Merge branch 'master' of Vargh/gl_bestmod into master

locations/mod_bestmod_kuhr.qsrc

@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 						*clr
 						gs 'cum_call', '', $namesob, 1, 0, -1, 60
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You try to push your dog away and get away from his clutches, but it has the opposite affect of what you''ve intended. <<$namesob>> is now leaning on you and you can feel his knot on your thigh, trying to find its way to your pussy.'
+						'You try to push your dog away and get away from his clutches, but it has the opposite affect of what you''ve intended. <<$namesob>> is now leaning on you and you can feel his dick on your thigh, trying to find its way to your pussy.'
 						if izvratH = 0:
-							'"Oh my God, I can''t look at this", your husband screams, then storms out of the room, slamming the door behind him. Meanwhile, your dogs knot found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan and it doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. Your husband comes back and you''re still lying on your back, with your dogs spern flowing out of your pussy.'
+							'"Oh my God, I can''t look at this", your husband screams, then storms out of the room, slamming the door behind him. Meanwhile, your dogs dick found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan and it doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. Your husband comes back and you''re still lying on your back, with your dogs spern flowing out of your pussy.'
 							'"I''ll take him to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 						elseif izvratH = 1:
-							'"Get off of her!" Shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but your dog doesn''t leave you alone. Meanwhile, your dog''s knot finds its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan, but your husband interprets your movement as an attempt to try to free yourself. "That''s it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you almost freed yourself!"'
+							'"Get off of her!" Shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but your dog doesn''t leave you alone. Meanwhile, your dog''s dick finds its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan, but your husband interprets your movement as an attempt to try to free yourself. "That''s it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you almost freed yourself!"'
 							'It doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. <<$husName>> looks at you in shock, as your dog''s cum flows out of your pussy...'
 							'"I''ll take him to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 							*clr
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $husName
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You grab his cock and take it into your mouth. You suck on his cock for a good two to three minutes, until <<$husName>> ends up cumming in your mouth. You swallow his sperm and clean up his cock. As your husband moves away, your dog stops licking your cunt and positions his knot above your face.'
+							'You grab his cock and take it into your mouth. You suck on his cock for a good two to three minutes, until <<$husName>> ends up cumming in your mouth. You swallow his sperm and clean up his cock. As your husband moves away, your dog stops licking your cunt and positions his dick above your face.'
 							'"Woah, hold on, this goes too far", <<$husName>> says and ties to shoo your dog away, but <<$namesob>> growls at your husband. Your husband then leaves the room to grab an old bed sheet. He comes back and pulls it over <<$namesob>> head, he then takes a small rope and ties the ends together. Your dog whimpers while inside the improvised bag.'
 							'"I''ll take him to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 									husband -= 1
 									gs 'cum_call', 'hands', $namesob, 1, 0, -1, 60
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z6.jpg"></center>'
-									'You take the dogs knot in your hand and begin to stroke it, after a few minutes your dog cums on your hands.'
+									'You take the dogs dick in your hand and begin to stroke it, after a few minutes your dog cums on your hands.'
 
 									act 'Finish':gt $loc
 								end
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						'"What do you mean ''you can''t stop him''? Do you like the way he licks you?" <<$husName>> shouts.'
 						'"No, of course not!", you try to explain.'
-						'"And yet I see you bitch here with your legs spread apart and your juices gushing out of your cunt, while your shitty dog licks your pussy." he says. "Well, you know what, why don''t you show me how much of a bitch you are. Go on, suck his cock."'
+						'"And yet I see you here with your legs spread apart and your juices gushing out of your cunt like a bitch, while your shitty dog licks your pussy." he says. "Well, you know what, why don''t you show me how much of a bitch you are. Go on, suck his cock."'
 
