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[text edits] Minor text edits because I'm a perfectionist who is never happy.

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  1. 3 3
      locations/AlbStars.qsrc
  2. 11 10
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

+ 3 - 3
locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -524,11 +524,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'The man climbs in behind you. He spreads your ass and you feel him spit on your anus before pressing his cock against it.'
-                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. He leans in close to your ear.'
-                '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" You whimper in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
+                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. After a few minutes, he removes his fingers, only to stuff your panties in your mouth before he leans in close to your ear.'
+                '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" Muffled by your panties, you whimper in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
                 *nl				
 				'After what feels like an eternity, you feel his cock twitching inside you and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and a sticky mix of cum and saliva trickles from your ravaged anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
-				'"Only that cute little head dancer has ever taken it in the ass better than you, whore. All the other bitches just cry." You let out a loud yelp as he finishes with a stinging smack on your ass that echoes into the room.'
+				'"Only that cute little head dancer has ever taken it in the ass better than you, whore. All the other bitches just cry." You let out a loud yelp as he finishes with a stinging smack on your ass that echoes into the room. You glance back and see a bright red handprint imprinted on your ass cheek.'
 				'To your despair and disgust, he drags you up next to him and forces you to lie on your side next to him with your ass hanging out, his sweaty, flabby arm wrapped around your back as he squeezes and slaps your ass while bragging on his phone to his friend about "some of the best anal" he''s ever had. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'mouth', 'pull' 

+ 11 - 10
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -728,8 +728,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					act 'Albina gets anal':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "Time to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, stretch my little asshole with your big dick!" she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
-						'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
+						'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "You want to fuck my ass?" Albina giggles in response. "Yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick?" she asks teasingly as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You turn and sit next to Albina as Lazar steps in behind you. You suck his dick before giving Albina a few hard smacks and spreading her asscheeks. You spit on her hole a few times and Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he slowly penetrates her back door.' 
+						'He grabs her hips and you watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
+							'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to vigorously tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar starts fucking her even harder this time. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy that''s dripping her juices.' 
 							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits right on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tongue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 							minut += 5
@@ -780,14 +780,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling... tense again. And Lazar is going to help me... relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
+			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lazar and I are going to... have a little fun and we were wondering if you wanted to join us again? I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
 				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do." you reply while shaking your head. Albina looks a little disappointed, but just shrugs her shoulders. "Your loss." she says before typing a message on her phone and walking away. You finish getting dressed and head on your way.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 
 			act 'Accept':
@@ -818,8 +818,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						act 'Albina gets anal':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "Time to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, stretch my little asshole with your big dick!" she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
-							'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
+							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "You want to fuck my ass?" Albina giggles in response. "Yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick?" she asks teasingly as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You turn and sit next to Albina as Lazar steps in behind you. You suck his dick before giving Albina a few hard smacks and spreading her asscheeks. You spit on her hole a few times and Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he slowly penetrates her back door.' 
+						    'He grabs her hips and you watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
+								'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to vigorously tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
 								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tobgue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 								minut += 5
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 		'You get dressed, place your uniform back in your locker and get ready to leave.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Leave school':
+		act 'Leave':
 			if rand(0,5) = 0: gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'Bella'
 			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 		end
@@ -893,8 +893,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasex.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re even more curious now, and crack the door open a little further to take a peek.'
+			
 			'You see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of some guy that you don''t know. He has his entire cock stuffed in her mouth, and Bella seems to be deep-throating him without too much difficulty.'
-			'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again."<i>Flmmpf flmmpf</i> --we talked about this-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!</i> --we may-- <i>flfff, flath</i> --get caught-- <i>mmmph, blahgggghspf...</i>"'
+			'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again. "<i>Flmmpf flmmpf</i> --we talked about this-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!</i> --we may-- <i>flfff, flath</i> --get caught-- <i>mmmph, blahgggghspf...</i>"'
 			'Noticibly irritated by her comments, the guy punishes Bella by shoving his cock even further down her throat. "Didn''t your parents ever teach you not to talk with your mouth full?"'
 			'A few seconds later, she pops his drool-coated cock out of her mouth, and he lies back on the bench. He has quite an impressive member standing to attention.'