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  1. 16 24
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  2. 185 137
      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc
  3. 211 211
      locations/gschool_post_shower.qsrc

+ 16 - 24
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -141,8 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tryouts':
 		act 'Try to follow Albina''s example':
 			*clr & cla
 			!! double cheer_exp so it progresses faster given that Sveta cant get it anywhere else
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 0, 'agil_exp', 'vital_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'danc_exp'
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 0, 'agil_exp', 'vital_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'danc_exp'
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'agil_exp', 'vital_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'danc_exp'
 			!! Success calculation - Contributing factors: social group, cool kids standing, Albina friendship, agility, endurance, dance skill, natural cheerleading talent
 			!!  New game character comparison:
 			!!  Cool kids would just about pass								~250 (100 cool + 55 friendship + 30 agi + 30 end + 20 dance + 15 talent)
@@ -323,16 +322,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 
 		act 'Follow the others into the hall':
 			*clr & cla
-			temp_time = 6
-			temp_count = 1
-			:cheerleading_practice_loop
 			!! double cheer_exp so it progresses faster given that Sveta cant get it anywhere else
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 0, 'agil_exp', 'vital_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'danc_exp'
-			if temp_count < temp_time: temp_count += 1 & jump 'cheerleading_practice_loop'
-			killvar 'temp_count'
-			killvar 'temp_time'
-
-			gs 'stat'
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 90, 'agil_exp', 'vital_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'cheer_exp', 'danc_exp'
+            gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/practice.mp4"></video></center>'
 
 			!! First time scene
@@ -696,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif rand(0,4) = 0 and cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3 :
+	elseif rand(0,4) = 0 and cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3 and npc_sex['A23'] => 1:
 		if First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 0:
 			First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 1
 			'You stay in the shower a little longer than usual and it''s quiet when you enter the empty locker room. As you are getting your clothes ready, the door opens and Albina peeks in. "Oh fuck." she mumbles before walking in. "I was hoping it would be empty in here. I''m so fucking wet right now and was going to spend a little time here before I went home..."
@@ -747,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Without hesistation, you plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to vigorously tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar starts fucking her even harder this time. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy that''s dripping her juices.' 
-							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass! Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits right on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tongue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+							'She eventually reaches orgasm, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass! Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits right on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tongue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -764,12 +756,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							end
 						end
 
-						act 'Reluctantly eat her ass':
+						act 'Eat her pussy instead':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You don''t really want to do this, but Albina looks back at you expectantly while spreading her cheeks and Lazar is waiting in anticipation, so you reluctantly give her asshole a few half hearted licks. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can do better than that!" Albina quips before forcing your head between her cheeks and making you eat her ass. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
-							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
+							'You don''t really want to do this and Albina looks back and sees this. She lets out a disappointed sigh. "Okay then, you can eat my pussy instead..." You slide underneath her and start licking her dripping wet pussy as Lazar penetrates her ass again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans and you pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
+							'She eventually reaches orgasm, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes! Cum in my ass! Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. She keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -777,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
+								'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out. "I think I got it all out. Come here <<$pcs_nickname>>." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
 								Albina just gives out a playful giggle. "Maybe we will, maybe we won''t." she teases him and you all laugh before getting dressed. You then all leave the room and go your seperate ways.'
 								minut += 5
 
@@ -837,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Without hesistation, you plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to vigorously tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
-								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tobgue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+								'She eventually reaches orgasm, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tobgue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -854,12 +846,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								end
 							end
 
-							act 'Reluctantly eat her ass':
+							act 'Eat her pussy instead':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You don''t really want to do this, but Albina looks back at you expectantly while spreading her cheeks and Lazar is waiting in anticipation, so you reluctantly give her asshole a few half hearted licks. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can do better than that!" Albina quips before forcing your head between her cheeks and making you eat her ass. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
-								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum in my ass! Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
+								'You don''t really want to do this and Albina looks back and sees this. She lets out a disappointed sigh. "Okay then, you can eat my pussy instead..." You slide underneath her and start licking her dripping wet pussy as Lazar penetrates her ass again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans and you pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
+								'She eventually reaches orgasm, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes! Cum in my ass! Give it to me!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. She keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -867,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								act 'Finish':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
+									'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out. "I think I got it all out. Come here <<$pcs_nickname>>." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
 									Albina teases him by bending over and wiggling her naked ass at him, showing off her still slightly gaping anus. You all laugh and get dressed before leaving the room and going your seperate ways.'
 									minut += 5
 

+ 185 - 137
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -34,35 +34,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				$mathNikoimg = 'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg'
 			end
-			'Mr. Tsarev pauses, then turns to the door as Niko is casually entering. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms then says "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts then says'
+			'Mr. Tsarev pauses, then turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms then says "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts then says'
 			killvar '$mathNikoimg'
 			*nl
 			if VK = 1:
 				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what is wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I arrived late." Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
 				'Niko shrugs then continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts up her fist then punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
-				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out work sheets. He is obviously not in a good mood.'
+				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
-				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean out the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
-				'Christina then replies. "That is why I have no interest in dating losers like you." Christina then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some work sheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive her on time. It''s not hard."'
+				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
+				'Christina then replies. "That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you." She then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
-				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm was not working at all." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You are really bad at it."'
+				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
 				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out." Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry." Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working.'
-				'Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms. Niko then chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you have all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you all to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
+				'Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms. Niko then chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
 			end
 		else
 			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me." Mr. Tsarev responds "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
 			*nl
 			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
 			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
 		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s penis?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
 			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
@@ -210,22 +210,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			VK = rand(1,5)
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
-			'The day seems to be dragging in and you find yourself constantly staring at the clock, waiting for the time to pass and the class to be over. You decide to play on your phone to pass the time.'
+			'The day seems to be dragging in and you find yourself constantly staring at the clock, waiting for the class to finally be over. You decide to play on your phone to pass the time.'
 		    if VK = 1 and npc_rel['A18'] <= 60 and (christinaQW['fight'] = -1 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2) and salocatnow >= 5:
 				if npc_rel['A18'] > 30:npc_rel['A18'] = 30
-				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face growing flushed in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
+				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif (VK = 1 and npc_rel['A18'] >= 80 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 2 and (christinaQW['subpath'] < 2 or christinaQW['dompath'] < 4)) or (VK = 1 and grupTipe = 2 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 2 and (christinaQW['subpath'] < 2 or christinaQW['dompath'] < 4)):
 				VKrand = rand(1,3)
 				if salocatnow >= 5:
-					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you have been putting on some weight. Would you like to run with Lina and I after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply "Um maybe another time." Christina replies immediately. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you an assuring nod before turning back towards the teacher.'
+					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you''ve been putting some weight on. Would you like to run with Lina and I after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply "Um maybe another time." Christina replies immediately. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you an assuring nod before turning back towards the teacher.'
 				elseif VKrand = 1:
 					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, when are you getting those track shoes that I told you about? I still see you wearing those raggedy ones at PE." You giggle then reply "I keep forgetting to check them out when I stop by the shop." Christina immediately replies. "I know what you mean. I always get distracted by the other clothes then forget why I went in there in the first place."'
 					*nl
-					'You both look to each other with a smile when you hear Mr. Tsarev say "Hey, eyes up here you two." You both look back toward the teacher until he turns around to write on the board. You and Christina continue chatting via text message as Mr. Tsarev continues his lesson.'
+					'You both look at each other with a smile when you hear Mr. Tsarev say "Hey, eyes up here you two." You both look back toward the teacher until he turns around to write on the board. You and Christina continue chatting via text message as Mr. Tsarev continues his lesson.'
 				elseif VKrand = 2:
-					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Have you heard what that bitch Bella said the other day? I am so sick of her lording over everyone as if she is too good to have a simple conversation with someone without rudely scoffing at them. She has nothing going for her. She isn''t good at anything except making enemies. That brainless uptight bitch!" You reply. "What did she say exactly?"'
