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locations/Peterroom.qsrc

@@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start_door':
 
 		if petersexday < 1:
 			petersexday += 1
-			'You called, Peter opened the door.'
-			'- Come on, get changed. I am now.'
+			'Peter opens the door.'
+			'"Come in and get changed."'
 
-			act 'Take the apartment':gt 'peterroom', 'start'
+			act 'Enter the apartment':gt 'peterroom', 'start'
 		else
-			'You rang the doorbell but no one answers.'
+			'You ring the doorbell, but no one answers.'
 
 			act 'Leave':
 				cla
@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if peter > 0 :
 		peterrand = rand(1, 2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/9.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get undressed, pinned collar and prepared. From the next room came the voice of Peter Vlasnyi:"Who is my whore?"'
+		'You get undressed and lock a collar around your neck. You hear Peter in the next room. "Who''s my whore?"'
 
-		act 'I, my lord ...':
+		act 'I am, Master.':
 			petersex = petersex + 1
 
 			if analplugin = 1 :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
@@ -63,66 +63,63 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		petersexday += 1
 		minut += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/1.jpg"></center>'
-		'undressing and dressing it. He put a collar in front of you picked up this narrow strip of skin with rivets and thinking.'
+		'As you start to undress, he puts a collar down in front of you. It''s a narrow strip of leather with space for a leash to be attached.'
 
-		act 'Wear' :
+		act 'Put it on' :
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You put the collar. Peter stroked whip you on the cheek:'
-			'- Lustful girl! Stand up, turn around, hands behind your back!'
-			'You execute the command and hands snap handcuffs.'
+			'You put the collar on and Peter strokes you gently on the cheek. Then, without warning, pulls his hand back and slaps you hard. "Lustful girl! Stand up and turn around - hands behind your back!"'
+			'You quickly do as he says, feeling cold metal closing around your wrists.'
 
 			if analplugin = 1 :
 				analplugin = 0
-				'"And what have we here?" Peter grips the tip of the butt plug sticking out of your ass, and eases it out.'
+				'"What do we have here?" Peter grips the end of the butt plug sticking out of your ass, and eases it out.'
 			end
 
-			act 'Smile':
+			act 'Submit yourself':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Peter pulled you by the collar, pushed you on your knees in front of him and ordered: "Come on bitch, open your mouth."'
+				'Peter pulls you by the collar, then shoves you to your knees in front of him. "Come on bitch, open your mouth." he orders.'
 
-				act 'Submit':
+				act 'Please him':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Peter unbuttoned his pants and pulled out his 25cm dick. He grabbed you by the hair and shoved in your mouth the head of his penis. You obediently wrap your lips around it, sucking and caressing with your tongue, feeling as it grows and strains in your mouth.'
+					'Peter unbuttons his pants and pulls out his 25cm cock. He grabs you by the hair and shoves the head in your mouth. You obediently wrap your lips around it, then begin to suck and caress it with your tongue, feeling it grow and strain inside your mouth.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					act 'Continue Composition' :
+					act 'Continue':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-						'And then Peter pushed you over and rudely and impatiently thrust member in your pussy and started to fuck you like a blow-up doll. A few minutes later, he stopped, pulled his cock out, pushed you to the floor and ordered:'
-						'"Crawl to me, bitch!"'
-
-						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
+						'Peter pushes you onto the bed and pushes your legs up to your chest before tightly binding them and your hands together. He then inserts his member into your pussy and starts fucking you hard. After a few minutes, he stops and pulls his cock out of you, unties you and then shoves you to the floor. He walks across the room, turns and says "Crawl to me, bitch!"'
+                        gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 					
-						act 'crawl' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
+						act 'Crawl' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
 					end
 				end
 				