-						act 'Suck <<$namesob>> knot':
+						act 'Suck <<$namesob>> cock':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z4.jpg"></center>'
-							'<<$husName>> grabs your dog by the collar and pulls him up to the couch, so that <<$namesob>> cock is just above your face. You take his knot into your mouth and begin to suck on it. Your husband watches and tells you that the dog loves your bitch mouth.'
+							'<<$husName>> grabs your dog by the collar and pulls him up to the couch, so that <<$namesob>> cock is just above your face. You take his cock into your mouth and begin to suck on it. Your husband watches and tells you that the dog loves your bitch mouth.'
 							'It seems like just being part of the audience doesn''t quite satisfy him, so he orders you to spread your legs.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'beast', 'sub'

locations/mod_bestmod_margo.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoroom':
 	cls
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You open the door a little bit and look in after her but nothing happens. Margaret just looks at you and you notice that she beautiful body.'
+	'You open the door a little bit and look in after her but nothing happens. Margaret just looks at you and you notice that she has a beautiful body.'
 
 	act 'Walk into the room':gt 'mod_bestmod_margo', 'margoroom2'
 end
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoroom2':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/margo6.jpg"></center>'
-		'Margot leans towards the male and shifts to an excellent position to start sucking him. Finally the member of the dog is alert.'
+		'Margot leans towards the dog and shifts to an excellent position to start sucking him. Finally the member of the dog is alert.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15, 'beast'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -67,10 +67,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoroom2':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/anal.jpg"></center>'
-			'Margaret gets on all fours and you direct the cock into her anus, the dog''s fleshy bulb slides slowly inside her tight hole. After only two thrusts, Margaret  was already squealing like the most natural bitch.'
+			'Margaret gets on all fours and you direct the cock into her anus, the dog''s fleshy bulb slides slowly inside her tight hole. After only two thrusts, Margaret was already squealing like the most natural bitch.'
 			'Margaret suddenly starts crying, then as the dog thrust in, abruptly moaned as her eyes welled up with tears.'
 			'"Margaret, what happened, did you cum?"'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> it stuck in me" Margaret said quietly licking her lips, "It feels unusual, something is pushing against the walls of my anus and feels painful and pleasant at the same time, I did not yet cum."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> it''s stuck in me" Margaret said quietly licking her lips, "It feels unusual, something is pushing against the walls of my anus and it feels painful and pleasant at the same time, I did not cum yet."'
 			'"Yes, it is an unusual and pleasant feelings, I completely agree, do not make any sudden movements or jerks, or the dog can break your wonderful ass. Show some care Margaret.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> you know, I watched a zooporno with a 19 year old girl that had 17 orgasms in 3 hours" then as she moves Margaret licks her lip "Yeah, this would kill her record."'
 			'"Right, a video like what would certainly be...interesting " you say skeptically "my father would love that video personally." Margaret said, trying to change positions but the dog viciously thrust inside and Margaret could not be freed so that she couldn''t move'
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoshower':
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+		if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 		act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 	end
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoshower':
 		minut -= 15
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		if pcs_horny >= 99:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+		if pcs_horny >= 99:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoshower':
 		act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 
 		if pcs_ass > 15 and pcs_horny > 0:
-			act '<font color="magenta">Stick your hand in the ass</font>':
+			act '<font color="magenta">Stick your hand in my ass</font>':
 				cls
 				pcs_ass += 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoshower':
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_fist', 15, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & analorgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+				if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & analorgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoroom3':
 		act 'Walk into the room':gt 'mod_bestmod_margo', 'margoroom2'
 
 		if pcs_ass > 15 and pcs_horny > 0:
-			act 'Stick me in the ass hand':
+			act '<font color="magenta">Stick your hand in my ass</font>':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				pcs_horny += 60
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'margoroom3':
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_fist', 15, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+				if pcs_horny >= 90:pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/mod_bestmod_mira.qsrc

@@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'third_wish':
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-		'You remind Mira about the third wish, and she reluctantly nods her head and says that she remembers it. You, act mysterious and with a sinister smile, command her to follow you...'
+		'You remind Mira about the third wish, and she reluctantly nods her head and says that she remembers it. You act mysterious and with a sinister smile, command her to follow you...'
 		if npc_QW['A800'] > 0:
 			act 'Go to your barn':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/bandit/piratmira.jpg"></center>'
-				'You lead Mira to your grandparents barn, where you are welcomed by horny Bandit. His bloodshot swollen member and a huge dick hanging between his legs. Mira, trying not to look up, catches a glimsp at him and promptly gets flushed beet red...'
+				'You lead Mira to your grandparents barn, where you are welcomed by horny Bandit. His bloodshot swollen member hanging between his legs. Mira, trying not to look up, catches a glimsp at him and promptly gets flushed beet red...'
 
