[text edits] Updated Albina and Bella chat options at school along with proofreading. Lots and lots of proofreading.

locations/gschool_chats.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 		menu_off = 1
 		gschool_gropeday = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boysex_tualet.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you enter the class, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air, before you feel hands pawing at your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you.'
+		'When you enter the class, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you.'
 		act 'Ignore it': gt 'gschool_chats', 'nerds'
 		act 'Identify the perpetrator': gt 'gschool_events', 'rand_scoolboy'
 	else
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'nerds', 1
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A142', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You go to the classrooms that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. You get several warm smiles and greetings from your fellow nerds.'
+					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. You get several warm smiles and greetings from your fellow nerds.'
 				else
 					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Some of them seem to be surprised at what you are wearing but they also seem to approve.'
 				end
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A12', 'like'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A16', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You go to the classrooms that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. Natasha notices your uniform, "Oh I like your uniform, very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia who looks at you and blushes. Then adds, "Yes very pretty."'
+					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes very pretty." she says in agreement.'
 				else
-					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Natasha notices your uniform, "Oh I like your uniform, very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia who looks at you and blushes. Then adds, "Yes very pretty."'
+					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes very pretty." she says in agreement.'
 				end
 				'Artem, Petka, Julia, Natasha, Zinaida, Evgeny, Feofan and Gerasim are sitting around some tables they''ve moved together.'
 				*nl
@@ -44,10 +44,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				if soniaPS > 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'like'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A159', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You go to the classrooms that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. Several of them look up at you as you walk in, a couple of the boys, especially Feofan, Artem and Petka look at you longer than the rest and Julia''s eyes also seem to linger on you for just a bit longer.'
+					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. Several of them look up at you as you walk in. A couple of the boys, especially Feofan, Artem and Petka look at you longer than the rest and Julia''s eyes also seem to linger on you for just a bit longer.'
 					'Artem, Petka, Julia, Natasha, Zinaida, Evgeny, Feofan and Gerasim are sitting around some tables they''ve moved together.'
 				else
-					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Several of them look up at you as you walk in, a couple of the boys, especially Feofan, Artem and Petka look at you longer than the rest and Julia''s eyes also seem to linger on you for just a bit longer.'
+					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Several of them look up at you as you walk in. A couple of the boys, especially Feofan, Artem and Petka look at you longer than the rest and Julia''s eyes also seem to linger on you for just a bit longer.'
 				end
 				*nl
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
@@ -60,19 +60,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				if soniaPS > 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'love'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A159', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'When you walk in the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at your scandalous display of flesh from your uniform or lack therefor of. Finally Feofan speaks up. "What are you wearing?" Only for Natasha to butt in. "A better questions is why?" As you get closer the nerds all share looks before looking at Feofan, who swallows and then says. "Maybe you should go hang out somewhere else or go change or something." Then the nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you a space to walk up to them and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
+					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of. Feofan finally speaks up. "What are you wearing?" Natasha butts in. "A better questions is why?" As you get closer, the nerds all share looks before looking at Feofan, who swallows and then says. "Maybe you should go hang out somewhere else or go change or something." Then the nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
 				else
-					'When you walk in the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at your scandalous display of flesh from your uniform or lack therefor of. The nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you a space to walk up to them and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
+					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of. The nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore there are no reactions to your uniform'
+			'You are using the school uniform cheat and are not wearing a uniform, therefore there are no reactions to your uniform'
 			*nl
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
 		end
 		*nl
 		'The outcasts are mostly hiding away from everyone else, hoping that no one will pick on them today.'
-		'Lesco is reading a book. Meanwhile '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, '', 'Fedor is sitting at a window sill looking outside, looking lonely and depressed.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, '', 'Christina sits at a desk in the back, looking forlorn.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, '', 'Sonia is sitting at a desk typing on her phone.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'And Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.', ' Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.')
+		'Lesco is reading a book. Meanwhile '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, '', 'Fedor is sitting on a window sill staring outside, looking lonely and depressed.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, '', 'Christina sits at a desk in the back, looking forlorn.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, '', 'Sonia is sitting at a desk typing on her phone.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.', ' Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.')
 		gs 'gschool_groups', 'outcasts'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -92,25 +92,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'gopniks', -5
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 5
 				
-				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
-				'At first a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally Dan laughs and Lavrenti speaks up. "What are you wearing?" They just seemed stunned at your uniform. Anushka chimes in. "Please tell you you lost some kind of bet." Several others comment all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. After a few minutes of ridicule they finally lose interest in you, but you can tell you lost their respect and maybe more today.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
+				'At first, a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally, Dan laughs and Lavrenti speaks up. "What are you wearing?" They just seem stunned at your uniform. Anushka chimes in. "Please tell me you just lost some kind of bet." Several others comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. After a few minutes of ridicule they finally lose interest in you, but you can tell you lost their respect and maybe more today.'
 			else
 				grupvalue[4] -= 5
 				gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'gopniks', -2
 				
-				'You go to the stairwell that the gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
-				'At first a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally Radomir speaks up. "Are you lost or something?" Paulina chimes in pointing back the way you came. "The nerds are back that way, loser." Several others comment all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. You feel very unwelcome among them, which makes you uneasy, they are well known to bully their fellow students, maybe this was a bad idea.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
+				'At first, a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally, Radomir speaks up. "Are you lost or something?" Paulina chimes in, pointing back the way you came. "The nerds are back that way, loser." Several others also comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. You feel very unwelcome among them, which makes you uneasy. They are well known to bully their fellow students, maybe this was a bad idea.'
 			end
-			'Hanging around are Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko.'
+			'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are all hanging around.'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif PCloSkirt < 5 and PCloThinness < 5 and PCloBra = 0:
 			if grupTipe = 4:
-				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
 			else
-				'You go to the stairwell that the gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
 			end
-			'Hanging around are Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko.'
+			'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif PCloSkirt = 5 and PCloThinness < 5 and PCloBra = 0:
@@ -120,11 +120,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'love'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 			if grupTipe = 4:
-				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
 			else
-				'You go to the stairwell that the gopnik''s like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
 			end
-			'Hanging around are Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko.'
+			'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
@@ -137,35 +137,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				pcs_mood -= 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick." Several of the other gopniks laugh as well, a few of the guys comment their next. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are, they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well, a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
 				*nl
-				'He stands up and shoves Dan up against the wall. "What did you say about my girl?"'
+				'Vitek stands up and shoves Dan up against the wall. "What did you say about my girl?"'
 				'Dan just swallows while everyone else shuts up. "Hey I was just joking, we all know she is your girl."'
-				'Vitek lets go him. "Then watch your mouth!" Then he turns towards you and walks over, grabing you by the arm and dragging you over to the side. "Just what are you wearing? You''re dressed like a slut, don''t wear this to school again. Now get out of here." With that he shoves you away, you glance back and know better than to tempt fate so you walk away.'
+				'Vitek lets go of him. "Then watch your fucking mouth!" He turns towards you and walks over, grabbing you by the arm and dragging you over to the side. "Just what are you wearing? You''re dressed like a slut! Don''t wear this to school again. Now get out of here." He then shoves you away. You glance back, but know better than to tempt fate so you walk away.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif kotovLoveQW > 0 and kotovLoveQW['clo_comment'] = 1:
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A9', 'hate'
 				pcs_mood -= 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, everyone notices you and when Vitek see''s you he tenses up and he angrily walks across to you and grabs you roughly by the arm and drags you out of the stair well. "What did I tell you about coming to school dressed like this? No girl of mine is going to walk around dressed like some slut, now don''t come back to school dressed like this again." He roughly shoves you into the wall and storms back to the other gopniks.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, everyone notices you and when Vitek sees you, he tenses up and angrily walks across to you. He grabs you roughly by the arm and drags you out of the stairwell. "What did I tell you about coming to school dressed like this? No girl of mine is going to walk around dressed like some slut. Now don''t come back to school dressed like this again!" He roughly shoves you into the wall and storms back to the other gopniks.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif grupTipe = 4:
-				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick." Several of the other gopniks laugh as well, a few of the guys comment their next. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are, they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
-				'Hanging around are Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well and a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
+				'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				grupvalue[4] -= 5
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				
-				'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps, or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick." Several of the other gopniks laugh as well, a few of the guys comment as well. "Like she came to see you Dan, she obviously came to throw herself at me." Radomir says. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are, they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
+				'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well and a few of the guys comment as well. "Like she came to see you Dan! She obviously came to throw herself at me." Radomir says. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore no one can react to your uniform.'
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat and are not wearing a uniform, therefore no one can react to your uniform.'
 		gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -203,10 +203,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A149', -1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A165', -1
 			
-			'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look. Then Christina starts to laugh. "What are you wearing, did mommy dress you? I mean we are all glad she did, the more clothes you wear that hides that hideous body the better." Lariska and Lina add their own snide remarks similar to Christina''s. Several other of the students laugh at her comments. Lizaveta, takes your picture and then starts text, you are sure sending the picture around. Vicky is smirking a bit and then whispering something to Vanya and her sister Katja.'
-			'Stasya glances at Bella. "My god what a little social disaster she is. Really no sense of style at all." Then she turns towards her boyfriend Andrey. "If I ever wore something like that, would you still love me?"'
-			'Andrey shakes his head. "Hell no, a man has to have his standards after all." Which just gets more and more of them to laugh.'
-			'Then Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe your lost, the nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hangout in. "Perhaps you would find those who might appreciate your sense of ... style there." The rest Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar, and Erast, either ignore what is going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
+			'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look and Christina starts to laugh. "What are you wearing? Did mommy dress you? I mean we are all glad she did, the more clothes you wear that hide that hideous body the better." Lariska and Lina add their own snide remarks similar to Christina''s and several other students laugh at her comments. Lizaveta takes your picture and then starts texting, obviously sending the picture around. Vicky is smirking a bit and then whispers something to Vanya and Katja.'
+			'Stasya glances at Bella. "My god, she is an absolute social disaster. Really no sense of style at all." Then she turns towards Andrey. "If I ever wore something like that, would you still love me?"'
+			'Andrey shakes his head. "Hell no, a man has to have his standards after all.", which just gets more and more of them to laugh.'
+			'Then Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe you''re lost? The nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hang out in. "Perhaps you would find those who might appreciate your sense of ... style there." Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar and Erast either ignore what is going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -225,12 +225,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A139', 1
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A140', 1
 				
-				'As you approach them, several of them giving you approving looks. Stasya comments, "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>, where did you buy that uniform from?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah I like it, it looks very nice." Several of the other girls Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta, and Bella, comment on how nice your outfit looks, while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion, though you notice Igor seems to be paying attention a little, or maybe he is paying attention to you. '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+' just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska,  while Veronika, is reading something and seems unaware of the whole conversation.'
