[changed] various coding and writing changes to the photo studio and models

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -293,9 +293,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commercial':
 		model_job_week += 1
 		model_week = (daystart - week) / 7
 		modelfoto['shoots'] += 1
-		money += modelpayfin
+		if $model['pay_method'] = 'direct_deposit':
+			karta += modelpayfin
+		else
+			money += modelpayfin
+		end
 		modelfoto['earnings'] += modelpayfin
-		gt 'foto','studio'
 	else
 		practice_session = 0
 	end
@@ -326,9 +329,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commercial':
 						cla
 						*nl
 						'"Sure!" you say. "I''ve always wanted to be an actress, I just never thought I''d get a chance like this. When do we shoot?"'
-						if $actress['firstname'] = '':
-							$actress['firstname'] = $model['firstname']
-							$actress['lastname'] = $model['lastname']
+						if $actress_stats['firstname'] = '':
+							$actress_stats['firstname'] = $model['firstname']
+							$actress_stats['lastname'] = $model['lastname']
 						end
 						casting = 3
 						if week >= 6:
@@ -348,14 +351,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commercial':
 					end
 
 					act '"Triple rate?! Hell yeah!"':
-					casting = 3
+						casting = 3
+						if $actress_stats['firstname'] = '':
+							$actress_stats['firstname'] = $model['firstname']
+							$actress_stats['lastname'] = $model['lastname']
+						end
 						cla
 						'"Triple rate?! Hell yeah! Who cares about being naked in public when I''m getting paid that much! I''d let them gangbang me for that kind of money!"'
 						*nl
 						'"I''m sure they''d be happy to arrange that with you some other time," he says with a shit eating grin.'
-						'You punch him playfully on the arm.'
 						act '"So when do we shoot?"':
-						cla
+							cla
 							casting = 3
 							if week >= 6:
 								SMTV_commercial = daystart - week + 13
@@ -385,6 +391,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commercial':
 							*nl
 							'"I guess so," you say. "Since they''re paying so much, it''s hard to turn down. Besides, it might be worth it to break into acting, right?"'
 							casting = 3
+							if $actress_stats['firstname'] = '':
+								$actress_stats['firstname'] = $model['firstname']
+								$actress_stats['lastname'] = $model['lastname']
+							end
 							if week >= 6:
 								SMTV_commercial = daystart - week + 13
 								'"If it means anything to you, I think you''re making the right choice for your career." He hands you a business card for the <b>Aurora Talent Agency</b> in the city center. "Be here next Saturday at 10:00, this is where they said they were going to set up the shoot."'
@@ -1013,6 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 	if specialjob7 > 95 and fame['city_kickboxing'] >=30 and pcs_inhib >= 45:'<a href="exec:gt ''foto_events2'',''kickboxing_documentary''">   Kickboxing documentary</a>'
     if specialjob8 > 95 and fame['city_running'] >=30 and pcs_inhib >= 50 and month >= 3 and month <=8:'<a href="exec:gt ''foto_events2'',''track_&_field_documentary''">   Track & Field documentary</a>'
 !!		if specialjob9 >= 95:'<a href="exec:gt ''foto_events'',''model_portraits''">photo albums</a>'
+!!	if specialjob9 >= 95:'<a href="exec:gt ''foto_events2'',''terry1''">Terry Request</a>'
 !!	if specialjob6 >= 95:'<a href="exec:gt ''foto_events'',''documentary''">	Documentary</a>'
 end
 

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		*nl
 		'The girls giggle together as you tune out again...'
 	elseif model['chatter'] = 5:
-		'"...and he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
+		'"... needed the debut money."'
 		'"Oh! You finally did your first nude shoot?"'
-		'"About time, girl. How long have you been here? Four months?"'
+		'"About time girl! How long have you been here? Four months?"'
 		'"What?? Who took four months to do their first nude shoot?"'
 		'"I just didn''t want to show my pussy on camera, okay? It''s not like I''m shy, but it''s just a little classier that way."'
-		'"Still though, four months? I mean, second shoot was a nude shoot."'
+		'"Still though, four months? I mean, my second shoot was a nude shoot."'
 		'"Yeah, but you''re a slut, Stasya."'
 		*nl
 		'The rest of the conversation devolves into shouting and laughter and you can''t really hear anything specific.'

locations/foto_practice.qsrc

@@ -610,13 +610,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude':
 					'"Well, if you''re sure. But I''m telling you, it won''t help very much until you''re more comfortable."'
 					act'Continue':
 						cla & *clr
-						gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(1,3)
+						gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(7,10)
 						inhib_exp += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nudepractice3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You hate to admit it, but he''s right. You keep holding yourself too stiff, striking the wrong pose, not paying attention to your expression, and a myriad of other mistakes. Every time the camera flashes, you feel panic course through your entire body, and you''re sure it shows.'
 						*nl
-						'Two hours later, you don''t feel like you learned very much and you don''t feel much more confident in your body either.'
+						'You spend the next couple hours training yourself to be as professional as possible and hiding your discomfort.'
 						act'End practice':gt'foto','end'
 					end
 				end
@@ -683,12 +683,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude':
 				'You spend a good portion of the next two hours laughing with the photographer and the rest of the staff, practicing the ridiculous and convoluted poses required for nude modelling.'
 				if pcs_mdlng < 20:
 					act'Continue':
-						cla
-						*nl
+						cla & *nl
 						'Without clothes, the shoot becomes all about posture. You''re very comfortable and confident in your body, but you never realized how much of an advantage clothes were for making yourself sexier on camera and how straining it can be to pose in ways that compensate. This is going to take some getting used to.'
 						act'Continue':
 							cla & *clr
-							*nl
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/modelbts2.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'The practice shoot ends and he calls you over to his computer to show you what you need to work on.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'foto', 'end'
@@ -697,7 +695,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude':
 				else
 					act'Continue':
 						cla & *clr
-						*nl
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/modelbts2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'The practice shoot ends and he calls you over to his computer to show you what you need to work on.'
 						if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:

locations/foto_shoot.qsrc

@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 		act'Clothing':
 			$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'catalog'
 			modelfoto['shoots'] += 1
-			model_week = (daystart - week) / 7
 			modelfoto['catalog'] += 1
 			model_job_week += 1
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(2,5)
+			model_week = (daystart - week) / 7
 			gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'tiny'
 			minut += 120
 			money += 450
@@ -71,10 +71,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 		act'Swimsuits':
 			$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'swim_catalog'
 			modelfoto['shoots'] += 1
-			model_week = (daystart - week) / 7
 			modelfoto['catalog'] += 1
 			model_job_week += 1
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(2,5)
+			model_week = (daystart - week) / 7
 			gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'tiny'
 			minut += 120
 			money += 450
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Topless':
+	act 'Exposed breasts':
 		$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'topless'
 		*clr & cla
 		if modelfoto['topless'] >= 5 and modelfoto['nude'] < 1: gt'foto_events','nude_persuasion'
@@ -364,12 +364,13 @@ end
 !! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
+	
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Alright, we can do that. What kind of nude shoot?"'
 	
