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[text edits] grammar and formatting fixes

hornguy6 2 years ago
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locations/gossips.qsrc

@@ -42,23 +42,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'complex':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if fame['pav_slut'] < 100:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors "Hey isn''t that the girl Sergia was talking about?" you overhear one of them ask. "Yeah, but she''s just a tease." his friend replies. They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			*nl
+			'"Hey isn''t that the girl Sergia was talking about?" you overhear one of them ask.'
+			'"Yeah, but she''s just a tease," his friend replies. They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 150:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors. "Hey isn''t that the girl that will let you feel her up for a cigarette?" you overhear one of them ask. "Yeah, I heard she gave Dimitri a handjob behind the garages." his friend replies. They keep talking, but you''re too far away to hear what they are saying. You can only assume it''s still about you. It seems people are talking about your growing reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			'"Hey isn''t that the girl that will let you feel her up for a cigarette?" you overhear one of them ask.'
+			'"Yeah, I heard she gave Dimitri a handjob behind the garages," his friend replies. They keep talking, but you''re too far away to hear what they are saying. You can only assume it''s still about you. It seems people are talking about your growing reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors. "Hey, isn''t that the slut that''s always giving guys blowjobs behind the garages?" you overhear one of them ask. "Yeah that''s her. Come on over here slut, I''ve got a cock you can suck on right here!" He and his friend laugh as he grabs his crotch. You just ignore them and keep walking. It seems people are talking about your reputation, which is only getting worse. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			*nl
+			'"Hey, isn''t that the slut that''s always giving guys blowjobs behind the garages?" you overhear one of them ask.'
+			'"Yeah that''s her. Come on over here slut, I''ve got a cock you can suck on right here!" He and his friend laugh as he grabs his crotch. You just ignore them and keep walking. It seems people are talking about your reputation, which is only getting worse. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors. "Hey slut, why don''t you come over here? We''ve got something for you." His friends laughs. "Yeah, we all know how much you love sucking dick!" They both laugh as you just keep walking, at least they don''t follow you. It seems like everyone is now aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			*nl
+			'"Hey slut! Why don''t you come over here? We''ve got something for you," one of them hollers.'
+			'"Yeah, we all know how much you love sucking dick!" They both laugh as you just keep walking, at least they don''t follow you. It seems like everyone is now aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 			act 'Keep going': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors. "Hey whore, come over here. We''ve got something for you." His friend laughs. "Yeah, we all know you love sucking dick more than anything in the world!" They both laugh as you keep walking, but they follow you and make more crude comments. You pass by a few other people that give you disgusted looks at the boys comments. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			*nl
+			'"Hey whore! Come over here! We''ve got something for you!" one of them hollers.'
+			'"Yeah, we all know you love sucking dick more than anything in the world!" They both laugh as you keep walking, but they follow you and make more crude comments. You pass by a few other people that give you disgusted looks at the boys comments. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 300:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors. "I''m surprised you can even walk with all the cocks that have fucked your dirty holes." one them says tauntingly as his friend laughs before joining in. "I wouldn''t touch you with three condoms on. Who knows how many diseases you have, or how much old cum is still inside you!" They give you looks of utter disgust as you walk away. There is little you can say in your defense.'
+			'Two boys around your age are standing near the apartment doors.'
+			*nl
+			'"I''m surprised you can even walk with all the cocks that have fucked your dirty holes," one them says tauntingly as his friend laughs before joining in.'
+			'"I wouldn''t touch you with three condoms on. Who knows how many diseases you have, or how much old cum is still inside you!" They give you looks of utter disgust as you walk away. There is little you can say in your defense.'
 		end
 		
 		act 'Keep going': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -72,20 +89,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'complex':
 		
