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[text edit] clean up volAndGev

Spackled Lanturn преди 3 години
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      locations/volAndGev.qsrc

+ 8 - 8
locations/volAndGev.qsrc

@@ -15,20 +15,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if andGevknow = 0:
 		bumpK += 1
 		if pcs_apprnc < 60:
-			'The guy sneered at you and muttered something about a bow-legged cow.'
+			'The guy sneers at you and mutters something about a bow-legged cow.'
 		else
-			'The guy smiled, looking at you.'
+			'The guy smiles, looking at you.'
 		end
 
 		act 'Swear at him':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You cursed at the guy for roughly pushing you.'
+			'You curse at the guy for roughly pushing you.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc < 60:	
-				'The guy flipped you the bird and smiled.'
+				'The guy flips you the bird and smiles.'
 			else
-				'The guy just looked at you and shrugged.'
+				'The guy just looks at you and shrugs.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		andGevknow = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 	
-		'You finally had enough. The same guy pushed you again and you lost it. You grabbed the ball and whipped it at him with all your strength, aiming at the back of his head.'
+		'You finally have had enough. The same guy pushes you again, and you lose it. You grab the ball and whip it at him with all your strength, aiming at the back of his head.'
 		if rand(0,2) = 2:
 			AndRev = 1
-			'Unfortunately, he turned towards you just as you released the ball and it connected right on his nose. The cracking sound of his nose breaking could be clearly heard. Fortunately for you, no one really liked him and they all declared they saw nothing.'
+			'Unfortunately, he turns towards you just as you release the ball and it connects right with his nose. The cracking sound of his nose breaking can be clearly heard. Fortunately for you, no one really liked him and they all declare they saw nothing.'
 		else
-			'The ball connected with the back of his head and sent him head over heels. By the time he got back on his feet, you managed to make it look like you had been doing something else the entire time.'
+			'The ball connects with the back of his head and sends him head over heels. By the time he gets back on his feet, you manage to make it look like you had been doing something else the entire time.'
 		end
 	end