locations/AndreiHanter.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ boyage = year - boyage
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrew</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
-'Andrew is the leader of a group of hunters. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadyukino.'
+'Andrew is the leader of a group of hunters. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadukino.'
 if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 0 and hantersAndreiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and hantersAndreiQw < 15:'You have friendly relations with him.'

locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -1986,7 +1986,7 @@ $cheatmenu = {
 	nl
 	pl'<a href="exec:gt''pavResidential''">Teleport to Pavlovsk</a>'
 	pl'<a href="exec:gt''street''">Teleport to City</a>'
-	pl'<a href="exec:gt''gadukino''">Teleport to Gadyukino</a>'
+	pl'<a href="exec:gt''gadukino''">Teleport to Gadukino</a>'
 	pl'<a href="exec:gt''dachi''">Teleport to Suburban Cooperative</a>'
 	pl'<b>Warning!</b> Teleporting while in event is likely to break your game!'
 	nl

locations/Gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Main':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><H4>Your Grandparents'' Cottage</H4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/izba.jpg"></center>'
-	'A fairly simple cottage in the village of Gadyukino which your grandparents call home. In the main room there is a huge <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing), and a <a href="exec:gad = 1 & gt ''bed2''">bed</a> where you can rest. The bed is more comfortable than it looks.'
+	'A fairly simple cottage in the village of Gadukino which your grandparents call home. In the main room there is a huge <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing), and a <a href="exec:gad = 1 & gt ''bed2''">bed</a> where you can rest. The bed is more comfortable than it looks.'
 	'There is an old <a href="exec:gt ''TV'',''gad''">television</a> in the living room. It''s positioned next to a body length <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>.'
 	'You can check your weight on your grandma''s old mechanical <a href="exec:msg ''Your body fat is = (<<salo>>)''">scales</a>.'
 
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandma':
 					'"One day she came home from work, and the floor boards all of a sudden started creaking! And through the glass panes in the door in the hallway, she could see the silhouette of a man. It looked remarkably like her late husband!"'
 					'"She was terrified! She quickly left her house, and only went back when I promised to go with her... but of course, we found nothing. Do you believe in ghosts, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Because ever since then, I do..."'
 				elseif temp = 2:
-					'"I wasn''t born in Gadyukino, I grew up in a different village", your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
+					'"I wasn''t born in Gadukino, I grew up in a different village", your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
 					'"When I was still a little girl, one of our neighbors died. Then, less than two weeks later, one of his brothers died too! And as the legend goes, death comes in threes..."'
 					'"His one surviving sister was terrified. She was a friend of mine, but her parents wouldn''t let her leave the house."'
 					'"It was well into the winter season then, and people could only go to other towns by sleigh. For forty days, they waited... just when they were about to accept that the legend might not be true, they found one of her relatives. Dead. Muzhik I believe his name was, he was found frozen solid, basically a block of ice! He''d tried to attend his cousin''s funeral, but it cost him his life!"'
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='villagecat':
 		act 'Feed Boniface':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			minute +=5
+			minut +=5
 			gs 'stat'
 			feedcat = 2
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/feedboniface.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -624,14 +624,14 @@ if $ARGS[0]='villagecat':
 			if sunWeather = 0:
 				cla
 				*clr
-				minute += 10
+				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You open the door for Boniface who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he becomes aware that it is raining out. He glares up at you as if the rain was your fault. He stares out into the wet for another moment then sedately turns around and goes back to his box.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'Gadhouse', 'Start'
 			else
 				cla
 				*clr
-				minute +=10
+				minut +=10
 				gs 'stat'
 				catout = 2
 				'You open the door for Boniface who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he stops to consider if he really wants to go outside. After considering all the pros and cons, he finally decides to go out.'

locations/Gadsarai.qsrc

@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					observ_exp += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/purses/cheap/5.jpg"></center>'
-					'In a far corner of the barn you find a burlap sack filled with mostly junk, but at the bottom you find a good quality messenger bag.'
+					'In a far corner of the barn you find a hessian sack filled with mostly junk, but at the bottom you find a good quality messenger bag.'
 					cheap_purses[5] = 1
 					$currentpursetype = 'cheap'
 					currentpursenumber = 5

locations/HotelAdmin.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if GotelWork = 0 and germanqw<2:
 		'You approach the man''s desk, but he doesn''t look up from his work. With a soft voice you carefully try to get his attention: "Umm... excuse me?"'
 		'He looks up from his desk: "Oh I''m sorry, I didn''t hear you come in. Hello, I''m Herman Leonidovich, manager of this hotel. Is there a problem?"'
 		'You smile and shake your head: "No, no problem. I am looking for a job, I hear you are often looking for maids?"'
-		'You can feel his eyes exploring your body for a moment before he responds: "Yes, we are! We currently only have a part-time vacancy, for a maid. You would be working between 16:00 and 19:00, give or take. Most of the hotel rooms are empty then, before the new guests come in. You can come work any day you like, no pressure. It would pay 250 <b>₽</b> per shift. After your work, you can immediately go collect your salary at the reception, or you can save it up and collect it all at once later. Does that sound good to you?"'
+		'You can feel his eyes exploring your body for a moment before he responds: "Yes, we are! We currently only have a part-time vacancy, for a maid. You would be working between 16:00 and 19:00, give or take. Most of the hotel rooms are empty then, before the new guests come in. You can work any day you like, no pressure. It would pay 250 <b>₽</b> per shift. After your work, you can immediately go collect your salary at the reception, or you can save it up and collect it all at once later. Does that sound good to you?"'
 		act'"That sounds great!"':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if GotelWork = 0 and germanqw<2:
 			'<center><H4>Administration room of the Pavlovsk hotel</H4></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/goteladmin.jpg"></center>'
 			'You frown: "Sorry for wasting your time, but that''s not something for me."'
-			'Herman gives you a friendly nod. "That''s no problem. If you ever change your mind, come see me again."'
+			'Herman gives you a friendly nod. "That''s not a problem. If you ever change your mind, come see me again."'
 			act'Return to the lobby':gt'hotelhole'
 		end
 	end

locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 		cla
 		observ_exp += 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You creep down to the lobby, and then around the corner, carefuly, you sneak a glimpse.'
+		'You creep down to the lobby, and then around the corner, carefully, you sneak a glimpse.'
         'You spy the desk girl; yep, you nod, she''s already showing herself off to the cameras.'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event1.jpg"></center>'
 		'She flashes her breasts beneath a devilish smile.'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 		'"Miss Tanich, What are you doing? What if our guests should spot you like this?" he says.'
 		'You think about the pictures you found in his office and you wonder why he acts so surprised.'
 		'"Oh Mister Leonidovich," she says pouting like a little girl, "I am so sorry, I have been bad daddy."'
-		'At that moment you figure out they are just playing a game and being caught flashing was all part of their weird little roleplay.'
+		'At that moment you figure out they are just playing a game and being caught flashing was all part of their weird little role play.'
 		act 'Continue':
 
 			*clr
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event9.jpg"></center>'
 			 'She needs his foregiveness and kisses his mouth while he undresses her.'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once all the clothes are off miss Tanich, she drops to her knees and puts her mouth on the big stiff penis dangling in front of her face.'
-			'Her lips glide down the length of the cock leaving a trail of shiney saliva, and then slowly she licks her way back up to the big fat head.'
+			'Once all the clothes are off Miss Tanich, she drops to her knees and puts her mouth on the big stiff penis dangling in front of her face.'
+			'Her lips glide down the length of the cock leaving a trail of shiny saliva, and then slowly she licks her way back up to the big fat head.'
 			'Using only her tongue, she licked all around, focusing on the head and backing off occasionally.'
 			'She sucks cock like a real pro, - you could learn a thing or two from this woman, you think to yourself.'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 				'She starts riding him furiously while he reaches his hands around her body and squeezes her juicy breasts.'
 				'He pinches her nipple, just to make her yelp, like his dog, and he laughs at her, and does it again.'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event6.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few minutes Miss Tanich turned around and started riding him while they faced eachother.'
+				'After a few minutes Miss Tanich turned around and started riding him while they faced each other.'
 				'You could see from the manager''s face that he was having trouble keeping up with her.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur',60
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 	    observ_exp += rand(0,1)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the lobby and you can see the desk girl and the manager talking to each other.'
-		'When they notice you they both give you a very dissapointing look.'
+		'When they notice you they both give you a very disappointing look.'
 		'You get the feeling you interrupted something here.'
 	end
 end
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if hotwait = 1:
 hotwait = 0
 end
 if maidqw >= 1 and hour >= 15 and hour < 16:
-	act'Wait in the lobby until you can start jour maid job':
+	act'Wait in the lobby until you can start your maid job':
 		hour = 16
 		minut = 0
 		cls
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 				end
 				if talkrand = 2:
 					'Pavlin tells you a story from his childhood.'
-					'"My father used to beat me everyday. One day when I was 12 after another savage beating I asked my mother to do something about it. The bitch started giving me another beating and then locked me out in my underpants on the balcony for 2 hours."'
+					'"My father used to beat me every day. One day when I was 12 after another savage beating I asked my mother to do something about it. The bitch started giving me another beating and then locked me out in my underpants on the balcony for 2 hours."'
 					'"This was in the middle of January, so I got lucky I didn''t freeze to death that day."'
 					'It seems he had a very rough childhood.'
 				end
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 					'Pavlin tells you how he got in this business.'
 					'"I basically followed into my father''s footsteps. When I was 19 I ran my first girl on the streets of Saint Petersburg."'
 					'"Too bad she had a nasty habit of always talking back to me."'
-					'"Knocking out her teeth helped a lot with that, too bad that made her too ugly to be profitable, hahaha."'
+					'"Knocking out her teeth helped a lot with that, too bad that made her too ugly to be profitable, ha ha ha."'
 					'Pavlin let out an evil laugh, you don''t think that was a joke.'
 				end
 				if talkrand = 5:
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 			cls
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/Pavlin.jpg"></center>'
-			'<<$pcs_firstname>>, have you heared, the circus is in town.'
+			'<<$pcs_firstname>>, have you heard, the circus is in town.'
 			'You look at Pavlin with a surprising look. "I didn''t know you were a fan of the circus. You want to go see a show or something?"'
 			'What? No, don''t be silly girl. A circus here means at least 50 guys in town who are looking for a good time after the shows.'
 			'And sometimes even between the shows. he laughed.'
@@ -266,8 +266,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 			act 'Sure, sounds like fun':
 				cla
 				cls
-				'"Ok, you can go ahead to room 312. they are expecting you"'
-				'Pavlin gives you the key for the hotelroom.'
+				'"Ok, you can go ahead to room 312. They are expecting you"'
+				'Pavlin gives you the key for the hotel room.'
 				act 'Go to room 312':gt 'HotelHole','clown'
 			end
 