+				'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. Stasya comments "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah I like it, it looks very nice." Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe at you in particular. '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+' just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be unaware of the whole conversation.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
-				'Around the lockers are Dimka, Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+'Lina, Bella, Veronika, Lazar, Erast, Vanya'
+				'Dimka, Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+'Lina, Bella, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya are all gathered around the lockers.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 				grupvalue[2] += 1
 				if soniaPS = 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'like'
 				
-				'As you approach them, several of them giving you approving looks. Stasya comments, "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>, where did you buy that uniform from?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah looking sexy <<$pcs_nickname>>." Several of the other girls Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta, and Bella, comment on how nice your outfit looks, while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion, though you notice Igor seems to be paying attention a little, or maybe he is paying attention to you. '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+' just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska,  while Veronika, is reading something and seems unaware of the whole conversation.'
+				'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. Stasya comments "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah looking sexy <<$pcs_nickname>>." Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe to you in partucular. '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5, 'Christina, ', '')+' just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be unaware of the whole conversation.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -258,9 +258,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A147', 'like'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A148', 'like'
 				
-				'As you approach them, several of them giving you once over, obviously noticing your uniform. Christina smirks, "Someone is trying hard to get the boys to look at her."'
-				'Bella gives you a closer look at hearing that and says. "Wouldn''t be so bad if it was a good quality."'
-				'Dimka adds in. "Now Bella you know her family can''t afford the finer things in life." If not for the tone of his voice and the smirk it would almost sound like he was defending you but it comes across more like a insult. Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast, and Vanya just stay out of it.'
+				'As you approach them, several of them give you once over, obviously noticing your uniform. Christina smirks "Someone is trying hard to get the boys to look at her."'
+				'Hearing this, Bella gives you a closer look and says "It wouldn''t be so bad if it was a good quality."'
+				'Dimka adds in. "Now Bella, you know her family can''t afford the finer things in life." If not for the tone of his voice and the smirk, it would almost sound like he was defending you but it comes across as more of an insult. Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya just stay out of it.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -279,13 +279,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A139', 'dislike'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A140', 'dislike'
 			
-			'As you approach them, several of them notice you and their looks get the rest to look and soon everyone is staring at you. Finally Bella speaks up. "What on earth are you wearing? Forget to change out of your whoring clothes last night?" Several of the rest laugh at that and you can feel the general feeling of agreement from the rest.'
-			'Dimka smirks. "Maybe she messed up the wash and her uniform just shrunk, and was to stupid to notice." Which gets several of the others to laugh even more.'
-			'Christina steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes, no one wants you around." You hear several murmers of agreement from most of the rest, it looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast, and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling unwelcome you turn around and leave.'
+			'As you approach, everyone is staring at you. Bella speaks up. "What on earth are you wearing? Forget to change out of your whoring clothes last night?" Several of the rest laugh and you can sense the general feeling of agreement from the rest.'
+			'Dimka smirks. "Maybe she messed up the wash and her uniform just shrunk and she was too stupid to notice?" and the others laugh even more.'
+			'Christina steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes! No one wants you around." and you hear several murmers of agreement from the rest. It looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling very unwelcome, you turn around and leave.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	else
-		'You are using the school uniform cheat so no one reacts to your uniform, this could be good or bad.'
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat and are not wearing a uniform, therefore no one can react to your uniform.'
 		gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 		gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -8,23 +8,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artem':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if artQW = 5 and arthakQW ! 11:
-		'You sit down and Artem pulls you close enough so only you can hear him as he speaks. "I can''t wait for our next lesson after school…" He says, his hand running down your thigh and stopping at the hem of your skirt. "I bet you can''t wait either." Slowly, he lowers his hand between your legs and gives the soft, sensitive area a light squeeze before bringing his hand back up above the desk with a confident, lecherous smile.'
+		'You sit down and Artem pulls you close enough so only you can hear him as he speaks. "I can''t wait for our next lesson after school..." he says as his hand runs down your thigh and stops at the hem of your skirt. "I bet you can''t wait either." Slowly, he lowers his hand between your legs and gives the soft, sensitive area a light squeeze before bringing his hand back up above the desk with a confident, lecherous smile.'
 	elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 20:
 		npc_rel['A2'] += 1
-		'Artem notices you walking over and quickly grabs an empty chair and makes room for you to sit next to him. "I was worried we wouldn''t see each other today." He jokes, but you can tell there''s a part of him that was being sincere. Artem isn''t one for public affection, but he still can''t go without some kind of physical contact with you, which leaves him sitting close enough to you that your legs bump and rub against each other under the table as you talk.'
+		'Artem notices you walking over, quickly grabs an empty chair and makes room for you to sit next to him. "I was worried we wouldn''t see each other today." He jokes, but you can tell there''s a part of him that was being sincere. Artem isn''t one for public affection, but he still can''t go without some kind of physical contact with you, which leaves him sitting close enough to you that your legs bump and rub against each other under the table as you talk.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A2'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'"There you are, <<$pcs_nickname>>. How''s it going?" Artem greets you as you sit down. "I figure we can get a head-start on Yenotin''s lesson while we talk," he says, moving the textbook towards you so the both of you can look at it. While you work, Artem keeps up a lively conversation, talking about a range of different topics.'
+			'"There you are <<$pcs_nickname>>. How''s it going?" Artem greets you as you sit down. "I figure we can get a head-start on Yenotin''s lesson while we talk." he says, moving the textbook towards you so the both of you can look at it. While you work, Artem keeps up a lively conversation, talking about a range of different topics.'
 		else
-			'"Hey, Artem, how''s it going?" You ask, taking a seat at a desk across from him. His desk is covered with worksheets and a stack of textbooks.'
+			'"Hey, Artem, how''s it going?" you ask, taking a seat at a desk across from him. His desk is covered with worksheets and a stack of textbooks.'
 			*nl
-			'"Oh hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m just putting together a study guide," he tells you with a smile. He hasn''t bothered to stop writing in his notebook since you started talking. As you watch him work, you realize that he''s writing quite a lot, more than needed for one person.'
+			'"Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m just putting together a study guide." he tells you with a smile. He hasn''t bothered to stop writing in his notebook since you started talking. As you watch him work, you realize that he''s writing quite a lot, more than is needed for one person.'
 			*nl
-			'"Who are you writing all that for?" You ask.'
+			'"Who are you writing all that for?" you ask.'
 			'"Well, I tutor a lot of the jocks, so it''s mostly for them, but I also help some of the popular kids."'
 			*nl
-			'"You mean actually tutoring them or just doing their work for them?" You ask suspiciously with a raised brow.'
+			'"You mean actually tutoring them or just doing their work for them?" you ask suspiciously with a raised brow.'
 			*nl
 			'Artem chuckles sheepishly, obviously a bit flustered by the question. "The jocks aren''t too bad and the popular kids… well, they need all the help they can get, and… and I''m happy to help if I can," he says before quickly changing the subject. You decide not to insist and keep him company while he works.'
 		end
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artem':
 		if grupTipe = 3:
 			'You try to chat up Artem, but he doesn''t seem all that interested in the conversation. His answers are short and he doesn''t even bother to stop writing in his notebook as you talk.'
 		else
-			'"Sorry, <<$Pcs_nickname>>, but why are you talking to me? We''re not exactly friends, y''know…." Artem asks weakly. He''s careful not to offend you, but it''s clear he''s hesitant to talk to you.'
+			'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but why are you talking to me? We''re not exactly friends you know…." Artem asks weakly. He''s careful not to offend you, but it''s clear he''s hesitant to talk to you.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A2'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Artem, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Artem. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -64,28 +64,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big6.jpg"></center>'
-	if artQW = 5 and arthakQW ! 11:
-		npc_rel['A6'] += 1
-		'A devious smile spreads across his face as he closes his book and sets it aside. You try your best to keep the conversation lighthearted, but Petka is determined to let you know how much he''s enjoying his after school "lessons" and how he can''t wait for the next one.'
-	elseif npc_rel['A6'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
+	if npc_rel['A6'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A6'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'"You really have to read this book, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m pretty sure it''s one you''d enjoy." Petka says excitedly. He starts to tell you about an interesting part he just read, but stops himself with a laugh. "Don''t worry, I won''t spoil it for you."'
+			'"You really have to read this book <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m pretty sure it''s one you''d enjoy." Petka says excitedly. He starts to tell you about an interesting part he just read, but stops himself with a laugh. "Don''t worry, I won''t spoil it for you."'
 		else
-			'"Oh, hey, <<$Pcs_nickname>>. Did you say something? I don''t think I heard you." He smiles sheepishly as he puts his book down. "This book is crazy interesting." He tells you, and before you know it he''s going on and on about all the interesting characters, plot holes and themes in the book.'
+			'"Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Did you say something? I don''t think I heard you." He smiles sheepishly as he puts his book down. "This book is crazy interesting." He tells you, and before you know it he''s going on and on about all the interesting characters, plot holes and themes in the book.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A6'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A6'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
 			'"Can we talk later? I really want to finish this chapter before class starts." Petka says, only briefly looking up from his book to address you before burying his nose right back into it.'
 		else
-			'You try talking to Petka, bit it''s a very one-sided with you doing all of the talking until they finally speak up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." He says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
+			'You try talking to Petka, but it''s very one-sided with you doing all of the talking until he finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." He says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A6'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Petka, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Petka. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -98,22 +95,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia':
 	if npc_rel['A12'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A12'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'Usually Julia is quiet and lets others do most of the talking, but with you, she participates more in the conversation.'
+			'Usually, Julia is quiet and lets others do most of the talking, but with you, she participates more in the conversation.'
 		else
-			'Julia is sitting alone, diligently working on her homework, when you sit down and start talking with her. She''s a quiet, soft spoken girl, so you end up doing most of the talking, but you can tell she''s enjoying herself.'
+			'Julia is sitting alone, diligently working on her homework when you sit down and start talking with her. She''s a quiet, soft spoken girl, so you end up doing most of the talking, but you can tell she''s enjoying herself.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A12'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A12'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
 			'You try to talk to Julia, but the conversation becomes completely one-sided, with you doing all the talking while Julia busies herself with schoolwork.'
 		else
-			'You try talking to Julia, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until she finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." She says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
+			'You try talking to Julia, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until she finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." she says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When she see''s you walking over she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that she moves away from you.'
+		'When she see''s you walking over, she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." she says as she moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A12'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Julia, she seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Julia. She seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -124,9 +121,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big12.jpg"></center>'
 		if pav_slut >= 200:
-			'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway. As long as you don''t tell anyone.'
+			'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use her help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway, so long as you don''t tell anyone.'
 		else
-			'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
+			'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use her help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
 		end
 		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -141,22 +138,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natasha':
 	if npc_rel['A16'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A16'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'"Hey, have you seen this new makeup line coming out? It''s expensive but I looove the colors!" Natasha says as she holds up the magazine ad for said makeup. She talks about how she can''t afford nice things like this, and it ends up bringing her down, but you quickly change the subject and start complimenting her on her sense of style and grades, reminding her she''s a top student in school which brings a smile to her face.'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have you seen this new makeup line coming out? It''s expensive but I looove the colors!" Natasha says as she holds up the magazine ad for said makeup. She talks about how she can''t afford nice things like this and this ends up bringing her down. You quickly change the subject and start complimenting her on her sense of style and grades and reminding her she''s a top student in school, which brings a smile to her face.'
 		else
 			'Natasha greets you with a smile as you sit down beside her. The conversation is lighthearted as you talk about your day so far and what goes on in the apartment complex where you both live.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A16'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A16'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'Natasha isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you persit trying to keep up a conversation. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" She says halfheartedly.'