-					'Christina replies. "Lizaveta told me about how Bella said that running track is only for fat girls wanting to lose weight. If she ever says that to my face, then I will show her how inferior to me she truly is." You try to calm Christina. "Maybe she didn''t say that. It could just be a rumor."'
+					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Have you heard what that bitch Bella said the other day? I''m so sick of her lording over everyone as if she''s too good to have a simple conversation with someone without rudely scoffing at them. She has nothing going for her. She isn''t good at anything except making enemies. That brainless uptight bitch!" You reply. "What did she say exactly?"'
+					'Christina replies. "Lizaveta told me about how Bella said that running track is only for fat girls wanting to lose weight. If she ever says that to my face, then I''ll show her just how inferior she truly is." You try to calm Christina. "Maybe she didn''t say that. It could just be a rumor."'
 					'Christina replies back. "Bella better hope that you are right. I will find out one way or another." Christina quickly turns off her phone then slams her hand on the table, causing Mr. Tsarev to jump up in surprise before quickly looking around the room for the source of the noise before shrugging and continuing with his lesson.'
 				else
 					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Have you seen what Zinaida was wearing this morning? Another hessian sack. Doesn''t she realize how bad she looks? Would it kill her to comb her hair? She looks like a fucking scarecrow." You reply. "Yeah she doesn''t really seem to care about her appearance at all." Christina replies. "Exactly! She is such an eyesore. Anyway have you been watching my races? I have been undefeated since I have started." You text back. "I have seen a few and I am always impressed at how fast you can move." Christina gives you a wink before replying. "Keep training and maybe you and I will keep the first two spots reserved for us. You can be the one in second of course."'
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
 								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra, and smile fiendishly as you see the momentary hesitation from your teacher as they stop at your desk. "You think this is a joke, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" Ms. Braakman asks, her eyes narrowing.'
-							    '"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Your teacher''s eyes darken dangerously, and you start to think you''ve won this fight, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
+							    '"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Her eyes darken dangerously as you think you''ve won, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							    '"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							    *nl
 							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 	gs 'grades', 'attend_class', 'school', 'pe'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive in the gym and head straight to the girls locker room. Once inside, you quickly change into your athletic clothes before heading back out into the hall. Once everyone is ready, Coach Pavlovich conducts a roll call to ensure everyone is here, this is the only class you have where all the students from your grade is present.'
+	'You arrive in the gym and head straight to the girls locker room. Once inside, you quickly change into your athletic clothes before heading back out into the hall. Once everyone is ready, Coach Pavlovich conducts a roll call to ensure everyone is present.'
 	if week = 5 and LocalRun = 0:
 		if SchoolSorev = 0:SchoolSorev = 1
 		'Coach Pavlovich announces that the inter-school running competition will be held this Saturday at 11:00. If you want to participate, you should come to school between 10:00 and 11:00.'
@@ -684,10 +684,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			gs 'sweat', 'add', 30
 			run_exp += rand(1, 2)
 			gs 'grades', 'class_activity_skill', 'school', 'pe', pcs_run
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp'
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'agil_exp'
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp', 'agil_exp'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra.jpg"></center>'
-			'After the roll call, Coach Pavlovich announces that you will be running.'
+			'After the roll call, Coach Pavlovich announces that you will be running today.'
 			act 'Run':
 				*clr & cla
 				if temper >= 10 and sunWeather = 1:
@@ -695,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					if runoutside = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run. He then pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
-						'As you run through the forest, you feel a hand on your ass - it''s Ivan. He''s much faster than you and sprints past you to show you how fast he can be when he wants. He then pauses and lets you catch up, and you run together for a while.'
+						'As you run through the forest, you feel a hand on your ass - it''s Ivan. He''s much faster than you and sprints past to show you how fast he can be when he wants. He then pauses and lets you catch up, and you run together for a while.'
 						act 'Show him your tits':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -703,16 +702,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 								'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. You almost immediately notice the erection growing in his tight shorts, and he awkwardly tries to hide it. As you pull your shirt back down, you give him a sweet smile and say "Try hiding that while you''re running past everyone!"'
 								'He grimaces as he sprints away from you, carefully checking to make sure no one is near him. You have a knowing smile on your face when, at the end of the class, his friends ask him why his lap time was so much slower than usual.'
 							elseif hotcat >= 4:
-								'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. He smiles and shakes his head, as he sprints away from you, you slow down a little to get everything back in place. At the end of the class, Ivan puts in the fastest time, again.'
+								'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. He smiles and shakes his head as he sprints away and you slow down a little to get everything back in place. At the end of the class, Ivan puts in the fastest time, again.'
 							else
-								'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. He makes a slightly disgusted look and shakes his head, as he sprints away from you, you slow down a little to get everything back in place. At the end of the class, Ivan puts in the fastest time, again.'
+								'Making sure no one else is nearby, you pull up your shirt and reveal your <<$titsize>> breasts to Ivan. He makes a slightly disgusted look and shakes his head as he sprints away. You slow down a little to get everything back in place. At the end of the class, Ivan puts in the fastest time, again.'
 							end
-							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+							act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
-						act 'Laugh it off and let him go':
+						act 'Laugh it off':
 							cla
 							'"Very funny Ivan." you tell him as you give him a wink. He playfully salutes you as he sprints off again, finishing the run well before anyone else.'
-							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+							act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 					elseif runoutside = 2:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -722,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
 							'You remain focused on your running and keep your eyes straight ahead. Running as quickly as you can, you hear whoever it was starting to fall behind.'
-							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+							act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 						act 'Look':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -731,18 +730,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
-							act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+							act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 						end
 					elseif runoutside = 3:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nopanstretch.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run. As Lina does some stretching, it becomes apparent she forgot her panties. As she stretches, her shorts pull to one side, showing her pussy off to everyone. Before anyone can say anything, she stops and stands up, oblivious to the little show she just gave. Coach Pavlovich then pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
 						'The rest of the run is very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
-						act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+						act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra2.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Since the weather is so nice, we will be running outside today. Let''s go!" He leads the class outside to the forest trail on the school grounds, near the old school building. He gives everyone time to do a little stretching before the run, before he pulls out his stop watch and says "Go!" Everyone then takes off, some faster than others.'
 						'Your run ends up being very uneventful and peaceful. You enjoyed the quiet time to yourself a great deal.'
-						act 'Finish run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+						act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 					end
 				else
 					runinside = rand(1,5)
@@ -759,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 						'You join the class in running laps around the gym. Half-way into your fourteenth lap, you wonder if there''s any way gym class could be any more boring than this.'
 					end
 					gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
-					act 'Finish the run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
+					act 'Finish your run':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 				end
 			end
 		elseif fizrarand = 2:
@@ -787,13 +786,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand1.jpg"></center>'
 				if hotcat >= 6:
 					'After the roll call, Coach Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
-					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. Now, the top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with mixed responses: the guys are whistling and whooping appreciatively, while most of the girls are staring you down in disapproval. You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
+					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. The top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with mixed responses: the guys are whistling and whooping appreciatively, while most of the girls are staring you down in disapproval. You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
 				elseif hotcat >= 4:
 					'After the roll call, Coach Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
-					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. Now, the top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with mixed responses: most of the class that are watching start laughing, with a few pointing, while some of the girls are staring you down in disapproval. You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
+					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. The top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with mixed responses: most of the class that are watching start laughing, with a few pointing, while some of the girls are staring you down in disapproval. You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
 				else
 					'After the roll call, Coach Nikolaevich announces that you will all be taking turns doing pull-ups. He also says that he will be counting how many each person does, so it''s a bit more stressful than usual.'