-	act 'Tasteful nude':
+	act 'Limited nude':
 		$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'taste_nude'
 		*clr & cla
 		if modelfoto['tastenude'] >= 5 and (modelfoto['topless'] + modelfoto['toplessnude'] + modelfoto['fullnude']) < 1: gt'foto_events','nude_persuasion'
@@ -401,7 +402,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act 'Topless nude':
+	act 'Exposed breasts nude':
+		
 		$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'top_nude'
 		*clr & cla
 		if modelfoto['toplessnude'] >= 3 and modelfoto['pussy'] < 1:gt'foto_events','nude_persuasion'
@@ -433,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act 'Full nude':
+	act 'Full exposure':
 		$modelfoto['shoot_type'] = 'full_nude'
 		if modelfoto['fullnude'] = 0:
 			gt'foto_nude_debut', 'nude_debut_pre'
@@ -682,10 +684,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trans_ling':
 	modelfoto['nip'] += 1
 	modelfoto['lingerie'] += 1
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(8,10)
-	if pcs_inhib < 45: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+	if pcs_inhib < 45: 
+		gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	end
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'small'
 	if fame['city_modelling'] > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,8)
-	inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	if rand(0,1) = 1:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/ling_trans/<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -711,10 +715,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'topless':
 	modelfoto['nip'] += 1
 	modelfoto['topless'] += 1
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(6,10)
-	if pcs_inhib < 50: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+	if pcs_inhib < 50:
+		gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	end
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'small'
 	if fame['city_modelling'] > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,8)
-	inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/topless/<<rand(1,57)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You spend two hours striking various posing with topless breasts, listening to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
@@ -735,10 +741,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tasteful':
 	modelfoto['tastenude'] += 1
 	modelfoto['nude'] += 1
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(9,10)
-	if pcs_inhib < 40: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+	if pcs_inhib < 40: 
+		gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
+	end
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'small'
 	if fame['city_modelling'] > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,10)
-	inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/tastenude/<<rand(1,28)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 	*nl
@@ -758,10 +766,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'topless_nude':
 	modelfoto['nude'] += 1
 	modelfoto['toplessnude'] += 1
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(9,10)
-	if pcs_inhib < 55: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+	if pcs_inhib < 55:
+		gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
+	end
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'medium'
 	if fame['city_modelling'] > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,10)
-	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/topnude/<<rand(1,79)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 	*nl
@@ -784,20 +794,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude':
 	modelfoto['nip'] += 1
 	modelfoto['pussy'] += 1
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(9,10)
-	if pcs_inhib < 60: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+	if pcs_inhib < 60:
+		gs 'willpower','pay','self'
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
+	end
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'medium'
 	if fame['city_modelling'] > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(5,10)
-	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
-	if pcs_pubes < 16:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude/<<rand(1,17)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
-		*nl
-		'You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you that fully expose your breasts and pussy. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+	if rand(0,1) = 1:
+		if pcs_pubes < 16:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude/<<rand(1,17)>>.jpg"></center>'
+			'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+			*nl
+			'You spend two hours posing for a photographer taking pictures of you that fully expose your breasts and pussy. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+		else
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bnude/<<rand(1,20)>>.jpg"></center>'
+			modelfoto['bush'] += 1
+			'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+			*nl
+			'You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy providing a nice contrast to the rest of your smooth body. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+		end
 	else
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bnude/<<rand(1,20)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
-		*nl
-		'You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, your <<$pc_desc[''pubes'']>> pussy providing a nice contrast to the rest of your smooth body. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+		if pcs_pubes < 16:
+			modelfoto['pussy'] += 1
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude/<<rand(1,17)>>.jpg"></center>'
+			'The photographer sends you on a quick trip to the dressing room to change into some clothes before the shoot.'
+			*nl
+			'Once you''re back, you spend two hours posing in the selected outfit and stripping or removing each piece as required. You never completely lose the clothes, but at one point or another, your breasts or pussy or both are put on display for the camera.'
+			*nl
+			'When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+		else
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bnude/<<rand(1,20)>>.jpg"></center>'
+			'The photographer sends you on a quick trip to the dressing room to change into some clothes before the shoot.'
+			*nl
+			'Once you''re back, you spend two hours posing for a photographer taking pictures of you in the selected outfit and stripping down piece by piece until your most intimate parts are exposed. Even though you started clothed, you have no doubt that the full spread will feature images that capture every part of you, even your furry pussy.'
+			*nl
+			'When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+		end
 	end
 	if modelfoto['nude'] = 1 and foto_persuade ! 5:
 		'You blink at the amount but the person who gave it to you reassures you it''s normal. The studio has a policy of doubling the pay for a model''s nude debut.'
@@ -826,7 +858,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erotic':
 	if pcs_inhib < 65: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', 'small'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'porn', 'small'
-	if pcs_inhib < 60:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	if pcs_inhib < 60:inhib_exp += 6
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/erotic/<<rand(1,19)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 	

