Proofread uni files and cleaned up journal hints file

locations/journal_quests.qsrc

@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		elseif cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = -2:
 			'For one reason or another, I don''t want to join the cheerleading squad.'
 		elseif cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 1:
-			'I have signed up to tryout for the cheerleading squad.'
+			'I have signed up to try out for the cheerleading squad.'
 		elseif cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 2:
-			'I was accepted into the cheerleading squad as a backup. Unless people start thinking I am a jock or see me as cool enough, this is as far as Albina will let me go.'
+			'I was accepted into the cheerleading squad as a backup. Unless people start thinking I''m a jock or see me as cool enough, this is as far as Albina will let me go.'
 		elseif cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3:
 			'I joined the cheerleading squad as a full member.'
 		else
@@ -40,35 +40,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 1 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 1:
 			if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 1:
 				if christinaQW['dompath'] = 7:
-					'I own Christina now. I completely ruined her life, took away everything she loves, gave her new rules to follow, or she gets punished. I am the Queen Bitch now!'
+					'I own Christina now. I completely ruined her life, took away everything she loves and gave her new rules to follow or she gets punished. I am the Queen Bitch now!'
 				elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 6:
-					'I won the fight! First I ruined her school rep, then beat the shit out of her, and then blackmailed the coach. She is ruined! Only time will tell what the fallout of all this will be.'
+					'I won the fight! I ruined her reputation before beating the shit out of her and blackmailing the coach. She is ruined! Only time will tell what the fallout of all this will be.'
 				elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 5:
 					'Just like I thought, she attacked me the moment school let out. This is going to be a rough fight...'
 				elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 4:
 					'Christina is going to know who spread those rumors about her. I hope I prepared enough, otherwise my plan could backfire pretty badly...'
 				elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 3:
-					'I have managed to successfully blackmail Christina. She can''t say no to me now! Of course, I could tell some people about the dirt I found, but I shouldn''t do that unless I am ready for one hell of a fight...'
+					'I have managed to successfully blackmail Christina. She can''t say no to me now! Of course, I could tell some people about the dirt I found, but I shouldn''t do that unless I''m ready for one hell of a fight...'
 				elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 2:
-					'I need to chat with Christina at school, let her know what I have on her. Unless she does what I want, I am going to ruin her reputation.'
+					'I need to chat with Christina at school, let her know what I have on her. Unless she does what I want, I''m going to ruin her reputation.'
 				else
-					'I shouild wait, and see what opportunities come up to get some dirt on Christina.'
+					'I should wait and see what opportunities come up to get some dirt on Christina.'
 				end
 			else
 				if christinaQW['subpath'] = 3:
-					'Christina owns me now. After gym classes, in the showers, she makes me do things.'
+					'Christina owns me now. After gym class, she makes me do things in the showers.'
 				elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 2:
 					if christinaQW['fight'] = -1:
 						'I challenged Christina ... and lost. I have a feeling that is going to catch up to me somehow...'
 					else
-						'I submitted myself to Christina''s control. I am just going to have to wait and see what the future brings...'
+						'I submitted myself to Christina''s control. I have to wait and see what the future brings...'
 					end
 				else
-					'I have heard Christina trains Lina by the lake afterschool. I should pay them a visit.'
+					'I heard Christina trains Lina by the lake after school. I should pay them a visit.'
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'I should talk to Christina at school sometime. I cannot decide what I think about her...'
+			'I should talk to Christina at school sometime. I can''t decide what to think about her...'
 		end
 		*nl
 		*nl
@@ -77,14 +77,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 60:
 			if kotovVSprohorov = 2:
 				if IvanShowerQW = 11:
-					'Ivan joins me sometimes in the showers at the sports center now. If I want it to happen for sure then I need to talk with him about it at school.'
+					'Ivan sometimes joins me in the showers at the sports center. If I want it to happen more often, then I need to talk with him about it at school.'
 				elseif IvanShowerQW = 1:
-					'I should talk to Ivan about what happened in the sports center the next time I am at school.'
+					'I should talk to Ivan about what happened in the sports center the next time I''m at school.'
 				else
-					'I need to not chicken out the next time Ivan tries to join my in the sports center shower.'
+					'I need to not chicken out the next time Ivan tries to join me in the sports center shower.'
 				end
 			elseif kotovVSprohorov = 1:
-				'I am feeling dirty, I should take a shower at the sports center.'
+				'I''m feeling dirty. I should take a shower at the sports center.'
 			else
 				'I see Ivan at the sports center around 17:00 a lot. I should try and chat with him then.'
 			end
@@ -109,16 +109,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									'I should try talking to Julia about sex.'
 								end
 							else
-								'I should spend some time chatting with Julia. I bet if I get to know her weel enough, she would open up to me more.'
+								'I should spend some time chatting with Julia. I bet if I get to know her well enough, she would open up to me more.'
 							end
 						else
 							'I bet if I bought some wine, Julia would drink it with me.'
 						end
 					else
-						'Julia agreed to help me with my homework, she should be waiting for me after school ends.'
+						'Julia agreed to help me with my homework. She should be waiting for me after school ends.'
 					end
 				else
-					'I should ask Julia to help me with my homework afterschool sometime. I can find her hanging out with the other nerds in a classroom during school breaks.'
+					'I should ask Julia to help me with my homework after school sometime. I can find her hanging out with the other nerds in a classroom during school breaks.'
 				end
 			else
 				'I need to get to know Julia better before she is willing to hang out with me after school.'
@@ -134,71 +134,71 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'Lariska trusts you more than anybody else in her life now, and will (eventually) be able to do plenty of stuff around town with you.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 18:
 			if LariskaBoyDay > daystart:
-				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now, give it some time.'
+				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now. Give it some time.'
 			else
-				'Lariska called me crying again, I need to go see her at home the next chance I get.'
+				'Lariska called me crying again. I need to go see her at home the next chance I get.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 17:
 			if LariskaBoyDay > daystart:
-				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now, give it some time.'
+				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now. Give it some time.'
 			else
-				'Lariska called me crying, I need to go see her at home the next chance I get.'
+				'Lariska called me crying. I need to go see her at home the next chance I get.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 16:
 			if LariskaBoyDay > daystart:
-				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now, give it some time.'
+				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now. Give it some time.'
 			else
-				'Lariska needs to talk to me, she said it was important. I should go to her bedroom afterschool or on the weekends.'
+				'Lariska needs to talk to me, saying it was important. I should go to her bedroom after school or on the weekends.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 15:
-			'I need to tell Lariska what I saw (name) doing when she is in her bedroom afterschool or on the weekends.'
+			'I need to tell Lariska what I saw (name) doing when she is in her bedroom after school or on the weekends.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 14:
-			'I feel like clubbing, I should hit up the disco next weekend'
+			'I feel like clubbing. I should hit up the disco next weekend.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 13:
 			if LariskaBoyDay > daystart:
-				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now, give it some time.'
+				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now. Give it some time.'
 			else
-				'I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom afterschool or on the weekends.'
+				'I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom after school or on the weekends.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 12:
-			'She wants me to meet her new boyfriend at Del Parco next Saturday'
+			'She wants me to meet her new boyfriend at Del Parco next Saturday.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 11:
 			if LariskaBoyDay > daystart:
-				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now, give it some time.'
+				'There isn''t anything to talk about right now. Give it some time.'
 			else
 				'I should chat with Lariska when she is cooking in her kitchen on a weekday.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 10:
-			'I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom afterschool or on the weekends.'
+			'I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom after school or on the weekends.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 9:
 			'I need to keep flirting with her to build her trust.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 8:
-			'I should try to flirt with Lariska afterschool or on the weekends, when she is in her bedroom.'
+			'I should try to flirt with Lariska after school or on the weekends when she is in her bedroom.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 7:
-			'We should get to know each other better, so I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom afterschool or on the weekends.'
+			'We should get to know each other better, so I should chat with Lariska when she is in her bedroom after school or on the weekends.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 6:
-			'I should do my homework with Lariska afterschool.'
+			'I should do my homework with Lariska after school.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 5:
-			'Lariska invited me to come over afterschool and do our homework together.'
+			'Lariska invited me to come over after school and do our homework together.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 4:
 			'I should talk to Lariska at school again.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 3:
 			if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 3 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2:
 				'I should talk to Lariska at school.'
 			else
-				'I have to find a way to deal with Christina, before Lariska is willing to be more involved with me.'
+				'I have to find a way to deal with Christina before Lariska is willing to be more involved with me.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 2:
-			'I should return the volleyball Lariska left behind during school. Maybe I can figure out why she freaked out.'
+			'I should return the volleyball Lariska left behind during school. Maybe then I can figure out why she freaked out.'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 1:
 			if npc_rel['A13'] > 40:
-				'I should try talking to her outside of the Five Eight Estates again. Maybe I should be a little nicer this time, though.'
+				'I should try talking to her outside of the Five Eight Estate again. Maybe I should be a little nicer this time, though.'
 			else
 				'I need to get to know Lariska better before she would hang out with me.'
 			end
 		else
 			if npc_rel['A13'] > 40:
-				'I think I heard the sound of a ball outside the Five Eight Estates.'
+				'I think I heard the sound of a ball outside the Five Eight Estate.'
 			else
 				'I need to get to know Lariska better before she would hang out with me.'
 			end
@@ -211,27 +211,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 11:
 			'This is the end of Natasha''s quest line, for now.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 10:
-			'I should check Natasha''s fridge, I am sure there is something I can use to keep corrupting her. It would be a good time to do this when she is in the laundry room.'
+			'I should check Natasha''s fridge. I''m sure there''s something I can use to keep corrupting her. It would be a good time to do this when she is in the laundry room.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 9:
 			'I bet Olu would love to give Natasha a ride. I should see what he thinks of other girls joining us. If I haven''t had sex with him yet, I will need to do that first.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 8:
 			'Kolka seems pretty horny these days. I could invite him over to Natasha''s apartment in the afternoon. I should talk to him about it, after teasing him in the mornings when I have her carry my books.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 7:
-			'I think Natasha could learn to please me, I should have her practice with her tongue when I am in her room.'
+			'I think Natasha could learn to please me. I should have her practice with her tongue when I am in her room.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 6:
-			'Natasha has a kinky side, she just doesn''t realize it yet. Next time I am in her bedroom, I should see how she handles bodily fluids in her mouth.'
+			'Natasha has a kinky side, she just doesn''t realize it yet. Next time I''m in her bedroom, I should see how she handles bodily fluids in her mouth.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 5:
-			'Natasha is pretty much my slave now. Let''s see how well she can handle worshipping my feet the next time I am in her bedroom.'
+			'Natasha is pretty much my slave now. Let''s see how well she can handle worshipping my feet the next time I''m in her bedroom.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 4:
 			'I need to have Natasha carry my books to school if I want to keep corrupting her. I can do that before school, in the hallway of my parents apartment.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 3:
-			'Since Natasha cannot seem to pay her debt to me, I should start forcing her to do things for me. Making her do my homework all by herself seems like a good place to start. I will let her do that for me a few times, and see what else I can get her to do.'
+			'Since Natasha cannot seem to pay back her debt to me, I should start forcing her to do things for me. Making her do my homework seems like a good place to start. I will let her do that for me a few times, and see what else I can get her to do.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 2:
-			'Natasha has borrowed money from me, in return she has to do my homework whenever I tell her to. Once her 30 days are up I should ask for my money back and see where it goes, because I don''t actually expect her to be able to pay it back.'
+			'Natasha has borrowed money from me. In return, she has to do my homework whenever I tell her. Once her 30 days are up, I should ask for my money back and see where it goes because I don''t actually expect her to be able to pay it back.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 1:
-			'Natasha agreed to help me with my homework. I just need to visit her in her apartment after school. I should chat with her a few times, before bringing up anything involving money though.'
+			'Natasha agreed to help me with my homework. I just need to visit her in her apartment after school. I should chat with her a few times before bringing up anything involving money though.'
 		else
-			'Natasha seems really smart, I should try to befriend her to help me with my grades. During school breaks seems like a good time to chat her up. It might take a lot of effort for her to trust me though.'
+			'Natasha seems really smart. I should try to befriend her to help me with my grades. During school breaks seems like a good time to chat her up. It might take a lot of effort for her to trust me though.'
 		end
 		*nl
 		*nl
@@ -241,13 +241,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'Coach Mikhail has finally made me a starter on the Volleyball Team.'
 		elseif trener_Speak = 7 and volleysostav > 0:
 			if pcs_vball > 70:
-				'I am pretty sure I have pushed every button and jumped through every hoop I can with the coach. It''s time to request that starter spot again.'
+				'I''m pretty sure I''ve pushed every button and jumped through every hoop I can with the coach. It''s time to request that starter spot again.'
 			else
-				'I have done everything I can do to twist Mikhail around my finger. Now I just need to keep practicing my volleyball skills to be worthy of a starter position.'
+				'I''ve done everything I can do to twist Mikhail around my finger. Now I just need to keep practicing my volleyball skills to be worthy of a starter position.'
 			end
 		elseif trener_Speak = 6 and volleysostav > 0:
 			if trenerSex >= 1:
-				'It''s time to start pushing for a spot as a starter. I should be careful about pushing too hard though, or I could ruin my chances, and worse.'
+				'It''s time to start pushing for a spot as a starter. I should be careful about pushing too hard though, or I could ruin my chances.'
 			else
 				'I need to at least give the coach a blowjob to finish my seduction scheme.'
 			end
@@ -282,17 +282,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								'I should chat with Ivan at school again.'
 							end
 						elseif IvanShowerQW = 1:
-							'I should talk to Ivan about what happened in the sports center the next time I am at school.'
+							'I should talk to Ivan about what happened in the sports center the next time I''m at school.'
 						else
 							'I need to not chicken out the next time Ivan tries to join my in the sports center shower.'
 						end
 					elseif kotovVSprohorov = 1:
 						'I should take a shower at the sports center. If the rumors I heard about Ivan are true, he should try to join me.'
 					else
-						'I want to use Ivan to make the coach jealous, somehow. I should start by chatting with him in the sports section when he is just showing up, usually around 17:00.'
+						'I want to use Ivan to somehow make the coach jealous. I should start by chatting with him in the sports section when he shows up, usually around 17:00.'
 					end
 				else
-					'I need something to make the coach jealous of me. Ivan spends a lot of time at the sports center, maybe I can use him to my advantage. I should put some effort into getting to know him better.'
+					'I need something to make the coach jealous of me. Ivan spends a lot of time at the sports center, maybe I can use him to my advantage? I should put some effort into getting to know him better.'
 				end
 			elseif VoltrenerVoyeur = 2:
 				if trenerlust >= 40:
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				end
 			elseif VoltrenerVoyeur = 1:
 				if trenerlust >= 40:
-					'I should take a shower again at the sports center. Maybe this time he wont run away so fast.'
+					'I should take a shower again at the sports center. Maybe this time he won''t run away so fast?'
 				else
 					'I need to keep trying to tease the coach.'
 				end
@@ -314,73 +314,73 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				end
 			end
 		elseif trener_Speak = 3 and volleysostav > 0:
-			'As much as I did not enjoy the lecture about volleyball the last time I spoke with the coach, if I keep asking about it, maybe he will volunteer some information on his own about his past on the European Team. If all else fails, maybe I can straight seduce him.'
+			'As much as I didn''t enjoy the lecture about volleyball the last time I spoke with the coach, if I keep asking about it, maybe he will volunteer some information on his own about his past on the European Team. If all else fails, maybe I can straight up seduce him?'
 		elseif trener_Speak = 2 and volleysostav > 0:
-			'Lets see what other information I can get out of the Coach. Surely there is something I can use to manipulate him. I should try just asking about volleyball in general.'
+			'Let''s see what other information I can get out of the coach. Surely there''s something I can use to manipulate him. I should try asking about volleyball in general.'
 		elseif trener_Speak = 1 and volleysostav > 0:
-			'Apparently the memories of the Coach''s time on the European team are painful, something bad must have happened. I should remember that for later, for now, lets see what I can get out of him about his personal life.'
+			'Apparently the memories of the coach''s time on the European team are painful, something bad must have happened. I should remember that for later. For now, let''s see what I can get out of him about his personal life.'
 		elseif trener_Speak = 0 and volleysostav > 0:
-			'I should talk to Mikhail. The only way I am ever going to be a starter for the team is if I manage to wrap him around my finger. Maybe I should ask him about the rumors of him playing for the European championship winning team in the past.'
+			'I should talk to Mikhail. The only way I''m ever going to be a starter for the team is if I manage to wrap him around my finger. Maybe I should ask him about the rumors of him playing for the European championship winning team in the past?'
 		elseif volleysostav < 0:
-			'I got kicked off the Volleyball Team, pretty sure there is nothing I can say or do to get back on the team.'
+			'I got kicked off the volleyball team. I''m pretty sure there''s nothing I can say or do to get back on the team.'
 		else
-			'If I want to join the Volleyball Team, I need to practice my skills at the community center, then talk to the coach about joining.'
+			'If I want to join the volleyball team, I need to practice my skills at the community center, then talk to the coach about joining.'
 		end
 		*nl
 		*nl
 		'<center><h1>Katja Meynold</h1></center>'
 		*nl
 		if katjaQW['QWstage'] = 0:
-			'Katja is both cute, smart and poupular. If I want to be her friend'+iif(npc_rel['A14'] < 60, ', I need to get to know her better by talking with her at school or the disco', '')+ +iif(pcs_makupskl < 40, ', I need to improve my make skill since she is very into makeup', '')+ +iif(class['school_grade_average'] < 64, ', I need to improve my grades since being good at school is important to her', '')+ +iif(fame['pav_slut'] >= 25, ', I need to be seen as les of a slut', '')+ +iif(hotcat >= 6, ', I need to improve my looks', '')+ +iif(npc_rel['A14'] >= 60 and fame['pav_slut'] < 25 and class['school_grade_average'] >= 65 and pcs_makupskl >= 40 and hotcat >= 6, ', I should probably go to school and see if somthing happens.', '.')
+			'Katja is both cute, smart and popular. If I want to be her friend'+iif(npc_rel['A14'] < 60, ', I need to get to know her better by talking with her at school or the disco', '')+ +iif(pcs_makupskl < 40, ', I need to improve my make up skill since she is very into make up', '')+ +iif(class['school_grade_average'] < 64, ', I need to improve my grades since being good at school is important to her', '')+ +iif(fame['pav_slut'] >= 25, ', I need to be seen as less of a slut', '')+ +iif(hotcat >= 6, ', I need to improve my looks', '')+ +iif(npc_rel['A14'] >= 60 and fame['pav_slut'] < 25 and class['school_grade_average'] >= 65 and pcs_makupskl >= 40 and hotcat >= 6, ', I should probably go to school and see if somthing happens.', '.')
 		elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] = 1:
-			'Katja has agreed to hang out after school, I should do this more often to see where thid leads.'
+			'Katja has agreed to hang out after school. I should do this more often to see where this leads.'
 		elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] = 2:
-			'Katja and me saw her mother and a Girl not much older than us kissing and it clearly affect Katja. I thought about asking Katja if we should try Kissing, but do not do it. Maybe if I hang out more whit har at ther house there will be another opertunity for kissing her.'
+			'Katja and I saw her mother and a girl not much older than us kissing and it clearly affected Katja. I thought about asking her if we should try kissing, but decided not to. Maybe if I hang out more with her at her house there will be another opportunity to try?'
 		elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2:
 			if npc_sex['A14'] = 0:
-				'I have kissed Katja but not gone any further.'+iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 20, ' Katja probably need to loosen up a little before she will go any further. Maybe trying to push her a little when kissing or getting her to be naked at the lake beach.', ' I think it is possible that she will go further if the opertunity comes up when hanging out at her home.')
+				'I''ve kissed Katja, but not gone any further.'+iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 20, ' Katja needs to loosen up a little before she will go any further. Maybe I should try to push her a little when kissing or getting her to be naked at the beach?', ' I think it''s possible that she will go further if the opportunity comes up when hanging out at her home.')
 			end
-				'While Katja is a shy girl she is still quit strong willed, and will not do anything sexual if not in the mood. Fortuanlly it is pretty easy to determine if she is aroused, just look at how red her face is.'
+				'While Katja is a shy girl, she is still quite strong willed, and will not do anything sexual if not in the mood. Fortunately for me, it''s pretty easy to determine if she is aroused by how red her face is.'
 
