more text, but also lots of fixes from the new linter

beaches.tw2

@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Natalie tells Jess how to get to the private beach and points out the turns.
 \#TODO
 
 ::hike to secret beach <6868,5737>
-"You were the one who wanted to go to the Sal's 'Secret Beach' dingbat."
+"You were the one who wanted to go to Sal's 'Secret Beach' dingbat."
 
 [['"I still think the secret beach is the best option."'->secret beach is best option]]
 [['"On second thought, let\'s go to the private beach."'->private beach 1]]
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ Natalie tells Jess how to get to the private beach and points out the turns.
 "Yeah, but this way isn't trespassing."
 
 [['"I changed my mind, we should go to the public beach."'->public beach 1]]
-[['"I changed my mind, let's go to that private beach."'->private beach 1]]
+[['"I changed my mind, let\'s go to that private beach."'->private beach 1]]
 
 ::secret beach 2 <7015,6032>
 Jess parks the car and you get out.
@@ -149,9 +149,14 @@ Jess smiles at you, surprised at how helpful you're being.
 [['"Is this safe?"'->is secret beach safe]]
 
 ::secret beach 4 <6773,6628>
-\#TODO
+You walk through the crevace, it's about a 15 minute hike.
+
+Finally the path opens up to a breathtaking view of the ocean.
 
-::is secret beach safe <7203,6437>
+[[stare at the beach]]
+[['"Wow. I can\'t believe more people don\'t know about this."'->amazed at secretness of secret beach]]
+
+::is secret beach safe <7199,6437>
 "What! don't you trust me?"
 
 [["Of course... it's just."->reluctantly secret beach 4]]
@@ -203,7 +208,7 @@ The girls maneaver the small slips of lycra to be covering their nipples again a
 <<include [[secret beach 4]]>>
 
 ::secret beach - jess tits <7478,6765>
-"Ugh. Fine... but only if you show us yours," Nat replies
+"Ugh. Fine... but only if you show us yours," Jess replies
 
 Sally and Nat turn to look at you and stop playing with each other's tits.
 
@@ -215,7 +220,7 @@ You squeeze your tits together and pull the fabric in tight and slide slowly out
 
 Your sister mimics your motion, you lock eyes, all four massive tits flop out of their restraints.
 
-You pose briefly, extending your 
+You pause briefly, extending your stare and the beautiful mounds of cleavage.
 
 \#TODO
 
@@ -226,7 +231,7 @@ You pose briefly, extending your
 
 [['"Maybe we should hike in too."'->hike in]]
 [['"Sounds like a bit of a harmless voyeur."'->harmless voyeur]]
-[['"On second thought maybe this isn't a good idea."'->private beach second thoughts]]
+[['"On second thought maybe this isn\'t a good idea."'->private beach second thoughts]]
 
 ::hike in <5590,6051>
 Jess cuts you off, "There's no time, we need to get as much practice in as we can, and we can't be worn out from a hike."
@@ -250,7 +255,7 @@ The girls giggle.
 "Crazy idea: why don't we knock on his door and ask permission to use his beach," Sally adds.
 
 [['"No way! better to ask for forgiveness than permission."'->forgiveness gt permission]]
-[['"I guess it can\'t hurt to ask."->ask permisssion]]
+[['"I guess it can\'t hurt to ask."'->ask permisssion]]
 
 ::private beach second thoughts <6219,5753>
 \#TODO
@@ -333,7 +338,7 @@ She speaks: "Good afternoon, what do you fine young ladies want?"
 ::you talk 3 <6123,6859>
 "What do you need it for? How long will you be?"
 
-[['"We'd like to practice for a beach volleyball tournament."'->milf judge 2]]
+[['"We\'d like to practice for a beach volleyball tournament."'->milf judge 2]]
 [['Lean in, say, "It\'s a secret," and flash her.'->seduce milf]]
 
 ::seduce milf <6123,7011>
@@ -348,9 +353,9 @@ She speaks: "Good afternoon, what do you fine young ladies want?"
 ::daughter swap 1 <5789,7018>
 "Hrm. I'd have to recuse myself from referreeing the tournament, and I don't think the organizers have enough substitutes for a last minute vacancy like that. Besides what's in it for Danni and I? Let's discuss it later over dinner? All four of you and Danni?"
 
-[['"Oh. OK then."->milf judge 3]]
-[['"We\'ll see you at dinner."->milf judge 3]]
-[['"We\'ll think about it."->milf judge 3]]
+[['"Oh. OK then."'->milf judge 3]]
+[['"We\'ll see you at dinner."'->milf judge 3]]
+[['"We\'ll think about it."'->milf judge 3]]
 
 ::milf judge 3 <5929,7143>
 \#TODO
@@ -360,3 +365,148 @@ Jess pulls down a subburban street and parks next to someone's driveway.
 
 The house is big, but kind of generic looking, I guess people would call it a McMansion.
 