 		if fame['pav_slut'] < 150:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/girls_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction. They start whispering and giggling to each other, followed by pointed looks in your direction. "Don''t you have a cock to go and suck somewhere, slut?" They all start giggling againa as you just sigh and continue on. It seems people are talking about your growing reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
+			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard.'
+			*nl
+			'You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction. They start whispering and giggling to each other, followed by pointed looks in your direction. "Don''t you have a cock to go and suck somewhere, slut?" They all start giggling againa as you just sigh and continue on. It seems people are talking about your growing reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/girls_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You overhear their conversation as you walk past. "Look, it doesn''t taste that bad." The second one chimes in. "And you can just spit it out if you want." The third one just frowns. "I guess..." They spot you and giggle as they point. "You could always ask her. She loves swallowing cum and does it all the time!" They all laugh at you before returning to their conversation. You just sigh and continue on. It seems people are talking about your reputation, which is only getting worse. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You overhear their conversation as you walk past.'
+			*nl
+			'"Look, it doesn''t taste that bad."The second one chimes in. "And you can just spit it out if you want."'
+			'The third one just frowns. "I guess..." They spot you and giggle as they point.'
+			'"You could always ask her. She loves swallowing cum and does it all the time!"'
+			'They all laugh at you before returning to their conversation. You just sigh and continue on. It seems people are talking about your reputation, which is only getting worse. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/girls_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction as they start whispering and giggling, followed by pointed looks in your direction. They notice you looking at them and one of them frowns. "What are you looking at slut? Mind your own business!" They all give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking quietly to each other. You just sigh and continue on. It seems everyone is now aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard.'
+			*nl
+			'You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction as they start whispering and giggling, followed by pointed looks in your direction. They notice you looking at them and one of them frowns. "What are you looking at slut? Mind your own business!" They all give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking quietly to each other. You just sigh and continue on. It seems everyone is now aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/girls_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction as they start whispering and giggling, followed by pointed looks in your direction. One of them frowns when they notice you staring. "What are you looking at whore? Don''t you have a bunch of boys waiting to gangbang you somewhere?" They all give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking quietly to each other. You just sigh and continue on. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
+			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard.'
+			*nl
+			'You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction as they start whispering and giggling, followed by pointed looks in your direction. One of them frowns when they notice you staring. "What are you looking at whore? Don''t you have a bunch of boys waiting to gangbang you somewhere?" They all give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking quietly to each other. You just sigh and continue on. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 300:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/girls_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction. They start talking out loud, apparently not caring who hears them. "Well well, if it isn''t the town bicycle!"'
-			'"Yeah, anyone can ride her as much as they want!" another chimes in. The last one stops laughing before replying. "I wouldn''t even touch a boy that has been with her. Who knows what kind of filthy diseases she gave him?!" They give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking to each other and ignoring you. You just sigh and continue on. There is little you can say in your defense.'
+			'Three girls are sitting on one of the benches that dot the courtyard. You can''t help but notice them looking in your direction.'
+			*nl
+			'They start talking out loud, apparently not caring who hears them. "Well well, if it isn''t the town bicycle!"'
+			'"Yeah, anyone can ride her as much as they want!" another chimes in. The last one just sneers at you.'
+			'"I wouldn''t even touch a boy that has been with her. Who knows what kind of filthy diseases she gave him?!" They give you looks of utter disgust and go back to talking to each other and ignoring you. You just sigh and continue on. There is little you can say in your defense.'
 		end
 		
 		act 'Keep going': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -100,24 +131,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
+		'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking.'
+		*nl
 		if fame['pav_slut'] < 100:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "Hey isn''t that the girl the gopniks were talking about?" one of them asks as you walk past. "Yeah, but she''s just a tease." his friend replies. They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
+			'"Hey isn''t that the girl the gopniks were talking about?" one of them asks as you walk past.'
+			'"Yeah, but she''s just a tease." his friend replies. They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 150:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "Hey isn''t that the girl that gave one of the gopniks a handjob in the restroom?" one of them asks as you walk past. The other one looks at you before replying. "No, I think she just likes to tease guys and flash her panties at them." They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
+			'"Hey isn''t that the girl that gave one of the gopniks a handjob in the restroom?" one of them asks as you walk past. The other one looks at you before replying.'
+			'"No, I think she just likes to tease guys and flash her panties at them." They seem to lose interest in you, but you can''t help but notice people are talking about your reputation. You should be more discreet if you want them to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "Hey isn''t that the slut the gopniks said was giving them blowjobs in the the old school building?" His friend laughs as he replies. "Yeah that''s her. I hear she''s a world class cock sucker." They keep watching and talking about you before the sound of the school drowns out their voices. It seems everyone is aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'"Hey isn''t that the slut the gopniks said was giving them blowjobs in the the old school building?" one of them says loudly, pointing at you.'
+			'"Yeah that''s her. I hear she''s a world class cock sucker." They keep watching and talking about you before the sound of the school drowns out their voices. It seems everyone is aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "Look who it is, one of the school sluts." His friend laughs before replying. "She looks sad. Maybe she needs a cock or two to cheer her up?" They laugh and keep talking about you until the sounds of the school drown out their voices as you walk down the hall. It seems everyone is aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
+			'"Look who it is, one of the school sluts," one of them taunts.'
+			'"She looks sad. Maybe she needs a cock or two to cheer her up?" They laugh and keep talking about you until the sounds of the school drown out their voices as you walk down the hall. It seems everyone is aware of your tarnished reputation. You should be more discreet if you want people to stop talking about you.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "Hey whore, come over here. We''ve got something for you." His friend laughs. "Yeah, we all know you love sucking dick more than anything in the world!" They both laugh as you keep walking, but they follow you and make more crude comments. Several of your fellow students laugh or give you disgusted looks when they hear the boys comments. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
+			'"Hey whore, come over here. We''ve got something for you!" one of them laughs.'
+			'"Yeah, we all know you love sucking dick more than anything in the world!" They both laugh as you keep walking, but they follow you and make more crude comments. Several of your fellow students laugh or give you disgusted looks when they hear the boys comments. Your reputation is in tatters, but maybe it isn''t too late to redeem yourself.'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 300:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boys_gossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are standing in the hallway talking. "I''m surprised you can even walk with all the cocks that have fucked your dirty holes." one them says tauntingly as his friend laughs before joining in. "I wouldn''t touch you with three condoms on. Who knows how many diseases you have, or how much old cum is still inside you!" They give you looks of utter disgust as you walk away. There is little you can say in your defense.'
+			'"I''m surprised you can even walk with all the cocks that have fucked your dirty holes," one them says tauntingly as his friend laughs before joining in.'
+			'"I wouldn''t touch you with three condoms on. Who knows how many diseases you have, or how much old cum is still inside you!" They give you looks of utter disgust as you walk away. There is little you can say in your defense.'
 		end
 		act 'Continue on': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
 	end