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Modificáronse 5 ficheiros con 137 adicións e 137 borrados
  1. 54 54
      story/01_intro.tw2
  2. 69 69
      story/02_transform.tw2
  3. 9 9
      story/03_custom_girl.tw2
  4. 3 3
      story/05_beaches.tw2
  5. 2 2
      story/06_public_beach.tw2

+ 54 - 54
story/01_intro.tw2

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ Natalie says, "I dunno, he had a pretty mean spike in P.E. class."
 
 Sally consoles Jessica, "Jess, this is our best bet; how do we convince him to do it?"
 
-[['Barge in and shout "I\'ll do it!"'->barge in]]
+[["Barge in and shout \"I'll do it!\""->barge in]]
 [[Keep listening.->keep listening 2][$times_spied+=1]]
 
 ::play games 2 <854,771>
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ You go to your room and open the bag Sally gave you. Inside, is a pink two piece
 <</if>>\
 
 [[Take your t-shirt off.->take your shirt off]]
-[['Go back to Jess\'s room and ask "Wait. Why a bikini?"'->why wear bikini]]
+[["Go back to Jess's room and ask \"Wait. Why a bikini?\""->why wear bikini]]
 
 ::play games 3 <833,1004>
 With the TV off, you listen to what your sister and her friends have to say.
@@ -180,14 +180,14 @@ With the TV off, you listen to what your sister and her friends have to say.
 
 Jessica stands in front of you with her slutty asian friend Natalie, and her nerdy friend Sally, but her friend Heather is missing. #FIXME
 
-[['"What kind of tournament?"'->discuss further]]
-[['"What\'s in it for me?"'->discuss further]]
-[['"I\'m not interested."'->not interested][$jess_disposition-=1]]
+[["\"What kind of tournament?\""->discuss further]]
+[["\"What's in it for me?\""->discuss further]]
+[["\"I'm not interested.\""->not interested][$jess_disposition-=1]]
 
 ::ignore her 2 <839,881>
 Your sister stands in front of the TV, turns it off, and scowls at you.
 
-[['"What do you want?"'->play games 3]]
+[["\"What do you want?\""->play games 3]]
 
 ::been there this whole time2 <390,1056>
 [['"I\'ve heard enough."'->just put this on]]
@@ -290,15 +290,15 @@ You hear a click as the phone turns off.
 
 Natalie winks.
 
-[['"Sure."'->discuss further][$nat_disposition+=1]]
-[['"Anything for you Natalie."'->discuss further][$nat_disposition += 2]]
-[['"I\'m still not interested."'->new plan 1]]
+[["\"Sure.\""->discuss further][$nat_disposition+=1]]
+[["\"Anything for you Natalie.\""->discuss further][$nat_disposition += 2]]
+[["\"I'm still not interested.\""->new plan 1]]
 
 ::discuss further <770,1134>
 "Can we discuss this further upstairs?" your sister begs.
 
-[['"Sounds great." go upstairs to your sister\'s room"'->go upstairs to talk]]
-[['(sarcastically) "Whatever." go upstairs to your sister\'s room.'->go upstairs to talk][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
+[["\"Sounds great.\" go upstairs to your sister's room."->go upstairs to talk]]
+[["(sarcastically) \"Whatever.\" go upstairs to your sister's room."->go upstairs to talk][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
 
 ::go upstairs to talk <626,1241>
 "Alright, so what's the deal with this tournament?" you ask.
@@ -317,9 +317,9 @@ You take off your shirt and start to untangle the bikini top to put it on.
 [[Keep putting on the bikini, It's probably just static electricity.->static electricity]]
 <<nobr>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-magical')>>
-	[['Go back to Jess\'s room and ask, "Is this bikini magical?"'->Is bikini magical?]]
+	[["Go back to Jess's room and ask, \"Is this bikini magical?\""->Is bikini magical?]]
 <<else>>
-	[['Go back to Jess\'s room and ask, "What is this?"'->what is this?]]
+	[["Go back to Jess's room and ask, \"What is this?\""->what is this?]]
 <</if>>
 <<set $current_top = 'topless'>>
 <</nobr>>
@@ -327,14 +327,14 @@ You take off your shirt and start to untangle the bikini top to put it on.
 ::what is this? <356,1598>
 "You look like you've never seen a bikini before," Jess scoffs.
 
-[['"It\'s a woman\'s swimsuit Jess... I don\'t have boobs!"'->explain bikini][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
-[['"Did you ask Natalie or Sally\'s brothers first if they wanted to wear it?"'->other brothers][$nat_disposition -= 1; $sally_disposition -= 1]]
-[['"Alright, I\'ll get changed in my room."'->put on suit voluntarily]]
+[["\"It's a woman's swimsuit Jess... I don't have boobs!\""->explain bikini][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
+[["\"Did you ask Natalie or Sally's brothers first if they wanted to wear it?\""->other brothers][$nat_disposition -= 1; $sally_disposition -= 1]]
+[["\"Alright, I'll get changed in my room.\""->put on suit voluntarily]]
 
 ::other brothers <498,1618>
 Jess gasps, "No. dipshit. Sally has an older brother in the military and Natalie has an older sister off at college, but no brothers. Needless to say neither are available to help with this."
 
