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Vengeance11 2 years ago
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+ 8 - 7
locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -717,8 +717,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You jump on the spot and slam the drawer closed before turning to face a rather annoyed looking Albina.'
-                        '"Do you mind <i>not</i> going through my personal things when I''m not here? I wouldn''t do it to you, so I don''t appeciate you doing it to me."'
-                        'You gingerly nod your head at her in reply.'
+            '"Do you mind <i>not</i> going through my personal things when I''m not here? I wouldn''t do it to you, so I don''t appeciate you doing it to me."'
+            'You gingerly nod your head at her in reply.'
 			act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 		end
 		
@@ -727,7 +727,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, condoms, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes, a large butt plug and a strap-on harness all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye. You look around, but it looks Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer.'
+		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, condoms, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes, a large butt plug and a strap-on harness all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
+		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer.'
 		act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 	end
 end
@@ -741,7 +742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 		'You point towards the laptop sitting at the foot of her bed. "I should''ve guessed that you would have something like that."'
 		'"Yeah, I honestly don''t know why I bought it. I sometimes look up workout techniques and sex tips, but I mostly just use it to watch porn when I feel like rubbing one out."'
-       'You''re a little surprised that she would admit such a thing to you given how private and guarded she is about herself.'
+        'You''re a little surprised that she would admit such a thing to you given how private and guarded she is about herself.'
 	
 		act 'Do something else':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 		
@@ -768,11 +769,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					*clr & cla
 					
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/kompmas.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep rubbing your clit as you feel your climax through the orgasmic wave of pleasure.'
+					'You keep rubbing your clit as you feel your climax building through the pleasure.'
 					temp = rand(0,3)
 					if temp = 0:
-                                                 npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
-						'Just before you are about to cum, you hear someone clearing their throat. Your heart leaps into your mouth and you turn to see Albina standing in the doorway watching you. You quickly rip your hand from between your legs and pull your clothes back into place. You can tell she''s pissed at you as she storms over and slams the laptop screen down. "Have fun <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You sheepishly apologize as she takes the laptop and throws it aside, not caring as it clatters along the floor. "Don''t touch my stuff when I''m not here!"'
+                     npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
+						'Just as you''re about to cum, you hear someone clearing their throat. Your heart leaps into your mouth and you turn to see Albina standing in the doorway watching you. You quickly rip your hand from between your legs and pull your clothes back into place. You can tell she''s pissed at you as she storms over and slams the laptop screen down. "Have fun <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You sheepishly apologize as she takes the laptop and throws it aside, not caring as it clatters along the floor. "Don''t touch my stuff when I''m not here!"'
 						act 'Find something else to do':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 		
 					else