locations/model_emily1.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 	act'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-		'Turning around, you see a girl with long hair and large breasts serious look on her face."'
+		'Turning around, you see a girl with long hair, large breasts, and serious look on her face."'
 		'"Get the fuck out of the way! I''m trying to get to my shoot!"'
 		act'"Oh, sorry about that..."':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -21,12 +21,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 			'You apologetically step aside as she strides past you. "Sorry, I didn''t realize I was in the way.'
 			'"Well you should pay more attention. You must be new here."'
 			'"Yeah, I am. I actua-"'
-			'She cuts you off mid-sentence. "Well, here''s your introduction: I''m Emily and if you see me coming, get <i>the fuck</i> out of my way. I''m going to be the next big thing in this city and it''s people like you who are always getting in my way and holding me back. So step off bitch. I have things to do."'
-			'She walks past and onto a nearby set, loudly complaining to the photographer, "Hey, I know I''m late. There was some fucking new girl who doesn''t know her fucking place around here. Let''s get started."'
+			*nl
+			'She cuts you off mid-sentence.'
+			*nl
+			'"Well, here''s your introduction: I''m Emily and if you see me coming, get <i>the fuck</i> out of my way. I''m going to be the next big thing in this city and it''s stupid little bitches like you who are always getting in my way and holding me back. So step <i>off</i>. I have things to do."'
+			'She walks past and onto a nearby set, loudly complaining to the photographer.'
+			'"Hey, I know I''m late. There was some fucking new girl who doesn''t know her fucking place around here. Let''s get started."'
 			act'Watch her work':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Despite her rude attitude, the moment she steps on on set acts perfectly professional, taking directions and adjusting poses flawlessly. She knows how to work her assets in just the right ways. She must be really set on being a pro.'
+                'Despite her rude attitude, the moment she steps on set, she acts perfectly professional, taking directions and adjusting poses flawlessly. She knows how to work her assets in just the right ways. She must be really set on being a pro.'
 				act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 			end
 			act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
@@ -36,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/turnback.jpg"></center>'
 			'"What do you just say to me?! Who do you think you are talking to people like that?"'
-			'The girl shoves her way past you and looks over her shoulder at you. She says, "You must be new here so I''ll give you the short version: I''m Emily and I''m going to be the next big thing in this town so when you see me coming, you get <i>the fuck</i> out of my way." And with that, she walks off towards her shoot.'
+            'The girl shoves her way past you and looks over her shoulder at you. "You must be new here so I''ll give you the short version: I''m Emily and I''m going to be the next big thing in this town, so when you see me coming, you get <i>the fuck</i> out of my way." With that, she walks off towards her shoot.'
 			act'Take the high road':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/pornwalk1.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -47,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 				act'Watch her work':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude1.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Despite her rude attitude, the moment she steps on on set acts perfectly professional, taking directions and adjusting poses flawlessly. She knows how to work her assets in just the right ways. She must be really set on being a pro.'
+					'Despite her rude attitude, the moment she steps on set, she acts perfectly professional, taking directions and adjusting poses flawlessly. She knows how to work her assets in just the right ways. She must be really set on being a pro.'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end		
 			end
@@ -72,21 +76,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_1':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Cunt!" you hiss'
-				'She stops dead in her tracks for a moment before whirling around and stomping back towards you. "What did you just say to me???"'
-				'"You heard me. Cu-n-<b>t.</b>" You spit the words from between your teeth, emphasizing the word so much that it transforms from one syllable to three. As the last sound leaves your lips, she steps in close to you, her face is barely centimeters away. You feel a proximity hovering over your chest and in your subconscious mind you realize it must be her nipples, which are almost touching tips with yours. As the stare goes on you begin to tense up and you feel like she''s about to hit you.'
+				'She stops dead in her tracks before whirling around and stomping back towards you. "What did you just say to me???"'
+				'"You heard me. Cu-n-<b>t.</b>" You spit the words from between your teeth, emphasizing the word so much that it transforms from one syllable to three. As the last sound leaves your lips, she steps in close to you, her face barely centimeters away from yours. You feel a proximity hovering over your chest and in your subconscious mind you realize it must be her nipples, which are almost touching tips with yours. As the stare goes on, you begin to tense up and you feel like she''s about to hit you.'
 				act'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-					'Seething anger burns behind her eyes as she continues to leer at you. "Now listen here you fucking slut, I''m going to be the next big thing in this town and you better remember it. You''ve seen the photo albums in the main hall? I''m Emily. That''s right. I''m number three. And someday soon I''m going to be number one. And no matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you work, no matter how hot you think you are, my name is <i>always</i> going to be above yours. Now make like the whore you are, and <b>fuck off.</b>"'
-					'And with that, she turns around and walks onto a nearby set. She loudly complains to the photographer, "Hey, I know I''m late. There was some fucking slut of a newbie who doesn''t know her fucking place around here. Let''s get started."'
+					'Seething anger burns behind her eyes as she continues to leer at you. "Now listen here you fucking slut, I''m going to be the next big thing in this town and you better remember it. You''ve seen the photo albums in the main hall? I''m Emily. That''s right. I''m number three. And someday soon I''m going to be number one. And no matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you work, no matter how hot you think you are, my name is <i>always</i> going to be above yours. Now make like the whore you are and <b>fuck off.</b>"'
+					'With that, she turns around and walks onto a nearby set, where she loudly complains to the photographer. "Hey, I know I''m late. There was some fucking slut of a newbie who doesn''t know her fucking place around here. Let''s get started."'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				
 					act'Watch her work':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You hate this stupid fucking bitch and her fucking face with her fucking ego and her fucking attitude with all your heart and soul but nothing pisses you off more than the fact that she''s actually really good at this. She''s incredibly professional, taking directions from the photographer flawlessly, working her body in a way that exudes sexuality with every move and pose. If she is still as angry as you are, she doesn''t show the slightest sign of it, maintaining perfect composure at all times.'
+						'You hate this stupid fucking bitch and her fucking face with her fucking ego and her fucking attitude with all your heart and soul, but nothing pisses you off more than the fact that she''s actually really good at this. She''s incredibly professional, taking directions from the photographer flawlessly, working her body in a way that exudes sexuality with every move and pose. If she''s still as angry as you are, she doesn''t show the slightest sign of it, maintaining perfect composure at all times.'
 						*nl
-						'You growl under your breath, "One day... I swear..." and walk away before you give yourself an aneurysm from being too ticked off.'
+						'"One day... I swear..." you growl under your breath and walk away before you give yourself an aneurysm from being too ticked off.'
 						act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 					end
 				end
@@ -104,15 +108,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 		'Unable to control the impulse, your eyes flick to her shapely breasts before going back into the stare. Even though it was only a fraction of a second, she saw you do it and immediately pounces on you for it.'
 		act'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
-			if tits <= 4: 
+			if tits < 4: 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/5.jpg"></center>'
-				'"What''s the matter slut? Jealous?" she says with a smirk, obviously lording her size and shape of her tits over you and your <<$titsize>> breasts.'
+				'"What''s the matter, slut? Jealous?" she says with a smirk, obviously lording the size and shape of her tits over you and your <<$titsize>> breasts.'
 				act'Grind your teeth in jealousy':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You say nothing and clench your jaw, grinding your teeth together. This girl pisses you off more than anything in the world and it definitely doesn''t help that she''s right about you wishing you had bigger breasts. You cross your arms over your chest and look away, hiding your breasts from her gaze and trying your best not to blush in embarrassment.' 
 					'"Whatever..." you mutter.'
-					'"Aww..." she says in mock pity. "It''s okay. Some boys like smaller, flatter girls like you." She leans over to whisper in your ear, "But they all <i>wish</i> they were with a woman like me..." She pats you on the head and says, "Maybe if you drink your milk you can ''level up'' one day. Or you can use all your whore money to buy some implants!" cackling to herself as she walks off.'
+					'"Aww..." she says in mock pity. "It''s okay. Some boys like smaller, flatter girls like you." She leans over to whisper in your ear, "But they all <i>wish</i> they were with a woman like me..." She pats you on the head. "Maybe if you drink your milk you can ''level up'' one day. Or you can use all your whore money to buy some implants!" She cackles to herself as she walks off.'
 					'<i><b>This. Fucking. Bitch!</b></i>'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end
@@ -125,23 +129,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 					emily['hate'] += 1
 					'"Why would I be jealous of fat cow tits like yours?" you sneer back.'
 					'"<i>Excuuuuuuuse me?!</i>"'
-					'Your words seem to catch her off guard and she steps back as though she''s genuinely offended and hurt. Sensing you have the upper hand, you push your breasts up with your hands, saying, "Maybe they''re not as big, but at least they''re cute, perky, and don''t get waved around like fake cow udders."'
+					'Your words seem to catch her off guard and she steps back as though she''s genuinely offended. Sensing you have the upper hand, you push your breasts up with your hands. "Maybe they''re not as big, but at least they''re cute, perky and don''t get waved around like fake cow udders."'
 					'"H-how dare you!" Emily begins to stammer in fury. "My breasts are completely natural and I have <i>never</i> used plastic surgery for anything! I''m naturally this gorgeous!"'
 					'"Is that the line you give to the boys that tease you at the club?" you say, giving her the same smirk she first gave you as you walk by. "At least I don''t look like a bimbo bitch!" you call over your shoulder without turning leaving her behind with what you imagine to be a jaw dropped look on her face.' 
+					*nl
 					'Pettiness never felt so good...'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end
 				
 			elseif tits = 4:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"What''s the matter slut? Jealous? Wish you had a pair like mine?"'
+				'"What''s the matter, slut? Jealous? Wish you had a pair like mine?"'
 				act'"We''re the same size!"':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Your mouth drops open in disbelief and offense. "What are you talking about you stuck up bitch?! We''re the same size!'
 					'She continues smirking as she pretends to muse over what you said.'
 					'"True... But there''s more to it than size..." she says, moving through poses like she''s doing a shoot or something. "Softness, supplness, the way they bounce..." She sways them back and forth to make her point, jiggling with the slightest movements.'
-					'Emily moves close and whispers, "No one cares what size a girl''s tits are when they''re as flabby as yours," before striding past and leaving you fuming.'
+					'"No one cares what size a girl''s tits are when they''re as flabby as yours," Emily whispers before striding past and leaving you fuming.'
 					'<i><b>This. Fucking. Bitch!</b></i>'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end
@@ -152,9 +157,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 					emily['hate'] += 1
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/3.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Why would I? At least I don''t need mine to distract from an ass ugly face!"'
+					'"Why would I? At least I don''t need mine to distract people from an ass ugly face!"'
 					'"<i>Excuuuuuuuse me?!</i>"'
-					'Your words seem to catch her off guard and she steps back as though she''s genuinely offended and hurt. Sensing you have the upper hand, you push your advantage. "Oh yeah, I bet when the boys come by your house they all bring a paper bag to put over that face of yours. They love using your tits to get off, they just don''t want to see your face while they do it!"'
+					'Your words seem to catch her off guard and she steps back as though she''s genuinely offended. Sensing you have the upper hand, you push your advantage. "Oh yeah, I bet when the boys come by your house they all bring a paper bag to put over that face of yours. They love using your tits to get off, they just don''t want to see your face while they do it!"'
 					'"H-how dare you!" Emily begins to stammer in fury. "I-! You-!"'
 					'"I don''t have time for this," you interrupt her. "Let me know if any of them manage to cum without a blindfold. I''ll take them to the doctor to get them some glasses!" Her jaw drops as you saunter past feeling good about yourself.' 
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
@@ -162,13 +167,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 			
 			elseif tits >= 5:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"What''s the matter whore? Wish you didn''t have such fat cow tits?" she says with fake concern and pushing out her chest, obviously trying to talk down your larger <<$titsize>> breasts.'
+				'"What''s the matter, whore? Wish you didn''t have such fat cow tits?" she says with fake concern and pushing out her chest, obviously trying to talk down your larger <<$titsize>> breasts.'
 				
