Text edits from troqu

locations/AndreiHanter

@@ -8,25 +8,26 @@ boyage = (boyage - boyage mod 10000) / 10000
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrew</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
-'Andrew is one of the familiar hunters. He <<boyage>> years. He is divorced and lives in Gadyukino one.'
-if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him had a bad relationship, he seems to hold on you some offense.'
+'Andrew is the leader of a group of hunters. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadyukino.'
+if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 0 and hantersAndreiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and hantersAndreiQw < 15:'You have friendly relations with him.'
-if hantersAndreiQw >= 15 and hantersAndreiQw < 25:'It looks like you simpatiziruet.'
+if hantersAndreiQw >= 15 and hantersAndreiQw < 25:'You''re good friends.'
 if hantersAndreiQw > 25 :'You love him.'
-if hantersAndreiLove = 1:'You two love each other.'
+if hantersAndreiLove = 1:'You love each other.'
 gs 'stat'
 
 act 'Chat':
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if hantersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrew, listening to interesting stories from his life, and telling your.'
-	if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You are talking with Andrew. He frowns and behaves not very friendly, but still supports the conversation.'
 	minut += 60
 	if hantersAndreiQw < 10:hantersAndreiQw += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Further':gt $loc, $metka
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
+	if hantersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrew, learning interesting tidbits about hunting.'
+	if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You talk to Andrew. He makes it clear he''d rather not talk to you, but takes part in the conversation.'
+
+	act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
@@ -34,12 +35,12 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 		act 'Flirt':
 			*clr & cla
 			if hantersAndreiQw <= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersAndreiQw += 1
-			if hantersIgorQw >= 10   and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersIgorQw -= 1
+			if hantersIgorQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersIgorQw -= 1
 			if hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersSergeiQw -= 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You need is flirting with Andrew. He is glad of your company, and once you notice it wandering a clear view.'
+			'You flirt with Andrew. He doesn''t say so aloud but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out unconciously.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -49,7 +50,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Andrew and flirting with him. Suddenly he nears his face to you and bites into your lips with a passionate, long kiss...'
+				'You smile sweetly at Andrew while you flirt and are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -61,21 +62,21 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					pcs_mood = 100
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your lips touch, you heart stops and breathing. <<$boydesc>> passionately kisses you and you answer him, clinging harder to his lips.'
+                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
+                    'Your lips touch and your heart skips a beat. Andrew takes control and continues agressively, you find yourself responding to his whims.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					if pcs_horny >= 40:
-						act'Further':
-							*clr & cla
-							minut += 5
-							gs 'stat'
 
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. Seeing that you don`t mind <<$boydesc>> gently took you by the hand and led him.'
+                    if pcs_horny >= 40:
+                        act'Continue':
+                            *clr & cla
+                            minut += 5
+                            gs 'stat'
 
