Toned Albina down so she isn't so violent.

locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -554,11 +554,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 		if AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 1:
 			AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2
 			npc_rel['A23'] = 100
-			'Albina smiles gratefully at you. "I just wanted to thank you again <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s like they say, ''a friend in need is a friend indeed'' or something stupid like that. I''m letting you know that I''m disbanding the Starlets as well. Too many bad memories you know?" You tell her you understand and she embraces you in a tight hug before composing herself, staring down anyone looking at her with a cold glare.'
+			'Albina smiles gratefully at you. "I just wanted to thank you again <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s like they say, ''a friend in need is a friend indeed'' or something stupid like that. I''m letting you know that I''m disbanding the Starlets as well. Too many bad memories you know?"' 
+			'You tell her you understand and she embraces you in a tight hug before composing herself, staring down anyone looking at her with a cold glare.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 			npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 			if AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2:
-				'You have a pleasant conversation with Albina where you both talk about almost anything, but you are careful not to bring up the Starlets or anything else that might upset her. The conversation ends with Albina embracing you in a tight and extended hug.'
+				'You have a pleasant conversation with Albina where you both talk about almost anything, but you''re careful not to bring up her father, the Starlets or anything else that might upset her. The conversation ends with Albina embracing you in a tight and extended hug.'
 			elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 				'Albina has a somewhat friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off.'
 			else
@@ -567,21 +568,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 			npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 			if grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
-				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask her with a smile.'
+				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask with a smile.'
 				'Albina just rolls her eyes. "Like you actually care." she says before shoving you aside and walking away. You swear you hear her calling you a ''fake bitch'' under her breath.'
 			else
-				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask her with a smile.'
-				'"Is this some kind of fucking joke?" she growls before she grabs you, shoves you against one of the lockers and glares at you. "Who put you up to this!?" she snarls. The rest of the group watch, stunned by her outburst.'
-				'"No... Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.'
+				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask with a smile.'
+				'"Is this some kind of fucking joke?" she snorts. "Why the fuck are you talking to me? I <i>don''t like you</i>, so why don''t you just piss off?" she emphasises with a hard glare.'
+				'"I... I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, and she scowls and scoffs dismissively. You try buttering her up, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before storming off.'
+				'"<i>What''s her problem?</i>" you think to yourself as you compose yourself before going on your way.'
 			end
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 150:
 			'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live like that - just letting guys... use you like that?"'
 			'You are about to speak up, but she shakes her head and walks away. You can''t tell if she was feeling disgusted or disappointed at you. She might even have been both.'
 		else
 			npc_rel['A23'] += 1
-			'Your conversation, if you can call it that, with Albina is shallow and is over after only a minute or two as she excuses herself.'
-			'"You know my... father... cares... a lot..." She trails off before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
-			'She outright refuses to speak about her home life, her father in particular, and more than a few people have been on the receiving end of her wrath when they press her about the subject.'
+			'Your attempt at a conversation with Albina is over after only a few seconds when you accidentally mention her father, which angers her greatly.'
+			'"Fuck you <$pcs_nickname>>! You''re such a fucking bitch!" she screams before forcefully shoving you aside and storming off. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears, but you don''t want to push it and anger her further.' 
+			'You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to her father, and more than a few people have been on the receiving end of her wrath when they press her about the subject. You got off lightly this time.'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -919,7 +921,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'He huffs. "Somebody has been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'"Okay..." you say as you roll your eyes. "What does that have to do with me?"'
 		else
-			'"Are you the one that''s been going around and telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks you.'
+			'"Are you the one that''s been going around and telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
 			'"No... Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
 			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he pushes you.'
 		end
@@ -1001,32 +1003,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vanya':
 	elseif npc_rel['A165'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 		npc_rel['A165'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 2:
-			'"What the hell Vanya!" you angrily stomp towards him...'
-			'"What now?" he looks innocently at you. "I''m getting tired of you accusing me for things I haven''t done..."'
-			'"It must''ve been you! Who else replaces talc powder with itching powder?!" you continue on.'