 				act'"What''s wrong with having big breasts?"':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/2.jpg"></center>'
 					'"What''s wrong with having big breasts?!" you exclaim. "Yours are big too!"'
-					'"True," she says while walking up to you so you''re shoulder to shoulder. "But mine are soft and perky and <i>just</i> the right size. Any bigger and they end up fat and saggy like yours where you have to worry about knocking someone out if you turn too fast." And then paying no more attention to you at all, she strides off while your jaw hits the floor. By the time you recover from this offense, she''s already long gone.'
+					'"True," she says while walking up to you so you''re shoulder to shoulder. "But mine are soft and perky and <i>just</i> the right size. Any bigger and they end up fat and saggy like yours where you have to worry about knocking someone out if you turn too fast." Paying no more attention to you, she strides off while your jaw hits the floor. By the time you recover from this offense, she''s already long gone.'
 					'<i><b>This. Fucking. Bitch!</b></i>'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end
@@ -178,10 +183,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 				act'Insults are just the mark of a jealous bitch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/3.jpg"></center>'
-					'"What? Are you saying that just because you''re jealous that you don''t have these instead of those mosquito bites you call breasts?"'
+					'"Are you saying that because you''re jealous you don''t have these instead of those mosquito bites you call breasts?"'
 					'"<i>Excuuuuuuuse me?!</i>" Your words seem to catch her off guard and she steps back as though she''s genuinely offended. "How could you even say that?! My breasts are obviously-"'
-					'"Excuses, excuses!" you say, cutting her off. "You can say whatever you like, the only thing I know is that <i>my</i> milkshakes bring all the boys to the yard." You step up to her and whisper in her ear, "And damn right, <i>they''re better than yours,</i>" before stepping off and striding away confidently.'
-					'<i>Suck it bitch,</i> you think to yourself as you walk away.'
+					'"Excuses, excuses!" you say, cutting her off. "You can say whatever you like, the only thing I know is that <i>my</i> milkshakes bring all the boys to the yard." You step up to her and whisper in her ear. "And damn right, <i>they''re better than yours,</i>"'
+					'<i>Suck it bitch,</i> you think to yourself as you confidently walk away.'
 					act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 				end
 			end
@@ -190,40 +195,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_2':
 		'Walking through the studio, you round the corner of a set and nearly bump into Emily.'
 		'"Oh. It''s you," she says flatly.'
 		'"Uhh, yeah... I never introduced myself the last time we saw each other. I''m <<$model[''firstname'']>>, I''m a new model here at the agency."'
-		'"Yeah, I know, I knew. Models are the only ones who walk around here naked, I''m not stupid."'
-		'"Right... So-" you start to say something but she interrupts you.'
+		'"Yeah, I know. Models are the only ones who walk around here naked, I''m not retarded."'
+		'"Right... So-" you start to say something, but she interrupts you.'
 		'"Look, are you just here to waste my time?"'
 		act'"Excuse me?"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, taken aback. "Excuse me?"'
 			'"I''m asking if you''re just trying to waste my time. Because everywhere, I go, that''s all you ever seem to do: get in my way and waste my fucking time."'
-			'She brushes past you rolling her eyes. You hear her muttering under her breath as she walks away. "Fucking amateurs, why do they even waste time with girls like that here..."'
+			'She brushes past you while rolling her eyes. You hear her muttering under her breath as she walks away. "Fucking amateurs, why do they even waste time with girls like that here..."'
 			act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 		end
 		act'"What''s your problem bitch?"':
 !!			emily['hate'] += 1
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Okay, what''s your problem bitch?" you snap back at her. "I''ve only spoken to you two times and both times you''ve been nothing but a vicious cunt. What the fuck did I ever do to you?"'
+			'"Okay, what''s your problem bitch?" you snap back at her. "I''ve only spoken to you two times and both times you''ve been nothing but a cunt. What the fuck did I ever do to you?"'
 			'Emily gets in your face and snaps back at you. "My problem with you is that you''re always in my fucking way! You come here, standing around like you''re going to get famous, and wasting everyone else''s time that they should be spending on me!"'
 			'"Oh, and you are going to get famous?" you retort.'
-			'"Yes. Because unlike you, I''ve been getting ready for this my whole life. I spent all of high school eating right and working out, getting a thin body and the most volouptuous ass. I started working here the moment I turned 18 and have spent every day since working with the photographers to become the perfect model. I''ve done hundreds of shoots, I''m sponsored by lingerie and clothing companies, and currently I''m working on breaking into the actress business. And then here <i>you</i> are, coming in probably just here for easy money like some kind of cheap whore and you expect me to treat you as some kind of special snowflake?"'
+			'"Yes. Because unlike you, I''ve been getting ready for this my whole life. I spent all of high school eating right and working out, getting a thin body and the most voluptuous ass. I started working here the moment I turned 18 and have spent every day since working with the photographers to become the perfect model. I''ve done hundreds of shoots, I''m sponsored by lingerie and clothing companies, and currently I''m working on breaking into the actress business. And then here <i>you</i> are, coming in for easy money like some kind of cheap whore and expecting me to treat you like some kind of special snowflake!"'
 			act'"I didn''t realize how serious you were"':
 				*clr & cla
 				emily['hate'] -= 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
 				'You find yourself taken aback by her tirade and step away from her.'
 				'"I-, I''m sorry Emily. I didn''t realize you were so serious about your work here. I never meant to bother you, I just... we just bumped into each other by accident, I swear."'
-				'She sighs a bit in exhasperation but otherwise recomposes herself. "Okay, whatever. It''s not a big deal I guess, just don''t make a habit of it," she says and brushes past you. You hear her muttering under her breath as she walks away. "Fucking amateurs, why do they even waste time with girls like that here..."'
+				'She sighs in exasperation, but otherwise recomposes herself. "Okay, whatever. It''s not a big deal I guess, just don''t make a habit of it," she says and brushes past you. You hear her muttering under her breath as she walks away. "Fucking amateurs, why do they even waste time with girls like that here..."'
 				act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 			end
 			act'"Who gave you the right?"':
 				*clr & cla
 				emily['hate'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-				'"And you think that gives you the right to act the way you do?" you shout back. "Plenty of other people are working hard here, why does your own work make you deserve it more than the rest? What, just because you were born with big tits and a pretty face makes you ''destined'' to make it big? You''re such a self-entitled brat!"'
-				'"A filthy amateur like you wouldn''t understand," she huffs. "And that''s always what you''re going to be. Just another picture of tits on the internet with a forgotten name to go along with them."'
+				'"And you think that gives you the right to act the way you do?" you shout back. "Plenty of other people are working hard here, so why does your work make you deserve it more than the rest? Just because you were born with big tits and a pretty face doesn''t mean you''re ''destined'' to make it big. You''re such a self-entitled brat!"'
+				'"A filthy amateur like you wouldn''t understand," she huffs. "And that''s always what you''re going to be. Just another set of tits on the internet with a forgotten name to go along with them."'
 				'Without another word, she walks away, leaving you in fumes.'
 				act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 			end
@@ -251,25 +256,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_modelling':
 	emily['model'] = rand(1,6)
 	if emily['model'] = 1:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a nude shoot. She is completely concentrated on her task and doesn''t even notice you. You spend a few moments watching before walking away.'
+		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a nude shoot. She''s completely concentrated on her task and doesn''t even notice you. You spend a few minutes watching before walking away.'
 	elseif emily['model'] = 2:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/nude2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a nude shoot. She looks happy and completely different from any other time you''ve interacted with her, but you can only assume it has something to do with the shoot as she blows on some kind of party toy. You watch for a few more moments before walking away.'
+		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a nude shoot. She looks happy and completely different from any other time you''ve interacted with her, but you can only assume it has something to do with the shoot as she blows on some kind of party toy. You watch for a few more minutes before walking away.'
 	elseif emily['model'] = 3:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/sexy.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a shoot. She''s wearing some kind of transparent lingerie and unzipped jeans, carefully and purposefully working her thin body to create a sexy atmosphere. You watch for a few more moments before walking away.'
+		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a shoot. She''s wearing some kind of transparent lingerie and unzipped jeans, carefully and purposefully working her thin body to create a sexy atmosphere. You watch for a few more minutes before walking away.'
 	elseif emily['model'] = 4:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/underwear.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of an underwear shoot. As you watch she moves through a bunch of different positions but never actually stopping to pose. And the expressions she puts on don''t seem like a freeze frame of emotion, more like all of her movements are part of the expression together. Taking a look at the camera, you realize this is some kind of video they''re filming, maybe a commercial. You watch for a little while longer before walking away.'
+		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of an underwear shoot. As you watch, she moves through a bunch of different positions but never actually stops to pose. The expressions she puts on don''t seem like a freeze frame of emotion, more like all of her movements are part of the expression together. Taking a look at the camera, you realize this is some kind of video they''re filming, maybe a commercial. You watch for a little while longer before walking away.'
 	elseif emily['model'] = 5:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/sponsor.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a shoot. She''s dancing around and acting playful while intermittently stripping out of her clothing with big bold letters of what the brand is. Maybe this is some kind of sponsorship or commercial she''s filming right now? Maybe both. You watch for a little while longer before walking away.'
 	elseif emily['model'] = 6:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/modelling/ana.mp4"></video></center>'
 		if anastasia[status] > 0:
-			'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a lingerie shoot with Anastasia. The two of them sit on the ground together taking cues from each other and the photographers as they go through poses. Anastasia doesn''t seem to notice but something about Emily''s face makes her seem bitter, like she''s annoyed to be working with her. Maybe it has something to do with her rankings in the studio. You watch for a few more moments before walking away.'
+			'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a lingerie shoot with Anastasia. The two of them sit on the ground together taking cues from each other and the photographers as they go through poses. Anastasia doesn''t seem to notice but something about Emily''s face makes her seem bitter, like she''s annoyed to be working with her. Maybe it has something to do with her rankings in the studio. You watch for a few more minutes before walking away.'
 		else
-			'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a lingerie shoot with another model you feel like you''ve seen around. The two of them sit on the ground together taking cues from each other and the photographers as they go through poses. The other woman doesn''t seem to notice but Emily seems really bitter, like she''s annoyed to be working with her. You wonder what that''s about as you watch for a few more moments before walking away.'
+			'Looking around for Emily, you find her on set in the middle of a lingerie shoot with another model you feel like you''ve seen around. The two of them sit on the ground together taking cues from each other and the photographers as they go through poses. The other woman doesn''t seem to notice but Emily seems really bitter, like she''s annoyed to be working with her. You wonder what that''s about as you watch for a few more minutes before walking away.'
 		end
 	end
 		
