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[GRAMMAR] - More grammar fixes

This time on possessive errors (your)
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      locations/BelSex.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/BurgerTip.qsrc
  3. 1 1
      locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv2.qsrc
  5. 3 3
      locations/FedorEv3.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/HotelWork.qsrc
  7. 1 1
      locations/LBZhouse.qsrc
  8. 1 1
      locations/LCporn.qsrc
  9. 1 1
      locations/LCwork.qsrc
  10. 1 1
      locations/Military.qsrc
  11. 1 1
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  12. 1 1
      locations/NikoEv2.qsrc
  13. 2 2
      locations/NikoPayback.qsrc
  14. 6 6
      locations/NikoSlut.qsrc
  15. 3 3
      locations/NikoWhore.qsrc
  16. 1 1
      locations/Terminal.qsrc
  17. 1 1
      locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc
  18. 2 2
      locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc
  19. 2 2
      locations/anushkaev1.qsrc
  20. 4 4
      locations/artemEv.qsrc
  21. 1 1
      locations/arturSex.qsrc
  22. 1 1
      locations/billsvid.qsrc
  23. 3 3
      locations/brosh.qsrc
  24. 1 1
      locations/city_irinaroom.qsrc
  25. 1 1
      locations/city_lake.qsrc
  26. 2 2
      locations/city_marketsex.qsrc
  27. 1 1
      locations/city_trashplace.qsrc
  28. 1 1
      locations/dimaHome.qsrc
  29. 2 2
      locations/dimalina.qsrc
  30. 2 2
      locations/dormev1.qsrc
  31. 1 1
      locations/ender.qsrc
  32. 1 1
      locations/foto_models2.qsrc
  33. 3 3
      locations/gKristinaZv.qsrc
  34. 1 1
      locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc
  35. 3 3
      locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc
  36. 2 2
      locations/gschool_break.qsrc
  37. 1 1
      locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc
  38. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc
  39. 2 2
      locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc
  40. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc
  41. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc
  42. 2 2
      locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc
  43. 1 1
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc
  44. 2 2
      locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc
  45. 2 2
      locations/hunters.qsrc
  46. 2 2
      locations/husbSex.qsrc
  47. 1 1
      locations/igorev.qsrc
  48. 4 4
      locations/kafesvid.qsrc
  49. 1 1
      locations/katjaEvDin.qsrc
  50. 1 1
      locations/kompMFCoral.qsrc
  51. 1 1
      locations/kuhr.qsrc
  52. 2 2
      locations/lesbidomhouse.qsrc
  53. 1 1
      locations/metro_events.qsrc
  54. 2 2
      locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc
  55. 2 2
      locations/mirasex.qsrc
  56. 1 1
      locations/mitkabuh.qsrc
  57. 3 3
      locations/mitkasex.qsrc
  58. 1 1
      locations/mother.qsrc
  59. 1 1
      locations/nichGala.qsrc
  60. 1 1
      locations/olu.qsrc
  61. 1 1
      locations/park_walkevents.qsrc
  62. 1 1
      locations/parksvid.qsrc
  63. 2 2
      locations/party_boys.qsrc
  64. 2 2
      locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc
  65. 10 10
      locations/porn_view_strings.qsrc
  66. 1 1
      locations/reks.qsrc
  67. 1 1
      locations/shoplifting.qsrc
  68. 5 5
      locations/shulga_room.qsrc
  69. 1 1
      locations/sitr.qsrc
  70. 1 1
      locations/sitr2x.qsrc
  71. 1 1
      locations/skverdin.qsrc
  72. 1 1
      locations/sny.qsrc
  73. 1 1
      locations/soniadisco.qsrc
  74. 4 4
      locations/stat_display.qsrc
  75. 1 1
      locations/street_walker.qsrc
  76. 2 2
      locations/trainBimbo.qsrc
  77. 1 1
      locations/vann.qsrc
  78. 1 1
      locations/worksalon.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		picrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from you asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
+		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from your asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
 
 		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 										if preziktype = 2:
 											sexcontra = 7
 											'Anatoly reaches for a condom, but you stop him. "Please, allow me," you say.
-											You fish out one of the sabotaged condoms from your purse, and put it on him using you mouth. He then lies back on the bench. You straddle him ready to fuck his brains out, and maybe more you think with a wicked little thrill.'
+											You fish out one of the sabotaged condoms from your purse, and put it on him using your mouth. He then lies back on the bench. You straddle him ready to fuck his brains out, and maybe more you think with a wicked little thrill.'
 										else
 											sexcontra = 3
 											'Anatoly puts a condom on saying, "You can never be too careful. My wife would kill me if I knocked up some sweet young thing." He then grabs you by the hand pulling you on top of him. You throw a leg over and sit on top of him, ready for action.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -1403,7 +1403,7 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 		'<font color="red"><b>WARNING</b></font>: Clearing reputation flags with your family may cause bugs. Use at your own risk!'
 		*nl
 		if motherKnowWhore > 0:
-			'Your mother knows, that you are sexually active and considers you are whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear both reputations</a>    <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear only whore reputation</a>'
+			'Your mother knows, that you are sexually active and considers you are a whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear both reputations</a>    <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear only whore reputation</a>'
 		elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
 			'Your mother knows that you are sexually active. <a href="exec:motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
 		else

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginvag2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Fedor stops for a moment to make sure that you are alright. Fedor rubs your cheek with his hand and then starts to thrust. You feel you vagina stretching for his <<dick>> centimeter penis and as he continues to thrust you feel the pain fade and pleasure take its place as you lay back and enjoy the pleasure building up.'
+			'Fedor stops for a moment to make sure that you are alright. Fedor rubs your cheek with his hand and then starts to thrust. You feel your vagina stretching for his <<dick>> centimeter penis and as he continues to thrust you feel the pain fade and pleasure take its place as you lay back and enjoy the pleasure building up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'	
 			

+ 3 - 3
locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Back Caught':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex9.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You spread your legs and feel Fedor enter you, causing you to moan lightly and Fedor start to thrust faster. You completely forget where you are as you enjoy Fedor roughly fucking your pussy until he lets out a muffled groan as he pulls out of you and paints your stomach with his seed. You open your eyes to see a flashlight shined on you, then Fedor exclaims. "Oh shit!" as many people in the theater are staring at both of you. You quickly put on you pants while trying to cover yourself as much as possible then you and Fedor quickly walk out of the theater.'
+	'You spread your legs and feel Fedor enter you, causing you to moan lightly and Fedor start to thrust faster. You completely forget where you are as you enjoy Fedor roughly fucking your pussy until he lets out a muffled groan as he pulls out of you and paints your stomach with his seed. You open your eyes to see a flashlight shined on you, then Fedor exclaims. "Oh shit!" as many people in the theater are staring at both of you. You quickly put on your pants while trying to cover yourself as much as possible then you and Fedor quickly walk out of the theater.'
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'	
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Restroom':
 		act 'Front':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/fedor/fedrestf1.jpg"></center>'	
-			'Fedor lifts you up to your feet with almost no effort then pulls down you shirt exposing your breasts, he then lifts you up by your waist and places you on the sink where he inserts his <<dick>> centimeter penis into you pussy. Fedor starts slow then begins to pick up the pace.'
+			'Fedor lifts you up to your feet with almost no effort then pulls down you shirt exposing your breasts, he then lifts you up by your waist and places you on the sink where he inserts his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your pussy. Fedor starts slow then begins to pick up the pace.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 							minut -= 10
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang5.jpg"></center>'
-							'One of the guys grabs you by your legs and lifts you up as another one lays under you then you feel a sharp sting in your ass as you are lowered onto a guy''s dick. You let out a pained grunt as you feel another guy''s dick enter you vagina and one in your mouth so you continue sucking trying your best to make them cum, so that they will no longer need you and hopefully let you go.'
+							'One of the guys grabs you by your legs and lifts you up as another one lays under you then you feel a sharp sting in your ass as you are lowered onto a guy''s dick. You let out a pained grunt as you feel another guy''s dick enter your vagina and one in your mouth so you continue sucking trying your best to make them cum, so that they will no longer need you and hopefully let you go.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'									
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'

+ 1 - 1
locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 			'You feel the impossibly large, bell-shaped head of his cock push up against your back door.'
 			'Slowly he applies pressure, pushing his <<dick>> cm dick into your ass. Your hole resists, but eventually you feel the head break through, stretching you sphincter. You let out a pained yelp, tears welling up in your eyes. Showing a bit of chivalry for the first time, Mr. Black waits a moment so you can get used to the feeling. All too soon the mercy disappears as he starts pumping his dick back and forth in your bowels. The intense feeling melds into a mixture of extreme pleasure and extreme pain, and you can''t decide If it''s enjoyable or not.'
 			' '
-			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into your throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in you asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
+			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into your throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in your asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotel_threesome4.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal9.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> reaches down then helps you to your feet before positioning himself behind you. He places his hand on your shoulder then pushes you forward before you hear him licking his finger before using it to lubricate your asshole. You try to relax yourself but the excitement is getting intense. You then feel his cock pressing against you asshole before slowly pushing its way inside, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. <<$boydesc>> then waits for your asshole to settle before thrusting his dick in your ass, causing him to moan loudly as he fucks your ass.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> reaches down then helps you to your feet before positioning himself behind you. He places his hand on your shoulder then pushes you forward before you hear him licking his finger before using it to lubricate your asshole. You try to relax yourself but the excitement is getting intense. You then feel his cock pressing against your asshole before slowly pushing its way inside, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. <<$boydesc>> then waits for your asshole to settle before thrusting his dick in your ass, causing him to moan loudly as he fucks your ass.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	

+ 1 - 1
locations/LCporn.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toiletsex':
 	'You come up from behind the man, and suddenly wrap your arms around him. He''s startled for a moment, but relaxes when you whisper: "That''s a nice cock you have there! I bet we could have some fun together, you and I..."'
 	'The man gives you a dirty grin when he feels you wrap your fingers around his cock, but he wants more. He takes you by the hand and guides you to the rear entrance of the diner, into the back alley. He positions you against the dumpsters and eagerly shoves his cock inside you.'
 	gs 'dinsex', 'vaginal_sex', 6, 'unknown'
-	'Not a surprise, he barely lasts any time at all, with in a few minutes he grunts and pulls out of your pussy and shoots his load all over you ass and without a further word he goes back into the cafe.'
+	'Not a surprise, he barely lasts any time at all, with in a few minutes he grunts and pulls out of your pussy and shoots his load all over your ass and without a further word he goes back into the cafe.'
 	gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 	gs 'npccleanc',$npclastgenerated
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start1':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/bjride.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You walk up to the group of men and give them a friendly smile as you say: "Good evening, sirs. I will be your waitress tonight."'
 	'The guys understand what you mean immediately, and all get up and guide you to their car. They make you sit in the back seat between two of them, and drive off. During the trip you constantly have hands on your body. The men fondle your boobs and legs eagerly, shove their hands underneath your clothes and fondle your pussy.'
-	'Before long one of them pulls down his pants and drags your head over to his dick. You suck his dick for the rest of the ride, while the other guys grab at your breasts, ass, or even fingers you pussy.'
+	'Before long one of them pulls down his pants and drags your head over to his dick. You suck his dick for the rest of the ride, while the other guys grab at your breasts, ass, or even fingers your pussy.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Military.qsrc