+::stare at the beach <6614,6890>
+You stare in amazement at the wonderous natural beauty, but in the distance you see beach chairs and umbrellas set out, so it's not completely unspoiled territory.
+
+[['"We should introduce ourselves."'->introduce ourselves to goddesses]]
+[['"Oh hey we have neighbours!"'->mention goddesses]]
+
+::amazed at secretness of secret beach <6828,6902>
+"We're not completely alone," Sally says and points out a few beach chairs and umbrellas in the distance.
+
+[['"We should introduce ourselves"'->introduce ourselves to goddesses]]
+
+::introduce ourselves to goddesses <6699,7112>
+Jess says, "Sure you and Sally go talk to them, maybe they'll give us booze. We got the Net, don't we Nat?"
+
+"Sure thing boss," Nat says playfully.
+
+[['"Alright lets go Sally."'->talk to goddesses]]
+[['"Uh. it looks like you guys need help."'->setup net on secret beach]]
+
+::mention goddesses <6481,7096>
+Sally asks, "Should we introduce ourselves."
+
+[['"No, let\'s not waste any time and setup the net."'->setup net on secret beach]]
+[['"I suppose we should."'->introduce ourselves to goddesses]]
+
+::setup net on secret beach <6481,7306>
+Having four people, made setting up the net quite fast.
+
+But just as we finished staking the guy lines, visitors approached.
+
+It was two women, both very fit and tan, one had straight shoulder length brown hair, and the other one had long curly lighter brown hair, and was noticeably curvier, but neither was as busty as You, Jess, Sally or Nat.
+
+They were wearing what looked like expensive white bikinis with gold rings and flowing ribbons instead of just tieing lycra directly to lycra.
+
+"Welcome, I'm Minnie, and this is Van, what *are* you doing on our beach?"
+
+The tone was not entirely accusatory, they seemed mostly curious.
+
+They women's age was unknowable, they had the immaculate fitness of youth, but also the demeanor, authority, and wisdom of someone much older.
+
+[['"What do you mean our beach."'->reject goddesses claim to beach]]
+[['"We were just going to play volleyball."'->reason for being on secret beach is volleyball]]
+[['"Uh... you\'re very pretty."'->compliment van and minnie beauty]]
+
+::talk to goddesses <6899,7330>
+You wander over to talk to the beach chairs, you see four women drinking wine and reading.
+
+You overhear a snippet of conversation, one of them is reading from a magazine.
+
+"Oh, the world is so terribly dreadful, these days..."
+
+"You mean when men fought wars over women? If anything, these days are much better than the past, even if our power wanes, besides, most of the gains and failures of modern times can be blamed on *your* husband."
+
+"Uh. excuse us, we just wanted to introduce ourselves..."
+
+The four women turn to look at you, and you can now get a good look at them. One of them, with short hair, puts down her book, (A large format, illustrated version of Sun Tzu's the Art of War), you get the feeling that she was watching you this entire time.
+
+They are all fit and tan, but of an unkowable age, they have the immaculate beauty of youth, but also a demeanor of wisdom and authority that comes with age.
+
+They are all wearing expensive looking white bikinis with gold rings on the waist, shoulder straps and between the cups.
+
+[["'I\'m ${girl_name} and this is Sally."']]
+
+::reject goddesses claim to beach <6331,7460>
+Minnie is about to say something when Van interrupts her, "We simply meant that we were here first... we have no plans to force you to leave."
+
+She continues, "But what is this net for? you shan't be able to catch many fish with it, even at high tide..."
+
+[['"You\'re not from around here are you?"'->minnie and van not from around here]]
+[['"It\'s for Volleyball."'->reason for being on secret beach is volleyball]]
+
+::reason for being on secret beach is volleyball <6481,7460>
+"Volleyball, the sport?" Minnie asks.
+
+"Oh! Diana loves sports," Van exlaims.
+
+Van shouts, "Diana! Vicky! the young women are playing some sort of sport!"
+
+Switching back to her normal speaking voice, "I thought the Olympics jumped the shark after they allowed people to play clothed."
+
+Two women gracefully dash over, they're wearing the same white swimsuits with gold rings that Minnie and Van are wearing.
+
+"This is Vicky," Minnie says.
+
+Superficially quite similar to Minnie, but she has different facial structure, so they couldn't be related.
+
+"And this is Diana," Van says. Unlike the other women, Diana keeps her hair very short.
+
+[['"Wait, you know the phrase \'Jumped the Shark,\' but you don\'t know what Volleyball is?"'->jumped the shark]]
+[['"Uhm... we only have one net."'->only have one net]]
+[['"The Olympics haven\'t been held nude, since ancient times..."'->nude olympics]]
+
+::compliment van and minnie beauty <6631,7460>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::minnie and van not from around here <6256,7610>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::jumped the shark <6386,7610>
+"Van has a particular area of expertise," Minnie explained sardonically.
+
+Van frowned.
+
+She looked pretty when she frowned.
+
+You got the feeling Van *always* looked pretty; regardless, of what she was doing.
+
+::only have one net <6516,7610>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::nude olympics <6651,7614>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::"'I\'m ${girl_name} and this is Sally."' <6899,7480>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::name puzzle start <8708,6734>
+[['"Vicky is..."'->name puzzle vicky]]
+[['"Van is..."'->name puzzle van]]
+[['"Minnie is..."'->name puzzle minnie]]
+[['"Diana is..."'->name puzzle diana]]
+[['"I\'ve figured it out!"'->name puzzle end]]
+
+::name puzzle vicky <8483,6884>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::name puzzle van <8633,6884>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::name puzzle minnie <8783,6884>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::name puzzle diana <8933,6884>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::name puzzle end <9604,6986>
+<<if true>>\#TODO\
+[['"You\'re British"'->name game fail british]]
+<</if>>
+
+<<back "\"Never mind, I need to think about this some moer.\"">>
+
+::name game fail british <9576,7484>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+

