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Where appicable, cheerleading now sends you to the changing room instead of dropping you outside school.

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      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  2. 7 7
      locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

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locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -543,14 +543,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 			'As you step out of the stall, you can hear the faint moaning of a girl coming from the locker area. You decide to check it out and peek around the corner to see Lina leaning against a locker masturbating. Thankfully, she can''t see you.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Leave alone':
+			act 'Leave her alone':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/lina2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Although it is pretty hot to watch, you don''t want to push your luck and slowly walk away, leaving her to it. You quietly get dressed and are leaving when you hear her scream loudly in pleasure as she orgasms.'
+				'Although it is pretty hot to watch, you don''t want to push your luck and slowly walk away, leaving her to it. You quietly get dressed and are sneaking out when you hear her scream loudly in pleasure as she orgasms.'
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -562,11 +562,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 
 				act 'Leave':
 					*clr & cla
-					'You agree to keep quiet about what you saw and you both get dressed and leave.'
+					'You agree to keep quiet about what you saw and you both get dressed, Lina awkwardly avoiding eye contact with you.'
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Get dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 				end
 				act 'Help her out':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/lina4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lay her down on her back and move between her legs. You lick her anus before running your tongue over her pussy lips and onto her clit. She moans in delight as you start lapping at her engorged bean.'
+						'You lay her down on her back and move between her legs. You start running your tongue over her pussy lips and onto her clit. She moans in delight as you start lapping at her engorged bean.'
 						'"Oh that''s good <<$pcs_nickname>> but you need some too!" she says as she has you lie down beside her. She then climbs on top of you and buries her face in your crotch, her glistening pussy sitting before you. She pulls your labia aside to expose your clit and gently starts circling her tongue over it. You moan in immense pleasure and get back to eating out her pussy.'
 						npc_rel['A19'] += 1
 						npc_sex['A19'] += 1 & if npc_sex['A19'] = 1: girl += 1
@@ -599,12 +599,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facesp.jpg"></center>'
 								'"That was just what I fucking needed <<$pcs_nickname>>! You eat pussy like a pro!"
-								With that, she moves to her locker to get dressed. You wash your face at the sink before getting dressed yourself and heading out.'
+								With that, she moves to her locker to get dressed. You wash your face at the sink before getting dressed yourself.'
 								minut += 15
 
