Might have broke the library files, might not have.

locations/city_library.qsrc

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		gt 'city_library', 'read'	
 	end
 	
-	act 'Loan a book':
+	act 'Borrow a book':
 		gt 'city_library', 'loan'
 	end
 
@@ -61,9 +61,8 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		act 'Read magic books':
 			dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], 'splcstng'
 			gs 'stat'
-
 			'You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
-			'Not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
+			'You discover that not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
 			'After about an hour, you decide to take a break from it and instead test your memory. You don''t remember much, but you understand magic a little better than before.'
 
 			! Find Researchable Spells
@@ -98,10 +97,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'intel', rand(3,6) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/science1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions writen inside and to finally understand the subject it describes.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions writen inside and understand the subject it describes.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -110,10 +107,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fiction' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading an adventure novel, immersing yourself in daring deeds and awesome twists.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -122,10 +117,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fantasy' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading a fantasy novel, rescuing damsels from dragons, digging for jewels with dwarves and performing word changing magic alongside elves and druids.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -134,10 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/scifi' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI''s and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -146,10 +137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/romance' + rand(1,20) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
-		
+		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... Several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 	end
 	
@@ -171,23 +160,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'sprt', rand(3,6)
 			grupvalue[3] += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/tolstoy.jpg"></center>'
-			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he used a shit-load of words.'
-			
+			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, but he used a <i>lot</i> of words.'
 			act 'Put the book back': gt 'city_library', 'read'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Read from the collected works of Leo Tolstoy (1:00) (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Go Back': gt 'city_library'
+	act 'Go back': gt 'city_library'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	cla
 	if $lib_book_loaned ! '':
-		'You''ve currently loaned a <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
+		'You''ve currently borrowed a <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
 		if lib_debt <= 0:
 			temp_loan_days_left = lib_debt / -50
 			'You have <<temp_loan_days_left>> days left before you need to return it.'
@@ -198,10 +185,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 		act 'Return your loaned book':
 			if lib_book_read = 0:
 				if $lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy': f_book -= 1
-
 			elseif lib_book_read = 1:
 				if $lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy': fantasybook = 0
-
 			end
 			$lib_book_loaned = ''
 			if lib_debt <= 0: lib_debt = 0
@@ -212,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if lib_debt > 0:
-		'You''ve got an outstanding debt of ₽<<lib_debt>> to the library.'
+		'You owe an outstanding debt of <<lib_debt>> <b>₽</b> to the library.'
 		if pcs_money >= lib_debt:
 			act 'Pay your debt':
 				pcs_money -= lib_debt
@@ -225,80 +210,67 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if $lib_book_loaned = '' and lib_debt = 0:
-		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels.
-		!'act 'Loan a book on science':
+		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels
+		!!act 'Borrow a book on science':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			s_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science book'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'city_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a science book that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'city_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		!'act 'Loan an adventure novel':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow an adventure novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			a_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'an adventure novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'city_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find an adventure novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'city_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		act 'Loan a fantasy novel':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a fantasy novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			f_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a fantasy novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'city_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a fantasy novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'city_library'
 		end
-		!'
-		act 'Read a science fiction novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a science fiction novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			sf_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science fiction novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'city_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a fantasy novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'city_library'
 		end
-		'
-		!'
-		act 'Read a romance novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a romance novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			r_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a romance novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'city_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a romance novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'city_library'
 		end
-		'
+	
 		act 'Go back': gt 'city_library'
 	end
 end

locations/pav_library.qsrc

@@ -14,8 +14,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
-'For such a small town, the library is surprisingly large - containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
-*nl
+'For such a small town, the library is surprisingly large, containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
 'Between the bookshelves are some tables which can be used for studying. Some of them have <a href="exec: gs ''internet_mobile'', ''get_access'', ''free'', ''noporn'',''nocamshow'' & gs ''internet_mobile'', ''add_limitation'', ''general-text'', ''On this public computer all adult content sites are blocked'' & gt ''Komp'',''start''">computers</a> for public use.'
 if lernHome > 0:
 	'You could do your homework with the help of one of the computers.'
@@ -28,7 +27,7 @@ end
 if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and kanikuli = 0 and week > 5 and hour >= 12 and hour < 14:
 	if nataliaQW['library_day_check'] ! daystart:
 		nataliaQW['library_day_check'] = daystart
-		if  rand(0,3) = 0: nataliaQW['library_day'] = daystart
+		if rand(0,3) = 0: nataliaQW['library_day'] = daystart
 	end
 	if nataliaQW['library_day'] = daystart:
 		'You see your classmate <a href="exec: gt ''natalia_pavlova'',''library''">Natalia Pavlova</a> .'
@@ -36,11 +35,9 @@ if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and kanikuli = 0 and week > 5 and hour >= 12 and
 end
 