-[['"So why do you need me to wear a bikini?"'->why wear bikini]]
+[["\"So why do you need me to wear a bikini?\""->why wear bikini]]
 
 ::What tournament? [know-tournament-beach-volleyball] <950,1730>
 "A beach volleyball tournament," Sally says matter of factly.
@@ -394,44 +394,44 @@ Sally joins in, "We don't need to //win// the tournament though, just placing wi
 <<if visitedTags('know-tournament-exists') and not visitedTags('know-tournament-beach-volleyball')>>
 	<<once [['"What tournament?"'->What tournament?]]>>
 <</if>>
-<<once [['"Is there a prize?"'->Is there a prize?]]>>
+<<once [["\"Is there a prize?\""->Is there a prize?]]>>
 <<if not visitedTags('know-tournament-girls-only') and not visitedTags('know-bikini-feminizes')>>
-	<<once [['"Why do I need to wear a bikini?"'->why wear bikini]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Why do I need to wear a bikini?\""->why wear bikini]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-magical') and
      not visitedTags('know-bikini-feminizes')>>
-	<<once [['"Enchanted bikini?"'->explain bikini feminizes]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Enchanted bikini?\""->explain bikini feminizes]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-tournament-girls-only') and not visitedTags('know-bikini-feminizes')>>
-	<<once [['"I won\'t pass as a girl wearing just a bikini."'->worried passing]]>>
+	<<once [["\"I won't pass as a girl wearing just a bikini.\""->worried passing]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-tournament-busty')>> 
-	<<once [['"What kind of people run this strange tournament?"'->who runs tournament?]]>>
+	<<once [["\"What kind of people run this strange tournament?\""->who runs tournament?]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-feminizes') and not visitedTags('know-bikini-busty')>>
-	<<once [['"So.. I need to wear a magic bikini to help you with a girl\'s only Beach Volleyball tournament?"'->learn bikini busty]]>>
+	<<once [["\"So.. I need to wear a magic bikini to help you with a girl's only Beach Volleyball tournament?\""->learn bikini busty]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-heather') and not visitedTags('know-tournament-busty')>>
-		<<once [['"Why would Heather need a magical swimsuit like this?"'->why does heather need a magic bikini]]>>
+		<<once [["\"Why would Heather need a magical swimsuit like this?\""->why does heather need a magic bikini]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-busty')>>
-	<<once [['"Wait. If the top will give me boobs, what will the bottom do?"'->What do the bottoms do?]]
-	<<once [['"How long will the enchantment hold out for?"'->Magic Bikni Duration]]>>
-	<<once [['"Why do I need to wear the bikini right now?"'->Why do I need to wear the bikini right now?]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Wait. If the top will give me boobs, what will the bottom do?\""->What do the bottoms do?]]
+	<<once [["\"How long will the enchantment hold out for?\""->Magic Bikni Duration]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Why do I need to wear the bikini right now?\""->Why do I need to wear the bikini right now?]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-sally-enchanted-bikini')>>
-	<<once [['"Couldn\'t Sally use magic to help us win the tournament?"'->magical cheating]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Couldn't Sally use magic to help us win the tournament?\""->magical cheating]]>>
 	<<once [['"May I ask more questions about being a sorceress?"'->Can I ask more questions about being a sorceress?]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-busty', 'know-bikini-clones', 'know-bikini-heather')>>
-	<<once [['"Can I keep the bikini?"'->Can I keep the bikini?]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Can I keep the bikini?\""->Can I keep the bikini?]]>>
 <</if>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-what-bottoms-do')>>
-	<<once [['"Uh. do I have to wear the bottoms? Surely I could wear a non-magical bottom."'->have to wear bottoms]]>>
+	<<once [["\"Uh. do I have to wear the bottoms? Surely I could wear a non-magical bottom.\""->have to wear bottoms]]>>
 <</if>>
-<<once [['"Couldn\'t you get someone else?"'->get someone else?]]>>
+<<once [["\"Couldn't you get someone else?\""->get someone else?]]>>
 <<if visitedTags('know-bikini-magical') and visitedTags('know-what-bottoms-do') and visitedTags('know-bikini-clones')>>
-	[['"I\'ll compete in the volleyball tournament with you..."'->agree]]<br>
+	[["\"I'll compete in the volleyball tournament with you...\""->agree]]<br>
 <</if>>
 
 ::Can I keep the bikini? <333,2236>
@@ -445,12 +445,12 @@ Sally joins in, "We don't need to //win// the tournament though, just placing wi
 "Tha..." Jess starts to say.
 
 [[Let your sister finish.->let sister finish][$jess_disposition += 5; $nat_disposition+=1; $sally_disposition += 2]]
-[['"On one condition."'->one condition]]
+[["\"On one condition.\""->one condition]]
 
 ::new bikni appearance <364,2602>
 "However you want... As long as it's a young busty woman of some sort."
 
-[['"Okay, let\'s discuss the details later."'->discuss making a bikni later][$keep_the_bikini to 'new']]
+[["\"Okay, let's discuss the details later.\""->discuss making a bikni later][$keep_the_bikini to 'new']]
 [["I don't need to keep the bikini."]]
 <<once [["Do you need a vagina to qualify as a woman?"]]>>
 
@@ -470,18 +470,18 @@ Nat replies, "I'd be honored. We'll talk after the tournament."
 
