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Kevin_Smarts 2 年之前
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+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick as he turns to you. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''ll fill you up real good." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat which you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of your causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed. You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan chatting. "<<$pcs_firstname>> is an amazing girl. You gotta invite me here more often."'
 					*nl
-					'Fedor shrugs. "It''s all up to <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan responds, "Whipped huh?" he then looks up your body. "I can''t say I blame you. <<$pcs_nickname>>''s ia quite the fox." Fedor gives Ivan a fist bump before Ivan gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor turns to you "So how did you enjoy that?" You reply, "You were both amazing. I had a great time." Fedor responds, "Awesome, now let''s get you cleaned up." Fedor then lifts you up and carries you to the bathroom.'
+					'Fedor shrugs. "It''s all up to <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan responds, "Whipped huh?" he then looks up your body. "I can''t say I blame you. <<$pcs_nickname>>''s is quite the fox." Fedor gives Ivan a fist bump before Ivan gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor turns to you "So how did you enjoy that?" You reply, "You were both amazing. I had a great time." Fedor responds, "Awesome, now let''s get you cleaned up." Fedor then lifts you up and carries you to the bathroom.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A3'

+ 1 - 1
locations/LariskaGo.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ act 'Go with Lariska':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/home_1.jpg"></center>'
 		if LariskaQW['story'] = 5:
 			'Entering the apartment, you see that it is decorated in a Japanese style.'
-			'"You have a nice apartment, Lariska," you say, looking around with interest.'
+			'"You have a nice apartment, Lariska." You say, looking around with interest.'
 			'"Thank you. Mother makes a good living, although she is usually only home on the weekends," she says a bit sadly.'
 			'You follow Lariska to her room.'
 			LariskaQW['story'] = 6

+ 1 - 1
locations/_attributes_scandalicious_swim_two.qsrc

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A very scanty bikini set, it is perfect for attentin seekers!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A very scanty bikini set, it is perfect for attention seekers!'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
 	CloQuality = 2