 act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
-
 act 'Go to the toilets': gt 'gdktoilet', 'start'
-
 if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart and hour = 19: act 'Wait for game night to start': minut += 60-minut & gt 'pav_library'
-if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart and hour = 20: act 'Join the <b>nerds</b>': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'game'
+if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart and hour = 20: act 'Join the nerds': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'game'
 
 killvar '$downlibrary'
 $downlibrary['read'] = {
@@ -65,7 +62,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 		gt 'pav_library', 'read'	
 	end
 	
-	act 'Loan a book':
+	act 'Borrow a book':
 		gt 'pav_library', 'loan'
 	end
 
@@ -74,10 +71,8 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 		lern += rand(1,3)
 		grupvalue[3] += 2
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/learning' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You read several books that should help you with your school work, you feel that you learned something today.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library'
 	end
 
@@ -93,11 +88,11 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 			gs 'willpower', 'chore', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4, 'hard', iif(pcs_traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 			if pcs_traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
 			if pcs_traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'grades', 'homework', 'school', 'yes', 1, 0, 0
 			'You sit down at one of the tables with a a computer and use it to help you do your homework.'
-			'After an hour you have '+iif(lernHome = 0, 'completed', 'done a part of')+' your homework.'
-			act 'Get up form the table': gt 'pav_library'
+			'After an hour, you''ve '+iif(lernHome = 0, 'completed', 'done a part of')+' your homework.'
+			act 'Get up from the table': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
 	elseif lernHome > 0 and will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Do your homework (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -117,10 +112,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'intel', rand(3,6) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		grupvalue[3] +=1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/science1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions writen inside and to finally understand the subject it describes.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions written inside and understand the subject it describes.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -129,10 +122,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] +=1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fiction' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading an adventure novel, immersing yourself in daring deeds and awesome twists.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -141,10 +132,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fantasy' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading a fantasy novel, rescuing damsels from dragons, digging for jewels with dwarves and performing word changing magic alongside elves and druids.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -153,10 +142,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/scifi' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI''s and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -165,10 +152,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/romance' + rand(1,20) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
-
+		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... Several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 	end
 	
@@ -190,23 +175,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'sprt', rand(3,6)
 			grupvalue[3] += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/tolstoy.jpg"></center>'
-			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he used a shit-load of words.'
-			
+			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, but he used a <i>lot</i> of words.'
 			act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library', 'read'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Read from the collected works of Leo Tolstoy (1:00) (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Go Back': gt 'pav_library'
+	act 'Go back': gt 'pav_library'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	cla
 	if $lib_book_loaned ! '':
-		'You''ve currently loaned a <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
+		'You''ve currently borrowed a <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
 		if lib_debt <= 0:
 			temp_loan_days_left = lib_debt / -50
 			'You have <<temp_loan_days_left>> days left before you need to return it.'
@@ -230,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if lib_debt > 0:
-		'You''ve got an outstanding debt of ₽<<lib_debt>> to the library.'
+		'You''ve owe an outstanding debt of <<lib_debt>> <b>₽</b> to the library.'
 		if pcs_money >= lib_debt:
 			act 'Pay your debt':
 				pcs_money -= lib_debt
@@ -243,80 +226,67 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if $lib_book_loaned = '' and lib_debt = 0:
-		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels.
-		!'act 'Loan a book on science':
+		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels
+		!!act 'Borrow a science book':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			s_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science book'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'pav_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a science book that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."' 
+			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		!'act 'Loan an adventure novel':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow an adventure novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			a_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'an adventure novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'pav_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find an adventure novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		act 'Loan a fantasy novel':
+		
+		act 'Borrow a fantasy novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			f_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a fantasy novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'pav_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a fantasy novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
-		!'
-		act 'Read a science fiction novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a science fiction novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			sf_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science fiction novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'pav_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a science fiction novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
-		'
-		!'
-		act 'Read a romance novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a romance novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			r_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a romance novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'pav_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a romance novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
-		'
+		
 		act 'Go back': gt 'pav_library'
 	end
 end