+ 80 - 79
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -691,41 +691,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp'
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'agil_exp'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra.jpg"></center>'
-			'After the roll call, Coach Pavlovich announces "Today you are going to be running."'
+			'After the roll call, Coach Pavlovich announces that you will be running.'
 			act 'Run':
 				*clr & cla
 				if temper >= 10 and sunWeather = 1:
 					runoutside = rand(1,6)
 					if runoutside = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run, before he pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
-						'As you run through the forest, you feel a hand on your ass- it''s Ivan. He''s much faster than you and sprints past you to show you how fast he can be when he wants. He then pauses and lets you catch up, and you run together for a while.'
+						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run. He then pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
+						'As you run through the forest, you feel a hand on your ass - it''s Ivan. He''s much faster than you and sprints past you to show you how fast he can be when he wants. He then pauses and lets you catch up, and you run together for a while.'
 						act 'Show him your tits':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra3.jpg"></center>'
-							'Making sure no one else is near you, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> boobs to Ivan. You almost immediately notice his erection growing in his tight shorts, and he awkwardly tries to hide it. As you pull your shirt back down, you give him a sweet smile and say "Try hiding that while you''re running past everyone!"'
+							'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. You almost immediately notice the erection growing in his tight shorts, and he awkwardly tries to hide it. As you pull your shirt back down, you give him a sweet smile and say "Try hiding that while you''re running past everyone!"'
 							'He grimaces as he sprints away from you, carefully checking to make sure no one is near him. You have a knowing smile on your face when, at the end of the class, his friends ask him why his lap time was so much slower than usual.'
 							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 						act 'Laugh it off and let him go':
 							cla
-							'"Very funny Ivan." you tell him as you give him a wink. He salutes you theatrically as he sprints off again, finishing the run well before anyone else.'
+							'"Very funny Ivan." you tell him as you give him a wink. He playfully salutes you as he sprints off again, finishing the run well before anyone else.'
 							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 					elseif runoutside = 2:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run, before he pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
+						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run. He then pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
 						'As you run through the forest, you hear someone coming up beside you.'
 						act 'Focus on running':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You are too focused on your running and you keep your eyes straight ahead. Running as quickly as you can, you hear whoever it was starting to fall behind.'
+							'You remain focused on your running and keep your eyes straight ahead. Running as quickly as you can, you hear whoever it was starting to fall behind.'
 							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 						act 'Look':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushtopless.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn your head and look over to see Anushka running next to you, but she has her top off and is carrying it in her hand. You can''t help but notice her small breasts bouncing with every step she takes. She notices where your eyes drift and grins at you. She runs alongside you for most of the run and a few of the boys pass the two of you, who all slow down for a bit to take a good long look. Some of the girls look as well, but most just give dirty or disgusted looks to Anushka.'
+							'You turn your head and look over to see Anushka running next to you, but she has her top off and is carrying it in her hand. You can''t help but notice her small breasts bouncing with every step she takes. She notices where your eyes drift and grins at you. She stays alongside you for most of the run and a few boys pass by, slowing down to take a good look. Some of the girls look as well, but most just give dirty or disgusted looks to Anushka.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -734,25 +734,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					elseif runoutside = 3:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nopanstretch.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run. As Lina does some stretching, it becomes apparent she forgot her panties. As she stretches, her shorts pull to one side, showing her pussy off to everyone. Before anyone can say anything, she stops and stands up, oblivious to the little show she just gave. Coach Pavlovich then pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
-						'The rest of the run turns out to be very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
+						'The rest of the run is very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
 						act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run, before he pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
-						'It turns out to be very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
+						'Your run ends up being very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
 						act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 					end
 				else
 					runinside = rand(1,5)
 					if runinside = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/butt.jpg"></center>'
-						'While running laps around the inside of the gym, Anushka passes behind Mr. Nikolaevich and pulls down the back of her shorts to show off her panty clad ass. It doesn''t take too long before many of the boys catch up to Anushka, but not pass her. They wait until she passes behind the teacher and flashes them her panty clad ass again.'
+						'"The weather isn''t great, so you''ll be running as many laps of the gym as you can. Start when you''re ready."'
+					    'You start running laps around the inside of the gym and it''s uneventful until you see Anushka pass behind Mr. Nikolaevich and pull down the back of her shorts to show off her panty clad ass. It doesn''t take too long before many of the boys catch up to Anushka, but not pass her. They wait until she passes behind the teacher and flashes them her panty clad ass again.'
 						gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You join the class in running laps around the gymnasium. Half-way into the fourteenth lap, you wonder if there''s any way gym class could be more boring than this.'
+						'"The weather isn''t great, so you''ll be running as many laps of the gym as you can. Start when you''re ready."'
+						'You join the class in running laps around the gym. Half-way into your fourteenth lap, you wonder if there''s any way gym class could be any more boring than this.'
 					end
 					gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 					act 'Finish the run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
@@ -766,8 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				grupvalue[2] += 1
 			end
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra4.jpg"></center>'
-			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will be taking turns performing vaults.'
-			'The instructor is actually counting and recording how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
+			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will be taking turns performing vaults. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 			act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		elseif fizrarand = 3:
@@ -780,11 +781,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand1.jpg"></center>'
-				'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. The instructor is actually counting and recording how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
+				'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
 				'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. Now, the top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with mixed responses: the guys are whistling and whooping appreciatively, while most of the girls are staring you down in disapproval. You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra6.jpg"></center>'
-				'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. The instructor is actually counting and recording how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
+				'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
 				if hotcat >= 6:'Some of the boys stop what they''re doing when it''s your turn, coming over to shout some words of support.'
 				if pcs_stren <= 20:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
@@ -795,10 +796,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of pull-ups. Better than most of the girls, but less than the jocks.'
 				elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
-					'In the end, you wind up doing a doing great. You do more pull-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
+					'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more pull-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
-					'You''ve done enough pull-ups in the past that this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
+					'You''ve done plenty of pull-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
 				end
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
@@ -807,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'stren_exp'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra7.jpg"></center>'
-			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be doing sit-ups. The boys get it a little harder, as they''re asked to do pull-ups and sit-ups while the girls only have to do sit-ups. The instructor is actually counting and recording how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
+			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be doing sit-ups, but that the boys will also have to do pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
 			if hotcat >= 6:'Some of the boys stop what they''re doing when it''s your turn, coming over to shout some words of support.'
 			if pcs_stren <= 20:
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
@@ -818,23 +819,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of sit-ups. Better than most of the girls, but less than the jocks.'
 			elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 				grupvalue[2] += 1
-				'In the end, you wind up doing a doing great. You do more sit-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
+				'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more sit-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
 			else
 				grupvalue[2] += 2
-				'You''ve done enough sit-ups in the past that this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
+				'You''ve done plenty of sit-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 			act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		elseif fizrarand = 5:
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp'
-			'For one of the activities, the teacher breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can jump rope the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
+			'The teacher breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can jump rope the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
 			if pcs_cupsize <= 20:
 				if pcs_vital <= 30:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
-					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries.'
+					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries.'
+					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					'Jumping rope is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done.'
@@ -849,10 +850,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
+					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
-					'Jumping rope is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your boobs bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
+					'Jumping rope is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your breasts bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
 					'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how long you can jump rope without messing up. You manage to go the longest in a couple of rounds of the competition. You could actually jump rope for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
@@ -861,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumph.mp4"></video></center>'
 				if pcs_vital <= 30:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
-					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
+					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
@@ -885,28 +886,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				rope_orgasm += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra8.jpg"></center>'
 				'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-				'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more and more intense as you try to climb higher. After a few seconds, the stimulation from the rope against your clit brings you to orgasm, and you have to do everything in your power to not fall as you quiver against the rope, stifling your moans. Your teacher looks up to you and says "Why are you shaking, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you tired or something? Go ahead and come down then."'
+				'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough rope rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more intense. After a few seconds, the stimulation from the rope against your clit brings you to orgasm, and you have to do everything in your power not to fall as you quiver against the rope, stifling your moans. Your teacher looks up to you and says "Why are you shaking, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you tired or something? Go ahead and come down then."'
 			elseif pcs_horny >= 50 and pcs_horny < 100:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/rope.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_stren <= 30: 
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more and more intense as you try to climb higher. You don''t even make it half way up the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough rope rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more intense. You don''t even make it half way up the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				elseif pcs_stren >= 40: 
 					pcs_horny += 20
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more and more intense as you try to climb higher. You almost make it to the top of the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough rope rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more intense. You almost make it to the top before you have to give up and slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				elseif pcs_stren >= 60: 
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					pcs_horny += 30
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more and more intense as you try to climb higher. You make it all the way to the top, but the distraction of the rubbing of the rope made you almost slipe once or twice. Once at the top you slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough rope rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. Despite the distraction, you manage to make it to the top, even though you almost slipped once or twice due to the pleasurable stimulation. You slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
 					pcs_horny += 30
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You do your best to climb up, but the rubbing of the rope against your pussy gets more and more intense as you try to climb higher. Even with the distraction of the rubbing of the rope, you easily and quickly make it to the top. Once at the top you slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough rope rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. Even with the rubbing of the rope distracting you, you easily and quickly make it to the top. Once there, you slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/rope.jpg"></center>'
@@ -914,32 +915,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
 					pcs_horny += 5
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You don''t even make it half way up the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You don''t even make it half way up the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				elseif pcs_stren >= 40: 
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You almost make it to the top of the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You almost make it to the top of the rope before you have to give up and slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				elseif pcs_stren >= 60: 
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					pcs_horny += 15
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. You make it all the way to the top, but the distraction of the rubbing of the rope made you almost slipe once or twice. Once at the top you slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. Despite the distraction, you manage to make it to the top, even though you almost slipped once or twice due to the pleasurable stimulation. Once at the top you slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
 					pcs_horny += 15
 					'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns climbing the ropes today.'
-					'You climb the rope as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. Even with the distraction of the rubbing of the rope, you easily and quickly make it to the top. Once at the top you slide back down, which rubs even more against your clit and turns you on even more.'
+					'You climb as instructed, but can''t help but feel the rough robe rubbing against your pussy through your clothes. Even with the rubbing of the rope distracting you, you easily and quickly make it to the top. Once there, you slide back down, which causes the rope to rub against your clit and turn you on even more.'
 				end
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 			act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		elseif fizrarand = 7:
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp'
-			'For one of the activities, the teacher breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can perform jumping jacks the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
+			'The teacher breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can perform jumping jacks the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
 			jumpingjacks = rand (1,5)
 			if jumpingjacks = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/bouncebhand.jpg"></center>'
-				'A girl from your brother''s grade is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing, she obviously isn''t wearing a bra. The bouncing of her breasts starts to draw the attention of a lot of the boys, just as her friend walks up behind her, reaches round and grabs her boobs. The first girl lets out a startled squeak then laughs, followed by a blush when her friend whispers in her ear and she sees all the boys staring.'
+				'A girl from your brother''s grade is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing - she obviously isn''t wearing a bra. The bouncing of her breasts starts to draw the attention of a lot of the boys, just as her friend walks up behind her, reaches round and grabs her breasts. The girl lets out a startled squeak, followed by a blush when her friend whispers in her ear and she sees all the boys staring.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -949,11 +950,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			end
 		elseif fizrarand = 8:
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'stren_exp'
-			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing push-ups. The instructor is actually counting and recording how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
+			'After the roll call, Mr. Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing push-ups. He also says that he will count how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
 			jumpingjacks = rand (1,5)
 			if jumpingjacks = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nipslip.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Alyona apparently doesn''t believe in wearing sports bras. During the pushup part of the class, the top of her boob pops out of her tank top, showing her nipple off for everyone to see. Anushka quickly points it out to her, making her blush a deep red as she quickly covers her nipple up and tries to ignore the laughter and all the staring boys around her.'
+				'Alyona apparently doesn''t believe in wearing sports bras. During the pushup part of the class, the top of her breast pops out of her tank top, showing her nipple off for everyone to see. Anushka quickly points it out to her, making her blush a deep red as she quickly covers her nipple up and tries to ignore the laughter and all the staring boys around her.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -973,10 +974,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 	if pcs_cupsize <= 20:
 		if pcs_vital <= 30:
 			grupvalue[2] -= 1
-			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries.'
+			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries.'
+			'You do about average among the girls before you stop. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done.'
@@ -993,7 +994,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
+			'You do about average among the girls before you stop. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a few seconds.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your boobs bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
@@ -1007,7 +1008,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumph.mp4"></video></center>'
 		if pcs_vital <= 30:
 			grupvalue[2] -= 1
-			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
+			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
@@ -1016,7 +1017,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'Jumping jacks is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s completely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'
 		else
 			grupvalue[2] += 2
-			'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard, and in no time they''ve gotten really sore. Fitness means enduring a little pain sometimes though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it, despite the help of the sports bra. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at your boobs.'
+			'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard, and in no time they''ve gotten really sore. Fitness means enduring a little pain sometimes though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it, despite the help of the sports bra. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at your breasts.'
 		end
 	end
 	gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
@@ -1037,7 +1038,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pushups':
 		'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of push-ups. Better than most of the girls, but less than the jocks.'
 	elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 		grupvalue[2] += 1
-		'In the end, you wind up doing a doing great. You do more push-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
+		'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more push-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
 	else
 		grupvalue[2] += 2
 		'You''ve done enough push-ups in the past that this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
@@ -1058,20 +1059,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 		act 'Listen in on Christina and Coach Pavlovich':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/sex/school/chcoachbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sneak up to Coach Pavlovich''s office door to listen to what they''re talking about. You hear Christina saying "Did you miss me, Sir?"'
-			'The coach doesn''t answer her in words, but does in gasps. Deciding you need to take the risk and look, you crack the door open and peek in.'
-			'What you see is like a dream come true; Christina, on her knees naked in front of Pavlovich, sucking his cock for all she''s worth.'
+			'You sneak up to Coach Pavlovich''s office door to listen to what they''re talking about. You hear Christina saying "Did you miss me, sir?"'
+			'The coach doesn''t answer her in words, but in gasps. Deciding you need to take the risk and look, you crack the door open and peek in.'
+			'What you see is like a dream come true; Christina, naked and on her knees in front of Pavlovich, sucking his cock for all she''s worth.'
 			+$OpenInnerThought+'"This is exactly what I was looking for!"'+$CloseInnerThought 
 			'Pulling out your phone, you make sure the flash is turned off, and start taking pictures.'
 			christinaQW['dompath'] = 2
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Keep Watching':
+			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cocksuck3.jpg"></center>'
 				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent, as gagging sounds fill the room.'
 				'The sounds and sight start making you wet, but you aren''t here to masturbate, so you keep taking as many pictures as you can.'
-				'Pavlovich seems to reach his limit and pulls mostly out, ordering her to keep her mouth open between gasps, and shoots thick ropes of cum into her waiting mouth.'
+				'Pavlovich seems to reach his limit and pulls out, ordering her to keep her mouth open before he shoots thick ropes of cum into her mouth.'
 				'Deciding you have enough evidence, and not wanting to play your hand just yet, you quietly close the door and sneak off, extremely pleased with yourself.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1226,7 +1227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Anushka, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Christina prepares to take her place as she finishes and steps aside.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Anushka, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1244,7 +1245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 					'You''re getting incredibly aroused watching this show and know where it''s going. You follow the other girls in masturbating as you watch and wait your turn. Christina soon reaches her explosive orgasm and drenches Sonia in a shower of pussy juice as she moans loudly. The other girls express their amazement while Sonia looks to be greatly enjoying herself. Anushka, Lina and a few other girls take their turns squirting over Sonia as you continue to rub your clit and finger yourself. Eventually, you feel your orgasm building and step up to Sonia as another girl finishes. You are surprised when Sonia suddenly starts licking your pussy as you stand above her. She is <i>really</i> good at this and you quickly feel yourself about to cum, so you pull her face out of your crotch and rub your engorged clit to bring yourself to orgasm.'
 					$orgasm_txt = 'You moan loudly as your pussy explodes and you squirt your juice all over Sonia''s already drenched face and into her mouth, Sonia happily taking it all and swallowing it.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-					'When you finish cumming, Sonia buries herself back in your pussy and starts licking you again. The pleasure is too good to stop her and for a few seconds you weakly stand there, having had one of the best orgasms in your life. You then somewhat reluctantly step off of her and let another girl have a go with her. Once the last few girls have had their turn, you all look down on Sonia, who is covered from head to breasts in girl cum, her cheeks bright red from all the slaps she recieved. She ignores the crude insults being thrown down at her and instead focuses all her attention on vigoursly fingering herself. The group insults her even more upon seeing this and a few even spit in her mouth, but she doesn''t seem to care and makes no effort to resist. You then all leave her sitting there and head to the lockers to get chnaged, where the girls all continue to laugh at and mock Sonia while showing videos to each other. You finish getting dressed and head out.'    
+					'When you finish cumming, Sonia buries herself back in your pussy and starts licking you again. The pleasure is too good to stop her and for a few seconds you weakly stand there, having had one of the best orgasms in your life. You then somewhat reluctantly step off of her and let another girl have a go with her. Once the last few girls have had their turn, you all look down on Sonia, who is covered from head to breasts in girl cum, her cheeks bright red from all the slaps she recieved. She ignores the crude insults being thrown down at her and instead focuses all her attention on vigoursly fingering herself. The group insults her even more upon seeing this and a few even spit on her face and in her mouth, but she doesn''t seem to care and makes no effort to resist. You then all leave her sitting there and head to the lockers to get changed, where the girls all continue to laugh at and mock Sonia while showing videos to each other. You finish getting dressed and head out.'    
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -8, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finish dressing':
@@ -1256,11 +1257,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		end
 	elseif gymshower = 5 and pcs_pubes >= 40:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/postphyssho2.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you step into the shower, some of the girls who are chatting to each other turn to look at you and start laughing.'
+		'As you step into the shower, some girls turn to look at you and start laughing.'
 		'"Seriously <<$pcs_nickname>>? Waxing isn''t just for floors you know!"'
 		'"It''s like there''s a gorilla between her legs!"'
-		'"You''d need a chainsaw to mow that lawn!"'
-		'Other girls in the room uncomfortably ignore the exchange, pretending not to hear because they don''t want to get involved or just trying to avoid becoming a target themselves.'
+		'"You''d need a chainsaw to cut that down!"'
+		'Other girls in the room uncomfortably ignore the exchange, pretending not to hear either because they don''t want to get involved or are just trying to avoid becoming a target themselves.'
 		act'Take the abuse':
 			cla & *clr
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -1276,9 +1277,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		act'Tell them to fuck off':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now they they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-			'"That''s probably the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!"'
-			'"You''d need a forest guide just to find her pussy under all that!"'
+			'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+			'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!"'
+			'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!"'
 			'"A machete to hack your way through too!"'
 			'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower fuming, your face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_shower'
@@ -1289,7 +1290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You roll your eyes and ignore them completely, turning on the faucet and rinsing your hair. They continue to sling insults at you, but you pay them no mind, picking up the soap and beginning to scrub your body.'
 			*nl
-			'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any more fun out of you and go turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
+			'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any reaction out of you and turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_shower'
 		end
 	else
@@ -1385,7 +1386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							'You give them a hard look. "I mean it, get the fuck out now!"'
 							'Dan starts to say something but Vitek sighs. "OK fine, we''re going. Why do you have to be such a bitch anyways?" Without waiting for a response, Vitek walks out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close, then you walk to your locker to dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
 						else
-							'"What the fuck are you doing? This is the girls shower, get out!" you yell at them.'
+							'"What are you doing? This is the girls shower, get out!" you yell at them.'
 							'The both just laugh. "So what? What are you going to do about it?"'
 							'You feel yourself start to panic. "I''ll scream! The coach is still in his office." He is most days anyways and you hope he is today.'
 							'Vitek gives you a hard look and takes a step towards you. You inhale like you are about to scream and he stops dead. "You''re going to regret this bitch." He then storms out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close, then you rush to your locker to quickly dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
@@ -1438,7 +1439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] > 60 and checkoutalbina = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She seems to be talking about the Starlets, but doesn''t sound happy about it. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
+					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She''s on the phone with her father, but doesn''t sound very happy about it. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
 					gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Yes':
@@ -1620,11 +1621,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 			checkoutalbina = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/albpeek.jpg"></center>'
 			if tits < 2:
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is clean shaven - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
 			elseif tits = 2:
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is clean shaven - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 			else
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is clean shaven - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'After a few moments of observation, you let your gaze slip away and turn back to your own clothes.'
@@ -1649,7 +1650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Lariska':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/larpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance at Lariska as she finishes drying herself off, wrapping her hair in a towel before bundling it around her head. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips, with small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. You also can''t help but notice that she keeps her bush trimmed and tidy.'
+			'You glance at Lariska as she finishes drying herself off, wrapping her hair in a towel before bundling it around her head. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips and small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. You also can''t help but notice that she keeps her bush trimmed and tidy.'
 			*nl
 			'Letting your gaze wander past her, you turn back to your own locker before anybody catches you staring and reach for your clothes.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1659,7 +1660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Lina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/linpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You take a peek at Lina as she starts to pull her thigh high''s on. She is slightly more athletic looking than most girls, with average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree.'
+			'You take a peek at Lina as she starts to pull her thigh highs on. She is slightly more athletic looking than most girls, with average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree.'
 			*nl
 			'After a few minutes, you look away, not wanting to get caught staring and sucked into an awkward conversation.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1703,11 +1704,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch2.jpg"></center>'
 		
