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      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  2. 3 2
      locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc
  3. 2 2
      locations/journal.qsrc

+ 12 - 11
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_practice':
 		act 'Skip practice (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end if
 	if cheerleadingQW['skipped'] > 1:
-		act 'Disjoin cheerleading squad': gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'Disjoin'
+		act 'Quit cheerleading squad': gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'Quit'
 	end if
 end
 
@@ -392,17 +392,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 					if random_event_probability = 0:
 						if npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5:
 							*nl
-							'As you are practicing, Lariska goes over on her ankle and falls to the ground. Albina has the group stop and she and Vicky go to check on her. She meekly insists that she is fine, but Albina disagrees and has her stay on the ground as Vicky checks her over. Christina then walks over and chimes in, a worried looking Lina silently standing behind her. "She said she''s fine, so stop fussing and get back to bossing us around!" Albina narrows her gaze. "Does she look fine to you? No, she''s going to sit this one out and we''ll see how ''fine'' she is later!" In response, Lariska tries to get back on her feet, but whimpers slightly in pain. "Stop faking it and get off your lazy ass!" Christina shouts. Lariska looks at her meekly and tries to stand, but Vicky has her sit back down. "She isn''t in any shape to continue. <<$pcs_nickname>>, help Vicky take her over there to sit out and rest. We''ll have to make do without her for the rest of the session. Christina doesn''t seem happy, but doesn''t stop you and Vicky from carrying Lariska over to the benches to rest her injured foot. Albina then has the group finish the practice session without her. When you finish, Lariska seems well enough to walk to the changing room with a slight limp, which annoys Christina and causes her to again accuse her of faking it.'
+							'As you are practicing, Lariska goes over on her ankle and falls to the ground. Albina has the group stop and she and Vicky go to check on her. She meekly insists that she is fine, but Albina disagrees and has her stay on the ground as Vicky checks her over. Christina then walks over and chimes in, a worried looking Lina silently standing behind her. "She said she''s fine, so stop fussing and get back to bossing us around!" Albina narrows her gaze. "Does she look fine to you? No, she''s going to sit this one out and we''ll see how ''fine'' she is later!" In response, Lariska tries to get back on her feet, but whimpers slightly in pain. "Stop faking it and get off your lazy ass!" Christina shouts. Lariska looks at her meekly and tries to stand, but Vicky has her sit back down.' 
+							'"She isn''t in any shape to continue. <<$pcs_nickname>>, help Vicky take her over there to sit out and rest. We''ll have to make do without her for the rest of the session." Christina doesn''t seem happy, but doesn''t stop you and Vicky from carrying Lariska over to the benches to rest her injured foot. Albina then has the group finish the practice session without her. When you finish, Lariska seems well enough to walk to the changing room with a slight limp, which annoys Christina and causes her to again accuse her of faking it.'
 						end if
 					elseif random_event_probability = 1:
 						!! Petia and a group of perverts watching you
 						*nl
-						'As you practice, you suddenly notice a group of boys watching you and the other girls practice. Petia is among them- you''re certain that you can smell him from where you stand. He has a perverted smirk on his face and licks his lips as he watches Albina bend over. Christina notices them lurking and stares them down, causing all but Petia to flee. He crosses his arms, acting like he isn''t scared, but he quickly waddles away when Albina straightens up and turns to see him staring at her, causing the girls to laugh at him. After almost throwing up at the thought of the fat, sweaty loner checking her out, she has the group focus and get back on track.'
+						'As you practice, you suddenly notice a group of boys watching you and the other girls practice. Petia is among them- you''re certain that you can smell him from where you stand. He has a perverted smirk on his face and licks his lips as he watches Albina bend over. One of the girls notices them lurking and stares them down, causing all but Petia to flee. He crosses his arms, acting like he isn''t scared, but he quickly waddles away when Albina straightens up and turns to see him staring at her, causing the girls to laugh at him. After almost throwing up at the thought of the fat, sweaty loser checking her out, she has the group focus and get back on track.'
 					elseif random_event_probability = 2:
 						!! Strange man that Bella knows
 						*nl
 						'As you practice, you notice a guy sitting at the back of the hall watching the group. He''s too old to be a student, but Bella flashes him a smile and makes a point of wiggling her ass at him during one of her moves. You''re curious as to how they know each other, but continue with what you were doing.'
-					elseif random_event_probability = 3:
+					elseif random_event_probability = 3 and cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3:
 						*nl
 						'As you practice, you notice a group of boys watching you and whispering among themselves, one of them holding a phone in his hand. You ignore them and continue practicing when, in the corner of your eye, you see the boy with the phone run up to you. Before you can react, he pulls your skirt up and holds the phone underneath you. You hear the click of the camera before he lets go and the group flees before anyone can stop them. You fix your clothing and assure everyone that you''re fine before the session continues.'
 					elseif random_event_probability = 4:
@@ -414,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 					elseif random_event_probability = 6:
 						if npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5:
 							*nl
-							'As Lina practices a move that involves holding another girl, Christina decides to amuse herself and pulls Lina''s skirt up, causing her to squeal as her panties are exposed to everyone. She is blushing heavily, forced to endure the humilation since she can''t let go of the girl. Christina eventually lets her skirt go and Albina chews her out for being so reckless and childish while praising Lina for not losing her focus. Christina just laughs and calls her for being a bossy spoilsport while giving a mocking smirk to Lina.'
+							'As Lina practices a move that involves holding another girl, Christina decides to amuse herself and pulls Lina''s skirt up, causing her to squeal as her panties are exposed to everyone. She is blushing heavily, forced to endure the humilation since she can''t let go of the girl. Christina eventually lets her skirt go and Albina chews her out for being so reckless and childish while praising Lina for not losing her focus. Christina just laughs and calls her for being a bossy spoilsport while giving a mocking smirk to Lina. Christina just laughs and mocks Albina, comparing her to a yapping little dog.'
 						end if
 					end if
 				end if
@@ -617,12 +618,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				else
 					'You are kneeling between Christina''s legs, desperately looking for a way out. "Nobody is coming to help you bitch, so you might as well just get this over with!" Christina barks when she notices your reluctance. Growing impatient, she grabs you by the hair and is about to force your head into her crotch when the door slams open and Albina storms in.
-					"Just what the FUCK do you think you''re doing!!!?" she screams. "I thought I told you this little game of yours was supposed to stop?" Christina just laughs. "What? Am I not allowed to have a little fun? What''s the harm in initiating the new girl?" '
+					"Just what the FUCK do you think you''re doing!!!?" she screams. "I thought I told you this little game of yours was supposed to stop?" Christina just laughs. "You''re like a chihuahua when you get angry, you know that? Just ''yap yap yap.''" she says while making a mocking motion with her hand. "Am I not allowed to have a little fun? What''s the harm in initiating the new girl?"'
 
