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Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into home-and-internet

netuttki 1 year ago
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locations/anush_bedroom.qsrc

@@ -60,11 +60,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushroom':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The room is surprisingly clean, more so than any other room in the apartment. The walls are covered with pictures and posters of <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''the_pretty_reckless''">bands</a> or famous models, girls and guys, while the room is skillfully decorated with various strings of coloured lights. In the centre of the room, beneath the window, is a <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''bed''">bed</a> with a small <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''night_stand''">nightstand</a> beside it.'
 	*nl
 	'Against the opposite wall are a small computer desk, a <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''computer''">laptop</a> and a chair. Next to the desk is a <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''nushdresser''">dresser</a> with a decent sized flatscreen TV sitting on top of it. On the other side of the desk is a bookshelf with a relatively large collection of books. Hanging on the wall next to the shelves is an <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''guitar''">acoustic guitar</a> with an electric guitar right beside it. A skateboard is also leaning against one of the other walls next to the <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''nushcloset''">closet door</a>, along with some rollerblades in the corner.'
-	act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom','hallway'
+	act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 	if AnushkaLoc = 2:
 		'<br>Anushka is lying on the bed, a mysterious smirk playing around her lips as she looks at you.'
 		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_pretty_reckless':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/the_pretty_reckless_poster.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/the_pretty_reckless_poster.jpg"></center>'
 	'You look over the bands'' posters; most posters are of bands with a few models, and the only band with more than one poster is The Pretty Reckless. The poster that seems to be most prominently displayed in her room is one of the lead singers for The Pretty Reckless, lying naked on a stone coffin. The poster right next to it is, similar one but without the band name and the <a href="exec:gt ''anush_bedroom'',''taylor_momsen''">Taylor''s</a> breasts on full display.'
 	act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 end
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'taylor_momsen':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/taylor_poster.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/taylor_poster.jpg"></center>'
 	'Yep her breasts are on full display; there is a crease in the middle of the poster like it came folder up inside something. It looks like Anushka made a lot of effort to get rid of the crease, but you can still see it. So perhaps she really loves the band or has a crush on the lead singer, maybe both.'
 	act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 end
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushdresser':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushdresser.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdresser.jpg"></center>'
 	if AnushkaLoc = 2:
 		'One drawer seems to be filled entirely with makeup. You see dozens of lipsticks, blushes, eyeliners, eye shadows and foundations inside it. Most of it matches her more alternative emo look she typically sports. Still, you spy a few more natural and mainstream colours among them. A couple of the other drawers contain folded pants, and one seems to be nothing but socks. Another one is stuffed full of bras, while the final one seems to be her panty drawer, which also contains several of her dildos. You notice her watching you snoop and close the drawers.'
 		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
@@ -116,14 +116,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushcloset':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
 	if AnushkaLoc = 2:
 		'The closet is crammed with a staggering amount of clothes. There are boots and shoes stuffed everywhere on the floor and on the top shelf. Most of the clothes fit her alt emo/punk look she typically sports, but you spot a few more mainstream pieces. There are even a few sun dresses and the like hanging from the rod within. On the inside of the closet door, you see a full-length mirror. You glance over to see Anushka watching you. She doesn''t seem to mind that you are snooping in her closet.'
 		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Ask to try on some clothes':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy1.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy1.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_bmi < 25:
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				minut += 10
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushcloset':
 		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Try on some clothes':
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/maksimshow.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimshow.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_bmi < 16:
 				if pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
 				minut += 10
@@ -211,13 +211,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'more_clothes':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy2.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy2.jpg"></center>'
 	'The two of you keep taking off your clothes only to try on different ones. You check yourselves out in the mirror, giggle, and comment on each other''s outfits.'
 	act 'These jeans are tight':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy3.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy3.jpg"></center>'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			'She hands you a pair of jeans while smirking at you. "I would say you need to ditch your panties, but you seem to be going commando already."'
 			'She pulls her panties off as well. Now with you both fully nude, you reach to grab one of the tight pairs of jeans when...'
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'more_clothes':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy4.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy4.jpg"></center>'
 			'Anushka suddenly yells, "Oh my god, you little pervert!" and covers herself quickly. You turn to see Maksim peeking through the door and instinctively cover yourself. Anushka then grabs a shoe and throws it at the door. Maksim takes off running just before the shoe hits the door frame. Anushka then takes off across her room, yanking the door open and running out of her room stark naked, chasing him while screaming at him. You debate following them, but you''re naked. Maybe you should put on some clothes first.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
 			if Exhibitionist_lvl = 3:
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'more_clothes':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy5.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy5.jpg"></center>'
 				'You grab the loose dress you had just been wearing and throw it on quickly before chasing after them.'
 				'You can hear Maksim yelling as he runs away. "Help! She''s going to kill me!"'
 				'You enter the hallway just in time to see Maksim run into the living room, closely followed by a naked Anushka. "Come back here, you little pervert!" she screams loudly.'
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'more_clothes':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/eduard.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 					'"She''s trying to kill me!" a panicking Maksim replies.'
 					'Eduard turns to Anushka and starts to say, "Just what the hell..." but he never finishes his sentence. Instead, he immediately turns his head away and puts his hand in front of his eyes. "God dammit, Anushka, put some clothes on!" he bellows.'
 					'He then turns his attention to Maksim. "Boy, were you spying on your sister and her friend again?" he asks sternly.'
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'more_clothes':
 					'Anushka starts to say something, and then Eduard turns towards you. "Was he spying on you girls?"'
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy5.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy5.jpg"></center>'
 						'You nod your head. "Yes, we were trying on clothes, and we noticed him spying on us."'
 						'Eduard visibly shakes with what you think is anger and embarrassment. "I am sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I thought I taught these boys better than this."'
 						'Anushka chimes in. "See? I told you!"'
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] ='chase_naked':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
 	'You take off after the two of them stark naked as well.'
 	'You can hear Maksim yelling as he runs away. "Help! She''s going to kill me!"'
 	'You enter the hallway a few steps behind Anushka while she chases Maksim. "Come back here, you little pervert!" she screams loudly.'
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] ='chase_naked':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
 		'He then turns his attention to Maksim. "Boy, were you spying on your sister and her friend again?" he asks sternly.'
 		'Maksim squeaks a lie out. "No."'
 		'Anushka starts to say something, then Eduard turns towards you, having forgotten you were naked... or maybe just wanting a second look. He stops with his mouth open like he is about to say something, and you see his eyes roaming over your naked body. Then Anushka interrupts it. "DAD! Stop staring at my naked friend."'
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] ='chase_naked':
 		'That startles him back to reality, and he quickly looks away. "I wasn''t. I mean ... sorry, I didn''t mean to." Then, with his hand covering his eyes, looking up at the ceiling, he gives a weary sigh, like a man who is dead inside, before he asks while not looking in your direction. "Was he spying on you girls?"'
 		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/maksimspy6.jpg"></center>'
 			'You nod your head. "Yes, we were trying on clothes, and we noticed him spying on us."'
 			'Eduard visibly shakes with what you think is anger and embarrassment. "I am sorry, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I thought I taught these boys better than this."'
 			'Anushka chimes in. "See? I told you!"'
@@ -328,12 +328,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		minut += 2
 		npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/snoop.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/snoop.jpg"></center>'
 		'You decide to snoop, so you open the nightstand''s drawer to peek inside. There are a couple of mostly empty prescription bottles, a small baggy of blue pills, marijuana, and a couple of rolled joints. You also notice a pair of scissors, razor blades, rolling papers, a lighter, a pack of cigarettes, condoms, lotion, lube, a vibrator, a dildo, a butt plug and even a strap-on harness.'
 		'"See anything you like?" Anushka asks you in a teasing tone.'
 		act 'Uh no':
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blush slightly and shake your head before closing the drawer, which just causes her to smirk in amusement.'
 			act 'Close the drawer':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		end
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 			minut += 2
 			joint += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/take_joint.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/take_joint.jpg"></center>'
 			'You pull out one of the joints and hold it up. "Yeah, I like this..."'
 			'She laughs a bit. "Yeah, me too, so wanna get high?"'
 			'You smile at her and nod yes. "What do you think? I grabbed it, didn''t I?"'
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 				minut += 20
 				gs 'drugs', 'joint'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/get_high.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/get_high.jpg"></center>'
 				'You take the joint from her and take a hit off it as you sit on the bed next to her. The two of you discuss various topics as you hand the joint back and forth, taking turns taking hits. Before too long, the joint is gone, and you feel pretty high.'
 				act 'Hangout': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			end
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 		'You decide to snoop, so you open the nightstand''s drawer to peek inside. There are a couple of mostly empty prescription bottles, a small baggy of blue pills, marijuana, and a couple of rolled joints. You also notice a pair of scissors, razor blades, rolling papers, a lighter, a pack of cigarettes, condoms, lotion, lube, a vibrator, a dildo, a butt plug and even a strap-on harness.'
 		'You''re not really surprised by the number of sex toys Anushka has, considering her relaxed attitude towards sex and sexuality. However, you decide it would be rude to play with them without her permission, so you close the drawer.'
 		act 'Close the drawer':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 			minut += 2
 			joint += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/take_joint.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/take_joint.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to take one of the joints. Surely she won''t miss it or mind that you took just one. So you take it out and look at it for a moment. It is nicely rolled. Then you place it in your purse for later and close the drawer.'
 			act 'Close the drawer':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		end
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		anushkaQW['computer_use'] = 1
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 		'You point towards her laptop. "You''re so lucky to have your own computer."'
 		'"I bought it with some of the money I made from our gigs, plus some modelling work I did in the city. Other than using it to write songs, look up the music and play some games, I mostly just look up porn when I''m horny and want to masturbate. I get so fucking turned on watching it that it gets to the point that I just can''t resist playing with myself."'
 		*nl
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Check out her porn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/usecomp.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/usecomp.jpg"></center>'
 			'You take a seat in front of the computer. "Maybe I should look at what kind of porn Anushka likes to watch? She won''t mind, right?" you think to yourself.'
 			'You start the computer up. It loads much faster than what you are used to, so it must be a pretty high-end laptop. Once it''s done loading, you click on the internet browser and look through her browsing history plus bookmarks.'
 			*nl
@@ -480,13 +480,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				act 'Masturbate':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushcmast.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'While browsing her vast list of pornos, you find one you like, lean back in the chair and start masturbating. Before long, you completely forget that you are in Anushka''s bedroom, masturbating to porn on her laptop.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushcmast.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You keep rubbing your clit... you can feel your climax building... building... You can feel yourself going higher and higher while riding the orgasmic wave of pleasure.'
 						temp = rand(0,3)
 						if temp = 0:
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 	else
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''re not sure you should be using her computer when she isn''t here without her permission, so you decide to leave it alone.'
 		act 'Return': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	end
@@ -552,17 +552,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agreeporn':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
 	'She grins, then connects the TV to the laptop to start playing some lesbian porn. You can''t help but notice the porno is about two teenage girls having a sleepover in one of their bedrooms. They talk for a bit, but as the conversation continues, it quickly leads to them having sex.'
 	*nl
 	'You feel yourself getting really aroused from watching the porno. You glance at Anushka, seeing her hand in her panties and her pants around her knees while masturbating with you sitting right beside her. You are stunned at her apparent easiness in the situation and quickly look away. At first, you try pretending she isn''t playing with herself, but you can''t help sneaking the occasional peek at her. It seems like she''s having fun. If she doesn''t think anything is wrong with it, then it''s probably not a big deal to her.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom','hallway'
+	act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 	act 'Just watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
 		'As the two of you continue to watch the porno, you do your best to ignore that Anushka is lying right next to you with her hand between her legs and masturbating for all she''s worth. Long before the video is over, Anushka''s breathing gets faster, and she starts moaning - softly at first, then louder and louder until finally, she arches her back in a shuddering orgasm. After giving herself a few moments to come down from her little pleasure high, she pulls her pants back up, gets off the bed and turns the porno off. She then turns to look you in your eyes. "I don''t know about you, but I could use a snack. Come on, let''s go raid the kitchen." She heads out of her room, waving for you to follow her. You''re not sure what else to do, so you get up to follow along behind her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 10, 'porn', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agreeporn':
 			inhib_exp += 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/dualmast.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/dualmast.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'"Well, fuck it." you think to yourself. The video has turned you on, and she obviously doesn''t think it''s a big deal to masturbate in front of you. With that thought, you begin to masturbate as well. You find it hard to get into it properly, knowing she is right next to you. After a while, however, you start to relax and get more comfortable with the situation as you begin to give in to the sensations. Your arousal grows more and more. You glance over at Anushka to see her looking at you with a massive grin on her face. She is clearly enjoying that the two of you are playing with yourselves together. At this point, neither of you is really watching the porno anymore. Instead, you just lay back on the bed side by side while looking at each other as you masturbate.'
 			*nl
 			'Sometime later, you feel Anushka speed up a bit next to you. Her soft moans suddenly get louder before she starts shuddering in orgasm. This is just enough to get you right to the edge, and you quicken your own pace as a result. Within moments, a huge orgasm rocks your body that completely overwhelms your senses. By the time you fully recover, Anushka has already turned off the porno and is smiling at you with her pants back up. She nods towards the door. "I don''t know about you, but I could use a snack. Come on, let''s go raid the kitchen." She heads out of her room, waving for you to follow. She is acting like everything is completely normal. Who knows, maybe for her, it is. You get up to follow her out.'
@@ -600,14 +600,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
 		'You check out the two guitars hanging on the wall. One of them is an acoustic guitar that looks pretty old but well cared for. The other is what looks like a relatively new, costly electric guitar.'
 		act 'Look at something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Ask about the old guitar':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
 			'While the acoustic guitar is in great shape, it looks as old or older than Anushka herself and doesn''t look all that expensive. It makes you wonder why she has it when the electric one is obviously new and more costly. "So what''s up with this old guitar?" you ask her.'
 			'She smiles at that. "It''s my dad''s, or at least it was. When I was little, he used to play all the time, and that is where my love of music started. One day... I don''t know... he just stopped playing." She shrugs slightly. "Anyways, when I got a little older, I took it and started teaching myself to play. He found me playing it and taught me a few things to help me with the basics. After I had stuck with it for a few months, he gave me his old guitar. I spent a lot of time playing it and teaching myself how to play."'
 			act 'Look at something else':gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
 			'"How long did it take you to learn to play?" you ask her.'
 			'She shakes her head. "I still have a lot to learn, but it has taken me years to get as good as I am now. It''s easy to learn the basics but hard to master." The two of you talk about how much time she practised to learn to play for a while.'
 			act 'Look at something else':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 		end
 	else
 		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
 		'You check out the two guitars. One of them is an acoustic guitar that looks relatively old but well cared for. The other is an electric guitar that looks much newer and more expensive.'
 		act 'Look at something else':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		if instrmusic_lvl < 5:
@@ -658,14 +658,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 				minut += 10
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/play_guitar.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/play_guitar.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to live out one of your fantasies. You''ve always wanted to play the guitar. You grab hold of the guitar then you begin to pretend to play, putting on a show as if you were a real rock star. After a while, you need to catch your breath. Playing was a lot harder than you thought.'
 				act 'Put the guitar back':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 			end
 		end
 		act 'Try to play it':
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/play_guitar.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/play_guitar.jpg"></center>'
 			if instrmusic_lvl < 20:
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'instrmusic', rand(0,1)
 				pcs_mood += 5
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bed':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	if AnushkaLoc = 2:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 		'Anushka sits on her bed and waves you to sit next to her. You quickly jump up on the bed next to her.'
 		act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Chat': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bed':
 			act 'Can we play together?': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'nush_guitar_play_together'
 		end
 	else
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'You lie down on her bed and roll over. You take a deep breath to find the pillow smells just like her. There is not much to do on the bed without Anushka, and you start feeling bored, wishing Anushka was here.'
 		act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	end
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'Anushka''s eyes brighten up as you ask her. She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. She strums a few bars to check it is still in tune. "I will play you the very first song I ever learned how to play. It is one of my dad''s favourites." She starts playing and then singing the song. It takes you a moment to recognize the song. Then, she plays the whole song while singing Wanted Dead or Alive by Bon Jovi..'
 			*nl
 			'You''re impressed with her talent. She is a good singer, better than some people you have heard on the radio, but is an even better guitar player. As she ends her song, you clap your hands and say, "Wow, I''ve heard you''re good, but I didn''t know that you were this good."'
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "This is another song my dad taught me. It''s Behind Blue Eyes by the Who." Starts playing and singing the new song for your listening pleasure.'
 			*nl
 			'She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her song, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else. This is a lot more our generation." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "This is the first song Rad, and I worked on learning together. It''s Make Me Wanna Die by The Pretty Reckless. It is also when my obsession with Taylor started and my first girl crush."'
 			*nl
 			'She motions to one of the posters on her wall. This one is of The Pretty Reckless, with Taylor Momsen front and centre as the lead singer for the band. You admit she is gorgeous and understand Anushka''s girl crush on her. She starts playing and singing the new song, and she is right. This one is different. It still has that rock feel like the others but is more modern.'
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else, this one I learned shortly after seeing the uncensored music video for it." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "It''s Heaven Knows by The Pretty Reckless."'
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song. She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
 			*nl
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else. This is another I learned shortly after we started secondary school and how things started to change with how everyone saw each other." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "It''s What''s up by the 4 Non Blondes."'
 			*nl
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song. She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else. This is another I learned shortly after we started going to Secondary School, with how the boys started treating us differently and how the girls started acting in response to what the boys did." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "It''s Try by Colbie Caillat."'
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song. She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Great as always, and yeah, I agree at some point, things just changed."'
 			*nl
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "It''s Numb by Linkin Park."'
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song. She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Great as always."'
 			*nl
@@ -904,7 +904,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			anushkaQW['guitar_play'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, pulling it over to her. "Sure, I will play you something else. This is one I have been working on recently. Ever since Dimka approached us about playing at his end-of-school party he plans to throw, we have been working on a playlist for it. This got me thinking, I should do a song dedicated to most of my fellow classmates, the judgmental hypocrite assholes they are." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it is still in tune. "It''s Whore by In This Moment."'
 			*nl
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song. She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Great as always. Is that how you feel about most of our classmates?"'
@@ -920,7 +920,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			minut += 5
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
 			'She grabs the acoustic guitar and says, "Sure, I will play one of the songs again. Let''s see which one I feel like playing today." So she starts playing and singing one of the songs she has already played for you.'
 			*nl
 			'She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her song, you clap your hands and praise her. "Just as great as the first time you played it. You really are good at this."'
@@ -940,7 +940,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_teach':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 	'You sit down on the bed next to Anushka and look at her. "Can you teach me how to play the guitar?"'
 	if anushkaQW['knows_guitar'] = 1:
 		'She smiles back at you. "Have you been practising?"'
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_teach':
 		if ml_guitar['hasguitar'] = 1:
 			act 'Yes':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile and nod your head. "Yes, I do. It is back at home, though."'
 				'She smiles back at you. "Okay, that''s good that you already have one. I can teach you with mine." She considers you a moment. "So, how good are you so far?"'
 				if instrmusic_lvl < 20:
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_teach':
 		else
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 				'You shake your head no. "No, I just thought I could play on yours." You tell her.'
 				'She shakes her head slightly. "Oh, you could, but it won''t do you any good. To learn, you will need to practice on your own. If you are serious about learning, buy one and then come ask me again, and I''ll teach you a bit."'
 				'You sigh a little. That is not what you wanted to hear. Well looks like you will need to save up and buy a guitar if you are serious about this.'
@@ -1019,7 +1019,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar_lesson':
 	anushkaQW['sveta_love'] += 1
 !!need the new code on gaining xp from being taught by a NPC here netuttkki
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/teach_guitar1.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/teach_guitar1.jpg"></center>'
 	'She hands you the guitar, and then she scoots around behind you. You sit down with her legs on each side of your hips, and you can feel her inner thighs pressing against your hips. She leans close behind you, and you can feel her pert breasts against your back as she reaches around you to place her hands on yours on the guitar. Leaning forward, her face is right next to yours, and you realize this is a very intimate feeling. You can feel the heat from her body against yours, and you can smell lavender from the shampoo she uses on her hair.'
 	*nl
 	if instrmusic_lvl < 20:
@@ -1043,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_play_together':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anush_bedroom/anushroom/teach_guitar2.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/teach_guitar2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You ask her. "Hey, want to play together?"'
 	'She smiles. "Yeah, sure." She gets up and gets her guitar off the wall while you sit on the bed and get yours ready. When she comes back, she sits next to you, and you discuss what to play until you find a song you both know and then begin to play.'
 	*nl