-					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. Now, the top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with negative responses: most give you looks of disgust or disapproval, while Vasily comments. "OH GOD! I think, I''m blind." You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, which gets everyone laughing, it takes a bit for Coach Nikolaevich to get the class back focused on class. You are deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
+					'You''re not wearing panties and while you''re doing your pullups, your shorts slide down a little. The top of your '+iif(pcs_pubes < 3, 'pubic area', 'pubes')+' are on display for the whole class to see. It''s met with negative responses: most give you looks of disgust or disapproval while Vasily loudly comments. "OH GOD! I think I''m blind!" You quickly let go of the bar and pull your shorts back up, which gets everyone laughing. It takes a while for Coach Nikolaevich to get the class focused. You are deeply embarrassed by the whole ordeal.'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizra6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -801,17 +800,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				if hotcat >= 6:'Some of the boys stop what they''re doing when it''s your turn, coming over to shout some words of support.'
 				if pcs_stren <= 20:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
-					'Unfortunately, pull-ups aren''t your strong point, and you''re unable to do as many as any of the girls. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks.'
+					'Unfortunately, pull-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as any of the girls. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks.'
 				elseif pcs_stren <= 30:
-					'Unfortunately, pull-ups aren''t your strong point, and you''re unable to do as many as most of the girls, other than the nerds girls and a couple of the popular girls.'
+					'Unfortunately, pull-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as most of the other girls, other than the nerds and a few of the popular girls.'
 				elseif pcs_stren <= 50:
-					'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of pull-ups. Better than most of the girls, other than a few of the jocks and a couple of others.'
+					'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of pull-ups. You do better than most of the girls, other than a few of the jocks.'
 				elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
-					'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more pull-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
+					'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more pull-ups than some of the boys and better than all of the girls except Christina.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
-					'You''ve done plenty of pull-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
+					'You''ve done plenty of pull-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge for you. When you finally stop, you''ve done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
 				end
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
@@ -827,22 +826,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
 				'Unfortunately, sit-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as any of the girls. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks.'
 			elseif pcs_stren <= 30:
-				'Unfortunately, sit-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as most of the girls, other than the nerds girls and a couple of the popular girls.'
+				'Unfortunately, sit-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as most of the other girls, other than the nerds and a few of the popular girls.'
 			elseif pcs_stren <= 50:
-				'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of sit-ups. Better than most of the girls, other than a few of the jocks and a couple of others.'
+				'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of sit-ups. You do better than most of the girls, other than a few of the jocks.'
 			elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 				grupvalue[2] += 1
 				'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more sit-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
 			else
 				grupvalue[2] += 2
-				'You''ve done plenty of sit-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
+				'You''ve done plenty of sit-ups in the past, so this isn''t too much of a challenge for you. When you finally stop, you''ve done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 			act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		elseif fizrarand = 5:
 			gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'pe', pcs_vital
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 1, 'vital_exp'
-			'The Coach Nikolaevich breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can jump rope the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
+			'Coach Nikolaevich breaks everyone into small groups and has you compete to see who can jump rope the longest. Many of the boys pay special attention to the girls during their turns.'
 			if pcs_cupsize <= 20:
 				if pcs_vital <= 30:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
@@ -855,13 +854,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					'Jumping rope is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
-					'The other girls are surprised at just how long you can jump rope without messing up. You manage to go the longest in a couple of rounds of the competition.'
+					'The other girls are surprised at just how long you can jump rope without messing up. You manage to go the longest in a a few of the rounds.'
 				end
 			elseif pcs_cupsize <= 60:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumprb.mp4"></video></center>'
 				if pcs_vital <= 30:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
-					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
+					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a few seconds.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
@@ -870,22 +869,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					'Jumping rope is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your breasts bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
-					'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how long you can jump rope without messing up. You manage to go the longest in a couple of rounds of the competition. You could actually jump rope for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
+					'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how long you can jump rope without messing up. You manage to go the longest in a few of the rounds and could actually jump rope for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumph.mp4"></video></center>'
 				if pcs_vital <= 30:
 					grupvalue[2] -= 1
-					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
+					'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you get tripped up on the rope. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. "Come on already! We want to see them bounce!" Vasily shouts.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Dan shouts: "C''mon, get them titties bouncing!"'
+					'You do about average among the girls before you get tripped up on the rope. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. "Come on, get those titties bouncing!" Dan shouts.'
 				elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
-					'Jumping rope is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s completely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'
+					'Jumping rope is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s entirely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[2] += 2
-					'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard, and in no time they''ve gotten really sore. Fitness means enduring a little pain sometimes though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it, despite the help of the sports bra. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at your boobs.'
+					'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard despite the help of your sports bra and they''re painfully sore in no time. Fitness means enduring a little pain though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at you.'
 				end
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
@@ -956,7 +955,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			jumpingjacks = rand (1,5)
 			if jumpingjacks = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/bouncebhand.jpg"></center>'
-				'Irina is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing - she obviously isn''t wearing a sports bra. The bouncing of her breasts starts to draw the attention of a lot of the boys, just as Stasya friend walks up behind her, reaches round and grabs her breasts. The Irina lets out a startled squeak, followed by a blush when Stasya whispers in her ear and she sees all the boys staring.'
+				'Irina is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing - she obviously isn''t wearing a sports bra. The bouncing of her breasts starts to draw the attention of a lot of the boys as Stasya walks up behind her, reaches round and grabs her breasts. Irina lets out a startled squeak, followed by a blush when Stasya whispers in her ear and she sees all the boys staring.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1000,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done.'
 		else
 			grupvalue[2] += 2
-			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a couple of rounds of the competition.'
+			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a few of the rounds.'
 		end
 		gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 		act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
@@ -1008,16 +1007,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumprb.mp4"></video></center>'
 		if pcs_vital <= 30:
 			grupvalue[2] -= 1
-			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a couple of seconds.'
+			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you''re too tired to continue. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a few seconds.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You do about average among the girls before you stop. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. A number of the boys grumble each time you fail to go for more than a few seconds.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
-			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your boobs bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
+			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your breasts bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
 		else
 			grupvalue[2] += 2
-			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a couple of rounds of the competition. You could actually go for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
+			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a few of the rounds and could actually go for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
 		end
 		gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 		act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
@@ -1025,16 +1024,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumph.mp4"></video></center>'
 		if pcs_vital <= 30:
 			grupvalue[2] -= 1
-			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you are just too tired. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. One of them shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
+			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you''re too tired to continue. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. "Come on already! We want to see them bounce!" Vasily shouts.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts: "C''mon, already! We want to see them bounce!"'
+			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts: "Come on, get those titties bouncing!" Dan shouts.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			'Jumping jacks is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s completely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'
 		else
 			grupvalue[2] += 2
-			'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard, and in no time they''ve gotten really sore. Fitness means enduring a little pain sometimes though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it, despite the help of the sports bra. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at your breasts.'
+			'You''re easily in good enough shape that this should be a snap, but each time you jump, your breasts slap up and down pretty hard despite the help of the sports bra and they''re painfully sore in no time. Fitness means enduring a little pain though, so you try to press on for as long as you can bear it. What ultimately stops you is the hooting and hollering from the boys. By the end of the class, almost all of them have come over to gawk at you.'
 		end
 	end
 	gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
@@ -1050,15 +1049,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pushups':
 		grupvalue[2] -= 1
 		'Unfortunately, push-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as any of the girls. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks.'
 	elseif pcs_stren <= 30:
-		'Unfortunately, push-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as most of the girls, other than the nerds girls and a couple of the popular girls.'