 					'Albina scoffs. "A LITTLE FUN?! I was late to practice when Karine joined and you convinced her she needed to tit fuck the coach to be allowed on the squad! Now you''re wanting <<$pcs_nickanme>> to go down on you?!" She kneels down next to you and stares straight at Christina. "I know why you volunteered to go with Karine. You wouldn''t want to lose your chance at the championships if the principal were to find out now would you?"
-					Christina laughs back in Albina''s face. "Nobody would believe you. Why are you even here anyway? Shouldn''t you be at home helping daddy?" she says with a wide grin.
-					Albina clenches her fists hard. "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!"
-					Christina again just laughs as she gets up and starts getting dressed. The two girls stare each other down and you think things might actually get violent between them. Thankfully, Christina finishes dressing, but mocks you before she leaves. "Welcome to the squad <<$pcs_firstname>>." she says with more than a hint of contempt in her voice. Once she''s gone, Albina turns to you.
+					Christina laughs back in Albina''s face. "Nobody would believe you. Why are you even here anyway? Shouldn''t you be having your Starlets give the ''star'' treatment?" she says with a wide grin.
+					Albina clenches her fists hard. "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!" Christina smirks and stands. "I''ve got better things to do anyways." she quips.
+					The two girls stare each other down as Christina gets dressed and you think things might actually get violent between them. Thankfully, Christina finishes dressing, but mocks you before she leaves. "Welcome to the squad <<$pcs_firstname>>. Watch out for the little chihuahua though. She bites." she says with more than a hint of contempt in her voice. Once she''s gone, Albina turns to you.
 
