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story/06_public_beach.tw2

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Sally exclaims, "Well the good news is that there's a free volleyball court we c
 Jess smiles, "Oh don't tell me you have a crush?"
 
 [['"I just admire her athleticism."'->public beach admire marcis athleticism]]
-[['"No. Her boyfriend Darren makes fun of me for being a nerd."->public beach teased for nerdiness]]
+[['"No. Her boyfriend Darren makes fun of me for being a nerd."'->public beach teased for nerdiness]]
 [['<lie> "No."'->lie about crush]]<<silently>>TODO - add $lies+=1<</silently>>
 
 ::public beach setup the nets far away <8535,6302>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Jess says, "Marci may be a stuck up bitch, but she cheered real hard for us duri
 Sally: "Yeah! but that's when her coach and stuff are watching, in halways and stuff they're super mean. They TPed my house!"
 
 [['"Their heckling will be distracting. We should practive far away from them."'->public beach distracting heckling]]
-[['"I guess you're right. We'll save a lot of time walking and setting up/taking down the net."'->public beach save time]]
+[['"I guess you\'re right. We\'ll save a lot of time walking and setting up/taking down the net."'->public beach save time]]
 [['"Hear me out... Marci could be our ally."'->public beach marci ally]]
 
 ::public beach run to the free court <8975,7186>
@@ -69,9 +69,9 @@ Right... they think I'm Heather... 'coz I look like Heather.
 [['"Thanks? I guess."'->public beach run to the court 2]]
 
 ::public beach choose court <8757,6057>
-[['"Marci is here?'"->public beach marci is here]]
+[['"Marci is here?\'"'->public beach marci is here]]
 [['"We should setup our net far away from the public nets."'->public beach setup the nets far away]]
-[['"So we don't have to setup our net great, lets grab the free court before someone else does." '->public beach run to the free court]]
+[['"So we don\'t have to setup our net great, lets grab the free court before someone else does." '->public beach run to the free court]]
 
 ::public beach distracting heckling <8315,6447>
 Jess: "I guess you're right, but we should plan on doing something mean to them later."
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ Natalie: "... Jess... you're super passive aggressive, and I love it."
 
 Sally: "I've been reading the rules, and there are _some_ minor hexes I can land without getting in too much trouble."
 
-[['"Let's go. I'll carry the net."'->public beach carry the net]]
-[['"Lets' go. I'll scout ahead and find a place."'->public beach scout ahead]]
+[['"Let\'s go. I\'ll carry the net."'->public beach carry the net]]
+[['"Lets\' go. I\'ll scout ahead and find a place."'->public beach scout ahead]]
 
 ::public beach save time <8486,6453>
 "Yeah!" Natalie screams, as she grabs the volleyball from the back of the car, and heads to the court.
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ Sally: "It also means halving the winnings if we win. And they don't know how to
 
 [['"You said it yourself, earlier this isn\'t about winning, so much as it\'s about qualifying"'->public beach qualifying more important than winning]]
 [['"I don't know how to play volleyball very well... but you're letting me on your team..."'->public beach 
-[['"They're plenty athletic! have you seen the throws and things they do, it\'s impressive!"'->public beach impressive cheering]]
+[['"They\'re plenty athletic! have you seen the throws and things they do, it\'s impressive!"'->public beach impressive cheering]]
 
 ::public beach admire marcis athleticism <8933,6344>
 Jess: "Sure, I'm _sure_ it's her athleticism you admire."
@@ -120,14 +120,14 @@ Sally: "Don't be silly guys, if anything these things are gonna make it harder t
 Sally: "It's okay, Marci teased me for being a nerd. We better find a spot far away from Marci and Darren."
 <<silently TODO in crease $sally_disposition>>
 
-[['"Alright, I'll carry the net."'->public beach carry the net]]
-[['"Alright. I'll scout ahead and find a place."'->public beach scout ahead]]
+[['"Alright, I\'ll carry the net."'->public beach carry the net]]
+[['"Alright. I\'ll scout ahead and find a place."'->public beach scout ahead]]
 
 ::lie about crush <9174,6558>
 Jess: "I'm your sister I can tell when you're lying about these sorts of things."
 
-[['"She's the head cheerleader, the most popular girl in school... of course I have a crush on her."'->public beach marci crush]]
-[['"Yeah she's super hot alright. I'm attacted to super hot girls... this isn't a surprise."'->public beach marci crush]]
+[['"She\'s the head cheerleader, the most popular girl in school... of course I have a crush on her."'->public beach marci crush]]
+[['"Yeah she\'s super hot alright. I\'m attacted to super hot girls... this isn\'t a surprise."'->public beach marci crush]]
 [['"I actually have a thing for Darren..."'->public beach Darren]]
 
 ::public beach not literal athleticism <8851,6556>
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@ Yeah $girl_name, "I guess you got more _athleticism_ than you bargained for."
 ::public beach marci crush <9298,6700>
 Jess: "Yeah alright, I suppose Marci has some assets that you might have a hard time ignoring, but she's just such a stuck up bitch."
 