 				act 'Order her to suck Bandit':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/bandit/piratmira.jpg"></center>'
-					'You tell Mira that she will now fulfill your third wish. You tell her in a demanding voice to suck Bandit bloated dog cock. You tell her that if shw fulfill her vow and grants her wish, all will be forgiven. Her mouth drops open slowly and she looks at you, as if your insane.'
+					'You tell Mira that she will now fulfill your third wish. You tell her in a demanding voice to suck Bandit''s bloated dog cock. You tell her that if she fulfill her vow and grants her wish, all will be forgiven. Her mouth drops open slowly and she looks at you, as if your insane.'
 					'"Come on", you tell the girl. With a contemptuous snort you say, "We both know that you''re a whore and prostitute, and can''t live without dick in you at least a few times a day. And right here," you point at Bandit''s dick, "is a huge cock ready to go! Mitka''s cock is puny next to this one, is it not?"'
-					'Mira stares at you like a deer in headlights, Bandit''s huge pulsating cock and just quivers, she isn''t going for it. You decide to push her and say, "It isn''t his first time with a human. I have been riding this cock for awhile now. It''s heavenly." Mira looks at you after that confession with eyes wide and round, as if seeing you for the first time.'
+					'Mira stares at you like a deer in headlights, then at Bandit''s huge pulsating cock and just quivers, she isn''t going for it. You decide to push her and say, "It isn''t his first time with a human. I have been riding this cock for awhile now. It''s heavenly." Mira looks at you after that confession with eyes wide and round, as if seeing you for the first time.'
 
 					act 'Confirm your wish':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'third_wish':
 							pcs_horny += RAND(25,30)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/bandit/piratmira1.jpg"></center>'
-							'Mira hesitantly crouches next to Bandit. He watches her with interest. Mira exhales sharply and with a new found resolve she lowers her head and gently, and with much hesitation takes his throbing cock in hand, after a minute, she sticking out her tongue and starts licking it... You tell her what a good whore she is and how much pleasure she is give to her canine lover.'
+							'Mira hesitantly crouches next to Bandit. He watches her with interest. Mira exhales sharply and with a new found resolve she lowers her head and gently, and with much hesitation takes his throbing cock in hand, after a minute, she sticks out her tongue and starts licking it... You tell her what a good whore she is and how much pleasure she is give to her canine lover.'
 
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'third_wish':
 								npc_QW['A60'] = 31 & !back to mira questline by illume
 								mirabandit = 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/bandit/piratmira3.jpg"></center>'
-								'She spends several minutes twisting her tongue over the tip and shaft of the dog''s dick. With a sigh, Mira lays on her back and starts to suck his cock, her lips crawl over Bandit''s massive hard cock. After a minute she pulls away, you see, she is having a hard time taking his cock into her mouth, Bandit''s cock starts to drip pre-cum. You tell her, to swallow every last drop, pro-cum, sperm or even piss if Bandit needs to go. She sighs resignedly and continues to suck. Soon Bandit starts to cum and Mira chokes at the shear volume of his cum, but she swallows it all and then she wipes a finger across her face and gathers up all the stay cum and shoves that into her mouth and swallows. She repeats this on her lips, chin, and the little that escaped to her neck and chest...'
+								'She spends several minutes twisting her tongue over the tip and shaft of the dog''s dick. With a sigh, Mira lays on her back and starts to suck his cock, her lips crawl over Bandit''s massive hard cock. After a minute she pulls away, you see, she is having a hard time taking his cock into her mouth, Bandit''s cock starts to drip pre-cum. You tell her, to swallow every last drop, pre-cum, sperm or even piss if Bandit needs to go. She sighs resignedly and continues to suck. Soon Bandit starts to cum and Mira chokes at the shear volume of his cum, but she swallows it all and then she wipes a finger across her face and gathers up all the stray cum and shoves it into her mouth and swallows. She repeats this on her lips, chin, and the little that escaped to her neck and chest...'
 