+                            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrew whispered, when your lips finally parted. You nod eagerly and Andrew gently took you by the hand and led you to his bed.'
 							act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Andrei'
 						end
 					else
@@ -85,57 +86,57 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- It was cool, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - said to you <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted.'
-
-							act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
-						end
-					end
-				end
-				act 'To remove the face':
-					*clr & cla
-					minut += 5
-					hanterslut += 1
-					hantersAndreiQw -= 50
-					gs 'stat'
-
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					' - No, <<$boydesc>>, don`t need this, you said, and trying not to look at Andrew gone.'
-
-					act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-			else
-				act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-		end
-	else
-		act 'Spend time together':
-			*clr & cla
-			hantersAndreiQw += 1
-			if hantersIgorLove > 0 or hantersSergeiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
-			if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersSergeiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
-			pcs_mood = 100
-			gs 'stat'
-
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend with Andrew time together softly cooing kisses and hugs. He is glad of your company, you can`t help but notice its full of happiness look, and it makes you want to sing and fly.'
+							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrew says when your lips finally parted. "For now though, let''s get back."'
+
+                            act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
+                        end
+                    end
+                end
+                act 'Push away':
+                    *clr & cla
+                    minut += 5
+                    hanterslut += 1
+                    hantersAndreiQw -= 50
+                    gs 'stat'
+
+                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+                    '"Sorry, Andrew, I can''t right now", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+
+                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                end
+            else
+                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            end
+        end
+    else
+        act 'Spend time together':
+            *clr & cla
+            hantersAndreiQw += 1
+            if hantersIgorLove > 0 or hantersSergeiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
+            if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersSergeiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
+            pcs_mood = 100
+            gs 'stat'
+
+            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
+            'You spend with Andrew time together. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is glad of your company, you see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-	end
+            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+        end
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
-	act 'Stick':
-		*clr & cla
-		hantersAndreiQw += 1
-		hantersAndreisex += rand(6,24)
-		gs 'stat'
+    act 'Have sex':
+	    *clr & cla
+        hantersAndreiQw += 1
+        hantersAndreisex += rand(6,24)
+	    gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You absolutely insolently wink Andrei, languid sigh, swiping a tongue across the lips and Igor, all knowing, takes you by the hand and leads.'
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
+	    'You catch Andrew''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leave no doubt what you want. He nods, places an arm around your shoulders, and leads you inside.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -144,25 +145,24 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
 	end
 end
 
-!! I replaced the partial condition "and temp = 1" with "and rand(1,5) = 1" because temp was not initialized in the file and only in the IgorHunter was temp = rand(1,5) in the similar situation
-if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and rand(1,5) = 1 and hantersAndreisex = 0:
+if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp = 1 and hantersAndreisex = 0:
 	*clr & cla
-	hantersAndreisex += rand(6,24)
+    hantersAndreisex += rand(6,24)
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approached Andrew to spend time together, but he suddenly stared at your lips with a passionate kiss and without a word pulled you with him..'
+	'As soon as you walked up to Andrew he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you along.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'To go with Andrew':
-		*clr & cla
-		hantersAndreiQw += 1
+	act 'Go with Andrew':
+	    *clr & cla
+	    hantersAndreiQw += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go with Andrew holding hands, knowing that where he leads you. And you really don`t even mind.'
+		'You go with Andrew, his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don`t mind.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -170,44 +170,44 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and rand(
 		act 'Further':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Andrei'
 	end
 	act 'Refuse':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersAndreiQw -= 1
+	    *clr & cla
+	    minut += 5
+	    hantersAndreiQw -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		' - No, <<$boydesc>>, not now, you said, and trying not to look at it left.'
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+        '"No, Andrew, not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersAndreiLove > 0:
-	act 'Part with a guy':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersAndreiLove = 0
-		hantersAndreiQw -= 100
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-		' - <<$boydesc>>, I decided that our relationship had no future, and we must part, you said, and trying not to look at Andrew, went.'
-
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+    act 'Break up':
+	    *clr & cla
+        minut += 5
+        hantersAndreiLove = 0
+        hantersAndreiQw -= 100
+	    gs 'stat'
+
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
+	    '"Andrew, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you said. You leave while trying not to look at him.'
+
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
 
 if hantersAndreiQw < 10 and hantersAndreiLove > 0:
 	*clr & cla
-	minut += 5
-	hantersAndreiLove = 0
-	hantersAndreiQw -= 10
+    minut += 5
+    hantersAndreiLove = 0
+    hantersAndreiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Andrew, but he is ahead of you, not allowing to tell you to say nislova.'
-	' - <<$pcs_nickname>>, between us nothing, so we`d better leave, " he said firmly and walked away.'
-	' - Well , maybe it`s for the best, " you thought, going in the other direction.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Andrew, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he said firmly and walked away.'
+	'"Well , maybe it`s for the best," you thought, going in the other direction.'
 