@@ -321,13 +321,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 				PavlinQW = 6
 				'"Pavlin I ..." you start talking but he immediately interrupts you.'
 				'"I hope you learned your lesson <<$pcs_firstname>>. I am sorry I had to do that but you need to understand the situation here."'
-				'You were hoping you could have an honest coversation with him about the incident but you understand now that that is not possible yet.'
+				'You were hoping you could have an honest conversation with him about the incident but you understand now that that is not possible yet.'
 				pavtalk = 1
 				pavldaystart2 = daystart
 			elseif pavtalk = 1:
 				'"Pavlin I need..." you start talking but he immediately interrupts you.'
 				'"What now? Stop bothering me and go back to work."'
-				'You were hoping you could have an honest coversation with him about the incident but you understand now that that is not possible yet.'
+				'You were hoping you could have an honest conversation with him about the incident but you understand now that that is not possible yet.'
 				pavtalk = 2
 				pavldaystart2 = daystart
 			elseif pavtalk = 2:
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 					' '
 					'The client pushes you on the ground and slides his dick back into your mouth. He starts furiously fucking your face, showing no concern for your comfort.'
 					'Your throat aches from the abuse, and you are ashamed but thankful to have the taste of cock in your mouth once again. Anything to help dull the awful urine taste is welcome at this point.'
-					'The man continues relentlessly face-fucking you until he finally erupts and cums buckets into your mouth. The taste of his semen finally seems to fully nullify the sour flavor that coated your tastebuds before.'
+					'The man continues relentlessly face-fucking you until he finally erupts and cums buckets into your mouth. The taste of his semen finally seems to fully nullify the sour flavor that coated your taste buds before.'
 					'After his orgasm, the man stands up. "Thank you very much honey, you were great!"'
 					'Suddenly his whole demeanor has changed and he starts treating you like a person instead of a mindless sex toy. He reaches towards you and gives you a loving peck on the cheek.'
 					'"Come on let me help you." <<$boydesc>> helps you to your feet, careful to help you regain your balance in your delicate state. He then assists you with taking off the bracelets and collar before putting your regular clothes back on.'
@@ -555,11 +555,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 					'You look up from the floor and you no longer see Pavlin''s eyes; you see a monster. You can practically feel the rage radiating from him as he marches towards you, fists clenched.'
 					'You scramble to your feet as quickly as you''re able and try to reason with him. "Pavlin, I''m so sorr-" You can''t even complete one sentence before you feel your nose explode under his fist.'
 					'"You fucking CUNT! Do you know how much money you just cost me?!?!" He screams!'
-					'You feel blood pouring from your nose and into your mouth. The metallic taste bitter and thick. You attempt to shake the dizziness from your head, but a second punch slams into your jaw.'
+					'You feel blood pouring from your nose and down your face. The metallic taste is bitter as it pools inside mouth. You attempt to shake the dizziness from your head, but a second punch slams into your jaw.'
 					'"After everything I''ve done for you, this is how you repay me?!?"'
-					'You stumble back and look at Pavlin with watery eyes. You see his clenched hand raise again, so you cover your head for protection and close your eyes, bracing for impact.'
+					'You stumble back and look at Pavlin with watery eyes. You see his clenched hand rise again, so you cover your head for protection and close your eyes, bracing for impact.'
 					' '
-					'All the breath leaves your body as Pavlin buries his fist into your pregnant belly. Your knees turn to jelly as you fall to the ground, now laying on your side. You feel a sickly, twisting pain in your stomach and everything inside you feels wrong.'
+					'All the breath leaves your body as Pavlin buries his fist into your pregnant belly. Your knees turn to jelly as you fall to the ground, now laying on your side. You feel a sickly, twisting pain in your stomach and everything inside you feels wrong.' 
 					'"<<$pitfs>>No! He has to stop! My baby...<<$pitfe>>" Your motherly instict cries out to you.'
 					'The tip of the horrible bastard''s steel toe boot slams into your swollen belly again and again. You try to cover your womb with your arms as the kicking assault continues, but the boot still manages to make it through your desperate defense.'
 					' '
@@ -633,7 +633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 									end
 									act 'Wait for the doctor':
 										*clr & cla
-										'While you wait for the doctor you place your hand on your stomach. You feel a stillness inside you. An empty place where something grew before.'
+										'While you wait for the doctor you place your hand on your stomach. You feel a stillness inside you; an empty place where something grew before.'
 										'"<<$pitfs>>No. Please, no!<<$pitfe>>" Your mind prays to an uncaring god, trying to make this nightmare end. You know what the doctor will tell you, even before she enters the room.'
 										' '
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/badnews.jpg"></center>'
@@ -835,7 +835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Twins' :
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/twins11.jpg"></center>'
 						'This quickly becomes too much for your sister. While being stimulated in 3 erogenous zones at once she explodes in an earth-shaking orgasm like she''s never experienced before.'
 						'Anya''s whole body starts shaking and you jump up to hold her before she falls off the couch.'
-						'<<$boydesc>> laughs hearily. "Ok girl, you had your release. Now it is my turn."'
+						'<<$boydesc>> laughs heartily. "Ok girl, you had your release. Now it is my turn."'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 	'When you enter the room you notice the lights are off and the curtains closed.'
 	'You try to turn the lights on but nothing happens'
 	'"Hello is someone here ?" you yell'
-	'No reply, so you stumble towards the bed and try the lightswitch there.'
+	'No reply, so you stumble towards the bed and try the light switch there.'
 	act 'Turn on the switch near the bed':
 		cls
 		cla
@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 		'"I need this too Popav, but we need to catch this girl first before we can have sex with her."'
 		'"I agree Popov, So let me do the tape first."'
 		'"No you were right before, I will do the bag first."'
-		'"No no, I wll do the tape."'
+		'"No no, I will do the tape."'
 		'...<br>'
 		'The clowns are back to arguing over the order.'
 		'Ok, I need to speed things up here, you think to yourself.'
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 			'He puts his hand down your panties and starts rubbing between your legs.'
 			'"Come on Popov, give her to me, I paid for her too."'
 			'"Just a minute, this little slut is such a great cocksucker."'
-			'"Enough!", Popav takes you by the head and moves your head from Popov''s dick.'
+			'"Enough!" Popav takes you by the head and moves your head from Popov''s dick.'
 			'"Now have a taste of this" he says before plowing his big cock in your mouth.'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/clown5.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'While Popov allowed you to go at your own tempo, Popav didn''t seem to care about that and just furiously started fucking your mouth.'
@@ -967,7 +967,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/clown6.jpg"></center>'
 				'Popav starts licking your pussy while Popov places his balls over your mouth.'
-				'"Let''s go girl, these balls aren''t going to lick themself."'
+				'"Let''s go girl, these balls aren''t going to lick themselves."'
 				'You take the hint and put the balls in your mouth.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'prostitution'
 				'After a minute Popav stops licking and asks: "Are you ready for some cock?"'
@@ -988,14 +988,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 					'"Hey Popav, what is the difference between a battery and a woman?"'
 					'"I don''t know."'
 					'"A battery has a positive side."'
-					'The clowns start laughing and high fiving eachother while you just groan at the stupidity of that joke.'
-					'"What''s the matter girl, are we not funny enough for you ?"'
+					'The clowns start laughing and high fiving each other while you just groan at the stupidity of that joke.'
+					'"What''s the matter girl, are we not funny enough for you?"'
 					'"Come here and finish us off now, because we don''t have much time left."'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/clown9.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You get on your knees and stroke their dicks until they both come all over your chest.'
 					'"Hey Popov, Why is the space between women''s breasts and her hips called a waist?"'
 					'"Because you could easily fit another pair of tits in there."'
-					'Again you groan at the stupid joke and can''t hide the fact that your are tired of these 2 clowns.'
+					'Again you groan at the stupid joke and can''t hide the fact that you are tired of these 2 clowns.'
 					'"Ok girl, now we will give you one last present before we go, just sit up on the bed and look at me."'
 
 					gs 'cum_call','breasts', $npclastgenerated, 1
@@ -1014,12 +1014,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 						'You go sit on the bed and Popov starts juggling some balls in the air.'
 						'You are not impressed at all and just want to leave at this point.'
 						wait 5000
-						'Suddenly out of nowhere you are hit in the face with a creampie.'
+						'Suddenly out of nowhere you are hit in the face with a cream pie.'
 						'And it is not the fun baby-making one.'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/clown2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Blinded by the pie you feel the clowns grabbing you by the arms and they push you out of the room.'
 						'They throw your clothes at you and Popav says: "Maybe next time you will laugh at our jokes and you will have a better time."'
-						'You start rubbing your face, cleaning off the pie when you realise you are standing buttnaked in the hallway.'
+						'You start rubbing your face, cleaning off the pie when you realize you are standing butt naked in the hallway.'
 						'You quickly put on your clothes and go to the bar to meet Pavlin.'
 						act 'Go to the bar':
 							cla
@@ -1030,9 +1030,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 							'Ha ha ha, it looks like you had a good time <<$pcs_firstname>>.'
 							'Not at all, this was one of the weirdest things I ever encountered in my life.'
 							'Just give me my money so I can go on and try to wash away this pie and try to forget this ever happened.'
-							'Ha ha , no problem <<$pcs_firstname>>. Here is your money, enjoy it. '
+							'Ha ha, no problem <<$pcs_firstname>>. Here is your money, enjoy it. '
 							'He hands you 2000 <b>₽</b>.'
-							'You think this experience traumatised you for life and you would never look at another clown the same way again.'
+							'You think this experience traumatized you for life and you would never look at another clown the same way again.'
 							act 'Back to the hotel lobby':gt 'HotelHole'
 						end
 					end

locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple1.jpg"></center>'
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		'She begins to reach under your skirt and starts removing your underwear'
-		'Once removed she places the panties in your hand. You can feel they are already soaking wet.'
+		'Once removed she places the panties in your hand; you can feel they are already soaking wet.'
 	else
-		'She begins to reach under your skirt and notices you are not wearing any underwear. " hmm free access, how kinky ", she says while removing her own panties and placing them in your hand.' 
+		'She begins to reach under your skirt and notices you are not wearing any underwear. “hmm free access, how kinky ", she says while removing her own panties and placing them in your hand.' 
 		'You can feel the panties are already soaking wet.'
 	end
 	'Motya is sitting in a chair next to the bed and is happily watching this scene unfold.'
@@ -27,18 +27,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 		gs 'arousal', 'massage', 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple2.jpg"></center>'
 		'" You can just relax. We will take good care of you" he says.'
-		' He pushes you on the bed and Uliana places her head between your legs. She starts licking your clit. '
-		' You can feel this is not her first rodeo so you close your eyes and start enjoying the feeling.'
+		'He pushes you on the bed and Uliana places her head between your legs. She starts licking your clit. '
+		'You can feel this is not her first rodeo so you close your eyes and start enjoying the feeling.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple3.jpg"></center>'
 		'Suddenly the feeling stops. Not even three seconds later it continues but much more forceful this time.'
-		'When you open you eyes you can see Motya eating you out now while Uliana placed herself next to you and has started rubbing her hands all over your body'
+		'When you open your eyes you can see Motya eating you out now while Uliana placed herself next to you and has started rubbing her hands all over your body'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple4.jpg"></center>'
 		'They were not kidding when they said they would take care of you.'
 		'You were close to the edge. '
 		orgasm += 1
-		'Suddenly you could feel the orgasm tearing through you. You rolled back your eyes and arched your back while Motya continued to enthoustasically lick your slit and your clit.'
+		'Suddenly you could feel the orgasm tearing through you. You rolled back your eyes and arched your back while Motya continued to enthusiastically lick your slit and your clit.'
 		'Then he stopped and moved his head back. You could feel your body convulsing a few more times while your orgasm faded away.'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -54,23 +54,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
 				'When she reached your hymen she yelled out : " Oh My God, she is still a virgin!"'
-				'"How about it honey, do you want my husband to be your first ?"'
+				'"How about it honey, do you want my husband to be your first?"'
 				act 'No, I want to save myself.':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'" no problem honey , this evening is all about what you want." '
-					'"Do you want him to come all over your face ? " '
-					'-"Yeah sure , that is fine"'
-					' You lay down on your back'
+					'"Do you want him to come all over your face? " '
+					'-"Yeah sure, that is fine"'
+					'You lay down on your back'
 					act 'finish':gt 'HotelWork', 'hotcoupfin'
 				end
 				act 'yes' :
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
-					' You lie down on the bed and spread your legs. Uliana takes Motya''s cock in her hand and guides it towards your pussy.'
+					'You lie down on the bed and spread your legs. Uliana takes Motya''s cock in her hand and guides it towards your pussy.'
 					'" Just relax Honey, he will be very gentle." she said while giving you a little smile.'
 					'<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple6.jpg"></left>'
-					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. he was slow and careful not too push too hard.'
+					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. he was slow and careful not to push too hard.'
 					'You let out a little moan as the dick had slowly but surely invaded your pussy.'
 					'His shaft sank in deeper and suddenly you let out a little grunt and twitch. You looked into Motya''s eyes and you both knew that your virginity was no more. '
 					'You could feel every inch of his <<dick>> cm dick inside you now. He gave you a little wink and then started moving again.'
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 					act 'Continue':gt 'HotelWork', 'hotcoupledoggy'
 				end
 			else
-				'"Well darling I have bad news and good news. The bad news is that you won''t be able to fuck a virgin this time. The good news is that she is definitly ready to accept your beautiful dick" Uliana said while she put her fingers, soaked with your juices, in Motya''s mouth.'
+				'"Well darling I have bad news and good news. The bad news is that you won''t be able to fuck a virgin this time. The good news is that she is definitely ready to accept your beautiful dick" Uliana said while she put her fingers, soaked with your juices, in Motya''s mouth.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'HotelWork', 'hotcoupledoggy'
 			end
 		end
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcoupledoggy':
 	'Suddenly you could feel Motya'' dick pushing against your pussy. He entered without much problems and started rhytmically pumping against your cute little butt.'
 	'<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple7.jpg"></left>'
 	'"mmm Uliana, this girl is so tight, I don''t think I can hold out much longer" said Motya'
-	' He pulled out of you and grabbed you by the waist. He swiftly turned you around so you ended up on your back on the bed.'
+	'He pulled out of you and grabbed you by the waist. He swiftly turned you around so you ended up on your back on the bed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcoupfin':
 	'You obey and not long after Motya finishes all over your face.'
 	'Uliana licks off most of it.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple9.jpg"></center>'
-	'you decide to end the evening with a three-way french kiss.'
+	'You decide to end the evening with a three-way french kiss.'
 	'Uliana and Motya both wave you goodbye and tell you that you are always welcome to repeat this experience.'
 	guy += 1
 	girl += 1
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 	'"But you can call me Pavlin. And what may I call you?"'
 	'"My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>," you answer.'
 	'"Welcome to my humble abode Miss <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let me introduce you to my good friend, Mr. Black."'
-	'You look in the direction he gestures and see another person. A big black dude sitting on a couch, already stroking his cock through his pants. His thick muscles evident through his fitted clothing.'
+	'You look in the direction he gestures and see another person. A big black dude sitting on a couch, already stroking his cock through his pants; his thick muscles evident through his fitted clothing.'
 	'"Why hello there honey, are you here to entertain us tonight?" The black man asks in a deep, husky voice.'
 	'"She sure is," says Pavlin as he places both hands on your shoulders and forces you down onto your knees.'
 	' '
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 		'As you continue servicing Pavlin''s manhood, the black guy moves behind you. He suddenly grabs you by the hips and yanks you up to a standing position.'
 		if pcs_vag = 0:'As you feel the massive member rub up against your exposed snatch, your heart skips a beat. "Oh god, am I really about to lose my virginity to a black man?!?! What would my family think of me if they knew? And why do I feel so excited about it?" You think, mind racing with emotion. '
 		'He places one calloused hand on you back and starts pushing his big <<dick>> cm schlong inside your dripping pussy. "Oh fuck!" You groan as he buries himself inside you.'	
-		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if your being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." You think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
+		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if your being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." you think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
 		' '
 		'Mr. Black gives you little time to adjust to his size before he''s pounding away in force.'
 		'"Don''t get distracted skank, you got plenty of dick right here too." Pavlin says as he forces your mouth back onto his cock.'
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 			'The fear wells up inside you once again, but you push it down. "Well, I did agree to do whatever they wanted." You reason, and brace for impact.'
 			' '
 			'You feel the impossibly large, bell-shaped head of his cock push up against your back door.'
-			'Slowly he applies pressure, pushing his <<dick>> cm dick into your ass. Your hole resists, but eventually you feel the head break trough, stretching you sphincter. You let out a pained yelp, tears welling up in your eyes. Showing a bit of chivalry for the first time, Mr. Black waits a moment so you can get used to the feeling. All too soon the mercy disappears as he starts pumping his dick back and forth in your bowels. The intense feeling melds into a mixture of extreme pleasure and extreme pain, and you can''t decide If it''s enjoyable or not.'
+			'Slowly he applies pressure, pushing his <<dick>> cm dick into your ass. Your hole resists, but eventually you feel the head break through, stretching you sphincter. You let out a pained yelp, tears welling up in your eyes. Showing a bit of chivalry for the first time, Mr. Black waits a moment so you can get used to the feeling. All too soon the mercy disappears as he starts pumping his dick back and forth in your bowels. The intense feeling melds into a mixture of extreme pleasure and extreme pain, and you can''t decide If it''s enjoyable or not.'
 			' '
-			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into you throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in you asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
+			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into your throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in you asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotel_threesome4.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -191,12 +191,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 					proshotelday = daystart
 					gs 'stat'
 					if prosmoneyhot = 0:
-						'"Ok guys, this was fun, but now I want my money," you say assertively, the smell of sticky jizm filling your nostrils.'
+						'"Ok guys, this was fun, but now I want my money," you say assertively, the smell of sticky jizz filling your nostrils.'
 						' '
-						'"Sure, no problem. You definitely earned it." Pavlin says, chuckling at your slathered face. He takes a wad of cash out of his pocket and gives it to you.'
+						'"Sure, no problem; You definitely earned it." Pavlin says, chuckling at your slathered face. He takes a wad of cash out of his pocket and gives it to you.'
 						'You start counting it and notice it is only 1500 <b>₽</b>.'
 						'"This is not enough! Where is the rest?" You yell at them, your face beet red in anger.'
-						'"Well bitch, that''s all that''s left, I spent the rest on cheap whores like you. If you want to earn more money, you can come back any time. Just go to the receptionist and ask for ''The Peacock''. She will understand."'
+						'"Well bitch, that''s all that''s left; I spent the rest on cheap whores like you. If you want to earn more money, you can come back any time. Just go to the receptionist and ask for ''The Peacock''. She will understand."'
 						'You angrily put the money away, quickly dress yourself, and stomp out of the room in a rage.'
 						money += 1500
 						pavhotprosQW = 4
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 					if prosmoneyhot = 1:
 						'You shyly look at Pavlin and ask, "So can I have my money back now?"'
 						' '
-						'"Sure, no problem. You definitely earned it." He guy takes a wad of cash out of his pocket and gives it to you.'
+						'"Sure, no problem; you definitely earned it." He guy takes a wad of cash out of his pocket and gives it to you.'
 						'Cum drips down your face as you count it and notice it''s only 500 <b>₽</b>. "Where is the rest?" You ask, confused.'
 						'"That''s all there is today, I spent the rest on cheap whores like you. If you want to earn back the rest, you can come by any time. Just go to the receptionist and ask for ''The Peacock''. She will understand."'
 						' '
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 						act'Back to the lobby':gt 'hotelhole'
 					end
 					if prosmoneyhot = 2:
-						'You look at Pavlin and ask: "So about my money... ?"'
+						'You look at Pavlin and ask: "So about my money...?"'
 						' '
 						'"Sure, no problem, you definitely earned it." Pavlin takes two 100 <b>₽</b> bills out of his pocket and slaps them onto your forehead, the bills sticking to the spooge still covering your face.'
 						'"If you want to earn back the rest of your money you can come by any day. Just go to the receptionist and ask for ''The Peacock''. She will understand."'
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				act'Knock on the door.':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You feel very nervous and with a shaking hand you knock on the door. After a few moments your heart skips a beat when you hear the knob turning as someone opens the door. It''s the man that took your money.'
+					'You feel very nervous and with a shaking hand you knock on the door. After a few moments your heart skips a beat when you hear the knob turning as someone opens the door; it''s the man that took your money.'
 					'A little smile creeps across his thin lips as he recognizes you.'
 					' '
 					'"Well, well, well, if it isn''t our favorite little voyeur. Come to earn your money back I assume?" He says arrogantly as his eyes devour you body.'
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						'"Yes I have." You say, not letting the man''s lecherous gaze intimidate you. "I will play the little bitch for you, but on my terms." You let your assertive words sink in for a moment before continuing.' 
 						' '
 						'"You will pay me DOUBLE what you took and, after we are done, I don''t have to deal with you anymore."'
-						'The man laughs, "Ha ha , take a look at this slut, thinking she can boss me around." The oaf suddenly slaps you across the face without warning, the loud smack echoing in the empty hallway.'
+						'The man laughs, "Ha ha, take a look at this slut, thinking she can boss me around." The oaf suddenly slaps you across the face without warning, the loud smack echoing in the empty hallway.'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/YurikEv/Avatars/Slap.jpg"></center>'
 						'Your cheek stings hotly but you don''t flinch. You keep staring him in the eyes with a stern look, refusing to submit.'
 						' '
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					'"N-Nothing! I was jus.-", before you have the chance to say something he squeezes down on your frail shoulder and pushes you in to the room, quickly shutting the door behind him.'
 					'The other guy looks up while continuing to fuck the girl from behind. "Who is this?" he asks.'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/sequence/kotovsexbonus21.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'"This little slut was curious to see what goes on in this room." Says the first man as he sets the ice bucket on a counter.'
+					'"This little slut was curious to see what goes on in this room." says the first man as he sets the ice bucket on a counter.'
 					'His friend grins evilly, never slowing his pace as he continues driving his prick into the euphoric woman in bed with him. "Let''s satisfy her curiosity then and give this skank a show."'
 					'"Of course this is not a free show." The first man says as he takes your wallet from you.'
 					'"Hey!" You exclaim, instinctively reaching out to take it back, but the glare he shoots your way freezes you in your tracks. He opens the wallet and removes some of your cash, stuffing it into his pocket before roughly throwing your now emptied accessory back to you.'
@@ -376,9 +376,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							'After several minutes you see the girl beginning to relax and get used to the dick in her ass. She begins moaning in pleasure as the hard member continues pumping away inside her.'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/threea.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'The man with his dick in her mouth moves his hands to the girl''s breasts and start pinching her nipples roughly.' 
-							'The girl obediently continues sucking but looks at the man with pleading eyes, hoping this would convince him to stop. Unfortunately for her the cruel bastard take this as encouragement. '
+							'The girl obediently continues sucking but looks at the man with pleading eyes, hoping this would convince him to stop. Unfortunately for her the cruel bastard takes this as encouragement. '
 							'Without warning the man grabs one of her nipples and gives it a firm twist. You are sure that if the girl didn''t have a mouth full of dick, her scream would have been loud enough for the entire floor to hear.'
-							'Finally the man relents from his torture and starts focusing on her mouth again. He places both hands on her head and begins face-fucking her, pushing his big cock into her mouth all the way to the base. You reckon that this girl is a deepthroat specialist as she seems unfazed by the rough throat-fucking.'
+							'Finally the man relents from his torture and starts focusing on her mouth again. He places both hands on her head and begins face-fucking her, pushing his big cock into her mouth all the way to the base. You reckon that this girl is a deep throat specialist as she seems unfazed by the rough throat-fucking.'
 							
