fix the text, and make it compatible with 0.8.3 version of the main game

locations/mod_Ibiza.qsrc

@@ -37,4 +37,4 @@ end
 !! 264b6014987d1f23 2r
 !! fbea2ef3e05ae63e 2b
 !! 7f04f3e9a5d1aa3a 1r
---- mod_Ibiza ---------------------------------
+--- mod_Ibiza ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaCabin.qsrc

@@ -577,19 +577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dream':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-				
-
-			
-			
-			
-			
-			
-			
-		end
-	end
 end
 
+--- mod_IbizaCabin ---------------------------------
 
-
-
---- mod_IbizaCabin  --------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDanceFloor.qsrc

@@ -32,4 +32,4 @@ if $args[0] = '':
 
 end
 
---- mod_IbizaDanceFloor  --------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDanceFloor ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay2.qsrc

@@ -588,4 +588,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 	end
 end
 
---- mod_IbizaDay2 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay2 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay3.qsrc

@@ -581,4 +581,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'VIP':
 	end
 end
 
---- mod_IbizaDay3 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay3 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay4.qsrc

@@ -160,4 +160,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'VIP':
 end
 
 
---- mod_IbizaDay4 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay4 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay5.qsrc

@@ -387,5 +387,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yazev':
 	end
 end
 
-
---- mod_IbizaDay5 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay5 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay6.qsrc

@@ -81,4 +81,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'departure':
 	end
 end
 
---- mod_IbizaDay6 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay6 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaDay7.qsrc

@@ -60,4 +60,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boat':
 end
 !!END OF EVENT next city center San Petersburgo.
 
---- mod_IbizaDay7 ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaDay7 ---------------------------------

locations/mod_IbizaStart.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 !!start event
 
 !!1/6 	Skills: Dance, Pole Dance and Erotic dancer  85+
-!!1/6	Skills: Exhibitionism 85+
+!!1/6	Skills: Inhibition 15-
 !!2/6 	Nightclub job. +10 times
 !!3/5 	Fame of slut in Pavlovsk, Gadyukino or city. Enough one of them
 !!4/5 	18 years old or fake identity

locations/mod_Ibiza_club.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club.jpg"></center>'
 			'You tell the bouncer you are here to work for Erik'
 			'He looks you over.'
-			if pcs_makeup > 1 and pcs_sweat < 30 and (PCloSkirt > 2 or PCloPants > 4 or $clothingworntype = 'exhibit'):
+			if pcs_makeup > 1 and pcs_sweat < 30 and (PCloSkirt > 2 or PCloPants > 4 or ($clothingworntype = 'salacious_dress' or $clothingworntype = 'salacious_outfits')):
 				minut += 5
 				'He nods and says something into his walkie-talkie. A couple of minutes later you meet Erik in the foyer.'
 				act 'Talk to him':gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'work'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if money >= 250:
 		act 'Enter the club (250 <b>₽</b>)':
 			menu_off = 1
-			if pcs_makeup > 1 and pcs_sweat < 50 and (PCloSkirt > 2 or PCloPants > 4 or PCloPanties = 1 or $clothingworntype = 'exhibit'):
+			if pcs_makeup > 1 and pcs_sweat < 50 and (PCloSkirt > 2 or PCloPants > 4 or PCloPanties = 1 or ($clothingworntype = 'salacious_dress' or $clothingworntype = 'salacious_outfits')):
 				'You can feel his eyes all over your body, but eventually he nods and lets pass where you are stopped just inside the door by another large man. He indicates the cashier window. You step over to it and pay the entry fee. With that paid he steps aside and lets you go inside.'
 				minut += 5
 				money -= 250
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 	!!* Ibiza start event
 
 	!!* 1/6 	Skills: Dance, Pole Dance and Erotic dancer  85+
-	!!* 1/6		Skills: Inhibition 85+
+	!!* 1/6		Skills: Inhibition 15-
 	!!* 2/6 	Nightclub job. +10 times
 	!!* 3/5 	Fame of slut in Pavlovsk, Gadukino or city. Enough one of them
 	!!* 4/5 	18 years old or fake identity
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		act 'Hear him out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
-			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, It includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
+			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, it includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
 			'"The pay depends on results, get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less, do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
 			'"So, are you interested?"'
 			act 'No':clubno = 1 & gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'inside'
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 					act 'Return':gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'inside'
 				end
 			else
-				'You ask him about work, but he says your not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
+				'You ask him about work, but he says you''re not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
 			end
 
 			exit
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 				act 'Dance with him':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club8.jpg"></center>'
-					'You continue to dance with the guy on the dance floor, but he doesn''t stop touching your butt. It gets you quite excited having a random guy feeling you up in public.'
+					'You continue to dance with the guy, but he boldly lifting up your skirt and start to plam your butt. It gets you quite excited having a random guy feeling you up in public.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 					pcs_horny = 0
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You stand up and she goes down on you, starting to lick your flower and sticking two fingers into your now wet cunt. She''s very skilled with her tongue and it takes her only minutes to make you cum.'
-					'You''re blissfully smiling at her. "Thank you.", you say to her..'
+					'You''re blissfully smiling at her. "Thank you.", you say to her....'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'