 			if katjaQW['school_kiss'] = 0 and katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2 and katjaQW['knows_masterbation'] + katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']+ katjaQW['knows_cuni'] >= 2:
 				'I should try to kiss Katja at school.'
 			elseif katjaQW['school_kiss'] = 1:
-				'I should kiss Katja again in school to see what happens.'
+				'I should kiss Katja again in school and see what happens.'
 			end
 
 			if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 0:
-				'It could be fun to see if I could get Katja to go to school without panties. To do this I need to speek with her at school when I don''t wear panties so she might see I am not wearing any'+iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 40 and katja['school_sex'] = 0, ', I should probably accept her advances at school', '')+ +iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 20, ', I probably need to loosen up Katja in other way frist, for example getting her to be naked at the lake beach.', '.')
+				'It could be fun to see if I could get Katja to go to school without panties. To do this, I need to speak with her at school when I''m not wearing panties so she can see that I''m not wearing any'+iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 40 and katja['school_sex'] = 0, ', I should probably accept her advances at school', '')+ +iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 20, ', I need to loosen up Katja in other ways first. For example, by getting her to be naked at the beach.', '.')
 			elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 4:
-				'I think I am getting close to having Katja take of her panties at school. Just a few more times and she will take them of.'
+				'I think I''m getting close to having Katja take off her panties at school. Just have to push her a little more...'
 			elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4:
-				'I have gotten Katja to take of her panties at School, now she just need to lose some more inhibition to not put them on in the morning.'
+				'I''ve gotten Katja to take off her panties at school. Now she just needs to lose some more inhibition so she doesn''t put them on in the morning.'
 			elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 4:
-				'Misson acomplished Katja don''t wear panties to school anymore.'
+				'Success. Katja doesn''t wear panties to school anymore.'
 			end
 			if npc_sex['A14'] = 1:
 				if strapon = 0:
-					'I should by a strap-on so that I can maybe use it on Katja.'
+					'I should buy a strap-on so that I can use it on Katja.'
 				elseif katjaQW['slut'] < 40:
-					'You need to get Katja to loose some more of her inhibition before you can use your strap-on on her.'
+					'You need to get Katja to lose some more of her inhibition before you can use your strap-on on her.'
 				elseif katjaQW['strapon_vag'] + katjaQW['strapon_ass'] + katjaQW['strapon_bj'] < 3:
-					'You should' +iif(katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 0, '; make Katja give your strap-on a blow-job', '')+ +iif( katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 0, '; fuck Katja''s pussy with your strap-on', '')+ +iif(katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 0, '; fuck Katja in the ass with your strap-on', '')+'.'
+					'You should' +iif(katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 0, '; make Katja give your strap-on a blowjob', '')+ +iif( katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 0, '; fuck Katja''s pussy with your strap-on', '')+ +iif(katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 0, '; fuck Katja in the ass with your strap-on', '')+'.'
 				end
 
 				if katjaQW['school_kiss'] > 1 and (katjaQW['ivan_pussy'] + katjaQW['ivan_anal']) = 0:
-					'Ivan seems interested in me and Katja. Maybe I can get them to have a threesome. Kissing Katja at school should get his attention, or maybe we will ran into him on the beach.' +iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 60, ' Katja probably need to loose some more inhibition before it she agrees.', '')+ +iif(IvanShowerQW ! 11, ' I need to have sex with Ivan first (See heis quest how to do this).', '')
+					'Ivan seems interested in Katja and I. Maybe I can get them to have a threesome? Kissing Katja at school should get his attention, or maybe we will run into him at the beach.' +iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 60, ' Katja needs to lose some more inhibition before she will agree.', '')+ +iif(IvanShowerQW ! 11, ' I need to have sex with Ivan first (See his quest on how to do this).', '')
 				end
 
 				if katjaQW['slut'] < 100:
-					'I should continue to corrupt Katja, there might be more things I can pus her to do.'
+					'I should continue to corrupt Katja. There might be more things I can push her to do.'
 				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 0:
-					'I should take Katja to the park to get her to to hook up with ramdom guys.'
+					'I should take Katja to the park to get her to to hook up with random guys.'
 				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 1:
-					'I took Katja to the park and she had sex with a ramdom guy. Maybe if we go again I could get her to have sex with several guys.'
+					'I took Katja to the park and she had sex with a random guy. Maybe if we go again I could get her to have sex with several guys.'
 				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 2:
 					'Katja had a threesome in the park with two random guys. Let''s go again and see where it ends.'
 				else
-					'Congatulations. You have managed to tun Katja from an inocent virgin to a complete slut tha will have orgies with random people you meet in the park.'
-					'You have unlucked the possibility to see all the scenes with Katja that are in the game at the moment' +iif(NatbelQW['QWstage'] < 8, ', except a scene started by going to the market which requires you to advance Natasha''s quest line.', '.')
+					'You have managed to tun Katja from an innocent virgin into a complete slut that will have orgies with random people you meet in the park.'
+					'You have unlocked all the scenes with Katja that are in the game at the moment' +iif(NatbelQW['QWstage'] < 8, ', except a scene started by going to the market which requires you to advance Natasha''s quest line.', '.')
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/uni_admin.qsrc

@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 # uni_admin
 
 !!This is the file containing the university administartion office.
-!!It is important since include to option to enroll in university, and therefore sets the variable regarding the choice of study.
+!!It is important to include an option to enroll in university, and therefore set the variable regarding the choice of study.
 
-!!The follwoing vables will be set in this file.
-!! university['prep_enrolled'] is set to 1 in the player enrolls in the university preparation program. 
-!! university['student'] is set to 1 in the player enrolls in a university program.
-!! $university['enrolled_in'] is set to the name of the university program the player enrolls in, there is the following progams: teaching_studies
-!! university['enrolled_in_semester'] is set to the semester the player enrolls in starting fom 1 for the first semester and ending with 8 for the last.
+!!The following variables will be set in this file.
+!! university['prep_enrolled'] is set to 1 if the player enrolls in the university preparation program. 
+!! university['student'] is set to 1 if the player enrolls in a university program.
+!! $university['enrolled_in'] is set to the name of the university program the player enrols in. There is the following progams: teaching_studies
+!! university['enrolled_in_semester'] is set to the semester the player enrolls in starting at 1 for the first semester and ending with 8 for the last.
 