+ 25 - 26
locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -146,22 +146,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 				npc_rel['A241'] +=2
 				'Actually, you think that there are some true on Alexandria''s words, and is a good moment to voice your opinions.'
 				'"I don''t know Tatiana enough, and I am reluctant to judge without hearing an explanation, but... her description of you, seemed to me too forced, more rumor than anything else, and that weird thing about your hair."'
-				'Alexandria raises an eyebrow, and grab a (beautiful and long)lock of hair, smiling slightly, she is paying close attention to your words.'
-				'"Well... basically she tolls me that your magic was somewhat altered on your quest for the Talisman''s power and that a simple scare turned your hair white."'
-				'Whit that, she burst in a short-lived and dry laugh, before talking again with contempt in her voice.'
-				'"I can assure you, that I have total control over my magic, hmpf... More importantly than that, my hair didn''t turned white because like some simpleton, I was scared by a toad in the dark. I''m a natural blonde, and I take good care of my hair, it''s one of the few things that Rikudo''s curse hasn''t altered."'
+				'Alexandria raises an eyebrow, and grabs a (beautiful and long) lock of hair, smiling slightly, she is paying close attention to your words.'
+				'"Well... basically she told me that your magic was somewhat altered on your quest for the Talisman''s power and that a simple scare turned your hair white."'
+				'With that, she bursts into a short-lived and dry laugh, before talking again with contempt in her voice.'
+				'"I can assure you, that I have total control over my magic, hmpf... More importantly than that, my hair didn''t turn white because like some simpleton, I was scared by a toad in the dark. I''m a natural blonde, and I take good care of my hair, it''s one of the few things that Rikudo''s curse hasn''t altered."'
 				'"Curse?"'
-				'Your words burst out, and during a moment, the two of you look each other in baffled surprise'
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, Are you telling me that they didn''t toll you?! I am a man!"'
+				'Your word burst out, and Alexandria looks at you as if studying a document to see if there is a spelling mistake. Finally she sighs having worked out what was wrong.'
+				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, did they not even tell you?! I am a man!"'
 			else
 				npc_rel['A241'] -=2
 				pcs_mood -= 20
-				'Actually, you think that there are some true on Alexandria''s words, and is a good moment to voice your opinions.'
-				'"Well, if you want my opinion, she is envious, I mean you are a powerful magician, and that weird thing about your hair, don''t help either."'
-				'Alexandria raise an eyebrow, and grab a (beautiful and long)lock of hair, as she pays close attention to your words.'
+				'Actually, you think that there are some truth to Alexandria''s words, and is a good moment to voice your opinions.'
+				'"Well, if you want my opinion, she is envious, I mean you are a powerful magician, and that weird thing about your hair doesn''t help either."'
+				'Alexandria raise an eyebrow, and grabs a (beautiful and long) lock of hair, as she pays close attention to your words.'
 				'"Well... basically she told me that your magic was somewhat altered on your quest for the Talisman''s power and that a simple scare turned your hair white, but if you ask me, it suits your style, I can''t blame the photographer for thinking that you... were... a model?"'
-				'Is like looking a train wreck, as Alexandria''s face goes darker at your dialogue. Finally, you shut up as she grit her teeth and with words full of contempt.'
-				'"I can assure you, that I have total control over my magic, hmpf... More importantly than that, my hair didn''t turned white because like some simpleton, I was scared by a toad in the dark. I''m a natural blonde, and I take good care of my hair, it''s one of the few things that Rikudo''s curse hasn''t altered, because... surprise! that trickster seemed to have forgotten to say you something important... I am a man!'
+				'Alexandria''s face grows darker at your every word, like she is witnessing a train derail and burst into flame. You think its best to stop talking before you upset things further as she grits her teeth.' 'Her words filled with contempt, she says, "I can assure you, that I have total control over my magic, hmpf... More importantly than that, my hair didn''t turn white because like I was some simpleton, scared by a toad in the dark. I''m a natural blonde, and I take good care of my hair, it''s one of the few things that Rikudo''s curse hasn''t altered, because... surprise! that trickster seemed to have forgotten to say you something important... I am a man!'
 			end
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -174,13 +173,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Alexandria</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I don''t think that Tatiana is that bad, after all, she is teaching me magic."'
-			'Alexandria fix her gaze at you and snort in derision.'
-			'"Oh really? When The Veil was lifted from your eyes, and you ended in our side of reality... What did she do? Teach you about your new world? Call Reinhold to inform about The Talisman''s fate? Or just... she shut up and waited to see what happened to you as you fumbled your way in total ignorance, uncaring of yours and others welfare?"'
-			'At those words, you are not sure how to answer, and feeling your indecision, Alexandria gives you a contempt half-smile before continuing.'
-			'"Let''s be generous <<$pcs_lastname>>, she hasn''t passed the pale where her antics begin to be accounted in destroyed lives, but, she isn''t really caring about your situation, only on what she can obtain from helping you, believe me I know her type, I learned this lesson, when Rikudo, probably the most powerful trickster of all times cursed me."'
+			'Alexandria fix her gaze at you and snorts in derision.'
+			'"Oh really? When The Veil was lifted from your eyes, and you ended in our side of reality... What did she do? Teach you about your new world? Call Reinhold to inform him about The Talisman''s fate? Or just... shut up and wait to see what happened to you as you fumbled your way in total ignorance, uncaring of yours and others welfare?"'