 Jess blushes. "Ew. Gross brother."
 
-[['"Awesome."'->what next?][$reward to "sex with nat"]]
+[["\"Awesome.\""->what next?][$reward to "sex with nat"]]
 <<else>>
 "No way dork," Nat rebuffs, "Not in a million years."
 
-[['"It\'s the only way I\'ll do this."'->virginity2][$nat_disposition -= 2; $jess_disposition -= 1]]
-[['"Fine. I\'ll help anyway."'->what next?]]
+[["\"It's the only way I'll do this.\""->virginity2][$nat_disposition -= 2; $jess_disposition -= 1]]
+[["\"Fine. I'll help anyway.\""->what next?]]
 <</if>>
 
 ::"Sally goes on a date with me." [nobr] <962,3175>
 <<if $sally_disposition >= 0 >>
 "Alright, I guess that's OK. I mean a date doesn't mean anything?" Sally asks, blushing.<br><br>
-[['"Awesome."'->what next?][$reward to "sally_date"]]
+[["\"Awesome.\""->what next?][$reward to "sally_date"]]
 <<if $jess_disposition >= 0 >>
 "Oh. You'll make such a cute couple," Jess adds.<br><br>
 <<else>>
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ Jess blushes. "Ew. Gross brother."
 
 "Jess, it's just a date, it's not like your BFF will lose her virginity to your brother," Nat says in an even tone.<br><br>
 
-[['"So it\'s settled?"'->sally date 2]]
+[["\"So it's settled?\""->sally date 2]]
 <</if>>
 <<else>>
 "Uh. I... Uh..." Sally struggles to find words.<br><br>
@@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ Jess blushes. "Ew. Gross brother."
 
 "No. Jess that's OK. It's just a date. It might be fun."<br><br>
 
-[['"So it\'s settled?"'->sally date 2]]
+[["\"So it's settled?\""->sally date 2]]
 <</if>>
 
 ::"You invite me to your college parties." [nobr] <1287,3284>
@@ -508,10 +508,10 @@ Jess blushes. "Ew. Gross brother."
 "You want to let my lame brother come to my cool college parties? Alright nerd, as long as you don't embarrass me."<br><br>
 
 <<if $keep_the_bikini == 'new'>>
-[['"I wouldn\'t be your lame brother, I\'d be your hotter younger sister."'->hotter sister][$reward to "college parties as a girl"]]<br>
+[["\"I wouldn't be your lame brother, I'd be your hotter younger sister.\""->hotter sister][$reward to "college parties as a girl"]]<br>
 <</if>>
 <</if>>
-[['"Sweet."'->what next?][$reward to "college parties"]]
+[["\"Sweet.\""->what next?][$reward to "college parties"]]
 
 ::"Sally gives me a longer-lasting feminization enchantment and you treat me like one of the girls at school." <1109,3130>
 "Oh. I never knew you felt that way. I kind of feel bad for teasing you for being a sissy wimp," Jess says before hugging you.
@@ -520,8 +520,8 @@ Sally explains, "That kind of magic is doable, but it will take a while and be e
 
 "Oh. you'll be such a cute girl," Nat mews.
 
-[['"You guys are the best."'->what next?][$reward to "help transitioning"]]
-[['"Sike! I\'m only in this for the money."'->what next?]]
+[["\"You guys are the best.\""->what next?][$reward to "help transitioning"]]
+[["\"Sike! I'm only in this for the money.\""->what next?]]
 
 ::What do the bottoms do? [know-what-bottoms-do] <191,1724>
 "It'll give you a nice round butt to go with your bust of course," Nat says.
@@ -562,16 +562,16 @@ Sally interjects, "No. The magic is imbued in both parts. It's important to wear
 ::"Do you need a vagina to qualify as a woman?" <604,2632>
 "I guess not, but you can't have an unsightly bulge, would a two inch flaccid cock be acceptable?" Sally inquires as the other girls stifle a laugh.
 
-[['"I guess."'->keep bikini final][$bottom_style to "girlcock"]]
+[["\"I guess.\""->keep bikini final][$bottom_style to "girlcock"]]
 [["I'd rather be a ken doll down there."]]
-[['"Better than a vagina."'->keep bikini final][$bottom_style to "girlcock"; $jess_disposition -=1]]
+[["\"Better than a vagina.\""->keep bikini final][$bottom_style to "girlcock"; $jess_disposition -=1]]
 
 ::"I'd rather be a ken doll down there." <489,2805>
 "Really? because that could be arranged."
 