 	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
 end

locations/IgorHanter

@@ -20,138 +20,138 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Igor Anisimov</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/igorhanter.jpg"></center>'
-'Igor is one of the familiar hunters, he comes to visit Andrew hunt. He <<boyage>> years. He is not married and lives in the Center..'
-if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You and him had a bad relationship, he seems to hold on you some offense.'
+'Igor is a hunter along with the Sergey and Andrew and is here visiting Andrew. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is not married and lives in the City Center..'
+if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersIgorQw >= 0 and hantersIgorQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersIgorQw >= 10 and hantersIgorQw < 20:'You have friendly relations with him.'
-if hantersIgorQw >= 20 and hantersIgorQw < 25:'It looks like you simpatiziruet.'
-if hantersIgorQw >= 25 and hantersIgorQw < 30:'It looks like he`s in love with you.'
-if hantersIgorQw >= 30 and hantersIgorQw <= 35:'It looks like he you love him.'
+if hantersIgorQw >= 20 and hantersIgorQw < 25:'You''re good friends.'
+if hantersIgorQw >= 25 and hantersIgorQw < 30:'It seems he has a crush on you.'
+if hantersIgorQw >= 30 and hantersIgorQw <= 35:'You have a mutual crush on each other.'
 if hantersIgorQw > 35 :'You love him.'
-if hantersIgorLove = 1:'You two love each other.'
+if hantersIgorLove = 1:'You two have fallen in love.'
 if hantersIgorLove = 2:'<<$boydesc>> is your boyfriend.'
 if hantersIgorLove = 3:'<<$boydesc>> is your husband.'
 
 act 'Chat':
-	*clr & cla
-	minut += 60
-	if hantersIgorQw < 10:hantersIgorQw += 1
-	gs 'stat'
+    *clr & cla
+    minut += 60
+    if hantersIgorQw < 10:hantersIgorQw += 1
+    gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if hantersIgorQw >= 0:'You have a chat with Igor, listening to interesting stories from his life, and telling your.'
-	if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You talk to Igor. He frowns and behaves not very friendly, but still supports the conversation.'
+    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
+    if hantersIgorQw >= 0:'You have a chat with Igor, swapping to stories about life and love.'
+    if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You talk to Igor. He wears his heart on his sleeve, so you can tell he doesn''t like you.'
 
-	act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
+    act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if hantersIgorQw >= 10:
-	if hantersIgorLove = 0:
-		act 'Flirt':
-			*clr & cla
-			if hantersIgorQw <= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersIgorQw += 1
-			if hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersAndreiQw -= 1
-			if hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersSergeiQw -= 1
-			gs 'stat'
+    if hantersIgorLove = 0:
+        act 'Flirt':
+            *clr & cla
+            if hantersIgorQw <= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersIgorQw += 1
+            if hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersAndreiQw -= 1
+            if hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and hantersKnowSlut = 0:hantersSergeiQw -= 1
+            gs 'stat'
 
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spread with Igor playful attitudes and vengeance flirting. He is glad of your company, and once you notice it wandering a clear view.'
+            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
+            'You spend time with Igor, flirting all the while. He flirts back, and blushes when you catch him checking you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA = 1 and pcs_apprnc >= 60:
-				*clr & cla
-				gs 'stat'
+            if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA = 1 and pcs_apprnc >= 60:
+                *clr & cla
+                gs 'stat'
 
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Igor and flirt with him. Suddenly Igor brings to you his face, you can feel his breath on my skin, smell the scent of his body, which delicate notes wafted to you. Slowly, afraid to startle you, Igor touches your cheek and you with a sinking heart, watching as his lips close to your...'
+                '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
+                'You smile sweetly at Igor. Suddenly Igor takes a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Answer kiss':
-					*clr & cla
-					pcs_mood = 100
-					hantersIgorLove = 1
-					hantersIgorQw += 1
-					gs 'stat'
+                act 'Answer kiss':
+                    *clr & cla
+                    pcs_mood = 100
+                    hantersIgorLove = 1
+                    hantersIgorQw += 1
+                    gs 'stat'
 