+			'Natasha isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you persist in trying to keep up a conversation. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" she says halfheartedly.'
 		else
 			'"Why are you even talking to me? It''s not like we''re in the same social circle or something." Natasha says with a suspicious look. "So, if you could just…" She drags the last part out, expecting you to catch her drift and leave.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When she see''s you walking over she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that she moves away from you.'
+		'When she sees you walking over, she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." she says as she moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A16'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Natasha, she seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Natasha. She seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -168,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natasha':
 			NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big16.jpg"></center>'	
-			'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
+			'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use her help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] > 0:
@@ -178,9 +175,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natasha':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You grab Natasha by the hand and pull her along with you as you tell her. "Come to the bathroom with me."'
-			'She looks at you questioningly but doesn''t protest, as you pull her into the bathroom, past a few girls using the mirrors. You take her into a stall with you. You sit down on the toilet and pull down your panties, then spread you legs and tell her. "Down on your knees, time to pay off a little debt."'
-			'She looks a little shocked at first but then gets down on her knees and lowers her face to your crotch.'
+			'You grab Natasha by the hand and pull her along with you as you tell her "Come to the bathroom with me."'
+			'She looks at you questioningly, but doesn''t protest as you pull her into the bathroom and past a few girls using the mirrors. You take her into a stall with you. You sit down on the toilet and pull down your panties, then spread your legs and tell her "Down on your knees. Time to pay off a little debt."'
+			'She looks a little shocked at first, but then gets down on her knees and lowers her face to your crotch.'
 			act 'Continue':
 !!ToDo: Expand this content (nutluck)
 				*clr & cla
@@ -189,10 +186,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natasha':
 				NatbelQW['lesbian'] += 1
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/school/natschoolowe.jpg"></center>'
-				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit, you bite your lip to try and keep from moaning too loudly. You lean back and relax, as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if your not mistaken she is starting to like it a lot.'
-				'She starts using her fingers on you as well and is really getting into it, you start to pant and moan. Clamping a hand over your own mouth to keep yourself from crying out, it doesn''t take her long to bring you to a climax.'
+				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit. You bite your lip to try and keep from moaning too loudly. You lean back and relax as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if you''re not mistaken, she is starting to like it a lot.'
+				'She starts using her fingers on you as well and is really getting into it as you start to pant and moan. Clamping a hand over your mouth to keep yourself from crying out, it doesn''t take her long to bring you to a climax.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
-				'Your whole body shudders as the orgasm rocks your body, you grind your pussy against her face as it does. Once the sensation passes you look down and see Natasha smiling up at you, obviously pleased with herself. You lean down and give her a long slow passionate kiss, tasting your own pussy juices on her lips. A few moments later the bell rings and you both merrily hurry to class.'
+				'Your whole body shudders as the orgasm rocks your body and you grind your pussy against her face as it does. Once the sensation passes, you look down and see Natasha smiling up at you, obviously pleased with herself. You lean down and give her a long slow passionate kiss, tasting your own pussy juices on her lips. A few moments later, the bell rings and you both merrily hurry to class.'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -210,20 +207,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'evgeny':
 		if grupTipe = 3:
 			'"In chess, you should be as cool as a cucumber." Evgeny says without you asking his opinion on the matter. You can''t help but laugh a bit, but go along with it nonetheless as you watch him play chess against himself.'
 		else
-			'"Oh, hello." Evgeny says with a curt nod towards you. He doesn''t even bother to look up from his chessboard, but you don''t take it as an insult. He''s always been socially awkward, some going as far as to say he''s autistic, so you don''t take offense, and instead sit down across from him and make small talk while he plays against himself.'
+			'"Oh, hello." Evgeny says with a curt nod towards you. He doesn''t even bother to look up from his chessboard, but you don''t take it as an insult. He''s always been socially awkward, some going as far as to say he''s autistic, so you don''t take offense and instead sit down across from him and make small talk while he plays against himself.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A151'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A151'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'You try talking to Evgeny, but it''s a very one-sided with you doing all of the talking until he finally speak up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." He says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
+			'You try talking to Evgeny, but it''s very one-sided with you doing all of the talking until he finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." he says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this game, so if you don''t mind…"'
 		else
 			'"I really don''t want to talk right now." Evgeny says abruptly. You''re a bit shocked at how straightforward he is, but he refuses to look up from his chessboard, leaving you with no other option but to walk away.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A151'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Evgeny, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Evgeny. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -236,22 +233,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'feofan':
 	if npc_rel['A152'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 250:
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'"I can''t believe this…" Feofan says as you approach. "Someone on this sci-fi forum said that Alien vs. Predator cross-over crap is the best in the series. Anyone with half a braincell knows the first two and last two movies are the only good ones!" He pauses for a second as he finishes reading what''s on his phone screen. "I can''t read anymore of this blasphemy." He finishes with a heavy sigh.'
+			'"I can''t believe this…" Feofan says as you approach. "Someone on this sci-fi forum said that Alien vs. Predator cross-over crap is the best in the series. Anyone with half a braincell knows the first two and last two movies are the only good ones!" He pauses for a second as he finishes reading what''s on his phone screen. "I can''t read anymore of this blasphemy." he finishes with a heavy sigh.'
 		else
-			'Feofan is busy on his phone when you approach, but when he sees you he flashes you a quick smile. "There''s this little Star Trek convention going on, but it''s out of town. Wish I could go." He''s clearly saddened by this, but gives a dismissive shrug of his shoulders before going on to talk about other conventions he has gone to..'
+			'Feofan is busy on his phone when you approach, but when he sees you he flashes you a quick smile. "There''s this little Star Trek convention going on, but it''s out of town. I wish I could go." He''s clearly saddened by this, but gives a dismissive shrug of his shoulders before going on to talk about other conventions he has gone to.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A152'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 250:
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'Feofan isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you insist and try to keep up a conversation until he finally stops you. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" He says halfheartedly with an awkward laugh.'
+			'Feofan isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you insist and try to keep up a conversation until he finally stops you. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" he says halfheartedly with an awkward laugh.'
 		else
-			'"Sorry if this sounds rude, but why are you talking to me, of all people? It''s not like we''re in the same social circle or something." Feofan says with a suspicious look. "Listen… I''m just kinda busy at the moment, so…" He remains polite and tries to stay lighthearted, but he obviously doesn''t want to talk.'
+			'"Sorry if this sounds rude, but why are you talking to me of all people? It''s not like we''re in the same social circle or something." Feofan says with a suspicious look. "Listen… I''m just kinda busy at the moment, so…" He remains polite and tries to stay lighthearted, but he obviously doesn''t want to talk.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 250:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Feofan, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Feofan. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -264,22 +261,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gerasim':
 	if npc_rel['A153'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A153'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'You greet Gerasim with a smile, and make a point to ask him how his day is going, subtly hinting to the fact that you know other students like to make him do their school work. With a shy smile, Gerasim shrugs his shoulders. "I''m fine." He says, his smile growing. "Thanks for worrying about me, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You greet Gerasim with a smile and make a point to ask him how his day is going, subtly hinting to the fact that you know other students like to make him do their school work. With a shy smile, Gerasim shrugs his shoulders. "I''m fine." he says, his smile growing. "Thanks for worrying about me though <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		else
-			'"Oh, hello, <<$pcs_nickname>>." Gerasim says with a sheepish smile. You watch him move the papers on his desk around nervously, and you realize he''s doing someone else''s homework. "Yeah, I''m a little busy, but I wouldn''t mind the company while I work." He adds with a small laugh.'
+			'"Oh hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." Gerasim says with a sheepish smile. You watch him move the papers on his desk around nervously and you realize he''s doing someone else''s homework. "Yeah, I''m a little busy, but I wouldn''t mind the company while I work." he adds with a small laugh.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A153'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A153'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'Gerasim isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you insist and try to keep up a conversation until he finally stops you. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" He says halfheartedly with an awkward laugh.'
+			'Gerasim isn''t really interested in talking to you, but you insist and try to keep up a conversation until he finally stops you. "Hey, I''ve gotta go… do this thing. I guess I''ll see you later?" he says halfheartedly with an awkward laugh.'
 		else
-			'You try talking to Gerasim, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until they finally speak up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." He says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
+			'You try talking to Gerasim, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until they finally speak up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." he says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A153'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Gerasim, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Gerasim. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -292,22 +289,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zinaida':
 	if npc_rel['A142'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A142'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'"Hey, look at this, I got into the top ten with my last score." With a small smile, Zinaida shows you the screen of her phone, and sure enough she''s number five on the leader board. You congratulate her, which causes her cheeks to flush slightly as she tries to downplay it.'
+			'"Hey, look at this. I got into the top ten with my last score." With a small smile, Zinaida shows you the screen of her phone, and sure enough she''s number five on the leaderboard. You congratulate her, which causes her cheeks to flush slightly as she tries to downplay it.'
 		else
-			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>." Zinaida says with a small smile. "Come to watch me beat some noobs?" She says as she lowers her phone so you can watch her as she plays.'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>." Zinaida says with a small smile. "Come to watch me beat some noobs?" she says as she lowers her phone so you can watch her as she plays.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A142'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A142'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 3:
-			'She is playing some game on her phone. "I''d like to talk… but I''m busy trying to beat this level. It''s… hard." Zinaida says quietly, looking up at you through her messy hair that hang down onto her face.'
+			'She is playing some game on her phone. "I''d like to talk… but I''m busy trying to beat this level. It''s… hard." Zinaida says quietly, looking up at you through her messy hair that hangs down onto her face.'
 		else
-			'You try talking to Zinaida, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until she finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." She says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to finish this worksheet for class, so if you don''t mind…"'
+			'You try talking to Zinaida, but it''s a very one-sided conversation with you doing all of the talking until she finally speaks up. "I don''t want to sound rude but… we''re not really friends so I''m not sure why you''d want to talk to me." She says quietly. "Anyways, I''ve got to beat this level before class, so if you don''t mind…"'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When she see''s you walking over she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that she moves away from you.'
+		'When she sees you walking over she gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." she says as she moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A142'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Zinaida, she seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Zinaida. She seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -322,32 +319,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
 	if VKAftermathEvent > 0 and VKNatFollowup = 0:
 		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
 		VKNatFollowup = 1
-		'You sit down next to Natalia and she quickly turns to you with a warm smile as she says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> It''s so great to see you! I hope that you are feeling better. You have been through so much." You give her a forced smile as you reply, "I''m fine Nat. Thank you for caring." Natalia smile turns to a frown as she responds, "You''re still having the nightmares aren''t you? I am looking for a way to help you with those. I plan on asking my mother for something. She used to get a lot of nightmares when she was young so she may know of some good ways to get rid of them." You place you hand on her shoulder then say, "Don''t worry about me Nat. I''ll be fine." Nat places her and on yours then nods before you get up then head back to class.'