 
 
@@ -25,25 +25,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The University Administration Building</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/uni_admin.jpg"></center>'
-	'The main lobby is large with several pillars across the room, on each end is a large set of stairs that go up to the next level. Opposite you is a long wall with several hallways going off to each side and two straight ahead.'
-	!!this below will all need to be updated and cleaned up. I am leaving it as is for now as I don''t know how to fix it
-	if university['diploma'] > 0:
-		'You have graduated from the University.'
+	'The main lobby is large with several pillars spread across the room. At each end of the room is a large set of stairs that go up to the next level. Several hallways going off in all directions stand opposite you.'
+    if university['diploma'] > 0:
+		'You have graduated from the university.'
 	elseif university['expelled_for_missing_exam'] = 0 and university['expelled'] = 1:
-		'You have been expelled from the University for failing your exams.'
+		'You have been expelled from the university for failing your exams.'
 	elseif university['expelled_for_missing_exam'] = 1:
-		'You have been expelled from the University for skipping your exams.'
+		'You have been expelled from the university for skipping your exams.'
 	elseif func('uniutil', 'student', 'expelled_for_other_reason'):
-		'You have been expelled from the University for reasons unrelated to your exam results.'
+		'You have been expelled from the university for reasons unrelated to your exam results.'
 	elseif university['student'] = 0:
 		if university['prep_enrolled'] = 1 and month = 8:
 			'You''ve enrolled in the preparatory classes.'
 		elseif university['prep_enrolled'] = 1:
 			'You''ve enrolled in the preparatory classes. They will start in August'
 		else
-			'You can take preparatory classes at the University on weekdays for 15000<b>₽</b>.'
+			'You can take preparatory classes at the university on weekdays for 15000<b>₽</b>.'
 		end
-		'Admission examinations for the University are held in August.'
+		'Admission exams for the university are held in August.'
 	end
 	act 'Leave':
 		minut += 2
@@ -58,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Take the entrance exam (1:00)': gt 'uni_admin', 'take_test'
 	end
 	if (university['entrance_exam_passed'] = 1 or university['prep_enrolled'] = 0) and university['student'] = 0 and university['diploma'] = 0 and age >= 17 and (storyline ! 1 or SchoolAtestat = 1) and month < 9:
-		act 'Enroll at the University': gt 'uni_admin', 'enrollment'
+		act 'Enroll at the university': gt 'uni_admin', 'enrollment'
 	end
 	if university['enrolled_in_semester'] > 0 and university['enrolled_in_semester'] = university['semester_passed'] and university['semeter_passed'] < 8:
 		act 'Enroll in your next semester': gt 'uni_admin', 'enrollment_semester'
@@ -72,27 +71,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enrollment':
 	cla & *clr
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/enrollment1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the enrollment office, where there are several desks with women working behind them and a fair number of young people about your age waiting in a side room. You inform them you wish to enroll at the university, they take down your name and ask you to go wait in the waiting room until your name is called. You walk into the other room, smile and nod to the other prospective students and take a seat.'
+	'You enter the enrollment office, where there are several desks with women working behind them and a fair number of people around your age waiting in a side room. You inform them that you wish to enrol at the university. They take down your name and ask you to wait in the waiting room until your name is called. You walk into the other room and nod at the other prospective students before taking a seat.'
 	act 'Wait your turn':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/enrollment2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wait until until your name is called by one of the women. She then leads you down a side hall to one of the offices, letting you take a seat and introduce yourself. After a brief discussion the woman takes your information and enters it into the computer.'
+		'You wait until until your name is called by one of the women, who leads you down a side hall to one of the offices. You take a seat and introduce yourself, and after a brief discussion the woman takes your information and enters it into the computer.'
 		if class['school_grade_average'] >= 70 or university['entrance_exam_passed'] = 1:
 			minut += 15
-			'She looks over the information for a bit, filling in some data. Several minutes later she turns to you and smiles, telling you that you are eligible to enroll at the university. She gives you a lot of paperwork and you spend some time filling it all out. Once done, she asks you to stand up so she can take your picture. As she works on your university ID card she tells you about the different degrees, giving you time to decide which route you want to choose.'
+			'She looks over your information and fills in some data. Several minutes later, she turns to you and smiles, telling you that you are eligible to enrol at the university. She gives you a lot of paperwork and you spend some time filling it all out. Once done, she asks you to stand up so she can take your picture. As she works on your university ID card she tells you about the different degrees, giving you time to decide which one you want to choose.'
 			act 'Teaching degree':
 				cla
-				'You inform her you wish to acquire a teaching degree. She hands you a packet of information about your classes you will be attending and about dorm life., next she inquires if you will be signing up for any elective classes at this time.'
-				act 'No not now':
+				'You inform her you wish to acquire a teaching degree. She hands you a packet of information about the classes you will be attending and about dorm life. She then inquires if you will be signing up for any elective classes at this time.'
+				act 'Not right now':
 					cla
-					'You shake your head no and tell her you don''t intend to sign up for any elective classes right now. She nods and makes a few more notes and then hands over your finished paperwork, welcoming you to Saint Petersburg University. You get up and leave, looking forward to when you can come back and start your classes.'
+					'You shake your head and tell her you don''t intend to sign up for any elective classes right now. She nods and makes a few more notes before handing over your finished paperwork, welcoming you to Saint Petersburg University. You get up and leave, looking forward to when you can come back and start your classes.'
 					act 'Leave':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 				end
-				act 'Enroll':
-					!!This sets the variables such that the player is enrroled in the first semester of the teaching program.
+				act 'Enrol':
+					!!This sets the variables such that the player is enrolled in the first semester of the teaching program.
 					university['prep_counter'] = 0
 					university['prep_enrolled'] = 0
 					university['student'] = 1
@@ -107,29 +106,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enrollment':
 					gs 'grades', 'grade_award', 'uni_teaching_studies_semester_1', 'teaching methods 101', 35
 					gs 'grades', 'grade_award', 'uni_teaching_studies_semester_1', 'learning theories 101', 35
 					cla
-					'You tell her you would like to pursue a teaching degree. She smiles and nods, then finishes filling out some more paperwork about the courses you can expect to take. Once the ID is done she hands it over, along with all of your paperwork. You are now officially enrolled as a student at the Saint Petersburg University.'
+					'You tell her you would like to pursue a teaching degree. She smiles and nods, then finishes filling out some more paperwork about the courses you can expect to take. Once your ID is done she hands it over, along with all of your paperwork. You are now officially enrolled as a student at the Saint Petersburg University.'
 					if (day - week) >= 27 and month = 8:
 						university['semester_week'] = 1
 						*nl
 						'She tells you that you enrolled at the last minute, and the classes have already started this week.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
-!!once we have the framework working i will start working on some elective classes, once we have a couple of them I will add them here.
+                    !!Once we have the framework working, I will start working on some elective classes and add them here.
 					!!act 'Take some elective classes':
 				end
 			end
 		else
 			university['entrance_information'] = 1
 			minut += 5
-			'She looks over the information for a bit, filling in some data. Several minutes later she turns to you frowning and tells you that you not are eligible to enroll at the university at this time, your grades from Pavlovsk Secondary School were not good enough. She informs you with so many students applying they can only take those with better grades, but you can still get in if you sign up and take the preparatory classes and pass them with a high enough grade. You do have to pay for the classes though.'
+			'She looks over the information, filling in some data. Several minutes later she turns to you and frowns, telling you that you''re not eligible to enrol at the university at this time. Your grades from secondary school were not good enough. She informs you that with so many students applying, they can only take those with better grades, but you can still get in if you take the preparatory classes and pass them with a high enough grade. You do have to pay for them though.'
 			act 'You don''t want to sign up':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head and thank her, but tell her you will think about it. She smiles to you and tells you she understands, then you leave.'
+				'You shake your head and thank her, telling her you will think about it. She smiles at you and tells you she understands before you leave.'
 				act 'Leave class':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'You don''t have enough money':
 				cla
-				'You tell her you don''t have enough money to pay for the classes. She nods in understanding and tells you if you get the money to come back and you can sign up later. You thank her for the information and leave.'
+				'You tell her you don''t have enough money to pay for the classes. She nods in understanding and tells you to come back and sign up later if you get the money. You thank her for the information and leave.'
 				act 'Leave class':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 			end
 			gs 'uni_admin', 'prep_pay'
@@ -142,18 +141,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enrollment_semester':
 	cla & *clr
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/enrollment1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the enrollment office, where there are several desks with women working behind them and a fair number of young people about your age waiting in a side room. You inform them you wish to enroll at the university, they take down your name and ask you to go wait in the waiting room until your name is called. You walk into the other room, smile and nod to the other prospective students and take a seat.'
+	'You enter the enrollment office, where there are several desks with women working behind them and a fair number of people around your age waiting in a side room. You inform them that you wish to enrol at the university. They take down your name and ask you to wait in the waiting room until your name is called. You walk into the other room and nod at the other prospective students before taking a seat.'
 	act 'Wait your turn':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/enrollment2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wait until until your name is called by one of the women. She then leads you down a side hall to one of the offices, letting you take a seat and introduce yourself. After a brief discussion the woman takes your information and enters it into the computer.'
+		'You wait until until your name is called by one of the women, who leads you down a side hall to one of the offices. You take a seat and introduce yourself, and after a brief discussion the woman takes your information and enters it into the computer.'
 		if 	$university['enrolled_in']= 'teaching_studies':
 			minut += 15
-			'She looks over the information for a bit, filling in some data. Several minutes later she turns to you and smiles, telling you that you since you passed your last semester you can enroll in the '+trim(MID('  first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth,  ninth,  tenth', (university['enrolled_in_semester']+1)*8,7))+' of the Teaching Studies Program. She gives you the paperwork and you spend some time filling it all out.'
-			act 'Enroll':
+			'She looks over your information and fills in some data. Several minutes later she turns to you and smiles, telling you that you since you passed your last semester you can enrol in the '+trim(MID('  first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth,  ninth,  tenth', (university['enrolled_in_semester']+1)*8,7))+' of the Teaching Studies Program. She gives you the paperwork and you spend some time filling it all out.'
+			act 'Enrol':
 				!!This sets the variables such that the player is enrolled in next semester of the teaching program.
 				university['enrolled_in_semester'] += 1
 				if university['enrolled_in_semester'] = 2:
@@ -166,14 +165,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enrollment_semester':
 					gs 'grades', 'grade_award', 'uni_teaching_studies_semester_2', 'psychology of a student 101', 35
 				end
 				cla
-				'You tell her you would like to continue to pursue a teaching degree. She smiles and nods, then finishes filling out some more paperwork about the courses you can expect to take.'
+				'You tell her you would like to continue pursuing a teaching degree. She smiles and nods, then finishes filling out some more paperwork about the courses you can expect to take.'
 				if (day - week) >= 27 and month = 8:
 					university['semester_week'] = 1
 					*nl
 					'She tells you that you enrolled at the last minute, and the classes have already started this week.'
 				end
 				act 'Leave':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
-!!once we have the framework working i will start working on some elective classes, once we have a couple of them I will add them here.
+                    !!Once we have the framework working, I will start working on some elective classes and add them here.
 					!!act 'Take some elective classes':
 			end
 		end
@@ -183,28 +182,28 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'prep_pay':
 	if money >= 15000:
-		act 'Pay for the preparatory classes 15000<b>₽</b>) (Cash)':
+		act 'Pay for the preparatory classes (15000<b>₽</b>) (Cash)':
 			cla & *clr
 			minut += 10
 			money -= 15000
 			gs 'stat'
 			university['prep_enrolled'] = 1
-			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment Office</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/payment.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go back to the enrollment office, paying 15000<b>₽</b> for the preparatory classes. They are held every weekday until <b>21:00</b>.'
+			'You go back to the enrollment office and pay 15000<b>₽</b> for the preparatory classes. They are held every weekday until <b>21:00</b>.'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	if karta >= 15000:
-		act 'Pay for the preparatory classes 15000<b>₽</b>) (Card)':
+		act 'Pay for the preparatory classes (15000<b>₽</b>) (Card)':
 			cla & *clr
 			minut += 10
 			karta -= 15000
 			gs 'stat'
 			university['prep_enrolled'] = 1
-			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment office</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Enrollment Office</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/payment.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go back to the enrollment office, paying 15000<b>₽</b> for the preparatory classes. They are held every weekday until <b>21:00</b>.'
+			'You go back to the enrollment office and pay 15000<b>₽</b> for the preparatory classes. They are held every weekday until <b>21:00</b>.'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 		end
 	end
@@ -217,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'take_prep':
 	university['prep_counter'] += 1
 	intel_exp += 1 + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Preparatory class</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Preparatory Class</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/prepcourse1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You attend the preparatory class for an hour. You pay close attention to what is being said and take notes for the entrance examination later on.'
 	act 'Leave class':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
@@ -231,17 +230,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'take_test':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Entrance Exam</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/admin/prepcourse1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the exam room and take your seat. A professor comes out and talks over all the different parts of the exam you will be taking and discusses what is required to pass. Once that is done he passes out the test, then starts the clock. You have one hour to complete the test.'
-!!this is a copy of the old stuff, the code will need to be completely rewritten not sure how we will do it. I assume it will take intel and pav school grades into account? don''t know
-	if pcs_intel +university['prep_counter'] >= 100:
+	'You enter the exam room and take your seat. A professor comes out and talks about the different parts of the exam you will be taking and what is required to pass. Once he''s finished, he passes out the papers and starts the clock. You have one hour to complete the test.'
+    if pcs_intel +university['prep_counter'] >= 100:
 		university['entrance_exam_passed'] = 1
-		'You completed the entrance examination, passing it with a perfect score.'
+		'You completed the entrance examination and passed it with a perfect score.'
 	elseif pcs_intel + university['prep_counter'] >= 80:
 		university['entrance_exam_passed'] = 1
-		'You completed the entrance examination, passing it.'
+		'You completed the entrance examination and passed it.'
 	else
 		university['entrance_exam_passed'] = -1
-		'You completed the entrance examination, failing to pass the exam.'
+		'You completed the entrance exam, but failed to pass.'
 	end
 	act 'Leave the exam room':gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 end