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your lips touch, you heart stops and breathing. Igor gently kisses you and you answer him, clinging harder to his lips.'
+                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
+                    'You move closer to him and begin kissing him again. Igor gently kisses you back.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					if pcs_horny >= 40:
-						act'Further':
-							*clr & cla
-							minut += 5
-							gs 'stat'
+                    if pcs_horny >= 40:
+                        act'Continue':
+                            *clr & cla
+                            minut += 5
+                            gs 'stat'
 
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. Seeing that you don`t mind, Igor gently took you by the hand and led him.'
+                            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Do you want to..?" Igor asked in a whisper, when your lips finally parted. "Yes" you say just as quietly and Igor gently took you by the hand and led inside.'
 
 							act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
-						end
-					else
-						act'Further':
-							*clr & cla
-							minut += 5
-							gs 'stat'
-
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- It was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. You melt in his hands, seeing his happy look and a smile.'
-
-							act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
-						end
-					end
-				end
-				act 'To remove the face':
-					*clr & cla
-					minut += 5
-					hantersIgorQw -= 50
-					gs 'stat'
-
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					' - No, <<$boydesc>>, don`t need this, you said, and trying not to look at rasteryalsya guy left.'
-
-					act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-			else
-				act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-		end
-	else
-		act 'Spend time together':
-			*clr & cla
-			pcs_mood = 100
-			hantersIgorQw += 1
-			if hantersSergeiLove > 0 or hantersAndreiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
-			if hantersSergeiLove = 0 and hantersAndreiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
-			if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA += 1
-			gs 'stat'
-
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You need with Igor along time softly cooing kisses and hugs. He is glad of your company, you can`t help but notice its full of happiness look, and it makes you want to sing and fly.'
+                        end
+                    else
+                        act'Continue':
+                            *clr & cla
+                            minut += 5
+                            gs 'stat'
+
+                            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                            '"It was everything I hoped for, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Igor whispered, when your lips finally parted. You melt in his hands and spend a few minutes cuddling together.'
+
+                            act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
+                        end
+                    end
+                end
+                act 'To remove the face':
+                    *clr & cla
+                    minut += 5
+                    hantersIgorQw -= 50
+                    gs 'stat'
+
+                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+                    '"No, Igor, this isn''t right", you say, and try not to look at his sorrowful face as he leaves.'
+
+                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                end
+            else
+                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            end
+        end
+    else
+        act 'Spend time together':
+            *clr & cla
+            pcs_mood = 100
+            hantersIgorQw += 1
+            if hantersSergeiLove > 0 or hantersAndreiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
+            if hantersSergeiLove = 0 and hantersAndreiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
+            if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA += 1
+            gs 'stat'
+
+            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
+            'You cuddle up with Igor, and trade gentle kisses with him. He adores you and wishes you were always with him and you wish the same.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-	end
+            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+        end
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersIgorLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
-	act 'Stick':
-		*clr & cla
-		hantersIgorQw += 1
-		hantersIgorsex += rand(12,36)
-		gs 'stat'
+    act 'Have sex':
+	    *clr & cla
+        hantersIgorQw += 1
+        hantersIgorsex += rand(12,36)
+	    gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You absolutely insolently wink Igor, languid sigh, swiping a tongue across the lips and Igor, all knowing, takes you by the hand and leads.'
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
+	    'You wink seductively at Igor, and look in the direction of his bed. Igor gives you an excited hug before leading the way.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -167,126 +167,128 @@ if hantersIgorLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersIgorQw >= 10 and rand(1,5)
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walked up to Igor to spend time together, but he suddenly stared at your lips with a passionate kiss and whispered:'
-	'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you.'
+	'You walked up to Igor to spend time together, but he suddenly kisses and whispered,'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s make love."'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Agree':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersIgorQw += 1
+	    *clr & cla
+	    minut += 5
+	    hantersIgorQw += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Smiling you wink Igor. He, all knowing, takes you by the hand and leads.'
+		'Smiling you wink Igor. He gets a childlike grin on his face and takes leads you by the hand.'
 		act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
-	end
+    end
 	act 'Decline':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersIgorQw -= 1
+	    *clr & cla
+	    minut += 5
+	    hantersIgorQw -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		' - No, <<$boydesc>>, not now, you said, and trying not to look at rasteryalsya guy left.'
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+        '"I can''t right now, Igor ," you say'
+		'You see a look of regret on his face as you leave'
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersIgorLove > 0:
-	act 'Part with a guy':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersIgorLove = 0
-		if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA = 0
-		hantersIgorQw -= 100
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-		' - <<$boydesc>>, I decided that our relationship had no future, and we must part, you said, and trying not to look at rasteryalsya guy left.'
-
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+    act 'Part with a guy':
+	    *clr & cla
+        minut += 5
+        hantersIgorLove = 0
+        if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA = 0
+        hantersIgorQw -= 100
+	    gs 'stat'
+
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
+	    '"We''re through Igor. I don''t think that this relationship was going where either of us wanted," you say. Igor looks completely blindsided but turns and leaves without saying a word.'
+
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
 
