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[text edit] clean up TerminalOffice

Spackled Lanturn 3 年之前
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      locations/TerminalOffice.qsrc

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locations/TerminalOffice.qsrc

@@ -106,15 +106,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		end
 		
 		if DoNotBuy = 2:
-			'You think about it for a while, realizing that you just have nowhere to store the goods and decide to downturn the purchase.'
+			'You think about it for a while, realize that you just have nowhere to store the goods and decide to turn down the purchase.'
 		else
 			!Produce purchase
-			act 'The small trinkets cost 100 <b>₽</b>, please put in how many trinkets you want to purchase':
+			act 'The small trinkets cost 100 <b>₽</b>. Please put in how many trinkets you want to purchase.':
 				minut += 13
 				MaxQuantityA = input("How many trinkets do you want to buy for 100 <b>₽</b> apiece?")
 				
 				if MaxQuantityA > (MaxQuantity1 + MaxQuantity2):
-					'<b><font color=red>You have nowhere to store the surplus <<MaxQuantityA-(MaxQuantity1 + MaxQuantity2)>> of trinkets.</front></b>'
+					'<b><font color=red>You have nowhere to store the surplus <<MaxQuantityA-(MaxQuantity1 + MaxQuantity2)>> ' + iif(MaxQuantityA - (MaxQuantity1 + MaxQuantity2) = 1, 'trinket', 'trinkets') + '.</front></b>'
 					cla
 					act 'Leave': gt 'TerminalOffice', '11'
 				end
@@ -123,11 +123,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 				
 				if MaxCost > money:
 					!If not enough money
-					'You don''t have enough money on you, you will have to withdraw money before proceeding with the purchase.'
+					'You don''t have enough money on you. You will have to withdraw money before proceeding with the purchase.'
 					if (money + karta >= MaxCost) or (karta >= MaxCost):
 						!The player can be plastic money
-						'You have enough money on your credit card and you offer them to pay with that.'
-						'"I''m sorry, we don''t own a card terminal." the Manager replies, "We accept only cash."'
+						'You have enough money on your credit card, and you offer them to pay with that.'
+						'"I''m sorry, we don''t own a card terminal," the Manager replies, "We accept only cash."'
 					end
 					cla
 					act 'Leave': gt 'TerminalOffice', '11'
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 					end
 					
 					if YouCanGar = 0 and money > 100: 
-						'You''ve purchased plenty of trinkets, but you''ve been thinking about expanding your business, but where could you store it all? Maybe you should talk to the stepfather if you could use some free space in his garage...'
+						'You''ve purchased plenty of trinkets, but you''ve been thinking about expanding your business. But where could you store them all? Maybe you should ask your stepfather if you could use some free space in his garage...'
 					end
 					
 					cla
@@ -173,11 +173,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 				!Hammered warehouses
 				if MaxCost > money:
 					!If not enough money
-					'You don''t have enough money on you, you will have to withdraw money before proceeding with the purchase.'
+					'You don''t have enough money on you. You will have to withdraw money before proceeding with the purchase.'
 					if (money + karta >= MaxCost) or (karta >= MaxCost):
 						!The player can be plastic money
-						'You have enough money on your credit card and you offer them to pay with that.'
-						'"I''m sorry, we don''t own a card terminal." the Manager replies, "We accept only cash."'
+						'You have enough money on your credit card, and you offer them to pay with that.'
+						'"I''m sorry, we don''t own a card terminal," the Manager replies, "We accept only cash."'
 					end
 					
 					cla
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 					end
 					
 					if YouCanGar = 0 and money > 100: 
-						'You''ve purchased plenty of trinkets, but you''ve been thinking about expanding your business, but where could you store it all? Maybe you should talk to the stepfather if you could use some free space in his garage...'
+						'You''ve purchased plenty of trinkets, but you''ve been thinking about expanding your business. But where could you store them all? Maybe you should ask your stepfather if you could use some free space in his garage...'
 					end
 					
 					cla
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		!Where the Director, the Door was closed dir
 		act 'Ask about the Director':
 			'"Excuse me, I wonder if I could meet your supervisor?" you ask.'
-			'The Manager grins, "Yuri is usually here every Monday through Friday, between 9:00 to 18:00 except lunch between 13:00 to 14:00."'
+			'The Manager grins, "Yuri is usually here every Monday through Friday, between 9:00 and 18:00 except lunch between 13:00 and 14:00."'
 			cla
 			act 'Leave': YouNotOpenDoorDir = 0 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '11'
 		end
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	if YouNotOpenDoorBuh = 1:
 		act 'Ask about the accountant':
 			'"Excuse me, I wonder if I could meet your accountant?" you ask.'
-			'The Manager grins, "Elizabeth is usually here Monday through Friday, between 9:00 to 20:00 except lunch between 13:00 to 14:00."'
+			'The Manager grins, "Elizabeth is usually here Monday through Friday, between 9:00 and 20:00 except lunch between 13:00 and 14:00."'
 			cla
 			act 'Leave': YouNotOpenDoorBuh = 0 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '11'
 		end
@@ -239,9 +239,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	
 	!He Has papers, but a Manager should say to go to the accounting Department.
 	if AboutDocsManager=0 and BurgerQW['TerminalTask'] = 1 and BurgerQW['TerminalTaskDay'] = daystart:
-		'"I''m Anatoly Chubais from the company "OOO Bystroushka limited", do you have the required documents with you?"'
+		'"I''m Anatoly Chubais from the company "OOO Bystroushka limited". Do you have the required documents with you?"'
 		act 'Give him the documents':
-			'"Looks good. Go and see Elizabeth in the account department, she needs to register you. You can find her next door."'
+			'"Looks good. Go and see Elizabeth in the account department. She needs to register you. You can find her next door."'
 			cla
 			act 'Leave': AboutDocsManager=1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '11'
 		end
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 
 	!The GG yet topics of conversation.
 	if verakassir = 0 and YouNotOpenDoorDir = 0 and YouNotOpenDoorBuh = 0 and BurgerQW['TerminalTask'] = 0: 
-		'You have nothing to say or left to do, you can leave the office.'
+		'You have nothing to say or left to do. You can leave the office.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -268,24 +268,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '21':
 		act 'Leave the office': minut += 1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '00'
 		