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+								act 'Get dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Get dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/albina_rescue.jpg"></center>'
 					'You are kneeling between Christina''s legs, desperately looking for a way out. "Nobody is coming to help you bitch, so you might as well just get this over with!" Christina barks when she notices your reluctance. Growing impatient, she grabs you by the hair and is about to force your head into her crotch when the door slams open and Albina storms in.
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Walk home with Albina': gt 'pav_complex'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -662,12 +662,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if rand(0,2) < 2:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/christina_force.jpg"></center>'
-					'She decides to change position, turning around and kneeling on the bench. "I like this position better. Then you can eat my ass as well!" You squirm as she grabs your head and forces your face into her crotch. Unable to move, you reluctantly start running your tongue up and down her labia before drifting down to her clit and flicking your tongue over it. She moans in pleasure. "Oh fuck yeah, just like that bitch!" Confident you''re submissive to her, she lets go of your head and you continue to reluctantly please her for a few minutes before her knees give out to the pleasure and she ends up laying flat on the bench, her legs split wide. "Oh fuck! Yes, yes, yes! Lick my asshole bitch! Taste my fucking ass!" she screams. You gaze up at her puckered rim.
+					'She gets on all fours on the bench in front of you. "I like this position. Then you can eat my ass as well!" You squirm as she grabs your head and forces your face into her crotch. Unable to move, you reluctantly start running your tongue up and down her labia before drifting down to her clit and flicking your tongue over it. She moans in pleasure. "Oh fuck yeah, just like that bitch!" Confident you''re submissive to her, she lets go of your head and you continue to reluctantly please her for a few minutes before her knees give out to the pleasure and she ends up laying flat on the bench, her legs split wide. "Oh fuck! Yes, yes, yes! Lick my asshole bitch! Taste my fucking ass!" she screams. You gaze up at her puckered rim.
 					Having no other choice, you start licking her anus. She moans in pleasure and reaches round to fondle her wet pussy. "Oh fuck yes, keep going! I''m going to cum!" After a few seconds, she screams out and you are drenched by the flood of pussy juice that gushes from her as her orgasm washes over her. She rides through the waves of pleasure as you stay kneeling on the floor. Once she recovers, she stands and gets dressed before throwing your outfit at you. You quickly stuff it in your bag before getting up and running to wash your face. Thankfully, Christina is gone when you return and you get dressed in peace.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Get dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/albina_rescue.jpg"></center>'
 					'You are kneeling between Christina''s legs, desperately looking for a way out. "Nobody is coming to help you bitch, so you might as well just get this over with!" Christina barks when she notices your reluctance. Growing impatient, she grabs you by the hair and is about to force your head into her crotch when the door slams open and Albina storms in.
@@ -683,7 +683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Walk home with Albina': gt 'pav_complex'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -697,10 +697,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
-				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do anyway." you reply. Albina again just shrugs her shoulders and Lazar smiles. "Your loss." he says before he and Albina head off to find somewhere more private. You finish getting dressed and head on your way.'
+				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do anyway." you reply. Albina again just shrugs her shoulders and Lazar smiles. "Your loss." he says before he and Albina head off to find somewhere more private. You finish getting dressed.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Finish getting dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 			act 'Accept':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -784,10 +784,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
-				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do." you reply while shaking your head. Albina looks a little disappointed, but just shrugs her shoulders. "Your loss." she says before typing a message on her phone and walking away. You finish getting dressed and head on your way.'
+				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do." you reply while shaking your head. Albina looks a little disappointed, but just shrugs her shoulders. "Your loss." she says before typing a message on her phone and walking away. You finish getting dressed.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Finish getting dressed': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 
 			act 'Accept':
@@ -872,12 +872,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 		end
 	end
 	if $CURACTS = '':
-		'You get dressed, place your uniform back in your locker and get ready to leave.'
+		'You get dressed, place your uniform back in your locker and start getting dressed.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Leave':
+		act 'Get ready to leave':
 			if rand(0,5) = 0: gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'Bella'
-			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -885,8 +885,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 	*clr & cla
 	if bellawatch = 0:
-		'As you''re making your way outside, you notice that the door to the boys'' locker room is ajar and you can hear voices coming from inside. Curious, you walk over and listen by the door.'
-		'"Get that tight little ass over here! You look so fucking sexy in that outfit." You hear a feminine giggle, followed by what sounds like wet, sloppy gagging.'
+		'You''re alone in the locker room by the time you finish getting dressed, and are just about to leave when you hear noises coming from out in the hallway. You peer out and notice that the door to the boys'' locker room with whispered voices coming from inside. Curious, you sneak over and listen.'
+		'"Get that tight little ass over here! You look so fucking sexy in that outfit!" You then hear a feminine giggle, followed by what sounds like wet, sloppy gagging.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Peek':
@@ -894,39 +894,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasex.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re even more curious now, and crack the door open a little further to take a peek.'
 			
-			'You see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of some guy that you don''t know. He has his entire cock stuffed in her mouth, and Bella seems to be deep-throating him without too much difficulty.'
+			'You see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of some guy that you don''t recognize. He has his entire cock stuffed in her mouth, and Bella seems to be deep-throating him without too much difficulty.'
 			'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again. "<i>Flmmpf flmmpf</i> --we talked about this-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!</i> --we may-- <i>flfff, flath</i> --get caught-- <i>mmmph, blahgggghspf...</i>"'
 			'Noticibly irritated by her comments, the guy punishes Bella by shoving his cock even further down her throat. "Didn''t your parents ever teach you not to talk with your mouth full?"'
 			'A few seconds later, she pops his drool-coated cock out of her mouth, and he lies back on the bench. He has quite an impressive member standing to attention.'
 