@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/military/sex/rape3.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you are starting to lose consciousness choking on his cock, he takes it out of you mouth, pulls the baf from your head and throws you on a crate. He steps to you, forcing his dick into your vagina quite forcefully. Although you can see now, you still tied up to do effectively anything.'
+			'When you are starting to lose consciousness choking on his cock, he takes it out of your mouth, pulls the baf from your head and throws you on a crate. He steps to you, forcing his dick into your vagina quite forcefully. Although you can see now, you still tied up to do effectively anything.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 										minut -= 5
 										gs'stat'								
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose4.jpg"></center>'
-										'Niko begins fidgeting as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
+										'Niko begins fidgeting as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens your mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 
 										act 'Suck Niko''s dick':

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering you vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 						

+ 2 - 2
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against you vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
+			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against your vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'	
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 					gs'stat'	
 					'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big9.jpg"></center>'					
-					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives you ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
+					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives your ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					

+ 6 - 6
locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills you mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as Niko approaches you. "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+				'He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as Niko approaches you. "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Trucker'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills you mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/rear1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turn around then slowly begin removing your pants before leaning over the desk then rubbing your fingers across your vagina, signaling him to fuck you. The man happily approaches you before shoving him penis inside of you vagina then thrusting his hip, pushing his penis deeper inside you. The trucker begins moaning as he fucks you at a moderate pace as he says, "How are you enjoying this sweetie?" You give him a smile as you reply, "I''m loving it."'
+			'You turn around then slowly begin removing your pants before leaning over the desk then rubbing your fingers across your vagina, signaling him to fuck you. The man happily approaches you before shoving him penis inside of your vagina then thrusting his hip, pushing his penis deeper inside you. The trucker begins moaning as he fucks you at a moderate pace as he says, "How are you enjoying this sweetie?" You give him a smile as you reply, "I''m loving it."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 8':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/8/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take ther truckers dick into you mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. '
+				'You take ther truckers dick into your mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. '
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 8':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1.11.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You take ther truckers dick into you mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. After a few more seconds, the man groans as his penis begins throbbing in your mouth, filling it with his warm seed which you let leak out of your mouth and onto the floor. The man takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were outstanding <<$NikoSlutName>>. I look forward to seeing you again soon." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+					'You take ther truckers dick into your mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. After a few more seconds, the man groans as his penis begins throbbing in your mouth, filling it with his warm seed which you let leak out of your mouth and onto the floor. The man takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were outstanding <<$NikoSlutName>>. I look forward to seeing you again soon." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 9':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/6/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wrap you lips around the truckers dick, evoking a moan from him. You begin sucking his dick while massaging his cock with your tongue, enjoying the warmth of his penis in your mouth. After a minute, the trucker groans as he begin pumping his seed into your mouth which you let slide out of you mouth as you tip your head sideways, letting his warm cum leak out. The trucker catches his breath then says, "You are a really good cocksucker. I will definitely be calling for your services again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You wrap you lips around the truckers dick, evoking a moan from him. You begin sucking his dick while massaging his cock with your tongue, enjoying the warmth of his penis in your mouth. After a minute, the trucker groans as he begin pumping his seed into your mouth which you let slide out of your mouth as you tip your head sideways, letting his warm cum leak out. The trucker catches his breath then says, "You are a really good cocksucker. I will definitely be calling for your services again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'

+ 3 - 3
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 									'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/photos/big10.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
-									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck you asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
 									*nl
 									'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
 								elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'					
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images\shared\sex\cum\mouth\cum1,3.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You obediently  open you mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
+												'You obediently  open your mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
 												gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A158', 1
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 												gs 'stat'	
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 					gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 					gs'stat'				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at you vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
+					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at your vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ elseif (trfatherQW >= 3 or trfatherQW < 0) and week = 6 and hour = 12:
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/sex/trfatherqw_12.jpg"></center>'
-					'You are barely aware of what they are doing, they quickly strip you naked. Soon you feel a dick being pushed inside or you pussy and ass at the same time.'
+					'You are barely aware of what they are doing, they quickly strip you naked. Soon you feel a dick being pushed inside or your pussy and ass at the same time.'
 					'The only time a hand is not covering your mouth is when there is a dick in it. Each of them seems to take multiple turns on all of your holes, with them switching so much, you completely lose track of how many men are even using you. By the time the start to finish, all you know is all three of your holes are acheing from being roughly used by the large gang of men around you.'
 					'When they finally all finish and leave, laughing. You feel cum leaking from all of your holes, as well as covering nearly every part of you body.'
 					act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $curloc

+ 1 - 1
locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					cls
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voltrenersexshower12.jpg"></center>'
-					'Scared, you cover you ass with your hands and look at him like a deer caught in the headlights.'
+					'Scared, you cover your ass with your hands and look at him like a deer caught in the headlights.'
 					'Mikhail Nikolaevich gives you an evil look, "Prokhorov fucks your ass and you scream with joy, but your coach just wants to alleviate some tension and you curl up all scared?"'
 					'You can see from the look in his eyes that he''s been at the wine and his slurring and unsteady legs confirm this. "Your ass isn''t that special." He spits on you and stumbles out of the showers.'
 					gs 'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A69'
 			sexpartkno = 1
 			gs 'dinSex', 'boy_wants_anal', 'lubri'
-			'Once he has your ass good and wet, he sits back and pulls you on top of him. With one hand he guides his cock to your asshole, with the other he pulls you down. You feel the head of his cock against you ass, you bit your lip a little at the pain as he pulls you down forcing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. Once he has the head in, he uses both hands to hold your hip and pull you down. He encourages you to set the pace, but lifting yourself up and down to fuck his dick with your ass.'
+			'Once he has your ass good and wet, he sits back and pulls you on top of him. With one hand he guides his cock to your asshole, with the other he pulls you down. You feel the head of his cock against your ass, you bit your lip a little at the pain as he pulls you down forcing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. Once he has the head in, he uses both hands to hold your hip and pull you down. He encourages you to set the pace, but lifting yourself up and down to fuck his dick with your ass.'
 			gs 'dinsex', 'analsex', 10
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'discoSex':
 					npc_rel['A69'] += 5
 					if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensexdisco2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You sit on one of the toilets, pulling your skirt up and spreading your legs, watching your little display for a moment. He pulls you up and then pulls you panties down, letting them pool around your ankles.'
+						'You sit on one of the toilets, pulling your skirt up and spreading your legs, watching your little display for a moment. He pulls you up and then pulls your panties down, letting them pool around your ankles.'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensexdisco3.jpg"></center>'
 						'Stepping out of your panties around your ankles you pull up your skirt showing him your naked wet pussy. While the coach pulls out his hard dick and starts stroking it as he watched you.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 												'Anushka grabs your hips a bit harder. "Oh yeah fucking take that bitch, you dirty little slut. You love getting fucked in the ass don''t you?"'
 												'You play along and nod. "Yes Nush fuck my ass." She seems to be as amused as you are about this. As you play at getting fucked by Anushka, Valentin grabs a bottle of lube out of the night stand and squirts some lube on his dick, then moves up behind Anushka.'
 												*nl
-												'She stops moving a moment then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you. You glance back and see Valentin fucking her from behind, with each thrust it forces her hips to bounce against you ass. Several minutes go by like this. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out, then you can feel her wetness from her orgasm dripping onto you ass cheeks as she cums from the anal fucking Valentin just gave her. "Ok your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+												'She stops moving a moment then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you. You glance back and see Valentin fucking her from behind, with each thrust it forces her hips to bounce against your ass. Several minutes go by like this. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out, then you can feel her wetness from her orgasm dripping onto your ass cheeks as she cums from the anal fucking Valentin just gave her. "Ok your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 												gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 												gs 'stat'
 												act 'No anal':
@@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 													gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs11.jpg"></center>'
-													'You nod at the request to be fucked in the ass. "Sure, you can fuck my ass." You tell him. With that Anushka rolls off the top of you, as Valentin moves up behind you. He grabs you by the hips and pulls you up into a doggy position. As he does Anushka moves around in front of you and lays on her back with her legs spread. She places her hand on the back of your head and pulls your face to her crotch. As you lower your face to her crotch, you feel Valentin cock pressing against you ass, along with a squirt of the lube. He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole, while you start to lick Anushka sopping wet pussy.'
+													'You nod at the request to be fucked in the ass. "Sure, you can fuck my ass." You tell him. With that Anushka rolls off the top of you, as Valentin moves up behind you. He grabs you by the hips and pulls you up into a doggy position. As he does Anushka moves around in front of you and lays on her back with her legs spread. She places her hand on the back of your head and pulls your face to her crotch. As you lower your face to her crotch, you feel Valentin cock pressing against your ass, along with a squirt of the lube. He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole, while you start to lick Anushka sopping wet pussy.'
 													*nl
 													'You groan a bit as Valentin <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock pops into your ass. He pauses a moment to let you adjust and then he slowly starts fucking your ass, as you moan more he starts picking up speed and fucking you a bit harder and faster. The louder you moan the harder and rougher he gets, he seems to be really getting into it making you think he is close when he says. "Fuck I''m about to cum.".'
 													gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'group', 'lesbian', 'lube'

+ 4 - 4
locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump':
 	*clr & cla
 	artdryhump += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/assjobc.jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn around in front of Artem, so he has a nice view of your butt. Artem carefully runs his hands over your ass cheeks, and you can feel him hesitating for a second. The he starts squeezing your butt and rubbing it with his hands. After a couple of minutes of this he places one of his hands on your shoulder and pushes you forward, you go with it and bend over. He grabs onto you and you can feel something hard pressing between you ass cheeks. When you glance back over your shoulder, you see him rubbing his erect cock against your clothes, at the crack of your ass.'
+	'You turn around in front of Artem, so he has a nice view of your butt. Artem carefully runs his hands over your ass cheeks, and you can feel him hesitating for a second. The he starts squeezing your butt and rubbing it with his hands. After a couple of minutes of this he places one of his hands on your shoulder and pushes you forward, you go with it and bend over. He grabs onto you and you can feel something hard pressing between your ass cheeks. When you glance back over your shoulder, you see him rubbing his erect cock against your clothes, at the crack of your ass.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay',3
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		act 'Pull his pants off':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first4.jpg"></center>'
-			'With you clothes now longer a problem you turn your attention to his clothes impeding your fun. You unbutton his pants then grab them by the legs and pull them and his underwear off. With them free you toss his pants and underwear across the room, his erect penis is standing at attention now that it is free of his pants.'
+			'With your clothes now no longer a problem you turn your attention to his clothes impeding your fun. You unbutton his pants then grab them by the legs and pull them and his underwear off. With them free you toss his pants and underwear across the room, his erect penis is standing at attention now that it is free of his pants.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Give him a blowjob':
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
 							'You crawl over to him, noticing a bit of your blood on his penis. A quick glance between your legs reveals a small trickle has run out of your pussy too. Using some tissues from the nightstand you wipe the blood away before straddling Artem.'
-							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of you pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							act 'Mount him':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
-								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of you pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'