+		'You sit down next to Natalia and she quickly turns to you with a warm smile as she says "<<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s so great to see you! I hope that you are feeling better. You have been through so much." You give her a forced smile as you reply. "I''m fine Nat. Thank you for caring." Natalia''s smile turns to a frown as she responds. "You''re still having the nightmares aren''t you? I am looking for a way to help you with those. I plan on asking my mother for something. She used to get a lot of nightmares when she was young, so she may know of some good ways to get rid of them." You place your hand on her shoulder then say "Don''t worry about me Nat. I''ll be fine." Nat places her hand on yours, then nods before you get up and head back to class.'
 	elseif NikoEv >= 17 and VKNatFollowup = 1:
 		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
 		VKNatFollowup = 2
-		'You approach Natalia and her eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s always good to see you. I hope things have been going better with Niko." You give her an approving nod before she says, "Well if you ever need to talk about anything then please stop by. I always look forward to chatting with you." You then rub on Natalia''s shoulder as gives you a warm smile before you get up, to go to your next class.'
+		'You approach Natalia and her eyes immediately light up as she says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s always good to see you. I hope things have been going better with Niko." You give her an approving nod before she says "Well if you ever need to talk about anything then please stop by. I always look forward to chatting with you." You then rub on Natalia''s shoulder as she gives you a warm smile before you get up to go to your next class.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A240'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
 		VK = rand(1,5)
 		if VK = 1:
-			'You see Natalia drawing something in her notebook but she quickly closes it when she sees you then says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you doing today?" You reply, "I doing great today, I just stopped by to chat with you. Do you have some time to chat?" She happily nods as she says, "For you? Of course!" You and Natalia spend the next few minutes chatting about your interests.'
+			'You see Natalia drawing something in her notebook, but she quickly closes it when she sees you and says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you doing today?" You reply. "I doing great today. I just stopped by to chat with you. Do you have some time?" She happily nods as she says "For you? Of course!" You and Natalia spend the next few minutes chatting about your interests.'
 		elseif VK = 2:
-			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for awhile?" You nod then replay, "Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes, swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
+			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for a while?" You nod and reply."Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
 		elseif VK = 3:
-			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida, "Come on Natalia,  you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies, "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia then say, "Hey Nat the guidance counselor want to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you a approving nod then says, "Okay I better go. See you Zin and you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers, "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin..and you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
 		elseif VK = 4:
-			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook then waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia then discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
+			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook and waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia and discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
 		else		
-			'You can see Natalia tidying up her back when you sit down next to her. She immediately pauses what she is doing then turns to you with an instant smile on her face as she says, "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t notice you there. I''m sorry." You place your hand on her shoulder then reply, "Relax there is nothing to be sorry for. How have you been?" Natalia nods as you both spent the next few minute chatting about various topics.'
+			'You can see Natalia tidying up her back when you sit down next to her. She immediately pauses what she is doing then turns to you with an instant smile on her face as she says "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t notice you there. I''m sorry." You place your hand on her shoulder and reply "Relax there is nothing to be sorry for. How have you been?" Natalia nods as you both spent the next few minute chatting about various topics.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A240'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
-		'You s Natalia and as soon as she notices you, she quickly packs her stuff then begins walking away. She doesn''t seem to like you and has no intention of changing that.'
+		'You see Natalia and as soon as she notices you, she quickly packs her stuff then begins walking away. She doesn''t seem to like you and has no intention of changing that.'
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200 and VKAftermathEvent = 0:
-		'As you approach Natalia she takes one look at you then packs up her things before quickly walking away from you. She obviously does not want to be seen with you.'
+		'As you approach Natalia, she takes one look at you then packs up her things before quickly walking away. She obviously does not want to be seen with you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
-		'You approach Natalia then sit down next to her as she quietly looks up at you. She says nothing as you begin discussing current events. Natalia listens and occasionally adds into the conversation.'
+		'You approach Natalia and sit down next to her as she quietly looks at you. She says nothing as you begin discussing current events. Natalia listens and occasionally adds into the conversation.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -360,12 +357,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if hotcat >= 6:
-		'As you enter the classroom you are immediately swarmed by Petia. He gets really close to you, invading your personal space without a care, and a raunchy smell hits your nostrils. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re good-looking enough to date me. So how about it? Wanna date?" he inquires.'
+		'As you enter the classroom you are immediately swarmed by Petia. He gets really close to you, invading your personal space without a care as a raunchy smell hits your nostrils. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re good-looking enough to date me. So how about it? Wanna date?" he inquires.'
 		act 'Let him down gently':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A159'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Taking a step back from him, you feel relieved having escaped his foul smell. "I didn''t say anything like that..." You protest, trying to sound as clear as possible without hurting his feelings. Hoping he gets the point, you stop talking and focus your attention elsewhere but to your dismay he keeps hitting on you. Letting out a sigh, you push him away. While you''re walking away, you hear him pestering another poor girl.'
+			'Taking a step back from him, you feel relieved having escaped his foul smell. "I didn''t say anything like that..." you protest, trying to sound as clear as possible without hurting his feelings. Hoping he gets the point, you stop talking and focus your attention elsewhere but to your dismay he keeps hitting on you. Letting out a sigh, you push him away. While you''re walking away, you hear him pestering another poor girl.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Tell him off':
@@ -375,22 +372,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			grupvalue[4] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Taking a step back from him, you feel relieved having escaped his foul smell. "Like I would ever be caught dating with someone like you. Even if we were the last living people on earth I still wouldn''t even consider it! Don''t ever ask me something like that again, got it?!" After you''re done telling him off you''re sure that he''s going to leave you alone but to your disappointment he only smiles and starts hitting on you again. By now you''re tired of him and shove him away. As you''re walking away you hear him pestering another girl.'
+			'Taking a step back from him, you feel relieved having escaped his foul smell. "Like I would ever be caught dating someone like you! If we were the last living people on Earth, I would rather let us go extinct than be near you! Don''t ever ask me something like that again, got it?!" After you''re done telling him off you''re sure that he''s going to leave you alone, but to your disappointment he only smiles and starts hitting on you again. By now you''re tired of him and shove him away. As you''re walking away, you hear him pestering another girl.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 250:
 		if grupTipe = 5:
-			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom trying to mooch off some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "The others are being rude towards me. They don''t want to help me out and I''m getting really hungry."'
+			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom trying to mooch some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "The others are being rude. They don''t want to help me out and I''m getting really hungry."'
 		else
-			'Walking into the classroom you notice the class mooch, Petia, pestering Feofan to give him some money so he can buy some food in the cafeteria. When Petia sees you, he turns toward you and begins to tell you that he had this great plan on how he would buy something from the cafeteria then turn around and sell it for a profit but he''s missing the funds to do it.'
+			'Walking into the classroom you notice the class mooch, Petia, pestering Feofan to give him some money so he can buy some food in the cafeteria. When Petia sees you, he turns toward you and begins to tell you that he had this great plan on how he would buy something from the cafeteria then turn around and sell it for a profit, but he''s missing the funds to do it.'
 			*nl
-			'Taking pity on him you attentively listen but you''re staying out of it as you don''t want to get involved. Taking your silence as encouragement he turns engages you in a lengthy discussion about all the things he would like to have.'
+			'Taking pity on him, you attentively listen but you''re staying out of it as you don''t want to get involved. Taking your silence as encouragement, he engages you in a lengthy discussion about all the things he would like to have.'
 		end
 		act 'Give him advice':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A159'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Feeling sorry for him you listen and give him some advice on how to approach the others. He listens carefully, gives you a nod and then quickly turns around and starts talking to the other students once again.'
+			'Feeling sorry for him, you listen and give him some advice on how to approach the others. He listens carefully, gives you a nod and then quickly turns around and starts talking to the other students once again.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Give him money (50 <b>₽</b>)':
@@ -398,8 +395,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 			npc_rel['A159'] += 2
 			money -= 50
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Feeling sorry and you do have the spare money. "Here Petia, go get yourself some lunch."'
-			'His eyes get huge and he takes the money from your hand, letting his hand linger against yours to long for comfort. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are the best!" He says with a grin and, is that love in his eyes? After another awkward moment he leaves to go buy some food.'
+			'You do have spare money and feel sorry for him. "Here Petia, go get yourself some lunch."'
+			'His eyes get huge and he takes the money from your hand, letting his hand linger against yours way too long for comfort. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are the best!" he says with a grin and, is that love in his eyes? After another awkward moment, he leaves to go buy some food.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Tell him to stop being such a mooch':
@@ -409,22 +406,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			grupvalue[4] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Getting tired of him always trying to mooch off you and everyone else you tell him. "Stop being such a mooch all the time and try taking care of yourself for once."'
-			'His eyes water up a little. "I thought we were friends... I''m...." then he walks off with his head hung low.'
+			'Getting tired of him always trying to mooch off you and everyone else, you tell him "Stop being such a mooch all the time and try taking care of yourself for once."'
+			'His eyes water up a little. "I thought we were friends... I''m...." He walks off with his head hung low.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 250:
 		npc_rel['A159'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 5:
-			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom trying to mooch off some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have any money? I''m getting really hungry. The rest just bully me when I ask them." He says in a pleading voice.'
+			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom, trying to mooch some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have any money? I''m getting really hungry. The rest just bully me when I ask them." he says in a pleading voice.'
 		else
-			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom trying to mooch off some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have any money? I''m getting really hungry."'
+			'You notice Petia desperately walking up and down the classroom, trying to mooch some stuff from the other students in the classroom. When he sees you, he breaks out into a smile and quickly starts walking towards you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have any money? I''m getting really hungry."'
 		end
 		act 'Tell him you don''t':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A159'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head no and tell him you don''t and ask him why he doesn''t bring a lunch. Which causes him to launch into a lengthy discussion about the benefits of a hot lunch, which leads to having a not so horrible conversation with him.'
+			'You shake your head, tell him you don''t and ask him why he doesn''t bring a lunch. This causes him to launch into a lengthy discussion about the benefits of a hot lunch, which leads to having a not so horrible conversation with him.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Give him money (50 <b>₽</b>)':
@@ -432,8 +429,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 			npc_rel['A159'] += 2
 			money -= 50
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Feeling sorry and you do have the spare money. "Here Petia, go get yourself some lunch."'
-			'His eyes get huge and he takes the money from your hand, letting his hand linger against yours to long for comfort. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best!" He says with a grin and, is that love in his eyes? After another awkward moment he leaves to go buy lunch.'
+			'You have the spare money and feel sorry for him. "Here Petia, go get yourself some lunch."'
+			'His eyes get huge and he takes the money from your hand, letting his hand linger against yours way too long for comfort. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best!" he says with a grin and, is that love in his eyes? After another awkward moment, he leaves to go buy lunch.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Tell him to stop being such a mooch':
@@ -443,16 +440,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			grupvalue[4] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big159.jpg"></center>'
-			'Getting tired of him always trying to mooch off you and everyone else you tell him. "Stop being such a mooch all the time and take care of yourself for once."'
-			'His eyes water up a little. "I thought we were friends... I''m...." then he walks off with his head hung low.'
+			'Getting tired of him always trying to mooch off you and everyone else, you tell him "Stop being such a mooch all the time and take care of yourself for once."'
