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Mansion text edits from Blatte

KevinSmarts 6 年之前
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共有 11 個文件被更改,包括 120 次插入115 次删除
  1. 5 5
      locations/yban
  2. 4 4
      locations/ybedr
  3. 2 2
      locations/ybib
  4. 2 2
      locations/ydet
  5. 3 3
      locations/ykabinet
  6. 8 8
      locations/ykamin
  7. 22 18
      locations/ykuh
  8. 13 12
      locations/ymans
  9. 57 57
      locations/youplace
  10. 3 3
      locations/ysport
  11. 1 1
      locations/yvan

+ 5 - 5
locations/yban

@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ else
 	bcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
 	lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 end
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bath</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Sauna</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yban.jpg"></center>'
 
-if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':act 'Go to your house':minut += 5 & gt 'youplace'
-act 'Go into Gym': minut += 5 & gt 'ysport'
+if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':act 'Walk back to the house':minut += 5 & gt 'youplace'
+act 'Go to the gym': minut += 5 & gt 'ysport'
 
 if saunaday ! daystart:
-	act 'Use Sauna':
+	act 'Use the sauna':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
 		fat -= 10
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if saunaday ! daystart:
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sauna/sau.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour relaxing in the heat of the sauna, having a cool shower and dressing. You feel revitalised.'
+		'You spend an hour relaxing in the heat of the sauna. You take a shower after you''re done to cool down and get dressed. You feel revitalised.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'yban'
 	end

+ 4 - 4
locations/ybedr

@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@ $location_type = 'private'
 $locclass = 'bedr'
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">House</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Bedroom</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+'<center>Your large bedroom with all the necessities that a modern bedroom has.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[4] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[4] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[4] = 2:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ybedr.jpg"></center>'
-	'Bright and beautiful room, with a nice <a href="exec:gt ''bed'', ''start''">double bed</a>. Near the entrance is a modern wardrobe(where you can <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe''">organize your clothes</a> or <a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''">pick something to wear</a>). You have a <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store''">chest</a> at the end of your bed where you can store some clothes.. Against the wall are a table and a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>'
-	'In the bottom of your wardrobe you have <a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''select''">your shoes</a> and next to the wardrobe is a dresser you keep <a href="exec:gt ''underwear'', ''dresser''">your underwear</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''purses'', ''view_purse_list''">purses</a> in.'
+	'It''s a bright and beautiful room, with a large <a href="exec:gt ''bed'', ''start''">continental bed</a>. On one of the sides there''s an entrance to a walk-in closet(where you can <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe''">organize your clothes</a> or <a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''">pick something to wear</a>). You have a <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store''">chest</a> at the end of your bed where you can store some clothes.'
+	'There''s a table and a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> placed in one of the corners. All of <a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''select''">your shoes</a> are neatly organized in the walk-in closet and you have a dresser where you keep <a href="exec:gt ''underwear'', ''dresser''">your underwear</a> in.'
 end
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'

+ 2 - 2
locations/ybib

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detached</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Library</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Library</font></b></center>'
+'<center>A huge collection of books are neatly placed on the bookshelves.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[10] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[10] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/ydet

@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ $loc = $CURLOC
 $locclass = 'bedr'
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detached</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Children</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Nursery</font></b></center>'
+'<center>The nursery room, that is neatly designed, only the best for your child.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[9] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[9] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'

+ 3 - 3
locations/ykabinet

@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Study</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Cabinet</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Work room</font></b></center>'
+'<center>Your work room where you spend most of the time signing important papers and working on your computer.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[12] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[12] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[12] = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ykabinet.jpg"></center>'
-if ymanrem[12] = 2:'Sitting on your antique desk is your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'', ''start''">computer</a>.'
+if ymanrem[12] = 2:'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'', ''start''">computer</a> sitting on your antique desk.'
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'
 

