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[fixes] [text edit] really minor text edits and changes

julzor 6 years ago
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5 changed files with 9 additions and 7 deletions
  1. 1 1
      locations/Gaddvor.qsrc
  2. 2 1
      locations/MiroslavaHome.qsrc
  3. 2 1
      locations/Nord.qsrc
  4. 3 3
      locations/gLakeNude.qsrc
  5. 1 1
      locations/mitka.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/Gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		*nl
 		'You are naked and can only go to your grandparents to get dressed or go to the banya.'
 	else
-		if hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10:'In the yard there are <a href="exec:gt ''Gaddvor'',''chickens''">chickens</a> running around.'
+		if feed_chickens = 1 or (hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10):'In the yard there are <a href="exec:gt ''Gaddvor'',''chickens''">chickens</a> running around.'
 
 		if mira_guest = 1: Miraloc = 7 & 'Your friend <a href="exec: gt ''Miroslava'', ''Start''">Mira</a> stands next to you.'
 

+ 2 - 1
locations/MiroslavaHome.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mirafather.jpg"></center>'
 					'Mira''s father tells you that she''s not home, she is over at the river.'
 
-					act 'Go to river':gt 'gadriver','start'
+					act 'Go to the river':gt 'gadriver','start'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'Gadukino'
 				elseif mira_temp >= 10 and sunWeather = 0 and hour < 20 and MiraLoc ! 0 and Mira_no = 0:
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2

+ 2 - 1
locations/Nord.qsrc

@@ -114,10 +114,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 	'A shop for <a href="exec:gt ''sexshop'', ''start''">sex toys</a> is open for perverts from all around the city.'
 	if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
 
-	gs 'taxi'
 	act 'Return to the Industrial Region (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 
 	act 'Wait':gs 'obj_din', 'wait'
+	
+	gs 'taxi'
 end
 
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/gLakeNude.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if month=1 or month=2 or month=12:
 	''
 end
 
-'This small natural beach is hidden away from the general public.  To reach it you had to travel around the lake along a forest trail.  On this secluded beach you can often find sunbathers and people skinny dipping, including people from other towns and even some from the city.'
+'This small natural beach is hidden away from the general public. To reach it you had to travel around the lake along a forest trail. On this secluded beach you can often find sunbathers and people skinny dipping, including people from other towns and even some from the city.'
 
 if $clothingworntype = 'swimwear' or $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 	act'Get dressed':
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 				minut += 5
 				voyeurism += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/self/lake_legs.jpg"></center>'
-				'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I`m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br>  You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
+				'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I`m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
 				act'Stop Watching!': gt'gLakeNude'
 			else
 				voyeurism_start = 2
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 				pcs_horny += 75
 				voyeurism += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/voyeurism/voyeurism_start_event.jpg"></center>'
-				'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I`m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br>  But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
+				'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I`m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
 				act'Watch the couple': 
 					gs'gLakeNudeEvent','gLakeNude_sex'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/mitka.qsrc

@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ else
 					elseif pcs_ass >= 25:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaanalhome2.jpg"></center>'
 					end
-					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda.  He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths pulling them off you.'
+					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths pulling them off you.'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					npc_QW['A63'] += 1