+ 20 - 20
locations/anushkaev2.qsrc

@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radnush_asspound':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/7.jpg"></center>'
 						'As you break the kiss, Anushka turns and sticks her tongue out. You notice that she is holding up her phone, and takes a selfie of the two of you covered in cum. She then gets up and starts to wipe the cum off her face with a tissue, offering one to you as well. At this point, Radomir is almost dressed. He slaps Anushka on the ass and heads for the door. "Later, bitches!" he quips as he walks out. "What a fucking asshole." she mutters once he''s gone. You both finish getting dressed and she lies down on her bed.'
 						act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-						act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+						act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 						act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'about_rad'
 						act 'Ask about the selfie': gt 'anushkaev2', 'rad_selfie'
 					end
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 	'"You''re not going to show it to anyone, are you?"'
 	'She looks a little surprised you would ask that. "No, of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to, that is..."'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'about_rad'
 	act 'Can I see it?':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-		act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+		act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 		act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'about_rad'
 		act 'Ask her to send it to you':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 			'You think about it and decide you would like a copy as well. "Yeah, send it to me."'
 			'She grins, obviously approving of your choice. You then get a notification on your phone and quickly add the selfie to your gallery.'
 			act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 			act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'about_rad'
 		end
 	end
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 	'She gives you a somewhat sour look. "Why did you?"'
 	'You smile at her. "Because you were here and I figured it wouldn''t be as bad for both of us. So why?" you press her.'
 	'She sighs. "It''s complicated, okay?"'
-	act 'Drop it': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+	act 'Drop it': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	act 'Explain':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 1
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 		'You nod. "Okay, I''ve got time. How about you just tell me?"'
 		'She frowns at you, clearly getting annoyed at the questions. "Because... because when it''s great, it''s amazing and when it''s not... Well, I deal with it."'
 		'You can tell she is holding something back.'
-		act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+		act 'Let it drop': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 		act 'Press her for more details':
 			*clr & cla
 			anushkaQW['rad_date'] = 1
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 			'"There is more to it than that. We''re friends right? So why don''t you tell me?" you say, continuing to prod her.'
 			'You can tell she is getting more and more annoyed. "For fuck''s sake, you''re like a dog with a bone about this! We use to date, okay? It makes things different. You happy now?"'
 			'"Thank you for telling me." you reply.'
-			act 'Drop it': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+			act 'Drop it': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 			act 'You guys use to date?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 				'"So you guys use to date? I didn''t know that. What happened?" you ask.'
 				'She frowns at you. "We fucking broke up, obviously. Will you fucking drop it already?" You can tell she is starting to get pissed at your prying.'
-				act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+				act 'Let it drop': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 				act 'Why did you break up?':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 															*nl
 															'She then grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka then start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do again sometime." he says it and points at both of you. He then heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
 															act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 															act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2' , 'talkaboutval'
 														end
 													end
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 															*nl
 															'Anushka grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do again sometime." he says and points at both of you. He then he heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
 															act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 															act 'Talk about what just happened':gt 'anushkaev2' , 'talkaboutval'
 														end
 													end
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 	'You smile at her. "Just friends that fuck huh?"'
 	'She rolls her eyes slightly. "Yeah, just friends that fuck."'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	if anushkaphoto[8] = 1:
 		act 'Ask about the selfie':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 			'"You''re not going to show it to anyone, are you?"'
 			'She looks a little surprised you would ask that. "No, of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to, that is..."'
 			act 'Hangout in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 			act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'about_rad'
 			act 'Can I see it?':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -769,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 				act 'Ask her to send it to you':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
@@ -779,7 +779,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 					'You think about it and decide you would like a copy as well. "Yeah, send it to me."'
 					'She grins, obviously approving of your choice. You then get a notification on your phone and quickly add the selfie to your gallery.'
 					act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -892,7 +892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wait_nushmar':
 	'She arches her brow as she finishes getting dressed. "Me and Marcus what?"'
 	'You point to your side of your face, indicating the splatter of cum still on her face. It takes her a moment to realize before she looks in the mirror and cleans the rest of it off. "Oh... Shut up." she says, but you can tell by her tone that she''s more amused than bothered by it.'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-	act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+	act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'talk_about_marcus'
 end
 
@@ -1019,7 +1019,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eat_nush_fucked':
 							'Now that Marcus is gone and it''s just the two of you, you decide to ask her about what just happened. "So, you and Marcus huh?"'
 							'She smiles and shakes her head. "Shut up."'
 							act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-							act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+							act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 							act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'talk_about_marcus'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1047,7 +1047,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 	'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that, or I should say only that. It''s about everyone saying it''s wrong. It''s the same reason I like fucking other chicks, or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that, the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
 	'You can only nod at that. You know Anushka is a bit of an anarchist at heart, so it''s not a surprise that breaking social norms turns her on.'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['tell'] = 0:
 		act 'Tell her about Olu': gt 'anushkachat', 'tell_about_olu'
 	end
@@ -1089,7 +1089,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 					if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['tell'] = 0:
 						act 'Tell her about Olu': gt 'anushkachat', 'tell_about_olu'
 					end
@@ -1112,7 +1112,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 						'You think about it and decide you would like a copy as well. "Yeah, send it to me."'
 						'She grins, obviously approving of your choice. You then get a notification on your phone and quickly add the selfie to your gallery.'
 						act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-						act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+						act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 						if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['tell'] = 0:
 							act 'Tell her about Olu': gt 'anushkachat', 'tell_about_olu'
 						end
@@ -1121,7 +1121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 						end
 					end
 					act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 					if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['tell'] = 0:
 						act 'Tell her about Olu': gt 'anushkachat', 'tell_about_olu'
 					end

+ 1 - 4
locations/booty_call_cum.qsrc

@@ -1476,7 +1476,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_pullout':
 			*nl
 			'At your words, you jump off his cock and reach behind you to grab it with your hand, furiously jerking it. Moments later, you feel hot viscious liquid spatter all over your ass.'
 		end
-		gs'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
 	else
 		if $booty_call['position'] = 'miss':
 			gs'cum_call', 'stomach',$boy,1
@@ -1497,7 +1496,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_pullout':
 					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> grunts and his cock slips from your pussy. The moment it does, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> comes, spattering your stomach with his sticky, white cum.'
 				end
 			end
-			
 		elseif $booty_call['position'] = 'doggy':
 			gs'cum_call', 'butt',$boy,1
 			gs'cum_call', 'back',$boy,1
@@ -1540,10 +1538,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_pullout':
 					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> grunts, his cock slipping from your pussy and sliding up between your ass cheeks. You reach around to put it back in when you feel something hot and wet spattering across your ass and back.'
 				end
 			end
-			
 		end
-		gs'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
 	end
+	gs'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'creampie_surprise':

+ 3 - 2
locations/booty_call_start.qsrc

@@ -155,8 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						end
 						act'Undress':gt 'booty_call_start', 'undress'
 					end
-				end
-				if hour >= 18 and $region = 'pav' and (week = 5 or week = 6):
+				elseif hour >= 18 and $region = 'pav' and (week = 5 or week = 6):
 					act'I''m going to the disco':
 						cla & *clr
 						$npc_apt_hall[$boy]
@@ -168,6 +167,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						!!end
 						act'Undress':gt 'booty_call_start', 'undress'
 					end
+				else
+					act'Undress':gt 'booty_call_start', 'undress'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 81 - 81
locations/gadriver.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	'A large river flows lazily a for a few hundred meters in the northern outskirts of Gadukino.'
+	'A large river flows lazily for a few hundred meters on the northern outskirts of Gadukino.'
 
 	if hour >= 6 and hour < 21 and sunWeather = 1: 'You see the local <a href="exec:gt ''gadriver'', ''fishers''">fishermen</a> fishing with their rods on the riverbank.'
 
@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if temp_gr = 4 and MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and hour >= 5:
 		if mitkaguysriver ! daystart:
 			mitkaguysriver = daystart
-			'While going to the river you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. They first invite you to join them, then insist you go with them.'
+			'While going to the river, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. They first invite you to join them, then insist you go with them.'
 
 			act 'Go with them':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex17.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys take you to Vasyan''s house, where, they rudely keep pushing you until you are bent over the kitchen table. They then take turns fucking you...'
+				'The boys take you to Vasyan''s house, where they rudely keep pushing you until you are bent over the kitchen table. They then take turns fucking you...'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 				npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 				pose = 1
@@ -78,13 +78,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif temp_gr = 5 and MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and hour >= 5:
 		if mitkaguysriver ! daystart:
 			mitkaguysriver = daystart
-			'While walking towards the river you meet the village boys, whom you''ve been drinking with recently. They ask you to go with them.'
+			'While walking towards the river, you meet the village boys you''ve been drinking with recently. They ask you to go with them.'
 
 			act 'Go with them':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex18.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys lead you to Vasyan''s house and start undressing, following their lead you strip off too, "We''re going to fuck your ass I hope you can enjoy it but I''m not going to be upset if you don''t."'
+				'The boys lead you to Vasyan''s house and start undressing; following their lead, you strip off, too, "We''re going to fuck your ass. I hope you can enjoy it, but I''m not going to be upset if you don''t."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 				'They don''t say anything more before they spend the next hour fucking you in the ass...'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'gangbang', 'sub'
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif temp_gr = 6 and MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and hour >= 5:
 		if mitkaguysriver ! daystart:
 			mitkaguysriver = daystart
-			'On your way to the river you meet Vasyan, he insists you follow him home...'
+			'On your way to the river, you meet Vasyan. But, unfortunately, he insists you follow him home...'
 
 			act 'Go with him':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -124,12 +124,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 				if mesec = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex20.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. Once you are naked, he pushes you towards the sofa and forces you to your knees...'
+					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and pulls your clothes off crudely. Once you are naked, he moves you towards the sofa and forces you to your knees...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex21.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. He then throws you onto his bed. Noticing, that you are slightly bleeding he asks if it is that time of the month. You whimper, "Yes." He curses angrily, turns you over and begins roughly fucking your ass...'
+					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and pulls your clothes off crudely. He then throws you onto his bed. Noticing that you are slightly bleeding, he asks if it is that time of the month. You whimper, "Yes." He curses angrily, turns you over and begins roughly fucking your ass...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 				end
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 				$lastwornbratype['swim'] = $braworntype
 				lastwornbranumber['swim'] = brawornnumber
 				gs 'clothing', 'strip_all', 'VillageRiver'
-				'Without hesitation, you take off all your clothes and neatly fold them before putting them down on a pile. Without your clothes holding you back, you can go for a nice swim in the river or just lie down in the sand and do some sunbathing.'
+				'Without hesitation, you take off all your clothes and neatly fold them before putting them down on a pile. Without your clothes holding you back, you can go for a nice swim in the river or lie down in the sand and sunbathe.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 			end
 		end
@@ -262,10 +262,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 				else
 					if rand(0,10) < 5 and MiraLoc = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/rivertwogirls.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Mira take a swim in the river, splashing water at each other and having fun.'
+						'You and Mira swim in the river, splashing water at each other and having fun.'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/gadriverswim.jpg"></center>'
-						'You take a swim in the river, feeling the refreshing and invigorating water flowing across your body.'
+						'You swim in the river, feeling the refreshing and invigorating water across your body.'
 					end
 				end
 				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
@@ -274,8 +274,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 					if MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and temp_gr = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex13.jpg"></center>'
-						'When you decide it''s time to get out of the river, you hear the sound of men laughing as they walk on the river bank approaching you. As they get closer you see the smirking faces of the village boys led by Mitya headed towards the river bank while you are still in the shallow waters.'
-						'They quickly undress and jump in the water. Within a few seconds you are surrounded by the grinning boys. Without a word they reach for you and roughly take turns forcing you to suck their cocks.'
+						'When you decide it''s time to get out of the river, you hear the sound of men laughing as they walk on the river bank approaching you. As they get closer, you see the village boys'' smirking faces, led by Mitya, headed towards the river bank while you are still in the shallow waters.'
+						'They quickly undress and jump in the water. Within a few seconds, you are surrounded by the grinning boys. Then, without a word, they reach for you and roughly take turns forcing you to suck their cocks.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 15, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -332,16 +332,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 					if pcs_stren < 30: gs 'exp_gain', 'stren', 1
 					if hour >= 22 and hour <= 6:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/watergirls1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You strip your clothes off and slowly step in to the cold river, knowing that the darkness hides your nudity. You swim around feeling the refreshing and invigorating water caressing your body.'
+						'You strip your clothes off and slowly step into the cold river, knowing that the darkness hides your nudity. You swim around, feeling the refreshing and invigorating water caressing your body.'
 					else
 						if temp_gr >= 10 and MiraLoc = 1:
 							pcs_horny += rand(5,15)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/rivertwogirlsnude'+rand(0,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-							'You step in to the river, you and Mira have a good old fashioned water fight, splashing each other until one of you finally surrenders.'
+							'You step into the river with Mira and have a good old-fashioned water fight, splashing each other until one of you finally surrenders.'
 						else
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/watergirls.jpg"></center>'
-							'You take your clothes off and swiftly step into the river, you sigh, feeling the cold refreshing and invigorating water.'
+							'You take your clothes off and swiftly step into the river. You sigh, feeling the cold, refreshing and tonic water.'
 						end
 					end
 					if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
@@ -349,10 +349,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 						if MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and temp_gr = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex12.jpg"></center>'
-							'As soon as you step out of the water, you find your naked self in front of three boys that are here to do some fishing.'
-							'Seeing you skinny dipping, they start to talk amongst themselves about how much of a shameless slut you are and the only good thing you are for is serving men. You tell them to fuck off, but they are too worked up and not listening to you at all.'
-							'One of the boys flips you over and start to penetrate your pussy as the other boy shoves his hardened cock into your protesting mouth. They have started to fuck you in an earnest and lust filled frenzy.'
-							'Your muffled moans and the sound of your wet pussy getting pounded fill the air. The boys soon orgasm and decide to ejaculate all over your body to show their dominance.'
+							'As soon as you step out of the water, you find your naked self in front of three boys here to do some fishing.'
+							'Seeing you skinny dipping, they start to talk amongst themselves about how much of a shameless slut you are and that the only good thing you are for is serving men. You tell them to fuck off, but they are too worked up and not listening to you at all.'
+							'One of the boys flips you over and starts penetrating your pussy as the other boy shoves his hardened cock into your protesting mouth. They have started to fuck you in an earnest and lust-filled frenzy.'
+							'Your muffled moans and the sound of your wet pussy getting pounded fill the air. The boys soon orgasm and decide to ejaculate all over your body to show dominance.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 							gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 						else
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_go_river.jpg"></center>'
 						end
-						'You are sunbathing by the river when Mira comes along. You smile, she undresses and lays her towel next to yours.'
+						'You are sunbathing by the river when Mira comes along. You smile, and she undresses and lays her towel next to yours.'
 