 		if tits < 2:
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re rather small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re rather small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
 		elseif tits = 2:
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 		else
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 		end
 		*nl
 		'After a few minutes of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
@@ -1735,7 +1736,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	act 'Check out Lariska':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your attention homes in on Lariska, who is letting the water from the shower pour over her head, rinsing the suds from her body. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips, with small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. The stream of water running down her stomach draws your eyes between her legs, soap collecting and washing through the natural filter of her neatly trimmed bush.'
+		'Your attention homes in on Lariska, who is letting the water from the shower pour over her head, rinsing the suds from her body. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips and small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. The stream of water running down her stomach draws your eyes between her legs, soap collecting and washing through the natural filter of her neatly trimmed bush.'
 		*nl
 		'After a few minutes of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1873,9 +1874,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
 			'You see a couple of the girls teasing each other while getting dressed. One manages to get behind the other, grabs her panties, and pulls up. They both start laughing, obviously just messing around with each other. Things settle back down as the girl who got wedgied adjusts her panties and they leave the room, still teasing each other.'
 		else
-			'As Lariska finishes getting dressed, Christina walks up behind her, grabs the back of her panties and yanks up on them hard, making Lariska squeal a bit as she stands on her toes to try and relieve the pressure. Most of the other girls laugh at this. "Oh please, we all know you like things up your ass, so don''t act like you''re not enjoying this." Christina tells her.'
+			'As Lariska finishes getting dressed, Christina walks up behind her, grabs the back of her panties and yanks up on them hard, making Lariska squeal as she stands on her toes to try and relieve the pressure. Most of the other girls laugh at this. "Oh please, we all know you like things up your ass, so don''t act like you''re not enjoying this." Christina tells her.'
 			'"Ow! Let go Christina, it hurts! Please!" Lariska pleads in a slightly whiny, submissive tone.'
-			'Christina laughs. "Is that what you tell Ivan when you let him fuck your ass?" Lariska goes bright red at the comment and Christina gives another hard yank and Lariska winces even more.'
+			'Christina laughs. "Is that what you tell Ivan when you let him fuck your ass?" Lariska goes bright red at the comment as Christina gives another hard yank and Lariska winces even more.'
 			'"Whatever butt slut, let''s go." Christina says as she waves to Lina and the three of them walk out, Lariska trying to dig her panties out of her ass.'
 		end
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
@@ -1883,7 +1884,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 10:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/panties.jpg"></center>'
-		'As two of the underclass girls get dressed, another girl comments they have the exact same panties on, which gets them to stop and stand next to each other to show off their panties side by side. They both get a laugh out of the fact that they are wearing the same style and color of panties.'
+		'As two of the underclass girls get dressed, another girl comments on how they are wearing the exact same panties, which gets them to stop and stand next to each other to show off their panties side by side. They both get a laugh out of the fact that they are wearing the same style and color of panties.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 11:
@@ -1896,12 +1897,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nerdoutcast.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'As you are getting dressed you see a girl from your brother''s grade glaring at Christina, who is trying to get dressed quietly in a corner. Deciding to punish Christina for wearing panties, and maybe cheer the girl up, you sneak up behind Christina, grab her panties, and yank up, hard. Christina screams, then looks over her shoulder angrily to see who would dare, but when she sees you, she turns white, too scared to fight back. You drop to your haunches and push up, hard. Just as you think you might actually left her off the ground, the straps of her panties break, making her stumble into the lockers. Her panties hang off of her, wedged so tightly into her ass and pussy that they don''t fall off. Turning and smiling at the girl, who smiles back, you go back to getting dressed while Christina struggles to dig her panties out, sniffling.'
+			'As you are getting dressed you see a girl from your brother''s grade glaring at Christina, who is trying to get dressed quietly in a corner. Deciding to punish Christina for wearing panties, and maybe cheer the girl up, you sneak up behind Christina, grab her panties and yank them up hard. Christina screams and looks over her shoulder angrily, but turns white when she sees you, too scared to fight back as you pull even harder. Just when you think you might actually lift her off the ground, you hear the loud rip of her panties tearing, making her stumble into the lockers. Her panties hang off of her, wedged so tightly into her ass and pussy that they don''t fall off. Turning and smiling at the girl, who smiles back, you go back to getting dressed while Christina holds back tears as she struggles to dig her ruined panties out.'
 		elseif (grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5) and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grabs the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person pulling up your panties keeps pulling them up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit." She laughs and then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow. You spend a few minutes pulling your panties out of your ass crack and getting them back in place.'
+			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grabs the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person keeps pulling your panties up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit." She laughs and then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow. You spend a few minutes pulling your panties out of your ass crack and getting them back in place.'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'ache'
 		else
-			'As you finish dressing, you turn around in time to see Christina stand up on one of the benches, reach down, and grab a girl from your brother''s grade''s panties from behind. She yanks up on them hard, making the girl yelp and stand up. This doesn''t stop Christina though, who keeps lifting until she manages to lift the girl off her feet. She squirms and cries out, dangling from her panties. Some of the girls laugh, a few nervously, obviously afraid to make Christina mad, as others look away in disgust. The girl starts to beg Christina to let her go, which seems to only encourage Christina, who now starts bouncing the girl by her panties until there is a loud rip and the girl''s panties end up under her arms. The girl looks to be on the verge of tears and runs out once Christina finally lets go. Christina laughs some more then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow.'
+			'As you finish dressing, you turn around in time to see Christina stand up on one of the benches, reach down, and grab a girl from your brother''s grade''s panties from behind. She yanks up on them hard, making the girl yelp and stand up. This doesn''t stop Christina though, who keeps lifting until she manages to lift the girl off her feet. She squirms and cries out, dangling from her panties. Some of the girls laugh while others look away in disgust. The girl starts to beg Christina to let her go, which seems to only encourage Christina, who now starts bouncing the girl by her panties until there is a loud rip and the girl''s panties end up under her arms. The girl looks to be on the verge of tears and runs out once Christina finally lets go. Christina laughs some more then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow.'
 			'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		end
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
@@ -1946,7 +1947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_dress':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/smokecig.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel the need to have a smoke before you leave school, so you take out your pack of smokes. You pull a cigarette out, placing it between your lips before lighting it up and taking a long drag. You spend the next few minutes smoking your cigarette, feeling it relax you. Once finished, you snuff it out and throw the butt into one of the toilets.'
+			'You feel the urge to have a smoke before you leave school, so you take out your pack of cigarettes, pull one out and place it between your lips before lighting it up and taking a long drag. You spend the next few minutes smoking your cigarette, feeling yourself relax as you do. Once finished, you snuff it out and throw the butt into one of the toilets.'
 			act'Continue':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1957,7 +1958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_dress':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/smokejoint.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel the need to get high before you leave school, so you take a seat on one of the benches and take out a joint from your purse, placing it between your lips before lighting it up and taking a long drag. You can feel the effects quickly as you feel yourself relax and smile a bit. You spend the next few minutes smoking the joint until you are nice and high. Once you are done, you throw the roach in one of the toilets.'
+			'You feel the urge to get high before you leave school, so you take a seat on one of the benches and take a joint out of your purse, placing it between your lips before lighting it up and taking a long drag. You quickly feel yourself relaxing and smile as you lean back against the lockers. You spend the next few minutes smoking the joint until you''re as high as a kite. Once you''re done, you throw the roach in one of the toilets.'
 			act'Continue':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 		end
 	end