locations/uni_lessons_electives1.qsrc

@@ -466,13 +466,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Psychology 101':
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'chrsm', rand(1,2)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/ebony_girl_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				if kendraQW['sub'] < 1:
-					'You start to sit next to Kendra, who glares at you. "I don''t think so, Princess. We''re not friends and I want nothing to do with you. Go sit somewhere else."'
+					'You''re about to sit next to Kendra when she glares at you. "I don''t think so, Princess. We''re not friends and I want nothing to do with you. Go sit somewhere else."'
 					'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her and find a seat by yourself.' 
 				elseif kendraQW['sub'] >= 10:
 					if npc_rel['A82'] >= 60:
 						'You decide to sit next to Kendra. You talk to her and she even lets you get a few words in, but she mostly treats you like a pet or someone simple, often making condescending comments towards you.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A82'] <= 20:
-						'You start to sit next to Kendra, who glares at you. "We''re not friends. You''re nothing more than my white slave bitch to use and abuse as I see fit. You don''t come over to me in public, <i>ever</i>. Go sit somewhere else."'
+						'You''re about to sit next to Kendra when she glares at you. "We''re not friends. You''re nothing more than my white slave bitch to use and abuse as I see fit. You don''t come over to me in public, <i>ever</i>. Go sit somewhere else."'
 						'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her and find a seat by yourself.' 
 					else
 						'You sit next to Kendra and try to have a conversation with her, but anytime you try and get a word in, she gives you a dirty look until you shut up and let her keep talking.'
@@ -502,13 +502,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Psychology 101':
 					'She eyes you like a pair of shoes she might buy. "I''m Kendra, but you can call me Mistress," she replies in an exotic accent. "If you like, I can train you to become one of my slaves."'
 					'You''re taken aback by her comment. "Slaves?"'
 					'She smiles. "Yes, I have many sex slaves here, and I can train you to serve me well. If you''re interested, come to my dorm room. It''s on the eighth floor of the east dorm, room 808."'
-					'She ignores you for the rest of the class. You wonder if you should visit her dorm room and see what she was talking about...'
+					'She ignores you for the rest of the class, leaving you to wonder if you should visit her dorm room and see what she was talking about...'
 				else
 					'There''s something about this ebony girl that intrigues you, so you decide to sit next to her. "Hi, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					'"No. Not interested. Maybe if you do something about all of... ''this'', you can try again." Her hand indicates your entire person with languid disinterest.'
 					'You''re taken aback by her comment. "What?"'
 					'She rolls her eyes, believing your shocked silence to be stupidity. "Just go away."'
-					'She ignores you for the rest of the class. but you wonder if she doesn''t find you attractive enough to get her attention. Maybe if you were better looking she would talk to you?'
+					'She ignores you for the rest of the class, leaving you to wonder if she doesn''t find you attractive enough to get her attention. Maybe if you were better looking she would talk to you?'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'uni_lessons_electivesev1', 'psychology_101'
 			end

locations/uni_library.qsrc

@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if week <= 4 and hour >= 15 and hour < 17:
 		if meet_kendra = 1:
-			'You see <a href="exec:gt ''uni_library'', ''kendra''">Kendra</a> sitting at one of the library tables studying some books.'
+			'You see <a href="exec:gt ''uni_library'', ''kendra''">Kendra</a> sitting at one of the tables studying some books.'
 		else
-			'You see a pretty ebony <a href="exec:gt ''uni_library'', ''kendra''">girl</a> sitting at one of the library tables studying some books.'
+			'You see a pretty ebony <a href="exec:gt ''uni_library'', ''kendra''">girl</a> sitting at one of the tables studying some books.'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if rand(0,3) = 0: nataliaQW['library_day'] = daystart
 		end
 		if nataliaQW['library_day'] = daystart:
-			'You see your former classmate <a href="exec: gt ''natalia_pavlova'',''library''">Natalia Pavlova</a> .'
+			'You see your former classmate <a href="exec: gt ''natalia_pavlova'',''library''">Natalia Pavlova</a>.'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			gt 'uni_library', 'read'	
 		end
 		
-		act 'Loan a book':
+		act 'Borrow a book':
 			gt 'uni_library', 'loan'
 		end
 