 						act 'Continue': gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 					elseif $clothingworntype = 'nude':
@@ -415,14 +415,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 							pcs_tan += 1
 						elseif krem > 0:
 							krem -= 1
-							'You smear the suntan lotion all over your body to help prevent a sunburn.'
+							'You smear the suntan lotion all over your body to help prevent sunburn.'
 							pcs_tan += 3
 						end
 						act 'Finish sunbathing':
 							if MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and temp_gr = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex14.jpg"></center>'
-								'You hear several men''s voices rapidly approaching. All of a sudden a couple of the village boys emerge in front of you. Noticing that you are nude, they brighten up greatly and in a few minutes, despite you protesting lively, they have you on all fours and are roughly fucking you...'
+								'You hear several men''s voices rapidly approaching. Suddenly, a couple of the village boys emerge in front of you. Noticing that you are nude, they brighten up considerably. In a few minutes, despite you protesting lively, they have you on all fours and are roughly fucking you...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -462,14 +462,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 						elseif krem > 0:
 							krem -= 1
 							pcs_tan += 3
-							'You smear suntan lotion all over your body to prevent a sunburn. Few minutes later you''re all oiled in and start sunbathing.'
+							'You smear suntan lotion all over your body to prevent sunburn. Then, you''re all lathered up and sunbathing a few minutes later.'
 						end
 						act 'Finish':
 
 							if MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and temp_gr = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex15.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a while, you hear some familiar voices quickly approaching you. A couple minutes later you see the village boys emerge from the bushes. Noticing you sunbathing, they brighten up greatly. In a short amount of time, despite you protesting lively, all of your holes have been violated...'
+								'After a while, you hear some familiar voices quickly approaching you. A couple of minutes later, the village boys emerge from the bushes. Noticing you sunbathing, they brighten up considerably. But, in a short time, despite you protesting lively, all of your holes have been violated...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 							elseif MiraLoc = 1 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 15 and temp_gr = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex16.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a while, you hear voices rapidly approaching from the village, in a couple of minutes you see the village boys emerge from the bushes. Seeing Mira they smile obscenely, and without hesitation they quickly surround her as she lays on the sand. You sit up and watch as they fuck her in all her holes...'
+								'After a while, you hear voices rapidly approaching from the village. You see the village boys emerge from the bushes in a couple of minutes. Seeing Mira, they smile obscenely, and without hesitation, they quickly surround her as she lies on the sand. You sit up and watch as they fuck her in all her holes...'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 30, 'gangbang', 'dom'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -532,8 +532,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 						elseif PCloswimwear = 1:
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/wash_horse_swim.jpg"></center>'
 						end
-						'You jump in the river and swim over to Desperado. You take your time, washing his beautiful chestnut coat.'
-						'After half an hour, you are satisfied with your work and Desperado is ready to be taken back home.'
+						'You jump in the river and swim over to Desperado. You take your time washing his beautiful chestnut coat.'
+						'After half an hour, you are satisfied with your work, and Desperado is ready to be taken back home.'
 						if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
 
 						act 'Get out of the water':
@@ -561,8 +561,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 							elseif PCloswimwear = 1:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/wash_horse_mira_swim.jpg"></center>'
 							end
-							'You invite Mira to wash Desperado with you; having nothing better to do she agrees.'
-							'Both of you swim over to Desperado and begin to splash water on him. You chat with Mira and sometimes splash her instead.'
+							'You invite Mira to wash Desperado with you; she agrees with nothing better to do.'
+							'You swim over to Desperado and begin to splash water on him. You chat with Mira and sometimes splash her instead.'
 							'After half an hour, you think Desperado looks cleaner than before and is ready to be taken back home.'
 							if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
 
@@ -616,14 +616,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_go_home.jpg"></center>'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I have to go home, " Mira said to you and began to gather her stuff.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I have to go home, " Mira said and began gathering her stuff.'
 
 		act 'Continue': gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 	elseif Mira_no = 0 and MiraLoc = 1 and hour > 8 and hour < 20 and sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and PC_arrive = 1:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_in_river.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Arriving at the beach, you see Mira laying down, sunbathing on a towel.'
+		'Arriving at the beach, you see Mira lying down, sunbathing on a towel.'
 		MiraLoc = 1
 		minut += 5
 		mira_go_blok = 1
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirariver.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Why are you moping about on the shore, get in the water and swim with me?" - Mira called out to you as she waded into the river.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, why are you moping about on the shore? Get in the water and swim with me?" - Mira called out to you as she waded into the river.'
 				minut += 1
 				Miraswimday = daystart
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/undressbch1.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'"Wait Mira, I have to change out of my clothes!" you cry in response, although she could hardly hear you as she is already splashing around in the river.'
+					'"Wait, Mira, I have to change out of my clothes!" you cry in response, although she can hardly hear you as she is already splashing around in the river.'
 					'You start to take off your clothes.'
 					if func('changingroom','count_swim_item') > 0:
 						act 'Change into swimwear':
@@ -661,13 +661,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 							lastwornbranumber['swim'] = brawornnumber
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip_all', 'VillageRiver'
 							inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
-							'Without hesitation, you take off all your clothes and neatly fold them before putting them down in a pile. Without your clothes holding you back, you can go for a nice swim in the river or just lie down in the sand and do some sunbathing.'
+							'Without hesitation, you take off all your clothes and neatly fold them before putting them down in a pile. Without your clothes holding you back, you can go for a nice swim in the river or lie down in the sand and sunbathe.'
 
 							act 'Swim':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/rivertwogirlsnude'+rand(0,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
-								'You wade into the river, and have fun with Mira spraying each other with water.'
+								'You wade into the river and have fun with Mira spraying each other with water.'
 								if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
 								temp_gr = rand(0,15)
 								cumspclnt = 4 & gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -699,13 +699,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'get_changed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/undressbch.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You put on our swimwear and neatly fold your clothes before putting them down in a pile, now you can go for a nice swim in the river or just lie down in the sand and do some sunbathing.'
+		'You put on your swimwear and neatly fold your clothes before putting them down in a pile. Now you can go for a nice swim in the river or just lie down in the sand and sunbathe.'
 		if PCloswimwear = 1:
 			act 'Swim':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/rivertwogirls.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You wade into the river, and have fun with Mira spraying each other with water.'
+				'You wade into the river and have fun with Mira spraying each other with water.'
 				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
 				temp_gr = rand(0,15)
 				cumspclnt = 4 & gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -729,12 +729,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'second_thoughts':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirariver.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	if func('changingroom','count_swim_item') = 0:
-		'"Actually Mira, I can''t come in right now, as I didn''t bring a swimsuit" you replied you her. "I''m going to stay on the shore for a bit."'
+		'"Actually, Mira, I can''t come in right now, as I didn''t bring a swimsuit", you replied you here. "I''m going to stay on the shore for a bit."'
 		*nl
-		'You should probably buy some swimwear if you intend of spending time at the beach'
+		'You should probably buy some swimwear if you intend to spend time at the beach.'
 		*nl
 	else
-		'"Actually Mira, I''ve changed my mind, I don''t feel like swimming just now," you replied you her. "I''m going to stay on the shore for a bit."'
+		'"Actually, Mira, I''ve changed my mind. I don''t feel like swimming just now," you replied to her. "I''m going to stay on the shore for a bit."'
 	end
 	minut += 1
 	npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
@@ -786,19 +786,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 			if npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and miraprost > 0 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'You and Mira talk about her being the village prostitute and how she can improve her performance.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and sunWeather = 1:
-				'It is always nice to talk with Mira and you gossip about boys.'
+				'It is always lovely to talk with Mira, and you gossip about boys.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 15 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'You and Mira talk about clothes and shopping, she has a thing for shoes but can''t wear pretty heels because of all the mud.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and sunWeather = 1:
-				'Mira asks you about Pavlovsk and you tell her all about it.'
+				'Mira asks you about Pavlovsk, and you tell her all about it.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 9 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'You talk to Mira about what it is like living in the village.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 8 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'Mira breaks the silence, "What brings you here to the village?"'
-				'"My granma-ma and Pop-pop live here, my folks like to come here over the summer. They think the country air will be good for me."'
+				'"My granma-ma and Pop-pop live here. My folks like to come here over the summer. They think the country air will be good for me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 7 and sunWeather = 1:
-				'You decide to strike up some conversation with Mira, "So what is there to do here in the village?"'
-				'"It''s a lot quieter than a town, but we do have a shop, this lovely beach and there are some beautiful walks. Other than that there''s only the gopnik guys but they are just after one thing and I don''t want that, plus dad would kill me."'
+				'You decide to speak with Mira, "So what is there to do here in the village?"'
+				'"It''s a lot quieter than a town, but we have a shop, this lovely beach, and some beautiful walks. Other than that, there are only the Gopnik guys, but they are just after one thing, and I don''t want that. Plus, dad would kill me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 7 and sunWeather = 1:
 				if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 				'You and Mira are chatting about trivial things.'
@@ -816,8 +816,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapunish':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirapunish.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Mira, she is looking distressed and embarrassingly smiles as you start asking what happened. She pleads you to release her. As you untie her, she explains that Kolyamba punished her for barely biting his cock as she sucked it...'
-	'"Thank God you showed up." she says with a sigh of relief as you untie her. "I''m glad it was you who found me and not one of those old hags from the village. They would be calling me a whore and I would get scolded about being promiscuous. Those old hags hate us you know. We''re young and beautiful and they are just mean old wrenches." said the naked Mira, revealing her true feelings about the villagers. She continues quietly, "Or it could have been even worse, someone could have abused me, raped me or even killed m..." All of a sudden she stops and lunges herself in your arms weeping. "Thank you," she tells you. "You saved my life!"'
+	'You approach Mira. She looks distressed and embarrassingly smiles as you start asking what happened. She pleads with you to release her. As you untie her, she explains that Kolyamba punished her for barely biting his cock as she sucked it...'
+	'"Thank God you showed up," she says with a sigh of relief as you untie her. "I''m glad you found me and not one of those old hags from the village. They would call me a whore, and I would get scolded for being promiscuous. Those old hags hate us, you know. We''re young and beautiful, and they are just mean old wretches." said the naked Mira, revealing her true feelings about the villagers. She continues quietly, "Or it could have been even worse. Someone could have abused me, raped me or even killed m..." Then, she suddenly stops and lunges in your arms, weeping. "Thank you," she tells you. "You saved my life!"'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 end
@@ -831,13 +831,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 	temp_gr = rand(0,10)
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/mitkaguysriver.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Oh, hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, so it''s just you today?" Kolyamba grinned.'
+	'"Oh, hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So it''s just you today?" Kolyamba grinned.'
 	if temp_gr <= 4:
-		'"There doesn''t seem to be anyone else around and all of us are as horny as bullfrogs, you want to have a little fun with us? Come on, spread your legs, show us your pussy and start playing with yourself..."'
+		'"There doesn''t seem to be anyone else around, and all of us are as horny as bullfrogs. Do you want to have a little fun with us? Come on, spread your legs, show us your pussy and start playing with yourself..."'
 	elseif temp_gr > 4 and temp_gr <= 8:
-		'"There doesn''t seem to be anyone around, and we are as horny as bullfrogs, you want to have a little fun with us? How about you give us a blowjob? We''ll be really grateful, ha-ha!"'
+		'"There doesn''t seem to be anyone around, and we are as horny as bullfrogs. Do you want to have a little fun with us? How about you give us a blowjob? We''ll be really grateful, ha-ha!"'
 	else
-		'"Ah, no Mira, it''s just our other hot babe. Come here lovely, we have something really special for you."'
+		'"Ah, no, Mira, it''s just our other hot babe. Come here, lovely. We have something exceptional for you."'
 	end
 	if temp_gr < 4:
 		act 'Pleasure Kolyamba':
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly take off your pants and climb onto Kolyamba, grabbing his cock, leading it inside you.'
+			'You quickly take off your pants and climb onto Kolyamba, grabbing his cock, and leading it inside you.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 				temp_gr = rand(0,2)
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasyan, rolls you onto your back, sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
+					'Vasyan rolls you onto your back, sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya steps up to you and slaps you in the face while pulling out his cock forcing your on your knees so he can slap you with his dick.'
+					'Vasya steps up to you and slaps you in the face while pulling out his cock, forcing you on your knees so he can beat you with his dick.'
 					'He forcefully shoves the cock into your mouth and cums lavishly in your mouth...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -899,7 +899,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get down on your knees and start licking Kolyamba''s dick, after a while you start sucking it like a popsicle...'
+			'You get down on your knees and start licking Kolyamba''s dick. Then, after a while, you start sucking it like a popsicle...'
 			'He only manages to hold out for a short time finishing in your mouth...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -911,7 +911,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 				temp_gr = rand(0,2)
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasyan, lays you onto your back, using his fingers stimulating your vaginal lips while sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
+					'Vasyan lays you onto your back, using his fingers to stimulate your vaginal lips while sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex6.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasyan steps up and roughs you up a little with his hands and then takes out his dick forcing you to suck him off.'
+					'Vasyan roughs you up with his hands and then takes out his dick, forcing you to suck him off.'
 					'He shoves the cock into your mouth and soon cums violently...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -933,7 +933,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasyan forces you on all four, telling you that you will enjoy this. He pulls out his dick and starts fucking you in the ass.'
+					'Vasyan forces you on all fours, telling you that you will enjoy this. Then, he pulls out his dick and starts fucking you in the ass.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -952,8 +952,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Kolyamba looks you in the eyes and asks if you trust him. You gulp and reply, "Yes." He takes out a blindfold and places it over your eyes so you can''t see what''s happening next. Kolyamba then proceeds taking both or your clothes off. You stand in front of him blindfolded, naked, and full of anticipation.'
-			'He orders you to get down on your knees, he grabs your head and tells you to open your mouth. While pleasuring him he orders you to stop and moves the cock away from the mouth. He then lies down on the ground and tells you to mount him. You move on top of him while he grabs his cock and leads it inside your ass. He frantically starts thrusting his cock inside your ass, cumming after a short while.'
+			'Kolyamba looks you in the eyes and asks if you trust him. You gulp and reply, "Yes." He takes out a blindfold and places it over your eyes so you can''t see what''s happening next. Kolyamba then proceeds to take both of your clothes off. You stand in front of him, blindfolded, naked, and full of anticipation.'
+			'He orders you to get down on your knees. He grabs your head and tells you to open your mouth. While pleasuring him, he orders you to stop and moves the cock away from the mouth. He then lies down on the ground and tells you to mount him. You move on top of him while he grabs his cock and leads it inside your ass. He frantically starts thrusting his cock inside your ass, cumming after a short while.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasyan tells you he heard about a sex position where both of you will reach ecstasy. Intrigued by this you take your clothes off and start caressing his cock. He removes your hand from his cock and tells you to get down on your hands and knees. Vasya walks behind you, grabs his cock and enters you from behind. You gasp as he mounts you. Soon enough you both cry out in ecstasy cumming at the same time.'
+					'Vasyan tells you he heard about a sex position where both of you will reach ecstasy. Intrigued by this, you take your clothes off and start caressing his cock. He removes your hand from his cock and tells you to get down on your hands and knees. Vasya walks behind you, grabs his cock and enters you from behind. You gasp as he mounts you. Soon enough, you both cry out in ecstasy cumming at the same time.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
@@ -986,7 +986,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex10.jpg"></center>'
 					'Vasyan steps closer to you and tells you he wants his cock sucked. You drop down on your knees and start sucking his glans.'
-					'Feeling dissatisfied by your performance he grabs you by the head and forces his cock deep down your throat mumbling something about teaching you how to do it properly. He finishes inside your mouth...'
+					'Feeling dissatisfied by your performance, he grabs you by the head. He forces his cock deep down your throat, mumbling something about teaching you how to do it properly. Finally, he finishes inside your mouth...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishers':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/hifishers.jpg"></center>'
-			'You politely greet the fishermen, but they are totally focused on fishing, one of them absently waves in your general direction in response.'
+			'You politely greet the fishermen, but they are too focused on fishing. One of them absently waves in your general direction in response.'
 
 			if fishersQW >= 3:
 				act 'Chat':
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishers':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep watching as the fishermen throw out their lures, one of them catches a fish and shows off his trophy before putting it into the fish bail. The two of you chat about fishing.'
+					'You keep watching as the fishermen throw out their lures. One catches a fish and shows off his trophy before putting it into the fish bail. The two of you chat about fishing.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'gadriver', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1053,7 +1053,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishers':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decide to try your luck at fishing and ask the fishermen if they could lend you a fishing rod. A friend of the family, Uncle Stepan points to a pile of spare rods and tells you to pick one.'
+					'You decide to try your luck at fishing and ask the fishermen if they could lend you a fishing rod. Uncle Stepan, a friend of the family, points to a pile of spare rods and tells you to pick one.'
 
 					act 'Fishing':gt 'gadriver', 'fishing'
 				end
@@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishers':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decide to join your new friends, Uncle Stepan tells you he has plenty of spare rods, and he hands you a rod while his eyes travel up and down your body.'
+					'You decide to join your new friends. Uncle Stepan tells you he has plenty of spare rods and hands you a rod while his eyes travel up and down your body.'
 
 					act 'Fishing':gt 'gadriver', 'fishing'
 				end
@@ -1084,7 +1084,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 	*clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/gadriver.jpg"></center>'
-	'The stream quietly flows over the rocks, pleasantly tickling your ears. You gaze at the village that''s completely peaceful, there is a sense of serenity about it today.'
+	'The stream quietly flows over the rocks, pleasantly tickling your ears. You gaze at the village that''s entirely peaceful. There is a sense of serenity about it today.'
 	'You caught <<fish>> fish.'
 	if hour < 22:
 		act 'Throw the bait':
@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/fishingriver.jpg"></center>'
-			'You throw out the lure and carefully watch the bobber for signs of nibble.'
+			'You throw out the lure and watch the bobber for signs of a nibble.'
 
