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[text edit] clean up shulgahome

Spackled Lanturn 3 tahun lalu
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1 mengubah file dengan 7 tambahan dan 7 penghapusan
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      locations/shulgahome.qsrc

+ 7 - 7
locations/shulgahome.qsrc

@@ -18,23 +18,23 @@ if npc_rel['A112'] < 30:$serg_obr = ' uncle' else $serg_obr = ''
 act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
 !Entry conditions:
 if week < 6 and hour >= 10 and hour < 16:
-	'When you ring the doorbell, no one comes to answer the door. Apparently both '+func('gopsex','hide','Shulga_var_name')+' and Sergey are not at home.'
+	'When you ring the doorbell, no one comes to answer the door. Apparently, both '+func('gopsex','hide','Shulga_var_name')+' and Sergey are not at home.'
 	if npc_rel['A112'] >=70: 'You could still enter with the key that Sergey gave you.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 16 and hour <= 19:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/serge/serge2.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you ring the doorbell,<<$serg_obr>> Sergey comes to answer the door.'
-	'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>", he shrugs. "If you''re looking for Vasily: he''s not here, and I don''t know when he''ll be back."'
-	if npc_rel['A112'] >=30: 'He offers: "You can come in anyway, if you want?"' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>," he shrugs. "If you''re looking for Vasily, he''s not here, and I don''t know when he''ll be back."'
+	if npc_rel['A112'] >=30: 'He offers, "You can come in anyway, if you want?"' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif week = 5 or week = 6 and hour >= 20:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/serge/serge2.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you ring the doorbell,<<$serg_obr>> Sergey comes to answer the door.'
-	'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>", he shrugs. "If you''re looking for Vasily: he''s not here. He''s probably at the disco with everyone else."'
-	if npc_rel['A112'] >=30: 'He offers: "You can come in anyway, if you want?"' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>," he shrugs. "If you''re looking for Vasily, he''s not here. He''s probably at the disco with everyone else."'
+	if npc_rel['A112'] >=30: 'He offers, "You can come in anyway, if you want?"' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 2 and hour < 5:
-	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too late to go visit them, you''d wake everyone up!'
+	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too late to go visit them. You''d wake everyone up!'
 	if npc_rel['A112'] >=70: 'You could use the key that Sergey gave you to enter the apartment quietly.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 5 and hour < 10:
-	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too early, they won''t be out of bed yet.'
+	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too early. They won''t be out of bed yet.'
 	if npc_rel['A112'] >=70: 'You could use the key that Sergey gave you to enter the apartment quietly.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 else
 	'The door is opened by '+func('gopsex','hide','Shulga_var_name')+' and you are invited in.' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'