 if hantersIgorQw < 10 and hantersIgorLove > 0:
 	*clr & cla
-	minut += 5
-	hantersIgorLove = 0
-	if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA = 0
-	hantersIgorQw -= 10
+    minut += 5
+    hantersIgorLove = 0
+    if hantersIgorLove = 2:bfA = 0
+    hantersIgorQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Igor, but he is ahead of you, not allowing to tell you to say nislova.'
-	' - <<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship had no future, and we need to leave, " he said, and trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walked away.'
-	' - Well , maybe it`s for the best, " you thought, going in the other direction.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Igor, but he cuts you off with an angry look.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our love wasn''t real and we need to break up," he says. As you try to find words to answer he turns and resolutely walks away.'
+	'"This may well be for the best," you thought, going in the other direction.'
 
 	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 
 if hantersIgorLove < 2 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA < 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20 and pcs_apprnc >= 60:
-	*clr & cla
-	minut += 1
-	gs 'stat'
+    *clr & cla
+    minut += 1
+    gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly <<$boydesc>> brought to you by your face, you felt his breath on my skin, faint aroma of his body, which delicate notes wafted to you. Slowly, afraid to startle you, Igor touched your fingers to your cheek and you with a sinking heart I felt his lips on my lips...'
+    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
+    'Suddenly Igor takes a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 !! this part is not included properly into boyfriend system yet - rachels
 !! it could be simply replaced with gs 'boyfrend','start' but we need to check if a slot is empty
 !! at the moment I disable all the actions
-	act 'Answer kiss':
-		*clr & cla
-		!stopboy = 0
-!!		$lover[lover_number] = $boy
-!!		$loverbody[lover_number] = $boybody
-!!		$loverbod[lover_number] = $boybod
-!!		$loverface[lover_number] = $boyface
-!!		loverdick[lover_number] = dick
-!!		loversilaVag[lover_number] = silaVag
-!!		loverfinance[lover_number] = finance
-!!		vneshlover[lover_number] = vneshBoy
-!!		$loverClo[lover_number] = $boyClo
-!!		figurlover[lover_number] = figurBoy
-!!		titlover[lover_number] = titBoy
-!!		hairlover[lover_number] = hairBoy
-!!		haraklover[lover_number] = harakBoy
-!!		boyage[lover_number] = boyage
-!!		loverday[lover_number] = day
-!!		bfA = 1
-!!		day[lover_number] = 0
-!!		boyonce[lover_number] = 0
-!!		loverizvrat[lover_number] = izvrat
-!!		giftDay[lover_number] = 0
-!!		giftNum[lover_number] = 0
-!!		loverlove[lover_number] = 0
-!!		boypicA = boypicnumber
-		hantersIgorLove = 2
-		pcs_mood = 100
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your lips touch, you heart stops and breathing. <<$boydesc>> gently kisses you and you answer him, clinging harder to his lips.'
-		'<center><b>Be aware! Igor is not in the Boyfriend system yet!</b></center>'
+    act 'Answer kiss':
+        *clr & cla
+	    !stopboy = 0
+!!	    $lover[lover_number] = $boy
+!!	    $loverbody[lover_number] = $boybody
+!!	    $loverbod[lover_number] = $boybod
+!!	    $loverface[lover_number] = $boyface
+!!	    loverdick[lover_number] = dick
+!!	    loversilaVag[lover_number] = silaVag
+!!	    loverfinance[lover_number] = finance
+!!	    vneshlover[lover_number] = vneshBoy
+!!	    $loverClo[lover_number] = $boyClo
+!!	    figurlover[lover_number] = figurBoy
+!!	    titlover[lover_number] = titBoy
+!!	    hairlover[lover_number] = hairBoy
+!!	    haraklover[lover_number] = harakBoy
+!!	    boyage[lover_number] = boyage
+!!	    loverday[lover_number] = day
+!!	    bfA = 1
+!!	    day[lover_number] = 0
+!!	    boyonce[lover_number] = 0
+!!	    loverizvrat[lover_number] = izvrat
+!!	    giftDay[lover_number] = 0
+!!	    giftNum[lover_number] = 0
+!!	    loverlove[lover_number] = 0
+!!	    boypicA = boypicnumber
+	    hantersIgorLove = 2
+        pcs_mood = 100
+        gs 'stat'
+
+        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
+        'You move closer to him and begin kissing him again. Igor gently kisses you back.'
+        '<center><b>Be aware! Igor is not in the Boyfriend system yet!</b></center>'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		if pcs_horny >= 40:
-			act'Further':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
+        if pcs_horny >= 40:
+            act'Further':
+                *clr & cla
+                minut += 5
+                gs 'stat'
+
+                '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Do you want to..?" Igor asked in a whisper, when your lips finally parted. "Yes" you say just as quietly and Igor gently took you by the hand and led inside.'
 
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-				'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. Seeing that you don`t mind, Igor gently took you by the hand and led him.'
 
 				act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
 			end
@@ -295,25 +297,24 @@ if hantersIgorLove < 2 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA <
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-				'- It was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. You melt in his hands, seeing his happy look and a smile.'
-
-				act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-		end
-	end
-	act 'To remove the face':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersIgorQw -= 50
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		' - No, <<$boydesc>>, don`t need this, you said, and trying not to look at rasteryalsya guy left.'
-
-		act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+                '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                '"It was everything I hoped for, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Igor whispered, when your lips finally parted. You melt in his hands and spend a few minutes cuddling together.'
+
+                act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
+            end
+        end
+    end
+    act 'To remove the face':
+        *clr & cla
+        minut += 5
+        hantersIgorQw -= 50
+        gs 'stat'
+
+        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+        '"No, Igor, this isn''t right", you say, and try not to look at his sorrowful face as he leaves.'
+
+        act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 --- IgorHanter ---------------------------------

locations/SergeiHanter

@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/sergeihanter.jpg"></center>'
 
