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[text edit] Corrected plot hole in Niko's family story.

VioletKitten 4 роки тому
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      locations/NikoDates.qsrc

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locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -617,14 +617,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your...family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who...passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother, or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my father took it extremely hard and blamed himself for not being there. I believe that he lost faith in both Yurik and I.'
+			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your...family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who...passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
 
 			act 'Continue listening':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'			
-				'It wasn''t my fault but of course, I received some of the blame for Yurik''s failure... I just can''t believe how fast it happened. One second she was on the sidewalk holding the cat then... Anyway my father began working even harder, trying to find a cure for my little brother''s condition. I don''t know much about his research. He always stayed locked in his study."'
+				'It wasn''t my fault but of course, I received some of the blame for Yurik''s failure... I just can''t believe how fast it happened. One second she was on the sidewalk holding the cat then... Anyway our sister died and my brother''s bitch of a girlfriend went missing shortly after. Good fucking riddance I say. She was nothing but a controlling bitch! and she deserved what she got..." Niko suddenly places his hand over his mouth, shutting himself up. It seems as if he caught himself saying something he shouldn''t have.'
 
 				act 'Go on':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask, "What happened to them?" Niko replies, "They both died..." You ask, "But how?" Niko shrugs then remains silent. You realize that he is not interested in answering, so you ask, "So what happened to your mother?" Niko replies, "I never met her. She left my father shortly after I was born. Yurik told me that she was just a gold digger who only wanted my father''s money, but after a long heated argument, she left without ever looking back. What a greedy bitch!" You respond, "Are there any happy memories that you have with your family?" Niko shrugs as he says, "None that aren''t surrounded in bad memories. Let''s talk about something else."'
+					'Realizing that Niko is tensing up, you decide to shift the conversation back to his parents, "What happened to your parents?" Niko replies, "They both died..." You ask, "But how?" Niko shrugs then remains silent. You realize that he is not interested in answering, so you ask, "So what happened to your biological mother?" Niko replies, "I never met her. She left my father shortly after I was born. Yurik told me that she was just a gold digger who only wanted my father''s money, but after a long heated argument, she left without ever looking back. What a greedy bitch!" You respond, "Are there any happy memories that you have with your family?" Niko shrugs as he says, "None that aren''t surrounded in bad memories. Let''s talk about something else."'
 					
 					act 'Chat with Niko':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -687,7 +687,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 											minut += 5
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d4.jpg"></center>'
-											'As you both get comfortably seated, you take this time to ask Niko, "Niko I hate to keep prying, but I feel that there is more to your story that you might need to get off your chest. Can you tell me how your brother died?" Niko takes a few second pause, before replying, "There was a fire in our old home and before you ask, No they didn''t die in the fire. My brother and I set up a christmas tree but sadly, we never realized how close we placed it to the fireplace. It would have been alright if we didn''t place rattling ornaments on the tree." You quickly ask, "How can rattling ornaments cause a fire?"'
+											'As you both get comfortably seated, you take this time to ask Niko, "Niko I hate to keep prying, but I feel that there is more to your story that you might need to get off your chest. Can you tell me how your brother died?" Niko takes a few second pause, before replying, "There was a fire in our old home and before you ask, No they didn''t die in the fire. My brother and I set up a Christmas tree but sadly, we never realized how close we placed it to the fireplace. It would have been alright if we didn''t place rattling ornaments on the tree." You quickly ask, "How can rattling ornaments cause a fire?"'
 
 											act 'Listen to Niko''s reply':
 												*clr & cla