+			'At those words, you are not sure how to answer, and feeling your indecision, Alexandria gives you a contemptuous half-smile before continuing.'
+			'"Let''s be generous <<$pcs_lastname>>, she hasn''t passed the pale where her antics begin to be counted in destroyed lives, but, she isn''t really caring about your situation, only on what she can obtain from helping you, believe me I know her type, I learned this lesson, when Rikudo, probably the most powerful trickster of all time cursed me."'
 			'"Cursed?"'
-			'Your words burst out, and during a moment, the two of you look each other in baffled surprise'
-			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, Are you telling me that they didn''t toll you?! I am a man!"'
+			'Your word bursts out, and for a moment that seems to last a life time, the two of you stare at each other in baffled surprise.'
+			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, Are you telling me that they didn''t tell you?! I am a man!"'
 			npc_rel['A241'] -=1
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			minut += 2
@@ -194,10 +193,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Alexandria</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 			'The truth is that you don''t want to be dragged in a discussion about Tatiana, with an obviously very opinionated wizard, so you do the most simple and just shut up, letting Alexandria badmouth your teacher.'
-			'"Let''s be generous <<$pcs_lastname>>, she hasn''t passed the pale where her antics begin to be accounted in destroyed lives, but, she isn''t really caring about your situation, only on what she can obtain from helping you, believe me I know her type, I learned this lesson, when Rikudo, probably the most powerful trickster of all times cursed me."'
+			'"Let''s be generous <<$pcs_lastname>>, she hasn''t passed the pale where her antics begin to be counted in destroyed lives, but, she isn''t really caring about your situation, only on what she can obtain from helping you, believe me I know her type, I learned this lesson, when Rikudo, probably the most powerful trickster of all time cursed me."'
 			'"Cursed?"'
-			'Your words burst out, and during a moment, the two of you look each other in baffled surprise'
-			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, Are you telling me that they didn''t toll you?! I am a man!"'
+			'You blurt out, and for a moment, the two of you stare at each other in baffled surprise.'
+			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, Are you telling me that they didn''t tell you?! I am a man!"'
 			minut += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -209,7 +208,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei?</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
-	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? Sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
+	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? Sits on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you.'
 	if $start_type = 'tg':
 		npc_rel['A241'] +=1
 		'"Yes Mr. Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
@@ -222,16 +221,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 		end
 	end
 	'After this little revelation, he exhales a big puff of smoke, and continue with his explanation.'
-	'"As I remember telling you the last time we meet, my name is Aleksei, and the hows and whys of my curse it''s better to leave them for another time, suffice is to say, that is my understanding, that you and your relation with the powers that have been transferred to your persona, holds the key to break my current predicament. As you can see from our early confrontation, the powers that be, wanted the monopoly over your attention, so I looked for an alternative, that is the reason after the... convoluted way we meet in Aphrodite, hm... as an afterthought, if you want to know, I took care of that little parasite, banishing it."'
-	'As he gives you this explanation, the pieces of the puzzle click in your head, and begin to explain his conduct, but there is a thing to explain.'
+	'"As I remember telling you the last time we meet, my name is Aleksei, and the hows and whys of my curse is better left for another time, suffice is to say, that is my understanding, that you and your relation with the powers that have been transferred to your persona, holds the key to break my current predicament. As you can see from our early confrontation, the powers that be, wanted the monopoly over your attention, so I looked for an alternative, that is the reason after the... convoluted way we met in Aphrodite, hm... as an afterthought, if you want to know, I took care of that little parasite, banishing it."'
+	'As he gives you this explanation, the pieces of the puzzle click in your head, and begin to explain his conduct, but there is one thing you need to know.'
 	'"Uh... I think that I begin to understand, but you mean, that you killed... Ehm... <i>her</i>?"'
-	'Aleksei look at you impassively, and in a cold voice that send shivers down your back, answer.'
+	'Aleksei looks at you impassively, and in a cold voice that send shivers down your back, answers.'
 	'"Yes"'
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if bimbolevel > 0:
-		act "But... she was like my friend!":
+		act '"But... she was like my friend!"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
@@ -252,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 		end
 	else
 		if succubusQW = 5:
-			act "You don''t have the right! She was my bitch!":
+			act '"You don''t have the right! She was my bitch!"':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -2140,7 +2140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act'I only did this because owed you one':
+		act'I only did this because I owed you one':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			'"I only did this because I owed you one," You say, wiping the cum from your eyes with your hands. Your eyes clear, you see a questioning look on his face. "Did you already forget? I promised I''d let you cum on my face this time."'
@@ -2268,7 +2268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act'I only did this because owed you one':
+		act'I only did this because I owed you one':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			'"I only did this because I owed you one," You say, wiping the cum from your eyes with your hands. Your eyes clear, you see a questioning look on his face. "Did you already forget? I promised I''d let you cum on my face this time."'