-'Sergey is a friend of Andrew and Igor, and one of the familiar hunters. He <<boyage>> years. He is married and lives in the Center..'
-if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You and him had a bad relationship, he seems to hold on you some offense.'
+'Sergey is a friend of Andrew and Igor, and a member of the hunter party. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is married and lives in the City Center..'
+if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 0 and hantersSergeiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and hantersSergeiQw < 20:'You have friendly relations with him.'
-if hantersSergeiQw >= 20 and hantersSergeiQw < 25:'It looks like you simpatiziruet.'
+if hantersSergeiQw >= 20 and hantersSergeiQw < 25:'You''re good friends.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 25 and hantersSergeiQw < 30:'It looks like he`s in love with you.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 30 and hantersSergeiQw <= 35:'It looks like he you love him.'
-if hantersSergeiQw > 35 :'You love him.'
+if hantersSergeiQw > 35 :'You have an unrequited love for him.'
 if hantersSergeiLove = 1:'You two love each other.'
 
 act 'Chat':
@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ act 'Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if hantersIgorQw >= 0:'You have chatted with Sergei, listening to interesting stories from his life, and telling your.'
-	if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You talk to Igor. He frowns and behaves not very friendly, but still supports the conversation.'
+    if hantersSergeiQw >= 0:'You spend some time chatting with Sergey, listening to interesting stories from his life and telling some stories of your own.'
+    if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You talk with Sergey. He seems uncomfortable, but doesn''t force you away.'
 
-	act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
+    act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spread with Sergei playful attitudes and vengeance flirting. He is glad of your company, and once you notice it wandering a clear view.'
+            'You flirt playfully with Sergey. He is glad for your company, though he can'' stop himself from letting his eyes wander.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Sergey and flirt with him. Suddenly he takes your face in his hands and brings his lips to your lips.'
+                'Suddenly he cups your chin in his hand and gives you a kiss full of passion.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your lips touch, you heart stops and breathing. <<$boydesc>> kisses you and you answer him, clinging harder to his lips.'
+					'You''ve been waiting for this and respond just as passionately. Sergey keeps kissing you and you are right ther with him, answering every kiss.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -77,67 +77,67 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you, - whispered in your ear <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. Seeing that you don`t mind <<$boydesc>> gently took you by the hand and led him.'
-
-							act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Sergei'
-						end
-					else
-						act'Further':
-							*clr & cla
-							minut += 5
-							gs 'stat'
-
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'- It was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, - told you <<$boydesc>>, when your lips finally parted. You are happy seeing his happy look and a smile.'
-
-							act'Further':gt $loc, $metka
-						end
-					end
-				end
-				act 'To remove the face':
-					*clr & cla
-					minut += 5
-					hantersSergeiQw -= 50
-					gs 'stat'
-
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					' - No, <<$boydesc>>, don`t need this, you said, and trying not to look at the guy left.'
-
-					act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-			else
-				act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-		end
-	else
-		act 'Spend time together':
-			*clr & cla
-			hantersSergeiQw += 1
-			if hantersIgorLove > 0 or hantersAndreiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
-			if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersAndreiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
-			pcs_mood = 100
-			gs 'stat'
-
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend with Sergey time together, kisses and hugs. He is glad of your company, you can`t help but notice his happy look, and it makes you very very glad.'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to make love to you," he says, when he finally pulls back. You answer Sergey with a kiss every bit as passionate as the one that started this. You''re making your way back towards his room as you do so.'
+
+                            act 'Go':gt'HanterLoveSex'
+                        end
+                    else
+                        act'Continue':