 							act 'Continue to watch in silence':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -390,13 +390,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 									'The girl''s cheeks blush bright red. "She must really love being humiliated and fucked for an audience." You think to yourself. You can''t help but wonder why, and if you''d be the same in this situation.'
 									' '
 									'Meanwhile, the guy who was fucking her ass lies down on the bed and she obediently climbs on top of him. The controlling man wastes no time and shoves his cock in her main fuckhole with one powerful thrust. He begins jackhammering his swollen rod in and out of her needy twat. You can see her nails digging into the man''s torso as she happily endures the rough fucking, a blissful smile stretching her lips.'
-									'"I wish all our bitches would be so eager to please." Comments the other man while casually moving behind the girl and his friend.'
+									'"I wish all our bitches would be so eager to please." comments the other man while casually moving behind the girl and his friend.'
 									'He firmly plants one of his hands on her hip and guides his stiff cock to her vulnerable anus with the other. You can see a glimpse of fear on her face the second before the man leans forwards and buries his member balls deep in her ass. You feel bad for the used whore, but can''t help but feel your own juices soaking your thighs as the show continues. Both of the strong, virile men show no mercy as they pound away at her holes, randomly squeezing her tits and spanking her ass between their thrusts.'
 									' '
 									'The men continue relentlessly pounding, their stamina seemingly endless. You notice the young woman''s breath becoming more and more ragged until she suddenly throws her head back and screams in an earth-shattering orgasm. Taking their cue, the men both pick up their pace before groaning in unison as they flood the girls bowels and cunt with their cum. After a moment the two boys shove the girl out from between them carelessly, now finished with their fucktoy. The satisfied slut immediately collapses on the bed, utterly spent, thick globs of seed slowly leaking from her used holes.'
 									' '
-									'One of the men steps off the bed and walks to you. "Ok whore, show''s over." He grips your arm like a vice and pushes you out the door.'
-									'"If you want your money back, maybe next time you''ll think about joining the show instead of just watching." Says the man before closing the door in your face. You think about pounding on the door and demanding you money back from the thief, but decide not to push your luck.'
+									'One of the men steps off the bed and walks to you, "Ok whore, show''s over." He grips your arm like a vice and pushes you out the door.'
+									'"If you want your money back, maybe next time you''ll think about joining the show instead of just watching." says the man before closing the door in your face. You think about pounding on the door and demanding you money back from the thief, but decide not to push your luck.'
 				
 								act 'Go to the lobby':gt 'hotelhole'
 							end
@@ -417,15 +417,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 									' '
 									'Meanwhile, the guy who was fucking her ass lies down on the bed and she obediently climbs on top of him. The controlling man wastes no time and shoves his cock in her main fuckhole with one powerful thrust. He begins jackhammering his swollen rod in and out of her needy twat. You can see her nails digging into the man''s torso as she happily endures the rough fucking, a blissful smile stretching her lips.'
 									'"I wish all our bitches would be so eager to please" comments the other man while casually moving behind the girl and his friend.'
-									'He firmly plants one of his hands on her hip and guides his stiff cock to her vulnerable anus with the other. You can see a glimpse of fear on her face the second before the man leans forwards and buries his member balls deep in her ass. You feel bad for the used whore, but can''t help but feel your own juices soaking your thighs as the show continues. Both of the strong, virile men show no mercy as they pound away at her holes, randomly squeezing her tits and spanking her ass between their thrusts.'
+									'He firmly plants one of his hands on her hip and guides his stiff cock to her vulnerable anus with the other. You can see a glimpse of fear on her face the second before the man leans forwards and buries his member balls deep in her ass. You feel bad for the used whore, but you can''t help but feel your own juices soaking your thighs as the show continues. Both of the strong, virile men show no mercy as they pound away at her holes, randomly squeezing her tits and spanking her ass between their thrusts.'
 									' '
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mmf/fbdrdp.jpg"></center>'
 									'You see the girl turning her head and seductively looking in your direction while biting her lip, the desire burning in her eyes.'
 									'Your heart flutters as you start rubbing your clit vigorously, maintaining eye contact with the other woman.'
 									'Soon you feel a hot wave of bliss spreading over your entire body. You shudder but keep your eyes focused on the threesome in front of you as an orgasm soaks your fingers.'
 									'The men continue relentlessly pounding, their stamina seemingly endless. You notice the young woman''s breath becoming more and more ragged until she suddenly throws her head back and screams in an earth-shattering orgasm. Taking their cue, the men both pick up their pace before groaning in unison as they flood the girls bowels and cunt with their cum. After a moment the two boys shove the girl out from between them carelessly, now finished with their fucktoy. The satisfied slut immediately collapses on the bed, utterly spent, thick globs of seed slowly leaking from her used holes.'
-									'One of the men steps off the bed and walks to you. "Ok whore, show''s over." He grips your arm like a vice and pushes you out the door.'
-									'"If you want your money back, maybe next time you''ll think about joining the show instead of just watching." Says the man before closing the door in your face. You think about pounding on the door and demanding you money back from the thief, but decide not to push your luck.'
+									'One of the men steps off the bed and walks to you, "Ok whore, show''s over." He grips your arm like a vice and pushes you out the door.'
+									'"If you want your money back, maybe next time you''ll think about joining the show instead of just watching." says the man before closing the door in your face. You think about pounding on the door and demanding you money back from the thief, but decide not to push your luck.'
 																
 									act 'Go to the lobby':gt 'hotelhole'
 								end
@@ -477,14 +477,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				'While you are on your way to your next room you encounter mister Leonidovich, the manager of this hotel. He tells you he spilled a drink in his office and asks you to go clean it up.'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/leonid/office.jpg"></center>'
 				'You go to his office and clean up the spilled drink'
-				if maidstat < 20:'You don''t do a very good job. there are still stains of liquor everywhere.'
+				if maidstat < 20:'You don''t do a very good job. There are still stains of liquor everywhere.'
 				if maidstat >= 20 and maidstat<50:'Your maid skills have improved a fair bit. You are able to get most of the stains out of the desk.'
-				if maidstat >= 50 and maidstat<70:'You are pretty good at cleaning rooms, and the room looks quite clean when you''re done with it. there is almost no trace left of the spilled drink'
-				if maidstat >= 70:'You''re a very experienced maid by now. You know how to clean up all sorts of spots and stains with ease, you easily remove all traces of liquor from the desk.'
+				if maidstat >= 50 and maidstat<70:'You are pretty good at cleaning rooms, and the room looks quite clean when you''re done with it. There is almost no trace left of the spilled drink'
+				if maidstat >= 70:'You''re a very experienced maid by now. You know how to clean up all sorts of spots and stains with ease; you easily remove all traces of liquor from the desk.'
 				if resepseen = 0:
 					'Just when you were about to leave the room you notice a folder lying on the ground beneath the desk. '
-					' You go and pick it up but when you place it back with the other folders on the desk you notice there are some pictures sticking out.'
-					' It looks like security footage from the lobby.'
+					'You go and pick it up but when you place it back with the other folders on the desk you notice there are some pictures sticking out.'
+					'It looks like security footage from the lobby.'
 					