+ 3 - 3
locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 			act 'Choose spanking': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
 		else
 			*nl
-			'She takes a look at your file and slowly shakes her head. "I see, you already have detention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. That means I have no other choice but to use the alternative punishment."'
+			'She takes a look at your file and slowly shakes her head. "I see you already have detention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. That means I have no other choice but to use the alternative punishment."'
 			act 'Get spanked': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
 		end
 !!		if demerit >= 50:act 'Choose suspension': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'suspension'
@@ -691,8 +691,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suspended':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big29.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wait for half an hour until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shows up and she looks about as pissed as you have ever seen her. She walks over and you start to open your mouth, but she interrupts you. "I don''t want to hear it! Do you know how ashamed I am of you right now? They called me at work and told me to come and get you. Now everyone at work knows! You are so selfish! All you have to do is behave yourself and get good grades, but that''s apparently too hard for you."' 
-	'She grabs your arm and drags you out of the school. She lectures you the whole way home, in fact she never stops talking until she drops you off at the apartment. "I have to go back to work, so make yourself useful for once and clean this place up." She walks out and slams the door before you can reply.'
+	'You wait for half an hour until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shows up and she looks about as pissed as you have ever seen her. She walks over and you start to open your mouth, but she interrupts you. "I don''t want to hear it! Do you know how ashamed I am of you right now? They called me at work and told me to come and get you. Now everyone at work knows! You are so selfish! All you had to do was behave yourself and get good grades, but that''s apparently too hard for you."' 
+	'She grabs your arm and drags you out of the school. She lectures you the whole way home, in fact she never stops talking until she drops you off at the apartment. "I have to get back to work, so make yourself useful for once and clean this place up." She walks out and slams the door before you can reply.'
 	act 'Now what': gt 'korrPar'
 end
 