+ 2 - 2
locations/cafe_parco.qsrc

@@ -65,13 +65,13 @@ if $args[0]= 'inner':
 			end
 
 		elseif mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] >= 5:
-			if npc_rel["A15"] < 50:
+			if npc_rel['A15'] < 50:
 				'You approach the couple and greet them, but they don''t pay any attention to you.'
 			else
 				'You approach the couple and greet them, right away Vicky starts gossiping, as always, Vanya, mostly joked about the things you two were talking about. You chatted for a few minutes...'
 			end
 
-			if npc_rel["A15"] >= 60:
+			if npc_rel['A15'] >= 60:
 				if mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 10:
 					cla
 					'Vicky and Vanya invite you to join them.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'Christina falls to the ground, and you grab her by the hair. "Well bitch, tell the whole school. Did you suck his cock or not?" Christins squeals as she admits to the whole school that she sucked his cock.'
 		'Leaning forward so nobody else can hear, you tell her "From now on, you don''t get to wear panties to school." Shaking her head no, you twist her hair a little more, making her yelp, and say "For that, you will wear a buttplug everyday too. Want to keep pushing it?"'
 		'She looks at you in fear and nods. "I can''t hear you Christina!" you growl, twisting her hair again. "Yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>, no more panties, and wear a buttplug!" she gasps. Letting her go, you look down at her, and realize from now on, she is yours to do with as you please.'
-		'You pull out your phone and take a few pictures of her, and then anonymously send copies of the blowjob pictures to Coach Pavlovich along with a message that read; "Christina is no longer allowed to do school sports, or this ends up in the Principles hands." Satisfied, you walk away.'
+		'You pull out your phone and take a few pictures of her, and then anonymously send copies of the blowjob pictures to Coach Pavlovich along with a message that read; "Christina is no longer allowed to do school sports, or this ends up in the Principal''s hands." Satisfied, you walk away.'
 		act 'Leave':gs 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif fightEnding = 13:
 		fightEnding = 0

+ 3 - 3
locations/family.qsrc

@@ -85,11 +85,11 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 			elseif kolloc = 11:
 				ocpd_room = 1
 				if momloc = 19 and sdadloc = 10:
-					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing playing on his phone.'
+					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing on his phone.'
 				elseif momloc = 19:
-					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing playing on his phone.'
+					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing on his phone.'
 				elseif sdadloc = 10:
-					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing playing on his phone.'
+					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting in the armchair, playing on his phone.'
 				else
 					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, playing video games.'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			elseif VK = 2:
 				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean out the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
 				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
-				'Christina then replies. "That is why I have no interest in dating losers like you." Christina then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some work sheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive her on time. It''s not hard."'
+				'Christina then replies. "That is why I have no interest in dating losers like you." Christina then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some work sheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
 				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm was not working at all." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You are really bad at it."'
 				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out." Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry." Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/lariska_storyline.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Boyfriend_1':
 	act 'Agree':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big13.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Yeah, that''s ok with me. You should be able to have some fun, enjoy your life." You give her a smile, trying to let her know it wont bother you.'
+		'"Yeah, that''s ok with me. You should be able to have some fun, enjoy your life." You give her a smile, trying to let her know it won''t bother you.'
 		'"Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was worried you would be mad at me for wanting that." She leans in and gives you a kiss on the cheek.'
 		LariskaQW['boyfriend'] = 1
 		lariskalove += 2