 					'Should you take a look?' 
 					act 'No, this is none of my business':
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							money -= 100
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/children.jpg"></center>'
 							'You let the children play around for an hour while you relax on a bench.'
-							'When it is time to leave you call out to the children but they are nowhere to be found. Then you notice them next to an icecream truck happily eating some icecream. You had to use the money you received from their father to pay for it.'
+							'When it is time to leave you call out to the children but they are nowhere to be found. Then you notice them next to an ice cream truck happily eating some ice cream. You had to use the money you received from their father to pay for it.'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/children3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You take the children back to the parent''s room and continue your work'
 							act'Continue':gt 'hotelwork', 'maid'
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					act 'Take the children to the hotel conference room':
 						cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/children2.jpg"></center>'
-						'There is not much to do here to entertain these children so you have to listen to them screaming at eachother for an hour, giving you a terrible headache.'
+						'There is not much to do here to entertain these children so you have to listen to them screaming at each other for an hour, giving you a terrible headache.'
 						'You take the children back to the parent''s room and continue your work'
 						gs 'pain', 2,'head','ache'
 						mood -= 5
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				'You enter the room and to your surprise you can see a naked man handcuffed to the bed.'
 				'"Thank god, someone to help me" says the man. " The key is on the table by the window ".'
 				'After you release him he tells you that he came to the room with a woman who promised to rock his world.'
-				'So that did not happen, he just ended up handcuffed to a hotelroom bed while the woman stole all his stuff.'
+				'So that did not happen, he just ended up handcuffed to a hotel room bed while the woman stole all his stuff.'
 				'She even took all his clothes'
 				'You felt sorry for the man but there was not much more you could do for him'
 
@@ -579,18 +579,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					'Just when you were about to leave the room you notice that the man is sitting on the edge of the bed and is on the verge of tears. He doesn''t know what to do now. Then you get an idea how to cheer him up a little bit.'
 					if stat['hj'] < 5:
-						'You move to the bed and gently place your hand on his bare chest. you push him down on the bed. Then you move your hand down to his waist and take his flacid penis in your hand. You slowly start moving your hand up and down. The man groans a little bit and you see he was already semi-erect.'
+						'You move to the bed and gently place your hand on his bare chest. You push him down on the bed. Then you move your hand down to his waist and take his flaccid penis in your hand. You slowly start moving your hand up and down. The man groans a little bit and you see he was already semi-erect.'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/maidhj.jpg"></center>'
-						'You kept stroking for a few minutes but your technique was not sufficient enough to make him cum. Maybe if you had some more experience with your hands you could have given him an happy ending.'
+						'You kept stroking for a few minutes but your technique was not sufficient enough to make him cum. Maybe if you had some more experience with your hands you could have given him a happy ending.'
 						'"Thanks for trying," he says, but I guess I am not really in the mood right now. He holds his head in his hands and shows a defeated look. Leaving the man like this does not make you feel very happy.'
 						pcs_mood -=10
 					end
 					if stat['hj'] >= 5:
-						'You move to the bed and gently place your hand on his bare chest. you push him down on the bed. Then you move your hand down to his waist and take his flacid penis in your hand. You slowly start moving your hand up and down. It only takes a few strokes for the dick to become rock hard.'
+						'You move to the bed and gently place your hand on his bare chest. You push him down on the bed. Then you move your hand down to his waist and take his flaccid penis in your hand. You slowly start moving your hand up and down. It only takes a few strokes for the dick to become rock hard.'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/maidhj.jpg"></center>'
 						'The man watches you but doesn''t say anything.'
-						'After stroking him for a few minutes he starts moaning loadly and suddenly his cum starts splashing all over your hand.'
-						'You give him a little smile and he smiles back at you. You are happy you were able to cheer him up. Then you stand up , go wash your hands in the bathroom and leave the room to continue your work.'
+						'After stroking him for a few minutes he starts moaning loudly and suddenly his cum starts splashing all over your hand.'
+						'You give him a little smile and he smiles back at you. You are happy you were able to cheer him up. Then you stand up, go wash your hands in the bathroom and leave the room to continue your work.'
 						pcs_mood +=10
 					end
 
@@ -603,16 +603,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					'Just when you were about to leave the room you notice that the man is standing at the edge of the bed and is on the verge of tears. He doesn''t know what to do now. Then you get an idea how to cheer him up a little bit.'
 					if stat['bj'] < 5:
-						'You move to the bed and crawled on it. You grab the man by the hip and turn him towards you. Then you moved your head down to his crotch and take his flacid penis in your hand. You place your mouth over the man''s penis slowly start sucking on it. The man groans a little bit and you feel his dick becoming harder in your mouth.'
+						'You move to the bed and crawled on it. You grab the man by the hip and turn him towards you. Then you moved your head down to his crotch and take his flacid penis in your hand. You place your mouth over the man''s penis and slowly start sucking on it. The man groans a little bit and you feel his dick becoming harder in your mouth.'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/maid_blow.jpg"></center>'
-						'You kept blowing him for a few minutes but your technique was not sufficient enough to make him cum. Maybe if you had some more experience with your mouth you could have given him an happy ending.'
-						'"thanks for trying" he says, but I guess I am not really in the mood right now. He holds his head in his hands and shows a defeated look. Leaving the man like this does not make you feel very happy.'
+						'You kept blowing him for a few minutes but your technique was not sufficient enough to make him cum. Maybe if you had some more experience with your mouth you could have given him a happy ending.'
+						'"Thanks for trying" he says, but I guess I am not really in the mood right now. He holds his head in his hands and shows a defeated look. Leaving the man like this does not make you feel very happy.'
 						pcs_mood -=10
 
 						act'Continue':gt 'hotelwork', 'maid'
 					end
 					if stat['bj'] => 5:
-						'You move to the bed and crawled on it. You grab the man by the hip and turn him towards you. Then you moved your head down to his crotch and take his flacid penis in your hand. You place your mouth over the man''s penis slowly start sucking on it. The man groans a little bit and you feel his dick becoming harder in your mouth.'
+						'You move to the bed and crawled on it. You grab the man by the hip and turn him towards you. Then you moved your head down to his crotch and take his flacid penis in your hand. You place your mouth over the man''s penis and slowly start sucking on it. The man groans a little bit and you feel his dick becoming harder in your mouth.'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/maid_blow.jpg"></center>'
 						'The man watches you but doesn''t say anything'
 						'After blowing him for a few minutes the man suddenly stands up, takes your head in his hands and starts moving your head up and down his dick. After 1 minute the man moaned loadly and suddenly you could feel he was about to cum.'

locations/IbizaStart.qsrc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 !!1/6 	Skills: Dance, Pole Dance and Erotic dancer  85+
 !!1/6	Skills: Exhibitionism 85+
 !!2/6 	Nightclub job. +10 times
-!!3/5 	Fame of slut in Pavlovsk, Gadyukino or city. Enough one of them
+!!3/5 	Fame of slut in Pavlovsk, Gadukino or city. Enough one of them
 !!4/5 	18 years old or fake identity
 !!5/5 	College diploma
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif oldtown_slut = IbizaTemp:
 		$IbizaTemp='Pushkino'
 	else
-		$IbizaTemp='Gadyukino'
+		$IbizaTemp='Gadukino'
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<<$OpenMaleVoice>>"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you doing? You look like you''re having fun. So listen, I''ve got something to tell you. You see... '
 	'I''ve been keeping an eye on you. You are a very good dancer and I''ve noticed that whenever you are working in the cage, many of our customers tend to have a few more drinks while looking at you dance.'
 	'I''ve also asked around a bit, and I hear you have quite the reputation in <<$IbizaTemp>>"<<$CloseMaleVoice>>'
-	!!PAVLOVSK, GADYUKINO OR CITY FAME SLUT PUT IN TEXT THE MORE HIGH -ONLY ONE
+	!!PAVLOVSK, GADUKINO OR CITY FAME SLUT PUT IN TEXT THE MORE HIGH -ONLY ONE
 	act '"Wrong girl Eric, I have no reputation."':
 		gt 'club', 'inside'
 	end

locations/Katlake.qsrc

@@ -32,6 +32,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'znakomstvo':
 		katday = daystart
 		telkat += 1
 		kat = 1
+		npc_rel['A219'] += 1
 		minut += 30
 		'"Erm... hello!" you say, a bit shyly.'
 		'The girl takes off her sunglasses and examines your body, top to bottom. Her face breaks out into a small smile and she says: "Hey, you!"'

locations/MiroslavaHome.qsrc

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto2.jpg"></center>'
 
-								'He guns the engine, which roars and then sets out at furious pace. The rear wheel burns rubber and smokes a little as he rides you down the highway, after a few miles he does a U-turn and heads back towards Gadyukino and does not stop in the village.'
+								'He guns the engine, which roars and then sets out at furious pace. The rear wheel burns rubber and smokes a little as he rides you down the highway, after a few miles he does a U-turn and heads back towards Gadukino and does not stop in the village.'
 
 
 								act 'One ride ends and another begins...':

locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -537,7 +537,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 15
-		pcs_health += 30
+		frost = 0
+		pcs_health += 10
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		pcs_energy += 25
 		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
@@ -547,6 +548,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 		end
 		pcs_breath = 0
 		fat += 4
+		cumspclnt = 2
+		gs 'cum_cleanup'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/driedbread1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You ate the dried meat and bread. Your throat is dry and some water could come in handy.'
@@ -558,7 +561,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
-		pcs_health += 30
+		frost = 1
+		pcs_health += 10
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
 			pcs_hydra += 50
@@ -592,15 +596,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 				vitaminday = daystart
 				vitamin -= 1
 				frost = 0
-				if pcs_hydra < 50 : pcs_hydra += 30 else pcs_hydra +=15
-				if pcs_hydra > 100: pcs_hydra = 100
-
+				if pcs_hydra >= 100:
+					pcs_hydra += 25
+				else
+					pcs_hydra += 50
+				end
 				if KandidozOnce = 1:Kandidoz -= 2
 				if GerpesOnce = 1:Gerpes -= 2
 				if SifacOnce = 1 and Sifilis >= 10:Sifilis -= rand(0, 1)
 
 				pcs_skin += 1
-
+				gs 'stat'
 				'You take some vitamins to stay healthy.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdFood'

locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'At the reception you notice a banner, which is written in large print:'
 	'"Please note, that all transactions of purchases and sales are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded."'
 
-	if home_owned[1] > 1 and ArendHouseSL > 0:
+	if home_owned[1] = 1 and ArendHouseSL > 0:
 		*nl
 		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay rent at the moment')+''
 	end

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -283,19 +283,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-
-	if $loc = 'sitrPar':
-
-		gs 'brother', 'pregreact'
-		gs 'brother', 'brotherSexCount'
+	
+	 if $loc = 'sitrPar' or ($loc = 'family' and $metka = 'sofa'):
 		
 		if hour >= 7 and hour < 23:
-			act'Chat with him':gt'brother2','chat'
+			act'Chat with Kolka':gt'brother2','chat'
 		end
 		
 		!if father_go = 1 and hour >= 7:
 		!	act'Play video games with him':gt'video_games','brother'
 		!end
+	end
+
+	if $loc = 'sitrPar':
+
+		gs 'brother', 'pregreact'
+		gs 'brother', 'brotherSexCount'
 
 		if indorf = 0 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and brothersawpirsF=0 and father_go = 1 and npc_rel['A34'] > 85 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and pirsF > 0:
 			act 'Show off your nipple piercings ':

locations/brother2.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 # brother2
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
+	minut += 15
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kolka</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
 	'You casually talk to him about whatever topics come up.'
@@ -61,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 
 	elseif brotherchat = 8:
-		'"... I just want more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he moans. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to boring old Gadyukino every other weekend."'
+		'"... I just want more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he moans. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to boring old Gadukino every other weekend."'
 		*nl
 		if seepornofut = 0:
 			'"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'

locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 3:
-					'	"... I wish I had more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to Gadyukino every other weekend."'
+					'	"... I wish I had more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to Gadukino every other weekend."'
 					*nl
 					if seepornofut = 0:
 						'	"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 3:
-			'	"... I wish I had more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to Gadyukino every other weekend."'
+			'	"... I wish I had more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to Gadukino every other weekend."'
 			*nl
 			if seepornofut = 0:
 				'	"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'

locations/carF.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 	if cardrive = 14:'Through the windshield, you see the old town.'
 	if cardrive = 5:'Through the windshield, you can see the park.'
 	if cardrive = 19:'Through the windshield, you see the Station.'
-	if cardrive = 23:'Through the windshield, you see the huts of the village of Gadyukino.'
+	if cardrive = 23:'Through the windshield, you see the huts of the village of Gadukino.'
 	if cardrive = 24:'Through the windshield, you can see the Old Town.'
 	if cardrive = 25:'You cross one of the bridges that leads to the island.'
 
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 23:
-				act 'To go to the village of Gadyukino':
+				act 'To go to the village of Gadukino':
 					cla
 					benz = benz - 1
 					teh = teh - RAND(3,6)
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadyukino.'
+						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadukino.'
 					else
 						minut += 15
 						'15 minutes later, you reach your destination.'

locations/cikl.qsrc

@@ -155,6 +155,8 @@ else
 	bimbocl = 0
 end
 
+bimbo += snapshotY
+
 !!Once bimbolevel is set to 1, must use the withdrawal in stat to return to 0
 if bimbo > 0 or bimbolevel > 0:
     if bimbo < 10:

locations/cityTrain.qsrc

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_ticket':
 		end	
 	end
 
-	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadyukino (100 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadukino (100 <b>₽</b>)':
 		if money >= 100:
 			money -= 100
 			gt 'cityTrain', 'village'
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'platform':
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old platform by the communal village': gt 'cityTrain', 'communal'
 
-	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadyukino': gt 'cityTrain', 'village'
+	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadukino': gt 'cityTrain', 'village'
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old town': gt 'cityTrain', 'oldtown'
 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'village':
 	if rand(1, 100) < 20: gt 'train', 'events'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 25 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+	'After 25 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadukino.'
 	act 'Get off the train':
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 		gt 'train', 'village'

locations/famdorfride.qsrc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ if hour < 12: hour = 12 & minut = 0
 gs 'stat'
 minut += 60
 gs 'stat'
-'When the clock strikes noon, your stepfather goes to get the Volga out of its garage. A few minutes later he arrives at your house and you and your mother get in. You quietly sit in the back of the car, watching the surroundings zip by. After roughly an hour you reach the village of Gadyukino, where your grandparents live.'
+'When the clock strikes noon, your stepfather goes to get the Volga out of its garage. A few minutes later he arrives at your house and you and your mother get in. You quietly sit in the back of the car, watching the surroundings zip by. After roughly an hour you reach the village of Gadukino, where your grandparents live.'
 
 act 'Enter your grandparents'' house':gt 'Gadhouse'
 

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -137,17 +137,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_1':
 			'	"How long have you been a model?" you ask.'
 			'	"I''ve been working for this agency for about a year. Ever since I moved to the city really."'
 			'	Something piques an interest in you as Mari mentions she''s from out of town, "If you don''t mind me asking where do you come from?"'
-			'	"Oh, just some place called Gadyukino. You''ve probably never heard of it. It''s a small village outside the city. Too small too be honest, same boring ins and outs every day. I wanted more excitement in my life! More than a simple farm girl would ever have. So I moved here."'
+			'	"Oh, just some place called Gadukino. You''ve probably never heard of it. It''s a small village outside the city. Too small too be honest, same boring ins and outs every day. I wanted more excitement in my life! More than a simple farm girl would ever have. So I moved here."'
 