@@ -285,9 +290,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_warning':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
 		'You sigh deeply, turning around to see exactly what you expect: bitchy looking Emily walking towards you.'
 		if emily['hate'] <= 0:
-			'"I thought we were past this Em-" you start, before she cuts you off, stomping right up to your face, her glare reflecting an intensity of rage that you have never seen before, even from her.'
+			'"I thought we were past this Em-" you start before she cuts you off, stomping right up to your face, her glare reflecting an intensity of rage that you''ve never seen before, even from her.'
 		else
-			'"What is it n-" you start, before she cuts you off, stomping right up to your face, her glare reflecting an intensity of rage that you have never seen before, even from her.'
+			'"What is it n-" you start before she cuts you off, stomping right up to your face, her glare reflecting an intensity of rage that you''ve never seen before, even from her.'
 		end
 		'"You''re really rising through the ranks around here." Her voice is completely calm, a strange contrast from the burning fury you see behind her eyes. "Made a name for yourself. Good for you!"'
 		'She gives you a chilling smile.'
@@ -295,7 +300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_warning':
 		act'Gulp':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-			'You reflexively swallow in fear, shying back away from her.'
+			'You reflexively swallow in fear and shyly back away from her.'
 			'"A good bitch knows her place," Emily regards you with a smirk, eyes still dead and lacking humor. "Do what I say and you won''t have to learn yours."'
 			'She walks away without another word, leaving just as abruptly as she appeared.'
 			act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
@@ -305,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_warning':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/5.jpg"></center>'
 			'"And why would I do that?" you snort.'
-			'"Because you''re an good bitch," Emily regards you with a smirk, eyes still dead and lacking humor. "Bitches know their place. And if they don''t, they get put into their place, whether they like it or not. Consider this your final warning."'
+			'"Because you''re a good bitch," Emily regards you with a smirk, eyes still dead and lacking humor. "Bitches know their place. And if they don''t, they get put into their place, whether they like it or not. Consider this your final warning."'
 			'She walks away without another word, leaving just as abruptly as she appeared.'
 			act'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 		end
@@ -358,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_chat':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/5.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', 2
-				'"What? You''re so afraid of your position that if you give help to a silly amateur like me it''ll knock you off your pedestal? Huh. Maybe you''re not good enough for me to be asking after all."'
+				'"What? You''re so afraid of your position that if you give help to a silly amateur like me it''ll knock you off your pedestal? Huh. Maybe you''re not good enough for me to be asking after all..."'
 				'Emily''s eyes narrow at your words before re-adjusting herself to respond. "I suppose I could give some advice to a poor unfortunate soul like you. At the very least maybe you''d stop embarrassing yourself on set and making the studio look bad. I can''t have you bringing down Aphrodite''s name and my fame just by association."'
 				'You smirk inwardly, pleased with how easy it was to manipulate her into doing this and listen as she starts giving you real advice.'
 				'"The most important things about modelling is how to hold yourself. If you can''t pull off the pose to make yourself or the clothes you''re wearing look sexy then you''ve failed. Practice the poses, spend time in front of the mirror testing looks. And when you''re on set, keep changing it up. Taking direction from the photographers is important but if you want to act like a professional then you need to take initiative. Every time the camera flashes, alter your position, even if just a little bit. They''re only looking for one perfect shot, either they have it or they don''t. But help them search."'
@@ -381,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emily_chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/emily_r/talking/1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I was wondering if you could give some advice about keeping a model''s figure. Do you have any?"'
-		'"Yeah, don''t live like a filthy pig. What, do you want me to write out a diet plan for you that lets you keep stuffing your face ice cream and chocolate? Cause that doesn''t exist, stupid."'
+		'"Yeah, don''t live like a filthy pig. What? Do you want me to write out a diet plan for you that lets you keep stuffing your face with ice cream and chocolate? Cause that doesn''t exist, stupid."'
 		act'Keep chatting':gt'model_emily1', 'emily_chat'
 	end
 