+			'His eyes water up a little. "I thought we were friends... I''m...." He walks off with his head hung low.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 250:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." With that he moves away from you. But stops a moment later, then turns back looking around a bit. Then he steps back and says. "Unless you want to give me a blowjob that is." He asks hopeful, but even you have standards and walk off instead.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut." He moves away from you, but stops, turns around and walks back. "Unless you want to give me a blowjob that is?" he asks hopefully, but even you have standards and walk off instead.'
 		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A159'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Petia, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Petia. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
@@ -463,36 +460,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesco':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big7.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(0,5) = 0:
-		'You see Lesco talking to Lera and unsurprisingly things look tense. Knowing how volatile the gopnik can be, you approach them carefully. They greet you back and Lesco is the first to speak up, "Lera and I were talking about her needing to take care some of her chores at home, but she doesn''t want to listen..."'
-		'An annoyed Lera is quick to snap back. "Why are you telling your little girlfriend my business? Trying to show off? Try that shit again and I''ll tell her all your dirty little secrets."'
-		'Hearing this you start to wonder what kind of secrets someone like Lesco is hiding but decide to keep quiet as you don''t really want to get involved. They continue on bickering for a while before you decide that it''s time to leave them alone.'
+		'You see Lesco talking to Lera and, unsurprisingly, things look tense. Knowing how volatile the gopnik can be, you approach them carefully. They greet you and Lesco is the first to speak up. "Lera and I were talking about her needing to take care some of her chores at home, but she doesn''t want to listen..."'
+		'An annoyed Lera is quick to snap back. "Why are you telling your little girlfriend my business? Trying to show off? Try that shit again and I''ll tell her all your dirty..little..secrets." she says while prodding him on the chest.'
+		'Hearing this, you start to wonder what kind of secrets someone like Lesco is hiding but decide to keep quiet as you don''t really want to get involved. They continue bickering for a while before you decide that it''s time to leave them alone.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A7'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 5:
-			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual, except when you sit with him. As you approach him with a friendly smile, he looks up and gives you a friendly smile in return. "How''s it going <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'You see Lesco sitting by himself as usual, except when you sit with him. As you approach him with a friendly smile, he looks up and gives you a friendly smile in return. "How''s it going <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			*nl
-			'You tell him well enough and ask if he wants to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncle''s family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You tell him well enough and ask if he wants to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and, as you suspected, how Lera makes his life a living hell at home. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things weere better. He tells you how Lera found a dead bird and started poking it, but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		else
-			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and shyly looks up towards you, "C-Can I help you with something?"'
+			'You see Lesco sitting by himself as usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time, you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and shyly looks up towards you. "C-Can I help you with something?"'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders, saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and, as you suspected, how Lera makes his life a living hell at home. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things were better. He tells you how Lera found a dead bird and started poking it, but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A7'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 5:
-			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he relaxes slightly and shyly looks up towards you, "What do you want?"'
+			'You see Lesco sitting by himself as usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time, you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he relaxes slightly and shyly looks up towards you. "What do you want?"'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders, saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and, as you suspected, how Lera makes his life a living hell at home. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things were better. He tells you how Lera found a dead bird and started poking it, but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		else
-			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and looks up towards you with a apprehensive expression. "Please leave me alone."'
+			'You see Lesco sitting by himself as usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time, you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and looks up towards you with a apprehensive expression. "Please leave me alone."'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. He seems unsure a bit but as you talk, he relaxes a little and you end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders, saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. He seems unsure, but as you talk, he relaxes a little and you end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and, as you suspected, how Lera makes his life a living hell at home. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things were better. He tells you how Lera found a dead bird and started poking it, but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut, I have enough problems with out being seen with the likes of you." With that he moves away from you.'
+		'When he sees you walking over, he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut! I have enough problems without being seen with the likes of you." he says as he moves away from you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A7'] += 1
-		'You strike up a conversation with Lesco, he seems a bit hesitant at first but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
+		'You strike up a conversation with Lesco. He seems a bit hesitant at first, but quickly engages you in some idle chatter about school.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end

locations/gschool_chats3.qsrc

@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
 	
 	if kotovLoveQW > 0 and pav_slut >= 200:
-		'Vitek scowled and tells you "Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, whats this garbage I hear about what you and <<$gnikname>> did? The whole town already knows, the guys have been telling me all about it. You fucking bitch! "'
+		'Vitek scowls and tells you "Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s this garbage I hear about what you and <<$gnikname>> did? The whole town already knows, the guys have been telling me all about it. You fucking bitch!"'
 		act 'Accuse him of sleeping around':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel[$static_num] = 0
 			kotovLoveQW = -1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You started yelling at Vitek that he has fucked other girls. Vitek started yelling at you and suddenly, there is a ringing in your head, your vision is blurry. You find you''re on the floor, with Vitek standing over you. Your cheek burns with pain, it takes you a few moments to understand what happened, it seems he slapped you, so hard it knocked you off your feet. "Stay away from me you fucking whore, it''s over between us!"'
+			'You start yelling at Vitek that he has fucked other girls. Vitek starts yelling at you and suddenly, there is a ringing in your head and your vision goes blurry. You find you''re on the floor with Vitek standing over you. Your cheek burns with pain and it takes you a few moments to understand what happened. It seems he slapped you so hard it knocked you off your feet. "Stay away from me you fucking whore! It''s over between us!"'
 
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 				if pav_sex > 75: pav_sex = 75
 				if pav_prostitute > 75: pav_prostitute = 75
 				gs 'stat'
-				'It takes a bit but you convince Vitek that all this was just gossip and none of it was true. Vitek frowned, "I''ll knock their teeth out if they whisper one more word about you then. Don''t worry, baby I will shut their yapping mouths."'
+				'It takes a bit, but you convince him that all this was just gossip and none of it was true. He frowns. "I''ll knock their teeth out if they whisper one more word about you then. Don''t worry baby. I will shut their yapping mouths."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -36,38 +36,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 1
-		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek. After you sit down, he turns to you, "What''s up, slut?" You grimance slightly, but what can you say, you pretty much are the gopnik''s party slut by choice.'
-		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all," you tell him.'
-		'He laughs. "Who knew your mouth was good for anything other than sucking cock." You put up with the comments and end up talking to him about a variety of things the group is up to. He only insults you ever so often but in an almost friendly way, atleast way friendlier than he treats anyone who isn''t a gopnik.'
+		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek. After you sit down, he turns to you. "What''s up, slut?" You grimance slightly, but what can you say, you pretty much are the gopnik''s party slut by choice.'
+		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+		'He laughs. "Who knew your mouth was good for anything other than sucking cock?" You put up with the comments and end up talking to him about a variety of things the group is up to. He only insults you every so often but in an almost friendly way, at least way friendlier than he treats anyone who isn''t a gopnik.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A9'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. After a few questions he starts telling you about some of his more exciting adventures, soon you are both laughing about them and swapping stories.'
+			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. After a few questions, he starts telling you about some of his more exciting adventures and soon you are both laughing about them and swapping stories.'
 		else
-			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks, "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-			'He shrugs, "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and after a few questions, starts telling you about some of his more exciting adventures. Soon you are both laughing about them.'
+			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+			'He shrugs. "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and after a few questions, starts telling you about some of his more exciting adventures. Soon you are both laughing about them.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A9'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks, "What do you want, you stupid cow?"'
-			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," You tell him.'
-			'He shrugs, "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He answers a few of your questions, but doesn''t completely ignore you at least.'
+			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you Vitek asks "What do you want, you stupid cow?"'
+			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+			'He shrugs. "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He answers a few, but doesn''t completely ignore you at least.'
 		else
-			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks, "What do you want, you stupid fucking cow?"'
-			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-			'He glares at you, "Fuck off bitch!" He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He ignore''s your questions, but at least he doesn''t chase you off either.'
+			'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks "What do you want, you stupid fucking cow?"'
+			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+			'He glares at you. "Fuck off bitch!" He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He ignores your questions, but at least he doesn''t chase you off either.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek, he glances at you and gives you a look of disgust. "Get the fuck away from me, slut!"'
-		'Then Dan chimes in, "Maybe she is looking for a fuck." He gives you a dark look.'
-		'Seeing the mood turning dark and ugly you beat a hasty retreat, hearing the laughter behind you.'
+		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek. He glances at you and gives you a look of disgust. "Get the fuck away from me, slut!"'
+		'Then Dan chimes in, "Maybe she is looking for a fuck?" he says as he gives you a dark look.'
+		'Seeing the mood turning dark and ugly, you beat a hasty retreat, hearing the laughter behind you.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 1
-		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you, Vitek asks, "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-		'He shrugs, "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He answers a few of your questions, but doesn''t completely ignore you at least.'
+		'You go over and sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily tell stories. When they notice you Vitek asks "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+		'He shrugs. "Whatever." He goes back to telling stories and you ask him a few questions about some of his more exciting adventures. He answers a few, but doesn''t completely ignore you at least.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	if kotovloveqw > 0 and NikoPayback = 2:act 'Tell him what Niko did to you':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Vitek Help'
@@ -80,27 +80,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A154'] += 1
-		'As you walk up, Radomir says, "Well well well, if it isn''t my favorite groupie slut."'
-		'You smile and put up with the comments, knowing this is now your place among the gopniks. He tells you, you should stop by practice some time. Saying the boys could use some stress release during the practice, which leads to him talking about the band and where they will be playing.'
+		'As you walk up, Radomir says "Well well well, if it isn''t my favorite groupie slut."'
+		'You smile and put up with the comments, knowing this is now your place among the gopniks. He tells you that you should stop by practice some time, saying the boys could use some stress release during the practice, which leads to him talking about the band and where they will be playing.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A154'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A154'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Radomir is talking about the bands latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he gives you a wink and starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where he says the band''s going and the success it will have.'
+			'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he gives you a wink and starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where he says the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 		else
 			'Radomir is talking about the bands latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he gives you a wink. "So what can I do for one of my fans?" You ask him about how things are going for the band and he starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where he says the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A154'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A154'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Radomir is talking about the bands latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he barely acknowledges you. Instead, he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He mostly ignores you, but does reply to a few of your comments.'
+			'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he barely acknowledges you. Instead, he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He mostly ignores you, but does reply to a few of your comments.'
 		else
-			'Radomir is talking about the bands latest gig as you walk up. You are not sure if he''s even seen you, as he completely ignores you. Instead, he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He ignores your comments, like you are not even there.'
+			'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you walk up. You are not sure if he''s even seen you as he completely ignores you. Instead, he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He ignores your comments, like you are not even there.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'As you start to say something to him, he interrupts you, "Get lost slut, I can''t be seen with the likes of you, I have a reputation to uphold."'
+		'As you start to say something to him, he interrupts you. "Get lost slut! I can''t be seen with the likes of you, I have a reputation to uphold."'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A154'] += 1
-		'Radomir is talking about the bands latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he barely acknowledges you. Instead he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He mostly ignores you, but does reply to a few of your comments.'