 			if storyline = 1:
-				act '"You''re from Gadyukino?"':
+				act '"You''re from Gadukino?"':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/meeting/4a.jpg"></center>'
-					'	"You''re from Gadyukino?" you exclaim. "My grandparents live in Gadyukino! I''m from Pavlovsky right down the road!"'
+					'	"You''re from Gadukino?" you exclaim. "My grandparents live in Gadukino! I''m from Pavlovsky right down the road!"'
 					'	Her face breaks out into a smile as you say that.'
 					'	"Well fancy that! Maybe we''re long lost cousins or something!"'
-					act 'Talk about Gadyukino':
+					act 'Talk about Gadukino':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/meeting/1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_2':
 									'	"Sure, ask away," she says, giving you all the attention.'
 									act 'Ask about her parents':
 										cla
-										'	All of a sudden you start to feel nervous. It''s such a personal question you don''t know if you should be asking, but you''re committed now. There''s no turning back. "It''s kind of personal, but I was wondering... what do your parents think of all this? I''m mostly asking since we kind of come from similar backgrounds and you know, your parents are from Gadyukino and I''m from Pavlovsky and we''re in sort of similar situations and... you know..."'
+										'	All of a sudden you start to feel nervous. It''s such a personal question you don''t know if you should be asking, but you''re committed now. There''s no turning back. "It''s kind of personal, but I was wondering... what do your parents think of all this? I''m mostly asking since we kind of come from similar backgrounds and you know, your parents are from Gadukino and I''m from Pavlovsky and we''re in sort of similar situations and... you know..."'
 										'	You trail off at the end of your sentence, unsure of how to end such a personal request.'
 										act '...':
 											*clr & cla
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_4':
 		*nl
 		if mari_farm_shoot = 0:
 			mari_farm_shoot = 1
-			'	<i>Huh, I didn''t know we had a dedicated set just for shooting farm stuff. I thought they went out to Gadyukino every time. Oh well, looks Mari''s busy. I guess I''ll have to find her some other time.</i> Eyeing her quivering toes one last time you think, <i>Hang in there girl!</i>'
+			'	<i>Huh, I didn''t know we had a dedicated set just for shooting farm stuff. I thought they went out to Gadukino every time. Oh well, looks Mari''s busy. I guess I''ll have to find her some other time.</i> Eyeing her quivering toes one last time you think, <i>Hang in there girl!</i>'
 			act 'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 		elseif mari_farm_shoot = 1:
 			'	<i>Stuck playing the farm girl again, huh Mari? They really are slave drivers for this kind of thing aren''t they? I guess I''ll find you some other time.</i>'
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
 			'	"Hey Mari, how come you don''t shave your bush?"'
-			'	"The photographers actually ask me not to shave. They say it helps sell my ''farm girl'' look," she says, causing you both to giggle a little. "Besides, I tried shaving once when I still lived in Gadyukino and I hated that prickly feeling when it would start to grow back as stubble. It''s too much of a hassle to keep it smooth down there so since then I just decided to keep it trimmed."'
+			'	"The photographers actually ask me not to shave. They say it helps sell my ''farm girl'' look," she says, causing you both to giggle a little. "Besides, I tried shaving once when I still lived in Gadukino and I hated that prickly feeling when it would start to grow back as stubble. It''s too much of a hassle to keep it smooth down there so since then I just decided to keep it trimmed."'
 			if pubestyle = 2:
 				'	"I know what you mean! Keeping it clean-shaven is too much work. What''s wrong with having a bit of bush?"'
 				'	"Right???"'
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading16.jpg"></center>'
 		'	"How come you''re always reading the same book Mari?"'
-		'	"Oh this old thing? I don''t know, it''s just one of my favorite stories. I fell in love with it back when I still lived in Gadyukino. It''s about a girl who moves away from her home and experiences all kinds of stuff. Love, and adventure, and new things she never even dreamed existed... I guess it''s comforting to me because I feel like the girl in this story. And I suppose it also reminds me a bit of home and how it''s never far away..."'
+		'	"Oh this old thing? I don''t know, it''s just one of my favorite stories. I fell in love with it back when I still lived in Gadukino. It''s about a girl who moves away from her home and experiences all kinds of stuff. Love, and adventure, and new things she never even dreamed existed... I guess it''s comforting to me because I feel like the girl in this story. And I suppose it also reminds me a bit of home and how it''s never far away..."'
 		act'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading7.jpg"></center>'
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading6.jpg"></center>'
 							'	"But ho-"  you start to say before she jumps up and cuts you off.'
-							'	"And who was I supposed to lose it to??" she says with a laugh. "You know Gadyukino. Mitka or one of his friends? There isn''t much selection there is there?"'
+							'	"And who was I supposed to lose it to??" she says with a laugh. "You know Gadukino. Mitka or one of his friends? There isn''t much selection there is there?"'
 							act 'Nod':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading14.jpg"></center>'
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 	act 'Ask her how she became a model':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
-		'	"How did you become a model here Mari? Did you get hired here right after moving from Gadyukino?"'
+		'	"How did you become a model here Mari? Did you get hired here right after moving from Gadukino?"'
 		'	"Well, no, not immediately. I tried a few other jobs out first. I tried being a clerk for a clothing store in the mall before I found this job."'
 		'	"Jobs weren''t exciting enough for you?"'
 		'	"Oh no, it''s not that. If I could do anything for work and still get paid enough to live comfortably, I don''t think I''d mind working at a clothing store."'
@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 						'	"I''m <<age>>!"'
 						'	"What??" she cries, jumping up excitedly. "That''s crazy!"'
 						'	"I know right? What are the odds that two girls like us from outside the city would both buy fake passports to end up here?"'
-						'	"You said you visit your grandparents in Gadyukino sometimes right? Maybe it''s something in the water!" she laughs.'
+						'	"You said you visit your grandparents in Gadukino sometimes right? Maybe it''s something in the water!" she laughs.'
 						'	You laugh with her for a moment before the both of you calm down again.'
 						'	"Hey... this reminds me for some reason... The guy who auditioned you... Did he also make you strip down before telling you how old you needed to be to work here?"'
 						'	"And then told you that he liked your naked body so you should go to the train station and buy a fake passport??"'

locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -2302,11 +2302,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hanters':
 					if gadriver_gang = 0:
 						'"I''m Andrei," replied the older man, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 						'"By any chance is your surname <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
-						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadyukino." said Andrei.'
+						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 					else
 						'"Bah, look what the cat dragged in." said in surprise the older man, looking at you closely, "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local slut.'
 						'You look at him in surprise.'
-						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadyukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
+						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
 						'"I`m Andrei, " he added further, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 						'"Don`t run away, we are good, we don''t bite." said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
 						hantersKnowSlut = 1
@@ -2412,11 +2412,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hanters':
 					if gadriver_gang = 0:
 						'"I''m Andrei," replied the older man, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 						'"By any chance is your surname <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
-						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadyukino." said Andrei.'
+						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 					else
 						'"Bah, look what the cat dragged in." said in surprise the older man, looking at you closely, "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local slut.'
 						'You stare at him in surprise.'
-						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadyukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
+						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
 						'"I`m Andrei, " he added further, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 						'"Don`t run away, we are good, we don''t bite." said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
 						hantersKnowSlut = 1

locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	clr
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><h4>Highway near Gadyukino Village</h4></center>'
+	'<center><h4>Highway near Gadukino Village</h4></center>'
 	'You walk out to the highway '
 	
 	! commented out to make it more likely and similiar to the choices in miroslavaHome

locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to lend a hand to help the girl with the calf. Your lonely in the village, maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could make it seem to the other villagers that you are not a complete stranger in Gadyukino. You walk over to the girl and introduce yourself and ask if she wants help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope, while you walk over behind the calf and give it a load slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately to moves forward away from you. The girl smiles in thanks and tells you her name is Miroslava.'
+			'You decide to lend a hand to help the girl with the calf. Your lonely in the village, maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could make it seem to the other villagers that you are not a complete stranger in Gadukino. You walk over to the girl and introduce yourself and ask if she wants help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope, while you walk over behind the calf and give it a load slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately to moves forward away from you. The girl smiles in thanks and tells you her name is Miroslava.'
 			'Together you are able to guide the calf back into its pen. Miroslava turns out to be quite a sociable girl and conversationalist. You learn that her family was recently forced to move to the village from the city. Her father''s huge gambling debts to some questionable men forced him to eventually sell the family''s property in the city to pay them back. Mira is having a rough time adjusting to the life in a small village. She misses the apartment in the center of the city and the money to buy nice dresses and makeup with. After selling everything and paying off the debt, her father was told to leave the city "or else...", so they were destitute and could only afford to buy a house in this seedy dust covered village. You walk with her and chat until you reach her house, which is only a few away from your grandparent''s place. Mira invites you to come and visit her at any time. She is just as bored in the village as you are.'
 
 			act 'Finish': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			gt 'gadukino'
 		end
 	else
-		'<center><h2>Village Gadyukino</h2></center>'
+		'<center><h2>Village Gadukino</h2></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/walk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You kill time, walking through the village.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gadukino'
@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Village Gadyukino</h2></center>'
+	'<center><h2>Village Gadukino</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/walk.jpg"></center>'
 	'You kill time, walking through the village.'
 

locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'to_gadukino':
 	!family_trip_month = 1
 	minut += rand(15,25)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know, you''ve arrived in Gadyukino. Your grandparents have lived here for forty years.'
+	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know, you''ve arrived in Gadukino. Your grandparents have lived here for forty years.'
 	act 'Go into the house': gt 'gadhouse'
 end
 

locations/gpoli.qsrc

@@ -104,20 +104,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if pcs_health < (pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5):
-			act 'Get treated for your poor health (1:00)':
-				cla
-				minut += 60
-				pcs_health = pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5 + 1000
-				if pillcon > 0 and rand(0,4) = 0:pillcon -= 2500
-				'After a quick discussion about your health, the doctor gives you an injection with a strange pink fluid. You immediately feel much better.'
-
-				act 'Leave':gt $curloc
-			end
-		end
-
-		if pain['total'] > 10:
-			act 'Pain relief (1:00)':
+		if pcs_health < (pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5) or pain['total'] > 10:
+			act 'See a Doctor about your health (1:00)':
 				cla
 				minut += 60
 				if pain['head'] > 0:pain['head'] -= rand(7,13)
@@ -157,7 +145,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if pain['clitoris'] > 0:pain['clitoris'] -= rand(7,13)
 				if pain['urethra'] > 0:pain['urethra'] -= rand(7,13)
 				if pain['cervix'] > 0:pain['cervix'] -= rand(7,13)
-				'You receive a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot which not only helps the pain but speeds your recovery too permanently reducing your current pain.'
+				pcs_health = pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5 + 1000
+				if pillcon > 0 and rand(0,4) = 0:pillcon -= 2500
+				gs 'stat'
+				'After a quick discussion about your health, the doctor gives you an injection with a strange pink fluid, a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot which not only helps the pain but speeds your recovery too, permanently reducing your current pain and increasing your health. You immediately feel much better, and should recover health faster over the coming days.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gpoli'
 			end
@@ -1287,7 +1278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 			gs 'stat'
 			*clr
 			cla
-			minute += 5
+			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/mward/old_nurse.jpg"></center>'
 			'Nurse: Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, how can I help you?'
 			act 'Donate your breast milk (0:15)':

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -317,13 +317,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 		'With the school open you can go to the <a href="exec:gt ''gschool_grounds'',''change_room''">changing rooms</a> by the gym and change your outfit.'
 	end
 
-	if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10:
+	if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10 and SchoolBlock = 0:
 		'Athletic students of your school and other schools in the area have gathered at the athletics track near your school. Everyone is getting ready for the running competition.'
 
 		act 'Participate in the 400m sprint event':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'SchoolRun2'
 	end
 
-	if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 1 and hour = 10:
+	if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 1 and hour = 10 and SchoolBlock = 0:
 		'Athletic students of your school and other schools in the area have gathered at the athletics track near your school. Everyone is getting ready for the running competition.'
 
 		act 'Participate in the 400m sprint race':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'SchoolRun'

locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					*nl
 					'Christina replies back, "Bella better hope that you are right. I will find out one way or another." Christina quickly turns off her phone then slams her hand on the table, causing Anatoly to jump up in surprise before quickly looking around the room for the source of the noise before shrugging and continuing with his lesson.'
 				else
-					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Have you seen what Zinaida was wearing this morning? Another burlap sack. Doesn''t she realize how bad she looks, and would it kill her to comb her hair? She looks like a fucking scarecrow." You reply, "Yeah she doesn''t really seem to care about her appearance at all." Christina replies, "Exactly! She is such an eyesore, anyway have you been watching my races? I have been undefeated since I have started." You text back, "I have seen a few and I am always impressed at how fast you can move." Christina gives you a wink before replying, "Keep training and maybe you and I will keep the first two spots reserved for us. You can be the one in second of course."'
+					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Have you seen what Zinaida was wearing this morning? Another hessian sack. Doesn''t she realize how bad she looks, and would it kill her to comb her hair? She looks like a fucking scarecrow." You reply, "Yeah she doesn''t really seem to care about her appearance at all." Christina replies, "Exactly! She is such an eyesore, anyway have you been watching my races? I have been undefeated since I have started." You text back, "I have seen a few and I am always impressed at how fast you can move." Christina gives you a wink before replying, "Keep training and maybe you and I will keep the first two spots reserved for us. You can be the one in second of course."'
 					*nl
 					'You giggle as you reply, "Sure sounds like fun." While sticking your tongue out at her, causing you both to giggle before turning back to your phones.'
 				end

locations/hanters.qsrc

@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ else
 	act'Talk to Igor':gt'IgorHanter'
 end
 