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 		minut += 5
 		gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
-	act 'Return to entrance':
+	act 'Return to the entrance':
 		minut += 2
 		gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 	end
@@ -168,54 +168,54 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'intel', max(0,rand(-1,1))
 	pcs_mood += (pcs_traits['nerd_status']*5 -10)
 	minut += 30
-	'You open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasional noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspicious. Despite this, it is a good environment to study in and you can see a number of other students studying as well.'
+	'You open the books and start studying for your <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet, but you hear occasional noises, some of them hard to make out and some of them fairly suspicious. Despite this, it''s a good environment to study in and you can see a number of other students studying as well.'
 	if pcs_sleep < 5:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are so tired that you are constantly falling asleep. You get no studying done in this condition.'
+		'You''re so tired that you''re constantly falling asleep. You get no studying done in this condition.'
 	elseif pcs_sleep < 30:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are very tired and have a hard time keeping you eyes open.'
+		'You''re very tired and have a hard time keeping your eyes open.'
 	end
 	if alko >= 6:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are so drunk that your eyes can''t make sense of the letters written in the books. Holding your pen is also a problem.'
+		'You''re so drunk that your eyes can''t make sense of the letters written in the books. Holding your pen is also a problem.'
 	elseif alko >= 4:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are drunk and have trouble concentrating on reading the books. When you look at the notes you''ve made, a lot of them are incomprehensible.'
+		'You''re drunk and have trouble concentrating on reading the books. When you look at the notes you''ve made, a lot of them are incomprehensible.'
 	elseif alko >= 2:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are feeling a little tipsy, but feel like your studying is going great. However, when you look at your notes afterwards, you notice that a lot of them make no sense.'
+		'You''re feeling a little tipsy, but feel like your studying is going great. However, when you look at your notes afterwards, you notice that a lot of them make no sense.'
 	end
 	if mentats_dose >= 1: study_mod += 30
 	If pcs_mood < 50:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are in a bad mood and it clearly affects your studying.'
+		'You''re in a bad mood and it clearly affects your studying.'
 	end
 	if StrongNarkota > 0 or jointhigh > 0:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are stoned, which makes it hard to concentrate on studying.'
+		'You''re stoned, which makes it hard to concentrate on studying.'
 	end
 	if amphHigh > 0: study_mod += 20
 	if pcs_energy < 5:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are extremely hungry and it is hard to think about anything else other than food.'
+		'You''re extremely hungry and it''s hard to think about anything other than food.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 10:
 		study_mod -= 10
-		'You are very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
+		'You''re very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 20:
 		study_mod -=10
-		'You are hungry and your thoughts often drift to food, affecting your performance negatively.'
+		'You''re hungry and your thoughts often drift to food, affecting your performance negatively.'
 	end
 	if pcs_horny > 90:
 		study_mod -= 10
-		'You are extremely horny and your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting your ability to study.'
+		'You''re extremely horny and your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting your ability to study.'
 	end
 	if pain['total'] > 90:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are in so much pain that you can''t study.'
+		'You''re in so much pain that you can''t study.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 75:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are in so much pain that you have a very hard time concentrating on studying.'
+		'You''re in so much pain that you have a very hard time concentrating on studying.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 60:
 		study_mod -= 20
 		'Your pain is constantly bothering you and makes it hard to study.'
@@ -226,9 +226,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 		'You try to study for half an hour, but get nothing done.'
 	else
 		if study_mod = 0:
-			'You study for half an hour, but you don''t think you are improving.'
+			'You study for half an hour, but you don''t think you''re improving.'
 		elseif study_mod = 1:
-			'You study for half an hour and think you are improving a little.'
+			'You study for half an hour and think you''re improving a little.'
 		elseif study_mod = 2:
 			'You study for half an hour and believe that you''re making good progress in getting ready for the exam.'
 		else
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 		gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 	if (week < 6 or hour < 23) and hour > 7:
-		act 'Return to entrance':
+		act 'Return to the entrance':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 		end
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wander':
 		gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 	if (week < 6 or hour < 23) and hour > 7:
-		act 'Return to entrance':
+		act 'Return to the entrance':
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 		end
@@ -343,11 +343,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		dynamic $downlibrary['read']
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'intel', rand(3,6) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
-		gs'stat'
-
+		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/science1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions writen inside and to finally understand the subject it describes.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading, trying to make sense of all the clever propositions written inside and understand the subject it describes.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -356,10 +354,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fiction' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading an adventure novel, immersing yourself in daring deeds and awesome twists.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -368,10 +364,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/fantasy' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		'You spend an hour reading a fantasy novel, rescuing damsels from dragons, digging for jewels with dwarves and performing word changing magic alongside elves and druids.'
-
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -380,10 +374,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		grupvalue[3] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/scifi' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI''s and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
-
+		'You spend an hour reading a science fiction novel - flying off into space, travelling though time, running from rogue AI and creating monsters with your hunchbacked assistant.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 	end
 
