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locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -460,8 +460,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 		cls
 		guy += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbj51.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'He unzips his pants and pulls his cock out. He stares down at you impatiently, so you start licking the length of his shaft and sucking on the head.'
-		'You take his length into your mouth and start sucking while looking up to seek approval.'
+		'He unzips his pants, pulls his cock out and stares down at you impatiently, so you start sheepishly licking the length of his shaft and sucking on the head.'
+		'You then take his length into your mouth and start sucking while looking up to seek approval.'
 		'"Oh yes, just like that you little fucking slut!"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 		tipdarand = rand(0, 2)
 
 		if tipdarand = 0:
-			'Without warning, he grabs your hair in his fists and forces you down on his cock. You choke as his tip hits your throat.'
+			'Without warning, he suddenly grabs your hair in his fists and forces you down on his cock. You choke as his tip hits your throat.'
 
 			act 'Rough deepthroat':
 				cls
@@ -490,8 +490,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 						'Suddenly, he thrusts deeply into your mouth and holds you tightly down on his cock.'
 					    'You let out a strangled gurgle as spurts of cum hit the back of your throat and spill out of your mouth.'
 						'He pulls out of your mouth and roughly pulls your head up by your hair, forcing you to look up at him. "Now swallow it like the good little cum whore that you are."'
-						
-						'You do as you''re told and show him your empty mouth. You make out his perverted smile through your tear filled eyes before he suddenly thrusts his cock back into your mouth and starts deepthroating you again, not caring as you choke and gag once more on his dick.'
+						*nl
+						'You do as you''re told and show him your empty mouth. You make out his perverted and sadistic grin through your tear filled eyes before he suddenly thrusts his cock back into your mouth and starts deepthroating you again, not caring as you choke and gag once more on his dick.'
 						'After a few minutes of this, he is seemingly finished with you and throws you to the floor. You lay there catching your breath as the man goes to the bathroom.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', -1, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -527,7 +527,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
                 'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. He leans in close to your ear.'
                 '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" You whimper in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
                 *nl				
-				'After what feels like an eternity, you feel his cock twitching inside you and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and his load trickles from your ravaged anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
+				'After what feels like an eternity, you feel his cock twitching inside you and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and a sticky mix of cum and saliva trickles from your ravaged anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
 				'"Only that cute little head dancer has ever taken it in the ass better than you, whore. All the other bitches just cry." You let out a loud yelp as he finishes with a stinging smack on your ass that echoes into the room.'
 				'To your despair and disgust, he drags you up next to him and forces you to lie on your side next to him with your ass hanging out, his sweaty, flabby arm wrapped around your back as he squeezes and slaps your ass while bragging on his phone to his friend about "some of the best anal" he''s ever had. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/miss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'The man moves in, roughly flips you on your back and spreads your legs. "This pussy looks like it will be worth every ruble!" You feel the tip of his cock spread your labia apart as he pushes into you.'
-				'He grabs your throat and pins you to the bed as he starts to very roughly pound your pussy. He occasionally uses his other hand to very tightly squeeze and twist your nipple, making you squeal. He seems to enjoy treating you this roughly.'
+				'He grabs your throat and pins you to the bed as he starts to very roughly pound your pussy. He occasionally uses his other hand to very tightly squeeze and twist your nipple, making you squeal in pain. He seems to enjoy treating you this roughly.'
                 'You panic when he stops thrusting and tightens his grip around your neck. You choke as you thrash your arms and legs in distress, but he just smiles and doesn''t loosen his grip until you are on the verge of blacking out. He then resumes fucking you, faster and seemingly closer to climax.'  
 				*nl
 				'You endure the remainder of the rough sex for what feels like an eternity, but he eventually lets go of you and pulls out. He starts jerking his cock and you feel his cum splattering onto your labia.'