locations/uni_dorm.qsrc

@@ -11,37 +11,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dormitory</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to the dorm building and go inside. It is pretty clean and in good shape. There is a older woman, with a very unpleasant and judgmental look on her face in a room just off the main hallway. It has a partially glass wall and a window, splitting it from the main room. She looks up at you as you enter, her look tells you she is already judging you, as a face frowns into a look of disapproval.'
+	'You walk up to the dorm building and go inside. It is pretty clean and in good shape. An older woman, with a very unpleasant and judgmental look on her face sits in a room just off the main hallway. It has a partially glass wall and a window, splitting it from the main room. She looks up at you as you enter, her look telling you she is already judging you as her face frowns into a look of disapproval.'
 	if home_owned[11] = 1 or university['student'] = 1:
 		act 'Show her your student ID':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk by you take out your student ID and show it to her. She looks for just a moment then goes back to doing what ever it was, she was doing before you walked in. You head for the elevators.'
-			act 'Take elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+			'As you walk by, you take out your student ID and show it to her. She looks for just a second and nods before going back to what she was doing. You head for the elevators.'
+			act 'Take the elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 		end
 	else
 		menu_off = 1
-		'Since you''re not attending the University, you know without a ID you are not allowed in the dorms. Unless you are on the guest list of a student you know.'
+		'Since you''re not attending the university and don''t have an ID, you won''t be allowed in the dorms unless you''re on the guest list of a student.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_island'
 		if DjibrilQW['invite'] = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 			act 'I''m here to visit Djibril':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk over to the counter pulling our your ID as you say. "I''m here to visit Djibril."' 
-				'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust and remarks "What, your own kind not good enough for you? Go ahead and take care of those black cocks. He is on the eighth floor room 810." Then she turns away from you and goes back to what he was doing, not wanting to reply and possibly get in a argument that would cause her to call security, you say nothing and go get in the elevator to the eighth floor.'
-				act 'Take elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+				'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Djibril."' 
+				'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, your own kind not good enough for you? Go ahead and take care of those black cocks. He''s on the eighth floor, room 810." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
+				act 'Take the elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 			end
 		end
 		if gosh > 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 			act 'I''m here to visit Gosha':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk over to the counter pulling our your ID as you say. "I''m here to visit Gosha."' 
-				'The woman shakes her head in disapproval, as she remarks "Gosha''s new whore? What you sluts see in that scrawny bastard, I''ll never understand. He''s been through half of the dorm already. He is on the sixth floor room 602." Then she turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing, not wanting to reply and possibly get in a argument that would cause her to call security, you say nothing and go get in the elevator to the sixth floor.'
+				'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Gosha."' 
+				'The woman shakes her head in disapproval. "You''re Gosha''s new whore? I''ll never understand what you sluts see in that scrawny bastard. He''s been through half of the dorm already! He''s on the sixth floor, room 602." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
 				reccoldorm = 1
 				goshiflag = 1
-				act 'Take elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+				act 'Take the elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 			end
 		end
 		if meet_kendra = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
@@ -49,13 +49,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				if npc_rel['A84'] < 40:
-					'You walk over to the counter pulling our your ID as you say. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
-					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust and remarks "Seems she has gotten tired of you, you''re no longer on the guest list. Now get out of here before I call security." Surprised Kendra removed you from her guest list, you turn and leave the dorm before the old woman calls security.'
+					'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
+					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "It seems like she''s gotten tired of you since you''re no longer on the guest list. Now get out of here before I call security." Surprised, you turn and quickly leave before the woman calls security.'
 					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_island'
 				else
-					'You walk over to the counter pulling our your ID as you say. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
-					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust and remarks "What, a man not good enough for you? Go ahead and go serve that black whore. She is on the eighth floor room 801." Then she turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing, not wanting to reply and possibly get in a argument that would cause her to call security, you say nothing and go get in the elevator to the eighth floor.'
-					act 'Take elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+					'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
+					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, a man not good enough for you? Go ahead and serve that black whore. She''s on the eighth floor, room 801." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
+					act 'Take the elevator':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -73,13 +73,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'elevator':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dormitory</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/elevator.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the dorm elevator, it seems to be in decent shape and fairly well maintained. There is a line of buttons to all the different floors in the dorm building.'
+	'You enter the dorm elevator. It seems to be in decent shape and fairly well maintained. The panel of floor numbers awaits your input.'
 	if func('uniutil', 'student', 'enrolled'):
-		'Your dorm room is at the tenth floor'
+		'Your dorm room is on the tenth floor.'
 	end
-	act 'Go to sixth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'sixth_floor'
-	act 'Go to eighth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'eighth_floor'
-	act 'Go to tenth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
+	act 'Go to the sixth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'sixth_floor'
+	act 'Go to the eighth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'eighth_floor'
+	act 'Go to the tenth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
 	act 'Go to the first floor and leave the dorm':gt 'city_island'
 end
 
@@ -94,17 +94,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sixth_floor':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
-	'Before you is the usual dorm hallway with dilapidated walls of the sixth floor. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
+	'Before you is the usual dorm hallway with the dilapidated walls of the sixth floor. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
 
 	if gosh > 0:
 		act 'Gosha''s room':
 			*clr & cla 
 			if (week <= 4 and hour >= 16 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 6 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 7 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 3) >= 2):
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big83.jpg"></center>'
-				'Gosha opens the door. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you come in." He then stands aside so you can walk in, closing the door after you.'
+				'Gosha opens the door. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you come in?" He stands aside so you can walk in before closing the door behind you.'
 				act 'Enter':gt 'gosha', 'gosha_room'
 			else
-				!!not home text
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
@@ -128,13 +127,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eighth_floor':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
-	'Before you is the usual dorm hallway with dilapidated walls of the eighth floor. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
+	'Before you is the usual dorm hallway with the dilapidated walls of the eighth floor. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
 	if DjibrilQW['invite'] = 1:
 		act 'Djibril'' room':
 			*clr & cla
 			if (week <= 4 and hour >= 16 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 6 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 7 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 3) >= 2):
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big82.jpg"></center>'
-				'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Djibril opens the door. He smiles as he notices it''s you. "I was hoping you would stop by <<$pcs_nickname>>, come on in." He says as he invites you into his room.'
+				'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Djibril opens the door. He smiles as he notices it''s you. "I was hoping you would stop by <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come on in."'
 				act 'Enter': gt 'djibril', 'djibril_room'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
@@ -153,23 +152,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eighth_floor':
 				if kendra_busy ! daystart:
 					if rand(1,5) = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/door.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you get close to the door you can hear her voice. It is fairly loud and sounds harsh in tone, but you can''t quite make out what she is saying. You hear a muffled reply that sounds male. It sounds like she is busy, you could knock or just leave her to her company.'
+						'You can hear Kendra''s voice as you get close to the door. It is fairly loud and sounds harsh in tone, but you can''t quite make out what she is saying. You hear a muffled reply that sounds male. It sounds like she''s already busy. You could knock or just leave her to her company.'
 						act 'Knock':
 							kendra_busy = daystart
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/strapon_door.jpg"></center>'
 							if npc_rel['A84'] < 40:
-								'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is standing in the doorway completely naked other than the strapon harness buckled in place around her hips, with a large black dildo attached to it that she is playing with. When she see''s you she frowns. "I told you last time, I don''t have time for games and I am tired of yours. Now get lost, I''m busy." She closes the door in your face.'
+								'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is completely naked and wearing a strapon harness around her hips. A large black dildo is attached to it and she plays with it as she frowns at you. "I told you last time, I don''t have time for games and I''m tired of yours! Now get lost, I''m busy!" She then slams the door in your face.'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 							else
 								if kendra_male_slave = 0:
-									'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is standing in the doorway completely naked other than the strapon harness buckled in place around her hips, with a large black dildo attached to it that she is playing with. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. I am kinda busy at the moment, I am punishing one of my other slaves."'
+									'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is completely naked and wearing a strapon harness around her hips. A large black dildo is attached to it and she plays with it as she looks at you. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. I''m kind of busy punishing one of my other slaves right now."'
 									*nl
-									'She starts to close the door before you can even say anything, then she stops and smiles at you, like she just had a good idea. "Or you could come in and watch." She stands aside to let you come in, holding the door open. As you glance in the room, you see a naked college boy kneeling next to the couch. When he notices you he blushes bright red and moves to cover himself up, but stops with one look from Kendra and instead just lowers his gaze to the floor. You have no doubt what she is going to do to him, considering the strapon she is wearing. Is that something you want to watch? It could be interesting and you might learn something from her as well. On the other hand do you want to humiliate him more than he already is?'
+									'She starts to close the door before you can reply, then stops and smiles at you. "You could come in and watch." She holds the door open and stands aside to let you enter. You glance in the room and see a naked college boy kneeling next to the couch. When he notices you, he blushes bright red and moves to cover himself up, but stops with one look from Kendra and instead just lowers his gaze to the floor. You have no doubt what she''s going to do to him, but is it something you want to watch? It could be interesting and you might learn something from her as well. On the other hand, do you want to humiliate him more than he already is?'
 								else
-									'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is standing in the doorway completely naked other than the strapon harness buckled in place around her hips, with a large black dildo attached to it that she is playing with. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. I punishing one of the boys again, want to come in a watch again?"'
+									'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Kendra opens the door. She is completely naked and wearing a strapon harness around her hips. A large black dildo is attached to it and she plays with it as she looks at you. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. I''m punishing one of the boys again. Want to come in and watch again?"'
 									*nl
-									'She stands aside to let you come in, holding the door open. As you glance in the room, you see the same college boy as last time, kneeling naked next to the couch, just like last time. When he notices you he blushes bright red and moves to cover himself up, but stops with one look from Kendra and instead just lowers his gaze to the floor. You have no doubt what she is going to do to him after watching last time. Is that something you want to watch again? Is this something you might want to learn to do to others as well? There is a couple of boys you know it might be fun to do it to.'
+									'She holds the door open and stands aside to let you enter. You glance in the room and see the same college boy kneeling naked next to the couch, just like last time. When he notices you, he blushes bright red and moves to cover himself up, but stops with one look from Kendra and instead just lowers his gaze to the floor. You know what she''s going to do to him after watching last time. Is it something you want to watch again? Is this something you might want to learn to do to others yourself? There are a few boys you know that it might be fun to do it with.'
 								end
 								gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -179,11 +178,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eighth_floor':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/strapon_door.jpg"></center>'
 									if kendra_male_slave = 0:
-										'You shake your head no. "No thanks you look busy and I don''t want to disturb you."'
-										'She laughs loudly and roughly grabs your chin in her hand. "Aww so shy, adorable... but I will break you of that in time. Maybe next time then." Then she closes the door, as she does. You see her stroking her strapon as she heads for the young man. Once the door is closed you turn and leave yourself.'
+										'You shake your head. "No thanks. You look busy and I don''t want to disturb you..."'
+										'She laughs loudly and roughly grabs your chin in her hand. "Aww so shy, adorable... but I will break you in time. Maybe next time then." She closes the door and you watch her stroking her strapon as she heads for the young man. Once the door is closed, you turn and leave.'
 									else
-										'You shake your head no. "No thanks, while last time was certainly entertaining, I didn''t come to see that again."'
-										'She laughs loudly and roughly grabs your chin in her hand. "Your lose, I might have let you take a turn with him, or maybe not." Then she closes the door, as she does. You see her stroking her strapon as she heads for the young man. Once the door is closed you turn and leave yourself.'
+										'You shake your head. "No thanks. Last time was entertaining, but I didn''t come to see that again."'
+										'She laughs loudly and roughly grabs your chin in her hand. "Your loss. I might have let you take a turn with him, or maybe not." She closes the door and you watch her stroking her strapon as she heads for the young man. Once the door is closed, you turn and leave.'
 									end
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -195,16 +194,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eighth_floor':
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big84.jpg"></center>'
 						if npc_rel['A84'] < 40:
-							'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Kendra opens the door. "I told you last time, I don''t have time for games and I am tired of yours. Now get lost." She closes the door in your face.'
+							'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Kendra opens the door. "I told you last time, I don''t have time for games and I''m tired of yours. Now get lost." She slams the door in your face.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 						else
-							'You knock on the door. After a couple of seconds, Kendra opens the door. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. Well come in." She stands aside to let you come in, as you enter she closes the door.'
+							'You knock on the door. After a few seconds, Kendra opens the door. "Well if it isn''t my new favorite white slave bitch. Come in." She stands aside to let you enter. She then closes the door behind you.'
 							act 'Enter': gt 'kendra', 'kendra_room_start'
 						end
 					end
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/door.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you get close to the door you can hear her voice. It is fairly loud and sounds harsh in tone, but you can''t quite make out what she is saying. You do hear a muffled reply that sounds male. She seems busy right now, you shouldn''t bother her.'
+					'You can hear Kendra''s voice as you get close to the door. It is fairly loud and sounds harsh in tone, but you can''t quite make out what she is saying. You do hear a muffled reply that sounds male. It sounds like she''s busy right now, so you shouldn''t bother her.'
 					act 'Leave':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 				end
 			else
@@ -234,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tenth_floor':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
 	if func('uniutil', 'student', 'enrolled'):
-		'Before you is the dorm hallway with it''s dilapidated walls, that leads to your dorm room. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
+		'Before you is the dorm hallway with it''s dilapidated walls leading to your dorm room. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
 	else
 		'Before you is the usual dorm hallway with dilapidated walls. You can hear music and loud talking from drunk students escaping from some rooms.'
 	end
@@ -266,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tenth_floor':
 		act 'Go to the shared kitchen': minut += 1 & gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_kitchen'
 	end
 	if (home_owned[11] = 1 or university['student'] = 1) and week = 5 and hour > 18 and hour < 23:
-		'You can hear music blasting in the corridor. It seems the Friday party is in full swing.'
+		'You can hear music blasting in the corridor. It sounds like the Friday night party is in full swing.'
 		act 'The party': minut += 1 & gt 'vecher', 'start'
 	end
 end
@@ -327,11 +326,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Your room</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_room/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'This is your room, which you share with another girl named Vika Kirilova.'
-	'Your <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''start''">bed</a> is positioned in one of the corners of the room, and your <a href="exec:gt ''stol'' ,''stolPar''">desk</a> is at the foot of it.'
-	if pornMagazine > 0:'You have hidden your porn magazines under the mattress of your bed.'
-	if komp = 1:'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> lying on your desk.'
-	'To the left of the entrance, you find an old <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>.'
+	'This is the dorm room you share with Vika.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''start''">bed</a> is positioned in one of the corners of the room. Your <a href="exec:gt ''stol'' ,''stolPar''">desk</a> sits at the foot of it.'
+	if pornMagazine > 0:'You''ve hidden your porn magazines under the mattress of your bed.'
+	if komp = 1:'Your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> sits on your desk.'
+	'To the left of the entrance is an old <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>.'
 	'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> hanging on the wall.'
 