 					"Are you okay <<$pcs_nickname>>? That girl goes way too far in the name of amusing herself. I think she just does it to act tough in front of her obidient little lapdogs."
 					She grabs your outfit off the floor and places it in your bag as you get dressed. Once you''re done, she insists on walking you home, despite you assuring her that you''re fine, and you both leave together.'
@@ -732,7 +733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				'You give her a sly little smile. "Yeah, okay. I''m in." She smiles and types a message on her phone. "Okay, get dressed and follow me." You do as she says and after you are dressed, you follow her out the door and down the hall. She stops and looks around before pulling you into the boys locker room. A nude Lazar is already waiting for you, his impressive cock awaiting you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m glad you decided to join us again." he greets and you give him a little smile. Albina starts undressing, quickly taking her shirt off before dropping her skirt to her ankles and stepping out of it. You undress yourself and Lazar sits on the bench as you and Albina kneel in front of him.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Blow Job':
+				act 'Blowjob':
 					*clr & cla
 					'Albina starts sucking on his balls while jerking his cock in her hand. You decide to lick his head and start circling your tongue around it. After a few seconds, Albina brings her head up and you make room to allow her to take his shaft into her mouth and start sucking his dick. Lazar puts his hands behind his head and leans back against the lockers as you and Albina take turns sucking his dick. During her turn, Albina slowly takes his entire length into her mouth and starts gagging as she deepthroats him. When she withdraws, saliva is dribbling down her chin, but she looks up and smiles at an appreciative Lazar.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
@@ -1072,7 +1073,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'CheerleaderEnd':
 	act 'Leave school':cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'Disjoin':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Quit':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/changing.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enter the locker room and look around for Albina, spotting her as she finishes getting ready. You walk over to her and she gives you a puzzled stare. "Hurry up and get dressed <<$pcs_nickname>>, we haven''t got all day to wait for you!" she barks. You meekly smile at her in response. "Well? Hurry up and spit it out." she says while motioning for you to hurry up.

+ 3 - 2
locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -292,6 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mixed':
 		'"I don''t blame her. If I had a son that looked like him, I would stay high all the time too."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 57:
 		'"Oh god, avoid Petia the mooch today! He smells worse than usual. Does that fat loser ever take a bath or brush his teeth?"'
+		'"I swear I would rather fart in my gym sock and smell it than go anywhere near that unwashed thing."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 58:
 		'"I bet Radomir is happy his band has their first groupie. Alyona is always hanging out with them and going to all their gigs."'
 		'"I heard she lets the whole band, including Anushka, pull trains on her."'
@@ -419,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mixed':
 	elseif chat_rand = 81 and npc_rel['A11'] <= 25 and grupTipe ! 4:
 		'"Aren''t <<$pcs_nickname>> and Vasily childhood friends?"'
 		'"More like were. They''re not close anymore."'
-		'"Aww… when you think about it, it''s kind of sad."'
+		'"Aww… When you think about it, it''s kind of sad."'
 		'"It''s hard for me to feel bad for someone that calls Dan and Vitek his best friends."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 82:
 		'"Did you hear about the rapist in St Petersburg?"'
@@ -839,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls':
 	elseif chat_rand = 22:
 		'"Will you sit with me in science class tomorrow?"'
 		'"I don''t know. I might skip it."'
-		'"Please don''t! Last time, I had to sit with Vasily and he kept telling me I should show more of my "titties"."'
+		'"Please don''t! Last time, I had to sit with Vasily and he kept telling me I should show more of my ''titties.''""'
 	elseif chat_rand = 23:
 		'"Irina can be such a bitch. I asked her for some beauty tips and she told me nothing I do will make me look as good as her."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 24:

+ 2 - 2
locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/23.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered. She leads a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are several rumors about her going around school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
+	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered, despite her rather petite size. She leads a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are several rumors about her going around school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
 	
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/13.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
-		'Lariska is an athletic girl that''s highly insecure, she''s very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. Christina used to control her, but ever since you took care of Christina she has been a lot more energetic. She has a sparkle in her eyes, and is almost always in a good mood.'
+		'Lariska is an athletic girl who is highly insecure, being very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. Christina used to control her, but ever since you took care of her, Lariska has been a lot more energetic. She has a sparkle in her eyes, and is almost always in a good mood.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'