@@ -392,10 +384,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/romance' + rand(1,20) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
-
+		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... Several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 	end
 	
@@ -417,23 +407,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'read':
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'sprt', rand(3,6)
 			grupvalue[3] += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/books/tolstoy.jpg"></center>'
-			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he used a shit-load of words.'
-			
+			'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, but he used a <i>lot</i> of words.'
 			act 'Put the book back': gt 'uni_library', 'read'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Read from the collected works of Leo Tolstoy (1:00) (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Go Back': gt 'uni_library', 'start'
+	act 'Go back': gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	cla
 	if $lib_book_loaned ! '':
-		'You''ve currently loaned a <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
+		'You''ve currently borrowed <<$lib_book_loaned>>.'
 		if lib_debt <= 0:
 			temp_loan_days_left = lib_debt / -50
 			'You have <<temp_loan_days_left>> days left before you need to return it.'
@@ -444,10 +432,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 		act 'Return your loaned book':
 			if lib_book_read = 0:
 				if $lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy': f_book -= 1
-
 			elseif lib_book_read = 1:
 				if $lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy': fantasybook = 0
-
 			end
 			$lib_book_loaned = ''
 			if lib_debt <= 0: lib_debt = 0
@@ -458,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if lib_debt > 0:
-		'You''ve got an outstanding debt of ₽<<lib_debt>> to the library.'
+		'You owe an outstanding debt of <<lib_debt>> <b>₽</b> to the library.'
 		if pcs_money >= lib_debt:
 			act 'Pay your debt':
 				pcs_money -= lib_debt
@@ -471,80 +457,67 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan':
 	end
 