+ 110 - 110
locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -99,33 +99,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlovsk slut':
 	if grupTipe = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/coolslut.jpg"></center>'
 		if soniaPS = 0:
-			'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe in complete disgust. Just as you''re about to ask what is going on, Irina cuts you off. "Shut your cum hole, slut, I don''t want to smell your cum breath. We''ve all heard about what you have been up too. Your ass is out, you are no longer welcome around us anymore. Go hang out with the other outcasts or just find some guys dick to suck and maybe they will pretend to care about you." With that, Irina turns and walks away, Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
+			'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe in complete disgust. Just as you''re about to ask what''s going on, Irina cuts you off. "Shut your cum hole, slut! I don''t want to smell your cum breath. We''ve all heard about what you''ve been up to and your ass is out. You''re no longer welcome around us. Go and find some dick to suck and maybe they will pretend to care about you." With that, Irina turns and walks away as Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
 		else	
-			'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe in complete disgust. Just as you''re about to ask what is going on, Irina cuts you off. "Shut your cum hole, slut, I don''t want to smell your cum breath. We''ve all heard about what you have been up too. Your ass is out, you are no longer welcome around us anymore. Go hang out with the other outcasts or find Sonia so that the two of you can blab about the latest cock you sucked, I am sure you two have a lot in common now." With that, Irina turns and walks away, Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
+			'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe in complete disgust. Just as you''re about to ask what''s going on, Irina cuts you off. "Shut your cum hole, slut! I don''t want to smell your cum breath. We''ve all heard about what you''ve been up to and your ass is out. You''re no longer welcome around us. Go and find Sonia, I''m sure you two have a lot in common now." With that, Irina turns and walks away as Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
 		end	
-		'"What a waste, you fucking slut." He then spits at your feet before leaving as well. You hear many of the students around you, laughing as you look around. While not being part of the popular clique anymore, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either, start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+		'"What a waste, you fucking slut." He then spits at your feet before leaving as well. You hear many of the students around you laughing as you look around. Having been publically shamed and disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/jockslut.jpg"></center>'
 		if npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 2:
-			'Christina, Lariska, and Lina walk up to you, Lariska and Lina are looking at you in disgust, while Christina is smirking. She shoves you hard up against your locker. "What are you doing here slut? Shouldn''t you be in the boys bathroom sucking a bunch of cocks? We all heard that is all you do, suck cocks and let anyone fuck you, just like a whore. At least sluts know to get payed but you just give it away for free." She says, mockingly laughing, Lariska, Lina and several other students nearby join in, openly mocking you.'
+			'Christina, Lariska, and Lina walk up to you. Lariska and Lina are looking at you in disgust, while Christina is smirking. She shoves you hard up against your locker. "What are you doing here slut? Shouldn''t you be in the boys bathroom sucking a bunch of cocks? We all heard that''s all you do now. At least sluts know to get paid, but you just give it away for free." she says mockingly while laughing. Lariska, Lina and several other students nearby join in, openly mocking you.'
 		else
-			'Albina and Veronika walk up to you, Veronica looking at you in disgust, while Albina is smirking. She shoves you hard up against your locker. "What are you doing here slut? Shouldn''t you be in the boys bathroom sucking a bunch of cocks? We all heard that is all you do, suck cocks and let anyone fuck you, just like a whore. At least sluts know to get payed but you just give it away for free." She says, mockingly laughing, Veronika and several other students nearby join in, openly mocking you.'
+			'Albina and Lazar walk up to you with looks of disgust on their face. "What are you doing here? Shouldn''t you be in the boys bathroom sucking dick like the whore that you are?" Lazar says mockingly. Albina opens her mouth to say something, but chooses to remain quiet and stares at the floor.'
 		end
 		if soniaPS = 0:
-			'"Stay away from us and go hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore." She then leans in close. "If I see you around us again then I will show you what happens to sluts that don''t know their place." With that, they turn and walk away. Not being part of the jock clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+			'"Go and hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore." Lazar says before turning and walking away. Albina looks at you with what you think is disappointment before she shakes her head and follows Lazar. Having been publically shamed and disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 		else	
-			'"Stay away from us and go hang out with the other losers, I am sure you and Sonia have a lot in common now slut." Then she leans in close "If I see you around us again then I will show you what happens to sluts that don''t know their place." With that, they turn and walk away. Not being part of the jock clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+			'"Go and hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore. I''m sure you and and Sonia have a lot in common now." Lazar says mockingly before walking away. Albina looks at you with what you think is disappointment before she shakes her head and follows Lazar. Having been publically shamed and disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 		end	
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'A couple of students stand in front of you, wanting to get a better look at the slut based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them, they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming, hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something, he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what you have gotten yourself into but the things they say you have done..." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse."'
-		'He pauses for a second to stare at the dejected look on your face, realizing that you are now an outcast. He then lets out a short sigh. "I''m sorry, I really am but this is your own fault, I don''t know what you were thinking, doing all those sex things and I don''t care, but please leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you, as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. You take a second to look around, as most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+		'A group of students stand in front of you, wanting to get a better look at what''s written on your locker. When you look at them, they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you have the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, but most seem to be hiding or hurry off when you approach. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim, but just as you''re about to say something, he turns to you. "Please go away! I don''t know what you''ve gotten yourself into, but the things they say you''ve done..." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry, but I can''t be seen hanging out with you anymore. I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse."'
+		'He pauses for a second to stare at the dejected look on your face, realizing that you are now an outcast. He then lets out a short sigh. "I''m sorry, I really am but this is your own fault. What were you thinking doing all that.. sex stuff? Just leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. You take a second to look around as most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/gopnikslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'Paulina, Lera, and Lena are standing next to you. Lera is snickering, Paulina looks annoyed, like she''s preparing to beat you up while Lera looks at you with disgust. Paulina shakes her head at you and finally speaks up. "I don''t know what your problem is, but apparently hanging out, partying and having a good time wasn''t enough for you. Noooo, you had to go around and be the pathetic town slut. Don''t act all surprised, we''ve all heard about how you let any guy fuck you in whatever hole they desire. Spineless sluts have no place with us, so stay the fuck away from us or I will personally beat the living shit out of you." With that, Paulina shoves you against you locker and walks away.'
-		'Lena gives you a final look of disgust and shoves you once again while Lera gives you a few parting words before walking away. "If you ever get the idea to approach us, we will bring you to some nasty guys who will fuck you so hard that your holes will be able to fit a fucking watermelon through." Not being part of the gopnik clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+		'You turn and see Pauline, Lera and Lena standing next to you. Lera is snickering, Pauline looks like she''s preparing to beat you up and Lera looks at you with disgust. Pauline shakes her head at you and finally speaks up. "I don''t know what your problem is, but apparently hanging out, partying and having a good time wasn''t enough for you. Noooo, you had to go around and be the town bicycle! Don''t act all surprised, we''ve all heard about how you let any guy fuck you in whatever hole they desire. Spineless sluts have no place with us, so stay the fuck away from us or I will personally beat the living shit out of you." With that, Pauline shoves your against you locker and walks away.'
+		'Lena gives you a final look of disgust and shoves you again while Lera gives you a few parting words before walking away. "If you ever try to approach us, we''ll take you to some nasty guys who will fuck you so hard that your holes will be loose enough to stick a watermelon inside them!" Having been publically shamed and disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	end
-	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
+	'<font color = red>You have been kicked out of your social group and become an outcast.</font>'
 	grupTipe = 5
 
 	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
@@ -136,25 +136,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya there. They give you friendly smiles. Vicky speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have been talking and you seem to have the right attitude to be one of us. So what do you say, do you want to join the popular clique?" They seem to be waiting on your response.'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing behind you and turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been talking and you seem to have the right attitude to be one of us. So what do you say, do you want to join the popular clique?" Vicky asks and the three of them just stand there waiting on your response.'
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head no. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I don''t think that is a good idea."'
-		'Vicky frowns but then nods. "Suit yourself then." With that, she turns and leaves, Andrey just shakes his head at you and does the same.'
-		'Stasya gives you a once over. "I told you guys she wasn''t cool enough." Then shakes her head at you. "Loser!" and with that, she follows the others, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+		'You shake your head. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I don''t think that''s a good idea."'
+		'Vicky frowns but nods. "Suit yourself then." With that, she turns and leaves, Andrey just shakes his head at you and does the same.'
+		'Stasya gives you a once over. "I told you guys she wasn''t cool enough! What a loser!" With that, she follows the others, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
 
 		grupvalue[1] -= rand(300,500)
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','cool kids', -5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod your head, "Yes I would love it, I love hanging out with you guys."'
-		'Vicky gives you a hug. Once she lets go, Andrey wraps an arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on you are one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile, as the four of you walk to your next class.'
+		'You nod your head. "Yes I would love to! I love hanging out with you guys!"'
+		'Vicky gives you a hug. Once she lets go, Andrey wraps an arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on, you''re one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile as the four of you walk to your next class.'
 		
