Text edits and typo fix

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Small Talk':
+	act 'Make small talk':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You chat about a variety of things, including school, music, clothes and what has been going on in Pavlovsk lately.'
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 	end
 	if AlbinaQW['Maid'] <= daystart:
-		act 'New Maid':
+		act 'The new maid':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Have you seen the new maid, Milena, yet? She''s a little older but just as, if not more, attractive than the last one, but my father isn''t here to charm her into sucking his dick. Not that it would work anyway. She bats for the other team, if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink. Mama says I shouldn''t disturb her when she''s doing her work, but we like chatting with each other about pretty much everything. That''s when I found out about her girlfriend."'
@@ -61,14 +61,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-				!! Probably needs dialog here
+				'You shake your head. "Not really, no..."'
+				'She shakes her head and smiles. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, not everyone''s interested in dating."' 
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			end
 			act 'Same as you':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-				!! Probably needs dialog here
+				'You smile at her. "I''m in the same boat as you. I like it keeping things casual. It''s just easier that way."'
+				'She smiles. "Don''t I know it. I just want sex, not a love story."'
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			end
@@ -179,14 +181,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				end
-				if Rex_Love = 1:	act 'Get marrid to Rex': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
-				if artembf = 1: act 'Get marrid to Artem': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Artem'
-				if kotovLoveQW = 1: act 'Get marrid to Vitek': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Vitek'
-				if fedorKozlovQW >= 5: act 'Get marrid to Fedor': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Fedor'
-				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:	act 'Get marrid to Niko': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
+				if Rex_Love = 1:	act 'Get married to Rex': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
+				if artembf = 1: act 'Get married to Artem': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Artem'
+				if kotovLoveQW = 1: act 'Get married to Vitek': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Vitek'
+				if fedorKozlovQW >= 5: act 'Get married to Fedor': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Fedor'
+				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:	act 'Get married to Niko': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
 				i = 0
 				:marrid_looop
-				if loverGender[i] ! 1: dynamic '	act ''Get marrid to <<$npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]>>'': gt ''albina_chat'', ''telling_marrige_dreams'', $npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]'
+				if loverGender[i] ! 1: dynamic '	act ''Get married to <<$npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]>>'': gt ''albina_chat'', ''telling_marrige_dreams'', $npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]'
 				i +=1
 				if i < ARRSIZE('lover'): jump 'marrid_looop'
 				Killvar 'i'				

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -297,14 +297,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 
 		if Rex_Love = 1 or artembf = 1 or kotovLoveQW = 1 or fedorKozlovQW or NikoVolkovQW >= 5 or (pcs_lover - pcs_girlfriends) > 0:
-			if Rex_Love = 1:	act 'Get marrid to Rex': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
-			if artembf = 1: act 'Get marrid to Artem': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Artem'
-			if kotovLoveQW = 1: act 'Get marrid to Vitek': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Vitek'
-			if fedorKozlovQW >= 5: act 'Get marrid to Fedor': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Fedor'
-			if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:	act 'Get marrid to Niko': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
+			if Rex_Love = 1:	act 'Get married to Rex': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
+			if artembf = 1: act 'Get married to Artem': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Artem'
+			if kotovLoveQW = 1: act 'Get married to Vitek': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Vitek'
+			if fedorKozlovQW >= 5: act 'Get married to Fedor': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Fedor'
+			if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:	act 'Get married to Niko': gt 'anushkachat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
 			i = 0
 			:marrid_looop
-			if loverGender[i] ! 1: dynamic '	act ''Get marrid to <<$npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]>>'': gt ''anushkachat'', ''telling_marrige_dreams'', $npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]'
+			if loverGender[i] ! 1: dynamic '	act ''Get married to <<$npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]>>'': gt ''anushkachat'', ''telling_marrige_dreams'', $npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]'
 			i +=1
 			if i < ARRSIZE('lover'): jump 'marrid_looop'
 			Killvar 'i'			

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1432,7 +1432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 					end
 				end
 			end
-		elseif longshower = 4 and hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] => 50:
+		elseif longshower = 4 and hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] => 70:
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1440,7 +1440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			act 'Go to your locker':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
-				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] > 60 and checkoutalbina = 1:
+				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] >= 70 and checkoutalbina = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She''s on the phone with her father, but doesn''t sound very happy about it. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
 					gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
@@ -1450,8 +1450,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find it hard to resist looking."'
-						'She walks up, turns you around so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+						'There''s no point lying to her, so you decide to just be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find it hard to resist looking."'
+						'She walks up, turns you around to face the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "I know, that''s why I always teased you and gave you a little show... What am I going to do with a dirty little girl like you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'
@@ -1463,7 +1463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull away from her and step away. "What are you doing?"'
+								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
 								'She looks confused. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head. "You''re pretty, but no."'
+						'You shake your head. "You''re very pretty, but no."'
 						'She arches a shapely brow. "No? Then why do you check me out when I''m naked?"'
 						'You blush slightly. You didn''t think anyone noticed you checking out the other girls.'
 						gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
@@ -1486,23 +1486,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Deny it':
 							*clr & cla
-							npc_rel['A23'] -= 1
+							npc_rel['A23'] -= 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you are in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed and you do the same. Soon you are both dressed and she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 						end
-						act 'Confess your attraction to her':
+						act 'Confess your attraction':
 							*clr & cla
-							npc_rel['A23'] += 1
+							npc_rel['A23'] += 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah, sorry, you''re beautiful and not looking is hard to resist."'
-							'She walks up to you, turns you so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question, as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah, sorry, you''re beautiful and it''s hard to resist looking at your amazing body."'
+							'She walks up to you, turns you around to face the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "I know, that''s why I always teased you and gave you a little show... What am I going to do with a dirty little girl like you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'
@@ -1514,8 +1514,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 									npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-									'You pull away from her and step away. "What are you doing?"'
-									'She looks confused. "I thought... never mind." she says, shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+									'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
+									'She looks confused. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 									gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'