 			if temp_gr > rand(15,19):
 				cla
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					act 'Throw another bait':gt 'gadriver', 'fishing'
 				end
 			else
-				'The bobber remains perfectly still, eventually you decide to try a different lure.'
+				'The bobber remains perfectly still. Eventually, you decide to try a different lure.'
 				act 'Retrieve bait':gt 'gadriver', 'fishing'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1149,7 +1149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re feeling tired, so you return the fishing rod to uncle Stepan.'
+			'You''re tired, so you return the fishing rod to uncle Stepan.'
 			if fish > 0:
 				act 'Release your catch':
 					cla
@@ -1159,7 +1159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decide to release all the fish you caught today, the other fishermen shake their heads disapprovingly, throwing sidelong glances at your body as you dump the fish back into the river.'
+					'You decide to release all the fish you caught today. The other fishermen shake their heads disapprovingly, throwing sidelong glances at your body as you dump the fish back into the river.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
@@ -1171,7 +1171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-					'You give all the fish you caught to uncle Stepan and he makes a show out of reluctantly accepting them, but you can see that he is actually quite happy with this arrangement.'
+					'You give all the fish you caught to uncle Stepan, and he makes a show out of reluctantly accepting them. Still, you can see that he is pretty happy with this arrangement.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
@@ -1184,8 +1184,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/villcat2.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you enter the house, Boniface immediately jumps down to the floor and twines around your feet. The furry beast starts yowling very loudly and pawing at your legs. He has obviously detected the smell of fresh fish. You treat Boniface to a small fish and within a few minutes all that remains is a pile of fish bones.'
-					if fish >0: fish = 0 & 'You try to give the rest of the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and point at your grandfather. He sighs heavily then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
+					'As soon as you enter the house, Boniface immediately jumps to the floor and twines around your feet. Then, the furry beast starts loudly yowling and pawing at your legs. He has obviously detected the smell of fresh fish. You treat Boniface to a small fish, and within a few minutes, all that remains is a pile of fish bones.'
+					if fish >0: fish = 0 & 'You try to give the rest of the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and points at your grandfather. He sighs heavily, then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
 
 					act 'Finish': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1194,7 +1194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					*clr
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/givefish.jpg"></center>'
-					'You try to give the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and point at your grandfather. He sighs heavily then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
+					'You try to give the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and points at your grandfather. He sighs heavily, then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
 
 					act 'Finish': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to release all the fish you caught today, the other fishermen shake their heads disapprovingly, throwing sidelong glances at your body as you dump the fish back into the river.'
+				'You decide to release all the fish you caught today. The other fishermen shake their heads disapprovingly, throwing sidelong glances at your body as you dump the fish back into the river.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
@@ -1233,7 +1233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/talkfishers.jpg"></center>'
-				'You give all the fish caught to uncle Stepan and he reluctantly accepts them, you can see he is quite happy with this arrangement.'
+				'You give all the fish caught to uncle Stepan, who reluctantly accepts them. You can see he is pretty happy with this arrangement.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
@@ -1247,8 +1247,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/villcat2.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you enter the house, Boniface immediately jumps down to the floor and twines around your feet. The furry beast starts yowling very loudly and pawing at your legs. He has obviously detected the smell of fresh fish. You treat Boniface to a small fish and within a few minutes all that remains is a pile of fish bones.'
-					if fish >0: fish = 0 & 'You try to give the rest of the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and point at your grandfather. He sighs heavily then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
+					'As soon as you enter the house, Boniface immediately jumps to the floor and twines around your feet. Then, the furry beast starts loudly yowling and pawing at your legs. He has obviously detected the smell of fresh fish. You treat Boniface to a small fish, and within a few minutes, all that remains is a pile of fish bones.'
+					if fish >0: fish = 0 & 'You try to give the rest of the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and points at your grandfather. He sighs heavily, then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
 
 					act 'Finish': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 					*clr
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/givefish.jpg"></center>'
-					'You try to give the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and point at your grandfather. He sighs heavily then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
+					'You try to give the fish to your grandmother, but she takes one look at the intact fish and points at your grandfather. He sighs heavily, then takes the fish outside to clean them.'
 
 					act 'Finish': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end

+ 66 - 66
locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -108,30 +108,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 		if npc_rel['A60'] > 0 and metmira = 1:
-			'Just down the road from your grandparents house is <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''miroslavahome'', ''start''">Mira''s house</a>.'
+			'Just down the road from your grandparents'' house is <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''miroslavahome'', ''start''">Mira''s house</a>.'
 			act 'Go to Mira''s house': minut += 5 & gt 'miroslavahome', 'start'
 		end
 		*nl
 
 		if month >= 6 and month <= 9:
 			if hour >= 6 and hour <= 16:
-				'An old farm truck is parked halfway off one of the roads nearby. The farmer who owns it will buy <a href="exec: gt ''gadukino'',''collection_point''">mushrooms and berries</a> from the locals to sell back in the city. He makes multiple trips from Gadukino to the city each day to ensure the freshest produce so he can be found from 6 am to 4 pm.'
+				'An old farm truck is parked halfway off one of the roads nearby. The farmer who owns it will buy <a href="exec: gt ''gadukino'',''collection_point''">mushrooms and berries</a> from the locals to sell back in the city. He makes multiple trips from Gadukino to the city daily to ensure the freshest produce so he can be found from 6 am to 4 pm.'
 			else
-				'This time of year, a truck usually comes by multiple times per day between 6 am and 4 pm to purchase mushrooms and berries from the locals.'
+				'This time of year, a truck usually comes by multiple times a day between 6 am and 4 pm to purchase mushrooms and berries from the locals.'
 			end
 		else
-			'During the summer, a truck usually comes into town from the city to buy fresh mushrooms and berries from the locals. It''s not the right season for it right now though.'
+			'During the summer, a truck usually comes into town from the city to buy fresh mushrooms and berries from the locals. It''s not the right season for it right now, though.'
 		end
 
 		!Looks like no reference to Gadmarket exists. Adding it...FinnMacha
 		*nl
-		'In the center of the village is a small grass covered square where villagers gather to meet and discuss or argue politics or village life.'
-		'Near the square sits the old <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''gad_church'',''start''">chapel</a>, it is not in the best shape, but it appears to be well loved.'
+		'In the centre of the village is a small grass-covered square where villagers gather to meet and discuss or argue about politics or village life.'
+		'Near the square sits the old <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''gad_church'',''start''">chapel</a>, it is not in the best shape, but it appears well-loved.'
 		if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
-			'One of the buildings facing the square has a sign saying <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gadmarket''">General Store</a>. A sign in the door proclaims it "OPEN". It looks like the only place in the village to buy goods.'
+			'One of the buildings facing the square has a sign saying, <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gadmarket''">General Store</a>. A sign on the door proclaims it "OPEN". It looks like the only place in the village to buy goods.'
 			act 'Go to the general store': minut += 5 & gt 'gadmarket'
 		else
-			'One of the building facing the square has a sign saying General Store. A sign in the door proclaims it "CLOSED". It looks like the only place in the village to buy goods.'
+			'One of the buildings facing the square has a sign saying, General Store. A sign on the door proclaims it "CLOSED". It looks like the only place in the village to buy goods.'
 		end
 
 		act 'Walk to the forest road (0:10)':minut += 10 & gt 'gadroad'
@@ -170,10 +170,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'collection_point':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/collection_point.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Parked halfway off the road is an old, unmarked truck. The back doors are open and inside is a farmer looking to buy either edible mushrooms or berries the locals find while out in the nearby woods.'
-	'Some find it odd that they''re operating out of a truck, but you imagine it''s cheaper to maintain than a shop and it lets them get around to other villages like this one to buy their mushrooms and berries, too.'
-	'There is a small sign hanging off of one of the back doors, which says:'
-	'"Buying: mushrooms 25<b>₽</b>/kg, berries 25<b>₽</b>/kg"'
+	'Parked halfway off the road is an old, unmarked truck. The back doors are open, and inside is a farmer looking to buy either edible mushrooms or berries the locals find while out in the nearby woods.'
+	'Some find it odd that they''re operating out of a truck. Still, you imagine it''s cheaper to maintain than a shop, and it lets them get around to other villages like this one to buy their mushrooms and berries, too.'
+	'There is a small sign hanging off of one of the back doors which says:'
+	'"Buying: mushrooms <b>₽</b>25/kg, berries <b>₽</b>25/kg"'
 
 	act 'Go back to the village center':minut += 1 & gt 'gadukino'
 	if boletus > 0 and bilberry > 0:
@@ -220,18 +220,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 	minut += 30
 	menu_off = 1
 	*nl
-	'At this hour of the night, the village is only illuminated by the light of the moon. You know this will be to your advantage. No one will be able to see you coming... That is, if there were anyone out at night. You prowl the village looking for prey, but as the minutes pass, your frustration grows.'
+	'At this hour of the night, the village is only illuminated by the light of the moon. You know this will be to your advantage. No one will be able to see you coming... That is if there were anyone out at night. You prowl the village looking for prey, but as the minutes pass, your frustration grows.'
 	if rand(1,100) < 70:
 		minut += 30
 		pcs_mood -= 5
 		*nl
-		'God, this place is dull! After searching for an hour, you find no one; not even a stray cat seems to be out and about tonight. You give up reluctantly, pondering how else you are going to feed tonight.'
+		'God, this place is dull! After searching for an hour, you find no one; not even a stray cat seems to be out and about tonight. You give up reluctantly, pondering how else you will feed tonight.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gadukino'
 	else
 		'You are getting really antsy to feed, and after finding absolutely no one outside, you decide that breaking into someone''s house, risky as it is, is still better than going hungry.'
 		*nl
 		!Another rand_check here to choose the scene?
-		'You break the lock of the first house you see and go inside. You sneak around the house, looking for a meal, but there''s nobody there. This entire night is a bust... Well, since you''re here, you might as well try and see if there''s any regular food that helps with your hunger, even though you doubt it.'
+		'You break the lock of the first house you see and go inside. You sneak around the house, looking for a meal, but there''s nobody there. So this entire night is a bust... But, since you''re here, you might as well try and see if there''s any regular food that helps with your hunger, even though you doubt it.'
 		'You head to the kitchen for a midnight snack, and as you tear through the fridge, eating whatever looks appetizing, you hear a man curse.'
 		'"Shit, what the hell happened to my door?!"'
 		'You freeze on the spot. You didn''t think anybody would actually come home while you were still here, but now that they did, maybe you can still salvage this mess.'
@@ -244,12 +244,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/succubus/kitchennude.jpg"></center>'
 			'Heavy footsteps echo through the corridor, approaching the kitchen, and with nowhere to hide, you decide to strip instead. You are here to feed, after all, and if he sees you nude, surely he will forget what he is angry about.'
 			'When the man enters the dark kitchen, his first reaction is about what you''d expect, "Who the hell are you!?"'
-			'You give him a good look at your body; according to your plan, that should be enough to calm him down. Unfortunately, he doesn''t seem to be aware of the plan, cause he is having none of it.'
+			'You give him a good look at your body; according to your plan, that should be enough to calm him down. But, unfortunately, he doesn''t seem to be aware of the plan cause he is having none of it.'
 			'"Have you been eating my food?! Get the hell out of my house!"'
 			*nl
-			'He grabs you and starts dragging you towards the door. You protest and try in vain to seduce him, wondering how anyone could resist your charms like this. Then you remember that you are stronger than him - weird how easily superhuman strength can slip your mind.'
-			'As soon as you resist his pull, he grinds to a halt, confused by the fact that he can''t move you further. With the tables turned, you grab him and half-drag, half-throw him into his own living room where he lands on his back, stunned by the fact that this woman so easily overpowered him.'
-			'You pull his pants off and, already nude yourself, lower your pussy to his cock. He may have played the angry man, but the fact that it stands at attention soothes your bruised ego - your seduction efforts didn''t go completely unnoticed - and you plunge yourself down on top of him.'
+			'He grabs you and starts dragging you towards the door. You protest and try vainly to seduce him, wondering how anyone could resist your charms like this. Then you remember that you are stronger than him - crazy how easily superhuman strength can slip your mind.'
+			'As soon as you resist his pull, he grinds to a halt, confused by the fact that he can''t move you further. Then, with the tables turned, you grab him and half-drag, half-throw him into his own living room, where he lands on his back, stunned by the fact that this woman so easily overpowered him.'
+			'You pull his pants off and, already nude, lower your pussy to his cock. He may have played the angry man, but the fact that it stands at attention soothes your bruised ego - your seduction efforts didn''t go completely unnoticed - and you plunge yourself down on top of him.'
 
 			act 'Feed on him':
 				*clr
@@ -276,17 +276,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 
 				'You ride him hard, desperate to get your hungry pussy the nourishment it requires.'
 				if scrand < succublvl:
-					'Your seduction and succubus powers were strong enough to get your victim hard, but they weren''t enough to make him forget about his situation: He is giving you hateful looks, clearly pissed about his door and food and, oh yeah, the fact you are raping him, but you simply ignore that.'
-					'All you need is his sperm. You could care less about his happiness, and if he wants to complain about a woman like you fucking his brains out, that''s his problem. Just as you''re thinking that, your powers surge and force him to come, unloading his jizz deep into your waiting cunt.'
+					'Your seduction and succubus powers were strong enough to get your victim hard. Still, they weren''t enough to make him forget about his situation: He is giving you hateful looks, clearly pissed about his door and food and, oh yeah, you are raping him, but you simply ignore that.'
+					'All you need is his sperm. You could care less about his happiness, and if he wants to complain about a woman like you fucking his brains out, that''s his problem. Just as you''re thinking, your powers surge and force him to come, unloading his jizz deep into your waiting cunt.'
 					*nl
-					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off of your passed-out plaything and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix.'
+					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly. Still, after coming inside you <<$scxcum>> and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off your passed-out plaything and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes and one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix.'
 					'Then you head out the back door, making sure to break the handle on the way out - you''re nothing if not consistent.'
 				else
 					'He was resisting you initially, but after a while, your powers break any resistance he had in him. By the time his first orgasm hits and he shoots his sperm into your needy cunt, he would have betrayed his own mother, much less broken his front door and laid his fridge at your feet, just to be inside you a little longer.'
-					'However unsavory the first few minutes of your meeting, this state of bliss you share with him pushes that memory in the far back of your minds and lets both of you enjoy the hard ride you''re giving him.'
+					'However unsavoury the first few minutes of your meeting, this state of bliss you share with him pushes that memory into the far back of your mind and lets both of you enjoy the hard ride you''re giving him.'
 					*nl
-					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off of your passed-out plaything, patting his head affectionately, and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix. There''s nothing better than sex with a willing subject.'
-					'Then you head out the back door. For a split second, you consider breaking that door too... but why add insult to injury when he has pleased you so?'
+					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly. Still, after coming inside you <<$scxcum>> and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off your passed-out plaything, patting his head affectionately, and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes and one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix. There''s nothing better than sex with a willing subject.'
+					'Then you head out the back door. For a split second, you consider breaking that door, too... but why add insult to injury when he has pleased you?'
 				end
 				killvar 'scfeed' & killvar 'scrand'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 	if npc_rel['A60'] = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/miroslava.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking around the village you notice a young girl around your own age. You do not recognize her from the last time you were at the village. She is pulling on a rope attached to the collar on a small calf. The calf grunts with displeasure, shakes her head and refuses to move any further.'
+		'Walking around the village, you notice a young girl your age. Unfortunately, you do not recognize her from the last time you were in the village. She is pulling on a rope attached to the collar of a small calf. The calf grunts with displeasure, shakes her head and refuses to move further.'
 		act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		act 'Help her':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -314,10 +314,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to lend a hand to help the girl with the calf. You are lonely in the village, and maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could make your trips to Gadukino less boring. You walk over to the girl and introduce yourself and ask if she wants help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope, while you walk over behind the calf and give it a load slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately moves forward away from you. The girl smiles in thanks and tells you her name is Miroslava, but everyone calls her Mira.'
-			'Together you are able to guide the calf back into its pen. Mira turns out to be quite a sociable girl and conversationalist. You learn that her family was recently forced to move to the village from the city. Her father''s huge gambling debts to some questionable men forced him to eventually sell the family''s property in the city to pay them back. Mira is having a rough time adjusting to the life in a small village. She misses the apartment in the center of the city and the money to buy nice dresses and makeup with. After selling everything and paying off the debt, her father was told to leave the city "or else...".'
-			'They were left quite poor and could only afford to buy a house in this run-down, dust-covered village.'
-			'You walk with her and chat until you reach her house, which turns out to be just down the road from your grandparent''s place. Mira invites you to come and visit her any time. She is just as bored in the village as you are.'
+			'You decide to lend a hand to help the girl with the calf. You are lonely in the village, and maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could make your trips to Gadukino less boring. You walk over to the girl, introduce yourself, and ask if she wants help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope while you walk over behind the calf and give it a load slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately moves forward away from you. The girl smiles in thanks and tells you her name is Miroslava, but everyone calls her Mira.'
+			'Together you can guide the calf back into its pen. Mira turns out to be quite a sociable girl and conversationalist. You learn that her family was recently forced to move to the village from the city. Her father''s substantial gambling debts to some questionable men forced him to sell the family''s property in the city to pay them back. Mira is having a rough time adjusting to life in a small village. She misses the apartment in the city centre and the money to buy lovely dresses and makeup. After selling everything and paying off the debt, her father was told to leave the city "or else...".'
+			'They were left relatively poor and could only afford a house in this run-down, dust-covered village.'
+			'You walk with her and chat until you reach her house, which turns out to be just down the road from your grandparents'' place. Mira invites you to come and visit her anytime. She is just as bored in the village as you are.'
 
 			act 'Finish your walk': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 		! mira 2nd wish - pose as prostitute - one time event to fire so check for this first before repeatable mira events
 		if npc_QW['A60'] = 15 and temper >= 10 and sunWeather = 1 and miraprost = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraqw7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Walking through the village, you notice Mira, digging in her vegetable garden. She stands with her ass high in the air, and to your amazement, she isn''t wearing panties. You get a good look at her pussy lips...'
+			'Walking through the village, you notice Mira digging in her vegetable garden. She stands with her ass high in the air, and to your amazement, she isn''t wearing panties. You get a good look at her pussy lips...'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 			gs 'willpower', 'prostitution', 'force'
@@ -339,12 +339,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira0,<<rand(0,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You quietly sneak up to her, but she notices your approach and turns around, her hands pull her skirt back into place, blushing. You stare at her for a few seconds silently, and then ask, "Why don''t you have any panties on?" Mira, her eyes darting about, shifting her weight from foot to foot, explaining hesitantly, "Well what happened is, well it''s very hot and I thought it would feel better without panties." You interrupt her with an upraised hand as you get an idea for your second wish... You remind her she still owes you two wishes and you''re ready to collect your second wish. You tell Mira to sit down and she reluctantly agrees. When she is finally sitting, you order her to show you her pussy. Mira grumbles and glares at you, but eventually sighs and slowly lifts up her skirt, giving you a good look at her crotch.'
+					'You quietly sneak up on her, but she notices your approach and turns around. Her hands pull her skirt back into place, blushing. You stare at her for a few seconds silently and then ask, "Why don''t you have any panties on?" Mira, her eyes darting about, shifting her weight from foot to foot, hesitantly said, "Well, what happened is, well, it''s scorching. I thought it would feel better without panties." You interrupt her with an upraised hand as you get an idea for your second wish... You remind her she still owes you two wishes, and you''re ready to collect your second wish. You tell Mira to sit down, and she reluctantly agrees. You order her to show you her pussy when she is finally sitting. Mira grumbles and glares at you but eventually sighs and slowly lifts up her skirt, giving you a good look at her crotch.'
 