+ 1 - 1
locations/arturSex.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ act 'Kneel down':
 		*clr & cla
 		artbj += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/sex/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You open you mouth and slowly wrap your lips around the hefty cock. The corners of your mouth stretch to accommodate the rod as you begun to suck at a gradual pace.'
+		'You open your mouth and slowly wrap your lips around the hefty cock. The corners of your mouth stretch to accommodate the rod as you begun to suck at a gradual pace.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		

+ 1 - 1
locations/billsvid.qsrc

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 
 	bilsvidukiy = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into you pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
+	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into your pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5, 'lesbian'

+ 3 - 3
locations/brosh.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if evgentipe = 0:
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Zhendos', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum50.jpg"></center>'
-				'Zhendos doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
+				'Zhendos doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ elseif evgentipe = 1:
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Mishan', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/bscum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mishan doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
+				'Mishan doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ elseif evgentipe = 2:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum43.jpg"></center>'
-				'Kolka doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you make a show of swallowing it.'
+				'Kolka doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you make a show of swallowing it.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'incest'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_irinaroom.qsrc

@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first8':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ira/sex/irinaqw6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You mouth begins to wander lower and lower until you come to Iras pussy. Moisture is already seeping from it and your tongue begins to caress her clit. Soon she shudders and moans in orgasm.'
+	'Your mouth begins to wander lower and lower until you come to Iras pussy. Moisture is already seeping from it and your tongue begins to caress her clit. Soon she shudders and moans in orgasm.'
 	'Ira decides to pay you back in the same coin and not speaking a word puts you on the edge of the tub and her lips sink into your pussy.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_lake.qsrc

@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dinribak':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/lake/sex/walk1/walk1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You call the idiot an idiot and get ready to leave. The guy says, "Well, maybe I was wrong, and you are not whore and a slut. Maybe I''m right and you are a slut, and you will stay and earn two thousand."'
+		'You call the idiot an idiot and get ready to leave. The guy says, "Well, maybe I was wrong, and you are not a whore and a slut. Maybe I''m right and you are a slut, and you will stay and earn two thousand."'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:

+ 2 - 2
locations/city_marketsex.qsrc

@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		elseif rand_act = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/vagmis1.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and lays you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs, exposing your pussy. He lines up his dick, rubbing the tip a bit against you pussy lips and then shoves his dick in and starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and lays you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs, exposing your pussy. He lines up his dick, rubbing the tip a bit against your pussy lips and then shoves his dick in and starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal28.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over, pulling your hips up, till you are on all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting a bit of your natural lube on the head of his dick. Then he moves the tip of his dick up and rubs it against you asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your slavia and a bit of your pussy juices on the tip for lucubration, you squeal a bit in pain.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over, pulling your hips up, till you are on all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting a bit of your natural lube on the head of his dick. Then he moves the tip of his dick up and rubs it against your asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your slavia and a bit of your pussy juices on the tip for lucubration, you squeal a bit in pain.'
 			'He works his way slowly deeper into your ass, holding onto your hips tightly so you can''t pull away. He works his way down till he is balls deep and then starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_trashplace.qsrc

@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if bomzQW = -10 and rand(0,5) = 0:
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', -20, 'rough', 'group', 'submissive', 'gangbang'
 				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'hobo', rand(35,55)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-				$orgasm_txt = 'The three hobos all start fucking you in unison, and they''re definitely not tender with you, the fourth man is stroking himself next to you and encouraging his friends to fuck you brains out, which they gladly do. The fucking lasts for a good 40 minutes and your holes are as sore as they can be, they all randomly swap and mercilessly abuse you for their own pleasure, your mind clouds from the intense stimulation, and it happens, your whole body is shaking in a powerful orgasm, you pussy and anus tightly clenching around the two cocks fucking you. The hobos all start laughing at you and crudely tell you how much of a filthy slut you are...'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'The three hobos all start fucking you in unison, and they''re definitely not tender with you, the fourth man is stroking himself next to you and encouraging his friends to fuck you brains out, which they gladly do. The fucking lasts for a good 40 minutes and your holes are as sore as they can be, they all randomly swap and mercilessly abuse you for their own pleasure, your mind clouds from the intense stimulation, and it happens, your whole body is shaking in a powerful orgasm, your pussy and anus tightly clenching around the two cocks fucking you. The hobos all start laughing at you and crudely tell you how much of a filthy slut you are...'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -20, 'rough', 'group', 'submissive', 'gangbang'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -1220,7 +1220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_knees':
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A1'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/kiss3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You mouth waters as your wrap your lips around his juicy cock. You use one hand to gently stroke his balls and the other to stroke his shaft in rhythm with your head. You look up into his eyes with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your mouth, looking for approval as you suck your way up and down his shaft. After a few minutes you feel his hands on the back of your head and he starts forcing you towards him as he thrusts his hips. Both of you hands move to his thighs as he begins to facefuck you, his cock sliding down your throat, gagging you viciously. Soon he is slamming into your esophagus balls deep until you feel yourself reaching the limit of what you can handle.'
+		'Your mouth waters as your wrap your lips around his juicy cock. You use one hand to gently stroke his balls and the other to stroke his shaft in rhythm with your head. You look up into his eyes with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your mouth, looking for approval as you suck your way up and down his shaft. After a few minutes you feel his hands on the back of your head and he starts forcing you towards him as he thrusts his hips. Both of you hands move to his thighs as he begins to facefuck you, his cock sliding down your throat, gagging you viciously. Soon he is slamming into your esophagus balls deep until you feel yourself reaching the limit of what you can handle.'
 		*nl
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			gs 'panties', 'remove'

+ 2 - 2
locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -815,12 +815,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'endure':
 	elseif pcs_ass < 20 and sucskill < 4:
 		'"Fuck, no!" You shudder.'
 		'"Shut up! Slut!"'
-		'You push your face in the couch and grit your teeth, as Dimka rapes your anus. You are humiliated and must endure this new violation of your body. Dimka seems to try to break you and continually forces more of it up your asshole until you feel his cock pressing against you pussy.'
+		'You push your face in the couch and grit your teeth, as Dimka rapes your anus. You are humiliated and must endure this new violation of your body. Dimka seems to try to break you and continually forces more of it up your asshole until you feel his cock pressing against your pussy.'
 	! If usually slightly anus or superior plus itchy from arousal
 	else
 		'"Fuck!" You gasp.'
 		'"I know you like it Slut!"'
-		'You moan as the metal rubs your innards. Your arousal and anal experience combined, make you enjoy the anal rape. Dimka senses this and begins to probe your asshole more until you feel his cock pressing against you pussy.'
+		'You moan as the metal rubs your innards. Your arousal and anal experience combined, make you enjoy the anal rape. Dimka senses this and begins to probe your asshole more until you feel his cock pressing against your pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		minut -= 5

+ 2 - 2
locations/dormev1.qsrc

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibrilgb':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/boy/djibril/sex/gangbang10.jpg"></center>'
 							'You take the dick out of your mouth long enough to say "Sorry, I don''t want to have sex. But you can fuck my butt, if you want." They laugh at that, and seem pleased with the idea. "I get first crack at her ass!" You hear Djibril loudly exclaim. They pull you up, and one of them sits on the couch while another kneels on it. You get on your hands and knees, joining them on the couch. You start stroking the one sitting on the couch, while sucking the one kneeling on it.'
 							*nl
-							'You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your butthole. The pressure builds, until it pops into you ass - stretching it. It must be Djibril, judging by how huge the cock feels in your ass. He starts fucking you anally, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
+							'You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your butthole. The pressure builds, until it pops into your ass - stretching it. It must be Djibril, judging by how huge the cock feels in your ass. He starts fucking you anally, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'lube'
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibrilgb':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/boy/djibril/sex/gangbang10.jpg"></center>'
-											'You say nothing, and keep sucking their dicks and jerking them off. They take your silence as consent. You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your asshole again. The pressure builds, until it pops into you ass - stretching it. Djibril''s massive dick stretches your ass to its limits. He starts fucking your ass, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
+											'You say nothing, and keep sucking their dicks and jerking them off. They take your silence as consent. You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your asshole again. The pressure builds, until it pops into your ass - stretching it. Djibril''s massive dick stretches your ass to its limits. He starts fucking your ass, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 											gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'lube'

+ 1 - 1
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
 		'Christina is a hell of a fighter. She is fast, hits harder than most boys and knows what she is doing. Yet despite all that she just isn''t a match for you. You finally land a few hard blows and she goes down gasping for breath, holding up her hand in surrender. You smirk as she lies beaten at your feet. You reach down and pull her phone out of her pocket and then toss it as far as you can out into the lake where it plops into the water.' 
-		'Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Neither you seen me here naked, right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat you ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" you say to both of them. Lina nods quickly while Christina is reluctant to agree, but soon nods herself. You confidently walk away as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
+		'Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Neither you seen me here naked, right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat your ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" you say to both of them. Lina nods quickly while Christina is reluctant to agree, but soon nods herself. You confidently walk away as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
 
 		act 'Walk off': gt 'gLake'
 	elseif fightEnding = 16:

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto_models2.qsrc

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 					act'Watch her work':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You hate this stupid fucking bitch and her fucking face with her fucking ego and her fucking attitude with all your heart and soul but nothing pisses you off more than the fact that she''s actually really good at this. She''s incredibly professional, taking directions from the photographer flawlessly, working her body in a way that exudes sexuality with every move and pose. If she is still as angry as you are she doesn''t show the slightest sign of it, maintaining perfect composure at all times.'
+						'You hate this stupid fucking bitch and her fucking face with her fucking ego and her fucking attitude with all your heart and soul but nothing pisses you off more than the fact that she''s actually really good at this. She''s incredibly professional, taking directions from the photographer flawlessly, working her body in a way that exudes sexuality with every move and pose. If she is still as angry as you are, she doesn''t show the slightest sign of it, maintaining perfect composure at all times.'
 						*nl
 						'You growl under your breath, "One day... I swear..." and walk away before you give yourself an aneurysm from being too ticked off.'
 						act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'