+ 9 - 9
locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -689,17 +689,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 								act 'Grab her ass':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/anushka/assgrab.jpg"></center>'
-									'You follow her out of the apartment, with her just in front of you. As the apartment door closes you reach out and grab her ass. "Hows your ass feel?" You ask her in a teasing tone.'
-									'"Owe! Fuck." She says as she pulls away from you and pushes your hands away. "My ass hurts what do you thinks, bitch." She says to you. Despite her words you know she is just fucking around with you.'
-									'"You really are a anal slut you know that, you just love having your ass fucked hard and rough." You tease her."'
-									'She laughs slightly. "Fuck you, at least I am not fucking my aunts boyfriend, your future uncle. Now that is a real slut, fucking any and everything"'
+									'You follow just behind her as she leaves the apartment. As the apartment door closes, you reach out and grab her ass. "How''s your ass feel?" You ask her in a teasing tone.'
+									'"Ow! Fuck." She says as she pulls away from you and pushes your hands away. "What do you think? My ass hurts, bitch." She says to you. Despite her words you know she is just fucking around with you.'
+									'"You really are an anal slut, you know that? You just love having your ass fucked hard and rough." You saying teasingly.'
+									'She laughs slightly. "Fuck you. At least I''m not fucking my aunt''s boyfriend, your future uncle. Now that is a real slut, fucking any and everything"'
 									if radspy = 1:
-										'You smirk at her responce. "You know I think Rad is right at least about you, you just like being fucked hard and rough and love it."'
-										'She just gives you a fuck off look and then flips you off with both fingers, till she gets to the stairs, then she walks down them but raises her hands up over her head and double flips you off again. You can''t help but laugh at that reaction.'
+										'You smirk at her response. "You know I think Rad is right about you, you just like being fucked hard and rough. You fucking love it."'
+										'She just gives you a fuck off look and then flips you off with both fingers till she gets to the stairs, then she walks down them but raises her hands up over her head and double flips you off again. You can''t help but laugh at that reaction.'
 									else
-										'You smirk to her. "I learned from the best."'
-										'She rolls her eyes at you. "Whatever slut." Then she turns and walks down the stairs. "Talk to you later." She says as she walks away.'
-										'"Later." You reply as she disappears down the next flight of stairs.'
+										'You smirk at her. "I learned from the best."'
+										'She rolls her eyes at you. "Whatever, slut." Then she turns and walks down the stairs. "Talk to you later."'
+										'"Later!" You call after her as she disappears down the next flight of stairs.'
 									end
 									act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
 								end

+ 4 - 4
locations/soniadisco.qsrc

@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'followsonia':
 		if soniahelp > soniaencourage:
 			'You walk up to her. "Are you ok?"'
 			'She gives you a look of disbelief. "NO, I''m not ok. You saw what happened, everyone is going to think I''m a slut now, hell I am a slut," she says between sobs.'
-			'You nod a bit. "I know, but I tried to help you and I wish I could have done more," you tell her.'
+			'You nod a bit. "I know, but I tried to help you and I wish I could have done more." you tell her.'
 			'She nods a bit. "I know, god I was so stupid," she says before she start sobbing harder.'
 		elseif soniaencourage > 0 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 50:
 			npc_rel['A25'] -= 10
@@ -770,12 +770,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'followsonia':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/soniasad.jpg"></center>'
 				if soniahelp > 0:
-					'You put your arm around her shoulder and hug her. "I am so sorry this happened to you, I tired to help. I should have done more."'
-					'She shakes her head. "No you tried to warn me, this is my fault. God I am so stupid, my life is over," she cries as she starts sobbing even harder. You start wiping the cum off her face and out of her hair as best you can as you hold her as she sobs into your shoulder.'
+					'You put your arm around her shoulder and hug her. "I am so sorry this happened to you, I tried to help. I should have done more."'
+					'She shakes her head. "No, you tried to warn me, this is my fault. God I am so stupid, my life is over." she cries as she starts sobbing even harder. You start wiping the cum off her face and out of her hair as best you can while you hold her, sobbing against your shoulder.'
 					'Once you have her face and hair mostly cleaned up and she seems to be slowing down on her sobs, she says, "I should go home."'
 				else
 					'You put your arm around her shoulder and hug her. "I am so sorry this happened to you, I wish I had said or done something to help you."'
-					'She shakes her head. "No you couldn''t have said anything to change my mind, this is my fault. God I am so stupid, my life is over," she cries as she starts sobbing even harder. You start wiping the cum off her face and out of her hair as best you can as you hold her as she sobs into your shoulder.'
+					'She shakes her head. "No you couldn''t have said anything to change my mind, this is my fault. God I am so stupid, my life is over," she cries as she starts sobbing even harder. You start wiping the cum off her face and out of her hair as best you can, holding her while she sobs into your shoulder.'
 					'Once you have her face and hair mostly cleaned up and she seems to be slowing down on her sobs, she says, "I should go home."'
 				end
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'