locations/mod_Ibiza_club2.qsrc

@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You went into the booth and closed the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti in the walls and booths carved strange round holes. Sitting on the toilet you hear what that noise in the next stall. Through the hole in the wall you looked someone''s eyes.'
-	'In a hole in the wall squeezed fat cock. Lustful voice said, "here''s a yum yum, baby."'
-	'This is so not surprisingly, that you do not believe in the reality of what is happening to touch the finger member. It is hard and hot.'
+	'You went into the booth and closed the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti, and holes are carved in opposite walls. Sitting on the toilet you hear a noise coming from the next stall, and then someone''s eye appears at the hole.'
+	'The next thing you know, a cock is pushed through the hole. A lustful voice says, "here''s a treat for you, baby."'
+	'This is so unexpected, that you hardly believe any of this is real, as you tentatively touch their member. It is hard and hot.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'inside'
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 		pcs_throat += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory1.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You lean against a member, it''s so big, warm and solid, you licked it, then again and again.'
+		'This is so surreal, but you lean closer to their member and impulsively find yourself licking it, again and again.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory2.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You bows member lips and start sucking it, trying to take it as deep as possible.'
-			'Suddenly, in your mouth and poured hot tart liquid.'
+			'You wrap your lips around the head and start sucking, trying to take it as deep as possible.'
+			'Suddenly, the reality of the situation comes flooding back into your head - and a warm liquid comes flooding into your mouth.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 				money += 1000
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You dial a mouthful of sperm, and then swallow it, sperm is not tasty, sticky and sharp taste.'
-				'A male voice telling you - excellent crumb, the money you deserve, a member of the hole and the hole disappears pushes 1,000 RUB.'
+				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, and then swallow it. Their sperm has a sticky and sharp taste which makes you grimace.'
+				'A man''s voice tells you - "That was fucking great, here, you deserve it." and then 1,000 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 				money += 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You dial a mouthful of sperm, the sperm is not tasty, sticky and sharp, you spit it on the floor.'
-				'A male voice telling you - excellent crumb, the money you deserve, a member of the hole and the hole disappears and is replaced by 500 RUB.'
+				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, but the sticky and sharp taste overwhelms you, and you spit it on the floor.'
+				'A man''s voice tells you - "Here, your money." and then 500 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You pee sitting on the toilet and began to wipe your vagina with toilet paper. Apparently you pressed too hard because you embraced the thrill of touching between the legs.'
+	'You pee sitting on the toilet and begin to wipe with toilet paper. Apparently you pressed too hard, as you feel a thrill coming from between the legs.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3 
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/tomas.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You caress his fingers swollen pussy until you orgasm does not cover.'
-		'After orgasm, you take it easy, but hear from the next stall pant, look at the wall you see that someone is peeking through the hole located in the wall.'
-		'The man behind the wall and realized that found giggled, great show. Eye of the holes in the wall and disappeared into it squeezed 500 RUB.'
+		'You caress swollen pussy with your fingers until you orgasm enthusiastically.'
+		'After orgasm, you catch your breath, but then notice someone is peeking at you through a hole in the wall.'
+		'The man behind the wall realises he has been caught, and giggles that you put on a great show. Suddenly the eye disappears, and 500 rubles are pushed through the hole.'
 
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 	*clr & cla
-	'You sit in a booth and hear someone come into the toilet after you and doors of adjacent booths closing. You realize there is two of them.'
-	'Voice from the next stall tells you - do not be afraid baby, we will not hurt you, on the contrary, we will give you some delicious candy with cream filling.'
+	'You sit in a booth and hear both adjacent doors closing as two others enter.'
+	'A voice from the next stall tells you - "Don''t be afraid baby, we won''t hurt you! On the contrary, we will give you some delicious candy with extra cream filling.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'inside'
 
@@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 		slutiness += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory4.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'On both sides of your booth through holes in the walls climbed members. Voice on the wall said, come on, baby, come on, we''re fed.'
-		'You took both members and began to caress them, then bent over to one of the members and took it into your mouth.'
+		'On both sides of your booth cocks poke through holes in the wall. The same voice says, "Come on, baby, come on, feeding time".'
+		'You take both members and begin to caress them, then bend over to one and take it into your mouth.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory6.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
 				'Finally one of the men finishes in your mouth.'
-				'You lick and start to finish processing the second in turn.'
+				'You lick it up and turn all your attention to the other.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -149,16 +149,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory7.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'The second man also comes in your mouth.'
-					'You swallow a mouthful and wipe your face, but semen is smeared all over it.'
+					'Before long, the second man also comes in your mouth.'
+					'You swallow a mouthful and wipe your face, but find semen smeared all over it.'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					
 					if rand(1, 100) > pcs_horny:
-						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied.'
+						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied - after all, they were only in your mouth!'
 						$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					else
-						pcs_horny = 0 & 'Orgasm washes over you.'
+						pcs_horny = 0 & 'Even though they only fucked your mouth, you feel an orgasm wash over you from the sheer depravity of the situation.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						cla
 						money += 2000
 						TQuest = 3
-						'Pleased voice says from behind the wall - "You''re a great pacifier, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
-						'2,000 RUB pokes through the hole in the wall.'
+						'A pleased voice says from behind the wall - "You were great, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
+						'2,000 RUB pokes through the hole.'
 