+		'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you walk up. Seeing you, he barely acknowledges you. Instead he tells the others about all the girls throwing their panties on stage at him at their last gig. He mostly ignores you, but does reply to a few of your comments.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -112,37 +112,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roman':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big157.jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_rel['A157'] >= 50 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A157'] += 1
-		'As you walk up, Roman says, "Well well well, if it isn''t our little fuck bunny, you looking for a cock to hop on?"'
-		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-		'"Tell me how much you love cock then." You banter with him for a bit, he rips on you a lot, but at least he does talk to you.'
+		'As you walk up, Roman says "Well well well, if it isn''t our little fuck bunny. You looking for a cock to hop on?"'
+		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+		'"Tell me how much you love cock then." You banter with him for a bit. He rips on you a lot, but at least he does talk to you.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A157'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'"So listen to this, I was arguing with this old hag yesterday. She wouldn''t let go that I was swearing." Roman is again telling one of his crazy stories to the group.'
 			'You join in, listening and asking him a few questions. Soon the two of you are chatting about a variety of topics.'	
 		else
-			'As you walk up, Roman says, "Well, what do you want?"'
-			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-			'"Yeah, what about?" You banter with him for a bit, about a variety of things, he seems friendly enough considering his rep.'
+			'As you walk up, Roman says "Well, what do you want?"'
+			'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+			'"Yeah, what about?" You banter with him for a bit about a variety of things. He seems friendly enough, considering his reputation.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A157'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'You take a seat near Roman. "Hey what''s up Roman?"'
-			'"Fuck off bitch," he snarls at you.'
-			'"Calm down, I just want to talk." He mostly ignores you or when he does respond he insults you, but at least he doesn''t run you off.'
+			'"Fuck off bitch!" he snarls at you.'
+			'"Calm down, I just want to talk." He mostly ignores you and when he does respond, he insults you, but at least he doesn''t run you off.'
 		else
 			'You take a seat near Roman. "Hey what''s up Roman?"'
-			'"Get lost cunt," he snarls at you.'
-			'"Calm down, I just want to talk." He mostly ignores you or when he does respond he insults you, but at least he doesn''t run you off.'
+			'"Get lost cunt!" he snarls at you.'
+			'"Calm down, I just want to talk." He mostly ignores you and when he does respond, he insults you, but at least he doesn''t run you off.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'As you start to approach Roman, he snarls at you, "If you so much as open your cum breath mouth at me, I will get you down these stairs." Not wishing to push your luck, you walk away.'
+		'As you start to approach Roman, he snarls at you. "If you so much as open your cum breath mouth at me, I will toss you down these stairs." Not wishing to push your luck, you walk away.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A157'] += 1
-		'As you walk up, Roman says, "Well, what do you want?"'
-		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-		'"Yeah, what about?" You banter with him for a bit, about a variety of things. He is rude and often insulting, but at least he doesn''t threaten you.'
+		'As you walk up, Roman says "Well, what do you want?"'
+		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+		'"Yeah, what about?" You banter with him for a bit about a variety of things. He is rude and often insulting, but at least he doesn''t threaten you.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -154,39 +154,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dan':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big10.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 1
-		'As you walk up, Dan says, "You lost or just looking for a cock to suck?"'
-		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk, is all," you tell him.'
-		'"I bet that is rare, not having your mouth full long enough to talk." You banter with him for a bit, he rips on you a lot, but at least he does talk to you.'
+		'As you walk up, Dan says "You lost or just looking for a cock to suck?"'
+		'"I just wanted to say hi and talk is all." you tell him.'
+		'"I bet that is rare, not having your mouth full long enough to talk." You banter with him for a bit. He rips on you a lot, but at least he does talk to you.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A10'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'"Hey, Dan!" you greet him.'
-			'"What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?," he asks you, soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation.'
+			'"What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he asks you and soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation.'
 		else
-			'"Hey, Dan!" you greet him. As usual, Dan is his arrogant self and barely pays you any attention.'
-			'"Oh, come on now Dan!" you tell him, "Don''t act that way, I know you like it when I talk to you."'
+			'"Hey Dan!" you greet him. As usual, Dan is his arrogant self and barely pays you any attention.'
+			'"Oh, come on now Dan!" you tell him. "Don''t act that way. I know you like it when I talk to you."'
 			'"Is that so?" he asks. You laugh a bit and the two of you strike up a friendly conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A10'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'"Hey, Dan!" you greet him.'
+			'"Hey Dan!" you greet him.'
 			'He narrows his eyes at you. "What do you want?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all," you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Well, I''m busy so get lost." You persist and he relents. He talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		else
-			'"Hey, Dan!" you greet him.'
+			'"Hey Dan!" you greet him.'
 			'He narrows his eyes at you. "What the fuck do you want?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all," you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Yeah well, I don''t want to talk to you." You persist and he relents. He talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
 		'You try and talk to him, but he just completely ignores you, like you aren''t even there. Eventually, you give up and walk off.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 1
-		'"Hey, Dan!" you greet him.'
-		'He glances at you, "What do you want?"'
-		'"I just wanted to talk is all," You tell him.'
+		'"Hey Dan!" you greet him.'
+		'He glances at you. "What do you want?"'
+		'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 		'"I''m not in the mood." You persist and he relents. He talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -204,24 +204,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 		npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 		'He smiles as you walk up. "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'You smile back. "Nothing much, just wanted to hang out and talk."'
-		'The two of you talk about a few things, though he gets a little hands on with you at times, but you are used to it. As you start to leave, he adds, "Stop by the garage some time, I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
+		'The two of you talk about a few things. He gets a little hands on with you at times, but you are used to it. As you start to leave, he adds "Stop by the garage some time, I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
 	elseif npc_rel['A158'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk up, Valentin calls out, "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, good seeing you again."'
-			'You smile as you reply, "You know, I''ve been busy lately so I haven''t really been around here."'
-			'Valentin in his most charming way, "Well I hope I will see you more frequently in the future."'
+			'As you walk up, Valentin calls out "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, good seeing you again."'
+			'You smile as you reply. "You know, I''ve been busy lately so I haven''t really been around here."'
+			'Valentin, in his most charming way, replies "Well I hope I will see you more frequently in the future."'
 			'Your cheeks turn red as you hear him comment and soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation, mostly about the band or his bike.'
 			act 'Ask for a ride on his bike':
 				cla & *nl
-				'Listening to him, you tease him a little, "Hey Valentin! As soon as you''ve fixed your bike, I want you to take me on a ride! And I won''t take no for an answer."'
-				'Valentin gives you a big smile, "Sure thing, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll send you a text as soon as I have finished repairing her and I''ll take you on a ride."'
+				'Listening to him, you tease him a little. "Hey Valentin! As soon as you''ve fixed your bike, I want you to take me on a ride! And I won''t take no for an answer."'
+				'Valentin gives you a big smile. "Sure thing, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll send you a text as soon as I have finished repairing her and I''ll take you on a ride."'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
-			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you up to," Valentin says.'
-			'You smile as you reply, "You know, I''ve been busy lately so I haven''t really been around here."'
-			'Valentin in his most charming way, "Well I hope I will see you more frequently in the future."'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you up to?" Valentin asks.'
+			'You smile as you reply. "You know, I''ve been busy lately so I haven''t really been around here."'
+			'Valentin, in his most charming way, replies "Well I hope I will see you more frequently in the future."'
 			'Your cheeks turn red as you hear him comment and soon the two of you are chatting and flirting back and forth.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A158'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
@@ -229,22 +229,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'"Hey, Valentin!" you greet him as you walk up.'
 			'He sighs. "What do you want?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all," you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Yeah? Well I''m busy, I don''t have time for you." You persist and he relents, he talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		else
 			'"Hey, Valentin!" you greet him as you walk up.'
 			'He frowns as you approach. "We have nothing to talk about so go bother someone else!"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all," you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Yeah well, I don''t want to talk to you." You persist and he relents, he talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'You try and talk to him, but he just completely ignores you, like you aren''t even there. Eventually you give up and walk off.'
+		'You try and talk to him, but he just completely ignores you, like you aren''t even there. Eventually, you give up and walk off.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 		'"Hey, Valentin!" you greet him as you walk up.'
-		'He gives you a slight no in greeting.'
+		'He gives you a slight nod in greeting.'
 		'"What have you been up to?" you ask him.'
-		'"Working on my bike and practicing with the band," he half heartedly answers you, but he warms up a bit the more you talk to him. Mostly you ask him about his music and his bike which seems to do the trick.'
+		'"Working on my bike and practicing with the band." he half heartedly answers you, but he warms up a bit the more you talk to him. You mostly ask him about his music and his bike, which seems to do the trick.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -255,39 +255,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vasily':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big11.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A11'] += 1
-		'"I am surprised you don''t walk bow legged after the number of times you have been fucked <<$pcs_nickname>>," Vasily says with a laugh.'
-		'You flip him the bird as you sit down by him. After a bit the two of you talk about a variety of things, though he keeps asking about who all you have fucked or who''s dick you just got through sucking.'
+		'"I am surprised you don''t walk bow legged after the number of times you have been fucked <<$pcs_nickname>>." Vasily says with a laugh.'
+		'You flip him the bird as you sit down by him. After a bit, the two of you talk about a variety of things, although he keeps asking about who you have fucked or who''s dick you just got through sucking.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A11'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk up he calls out, "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Vasily speaks softly to you.'
-			'You smile as you reply, "Not much, thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'As you walk up he calls out. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Vasily speaks softly to you.'
+			'You smile as you reply "Not much, thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
 			'Soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation about what''s been going on.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up he calls out, "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Vasily speaks softly to you.'
-			'You smile as you reply, "Not much, thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-			'Soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation about when you were both kids mostly.'
+			'As you walk up he calls out. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Vasily speaks softly to you.'
+			'You smile as you reply "Not much, thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'Soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation, mostly about when you were both kids.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A11'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'"Hey, Vasily!" you greet him as you walk up.'
 			'He frowns as you approach. "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all." you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Can''t you find someone else to bother?" You persist and he relents, he talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		else
 			'"Hey, Vasily!" you greet him as you walk up.'
 			'He frowns as you approach. "Stop bothering me <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'"I just wanted to talk, is all." you tell him.'
+			'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 			'"Go bother someone else!" You persist and he relents, he talks to you for a short bit before making it clear he is done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'"Get lost, you fucking slut!" he says with a sneer and more than loud enough for everyone to hear, so you turn and walk away.'
+		'"Get lost you fucking slut!" he says with a sneer, more than loud enough for everyone to hear, so you turn and walk away.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A11'] += 1
-		'As you walk up he says, "Hey," with a nod of greeting'
-		'You smile as you reply, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-		'Soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation, about when you were both kids mostly.'
+		'As you walk up, he says "Hey" with a nod of greeting'
+		'You smile as you reply "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+		'Soon the two of you are engaged in a friendly conversation, mostly about when you were both kids.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -300,37 +300,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arkadi':
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A156'] += 1
 		'As you walk up, he cups his crotch and bounces it a bit. "Yeah you want this, don''t you. Well I don''t got time to give it to you right now."'
-		'"I just wanted to talk, is all." you tell him.'
+		'"I just wanted to talk is all." you tell him.'