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-					act 'Does not comply (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+					act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 						cla & *clr
 						gs 'pain', 8, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/4_1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Have to punish you" with these words Peter crossed over the table and shoved a plug in your ass. - Pop up earlier than end flogging, will receive the same amount:- Peter became the side of you, spread the whip and started whipping. counting aloud strikes interspersed with your shouts and sobs ...'
-						'"Ask me to fuck you, nine docile litter?"'
-
-						act 'Yes! I''ll be your whore!' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
+						'"You need to be punished!" He rounds the table and forces you on your knees with your ass high in the air. You squeal when he shoves a butt plug deep into your ass before he starts delivering several stinging smacks to your ass cheeks, alternating cheeks with each strike. He counts the strikes aloud, ignoring your pained sobs.'
+						'"Beg me to fuck you, whore!"'
+                        'Please fuck me, Master! Please! Fuck me like the dirty little whore I am!'
+						act 'Continue' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
 					end
 				else
-					act 'Does not comply (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+					act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end	
 			end
 		end
@@ -136,35 +133,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter on a leash led you into the bedroom. Knocked on the huge bed and tied his hands and feet.'
-	'Then deftly put into your mouth gag:- ball on the strap and fastened it at the back.'
-	'"I love, <<$pcs_nickname>>," as you moan, but when you''re talking about, you start talking nonsense. So it is better groan, honey ...'
+	'Peter puts you on a leash and leads you into the bedroom. He pushes you onto the huge bed and securely ties your hands and feet before fastening a ball gag into your mouth.'
+	'"I love you <<$pcs_nickname>>, especially when you moan, but when you''re allowed to talk, you start spouting nonsense. So I think you''re better off gagged.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
 					
-	act 'Moo':
+	act 'Moan':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Peter bore down on you from above. "Check how much you sweet ass?" Said Peter'
+		'Peter spreads your legs and bears down on you from above. "Let''s see how well your sweet ass opens for me." he says'
 
 		if analplugin = 1 :
 			analplugin = 0
-			', Pulled a butt plug'
+			', pulls out your butt plug'
 		end
 
-		' and put his huge erection to your anus half-entering it. You gasped in pain, and mooed into gag. You can''t wait for him to get in your ass completely. Peter saw your reaction and began to fuck your ass with every stroke penetrating deeper and deeper until his penis completely sinks into you, and his balls slap you hard on the buttocks. He fucks you so hard that your knees start to shake, and from you pussy juices leak on buttocks.'
-
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
+		', and positions his huge erection against your asshole, half-entering with the first thrust. You gasp in pain, moaning into the gag. You can''t wait for him to bury himself in your ass completely. Peter sees your reaction and begins to fuck your ass, penetrating deeper with each stroke, until his dick is completely buried inside you and his balls slap hard against your buttocks. He fucks you so hard that your knees start to shake, and pussy juices trickle down your ass.'
+        gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 					
-		act 'Moo':
+		act 'Moan again':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/8.jpg"></center>'
-			'He continues to penetrate you faster, then slows the rhythm, makes several deep movements and finishes by filling your insides with hot stream of sperm ....'
-
-			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
+			'He continues to fuck you hard and fast, then slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your insides with a hot stream of cum.'
+            gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
 			if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
@@ -172,10 +166,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 			if pcs_horny >= 100:
 				analorgasm += 1
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'heat surges in your ass and orgasm washes over you.'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'A pleasant sensation surges within you and an orgasm washes over you, juices spraying from your pussy as you moan loudly into the gag.'
 			end
 
-			'Your ass makes squelching noise when freed from his penis. Peter sat on the bed, breathing heavily, and you remained lying bound, feeling sperm slowly leaking from your fucked ass.'
+			'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain bound, his cum slowly leaking from your ruined asshole.'
 			
 			act 'Relax' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 		end
@@ -188,22 +182,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/vanroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'- You were great - said Peter and smacking you on the cheek, picked up and carried you to the bathroom where you showered together.'
+	'"You were great." Peter says, smacking you on the ass. After a few minutes, he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom, where you shower together.'
 
-	act 'Get out' :
+	act 'Leave' :
 		cla
 		*clr
 		peter += 1
 		minut += 20
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/mash.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walked down to the yard, and Peter started the car. He kissed you on the lips and said:'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you really brighten up my lonely and gray existence. Your appearance is as the light in the dark, or a breath of fresh air ... I hope to see you again. But I need to leave for now. Want a lift?"'
+		'You walk down to the front yard together, and Peter starts the car. He kisses you on the lips and says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you really brighten up my lonely, dull existence. For me, your presence is like a light in the darkness, or a breath of fresh air. I need to leave for now, but I truly hope to see you against soon." He starts the car. "Oh, do you need a lift?" he suddenly asks.'
 			
-		act 'To the center':
+		act 'To the city center':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gt 'city_center'
 		end
-		act 'The house':
+		act 'To your apartment':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gt 'city_residential'
 		end
@@ -215,44 +208,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 	*clr
 	if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/d1-1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter connects your hands behind your back. His hands take you by the hips and lifted your ass, placing you cancer. You dutifully lean and Peter catches the rope to the hook.'
+	'Peter ties your hands behind your back, then lifts you up by the hips, placing you on a hook.'
 