locations/model_jeff1.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hi! Are you the new model here?"'
 		'"Yeah, I-" you start to say.'
-		'"Welcome to our little family!" the girl says, interrupting you, suddenly jumping up and wrapping her arms around your neck.'
+		'"Welcome to our little family!" the girl says, interrupting you and suddenly jumping up and wrapping her arms around your neck.'
 		'You can feel her puffy nipples against your skin and you can tell she''s really not shy in the least about physical boundaries or personal space.'
 		'"Ah-! Ahm... Thanks..." you say awkwardly when she lets you go. "I was just looking around, getting familiar with the studio."'
 		'"How do you like it? I personally find it very busy... People don''t want to play with me very often..." she says with a pouty face.'
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_1':
 					'"That''s your real name?"'
 					'"Nope!" She keeps smiling.'
 					'"Ahh, uh... Okay..." you say.'
-					'All of sudden she seems to startle herself and squeaks, "Oh no! I totally forgot, I was supposed to be on set! Gotta run! It was nice meeting you!" you hear Jeff call back as she skips off towards the other side of the studio.'
+					'All of sudden she seems to startle herself and squeaks. "Oh no! I totally forgot, I was supposed to be on set! Gotta run! It was nice meeting you!" you hear Jeff call back as she skips off towards the other side of the studio.'
 					'<i>What a weird girl...</i>'
 					jeff['status'] = 2
 					act'Leave':gt 'foto','studio'
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/4.jpg"></center>'
 	jeff['status'] = 3
-	'As you walk past a set, you hear someone yell out from an armchair, "Hey there cutie!"'
-	'Looking over you see Jeff smiling at you, sitting with her legs up and her neat little pussy on peeking out from between them. She must''ve just finished a shoot.'
+	'As you walk past a set, you hear someone yell out from an armchair. "Hey there, cutie!"'
+	'Looking over, you see Jeff smiling at you, sitting with her legs up and her neat little pussy on peeking out from between them. She must''ve just finished a shoot.'
 	act'Hey!':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -66,9 +66,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 		act'"Isn''t that bad?"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/6.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Isn''t that bad?" you ask. "After all, they''re paying you to be on set and do the job aren''t they?"'
-			'"Oh I knowwwww! But why can''t I have a bit of fun now and then?"'
-			'She starts to kick her leg up and down playfully.'
+			'"Isn''t that bad?" you ask. "After all, they''re paying you to be on set and do the job, aren''t they?"'
+			'"Oh I knowwwww! But why can''t I have a bit of fun now and then?" She starts to kick her leg up and down playfully.'
 			'Her carefree attitude is very interesting to you. You decide to ask her what she did before she was a model.'
 			'"Before? Oh, I used to work for an escort service."'
 			act'"An... escort service...?"':
@@ -77,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 				'"An... escort service...?" you ask tentatively.'
 				'"Mhmmm! I needed some money to pay for my university tuition so I did some part time escorting."'
 				'"So you would..."'
-				'"Let old men use my innocent, nubile, teen body to fulfill their sexual fantasies for money? Sure! Sometimes they there weren''t very nice though," she says putting on a pouty face. "It could be hard sometimes because of that, but I was a big girl so I powered through! Anyways, that''s why I switched to modelling after a little while. They''re much nicer here!"'
+				'"Let old men use my innocent, nubile, teen body to fulfil their sexual fantasies for money? Sure! Sometimes they there weren''t very nice though," she says putting on a pouty face. "It could be hard sometimes because of that, but I was a big girl so I powered through! Anyways, that''s why I switched to modelling after a little while. They''re much nicer here!"'
 				act'That''s... good?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/8.jpg"></center>'
@@ -85,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 					'"What is it you said you were studying in university?"'
 					'"Economy and management!" she says proudly.'
 					'<i>This airhead? Economy and management?!</i>'
-					'"Well, I guess I should go now. Gotta get paid! Bye <<$model[''nickname'']>>!" she says and then runs off.'
+					'"Well, I guess I should go now. Gotta get paid! Bye <<$model[''nickname'']>>!" she says and runs off.'
 					act'Leave':gt 'foto','studio'
 				end
 			end
@@ -96,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 				'"An escort service??" you ask in surprise.'
 				'"Mhmmm! I needed some money to pay for my university tuition so I did some part time escorting."'
 				'"So you would have sex with people for money?"'
-				'"Yup! I''d let them fulfill their every sexual fantasy! For some reason a lot of them liked this position," she says, putting her legs up in the air and flashing her pussy at you. "It paid the bills really well and even let me get a nice apartment in the residential area after I paid off my tuition for that year. Sometimes they there weren''t very nice though," she says putting on a pouty face. "It could be hard sometimes because of that, but I was a big girl so I powered through! Anyways, that''s why I switched to modelling after a little while. They''re much nicer here!"'
+				'"Yup! I''d let them fulfil their every sexual fantasy! For some reason a lot of them liked this position," she says, putting her legs up in the air and flashing her pussy at you. "It paid the bills really well and even let me get a nice apartment in the residential area after I paid off my tuition for that year. Sometimes they weren''t very nice though..." she says putting on a pouty face. "It could be hard sometimes because of that, but I was a big girl so I powered through! Anyways, that''s why I switched to modelling after a little while. They''re much nicer here!"'
 				act'That''s... good?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/8.jpg"></center>'
@@ -104,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_2':
 					'"What is it you said you were studying in university?"'
 					'"Economy and management!" she says proudly.'
 					'<i>This airhead? Economy and management?!</i>'
-					'"Well, I guess I should go now. Gotta get paid! Bye <<$model[''nickname'']>>!" she says and then runs off.'
+					'"Well, I guess I should go now. Gotta get paid! Bye <<$model[''nickname'']>>!" she says and runs off.'
 					act'Leave':gt 'foto','studio'
 				end
 			end
@@ -327,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jeff_sex_talk':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/jeff_m/talking/22.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Definitely the time I fucked my bio professor."'
 		'"You fucked your professor?"'
-		'"Oh yeah, I fuck any professor I think I can get away with. Really easy way to bump up your grades. Older guys always have their specific fetishes and my bio professor has a bit of an oral fixation with nipples. The first time we hooked up, I came three times before he even put it in me! That man has a mouth that was made to suck on titties."'
+		'"Oh yeah, I fuck any professor I think I can get away with. Really easy way to bump up your grades. Older guys always have their specific fetishes and my bio professor has a bit of an oral fixation with nipples. The first time we hooked up, I came three times before he even put it in me! That man has a mouth that was <i>made</i> to suck on titties."'
 		act 'Continue': gt'model_jeff1', 'jeff_sex_talk'
 	end
 	