+ 8 - 8
locations/ykamin

@@ -4,18 +4,18 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detached</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Lounge</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Fireplace room</font></b></center>'
+'<center>The fireplace room where you can lounge, work on your tapestry and watch the relaxing fire sparks from the fireplace.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[8] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[8] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[8] = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ykamin.jpg"></center>'
-if ymanrem[8] = 2:'<a href="exec:gt ''stol'', ''start''">Table</a>'
+if ymanrem[8] = 2:'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''stol'', ''start''">table</a> which you can sit at.'
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'
 
-if gobelen>0:'You have <<gobelen>> completed tapestries.'
-if pcs_sewng >= 40 and tkan > 0:'You have enough fabric for <<tkan>> lessons.'
+if gobelen>0:'You have completed <<gobelen>> tapestries.'
+if pcs_sewng >= 40 and tkan > 0:'You have enough fabric for <<tkan>> more uses.'
 if pcs_sewng >= 40 and tkan <= 0:'You do not have any fabric.'
 if pcs_sewng >= 80:
 	if newgobelen = 0 and tkan > 0:
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if pcs_sewng >= 80:
 			newgobelen = 1
 			minut += 15
 			gs'stat'
-			'You spend 15 minutes at the embroidery frame, preparing the fabric and outlining the pattern for the tapestry.'
+			'You spend 15 minutes on the embroidery frame, preparing the fabric and outlining the pattern for the tapestry.'
 			act'Set the tapestry aside':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
@@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ if pcs_sewng >= 80:
 			gobramin = (pcs_sewng - 70) * 2
 			newgobelen += rand(gobramin,gobramax)
 			gs'stat'
-			if newgobelen < 1000:'You spent an hour working on your tapestry, which is now <<newgobelen/10>> percent finished.'
+			if newgobelen < 1000:'You spend an hour working on your tapestry, which is now <<newgobelen/10>> percent finished.'
 				if newgobelen >= 1000:
 				newgobelen = 0
 				gobelen+=1
-				'Your work on the tapestry is done.'
+				'Your work on the tapestry is done. You feel pretty satisfied having finished a piece.'
 			end
 			act'Set the tapestry aside':gt $curloc
 		end

+ 22 - 18
locations/ykuh

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Mansion</font></b></center>'
-'<center>Kitchen</center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kitchen</font></b></center>'
+'<center>A well stacked kitchen containing all the necessities to make whatever meal you please.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[6] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[6] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
@@ -16,37 +16,37 @@ if dirttarelka > 0 and fairy >= dirttarelka:
 	cltarelka += dirttarelka
 	fairy -= dirttarelka
 	dirttarelka = 0
-	'Dishwasher washed your dirty dishes.'
+	'You washed the dirty dishes in the dishwasher.'
 elseif fairy < dirttarelka:
-	'You have no more dishwashing detergent.'
+	'You can''t use the dishwasher. You have no detergent.'
 end
 
 if cltarelka > 0:
-	'In the cabinet you have <b><<cltarelka>></b> clean plates'
+	'You have <b><<cltarelka>></b> clean plates left.'
 else
 	'<b><font color="red">You don''t have any clean plates left.</font></b>'
 end
 
-if dirttarelka > 0:'In the sink are <b><<dirttarelka>></b> dirty dishes. <a href="exec:dynamic $dirtarm">Wash the dishes</a>.'
+if dirttarelka > 0:'There are <b><<dirttarelka>></b> dirty dishes in the sink. <a href="exec:dynamic $dirtarm">Wash the dishes</a>.'
 
 if fairy > 0:
 	'Under the sink is some dishwashing detergent, which is enough for <b><<fairy>></b> times.'
 else
-	'<b><font color="red">You have nothing to wash dishes with. You should buy some dishwashing detergent.</font></b>'
+	'<b><font color="red">You have nothing to wash dishes with. You should buy some detergent.</font></b>'
 end
 
 if eda > 0:
 	if cltarelka = 0 or edahot > 0:$edagot = ''
-	if cltarelka > 0 and edahot = 0:$edagot = '<a href="exec:dynamic $edagotd">Cook meal (0:30)</a>'
+	if cltarelka > 0 and edahot = 0:$edagot = '<a href="exec:dynamic $edagotd">Cook a meal (0:30)</a>'
 