-[['"Yeah. Make my bikini bottom smooth as a ken doll instead of genitals."'->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "ken_doll"]]
-[['"No. Make it with a pussy."'->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "vagina"]]
-[['"No. Make it with the small cock."'->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "girlcock"]]
+[["\"Yeah. Make my bikini bottom smooth as a ken doll instead of genitals.\""->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "ken_doll"]]
+[["\"No. Make it with a pussy.\""->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "vagina"]]
+[["\"No. Make it with the small cock.\""->keep bikini final][$bottom_style = "girlcock"]]
 
 ::keep bikini final <276,2872>
 "Alright I'll make your bikini bottom transform your genitals to<<nobr>>
@@ -615,13 +615,13 @@ Jess says, "Plus the weather's really nice."
 <<silently>>
 <<if $current_top == 'heather bikini'>>\
 "Well you better finish getting changed brother, then we can practice," Jess says.
-[['"Alright I\'ll meet you back here in 20."'->put on swimsuit]]
+[["\"Alright I'll meet you back here in 20.\""->put on swimsuit]]
 <<else>>
 "We all need to get changed, then we can practice," Jess says.
-[['"Alright I\'ll meet you back here in 20."'->put on swimsuit]]
+[["\"Alright I'll meet you back here in 20.\""->put on swimsuit]]
 <</if>>
 <<if $keep_the_bikini == 'new'>>\
-[['No. we should go shopping and get the stuff for my bikini.'->shopping1]]
+[["No. we should go shopping and get the stuff for my bikini."->shopping1]]
 <</if>>\
 <</silently>>
 
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ Jess opens the door with her friends lining up behind her.
 
 <<include [[been there this whole time2]]>>
 
-[['"Uh can I get some help with this?"'->help with bikini]]
+[["\"Uh can I get some help with this?\""->help with bikini]]
 [[Untie and try again, but do the top part first->Tie the top part first.]]
 
 ::explain magical bikini [know-bikini-magical know-bikini-feminizes know-tournament-beach-volleyball know-sally-enchanted-bikini] <944,1628>
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ Sally continues, "Each bikini I made is tied to a different person and whoever p
 
 "Well it's a funny story..." Sally starts.
 
-[['"I\'m listening."'->explain tournament detail.]]
+[["\"I'm listening.\""->explain tournament detail.]]
 
 ::explain tournament detail. [know-tournament-beach-volleyball know-tournament-girls-only know-bikini-busty know-bikini-feminizes know-bikini-heather] <724,1555>
 "Right so there's this girl's only beach volleyball tournament."

+ 69 - 69
story/02_transform.tw2

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ You pull out the bikini top, it's a got four strings, two for the neck and two f
 
 <<if $girls_present>>\
 
-[['"Could I get some help with this?"'->help with bikini]]
+[["\"Could I get some help with this?\""->help with bikini]]
 
 <</if>>\
 
@@ -15,14 +15,14 @@ You pull out the bikini top, it's a got four strings, two for the neck and two f
 
 [[Put the bottoms on first.->bottoms first]]
 
-[['Look up "How to tie a bikini" on YouTube.'->youtube]]
+[["Look up \"How to tie a bikini\" on YouTube."->youtube]]
 
 ::Tie the top part first. [top-part-tied] <3499,1571>
 Yeah that seems to work. Now just put it over your head and oh! The back is quite hard to reach.
 
 
 
-[['"Can I get some help with the back?"'->help with bikini]]
+[["\"Can I get some help with the back?\""->help with bikini]]
 
 [[Stretch and tie the back yourself.]]
 
@@ -63,9 +63,9 @@ Nat sits behind you on your bed, and starts to massage your shoulders.
 
 [[Feel your tits.->feel your tits with nat]]
 
-[['"I need to talk to Jess and Sally."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"I need to talk to Jess and Sally.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
-[['"I think I\'d like to be alone for the next part."'->put on bottoms second]]
+[["\"I think I'd like to be alone for the next part.\""->put on bottoms second]]
 
 [[Take off your pants.->pants off 1]]
 
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ It takes all your dexterity, but you're able to stretch and tie the back into a
 
 [[Relax.->relax and transform]]
 
-[['"Help! I\'m growing breasts!"'->transform with nat]]\
+[["\"Help! I'm growing breasts!\""->transform with nat]]\
 
 <<set $current_top = "heather bikini">>
 
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ The fabric clings to your skin, and your chest starts to tingle. Electricity sur
 
 [[Look in mirror.]]
 [[Feel your new tits.]]
-[['Go back to Jess\'s room and declare, "I have questions."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["Go back to Jess's room and declare, \"I have questions.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::look in mirror with nat [know-bikini-heather] <4075,2101>
 You look around for a mirror, but after thinking for a second, you realize you don't have one.
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ You look around for a mirror, but after thinking for a second, you realize you d
 
 After getting a good look in, hand the mirror back.
 
-[['"I need to talk to Jess and Sally."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"I need to talk to Jess and Sally.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::feel your tits with nat <3734,2526>
 They feel so good. They're large and sensitive. You've never been in such proximity to boobs like this before, it's getting your dick hard.
@@ -135,11 +135,11 @@ They feel so good. They're large and sensitive. You've never been in such proxim
 <<if $nat_disposition >= 0>>\
 "Oh they're nice are they? May I?" Nat gestures to your décolletage.
 
-[['Go right ahead.'->nat motorboats you.]]
-[['"No. I have questions."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["Go right ahead."->nat motorboats you.]]
+[["\"No. I have questions.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 <<else>>\
 
-[['"I have questions."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"I have questions.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 <</if>>
 
 ::bikini top transformation part 2 <4096,1800>
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@ You head back to Jess's room with your new bosom jiggling distractingly as you w
 
 Sally and Jess hold their hands up to their mouths stifling a giggle.
 