 		'He snorts a bit, but doesn''t refute what you say as you talk to him. He starts to talk back a bit.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A156'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A156'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk up to him, you say, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-			'He scoots over and makes room for you on the set he is sitting on. "Sure, what do you want to talk about?"'
-			'You know he loves the city so you ask him questions about it and soon you are chatting away.'
+			'As you walk up to him, you say "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'He scoots over and makes room for you on the step he is sitting on. "Sure, what do you want to talk about?"'
+			'You know he loves the city, so you ask him questions about it and soon you are chatting away.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him, you say, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-			'He scoots over and makes room for you on the set he is sitting on. "Oh yeah? What about?"'
-			'You know he loves the city so you ask him questions about it and soon are chatting away.'
+			'As you walk up to him, you say "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'He scoots over and makes room for you on the step he is sitting on. "Oh yeah? What about?"'
+			'You know he loves the city, so you ask him questions about it and soon you are chatting away.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A156'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A156'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk up to him, you say, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-			'He snorts and grabs his crotch. "Why don''t you suck my dick instead."'
-			'You ignore the comment and ask him about the city, after a bit he finally starts to respond back, telling you about his time in the city.'
+			'As you walk up to him, you say "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'He snorts and grabs his crotch. "Why don''t you suck my dick instead?"'
+			'You ignore the comment and ask him about the city and after a bit, he finally starts to respond back, telling you about his time in the city.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him, you say, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
-			'He snorts and grabs his crotch. "Why don''t you do something useful with that mouth of yours and suck my dick instead."'
-			'You ignore the comment and ask him about the city, after a bit he finally starts to respond back, telling you about his time in the city.'
+			'As you walk up to him, you say "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+			'He snorts and grabs his crotch. "Why don''t you do something useful with that mouth of yours and suck my dick instead?"'
+			'You ignore the comment and ask him about the city and after a bit, he finally starts to respond back, telling you about his time in the city.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'"Get lost you disgusting whore!" he says, before you even make it to him.'
+		'"Get lost you disgusting whore!" he says before you even make it to him.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A156'] += 1
-		'As you walk up to him, you say, "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
+		'As you walk up to him, you say "I thought I would just come by and hang out with you for a bit."'
 		'He looks up at you from where he is sitting on the stairs. "Oh yeah? What about?"'
-		'You know he loves the city so you ask him questions about it and soon you are chatting away.'
+		'You know he loves the city, so you ask him questions about it and soon you are chatting away.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -342,10 +342,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big155.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A155'] += 1
-		'You approach Lavrenti, "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
-		'Lavrenti smiles to you, "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
+		'You approach Lavrenti. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
+		'Lavrenti smiles at you. "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
 		'"Sounds great, can I come?" you ask him, wondering if you''ll get an invite.'
-		'He laughs a bit and then nods. "Yeah, you can come if you want, I mean what''s a party without a party favor to pass around. I will text you when the party is." Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties.'
+		'He laughs a bit and then nods. "Yeah, you can come if you want. I mean what''s a party without a party favor to pass around? I will text you when the party is." Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
@@ -353,35 +353,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 			'You nod to him. "Sounds great, just text me the time and day of the party."'
 			'Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then funny things that happened at other parties.'
 		else
-			'You approach Lavrenti, "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
-			'Lavrenti smiles to you, "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
-			'"Sounds great," you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite.'
+			'You approach Lavrenti. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
+			'Lavrenti smiles at you. "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
+			'"Sounds great." you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite.'
 			'He laughs a bit and then nods. "Yeah, you can come if you want, I will text you when it is." Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A155'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'You approach Lavrenti, "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
-			'Lavrenti looks a bit questioning at you, "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
-			'"Sounds great, I am looking forward to it." you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite.'
-			'He frowns at you, "Why the fuck should I invite you?"'
-			'"Come on, don''t be like that. It will be fun," you tell him.'
-			'He snorts. "Let me think about it." You keep talking to him, hoping to warm him up for an invite, asking about his party which slowly gets him talking.'
+			'You approach Lavrenti. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
+			'Lavrenti just looks at you. "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
+			'"Sounds great, I look forward to it." you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite.'
+			'He frowns at you. "Why the fuck would I invite you?"'
+			'"Come on, don''t be like that. It will be fun." you tell him.'
+			'He snorts. "Let me think about it." You keep talking to him, hoping to warm him up for an invite. You ask about his party, which slowly gets him talking.'
 		else
-			'You approach Lavrenti, "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
-			'Lavrenti gives you a fuck off look, "My parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
+			'You approach Lavrenti. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
+			'Lavrenti gives you a "fuck off" look. "My parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
 			'"Sounds great, parties are always fun." you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite.'
-			'He frowns at you, "Fuck off, you''re not invited."'
-			'"Come on, don''t be like that. It will be fun," you tell him.'
-			'He snorts. "You are about the last person I would invite." You keep talking to him hoping to warm him up for an invite, asking about his party which slowly gets him talking a little.'
+			'He frowns at you. "Fuck off! You''re not invited."'
+			'"Come on, don''t be like that. It will be fun." you tell him.'
+			'He snorts. "You are about the last person I would invite." You keep talking to him, hoping to warm him up for an invite. You ask about his party, which slowly gets him talking a little.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'"Get the fuck away from me you fucking slut," he tells you.'
+		'"Get the fuck away from me you fucking slut!" he tells you.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A155'] += 1
-		'You approach Lavrenti, "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
-		'Lavrenti nods to you, "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
-		'"Sounds great," you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite. Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties, as you try and wrangle an invite.'
+		'You approach Lavrenti. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
+		'He nods at you. "Not a lot, my parents will be out of town next week and I was thinking of throwing a party."'
+		'"Sounds great." you tell him, wondering if you will get an invite. Soon the two of you are talking about his party and then he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties as you try and wrangle an invite.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -408,39 +408,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ekaterina':
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 		'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
-		'She gives you a look of disgust. "Not really, me and some of the girls got together last night for fight night. Something you wouldn''t understand"'
+		'She gives you a look of disgust. "Not really. Some of the girls and I got together last night for fight night. Something you wouldn''t understand"'
 		'You ask her a few questions about it and she answers you in as few words as possible, before finally just getting up and walking away from you. She obviously isn''t a fan of how you got to be a gopnik.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A145'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Not really, me and some of the girls got together last night for fight night."'
-			'She then goes on to tell you about how some of the gopnik girls get together and fight each other to practice and just to kick the shit out of each other for fun. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds."'
+			'She shakes her head. "Not really. Some of the girls and I got together last night for fight night."'
+			'She then goes on to tell you about how some of the gopnik girls get together and fight each other to practice or just to kick the shit out of each other for fun. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds."'
 		else
 			'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Not really, me and some of the girls got together last night for fight night."'
-			'She then goes on to tell you about how some of the gopnik girls get together and fight each other to practice and just to kick the shit out of each other for fun. Then she stops and looks you over for a moment, as if judging you. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds, to see what you are made of."'
+			'She shakes her head. "Not really. Some of the girls and I got together last night for fight night."'
+			'She then goes on to tell you about how some of the gopnik girls get together and fight each other to practice or just to kick the shit out of each other for fun. Then she stops and looks you over for a moment, as if judging you. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds. See what you are made of."'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A145'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
 			'She glares at you. "What fucking business is it of yours?"'
-			'You raise your palms towards her, to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
-			'She starts to say something and then stops, gives you a look over and then gets a dark smile on her face. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds, to see what you are made of." By the way she is looking at you, you think she just wants an excuse to beat your ass.'
+			'You raise your palms towards her to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
+			'She starts to say something and then stops, gives you a look over and then gets a dark smile on her face. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds. See what you are made of." By the way she is looking at you, you think she just wants an excuse to beat your ass.'
 		else
 			'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
 			'She snarls at you. "What fucking business is it of yours?"'
-			'You raise your palms towards her, to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
-			'"Well fuck off!" she snarls at you, you try to talk a bit more, but she mostly ignores you or snarls at you, before driving you off.'
+			'You raise your palms towards her to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
+			'"Well fuck off!" she snarls at you. You try to talk a bit more, but she mostly ignores you or snarls at you, driving you off.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'"Get the fuck away from me, before I kick your teeth in!" You are certain she means it, so you beat a hasty retreat.'
+		'"Get the fuck away from me before I kick your teeth in!" You are certain she means it, so you beat a hasty retreat.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 		'As you walk over to her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?" you ask.'
-		'She shakes her head no. "Mind your own business!"'
-		'You raise your palms towards her, to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
+		'She shakes her head. "Mind your own business!"'
+		'You raise your palms towards her to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking, is all."'
 		'"Yeah well, don''t." You change the subject to school and she pays half attention to you, obviously not that interested in talking.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -451,39 +451,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lera':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big21.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A21'] += 1
-		'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs, "So, hopped on any cocks today, bunny?" Lera inquires.'
-		'You sigh slightly, "No, have you licked any pussy?" you reply.'
-		'"No, but you just might, if you don''t watch your mouth." Lera says as she spreads her legs.'
-		'After that you both engage in a bit of banter, back and forth.'
+		'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "So, hopped on any cocks today bunny?" Lera inquires.'
+		'You sigh slightly "No, have you licked any pussy?" you reply.'
+		'"No, but you just might if you don''t watch your mouth." Lera says as she spreads her legs.'
+		'You then both engage in a bit of back and forth banter.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] >= 50:
 		npc_rel['A21'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs, "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lera inquires.'
-			'You shrug your shoulders, "Nothing much you?" you reply.'
-			'"Nah," Lera says as she shakes her head.'
-			'After that you both engage in a bit of banter back and forth, about how the school day has been.'
+			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lera inquires.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders. "Nothing much you?" you reply.'
+			'"Nah." Lera says as she shakes her head.'
+			'You then both engage in a bit of banter back and forth about how the school day has been.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you walk up to her, "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders, "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much, waiting for Lena."'
+			'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you walk up to her. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much. Just waiting for Lena."'
 			'The two of you continue talking for a while until Lena shows up and calls Lera over, ending your conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A21'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs, "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and frowns, "None of your fucking business <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'You talk to her some more but it is mostly one sided, as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
+			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and frowns. "None of your fucking business <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You talk to her some more, but it is mostly one sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
 		else
-			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs, "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and frowns, "None of your fucking business, bitch!"'
-			'You talk to her some more but it is mostly one sided, as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
+			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and frowns. "None of your fucking business, bitch!"'
+			'You talk to her some more, but it is mostly one sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
 		'"Don''t even come near me with that disgusting cum breath of yours."'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A21'] += 1
-		'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you walk up to her, "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
-		'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders, "Nothing much, waiting for Lena."'
+		'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you walk up to her. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+		'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Nothing much. Just waiting for Lena."'
 		'The two of you continue talking for a while until Lena shows up and calls Lera over, ending your conversation.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -497,40 +497,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona':
 	
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A143'] += 1
-		'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening to?"'
+		'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 		'She pulls out one of the ear buds. "This new band I heard about."'
 		'"Cool, are they any good?" you ask her. She nods and you press on and get her talking about her favorite kind of music.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A143'] >= 50:
 		npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening to?"'
+			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 			'She pulls out one of the ear buds. "This new band I heard about, want to listen?"'