-			'"No idea. What an amazing... I mean cruel joke though..." he coolly replies.'
+			'"What the hell Vanya!" you yell while angrily stomping towards him.'
+			'"What now?" he replies with an innocent look. "I''m getting tired of you accusing me of things I haven''t done!"'
+			'"It must''ve been you! Who else replaces talc powder with itching powder?!"'
+			'"No idea. What an amazing... I mean cruel joke though..." he replies.'
 		else
-			'"Funny joke you played on me there, dickhead." you angrily push Vanya.'
+			'"Funny joke you played on me there, dickhead." you angrily yell while pushing him.'
 			'"What are you talking about? You''ve gone crazy!" he replies.'
-			'"Listen here, I know it was you!" you start yelling.'
-			'"Oh, yeah! Prove it then!" he yells back. You both stand there in silence and after a while you stomp off while Vanya is grinning from ear to ear.'
+			'"I know it was you!" you yell in response.'
+			'"Oh yeah? Prove it then!" he yells back. You both stand in silence for a few seconds before you stomp off as Vanya grins from ear to ear.'
 		end
     elseif mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] >= 20:
 		npc_rel['A165'] += 1
 		'"Hey Vanya..." you sneakily greet him. "Want to hear a secret?" you ask.'
-		'Vanya''s attention turns totally towards you. "Hell yeah! I love secrets! Especially ones I can use on others as a joke."'
+		'Vanya turns towards you. "Hell yeah! I love secrets! Especially ones I can use against others as a joke."'
 		'"Well this one is special..." you snicker. "I saw you and Vicky having sex in the park..."'
-		'Vanya stops and thinks for a moment and then starts grinning, "That''s the big secret? Well that''s nothing new. Vicky and I love to have sex outdoors." he winks.'
+		'Vanya stops and thinks for a moment before grinning. "That''s the big secret? Well that''s nothing new. Vicky and I love to have sex outdoors." he winks.'
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
 		'"Are you up for a threesome with Vicky and me?" Vanya asks.'
 		'"What?" you ask surprised.'
 		'Vanya breaks out in a mischievous smile. "Yeah, you know. We''ve heard that you''ve become such a big slut, so we wanted to try a threesome."'
 		'"Hmm..." you start to think...'
-		'"Never mind, I was only kidding. Like I would share Vicky with a slut like you."'
+		'"Gross, I was just kidding! Like I would share Vicky with a slut like you."'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A165'] += 1
-		'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Check this out!" Vanya yells out as he throws a crumbled paper ball onto Vitek''s head.'
-		'He in turn quickly turns around and staring, trying to figure out who threw the crumbled paper. "Who was it?!" Vitek yells out. "Tell me who the fuck it was!"'
+		'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Check this out!" Vanya yells out as he throws a crumbled paper ball at Vitek''s head.'
+		'He in turn quickly spins around and glares, trying to figure out who threw the crumbled paper. "Who was it?!" Vitek yells out. "Tell me who the fuck it was!"'
 		'"So easily agitated..." Vanya comments while you burst out in laughter over the stupid face Vitek is making.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1041,11 +1043,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 		npc_rel['A150'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 2:
 			'"Oh hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Erast gently says. "What can I help you with?"'
-			'"Hi Erast! So I saw you skating and needed some pointers..." you ask him.'
-			'"No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll gladly share my secrets with you." he winks and continues on, talking about different skating techniques.'
+			'"Hey Erast! So I saw you skating and needed some pointers..." you ask him.'
+			'"No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll gladly share my secrets with you." he winks before talking about different skating techniques.'
 		else
 			'"Oh hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Erast gently says. "What can I help you with?"'
-			'"Hi Erast! Well, I was thinking about starting to work out and wanted to ask you about some pointers, if you have the time?" you politely ask.'
+			'"Hey Erast! Well, I was thinking about starting to work out and wanted to ask you about some pointers, if you have the time?" you politely ask.'
 			'"Of course <<$pcs_nickname>>." Erast brightens up as he starts asking you about what you want to achieve with your training.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
@@ -1056,11 +1058,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 			'"Sorry, I don''t have any time right now. Later, okay?" he politely replies.'
 		else
 			'"Oh hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Erast gently says. "What can I help you with?"'