-[['"What\'s the deal with these tits?"'->explain tits]]
-[['"Oh yeah very funny, now how do we undo this?"'->undo this]]\
+[["\"What's the deal with these tits?\""->explain tits]]
+[["\"Oh yeah very funny, now how do we undo this?\""->undo this]]\
 
 <<set $current_top = 'heather bikini'>>
 
@@ -190,24 +190,24 @@ Her face lights up with pleasure as she plays with them. She slips a hand undern
 
 "I can't wait to grow my own set."
 
-[['Well there\'s no time like the present.'->no time like the present.]]
-[['"We can\'t do this Nat, you\'re Jessica\'s best friend!"'->Jess's best friend]]
+[["Well there's no time like the present."->no time like the present.]]
+[["\"We can't do this Nat, you're Jessica's best friend!\""->Jess's best friend]]
 [[Pull her in closer.->nat motorboating 2]]
 
 ::no time like the present. <3827,2652>
 "Actually, we really don't have time for this now, Sally and Jess are waiting for us."
 
-[['"Alright."'->back to jess and sally]]
-[['"Not even for a quickie?"'->quickie]]
+[["\"Alright.\""->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Not even for a quickie?\""->quickie]]
 
 ::Jess's best friend <4125,2721>
 "Really? Has she said something to you? I've suspected... but."
 
-[['"I think you misunderstand, my sister doesn\'t *like*, you like you. She just likes your company. You hang out a lot. She has a shirtless Channing Tatum poster on her wall!"'->not lesbian.]]
-[['(lie) "Uh.. yeah she really has the hots for you."'->trick natalie][$lies+=1]]
-[['"She\'s kind of a mystery to me actually."'->jess a mystery]]
+[["\"I think you misunderstand, my sister doesn't *like*, you like you. She just likes your company. You hang out a lot. She has a shirtless Channing Tatum poster on her wall!\""->not lesbian.]]
+[["(lie) \"Uh.. yeah she really has the hots for you.\""->trick natalie][$lies+=1]]
+[["\"She's kind of a mystery to me actually.\""->jess a mystery]]
 
-<<once [['"Wait. Are you into girls?"'->is nat a lesbian?]]>>
+<<once [["\"Wait. Are you into girls?\""->is nat a lesbian?]]>>
 
 ::nat motorboating 2 <3864,2527>
 Nat brings her head into your ample cleavage and then uses both hands to squeeze your tits together with her head between.
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ Your cock is now hard with anticipation.
 <<else>>\
 "No. But we'll pick up where we left off later."
 
-[['"Alright."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 <</if>>\
 
@@ -265,17 +265,17 @@ She puts some on her hands, and starts to stroke your cock.
 ::not lesbian. <3970,2809>
 "In that case what's your excuse?" Nat accuses pointing to a picture of a petite Japanese woman in a swimsuit hung on your wall, "Am I not attractive to you?"
 
-[['"No! uh. Look there\'s no time? can we finish this later?"'->finish this later]]
+[["\"No! uh. Look there's no time? can we finish this later?\""->finish this later]]
 
-[['"I have a crush on Sally!"'->pathetic sally]]
+[["\"I have a crush on Sally!\""->pathetic sally]]
 
 <<set $nat_disposition -= 1>>
 
 ::trick natalie <4144,2851>
 "Oh. That's great news! How should I tell her that I feel the same way?"
 
-[['"Tell her how you really feel... after the tournament."'->tell her how you really feel]]
-[['"You\'ve been friendzoned."'->friendzoned]]
+[["\"Tell her how you really feel... after the tournament.\""->tell her how you really feel]]
+[["\"You've been friendzoned.\""->friendzoned]]
 
 <<set $nat_offlimits to true >>
 
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ She puts some on her hands, and starts to stroke your cock.
 
 
 
-[['"Alright. lets head back Jess\'s room."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright. lets head back Jess's room.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 <<set $nat_disposition += 1;
 
@@ -306,9 +306,9 @@ Natalie is exasperated, "What? no! that's terrible advice. The 'friendzone' isn'
 
 
 
-[['(mumble) "Then why won\'t Sally go out with me?"'->pathetic sally]]
+[["(mumble) \"Then why won't Sally go out with me?\""->pathetic sally]]
 
-[['"Okay."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Okay.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::pathetic sally <4405,3141>
 "Oh that's adorable. And pathetic. Actually the more I think about it, you two nerds were made for each other."
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ Nat extends her pinky.
 
 
 
-[['"Deal."'->crush deal.]]
+[["\"Deal.\""->crush deal.]]
 
 ::crush deal. <4578,3058>
 You shake pinkies: enacting the solemnest of vows: A Pinky Promise.
@@ -334,22 +334,22 @@ You shake pinkies: enacting the solemnest of vows: A Pinky Promise.
 
 
 
-[['"Okay."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Okay.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::jess a mystery <4441,2614>
 "Yeah. And you live with her. Would you... you know... find out about her for me?"
 