-	'In the refrigerator there''s food, enough for <b><<eda>></b> servings. <<$edagot>>'
+	'There''s enough food for <b><<eda>></b> servings. <<$edagot>>'
 elseif edaD = 0 and eda = 0:
 	'<b><font color="red">The fridge is empty, you have nothing to eat.</font></b>'
 end
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'
 
-if edahot > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $edahotd">On the table is a cooked meal.</a>'
+if edahot > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $edahotd">There''s a warm meal on the table.</a>'
 
 if pranik > 0:
 	'You have <<pranik>> cookies.'
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if pranik > 0:
 		frost = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-		'You drank tea with cookies, sweet and very bad for your figure, but so good.'
+		'You drank tea with cookies, it''s sweet and very bad for your figure, but they''re so good you can''t resist.'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ act 'Drink':
 		cumspclnt = 2
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
 		pcs_breath = 0
-		'You gladly drank a glass of water.'
+		'You gladly drink a glass of water.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Get up from the table':gt $curloc
@@ -103,14 +103,16 @@ if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and huseatday ! daystart and eda >= 2:
 		huseatday = daystart
 		pcs_mood -= 15
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/kitchen/cook.jpg"></center>'
-		'You cooked some food for your husband.'
+		'You made some delicious food for your husband.'
 
 		act 'Put the food on the table':gt $curloc
 	end
 end
 
 if lekarstvo > 0:
-	'You have <<lekarstvo>> tablets.'
+	'You have <<lekarstvo>> pills left.'
+else if lekarstvo = 1:
+	'You have one pill left.'
 
 	if sick > 0 and lekarday ! daystart:
 		act 'Take a pill':
@@ -121,7 +123,7 @@ if lekarstvo > 0:
 			lekarstvo -= 1
 			sick -= sick * 20 / 100
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/lekr1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You took the pill'
+			'You took a pill.'
 
 			act 'Move away':gt $curloc
 		end
@@ -129,10 +131,12 @@ if lekarstvo > 0:
 end
 
 if vitamin > 0:
-	'You have <<vitamin>> vitamins.'
+	'You have <<vitamin>> vitamin pills left.'
+else if vitamin = 1:
+	'You have one vitamin pill left.'
 
 	if vitaminday ! daystart:
-		act 'Take some vitamins':
+		act 'Take a vitamin pill':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -146,7 +150,7 @@ if vitamin > 0:
 
 			pcs_skin += 1
 
-			'You took vitamins'
+			'You took a vitamin pill.'
 
 			act 'Move away':gt $curloc
 		end

+ 13 - 12
locations/ymans

@@ -17,23 +17,24 @@ else
 end
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">House</font></b></center>'
 '<center>Hall</center>'
+'<center>The main hall of the mansion. From here you can visit the different rooms in the mansion.</center>'
 