+		'Unfortunately, push-ups aren''t your strong point and you''re unable to do as many as most of the other girls, other than the nerds and a few of the popular girls.'
 	elseif pcs_stren <= 50:
-		'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of push-ups. Better than most of the girls, other than a few of the jocks and a couple of others.'
+		'In the end, you wind up doing a perfectly respectable amount of push-ups. You did better than most of the other girls, other than a few of the jocks.'
 	elseif pcs_stren <= 70:
 		grupvalue[2] += 1
 		'In the end, you wind up doing great. You do more push-ups than some of the boys and better than all the girls except Christina.'
 	else
 		grupvalue[2] += 2
-		'You''ve done enough push-ups in the past that this isn''t too much of a challenge. When you finally stop, you have done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
+		'You''ve done enough push-ups in the past that this isn''t too much of a challenge for you. When you finally stop, you''ve done more than all the other girls and about half the boys as well.'
 	end
 	gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 	act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
@@ -1071,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big69.jpg"></center>'
 	if christinaQW['dompath'] = 1:
 		postphys_event = daystart
-		'After class, Coach Pavlovich returns to his office. For some reason, Christina is following him while all other students go to the locker rooms as usual.'
+		'After class, Coach Pavlovich returns to his office. For some reason, Christina is following him while all other students go to the locker rooms.'
 		act 'Ignore it and go to the locker room': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys2'
 		act 'Listen in on Christina and Coach Pavlovich':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1080,7 +1079,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 			'The coach doesn''t answer her in words, but in gasps. Deciding you need to take the risk and look, you crack the door open and peek in.'
 			'What you see is like a dream come true; Christina, naked and on her knees in front of Pavlovich, sucking his cock for all she''s worth.'
 			+$OpenInnerThought+'"This is exactly what I was looking for!"'+$CloseInnerThought 
-			'Pulling out your phone, you make sure the flash is turned off, and start taking pictures.'
+			'Pulling out your phone, you make sure the flash is turned off and start taking pictures.'
 			christinaQW['dompath'] = 2
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1128,7 +1127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	shower_shave = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/showers.jpg"></center>'
-	'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, and head to the showers; you are greeted by wafts of steam and several girls who are giggling and gossiping among themselves, apparently oblivious to your existence.'
+	'After stripping from your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, and head to the showers; you are greeted by wafts of steam and several girls giggling and gossiping among themselves, oblivious to your existence.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower2'
 end
 
@@ -1143,16 +1142,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 	if gymshower = 1:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/showerspank.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower, but you do hear Bella talking to Albina.'
-	    'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see Bella start spanking Albina; most of the girls in the shower room stop what they''re doing to watch. After several fairly hard smacks, they stop and laugh about it, Albina rubbing her ass with strange glee as Bella smiles and nods her head, seemingly in approval. Everyone then returns to showering.'
+	    'As you wash off the soap, you turn in time to see Bella start spanking Albina; most of the girls stop what they''re doing to watch. After several fairly hard smacks that echo into the room, they stop and laugh about it as Albina rubs her ass with strange glee and Bella smiles and nods her head, seemingly in approval. You turn back and finish your shower as Bella and Albina giggle at each other.'
 	elseif gymshower = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/picture.jpg"></center>'
-		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few moments basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
+		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
 	    if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see one of the girls pointing at Christina. She says something to a couple of girls near her and they all burst out laughing. Christina''s face turns bright red and she takes a step forward, before stopping and looking in your direction. Seeing you looking she cringes and tries to pretend like nothing was happening. Not falling for it, you walk over to her and ask what they were laughing at. "My buttplug." she replies, embarrassed and afraid.'
-			'Looking at her sternly you tell her to bend over and show it to them. When she hesitates you grab her arm and pull her down, turn her ass in their direction, and say loud enough for everybody nearby to hear, "This is for trying to hide it." Smack! You spank her hard, causing her to squeal out in suprise. The girls watching start laughing so hard one of them snorts, prompting them to laugh even louder. Christina''s face turns even redder, if that was possible, but she stays put, knowing better than to cross you again.'
-			'You spank her one more time for good measure, and remind her in a low tone. "This is your life now, bitch." You walk back to your shower head and finish rinsing yourself off. Seeing that the fun was everybody went back to their showers.'
+			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see one of the girls pointing at Christina. She says something to a few girls near her and they all burst out laughing. Christina''s face turns bright red and she takes a step forward before stopping and looking in your direction. Seeing you looking, she cringes and tries to pretend like nothing was happening. Not falling for it, you walk over to her and ask what they were laughing at. "My buttplug." she replies, embarrassed and afraid.'
+			'Looking at her sternly, you tell her to bend over and show it to them. When she hesitates you grab her arm and pull her down, turn her ass in their direction and speak loud enough for everybody to hear. "This is for trying to hide it." You spank her hard, causing her to squeal out in suprise. The girls watching start laughing so hard one of them snorts, prompting them to laugh even louder. Christina''s face turns even redder, if that was possible, but she stays put, knowing better than to cross you again.'
+			'You spank her one more time for good measure. "This is your life now, bitch." you remind her in a low tone before walking back to your shower head and finish rinsing yourself off. Seeing that the fun is over, everyone go back to their own business.'
 		else
-			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see Christina holding up her phone and taking pictures. All the girls quickly notice. Some laugh and others quickly finish and leave but everyone, well everyone except Anushka, covers up. After a few laughs and some yelling seeming to all be in good natured fun, Christina stops and everyone goes back to showering.'
+			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see Christina holding up her phone and taking pictures. All the girls quickly notice. Some laugh and others quickly finish and leave as everyone except Anushka covers up. After a few laughs and some good-natured yelling, Christina stops and everyone goes back to showering.'
 		end
 	elseif gymshower = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/aylnushkiss.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1161,7 +1160,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see see Anushka and Aylona sharing a kiss under one of the shower heads. Several other girls notice and a few whistle, make cat calls or yell encouragements. A few others look disgusted at the two of them kissing. Katyusha even says "Stop that you fucking dykes! That''s so disgusting." Anushka looks to Katyusha, makes a V with her fingers and sticks her tongue between them wiggling it back and forth. Katyusha glares at her, then shakes her head, turns off the water and walks into the locker room. Anushka and Aylona laugh about it before they go back to just showering.'
 	elseif gymshower = 4 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you shower, you catch of a glimpse of Lena and Lera up to their usual tricks. Lera is on her knees with her face buried in Lena''s crotch, who is clearly enjoying herself. Several of the other girls give disgusted looks at what is going on. Still most are use to it, as it''s something you''ve seen dozens of times before, you ignore them and go back to cleaning yourself, but are interrupted by Lena calling someone out. You turn to see her getting up in Sonia''s face, who has her fingers buried deep inside her pussy. "What a horny little slut you are! You suck my brother''s dick every fucking day, so why don''t you let me have a turn?" Lena says before forcefully dragging Sonia out into the middle of the room and pushing her onto her knees.'
+		'As you shower, you catch of a glimpse of Lena and Lera up to their usual tricks. Lera is on her knees with her face buried in Lena''s crotch, who is clearly enjoying herself. Several of the other girls give disgusted looks at what they''re seeing. As it''s something you''ve seen dozens of times before, you ignore them and go back to cleaning yourself, but are interrupted by Lena calling someone out. You turn to see her getting up in Sonia''s face, who has her fingers buried deep inside her pussy. "What a horny little slut you are! You suck my brother''s dick every fucking day, so why don''t you let me have a turn?" Lena says before forcefully dragging Sonia out into the middle of the room and pushing her onto her knees.'
