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[text edit] Some random words left over from the machine translation got missed in this file

KevinSmarts 5 years ago
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      locations/club.qsrc

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locations/club.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The dance floor</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club9.jpg"></center>'
-	'The club is filled to the brink with people. Most of which are dancing on the dancefloor.'
+	'The club is filled to the brink with people. Most of whom are on the dance floor having a great time.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the dance floor':gt 'club', 'inside'
 	
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 			pcs_willpwr += 10
 			clrand = rand(0, 400)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club4.jpg"></center>'
-			'On the dance floor very closely, you can put a hand on his shoulder one guy to make a couple of steps and pressed her chest already to another, and in the dance, how much one can do in dance.'
+			'The dance floor is packed and everyone is dancing very closely, you could put your hand on the shoulder of the guy in front of you but you when you turn around your chest is right up against another. You don''t let it bother you as everyone is forced to dance this close.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc >= clrand:
 				pcs_horny += 1
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 				act 'Dance with him':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club8.jpg"></center>'
-					'You continue to dance with the guy on the dancefloor, but he doesn''t stop touching your. It somehow gets you excited, when a random guy is touching you in public.'
+					'You continue to dance with the guy on the dance floor, but he doesn''t stop touching your butt. It gets you quite excited having a random guy feeling you up in public.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 						dansexclub = rand(0, 1)
 
 						if dansexclub = 1:
-							'You''re passionately kissing the guy, while he''s continously groping you, always dedicating one of his hands to either your tits or your ass. "Why don''t we go to the VIP-Area. There we''ll have a bit more privacy.", he says inbetween kisses.'
+							'You''re passionately kissing the guy, while he''s continuously groping you, always dedicating one of his hands to either your tits or your ass. "Why don''t we go to the VIP-Area. There we''ll have a bit more privacy.", he says inbetween kisses.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 15, 'sub'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 							if pcs_horny < 70: act 'Go to the dance floor':gt 'club', 'dance'
 							act 'Go to Vip-room with the guy':$sexloc = 'vipclub' & xgt 'sex', 'var'
 						elseif dansexclub = 0:
-							'You''re passionately kissing the guy, while he''s continously groping you, always dedicating one of his hands to either your tits or your ass. "Let''s go to the toilet.", he says with a smile.'
+							'You''re passionately kissing the guy, while he''s continuously groping you, always dedicating one of his hands to either your tits or your ass. "Let''s go to the toilet.", he says with a smile.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 15, 'sub'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 				if clrand > 85:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/dancelezb.jpg"></center>'
-					'While you''re dancing you a hand groping your ass. You turn around to see who touched your, but you''re surprised to see women smiling at you, she seems to be biting her lips.'
+					'While you''re dancing you a hand groping your ass. You turn around to see who touched your butt, but you''re surprised to see a woman smiling at you, she is seductively biting her lip.'
 					dansexclub = rand(0, 1)
 
 					act 'Stop dancing':gt 'club', 'inside'