-			'"Hi Erast! Well, I was thinking about starting to work out and wanted to ask you about some pointers, if you have the time?" you politely ask.'
+			'"Hey Erast! Well, I was thinking about starting to work out and wanted to ask you about some pointers, if you have the time?" you politely ask.'
 			'"Oh... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> but I don''t have time right now... I got to head to class... Maybe another time..." Erast avoids looking you in the eyes.'
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
-		'"Are the rumors true?" Erast asks you.'
+		'"Are the rumors true?" Erast asks.'
 		'"What rumors?" you ask back.'
 		'"Well..." he looks around, avoiding meeting your eyes. "I heard that you''ve built quite the reputation..."'
 		'"What reputation?! Out with it!!!" You''re getting irritated by him trying to avoid the subject.'
@@ -1070,7 +1072,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 		npc_rel['A150'] += 1
 		'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>... What''s up?" Erast asks.'
 		'"Nothing much just hanging around waiting for the next class to start. You?" you ask.'
-		'"Same thing here..." Erast replies and doesn''t say anything more...'
+		'"Same thing here..." Erast replies, but remains silent until the bell rings and he scurries off.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -1189,14 +1191,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 			'"You really mean that?" you ask as your eyes widen. "You think I''ll fit in with them?"'
 			'Bella nods. "No doubt! You''ll have no issues fitting in. I''ll be seeing you around and we can plan something, no?"'
 		else
-			'"Now that we''ve established that you''re pretty mature and cool, you should come and hang with my friends." Bella says smiling.'
-			'"You really mean that?" your eyes widen, "I can''t believe you asked me!"'
+			'"Now that we''ve established that you''re pretty mature and cool, you should come and hang with my friends." Bella says with a smile.'
+			'"You really mean that?" you reply as your eyes widen.'
 			'Bella nods. "Of course, I don''t joke around. I''ll be seeing you around and we can plan something, no?"'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 		npc_rel['A22'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
-			'"What do you want now <<$pcs_nickname>>? What can you possibly want from me?" Bella rolls her eyes.'
+			'"What do you want now <<$pcs_nickname>>? What can you possibly want from me?" Bella moans as she rolls her eyes.'
 			'"I was thinking about asking yo..." you start.'
 			'Bella begins to mockingly laugh. "Don''t be silly! Like I would give advice to someone younger..."'
 		else
@@ -1227,14 +1229,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'veronika':
 		if grupTipe = 2:
 			'"So... <<$pcs_nickname>>... I was thinking..." Veronika speaks up.'
 			'You stand there confused. "Wait, you''re talking to me?"'
-			'She indifferently nods. "Yes, I was thinking about asking you if you would like to see my skating routine?"'
+			'She nods indifferently. "Yes, I was thinking about asking you if you would like to see my skating routine?"'
 			'You squeal. "Of course I would love to see that! I bet it''s amazing." You give her a hug while she remains stiff as usual.'
 		else
 			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Veronika speaks quietly.'
-			'"Hi Veronika! Glad I ran into you." you cheerfully greet her.'
-			'"Oh?" she surprisingly replies.'
+			'"Hey Veronika! Glad I ran into you." you cheerfully greet her.'
+			'"Oh?" she replies in surprise.'
 			'"Yeah, I just wanted to tell you that I''ll be cheering you on as you compete." you say.'
-			'"Thank you." Veronika politely replies.'
+			'"Oh. Thank you." Veronika politely replies.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 150:
 		npc_rel['A141'] += 1
@@ -1245,7 +1247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'veronika':
 		else
 			'Veronika is looking at you indifferently.'
 			'"Did you say something?" you ask.'
-			'She keeps on looking at you and just shrugs her shoulders before continuing on.'
+			'She keeps looking at you and just shrugs her shoulders before continuing on.'
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 150:
 		'"What are you up to Veronika?" you ask.'
@@ -1271,21 +1273,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 			'As soon as Lina sees you, she comes right up and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, how could you say those awful things about Christina?"'