+ 3 - 3
locations/gKristinaZv.qsrc

@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 				if pcs_ass < 5:agape = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj9.jpg"></center>'
-				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on you ass skills instead then."'
+				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on your ass skills instead then."'
 				'She grabs her bag and throws a dildo your way. Wait... she expects you to put this in your butt? That''ll never fit!'
 				'You try for a minute, but your suspicions were right... it doesn''t fit. Christina sees your helpless look and says, disgruntled: "Fine, use your fingers instead. But you better make a good show of it, or else!"'
 				'You do as she says, slowly licking your fingers before slowly sliding one up your butthole. Once you get used to it you add a second, but Christina is already bored by then. She tells you to get dressed, while she threatens you: "That was weak, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''ll definitely be expecting a better effort from you next time."'
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 				if pcs_ass >= 20:agape = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj10.jpg"></center>'
-				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on you ass skills instead then."'
+				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on your ass skills instead then."'
 				'She grabs her bag and throws a dildo your way. You''re relieved to see it''s not the huge one, this one should fit okay.'
 				'You lean backwards and after you spit on the dildo a few times, move it against your backside. All of the girls from your class watch you attentively as you slowly work the head in, and then begin to f*** your ass with it. Christina smiles: "You''re quite good at taking stuff up your butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>. How is this so easy for you? Do you practice on a daily basis or something?"'
 				'After a while Christina has seen enough, and allows you to change.'
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 			else
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj11.jpg"></center>'
-				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on you ass skills instead then."'
+				'Christina looks surprised: "Still a virgin? How unexpected. Alright, I''m nothing if not flexible. We''ll work on your ass skills instead then."'
 				'She grabs her bag and throws a dildo your way. By now you''ve had bigger things up there, this shouldn''t be too hard.'
 				'You do as you''re told and ease the dildo into your ass. As you thought, it''s no challenge and it slides in rather easily.'
 				'Christina notices, and says: "Too easy, bitch! That dildo is too small for your broken ass. Give it back and use your hand instead!"'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'contmast':
 			if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/orgasm.mp4"></video></center>'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'As your pussy gets wet you pulls you panties down and slip your fingers inside of yourself. You start finger fucking yourself, with in a few minutes a powerful orgasm rocks your body. Leaving you gasping and trembling as you recover.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'As your pussy gets wet you pulls your panties down and slip your fingers inside of yourself. You start finger fucking yourself, with in a few minutes a powerful orgasm rocks your body. Leaving you gasping and trembling as you recover.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

+ 3 - 3
locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2_sub':
 				*nl
 				'Then, he lets out a relaxed sigh, "Fuck, I needed that. You''re a great lay, <<$pcs_nickname>>." He steps over to the sink and cleans himself up, wiping off the sweat and giving his cock a good wash. You climb down from the counter, his sperm flowing from your gaping asshole and running down your thigh, and do the same next to him.'
 				*nl
-				'When he''s finished cleaning up and his uniform is back in place, he heads for the door but pauses on his way out. "I look forward to next time, but maybe do some of those exercises to tighten up that pussy of yours, or maybe I will just go straight for you ass next time," he shrugs as if it doesn''t really matter to him and then exits, leaving you standing there, still struggling to wash your ass.'
+				'When he''s finished cleaning up and his uniform is back in place, he heads for the door but pauses on his way out. "I look forward to next time, but maybe do some of those exercises to tighten up that pussy of yours, or maybe I will just go straight for your ass next time," he shrugs as if it doesn''t really matter to him and then exits, leaving you standing there, still struggling to wash your ass.'
 				*nl
 				'Luckily for you, no one else enters the bathroom while you clean yourself off and get dressed. You leave the bathroom just before the bell rings, hoping no one spots you. You can''t help but wonder if Radomir was serious about those exercises...'
 				noShampoo = 1
@@ -683,7 +683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/boysfuck.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor places one hand on your hip and the other grabs your thigh, then he lifts your leg off the ground while Ivan places his hand on the back of your head, both of them helping you to keep your balance as you stand on one leg - having sex with two jocks definitely has its perks. Just then, Fedor slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into you pussy and starts fucking you hard almost at once, but his handiwork more than prepared you for it. You moan as he fucks you, but your moans are muffled by Ivan''s cock and Fedor''s thrusts push you forward time and time again, pushing the dick in your mouth deep into your throat over and over. Being shared by the two of them, spit roasted by them, not to mention the fact that you agreed to this - it makes this situation pretty damn arousing.'
+				'Fedor places one hand on your hip and the other grabs your thigh, then he lifts your leg off the ground while Ivan places his hand on the back of your head, both of them helping you to keep your balance as you stand on one leg - having sex with two jocks definitely has its perks. Just then, Fedor slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy and starts fucking you hard almost at once, but his handiwork more than prepared you for it. You moan as he fucks you, but your moans are muffled by Ivan''s cock and Fedor''s thrusts push you forward time and time again, pushing the dick in your mouth deep into your throat over and over. Being shared by the two of them, spit roasted by them, not to mention the fact that you agreed to this - it makes this situation pretty damn arousing.'
 				*nl
 				'After several minutes, they turn you around so they can switch who is fucking you and who you''re sucking, and some time later, they switch again. About the time you expect them to switch once more, Ivan suggests, "Hey, Fedor, how about you lay down on the floor so we can both fuck her?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 		'When you don''t resist, they seem to take that as consent. A couple of them grab your arms and hold them tight while the others start roughly pulling your clothes off. They don''t actually manage to rip your school uniform but they aren''t exactly treating it with care either and at least one button is torn free in the process. Your panties and bra are ripped off of you - in the case of your panties, they literally managed to tear them apart. They are so rough with you while they do this that you are sure they will leave bruises on your body.'
 	end
 	*nl
-	'When you start making too much noise - not that you are making a lot of noise to begin with - one of them clamps his hand over you mouth, "Shut up, slut! You''ll only open your mouth to service our cocks, got it? If you make any noise and get us caught, we''ll make sure you regret it!"'
+	'When you start making too much noise - not that you are making a lot of noise to begin with - one of them clamps his hand over your mouth, "Shut up, slut! You''ll only open your mouth to service our cocks, got it? If you make any noise and get us caught, we''ll make sure you regret it!"'
 	'You nod your head in understanding and do your best to stay as quiet as you can.'
 	act 'Rough start':
 		*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke2':
 									act 'Lesson two':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/causmo9.jpg"></center>'
-										'Finally she stops and for a moment you think she is done, but then she grabs the meter stick off the desk and uses it to slap painfully hard across you ass. Now it is starting to really hurt. With that she asks: "Have you learned your lesson yet?"'
+										'Finally she stops and for a moment you think she is done, but then she grabs the meter stick off the desk and uses it to slap painfully hard across your ass. Now it is starting to really hurt. With that she asks: "Have you learned your lesson yet?"'
 										gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 										gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -1153,7 +1153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke2':
 																		act 'Suck it':
 																			*clr & cla
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/causmo15.jpg"></center>'
-																			'She stops and leaves you alone a moment to rummage in her desk drawer, before pulling out a stapon harness. "Screw me little bitch, we will see who gets screwed." She steps into the harness, pulling it up and tightening the straps snuggly in place, before she grabs you by the hair again, pulling your face over to the dildo. "Open you mouth." As soon as you do she drives the dildo into your mouth and fucks your mouth.'
+																			'She stops and leaves you alone a moment to rummage in her desk drawer, before pulling out a stapon harness. "Screw me little bitch, we will see who gets screwed." She steps into the harness, pulling it up and tightening the straps snuggly in place, before she grabs you by the hair again, pulling your face over to the dildo. "Open your mouth." As soon as you do she drives the dildo into your mouth and fucks your mouth.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Get fucked':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonialick.jpg"></center>'
-			'The treatment she gives your clit and nipples turns your panties into a soaked mess and your entire body is tense now, still a ways away from release but too far gone to even think about stopping now. She pushes you back into the stall and briefly covers you mouth with hers, her sweet perfume tickling your nose with the promise of sexual bliss, your tongues wrestling with each other as you practically tear eachother''s clothes off. Sonia sits you down on the edge of the toilet and spreads your legs wide; the smoldering look she gives you as she kneels down between them sends waves of excitement through your body. The girl takes her time as she kisses her way down from your breasts to your navel, to your pubic mound... then past your sex, down your inner thigh. Just as you open your mouth to protest, her tongue takes a lingering lap at your lips.'
+			'The treatment she gives your clit and nipples turns your panties into a soaked mess and your entire body is tense now, still a ways away from release but too far gone to even think about stopping now. She pushes you back into the stall and briefly covers your mouth with hers, her sweet perfume tickling your nose with the promise of sexual bliss, your tongues wrestling with each other as you practically tear eachother''s clothes off. Sonia sits you down on the edge of the toilet and spreads your legs wide; the smoldering look she gives you as she kneels down between them sends waves of excitement through your body. The girl takes her time as she kisses her way down from your breasts to your navel, to your pubic mound... then past your sex, down your inner thigh. Just as you open your mouth to protest, her tongue takes a lingering lap at your lips.'
 			*nl
 			'For all the cock she is rumored to have sucked, she is mind-numbingly good at licking pussy, turning the sound you meant to utter into a sigh of pleasure. You briefly wonder if the two skills are related before her magic mouth and fingers put you in a state beyond coherence. You can feel the tension in your body taking palpable form, concentrating more and more in your lower stomach, building up. As you get closer and closer to climax, she slips two of her small fingers into your pussy, finger-fucking you while she licks, sucks and flicks your clit with her tongue. The sensation is overwhelming, the timing impeccable, hitting the right spot and rhythm in a way no man could. She somehow even holds you on the edge for a few more seconds before your body starts shaking in orgasm and you scream out in unbridled lust.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc

@@ -1318,7 +1318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 									gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 									gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal you pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 									gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 									gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell himw ith a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal you pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell himw ith a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1262,7 +1262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 									gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 									gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal you pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
+									'Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -1282,7 +1282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 										gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 										gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal you pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1597,7 +1597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Do you mind? This is the girls locker room, you''re not suppose to be in here. Please leave." you tell him.'
+						'"Do you mind? This is the girls locker room, you''re not supposed to be in here. Please leave." you tell him.'
 						'He pauses a moment and then throws his hands up. "Fine!" He then turns and leaves.'
 						act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head. Christina and Lariska taunt you for not doing it. "Come on you pussy. Don''t be a little bitch and just do it."'
+							'You shake your head. Christina and Lariska taunt you for not doing it. "Come on your pussy. Don''t be a little bitch and just do it."'
 							'You keep up your resolve, shaking your head again and then hiss to Lariska. "Why don''t you do it?"'
 							'Christina nods and says to Lariska "Show her you''re no pussy." Lariska looks around and then puts her phone under her skirt for a moment, then pulls it back up. You lean over to glance and can see a close up image of her pussy. She then sends it through the school wifi to Mr Tsarev, who stops what he is doing when his phone buzzes and looks at it. There is a shocked look on his face for a moment before he looks around at the class, obviously trying to figure out who sent it. A few minutes later, the bell to end class rings.'
 							act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 														*clr & cla
 														minut += 4
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop12.jpg"></center>'
-														'The lubrication from your drool seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says "Open you mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
+														'The lubrication from your drool seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says "Open your mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
 														*nl
 														'Several spurts of cum later, he lets go of you and gets dressed. Once he is finally fully dressed, he unties your hands and pulls you off the desk roughly, causing you to fall roughly to your knees. He throws your clothes at you as he sits back down at his desk. "Get the fuck out of my office, I don''t expect to see you in here again. If I do, then I will keep showing you what happens to bad little girls until you get it. Now get the fuck out!"'
 														if $pantyworntype = 'none':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1267,7 +1267,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_eatpussy':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka7.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get off your knees and put one foot on the side of the locker, spreading your legs wide and showing off you pussy. His eyes are glued to your pussy. "Get on your knees and lick my pussy, pervert." you command him. He drops to his knees at once without a word and starts licking your pussy. He isn''t very skilled, but he seems eager to please. You grab his head and grind your crotch against his face, covering him in your wetness.'
+	'You get off your knees and put one foot on the side of the locker, spreading your legs wide and showing off your pussy. His eyes are glued to your pussy. "Get on your knees and lick my pussy, pervert." you command him. He drops to his knees at once without a word and starts licking your pussy. He isn''t very skilled, but he seems eager to please. You grab his head and grind your crotch against his face, covering him in your wetness.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Make him lick your ass':