 						guy += 2
 						swallow += 2
@@ -186,7 +186,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						if pornstudio = 0:
 							act 'Continue':
 								pornstudio = 2
-								'A male voice says - "Some work for you. Take the card, come if you want to have fun and make money."'
+								'A male voice says "I have some more work for you."'
+								'He pushes a card through the hole and says "Come find me at my studio if you want to have fun and make more money."'
 
 								act 'Leave':gt 'mod_Ibiza_club', 'inside'
 							end
@@ -201,4 +202,3 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 end
 
 --- mod_Ibiza_club2 ---------------------------------
-

locations/mod_Ibiza_readme.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ end
 
 
 '<center>Mod <b>Ibiza</b></center>'
-'<center>version 0.5.2 completed and checked with Girl Life version 0.8.1</center>'
+'<center>version 0.5.3 completed and checked with Girl Life version 0.8.3</center>'
 '
 
 	"Why? Why did I take "Philosophy"? I swear Prof. Avdeyev hates me.", you think.
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ end
 	The PC has to be at college.
 	Her age has to be equal or above 18 or she has to own a fake passport.
 	The PC has to be an outstanding dancer,  all Modern Dancing, Erotic Dancing and Pole Dancing have to be above 84.
-	Also, her Inhibition has to be above 84.
+	Also, her Inhibition has to be below 16.
 	The PC has to be known as a slut in one of the districts (Pavlovsk 125, city 75, oldtown 75, village 75)
 	The event can start, when the PC will do at least ten jobs at the club.
 
@@ -40,4 +40,4 @@ end
          rachels, Tendaris'
 
 		 
---- mod_Ibiza_readme ---------------------------------
+--- mod_Ibiza_readme ---------------------------------

locations/mod_Ibiza_setup.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 $mod_info[0] = 'Ibiza'
 !0=mod name, saved to $mod_name[i] array 
 
-$mod_info[1] = '05200'
+$mod_info[1] = '05300'
 !1=mod version
 !this will be displayed as version 1.2, fix3.
 !if you input 40500, will be showen as version 4.5
@@ -44,4 +44,4 @@ end
 ! gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 
 
---- mod_Ibiza_setup ---------------------------------
+--- mod_Ibiza_setup ---------------------------------

locations/mod_Ibiza_vipclub.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'rum'
 			pcs_horny += rand(10, 20)
 			*nl
-			'You enjoy a tasty cocktail, for some reason you also feel like it''s gotten hot in here.'
+			'You enjoy a tasty cocktail. For some reason, you also feel like it''s gotten hot in here.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'mod_Ibiza_vipclub', 'start'
 		end
 
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger_oral'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/vip1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You have a wonderful idea and a couple of minutes later find yourself in a room with two staff members, one man and one woman. You have them start on the couch, with the man stting while she knelt beside of him and gave him a blowjob. You raptly watched the two professional lovers, getting more and more excited by the display.'
+					'You have a wonderful idea and a couple of minutes later find yourself in a room with two staff members, one man and one woman. You have them start on the couch, with the man sitting while she kneels beside him and gives him a blowjob. You raptly watch the two professional lovers, getting more and more excited by the display.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/vip2.jpg"></center>'
-						'The guy turns the woman around and begins fucking her from behind. Deciding you''ve waited long enough you undress and slide your wet pussy in front of her face. She understands your unspoken commands, and immediately begins licking you in all the right places.'
+						'The guy turns the woman around and begins fucking her from behind. Deciding you''ve waited long enough, you undress and slide your wet pussy in front of her face. She understands your unspoken command and immediately begins licking you in all the right places.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'dom'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 										cla
 										*clr
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/vip6.jpg"></center>'
-										'Soon enough you see her convulsing slightly in orgasmic bliss, and the man grunts to let her know he''s cumming as well. You lick the drool off the side of your lips as you watch him cum all over her chest and into her mouth.'
+										'Soon enough, you see her convulsing slightly in orgasmic bliss, and the man grunts to let her know he''s cumming as well. You lick the drool off the side of your lips as you watch him cum all over her chest and into her mouth.'
 
 										act 'Finish':gt 'mod_Ibiza_vipclub', 'start'
 

locations/mod_Ibizabar.qsrc

@@ -74,4 +74,4 @@ if $ARGS[0]='buffetbar4':
 	act 'Leave the bar': gt 'mod_IbizaDanceFloor'
 end
 
---- mod_IbizaBar ---------------------------------
+--- mod_IbizaBar ---------------------------------