 								act 'Finish':mira_guest = 0 & gt 'gadukino'
 							end

locations/mod_bestmod_petdog.qsrc

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/vag2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, making it more comfortable for the male''s dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of this member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it trickling down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog become stronger and more violent. Soon he begins to growl and you push your ass against his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His unit expands in your pussy, pushing against your wall, his knot tightly binding you together. The dog tries to escape, but his member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely. His thick, hot sperm feels warm inside you.'
+			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, making it more comfortable for the male''s dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of his member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it trickling down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog become stronger and more violent. Soon he begins to growl and you push your ass against his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His knot expands in your pussy, pushing against your walls, tightly binding you together. The dog tries to escape, but his member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely. His thick, hot sperm feels warm inside you.'
 			'His member is spent, throbbing in your depths. Your pussy milks him of his semen, sucking in every last drop. Cum begins to flow down your legs, trickling down your thighs. You are completely filled with his sperm. The dog struggles and moves around, but you stay tied together for a few minutes with his knot in his prize. Eventually, his knot loosens and you are released from him. You fall to the ground, the dogs thick spunk flowing out of your pussy and pooling around you on the ground.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel it as he starts spewing his liquid inside your ass. You''ve held in the position for a few minutes, but the ball at the base of his penis hasn''t decreased, and the bored dog begins to pull out of your anus, growling. In pain you start yelling, feeling like his huge cock will rip your anus in two. There is a distinctive "schlpop!" sound as his cock pops out of your ass, which gushes sperm mixed with secretions from your anus down your belly.'
+			'You feel it as he starts spewing his liquid inside your ass. You''ve held in the position for a few minutes, but the knot at the base of his penis hasn''t decreased, and the bored dog begins to pull out of your anus, growling. In pain you start yelling, feeling like his huge cock will rip your anus in two. There is a distinctive "schlpop!" sound as his cock pops out of your ass, which gushes sperm mixed with secretions from your anus down your belly.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'

locations/mod_bestmod_sitr.qsrc

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 					'"OH MY GOD, what is he doing?", your husband yells.'
 					'"Help me!", you scream, "He won''t let go!"'
 					'<<$husName>> tries to shoo the dog away, but <<$namesob>> growls and snarls at your husband. "He won''t stop it. What should I do?" he asks.'
-					'"Think of something." you tell him, already moaning slightly with pleasure. <<$husName>> tries to intimidate the dog, continuously yelling at him, but to no avail. Suddenly your dog jumps on top you.'
-					'"Oh my God, that he is going to do now?" <<$husName>> screams..'
+					'"Think of something." you tell him, already moaning slightly with pleasure. <<$husName>> tries to intimidate the dog, continuously yelling at him, but to no avail. Suddenly your dog jumps on top of you.'
+					'"Oh my God, what is he going to do now?" <<$husName>> screams..'
 					'"Isn''t it obvious? He wants to fuck me." you say.'
 					'"Please, try to free yourself", your husband pleads.'
 