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -689,8 +689,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	elseif rand(0,4) = 0 and cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3 :
 		if First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 0:
 			First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 1
-			'You stay in the shower a little longer than usual and it''s quiet when you enter the empty locker room. As you are getting your clothes ready, the door opens and Albina peeks in. "Oh fuck." she mumbles before walking in. "I was hoping it was going to be empty in here. I''m so fucking wet right now and was going to spend a little time with my dildo before I went home..."
-			At this point, Lazar peeks his head in the door. He has a wide grin on his face. "I couldn''t help but hear that you are in need of some aid. What kind of gentleman would I be if I didn''t help a lady in distress?" Albina just laughs. "You say the stupidest fucking shit sometimes, you know that?" she replies. He feigns insult at her. "And here I thought we had something after all the times I''ve helped you. Your little neon pink G-string is the pride of my collection you know." Albina smiles and shakes her head at him. "What can I say? A girl has needs and you just happen to be the only person who can satisfy them the way I like. And you''re not ugly or a pervy douchebag. Well, not as much of a pervy douchebag as some of the creeps who hit on me." she says with a grin and Lazar again feigns insult. "Yeah, I would definetly prefer having you inside me instead of my plastic friend here." Lazar playfully bows, then turns his attention to you. "Say, why don''t you join us <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You look at Albina, who just shrugs her shoulders. "Join if you want. We''re just going to have a quicky to get me off."'
+			'You stay in the shower a little longer than usual and it''s quiet when you enter the empty locker room. As you are getting your clothes ready, the door opens and Albina peeks in. "Oh fuck." she mumbles before walking in. "I was hoping it was going to be empty in here. I''m so fucking wet right now and was going to spend a little time here before I went home..."
+			At this point, Lazar peeks his head in the door. He has a wide grin on his face. "I couldn''t help but hear that you are in need of some aid. What kind of gentleman would I be if I didn''t help a lady in distress?" Albina just laughs. "You say the stupidest fucking shit sometimes, you know that?" she replies and he feigns insult at her. "And here I thought we had something after all the times I''ve helped you. Your little neon pink G-string is the pride of my collection you know." Albina smiles and shakes her head at him. "What can I say? A girl has needs and you just happen to be the only person who can satisfy them the way I like. And you''re not ugly or a pervy douchebag. Well, not as much of a pervy douchebag as some of the creeps who hit on me." she says with a grin and Lazar again feigns insult. "Yeah, I would definetly prefer having you inside me instead of my plastic friend here." Lazar playfully bows, then turns his attention to you. "Say, why don''t you join us <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You look at Albina, who just shrugs her shoulders. "Join if you want. We''re just going to have a quicky to get me off."'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				'"No, I''m fine thanks. I''ve got places to be and things to do anyway." you reply. Albina again just shrugs her shoulders and Lazar smiles. "Your loss." he says before he and Albina head off to find somewhere more private. You finish getting dressed and head on your way.'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 			act 'Accept':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "I need to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick? Well come and get it then." she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
-						'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
+						'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -745,11 +745,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Albina then climbs off of you and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
+								'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
 								Albina just gives out a playful giggle. "Maybe we will, maybe we won''t." she teases him and you all laugh before getting dressed. You then all leave the room and go your seperate ways.'
 								minut += 5
 
-								act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 							end
 						end
 
@@ -766,11 +766,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Albina then climbs off of you and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
+								'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
 								Albina just gives out a playful giggle. "Maybe we will, maybe we won''t." she teases him and you all laugh before getting dressed. You then all leave the room and go your seperate ways.'
 								minut += 5
 
-								act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 							end
 
 						end
@@ -816,8 +816,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						act 'Albina gets anal':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "I need to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick? Well come and get it then." she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door. You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape.' 
-							'You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
+							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "I need to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick? Well come and get it then." she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
+							'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -835,11 +835,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								act 'Finish':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina then climbs off of you and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
+									'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
 									Albina teases him by bending over and wiggling her naked ass at him, showing off her still slightly gaping anus. You all laugh and get dressed before leaving the room and going your seperate ways.'
 									minut += 5
 
-									act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+									act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 								end
 							end
 
@@ -856,11 +856,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								act 'Finish':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina then climbs off of you and pulls you up and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
+									'Albina then climbs off of you, pulls you up and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
 									Albina teases him by bending over and wiggling her naked ass at him, showing off her still slightly gaping anus. You all laugh and get dressed before leaving the room and going your seperate ways.'
 									minut += 5
 
-									act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+									act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 								end
 							end
 						end