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Fixed typos

Vengeance11 3 years ago
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      locations/albina_house_events.qsrc
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      locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

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locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/3.jpg"></center>'
 							'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passiontely making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
-							'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you are greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Oh hey <<pcs_nickname>>, just give me a few seconds and we can do something."'
+							'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you are greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, just give me a few seconds and we can do something."'
 							'She finishes drying her hair and pulls on a skimpy tank top before leading you out the door. "My favourite show is about to start. I think you''ll like it."'
 							
 							act 'Go to watch TV': gt 'albina_house_events', 'tv_1'
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 !! (used only after the swimming event)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/watchtv.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina grabs some snacks and leads you into the living room and you sit with her as the show starts. It''s some American medical drama that''s been dubbed into Russian. Albina gets really engrossed in it, telling you everything she thinks you need to know about the plot and the characters. You end up watching quite a few episodes. When it finishes, she turns to you, her eyes full of happiness you''ve rarely seen. "So, what did you think?"'
+	'Albina grabs some snacks and leads you into the living room and you sit with her as the show starts. It''s some American medical drama that''s been dubbed into Russian. Albina gets really engrossed in it, telling you everything she thinks you need to know about the plot and the characters. When it finishes, she turns to you, her eyes full of happiness you''ve rarely seen. "So, what did you think?"'
 	minut +=36
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 		'"It was actually quite cool. I might start watching it myself." She smiles, seemingly over the moon at your answer. She is about to speak when you hear the door open and you turn to see her mother, who immediately sighs upon seeing Albina''s skimpy choice of clothes.'
 		'"What have I told you about strutting around here in your underwear young lady? Get dressed already! I''m going to take a bath and you better be wearing something decent before I come back!" She doesn''t bother waiting for a reply and leaves without another word. Albina just rolls her eyes and gets comfy on the sofa before flicking through the channels to find something to watch. Unfortunately, she doesn''t succeed and the two of you end up randomly channel surfing for a few minutes before Zoya reappears, clothed in a bathrobe with her hair wrapped in a towel. She glares at Albina with unconcealed anger. Then, reaching into a nearby pile of clothes, she rifles through it for a few seconds before throwing a pair of booty shorts at Albina.'
 		'"Put these on, and don''t you dare ignore me again or there will be consequences young lady!" You take that as your cue to leave and awkwardly bid them farewell. Even once you reach the front door, you can still hear Zoya chewing out Albina while Albina loudly complains.'
-		minut +=6
+		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Go home':gt 'pav_residential'
@@ -540,10 +540,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 	act 'It was okay':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/watchtv.jpg"></center>'
-		'It was okay, I guess. Not reallty my kind of thing." you reply. Albina looks a little disheartened, but isn''t able to reply before you hear the door opening and turn to see her mother entering, who rolls her eyes and sighs upon seeing Albina''s skimpy choice of clothes.'
+		'It was okay, I guess. Not really my kind of thing." you reply. Albina looks a little disheartened, but isn''t able to reply before you hear the door opening and turn to see her mother entering, who rolls her eyes and sighs upon seeing Albina''s skimpy choice of clothes.'
 		'"What have I told you about strutting around here in your underwear young lady? Get dressed already! I''m going to take a bath and you better be wearing something decent before I come back!" She doesn''t bother waiting for a reply and leaves without another word. Albina just rolls her eyes and gets comfy on the sofa before flicking through the channels to find something to watch. Unfortunately, she doesn''t succeed and the two of you end up randomly channel surfing for a few minutes before Zoya reappears, clothed in a bathrobe with her hair wrapped in a towel. She glares at Albina with unconcealed anger. Then, reaching into a nearby pile of clothes, she rifles through it for a few seconds before throwing a pair of booty shorts at Albina.'
 		'"Put these on, and don''t you dare ignore me again or there will be consequences young lady!" You take that as your cue to leave and awkwardly bid them farewell. Even once you reach the front door, you can still hear Zoya chewing out Albina while Albina loudly complains.'
-		minut +=6
+		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Go home':gt 'pav_residential'
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_2':
 !! (used every other time)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/watchtv.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina grabs some snacks and leads you into the living room and you sit with her as the show starts. It''s some American medical drama that''s been dubbed into Russian. Albina gets really engrossed in it, telling you everything she thinks you need to know about the plot and the characters. You end up watching quite a few episodes and when it finishes, she turns to you, her eyes full of happiness you''ve rarely seen. "So, what did you think?"'
+	'Albina grabs some snacks and leads you into the living room and you sit with her as the show starts. It''s some American medical drama that''s been dubbed into Russian. Albina gets really engrossed in it, telling you everything she thinks you need to know about the plot and the characters. When it finishes, she turns to you, her eyes full of happiness you''ve rarely seen. "So, what did you think?"'
 