+ 2 - 2
locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc

@@ -3206,7 +3206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_hunters_sex_misionary':
 	if g = 1 and h < 3 and sex > 30:'You are enjoying his every move, and want to lift your legs <a href="exec:gt ''hunterLoveSex'', ''din_hunters_sex_misionary_bonus''">up</a> .'
 	if g = 2 and h < 3:'You groan loudly under your boyfriend <a href="exec:gt ''hunterLoveSex'', ''din_hunters_sex_misionary_bonus2''">kissing</a> him passionately.'
 	*pl
-	if hunters_kuni = 0 and h < 3:'To ask a guy <a href="exec:gt ''hunterLoveSex'', ''din_hunters_sex_kuni''">lick</a> you pussy.'
+	if hunters_kuni = 0 and h < 3:'To ask a guy <a href="exec:gt ''hunterLoveSex'', ''din_hunters_sex_kuni''">lick</a> your pussy.'
 	*pl
 	if h < 3:'Having had enough of this position he asks you...'
 	if h = 3:'Suddenly <<$boydesc>> begins to move even faster and you realize that he is already on edge and ready...'
@@ -4410,7 +4410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Andrei':
 			'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kotovpre30.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'<<$boydesc>> throws you on the bed and pounces on top of you'
-			'You long for his kisses. <<$boydesc>> somehow manages to rip off you clothes even as you devour his mouth with your own'
+			'You long for his kisses. <<$boydesc>> somehow manages to rip off your clothes even as you devour his mouth with your own'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									minut += 5
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/backwaterrelax11.jpg"></center>'
-									'The men throw you down on the blanket and pull off you panties...'
+									'The men throw you down on the blanket and pull off your panties...'
 
 									act 'Further':
 										*clr & cla
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/backwaterrelax11.jpg"></center>'
-							'The men throw you down on the blanket and pull off you panties...'
+							'The men throw you down on the blanket and pull off your panties...'
 
 							act 'Further':
 								*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/husbSex.qsrc

@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 	gs'brosok'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj24.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your husband''s <<husDick>> centimeter member enters you mouth.'
+	'Your husband''s <<husDick>> centimeter member enters your mouth.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if pcs_ass + anal_slip < husDick:
-		'You scream and bit your lip from the sharp pain when his member slides into you ass.'
+		'You scream and bit your lip from the sharp pain when his member slides into your ass.'
 	else
 		'You groan at the feeling of fullness when his penis parts your ass as he enters.'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -815,7 +815,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_sisterkom_krossdress':
 														'<center><b><font color = maroon>Igor''s sister''s room</font></b></center>'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/crossdress/face.jpg"></center>'
 														'"That was great! You know, this is something we need to do again." you exhaustedly say.'
-														'"That''s for sure!" Igor panted. His face all wet from eating you pussy.'
+														'"That''s for sure!" Igor panted. His face all wet from eating your pussy.'
 														'"Okay, I have to go. But, you have to dress up next time we have sex. Just look at you, I immediately get turned on when I see you like that." you say.'
 														'"I think we can pull it off again. Now get your cute ass out of here before someone catches us."'
 														'"Okay. See you later, honey."'

+ 4 - 4
locations/kafesvid.qsrc

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	act 'Find out just how wet she is':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Smiling, you reach up and take a firm hold between her thighs. "I don''t like it. I love it," you say, with a wicked grin of your own. Her body writhes in pleasure, as you put you hand to work against her now soaked panties. A few seconds later, she starts to take you top off.'
+		'Smiling, you reach up and take a firm hold between her thighs. "I don''t like it. I love it," you say, with a wicked grin of your own. Her body writhes in pleasure, as you put you hand to work against her now soaked panties. A few seconds later, she starts to take your top off.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				swallow += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/16.jpg"></center>'
-				'You drop to your knees, as <<$telsob>> grabs his cock. "Now, I want you to be a good girl, and swallow all of this for me," she says, as she strokes him in front of your mouth. Seconds later warm jets of sperm enter your mouth. <<$telsob>> keeps working the man roughly, squeezing every last drop out of him, and into you mouth. "Very good <<$pcs_nickname>>, now swallow", she says. You do. Then she sits back down chitchatting with you like nothing happened.'
+				'You drop to your knees, as <<$telsob>> grabs his cock. "Now, I want you to be a good girl, and swallow all of this for me," she says, as she strokes him in front of your mouth. Seconds later warm jets of sperm enter your mouth. <<$telsob>> keeps working the man roughly, squeezing every last drop out of him, and into your mouth. "Very good <<$pcs_nickname>>, now swallow", she says. You do. Then she sits back down chitchatting with you like nothing happened.'
 			
 				! WD: missing exit
 				act 'Finish':gt 'kafesvid', '3'
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		act 'Take him in your mouth':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend some time with licks and kisses, before you take his cock in your mouth. <<$telsob>> moves behind you, and pulls down your pants. She gives you pussy long slow licks, between little words of encouragement urging you to suck. A few minutes later <<$telsob>> takes charge again, saying: "I think you are ready, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Turn around and show this nice young man just how wet and willing that pussy is."'
+			'You spend some time with licks and kisses, before you take his cock in your mouth. <<$telsob>> moves behind you, and pulls down your pants. She gives your pussy long slow licks, between little words of encouragement urging you to suck. A few minutes later <<$telsob>> takes charge again, saying: "I think you are ready, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Turn around and show this nice young man just how wet and willing that pussy is."'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 				act 'Do as she says':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/18.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie on the table, with your legs spread wide. The man re-enters you, and pounds away at you pussy with abandon. <<$telsob>> puts a hand behind you, so you don''t get fucked right off the table. Then she reaches down to massage your clit, whispering words of encouragement in you ear. You are close to orgasm when <<$telsob>> stops the action and commands, "And now you will take it in the ass."'
+					'You lie on the table, with your legs spread wide. The man re-enters you, and pounds away at your pussy with abandon. <<$telsob>> puts a hand behind you, so you don''t get fucked right off the table. Then she reaches down to massage your clit, whispering words of encouragement in you ear. You are close to orgasm when <<$telsob>> stops the action and commands, "And now you will take it in the ass."'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/katjaEvDin.qsrc

@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 						'As you get naked she makes sure the harness is securely in place. She looks over at you and grins, swinging her hips back and forth making the dildo swing along with her movements, which makes her giggle. After she amuses herself for a bit she looks at you with a wicked grin and walks over.'
 						'She grabs you by your hair, not too hard but not very gentle either, pulls you off the bed and gets you down in front of her on your knees. Once you''re on your knees she pushes the head of the dildo against you lips and slips it into your mouth. With a firm hold on your hair she starts fucking your mouth. Soon she is ramming the dildo down your throat.'
 						'No matter how used to being throat fucked you are, she makes you gag. She buries it to the base in your throat and leaves it till you start to gag, then she goes back to roughly fucking your mouth. Each time she makes you gag you can hear her giggle, you can tell she is enjoying herself.'
-						'With tears running down your cheeks from being gagged and saliva dripping from you mouth, she finally pulls your head away by your hair. "Ok I think we got this wet enough with your saliva, don''t you? Ready for round two?"'
+						'With tears running down your cheeks from being gagged and saliva dripping from your mouth, she finally pulls your head away by your hair. "Ok I think we got this wet enough with your saliva, don''t you? Ready for round two?"'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/kompMFCoral.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if dildo = 1 or middildo = 1 or largedildo = 1 or bigdildo = 1 or extradildo = 1
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/accessories/computer/webcam/toys/midthroat'+rand(1,3)+'.mp4" ></video></center>'
-					'Sucking on the the head of the dildo seductively you push it into you mouth giving the toy a sensual blowjob.'
+					'Sucking on the the head of the dildo seductively you push it into your mouth giving the toy a sensual blowjob.'
 				end
 				if pcs_throat >= 25:
 					mfcclients = 0

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr.qsrc

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 						end
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						husband += 1
-						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissively oblige to do so. "Now open you mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
+						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissively oblige to do so. "Now open your mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
 
 						act 'Blowjob':
 							cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/lesbidomhouse.qsrc

@@ -1148,7 +1148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW8':
 			
 		elseif temp = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/sex/sub14.jpg"></center>'
-			'As soon as you approach Mistress she turns around and walks into the living room, expecting you to follow her. When you enter the living room, you see a collar and a leash lying on the couch. You quickly take off you clothes when she orders you to, and silently let her lock the collar around your neck. Then, she makes you get down onto your hands and knees and makes you follow her to the window.'
+			'As soon as you approach Mistress she turns around and walks into the living room, expecting you to follow her. When you enter the living room, you see a collar and a leash lying on the couch. You quickly take off your clothes when she orders you to, and silently let her lock the collar around your neck. Then, she makes you get down onto your hands and knees and makes you follow her to the window.'
 			'You crouch to the large window she indicated, and Mistress attaches the leash to the window frame. There''s no doubt as to what you are, for anyone who happens to look up. This is so humiliating!'
 			'Meanwhile, Mistress makes herself comfortable on the couch with a glass of wine. She leafs through a magazine, occasionally glancing at you to make sure your posture is good.'
 			'For the next 20 minutes, not much happens. About twenty people happen to look up and spot you by accident... several of them snapping pictures on their phones, undoubtedly to show their friends later. At one point two teenagers, finding your predicament hilarious, began pointing up and calling you out when passers-by were near them, drawing more attention to you. You hear a soft snicker behind you from Mistress, when she notices you shifting uncomfortably. Luckily the boys got bored after a few minutes and left. Your face is reddened by your intense blushing, you really hope no one you know walks by and sees you dressed up as a slave on display! What would they think!?'
@@ -1160,7 +1160,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW8':
 		elseif temp = 2:	
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/sex/sub15.jpg"></center>'
 			'As soon as you approach Mistress she turns around and walks into the living room, expecting you to follow her. When you enter the living room, you can''t help but notice a large dildo with a suction cup lying on the couch.'
-			'You quickly take off you clothes when she orders you to, and follow her to the window. She has the dildo in her hand.'
+			'You quickly take off your clothes when she orders you to, and follow her to the window. She has the dildo in her hand.'
 			'"On your knees", she commands when you get there. You drop to your knees where she indicates, and she sizes you up for a second before sticking the suction cup of the dildo against the window, in plain sight of anyone who happens to be walking through the street.'
 			'"Show the people of St Petersburg what you have learned so far", Mistress says a bit ambiguously, with a devious twinkle in her eyes. Training a slave is well and good... but getting to show off a slave''s obedience and submission to a crowd, that must be one of the best things in life.'
 			'You hesitantly look at the dildo for a second, blushing furiously. What if someone sees you? What if someone <i>you know</i> sees you!? You live in this very building!'