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirawish2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You enjoy the view, then snap your fingers as an amazing idea comes to mind for your second wish. Mira says she thought her second wish was over, but you wouldn''t make it that easy. You ask if she is thinking about backing out of granting your wishes, but Mira says no, she will go through with them. You smile and tell her to follow you.'
+						'You enjoy the view, then snap your fingers as a fantastic idea comes to mind for your second wish. Mira says she thought her second wish was over, but you wouldn''t make it that easy. You ask if she is thinking about backing out of granting your wishes, but Mira says no, she will go through with them. You smile and tell her to follow you.'
 
 						act 'Lead her to the road':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirawish2_1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lead her out to the main road. You tell Mira, that she is to pose as a prostitute and attempt to get a customer or two. This is your second wish. You want Mira to become a prostitute and fulfill the desires of anyone who asks for her services. Mira looks shocked but nods that she will do it, Mira looks around the area and seeing no one else watching begins to pose by the roadside for passing cars...'
+							'You lead her out to the main road. You tell Mira that she is to pose as a prostitute and attempt to get a customer or two. This is your second wish. You want Mira to become a prostitute and fulfil the desires of anyone who asks for her services. Mira looks shocked but nods that she will do it. Mira looks around the area and, seeing no one else watching, begins to pose by the roadside for passing cars...'
 
 
 							act 'Wait for a car...':
@@ -363,30 +363,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 								miraprost += 1
 								npc_QW['A60'] = 16
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraprost.jpg"></center>'
-								'It isn''t long before Mira''s first customer pulls up in a nice vehicle. She takes a deep breath, looks you in the eyes, winks and approaches the vehicle and starts talking to the driver.'
-								'You can''t hear what she is saying but after only a few minutes the door opens and Mira steps into the vehicle. It pulls away, but doesn''t go far. You see it pull off the main road and head down a dirt road. Smiling and wanting to see the action, you run into the woods trying to head off the vehicle.'
+								'It isn''t long before Mira''s first customer pulls up in an excellent vehicle. She takes a deep breath, looks you in the eyes, winks, approaches the car, and starts talking to the driver.'
+								'You can''t hear what she is saying, but after only a few minutes, the door opens, and Mira steps into the vehicle. It pulls away but doesn''t go far. You see it pull off the main road and head down a dirt road. Smiling and wanting to see the action, you run into the woods, trying to head off the vehicle.'
 								gs 'stat'
 
 								act 'Watch her with the customer':
 									if rand(0,1) = 0:
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraprost1.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You walk up and look into the car. You see Mira giving one hell of a blowjob to her first customer. Her head is bobbing up and down on his 17cm cock.'
+										'You walk up and look into the car, and you see Mira giving one hell of a blowjob to her first customer. Her head is bobbing up and down on his 17cm cock.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 										gs 'stat'
 
 										act 'Hide':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraprost1_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'You duck for cover as the guy suddenly gets out of the car and opens the passenger door, grabs Mira''s head and starts forcing his cock deep into her throat.'
+											'You duck for cover as the guy suddenly gets out of the car, opens the passenger door, grabs Mira''s head, and starts forcing his cock deep into her throat.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 											gs 'stat'
 
 											act 'Keep watching':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraprost1_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'Eventually, the guy grunts and cums all over Mira''s face and into her mouth. The nicely dressed man pulls Mira out of the car, hands her a few bills and then drives off.'
-												'Mira walks back towards town counting the money he gave her as she absentmindedly licks the cum as it drips down her face. She smiles at you and shows you the money as you join her.'
+												'Eventually, the guy grunts and cums all over Mira''s face and into her mouth. Finally, the nicely dressed man pulls Mira out of the car, hands her a few bills and then drives off.'
+												'Mira walks back towards town, counting the money he gave her as she absentmindedly licks the cum as it drips down her face. Finally, she smiles and shows you the money as you join her.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 												gs 'stat'
 
@@ -404,22 +404,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 									else
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraprost2.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You walk up and look into the van. You see Mira showing her first customer her tits and rubbing her pussy. You see a hungry gleam in the guy''s eyes, which Mira returns right back.'
+										'You walk up, look into the van, and see Mira showing her first customer her tits and rubbing her pussy. You see a hungry gleam in the guy''s eyes, which Mira returns.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 20
 										gs 'stat'
 
 										act 'Keep watching':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraprost2_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Mira and the guy jump into the back of the van and you watch as he starts fucking her wet pussy. His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy. The guy pounds his 20cm cock deep into her pussy. From Mira''s grunts of partial ecstasy, partial pain, you know the guy is hitting or entering her cervix.'
+											'Mira and the guy jump into the back of the van, and you watch as he starts fucking her wet pussy. His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy. The guy pounds his 20cm cock deep into her pussy. From Mira''s grunts of partial joy and partial pain, you know the guy is hitting or entering her cervix.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 											gs 'stat'
 
 											act 'Hide':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums. '
-												'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and says thanks.'
+												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums.'
+												'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk. He gives her a nice wad of cash, and she walks to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and says thanks.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 												gs 'stat'
 
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 			if pcs_horny > 50 and rand(0,1) = 0:
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 				*nl
-				'You meet Mira, who is heading to the river to get some water, seeing you she decides to stop and chat with you for a few minutes.'
+				'You meet Mira, heading to the river to get some water. Seeing you, she decides to stop and chat with you for a few minutes.'
 
 				act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force'
@@ -467,11 +467,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 							elseif temp = 1:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasp1.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
-								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually sits down on the fence and slightly spreads her legs, showing you her bare pussy. She isn''t even wearing any panties!'
+								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually, sits down on the fence, and spreads her legs, showing you her bare pussy. She isn''t even wearing any panties!'
 							elseif temp = 2:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasp2.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
-								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually, sits down on the fence and, looking at you with a gleam in her eyes and a mischievous smile, she pulls aside panties showing off her wet pussy...'
+								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually, sits down on the fence and, looking at you with a gleam in her eyes and a mischievous smile, pulls aside her panties showing off her wet pussy...'
 							elseif temp = 3:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasp5.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 							if temp = 0:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasp3.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
-								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and sits down on a nearby fence. Mira glances around and spreads her legs... You are surprised to see, she isn''t wearing panties and her gaping pussy is oozing cum. She must have just been fucked.'
+								'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually, sits down on a nearby fence, glances around, and spreads her legs... You are surprised that she isn''t wearing panties and her gaping pussy is oozing cum. She must have just been fucked.'
 								'"Who did that to you?" you ask her. Mira just smiles devilishly and tells you that it''s a secret.'
 							elseif temp = 1:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasp4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -518,28 +518,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 				temp = rand(0,7)
 				if temp = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasyan and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasyan... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
+					'Walking through the village, you notice that Vasyan and Mira are having sex behind a shed. Mira moans as she rides his cock, and it seems she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasyan... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
 				elseif temp = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad6.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasyan and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasyan... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
+					'Walking through the village, you notice that Vasyan and Mira are having sex behind a shed. Mira moans as she rides his cock, and it seems she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasyan... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
 				elseif temp = 2:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad7.jpg"></center>'
 					'Walking through the village, you notice Kolyamba and Mira hiding behind some bushes. She''s squatting before him, passionately sucking on his cock...'
 				elseif temp = 3:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad8.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you notice behind the bushes Mira with Vasyan and Kolyamba. Mira is butt naked on all fours and taking turns sucking the boys members...'
+					'Walking through the village, you notice behind the bushes Mira with Vasyan and Kolyamba. Mira is butt naked on all fours and taking turns sucking the boys'' members...'
 				elseif temp = 4:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirahorny.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you see Mira. She sits on the fence intensely rubbing her pussy, as if no one is watching...'
+					'Walking through the village, you see Mira. She sits on the fence, intensely rubbing her pussy, as if no one is watching...'
 				elseif temp = 5:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you notice Mira behind a fence with Kolyamba. She squirms and moans, but dutifully exposes her bare butt to Kolyamba, who is trying to shove a bottle in her...'
+					'Walking through the village, you notice Mira behind a fence with Kolyamba. She squirms and moans but dutifully exposes her bare butt to Kolyamba, who is trying to shove a bottle in her...'
 				elseif temp = 6:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasexgad10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you see Mira, facing Mitka with her pants down and sticking her fingers in her ass...'
+					'Walking through the village, you see Mira facing Mitka with her pants down and sticking her fingers in her ass...'
 				elseif temp = 7:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirasexgad11.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the village, you meet Mira. You notice she is not wearing panties and the white thread of a tampon is sticking out of her pussy...'
+					'Walking through the village, you meet Mira. You notice she is not wearing panties, and the white thread of a tampon is sticking out of her pussy...'
 				end
 				if temp = 4:
 				     gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
@@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 			if npc_QW['A60'] >= 6:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira fucking Mitka. Mitka slowly grinds his cock deep into Mira''s pussy. You see Mira shudder under him as she climaxed. She moaned and raked his back with her fingernails as she squirted and continued to cum. Mitka increased his pace and started to roughly hammer his cock into her dripping pussy. With his left hand he reached for Mira''s right tit and started to squeeze it without mercy. Mira just squeals and laughs.'
+				'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira fucking Mitka. Mitka slowly grinds his cock deep into Mira''s pussy. You see Mira shudder under him as she climaxes. She moaned and raked his back with her fingernails as she squirted and continued to cum. Mitka increased his pace and roughly hammered his cock into her dripping pussy. With his left hand, he reached for Mira''s right tit and squeezed it without mercy; Mira just squealed and laughed.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -571,9 +571,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad3.jpg"></center>'
 						if rand(0,1) = 0:
-							'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. Within a few minutes you see Mitka begin to pick up the pace and he started to drive his cock faster and faster into Mira''s pussy until he grunts like a pig and dumps a huge load of cum into Mira''s pussy which is again squirting. After a few minutes of them just laying together holding each other and gasping for breath, they slowly begin to kiss and laugh as they freshen up. You smile and rub your own dripping snatch before moving away.'
+							'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignore everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. Within a few minutes, you see Mitka begin to pick up the pace. He starts to drive his cock faster and faster into Mira''s pussy until he grunts like a pig, dumping a massive load of cum into Mira''s pussy which is again squirting. After a few minutes of them laying together, holding each other and gasping for breath, they slowly begin to kiss and laugh as they freshen up. You smile and rub your own dripping snatch before moving away.'
 						else
-							'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. You see Mitka pull his cock out of Mira''s dripping pussy and he drives it deep into her ass, barebacked. Mira let''s out a short scream of protest as Mitka continues to drive his cock into her asshole until his pubes rub up against her ass. Mira writhes under his brutal onslaught. After only a few minutes, Mitka starts to slap her ass leaving bright red marks. Mitka begins to shudder from his thrusts into her ass. Finally, Mitka leans back with his dick still embedded balls deep in Mira''s asshole and lets out a bestial growl as he begins to cum...'
+							'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignore everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. You see Mitka pull his cock out of Mira''s dripping pussy, and he drives it deep into her ass, barebacked. Mira lets out a short scream of protest as Mitka continues to drive his cock into her asshole until his pubes rub up against her ass. Mira writhes under his brutal onslaught. After only a few minutes, Mitka starts to slap her ass, leaving bright red marks. Mitka begins to shudder from his thrusts into her ass. Finally, Mitka leans back with his dick still embedded balls deep in Mira''s asshole and lets out a bestial growl as he begins to cum...'
 						end
 						gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 4:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira, sucking Mitka''s cock in the backyard. She wraps her lips around it, almost completely taking the dick into her mouth. Sometimes she glances to the side...'
+				'Walking through the village, you notice Mira sucking Mitka''s cock in the backyard. She wraps her lips around it, almost entirely taking the dick into her mouth. Sometimes she glances to the side...'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -602,9 +602,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirasexgad1.jpg"></center>'
 						if rand(0,1) = 0:
-							'A couple of times you think, she''s about to notice you watching, but she never does, continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, quickly seeing this takes his dick in her hand and directs it into in her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all, and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You see she is about to rise from her knees, so you hastily depart.'
+							'You think she''s about to notice you watching a couple of times, but she never does, continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back, and Mira, quickly seeing this, takes his dick in her hand and directs it into her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You see she is about to rise from her knees, so you hastily depart.'
 						else
-							'Until she finally spots you watching her. You see she blushes crimson, but she does not stop sucking, only occasionally shifts her eyes in your direction. You continue to watch as if not seeing anything unusual, as Mira''s head bobs up and down continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, quickly seeing this takes his dick in her hand and directs it into in her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all, and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You smile at Mira with the most peaceful of expressions and walk away...'
+							'Until she finally spots you watching her. You see, she blushes crimson but does not stop sucking, only occasionally shifting her eyes in your direction. You watch as if not seeing anything unusual as Mira''s head bobs up and down, continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back, and Mira, quickly seeing this, takes his dick in her hand and directs it into her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You smile at Mira with the most peaceful of expressions and walk away...'
 						end
 						gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 				else
 					gs 'miroslava','miraclothes'
 				end
-				'You meet Mira, who is heading to the river to get some water, seeing you she decides to stop and chat with you for a few minutes.'
+				'You meet Mira, heading to the river to get some water. Seeing you, she decides to stop and chat with you for a few minutes.'
 
 				act 'Finish your walk': gt 'gadukino'
 			end
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'other_events':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, you see two old women, carrying boards...'
+		'Walking through the village, you see two old women carrying boards...'
 
 		act 'Finish your walk': gt 'gadukino'
 	elseif temp = 3:
@@ -673,10 +673,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'other_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if temper >= 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They kindly smile in your face, and as soon as you pass by, immediately start whispering among themselves...'
+			'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They kindly smile at you, and as soon as you pass by, they start whispering among themselves...'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They, as if on command, all huddle together and stare, as you walk by them...'
+			'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They, as if on command, all huddle together and stare as you walk by them...'
 		end
 
 		act 'Finish your walk': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -685,7 +685,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'other_events':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, a group of young boys, who look no older than 13 or 14, are playing in the road. Two of the older boys sit on an old, beat up dirt bike. You''re not even sure it works, but the kids are having fun playing on it nonetheless.'
+		'Walking through the village, a group of young boys, who look no older than 13 or 14, are playing in the road. Two older boys sit on an old, beat-up dirt bike. You''re not sure it works, but the kids are having fun playing on it.'
 
 		act 'Finish your walk': gt 'gadukino'
 	elseif temp = 5:

+ 137 - 135
locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -8,20 +8,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you hear someone catching up to you. Turning around, you see Mira nearing you.'
+	'Walking through the village, you hear someone catching up to you. Turning around, you see Mira nearing you.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-		'Mira ran immediately up to you and started gossiping.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I heard what happened," she began gasping for breath. "I overheard Mitka and Kolyamba."'
-		'You stood there in silence waiting for her to catch her breath and to see what she''ll say.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, could you ever forgive me for acting like a fool, I treated you like shit," she continued. "I had an epiphany and realized that you''re my only true friend here."'
-		'"So what now?," you asked, looking at her.'
-		'"Well, if you want, I can make it up to you?" she answered a bit embarrassed.'
-		'While you pondered what to answer, Mira stares at you, biting her lip impatiently.'
+		'Mira immediately ran up to you and started gossiping.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I heard what happened," She gasped for breath. "I overheard Mitka and Kolyamba."'
+		'You stood there in silence, waiting for her to catch her breath and see what she''d say.'
+		'"Sveta, could you ever forgive me for acting like a fool? I treated you like shit," she continued. "I had an epiphany and realized you''re my only true friend here."'
+		'"So what now?" you asked, looking at her.'
+		'"Well, if you want, I can make it up to you?" she answered, a bit embarrassed.'
+		'While you ponder what to answer, Mira stares at you, biting her lip impatiently.'
 
 		act 'Agree':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-			'You finally decide what to answer Mira.'
-			'"Ok, I agree to a truce," you say smiling, genuinely filled with joy ending all the drama. "I forgive you."'
+			'You finally decide what to answer.'
+			'"Okay, I agree to a truce," you say, smiling, genuinely filled with joy ending all the drama. "I forgive you."'
 			'"And...?" Mira asks you.'
 			'Instead of answering her, you grab her by the arm and pull her into the bushes.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
@@ -44,12 +44,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-			'You finally decide what to answer Mira.'
-			'"Ok, I agree to a truce," you say smiling, genuinely filled with joy that all the drama has come to an end. "I forgive you."'
+			'You finally decide what to answer.'
+			'"Okay, I agree to a truce," you say, smiling, genuinely filled with joy that all the drama has ended. "I forgive you."'
 			'"And...?" Mira asks you.'
 			'"No, Mira, I don''t want anything more from you," you reply. "I''m not sexually interested in girls."'
 			'"Well, if you ever change your mind..." said Mira. "Let''s get back to the village."'
-			'You walk back to the village, gossiping about the boys in the village.'
+			'You walk back to the village, gossiping about the boys from the village.'
 			act 'Go back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 		end
 	end
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mitka_apologise':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you hear someone catching up to you. Turning around, you see Mitka running towards you. Knowing from experience, that boys are faster runners, you stop and wait for him to catch up.'
+	'Walking through the village, you hear someone catching up to you. Turning around, you see Mitka running towards you. Knowing from experience that boys are faster runners, you stop and wait for him to catch up.'
 