-			'You nod and she offers one of the earbuds, the two of you listen to the music for a bit and talk about your favorite bands.'
+			'You nod and she offers one of the earbuds. The two of you listen to the music for a bit and talk about your favorite bands.'
 		else
-			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening to?"'
+			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 			'She pulls out one of the ear buds. "This new band I heard about, want to listen?"'
-			'You nod and she offers one of the earbuds, the two of you listen to the music for a bit and talk about your favorite bands.'
+			'You nod and she offers one of the earbuds. The two of you listen to the music for a bit and talk about your favorite bands.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A143'] <= 20:
 		npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4 and pav_slut < 300:
 			npc_rel['A143'] += 1
-			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening to?"'
+			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 			'She ignores you and pulls out a small bottle of booze from her jacket pocket and takes a swig from it.'
 			'You press on and get her talking a little about her favorite kind of music, before she goes back to ignoring you.'
 		elseif grupTipe ! 4 and pav_slut < 300:
 			npc_rel['A143'] += 1
-			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening too?"'
+			'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 			'She gives you a dirty look and pulls out a small bottle of booze from her jacket pocket and takes a swig from it.'
-			'You press on and get her talking a little about her favorite kind of music, before she threatens to cut you, if you don''t leave her alone.'
+			'You press on and get her talking a little about her favorite kind of music, before she threatens to cut you if you don''t leave her alone.'
 		else
-			'She doesn''t say a word to you, only glares at you and starts playing with the knife she always carries. Getting the message, you leave.'
+			'She doesn''t say a word to you. She only glares at you and starts playing with the knife she always carries. Getting the message, you leave.'
 		end
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A143'] += 1
-		'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask, "What are you listening too?"'
+		'Alyona is sitting a little bit away from the rest, with earbuds attached to her phone, listening to some music by the sounds of it. You take a seat next to her and ask "What are you listening to?"'
 		'She pulls out one of the earbuds. "This new band I heard about, why?"'
-		'"I was just curious is all, they any good?" you ask her. She nods and you press on and get her talking about her favorite kind of music.'
+		'"I was just curious is all. Are they any good?" you ask her. She nods and you press on and get her talking about her favorite kind of music.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -546,8 +546,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A144'] -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Sorry I can''t, maybe some other time?" You tell her.'
-			'She frowns a little then shurgs. "Sure what ev, some other time then."'
+			'"Sorry I can''t, maybe some other time?" you tell her.'
+			'She frowns a little, then shurgs. "Sure what ev. Some other time then."'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'I would like that':
@@ -555,30 +555,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			meet_after_school = 1
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Yes I would like that." You tell her.'
-			'"Sweet, I''ll wait for you at the doors after school." She tells you.'
+			'"Yes I would like that." you tell her.'
+			'"Sweet, I''ll wait for you at the doors after school." she tells you.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anushkaFirstvisit ! 0:
 		npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step with her knee''s pulled up to almost her chin. Which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knee''s to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
-			'She glances to you with a smile. "Yeah, if I can get it finished, what do you think <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step with her knees pulled up to almost her chin, which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knees to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'She glances to you with a smile. "Yeah, if I can get it finished. What do you think <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'You look over it and soon the two of you are talking about her music, which leads to a variety of other subjects. The two of you talk and laugh until the bell rings.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step cross legged. Which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knee''s to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knees to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a smile. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, just finishing it up."'
 			'Soon the two of you are talking about her music, which leads to a variety of other subjects. The two of you talk and laugh until the bell rings.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] <= 20:
 		if grupTipe = 4 and pav_slut < 300:
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
-			'Anushka is leaning against the wall snickering about something she is looking at on her phone. Walking up, you stand next to her and try and peak, but before you can see anything, she puts her phone away and frowns at you. "What do you want?"'
+			'Anushka is leaning against the wall, snickering about something she is looking at on her phone. Walking up, you stand next to her and try and peek. Before you can see anything, she puts her phone away and frowns at you. "What do you want?"'
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I thought we could just hang out." you tell her.'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Whatever." You try to talk to her, but she mostly just ignores you.'
 		elseif grupTipe ! 4 and pav_slut < 300:
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
-			'Anushka is leaning against the wall snickering about something she is looking at on her phone. Walking up, you stand next to her and try and peak, but before you can see anything, she puts her phone away and frowns at you. "Get lost freak, I''m busy."'
+			'Anushka is leaning against the wall, snickering about something she is looking at on her phone. Walking up, you stand next to her and try and peak, but before you can see anything, she puts her phone away and frowns at you. "Get lost freak, I''m busy."'
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I thought we could just hang out." you tell her.'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Like I would want to talk to you." You try to talk to her, but she mostly just ignores you.'
 		else
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end		
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A144'] += 1
-		'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step, cross legged. Which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knee''s to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+		'As you walk up the steps, Anushka is sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives a nice shot up her skirt to anyone with eyes. She is using her knees to support a notebook computer that she is typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see they are lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 		'She glances to you with a slight smile. "No, it is something Rad wrote and I am, well, fixing it."'
 		'Soon the two of you are talking about her music, which leads to a variety of other subjects. The two of you talk and laugh until the bell rings.'
 	end
@@ -599,14 +599,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			if Anush_lunch = 0:
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Hey Anush, you feeling ok? You kinda look flushed, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
-				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you were ok."'
-				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk too much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
+				'"Hey Nush, you feeling OK? You kinda look flushed, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
+				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you while one hand reaches down and squeezes your ass. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you were OK."'
+				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk too much. I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
 				act 'Um, that''s not what I meant':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
-					'You place your hand on her shoulders and gentle push her away. "No, I don''t want to."'
-					'She rolls her eyes. "Fine whatever, if you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." With that she turns and walks off, leaving you unsure what just happened.'
+					'You place your hand on her shoulders and gently push her away. "No, I don''t want to."'
+					'She rolls her eyes. "Fine whatever. If you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." She turns and walks off, leaving you unsure of what just happened.'
 					act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				act 'Go with it':
@@ -616,13 +616,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You breath heavily, feeling yourself turned on. "Ok, where?"'
-					'You barely even have time to get the words out, when she leans in and kisses you. You kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes, she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
+					'You barely even have time to get the words out when she leans in and kisses you and you kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each other''s bodies and several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes, she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
 					act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"You are looking pretty flushed again today, would you like me to help you out with that?"'
-				'You barely even have time to get the words out, when she leans in and kisses you. You kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes, she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
+				'"You are looking pretty flushed again today. Would you like me to help you out with that?"'
+				'You barely even have time to get the words out when she leans in and kisses you and you kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each other''s bodies and several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes, she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
 				act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
 			end
 		end
@@ -636,43 +636,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lena':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big20.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
-		'As usual, you find Lena smoking on the stairs, "Shouldn''t you be in the bathroom getting gangbanged?" Lena inquires with a note of disgust.'
-		'You sigh slightly, "No, I just wanted to see what you were up to." you reply.'
-		'"Go bother someone else," Lena says.'
+		'As usual, you find Lena smoking on the stairs. "Shouldn''t you be in the bathroom getting gangbanged?" Lena inquires with a note of disgust.'
+		'You sigh slightly. "No, I just wanted to see what you were up to." you reply.'
+		'"Go bother someone else." she says.'
 		'You talk to her for a bit and while she doesn''t ignore you, she also makes it clear she doesn''t approve of how you got in the gopniks.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much, just waiting for this day to end."'
-			'The two of you continue talking for a while, about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much. Just waiting for this day to end."'
+			'The two of you continue talking for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and arches a brow, "Nothing much, you lost <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and arches a brow. "Nothing much. You lost <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'You shake your head. "No, I just came over to see how you were and hang out."'
-			'The two of you continue talking for a while, about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
+			'The two of you continue talking for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you with a frown, "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you with a frown. "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'"I just wanted to say hi and see what you were up to." you reply'
 			'"Yeah well, I don''t want to talk to you." You continue talking to her for a while, but it is obvious she has no interest in talking to you.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you with a frown, "What do you want freak?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you with a frown. "What do you want freak?"'
 			'"I just wanted to say hi and see what you were up to." you reply'
 			'"Yeah well, I don''t want to talk to you." You continue talking to her for a while, but it is obvious she has no interest in talking to you.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
-		'"What do you want cunt? Shouldn''t you be sucking some cocks somewhere?" With that she ignores you.'
+		'"What do you want cunt? Shouldn''t you be sucking some cocks somewhere?" She turns away and ignores you.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
-		'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
-		'She looks back at you and arches a brow, "You lost, shouldn''t you be hanging out with your own friends?"'
+		'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+		'She looks back at you and arches a brow. "You lost? Shouldn''t you be hanging out with your own friends?"'
 		'You shake your head. "I have a lot of friends. I just wanted to come over to see how you were and hang out."'
-		'The two of you continue talking for a while, about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
+		'The two of you continue talking for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -684,42 +684,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pauline':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big24.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-		'As usual you find Pauline on the stairs, "What do you want?" Pauline asks in a non too friendly tone, as you approach.'
-		'You sigh slightly, "I just wanted to talk is all." you reply.'
+		'As usual you find Pauline on the stairs. "What do you want?" Pauline asks in a non too friendly tone as you approach.'
+		'You sigh slightly. "I just wanted to talk is all." you reply.'
 		'"Go talk to someone that cares then." she says.'
 		'You talk to her for a bit and while she doesn''t ignore you, she also makes it clear she doesn''t approve too much of how you got into the gopniks.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A24'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A24'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much, just waiting for this day to end."'
-			'The two of you continue talking for a while, about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
+			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
+			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much. Just waiting for this day to end."'
+			'The two of you continue talking for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
 		else
 			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
-			'She looks back at you and asks, "You lost <<$pcs_nickname>>, shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
-			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that, I just came over to see how you were doing."'
+			'She looks back at you and asks "You lost <<$pcs_nickname>>? Shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
+			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
 			'The two of you continue talking for a while, mostly about how, if you want to hang with the gopniks, you should join them.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A24'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 300:
 		npc_rel['A24'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
-			'She glances at you and then looks around a moment before replying, "I should just kick your ass, right now."'
-			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that, I just came over to see how you were doing."'
+			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
+			'She glances at you and then looks around for a moment before replying "I should just kick your ass, right now."'
+			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
 			'You try and talk to her, but she doesn''t really have much to say to you other than offer a few threats.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
-			'She glances at you and then looks around a moment before replying, "If there weren''t teachers around, I would kick your ass right now."'
-			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that, I just came over to see how you were doing."'
+			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
+			'She glances at you and then looks around for a moment before replying. "If there weren''t teachers around, I would kick your ass right now."'
+			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
 			'You try and talk to her, but she doesn''t really have much to say to you other than offer a few threats.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 300:
 		'"Don''t even think about trying to talk to me, slut."'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-		'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
-		'She glances at you and then looks around a moment before replying, "You lost, shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
-		'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that, I just came over to see how you were doing."'
+		'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
+		'She glances at you and then looks around for a moment before replying. "You lost? Shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
+		'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
 		'The two of you continue talking for a while, mostly about how, if you want to hang with the gopniks, you should join them.'
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'