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[Changed] The suspicious character now works in a copy shop in the Red Light District.

Alaratt 3 年之前
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共有 4 个文件被更改,包括 15 次插入15 次删除
  1. 1 1
      locations/anushapt.qsrc
  2. 2 2
      locations/city_industrial.qsrc
  3. 10 10
      locations/etoexhib.qsrc
  4. 2 2
      locations/foto.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 					'A thought then occurs to you. You''re under-aged and so is Anushka. It''s not legal to model in the nude when you''re under 18. "Wait a second, how did you get past the age check?"'
-					'She laughs a bit. "Sometimes I forget that not everyone has a fake passport. It is pretty easy to pick one up though." She tells you about a guy that sells fake passports and that the most likely place to get a hold of him is near the train station. "Once you have one, you won''t have any problems signing up as a model."'
+					'She laughs a bit. "Sometimes I forget that not everyone has a fake passport. It is pretty easy to pick one up though." She tells you about a copy shop in the Red Light District that sells fake passports. "Once you have one, you won''t have any problems signing up as a model."'
 					act 'Thanks':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 				end
 			end

+ 2 - 2
locations/city_industrial.qsrc

@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 		'A shop that sells sex toys. It is currently closed and will open at 11:00.'
 	end
 	if bordel > 0 and func('bordel', 'is_open'):'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
-	if hour < 2 or hour >= 10: 
-		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'',''pos54''">suspicious character</a>.'
+	if hour >= 10: 
+		'You see a small <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'',''pos54''">copy shop</a> tucked away between two larger buildings.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Return to the Industrial Region (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial'

+ 10 - 10
locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -1677,16 +1677,16 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos54':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/spy.jpg"></center>'
-	'A suspicious man. He constantly looks around. Occasionally, some people approach him and leave with papers. After looking carefully, you understand: he sells gas station checks and forged documents. It''s possible you could find something useful.'
+	'You enter the run-down looking copy shop and look around. Scattered across the room are small tables with various dusty looking copy machines that don''t strike you as being very reliable. Watching you from behind a counter is a bored looking man with greasy hair and a sleazy look.'
 
 	if fakepassport = 2:
 		!only notify player 1 time after events triggered
 		fakepassport = 0
-		'He tells you "A passport with a fake age will cost you 30,000 <b>₽</b>"'
+		'He looks at you hard before saying in a quiet voice, "A passport with a fake age will cost you 30,000 <b>₽</b>"'
 	end
 
 	if func('uniutil', 'fake_diploma', 'aware_needed'):
@@ -1695,20 +1695,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos54':
 		'He tells you "A diploma for a bachelor''s degree will cost you 100,000 <b>₽</b>"'
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial_train', 'outside'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 
 	if age < 18 and fakepassport ! 1:
 		if money => 30000:
 			act 'Buy fake passport (30,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 				*clr & cla
-				minut += 10
+				minut += 60
 				money -= 30000
 				fakepassport = 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/spy.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a fake passport, which claims you are an adult.'
+				'He tells you to come in the back and takes a quick photo of your face, then tells you to wait out out front until he''s done. About an hour goes by before he steps back out and hands you the passport, which shows your face but has an older age printed out on it.'
 
-				act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial_train', 'outside'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Buy fake passport (<font color="red">30,000 <b>₽</b></font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough money to buy the fake passport.</font>'
@@ -1719,14 +1719,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos54':
 		if money => 100000:
 			act 'Buy fake diploma (100,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 				*clr & cla
-				minut += 10
+				minut += 60
 				money -= 100000
 				gs 'uniutil', 'fake_diploma', 'set_obtained'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/spy.jpg"></center>'
 				'You bought a fake diploma.'
 
-				act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial_train', 'outside'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Buy fake diploma (<font color="red">100,000 <b>₽</b></font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough money to buy the fake diploma.</font>'
@@ -1757,7 +1757,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos90':
 			'"Do not get me wrong, I''ll soon be 30 and unmarried but can''t meet anyone. Most men in our backwoods town are not interesting."'
 			'"I see, do you think you can mail me your most beautiful pictures, a bit of erotica would be good as well. I will find you a good husband on a dating site."'
 			'"Erotica! Do you think that is necessary?"'
-			'"It is necessary. Men at the sight of a beautiful female body lose their heads."'
+			'"It is necessary. Men lose their heads at the sight of a beautiful female body lose their heads."'
 			'"Ok, I''ll try to take a picture as erotic as possible."'
 
 			act 'Finish':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos24'

+ 2 - 2
locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 						'"Okay, listen. I''m not really 18. I''m <<age>> and I don''t have a passport that says otherwise, but I still want to work here. Isn''t there some way we can work this out?"'
 						'"Hmmm..." He rubs his chin thoughtfully, smiling while he looks you up and down. Just the way he stares gives you the impression that he''s undressing you with his eyes, remembering what you look like naked. "Alright. I''m not supposed to do this but I like your tits and I wouldn''t mind seeing more of that around here."'
 						'<i>He was thinking about me naked! I knew it!</i>'
-						'"There''s a man who hangs around at the train station in the industrial area. Bald head, sunglasses, real sketchy. If you can come up with 30.000 cash, he can sell you a fake passport that says you''re 18. If you can do that, I can at least have some deniability and you can work here. Deal?"'
+						'"There''s a small copy shop in the Red Light District. If you can come up with 30.000 cash, the guy there can sell you a fake passport that says you''re 18. If you can do that, I can at least have some deniability and you can work here. Deal?"'
 						'"Deal."'
 						'"Good. Now don''t come back without that passport. I don''t like having my time wasted."'
 						'He shoos you away and you leave the studio, getting ready for the next step.'
@@ -802,7 +802,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hmmm..." He rubs his chin thoughtfully while continuing to look at your body before saying, "Alright, listen, I''m not supposed to do this but you have an exceptional body so I''m going to make an exception."'
-				'He leans in close and whispers into your ear, "There''s a man who hangs around at the train station in the industrial area. If you can come up with 30.000 cash, he can sell you a fake passport that says you''re 18. If you can do that, I can at least have some deniability and you can work here. Sound good?"'
+				'He leans in close and whispers into your ear, "There''s a small copy shop in the Red Light District. If you can come up with 30.000 cash, the guy there can sell you a fake passport that says you''re 18. If you can do that, I can at least have some deniability and you can work here. Sound good?"'
 				'You smile and sigh with relief. "Thanks. I''ll do just that," you say before getting dressed and leaving.'
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'underwear', 'wear'