-	act 'Sucking her fingers':
+	act 'Suck his fingers':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Peter pushes your hands halves drives his cock in the ass. You gasped in pain, and mooing in gag. - And I see you can not wait to get his ass completely - Peter saw your reaction and began to fuck your ass with every stroke penetrating deeper and deeper until his penis did not completely sink into you, and the balls hard slap on the buttocks.'
+		'Peter grabs your head and shoves all of his fingers into your mouth, forcing you to suck on them.'
+		'After a few seconds of you sucking and gagging on his fingers, he withdraws them and moves around behind you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
-		act 'Moan':
+		act 'Penetration':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-3.jpg"></center>'
-			'He fucks you so intense that you feel like my knees start to shake, and the legs from the pussy juices flow down your.'
-
+			'You think he is about to finger your ass, but squeal in surprise when he shoves his dick into you instead.'
+            'You moan in a mix of pleasure and pain as he starts thrusting, quickly picking up the pace.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
-			act 'Moan':
+			act 'Submit yourself':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'He continues to stick you faster'
+				'He continues to fuck you hard and you submit yourself to the pleasure of your ass being hammered, your pussy juices running down your legs.'
 
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:
 					analorgasm += 1
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-					'You are very excited that grew in the ass sweet languor, and then suddenly become a hot orgasm washing over you. Simultaneously with you ends Peter pounding dick deeper and filling your insides hot stream of sperm ....'
+					'He continues to fuck you hard and fast and you soon feel an intense orgasm washing over you, juices spraying from your pussy as his warm cum fills your ass.'
 					
 				elseif pcs_horny < 100:
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
-					' and then slows the rhythm, makes several deep movements and finishes filling your insides hot stream of sperm ....'
+					'He suddenly slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your ass with a hot load of cum.'
 					
 				end
 
-				'Ass to squelch freed from his penis. Peter sat on the bed, breathing heavily, and you remained kneeling with protruding upward booty fucked from which the legs dripping sperm.'
+				'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain kneeling with your ass in the air, his cum trickling down your leg.'
 
 				act 'Further' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 			end
@@ -264,8 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter put you on your knees, then lifted your head and holding her hands to force your mouth planted its piston. His head slipped down his throat, but he did not rest on this, continuing to press. And its 25 centimeter count began to enter into you further.'
-
+	'Peter forces you on your knees, then lifts your head and thrusts his cock into your mouth. The head of his cock goes down your throat, but he continues to thrust, forcing more of its 25cm length inside.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -273,32 +266,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-2.jpg"></center>'
-		'- Cosi better whore! Inch by inch, pushing relentlessly pounding him deeper and deeper. After another push me you felt that your lips into something rested. And in a moment you realize that it is all inside.'
-
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+		'He thrusts mercilessly, fucking deeper into your mouth. Eventually, you feel his balls slap your chin, and realize that he''s bottomed out.'
+        gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
 	
-		act 'Moan':
+		act 'Deepthroat':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tears streamed from your eyes, and Peter began slowly began to move. He took his hands away from your head, and now you hands grabbed his buttocks and continued to sit down on his spear. You trembling, you are lost in sensation between the legs fire raged in the chest ached pleasantly shamelessness and sense of awareness of their depravity.'
-
-			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+			'Tears stream from your eyes as he begins moving slowly. He takes his hands away from your head, and you desperately grab onto him while you let him use your throat. Trembling, you are lost in sensations - caught between the fire raging between your legs and your shameless awareness of the depravity of the situation.'
+            gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
-			act 'Moo':
+			act 'Continue':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Peter began to finish and stopped drove a member as far as possible, you feel like you are somewhere deep pours his sperm., And on his balls your saliva flowing ...'
-
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+				'Peter is nearing climax, his thrusts becoming ragged, when he suddenly stops and pushes in deep. His balls draw up, coated with your saliva, and you feel his sperm shooting down your throat.'
+                gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 		
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-					'Suddenly you start you finish yourself. Between the legs blazing fire and waves of pleasure covered body, you moaned and shuddered with orgasm, but Peter gripped you do not allow members to slip out of his mouth ...'
+					'Your orgasm suddenly hits you. Waves of pleasure ripple through your body, and you moan and shudder with release, but Peter holds you in place and refuses to allow his cock to slip out of your mouth.'
 				end
 
 				act 'Swallow' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
@@ -307,5 +297,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
 	end
 end
 
---- Peterroom ---------------------------------
-
+--- Peterroom ---------------------------------