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 						*clr
 						gs 'cum_call', '', $namesob, 1, 0, -1, 60
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You try to push your dog away ang get way from his clutch, but it seems to do just the opposite of what you''ve intended to do. <<$namesob>> now leans on you and you can feel knot on your thigh, trying to find its way to your pussy.'
+						'You try to push your dog away and get away from his clutch, but it seems to do just the opposite of what you''ve intended to do. <<$namesob>> now leans on you and you can feel the penis on your thigh, trying to find its way to your pussy.'
 						if izvratH = 0:
-							'"Oh my God, I can''t look at this", your husband screams, then storms out of the room, slamming the door behind him. Meanwhile, your dogs knot found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan and it doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. Your husband comes back and you''re still lying on your back, with your dogs spern flowing out of your pussy.'
-							'"I''ll take him now to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
+							'"Oh my God, I can''t look at this", your husband screams, then storms out of the room, slamming the door behind him. Meanwhile, your dogs penis found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan and it doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. Your husband comes back and you''re still lying on your back, with your dogs sperm flowing out of your pussy.'
+							'"I''ll take him to the vet now and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 						elseif izvratH = 1:
-							'"Get off her" shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but your dog doesn''t leave you alone. Meanwhile, your dogs knot found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan, but your husband interprets your movement as an attempt of trying to free yourself. "That''s it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you almost freed yourself."'
-							'It doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. <<$husName>> looks at you in shook, as your dogs cum flows out of your pussy..'
-							'"I''ll take him now to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
+							'"Get off her" shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but your dog doesn''t leave you alone. Meanwhile, your dogs penis found its way to your pussy and enters it. You moan, but your husband interprets your movement as an attempt of trying to free yourself. "That''s it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you almost freed yourself."'
+							'It doesn''t take long for you to cum and not long after <<$namesob>> cums inside you as well. Once he is done pumping his seed into you, he runs back into the corridor. <<$husName>> looks at you in shock, as your dogs cum flows out of your pussy..'
+							'"I''ll take him to the vet now and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 						end
 
 						act 'Put your dog to sleep':
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						'<<$husName>> tries to pull the dog away from you, but he just growls. Your husband then leaves the room to grab an old bed sheet. He comes back and pulls it over <<$namesob>> head, he then takes a small rope and ties the ends together. Your dog whimpers while inside the improvised bag.'
-							'"I''ll take him now to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
+							'"I''ll take him to the vet now and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 
 						act 'Put your dog to sleep':
 							sobaka = 0
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 						spafinloc = 12
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						'"I''m not going to", <<$husName>> chuckles. He leans back into the chair with a sly grin on his face.'
-						'"He''s not going to stop" you reply and push your legs apart. <<$husName>> looks at, enjoying your soft moans, then he suddenly gets up, pulls out his dick and tells you to suck it.'
+						'"He''s not going to stop" you reply and push your legs apart. <<$husName>> watches, enjoying your soft moans, then he suddenly gets up, pulls out his dick and tells you to suck it.'
 
 						act 'Blowjob':
 							cla
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $husName
 							gs 'boyStat', $husID
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You grab his cock and take it into your mouth. You suck on his cock for good two to three minutes, until <<$husName>> ends up cumming in your mouth. You swallow his sperm and clean up his cock. As your husband moves away, your dog stops licking your cunt and positions his knot above your face.'
-							'"Wooh, hold on, this goes too far", <<$husName>> says and ties to shoo your dog away, but <<$namesob>> growls at your husband. Your husband then leaves the room to grab an old bed sheet. He comes back and pulls it over <<$namesob>> head, he then takes a small rope and ties the ends together. Your dog whimpers while inside the improvised bag.'
-							'"I''ll take him now to the vet and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
+							'You grab his cock and take it into your mouth. You suck on his cock for good two to three minutes, until <<$husName>> ends up cumming in your mouth. You swallow his sperm and clean up his cock. As your husband moves away, your dog stops licking your cunt and positions his penis above your face.'
+							'"Wooh, hold on, this goes too far", <<$husName>> says and tries to shoo your dog away, but <<$namesob>> growls at your husband. Your husband then leaves the room to grab an old bed sheet. He comes back and pulls it over <<$namesob>> head, he then takes a small rope and ties the ends together. Your dog whimpers while inside the improvised bag.'
+							'"I''ll take him to the vet now and have him put to sleep", <<$husName>> tells you.'
 							gs 'boyStat', $husID
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'beast'
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 									husband -= 1
 									gs 'cum_call', 'hands', $namesob, 1, 0, -1, 60
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z6.jpg"></center>'
-									'You take the dogs knot in your hand and begin to stroke it, after a few minutes your dog cums on your hands.'
+									'You take the dogs penis in your hand and begin to stroke it, after a few minutes your dog cums on your hands.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'beast'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						pcs_mood -= 15
 						pcs_willpwr -= 15
-						'<<$husName>> tries to shoo your dog away, but to no avail, instead <<$namesob>> growls angry. Then <<$husName>> kicks your dog into the ribs, he whimpers and your husband continues to kick him over and over again.'
+						'<<$husName>> tries to shoo your dog away, but to no avail, instead <<$namesob>> growls angry. Then <<$husName>> kicks your dog in the ribs, he whimpers and your husband continues to kick him over and over again.'
 						'"I better never see you doing something like this ever again.", <<$husName>> says. As you open your eyes you see your dog lying dead on the floor in his own pool of blood.'
 						'"I''m going to take this little shit outside and throw it away", your husband says as he wraps the dog into an old sheet. "Now clean these blood stains up, I don''t want to buy a new carpet.", <<$husName>> orders you, as he makes his way out to the garbage cans.'
 
