[text edit] clean up carF

locations/carF.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Move away from the car':dynamic $enddrive
 
 	if kanistra > 0:
-		'In the trunk there is <<kanistra>> canister/s of gasoline. Each canister contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
+		'In the trunk there ' + iif(kanistra = 1, 'is 1 cannister', 'are <<kanistra>> canisters') + ' of gasoline. Each canister contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
 
 		if benz <= 45:
 			act 'Pour gasoline into the tank':
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				menu_off = 1
 				benz += 5
 				kanistra -= 1
-				'You emptied the canister of gasoline into the tank.'
+				'You empty the canister of gasoline into the tank.'
 
 				act 'Move away':gt 'carF', 'start'
 			end
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><<$car>></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/car/salon<<car>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Gasoline - <<benz>> liters, the fuel tank has a capacity of 40 liters.'
+	'Gasoline - <<benz>> ' + iif(benz = 1, 'liter', 'liters') + ', the fuel tank has a capacity of 40 liters.'
 
 	if teh <= 0:teh = 0 & wrek = 1
 	if teh <= 0 or wrek = 1:$teh = 'The car is in need of repairs and won''t start.'
 	if teh >= tehcar * 75 / 100 and wrek = 0:$teh = 'The car is in excellent condition.'
-	if teh < tehcar * 75 / 100 and teh >= tehcar * 50 / 100 and wrek = 0:$teh = 'While driving, you occasionally hear some troubling noises'
+	if teh < tehcar * 75 / 100 and teh >= tehcar * 50 / 100 and wrek = 0:$teh = 'While driving, you occasionally hear some troubling noises.'
 	if teh < tehcar * 50 / 100 and teh >= tehcar * 25 / 100 and wrek = 0:$teh = 'The car seems broken and barely drives.'
 	if teh < tehcar * 25 / 100 and wrek = 0:$teh = 'How this car still runs is a mystery, even to its designers.'
 
@@ -134,15 +134,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			dpsrand = rand(0, 100)
 
 			if dpsrand <= alko:
-				'A policeman stops you, he looks at your condition and requests you breathe into a tube. You breathe and a red light brightens up on the instrument panel.'
-				'The officer snorts, and writes something down. He hands you a slip of paper with the number 50,000 on it'
+				'A policeman stops you. He looks at your condition and requests you breathe into a tube. You breathe, and a red light brightens up on the instrument panel.'
+				'The officer snorts and writes something down. He hands you a slip of paper with the number 50,000 on it'
 				'"Or I can write a report. But you will get a permanent record for driving drunk."'
 
 				if money >= 50000:
 					act 'Bribe him (50,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 						cla
 						money = money - 50000
-						'You pay and the policeman warns you that you can not keep driving in your drunken state.'
+						'You pay, and the policeman warns you that you can not keep driving in your drunken state.'
 
 						act 'In the salon':gt 'carF', 'salon'
 					end
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 				act 'Come on, this is within the law':
 					cla
 					prava = 0
-					'"I can take your license, for not driving sober."'
+					'"I can take your license for not driving sober."'
 
 					act 'In the salon':gt 'carF', 'salon'
 				end
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			if avarand >= 50:
 				teh = teh/2
 				wrek = 1
-				'Driving drunken, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
+				'Driving drunk, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
 
 				act 'In the salon':gt 'carF', 'salon'
 
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			elseif cardrive <= 11 or cardrive = 25:
 				car_town = 1
 				act 'Go to another city destination': gs 'carF', 'city'
-				act 'Go to Pavlosvsk':
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk':
 					minut += 65
 					*nl
 					'You drive for more than an hour on the highway before you get to the town of Pavlovsk.'
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 					'You drive for half an hour on the highway before you get to the city.'
 					gs 'carF', 'city'
 				end
-				act 'Go to a Pavlosvsk destination':
+				act 'Go to a Pavlovsk destination':
 					minut += 30
 					*nl
 					'You drive for half an hour on the highway before you get to the town of Pavlovsk.'