one variable change to work with new sistersleep options, some conversation text cleanup

locations/sister

@@ -15,13 +15,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gdk':
        
 	elseif sisboypartyQW < 2 and sisboyparty = 2 and sisboyparty_day + 1 = daystart:   
 		cla
-		'Anya and some of her friend are dressed up organizing themself before going to the party. Anya sees you and waves you to her.'
+		'Anya and some of her friends are dressed up organizing themself before going to the party. Anya sees you and waves you to her.'
 			
 		act 'Go to the party':gt 'sisterQW','sisboyQW_party'
 
 	elseif sisboypartyQW >= 2 and sisboyparty = 2 and sisboyparty_day + 1 = daystart:
 		cla
-		'A merry group of friends have gathered for another boozy party at Rexs.'
+		'A merry group of friends have gathered for another boozy party at Rex''s.'
 
 		act 'Go to the party':dynamic $party_pre_conditions
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gdk':
 				gt'annafrends', 'scene1'
 			elseif AniaFrends = 0:
 				AniaFrends = 1
-				'You met with Anyas friends. They are all her former classmates. There''s small and nimble Lena, Ira who is constantly confused, a tall athletic guy, whom everyone calls Rex, and a red-haired lanky guy named Roma. After the introductions you sit drinking beer and chatting with Anya and her friends.'
+				'You met with Anya''s friends. They are all her former classmates. There''s small and nimble Lena, Ira who is constantly confused, a tall athletic guy, whom everyone calls Rex, and a red-haired lanky guy named Roma. After the introductions you sit drinking beer and chatting with Anya and her friends.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ $party_pre_conditions ={
 	if rex <= 80:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/rekshome/party_sister_1.jpg"></center>'
 		if GorSlut < 2 and mesec <= 0 and manna >= ((intel*magik) + magik*100 + vital*10 + rikudo)*50/100 and alko < 3 and spdirtyv = 0 and spdirtyc = 0: 
-			'"Hello <<$name>>, Today we''re going to a party to at Rexs, Are you with coming with us?"'
+			'"Hello <<$name>>, Today we''re going to a party to at Rex''s, Are you into coming with us?"'
 
 			act 'Yes':gt 'sbReksHome','party'
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ $party_pre_conditions ={
 				sisboyparty = -1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/rekshome/party_sister_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I would love, but I have a lot of homework, I''m sorry."'
+				'"I would love to, but I have a lot of homework, I''m sorry."'
 				'"Don''t worry, maybe next time you can come."'
 				act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
 		
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ $party_pre_conditions ={
 			act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
 			 
 		elseif mesec > 0 or manna < ((intel*magik) + magik*100 + vital*10 + rikudo)*50/100:
-			'"Hello <<$name>>, Today we''re going to a party at Rexs, Are you with us?"'
+			'"Hello <<$name>>, Today we''re going to a party at Rex''s, Are you with us?"'
 			'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today, you go without me."'
 			'"You do look a little pale sis, go home and get some rest."'
 			act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ $party_pre_conditions ={
 	if rex > 80:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/rekshome/reks.jpg"></center>'
 		if GorSlut < 2 and mesec <= 0 and manna >= ((intel*magik) + magik*100 + vital*10 + rikudo)*50/100 and alko < 3 and spdirtyv = 0 and spdirtyc = 0:
-			'"Baby, let''s go to my place, once again I am hosted a cool hang out."'
+			'"Baby, let''s go to my place, once again I am hosting a great get together."'
 				
 			act 'Accept':gt 'sbReksHome','party'
 				
@@ -131,8 +131,8 @@ $party_pre_conditions ={
 			act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
 
 		elseif mesec > 0 or manna < ((intel*magik) + magik*100 + vital*10 + rikudo)*50/100:
-			'"Sorry Rex, sweetie, I''m not feelin too good today, you go without me."'
-			'"Pancake, I do not want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys, take care, and do not be sad."'
+			'"Sorry Rex, sweetie, I''m not feeling too good today, you go without me."'
+			'"Sweetie, I do not want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys, take care, and do not be sad."'
 			'Rex gives you a gentle kiss on your cheek and leaves.'
 
 			act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 !1 - knows about the parties
 !2 - agreed to go to the party
 		if sisboypartyQW >= 2 and sisboyparty = 1 and sisboyparty_day = daystart:
-			'"Listen, <<$name>>, Rexs apartment is available tomorrow and he''s having a party, do you want to go?"'
+			'"Listen, <<$name>>, Rex''s apartment is available tomorrow and he''s having a party, do you want to go?"'
 			
 			act 'Yes':
 				cls
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 		'You''re both embarrassed after what happened that night, and can not look into each other''s eyes, finally Anya speaks with you.'
 		'"<<$name>>," with a smile she tells you, "Well, you''re a fool, I thought you liked guys, and I always found it much more pleasant to handle men."'
 		'You look at Anya blushing, "Forgive me, I was so worked up, I just could not control myself, I do not know what came over me."'
-		'"Well, I do not mind, so you sometimes lose control of yourself." She smiles slyly, You smile at her...'
+		'"Well, I do not mind, if you sometimes lose control of yourself." She smiles slyly, You smile at her...'
 