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -73,19 +73,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mitka_apologise':
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big63.jpg"></center>'
 		'Mitka catches up to you and strikes up a conversation.'
-		'"Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I beat up the other guys," he said with a smirk, seeing the fear on your face "I told them not to touch you anymore, and if they want anything to do with you they have to come and speak to me first."'
+		'"Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I beat up the other guys," he said with a smirk, seeing the fear on your face. "I told them not to touch you anymore, and if they want anything to do with you, they have to come and speak to me first."'
 		'You stood silently and waited to see what more he had to say.'
 		'"In short, I remember you as one of my best childhood friends, so I don''t want to argue anymore about Mira," he said with a grin. "Friends?"'
 		if npc_QW['A60'] >= 12:
-			'"So you won''t have sex with Mira anymore?," you ask relieved.'
+			'"So you won''t have sex with Mira anymore?" you ask, relieved.'
 			'"Don''t worry, Mira won''t mind." Mitka snickered.'
 			'"You must stop having sex with her." you look at Mitka with distrust.'
-			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
-			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while, until he disappears behind a corner.'
+			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set. I''ll try to avoid Mira... But I won''t say no if she begs me to fuck her."'
+			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while until he disappears behind a corner.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 3:
 			'"And you must stop having sex with Mira." you look at Mitka with distrust.'
-			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
-			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while, until he disappears behind a corner.'
+			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set. I''ll try to avoid Mira... But I won''t say no if she begs me to fuck her."'
+			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while until he disappears behind a corner.'
 		end
 		act 'Go back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 	end
@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you suddenly hear someone calling out to you by name. Turning back, you see that it is Stepan, coming your way. Remembering his recent participation of the village gangbang make you pick up your pace. There is no way you want to deal with it right now.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait, I need to speak with you," Stepan yelled from afar, seeing that you are getting ready to run away.'
+	'Walking through the village, you suddenly hear someone calling out to you. Turning back, you see that it is Stepan coming your way. Remembering his recent participation in the village gangbang makes you pick up your pace. There is no way you want to deal with it right now.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait, I need to speak with you," Stepan yelled from afar, seeing that you were getting ready to run away.'
 
 	act 'Run away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/girl_escapes.jpg"></center>'
 		'You started running away from the road, not stopping before you felt you were in the clear.'
-		'"Good thing I ran away from that pervy bastard, I cannot believe how much I''ve looked up to him." you thought to yourself, looking around.'
+		'"Good thing I ran away from that pervy bastard. I cannot believe how much I''ve looked up to him." you thought, looking around.'
 		act 'Continue':gt'meadow'
 	end
 
@@ -119,20 +119,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Stepan</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big171.jpg"></center>'
-		'For a moment you hesitate, wondering what he wants. While you are contemplating to stay or run away, he caught up with you. He shifts nervously from foot to foot, clearly not knowing how to begin the conversation. You look puzzled at him thinking he would be prepared, when he finally speaks up.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, -uh," he began, but immediately faltered. "In short, I''m trully sorry for what happened the other day... I don''t know what came over us, it was like a demon possessed me, I got aroused by Mitka''s drunken tales of you."'
-		'He looked at you with sorrow in his eyes. You did not expect that anyone of them would be sorry.'
-		'"I had a talk with the other men in the morning, and, uh," Stepan losing his composure. "Well, in short, I decided that I wanted to talk to you, apologize and ask if you could forget about yesterday... I''m really sorry and I''m worried that we might have damaged you physically."'
-		'You look skeptically at your "uncle", not really knowing if he''s joking or not.'
+		'For a moment, you hesitate, wondering what he wants. Then, while contemplating whether to stay or run away, he catches up with you. He shifts nervously from foot to foot, clearly not knowing how to begin the conversation. You look puzzled at him, thinking he would be prepared, when he finally speaks up.'
+		'"Sveta, -uh," he began but immediately faltered. "I''m truly sorry for what happened the other day... I don''t know what came over us. It was like a demon possessed me. I got aroused by Mitka''s drunken tales of you."'
+		'He looked at you with sorrow in his eyes. But, of course, you did not expect anyone to be sorry.'
+		'"I had a talk with the other men in the morning, and, uh," Stepan lost his composure. "Well, I decided I wanted to talk to you. So I apologize and ask if you could forget about yesterday... But, again, I''m sorry and worried we might have damaged you physically."'
+		'You look sceptically at your "uncle", not knowing if he''s joking.'
 		act 'Okay...':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/10000.jpg"></center>'
-			'Feeling that you''re still skeptical, Stepan reached into his sweatpants and pulled out a bundle, handing it over to you.'
+			'Feeling that you''re still sceptical, Stepan reached into his sweatpants and pulled out a bundle, handing it over to you.'
 			'"Here," he showed the money in your hand. "It''s ten thousand rubles."'
-			'"What do you do want me to do with this?" you asked somewhat annoyed.'
+			'"What do you want me to do with this?" you asked, somewhat annoyed.'
 			'"I don''t know, you can do whatever you want with it," replied Uncle Stepan. "Spend it on something relaxing, or buy yourself something nice."'
 			'Not knowing what to choose, you look at the money, then at your "uncle."'
 
@@ -147,10 +147,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 				'"Okay, I accept your money," you finally decide. "Let''s just try to move on from that crazy day."'
 				'You take the money from his hand.'
 				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says. "I''ll be on my way."'
-				'You were about to turn and leave, when Stepan added:'
-				'"And yeah... <<$pcs_nickname>>, none of the men will fuck you like that again, so there''s no need to be afraid."'
+				'You were about to turn and leave when Stepan added:'
+				'"And yeah... <<$pcs_nickname>>, none of the men will fuck you like that again. So there''s no need to be afraid."'
 				'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
-				'"So village men will continue to fuck me, they just won''t outright rape me." you thinnk to yourself gloomily and wonder why did you allow things to become like this...'
+				'"So village men will continue to fuck me, they just won''t outright rape me." you think to yourself gloomily and wonder why you allowed things to become like this...'
 				'What will your life in Gadukino be like now?'
 				act 'Walk back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 			end
@@ -165,13 +165,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I don''t need your fucking money, I''m not a prostitute or a whore" you said in a firm voice, clearly annoyed, looking straight into Stepan eyes. "You think you can buy my silence with some money, are you really that dumb?"'
-					'He starts acting anxiously telling you once more to take the money. "I''ve already said it, I don''t want your money! But you don''t need to worry I won''t tell anyone what happened." you sternly tell him.'
+					'"I don''t need your fucking money. I''m not a prostitute or a whore" you said in a firm voice, clearly annoyed, looking straight into Stepan''s eyes. "You think you can buy my silence with some money? Are you really that dumb?"'
+					'He starts acting anxiously, telling you once more to take the money. "I''ve already said I don''t want your fucking money! But you don''t need to worry. I won''t tell anyone what happened." you sternly tell him.'
 					'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says. "I''ll be on my way."'
 					'Just as you were leaving, Stepan added:'
-					'"One last thing <<$pcs_nickname>>. None of the men will try to fuck you like that anymore. Mitka warned everyone that if it happens again their cannon would be shooting blanks for the rest of their life... If anyone approaches you, you come to me and I''ll sort it out."'
+					'"One last thing Sveta. None of the men will try to fuck you like that anymore. Mitka warned everyone that if it happens again, their cannon would be shooting blanks for the rest of their life... So if anyone approaches you, you come to me, and I''ll sort it out."'
 					'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
-					'"Thre is no way I can really trust them, is there?" you thinnk to yourself gloomily and wonder which area of village should you try to avoid...'
+					'"There is no way I can really trust them, is there?" you think to yourself gloomily and wonder which area of the village you should try to avoid...'
 					act 'Walk back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 				end
 			else
@@ -191,12 +191,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk by yourself and lost in your thoughts. You pass by a crowd of drunken men from the village but decide not to pay them any attention. Seeing how you''re alone, the drunkards turn their attention on you.'
-	'One of the men grabs your arm and forcefully lead you away from the village''s main path as the rest of men cheers and follows you.' 
-	'They remove all your clothes and leer at your naked body before surround you on all sides, taking out their cocks and start to stroke, getting ready for an outdoor gangbang.'
-	'You think about running away or resisting, but considering your tattered reputation and how men from the village alreayd treating you.' 
-	'You just don''t even have the will to stop or give a damn about your imminent fuck fest.'
-	'One of the men put both of his hands on your shoulders and not so gently pushes you down on your knees. You sighed and open your mouth willingly, resigned to your fate...'
+	'You walk by yourself and get lost in your thoughts. You pass by a crowd of drunken men from the village but decide not to pay them attention. Then, seeing you''re alone, the drunkards turn their attention to you.'
+	'One of the men grabs your arm and forcefully leads you away from the village''s main path as the rest of the men cheer and follow you.' 
+	'They remove all your clothes and leer at your naked body before surrounding you on all sides. Then, they take out their cocks and start to stroke, getting ready for an outdoor gangbang.'
+	'You think about running away or resisting, but consider your tattered reputation and how men from the village are already treating you.' 
+	'You don''t even have the will to stop or give a damn about your imminent fuck fest.'
+	'One of the men puts both of his hands on your shoulders and not so gently pushes you down on your knees. You sighed and opened your mouth willingly, resigned to your fate...'
 	
 	act 'Start to suck':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 		guy += 1
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You caress and start to please one of men with your mouth while bring pleasure to two other men with your hands. Stroking and jerking their hardened cocks.'
+		'You caress and start to please one of the men with your mouth while bringing pleasure to two other men with your hands. Stroking and jerking their hardened cocks.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You turn the other way and start sucking on the cock you''ve been stroking...'
-			'You give him a wink before twist the tip of your tongue on the head of the man''s penis. You received a hard and appreciative groan in return.'
+			'You give him a wink before twisting the tip of your tongue on the head of the man''s penis. You received a demanding and appreciative groan in return.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 				guy += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The drunkend and horny men continue to line up, one after another. Some of the men are so impossibly horny that you are stuffed with two cocks in your mouth at once. You eventually sucked each one of them off, embracing and welcoming their hard penis with your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips lips, pleasuring them all.'
+				'The drunk and horny men continue to line up, one after another. Finally, some men are impossibly horny that you are stuffed with two cocks in your mouth at once. You eventually suck each of them off, embracing and welcoming their hard penis with your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips, pleasuring them all.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -243,8 +243,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy2, 1
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum1.jpg"></center>'
-					'It doesn''t take long before the first group of men finish, cumming in your mouth, and on your face and tits. You feel quite accomplished and enjoy the feeling of warm and gooey cum slidding down your face and drip onto your body.'
-					'However, you soon come back to your senses at loud and cheering sound around you and start to suck the rest of the men.'
+					'It doesn''t take long before the first group of men finish, cumming in your mouth and on your face and tits. After that, you feel pretty accomplished and enjoy the feeling of warm and gooey cum sliding down your face and dripping onto your body.'
+					'However, you soon return to your senses at a loud cheering sound around you and start to suck the rest of the men.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -255,8 +255,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all that have happened so far and want to experience more of it.' 
-						'You didn''t even notice when and how but now you on all fours in ront of the men. Your wiggle and sticks out your butt in anticipation. One of the men plunges his cock into your wet and willing vagina from behind while another man fucks your throat quite enthusiastically.'
+						'You actually feel a bit ecstatic from all that has happened and want to experience more of it.' 
+						'You didn''t even notice when and how, but you''re now on all-fours in front of the men. Your wiggle and sticks out your butt in anticipation. One of the men plunges his cock into your wet and willing vagina from behind. In contrast, another man fucks your throat quite enthusiastically.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 						minut -= 5
@@ -278,8 +278,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang2':
 	guy += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog2.jpg"></center>'
-	'The man that fucks your pussy slows down after a good while of wild and savage thrusting. Another man taps him on the shoulder and take his place then proceed to hammer your vgagina just the same.'
-	'All the men near you all greeted by your moans of pleasure as well as your begging for them to fuck you and use your holes harder.'
+	'The man that fucks your pussy slows down after a good while of wild and savage thrusting. Then, another man taps him on the shoulder and takes his place, then proceed to hammer your vagina just the same.'
+	'All the men near you are greeted by your moans of pleasure and your begging for them to fuck you and use your holes harder.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -298,8 +298,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang2':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog3.jpg"></center>'
 		'The third man was in no hurry to to start pounding your pussy, instead you felt his index finger probing and exploring your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
-		if pcs_ass <= 5:'"Well, well what a tight hole you have here..." you hear a male voice from behind you. "Let me help you stretch it out."'
-		if pcs_ass <= 10:'You could only muffled in protest since your mouth was busy servicing another man.'
+		if pcs_ass <= 5:'"Well, well, what a tight hole you have here..." you hear a male voice from behind you. "Let me help you stretch it out."'
+		if pcs_ass <= 10:'You could only muffle in protest since your mouth was busy servicing another man.'
 
 		gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 		gs 'dinsex','analsex'
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang2':
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog2.jpg"></center>'
-			'The next man, wanting to outdone the man before, grabbed his cock, thrust it in your anus and started to slam into you eager butt relentlessly .'
+			'The next man, wanting to outdo the man before, grabbed his cock, thrust it into your anus, and started to relentlessly slamming into your eager butt.'
 
 			gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 			gs 'dinsex','analsex'
@@ -330,11 +330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang2':
 				npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re on your back. You move your head wanting to see who''s about to ravage you next and you see Stepan the fisherman, the man whom you are quite close to and found of...'
-				'You look into his eyes and asking him not to do this while Stepan readying his cock between your splayed legs... You only hear him say "I''ve been fantasizing about this for a very long time."'
-				'Your eyes widen in shock as Stepan''s full length enters your body and feel your heart breaks a little. To the drunk Stepan, you are nothing but a lubricated meat tunnels that existed only to pleasure his cock.'
-				'Stepan start to groan and soon finish and release his load inside you and stumble off to the side and soon fallen into a peaceful slumber...'
-				'You take your mind off him and bite inside your cheeck as you realize there are still many men left waiting to be pleasured...'
+				'You''re on your back. You move your head, wanting to see who''s about to ravage you next, and you see Stepan, the fisherman, the man you are close to and found of...'
+				'You look into his eyes and ask him not to do this while Stepan readies his cock between your splayed legs... You only hear him say, "I''ve been fantasizing about this for a long time."'
+				'Your eyes widen in shock as Stepan''s full length enters your body, and you feel your heart break a little. To the drunk Stepan, you are nothing but a lubricated meat tunnel that exists only to please his cock.'
+				'Stepan starts to groan and soon finishes, releases his load inside you, stumbles off to the side, and soon falls into a peaceful slumber...'
+				'You take your mind off him and bite inside your cheek as you realize there are still many men left waiting to be pleasured...'
 				
 				pose = 0
 				protect = rand(0,1)
@@ -352,9 +352,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang2':
 					guy += 1
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis2.jpg"></center>'
-					'The next man lifts your leg up to allow himself a better access to your pussy with his impressive cock.'
-					'You enjoy the sensation and moans out quite unabashedly as the tip of the man''s cock press lightly against your cervix.'
-					'The man who has been fucking your mouth soon tense up and cup your face as he ejaculate into your mouth, you swallowed his cum without much thought and licks your upper lips seductively at him.'
+					'The next man lifts your leg up to allow himself better access to your pussy with his impressive cock.'
+					'You enjoy the sensation and moan out quite unabashedly as the tip of the man''s cock presses lightly against your cervix.'
+					'The man who has been fucking your mouth soon tenses up and cups your face as he ejaculates into your mouth. You swallow his cum without much thought and lick your upper lips seductively at him.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'rough'
@@ -378,12 +378,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 	npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You see another familiar face, this time it is Vasyan.'
-	'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells and smiles wickedly at you.'
-	'You shudder as his parts your pussy lips with his hands then proceed to burry his lengthy cock deep inside you.'
-	'Vasyan fucks your pussy hard and without tenderness, your begging do nothing to slow down his unfaltering and domineering thrust. Your escatic moans soon fill the air...'
-	'Vasyan start to tense up and climax, he release his load on your stomach and with his own hand, he mush your cum and spread them on your skin...'
-	'He walks off, receive loud cheering and hi-fives from men, leaving you a quivering mess on the ground with still many cocks to serve...'
+	'You see another familiar face, this time, it''s Vasyan.'
+	'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere, waiting for their turn", he says and smiles wickedly at you.'
+	'You shudder as he parts your pussy lips with his hands and then buries his lengthy cock deep inside you.'
+	'Vasyan fucks your pussy hard, and without tenderness, your begging does nothing to slow down his unfaltering and domineering thrust. Your ecstatic moans soon fill the air...'
+	'Vasyan start to tense up and climax. He releases his load on your stomach, and with his own hand, he mushes your cum and spreads it on your skin...'
+	'He walks off and receives loud cheering and high-fives from men, leaving you a quivering mess on the ground with still many cocks to serve...'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral4.jpg"></center>'
 		'The men decide to give you a short rest from fucking, so the next group of men are here for you to please them with your mouth.'
-		'They tell you to get on your knees and order you to suck. You nod meekly and start to kiss and caress their cocks before open your mouth to service them'
+		'They tell you to get on your knees and order you to suck. You nod meekly and start to kiss and caress their cocks before opening your mouth to serve them.'
 