-			'With the guy reclining in his vulnerable position, savoring his achievement, Bella slowly slides her foot over his cock and seductively whispers "Try that stunt one more time, and you''ll end up circumcised when you least expect it. Got it?"'
-			'The guy swallows hard. It looks like he got the message Bella wanted to convey.'
+			'With the guy reclining in his vulnerable position, savoring his achievement, Bella slowly slides her foot over his cock and seductively whispers "Try that stunt again, and you''ll end up circumcised when you least expect it. Got it?"'
+			'The guy swallows hard. It looks like he got the message Bella wanted to convey. You''ve seen enough, and head back to the locker room to gather your belongings.'
 			bellawatch = 1
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 		end
 
 		act 'Don''t peek':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'It''s none of your business, and you don''t want to get caught, so you hurry on your way.'
+			'It''s none of your business, and you don''t want to get caught, so you hurry back to the locker room to gather your belongings.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 		end
 	elseif bellawatch = 1:
 		if soniaPS ! 4:
-			'As you''re making your way outside, you notice that the door to the boys'' locker room is ajar and you can hear voices coming from inside.'
+			'You are again alone in the locker room when you hear the familiar sounds coming from across the hall.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Watch them again':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasex.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re even more curious now, and crack the door open a little further to take a peek.'
-				'You see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of some guy that you don''t know. He has his entire cock stuffed in her mouth, and Bella seems to be deep-throating him without too much difficulty.'
+				'Your curiosity gets the better of you and you sneak across the hall to take another peek.'
+				'Peering in, you again see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of the same guy and deep-throating him.'
 				'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again."<i>Flmmpf flmmpf</i> --think I heard-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!</i> --some footsteps-- <i>flfff, flath</i> --could you-- <i>mmmph, blahgggghspf...</i>"'
 				*nl
 				'The guy takes a brief look over his shoulder, and you quickly duck out of sight.'
@@ -934,6 +934,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 				'"<i>flmmpf! flfff, flath,</i> --fuck you!-- <i>mmmph...</i>" you hear a flustered Bella respond.'
 				'A few seconds later, she pops his drool-coated cock out of her mouth, and he lies back on the bench. He has quite an impressive member standing to attention.'
 				'With the guy reclining in his vulnerable position, savoring his achievement, Bella slowly slides her foot over his member and seductively giggles. "Ready for round two?"'
+				'You''ve seen enough and hurry back to the locker room before you''re caught.'
 				bellawatch = 2
 				pcs_mood += 10
 
@@ -941,27 +942,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 
 			act 'Leave them alone':
 				*clr & cla
-				'You overhear some familiar voices coming from the boys locker room. It must be Bella and the guy she was with last time, going at it again. You stand in front of the door contemplating if you should enter or not, but in the end you decide that you''ve already seen everything you needed to see.'
+				'Knowing that it must be Bella and that guy going at it again, you contemplate going and peeking on them again, but in the end you decide not to and finish getting dressed.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Finish getting dressed':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 		else
-			'As you''re making your way outside, you notice that the door to the boys'' locker room is ajar and you can hear voices coming from inside.'
+			'You are again alone in the locker room when you hear the familiar sounds coming from across the hall.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Peek inside':
+			act 'Watch them again':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasex.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re even more curious now and slowly crack the door further to take a peek.'
-				'You see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of a guy that don''t recognise. He has his entire cock stuffed in her mouth, and Bella seems to be deep-throating him without too much difficulty.'
-				'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again. "<i>Flmmpf flmmpf--</i> you cheating on me-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!--</i> it tastes like-- <i>flfff, flath mmmph, blahgggghspf</i>... Sonia?!" Both of them start laughing, and Bella tries to mimic Sonia sucking cocks. "Oh, it''s sooo big, I need to suck your cock right away!"'
-				'You''ve seen enough and decide to leave them alone before you get caught.'
+				'Your curiosity gets the better of you and you sneak across the hall to take another peek.'
+				'Peering in, you again see Bella in her cheerleading outfit, kneeling in front of the same guy and deep-throating him.'
+				'Each time he backs off a bit and pulls out of her mouth, Bella gasps for air, letting out a few muffled words before she''s gagged again. "<i>Flmmpf flmmpf--</i> you cheating on me-- <i>flmmpf flfff, flath, mmmph!--</i> it tastes like-- <i>flfff, flath mmmph, blahgggghspf</i>... Sonia?!" Both of them start laughing, and Bella tries to mimic Sonia sucking dick. "Oh, it''s sooo big! I need to suck it now!"'
+				'You''ve seen enough and decide to leave them alone before you get caught. You hurry back over to the locker room.'
 				bellawatch = 2
 				pcs_mood += 10
 