+                            *clr & cla
+                            minut += 5
+                            gs 'stat'
+
+                            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
+                            '"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sergey said, when your lips finally parted. You see a look that clearly shows he wishes for more and smile.'
+
+                            act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
+                        end
+                    end
+                end
+                act 'Move away':
+                    *clr & cla
+                    minut += 5
+                    hantersSergeiQw -= 50
+                    gs 'stat'
+
+                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+                    '"Sorry, Sergey, but this isn''t what I wanted", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+
+                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                end
+            else
+                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            end
+        end
+    else
+        act 'Spend time together':
+            *clr & cla
+            hantersSergeiQw += 1
+            if hantersIgorLove > 0 or hantersAndreiLove > 0:hanterslut += 1
+            if hantersIgorLove = 0 and hantersAndreiLove = 0:hanterslut -= 1
+            pcs_mood = 100
+            gs 'stat'
+
+            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
+            'You and Sergey spend time together, spooning the whole while. You can almost feel how much he needed to spend time with you. You notice the happy look on his face, feeling very satisfied you put it there.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 120
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-	end
+            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+        end
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
-	act 'Stick':
-		*clr & cla
-		hantersSergeiQw += 1
-		hantersSergeisex += rand(9,30)
-		gs 'stat'
+    act 'Have sex':
+	    *clr & cla
+        hantersSergeiQw += 1
+        hantersSergeisex += rand(9,30)
+	    gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You absolutely insolently wink Sergei, languid sigh, swiping a tongue across the lips and <<$boydesc>>, all knowing, takes you by the hand and leads.'
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
+	    'You pull Sergey off to the side and kiss him. You guide his hands to your sopping, needy snatch so there''s no doubt what you want. Sergey doesn''t hesitate and leads you to his bed, never removing his hand.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -153,56 +153,56 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and rand(
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went to Sergei to spend time together, but instead he passionately bites into your lips.'
-	'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you, " he whispered after the kiss.'
+	'You went to Sergey to spend time together, but instead he passionately bites into your lips.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you," he whispers after the kiss.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Agree':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersSergeiQw += 1
+	    *clr & cla
+	    minut += 5
+	    hantersSergeiQw += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Smiling you wink Sergei. He, all knowing, takes you by the hand and leads.'
 		act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Sergei'
 	end
+		'Smiling, you bite softly on Sergey''s neck. He rushes and pulls you along with him.'
 	act 'Decline':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersSergeiQw -= 1
+	    *clr & cla
+	    minut += 5
+	    hantersSergeiQw -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		' - No, <<$boydesc>>, not now, you said, and trying not to look at the guy left.'
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+        '"No, Sergey, not now, but soon." You give him a small look of regret as you leave.'
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 if hantersSergeiLove > 0:
-	act 'Part with a guy':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 5
-		hantersSergeiLove = 0
-		hantersSergeiQw -= 100
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-		' - <<$boydesc>>, I decided that our relationship had no future, and we must part, you said, and trying not to look at rasteryalsya guy left.'
-
-		act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
+    act 'Part with a guy':
+	    *clr & cla
+        minut += 5
+        hantersSergeiLove = 0
+        hantersSergeiQw -= 100
+	    gs 'stat'
+
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
+	    '"Sergey the passion is gone", you say, "I think it''s time we parted." You leave without looking back.'
+
+	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+    end
 end
 