 		act 'Make them cum':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -424,9 +424,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can feel their cocks pulsate, getting hotter and harder. The trio of men cry out in pleasure and one of them hold your head in place as the rest of them orgasm and coat your face with their cum.'
-			'They steady themselves after a moment and start to walk away while receive hi-fives from other men. They tell you that they definetely want to group fuck your and fill your little holes next time.'
-			'You blushes at the crude and lewd compliments but bat your eyelashes at them at hollering and laughing men around you.'
+			'You can feel their cocks pulsate, getting hotter and harder. Finally, the trio of men cry out in pleasure, and one holds your head in place as the rest of them orgasm and coat your face with their cum.'
+			'They steady themselves after a moment and start to walk away while receiving high-fives from other men. Then, finally, they tell you they definitely want to group fuck you and fill your little holes next time.'
+			'You blush at the crude and lewd compliments but bat your eyelashes at them at hollering and laughing men around you.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Bend over again':
@@ -436,8 +436,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 				guy += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog5.jpg"></center>'
-				'After the short rest, you''re some what ready to be fucked again as the remain men cheered you on.'
-				'They tell you to be on all fours and stick out your butt, one of the men starts mount you from behind and start to fuck you in earnst.'
+				'After the short rest, you''re ready to be fucked again as the remaining men cheer you on.'
+				'They tell you to be on all fours and stick out your butt. Then, one of the men starts to mount you from behind and starts to fuck you in earnest.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -445,8 +445,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 				pose = 1
 				protect = rand(0,1)
 				if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
-				'The men cum inside you and slowly backing out from you feeling satisfied. He proclaimed loudly that he loves fucking your pussy and proceed to motorboat despite the presence of other men''s cum.'
-				'The crowd laughing and gaive him thumbs up as the man take his leaves.'
+				'The men cum inside you, slowly backing out from you, feeling satisfied. Then, he proclaimed loudly that he loves fucking your pussy and proceeded to motorboat you despite the presence of other men''s cum.'
+				'The crowd laughs and gives him a thumbs up as the man takes his leaves.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Please them all':
@@ -456,9 +456,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 					guy += 1
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog6.jpg"></center>'
-					'The next trio of men stepped up whiling arguing who''s going to get to fuck you first...'
-					'You give those men your best come-hither look and begging them just come here to cock-roast you!'
-					'The men chuckles and soon you receive your wish of pleasuring three cocks at once and again.'
+					'The next trio of men stepped up while arguing about who will get to fuck you first...'
+					'You give those men your best come-hither look and beg them just come here to cock-roast you!'
+					'The men chuckle, and soon you receive your wish of pleasuring three cocks at once and again.'
 					'These men are fucking you quite ferociously and without wanting to slow down...'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang3':
 					protect = rand(0,1)
 					pose = 1
 					if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
-					'They soon cum all over your body, one of them twist your nipples lightly before give you a wink before they all departed.'
+					'They soon cum all over your body. Finally, one of them twisted your nipples lightly before giving you a wink before they all departed.'
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Continue the sex fest': gt 'gadukino_event', 'gadriver_gang4'
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	guy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog7.jpg"></center>'
-	'Then someone else grabs your hips and start to penetrate your ass.'
+	'Then someone else grabs your hips and starts to penetrate your ass.'
 
 	protect = rand(0,1)
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 		guy += 1
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog8.jpg"></center>'
-		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand straight, his cock is pretty limpy as he''s having difficult getting an erection. He doesn''t seem to mind too much as he enters your anus.'
+		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand up straight. His cock is pretty limp, as he''s having difficulty getting an erection. However, he doesn''t seem to mind much as he enters your anus.'
 		gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 		gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -514,12 +514,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog9.jpg"></center>'
-			if hunters_were_met = 0:'You squint a little to see who''s next in line while sucking someone''s cock, you see an unknown village man, penetrating your ass.'
-			if hunters_were_met = 1:'When another man starts penetrating your ass, you squint a little to see who it is, and to your horror there''s Andrei thrusting away. There''s no doubt that Igor and Sergei will find out...'
+			if hunters_were_met = 0:'You squint a little to see who''s next in line while sucking someone''s cock. But, instead, you see an unknown village man penetrating your ass.'
+			if hunters_were_met = 1:'When another man starts penetrating your ass, you squint a little to see who it is, and to your horror, Andrei is thrusting away. There''s no doubt that Igor and Sergei will find out...'
 
 			gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 			gs 'dinsex','analsex'
-			'Andrei cums and whipspers "You better get prepared to serve me or I''ll tell the others everything..."'
+			'Andrei cums and whispers, "You better prepare to serve me, or I''ll tell the others everything..."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			minut -= 5
@@ -533,8 +533,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog10.jpg"></center>'
 				'While you are sucking the men near you. In the corner of your eye, you notice Kolyamba stepping up and getting ready for his turn with you.'
-				'You whimper a little as another man plunge deep inside of you, hard and fast.'
-				'"What a good little fuck doll, so ready and willing to please, huh?" Kolyamba grins and he watches as you keep copulating with others.'
+				'You whimper a little as another man plunges deep inside you, hard and fast.'
+				'"What a good little fuck doll, so ready and willing to please, huh?" Kolyamba grins, and he watches as you keep copulating with others.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -550,10 +550,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 					if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re suddenly realized that no one is fucking your pussy or ass.'
-					'"I hope that that was the last one, it was okay but my body start to feel sore all over." you thought.'
-					'This turns out to be wishful thinking as other naked durnken men soon occupy the empty space around you again.'
-					'You kneel obediently in front of the men and several of them shove their cocks to your face immediately.'
+					'You suddenly realize that no one is fucking your pussy or ass.'
+					'"I hope that that was the last one, it was okay, but my body feels sore all over." you think.'
+					'This turns out to be wishful thinking as other naked drunken men soon occupy the empty space around you again.'
+					'You kneel obediently in front of the men, and several shove their cocks to your face immediately.'
 
 					act 'Continue on':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -562,8 +562,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"And now, let the little nympho fuck puppy work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Turning your head you see a naked man lying on the ground and gesture you to get on top of him.'
-						'You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock, lost in the pleasure everytime his cock impales you.'
+						'"And now, let the little nympho fuck puppy work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Then, turning your head, you see a naked man lying on the ground and gesture to get on top of him.'
+						'You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock, lost in the pleasure every time his cock impales you.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -580,8 +580,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 							guy += 1
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Another guy lies domw beside the man that you''re currently riding, you climb on top of him and proceed to fuck him just as hard and without any hesitation.' 
-							'Someone else steps up to you with his cock at you face level, you respond immediately by open your mouth and begin to suck.'
+							'Another guy lies down beside the man that you''re currently riding. Again, you climb on top of him and proceed to fuck him just as hard and without hesitation.' 
+							'Someone else steps up to you with his cock at your face level. You respond immediately by opening your mouth and beginning to suck.'
 
 							dick = rand(10,20)
 							guy += 1
@@ -601,13 +601,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 								guy += 1
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You see a thrid man lying on the ground, as you might as well just do it, you climb on the top of him as well.'
+								'You see a third man lying on the ground, and you might as well just do it. So you climb on top of him as well.'
 
 								protect = rand(0,1)
 								pose = 1
 								if rand(0,1) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
-								'Bouncing on the cock of another guy you suddenly hear the voice of Kolyamba.'
-								'"Fuck yeah, finally. I was fucking getting tired of waiting, it is worth it tho." He winks as you blush.' 
+								'Bouncing on the cock of another guy, you suddenly hear the voice of Kolyamba.'
+								'"Fuck yeah, finally. I was fucking getting tired of waiting. It is worth it, though." He winks as you blush.' 
 								'He immediately grabs and shoves his cock in your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -633,10 +633,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang5':
 	npc_sex[$boy[2]] += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dp1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kolyamba and the other man start double pounding you, the feeling you''re experiencing is indescribable.'
+	'Kolyamba and the other man start double pounding you. The feeling you''re experiencing is indescribable.'
 	'"Wow, a sandwich," you hear someone''s drunken laughter followed by other drunkards.'
 	'Kolyamba soon finishes like others and takes a moment to compose himself.'
-	'Kolyamba tells you that Mitka takes off already to visit Mira because he doesn''t want to wait any longer.'																																																
+	'Kolyamba tells you that Mitka takes off already to visit Mira because he doesn''t want to wait any longer.'
+	
+	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dick[2]', 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -652,7 +654,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang5':
 		guy += 2
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dp2.jpg"></center>'
-		'The next two men appreciating the joke start fucking you also simultaneously.'
+		'The following two men appreciating the joke, start fucking you also simultaneously.'
 		'Kolyamba gives them a nod before he takes off.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -667,8 +669,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang5':
 			if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral6.jpg"></center>'
-			'Finally, with a handful of men left, you only want this whole village-gang-fuck-slash-rape-fest to end, you are sore all over, even in place you don''t know it existes.'
-			'You gesture them to gather around you as you kneel down again. You began sucking them off and double fisting pumping some cock, trying to finish them off quickly.'
+			'Finally, with a handful of men left, you want this village-gang-fuck-slash-rape-fest to end. You are sore all over, even in places you didn''t know existed.'
+			'You gesture for them to gather around you as you kneel down again. Then, you began sucking them off and double-fisting, pumping some cock, trying to finish them off quickly.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -688,8 +690,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang5':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Not unlike the final dash of a runner. you give it all into sucking and pleasuring the remaining men'
-				'Your endeavor didn''t go unnoticed, some of men began groan aprreciatively and start cumming in your mouth and some of them on your face.'
+				'Not unlike the final dash of a runner. You give it all into sucking and pleasuring the remaining men.'
+				'Your endeavour didn''t go unnoticed. Some men began to groan appreciatively and start cumming in your mouth, and some on your face.'
 				'There was so much sperm that your chest and abdomen also got covered.'
 				act 'Finally finish':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -701,11 +703,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang5':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum4.jpg"></center>'
-					'When the last men finally came, the crowd began to disperse, leaving you wrapped in a tattered blanket. You hear them sharing impressions of their drunken antics.'
-					'Some of them even give you a thumb up, you just don''t know what to feel about this whole thing...'
-					'You hated being forced into anything but it would be a lie that you did not enjoy at some level as well...'
-					'More importantly, what will you do now and how will you face people in the village?'
-					'"Best to clean myself up first and deal with the consequences later." You think to yourself.'
+					'The crowd began to disperse when the last men finally came, leaving you wrapped in a tattered blanket. You hear them sharing impressions of their drunken antics.'
+					'Some of them even give you a thumbs up. You just don''t know what to feel about this whole thing...'
+					'You hated being forced into anything, but it would be a lie that you did not enjoy at some level as well...'
+					'More importantly, what will you do now, and how will you face people in the village?'
+					'"Best to clean up first and deal with the consequences later." You think to yourself.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
@@ -723,8 +725,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_mitka':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big63.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you met Mitka. Seeing you, he started rubbing his crotch and said with a grin.'
-	'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you just gave me."'
+	'Walking through the village, you meet Mitka. Seeing you, he started rubbing his crotch and said with a grin.'
+	'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s have some fun getting rid of this boner you gave me."'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -736,7 +738,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_mitka':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -754,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_kolyamba':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big61.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing you, he reached into his pants and started playing with his balls. He then grabbed you by the arm and dragged into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking through the village, you meet Kolyamba. Seeing you, he reached into his pants and started playing with his balls. He then grabbed you by the arm and dragged you into the bushes next to the road.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -766,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_kolyamba':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -784,7 +786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_vasyan':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasyan Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big62.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you met Vasyan. Seeing you, he smiled and waved you over to him. He kisses you on the lips and asks you to join him as he walked into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking through the village, you meet Vasyan. Seeing you, he smiled and waved you over to him. He kisses you and asks you to join him as he walks into the bushes next to the road.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -796,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_vasyan':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -819,15 +821,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_2boys':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 1:
 		mitkaday = daystart
 		kolyambaday = daystart
-		'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+		'Walking through the village, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 2:
 		mitkaday = daystart
 		vasyanday = daystart
-		'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+		'Walking through the village, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 3:
 		kolyambaday = daystart
 		vasyanday = daystart
-		'Walking through the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+		'Walking through the village, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -848,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_2boys':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You tell them to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You tell them to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -866,8 +868,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big63.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls and said with a grin.'
-	'"Oh hey girls, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you both just gave me."'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village, you met Mitka. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls and says with a grin.'
+	'"Oh hey, girls, let''s have some fun getting rid of this boner you both gave me."'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -879,7 +881,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -897,7 +899,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_kolyamba':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big61.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls, and tries to grab you both by the hand.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Kolyamba. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls and tries to grab you both by the hand.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -909,7 +911,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_kolyamba':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -927,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_vasyan':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasyan Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big62.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, he smiles and tries to grab you both by the hand.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, he smiles and tries to grab you both by the hand.'
 
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -938,7 +940,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_vasyan':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You take Mira by the hand and tell him to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -961,15 +963,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_2boys':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 1:
 		mitkaday = daystart
 		kolyambaday = daystart
-		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+		'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you both, they smile at each other and drag you both into the bushes.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 2:
 		mitkaday = daystart
 		vasyanday = daystart
-		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+		'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you both, they smile at each other and drag you both into the bushes.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 3:
 		kolyambaday = daystart
 		vasyanday = daystart
-		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+		'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you both, they smile at each other and drag you both into the bushes.'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -990,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_2boys':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You take Mira by the hand and tell them to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You take Mira by the hand and tell them to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -1014,7 +1016,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_3boys':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village, you meet Mitka, Kolyamba, and Vasyan. Seeing you both, they smile at each other and drag you both into the bushes.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1028,7 +1030,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_3boys':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			*nl
-			'You take Mira by the hand and tell them to go away, while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
+			'You take Mira by the hand and tell them to go away while quickly walking away in the other direction.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 		end

+ 26 - 26
locations/grandmahelp.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ frost = 0
 
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/grandmahelp.jpg"></center>'
 
-'You ask your grandmother if you there is anything you could help out with. Your grandmother turns to you and says:'
+'You ask your grandmother if there is anything you could help out with. Your grandmother turns to you and says:'
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if month <= 4 or month >= 10:
@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif grandmaQW['chore_type'] = 13 and ((boletus_stored + bilberry_stored) <= 16):
 		gt 'grandmahelp', 'pickforest_both'
 	else
-		'"There is nothing to do today <<$pcs_nickname>>, take the day off.'
+		'"There is nothing to do today, <<$pcs_nickname>>. take the day off.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cleanfloor':
-	'"There is always something to do, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve gotten quite old and my strength is not what it used to be. Could you help me out by cleaning the floor?"'
+	'"There is always something to do, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve gotten quite old, and my strength is not what it used to be. Could you help me out by cleaning the floor?"'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_clean_floor'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will do it soon':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cleanfloor':
 		gs'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/washfloor.jpg"></center>'
-		'You grab a bucket and a rag, and get down on your knees and begin scrubbing the floor. Within the hour the floor shines and you are satisfied with the work you''ve done. You put the cleaning supplies into a corner and continue on with your day.'
+		'You grab a bucket and a rag, get down on your knees and begin scrubbing the floor. Within the hour, the floor shines, and you are satisfied with your work. You put the cleaning supplies into a corner and continue your day.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 		act 'Return back to your grandmother': minut += 1 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cleanfloor':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'washclothes':
-	'"Of course, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can help me wash your grandfathers dirty clothes?"'
+	'"Of course, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can help me wash your grandfather''s dirty clothes?"'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_wash_clothes'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will wash them in a little bit':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'washclothes':
 		    minut += 10
 		    gs'stat'
 		    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/washclothes2.jpg"></center>'
-		    'Once you are done with the washing, you walk over to the clothesline where you carefully hang the clothes to dry.'
+		    'Once done with the washing, you walk to the clothesline, where you carefully hang the clothes to dry.'
 