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'a':
 				clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotc'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-				'The man jerks back, and stops molesting you. A few moments later, you can feel something wet seep through you clothes. After a few more seconds, the guy moves away.'
+				'The man jerks back, and stops molesting you. A few moments later, you can feel something wet seep through your clothes. After a few more seconds, the guy moves away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'

+ 2 - 2
locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc

@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'play_game_wish1':
 		elseif zz_stage = 20:
 			'She turns again looking in your direction. Touching herself, she slowly starts removing the bra.'
 			'Playfully spinning, she slips her bra off. Covers her breasts with a hand and after waving her bra around, throws it in your lap.'
-			'Vicky''s little show is making you more turned on, and when the bra falls in your lap, you feel you panties getting wet.'
+			'Vicky''s little show is making you more turned on, and when the bra falls in your lap, you feel your panties getting wet.'
 		elseif zz_stage = 21:
 			'She once again grabs her panties and pulls them down, this time exposing her wonderful pussy. After giving you a quick glance she pulls them back!'
 			'After teasing you for a while she grabs her panties, pulling them down, this time dropping them almost to the floor.'
@@ -998,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'case_gift':
 							'You can hear her clearly now. Vicky doesn''t seem to mind that you were spying on them.'
 							'Dangling his legs in the air, she grabs a large white Teddy bear and presses it to her.'
 							'"Since you don''t seem to love me, my new boyfriend will have to do instead." She says and pulls out a... dildo.'
-							'You mouth drops open. "This is the gift her mother gave her. A fake cock... Her mother gave her a dildo as a gift!!! Can you imagine if my mother would have given me a dildo as a gift..."'
+							'your mouth drops open. "This is the gift her mother gave her. A fake cock... Her mother gave her a dildo as a gift!!! Can you imagine if my mother would have given me a dildo as a gift..."'
 
 							act 'Further':
 								*clr

+ 2 - 2
locations/mirasex.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. You mouth filled with her taste and her scent filling the air you lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. your mouth filled with her taste and her scent filling the air you lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 15
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ $textlick[1] ='Spreading your labia with her fingers, she licks clumsily, her in
 $textlick[2] ='She timidly kisses your labia, sometimes touching gently touching your clitoris. '
 $textlick[3] ='She carefully moves her inexperienced tongue from top to bottom, sometimes gently touching your clitoris. '
 $textlick[4] ='Spreading your labia with her fingers, she licks skillfully, swiping her tongue across the length of your pussy and tickling your clitoris. '
-$textlick[5] ='She kisses you pussy, sometimes trying to penetrate a naughty finger in your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina '
+$textlick[5] ='She kisses your pussy, sometimes trying to penetrate a naughty finger in your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina '
 $textlick[6] ='She quickly but skillfully licks your pussy from top to bottom, sometimes making a circular motion, and gently touching your clitoris. '
 $textlick[7] ='Your face buried between her legs, your lick clumsily, swiping your inexperienced tongue over her vagina, '
 $textlick[8] ='You timidly kisses your labia, sometimes attempting to finger your clitoris as well. '

+ 1 - 1
locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_1to9':
 				if mitkarand = 5:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjcum1.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You are sucking his cock fiercely until suddenly warm cum starts to fill your mouth. Surprised, you pull his cock out of you mouth which continues to shoot cum onto your face and breasts.'
+					'You are sucking his cock fiercely until suddenly warm cum starts to fill your mouth. Surprised, you pull his cock out of your mouth which continues to shoot cum onto your face and breasts.'
 					'He makes you lick his dick clean before he leaves you to go back to drinking with Kolyamba and Vasyan. After a little while you sober up enough to get dressed and go sit back by the boys.'
 					
 					minut += 5

+ 3 - 3
locations/mitkasex.qsrc

@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadHandsCum2':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagadsexhandscum2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are Lie on the ground. The guys feel the approaching orgasm and put your hands on their members, and told to finish them off. You went to work and were soon rewarded for your diligence, they groaned and you felt your body get showered in hot cum.'
+	'You are lying on the ground. The guys feel the approaching orgasm and put your hands on their members, and you''re told to finish them off. You went to work and were soon rewarded for your diligence, they groaned and you felt your body get showered in hot cum.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if kosmetica <= 0:'After the guys went about their business and you are left to clean yourself up.'
@@ -852,7 +852,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadHandsCum1':
 	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagadsexhandscum1.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are lie on the ground. <<$boydesc>>, feeling the approaching orgasm, pulls out of you tells you to jerk him off. You went to work and were soon rewarded for your diligence, he groaned and you felt hot drops of sperm spray on your body.'
+	'You are lying on the ground. <<$boydesc>>, feeling the approaching orgasm, pulls out of you and tells you to jerk him off. You went to work and were soon rewarded for your diligence, he groaned and you felt hot drops of sperm spray on your body.'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -2050,7 +2050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forestAnal3_1':
 	mitboysex += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaforestsexanal3.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You bend over as the guys jockey to fuck you ass first...'
+	'You bend over as the guys jockey to fuck your ass first...'
 
 	if temp_ms = 1:
 		if boyAsexa = 0: boyAsexa = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 								minut += 30
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/clothes_shopping.jpg"></center>'
-								'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings you clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
+								'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings your clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
 
 								act 'Try on the clothes she brings you':
 									*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichGala.qsrc

@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'slaveImplant':
 		'Gala returns about two hours later. Without another word she grabs her cane again and continues hitting you. Once again you are back to screaming and begging.'
 		'Once she is finally done you doubt that you will ever be able to sit without extreme pain again.'
 		'"Don''t forget this lesson, slave."'
-		'She unties you and then leaves you alone. You have quite some troubles putting you clothes back on, since even the softes touch feels like molten metal.'
+		'She unties you and then leaves you alone. You have quite some troubles putting your clothes back on, since even the softes touch feels like molten metal.'
 		pain['asscheeks'] = 100
 		nichGalaImplantCount = 0
 		nichGalaImplantDay = daystart

+ 1 - 1
locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'seduction':
 						act 'Strip down to your panties':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/seduction6.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull all your clothes off until all you are left wearing are you panties. You continue to do poses for him as he keeps taking your pictures. "Now please remove your panties." He asks you, you reach down and start to pull your panties down as well.'
+							'You pull all your clothes off until all you are left wearing are your panties. You continue to do poses for him as he keeps taking your pictures. "Now please remove your panties." He asks you, you reach down and start to pull your panties down as well.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Strip naked': gt 'olu', 'seduction_strip'

+ 1 - 1
locations/park_walkevents.qsrc

@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6a':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/event/rape/2.jpg"></center>'
-	'He''s huge and intimidating, you decide it''s better to do as he tells you, so can get out of the situation alive, hence you take off you clothes and a cold breeze makes your nipples rock hard immediately.'
+	'He''s huge and intimidating, you decide it''s better to do as he tells you, so can get out of the situation alive, hence you take off your clothes and a cold breeze makes your nipples rock hard immediately.'
 	'The man is quite enjoying himself, licking his lips as he keeps on observing you taking off your clothes.'
 
 	act 'Now what?':

+ 1 - 1
locations/parksvid.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/park/3.jpg"></center>'
 			'<<$telsob>> and you walk up to the guy, she leans against you and whispers in your ear. "Well ask."'
-			'"Is it true what they say? That you''re not suppose to wear anything at all under a kilt?" you ask'
+			'"Is it true what they say? That you''re not supposed to wear anything at all under a kilt?" you ask'
 			'"You want to know, look and see." He replied with a smile.'
 			'"Do you want to take a look <<$pcs_nickname>>?" asks <<$telsob>>'
 			'"Go ahead and look yourself." You answer.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/party_boys.qsrc

@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'out':
 		end
 	elseif i = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_4_11.jpg"></center>'
-		'Out on the street, one of the guys immediately grabs you from behind, and tells you to bend over. You obediently follow his order as he spits in his hand and rubs his saliva all over your pussy. His member easily enters you and he brazenly grabs you by the hips and starts pumping you hard balls deep, completely unconcerned if you are enjoying yourself or not. The guy spanks you, his hand coming down in sweeping strokes on your ass, as he drives his dick in you pussy. You feel yourself getting wet from the forceful fucking and begin to rhythmically wag you ass enjoying every movement while holding two of the other guy''s members in your hands. Not quite done the first guy helps you up.'
+		'Out on the street, one of the guys immediately grabs you from behind, and tells you to bend over. You obediently follow his order as he spits in his hand and rubs his saliva all over your pussy. His member easily enters you and he brazenly grabs you by the hips and starts pumping you hard balls deep, completely unconcerned if you are enjoying yourself or not. The guy spanks you, his hand coming down in sweeping strokes on your ass, as he drives his dick in your pussy. You feel yourself getting wet from the forceful fucking and begin to rhythmically wag your ass enjoying every movement while holding two of the other guy''s members in your hands. Not quite done the first guy helps you up.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gost_home':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boys_party_gost_9_5.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As soon as you get in the room, ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Roma and Rex', 'the guys') + ' begin to undress and gently caress you. You feel like the belle of the ball as they passionately kiss you and start to lick you ass and pussy at the same time. After taking care of you for a long time, their dicks are both erect and the guys look expectantly at you.'
+	'As soon as you get in the room, ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Roma and Rex', 'the guys') + ' begin to undress and gently caress you. You feel like the belle of the ball as they passionately kiss you and start to lick your ass and pussy at the same time. After taking care of you for a long time, their dicks are both erect and the guys look expectantly at you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Give them a handjob': gt 'party_boys', 'gost_home_hand'

+ 2 - 2
locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'male_gopnik_beer':
 							*nl
 							'They follow behind you, laughing and talking seeming to enjoy the view. Occasionally a car drives by, the headlights lighting up your naked body. You notice a couple of people see you, their reactions range from disgust to interest but none of them approach or say anything.'
 							*nl
-							'Just before you get back to where you started, you notice you can''t hear the boys anymore. You turn back to look and they are gone. They took your clothes and left, you start back hoping they just stopped for a moment, but when you see your purse hanging from a handle of one of the garage doors you know they ditched you and took you clothes. Gathering up your purse you know you need to somehow make it back to the apartments without getting spotted.'
+							'Just before you get back to where you started, you notice you can''t hear the boys anymore. You turn back to look and they are gone. They took your clothes and left, you start back hoping they just stopped for a moment, but when you see your purse hanging from a handle of one of the garage doors you know they ditched you and took your clothes. Gathering up your purse you know you need to somehow make it back to the apartments without getting spotted.'
 							act 'Go home':gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'homenaked'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1024,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_1':
 						*nl
 						'They follow behind you, laughing and talking seeming to enjoy the view. Occasionally a car drives by, the headlights lighting up your naked body. You notice a couple of people see you, their reactions range from disgust to interest but none of them approach or say anything.'
 						*nl
-						'Just before you get back to where you started, you notice you can''t hear the girls anymore. You turn back to look and they are gone. They took your clothes and left, you start back hoping they just stopped for a moment, but when you see your purse hanging from a handle of one of the garage doors you know they ditched you and took you clothes. Gathering up your purse you know you need to somehow make it back to the apartments with out getting spotted.'
+						'Just before you get back to where you started, you notice you can''t hear the girls anymore. You turn back to look and they are gone. They took your clothes and left, you start back hoping they just stopped for a moment, but when you see your purse hanging from a handle of one of the garage doors you know they ditched you and took your clothes. Gathering up your purse you know you need to somehow make it back to the apartments with out getting spotted.'
 						act 'Go home':gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'homenaked'
 					end
 				end

+ 10 - 10
locations/porn_view_strings.qsrc

@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_8_stretched_both': $result = 'Guys are amazed at your holes
 <font color="navy"><i>— Not for you. Do not like do not watch, and go home.</i></font>
 <font color="maroon"><i>No no... All right, everything`s cool.</i></font>'
 
-if $args[0] = 'view_8_stretched_anus': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>- <<$pcs_nickname>>, you ass did?</i></font>
+if $args[0] = 'view_8_stretched_anus': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>- <<$pcs_nickname>>, your ass did?</i></font>
 <font color="navy"><i>— What`s wrong with her?</i></font>
 <font color="maroon"><i>— Hole. There is the hand, probably to put you?</i></font>
 <font color="navy"><i>And not only. Don`t like? I then went.</i></font>
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_14tanga': $result = 'You stay in some little panties.
 <font color="maroon"><i>- <<$pcs_nickname>>, actually that`s not fair.</i></font>
 <font color="navy"><i>— What?</i></font>
 <font color="maroon"><i>— We are here for a long time already without panties, and you in shorts.</i></font>
-<font color="navy"><i>— Yeah, but you top it is, and I bare Tits.</i></font>
+<font color="navy"><i>— Yeah, but your top it is, and I bare Tits.</i></font>
 Guys, as a team, take off the remaining clothes.
 <font color="navy"><i>— Nuuu... and there is nothing to argue</i></font>, "you say, taking off panties.'
 