 if ymanrem[3] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[3] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[3] = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[3] = 3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ymans.jpg"></center>'
-if ymanrem[3] = 3:'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">The mirror</a> hangs on the wall, beside that is the <a href="exec:gt ''cloakroom'', ''view_coat_list''">coat closet</a>.'
-if umbrella > 0:'An umbrella hangs on a hook.'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Bedrooms':minut += 1 & gt 'ybedr'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Bathroom':minut += 1 & gt 'yvan'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Kitchen':minut += 1 & gt 'ykuh'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Living Room':minut += 1 & gt 'yzal'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Fireplace room':minut += 1 & gt 'ykamin'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Nursery':minut += 1 & gt 'ydet'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Library':minut += 1 & gt 'ybib'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Gymnasium':minut += 1 & gt 'ysport'
-if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Cabinet':minut += 1 & gt 'ykabinet'
-if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':act 'Go outside':minut += 5 & gt 'youplace'
+if ymanrem[3] = 3:'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> hanging on the wall, beside it is a <a href="exec:gt ''cloakroom'', ''view_coat_list''">coat closet</a>.'
+if umbrella > 0:'There''s an umbrella hanging on a hook.'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the bedroom':minut += 1 & gt 'ybedr'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the bathroom':minut += 1 & gt 'yvan'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the kitchen':minut += 1 & gt 'ykuh'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the living room':minut += 1 & gt 'yzal'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the fireplace room':minut += 1 & gt 'ykamin'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the nursery':minut += 1 & gt 'ydet'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to the library':minut += 1 & gt 'ybib'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go the gym':minut += 1 & gt 'ysport'
+if ymanrem[3] >= 1:act 'Go to your work room':minut += 1 & gt 'ykabinet'
+if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':act 'Walk outside':minut += 5 & gt 'youplace'
 
 if rand (0,2) ! 0:gs 'din_bad' & dynamic $mobile_check
 

+ 57 - 57
locations/youplace

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 clr
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><h4>Your Land</h4></center>'
+'<center><h4>Your land lot</h4></center>'
 
 if placeMansion < 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yzemelniy.jpg"></center>'
 if placeMansion = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ystart.jpg"></center>'
@@ -16,59 +16,59 @@ if car > 0 and cardrive = 18:
 	'<a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">Your <<$car>></a> is parked here.'
 end
 
-act 'Go to the suburbs':minut += 5 & gt 'psiklin', 'start'
+act 'Visit the suburbs':minut += 5 & gt 'psiklin', 'start'
 
-if bassMansion = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''ybass''">Pool</a>.'
-if banaMansion >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''yban''">Bath</a>.'
-if placeMansion = 3:'<a href="exec:gt ''ymans''">Go inside</a>.'
+if bassMansion = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''ybass''">Go to the pool</a>.'
+if banaMansion >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''yban''">Go to the sauna</a>.'
+if placeMansion = 3:'<a href="exec:gt ''ymans''">Walk inside the mansion</a>.'
 
 if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1500000 and placeMansion = 0:
-	act 'Buy land for cottage (1,500,000)':
+	act 'Buy the land lot for a mansion (1,500,000)':
 		cls
 		karta -= 1500000
 		placeMansion = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You have bought land for cottage'
+		'You have bought the land lot. You can finally build your own dream mansion.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 	end
 end
 
 if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 500000 and placeMansion = 1:
-	act 'Pay for water, electricity and building foundations (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Pay for running utilies and the building foundation (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 		cls
 		karta -= 500000
 		placeMansion = 2
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You paid for a supply of communications to the site and zero cycle'
+		'You''ve paid for the utilities. You now have running water, sewage, electric power, and telephone lines. There''s even a foundation built on the land lot.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 	end
 end
 
 if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1500000 and placeMansion = 2:
-	act 'Pay for the construction and external finish of the building (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Pay for the finishing touches on the mansion (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 		cls
 		karta -= 1500000
 		placeMansion = 3
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You paid for the construction of housing mansion'
+		'You''ve paid for the construction of the mansion.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 	end
 end
 
 if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 500000 and placeMansion = 3 and ymanrem[3] = 0:
-	act 'Pay for the construction of rooms (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+	act 'Pay for the construction of the rooms (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 		cls
 		karta -= 500000
 		ymanrem[3] = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You paid for the construction of the rooms.'
+		'You paid for the construction of the rooms. You can finally begin designing the interior of the mansion.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -76,26 +76,26 @@ end
 