 		sisterLesb = 3
 		act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt'sister'
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 
 					act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt'sister'
 				end
-			elseif sisboyrand >= 8 and sisboyQW = 9 and sisterLesb = 4 and sisboytrioQW = 0 and sisboytrio < 5 and sistrioday <= daystart:
+			elseif sisboyrand >= 8 and sisboyQW = 9 and sisterLesb >= 4 and sisboytrioQW = 0 and sisboytrio < 5 and sistrioday <= daystart:
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/sisboyqw_09.jpg"></center>'
 				if hour > 16:
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 					sister += 10
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/sisboyqw_36.jpg"></center>'
-					'You agree to Anyas indecent proposal.'
+					'You agree to Anya''s indecent proposal.'
 					'"Well, aren''t you all liberated? Of course I agree, it will be very interesting."'
 					'You hug and kiss with your beloved sister.'
 					act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt'sister'
@@ -502,13 +502,13 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterqw/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
 				if talkrand = 0:'You ask your sister about Roma, she is happy talking about him and says how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
-				if talkrand = 1:'Anka says, before she met Roma-the mymra, and after leaving it for a long time he nazvanivala, from-Anya for this much scold and jealous.'
+				if talkrand = 1:'Anya says, before she met Roma he was with a mean girl, and after ignoring her for a long time he called her,  making Anya jealous and she scolded him.'
 				if talkrand = 2:'One day she and Roma were in a movie, and noticed on the back row a girl sucking a guy, and that Roma asked her if she would do the same.'
-				if talkrand = 3:'Anya complains that Roma drinks too much beer, does not buy her gifts, and doesn''t pays her enough attention.'
+				if talkrand = 3:'Anya complains that Roma drinks too much beer, does not buy her gifts, and doesn''t pay her enough attention.'
 				if talkrand = 4:'Anya says, Roma offered her a threesome with another girl, which she was most offended by and didn''t speak to him for a week afterwards.'
 				if talkrand = 5:'Anya blushes as she tells you that Roma sometimes comes to her work and drags her into the back room.'
-				if talkrand = 6:'Anya in detail and with enthusiasm tells you about Romas magnificent virility, and how if not for this, they would have long since parted.'
-				if talkrand = 7:'Anya shares with you a secret, that her favorite position "cowgirl", Roma prefers to do her doggy-style.'
+				if talkrand = 6:'Anya in detail and with enthusiasm tells you about Roma''s magnificent virility, and how if not for this, they would have long since parted.'
+				if talkrand = 7:'Anya shares with you a secret, that her favorite position is "cowgirl", even though Roma prefers to do her doggy-style.'
 				if talkrand = 8:'You speak with your sister very frankly about sexual things, and she says shyly, she does not like to swallow sperm, but with Roma it''s different, and she is willing to swallow for him.'
 				if talkrand = 9:
 					if reksLike = 0:
@@ -517,16 +517,16 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 						rexSisTalk = 0
 						rexPark = 0
 						rexCar = 0
-						'Anya talks for a long time about her''s and Roma''s friends, and asks you if you want to get to know any of them.'
+						'Anya talks for a long time about her and Roma''s friends, and asks you if you want to get to know any of them.'
 						'"Well, Rex sounds quite nice... I guess."'
-						'Anya smiles, "Hmm.. He is a nice guy, but sometimes behaves a bit strange, Rex is obsesed with womens'' legs.'
-						'There was a case when Rex was driving without a license in his fathers'' car and gazing at a girl walking on the sidewalk, in stockings and short skirt. Imagine, he was so carried away, he had not noticed ahead sitting at the traffic lights, a van.'
-						'He drove straight into it and wrote off the car. That''s why we call him Rex, because he stares at legs with his mouth open, teeth on show, wanting to devour them." As she says this, Anya is holding her hands like claws and impersonating a T-Rex growling at your legs.'
+						'Anya smiles, "Hmm.. He is a nice guy, but sometimes behaves a bit strange, Rex is obsessed with women''s legs.'
+						'There was a case when Rex was driving without a license in his father''s car and gazing at a girl walking on the sidewalk, in stockings and a short skirt. Imagine, he was so carried away, he had not noticed a van ahead sitting at the traffic lights.'
+						'He drove straight into it and totalled the car. That''s why we call him Rex, because he stares at legs with his mouth open, teeth on show, wanting to devour them." As she says this, Anya is holding her hands like claws and impersonating a T-Rex growling at your legs.'
 					else
 						'You ask your sister about Roma, she is happy talking about him and says how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
 					end
 				end
-				if talkrand = 10:'Anya says, that you Roma likes you, and asks if you like him.'
+				if talkrand = 10:'Anya says, that Roma likes you, and asks if you like him.'
 				act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt'sister'
 			end
 		end
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 		
 		if sisboytrioQW ! 1:
 			'"Sister, I adore you, I spent a lovely evening with Roma."'
-			'"Yes, I''m glad for you, enougth already, you''ll strangle me."
+			'"Yes, I''m glad for you, enough already, you''ll strangle me."
 			Anya is happy to let you go, and kisses you on the cheek'
 		else
 			'"<<$nickname>>, I adore you, I really enjoyed our evening with Roma."'
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if hour >= 7 and hour < 24:
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sister.jpg"></center>'
-		'Anya looks at you and laughs "Well, <<$name>>, I know what you were upto! I went into the room, and you were playing with yourself!"'
+		'Anya looks at you and laughs "Well, <<$name>>, I know what you were up to! I went into the room, and you were playing with yourself!"'
 
 		act 'Move away':SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
 	end