 	if tabletki > 0 and prezik + prezikcount + preziksabo > 0:
@@ -350,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 	if hour > 14 and hour < func('bordel', 'open_hour'):
 		vika_sleep = 0
 		if npc_rel['A220'] >= 60 and birthday = day and birthmonth = month and vikaslut = 1 and b_vika_present_Day ! daystart:
-			'<a href="exec:gt''Vika''">Vika</a> seems excited when she notices you, trying to hide a box behind her back.'
+			'<a href="exec:gt''Vika''">Vika</a> seems excited when she notices you. She is trying to hide a box behind her back.'
 		else
 			'<a href="exec:gt''Vika''">Vika</a> is lying on her bed.'
 		end
@@ -363,13 +362,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Walk out in the corridor':
+	act 'Walk out to the corridor':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			odkomp = 0
 			minut += 1
 			gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
 		else
-			'You need to get dressed.'
+			'You need to get dressed first!'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -380,10 +379,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 		:study_loop
 		if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>':
 			if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-				dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class (30 minuts)'': gt ''uni_dorm'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
+				dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class (0:30)'': gt ''uni_dorm'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
 			else
 				*nl
-				'You don''t need to study more this week for you <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'
+				'You don''t need to study any more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class.'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -398,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 		minut += 120
 		intel_exp += 1 + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You spend two hours reading the course literature. You feel like you''ve picked up some stuff from the book that will come in handy in time for the examination.'
+		'You spend two hours reading the course literature. You feel like you''ve picked up some stuff from the book that will come in handy for the exam.'
 
 		act 'Finish':gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_room'
 	end
@@ -424,11 +423,11 @@ if $args[0] = 'studying':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$ARGS[1]>>_<<$ARGS[2]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$ARGS[1]>>_<<$ARGS[2]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-		'You study for half an hour, and you can tell you will need to study more if you want to completly understand this weeks material'
+		'You study for half an hour and can tell that you will need to study more if you want to understand this week''s material.'
 	else
-		'You study for half an hour, and you think you understand everything that is covered this week'
+		'You study for half an hour and believe that you now understand everything that is being covered this week.'
 	end
-	act 'Get up from you desk': gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_room'
+	act 'Get up from your desk': gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_room'
 end
 
 if $args[0] = 'dorm_kitchen':
@@ -443,7 +442,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'dorm_kitchen':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Dorm Kitchen</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_kitchen.jpg"></center>'
-	'This is the large shared kitchen for this floor. It is fairly tidy, with a lot of cabinets along two of the walls. Two ovens and two refrigerators, as well as several tables with chairs around them, are scattered around the room.'
+	'The large shared kitchen for this floor. It is fairly tidy, with a lot of cabinets along two of the walls. Two ovens and two refrigerators, as well as several tables with chairs around them, are scattered around the room.'
 	act 'Return to the corridor': minut += 1 & gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
 
 	if eda > 0:
@@ -454,7 +453,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'dorm_kitchen':
 		end
 		'Your shelf in the refrigerator holds enough food for <b><<eda>></b> ' + iif(eda = 1, 'serving', 'servings') + '. <<$edagot>>'
 	else
-		'<b><font color="red">Your shelf in the refrigerator is bare, there is nothing left for you to eat.</font></b>'
+		'<b><font color="red">Your shelf in the refrigerator is bare. There is nothing left for you to eat.</font></b>'
 	end
 
 	if edahot > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $edahotd">There''s a warm meal on the table.</a>'

locations/uni_exams1.qsrc

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education_101':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom, and closes the door. Mr. Kovalyov turns to the class and says. "Today is your final exam, I hope you have all payed attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks he walks around handing out the exams. Once everyone has one he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin."'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom and closes the door before turning to the class. "Today is your final exam. I hope you''ve all paid attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks, he walks around handing out the papers. Once everyone has one, he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now."'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education_101':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education 101_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education 101_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have don horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education 101_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education 101_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teaching_methods_101':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Kovalchuk sitting behind her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one she smiles to each one as they enter. Once everyone is seated you find a exam sitting on the desk waiting for you. "Today is your final exam, if you have payed attention in my class and studied you should have no problem passing this exam. It is a very important exam much of your grade is decided by this one test, showing us what you have learned." She glances to the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin." Then she takes a seat at her desk.'
+	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Kovalchuk sitting behind her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one and she smiles at each one as they enter. Once everyone is seated, you find an exam paper sitting on the desk waiting for you. "Today is your final exam. If you have paid attention in my class and studied, then you should have no problem passing. It is a very important exam since most of your grade is decided by this paper. Show us what you have learned." She glances to the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now." She then takes a seat at her desk.'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you''re positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teaching_methods_101':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods 101_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods 101_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have did horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods 101_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods 101_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learning_theories_101':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom, and closes the door. Mr. Kovalyov turns to the class and says. "Today is your final exam, I hope you have all payed attention in my class and studied hard. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks he walks around handing out the exams. Once everyone has one he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin."'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom and closes the door before turning to the class. "Today is your final exam. I hope you''ve all paid attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks, he walks around handing out the papers. Once everyone has one, he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now."'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learning_theories_101':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories 101_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories 101_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have did horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories 101_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories 101_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5

locations/uni_exams2.qsrc

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education_102':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom, and closes the door. Mr. Kovalyov turns to the class and says. "Today is your final exam, I hope you have all payed attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks he walks around handing out the exams. Once everyone has one he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin."'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom and closes the door before turning to the class. "Today is your final exam. I hope you''ve all paid attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks, he walks around handing out the papers. Once everyone has one, he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now."'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education_102':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_general education 102_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_general education 102_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have don horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_general education 102_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_general education 102_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well on the exam and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_general education_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teaching_methods_102':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Kovalchuk sitting behind her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one she smiles to each one as they enter. Once everyone is seated you find a exam sitting on the desk waiting for you. "Today is your final exam, if you have payed attention in my class and studied you should have no problem passing this exam. It is a very important exam much of your grade is decided by this one test, showing us what you have learned." She glances to the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin." Then she takes a seat at her desk.'
+	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Kovalchuk sitting behind her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one and she smiles at each one as they enter. Once everyone is seated, you find an exam paper sitting on the desk waiting for you. "Today is your final exam. If you have paid attention in my class and studied, then you should have no problem passing. It is a very important exam since most of your grade is decided by this paper. Show us what you have learned." She glances to the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now." She then takes a seat at her desk.'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you''re positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teaching_methods_102':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_teaching methods 102_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_teaching methods 102_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have did horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_teaching methods 102_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_teaching methods 102_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well on the exam and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_teaching methods_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'psychology_of_a_student_101':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom, and closes the door. Mr. Kovalyov turns to the class and says. "Today is your final exam, I hope you have all payed attention in my class and studied hard. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks he walks around handing out the exams. Once everyone has one he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test, begin."'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Kovalyov enters the classroom and closes the door before turning to the class. "Today is your final exam. I hope you''ve all paid attention in my class and taken notes. Much of your grade will be decided by this one exam." As he talks, he walks around handing out the papers. Once everyone has one, he walks back to the front of the class and looks at the clock on the wall. "You have three hours to complete the test and may begin now."'
 	*nl
-	'You spend all three hours you have taking the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on and then going back to the parts you are less sure of to check them again. Once you are happy with your work, you hand in your exam as class ends and leave.'
+	'You spend all three hours you have on the exam, doing all the parts you are positive on before going back to the parts you''re less sure of to check them again. Once you''re happy with your work, you hand in your paper as class ends and leave.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/exam<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'psychology_of_a_student_101':
 		class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_psychology of a student 101_exam_done'] = 1
 
 		if class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_psychology of a student 101_grade'] < 40:
-			'You think that you have did horrible on the exam and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you''ve done terrible and are probably going to fail with <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_psychology of a student 101_grade'] < 70:
-			'You think that you did enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>> on the exam'
+			'You think that you did good enough to pass, and are probably going to get a <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		elseif class['uni_teaching_studies_semester_2_psychology of a student 101_grade'] < 90:
-			'You think you did pretty well on the exam, and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
+			'You think you did pretty well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.'
 		else
-			'You are sure you did extremely well on the exam and is going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.' 
+			'You''re sure you did extremely well and are going to get an <<$class[''uni_teaching_studies_semester_1_learning theories_grade'']>>.' 
 		end
 		act 'Go to university campus':
 			minut += 5

locations/uni_grounds.qsrc

@@ -27,54 +27,54 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 		if daystage = 2 or daystage = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_day_winter.jpg"></center>'
-			'The University boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
 			!!day winter desc here
 			if week = 7:
 				'The campus is pretty quiet right now. Most of the students are relaxing, trying to recover from the weekend.'
 			elseif week >= 5:
-				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting with each other or just enjoying their weekend, despite the cold weather.'
+				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting each other or enjoying their weekend, despite the cold weather.'
 			else
 				'The campus is quite lively right now. Most of the students are on their way to the next class, trying not to slip on any icy spots in the courtyard.'
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_winter_night.jpg"></center>'
-			'The University boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
 			!!night winter desc here
 			if week = 7:
-				'The campus is quiet right now, most of the students seem to be sleeping, worn out from the weekend.'
+				'The campus is quiet right now. Most of the students seem to be sleeping, worn out from the weekend.'
 			elseif week >= 5:
-				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting with each other or just enjoying their weekend, despite the cold weather.'
+				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting each other or enjoying their weekend, despite the cold weather.'
 			else
-				'The campus is quiet right now, most of the students seem to be sleeping or studying late.'
+				'The campus is quiet right now. Most of the students seem to be sleeping or studying late.'
 			end
 		end
 	else
 		if daystage = 2 or daystage = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_day.jpg"></center>'
-			'The University boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
 			!!day desc here
 			if week = 7:
 				'The campus is pretty quiet right now. Most of the students are relaxing, trying to recover from the weekend.'
 			elseif week >= 5:
-				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting with each other or just enjoying their weekend.'
+				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting each other or enjoying their weekend.'
 			else
 				'The campus is quite lively right now. Most of the students are on their way to the next class, or hanging out with friends.'
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_night.jpg"></center>'
-			'The University boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes.'
 			!!night desc here
 			if week = 7:
-				'The campus is quiet right now, most of the students seem to be sleeping, worn out from the weekend.'
+				'The campus is quiet right now. Most of the students seem to be sleeping, worn out from the weekend.'
 			elseif week >= 5:
-				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting with each other or just enjoying their weekend.'
+				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are moving around the courtyard visiting each other or enjoying their weekend.'
 			else
-				'The campus is quiet right now, most of the students seem to be sleeping or studying late.'
+				'The campus is quiet right now. Most of the students seem to be sleeping or studying late.'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Return to the City':
+	act 'Return to the city':
 		minut += 5
 		gt 'city_island'
 	end
@@ -86,25 +86,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		minut += 5
 		gt 'uni_dorm', 'start'
 	end
-	!!act 'Got to the Gym':
+	!!act 'Got to the gym':
 	!!	minut += 3
 	!!	gt '', ''
 	!!end
 	if (week < 6 and hour > 7) or (hour > 8 and hour < 23):
-		act 'Go to the Library':
+		act 'Go to the library':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	
 	if week < 6 and hour > 7 and hour < 17:
-			act 'Go to the University Administration':
+			act 'Go to the administration building':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_admin', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
-	!! any student/random events will go below here, to keep any main actions on top of the extra options
+	!! Any student/random events will go here to keep any main actions on top of the extra options
 	
 
 end

locations/uni_lessons.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'short_break':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Lecture Building Hallway</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/lecture_hall.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking down the halls, you are still amazed at how well taken care of the buildings are compared to your old school.'
+	'Walking down the halls, you are still amazed at how well maintained the buildings are compared to your old school.'
 	gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
 	act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 end