 			'"Because they''re true," you say with a shrug. Raising an eyebrow, you add, "You didn''t know?"'
 			'"I...um...she never..." she stammers in response. Obviously she didn''t know.'
-			'"It''s ok, sweetie. She made her own choices and they have finally caught up to her." You smile at her, before heading off to the next class.'
+			'"It''s okay, sweetie. She made her own choices and they''ve finally caught up to her." You smile at her, before heading off to the next class.'
 		else
 			npc_rel['A19'] += 1
 			if avelinaQW['encourage'] >= 1:
-				'Avelina sees you approaching and her face lights up. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-				'"Hey, Lina. How are you doing?"'
+				'Lina sees you approaching and her face lights up. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+				'"Hey Lina. How are you doing?"'
 				'"I''ve finally been improving my lap times." Lina proudly tells you.'
 				'"Great news! I''m glad you''re improving," you encourage her.'
 			else
 				avelinaQW['encourage'] = 1
 				if npc_rel['A13'] < 60: npc_rel['A13'] = 60
-				'You find Avelina standing alone, looking lost and sad.'
+				'You find Lina standing alone, looking lost and sad.'
 				'"Looks like your role model made some bad choices," you say to her sternly. "Be careful spending time around her, you may find yourself dragged down with her."'
 				'She looks at her feet, obviously afraid of you.'
-				'"Don''t worry, sweetie, I''m not going to hurt you. I just hoping you will use this as an opportunity to start thinking for yourself, again." You say with a sweet smile.'
+				'"Don''t worry, sweetie, I''m not going to hurt you. I just hoping you''ll use this as an opportunity to start thinking for yourself again." you say with a sweet smile.'
 				'Looking up at you, a bit suprised, you see a hint of a smile on her face before she nods at you. "Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1297,7 +1299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 				'"Great news! I''m glad you''re improving." you encourage her.'
 				'Lina nods. "Yeah, the new workout plan that Christina made for me is really great. She''s really helped me out a lot." There she goes, worshipping Christina.'
 			else
-				'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! Did you watch the latest video someone took of the Starlets? Their movements were amazing! I wish I could also join them, but I''m too clumsy..." Lina looks dejected.'
+				'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! Did you watch the latest video someone took of the Starlets? Their movements were amazing! I wish I could join them, but I''m too clumsy..." Lina looks dejected.'
 				'"Is that so?" you curiously ask.'
 				'With a nervous laughter Lina replies. "I should stop, you''re probably not interested in this anyway." Before you''re able to answer, you can hear Christina calling her over and Lina quickly runs over to her, leaving you alone.'
 			end
@@ -1340,22 +1342,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 					npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 					LariskaQW['story'] = 4
 					'Pulling out the the volleyball she dropped outside your parents apartment the other day, you hand it to her. "You dropped this, Lariska."'
-					'When she sees the ball, her eyes go wide and she looks around fearfully. Seeing that Christina is engrossed in her conversation with Lina, she snatches the ball and stuffs it out of sight.'
+					'When she sees the ball, her eyes grow wide and she looks around fearfully. Seeing that Christina is engrossed in her conversation with Lina, she snatches the ball and stuffs it out of sight.'
 					'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be..."'
-					'"Then why were you there? You ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
-					'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers, trying to think of a something to tell you, unwilling to admit the truth.'
-					'"Relax," you say laughing. "I already talked to her, she agreed to let you hang out with me outside of school. I promise. Just ask her about it the next time you get a chance, ok?"'
+					'"Then why were you there?" you ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
+					'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers as she tries to think of an excuse, unwilling to admit the truth.'
+					'"Relax," you say laughing. "I already talked to her and she agreed to let you hang out with me outside of school. I promise. Just ask her about it the next time you get a chance, ok?"'
 					'She looks at you, a bit dazed, but manages to nod.'
 					'Giving her a soft smile, you head off to your next class.'
 				else
 					npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 					LariskaQW['story'] = 4
 					'Pulling out the the volleyball she dropped outside your parents apartment the other day, you hand it to her. "You dropped this, Lariska."'