 if placeMansion => 2:
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 800000 and banaMansion = 0:
-		act 'Pay for the construction of baths (800,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the construction of the sauna (800,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 800000
 			banaMansion = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of baths.'
+			'You paid for the construction of the sauna. You finally have a place where you can relax.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 500000 and bassMansion = 0:
-		act 'Pay for the construction of the basement (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the construction of the pool area (500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 500000
 			bassMansion = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of the pool'
+			'You paid for the construction of the pool area. You can finally take relaxing swims in private.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
@@ -103,241 +103,241 @@ if placeMansion => 2:
 end
 if placeMansion = 3:
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[3] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for repairs Hall (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the main hall (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[3] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the main hall is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 150000 and ymanrem[3] = 2:
-		act 'Pay lounge furniture (150,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the main hall (150,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 150000
 			ymanrem[3] = 3
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture'
+			'The work on the main hall is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[4] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repairs sleeping (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the bedroom (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[4] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the bedroom is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 300000 and ymanrem[4] = 1:
-		act 'Pay bedroom furniture (300,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the bedroom (300,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 300000
 			ymanrem[4] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture'
+			'The work on the bedroom is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[5] = 0:
-		act 'Pay bathroom renovation (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the bathroom (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[5] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the batroom is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[5] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for furniture and fixtures for the bathroom (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the bathroom (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[5] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture and sanitary ware.'
+			'The work on the batroom is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[6] = 0:
-		act 'Pay renovated kitchen (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the kitchen (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[6] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the kitchen is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 350000 and ymanrem[6] = 1:
-		act 'Pay kitchen furniture (350,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the kitchen (350,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[6] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture for the kitchen.'
+			'The work on the kitchen is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[7] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repairs hall (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the living room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[7] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the living room is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[7] = 1:
-		act 'Pay furniture hall (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the living room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[7] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture for the hall'
+			'The work on the living room is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[8] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repairs fireplace room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the fireplace room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[8] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the fireplace room is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[8] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for the purchase of furniture for the fireplace room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the fireplace room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[8] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture.'
+			'The work on the fireplace room is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[9] = 0:
-		act 'Children''s room to pay for repairs (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the nursery room (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[9] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the nursery is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[9] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for the purchase of furniture for the nursery (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the nursery (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[9] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture'
+			'The work on the nursery is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[10] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repairs library (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the library (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[10] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the library is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[10] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for the purchase of furniture for libraries (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the library (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[10] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture'
+			'The work on the library is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[11] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repairs gym (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the gym (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[11] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the gym is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[11] = 1:
-		act 'Pay furniture gym (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the gym (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[11] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture for the gym'
+			'The work on the gym is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[12] = 0:
-		act 'Pay for repair of the (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Pay for the renovations of the office (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[12] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You pay for repairs'
+			'The work on the office is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end
 	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= 250000 and ymanrem[12] = 1:
-		act 'Pay for the purchase of furniture for the office (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Decorate the office (250,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 250000
 			ymanrem[12] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the purchase of furniture.'
+			'The work on the office is finished.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $curloc
 		end

+ 3 - 3
locations/ysport

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ clr
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Detached</font></b></center>'
 '<center>Gym</center>'
-'The hall for sport activities and doors leading to the pool and the Baths.'
+'Your private gym with all the necessities to live a healthy life. From here you can walk over to the pool or relax in the sauna.'
 
 if ymanrem[11] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[11] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ if ymanrem[11] = 2:''
 gs 'exercise', 'start'
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'
-if bassMansion = 1: act 'Goto Pool': gt 'ybass'
-if banaMansion >= 1:act 'Goto Sauna': gt 'yban'
+if bassMansion = 1: act 'Go to the pool area': gt 'ybass'
+if banaMansion >= 1:act 'Go to the sauna': gt 'yban'
 
 --- ysport ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/yvan

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 if ymanrem[5] = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/ynill.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[5] = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yrem.jpg"></center>'
 if ymanrem[5] = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/mansion/yvan.jpg"></center>'
-if ymanrem[5] = 2:'On the wall hangs a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>.'
+if ymanrem[5] = 2:'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> hanging on the wall.
 
 act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'