locations/uni_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education':
 	temp = rand(1,10)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/banana.jpg"></center>'
-		'As Mr. Kovalyov continues on his lecture you can''t help but notice how attractive he is. He has a mesmerizing smile while he talks. This mesmerizing smile seems to have effect on the other girls, even the shy Katja. You remember she used to be quite the shy girl in school always resisting any charm. But now... she is half finished eating her banana while she is listening to Mr. Kovalyov lecture, and she is almost deep throating the banana as she eats it. Her mind is probably wandering somewhere else, by how she is eating the banana.'
+		'As Mr. Kovalyov continues his lecture, you can''t help but notice how attractive he is. He has a mesmerizing smile while he talks and this seems to have an effect on the other girls, even the shy Katja. You remember she used to be quite the shy girl in school, always resisting any charm. But now... she is half finished eating her banana while listening to Mr. Kovalyov and is almost deep throating it as she eats it. Her mind is likely wandering somewhere else...'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/upskirt_pussy.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s nearly end of the class when you can''t help it but notice that some of the boys are twitching and whispering to each other. You curiously try to find out what could be behind this anomaly when you turn your head to the left and see the reason. It''s Liliya again causing some trouble it seems, as she is spreading her legs innocently, just a tiny bit, only to tease the boys with her naked pussy.'
+		'It''s nearly the end of the class when you can''t help it but notice that some of the boys are twitching and whispering at each other. You curiously try to find out what the commotion could be about when you turn your head and see the reason. It''s Liliya causing some trouble again as she innocently spreads her legs just enough to tease the boys with her naked pussy.'
 		if PCloSkirt = 0 and exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
 			*nl
-			'Wonder if you should try the same thing one day.'
+			'You wonder if you should try the same thing one day...'
 		elseif PCloSkirt > 0 and 	exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':	
 				act 'Spread your legs':
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education':
 					gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'inside', -5, 1 
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/no_panties.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn your lower body to the right, facing the boys, and lift up your skirt a bit. Spreading your legs you let the boys take a good look at pussy, you feel a thrill of excitement from the act.'
+					'You turn your lower body to face the boys and lift up your skirt a little. Spreading your legs, you let the boys take a good look at your pussy, feeling a thrill of excitement from the act.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education':
 					gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'inside', -5, 1 
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/panties.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn your lower body to the right, facing the boys, and lift up your skirt a bit. Spreading your legs, you help out the audience sliding your underwear to the side flashing your pussy to the boys.'
+					'You turn your lower body to face the boys and lift up your skirt a little. Spreading your legs, you pull your underwear to the side, flashing your pussy at the boys.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -41,21 +41,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_education':
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/girls_dryhump.jpg"></center>'
-		'During the halftime break, you relax as the class was pretty mentally exhausting and look around to see how others are handling all the information you are getting bombarded with. Everybody is relaxing just like you, some eat some snacks. A couple of girls notice a few of the boys checking them out and start whispering back and forth giggling, after a bit one of them grabs her friend and bends her over the table and starts to dry hump her hard and rough.'
-		*nl
-		'The second girl plays along, moaning and carrying on like she is getting fucked hard and rough, but the noise quickly draws Mr. Kovalyov, who walks over and gives the girl doing the humping some pointers with her technique, which makes her blush. The two girl share a look at his comments and burst out laughing, they quickly stop and retakes their seats. Mr. Kovalyov walks away from them back to the front of the classroom which a amused smile on his face.'
+		'During the halftime break, you relax as the class was pretty mentally exhausting and look around to see how others are handling all the information you are getting bombarded with. A couple of girls notice a few of the boys checking them out and start whispering back and forth while giggling before one of them grabs her friend, bends her over the table and starts to hump her hard and rough.'
+		'The second girl plays along, moaning and carrying on like she is getting fucked hard and rough, but the noise quickly draws Mr. Kovalyov''s attention, who walks over and gives the girl doing the humping some pointers with her technique, which makes her blush. The two girls share a grin at his comments and burst out laughing before they quickly stop and retake their seats. Mr. Kovalyov walks away back to the front of the classroom with an amused smile on his face.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/air_bj.jpg"></center>'
-		'You notice some of the boys whispering to each other and winking. Quickly see the reason why: Two of the girls seems to be bored and decided to tease the boys with some blowjob imitation. Everything goes smoothly and according to the girl''s plans until Mr. Kovalyov nervously starts to laugh and interrupts the forbidden act. "C''mon girls, you two are adults now, stop acting like you are in high school." With that he goes back to giving his lecture and everyone returns their attention to him.'
+		'You notice some of the boys whispering at each other and winking and you quickly see the reason why. Two girls seems to be bored and have decided to tease the boys with some blowjob imitation. Everything goes smoothly and according to the girl''s plans until Mr. Kovalyov nervously starts to laugh and interrupts them. "Come on girls, you two are adults now. Stop acting like you are in high school!" He then goes back to his lecture and everyone returns their attention to him.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/general_education/girls_bj.jpg"></center>'
-		'Usually when a teacher leaves a classroom chaos strikes and everybody starts to act like a child. This is no different situation. As soon as Mr. Kovalyov left the classroom to fetch his missing notes you see different students talking to each other, taking selfies. In this case however most of the boys and girls not taking selfies but taking pictures of Maya and Dasha. They are on top of their desks, one kneeling before the other. Dasha takes on the lead and with gentle hips movement starts to shove down her imaginary dick in Dasha''s throat. This goes on for nearly a minute when the door opens and Mr. Kovalyov returns everyone quickly returns to their seats and the class quiets down.'
+		'When a teacher leaves a classroom at school, chaos strikes and everybody starts to act like a child. It seems university is no different. As soon as Mr. Kovalyov leaves the classroom, you see different students talking to each other and taking selfies. However, Maya and Dasha are on top of their desks, one kneeling before the other. Dasha takes the lead and starts to shove her imaginary dick down Maya''s throat. This goes on for nearly a minute before the door opens and Mr. Kovalyov returns. Everyone quickly returns to their seats and the class quietens down.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/lecture<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you look around hoping for something interesting to happen but nothing does.'
+		'As you sit listening to the lesson, you look around hoping something interesting will happen, but nothing does.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
@@ -67,36 +66,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teaching_methods':
 	temp = rand(1,10)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/teaching_methods/girl_goofing.jpg"></center>'
-		'The lecture of Mr. Pasternak is rather boring, with his strict tone of teaching. In your boredom you look around to see if there is anything exciting happening, maybe some fun. Seems like the best fun you can find is one of your classmate making a funny face towards you'
+		'Mr. Pasternak''s lecture is rather boring with his strict tone of teaching. In your boredom, you look around to see if anything exciting is happening, but all you see is one of your classmate making a funny face at you.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/teaching_methods/girls_dryhump.jpg"></center>'
-		'During the halftime break, you relax as the class was pretty mentally exhausting and look around to see how others are handling all the information you are getting bombarded with. Everybody is relaxing just like you, some eat some snacks. A couple of girls notice a few of the boys checking them out and start whispering back and forth giggling, after a bit one of them grabs her friend and bends her over the table and starts to dry hump her hard and rough. The second girl plays along, moaning and carrying on like she is getting fucked hard and rough, but the noise quickly draws Mr. Pasternak attention who clears his throat loudly. The girls giggle but stop what they are doing and take their seats again, while the boys are grinning and staring even harder at them.'
+		'During the halftime break, you relax as the class was pretty mentally exhausting and look around to see how others are handling all the information you are getting bombarded with. A couple of girls notice a few of the boys checking them out and start whispering back and forth while giggling before one of them grabs her friend, bends her over the table and starts to hump her hard and rough.' 
+		'The second girl plays along, moaning and carrying on like she is getting fucked hard and rough, but the noise quickly draws Mr. Pasternak''s attention, who loudly clears his throat. The girls giggle but stop what they''re doing and take their seats again.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/teaching_methods/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s hard to stay awake during the class. You are not alone with this thought, as you see some has already fallen asleep on their desk'
+		'It''s hard to stay awake during the class and you''re not alone with this thought. You see someone has already fallen asleep on their desk.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/teaching_methods/upskirt_panties.jpg"></center>'
-		'Everybody knows that Mr. Pasternak requires you to fully pay attention to his class, and that he doesn''t allow any type of goofing off and playing around in his class. His teaching methods are rather boring and monotone, yet its very rare to see somebody try him and make a scene. Today is no different day than the usual, but you can''t help but notice that Liliya doesn''t give up that easily. She is eager to disturb or charm Mr. Pasternak with her pose. She is sitting in a way that Mr. Pasternak could easily see her legs spreading under the desk. As you take a sneak peak you can see it''s a special day because she decided to wear panties this time.'
+		'Everybody knows that Mr. Pasternak requires you to fully pay attention to his class, and that he doesn''t allow any type of goofing off in his class. His teaching methods are rather boring and monotone, yet it''s rare to see anyone make a scene. Today is no different than the usual, but you can''t help but notice that Liliya doesn''t give up that easily. She is eager to disturb or charm Mr. Pasternak with her pose. She is sitting in a way that Mr. Pasternak could easily see her legs spreading under the desk. As you take a sneak peek, you can see it''s a special day because she decided to wear panties this time.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/teaching_methods/whaletail.jpg"></center>'
-!!need christina code added here
-		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 6:
-			'You try to rest your head a bit on the desk in front of you, looking around what are the others up to. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and it''s none other than Christina! You see her looking at you with a disgust sitting on her face and a huge whaletail peeking out of her trousers. You quickly shiver on the memories when she bullied you and what she has done to you. Lucky for you, those times are up, and maybe now she is no longer a bully. You quickly take another look at her enormous whaletail, and decide to continue to pay attention to class before you anger her'
+        if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 6:
+			'You try to rest your head on the desk in front of you while looking around to see what the other students are doing. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and it''s none other than Christina! You see her looking at you in disgust as a huge whaletail peeks out of her pants. You quickly shiver at the memories of when she bullied you. Luckily for you, those times are done. You quickly take another look at her enormous whaletail and decide to continue paying attention to the lecture before you anger her.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif christinaQW['subpath'] >= 1:
-			'You try to rest your head a bit on the desk in front of you, looking around what are the others up to. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and its none other than Christina! You see her looking at you with a bratty face taunting you, with a huge whaletail peeking out of her trousers. You remember in school when you beat her, and she had to "no panties, butt plug all the time", and when you even taunted her and checked if she is a good little slut. Those times are up now and she is once again free of you, and she seems pretty confident in herself. Taunting you with her enormous whale tail is a clear sign that she wants dominance!'
+			'You try to rest your head on the desk in front of you while looking around to see what the other students are doing. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and it''s none other than Christina! You see her taunting you with a bratty face as a huge whaletail peeks out of her pants. You remember when you beat her up at school and you forced her to wear a buttplug with no panties all the time. Those times are done now and, free of you, she seems pretty confident in herself. Taunting you with her enormous whaletail is a clear sign that she wants dominance.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
-			'You try to rest your head a bit on the desk in front of you, looking around what are the others up to. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and its none other than Christina! You remember in school she was kind of a bully and always a dominant person, but you two had no grudge against each other. She has a huge whaletail peeking out of her trousers, probably to gain attention from all the boys around. Even you can hardly take your eyes off of her thong slipping out like that. You can''t really tell why but something is in her eyes, in her pose and you feel intimidated. It is clear who is the dominant girl in the classroom and who has the authority here.'
+			'You try to rest your head on the desk in front of you while looking around to see what the other students are doing. You quickly notice that somebody is watching you, and it''s none other than Christina! You remember her being a domineering bully in school. She has a huge whaletail peeking out of her pants, probably to gain attention from all the boys around. Even you can hardly take your eyes off her thong slipping out like that. You can''t tell why, but something in her eyes and her pose intimidates you.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/lecture<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you look around hoping for something interesting to happen but nothing does.'
+		'As you sit listening to the lesson, you look around hoping something interesting will happen, but nothing does.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
@@ -108,29 +107,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learning_theories':
 	temp = rand(1,10)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/learning_theories/girls_goofing.jpg"></center>'
-		'The lessons of Mrs. Kovalchuk are usually pretty interesting as she often interrupts herself and goes off topic talking about examples of sci-fi movies or superhero movies. Sometimes a little spark of this is enough to lead the whole lecture into a talking lesson about her interests and in general about everything nerdy or geeky. Today is no different, as she speaks with a few students about the latest movie and how it could be connected to the subject everybody is kind of free to do as they wish. On set of girl group is justing just that, randomly goofing around like they are in high school'
+		'Mrs. Kovalchuk''s lessons are usually pretty interesting as she often interrupts herself and goes off topic talking about sci-fi or superhero movies. Sometimes a little spark of this is enough to lead the whole lecture into a discussion about her interests and everything nerdy or geeky in general. Today is no different and she speaks with a few students about the latest movie and how it could be connected to the subject. You''re free to do as you wish and a group of girls are doing just that, goofing around like they are in high school.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/learning_theories/girls_kissing.jpg"></center>'
-		'During the class break most of the students just relax, but a few fool around quietly not to draw to much attention. One pair of girl perhaps feeling extra brave and cheeky, or perhaps they are just seeking some attention or maybe just into each other. Regardless the reasons while near the front of class they start kissing each other slowly but with more passion. Suddenly every boy in class is paying attention to them, and not only the boys but some of the girls are enjoying the show. They keep kissing until Mrs. Kovalchuk walks up to them and ask them to take their seats as she starts the second part of class.'
+		'During the break, most of the students just relax, but a few quietly fool around so as not to draw too much attention. A pair of girls, perhaps feeling extra brave and cheeky, start slowly but passionately kissing near the front of the class and a number of both boys and girls enjoy the show. They keep kissing until Mrs. Kovalchuk walks up to them and asks them to take their seats as she starts the second part of the class.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/learning_theories/sleep_selfie.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s an everyday normal lecture about learning theories. They are often quite fun and interesting but today it''s just very dry and slow. You nearly fall asleep, when you see that Eva is taking a picture of Liliya sleeping on her desk nearly drooling as she dreams. You wonder if the class that is so boring, or she had an interesting and exhausting night.'
+		'It''s a normal lecture about learning theories today. They are often quite fun and interesting, but today is very dry and slow. You nearly fall asleep when you see Eva taking a picture of Liliya sleeping on her desk, nearly drooling as she dreams. You wonder if it''s because the class is so boring, or if she had an interesting and exhausting night.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/learning_theories/feelup_teacher.jpg"></center>'
-		'Today Mrs. Kovalchuk goes off topic more than usual talking about her latest cosplay outfit after one of the other students ask her about her latest project. She describes the outfit and the character she is going to play as. One of the boys uses the opportunity to get up and join her after asking many questions about the costume. While discussing the costume the boy comments that only real fairly large breasts, that are still very firm could pull it off, she assures him her''s are real, and are plenty firm.'
-		*nl
-		'He takes this as a invite to reach out and give her breasts a squeeze, she seems shocked at first but doesn''t stop him. After a couple of squeezes he seems pretty impressed and nods in agreement, saying he believes she is right. Which gets most of the class laughing, she scolds him when everyone starts to laugh and send him back to his seat, then gets back to teaching her lesson.'
+		'Mrs. Kovalchuk goes off topic more than usual today, talking about her latest cosplay outfit after one of the other students asks her about her latest project. She describes the outfit and the character she is going to play in great detail and one of the boys uses the opportunity to get up and join her. After asking many questions and discussing the costume, the boy comments that only fairly large and natural breasts that are still very firm could pull it off. She assures him that her breasts are real and are very firm.'
+		'He takes this as an invite to reach out and give her breasts a squeeze. She seems shocked at first, but doesn''t stop him. After a few squeezes, he seems rather impressed and nods in agreement, which gets most of the class laughing. She scolds him and sends him back to his seat before returning to her lesson.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/learning_theories/upskirt_no_panties.jpg"></center>'
-		'"May I use the bathroom Mrs. Kovalchuk?" Somebody interrupts the class. Liliya then walks towards the door to leave the classroom. Several eyes are fixated on her and she clearly enjoys the attention she gets. With a wink and a huge smile on her face she then lets out an "Opps, whats that?" she stops and acts like she dropped something, then gets down on her hands and knee''s before crawling half under Mrs. Kovalchuk''s desk clearly exposing her naked ass and pussy. Everybody in the classroom goes crazy and the boys starts to whistle while the teacher has no clue whats going on. Liliya then climbs out, fixes her dress and leaves the classroom with an even bigger smile on her face.'
+		'"May I use the bathroom Mrs. Kovalchuk?" you hear a girl ask and glance up to see Liliya walking towards the door to leave the classroom. Several eyes are fixated on her and she clearly enjoys the attention. With a wink and a huge smile on her face, she then lets out an innocent sounding "Oops, what''s that?" She stops and acts like she dropped something before getting down on all fours and crawling under Mrs. Kovalchuk''s desk, clearly exposing her naked ass and pussy as she does. Everybody in the classroom goes crazy and the boys start to whistle and holler. Mrs. Kovalchuk has no clue what''s going on as Liliya climbs out, fixes her dress and leaves the classroom with an even bigger smile on her face.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/lecture<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you look around hoping for something interesting to happen but nothing does.'
+		'As you sit listening to the lesson, you look around hoping something interesting will happen, but nothing does.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'uni_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end