 		grupvalue[2] -= 200
 		grupvalue[3] -= 400
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid':
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','cool kids', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -180,10 +180,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid warn 1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya there. They give you friendly smiles. Vicky speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything ok with you?"'
-	'Before you can answer, Stasya adds. "You havn''t been setting the right example of late. You are acting a lot more like the rest of the losers in this school, so do you want to hang around with us anymore?"'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Vicky says. "Cool it, look <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want to hang out with us, just act like you normally do ok? That''s all where saying." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You certainly don''t want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing behind you and turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything okay?"'
+	'Before you can answer, Stasya chimes in. "You havn''t been setting the right example of late. You''re acting more like the losers than us, so do you want to keep hanging around with us or not?"'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "Cool it, Stasya! Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to hang out with us, just act like you normally do okay? That''s all we''re saying." Vicky says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids question whether you belong in the group or not...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid warn 2':
@@ -192,10 +192,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid warn 2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya there. Vicky speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know we talked about this before, but you still seem to be not getting with the program."'
-	'Before you can answer Stasya adds. "I told you she doesn''t want to be one of us, I don''t know why we ever let her hang out with us in the first place."'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Andrey says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to get your act together or you''re out, simple as that." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids to question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You better fix things or work your way into another group unless you want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we talked about this before, but you still seem to be not getting with the program." Vicky says with disdain.'
+	'Before you can answer, Stasya chimes in. "I told you she doesn''t want to be one of us! I don''t know why we ever let her hang out with us in the first place."'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to get your act together or you''re out, simple as that." Andrey says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids question whether you belong in the group or not. You need to improve your standing with them or risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid slut warn':
@@ -204,10 +204,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid slut warn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya there. Vicky speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, whats going on with you? We have all heard the rumors about your sexual exploits, we all like sex but come on, this is getting out of hand."'
-	'Before you can answer Stasya adds. "Maybe she just wants to be a slut."'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Andrey says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to start using a little discretion or you''re out." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids to question whether you belong or not, that''s not good. You better fix things and quick unless you want to become a outcast slut and that is the lowest of the low in school, you shudder to even think about it.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Vicky, Andrey and Stasya. "What''s going on with you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? We''ve all heard the rumors about your sexual exploits. We all like sex but come on, this is getting out of hand." Vicky says with a hint of disdain.'
+	'Before you can answer, Stasya chimes in. "Maybe she just wants to be a slut."'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to start using a little discretion or you''re out." Andrey says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other cool kids question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or you risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jock':
@@ -215,28 +215,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joinjock.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Lariska and Lina there. They give you friendly smiles. Lariska speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have been talking and you seem to have the right attitude to be one of us. So what do you say, do you want to join us, and become one of our fellow jocks?" They seem to be waiting on your response.'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Lariska and Lina giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been talking and you seem to have the right attitude to be one of us. So what do you say, do you want to join us and become a jock?" They seem to be waiting on your response.'
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head no. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I don''t think that is a good idea."'
-		'Lariska frowns but then nods. "Suit yourself then." With that, she turns and leaves.'
+		'You shake your head. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I don''t think that''s a good idea."'
+		'Lariska frowns then nods. "Suit yourself." With that, she turns and leaves.'
 		if npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 5:
-			'"Your loss, <<$pcs_nickname>>." and with that she follows after Lariska, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+			'Lina gives you a once over. "Your loss, <<$pcs_nickname>>." With that she follows after Lariska, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
 		else
-			'Lina gives you a once over. "Well at least Christina will be happy." and with that she follows after Lariska, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+			'Lina gives you a once over. "Well at least Christina will be happy." With that she follows after Lariska, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
 		end
 		grupvalue[2] -= rand(300,500)
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','jocks', -5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joinjock.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod your head, "Yes I would love to, I love hanging out with you guys."'
-		'Lariska gives you a hug. "From now on you are one of us." Lina gives you a friendly smile, with that they walk you to your next class.'
+		'You nod your head. "Yes, I would love to! I love hanging out with you guys!"'
+		'Lariska gives you a hug. "From now on you are one of us." Lina gives you a friendly smile and you all walk you to your next class.'
 		
 		grupvalue[1] -= 200
 		grupvalue[3] -= 500
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock':
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','jocks', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -262,10 +262,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock warn 1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Lariska and Lina there. They give you friendly smiles. Lariska speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything ok with you?"'
-	'Before you can answer Lina adds. "You haven''t been putting your all into sports and you are starting to act like some of the others, so you don''t want to hang around with us anymore?"'
-	'Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You certainly don''t want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Lariska and Lina giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything okay with you?" Lariska asks.'
+	'Before you can answer, Lina chimes in. "You haven''t been putting your all into sports and you''re starting to act like some of the others, so does that mean that you don''t want to hang around with us anymore?"'
+	'The bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks question whether you belong in the group or not...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jock warn 2':
@@ -274,14 +274,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock warn 2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Lariska and Lina there. They give you friendly smiles. Lariska speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know we talked about this before, but you still seem to be not getting with the program."'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Lariska and Lina giving you friendly smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we talked about this before, but you still seem to be not getting the idea." Lariska scoffs.'
 	if npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 5:
-		'Before you can answer Lina adds. "Some of us have been feeling like you aren''t really fitting in with us anymore and that we should probably cut you loose."'
+		'Before you can answer, Lina chimes. "Some of us have been feeling like you aren''t really fitting in with us anymore and that we should probably cut you loose."'
 	else	
-		'Before you can answer Lina adds. "Christina says she doesn''t want you to be one of us and that we should have never let you hang out with us in the first place."'
+		'Before you can answer, Lina chimes. "Christina says she doesn''t want you to be one of us and that we should have never let you hang out with us in the first place."'
 	end	
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Lariska says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to get your act together or you''re out, simple as that." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks to question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You better fix things or work your way into another group unless you want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to get your act together or you''re out, simple as that." Lina says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or risk becoming being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jock slut warn':
@@ -290,9 +290,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock slut warn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Lariska and Lina there. They give you friendly smiles. Lariska speaks  "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, whats going on with you? We have all heard the rumors about your sexual exploits, sex is fun, but what are you going to do next? Fuck the whole football team?"'
-	'Before you can answer, Lina adds. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to start using a little discretion or you''re out." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks to question whether you belong or not, that''s not good. You better fix things and quick unless you want to become a outcast slut and that is the lowest of the low in school, you shudder to even think about it.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Lariska and Lina giving you friendly smiles. "What''s going on with you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? We''ve all heard the rumors about your sexual exploits. Sex is fun, but what are you going to do next? Fuck the whole football team?"'
+	'Before you can answer, Lina chimes. "You need to start using a little discretion or you''re out." The bell then rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other jocks question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
@@ -300,23 +300,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joinnerd.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Artem, Feofan, Petka, Gerasim, Zinaida, and Julia there. They give you friendly smiles. Artem speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have been talking and we like you. We were wondering if you would like to come hang out with us at our game night?" They seem to be waiting on your response. You can''t help but think to yourself, <font color=#FF00CC>Joining them might mean that will be leaving my clique to join theirs</font>...'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see a group of nerds bunched up, all giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been talking and we like you. We were wondering if you would like to come hang out with us at our game night?" They seem to be waiting on your response.'
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head no. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I''m just not interested in doing a game night, sorry."'
-		'Artem frowns but then nods. "Oh, ok. Well maybe some other time." With that, he turns and the rest follow, looking a little depressed. Looks like they were really expecting and hoping you to join them. It makes you feel a little bad and leaves you to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+		'You shake your head. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I''m just not interested in doing a game night. Sorry."'
+		'Artem frowns then nods. "Oh, okay. Well maybe some other time then..." With that, he turns and the rest follow, looking a little disappointed. Looks like they were hoping you would join them. It makes you feel a little bad and wondering if you made the right choice.'
 		grupvalue[3] -= rand(300,500)
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','nerds', -5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joinnerd.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod your head, "Yes I would love to hang out with you guys and a game night sounds like a lot of fun."'
-		'Most of them start speaking at once, they seem as excited as you are about you joining them. You understand this means you are part of their group now. Finally Feofan talks loud enough the rest let him talk. "That''s great <<$pcs_nickname>> meet us at the community center library tonight at 20:00. See you then." With that they all start leaving and going to class, most saying they look forward to seeing you tonight.'
+		'You nod your head. "Yes, I would love to hang out with you guys! A game night sounds like a lot of fun."'
+		'They all start speaking at once, excited about you joining them. Feofan then speaks up. "That''s great <<$pcs_nickname>>! Meet us at the community center library tonight at 20:00. See you then." With that they all start leaving and going to class, saying that they look forward to seeing you tonight.'
 		