 		    act 'Continue':gt'gaddvor'
 			act 'Return back to your grandmother': minut += 1 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'washclothes':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milkcows':
-	' "<<$pcs_nickname>>, go to the barn and milk the cows."'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, go to the barn and milk the cows."'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_milk_cow'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will do it in a bit':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milkcows':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'groceries':
-	'"Oh yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was going to go down to the store today to buy some groceries, but my knees are aching. Do you think you could go down there and get them for me? I have a list of what we need and the grocer will come by later to collect the money."'
+	'"Oh yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was going to go down to the store today to buy some groceries, but my knees are aching. Do you think you could go down there and get them for me? I have a list of what we need, and the grocer will come by later to collect the money."'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_groceries'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will go to the store later':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'groceries':
 		gs'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/izba.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your grandmother shuffles around looking for her list for a few minutes, finally finding it and giving it to you. You grab a basket and set out for the store.'
+		'Your grandmother shuffles around, looking for her list for a few minutes, finally finding it and giving it to you. You grab a basket and set out for the store.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadmarket'
 	end
 end
@@ -144,14 +144,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_mushrooms':
 
 		boletus_stored -= 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_mushrooms.jpg"></center>'
-		'Grandma gives you a basket of mushrooms and you spend a while cleaning them, washing them, and cutting them up, in preparation for canning.'
+		'Grandma gives you a basket of mushrooms, and you spend a while cleaning them, washing them, and cutting them up in preparation for canning.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once they are prepared, you help put them in glass jars. Once they are all ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
+			'Once they are prepared, you help put them in glass jars. Once they are ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_mushrooms':
 				grandmaQW['help_amount'] += 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canned_mushrooms.jpg"></center>'
 				'Finally, you help Grandma take them out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
-				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "It is important to save food up for the hard winter months. Sure, now you can just walk to the store and get whatever you want, but it wasn''t always that way!"'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "It is important to save food up for the hard winter months. Sure, now you can walk to the store and get whatever you want, but it wasn''t always that way!"'
 				act 'Finish':gt 'gadhouse','start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -180,14 +180,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_berries':
 
 		bilberry_stored -= 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_berries.jpg"></center>'
-		'Grandma gives you a basket of berries and you spend a while cleaning them, removing stems, and picking out any shriveled or bad ones.'
+		'Grandma gives you a basket of berries, and you spend a while cleaning them, removing stems, and picking out any shrivelled or bad ones.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once they are prepared, you help pour them into glass jars. Once they are all ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
+			'Once they are prepared, you help pour them into glass jars. Once they are ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_berries':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'can_veggies':
-	'"We have had good luck with the garden this year, <<$pcs_nickname>>. But now we need to can these vegetables before they spoil. Can you help me please?"'
+	'"We have had good luck with the garden this year, <<$pcs_nickname>>. But now we need to can these vegetables before they spoil. Can you help me, please?"'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_can_veggies'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will help her in a little while':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -216,14 +216,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_veggies':
 
 		grandmaQW['chore_harvest_done'] = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_veggies.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Grandma spend some time sorting out all of the different vegetables from the garden. Once they are sorted you begin cleaning them, cutting them up, removing stems and leaves, and preparing them for canning.'
+		'You and Grandma spend some time sorting out all the vegetables from the garden. Once they are sorted, you begin cleaning them, cutting them up, removing stems and leaves, and preparing them for canning.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 90
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-			'It is a tedious process, but eventually you finish, and help Grandma put them all in jars. You stand by while she boils the jars, helping her remove them from the canner when needed and replacing them with others.'
+			'It is a tedious process, but eventually, you finish and help Grandma put them all in jars. Then, you stand by while she boils the jars, helping her remove them from the canner when needed and replacing them with others.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_veggies':
 				grandmaQW['chore_can_veggies'] = 0
 				grandmaQW['help_amount'] += 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canned_veggies.jpg"></center>'
-				'Finally, you help Grandma take the last of the jars out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
+				'Finally, you help Grandma take the last jars out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
 				'"You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you know how to can your own food, you can survive years of poor harvests," she says.'
 				'"Your grandfather and I had many hard times when we were younger, but saving our crops during the good times kept us from starving to death in the bad times. You would do well to remember that, young lady!"'
 				act 'Finish':gt 'gadhouse','start'
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'can_veggies':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'feedchickens':
-	'"Of course <<$pcs_nickname>>, would you be kind and feed the chickens?"'
+	'"Of course, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Would you be kind and feed the chickens?"'
 
 	grandmaQW['chore_feed_chickens'] = 1
 	act 'Tell her you will do it in a little while':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'feedchickens':
 		gs'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/feed_chickens.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take the grain mix for the chickens with you and walk over to the yard.'
+		'You take the grain mix for the chickens and walk to the yard.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt'gaddvor','chickens'
 		
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'harvest':
 	if month = 7:
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> dear, the strawberries are ripe to pick. Could you go over to the plot and pick them today?"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> dear, the strawberries are ripe for picking. Could you go over to the plot and pick them today?"'
 
 		grandmaQW['chore_collect_strawberries'] = 1
 		act 'Tell her you will do it in a little bit':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'harvest':
 			act 'Continue':gt'gadgarden','strawberry'
 		end
 	elseif month = 8 or month = 9:
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> dear, the fruits are ripe and it is time to start collecting them, could you go and do it today?"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> dear, the fruits are ripe, and it is time to start collecting them. Could you go and do it today?"'
 
 		grandmaQW['chore_collect_fruit'] = 1
 		act 'Tell her you will do it in a little bit':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pickforest_mushrooms':
 	grandmaQW['chore_gather_mushrooms'] = 1
 	grandmaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = rand(1,2)
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s mushroom season. Would you mind going into the forest to pick some for us?"'
-	'"How much do we need, Grandma?", you ask.'
+	'"How much do we need, Grandma?" you ask.'
 	'"Oh, I would say you should be able to find at least <<grandmaQW[''chore_mushroom_quantity'']>> kilos," Grandma replies.'
 
 	act 'Tell her you will go get some soon':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pickforest_berries':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadroad_night.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'You decide that now is as good a time as any to do it. You grab a basket and head out, walking to the forest.'
+		'You decide now is as good a time as any to do it. So you grab a basket and head out, walking to the forest.'
 		minut += 60
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 	end
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pickforest_both':
 	grandmaQW['chore_gather_both'] = 1
 	grandmaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = rand(1,2)
 	grandmaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = rand(1,2)
-	'"This is the time of year that the forest provides us its gifts, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can you go and harvest some mushrooms and berries for us?"'
+	'"This is the time of year that the forest provides us with its gifts, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can you go and harvest some mushrooms and berries for us?"'
 	'"How much of each should I get?" you ask.'
 	'"If you could, try to find <<grandmaQW[''chore_mushroom_quantity'']>> kilos of mushrooms and <<grandmaQW[''chore_berry_quantity'']>> kilos of berries," Grandma replies. "It is important to stock up while we can."'
 
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pickforest_both':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadroad_night.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'You decide that now is as good a time as any to do it. You grab a basket and head out, walking to the forest.'
+		'You decide now is as good a time as any to do it. So you grab a basket and head out, walking to the forest.'
 		minut += 60
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 	end

+ 8 - 2
locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -29,12 +29,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'housing', 'rent'
     gs 'journal', 'journalmenu'
-    
 ! records
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0]='journalmenu':
 	*clr & cla
+	gs 'stat'
 	if $start_type[1] ! 'nomagic':
         $tablebody = '<tr><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 0 & gs ''journal'', ''magictab''">Magic</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 1 & gs ''Journal'', ''housingtab''">Housing</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 2 & gs ''journal_work'', ''start''">Work</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 2 & gs ''journal_quests'', ''start''">Quests</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 4 & gs ''journal'', ''relationstab''">Relations</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 5 & gs ''journal'', ''generaltab''">Game Information</a></th><th><a href="exec:menutrack = 6 & gs ''journal'', ''notestab''">Notes</a></th></tr>'
     
@@ -59,6 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='journalmenu':
 	end
 	gs 'journal', 'leaveactions'
 
+
 ! Journal Menu
 end
 
@@ -68,13 +69,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magictab':
 	
 	'<center><h2>Spells</h2></center><br>'
 	'<center><h2>Spells to Cast</h2></center><br>'
-	func('spellBook','cast','$nonComSpells') 
+	func('spellBook','cast','$nonComSpells', 'gt ''journal'', ''magictab''', 'jclose = 1') 
 	'<br><center><h2>Spell Learning</h2></center><br>'
 	'<br><center><h3>Combat</h3></center><br>'
 	func('spellBook','learn','$combatSpells') 
 	'<br><center><h3>Non-Combat</h3></center><br>'
 	func('spellBook','learn','$nonComSpells') 
 	delact 'Never mind'
+	
+	
 ! magic
 end
 
@@ -83,8 +86,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'housingtab':
 	gs 'journal', 'journalmenu'
 
 	'<center><h2>Housing</h2></center>'
+	
+	gs 'homes_properties', 'get_owned_homes'
 	*nl
 	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Your bills are paid by the other tenants in exchange for your house services'
+	if home_owned[1] = 3:'You own a two room apartment in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.'
 	if accessible_property['city_apartment'] = 1:'You rent a two room apartment in the city residential area. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days'
 	if accessible_property['city_apartment'] = 2:'You own a two room apartment in the city residential area. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.'
 	if accessible_property['city_apartment'] = 3:'You own a two room apartment in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/natbel_friend.qsrc

@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'go_to_del_greco':
 		act 'Be flirty':
 			NatbelQW['romance'] += 1
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/friends/hands.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/friends/Hands.jpg"></center>'
 			'You reach over and place your hand on hers and squeeze it gentle, leaving your hand holding hers. "I know; I just wanted to treat you, you mean a lot to me. Maybe we can do more stuff like this in the future if you like?"'
 			'Natasha smiles then after a moment, she looks around at the other people around, after which she gently pulls her hand away. You can tell it made her a little uncomfortable but she didn''t seem to mind it to much. "There''s nothing I''d like more but I simply can''t afford it. Sometimes I kid myself but that''s when I''ve borrowed money and I need to stop doing that as it keeps getting on top of me."'
 			*nl

+ 2 - 2
locations/npc_relationship.qsrc

@@ -246,10 +246,10 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'defaultnotschool':
 	r = 1
-	:default_friendship_loop
+	:default_friendship_loop2
 		if npc_grupTipe['A<<r>>'] = 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'set', 'A<<r>>', 30
 		r += 1
-	if r <= aarraynumber :jump 'default_friendship_loop'
+	if r <= aarraynumber :jump 'default_friendship_loop2'
 end
 
 --- npc_relationship ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 1
locations/prostitution_pavlovsk.qsrc

@@ -968,7 +968,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'set_5':
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'prostitute', iif($prostitute['client_behavior'] = 'nice', rand(1,2), rand(2,4))
 
 		if $prostitute['pav_location'] = 'public':
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/prostitution/pavlovsk/street/set_5/public/vag_'+rand(0,1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/prostitution/pavlovsk/street/set_5/Public/vag_'+rand(0,1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'He suddenly pushes you against a big trash can. "Here is fine," he says as his hands pull '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'up your skirt.', 'down your pants.')+iif(prostitute['pav_condom'] = 1, '"The condom," you say when you feel his cock touching your pussy lips. He groans annoyed, but he pulls away and puts it on.', ' ')+'Without further ado his rock hard cock moves into your cunt while you try to steady yourself without touching the dirty trash can in front of you. Your attempt not very successful. Every time he pushes into you he pushes you further and further towards it until your whole body is pressed against it. The lid stands half open, the trash nearly spills over the edge and you have to pull your head back so that your face isn''t pushed into the trash bags.'
 		else
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'

+ 26 - 24
locations/succubus.qsrc

@@ -196,11 +196,11 @@ end
 !!This is the 'city_park' and 'city_residential' call
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'RapistFight':
-	gs 'stat'
 	$scsubloc = $ARGS[0]
 	if suceatinit = 0: gt 'succubus', 'init'
 	suceatinit = 0
-	cls
+	*clr
+	cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
 	'Instinctively, you are barely aware of what causes your power to reach out and take hold of your would-be rapist''s mind.'
@@ -235,6 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RapistFight':
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'You quickly drag him out of sight, then rip off his pants and expose your now hungry pussy.'
 			'You force him to the ground and immediately mount him, your now hair-trigger snatch sending you into orgasm.'
 			''
@@ -242,10 +243,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RapistFight':
 			''
 			act 'Continue':
 				succubusQW['rapist_cash'] = rand(50, 300)
-				cla
-				'Finally, when your instincts tell you he has nothing left to give, you get off him and fix your clothes.'
-				'As you make ready to leave, you look down upon your would-be-rapist-turned-meal as he lies there utterly exhausted and wonder if this experience will discourage him from such activities in the future...'
-				'Before you leave him to contemplate such things you check his wallet and grab <<succubusQW[''rapist_cash'']>> <b>₽</b> as a bonus reward.'
 				guy += 1
 				pcs_horny = 0
 				orgasm += 1 + scfeed
@@ -257,14 +254,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RapistFight':
 				minut += 15 + (20 * scfeed) / succublvl
 				killvar 'scfeed' & killvar 'scrand'
 				gs 'stat'
+				cla
+				'Finally, when your instincts tell you he has nothing left to give, you get off him and fix your clothes.'
+				'As you make ready to leave, you look down upon your would-be-rapist-turned-meal as he lies there utterly exhausted and wonder if this experience will discourage him from such activities in the future...'
+				'Before you leave him to contemplate such things you check his wallet and grab <<succubusQW[''rapist_cash'']>> <b>₽</b> as a bonus reward.'
 				act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		else
+			minut +=5
+			gs 'stat'
 			''
 			'And you feel his fear overcome his lust and your hold...'
 			'By the time you pull yourself back to the physical world, he is long gone.'
-			minut +=5
-			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end
@@ -282,7 +283,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavResfeed':
 	'You hide for a few minutes, watching groups of students pass you by as you wait for a lone victim to pounce on. You lie in wait for almost thirty minutes, thinking about the meal ahead, your hand finding its way between your legs a few times.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
-		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
 		'Just as you are starting to think no one would walk by alone, a young guy in a tracksuit walks right past you into the bushes. He pulls his pants down to take a piss.
 		"Wow, what do we have here?" you say from the darkness, causing him to jump.
@@ -292,14 +292,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavResfeed':
 		"Right here," you say as you sneak up behind him and reach around and stick a hand into his pants. You spend some time groping him and trying to find out what he is packing.
 		"Find something you like?" he asks in a cocky tone. You don''t know why. He doesn''t have anything that impressive down there.'
 		act 'Warm him up':
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/boybj2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Meh, it will have to do," you tell him. He drags you into the bushes and pushes you down to your knees. You decide to play along for now and place your lips around his cock and work your magic. Literally. You give him the kind of blowjob only a succubus like yourself can give. It isn''t long before he cums in your mouth. You swallow it, savoring the appetizer before the main course with a smile on your face. He grabs your chin and looks at you with contempt.
-			"What a slut, if you enjoy cum that much, maybe I should call my friends to give you all you can eat. Would you like that, whore?"'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your contented smile turns into a confident grin as you pull the guy''s legs out from under him. He tries to get up, but you push him back down with unnatural strength. You let instinct take over as you undress and lower yourself on top of his hardening member. You ride him hard, trying to milk him as fast as you can. He cums once, then twice, then three times, then more. He begs you to stop, but you aren''t listening.'
-			'Eventually, he runs out of energy to give, and you lift yourself off of him. He lies on the ground unconscious with a pained expression on his face. Now to make him pay for that whore comment. You check his pockets for valuables and find a cellphone and some loose change.'
-			'You pocket the money and crush the phone in your hand. Then, after making sure the coast is clear, you drag him back to the sidewalk and leave him there, unconscious with no pants for someone to find. He won''t remember this punishment or most of the night, but you sure had fun.'
 			money += rand(250,500)
 			scfeed = succublvl + rand(1,4)
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -316,6 +308,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavResfeed':
 			minut += 15 + (20 * scfeed) / succublvl
 			killvar 'scfeed' & killvar 'scrand'
 			gs 'stat'
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/boybj2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"Meh, it will have to do," you tell him. He drags you into the bushes and pushes you down to your knees. You decide to play along for now and place your lips around his cock and work your magic. Literally. You give him the kind of blowjob only a succubus like yourself can give. It isn''t long before he cums in your mouth. You swallow it, savoring the appetizer before the main course with a smile on your face. He grabs your chin and looks at you with contempt.
+			"What a slut, if you enjoy cum that much, maybe I should call my friends to give you all you can eat. Would you like that, whore?"'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
+			'Your contented smile turns into a confident grin as you pull the guy''s legs out from under him. He tries to get up, but you push him back down with unnatural strength. You let instinct take over as you undress and lower yourself on top of his hardening member. You ride him hard, trying to milk him as fast as you can. He cums once, then twice, then three times, then more. He begs you to stop, but you aren''t listening.'
+			'Eventually, he runs out of energy to give, and you lift yourself off of him. He lies on the ground unconscious with a pained expression on his face. Now to make him pay for that whore comment. You check his pockets for valuables and find a cellphone and some loose change.'
+			'You pocket the money and crush the phone in your hand. Then, after making sure the coast is clear, you drag him back to the sidewalk and leave him there, unconscious with no pants for someone to find. He won''t remember this punishment or most of the night, but you sure had fun.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_residential'
 		end
 	end
@@ -418,12 +418,12 @@ end
 
 !!This is sex with Tatiana
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tatianasex':
-	gs 'stat'
 	$scsubloc = 'tatianasex'
 	if suceatinit = 0: gt 'succubus', 'init'
 	suceatinit = 0
-	cls
 	gs 'stat'
+	*clr
+	cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
 	if sucpcinfo < 4:
 		tatisucsex -= 2
@@ -437,19 +437,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tatianasex':
 	end
 
 	act 'Continue':
-		cls
+		*clr
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tatiana/sex/karinsucsex1.jpg"></center>'
 		'As she licks you out, she feels the same things you do until you both have your first orgasm.'
 		'You then move her around into a "69" position.'
 		act 'Continue':
-			cls
+			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tatiana/sex/karinsucsex2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You pleasure each other for some time, orgasming together, and then at some point you flip over.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				if sucpcinfo >= 6 and sucskill < 3 and sctrainprep = 1: gt 'succubus', 'training3sex'
-				cls
+				*clr
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tatiana/sex/karinsucsex3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You continue this way for some time, flipping back and forth, having multiple simultaneous orgasms until you sense her body is tiring even though her power level is a bit higher than when you two started.'
@@ -475,6 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tatianasex':
 					if sucpcinfo < 4: gt 'succubus', 'tatianaask' & exit
 					tatisucsex += 1
 					if tatisucsex = 0: tatisucsex = 1
+					gs 'stat'
 					'As you both put yourselves back together, Tatiana says, "That was intense, thank you!"'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'tatiana_lab', 'Tatiana'
 				end
@@ -486,7 +487,8 @@ end
 
 !!Trainging sex ending
 if $ARGS[0] = 'training3sex':
-	cls
+	gs 'stat'
+	*clr
 	cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tatiana/sex/karinsucsex3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You continue this way for hours, changing position occasionally, and the whole time you both are causing the massive amount of energy between you to cycle faster and faster until it almost feels as if you and Tatiana are sharing one body that is having a continuous orgasm.'
@@ -524,9 +526,9 @@ end
 
 !!This is the computer search
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kompresearch':
-	gs 'stat'
 	minut += 10 * rand(3,6)
 	sucpcinfo = 1
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/succresrch.jpg"></center>'
 	'Other than a host of internet stories, the thing you find that matches closest to what you have been feeling is a succubus, a demonic creature that destroys or corrupts men''s souls through sex.'
 	'However, you don''t feel like you have been corrupting anything, and the match isn''t that great...'