 		!GG not a complete idiot, so will limit communication with only Buch documents, then that thread again
-		'A cute girl looks up from the monitor, turning to you and asks, "What can I help you with?"'
+		'A cute girl looks up from her monitor, turns to you and asks, "What can I help you with?"'
 		
 		if BurgerQW['TerminalTask'] = 1 and BurgerQW['TerminalTaskDay'] = daystart:
-			'"I was talking with Anatoly Chubais from the company ''OOO Bystroushka limited'', I was instructed to deliver these documents."'
-			'"Yes, I''ve been expecting these, may I?" she holds out her hand.'
+			'"I was talking with Anatoly Chubais from the company ''OOO Bystroushka limited''. I was instructed to deliver these documents."'
+			'"Yes, I''ve been expecting these, may I?" She holds out her hand.'
 			act 'Give her the documents':
 				cla
 				minut += 1
 				BurgerQW['TerminalTask'] = 2
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You hand the girl the folder, she opens it and quickly checks the content.'
+				'You hand the girl the folder. She opens it and quickly checks the contents.'
 				'"Tell Anatoly Borisovich that Elizabeth said thank you."'
 				'The girl smiles and then turns her attention to her monitor and starts rapidly typing away on her keyboard.'
 				
 				act 'Leave the office': minut += 1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '00'
 			end
 		else
-			'You have nothing to say or left to do, you can leave the office.'
+			'You have nothing to say or left to do. You can leave the office.'
 		end
 		
 	else
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '21':
 		cla
 		gs 'TerminalOffice', 'TerminalOfficeScreen', 'A door with a sign', 'terminal6'
 		act 'Move away from the door': minut += 1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '00'
-		'You knock, but there is only silence. You try pushing down the handle, realizing that the door is locked. You''ll have to come back at a different time.'
+		'You knock, but there is only silence. You try pushing down the handle, but realize that the door is locked. You''ll have to come back at a different time.'
 		
 		YouNotOpenDoorBuh = 1
 		
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '31':
 		act 'Leave the office': minut += 1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '00'
 		
 		!Before the development of the plot 'Talk' the Director will constantly be on the phone and send he tries out of the office
-		'You knocked and opened the door. Behind a massive desk you see a man. He''s talking on the phone and apparently not in the mood. He''s a bit surpised as you weren''t the person he was expecting, so he dismissively waves his hand, clearly indicating that you need to leave the office.'
+		'You knock and open the door. Behind a massive desk, you see a man. He''s talking on the phone and apparently not in the mood. He''s a bit surprised as you aren''t the person he was expecting, so he dismissively waves his hand, clearly indicating that you need to leave the office.'
 		
 		if AboutBussines = 0: 
 			act 'Talk':
@@ -332,22 +332,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '31':
 			act 'Give him the documents':
 				gs 'TerminalOffice', 'TerminalOfficeScreen', 'The Director''s office', 'terminal1'
 				
-				'You walk up to the desk. However, you''re ignored by the man, but you refuse to turn back, you have an important assignment from the boss.'
-				'"I was told by Anatoly Chubais from the company "OOO Bystroushka limited", to hand over these documents to you."'
-				'The man stops talking on the phone, frowns, and pointing towards the door, "You need to head over to the accountant''s office."'
+				'You walk up to the desk. You''re ignored by the man, but you refuse to turn back, you have an important assignment from the boss.'
+				'"I was told by Anatoly Chubais from the company "OOO Bystroushka limited" to hand over these documents to you."'
+				'The man stops talking on the phone, frowns, and, pointing towards the door, asserts, "You need to head over to the accountant''s office."'
 				AboutDocs = 1
 				delact 'Give him the documents'
 			end
 		end
 		
-		if AboutBussines = 1 or AboutDocs = 1: 'You have nothing to say or left to do, you can leave the office.'
+		if AboutBussines = 1 or AboutDocs = 1: 'You have nothing to say or left to do. You can leave the office.'
 		
 	else
 		!The Director is not in place
 		cla
 		gs 'TerminalOffice', 'TerminalOfficeScreen', 'A door with a sign', 'terminal5'
 		act 'Move away from the door': minut += 1 & gt 'TerminalOffice', '00'
-		'You knock, but there is only silence. You try pushing down the handle, realizing that the door is locked. You''ll have to come back at a different time.'
+		'You knock, but there is only silence. You try pushing down the handle, but realize that the door is locked. You''ll have to come back at a different time.'
 		
 		YouNotOpenDoorDir = 1