@@ -969,22 +970,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 
 			act 'Ignore them':
 				*clr & cla
-				'As you walk past the boys'' locker room, you can hear Bella and her friend going at it again. This time it''s different though.'
-				'"Who''s the sluttiest girl at your school?" you hear the guy ask.'
+				'You peek out the door, but decide to ignore them. However, their conversation grabs your attention and you can''t help but listen in.'
+				'"Who''s the sluttiest girl at this school?" you hear the guy ask.'
 				'"Oh, it''s definitely Sonia. She''ll do anything for a cock!"'
 				'They both start laughing, and the guy continues. "Let''s mix it up a little. I want you to act like Sonia as you''re sucking me off."'
-				'You hear some muffled voices as Bella tries her best to mimic Sonia, but it''s just too weird for you, and you leave without peeking in.'
+				'You hear some muffled voices as Bella tries her best to mimic Sonia, but it''s just too weird for you, and you return to getting dressed.'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Finish getting dressed':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif bellawatch = 2:
-		'As you walk past the boys'' locker room, you can hear Bella and her friend going at it again.'
+		'You are again alone in the locker room when you hear the familiar sounds coming from across the hall.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Peek':
@@ -1021,19 +1022,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 						'"I... I..." you stammer while Bella just crosses her arms and stares at you.'
 						'"Do I even want to know why you''re peeping <<$pcs_nickname>>? Forget it. Just don''t get the wrong idea, please. This is my friend Yuri, and we..." she says while looking at him with distaste "<i>...you know</i>, on occasion. Anyway, I''d appreciate it if you didn''t tell anyone. God knows what Lizaveta would make of this."'
 						'You can''t fault her for having needs, and you know how mean some girls can be with this sort of stuff, especially if it''s with an older guy. You agree to keep quiet and head for the door.'
-						'You''re pretty sure they''ll just get right back to what they were doing after you leave.'
+						'You''re pretty sure they''ll just get right back to what they were doing after you leave. You hurry back to the locker room to grab your belongings.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Leave them alone':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 
 					elseif rand_finish = 1:
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/bellacaught.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'At this point, your luck finally runs out. As Bella arches her head back, she catches you peeping. You squeal and try to hide, but Bella quickly scrambles off the bench, sildes her panties on and chases you around behind the lockers. She walks up to you looking rather unimpressed, the massive wet patch on her panties a giveaway at how aroused she is feeling.'
 						'"I... I..." you stammer while Bella just crosses her arms and stares at you.'
 						'"What kind of perverted freak are you <<$pcs_nickname>>? Do you get off on watching other people have sex?" You are about to reply when she suddenly slaps you hard and you feel a sharp sting pulse through your cheek. "You won''t tell <i>anyone</i> about what you just saw. Got it?"'
-						'All of this happens as she''s shoving you out of the locker room, leaving you no time to react. "Fucking kids these days..." you hear her mumbling before the door closes in your face.'
+						'All of this happens as she''s shoving you out of the locker room, leaving you no time to react. "Fucking kids these days..." you hear her mumbling before the door closes in your face. You rub your stinging cheek before walking back to the locker room to grab your belongings.'
 						gs 'pain', 5, 'cheeks', 'slap'
 						pcs_mood -= 20
 						npc_rel['A22'] -= 5
@@ -1041,28 +1042,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bella':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/bellasexclimax.jpg"></center>'
 						'They''re way too into it to notice that you''re watching them.'
 						'After a few minutes Bella is loudly screeching, "YES! YES! Keep going! I''m going to--" She doesn''t finish her sentence before she screams in pleasure, collapsing onto the bench as her orgasm overwhelms her. The guy keeps pounding into her, then suddenly groans in pleasure. He pulls out of her and she flips onto her back, showing him her tits as he jerks himself.'
-						'Bella giggles as his cum squirts over her tits. When he''s done, she takes his cock into her mouth and sucks him off. He then pulls her to her feet and drags off to the showers, where you''re certain that round two will happen.'
-						'You take your chances and leave while you can, feeling very aroused at what you just witnessed.'
+						'Bella giggles as his cum squirts over her tits. When he''s done, she takes his cock into her mouth and sucks him off. He then pulls her to her feet and drags her off to the showers, where you''re certain that round two will happen.'
+						'You take your chances and leave while you can, feeling very aroused at what you just witnessed as you hurry back to the locker room to grab your belongings.'
 						pcs_mood += 10
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						act 'Leave them to it':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'Leave them alone':
+			act 'Ignore them':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You really should leave now before they catch you. You slowly sneak back out the door, then make a run for it.'
+				'You decide to just leave them to it and finish getting dressed.'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Finish getting dressed':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1130,7 +1131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cheerleadersreact':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave school':npc_pregtalk['A23'] = 1 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+	act 'Leave':npc_pregtalk['A23'] = 1 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'CheerleaderEnd':
@@ -1139,7 +1140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'CheerleaderEnd':
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave school':cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+	act 'Leave':cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Quit':
@@ -1158,7 +1159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Quit':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Leave school':cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+	act 'Leave':cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 end
 