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ Kolka, red as cancer, begins to apologize to you, stroking your hair.
 <font color="navy"><i>I`m not a whore! And you sheep! I`m with you, as friends, and you... I will not come anymore...</i></font>
 Until guys realize the seriousness of the situation and not a pleasant prospect to remain without sweet and they start vying with each other to apologise. You for decency broke a bit, and then you got the idea:
 <font color="navy"><i>— You will be forgiven if I pussy lick, and I did not finish even. Only the mood ruined everything.</i></font>
-<font color="maroon"><i>— Well, who screwed up, he let you pussy and licks.</i></font>
+<font color="maroon"><i>— Well, who screwed up, he let your pussy and licks.</i></font>
 You get comfortable on the couch, pulling his knees bent legs to his chest, and nick begins to correct his wrongdoing.'
 
 if $args[0] = 'view_16_next_wdays': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>— What kind of thread you got there?</i></font> — surprise asks Kolka.
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_16_next_wdays_virgin': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>Yo
 <font color="navy"><i>— Small. Like a virgin is impossible! Let`s not get distracted!</i></font>'
 
 if $args[0] = 'view_16_next2': $result = 'He licks clumsily, but you tell him how to make you nicer and it slowly goes smoothly.
-Others, looking at you, too excited. You grabbed Misha`s cock and began to jerk off, but when you want to take a member of Gandoca, he got up and put your dick in you mouth.
+Others, looking at you, too excited. You grabbed Misha`s cock and began to jerk off, but when you want to take a member of Gandoca, he got up and put your dick in your mouth.
 <font color="navy"><i>— Only warn when to stop going</i></font> you say to him.
 Zhendos nodded and you took his organ in my mouth. Holding the cock with one hand, you began to slowly suck him, taking deeper.'
 
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_17_next': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>- <<$pcs_nickna
 After a while they end.'
 
 if $args[0] = 'view_17_next_rand': $result = 'You can not finish and ask the guys to help you.
-<<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> starts to lick you pussy, gently parting the lips on her cunt with fingers.'
+<<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> starts to lick your pussy, gently parting the lips on her cunt with fingers.'
 
 if $args[0] = 'view_17_fin': $result = 'After a while you end up too. Take a shower and get dressed and go home.'
 
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ You begin to feel the throbbing member, ready to be discharged, but only more en
 You release the member from his mouth, but continued to hold his hand and swallow what has accumulated in your mouth. Then lick the remnants of sperm with deciduous member.
 You sit on the couch.
 <font color="navy"><i>Boys next while I suck, lick me.</i></font>
-While <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>> Fucks you in the mouth, <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> licking you pussy, and <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> played with your Breasts.
+While <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>> Fucks you in the mouth, <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> licking your pussy, and <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> played with your Breasts.
 <font color="maroon"><i>I come</i></font>, warns <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>>.
 You begin to feel the throbbing member, ready to be discharged, but only more energetic start to sit down on him, not letting go of his mouth. In the next moment you get a lot of salty liquid, but do not let dick and trying to milk it to the end, helping hand.
 You release the member from his mouth, but continued to hold his hand and swallow what has accumulated in your mouth. Then lick the remnants of sperm with deciduous member.
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_20_wdays': $result = '<font color="maroon"><i>- <<$pcs_nickn
 if $args[0] = 'view_20_end': $result = '<<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> played with your Breasts.
 After a while you begin to feel the pulsing member is ready to discharge, but only more energetic start to sit down on him, not letting go of his mouth. In the next moment you get a lot of salty liquid, but do not let dick and trying to milk it to the end, helping hand.
 You release the member from his mouth, but continued to hold his hand and swallow what has accumulated in your mouth. Then lick the remnants of sperm with deciduous member.
-The following <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>> Fucks you in the mouth, <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> licking you pussy, and <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> played with your Breasts.
+The following <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>> Fucks you in the mouth, <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> licking your pussy, and <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> played with your Breasts.
 After a while you begin to feel the pulsing member is ready to discharge, but only more energetic start to sit down on him, not letting go of his mouth. In the next moment you get a lot of salty liquid, but do not let dick and trying to milk it to the end, helping hand.
 Latest to your mouth is attached <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>>, and your tongue for your pussy provides <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>>, while <<$_zz_boy_arr[1]>> explores the nooks and crannies of your body.
 You and your company lie tired, but happy.
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ But <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> could no longer hold back and pulled out a cock, you cum
 <font color="navy"><i>— You will fuck me too? — you turn to him — <font color="navy"><i>come on, I`ll raise him good</i></font>.
 You take his cock in her mouth and quickly bring it to firing position. Then stand cancer and invitingly curved.
 <font color="navy"><i>— Come with me.</i></font>
-<<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> comes into you and starts fucking. Due to the fact that he had cum, the sex with him lasted longer than with other guys. You even managed to discharge. But, in the end, and he pulled out a member and cum on you ass.
+<<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> comes into you and starts fucking. Due to the fact that he had cum, the sex with him lasted longer than with other guys. You even managed to discharge. But, in the end, and he pulled out a member and cum on your ass.
 <font color="navy"><i>"Boys, you are great. Just rubbed me a bit, it seems.</i></font>
 You go in the shower.
 After a shower, you dress and go home.'
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_24': $result = 'He prepares it and his cock, lubricating tho
 <font color="navy"><i>— Come on, come on... Faster... Fuck me...</i></font>
 <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> Fucks you in the mouth, and <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>> squeezes your Breasts, periodically pulling and lightly twisting your nipples sticking out.
 After <<$_zz_boy_arr[0]>> pulls you in the mouth, takes his place <<$_zz_boy_arr[2]>>.
-After a while you lie tired, but happy. Guys, too tired. You feel that of the priests, begins to flow semen, and run to the shower. There you ass thoroughly washed, rinsed, then dress up and go home.'
+After a while you lie tired, but happy. Guys, too tired. You feel that of the priests, begins to flow semen, and run to the shower. There your ass thoroughly washed, rinsed, then dress up and go home.'
 
 if $args[0] = 'view_27_pain': $result = '<font color="navy"><i>— Brush better, and then something aches I have.</i></font>'
 
@@ -775,7 +775,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'view_no_condom': $result = '<font color="navy"><i>— Only pull o
 ! condom
 if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on0': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums in the condom.'
 ! cum on
-if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on1': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums in you pussy.'
+if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on1': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums in your pussy.'
 if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on2': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums on his back.'
 if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on3': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums you in the ass.'
 if $args[0] = 'view_cum_on4': $result = 'After a while, the guy cums in your mouth.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/reks.qsrc

@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sms':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/phone/smsrex7.jpg"></center>'
-				'you took off you clothes and took a picture wearing little panties'
+				'you took off your clothes and took a picture wearing little panties'
 				act 'Send': gt 'reks', 'sms_end2'
 			end
 		elseif smsForRex = 8:

+ 1 - 1
locations/shoplifting.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You comply and stand up, pressed against the wall, he begins grabbing you clothes wanting to remove them. While he''s doing this you hear him say, "I want you to touch yourself." You prepare yourself by taking a deep breath and slowly slide down your hand towards your panties. As you finally reach the clit, you slowly begin touching it, biting your lip as your body reacts to the soft touches.'
+		'You comply and stand up, pressed against the wall, he begins grabbing your clothes wanting to remove them. While he''s doing this you hear him say, "I want you to touch yourself." You prepare yourself by taking a deep breath and slowly slide down your hand towards your panties. As you finally reach the clit, you slowly begin touching it, biting your lip as your body reacts to the soft touches.'
 		'The security guard is satisfyingly observing you, rubbing his cock throughout his pants. He''s clearly aroused and you fear a bit what might come next, but you manage to keep focus as you know this will seal your faith.'
 		'"Wonder if your panties are soaked yet, girl?" he asks.'
 

+ 5 - 5
locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_sex_room_ev1_2':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/bigroom/sex/1_9.jpg"></center>'
 					gs 'arousal','vaginal',10,'dick[2]','group','gangbang'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Vitek and Dan stop spit roasting you as Vasily stay down beside you as he waited for his turn, and now you dutifully show him that he was not forgotten. Short sharp breaths are all that escape you mouth as you lower yourself onto <<dick[2]>>cm <<$dick_girth[2]>> cock and ride him with an urgent need.'
+					'Vitek and Dan stop spit roasting you as Vasily stay down beside you as he waited for his turn, and now you dutifully show him that he was not forgotten. Short sharp breaths are all that escape your mouth as you lower yourself onto <<dick[2]>>cm <<$dick_girth[2]>> cock and ride him with an urgent need.'
 
 					act 'Take a breather':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_sex_room_ev1_2':
 								fat -= 1
 								gs 'arousal','vaginal',10,'dick[3]','group','gangbang'
 								gs 'arousal','anal',-5,'dick[1]','group','gangbang'
-								'You mount Vitek, while he is laying on the sofa. As you slide him into you, he leans up suckles at your nipple. Just as you were start to enjoy this pleasant surprise, Dan abruptly drives his <<dick[1]>>cm <<$dick_girth[1]>> cock inside you ass. You let out a loud grunt, but it''s more from the surprise, than any pain.'
+								'You mount Vitek, while he is laying on the sofa. As you slide him into you, he leans up suckles at your nipple. Just as you were start to enjoy this pleasant surprise, Dan abruptly drives his <<dick[1]>>cm <<$dick_girth[1]>> cock inside your ass. You let out a loud grunt, but it''s more from the surprise, than any pain.'
 								'By the time Vasily worked himself close enough to allow you to wrap your lips around his cock then there was only pleasure.'
 								gs 'stat'
 