 
 
-[['"Sure."'->agree to snoop]]
+[["\"Sure.\""->agree to snoop]]
 
 <<if $times_spied <= 0>>\
 
-[['"I\'m not a snoop!"'->not a snoop]]
+[["\"I'm not a snoop!\""->not a snoop]]
 
 <<else>>\
 
-[['(lie) "I\'m not a snoop!"'->not a snoop][$lies += 1]]
+[["(lie) \"I'm not a snoop!\""->not a snoop][$lies += 1]]
 
 <</if>>\
 
@@ -358,9 +358,9 @@ You shake pinkies: enacting the solemnest of vows: A Pinky Promise.
 
 
 
-<<once [['"Oh? Are you a lesbian?"'->is nat a lesbian?]]>>\
+<<once [["\"Oh? Are you a lesbian?\""->is nat a lesbian?]]>>\
 
-[['"Alright, lets head back to Jess\'s room."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright, lets head back to Jess's room.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::not a snoop <4561,2823>
 <<if $girls_know_you_spied>>\
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ You shake pinkies: enacting the solemnest of vows: A Pinky Promise.
 
 
 
-[['"Alright, lets head back to Jess\'s room."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright, lets head back to Jess's room.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
 ::is nat a lesbian? <4252,2778>
 "I'm bisexual..."
@@ -389,11 +389,11 @@ You shake pinkies: enacting the solemnest of vows: A Pinky Promise.
 
 
 
-[['"Alright."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
-[['"I\'ll make it up to you later."'->make up for this later]]
+[["\"I'll make it up to you later.\""->make up for this later]]
 
-[['"Do we have enough time for a quickie?"'->quickie]]
+[["\"Do we have enough time for a quickie?\""->quickie]]
 
 ::Pat her head. <3624,2643>
 "Dirty." Nat licks her lips seductively.
@@ -414,11 +414,11 @@ Your cock flops out and she grabs it with one hand. With the other she cups your
 
 
 
-[['"I bet you say that to all the girls."'->all the girls]]
+[["\"I bet you say that to all the girls.\""->all the girls]]
 
-[['"I bet you say that to all the boys."'->all the boys]]
+[["\"I bet you say that to all the boys.\""->all the boys]]
 
-[['"Too big for your mouth?"'->too big for your mouth]]
+[["\"Too big for your mouth?\""->too big for your mouth]]
 
 <<else>>\
 
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ Your cock flops out and she grabs it with one hand. With the other she cups your
 
 
 
-[['"Not even for a quickie?"'->quickie]]
+[["\"Not even for a quickie?\""->quickie]]
 
 <</if>>
 
@@ -443,11 +443,11 @@ After about a minute, Natalie, rebuffs you and stands up off the bed.
 
 
 
-[['"Alright."'->back to jess and sally]]
+[["\"Alright.\""->back to jess and sally]]
 
-[['"I\'ll make it up to you later."'->make up for this later]]
+[["\"I'll make it up to you later.\""->make up for this later]]
 
-[['"Not even for a quickie?"'->quickie]]
+[["\"Not even for a quickie?\""->quickie]]
 
 ::all the boys <3225,2772>
 "What! Are you insinuating I sleep with all the guys?"
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ After about a minute, Natalie, rebuffs you and stands up off the bed.
 
 
 
-[['"I\'ll uh make up for this later."'->make up for this later]]
+[["\"I'll uh make up for this later.\""->make up for this later]]
 
 ::nat give you a bj <3485,2890>
 Nat licks the head of your penis while she fondles your balls. She starts to put the whole thing in her mouth...
@@ -487,9 +487,9 @@ Nat licks the head of your penis while she fondles your balls. She starts to put
 
 
 
-[['"I\'m almost there, just keep sucking."'->just keep sucking]]
+[["\"I'm almost there, just keep sucking.\""->just keep sucking]]
 
-[['"You better stop, we can finish this later."'->finish this later]]
+[["\"You better stop, we can finish this later.\""->finish this later]]
 
 ::make up for this later <3355,2990>
 "You better. Let's go talk to the other girls."
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ You reluctantly put your pants back on.
 
 
 
-[['"I\'ll make up for this later."'->make up for this later]]
+[["\"I'll make up for this later.\""->make up for this later]]
 
 ::Put on clean underwear and pants. <3120,3446>
 You find some clean boxers and jeans and put them, which gives you time to soak in all that just happened.
@@ -615,13 +615,13 @@ You pull out the bikini top, it's a got four strings, two for the neck and two f
 
 
 
-[['"Could I get some help with this?"'->help with bikini2]]
+[["\"Could I get some help with this?\""->help with bikini2]]
 
 [[Tie the top part first.->tie top first2]]
 
 [[Tie the bottom part first.->tie bottom first2]]
 
-[['Look up "How to tie a bikini" on YouTube.'->youtube2]]
+[["Look up \"How to tie a bikini\" on YouTube."->youtube2]]
 
 ::help with bikini2 <1324,4156>
 "Fine. I'll help," Nat cries through the door. She enters your room, closing the door behind her and gets to work.
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ Nat ties the top in a simple knot then puts it around your neck. She spins you a
 
 [[Relax.->transform with nat2]]
 
-[['"Help! I\'m growing breasts!"'->transform with nat2][$mood = 'alarm']]
+[["\"Help! I'm growing breasts!\""->transform with nat2][$mood = 'alarm']]
 
 [[Try to take the bikini off.->transform with nat2][$mood = 'alarm']\
 
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ Yeah that seems to work. Now just put it over your head and oh! The back is quit
 
 
 
-[['"Can I get some help with the back?"'->help with bikini2]]
+[["\"Can I get some help with the back?\""->help with bikini2]]
 
 [[Stretch and tie the back yourself.->tie back yourself2]]
 
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ Hrm. that doesn't seem to work.
 