 		'Sonia doesn''t resist or even hesitate and immediately buries her face right into Lena''s crotch and starts eating her out. Albina, Bella and Vicky are among the group of girls who look in disgust before walking out to get dressed.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1169,9 +1168,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Try to leave unnoticed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
-				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" the Lera who grabbed you says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
+				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" Lera says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
 				*nl
-				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking the Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before another Paulina takes her place.'
+				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before Pauline takes her place.'
 				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
@@ -1251,7 +1250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Paulina, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1265,7 +1264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				act 'Wait your turn':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re getting incredibly aroused watching this show and know where it''s going. You follow the other girls in masturbating as you watch and wait your turn. Christina soon reaches her explosive orgasm and drenches Sonia in a shower of pussy juice as she moans loudly. The other girls express their amazement while Sonia looks to be greatly enjoying herself. Paulina, Lina and a few other girls take their turns squirting over Sonia as you continue to rub your clit and finger yourself. Eventually, you feel your orgasm building and step up to Sonia as another girl finishes. You are surprised when Sonia suddenly starts licking your pussy as you stand above her. She is <i>really</i> good at this and you quickly feel yourself about to cum, so you pull her face out of your crotch and rub your engorged clit to bring yourself to orgasm.'
+					'You''re getting incredibly aroused watching this show and know where it''s going. You follow the other girls in masturbating as you watch and wait your turn. Christina soon reaches her explosive orgasm and drenches Sonia in a shower of pussy juice as she moans loudly. The other girls express their amazement while Sonia looks to be greatly enjoying herself. Pauline, Lina and a few other girls take their turns squirting over Sonia as you continue to rub your clit and finger yourself. Eventually, you feel your orgasm building and step up to Sonia as another girl finishes. You are surprised when Sonia suddenly starts licking your pussy as you stand above her. She is <i>really</i> good at this and you quickly feel yourself about to cum, so you pull her face out of your crotch and rub your engorged clit to bring yourself to orgasm.'
 					*nl
 					$orgasm_txt = 'You moan loudly as your pussy explodes and you squirt your juice all over Sonia''s already drenched face and into her mouth, Sonia happily taking it all and swallowing it.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
@@ -1318,11 +1317,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
 				*nl
 				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
-				'You stop and take a few steps closer to them, with your hands balled up into fists, they stop their cackling when you get close. "I said fuck off!"'
-				'They collective take a step back and then Bella says. "What can''t take a joke, fine fine, don''t get your panties in a wad." They leave you in peace for the rest of the shower and instead spend the time gossiping about a variety of stuff..'
+				'You stop and take a few steps closer to them, with your hands balled up into fists. They stop their cackling when you get close. "I said fuck off!"'
+				'They all take a step back before Bella smirks. "What, can''t take a joke? Fine fine, don''t get your panties in a twist." They leave you in peace for the rest of the shower and instead spend the time gossiping about a variety of stuff..'
 			else
 				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'"What can''t take a joke? Well then you shouldn''t come to school looking like that, it''s shameful. The only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there, is if you let Lesco or Petia have a go!" Irina says.'
+				'"What can''t take a joke? Well then you shouldn''t come to school looking like that, it''s shameful! The only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there, is if you let Lesco or Petia have a go!" Irina says.'
 				*nl
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling the boys where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
 				'"And a machete to hack their way through too!" Stasya says.'
@@ -1356,7 +1355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 	shower_shave = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/watch.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are just enjoying the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna feel and completely relaxes you. Before you realize it, you find yourself alone in the shower.'
+	'You enjoy the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and completely relaxes you. Before you realize it, you find yourself alone in the shower.'
 	act 'Keep taking a shower':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1366,15 +1365,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/shower/lazar1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, the only sounds you hear is someone walking. It looks like most of the girls have already left.'
-			act 'Continue':
+			'You continue showering before you suddenly hear the sound of someone walking into the room.'
+			act 'Look back':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_mood += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/shower/lazar2.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are showering, you turn and see Lazar standing there with his hard cock in his hand, stroking it while he watches you shower with a big grin on his face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Looking good."'
-				'You are shocked, but before you can react, he keeps talking. "Why don''t you suck my dick?" he says as he starts walking towards you, still stroking his hard cock. You can''t help but stare at his dick. It is as long and nearly as thick as your forearm.'
+				'You look back and see Lazar standing there with his hard cock in his hand, stroking it while he watches you shower with a big grin on his face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Looking good."'
+				'Before you can react, he continues talking. "Why don''t you suck my dick?" he says as he starts walking towards you while still stroking his cock. You can''t help but stare. It''s as long and nearly as thick as your forearm.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Suck his dick': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom'
@@ -1386,7 +1385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/shower/lazarno.jpg"></center>'
 						'"What the fuck are you doing? This is the girls shower, get out!" you yell at him while covering up.'
-						'He stops stroking his dick when you yell and he puts his hands up with his dick still hanging out. "OK OK, no need to yell. I''ll go." He puts his dick away and then very slowly walks out of the shower, watching your naked body the whole time. Once he is gone, you wait a couple of minutes until you hear the door close. You rush to your locker and quickly dry off and get dressed before he comes back.'
+						'He stops stroking his dick and puts his hands up with his dick still hanging out. "Okay, okay, no need to yell. I''ll go." He puts his dick away and then very slowly walks out of the room, looking at your naked body the whole time. Once he''s gone, you wait for a few minutes before you rush to your locker and quickly dry off and get dressed before he comes back.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
@@ -1400,14 +1399,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/vd1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, the only sounds you hear is someone walking. It sounds like most of the girls have already left.'
-			act 'Continue':
+			'You enjoy the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and completely relaxes you. You continue showering before you suddenly hear the sound of someone walking into the room.'
+			act 'Look back':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut +=3
 				pcs_mood += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/vd2.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are showering, you turn and see Vitek and Dan standing there watching you shower with huge smiles on their face. Both of them are only wearing towels, as if they had walked over here after getting out of the boys shower. They both let their towels drop, showing off their dangling dicks. "Get on your knees so you can suck our dicks." Dan orders.'
+				'You look back and see Vitek and Dan watching you shower with huge smiles on their face. Both of them are wearing only towels, and they both let their towels drop, showing off their dicks. "Get on your knees so you can suck our dicks." Dan orders.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get on your knees': gt 'gschool_sex', 'vd_lockerroom'
@@ -1429,12 +1428,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							'"What the fuck are you doing? This is the girls shower, get out!" you yell at them.'
 							'They both just laugh. "So what? What are you going to do about it?"'
 							'You give them a hard look. "I mean it, get the fuck out now!"'
-							'Dan starts to say something but Vitek sighs. "OK fine, we''re going. Why do you have to be such a bitch anyways?" Without waiting for a response, Vitek walks out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close, then you walk to your locker to dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
+							'Dan starts to say something but Vitek sighs. "Okay fine, we''re going. Why do you have to be such a bitch anyways?" Without waiting for a response, Vitek walks out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close, then you walk to your locker to dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
 						else
 							'"What are you doing? This is the girls shower, get out!" you yell at them.'
 							'The both just laugh. "So what? What are you going to do about it?"'
-							'You feel yourself start to panic. "I''ll scream! The coach is still in his office." He is most days anyways and you hope he is today.'
-							'Vitek gives you a hard look and takes a step towards you. You inhale like you are about to scream and he stops dead. "You''re going to regret this bitch." He then storms out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close, then you rush to your locker to quickly dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
+							'You feel yourself start to panic. "I''ll scream! The coach is still in his office." You hope he is in case they call your bluff.'