 act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
 
 if hantersSergeiQw < 10 and hantersSergeiLove > 0:
 	*clr & cla
-	minut += 5
-	hantersSergeiLove = 0
-	hantersSergeiQw -= 10
+    minut += 5
+    hantersSergeiLove = 0
+    hantersSergeiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but he beat you, not having to tell you to say nislova.'
@@ -214,14 +214,14 @@ end
 
 if hantersSergeiQw > 50 and hantersSergeiLove > 0:
 	*clr & cla
-	minut += 5
-	hantersSergeiLove = 0
-	hantersSergeiQw -= 50
+    minut += 5
+    hantersSergeiLove = 0
+    hantersSergeiQw -= 50
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but he beat you, not having to tell you to say nislova.'
-	' - <<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship had no future. You`re a good girl, but I really appreciate my family, to risk continuing the relationship with you, " he said, and trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walked away.'
-	' - Well, how is it? Although it may be better thought upset you, going the other way.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Sergey, but before you say anything he speaks instead.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship has no future. You`re passion is unmatched, but I really love my family. I can''t risk that for you, " he says. He turns and walks away without saying another word, nor giving you time to say anything.'
+	'''Well, that''s how you feel is it?'' you thought as you stand there stunned. ''Although this is probably for the best.'' you finaly conclude before going the other way.'
 
 	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
 end