-!actions if the SG slut in Gadyukino
+!actions if the SG slut in Gadukino
 if hantersRape = 3:
 	cla
 	*clr

locations/hotel_resep.qsrc

@@ -115,14 +115,14 @@ if proshotelopen = 1 and proshotelday ! daystart:
 			gs'stat'
 			if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 				'You enter the room with Pavlin.'
-				'"You just sit down on the bed, the client will be here in a few minutes."'
+				'"You just sit down on the bed; the client will be here in a few minutes."'
 			else
 				'You go to the room and knock on the door. Pavlin opens the door.'
 				'He lets you enter the room and offers you to sit down on the couch.'
 				'"When the girl at the desk called me I informed the customer straight away, they will be here shortly."'
 			end
 			'Indeed not one minute later there was a knock on the door, Pavlin opened up and had a short conversation with the customer. The customer handed him a wad of cash and entered the room.'
-			'"I''ll be waiting in the hotelbar, meet me there when you are done girl," said Pavlin while he left the room.'
+			'"I''ll be waiting in the hotel bar, meet me there when you are done girl," said Pavlin while he left the room.'
 			act 'Perform your duty':gt 'hotel_resep', 'pavgenpros'
 		end
 	end
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 	if npc_rel['A217'] = 6 and pavlevent = 0:
 		'You are sure the money he received from the customer was more than double this amount'
 		'You bring up the issue: "Actually Pavlin I believe I should get more money, I am doing all the work here and I know these guys pay you much more than this."'
-		' Where Pavlin was still sitting there with a big smile a moment before, the moment you mentioned the money a gloom came over his face. this only lasted a few moments and then his smile reappeared.'
+		' Where Pavlin was still sitting there with a big smile a moment before, the moment you mentioned the money a gloom came over his face. This only lasted a few moments and then his smile reappeared.'
 		'"You are right <<$pcs_firstname>>, come with me to my car I''ll give you a bonus today."'
 		'You are excited at the prospect of finally getting the money you earned but you are unsure if you can trust Pavlin.'
 		minut += 5
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavgenpros':
 
 	'You move the dick out of your mouth and tell him to put on a condom and fuck you.'
 	if pcs_dom >= 25:
-		'The man wanted to start arguing but he could see you would not be pursuaded.'
+		'The man wanted to start arguing but he could see you would not be persuaded.'
 		gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_his_condom'
 	elseif rand(0,2) = 1 and pcs_dom < 25:
 
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavgenpros':
 			'"I don''t care bitch <<$npc_firstname[''A217'']>> still owes me a favor, so you are going to lie there and take it."'
 			'You try to get away but <<$boydesc>> pins you down and guides his cock towards your ass'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'"at least use some lub..."'
+			'"at least use some lube..."'
 			'Before you can finish your sentence <<$boydesc>> has already penetrated your anus and is thrusting with all his might.'
 			'You were not ready for it and start screaming your longs out.'
 			'Luckily he did not last long and after 30 seconds he blew his load in your ass'

locations/korrPar.qsrc

@@ -216,8 +216,10 @@ if hour >= 16 and hour <= 20 and indorf = 0:
 		elseif schoolPredupr = 2:
 			schoolPredupr = 3
 			SchoolBlock = 1
+			ParHomeBlock = 1
 			home_owned[2] = 0
 			schoolprogul = 0
+			pcs_grades = 0
 			if $clothingworntype = 'school' and clothingwornnumber = 6:gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			'As you enter the hallway, you find your mother there waiting for you. You have never seen her this furious. "<<$pcs_nickname>>? I just got off the phone with the school, they told me you didn''t show up yet again and expelled you. I''ve had it with you! I''ve warned you so many times! Go ahead, live your irresponsible life the way you want. You''re no longer welcome here." She already packed up all your things from your room before you got home, and roughly shoves the bag into your hands. After that, she pushes you out the door and slams it shut in your face.'
 

locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -52,10 +52,10 @@ act 'Drink some water (0:05)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 
 act 'Have a cup of tea (0:05)':
 	cls
-	minut += 5
 	if pcs_hydra >= 100:
 		'You don''t need any more tea.'
 	else
+		minut += 5
 		pcs_hydra += 80
 		cumspclnt = 2
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'

locations/lact_lib.qsrc

@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/milk_sink.jpg"></center>'
 			'<center>You pour <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breast milk into the sink and clean up your breastpump.</center>'
-			minute += 5
+			minut += 5
 			act 'Finish':
 				milkedvolume = 0
 				gt $loc, $metka
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 				else
 					pcs_hydra = 100
 				end
-				minute += 7
+				minut += 7
 				act 'Finish':
 					milkedvolume = 0
 					gt $loc, $metka

locations/mey_home.qsrc

@@ -168,13 +168,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 
 	act 'Have a cup of tea (0:05)':
 		cls
-		minut += 5
-		cumspclnt = 2
-		gs 'cum_cleanup'
-		pcs_breath = 0
-		pcs_mood += rand(1, 3)
-		'You make a refreshing cup of tea and everything seems a little better.'
-
+		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
+			'You don''t need any more tea.'
+		else
+			minut += 5
+			pcs_hydra += 80
+			cumspclnt = 2
+			gs 'cum_cleanup'
+			pcs_breath = 0
+			pcs_mood += rand(3, 6)
+			'You make a refreshing cup of tea and everything seems a little better.'
+		end
+	
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt 'mey_home', '1'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if motherWorry = 1 and indorf = 0:
 		motherWorry = 0
 		npc_rel['A29'] -= 1
-		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 		if $loc = 'gkafe':
 			'Your mother looks at you from across the cafe counter, "<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, Where the hell have you been! I have been worried sick!" You mother then looks around the small cafe and says with a frown, "We will talk about this when we get home."'
 		else
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if pcs_haircol ! nathcol and pcs_haircol <= 3 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60: 
 			$texthcol2 = 'says with a frown, "You should concentrate on your studies, not on how you look."'
 		elseif pcs_haircol ! nathcol and pcs_haircol > 3 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60:
-			delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+			delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 			$texthcol2 = 'then angrily grabs a handful of your hair. She holds it tightly but doesn''t quite pull it. "What a fool you are. Do you want to throw away your future? Get out of my sight!"'
 		else
 			$texthcol2 = 'says with a smile, "It looks nice on you. I''m sure the boys will like it too. Just make sure you keep your grades up."'
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			act'Show her your pierced tongue':
 				cls
 				pirsAmother=1
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/a<<pirsA>>.jpg" ></center>'
 				'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue, showing her your shiny new piercing.'
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		act'I just think it looks pretty':
 			cls
 			pirsBmother=1
-			delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+			delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/b<<pirsB>>.jpg" ></center>'
 			'You shrug and answer with a sweet smile on your face: "I like it, I think it looks cute. Don''t you agree?"'
@@ -188,14 +188,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if pirsD > 0 and pirsD < 10000 and pirsDmother=0:
 		!!mother notices a nose ring
 		pirsDmother=1
-		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 		'Your mother looks a bit shocked at your nose ring: "Jesus, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what is- why?! I understand putting a ring in a bull''s nose to lead them by, but on a person? There''s no reason to do that!"'
 	end
 
 	if pirsE > 0 and pirsE < 10000 and pirsEmother=0:
 		!!mother notices eyebrow piercing
 		pirsEmother=1
-		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 		'Your mother doesn''t understand why you go an eyebrow piercing: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why would you want that thing in your eyebrow?" She shakes her head in exasperation. "Kids these days..."'
 		''
 	end
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			minut += 60
 			npc_rel['A29'] += rand(1, 5)
 			pcs_mood -= 10
-			delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+			delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 			TotalMomPom += 1
 			MomPom += 1
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if npc_QW['A29'] = 0:npc_QW['A29'] = 1
 
 				if momslut < 2:
-					delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+					delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 					'Your mother is furious and grabs you by the ear, pulling you out of the clinic and onto the street. "Oh, you slut! Your father and I worked so hard to raise you as a decent person, hoping you would find a good husband some day... and now it turns out you''re a whore who has already put her pussy to work. Get out of my sight!" She storms off, leaving you to find your own way home. When you return home, you make sure you do it quietly so she can''t give you another earful.'
 				else
 					'Your mother shakes her head sadly when she reads the referral. "Well... I guess I shouldn''t be surprised."'
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			elseif motherKnowWhore > 0 and npc_QW['A29'] < 2:
 				npc_rel['A29'] -= 10
 				motherKnowSpravka = 1
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				if npc_QW['A29'] = 0:npc_QW['A29'] = 1
 				'Your mother reads the referral and closes her eyes for a second, trying to suppress her anger. "To be honest, it''s not even a surprise to me. Don''t think that I haven''t seen you sneaking around the house at weird times, and all the guys loitering near our apartment."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A29'] >= 2:
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if alko > 1 and alkomday ! daystart:
 		alkomday = daystart
 		npc_rel['A29'] -= 1
-		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+		delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 		'Your mother can smell you have been drinking alcohol, and gives you a lecture: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why do you smell of alcohol? You''re still too young to drink, you could get into all sorts of trouble!"'
 	end
 
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if motherKnowWhore = 0:motherKnowWhore = 1
 
 			if momslut < 2:
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				'When you approach her, your mother looks concerned at you and then sighs exasperatedly, rolling her eyes in disgust. When you look down to see what got her so angry, you realize you forgot about the cum stains on your face. They''re quite large, and very recognizable as such.'
 				'"I tell everyone my daughter is decent, and meanwhile it turns out she fucks around like a common whore and then proudly displays the stains for the whole town to see. Slut! Get out of my sight!" You can tell your mother is struggling to resist the urge to slap you.'
 				'You try to calm her down and tell her that''s not true, but she''s too upset right now and not interested in listening to you.'
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if motherKnowWhore = 0:motherKnowWhore = 1
 
 			if momslut < 2:
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				'Your mother glares at you. You realize she must have noticed the cum stains on your face, and feel terrible.'
 				'"Again, you fucking little whore? I was already so ashamed of you! Get out of my sight!"'
 				'Knowing there is nothing you can say to make it better right now, you simply mumble an apology and leave quickly.'
@@ -659,12 +659,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if ($clothingworntype = 'formal' or $clothingworntype = 'expensive') and hour > 9:'Your mother looks a bit puzzled at your fancy clothes: "Well well, look at you... why are you so dressed up? Big plans today?"'
 
 	if week = 5 and dostupindorf = 1:
-		if hour > 9:'While your mother is working on some meals in the kitchen, she remembers something and looks at you: "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, while you''re here... we''re going to visit your grandparents in Gadyukino tomorrow. We leave at noon (12:00) tomorrow, so if you want to come along you should meet me in the kitchen before then."'
+		if hour > 9:'While your mother is working on some meals in the kitchen, she remembers something and looks at you: "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, while you''re here... we''re going to visit your grandparents in Gadukino tomorrow. We leave at noon (12:00) tomorrow, so if you want to come along you should meet me in the kitchen before then."'
 	elseif week = 6 and dostupindorf = 1:
 		if hour > 9 and hour < 12:
-			'Your mother is finishing up on some meals before leaving for Gadyukino and puts down her work for a second. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, well? Do you want to come with us to Gadyukino or would you rather stay home with Anya?"'
+			'Your mother is finishing up on some meals before leaving for Gadukino and puts down her work for a second. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, well? Do you want to come with us to Gadukino or would you rather stay home with Anya?"'
 
-			act 'Go to Gadyukino':hour = 12 & minut = 0 & indorf = 1 & gt 'famdorfride'
+			act 'Go to Gadukino':hour = 12 & minut = 0 & indorf = 1 & gt 'famdorfride'
 		end
 	end
 end	
@@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				npc_rel['A29'] -= 20
 				pregTalkFamily = 1
 				pregtalkmom = 1
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				if motherKnowSpravka = 0:motherKnowSpravka = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your mother, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				npc_rel['A29'] -= 20
 				pregTalkFamily = 1
 				pregtalkmom = 1
-				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadyukino for the summer
+				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
 				if motherKnowSpravka = 0:motherKnowSpravka = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your mother, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
@@ -836,11 +836,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] <= 80 and pregtalkbrother = 1 and brothersecret = 0:
 		'Before you can even finish the second syllable of your brother''s name, you see the rage building in your mother''s face. She balls her fists and visibly shakes, making it clear that she is using all of her strength to stop herself from transferring that strength from her open palm to your face.. '
@@ -855,11 +855,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] > 80 and pregtalkbrother = 1 and brothersecret = 0:
 		'Your mother stares in stunned silence as you utter Kolka''s name. Her knees seem to give out, and she barely manages to hold herself up by leaning on the counter.'
@@ -884,11 +884,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 60 and (pregtalkbrother = 0 or brothersecret = 1):
 		'As soon as your brother''s name crosses your lips, your mother''s face visibly reddens. Her mouth curls into a snarl and she reaches up and grips you by your hair. '
@@ -904,11 +904,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'Eventually, you get up, wipe your face.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] <= 80 and (pregtalkbrother = 0 or brothersecret = 1):
 		'Before you can even finish the second syllable of your brother''s name, you see the rage building in your mother''s face. She balls her fists and visibly shakes, making it clear that she is using all of her strength to stop herself from transferring that strength from her open palm to your face.. '
@@ -922,11 +922,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] > 80 and (pregtalkbrother = 0 or brothersecret = 1):
 		'Your mother stares in stunned silence as you utter Kolka''s name. Her knees seem to give out, and she barely manages to hold herself up by leaning on the counter.'
@@ -946,11 +946,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		if hour < 19:
 			'You decide to go apartment hunting.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'You decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. Tomorrow, you’ll need to go apartment shopping.'
 