locations/uni_library.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The University Library</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/library.jpg"></center>'
-	'One of the medium sized buildings is the University library, it is three stories tall and filled with books on each floor, sections with tables scattered around to study or relax, as well as computer stations on each floor to help the students study.'
+	'One of the medium sized buildings is the university''s library. It is three stories tall and filled with books, sections with tables scattered around to study or relax at and computer stations to help students with their studying.'
 	if (week < 6 or hour < 23) and hour > 7:
 		act 'Study': gt 'uni_library', 'study'
 		act 'Wander around': gt 'uni_library', 'wander'
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The University Library</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/study' + rand(1,7) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You spend some time collecting some books on your subjects and grab one of the library laptops, then you find a quiet place to sit.' 
+	'You spend some time collecting some books on your subjects and grab one of the library''s laptops before finding a quiet place to sit.' 
 	if university['semester_week'] > 0:
 		i = 0
 		:study_loop
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 				dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class (30 minuts)'': gt ''uni_library'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
 			else
 				*nl
-				'You don''t need to study more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'
+				'You don''t need to study any more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class.'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -79,12 +79,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'grades', 'optional_activity_attribute', '<<$ARGS[1]>>', '<<$ARGS[2]>>', 'yes', min(pcs_intel+10,100)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Once there, you open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> class. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasionally noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspect. Still, for the most part it is a good environment to study in, there are a few other students you can see studying as well.'
+	'You open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> class. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasional noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspicious. Despite this, it is a good environment to study in and you can see a number of other students studying as well.'
 	*nl
 	if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$ARGS[1]>>_<<$ARGS[2]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$ARGS[1]>>_<<$ARGS[2]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-		'You study for half an hour, and you can tell you will need to study more if you want to completly understand this weeks material'
+		'You study for half an hour and can tell that you will need to study more if you want to completly understand this week''s material.'
 	else
-		'You study for half an hour, and you think you understand everything that is covered this week'
+		'You study for half an hour and believe you now understand everything that is being covered this week.'
 	end
 	act 'Leave':
 		minut += 5
@@ -95,10 +95,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 		end
-		act 'Keep Studying': gt 'uni_library', 'study'
+		act 'Keep studying': gt 'uni_library', 'study'
 		act 'Wander around': gt 'uni_library', 'wander'
 	else
-		'The library is closing'
+		'The library is closing for the night.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	intel_exp += max(0,rand(-1,1))
 	pcs_mood += (traits['nerd_status']*5 -10)
 	minut += 30
-	'Once there, you open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasionally noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspect. Still, for the most part it is a good environment to study in, there are a few other students you can see studying as well.'
+	'You open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasional noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspicious. Despite this, it is a good environment to study in and you can see a number of other students studying as well.'
 	if pcs_sleep < 5:
 		no_study = 1
 		'You are so tired that you are constantly falling asleep. You get no studying done in this condition.'
@@ -123,24 +123,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 		'You are so drunk that your eyes can''t make sense of the letters written in the books. Holding your pen is also a problem.'
 	elseif alko >= 4:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are drunk and have trouble concentration on reading the books. When you look back on the notes you made, a lot of them are incomprehensible.'
+		'You are drunk and have trouble concentrating on reading the books. When you look at the notes you''ve made, a lot of them are incomprehensible.'
 	elseif alko >= 2:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are feeling a little tipsy,still you think the studying is going great. But when you look at your notes afterwards, you notice that a lot of them make no sense.'
+		'You are feeling a little tipsy, but feel like your studying is going great. However, when you look at your notes afterwards, you notice that a lot of them make no sense.'
 	end
 	if mentats_dose >= 1: study_mod += 30
 	If pcs_mood < 50:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are in a bad mood and it clearly affects you studying.'
+		'You are in a bad mood and it clearly affects your studying.'
 	end
 	if StrongNarkota > 0 or jointhigh > 0:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are stoned, and it is not making it easier to concentrate on studying.'
+		'You are stoned, which makes it hard to concentrate on studying.'
 	end
 	if amphHigh > 0: study_mod += 20
 	if pcs_energy < 5:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are extremely hungry and it is hard to think about anything else that food.'
+		'You are extremely hungry and it is hard to think about anything else other than food.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 10:
 		study_mod -= 10
 		'You are very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
@@ -150,17 +150,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	end
 	if pcs_horny > 90:
 		study_mod -= 10
-		'You are so aroused, that your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting you ability your study.'
+		'You are extremely horny and your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting your ability to study.'
 	end
 	if pain['total'] > 90:
 		no_study = 1
 		'You are in so much pain that you can''t study.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 75:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are in so much pain that you have a very hard time to concentrate on studying.'
+		'You are in so much pain that you have a very hard time concentrating on studying.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 60:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'Your pain is constantly bothering you and it makes it harder to study.'
+		'Your pain is constantly bothering you and makes it hard to study.'
 	end
 	*nl
  	study_mod = max(0,(rand(30 + study_mod,pcs_intel + study_mod) + 10)/33)
@@ -170,11 +170,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 		if study_mod = 0:
 			'You study for half an hour, but you don''t think you are improving.'
 		elseif study_mod = 1:
-			'You study for half an hour, and think you are improving a little.'
+			'You study for half an hour and think you are improving a little.'
 		elseif study_mod = 2:
-			'You study for half an hour, and think you are making good progress in getting ready for the exam.'
+			'You study for half an hour and believe that you''re making good progress in getting ready for the exam.'
 		else
-			'You study for half an hour, and think you are improving a lot.'
+			'You study for half an hour and believe that you''re improving a lot.'
 		end		
 		gs 'grades', 'grade_award', '<<$ARGS[1]>>', '<<$ARGS[2]>>', 'yes', study_mod
 	end
@@ -193,10 +193,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 		end
-		act 'Keep Studying': gt 'uni_library', 'study'
+		act 'Keep studying': gt 'uni_library', 'study'
 		act 'Wander around': gt 'uni_library', 'wander'
 	else
-		'The library is closing'
+		'The library is closing for the night.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -209,58 +209,58 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wander':
 	temp = rand(1,20)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/accident_panty_flash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you spot two girls in one of the rows of books. One of them starts climbing the shelf to get at a book out of reach, as she does her short skirt climbs up her thighs, showing off her panties to everyone looking. You can''t help but smile a bit at that as you continue on.'
+		'As you wander around, you spot two girls in one of the rows of books. One of them starts climbing the shelf to get at a book out of reach and her short skirt rides up as she does, showing off her panties to everyone looking. You can''t help but smile as you continue on.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/accident_pussy_flash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you spot a girl in one of the rows of books. She starts climbing the shelf to get at a book out of reach, as she does her short skirt climbs up her thighs, showing off her pussy to everyone looking. Obviously she thought a short skirt and no panties was a good combo. You can''t help but smile a bit at that as you continue on.'
+		'As you wander around, you spot a girl in one of the rows of books. She starts climbing the shelf to get at a book out of reach and her short skirt rides up as she does, showing off her pussy to everyone looking. You can''t help but smile as you continue on.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/asian_titflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you stop just inside of one of the rows of books before it opens up into another one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging an Asian girl to pull up her shirt. She keeps telling them no, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally, blushing a bit, she pulls up her shirt and holds it up for a bit, showing off her firm little titties. The guys all grin and quietly clap, after a few moments she blushes even redder, pulls her shirt down and walks away. You wonder if she regrets doing it or not. After a few more moments you continue on your way.'
+		'As you wander around, you stop inside of one of the rows of books before it opens up into another one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging an Asian girl to pull up her shirt. She keeps refusing, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally, blushing a little, she pulls up her shirt and holds it up, showing off her firm little breasts. The guys all grin and quietly clap before she pulls her shirt down and walks away blushing. You wonder if she regrets doing it before you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/black_titflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you stop just inside of one of the rows of books before it opens up into another one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging a chubby black girl to pull up her shirt. She keeps telling them no, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally she exposes her large, saggy tits to them. The guys all grin and quietly clap, after a few moments she puts her tits away and goes back to studying. You wonder if she regrets doing it or not. After a few more moments you continue on your way.'
+		'As you wander around, you stop inside of one of the rows of books before it opens up into another one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging a chubby black girl to pull up her shirt. She keeps refusing, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. A few seconds later, she finally exposes her large, saggy breasts to them. The guys all grin and quietly clap before she pulls her shirt down and goes back to studying. You wonder if she regrets doing it before you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/girl_sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you spot a girl with her head down on one of the workstations, apparently having fallen asleep while studying. She snores softly, a few other students occasionally glance over and laugh softly at her. You shake your head and leave the girl to sleep in peace.'
+		'As you wander around, you spot a girl with her head down on one of the work stations, apparently having fallen asleep while studying. She snores softly, a few of the other students occasionally glancing over and laughing at her softly. You shake your head and leave the girl to sleep in peace.'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/laying_in_row.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you start down one of the rows, only to find a girl lying in the middle of the isle on her stomach, reading a book. She glances up briefly at you, then goes back to reading her book, ignoring you. Not able to easily get past her, and not wanting to be rude by trying to step over her, even if she is being rude in the first place, you decide to just skip down to the next isle of books and continue your wandering.'
+		'As you wander around, you start down one of the rows, only to find a girl lying in the middle of the aisle on her stomach, reading a book. She briefly glances up at you before going back to her book and ignoring you. Not able to easily get past her and not wanting to be rude by trying to step over her, even if she is being rude in the first place, you decide to just walk over to the next aisle and continue your wandering.'
 	elseif temp = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/naked_run.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you glimpse what appears to be a naked girl dash between two isles of books. You glance in the isle she went down and sure enough you see the backside of a naked girl running down the isle. You have no clue where her clothes are or why she''s doing it, but with how fast she''s running, you doubt she is enjoying it. She quickly disappears down another row of shelves.'
+		'As you wander around, you glimpse what appears to be a naked girl dashing between two aisles of books. You glance into the aisle she went down and see her continue running down the aisle. You have no clue where her clothes are or why she''s doing it, but with how fast she''s running, you doubt she is enjoying it. She quickly disappears down another row of shelves.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 8:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/naked_walk.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you turn to head down an isle you come nearly face to face with a pretty blond girl standing there naked. She just smiles to you, saying hello. You respond in kind and then she walks past you like nothing is wrong. You shake your head and continue on your way. A few moments later you come across a guy holding a handful of girl clothes, who keeps glancing down each isle. You can only assume he is looking for the naked girl you''ve seen. So you point in the direction you saw her, he smiles and nods, then starts jogging in that direction.'
+		'As you turn to head down an aisle, you come nearly face to face with a pretty blond girl standing there naked. She just smiles at you and says hello. You respond in kind and she walks past you like nothing is wrong. You shake your head and continue on your way. A few seconds later, you come across a guy holding a girl''s clothes while glancing down each aisle. You can only assume he is looking for the naked girl you seen and so point in the direction you saw her. He smiles and nods before jogging in that direction.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/pussy_flash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you go through one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging a girl standing just inside of one of the isles to flash them. She keeps telling them no, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally she lifts her skirt and flashes them her neatly trimmed pussy. One of the guys briefly woops loudly, and is promptly hit by his friends to be quiet. Several others look over at the boys, but the girl has already dropped her skirt back in place and with a huge grin walks off. You wonder if she regrets doing it or not, as you continue on your way.'
+		'As you wander around, you go through one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys sitting at a table, encouraging a girl standing just inside of one of the aisles to flash them. She keeps refusing, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally, she lifts her skirt and flashes her neatly trimmed pussy at them. One of the guys briefly woops loudly, but is promptly hit by his friends and told to be quiet. Several others look over at the boys, but the girl has already dropped her skirt back in place and walks off with a grin on her face. You wonder if she regrets doing it as you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 10:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/tit_flash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you wander around, you go through one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys, sitting at a table encouraging a girl standing just inside of one of the isles to flash them. She keeps telling them no, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally she lifts her shirt and flashes them her firm titties. One of the guys briefly woops loudly, and is promptly hit by his friends to be quiet. Several others look over at the boys, but the girl has already dropped her shirt back in place and with a huge grin walks off. You wonder if she regrets doing it or not, as you continue on your way.'
+		'As you wander around, you go through one of the small study areas. Before you are several guys sitting at a table, encouraging a girl standing just inside of one of the aisles to flash them. She keeps refusing, but you can tell she is getting aroused and excited by the attention they are giving her. Finally, she lifts her shirt and flashes her breasts at them. One of the guys briefly woops loudly, but is promptly hit by his friends and told to be quiet. Several others look over at the boys, but the girl has already dropped her shirt back in place and walks off with a grin on her face. You wonder if she regrets doing it as you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/events/sex/bj.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk around, you hear some moaning, and glancing down one of the rows of shelves, you see a boy sitting at one of the workstations. It takes a moment for you to notice the girl under the desk on her knees bobbing her head up and down in his lap. She is obviously giving him a blowjob and he is doing his best to be quiet but failing at it. You watch for a few more moments, feeling aroused at the scene before you decide to move on, before you are noticed.'
+		'As you walk around, you hear some moaning, and glancing down one of the rows of shelves, you see a boy sitting at one of the work stations. It takes a moment for you to notice the girl under the desk on her knees bobbing her head up and down in his lap. You watch for a few more seconds, feeling aroused at the scene before you decide to move on before you''re spotted.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/library/library.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wander around the library for a bit, looking at all the books. You pass several of your fellow students, some quietly studying, reading or just looking through the bookshelves. You don''t come across anything of interest.'
+		'You wander around the library for a while, looking at all the books. You pass by several of your fellow students, some quietly studying, reading or just looking through the bookshelves. You don''t come across anything of interest.'
 	end
 	act 'Leave':
 		minut += 5
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wander':
 			gt 'uni_library', 'wander'
 		end 
 	else
-		'The library is closing'
+		'The library is closing for the night.'
 	end
 end
 