locations/model_krystal.qsrc

@@ -464,13 +464,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'krystal3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/meeting3/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You see Krystal standing by one of the sets with a male.'
+	'You see Krystal standing by one of the sets with a man.'
 	'<i>Must be a photographer.</i>'
 	act'Say hi':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/meeting3/2.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hey Krys-"'
-		'You stop suddenly as the guy starts to reachs up her skirt and down her dress.'
+		'You stop suddenly as the guy starts to reaches up her skirt and down her dress.'
 		act'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/meeting3/3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystal3':
 			'You timidly walk over to her.'
 			'"This is my boyfriend, Ben," she says while he fondles her breast.'
 			'"Uhmm... Nice to meet you Ben..." You hold out your hand and he says nothing to you, continuing to grope her and kiss the back of her neck.'
-			'"Oh, don''t mind him," Krystal continues on. "We haven''t had sex since -<i>ahhh!</i>- this morning, so he''s very-! Eager-!" Her last word comes out as a squeal when he pinches her nipple and pulls on it.'
+			'"Oh, don''t mind him," Krystal continues on. "We haven''t had sex since -<i>ahhh!</i>- this morning, so he''s very-! eager-!" Her last word comes out as a squeal when he pinches her nipple and pulls on it.'
 			'"Did you want to stick around? We could make this a threesome," she says casually while leaning onto her boyfriend. She''s clearly enjoying his advances.'
 			act'"No, that''s okay..."':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/shower.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/cuni2.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'As you head into the shower area, you''re hit in the face by the unmistakable sound of someone moaning in pleasure.'
 	*nl
 	'"Ahh! Yes! Just like that!"'
@@ -802,14 +802,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 			pcs_makeup = 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 			dynamic $showerdin
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/doggy5.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You step into a stall and turn on the shower, trying your best to ignore what is going on while Krystal starts getting fucked from behind.'
 			if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 			if pcs_horny >= 40:
 				act 'Use the shower head on your pussy':
 					cla
 					*clr
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash2.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/showerfuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash2.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/leg_up2.mp4"></video></center>'
 					*nl
 					'Her boyfriend pushes her against the wall and pulls her leg up to get deep inside her. Krystal''s moans and the sound of cock slamming into her pussy are too much for you and you can''t stop yourself from placing the shower head between your legs, massaging your pussy with powerful jets of warm water and fingers.'
 					'Your voices start to sync together, echoing out of the stalls in perfect time with each other.'
@@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 						cla & *clr
 						if exhibitionist_lvl < 2:
 							pcs_mood += 15
-							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/showercum.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/cum_jerkoff1.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Her boyfriend pulls out of her and she jacks him off furiously until he spatters her belly with his cum.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', -10
 							$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 							end
 						else
 							pcs_mood += 15
-							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/showercum.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/cum_jerkoff1.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Her boyfriend pulls out of her and she jacks him off furiously until he spatters her belly with his cum.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'no'
 							gs 'arousal', 'clit_vibe', -5, 'masturbate', 'exhibitionism'
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 			if exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
 				act 'Dry off':
 					cla & *clr
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/showerfuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/leg_up2.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You start to towel off looking a little enviously at Krystal when her boyfriend pushes her against the wall and starts to take her from the front.'
 					*nl
 					'You take one last look with a bit of regret and go back to the main floor of the studio.'
@@ -886,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystalshower':
 			else
 				act 'Dry off':
 					cla & *clr
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/showerfuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/leg_up2.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You shyly towel off, still doing your best to ignore the wild and unashamed sex of your co-worker and her boyfriend, who have now switched positions so Krystal''s back is to the wall with her leg up and his big fat cock now pummelling her from the front.'
 					*nl
 					'As you finish drying off you realize how wet between the legs you are. Blushing hard you put your towel in the bin and go back to the main floor of the studio.'

locations/model_mari.qsrc

@@ -3,12 +3,16 @@
 !! ---------------------------------------- Mari Model ---------------------------------------------------------
 !!npc_rel['A213'] = Mari
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_1':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_age':
 	if month >= 5 and day >= 20:
 		mari['age'] = year - 1999
 	else
 		mari['age'] = year - 1998
 	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_1':
+	gs 'model_mari','mari_age'
 	if mari['status'] =  2:gt 'model_mari','mari_2'
 	if mari['status'] =  3:gt 'model_mari','mari_3'
 	if mari['status'] =  4:gt 'model_mari','mari_4'
@@ -198,6 +202,7 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_2':
+	gs 'model_mari','mari_age'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading1.jpg"></center>'
 	'On your way to a shoot, you see Mari on a break, sitting in the chair of an unused set. At least you think she''s on break because she''s reading a book. But you''re not totally sure since she''s also completely naked.'
@@ -273,6 +278,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_3':
 	*clr & cla
+	gs 'model_mari','mari_age'
 	if $mari['used_firstname'] = '':
 		$mari['used_firstname'] = $model['firstname']
 		$mari['used_nickname'] = $model['nickname']
@@ -304,6 +310,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_4':
 	*clr & cla
+	gs 'model_mari','mari_age'
 	mari['busy'] = rand(1,3)
 	mari['status'] =  rand(3,4)
 	mari['busy_cooldown'] = hour + 2
@@ -352,6 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_4':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
+	gs 'model_mari','mari_age'
 	act'Leave':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading13.jpg"></center>'
@@ -540,10 +548,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_underwear_chat':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'I buy from Fashionista':
+	act'I buy from Lusso Intimo':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I get most of my underwear from Fashionista," you tell her.'
+		'"I get most of my underwear from Lusso Intimo," you tell her.'
 		'"Oh yeah? I''ve never shopped there before. What kind of stuff do they have?"'
 		'"Super stylish and fancy. Very lacy. I really like it."'
 		'"Oh. I''m not really into lace. A bit uncomfortable for me. Maybe I''ll try something else. Thanks for the suggestion though!"'
@@ -721,10 +729,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 
 	if mari['name_chat'] = 0:gs 'model_mari','mari_nametalk'
 	
+	
 	gs'model_mari','mari_parents'
 	gs'model_mari','mari_fakepassport_talk'
 	gs'model_mari','mari_first_nude'
-
+	gs'model_mari','other_models_talk'
 	
 end
 
@@ -846,26 +855,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_nametalk3':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"It is, actually," you nod.'
-			'"Really?" Mari perks up at that.'
-			'"You seem surprised," you laugh.'
-			'"Most of the other models use a proper fake name," she says. "I didn''t expect anybody else to use their real name."'
-			act'Keep chatting':gt 'model_mari','mari_modelling_chat'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_same_nametalk'
 		end
 	elseif $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname:
 		act'It''s my nickname':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"It is, actually," you nod. "Well, sort of. It''s a nickname for me, like you."'
-			'"Really?" Mari perks up at that.'
-			'"You seem surprised," you laugh.'
-			'"Most of the other models use a proper fake name," she says. "I didn''t expect anybody else to be like me in this regard."'
-			act'Keep chatting':gt 'model_mari','mari_modelling_chat'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_same_nametalk'
 		end
 	else
 		act'No, it''s <<$pcs_firstname>>':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"It''s not," you shake your head. "My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. My friends call me <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			if $pcs_nickname ! $pcs_firstname:
+				'"It''s not," you shake your head. "My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. My friends call me <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			else
+				'"It''s not," you shake your head. "My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			end
 			!!'"<<$pcs_nickname>>..." Mari says, smiling to herself as if seeing how your name feels in her mouth. "I like it. Do... do you mind if I call you that?"'
 			gs 'model_mari','mari_nametalk5'
 		end
@@ -898,8 +905,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_nametalk4':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
 		'You feel bad leaving her in the dark. She''s right. It''s only fair after all.'
-		'"My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>," you admit. "My friends call me <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-		gs 'model_mari','mari_nametalk5'
+		if $model['firstname'] = $pcs_firstname:
+			'"<<$pcs_firstname>> is my real name," you admit.'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_same_nametalk'
+		elseif $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname:
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> is my real name," you admit. "Sort of. It''s my nickname."'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_same_nametalk'
+		elseif $pcs_nickname ! $pcs_firstname:
+			'"My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>," you admit. "My friends call me <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_nametalk5'
+		else
+			'"My real name is <<$pcs_firstname>>," you admit.'
+			gs 'model_mari','mari_nametalk5'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -931,6 +949,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_nametalk5':
 end
 