-					'When she sees the ball, her eyes go wide and her face turns bright red. She grabs the ball like it''s evidence of a conspiracy and stuffs it out of sight.'
+					'When she sees the ball, her eyes grow wide and her face turns bright red. She grabs the ball like it''s evidence of a conspiracy and stuffs it out of sight.'
 					'"So why did you run away? Didn''t you enjoy what we did?"'
-					'"I...uh...I panicked. I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it was too sudden," her face turns even more red as she thinks about the kiss.'
+					'"I...uh...I panicked. I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it was too sudden." Her face turns even more red as she thinks about the kiss.'
 					'"Well, I enjoyed it, just so you know. If you want to do it again sometime..."'
-					'She looks at you, a bit dazed, and says softly "I liked it too. I just need to think about it some more, ok?"'
+					'She looks at you, a bit dazed, and softly says "I liked it too. I just need to think about it some more, ok?"'
 					'"Ok," you say with a soft smile, and head off to your next class.'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1364,21 +1366,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 				'Pulling out the the volleyball she dropped outside your parents apartment the other day, you hand it to her. "You dropped this, Lariska."'
 				'When she sees the ball, her eyes go wide and she looks around fearfully. Seeing that Christina is engrossed in her conversation with Lina, she snatches the ball and stuffs it out of sight.'
 				'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be..."'
-				'"Then why were you there? You ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
-				'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers, trying to think of a something to tell you, unwilling to admit the truth.'
+				'"Then why were you there?" you ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
+				'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers as she tries to think of an excuse, unwilling to admit the truth.'
 				'"Relax," you say laughing. "I am pretty sure I already know," you say with a twinkle in your eye.'
-				'Her face flushes again, but all she says is "Don''t tell Christina I was there, she doesn''t like me hanging around you. She hates you, always has."'
-				'"I know, though I have no idea why. But don''t worry, I will figure out a way for her to agree to let us hang out. Or eliminate the need for her approval."'
-				'Lariska''s eyes go wide, but she just says, "Just be careful, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I don''t want her to hurt you because of me."'
+				'Her face flushes again, but all she says is "Don''t tell Christina I was there. She doesn''t like me hanging around you. She hates you, always has."'
+				'"I know, though I have no idea why. But don''t worry, I''ll figure out a way for her to agree to let us hang out. Or eliminate the need for her approval."'
+				'Lariska''s eyes grow wide, but she just says, "Just be careful, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I don''t want her to hurt you because of me."'
 				'"I can take it, sweetie. Especially when it''s worth it." You give her a sweet smile and head off to class.'
 			end
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 3:
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 			'"Hey, Lariska! How is your day going?"'
-			'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I told you, Christina doesn''t really want me hanging out with you afterschool."'
-			'"I know Lariska, I am working on it. In the meantime, I was just saying hi."'
+			'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I told you, Christina doesn''t really want me hanging out with you after school."'
+			'"I know Lariska, I''m working on it. In the meantime, I was just saying hi."'
 			'"O-Oh. I''m sorry, I just keep thinking about it. Hopefully you will manage to convince her." She gives you a sad smile.'
-			'"Hang in there, sweetie. I will convince her, I promise."'
+			'"Hang in there, sweetie. I''ll convince her, I promise."'
 		elseif LariskaQW['story'] = 4:
 			LariskaQW['story'] = 5
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 1
@@ -1387,7 +1389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 			'She blushes a bit and says "Good, I''m looking forward to it!"'
 		else
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 2
-			'"Hey, cutie," you say when you see Lariska. She blushes a little but still smiles at you. You spend the rest of the break chatting with her.'
+			'"Hey, cutie," you say when you see Lariska. She blushes a little, but still smiles at you. You spend the rest of the break chatting with her.'
 		end
 	else
 		!!if LariskaQW['LariskaHelp'] = -1:
@@ -1396,7 +1398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 			if grupTipe = 2:
 				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, have you seen Christina around?" Lariska asks.'
-				'"No, why?" you can sense the desperation in her demeanor.'
+				'"No, why?" You can sense the desperation in her demeanor.'