-[['"Listen here me out we can use the cheerleader's help."'->public beach marci ally]]
-[['"I don't think I can be near her, I would be too distracted by embarrassment."'->public beach too embarrassed]]
+[['"Listen here me out we can use the cheerleader\'s help."'->public beach marci ally]]
+[['"I don\'t think I can be near her, I would be too distracted by embarrassment."'->public beach too embarrassed]]
 
 ::public beach Darren <8735,6903>
 Jess and Natalie laugh.
@@ -160,8 +160,8 @@ Natalie: "Hey, why did you never put a hex on her or whatever?"
 
 Sally: "I thought about it, but there are like... rules..."
 
-[['"Listen here me out we can use the cheerleader's help."'->public beach marci ally]]
-[['"I don't think I can be near him, I would be too distracted by embarrassment."'->public beach too embarrassed]]
+[['"Listen here me out we can use the cheerleader\'s help."'->public beach marci ally]]
+[['"I don\'t think I can be near him, I would be too distracted by embarrassment."'->public beach too embarrassed]]
 
 ::public beach carry the net <8829,7191>
 Double-click this passage to edit it.
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Natalie: "I guess I can pretend not to hate Marci's guts for a few days."
 
 Sally: "I guess I can too, but I'm looking up the legal Hex limit later."
 
-[['"Alright, let's get down and talk to them."'->public beach talk to cheerleaders]]
+[['"Alright, let\'s get down and talk to them."'->public beach talk to cheerleaders]]
 
 ::public beach impressive cheering <8694,6647>
 Natalie: "Yeah it's super impressive, they get thrown high into the air, and then when they come down you can see under their skirt..."
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ Sally: "But Marci would be rich too!" Sally thinks... "Ugh when I say that out l
 
 Natalie: "If you need any help with that Sal, just let me know... I'd love to see Marci as a frog... or something."
 
-[['"That\'s the spirit! Let\s go talk to them."'->public beach talk to cheerleaders]]
+[['"That\'s the spirit! Let\\s go talk to them."'->public beach talk to cheerleaders]]
 
 ::public beach head on over <9217,7185>
 You see Marci, the head cheerleader, and her three friends, Pratiba, Gina and Karen.
@@ -214,8 +214,8 @@ Jess: "Yeah it's the embarrassment that distracts you."
 
 Sally: "I guess we better find a spot far away from Marci and Darren to setup our net."
 
-[['"Let's go, I\'ll scout ahead"'->public beach scout ahead]]
-[['"Let's go, I\ll carry the net"'->public beach carry the net]]
+[['"Let\'s go, I\'ll scout ahead"'->public beach scout ahead]]
+[['"Let\'s go, I\\ll carry the net"'->public beach carry the net]]
 
 ::public beach run to the court 2 <8975,7329>
 They stop playing and turn towards you, giving the guys a good look at all their asses.
@@ -260,8 +260,8 @@ Marci: "It's like this weird reality show? I guess? It's not on T.V. internet on
 Gina: "They gotta have curves though, like us. No skinny bitches."
 
 [['"Cash prizes."'->cash prizes]]
-[['"Oh so you need to be good at volleyball huh... wouldn't it be great if you... had some training? from... people who know how to play volleyball."'->help train]]
-[['"So it's like porn?"->porn]]
+[['"Oh so you need to be good at volleyball huh... wouldn\'t it be great if you... had some training? from... people who know how to play volleyball."'->help train]]
+[['"So it\'s like porn?"'->porn]]
 
 ::use nextdoor net <9659,7888>
 Double-click this passage to edit it.
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ Double-click this passage to edit it.
 ::talk to the cheerleaders <9164,7690>
 They wave at the large temporary stadium, the tournament organizers have been made, it's all roped off and it's covered in banners with the tournaments logo: A woman with two volleyballs where here breast should be.
 
-[['"Let me guess... you're practicing? with that?" (points at beach ball)'->practicing with a beach ball]]
+[['"Let me guess... you\'re practicing? with that?" (points at beach ball)'->practicing with a beach ball]]
 [['"The tournament will be with a real ball like this one."'->real ball]]
 [['"Is that beer?"'->is that beer]]
 [['<lie> "Oh? What tournament?"'->what tournament]]
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ Marci: "But that's not that much difference than a cheerleading meet."
 
 Pratiba: "I guess, but at least at a cheer event, guys can't just whip their dicks out, if they're watching it in the privacy of their homes... on their computer."
 
-[['"Oh come on... no one's masturbating to... beach vollyeball."'->no one is masturbating to beach volleyball]]
+[['"Oh come on... no one\'s masturbating to... beach vollyeball."'->no one is masturbating to beach volleyball]]
 [['"Well I guess that\'s why it pays well."'->pays well]]
 
 ::join your team <9256,8212>