@@ -162,13 +162,13 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						'"What do you mean, you can''t stop him? Do you like the way he licks you?", <<$husName>> shouts.'
 						'"No, of course not!", you try to explain.'
-						'"And yet I see you bitch here with your legs spread apart and your juices gushing out of your cunt, while your shitty dog licks your pussy." he says. "Well, you know what, why don''t you show me how much of a bitch you are. Go on, suck his cock."'
+						'"And yet I see you here with your legs spread apart and your juices gushing out of your cunt like a bitch, while your shitty dog licks your pussy." he says. "Well, you know what, why don''t you show me how much of a bitch you are. Go on, suck his cock."'
 
-						act 'Suck <<$namesob>> knot':
+						act 'Suck <<$namesob>> cock':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z4.jpg"></center>'
-							'<<$husName>> grabs your dog by the collar and pulls him up to the couch, so that <<$namesob>> cock is just above your face. You take his knot into your mouth and begin to suck on it. Your husband watches and tells you that the dog loves your bitch mouth.'
+							'<<$husName>> grabs your dog by the collar and pulls him up to the couch, so that <<$namesob>> cock is just above your face. You take his cock into your mouth and begin to suck on it. Your husband watches and tells you that the dog loves your bitch mouth.'
 							'It seems like just being part of the audience doesn''t quite satisfy him, so he orders you to spread your legs.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'beast', 'sub'
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 								gs 'cum_call', '', $HusID
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z5.jpg"></center>'
 								'You obediently spreads your legs apart and your husband pushes his cock into your pussy. The first few times he moves slowly, but soon he starts to get very rough. He doesn''t need long before he cums deep inside your pussy'
-								'He looks at the dog, "Seems like that shit isn''t done yet. Let''s try something else, turn around bitch.", he orders. "Let''s see if he like your asshole more than your mouth.'
+								'He looks at the dog, "Seems like that shit isn''t done yet. Let''s try something else, turn around bitch.", he orders. "Let''s see if he likes your asshole more than your mouth.'
 
 								gs 'boyStat', $HusID
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 									analorgasm += 1
 									gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $namesob, 1, 0, -1, 60
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="mod/bestmod/images/beast/zoo/z8.jpg"></center>'
-									'You turn around and position yourself on all fours. <<$namesob>> immediately jumps on you, you spread your buttocks apart with one hand. He start to fuck you, thinking you are just another bitch in heat. "That''s a good bitch", your husband comments and leaves the room. Your dog increases his speed, pumping his knot in and out of your ass and you have to admit, it starts to feel really good. For several minutes <<$namesob>> humps your ass, until you eventually climax. Your ass tightens, causing your dog to cum too.'
+									'You turn around and position yourself on all fours. <<$namesob>> immediately jumps on you, you spread your buttocks apart with one hand. He start to fuck you, thinking you are just another bitch in heat. "That''s a good bitch", your husband comments and leaves the room. Your dog increases his speed, pumping his cock in and out of your ass and you have to admit, it starting to feel really good. For several minutes <<$namesob>> humps your ass, until you eventually climax. Your ass tightens, causing your dog to cum too.'
 
 									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'