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsKolka = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -976,10 +976,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] <= 80 and pregtalkbrother = 1 and brothersecret = 0:
 		'Before you''re able to finish the second syllable of your step-father''s name, you see the rage building in your mother''s face. She tightens her fist and is visibly shaking, making it clear that she is using all of her might to hinder herself from attacking you...'
@@ -994,10 +994,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] > 80 and pregtalkstepdad = 1 and stepdadSecret = 0:
 		'Your mother stares at you in stunned silence as you utter Vladimir''s name. Her knees seem to give out, as she barely manages to hold herself up by leaning on the counter.'
@@ -1023,10 +1023,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 60 and (pregtalkstepdad = 0 or stepdadSecret = 1):
 		'As soon as your step-father''s name crosses your lips, your mother''s face visibly reddens. Her mouth curls into a snarl and she reaches up and grips you by your hair and starts draging you around.'
@@ -1047,10 +1047,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] <= 80 and (pregtalkstepdad = 0 or stepdadSecret = 1):
 		'Before you''re able to finish the second syllable of your step-father''s name, you see the rage building in your mother''s face. She tightens her fist and is visibly shaking, making it clear that she is using all of her might to hinder herself from attacking you...'
@@ -1065,10 +1065,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] > 80 and (pregtalkstepdad = 0 or stepdadSecret = 1):
 		'Your mother stares at you in stunned silence as you utter Vladimir''s name. Her knees seem to give out, as she barely manages to hold herself up by leaning on the counter.'
@@ -1094,10 +1094,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'Eventually, you get up and wipe your face. You have no choice but to fend for yourself now.'
 		if hour < 19:
 			'As there is still some time left of the day you decide to go apartment hunting. You need to find somewhere to stay as soon as possible.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		else
 			'It''s too late to look for an apartment today. Instead you decide to look for a place to sleep tonight. You''ll need to go apartment hunting first thing tomorrow.'
-			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
+			act 'Continue':momKnowsVladimir = 1 & home_owned[2] = 0 & ParHomeBlock = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/npcstatic2.qsrc

@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Miroslava'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Mira'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Mira'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Girl from Gadyukino. Daughter of Afanasiy'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Girl from Gadukino. Daughter of Afanasiy'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = ((school_year - 1) * 10000) + 0805
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Kolyambu'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Kolyambu'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Boy from Gadyukino'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Boy from Gadukino'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
@@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Vasyanya'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Vasya'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Vasya'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Boy from Gadyukino'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Boy from Gadukino'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)

locations/npcstatic4.qsrc

@@ -1981,7 +1981,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Styopa'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Stepan'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = ''
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Uncle Styopa'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A Fisherman in Gadyukino.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A Fisherman in Gadukino.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
@@ -2074,7 +2074,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrei'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrew'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = ''
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Unknown Man'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadyukino.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadukino.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19800317
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
@@ -2167,7 +2167,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Igor'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Igor'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = ''
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Unknown Man'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadyukino.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadukino.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19920609
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
@@ -2260,7 +2260,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Sergey'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Sergey'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = ''
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Unknown Man'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadyukino.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A hunter in Gadukino.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19850000
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,50)

locations/npcstatic5.qsrc

@@ -1206,7 +1206,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Mariya'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Mari'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Enstky'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Mari'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A farm girl who grew up in Gadyukino before she got tired of it and jumped head first into the big city life by doing nude modelling. Has become very accustomed to being nude to the point that she takes some level of joy in it, although not like that of an exhibitionist. She thinks she''s straight but she''s actually bisexual and doesn''t know it.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'A farm girl who grew up in Gadukino before she got tired of it and jumped head first into the big city life by doing nude modelling. Has become very accustomed to being nude to the point that she takes some level of joy in it, although not like that of an exhibitionist. She thinks she''s straight but she''s actually bisexual and doesn''t know it.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19980520
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(20,30)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(20,30)

locations/pavResidential.qsrc

@@ -141,11 +141,11 @@ end
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''pavResidential'' & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
 
-if SchoolBlock = 0:
+!if SchoolBlock = 0:
 	$schoolname = ' and the local <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''gschool_grounds'', ''main''">school</a>.'
-else
-	'.'
-end
+!else
+!	'.'
+!end
 
 'The town surrounds the old palace grounds which are now a large <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''gskver'', ''start''">public park</a>, close to the residential area is the <a href="exec:gt ''glake''">lake</a>.'
 
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ else
 end
 !!end of code changes.
 
-if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and week < 6 and hour >= 4 and hour < 9: act '<font color = green><b>Go to school</b></font>': minut += 1 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and week < 6 and hour >= 4 and hour < 9: act '<font color = green><b>Go to school</b></font>': minut += 1 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 
 act 'Go to the high street':minut += 5 & gt 'pavCommercial'
 if home_owned[2] = 1: act '<b>GO HOME</b> (Parents'' Apartment)': minut += 4 & GT 'korrPar'

locations/pavSharedApt.qsrc

@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	gs 'kit_din'
 	'<center><h3>Kitchen</h3></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/kuhrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'It is a modest kitchen but has all that is needed.'
+	'It''s a modest kitchen, but has all that is needed.'
 
 	! dishes
 	if cltarelka > 0:
@@ -593,11 +593,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	else
 		'<b><font color = red>You have no clean dishes left.</font></b>'
 	end
-	if dirttarelka > 0:'The sink has <b><<dirttarelka>></b> pieces of dirty dishes. <a href="exec: dynamic $dirtarm">That can be washed and</a>.'
+	if dirttarelka > 0:'The sink has <b><<dirttarelka>></b> dirty dishes. <a href="exec: dynamic $dirtarm">that need to be washed</a>.'
 	if fairy > 0:
-		'above the sink is a detergent to wash the dishes with, there is enough for <b><<fairy>></b> time.'
+		'Above the sink is some detergent to wash the dishes with. There is enough for <b><<fairy>></b> uses.'
 	else
-		'<b><font color = red>you do not have any detergent to wash the dishes, You need to buy detergent.</font></b>'
+		'<b><font color = red>You do not have enough detergent, you should buy some from the supermarket.</font></b>'
 	end
 
 	! food
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 		'In the refrigerator there''s enough (your own) food for <b><<eda>></b> servings. <<$edagot>>'
 	end
 	if edahot > 0:'<a href="exec: dynamic $edahotd ">On the table is ready meal (0:30).</a>'
-	if edaD = 0 and eda = 0:'<b><font color="red">Yyou have nothing to eat, the refrigerator is empty!</font></b>'
+	if edaD = 0 and eda = 0:'<b><font color="red">You have nothing to eat, the refrigerator is empty!</font></b>'
 
 	if eda >= 3:
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''pavSharedApt'', ''cookForGuys''">Cook meal (1:30) for the guys</a>'

locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -1099,8 +1099,8 @@ $housemates = {
 	gs 'stat'
 	 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/housemates.jpg"></center>'
 	'Floor 1 - Apartment number 2: Artem Chebotarev'
-	'Floor 2 - Apartment number 7: your parents								Apartment number 9: Uncle Misha'
-	'Floor 3 - Apartment number 13: Sergey and Vasily Shulgin	 	Apartment number 14: Julia Milova'
+	'Floor 2 - Apartment number 7: your parents							Apartment number 9: Uncle Misha'
+	'Floor 3 - Apartment number 13: Sergey and Vasily Shulgin	 		Apartment number 15: Julia Milova'
 	'Floor 4 - Apartment number 19: Natasha Belova						Apartment number 21: Aunt Luda'
 	'Floor 5'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
@@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_2':
 	if home_owned[2] = 1:
 		act '<font color = maroon>Your apartment</font>':gt 'korrPar'
 	end
-	act 'Apartment 7: Uncle Misha':
+	act 'Apartment 9: Uncle Misha':
 		cla
 		if hour >= 0 and hour < 5:
 			'It''s too late to visit uncle Misha, he''s probably sleeping now.'
@@ -1218,9 +1218,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_3':
 	'<<$etaj3_smoke_rnd>>'
 	'<<$pod_ev_rnd>>'
 
-	act 'Apartment number 11: Vasily and Sergei Shulgin':gt 'shulgahome'
+	act 'Apartment number 13: Vasily and Sergei Shulgin':gt 'shulgahome'
 	if BeInJulMilHome = 1: 
-		act 'Apartment number 12: Julia Milova': gt 'JuliaMilVhod'
+		act 'Apartment number 15: Julia Milova': gt 'JuliaMilVhod'
 	end
 	act 'Go down to the second floor': gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 	act 'Go up to the fourth floor': gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_4'
@@ -1238,10 +1238,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_4':
 	'<<$pod_ev_rnd2>>'
 	
 	if BeInNatBelHome = 1: 
-		act 'Apartment number 14: Natasha Belova': gt 'NatBelVhod'
+		act 'Apartment number 19: Natasha Belova': gt 'NatBelVhod'
 	end
 
-	act 'Apartment number 16: Aunt Luda': 
+	act 'Apartment number 21: Aunt Luda': 
 		*clr & cla
 		minut +=1
 		gs 'stat'

locations/poli.qsrc

@@ -40,24 +40,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	act 'Go see a cosmetic surgeon':gt 'poli','cosmetic1'
 
-	if pcs_health < (pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5):
-		act 'Ask the doctor for a health treatment (1:00)':
-			cla
-			minut += 60
-			pcs_health = pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5 + 1000
-			if pillcon > 0 and rand(0,4) = 0:pillcon -= 2500
-			if hosprand = 0:gt 'poli', '0'
-			if hosprand = 1:gt 'poli', '1'
-			if hosprand = 2:gt 'poli', '2'
-
-			'The doctor guides you to a bed and tells you to lie down, after which he gives you a shot. You feel drowsy for a little while, but afterwards you feel a lot better and healthier.'
-
-			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
-		end
-	end
-
-	if pain['total'] > 10:
-		act 'Ask the doctor to treat your pains (1:00)':
+	if pcs_health < (pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5) or pain['total'] > 10:
+		act 'See a Doctor about your health (1:00)':
 			cla
 			minut += 60
 			if pain['head'] > 0:pain['head'] -= rand(7,13)
@@ -97,12 +81,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if pain['clitoris'] > 0:pain['clitoris'] -= rand(7,13)
 			if pain['urethra'] > 0:pain['urethra'] -= rand(7,13)
 			if pain['cervix'] > 0:pain['cervix'] -= rand(7,13)
-			'The doctor guides you to a bed and tells you to lie down, after which he gives you a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot.'
-			'You feel drowsy for a little while, but afterwards you feel a lot better. The shot sped up your aching body''s recovery by a lot, meaning the pain probably won''t come back nearly as strongly when the shot wears off.'
+			pcs_health = pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5 + 1000
+			if pillcon > 0 and rand(0,4) = 0:pillcon -= 2500
+			gs 'stat'
 
 			if hosprand = 0:gt 'poli', '0'
 			if hosprand = 1:gt 'poli', '1'
 			if hosprand = 2:gt 'poli', '2'
+			'The doctor guides you to a bed and tells you to lie down, after which he gives you a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot.'
+			'You feel drowsy for a little while, but afterwards you feel a lot better. The shot sped up your aching body''s recovery by a lot, meaning the pain probably won''t come back nearly as strongly when the shot wears off, and should aid your health recovery over the coming days.'
 
 			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end

locations/pornstudio.qsrc

@@ -639,7 +639,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'options':
 										$pornofday += '<font color="grey"><<$porndesc[pornplan[''<<counter>>,<<porns>>'']]>></font><br>'
 									elseif pfilmday[counter - 5] > 0 and porntaken['<<counter>>,<<porns>>'] = 0:
 										$pornofday += '<font color="grey"><<$porndesc[pornplan[''<<counter>>,<<porns>>'']]>></font><br>'
-										$pornofday += '<font color="grey"><<$porndesc[pornplan[''<<counter>>,<<porns>>'']]>></font><br>'
 									elseif pfilmday[counter + 1] > 0 and porntaken['<<counter>>,<<porns>>'] = 0:
 										$pornofday += '<font color="grey"><<$porndesc[pornplan[''<<counter>>,<<porns>>'']]>></font><br>'
 									elseif pfilmday[counter + 2] > 0 and porntaken['<<counter>>,<<porns>>'] = 0:

locations/preALT.qsrc

@@ -55,7 +55,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Three':
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/schoolgirl.jpg"></center>'
 			'Welcome to the Schoolgirl version! You will need to carry on with your school life, manage your relationships and deal with whatever else comes up along the way!'
-			act 'Begin': close all & gt 'bedrPar'
+			act 'Begin':
+				close all
+				if $month = 'June':
+					gt'Gaddvor'
+				else
+					gt'pavComplex','start'
+				end
+			end
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Continue': close all & gt 'preALT', 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start'
@@ -71,7 +78,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/gadukino.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are on summer holiday with your parents and have been stuck here weeks. Good thing this evening you are finally going home, there is nothing to do here but watch animals graze.'
+	'You are on summer holiday with your parents and have been stuck here weeks. Good thing this evening you''re finally able to go home, there is nothing to do here but watch animals graze.'
 
 	act 'Take a walk':
 		*clr
@@ -135,7 +142,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start':
 		end
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/magicschoolgirl.jpg"></center>'
 		'Welcome to the Cursed Schoolgirl version! Guide <<$pcs_nickname>> through her school life, relationships and myriad other issues that might pop up and all with the added spice of magic to keep things interesting!'
-		act 'Begin!': gt'pavResidential'
+		act 'Begin':
+			close all
+			if $month = 'June':
+				gt'Gaddvor'
+			else
+				gt'pavComplex','start'
+			end
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -201,14 +215,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start 2':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Lay low for now. Go on with your life. We will contact you if anything comes up. Gustav here will drop you off at your home."'
+							'"Lay low for now. Go on with your life. We will contact you if anything comes up. Gustav here will drop you off at your '+iif($month = 'June','grandparent''s','parent''s')+'."'
 
 							act 'Follow Gustav':
 								hour = 18
 								cla
 								*clr
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
-								'You give Gustav directions to your house and half an hour later he drops you off in front of your home.'
+								if $month = 'June':
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/gadukino.jpg"></center>'
+									'You give Gustav directions to your grandparent''s house, half an hour later he drops you off at your grandparent''s yard in Gadukino.'
+								else
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
+									'You give Gustav directions to your family''s apartment building, half an hour later he drops you off in front of your apartment complex in Pavlovsk.'
+								end
 								act 'Continue':
 									showstat 1
 									showobjs 1
@@ -221,7 +240,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start 2':
 									*clr
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/magicschoolgirl.jpg"></center>'
 									'Welcome to the Cursed Schoolgirl version! Guide <<$pcs_nickname>> through her school life, relationships and myriad other issues that might pop up and all with the added spice of magic to keep things interesting!'
-									act 'Begin!': gt'pavResidential'
+									act 'Begin!':
+										if $month = 'June':
+											gt'Gaddvor'
+										else
+											gt'pavComplex','start'
+										end
+									end
 								end
 							end
 						end

locations/rinok.qsrc

@@ -121,10 +121,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $metka = 'start':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 
-		'On the counter is a very entertaining fantasy book, that is all 150 <b>₽</b> and women''s novels are in paperback standing 300 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'On the counter is a very entertaining fantasy book, a science fiction book and women''s romance novels. They all cost 350 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy a book of fantasy 350r':
+			act 'Buy a book of fantasy 350 <b>₽</b>':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $metka = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy a book of science fiction 350r':
+			act 'Buy a book of science fiction 350 <b>₽</b>':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $metka = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy ladies for romance 350r':
+			act 'Buy ladies for romance 350 <b>₽</b>':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350

locations/road.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/road.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'<center><<nroad>> km</center>'
-	'Calling it a highway would be too much credit, but this road is the main way to get from St. Petersburg to the town of Pavlovsk, 20km away. Smaller villages named Gadyukino and Pushkin can be found along the way. Cars are driving by you at a high speed.'
+	'Calling it a highway would be too much credit, but this road is the main way to get from St. Petersburg to the town of Pavlovsk, 20km away. Smaller villages named Gadukino and Pushkin can be found along the way. Cars are driving by you at a high speed.'
 