locations/uni_programs.qsrc

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 
 !!This is the file containing the variabels and actions for handeling the different program the player can attend at the university.
 
-!!The follwoing vaiables are improtat.
-!! university['student'] is set to 1 in the player is enrolled in a university program.
+!!The following vaiables are important.
+!! university['student'] is set to 1 if the player is enrolled in a university program.
 !! $university['enrolled_in'] is the name of the university program the player is enrolled in, there is the following progams: teaching_studies
-!! university['enrolled_in_semester'] is the semester the player enrolled in starting fom 1 for the first semester and ending with 8 for the last.
+!! university['enrolled_in_semester'] is the semester the player enrolled in starting at 1 for the first semester and ending with 8 for the last.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'program_name':
 	if  $university['enrolled_in']= 'teaching_studies':
@@ -15,20 +15,20 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 	!!This arg have two functions. If called with gs without any optional argument it will make the cations to go to class availeble.
-	!!Second if called as a function with the additional ARGS[1] of monday, tuesday, wednesday or thursday, it will print on the screen the name of the classe and the time period. 
+	!!Second if called as a function with the additional ARGS[1] of monday, tuesday, wednesday or thursday, it will print on the screen the name of the class and the time period. 
 	if $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies':
 		if university['enrolled_in_semester'] = 1:
 			if $ARGS[1] = 'monday':
-				$Result = 'General Education 101 (9:00 to 10:30)'
+				$Result = 'General Education 101 (09:00 to 10:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'tuesday':
-				$Result = 'General Education 101 (9:00 to 10:30)'
+				$Result = 'General Education 101 (09:00 to 10:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'wednesday':
-				$Result = 'General Education 101 (9:00 to 10:30)'
+				$Result = 'General Education 101 (09:00 to 10:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'thursday':
-				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 (9:00 to 10:30)'
+				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 (09:00 to 10:30)'
 			elseif week = 1: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 101 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 2:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 101 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 101 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 101 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 (9:00 to 10:30)'
 			elseif week = 1: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 102 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 2:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 102 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your General Education 102 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_first':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 102 class': 
 					if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 					if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -129,14 +129,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 			if $ARGS[1] = 'monday':
 				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'tuesday':
-				$Result = 'Lerning Theories 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
+				$Result = 'Learning Theories 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'wednesday':
 				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'thursday':
-				$Result = 'Lerning Theories 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
+				$Result = 'Learning Theories 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif week = 1: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 101 class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 2:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
-				act 'Go to your Lerning Theories 101 Class': 
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				act 'Go to your Learning Theories 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut				
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 101 class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut				
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Lerning Theories 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -175,14 +175,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 			if $ARGS[1] = 'monday':
 				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'tuesday':
-				$Result = 'Phsychology of a Student 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
+				$Result = 'Psychology of a Student 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'wednesday':
 				$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'thursday':
-				$Result = 'Phsychology of a Student 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
+				$Result = 'Psychology of a Student 101 (11:00 to 12:30)'
 			elseif week = 1: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 102 class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 2:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Phsychology of a Student 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut				
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 102 class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut				
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
@@ -209,8 +209,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_second':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4: 
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
-				act 'Go to your Phsychology of a Student 101 Class': 
+				'Your next class will start at 11:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				act 'Go to your Psychology of a Student 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 10: minut += 60 - minut
 					uni_period['second'] = daystart
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				$Result = '<<$university[''elective3'']>> (13:15 to 14:45)'
 			elseif week = 1 and $university['elective1'] ! '': 
 				!!*nl
-				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				!!act 'Go to your elective clas 1': 
 				!!	if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 				!!	if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				!!end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Lerning Theories 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 					if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4 and $university['elective3'] ! '': 
 				!!*nl
-				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				!!act 'Go to your elective clas 3': 
 				!!	if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 				!!	if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				$Result = '<<$university[''elective3'']>> (13:15 to 14:45)'
 			elseif week = 1 and $university['elective1'] ! '': 
 				!!*nl
-				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				!!act 'Go to your elective clas 1': 
 				!!	if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 				!!	if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				!!end
 			elseif week = 3:
 				*nl
-				'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				act 'Go to your Phsychology of a Student 101 Class': 
 					if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 					if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_period_third':
 				end
 			elseif week = 4 and $university['elective3'] ! '': 
 				!!*nl
-				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+				!!'Your next class will start at 13:15. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 				!!act 'Go to your elective clas 3': 
 				!!	if hour = 12: minut += 75 - minut
 				!!	if hour = 13 and minut < 15: minut += 15 - minut
@@ -332,17 +332,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			if $ARGS[1] = 'schedule':
 				if university['exam_week'] = 1: 
 					if week < 4 or (week = 4 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'General Education 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week. Teaching Methods 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Monday next week. Lerning Theories 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
+						$Result = 'General Education 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week. Teaching Methods 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Monday next week. Lerning Theories 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
 					else	
-						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Tuesday next week. Learning Theories 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
+						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Tuesday next week. Learning Theories 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
 					end
 				elseif university['exam_week'] = 2: 
 					if week < 2 or (week = 2 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Tuesday this week. Lerning Theories 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
+						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Tuesday this week. Lerning Theories 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
 					elseif week < 4 or (week = 4 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'Learning Theories 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
+						$Result = 'Learning Theories 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
 					else
-						$Result = 'All your exams are over. Now it is just waiting to the grade is announced.'
+						$Result = 'All your exams are over. Now you just have to wait for your grade to be announced.'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'is_over':
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			elseif university['exam_week'] = 1: 
 				if week = 4:
 					*nl
-					'Your General Education 101 exam will start at 9:00 today. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					'Your General Education 101 exam will start at 09:00 today. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 					act 'Go to your General Education 101 exam': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			elseif university['exam_week'] = 2:
 				if week = 2: 
 					*nl
-					'Your Teaching Methods 101 exam will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					'Your Teaching Methods 101 exam will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 					act 'Go to your Teaching Methods 101 exam': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 					end
 				elseif week = 4: 
 					*nl
-					'Your Lerning Theories 101 exam will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					'Your Lerning Theories 101 exam will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 					act 'Go to your Lerning Theories 101 exam': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -401,17 +401,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			if $ARGS[1] = 'schedule':
 				if university['exam_week'] = 1: 
 					if week < 4 or (week = 4 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'General Education 102 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week. Teaching Methods 102 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Monday next week. Phsychology of a Student 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
+						$Result = 'General Education 102 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week. Teaching Methods 102 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Monday next week. Psychology of a Student 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
 					else	
-						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Tuesday next week. Phsychology of a Student 101  Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
+						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Tuesday next week. Psychology of a Student 101  Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday next week.'
 					end
 				elseif university['exam_week'] = 2: 
 					if week < 2 or (week = 2 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Tuesday this week. Phsychology of a Student 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
+						$Result = 'Teaching Methods 102 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Tuesday this week. Psychology of a Student 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
 					elseif week < 4 or (week = 4 and hour < 9):
-						$Result = 'Phsychology of a Student 101 Exam (9:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
+						$Result = 'Psychology of a Student 101 Exam (09:00 to 12:00) Thursday this week.'
 					else
-						$Result = 'All your exams are over. Now it is just waiting to the grade is announced.'
+						$Result = 'All your exams are over. Now you just have to wait for your grade to be announced.'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif $ARGS[1] = 'is_over':
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			elseif university['exam_week'] = 1: 
 				if week = 4:
 					*nl
-					'Your General Education 102 exam will start at 9:00 today. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					'Your General Education 102 exam will start at 09:00 today. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 					act 'Go to your General Education 102 exam': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 			elseif university['exam_week'] = 2:
 				if week = 2: 
 					*nl
-					'Your Teaching Methods 102 exam will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					'Your Teaching Methods 102 exam will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
 					act 'Go to your Teaching Methods exam 102': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
@@ -457,12 +457,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exam':
 					end
 				elseif week = 4: 
 					*nl
-					'Your Lerning Theories exam will start at 9:00. You can go to it now or go do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
-					act 'Go to your Phsychology of a Student 101 exam': 
+					'Your Psychology of a Student exam will start at 09:00. You can go to it now or do other things first, but you need to be at the university plaza before it starts if you want to attend it.'
+					act 'Go to your Psychology of a Student 101 exam': 
 						if hour = 8: minut += 60 - minut
 						if hour = 7: minut += 120 - minut					
 						gs 'stat'
-						gt 'uni_exams2', 'phsychology_of_a_student_101'
+						gt 'uni_exams2', 'psychology_of_a_student_101'
 					end
 				end
 			end

locations/uni_shop.qsrc

@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if hour < 8 or hour >= 23:
 		'The store is currently closed.'
-		act 'Leave the store':minut += 2 & gt 'city_island'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 2 & gt 'city_island'
 		exit
 	end
 
-	'In the store there is an <a href="exec: gt ''uni_shop'', ''atm''">ATM</a>, from which you can withdraw money from and deposit money to your bank account.'
+	'In the store is an <a href="exec: gt ''uni_shop'', ''atm''">ATM</a>, from which you can withdraw money and deposit money into your bank account.'
 
 	!! output from purchase
 	if $message ! '':

locations/unicoursework.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ $unicourseworkloc[1] = $ARGS[2]
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if func('uniutil', 'student', 'enrolled') and func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'is_not_finished'):
 		if $unicourseworkloc[0] = 'komp':
-			'You should probably do some of your <a href="exec:gt ''unicoursework'', ''do_coursework'', $unicourseworkloc[0], $unicourseworkloc[1]">coursework</a>.'
+			'You should do some of your <a href="exec:gt ''unicoursework'', ''do_coursework'', $unicourseworkloc[0], $unicourseworkloc[1]">coursework</a>.'
 		else
 			act 'Do some coursework (1:00)':
 				gt 'unicoursework', 'do_coursework', $unicourseworkloc[0], $unicourseworkloc[1]
@@ -39,19 +39,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'do_coursework':
     end
 
     if $ARGS[1] = 'komp':
-    	'It may be boring, but it still needs doing! You spend an hour doing coursework, and '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% of it is now finished.'
+    	'It may be boring, but it still needs doing! You spend an hour doing your coursework and '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% of it is now finished.'
     elseif $ARGS[1] = 'sitr2x':
-    	'You sat and studied, and you managed to complete some of your coursework. You are now '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent done.'
+    	'You managed to complete some of your coursework. You are now '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% done.'
     elseif $ARGS[1] = 'sitr':
-    	'You work on your course''s homework and are about '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent done.'
+    	'You work on your course''s homework and are about '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% done.'
     elseif $ARGS[1] = 'pav_shared_apt':
-    	'You sit down on the sofa bed and do some of your coursework. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent of it.'
+    	'You sit down on the sofa bed and do some of your coursework. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% of it.'
     elseif $ARGS[1] = 'nichBedroomServant':
-    	'You work on your coursework and have now completed '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent.'
+    	'You work on your coursework and have now completed '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'%.'
     elseif $ARGS[1] = 'bedrPar':
-    	'You sit down at your desk and do some of your coursework. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent of it.'
+    	'You sit down at your desk and do some of your coursework. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% of it.'
     else
-    	'You sit for an hour and do some of your work for class. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+' percent of the work.'
+    	'You sit for an hour and do some of your work for class. You''ve finished '+func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'get')+'% of the work.'
     end
 
     if func('uniutil', 'assignment_progress', 'is_not_finished'):