+							'Vitek gives you a hard look and takes a step towards you. You inhale like you''re about to scream and he stops. "You''re going to regret this bitch." He then storms out while Dan lingers just a moment longer, checking you out before he leaves as well. You wait until you hear the door close before you rush to your locker to quickly dry off and get dressed before they come back.'
 						end
 						act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end
@@ -1446,12 +1445,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/watch.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it, with the steam filling the room giving it an almost sauna feel, completely relaxes you. Before long, you no longer hear any noise at all other than the shower, at first you think all the other girls have left but then you hear a locker open and close, maybe someone is still in there. After a few minutes, you notice your fingers starting to prune up and decide it is time to get out of the shower.'
+			'You enjoy the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, all you can hear is the shower and you think all the other girls have left, but then you hear a locker open and close. After a few minutes, you notice your fingers starting to prune up and decide that it''s been long enough.'
 			act 'Go to your locker':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You go to your locker and you don''t see or hear anyone. Just as you are finishing drying your hair, you hear something, so you turn off the dryer and listen. You can''t hear anything now, but you could have sworn there was a sound coming from inside one of the lockers.'
+				'You go to your locker and don''t see or hear anyone. Just as you finish drying your hair, you think you hear something, so you turn off the dryer and listen. You can''t hear anything now, but you could have sworn there was a sound coming from inside one of the lockers.'
 				act 'Get dressed':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1463,37 +1462,86 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You walk over to the lockers where you think you heard the noise come from. You get closer, look through the vents in the lockers and listen closely. As you get to one it sounds like... someone breathing. Could someone be inside one of the lockers? "Is anyone there?" you ask and hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
+					'You walk over to the lockers where you think you heard the noise come from. You get closer, look through the vents in the lockers and listen closely. As you get close to one it sounds like... someone breathing. Could someone be inside one of the lockers? "Is anyone there?" you ask, but hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
 					act 'Open the locker': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_lockerroom'
 					act 'Ignore it':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petkaleave.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head. Your imagination must be going crazy. You go back to getting dressed and you don''t hear any more noise. It must have been your imagination.'
+						'You shake your head. Your imagination must be going crazy. You go back to getting dressed and don''t hear any more noises.'
 						act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end
 				end
 			end
-		elseif longshower = 4 and hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] => 50:
+		elseif longshower = 4 and hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] => 70:
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/watch.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, you no longer hear any noise at all other than the shower. At first, you think all the other girls have left, but then you hear a phone ring and then someone talking. You can''t tell who it is from here.'
+			'You enjoy the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, all you can hear is the shower and you think all the other girls have left, but then you hear a phone ring and then someone talking. You can''t tell who it is from here.'
 			act 'Go to your locker':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
-				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] > 60 and checkoutalbina = 1:
+				if checkoutalbina = 1:
+				    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
+					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell that it''s Albina. '+iif(AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0,'She doesn''t sound very happy as she argues on the phone with her father.','She is happily speaking on the phone with someone.')+' Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she''s saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
+					gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Yes':
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
+						'There''s no point lying to her, so you decide to be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find it hard to resist looking."'
+						'She walks up and turns you around so you''re facing the lockers before giving your ass a hard slap. "What a dirty girl you are! I''m going to have to punish you!" You''re barely able to react before she delivers a stinging smack to your ass, causing you to whimper. She continues spanking you until your ass is red and numb. You look back and see a devious smile on her face as she licks her lips. "Have you learned your lesson?"'
+						'You nod and rub your ass as she starts getting dressed. Once she finishes, she gives you a wink and a smile. "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." She then walks out the door, leaving you alone to finish getting dressed. You can''t help but think that she was more than a little aroused.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
+						gs 'pain', 'asscheeks', 'spank', 2
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Finish getting dressed': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+					end
+					act 'No':
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
+						'You shake your head. "You''re very pretty, but no."'
+						'She arches a shapely brow. "No? Then why do you check me out when I''m naked?"'
+						'You blush slightly. You didn''t think anyone noticed you checking out the other girls.'
+						gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Deny it':
+							*clr & cla
+							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+						end
+						act 'Confess your attraction to her':
+							*clr & cla
+							npc_rel['A23'] += 3
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
+							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah, sorry. You''re beautiful and it''s hard to resist looking at your amazing body."'
+							'She walks up and turns you around so you''re facing the lockers before giving your ass a hard slap. "What a dirty girl you are! I''m going to have to punish you!" You''re barely able to react before she delivers a stinging smack to your ass, causing you to whimper. She continues spanking you until your ass is red and numb. You look back and see a devious smile on her face as she licks her lips. "Have you learned your lesson?"'
+							'You nod and rub your ass as she starts getting dressed. Once she finishes, she gives you a wink and a smile. "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." She then walks out the door, leaving you alone to finish getting dressed. You can''t help but think that she was more than a little aroused.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
+							gs 'pain', 'asscheeks', 'spank', 2
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Finish getting dressed': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+						end
+					end
+				elseif checkoutalbina = 1 and npc_sex['A23'] => 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She''s on the phone with her father, but doesn''t sound very happy about it. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
+					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell that it''s Albina. '+iif(AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0,'She doesn''t sound very happy as she argues on the phone with her father.','She is happily speaking on the phone with someone.')+' Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she''s saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
 					gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
-						npc_rel['A23'] += 1
+						npc_rel['A23'] += 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find it hard to resist looking."'
-						'She walks up, turns you around so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+						'There''s no point lying to her, so you decide to be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find it hard to resist looking."'
+						'She walks up and turns you around so you''re facing the lockers before giving your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding between your legs.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'
@@ -1505,8 +1553,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull away from her and step away. "What are you doing?"'
-								'She looks confused. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
+								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1520,7 +1568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head. "You''re pretty, but no."'
+						'You shake your head. "You''re very pretty, but no."'
 						'She arches a shapely brow. "No? Then why do you check me out when I''m naked?"'
 						'You blush slightly. You didn''t think anyone noticed you checking out the other girls.'
 						gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
@@ -1528,11 +1576,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Deny it':
 							*clr & cla
-							npc_rel['A23'] -= 1
+							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you are in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed and you do the same. Soon you are both dressed and she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1540,11 +1588,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						end
 						act 'Confess your attraction to her':
 							*clr & cla
-							npc_rel['A23'] += 1
+							npc_rel['A23'] += 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah, sorry, you''re beautiful and not looking is hard to resist."'
-							'She walks up to you, turns you so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question, as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah, sorry. You''re beautiful and it''s hard to resist looking at your amazing body."'
+							'She walks up and turns you around so you''re facing the lockers before giving your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "I know, that''s why I always teased you and gave you a little show... What a dirty girl you are! What am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding between your legs.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'
@@ -1556,8 +1604,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 									npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-									'You pull away from her and step away. "What are you doing?"'
-									'She looks confused. "I thought... never mind." she says, shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+									'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
+									'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind." she says, shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 									gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -1570,7 +1618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 					end
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/getdressed.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. While you get dressed, you can still hear someone talking in the other row of lockers, most likely on the phone. At this point you can tell it is Albina. She sounds frustrated and like she is arguing with someone about a show, but you''re not sure. Just as you finish dressing, she stops talking and comes back around to where you are, wearing only a towel. She gives you a brief look for a moment, perhaps wondering what you heard before she starts getting dressed.'
+					'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. While you get dressed, you can still hear someone talking in the other row of lockers, most likely on the phone. At this point you can tell it is Albina. '+iif(AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0,'She sounds very frustrated as she loudly argues with someone.','She is happily speaking on the phone with someone.')+' Just as you finish dressing, she stops talking and walks round to where you are, wearing only a towel. She jumps when she notices you and briefly stares at you, perhaps wondering what you heard before she drops her towel and starts getting dressed while ignoring you.'