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_same_nametalk':
+	'"Really?" Mari perks up at that.'
+	'"You seem surprised," you laugh.'
+	if $model['firstname'] = $pcs_firstname:
+		'"Most of the other models use a proper fake name," she says. "I didn''t expect anybody else to use their real name."'
+	else
+		'"Most of the other models use a proper fake name," she says. "I didn''t expect anybody else to be like me and basically still use their real name."'
+	end
+	act'Keep chatting':gt 'model_mari','mari_modelling_chat'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_parents':
 	if mari['parent_ask'] < 1 and mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg':
 		act'Ask about her parents':
@@ -1176,9 +1205,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_first_nude2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_first_nude2.shave':
-	*nl
 	'"They made you shave for it?" you ask.'
-	'"Yeah. The studio has this policy that every model''s first full frontal has to shave her... yeah... I''d never completely shaved everything off like that before so it was a weird experience at first. Mostly felt... breezy? Like being more naked than naked if that makes any sense. It''s a good thing I like being naked!" she laughs.'
+	'"Yeah. The studio has this policy that every model''s first full frontal has to shave her... yeah... I''d done it once before, but it''s not like I showed anybody, let alone had photographs taken of it. It made me feel... naked? Like being more naked than naked if that makes any sense. It''s a good thing I like being naked!" she laughs.'
 	gs'model_mari', 'mari_first_nude4'
 end
 
@@ -1187,7 +1215,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_first_nude3':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No," you shake your head. "I haven''t seen yours."'
-		*nl
 		'"Well, that''s probably for the best," Mari replies, a faint blush coloring her cheeks. "You''d probably tease me for looking too cheerful. Honestly? It was a great experience for me. I had a lot of fun doing it. I''ve never really been embarrassed about my body so when they asked me if I wanted to pose nude I just figured why not? It was a little embarrassing to shave everything, uhm, down there... but even that wasn''t too bad. It mostly felt... breezy? Like being more naked than naked if that makes any sense. It''s a good thing I like being naked!" she laughs. "But since I did my debut early on in my career, the majority of my portfolio is filled with nudes now."'
 		gs'model_mari', 'mari_first_nude4'
 	end
@@ -1196,7 +1223,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_first_nude3':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Yeah I''ve gone through yours."'
-		*nl
 		'"Oh dear!" Mari blushes hard. "Well then you could probably tell I might have been having too much fun. I''ve never really been embarrassed about my body so when they asked me if I wanted to pose nude I just figured why not? It was a little embarrassing to shave everything, uhm, down there... but even that wasn''t too bad. It mostly felt... breezy? Like being more naked than naked if that makes any sense. It''s a good thing I like being naked!" she laughs. "But honestly? It was a great experience for me. And since I did it early on in my career the majority of my portfolio is filled with nudes now."'
 		gs'model_mari', 'mari_first_nude4'
 	end
@@ -1209,12 +1235,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_first_nude4':
 			if modelfoto['fullnude'] > 0 and mari['knows_underage'] = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"So you did your first nude shoot when you were still underage?" you ask.'
-				'"Yeah, just like you," she smirks. "I guess maybe it''s not something to be too proud of when you put it like that. It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the math. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same when I was 17 as I do when I''m 18."'
+				if mari['age'] = 18:
+					'"Yeah, just like you," she smirks. "I guess maybe it''s not something to be too proud of when you put it like that. It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the math. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same in photos of when I was 17 as I do now that I''m 18."'
+				else
+					'"Yeah, just like you," she smirks. "I guess maybe it''s not something to be too proud of when you put it like that. It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the math. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same in photos of when I was 17 as I do in photos of when I was 18."'
+				end
 				act'Keep chatting':gt 'model_mari','mari_modelling_chat'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading5.jpg"></center>'
+				
 				'"So you did your first nude shoot when you were still underage?" you ask.'
-				'"Yeah, I guess so," she shrugs. "It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the math. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same when I was 17 as I do when I''m 18."'
+				if mari['age'] = 18:
+					'"Yeah, I guess so," she shrugs a little shyly. "It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the maths. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same in photos of when I was 17 as I do now that I''m 18."'
+				else
+					'"Yeah, I guess so," she shrugs a little shyly. "It certainly makes it harder to consider telling my parents about what I do. If they ever start reading dates, they might do the maths. My mother would be mortified! But there''s no turning back now. I was only a couple months from my birthday anyways. Seems like a technicality at that point. I look the same in photos of when I was 17 as I do in photos of when I was 18."'
+				end
 				act'Keep chatting':gt 'model_mari','mari_modelling_chat'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1359,6 +1394,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pc_nude_debut_talk':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'other_models_talk':
+	act'Ask about the other models':
+	
+	end
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'weekend_plans':
 	if week = 5:
 		act'Ask about her weekend plans':
@@ -1380,7 +1421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weekend_plans':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Any plans for the weekend Mari?" you ask.'
-					'"Yeah, I''m gonna go home to visit my parents," she smiles.'
+					'"I''m gonna go home to visit my parents," she smiles.'
 					'"In Gadukino?"'
 					'"Mhm. I make a point of trying to see them every couple weeks. Sometimes work gets in the way, but I can usually make it out at least once a month. It''s nice that they''re only a train ride away. I always feel better after spending some time with them."'
 				end
@@ -1403,16 +1444,16 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_sex_talk':
 	if mari['sex'] = 0:
-		act'Ask for sex advice':
+		act'Talk about sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			mari['sex'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Sex?? You want to ask me for advice on sex???" she says, seemingly surprised.'
-			'"Yeah, I just wanted to ask you about it since you always have such good advice about everything."'
+			'"Sex?? You want to talk about sex???" she says, seemingly surprised.'
+			'"Yeah, just a bit of girl talk," you say with a conspirational smile.'
 			act'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading5.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Well... That''s... I..." Mari is blushing heavily, her face turning dramatically red. You think this is the first time you''ve ever seen her embarrassed about something. "I might not be the best person to ask <<$mari[''used_nickname'']>>..."'
+				'"Well... That''s... I..." Mari is blushing heavily, her face turning dramatically red. You think this is the first time you''ve ever seen her embarrassed about something. "I don''t have a lot to talk about in that department <<$mari[''used_nickname'']>>..."'
 				act'"Wait... don''t tell me you..."':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1422,7 +1463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_sex_talk':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading5.jpg"></center>'
 						'Your mouth is agape as she wriggles in embarrassment. She doesn''t seem upset by any means, she''s still clearly smiling. It kind of reminds you of when you were younger and when girls asked each other if they had ever kissed a boy.'
-						'"You''re a virgin?! You''re a nude model who''s <<sisterAge>> and living in St. Petersburg and you''re a virgin?!"'
+						'"You''re a virgin?! You''re a nude model who''s <<mari[''age'']>> and living in St. Petersburg and you''re a virgin?!"'
 						'Your exclamations are met with hushes, "Shh! Shh! Shh shh shh! Not so loud!" as Mari tries to quiet you down while holding back her own nervous laughter.'
 						act'"But how?!"':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1488,7 +1529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_sex_talk':
 												'"It''s okay <<$mari[''used_nickname'']>>," Mari says, instantly breaking back into her usual smile. "You''re probably right. No harm done."'
 												act'Continue':
 													*clr & cla
-													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading17.jpg"></center>'
+													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading19.jpg"></center>'
 													'"No harm done..." she mutters to herself again with a far-off look.'
 													gs 'model_mari','mari_chat'
 												end
@@ -1506,7 +1547,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_sex_talk':
 												cla & *clr
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/models/mari/talking/reading19.jpg"></center>'
 												'"Maybe?" you shrug. "The way you act, how kind you are to the other girls here, the way you''re always hugging me... It might be more affectionate than you realize. But I can''t be the judge of that. Only you can say if it''s something more."'
-												'"I guess this is something I''ll have to think about..."'
+												'"I guess this is something I''ll have to think about..." she mumbles with a far-off look.'
 												gs 'model_mari','mari_chat'
 											end