 		grupvalue[1] -= 500
 		grupvalue[2] -= 400
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','nerds', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -345,10 +345,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd warn 1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Artem, Feofan, Petka, Gerasim, Zinaida, and Julia there. They give you friendly smiles. Artem speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything ok with you?"'
-	'Before you can answer Julia adds. "You''ve been acting out of late. You are acting a lot more like the others in school, don''t you want to hangout with us anymore?"'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Feofan says. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>. We like you and want you to stay, but if you want to hang out with us, just act like you want to hang out with us? That''s all where saying." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You certainly don''t want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see a group of nerds bunched up and giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, is everything okay with you?"'
+	'Before you can answer, Julia chimes in. "You''re acting a lot like the others. Does that mean that you don''t want to hangout with us anymore?"'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>. We like you and want you to stay, but if you want to hang out with us, just act like you want to hang out with us? That''s all we''re saying." Feofan says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong in the group or not...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd warn 2':
@@ -357,10 +357,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd warn 2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Artem, Feofan, Petka, Gerasim, Zinaida, and Julia there. They give you friendly smiles. Artem speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know we talked about this before, but you are still acting out."'
-	'Before you can answer Julia adds. "Yeah we''re all worried about you, whats wrong? Is there anything we can do to help? Please just ask."'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Feofan says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I don''t know whats wrong, but if you don''t want to hang out with us, just say so, anyways what ever is wrong we hope things get better." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You better fix things or work your way into another group unless you want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see a group of nerds bunched up and giving you friendly smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we talked about this, but you''re still acting out." Artem says with disdain.'
+	'Before you can answer, Julia chimes in. "Yeah, we''re all worried about you. What''s wrong? Is there anything we can do to help? Please just ask."'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I don''t know what''s wrong, but if you don''t want to hang out with us, just say so. In any case, we hope things get better for you." Deofan says before the bell rings and you all hurry to class. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd slut warn':
@@ -369,9 +369,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd slut warn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Artem, Feofan, Petka, Gerasim, Zinaida, and Julia there. They give you friendly smiles. Feofan speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, whats going on with you? We have all heard some pretty disturbing rumors about you, if they are even half true... I just don''t know what to say. You always seemed like such a nice girl."'
-	'Before you can answer Petka adds. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you need to get yourself under control or you won''t be able to hang out with us anymore." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong or not, that''s not good. You better fix things and quick unless you want to become a outcast slut and that is the lowest of the low in school, you shudder to even think about it.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see a group of nerds bunched up and giving you friendly smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s going on with you? We''ve all heard some pretty disturbing rumors about you... If they''re even half true... I just don''t know what to say. You always seemed like such a nice girl." Feofan says with a hint of disappointment.'
+	'Before you can answer, Petka chimes in. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to get yourself under control or you won''t be able to hang out with us anymore." The bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other nerds question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
@@ -379,28 +379,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joingopnik.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Viktor and Lena there. Viktor gives you a hungry once over and Lena gives you a smirk. Viktor speaks "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have been talking and you seem like you have the right attitude to hang with us. So what do you say, want to come to one of our exclusive parties tonight?" They seem to be waiting on your response. You can''t help but think to yourself, <font color=#FF00CC>Joining them might mean that will be leaving my clique to join theirs</font>...'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Vitek and Lena. Vitek gives you a hungry once over and Lena gives you a smirk. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been talking and you seem like you have the right attitude to hang with us. So what do you say, want to come to one of our exclusive parties tonight?" They seem to be waiting on your response.'
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head no. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I''m just not in the partying mood tonight.""'
-		'Viktor''s eyes darken a bit. "What, you too good for us all of a sudden? Well fuck you then!" With that, he storms away, Lena looks at you like you are a complete idiot and then follows her brother, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+		'You shake your head. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I''m just not in the partying mood tonight.""'
+		'Vitek''s eyes darken. "What, are you too good for us all of a sudden? Well fuck you then!" With that, he storms away. Lena looks at you with a derogatory stare before following her brother, leaving you behind to wonder if you made the right choice.'
 		grupvalue[4] -= rand(300,500)
 		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','gopniks', -5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joingopnik.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod your head, "Yeah that sounds great, I love hanging out and maybe getting a little wasted."'
-		'Viktor smirks and gives Lena a long glance, you can tell they shared something but you don''t know what. "Lena will let you know where and when." With that, he turns and walks off, but you can''t help but feel you missed something, like he found something amusing which makes you a bit nervous.'
-		'Lena leans over. "Meet me and Lera after school at the apartment garages at eight this evening and we will take you there." She smiles like she knows something you don''t and then without further word or letting you ask anything she briskly walks away.'
+		'You nod your head. "Yeah that sounds great, I love hanging out and maybe getting a little wasted."'
+		'Vitek smirks and glances at Lena, leaving you wondering what they mean. "Lena will let you know where and when." With that, he turns and walks off, but you can''t help but feel you missed something, which makes you feel a little nervous.'
+		'Lena leans over. "Meet me and Lera after school at the apartment garages at eight this evening." She smiles like she knows something you don''t, but without a further word or letting you ask anything, she briskly walks away.'
 		gopnik_initiation = 1
 		gopnik_initiation_day = daystart
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+		act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -410,10 +410,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik warn 1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Viktor, Lena, Lera, and Dan there. Viktor gives you a once over. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the fuck is up with you?"'
-	'Before you can answer, Lena adds. "You have been acting like some submissive bitch, fucking grow and pair and get your shit together"'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Lera says. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want to hang out with us, just act like it ok? That''s all where saying." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You certainly don''t want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Vitek, Lena, Lera and Dan. Vitek gives you a once over. "What the fuck is up with you, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+	'Before you can answer, Lena chimes in. "You''ve been acting like a little submissive bitch lately. Grow a fucking pair and get your shit together!"'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want to hang out with us, just act like it okay? That''s all we''re saying." Lera says before the bell rings and the group disperses. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong in the group or not...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik warn 2':
@@ -422,10 +422,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik warn 2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Viktor, Lena, Lera, and Dan there. Lena gives you a slight shove into your locker. "What the fuck bitch, you can''t fucking hear or something or you think your too good for us."'
-	'Before you can answer, Dan adds. "I told you she didn''t belong, the bitch is too soft." He says as he plays with your hair." I don''t know why we let Vasily talk us into letting her hang out with us anyways, I mean maybe if she sucked a few more cocks we could look the other way." He says with a laugh.'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Vitek says. "Cool it Dan, <<$pcs_nickname>> get your shit together or you''re out, simple as that." Then the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong or not, that''s not good is it? You better fix things or work your way into another group unless you want to be a outcast.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Vitek, Lena, Lera and Dan. Lena shoves you into your locker. "What the fuck bitch? You deaf or something, or do you just think you''re too good for us?"'
+	'Before you can answer, Dan chimes in. "I told you she didn''t belong, this bitch is too soft." he says as he plays with your hair. "I don''t know why we let Vasily talk us into letting her hang out with us anyways. I mean maybe if she sucked a few more cocks we could look the other way..." he adds with a laugh.'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "Cool it, Dan. <<$pcs_nickname>>, get your shit together or you''re out, simple as that." Vitek says before the bell rings and the group disperses. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or you risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut warn':
@@ -434,23 +434,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut warn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the school hallway, you stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you so you turn to see Paulina, Lena, Lera, and Dan there. Dan stands uncomfortable close and wraps a arm around your hip and pulls you closer. "Hey slut, sucked any cocks today? I can give you another one to suck." before laughing.'
-	'Before you can answer, Lera adds. "Maybe she just wants to be a slut."'
-	'Again before you can get a word in edge wise. Paulina says to Lera. "We don''t need another Nush, one slut is enough."'
-	'Lera fires back. "Hey she isn''t a slut, she just likes to fuck, not like she lets anyone fuck her." She gives Dan a pointed look, which makes him give Lera a sour look in return.'
+	'You walk down the hallway and stop at your locker. You sense someone standing next to you and turn to see Pauline, Lena, Lera and Dan. Dan stands uncomfortably close and wraps an arm around your hip before pulling you in closer. "Hey slut. Sucked any cocks today? I can give you another one..." he says with a laugh.'
+	'Before you can answer, Lera chimes in. "Maybe she just wants to be a slut."'
+	'You are again interrupted before you can speak. "We don''t need another Nush, one slut is enough." Pauline says in reply.'
+	'Lera fires back. "Hey, he isn''t a slut! She just likes to fuck. It''s not like she lets just anyone fuck her. Not like <<$pcs_nickname>> here." She gives Dan a pointed look, which makes him give Lera a sour look in return.'
 	*nl
-	'Paulina rolls her eyes. "What ever, if you want to lick her ass so bad go ahead and do it, you carpet muncher."'
-	'Before Lera can reply Lena steps between the girls. "That''s enough, we are not here to bitch about this shit." She then turns to you. "And you, chill the fuck out and stop being the town bicycle or you''re out, got it?" They then turn and walk off, still chatting among themselves, shortly after the bell rings and you all hurry to class, but you can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong or not, that''s not good. You better fix things and quick unless you want to become a outcast slut and that is the lowest of the low in school, you shudder to even think about it.'
-	act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
+	'Pauline rolls her eyes. "Whatever. If you want to lick her ass so bad go ahead and do it, you carpet muncher."'
+	'Before Lera can reply, Lena steps between the girls. "That''s enough, we''re not here to bitch about this shit." She then turns to you. "And you, chill the fuck out and stop being the town bicycle or you''re out, got it?" They then turn and walk off, still chatting among themselves as the bell rings. You can''t help but worry. It seems your recent activity has made the other gopniks question whether you belong in the group or not. You better fix things fast or you risk being kicked out...'
+	act 'Go to class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid outcast':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/outcast.jpg"></center>'
-	'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe shaking her head. Just as you''re about to ask what is going on, Irina cuts you off. "Save it, we don''t care. I don''t know what happened to you, but you use to be cool. Now? Well you made your choice, you''re out, no longer welcome to hang with us." With that Irina turns and walks away, Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
-	'"Now you''re back where you always belonged, as an outcast with the other losers." He says before leaving as well. You hear most of the rest of the students laughing, as you look around. Not being part of the popular clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
-	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
+	'Irina and Dimka walk up to you. Dimka is smirking at you while Irina looks you over from head to toe shaking her head. Just as you''re about to speak, Irina cuts you off. "Save it, we don''t care. I don''t know what happened, but you use to be cool. Now? Well you made your choice. You''re no longer welcome to hang out with us." With that Irina turns and walks away as Dimka gives you a final look and shakes his head.'
+	'"Now you''re where you always belonged. With the other losers." he says before leaving as well. You hear the other students laughing as you look around. Having been publically disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+	'<font color = red>You have been kicked out of your social group and become an outcast.</font>'
 