 	if car > 0 and cardrive = 22 and ncarroad = nroad:'You parked <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">your <<$car>></a> next to the road.'
 	if nroad = 0:act 'Go to the City Industrial Region (0:15)':minut += 15 & gt 'nord'
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			elseif gorand>60:
 				gs 'road', 'autostop_d'
 				if nroad<15:
-					act 'Ask the driver to take you to Gadyukino':
-						$road_textrand0 = 'Gadyukino'
+					act 'Ask the driver to take you to Gadukino':
+						$road_textrand0 = 'Gadukino'
 						gt 'road', 'autostpo_money'
 					end
 				end
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			elseif gorand>60:
 				gs 'road', 'autostop_d'
 				if nroad>15:
-					act 'Ask the driver to take you to Gadyukino':
-						$road_textrand0 = 'Gadyukino'
+					act 'Ask the driver to take you to Gadukino':
+						$road_textrand0 = 'Gadukino'
 						gt 'road', 'autostpo_money'
 					end
 				end
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	elseif nroad = 9:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 10:
-		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''village''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. In the same direction, a dirt road leads to the village of <a href="exec:minut += 30 & gt ''gadukino''">Gadyukino</a>.'
+		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''village''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. In the same direction, a dirt road leads to the village of <a href="exec:minut += 30 & gt ''gadukino''">Gadukino</a>.'
 	elseif nroad = 11:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 12:
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex1':
 	swallow += 1
 	spafinloc = 12
 	gs 'cum_manage'
-	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadyukino':
+	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadukino':
         minut+=15
         nroad=15
 	elseif $road_textrand0 = 'Pavlovsk':
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex2':
 	hja += 1
 	spafinloc = 7
 	gs 'cum_manage'
-	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadyukino':
+	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadukino':
         minut+=15
         nroad=10
 	elseif $road_textrand0 = 'Pavlovsk':
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autospot_drive':
 	cls
 	gs'stat'
 	money -= autostop_price * 100
-	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadyukino':
+	if $road_textrand0 = 'Gadukino':
         minut += 15
         nroad = 10
 	elseif $road_textrand0 = 'Pavlovsk':

locations/stwork.qsrc

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Use staff toilet':gt 'stwork', 'toilet'
 	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
 	act 'Change your clothes':gt 'wardrobe', 'start'
-	act 'Have a cup of water (0:05)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
+	act 'Have a cup of water (0:10)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 	if money >= 100:
 		act 'Have a snack (0:05) (100 <b>₽</b>)': money -= 100 & gs 'food', 'snack'
 	end

locations/succubus.qsrc

@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'sucwalkinginit':
 	!!'HotelRoom' = Hotel next to train station in Pavlovsk
 	!!Zone 3; 'ybedr' = Mansion outside city
 	!!Zone 4; 'bedr2x' = Apartment in "Old Town" (aka Pushkin)
-	!!Zone 5; 'Gadhouse' = Grandmother's house in Gadyukino
+	!!Zone 5; 'Gadhouse' = Grandmother's house in Gadukino
 
 	if $loc = 'bedr' or $loc = 'tanspalnya' or $loc = 'dom_gor' or $loc = 'obroom':
 		sucslpzone = 1

locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ if hanterhelp = 2 and hantersKnow = 0:
 		if hanters > 0:
 			'"I''m Andrei," replied the older man, "and these are my friends, from the city, Igor and Sergei."'
 			'"Is your lastname possibly <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You look at him and nodded approvingly.'
-			'"Don''t be afraid <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... that''s good to know, I''m also from Gadyukino." said Andrei.'
+			'"Don''t be afraid <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... that''s good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 			if pcs_sweat > 0 or dirtyclothes = 1:
 				'"Go on, take a bath and wash your clothes, they''re quite dirty," Andrei continued.'
 				'"Where?"'
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ if hanterhelp = 2 and hantersKnow = 0:
 		else
 			'"Look what the cat dragged in, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local slut.'
 			'You look at him feeling a bit uncomfortable.'
-			'"Don''t be afraid, I''m also from Gadyukino, you look just like your mother when she was younger, and I see you''re also been blessed with good looks." he said.'
+			'"Don''t be afraid, I''m also from Gadukino, you look just like your mother when she was younger, and I see you''re also been blessed with good looks." he said.'
 			'"I''m Andrei," he says, adding "and these are my friends, from the city, Igor and Sergei.'
 			if pcs_sweat > 3 or dirtyclothes = 1:
 				hantersKnowSlut = 1
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ if hanterhelp = 2 and hantersKnow = 0:
 		if hanters > 0:
 			'"I''m Andrei," replied the older man, "and these are my friends from the city, Igor and Sergei."'
 			'"Is your lastname possibly <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You look at him and nodded approvingly.'
-			'"Don''t be afraid <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... that''s good to know, I''m also from Gadyukino." said Andrei.'
+			'"Don''t be afraid <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... that''s good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 			if pcs_sweat > 0:
 				'"You can go and get cleaned up, we''ll try to find some fitting clothes." said Andrei.'
 				'"Where can I clean myself?"'
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if hanterhelp = 2 and hantersKnow = 0:
 		else
 			'"Look what the cat dragged in, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local slut.'
 			'You look at him feeling a bit uncomfortable.'
-			'"Don''t be afraid, I''m also from Gadyukino, you look just like your mother when she was younger, and I see you''re also been blessed with good looks." he said.'
+			'"Don''t be afraid, I''m also from Gadukino, you look just like your mother when she was younger, and I see you''re also been blessed with good looks." he said.'
 			'"I''m Andrei," he says, adding "and these are my friends, from the city, Igor and Sergei.'
 			if pcs_sweat > 0:
 				*clr & cla
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 		end
 	end
 
-	!the conversation of the hunters, if he did porn, in the Studio, dancing strip tease or a slut in Gadyukino
+	!the conversation of the hunters, if he did porn, in the Studio, dancing strip tease or a slut in Gadukino
 	if hanters > 0 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and hantersKnow = 1 and hanters_check = 0:
 		if fame_sexind > 10 and city_modelling > 30 and hantersknowfoto = 0 and hantersIgorLove = 0:
 			*clr & cla
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterstalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'While walking around the swamp you hear the hunters discussing something very lively.'
-			'"I''m telling you, everyone in Gadyukino has had the pleasure to "test out" the goods." you overhear Andrei. As soon as they noticed you the men stop talking and changed the subject to another topic.'
+			'"I''m telling you, everyone in Gadukino has had the pleasure to "test out" the goods." you overhear Andrei. As soon as they noticed you the men stop talking and changed the subject to another topic.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'swamp_yard'
 		end

locations/swamphouse.qsrc

@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				swamp_clothes = 1
 				!gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphouse_tkancloth.jpg"></center>'
-				'You find a piece of burlap... "Well, at least it''s something." you say to yourself.'
+				'You find a piece of hessian... "Well, at least it''s something." you say to yourself.'
 				act 'Back.': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut+=5
 					swamp_clothes = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/tkan_cloth.jpg"></center>'
-					'You look around searching for your clothes but can''t seem to find them, instead you hide behind a piece of burlap... It''s better than nothing.'
+					'You look around searching for your clothes but can''t seem to find them, instead you hide behind a piece of hessian... It''s better than nothing.'
 					act 'Further': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 				end
 			end

locations/train.qsrc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'communal_tickets':
 			'You don''t have enough money for this ticket.'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadyukino (50 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadukino (50 <b>₽</b>)':
 		if money >= 50:
 			money -= 50
 			gt 'train', 'communal_village'
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'communal_trains':
 
 	act 'Take a train to St. Petersburg city industrial area': gt 'train', 'communal_ind'
 
-	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadyukino': gt 'train', 'communal_village'
+	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadukino': gt 'train', 'communal_village'
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old platform by the old town': gt 'train', 'communal_oldtown'
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'communal_village':
 	if rand(1, 100) < 20: gt 'train', 'events'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+	'After 10 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadukino.'
 	act 'Get off the train':
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 		gt 'train', 'village'
@@ -151,9 +151,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'village':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
 	if storyline = 1:
-		'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadyukino where your grandparents reside is not far from here.'
+		'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadukino where your grandparents reside is not far from here.'
 	else
-		'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadyukino where some farmers reside is not far from here.'
+		'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadukino where some farmers reside is not far from here.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Return to the road':minut += 15 & nroad = 10 & gt 'road'
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldtown_tickets':
 			'You don''t have enough money for this ticket.'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadyukino (50 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadukino (50 <b>₽</b>)':
 		if money >= 50:
 			money -= 50
 			gt 'train', 'oldtown_village'
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldtown_trains':
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old platform by the communal village': gt 'train', 'oldtown_communal'
 
-	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadyukino': gt 'train', 'oldtown_village'
+	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadukino': gt 'train', 'oldtown_village'
 
 	act 'Take a train to Pavlovsk': gt 'train', 'oldtown_pavlovsk'
 end
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldtown_village':
 	if rand(1, 100) < 20: gt 'train', 'events'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+	'After 10 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadukino.'
 	act 'Get off the train':
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 		gt 'train', 'village'

locations/vokdinvera.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 
 								if veraboyrand = 0:
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vera/sex/bvtalk0.jpg"></center>'
-									'Vera nods and begins: "My first time was with an adult man, when I was only 14 years old. I grew up in Gadyukino, where basically everyone knows one another and shares everything, so I never dated the local guys. Then one guy, a handsome older man came to the village, in his expensive car. He invited me over to his place, to have some martinis.'
+									'Vera nods and begins: "My first time was with an adult man, when I was only 14 years old. I grew up in Gadukino, where basically everyone knows one another and shares everything, so I never dated the local guys. Then one guy, a handsome older man came to the village, in his expensive car. He invited me over to his place, to have some martinis.'
 									'I felt really attracted to him, so I let him take me to his place. He kept offering me more martinis until I was really drunk. He took off his shirt and I became a bit giddy, licking his chest. It was really nice. And then suddenly, bam! He threw me on my back, ripped my clothes away and stuck his cock inside me. It hurt... it wasn''t unbearable, but I had never had sex before so I was shocked!'
 									'I was just laying there with my legs spread, under his sweaty body, while he was pounding me. Then he pulls out and shoots his sperm all over my stomach. So there I was, on my back... all covered in semen, my pussy all bloody, and what do you think he said!? He said I was like a log... he complained how he had to do all the work! That jerk didn''t even realize he robbed me of my innocence!'
 									'I got angry and left immediately, and never saw him again after that. At least no one in the village found out... I was so ashamed! For a month, I hid from everyone and didn''t even go for a walk, I couldn''t look anyone in the eye after losing my virginity like that."'
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vera/sex/bvtalk8.jpg"></center>'
 									'Vera tells you the last part of her sexual history. You can tell she''s not proud of it, but nevertheless she begins: "After I graduated from college and broke up with Sasha, I had to make a choice: return to the village and tend to some boring cows until I die, or somehow make it in the city. I decided to do the one thing I was good at: have sex. For money. Yeah, you heard me right... I became a prostitute."'
 									'"I figured I would only do it for a little while, earn some money to find my own place and get a good job, and stop there. That''s not what happened though. I ended up in an illegal brothel, the owner had taken my passport and wouldn''t even let me out to buy cigarettes. Several people would come to fuck me every day. The Saturdays were the worst... he''d rent me out to a group of criminals regularly, who would fuck me all night and stick beer bottles in my pussy and anus by the end of the night, when they no longer wanted me. It was hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-									'"I don''t know what would''ve happened to me if the police didn''t raid the brothel that one night, about a year after I got there. I might''ve ended up dead in a ditch somewhere. I spent a few weeks in prison, but after that the court only gave me a fine and released me. With the money I had saved up, I was able to return to Gadyukino and buy a home. Then I met Anatoly, and settled down with him. It''s not the life I had in mind for myself, but you know... it wasn''t so bad, after all I''d been through."'
+									'"I don''t know what would''ve happened to me if the police didn''t raid the brothel that one night, about a year after I got there. I might''ve ended up dead in a ditch somewhere. I spent a few weeks in prison, but after that the court only gave me a fine and released me. With the money I had saved up, I was able to return to Gadukino and buy a home. Then I met Anatoly, and settled down with him. It''s not the life I had in mind for myself, but you know... it wasn''t so bad, after all I''d been through."'
 
 									act '"Prostitution!? That''s fucked up!"':
 										*clr & cla

locations/vokzalGin.qsrc

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_ticket':
 	end
 
 	if money >= 75:
-		act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadyukino (75 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadukino (75 <b>₽</b>)':
 			money -= 75
 			gt 'vokzalGin', 'village'
 		end
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'village':
 	if rand(1, 100) < 20: gt 'train', 'events'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 15 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+	'After 15 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadukino.'
 	act 'Get off the train':
 		if rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 		gt 'train', 'village'

locations/vokzalholle.qsrc

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_ticket':
 	end
 
 	if money >= 75:
-		act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadyukino (75 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Buy a ticket to the village of Gadukino (75 <b>₽</b>)':
 			money -= 75
 			gt 'vokzalholle', 'village'
 		end
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'village':
 	if rand(1, 100) < 20: gt 'train', 'events'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 20 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+	'After 20 minutes, the train stops at the small station near the village of Gadukino.'
 	act 'Get off the train':
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 		gt 'train', 'village'

locations/vokzalper.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if Trainpass_day > daystart:
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old platform by the communal village': gt 'vokzalholle', 'communal'
 
-	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadyukino': gt 'vokzalholle', 'village'
+	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadukino': gt 'vokzalholle', 'village'
 
 	act 'Take a train to the old town': gt 'vokzalholle', 'oldtown'
 

locations/vokzalperG.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ end
 if Trainpass_day > daystart:
 	act 'Take a train to the old town': gt 'vokzalGin', 'oldtown'
 
-	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadyukino': gt 'vokzalGin', 'village'
+	act 'Take a train to the village of Gadukino': gt 'vokzalGin', 'village'
 
 	act 'Take a train to the the communal village': gt 'vokzalGin', 'communal'