 				'"Well Lina was running after her and I don''t want to be left out..." She dismayingly looks at you.'
 				'"Listen Lariska." You grab hold of her. "You don''t need to run after anyone. You''re fine on your own, okay? Now stop worrying and head to class instead."'
 			else
@@ -1407,7 +1409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 		elseif npc_rel['A13'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 			if grupTipe = 2:
-				'"I sure beat your ass during gym class. You had no chance against me." Lariska is gleefully trash-talking you.'
+				'"I sure beat your ass during gym class. You had no chance against me!" Lariska is gleefully trash-talking you.'
 				'"Well at least I don''t have to fish for other people''s approval." you ferociously tell her off.'
 				'"I can''t believe you said something like that!" She stands there, shocked.'
 			else

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/christina_ambush.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Yeah, I''m not going to do that. Don''t you have to go and teach your little lapdogs some tricks? Where are they anyway?" you ask, warey of them hiding in wait to ambush you.
+				'"Yeah, I''m not going to do that. Don''t you have to go and teach your little lapdogs some tricks? Where are they anyway?" you ask, wary of them hiding in wait to ambush you.
 				"I sent them home. It''s nice having people just do as you tell them to, like you will right now. Albina isn''t here to save you now and you won''t be telling her a thing if you want to keep your place on the squad. Right now, your place is between my legs eating my pussy!"
 				Her arrogance gets the better of you and you lunge forward to grab your outfit from her clutches. Just as you reach her however, she throws your outfit behind her and jumps to her feet, grabbing your hair. "Come now <<$pcs_firstname>>. You didn''t think it would be that easy did you?" she says mockingly as she drags you to the bench and forces you to your knees in front of her.'
 				minut += 5
@@ -1048,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasexclimax.jpg"></center>'
 						'They''re way too into it to notice that you''re watching them.'
 						'After a few minutes Bella is loudly screeching, "YES! YES! Keep going! I''m going to--" She doesn''t finish her sentence before she screams in pleasure, collapsing onto the bench as her orgasm overwhelms her. The guy keeps pounding into her, then suddenly groans in pleasure. He pulls out of her and she flips onto her back, showing him her tits as he jerks himself.'
-						'Bella giggles as his cum squirts over her tits. When he''s done, she takes his cock into her mouth and sucks him off. He then pulls her to her feet and drags her off to the showers, where you''re certain that round two will happen.'
+						'Bella giggles as his cum squirts over her tits. When he''s done, she takes his cock into her mouth and sucks him off before he pulls her to her feet and drags her off to the showers, where you''re certain that round two will happen.'
 						'You take your chances and leave while you can, feeling very aroused at what you just witnessed as you hurry back to the locker room to grab your belongings.'
 						pcs_mood += 10
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1110,14 +1110,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'skipped_ev':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A22', 'dislike'
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A13', 'dislike'
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A19', 'dislike'
-		grupvalue[1] -= 10
-		grupvalue[2] -= 7
+		grupvalue[1] -= 7
+		grupvalue[2] -= 10
 		grupvalue[3] -= 2
 		grupvalue[4] += 3
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		'As you walk down the hallway, you hear your name echo off the walls and the angry stomping of heels as you see an absolutely livid Albina, fists clenched, storming down the hallway at you, Vicky following close behind.'
 		'"You think this is funny don''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>? Well, you''re FUCKING DONE!!" Vicky stops her from attacking you in a fit of rage.'
-		'"That''s right. Done. I''m kicking your fucking bitch ass off the team. Right here, right fucking now. If I EVER see you anywhere near us..." She walks right up to you. "then you better hope I''m in a good fucking mood, bitch!"'
+		'"That''s right. Done. I''m kicking your fucking bitch ass off the team. Right here, right fucking now. If I EVER see you anywhere near us..." She walks right up to you. "Then you better hope I''m in a good fucking mood, bitch!"'
 		'She stares at you enraged before she relaxes her clenched fist as Vicky places a hand on her shoulder and leads her away, looking extremely disappointed with you.'
 		'The other students start talking among themselves as you are left feeling somewhat intimidated by Albina''s actions.'
 	end