 	grupvalue[1] = 0
 	grupvalue[2] -= 500
@@ -475,11 +475,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jock outcast':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/outcast.jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 5:
-		'Albina and Lazar walk up to you and Albina says "What are you doing here bitch? You use to know whats what and be focused on what''s important. Now you just fuck off doing what ever. So you know what, we say fuck off to you." She says, mockingly laughing, and several other students nearby join in, openly mocking you. "Stay away from us and go hang out with the other losers." Then she leans in close "Or I will show you what happens to bitches that don''t know their place." With that they turn and walk away. Not being part of the jock clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+		'Lazar and Albina walk up to you and Albina scoffs at you dismissively. "It seems like you care more about being a social reject than anything else, so fuck off and go hang out with the other losers where you belong. We''re not your friends anymore, and don''t try to pretend otherwise." She gives you a pitiful once over before forcefully shoving you aside and walking away. A disappointed looking Lazar just shakes his head at you before catching up with Albina, where you hear them clearly mocking you. Having been publically disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	else
-		'Christina, Lariska, and Lina walk up to you, Lariska and Lina are looking at you like you did something wrong, while Christina is smirking. She shoves you hard up against your locker. "What are you doing here bitch? You use to know whats what and be focused on what''s important. Now you just fuck off doing what ever. So you know what, we say fuck off to you." She says, mockingly laughing, Lariska, Lina and several other students nearby join in, openly mocking you. "Stay away from us and go hang out with the other losers." Then she leans in close "Or I will show you what happens to bitches that don''t know their place." With that they turn and walk away. Not being part of the jock clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+		'Christina, Lariska and Lina walk up to you. Lariska and Lina are looking at you like you did something wrong while Christina is smirking. She shoves you hard up against your locker. "What are you doing here bitch? You belong with the loser crowd now, so fuck off." she says with a laugh and Lariska and Lina join in openly mocking you. "Stay away from us or I''ll show you what happens to little bitches who don''t know their place." Christina warns before they turn and walk away. Having been publically disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	end
-	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
+	'<font color = red>You have been kicked out of your social group and become an outcast.</font>'
 	
 	grupvalue[1] -= 500
 	grupvalue[2] = 0
@@ -503,8 +503,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd outcast':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/outcast.jpg"></center>'
-	'A couple of students stand in front of you, wanting to get a better look at the "slut" based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them, they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what got into you." He shakes his head. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse, no one in school wants to be around you anymore." When he notices the dejected look on your face as he''s told you off, ending with that you are an outcast he sighs a little. "I''m sorry I really am, but this is your own fault, but please leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you, as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. As you look around, most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
-	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
+	'You try to find your friends, but most seem to be hiding or hurry off when you approach. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim, but as you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I can''t be seen hanging out with you. I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse. None of us want to be around you anymore." He sighs when he sees the dejected look on your face. "I''m sorry I really am, but this is your own fault. Please just leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. As you look around, most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+	'<font color = red>You have been kicked out of your social group and become an outcast.</font>'
 	
 	grupvalue[1] -= 500
 	grupvalue[2] -= 300
@@ -528,8 +528,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik outcast':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/outcast.jpg"></center>'
-	'Paulina, Lera, and Lena are standing next to you. Paulina looks annoyed, just like she''s preparing to beat you up while Lera looks at you with disgust. Paulina shakes her head at you and finally speaks up. "I don''t know what your problem is, but apparently hanging out, partying and having a good time wasn''t enough for you. No you had to become a spinless cunt afraid of her own shadow, so stay the fuck away from us or I will beat the shit out of you." With that Paulina shoves you against you locker and walks away. Lena gives you a final look of disgust and shoves you once again while Lera gives you a few parting words before walking away. "Your so pathetic even the nerds will kick your ass now." Not being part of the gopnik clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
-	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
+	'As you approach your locker, Pauline, Lera and Lena walk up next to you. Pauline looks like she''s preparing to beat you up while Lera looks at you with disgust. Pauline shakes her head at you and finally speaks up. "I don''t know what your problem is, but apparently hanging out, partying and having a good time wasn''t enough for you. Nooo, you had to become a spineless cunt afraid of her own shadow, so stay the fuck away from us or I''ll beat the shit out of you!" With that, Pauline shoves you against your locker and walks away. Lena gives you a final look of disgust and shoves you again while Lera gives you a few parting words before walking away. "You''re so pathetic even the nerds will kick your ass now." Having been publically disawoved by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+	'<font color = red>You have been kicked out of your social group and become an outcast.</font>'
 	
 	grupvalue[1] -= 400
 	grupvalue[2] -= 300
@@ -553,8 +553,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik miss':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>School Hall</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big20.jpg"></center>'
-	'Just as you approach your locker, Lena shoves you against it. "Where the fuck where you bitch? We waited for almost a hour for you."'
-	'You start to answer her but before you can even get a single word out, she shoves you again. "Doesn''t matter, we changed our mind about you. You''re not welcome. So get lost." She then walks away, you know that you screwed up by not showing up. Maybe if you try to earn their respect again they will give you a second chance.'
+	'Just as you approach your locker, Lena shoves you against it. "Where the fuck were you bitch? We waited almost an hour for you!"'
+	'You start to answer, but before you can even get a single word out, she shoves you again. "It doesn''t matter, we changed our mind about you. You''re not welcome. So get lost." she snarls before storming off. Maybe if you try to earn their respect again they will give you a second chance.'
 	minut += 1
 	grupvalue[4] -= 100
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -628,10 +628,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group_student_rel_change':
 		if npc_rel['A200'] <= 20: grupvalue[4] -= 1   
 		if npc_rel['A21'] >= 80: grupvalue[4] += 1     
 		if npc_rel['A21'] <= 20: grupvalue[4] -= 1   
-		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 80: grupvalue[2] += 1     
-		if npc_rel['A22'] <= 20: grupvalue[2] -= 1   
-		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 80: grupvalue[1] += 1     
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20: grupvalue[1] -= 1   
+		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 80: grupvalue[1] += 1     
+		if npc_rel['A22'] <= 20: grupvalue[1] -= 1   
+		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 80: grupvalue[2] += 1     
+		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20: grupvalue[2] -= 1   
 		if npc_rel['A24'] <= 20: grupvalue[4] -= 1   
 		if npc_rel['A24'] >= 80: grupvalue[4] += 1     
 		if soniaPS = 0 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80: grupvalue[1] += 1     

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+ 267 - 270
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc


+ 1 - 1
locations/npcstatic4.qsrc

@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Ignatio'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Ignat'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Vedenin'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Porn actor Ignat Vedenin'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Ignat is a student from Kaliningrad who attends the local university. He lives in his own rented apartment near campus and signed up for both the pussy and the money. He is athletic, handsome and intelligent, and often sells footage of himself with female students to the studio.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Ignat signed up for both the pussy and the money. He lives near the university and often pretends to be a student so he can hook up with girls and bring them back to his place to film himself having sex with them. He then sells this footage to the studio.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19980501
 npc_intel['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(40,50)
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0

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