 					'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 					act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 				end
@@ -1579,14 +1627,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/latecoach.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna feel, which completely relaxes you. Before long, you no longer hear any noise at all other than the shower. At first, you think all the other girls have left, but then you hear some lockers opening and closing. You turn off the shower and go to your locker. Coach Pavlovich is standing in the girls locker room, he turns to look at you as you walk in naked, you quickly cover yourself up as best you can. He looks surprised, but you are not sure if it is genuine or if he is faking it.'
+			'You enjoy the sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and completely relaxes you. Before long, all you can hear is the shower and you think all the other girls have left, but then you hear some lockers opening and closing. You turn off the shower and go to your locker. You find Coach Pavlovich, who turns to look at you as you walk in naked and you quickly cover yourself up as best you can. He looks surprised, but you''re not sure if it''s genuine or not.'
 			act 'What are you doing':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"What are you doing in the girls locker room?" You ask him.'
-				'"Oh I didn''t know anyone was left. I thought the locker room was empty. I was just making sure all the lockers were closed." He says.'
-				'You can''t help but notice the hardon causing his shorts to bulge. His eyes follow your eyes and he smiles when he notices you looking at the bulge in his shorts. "A girl with your reputation just can''t help herself, can you? Go ahead and touch it." he says.'
+				'"What are you doing in the girls locker room?" you ask.'
+				'"Oh I didn''t know anyone was left. I thought the locker room was empty. I was just making sure all the lockers were closed." he says.'
+				'You can''t help but notice his erection causing his shorts to bulge. His eyes follow your gaze and he smiles when he notices you staring. "A girl with your reputation just can''t help herself, can you? Go ahead and touch it." he says.'
 				act 'Feel his cock': gt 'gschool_sex', 'victor_lockerroom'
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1596,7 +1644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker1.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Do you mind? This is the girls locker room, you''re not supposed to be in here. Please leave." you tell him.'
-						'He pauses a moment and then throws his hands up. "Fine!" He then turns and leaves.'
+						'He pauses before throwing his hands up. "Fine!" He then turns and leaves.'
 						act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1607,7 +1655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/watch.jpg"></center>'
-			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it, with the steam filling the room giving it an almost sauna feel, completely relaxes you. Before long, you no longer hear any noise at all other than the shower. All the other girls must have already left. After a few minutes, you notice your fingers starting to prune up and decide it is time to get out of the shower. You go to your locker, dry off, and get dressed. By the time you get to the locker room, it is empty, all the other girls have already left.'
+			'The sensation of the hot water hitting your body and running down it, with the steam filling the room giving it an almost sauna-like feel, completely relaxes you. Before long, all you can hear is the shower and you think all the other girls have left. After a few minutes, you notice your fingers starting to prune up and decide that it''s been long enough. You go to your locker, dry off, and get dressed.'
 			act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1628,7 +1676,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_watch_end':
 	*nl
-	'After a few moments of observation, decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
+	'After watching for a few more seconds, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 	gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1647,7 +1695,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call. All in all, everyone has a good laugh at the moment.'
+		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call.'
 		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you''re finished, most of the other girls have already left.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
@@ -1657,7 +1705,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/locselfiedan.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A girl is at the mirror, taking a selfie of herself trying to look sexy. As she does, Albina walks up beside her and then starts to dance next to her, bending over and grinding her ass against her. She can''t help but laugh and grind back, and soon both of them are teasing each other and laughing, along with many of the other girls in the locker room that saw the whole thing.'
+		'Bella is at the mirror, taking a selfie of herself trying to look sexy. As she does, Albina walks up beside her and then starts to dance next to her, bending over and grinding her ass against her. She can''t help but laugh and grind back, and soon both of them are teasing each other and laughing, along with many of the other girls in the locker room that saw the whole thing.'
 		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
@@ -1666,12 +1714,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerroom.jpg"></center>'
-		'You are running extra late today, by the time you finally finish dressing, nobody seems to be left in the room or showers. You take a few steps towards the door, convinced that you are the last person here, when you hear a soft moan. At first you think you misheard but... there it is again.'
+		'You are running extra late today and by the time you finally finish dressing, nobody seems to be left in the room or showers. You take a few steps towards the door, convinced that you are the last person here, when you hear a soft moan. At first you think you misheard but... there it is again.'
 		act 'Ignore it': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 		act 'Take a peek':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/les<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'Curious, you sneak toward the source of the soft, feminine sounds. As you get closer, you are sure you are about to come across a couple of girls making out... and, sure enough, when you peek around the next corner, you spy Lena and Lera making out and feeling each other up. Their display of passion is so infectious that you are tempted to join them, but they seem so into each other that you would feel guilty intruding on their tender moment. That doesn''t make it any less arousing to watch, though.'
+			'Curious, you sneak toward the source of the soft, feminine sounds. As you get closer, you are sure you are about to come across some girls making out and, sure enough, when you peek around the next corner, you spy Lena and Lera making out and feeling each other up. Their display of passion is so infectious that you are tempted to join them, but they seem so into each other that you would feel guilty intruding on their tender moment. That doesn''t make it any less arousing to watch, though.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave them in peace':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
@@ -1684,7 +1732,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 				minut -= 10
 				gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
-				'As you do, you hear their joined moans of pleasure grow to a crescendo that fills the room and your ears. Then, all goes quiet. You peek around the corner again and watch them talk softly for a moment, exchanging final kisses before they get up to get dressed. You quickly straighten out your clothes as well and head for the exit as quietly as you can - you don''t want them to know you were spying on them.'
+				'As you do, you hear their joined moans of pleasure grow to a crescendo that fills the room. Then, all goes quiet. You peek around the corner again and watch them talk softly for a moment, exchanging final kisses before they get up to get dressed. You quickly straighten out your clothes as well and head for the exit as quietly as you can - you don''t want them to know you were spying on them.'
 				$orgasm_txt = ''
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1695,8 +1743,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/nudepic<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'Still naked, you hear a couple of girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they are not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina trying to work her buttplug into a comfortable position. Smirking, you go over to her, slap her hand away, and yank the plug out, making her yelp in suprise. "Open." you say in a menacing tone. She cringes before closing her eyes and opening her mouth.'
-			'Shoving the plug into her mouth you spin it around a few times, letting her slobber on it a bit. Despite the taste, she does lube it up as best she can, mindful of where it is going. "Bend over." you bark at her. She sighs, but bends over and spreads her buttcheeks, trying to ignore the laughing of the other girls. Without being gentle in the slightest, you jam it back in, getting another gasp out of her.'
+			'Still naked, you hear a few girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they''re not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina trying to work her buttplug into a comfortable position. Smirking, you go over to her, slap her hand away, and yank the plug out, making her yelp in suprise. "Open." you say in a menacing tone. She cringes before closing her eyes and opening her mouth.'
+			'Shoving the plug into her mouth, you spin it around a few times, letting her slobber on it. Despite the taste, she does lube it up as best she can, mindful of where it is going. "Bend over." you bark at her. She sighs, but bends over and spreads her buttcheeks, trying to ignore the laughing of the other girls. Without being gentle in the slightest, you jam it back in, getting another gasp out of her.'
 		else
 			'Still naked, you hear a couple of girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they are not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina standing there with her phone out. Glancing back at them, you see them looking at you and giggling again - obviously, something happened that you missed; something that they thought was funny. You wonder what it was.'
 		end
@@ -1705,7 +1753,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 5:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/boysraid.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked, when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
+		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
 		'Dan snorts. "Or what?"'
 		'Albina, not backing down, says "Do you really want to find out?" Everyone can hear the implied threat and considering her fearsome temper and willingness to get violently physical, Dan backs off.'
 		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
@@ -1716,12 +1764,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/christinaselfie<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'As you get dressed you overhear one of the girls say to another, "Come take a picture with me. I want to send something to my boyfriend." Giggling, two of her friends came over and posed with her.'