 

+ 7 - 7
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			end
 		end
 		if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 0 and AlbinaQW['RideDaystart'] <= daystart and AlbinaQW['Chernov'] > 0: 
-			'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaRide''">Albina</a> is waiting behind the wheel of a large black SUV, parked near the school.'
+			'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaRide''">Albina</a> is waiting behind the wheel of an SUV parked near the school.'
 		end
 
 		! meynold`s events
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bulding':
 		npc_rel['A18'] = 0
 		christinaQW['dompath'] = 7
 		if LariskaHomeIn < 1:LariskaHomeIn = 1
-		'Lariska tells you that you crushed Christina''s spirit when she lost that fight to you, and that there''s no fight left in her now. It sounds like Coach Pavlovich took your threat seriously too, as she was kicked from both the cheerleading squad and the track team.'
+		'Lariska tells you that you crushed Christina''s spirit when you beat her, and that there''s no fight left in her now. It sounds like Coach Pavlovich took your threat seriously too, as she was kicked from both the cheerleading squad and the track team.'
 		
 	elseif (week = 1 or week = 3 or week = 5) and christinaQW['fight'] = -1 and christinaQW['subpath'] = 3:
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -738,9 +738,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change_room':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/lockerroom.jpg"></center>'
 
-	act 'Leave the school building':
+	act 'Leave':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed.</font></b>'
+			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed first!</font></b>'
 			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 		else
 			minut += 1
@@ -748,9 +748,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change_room':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to sports field':
+	act 'Go to the sports field':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed.</font></b>'
+			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed first!</font></b>'
 			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'change_room'
 		else
 			minut += 1
@@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change_room':
 	'You can access your <a href="exec: quick_dress = 1 & gt ''wardrobe'', ''default''">default clothing</a> options directly.'
 
 	if (hour = 18 and minut >= 30) or hour > 18:
-		'The school is closing for the night and you have to leave so you don''t get locked in all night.'
+		'The school is closing for the night and you have to leave before you get locked in.'
 		exit
 	end