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_sex_room_ev1_2':
 										gs 'arousal','bj',-10,'dick[1]','group','gangbang'
 										gs 'arousal','vaginal',-10,'dick[2]','group','gangbang'
 										gs 'stat'
-										'Eventually Dan decides to take the initiative, or rather take your head in his hands. He forces his cock into the side of you mouth stretching your mouth to it''s limits. Then he sinks halfway down your throat and slowly pulls back out. He orders you to stick out your tongue and begins to slap his rock hard cock against your face. With a groan of appreciation Dan says: "<<$pcs_nickname>> you have become such a good little cocksucker. It wasn''t so long ago that you couldn''t even give a decent hand-job. I think you might even deserve a reward."'
+										'Eventually Dan decides to take the initiative, or rather take your head in his hands. He forces his cock into the side of your mouth stretching your mouth to it''s limits. Then he sinks halfway down your throat and slowly pulls back out. He orders you to stick out your tongue and begins to slap his rock hard cock against your face. With a groan of appreciation Dan says: "<<$pcs_nickname>> you have become such a good little cocksucker. It wasn''t so long ago that you couldn''t even give a decent hand-job. I think you might even deserve a reward."'
 										'Before you can respond Dan rewards you by violently shoving his cock down your throat until your <<$lip1>> lips are wrapped around the base.'
 
 										act 'Work it':
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunken_sex':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/bigroom/drunk_ev/sex/sex'+rand(1,22)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'gg_devst_deflor'
-		'You get halfway to your feet, before you stumble back to the floor. Unannounced one of the boys slides his cock into you from behind. Your gasp is cut short when someone else''s cock rudely fills you mouth, and hits the back of your throat. As you gag and gasp for air, it all becomes a blur. The boys take turns using your young body from end-to-end.'
+		'You get halfway to your feet, before you stumble back to the floor. Unannounced one of the boys slides his cock into you from behind. Your gasp is cut short when someone else''s cock rudely fills your mouth, and hits the back of your throat. As you gag and gasp for air, it all becomes a blur. The boys take turns using your young body from end-to-end.'
 		'As time passes, their rough treatment stops hurting and even starts to feel pretty good. You encourage whoever it is behind to keep it up by grinding back into his pelvis.'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 
@@ -1444,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_lern_sex_yes':
 		else
 			gs 'arousal','anal',10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/vasya/sex/shuglinhome/lern/ev<<lern_imgset>>_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'He rubs his fingers over your anus for a bit, then he slides in one finger in your ass and fucks you with it, shortly it is joined by a second finger. You moan in pleasure as he fingers you ass. Pulling out his finger''s you feel the head of his cock rubbing against your asshole, with a slight grunt he forces his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass. You wince and cry out a little in a mixture of pleasure and pain as he says. "I call this one, how to be a good little buttslut."'
+			'He rubs his fingers over your anus for a bit, then he slides in one finger in your ass and fucks you with it, shortly it is joined by a second finger. You moan in pleasure as he fingers your ass. Pulling out his finger''s you feel the head of his cock rubbing against your asshole, with a slight grunt he forces his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass. You wince and cry out a little in a mixture of pleasure and pain as he says. "I call this one, how to be a good little buttslut."'
 			'Then he starts slowly fucking your ass, giving you time to adjust to the feeling.'
 			'The pain fades and is replaced solely by pleasure.'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr.qsrc

@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						husband += 1
 						SUB += 1
-						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissively oblige to do so. "Now open you mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
+						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissively oblige to do so. "Now open your mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
 
 						act 'Blowjob':
 							cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 						end
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						husband += 1
-						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissivly oblige to do so. "Now open you mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
+						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissivly oblige to do so. "Now open your mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
 
 						act 'Blowjob':
 							cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/skverdin.qsrc

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ $d_pp_bj = {
 			'<<$boydesc>> suddenly took out a member of your mouth and began to say a word to lift you and expand back to him'
 			dynamic $d_pp_sex
 		elseif tiprand >= 70:
-			'<<$boydesc>> whispers to you "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you mouth is not tired? can perepihnemsya?"'
+			'<<$boydesc>> whispers to you "<<$pcs_nickname>>, your mouth is not tired? can perepihnemsya?"'
 			dynamic $d_pp_sex
 			dynamic $d_pp_bjcum
 		else

+ 1 - 1
locations/sny.qsrc

@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A1'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/sex/pett2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After he rubs your clits, you start moaning. You feel your pussy getting wet and you are use he can feel your wetness through your panties, after several minutes of this. He gets up and pulls you around to the front of the couch, he turns you to face the couch with your back to him. He pulls down your panties and pushes you down on your knees and bends you over till your body is resting on the couch. He slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your wet pussy and starts fucking you slow and gentle.'
+		'After he rubs your clits, you start moaning. You feel your pussy getting wet and he can feel your wetness through your panties after several minutes of this. He gets up and pulls you around to the front of the couch, he turns you to face the couch with your back to him. He pulls down your panties and pushes you down on your knees and bends you over till your body is resting on the couch. He slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your wet pussy and starts fucking you slow and gentle.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		minut -= 5

+ 1 - 1
locations/soniadisco.qsrc

@@ -1570,7 +1570,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homesex':
 					'She pulls your clothes aside and reaches for your panties when she doesn''t find any she smiles at you. "Dirty girl." She she starts to kiss her way down your stomach away from your breasts towards you waist.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/home/walkhome/walksex4.jpg"></center>'
-					'She pulls you clothes aside until she gets to your panties, she gentle starts pulling them off, once she has them fully off she tosses them aside and starts kissing your ankle and slowly starts to kiss her way back up your legs towards your inner thighs.'
+					'She pulls your clothes aside until she gets to your panties, she gentle starts pulling them off, once she has them fully off she tosses them aside and starts kissing your ankle and slowly starts to kiss her way back up your legs towards your inner thighs.'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'

+ 4 - 4
locations/stat_display.qsrc

@@ -272,16 +272,16 @@ else
 end
 
 if sick = 1:
-	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are have a mild cold.'
+	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are having a mild cold.'
 	$stat_sick_msg = 'This is not good, a tickle in the throat and a little runny nose.'
 elseif sick > 0 and sick < 24:
-	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are have a cold.'
+	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are having a cold.'
 	$stat_sick_msg = 'You have chills. You nose is running and throat is raw, you cough and sneeze - it looks like you got a cold.'
 elseif sick > 0 and sick < 48:
-	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are have a serious cold.'
+	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are having a serious cold.'
 	$stat_sick_msg = 'You have a fever. Your nose is clogged, it hurts to swallow - throat aches. You continually cough and sneeze - it looks like your cold is pretty bad.'
 elseif sick > 0 and sick < 72:
-	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are have the flu.'
+	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You have the flu.'
 	$stat_sick_msg = 'You have a high fever. You have a stuffy nose, sore head and throat, your coughing badly - it looks like you got a strong cold. Maybe it''s the flu.'
 elseif sick > 0:
 	$stat_sick_tooltip = 'You are seriously sick.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/sex/analo5.jpg"></center>'
 							'When he pulls out he starts to use his hands to help you roll over as he says "Roll over and get on your knee''s I want to fuck that pretty little ass of yours now." With his help you quickly roll over and get on your elbows and knees, with your ass up for him. You feel him press his dick against your anus before he slides it in. When you tense up a bit, he stops to give you a moment to get us to it before he slides it the rest of the way in.'
-							'He slowly works his way balls deep into your ass, taking his time. It is sweet of him but not really necessary, you are use to being fucked and you are here for the money. Moaning loudly, like you are loving it, you know guys like that. He picks up the pace and starts fucking your ass harder.'
+							'He slowly works his way balls deep into your ass, taking his time. It is sweet of him but not really necessary, you are used to being fucked and you are here for the money. Moaning loudly, like you are loving it, you know guys like that. He picks up the pace and starts fucking your ass harder.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'prostitution'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Finish him':

+ 2 - 2
locations/trainBimbo.qsrc

@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos333':
 	stat['bj'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/bimbo.strip'+rand(0,6)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You start rubbing your clit as the guy fucks your mouth and throat. After a bit you are completely naked, once you he pulls you up and pushes you are he pushes you down on the floor where you sprawl before him, you clothes laying around you, as he says.'
+	'You start rubbing your clit as the guy fucks your mouth and throat. After a bit you are completely naked. He pulls you up and pushes you down on the floor where you sprawl before him, your clothes lying around you.'
 	if rand(0,1) = 0:
 		'"You''re hot and give great head, but I think I want to try that tight little ass of yours."'
 		act 'Next':gt 'trainbimbo', 'pos3333'
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos3334':
 	if bimbo_rand1 >= 10:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/sex/toiletvag3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'He turns your face to the wall and enters your pussy from behind. You are not prepared for this, it hurts as he forces himself into you. You try to pull away but his quite strong hands hold you in place. Unable to pull away you start rubbing your clit and getting yourself wet.'
 	'He abuses your poor vagina while he lets loose variable vulgar comments to you. He uses use for a long time, and to your surprise once you get yourself wet the pain gradually starts to recede, you begin to enjoy his rough handling of your body, and you begin to moan softly.'
-	'"So, you actually like it slut? If you visit here again, you can be a my toilet whore any time, ha ha!" With these words began to twitch and you can feel his spurts of hot sperm shooting deep into your ass. Once he has finished cumming in you ass, he pushes your head against the wall while he pulls his dick out of you and wipes it off on your butt cheeks, with a final laugh he lets you go and leaves.'
+	'"So, you actually like it slut? If you visit here again, you can be a my toilet whore any time, ha ha!" With these words began to twitch and you can feel his spurts of hot sperm shooting deep into your ass. Once he has finished cumming in your ass, he pushes your head against the wall while he pulls his dick out of you and wipes it off on your butt cheeks, with a final laugh he lets you go and leaves.'
 	if horand > pcs_horny:
 		pcs_horny += 10 & 'You have not managed to cum.'
 	else

+ 1 - 1
locations/vann.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'v4':
 	stat['mast'] += 1
 	if pcs_inhib < 30:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/sex/bathroom/v9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You spray water from the faucet directly onto your pussy and let the jet of warm water caress you. Getting further into it, you push your fingers inside you pussy while the water takes care of your clit. You''re completely absorbed in your masturbation until you hear someone turned on the faucet in the sink. Opening your eyes, you see a guy standing at the sink, looking at you and grinning.'
+	'You spray water from the faucet directly onto your pussy and let the jet of warm water caress you. Getting further into it, you push your fingers inside your pussy while the water takes care of your clit. You''re completely absorbed in your masturbation until you hear someone turned on the faucet in the sink. Opening your eyes, you see a guy standing at the sink, looking at you and grinning.'
 	'"Sorry, don''t let me interrupt. I''m just enjoying the show!" he says without looking away from your pussy, your fingers still tightly jammed inside it.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self'

+ 1 - 1
locations/worksalon.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									cla
 									*clr
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/s4.jpg"></center>'
-									'After she has you good and worked up, you give her a new order. "Now lick my ass." Her tongue slides up from you pussy and she starts to lick your asshole with her tongue.'
+									'After she has you good and worked up, you give her a new order. "Now lick my ass." Her tongue slides up from your pussy and she starts to lick your asshole with her tongue.'
 									'Moments later she slides her tongue inside of your ass while her hand massages your clit. You moan louder, your pussy becoming soaking wet as Masha massages your pussy and tongue fucks your ass.'
 									'Within minutes you feel your body spasm and you orgasm hard. After your orgasm as you catch your breath, Masha licks all your pussy juices off you, leaving you clean.'