 
 
-[['"Uh can I get some help with this?"'->help with bikini2]]
+[["\"Uh can I get some help with this?\""->help with bikini2]]
 
 [[Untie and try again, but do the top part first->tie top first2]]
 
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ It takes all your dexterity, but you're able to stretch and tie the back into a
 
 [[Relax.->relax and transform2]]
 
-[['"Help! I\'m growing breasts!"'->transform with nat2][$mood to 'alarm']]\
+[["\"Help! I'm growing breasts!\""->transform with nat2][$mood to 'alarm']]\
 
 <<set $current_top = "heather bikini">>
 
@@ -787,13 +787,13 @@ They feel so good. They're large and sensitive. You've never been in such proxim
 
 
 
-[['Go right ahead.'->nat motorboats you2]]
+[["Go right ahead."->nat motorboats you2]]
 
-[['"No. I would like some privacy."'->privacy from nat]]
+[["\"No. I would like some privacy.\""->privacy from nat]]
 
 <<else>>\
 
-[['"I would like some privacy please."'->privacy from nat]]\
+[["\"I would like some privacy please.\""->privacy from nat]]\
 
 <</if>>
 
@@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ It's so stretchy it seems like its actually destroying and creating matter... if
 <</if>>\
 
 <<if $girls_present>>\
-[['"There\'s something weird about this bikini," you shout through the door"'->weird bikini]]
+[['"There\'s something weird about this bikini," you shout through the door.'->weird bikini]]
 <</if>>\
 [[Put your right leg through the leg hole.->right leg through]]
 
@@ -989,7 +989,7 @@ The fabric clings tightly, tighter than fabric should, even Lycra should be.
 <<if visitedTags('know-what-bottoms-do')>>\
 Unsurprisingly, your genitals start to shrink from the pressure of the fabric.
 <<elseif visitedTags('know-bikini-feminizes') and $girls_present>>\
-[['"Ah! my penis is shrinking! You didn\'t tell me that would happen!"'->shrinking penis]]
+[["\"Ah! my penis is shrinking! You didn't tell me that would happen!\""->shrinking penis]]
 <<else>>\
 The pressure from the bikini on your genitals builds, and they start to shrink.
 
@@ -1006,8 +1006,8 @@ The pressure from the bikini on your genitals builds, and they start to shrink.
 ::shrinking penis <2890,1446>
 You hear the girls shriek with laughter from the door.
 
-[['"Hey it\'s not funny! You guys!"'->shrinking penis 2]]
-[['"Is this some kind of prank! Make it stop!"'->shrinking penis 2]]
+[["\"Hey it's not funny! You guys!\""->shrinking penis 2]]
+[["\"Is this some kind of prank! Make it stop!\""->shrinking penis 2]]
 [[Wait for them to calm down.->shrinking penis 2]]
 
 ::bottom transform 2 <3040,1443>
@@ -1051,14 +1051,14 @@ You're completely feminized from the waist down.
 
 [[Put on bikini top.->put on top second]]
 <</if>>\
-[['"You\'ve got to turn me back!" you scream through the door"'->turn me back]]
+[["\"You've got to turn me back!\" you scream through the door."->turn me back]]
 [[Explore your womanhood.]]
 
 ::turn me back <1247,1588>
 Your sister berates you: "Like we said already, we can't turn you back until you help with the tournament."
 
-[['"I\'m calling the authorities."'->tattle to cops/parents][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
-[['"I\'m telling Mom and Dad."'->tattle to cops/parents][$jess_disposition -= 2; $sally_disposition -= 2]]
+[["\"I'm calling the authorities.\""->tattle to cops/parents][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
+[["\"I'm telling Mom and Dad.\""->tattle to cops/parents][$jess_disposition -= 2; $sally_disposition -= 2]]
 <<include [[bikini questions]]>>
 
 ::Explore your womanhood. <3298,1120>
@@ -1070,11 +1070,11 @@ You slide a hand beneath the bikini bottom and slip a a few fingers into your ne
 The top is just 2 triangle shaped pieces of fabric connected with strings.
 
 <<if $girls_present>>\
-[['"Could I get some help with the top?"'->help with bikini]]
+[["\"Could I get some help with the top?\""->help with bikini]]
 <</if>>\
 [[Tie the top part first.]]
 [[Tie the bottom part first.]]
-[['Look up "How to tie a bikini" on YouTube.'->youtube]]
+[["Look up \"How to tie a bikini\" on YouTube."->youtube]]
 
 ::put on bottoms second <3082,1905>
 Take off your pants and boxers.

+ 9 - 9
story/03_custom_girl.tw2

@@ -278,13 +278,13 @@
 <</if>>\
 "I've got it all written down in my notes," Sally describes.
 