 	minut +=36
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_2':
 		'"It''s not awful. You just don''t get it." Albina replies before snuggling into her mother, who softly strokes her hair as they settle down to watch another show. You decide it''s time for you to leave and bid them farewell.' 
 		if AlbinaQW['robe'] = 1: 'You gather up your clothes and head off to the bathroom to get changed, leaving the robe in Albina''s room before you quietly leave the house.'
 		AlbinaQW['robe'] = 0
-		minut +=6
+		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go home':gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_2':
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> said the same thing! You two just don''t get it, so there''s something you both have in common!" Albina replies before snuggling into her mother, who laughs and softly strokes her hair as they settle down to watch another show. You smile and decide it''s time for you to leave and so bid them farewell.'
 		if AlbinaQW['robe'] = 1: 'You gather up your clothes and head off to the bathroom to get changed, leaving the robe in Albina''s room before you quietly leave the house.'
 		AlbinaQW['robe'] = 0
-		minut +=6
+		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Go home':gt 'pav_residential'

+ 3 - 3
locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -107,14 +107,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz5.jpg"></center>'			
 					'You keep watching as she sits up on her knees and opens the bottle, squirts a plentiful amount of its contents onto her fingers and starts rubbing it into her asshole. The soft moan and look of bliss on her face tells you that she is fingering herself, preparing herself for the ass fucking she''s about to receive. When she feels she is ready, she passes the bottle to him and backs up to him on her hands and knees. Lazar lubes his shaft up and throws the bottle aside before he gives her ass a few hard smacks.' 
-					'He then moves in behind her and pushes his dick gently into her ass, which elicits a soft moan from her as a look of pleasure washes over her face. He is fairly slow and doesn''t go too deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and begging him to go faster, he starts fucking her backdoor a lot harder, slamming himself balls deep into her asshole. She grips the sheets tightly as her body is rocked by a massive orgasm. She falls forward and buries her face in the sheets, partially muffling her cries of pleasure.' 
+					'He then moves in behind her and pushes his dick gently into her ass, which elicits a soft moan from her as a look of pleasure washes over her face. He is fairly slow and doesn''t go too deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and begging him to go faster, he starts fucking her backdoor a lot harder, slamming himself balls deep into her asshole. She grips the sheets tightly as her body is rocked by a massive orgasm. She falls forward and buries her face in the sheets, partially muffling her cries of pleasure as juices squirt from her pussy.' 
 					'You quickly glance around to make sure nobody heard that.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Keep watching':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop  src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></center>'
-						'She writhes in pleasure before him, and once her orgasm passes, she turns and quickly takes his dick into her mouth. She sucks it for a few seconds before turning around and wiggling her ass at him. He slides his dick back into her ass and starts fucking her again as she tells him to slap her ass and pull her hair. He does just that and a after few minutes, it sounds like she''s on the verge of cumming again.'
+						'She writhes in pleasure before him, and once her orgasm passes, she turns and quickly takes his dick into her mouth. She sucks it for a few seconds before turning around and wiggling her ass at him. He slides his dick back into her ass and starts fucking her again as she tells him to slap her ass and pull her hair while she reaches back and plays with her clit. He does just that and after few minutes, it sounds like she''s on the verge of cumming again.'
                         'A hard smack on the ass is enough to send her over the edge and another powerful orgasm overwhelms her entirely, leaving her shuddering on the bed.'
 						'Lazar starts quickly jerking his dick and once she recovers, Albina quickly slides off the bed and kneels in front of him, sticking her tongue out. A few seconds later, Lazar groans as a stream of cum starts splattering all over her face. When he finishes, she takes his dick into her mouth and sucks and licks it clean before smiling up at him.' 
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A149'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/walkin3.jpg"></center>'
-	'It''s too much for you. You have to be part of this, so you walk in and close the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Lazar finally notices you, his dick loudly popping out of Albina''s mouth as he stumbles back a little in surprise. A puzzled Albina looks up at him, and then at you. "What the fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>? Can''t you knock?" she asks in a somewhat confused tone.'
+	'It''s too much for you. You have to be part of this, so you walk in and close the door. They''re too busy to hear you entering and you manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Lazar finally notices you, his dick loudly popping out of Albina''s mouth as he stumbles back a little in surprise. A puzzled Albina looks up at him, and then at you. "What the fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>? Can''t you knock?" she asks in a somewhat confused tone.'
 	if AlbinaQW['Lazar_Threesome'] = 1:
 		'"You guys looked like you were having fun, so I thought I could join in as well?"'
 		'Lazar just grins widely. "Getting to fuck you two babes at the same time again? Fuck yeah, I''m down with that!" and Albina smiles in return. "If it''s anything like our last threesome, then I look forward to both of you making me cum again."'