 	if $lib_book_loaned = '' and lib_debt = 0:
-		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels.
-		!'act 'Loan a book on science':
+		!!There''s currently only code for fantasy novels (Is this still true? I''ve left everything but the fantasy novel out until confirmed)
+		!!'act 'Borrow a science book':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			s_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science book'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'uni_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a science book that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'uni_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		!'act 'Loan an adventure novel':
+		
+		!!'act 'Borrow an adventure novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			a_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'an adventure novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'uni_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find an adventure novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'uni_library'
 		end
-		'
-
-		act 'Loan a fantasy novel':
+		
+		act 'Borrow a fantasy novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			f_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a fantasy novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'uni_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a fantasy novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'uni_library'
 		end
-		!'
-		act 'Read a science fiction novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a science fiction novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			sf_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a science fiction novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'uni_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a science fiction novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'uni_library'
 		end
-		'
-		!'
-		act 'Read a romance novel (1:00)':
+		
+		!!act 'Borrow a romance novel':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			r_book += 1
-			$lib_book_loaned = 'fantasy'
+			$lib_book_loaned = 'a romance novel'
 			lib_debt = -700
-			
-			!!Picture here?
-			'You find a fantasy novel that caches your interest and bring it to the librarian.'
-			'The librarian notes your name and the title of the book down, then hands it to you.'
-			'"Here You need to return it within 2 weeks, for every day that you''re late, you need to pay a ₽50 fine."'
-			act 'Put the book away': gt 'uni_library'
+			!!Picture here
+			'You find a fantasy novel that catches your interest and bring it to the librarian, who notes your name and the title of the book down before handing it to you.'
+			'"You need to return it within 2 weeks. Every day that you''re late incurs a 50 <b>₽</b> fine."'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'uni_library'
 		end
-		'
+		
 		act 'Go back': gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 	end
 end
@@ -556,28 +529,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'chrsm', rand(1,2)
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/classroom/ebony_girl_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk over to her table and start to sit down at the same table.'
+	'You walk over to her table.'
 	if meet_kendra = 1:
 		if kendraQW['sub'] < 0:
-			'Kendra looks at you as you start to sit down. "I don''t think so, princess. We are not friends and I want nothing to do with you. So, go sit somewhere else."'
-			'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her.' 
+			'You''re about to take a seat when Kendra glares at you. "I don''t think so, Princess. We''re not friends and I want nothing to do with you. Go sit somewhere else."'
+			'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her and find a seat by yourself.' 
 		elseif kendraQW['sub'] >= 10:
 			if npc_rel['A82'] >= 60:
 				minut += 10
-				'You sit next to Kendra. You talk to her and she even lets you get in a few words edgewise, but she mostly treats you like a pet or someone simple - making condescending comments often.'
+				'You sit next to Kendra. You talk to her and she even lets you get a few words in, but she mostly treats you like a pet or someone simple, often making condescending comments towards you.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A82'] <= 20:
-				'You start to sit next to Kendra, when she looks over at you. "We are not friends. You are nothing more than my white slave bitch to use and abuse as I see fit. You don''t come over to me in public, ever. So, go sit somewhere else."'
-				'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her.' 
+				'You''re about to sit next to Kendra when she glares at you. "We''re not friends. You''re nothing more than my white slave bitch to use and abuse as I see fit. You don''t come over to me in public, <i>ever</i>. Go sit somewhere else."'
+				'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her and find a seat by yourself.' 
 			else
 				minut += 10
-				'You sit next to Kendra. You try and have a conversation with her, but mostly she talks and you listen. Anytime you try and get a word in edgewise, she just gives you a dirty look until you shut up and let her keep talking.'
+				'You sit next to Kendra and try to have a conversation with her, but anytime you try and get a word in, she gives you a dirty look until you shut up and let her keep talking.'
 			end
 		else
 			if npc_rel['A82'] >= 60:
 				minut += 10
-				'You sit next to Kendra. You talk to her and she even lets you get in a few words edgewise, but she mostly treats you like a pet or someone simple - making condescending comments often.'
+				'You sit next to Kendra. You talk to her and she even lets you get a few words in, but she mostly treats you like a pet or someone simple, often making condescending comments towards you.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A82'] <= 20:
-				'You start to sit next to Kendra, when she looks over at you. "I don''t think so, princess. We are not friends. You are nothing more than my toy to be used when and where I want, and now is not the time. So, go sit somewhere else."'
+				'You''re about to sit next to Kendra when she looks over at you. "I don''t think so, Princess. We''re not friends. You''re nothing more than my toy to be used when and where I want, and now is not the time, so go sit somewhere else."'
 				'You glance around and notice a few other students staring at you, so you move away from her.' 
 			else
 				minut += 10
@@ -591,21 +564,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 	else
 		if hotcat >= 5:
 			meet_kendra = 1
-			'There is something about this ebony girl that intrigues you, so you sit down next to her. "Hi, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'She glances over at you as if you were a pair of shoes that she was thinking about buying. After a long moment, she finally says, in an accented tone, "I''m Kendra, but you can call me Mistress. If you like, I can train you and you can become one of my slaves."'
-			'You are taken aback by her comment. "Slaves?"'
-			'She smiles. "Yes, I have many sex slaves here, I can train you well to serve me. If you are interested, come to my dorm room. It is on the eighth floor of the east dorm, room 808."'
-			'She ignores you, leaving you to wonder if you should go visit her dorm room and see what the hell she was talking about.'
+			'There''s something about this ebony girl that intrigues you, so you decide to sit next to her. "Hi, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'She eyes you like a pair of shoes she might buy. "I''m Kendra, but you can call me Mistress," she replies in an exotic accent. "If you like, I can train you to become one of my slaves."'
+			'You''re taken aback by her comment. "Slaves?"'
+			'She smiles. "Yes, I have many sex slaves here, and I can train you to serve me well. If you''re interested, come to my dorm room. It''s on the eighth floor of the east dorm, room 808."'
+			'She then ignores you, leaving you to wonder if you should visit her dorm room and see what she was talking about...'
 			act 'Leave Kendra be':
 				minut += 2
 				gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 			end
 		else
-			'There is something about this ebony girl that intrigues you, so you sit down next to her. "Hi, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'She glances over at you as if you were a pair of shoes that she was thinking about buying. After a long moment, she finally says, in an accented tone, as she shakes her head. "No, not interested. Maybe if you do something about all this, you can ask try again." The last part she kinda vaguely waves her hand at your general body and face.'
-			'You are taken aback by her comment. "What?"'
-			'She rolls her eyes like you are stupid. "Just go away."'
-			'She ignores you, leaving you to wonder if she doesn''t find you attractive enough to get her attention, maybe if you was better looking she would talk to you.'
+			'There''s something about this ebony girl that intrigues you, so you decide to sit next to her. "Hi, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'"No. Not interested. Maybe if you do something about all of... ''this'', you can try again." Her hand indicates your entire person with languid disinterest.'
+			'You''re taken aback by her comment. "What?"'
+			'She rolls her eyes, believing your shocked silence to be stupidity. "Just go away."'
+			'She then ignores you, leaving you to wonder if she doesn''t find you attractive enough to get her attention. Maybe if you were better looking she would talk to you?'
 			act 'Leave her be':
 				minut += 2
 				gt 'uni_library', 'start'