+			'As you get dressed you overhear some girls talking to each other. "Come and take a picture with me. I want to send something to my boyfriend." Giggling, two of her friends walk over and pose with her.'
 		else
 			'As you get dressed you overhear Christina say "Damn we look good, I look really amazing." You turn and see her checking out her naked body in the mirror, along with Lariska and Lina.'
 			'"You look amazing as always Christina!" Lina says.'
 			'Christina grabs her phone and says "Let''s take a selfie."'
-			'The three of them pose several times as Christina takes several selfies of the three of them naked. Lariska even takes a couple herself, which Christina doesn''t seem to mind. They go on for several minutes about how great they look, although it is mostly Lina and Lariska stroking Christina''s ego.'
+			'The three of them pose several times as Christina takes several selfies of the three of them naked. Lariska even takes a few herself, which Christina doesn''t seem to mind. They go on for several minutes about how great they look, although it''s mostly just Lina and Lariska stroking Christina''s ego.'
 		end
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
@@ -1740,9 +1788,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 			'As you get dressed you decide to have some fun with Christina, who is trying to hide in a corner so she isn''t noticed. Calling her to the center of the room, you tell her to raise her skirt and bend over. When she hesitates, you warn her if she has panties on and no buttplug inserted, you are going to spank her ass so hard she won''t be able to sit for a week. Grimacing, she bends over and flips up her skirt. Seeing she is following your rules, you tell her to turn and give everybody a good look, before letting her continue to get dressed. Several girls laugh at her while she hurries to finish dressing and flees the locker room before you mess with her some more.'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/applegirl.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t know why but Christina says something to Lina, which causes Lina to lie down on her stomach on one of the benches. Christina then sticks an apple in her mouth and proceeds to ignore her. A few minutes pass and once Christina is fully clothed, she walks back over and then uses her belt to smack Lina hard on the ass, making her wince in pain. "Have you learned your lesson?" Chrisina asks Lina, who enthusiastically nods her head.'
-			'Lariska just stands there watching, from a safe distance, as Christina yanks hard on Lina''s hair. "Are you sure?" Lina nods even more enthusiastically.'
-			'Christina gives her a final look and then puts her belt on. "OK fine, but don''t do it again."'
+			'You don''t know why but Christina says something to Lina which causes Lina to lie down on her stomach on one of the benches. Christina then sticks an apple in her mouth and proceeds to ignore her. A few minutes pass and once Christina is fully clothed, she walks back over and then uses her belt to smack Lina hard on the ass, making her wince in pain. "Have you learned your lesson?" Chrisina asks Lina, who enthusiastically nods her head.'
+			'Lariska stands watching from a safe distance as Christina yanks hard on Lina''s hair. "Are you sure?" Lina nods even more enthusiastically.'
+			'Christina gives her a final look and then puts her belt on. "Okay fine, but don''t do it again."'
 			'Lina gets up and takes the apple out of her mouth while taking a bite. "I won''t Christina." The three of them walk out together, with Lina and Lariska sharing the apple.'
 		end
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
@@ -1751,7 +1799,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/chrislarwedgie.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'You see a couple of the girls teasing each other while getting dressed. One manages to get behind the other, grabs her panties, and pulls up. They both start laughing, obviously just messing around with each other. Things settle back down as the girl who got wedgied adjusts her panties and they leave the room, still teasing each other.'
+			'You see some girls teasing each other while getting dressed. One manages to get behind the other, grabs her panties and pulls them up. They both start laughing, obviously just messing around with each other. Things settle back down as the girl who got wedgied adjusts her panties and they leave the room, still teasing each other.'
 		else
 			'As Lariska finishes getting dressed, Christina walks up behind her, grabs the back of her panties and yanks up on them hard, making Lariska squeal as she stands on her toes to try and relieve the pressure. Most of the other girls laugh at this. "Oh please, we all know you like things up your ass, so don''t act like you''re not enjoying this." Christina tells her.'
 			'"Ow! Let go Christina, it hurts! Please!" Lariska pleads in a slightly whiny, submissive tone.'
@@ -1769,19 +1817,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 11:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/younggirls.jpg"></center>'
-		'A Christina, Lariska, and Lina are horsing around, while Lizaveta starts to take pictures of them with her phone. Lina grabs Christina, reaching around to grab her by the ass as she puts her hair into a ponytail as Lariska moons the one taking the picture. They get most of the other girls laughing, but it quickly breaks up as everyone finishes dressing and start to leave.'
+		'Christina, Lariska and Lina are horsing around, while Lizaveta starts to take pictures of them with her phone. Lina grabs Christina, reaching around to grab her by the ass as she puts her hair into a ponytail as Lariska moons the one taking the picture. They get most of the other girls laughing, but it quickly breaks up as everyone finishes dressing and starts to leave.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress <= 15:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/nerdoutcast.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'As you are getting dressed you Natasha glaring at Christina, who is trying to get dressed quietly in a corner. Deciding to punish Christina for wearing panties, and maybe cheer the girl up, you sneak up behind Christina, grab her panties and yank them up hard. Christina screams and looks over her shoulder angrily, but turns white when she sees you, too scared to fight back as you pull even harder. Just when you think you might actually lift her off the ground, you hear the loud rip of her panties tearing, making her stumble into the lockers. Her panties hang off of her, wedged so tightly into her ass and pussy that they don''t fall off. Turning and smiling at Natasha, who smiles back, you go back to getting dressed while Christina holds back tears as she struggles to dig her ruined panties out.'
+			'As you are getting dressed, you see Natasha glaring at Christina, who is trying to get dressed quietly in a corner. Deciding to punish Christina for wearing panties, and maybe cheer Natasha up, you sneak up behind Christina, grab her panties and yank them up hard. Christina screams and looks over her shoulder angrily, but turns white when she sees you, too scared to fight back as you pull even harder. Just when you think you might actually lift her off the ground, you hear the loud rip of her panties tearing, making her stumble into the lockers. Her panties hang off of her, wedged so tightly into her ass and pussy that they don''t fall off. Turning and smiling at Natasha, who smiles back, you go back to getting dressed while Christina holds back tears as she struggles to dig her ruined panties out.'
 		elseif (grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5) and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grabs the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person keeps pulling your panties up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit." She laughs and then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow. You spend a few minutes pulling your panties out of your ass crack and getting them back in place.'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'ache'
 		else
-			'As you finish dressing, you turn around in time to see Christina stand up on one of the benches, reach down, and grab Natasha''s panties from behind. She yanks up on them hard, making the Natasha yelp and stand up. This doesn''t stop Christina though, who keeps lifting until she manages to lift Natasha off her feet. She squirms and cries out, dangling from her panties. Some of the girls laugh while others look away in disgust. Natasha starts to beg Christina to let her go, which seems to only encourage Christina, who now starts bouncing her by her panties until there is a loud rip and the Natasha''s panties end up under her arms. She looks to be on the verge of tears and runs out once Christina finally lets go. Christina laughs some more then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow.'
+			'As you finish dressing, you turn around in time to see Christina stand up on one of the benches, reach down, and grab Natasha''s panties from behind. She yanks up on them hard, making Natasha yelp and stand up. This doesn''t stop Christina though, who keeps lifting until she manages to lift Natasha off her feet. She squirms and cries out, dangling from her panties. Some of the girls laugh while others look away in disgust. Natasha starts to beg Christina to let her go, which seems to only encourage Christina, who now starts bouncing her by her panties until there is a loud rip and Natasha''s panties end up under her arms. She looks to be on the verge of tears and runs out once Christina finally lets go. Christina laughs some more then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow.'
 			'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		end
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'

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