-[['"May I see your notes?" (refine/edit"'->custom notes]]
-[['"That sounds great!"'->accept custom girl]]
+[['"May I see your notes?" (refine/edit)'->custom notes]]
+[["\"That sounds great!\""->accept custom girl]]
 
 ::carpet matches drapes <4932,7639>
 <<if $hair_color == 'bright pink'>>\
 "Even if the drapes are bright pink?"
-[['Yeah!'->pubic hair shape]]
+[["Yeah!"->pubic hair shape]]
 <<else>>\
 <<include [[pubic hair shape]]>>
 <</if>>\
@@ -383,7 +383,7 @@ Nat and Sally head off to the shoe store.
 "Earlier, you said you wanted a custom bikini enchantment. How do you want it to look!"
 
 [['"I want to look like Heather."'->clone heather]]
-[['"Guess what kind of girl I\'d like to be." (randomize"'->random girl][$tournament_bikini = 'custom_bikini'; $heather_bikini_options = 'custom']]
+[['"Guess what kind of girl I\'d like to be." (randomize)'->random girl][$tournament_bikini = 'custom_bikini'; $heather_bikini_options = 'custom']]
 [['"I\'ll tell you exactly what I want to look like."'->custom girl][$tournament_bikini = 'custom_bikini'; $heather_bikini_options = 'custom']]
 
 ::clone heather <4210,7079>
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ Nat and Sally head off to the shoe store.
 "Hrm. let me think..." You can see the the look of intense thought on Sally's forehead.
 
 <<include [[custom girl 5]]>>
-[['"I don\'t like that, can you guess again?" (re-randomize"'->random girl]]
+[['"I don\'t like that, can you guess again?" (re-randomize)'->random girl]]
 
 ::get a girl name <4494,5333>
 You walk out of your room, boobs jiggling.
@@ -639,10 +639,10 @@ delete State.temporary.available_genitals[variables()['bottom_style']]
 [[Wait for Sally to respond.->custom girl 3]]
 
 ::pubic hair options <4676,7631>
-[['None.'->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'none']]
-[['Well the carpet should match the drapes.'->carpet matches drapes]]
-[['A big muff.'->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'muff']]
-[['A landing strip.'->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'strip']]
+[["None."->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'none']]
+[["Well the carpet should match the drapes."->carpet matches drapes]]
+[["A big muff."->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'muff']]
+[["A landing strip."->custom girl 5][$pubic_hair = 'strip']]
 <<if ['kinda_like_heather', 'heather_sister'].include($heather_bikini_options)>>\
 <<choice [['"However, Heather keeps hers."'->heather pubes]]>>
 <</if>>\

+ 3 - 3
story/05_beaches.tw2

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ You finish loading the gear into Jess's white 7-year-old Japanese hatchback.
 
 "Alright //girls// lets head to the beach!" Jess says.
 
-[['"Shotgun!"'->shotgun]]
+[["\"Shotgun!\""->shotgun]]
 [['Get in the backseat.'->backseat]]
 
 ::backseat <7051,4826>
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ Finally the path opens up to a breathtaking view of the ocean.
 ::is secret beach safe <7199,6437>
 "What! don't you trust me?"
 
-[['Of course... it\'s just.'->reluctantly secret beach 4]]
+[["Of course... it's just."->reluctantly secret beach 4]]
 
 ::reluctantly secret beach 4 <7092,6597>
 "Well then hurry up!" Jess says.
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ Finally the path opens up to a breathtaking view of the ocean.
 
 [[Follow the girls.->secret beach 4]]
 [['"Sure. I\'d do it for a kiss."'->do it for kiss][$jess_disposition -= 1]]
-[['"Why don\'t you show me your tits"'->secret beach - show me your tits][$jess_disposition -= 2]]
+[['"Why don\'t you show me your tits?'->secret beach - show me your tits][$jess_disposition -= 2]]
 
 ::do it for kiss <7218,6753>
 Nat puts down the net and poles and comes closer.

+ 2 - 2
story/06_public_beach.tw2

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Right... they think I'm Heather... 'coz I look like Heather.
 ::public beach choose court <8757,6057>
 [['"Marci is here?\'"'->public beach marci is here]]
 [['"We should setup our net far away from the public nets."'->public beach setup the nets far away]]
-[['"So we don\'t have to setup our net great, lets grab the free court before someone else does.""'->public beach run to the free court]]
+[['"So we don\'t have to setup our net great, lets grab the free court before someone else does." '->public beach run to the free court]]
 
 ::public beach distracting heckling <8315,6447>
 Jess: "I guess you're right, but we should plan on doing something mean to them later."
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Double-click this passage to edit it.
 ::talk to the cheerleaders <9164,7690>
 They wave at the large temporary stadium, the tournament organizers have been made, it's all roped off and it's covered in banners with the tournaments logo: A woman with two volleyballs where here breast should be.
 
-[['"Let me guess... you\'re practicing? with that?" (points at beach ball"'->practicing with a beach ball]]
+[['"Let me guess... you\'re practicing? with that?" (points at beach ball)'->practicing with a beach ball]]
 [['"The tournament will be with a real ball like this one."'->real ball]]
 [['"Is that beer?"'->is that beer]]
 [['<lie> "Oh? What tournament?"'->what tournament]]