custom_girl.tw2

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 \#ERROR\#
 <</if>>\
 <<if $keep_the_bikini == 'new' >>\
-<<choice [['"I'd get to keep both sets of bottoms right?"'->both sets]]>>
+<<choice [['"I\'d get to keep both sets of bottoms right?"'->both sets]]>>
 <</if>>\
 
 <<include [[genital chooser]]>>

intro.tw2

@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ Sally interjects, "No. The magic is imbued in both parts. It's important to wear
 
 "Besides, you can't be showing off your bulge at this thing you'll stand out."
 
-[['"But I don't need to wear them for very long?"'->"But I don't need to wear them for very long."]]
+[['"But I don\'t need to wear them for very long?"'->"But I don't need to wear them for very long."]]
 <<include [[bikini questions]]>>
 
 ::discuss making a bikni later <151,2685>

money_game.tw2

@@ -1,61 +1,61 @@
-::Places to search <4951,4575>
-<<choice [[Search Your Bedroom]]>>
-<<choice [[Search your parent's room]]>>
-<<choice [[Search under the couch cushions]]>>
-<<choice [[Text Jess for money]]>>
-<<choice [[Beg the girls for money]]>>
-
-::Search Your Bedroom <4951,4723>
-Your old piggy bank has about $20 in quarters in it, it's amazing you haven't raided it earlier.
-
-<<include [[Places to search]]>>
-
-::Search your parent's room <4726,4725>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::Search under the couch cushions <4841,4725>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::Text Jess for money <5071,4886>
-<div class="messages-wrapper">
-@@.message;.from;Sis can I have some money... I'll pay you back.@@
-<<if $jess_disposition < 1 >>
-@@.message;.to;No chance bro, you're not trustworthy.@@
-[[text: I could do your chorse?->do jess's chores]]
-<<elseif $jess_disposition < 3 >>
-@@.message.to;Hrm. will you do all my chores?@@
-[[text: Yes-do jess's chores>]]
-[[text: No->no money from sis]]
-<<else>>
-@@.message;.to;Sure, lil sis, I can spot you $200, I'm sure we'll win it back.@@
-[[text: Thanks Sis->grateful after giving you money.]]
-<</if>>
-</div>>
-
-::Beg the girls for money <5213,4721>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::Check wallet <4955,4360>
-You check your wallet, It's got 1 folded up five dollar bill in it.
-
-That won't be enough for much of anything.
-
-<<include [[Places to search]]>>
-
-::do jess's chores <4850,5036>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::text: Yes-do jess's chores> <5000,5036>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::no money from sis <5150,5036>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::grateful after giving you money. <5300,5036>
-Double-click this passage to edit it.
-
-::new clothes 1 <4934,4141>
-"Alright, after practice we'll head to the Mall to get you a new wardrobe."
-
-[['"New wardrobe?"']
-
+::Places to search <4951,4575>
+<<choice [[Search Your Bedroom]]>>
+<<choice [[Search your parent's room]]>>
+<<choice [[Search under the couch cushions]]>>
+<<choice [[Text Jess for money]]>>
+<<choice [[Beg the girls for money]]>>
+
+::Search Your Bedroom <4951,4723>
+Your old piggy bank has about $20 in quarters in it, it's amazing you haven't raided it earlier.
+
+<<include [[Places to search]]>>
+
+::Search your parent's room <4726,4725>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::Search under the couch cushions <4841,4725>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::Text Jess for money <5071,4886>
+<div class="messages-wrapper">
+@@.message;.from;Sis can I have some money... I'll pay you back.@@
+<<if $jess_disposition < 1 >>
+@@.message;.to;No chance bro, you're not trustworthy.@@
+[[text: I could do your chorse?->do jess's chores]]
+<<elseif $jess_disposition < 3 >>
+@@.message.to;Hrm. will you do all my chores?@@
+[[text: Yes-do jess's chores>]]
+[[text: No->no money from sis]]
+<<else>>
+@@.message;.to;Sure, lil sis, I can spot you $200, I'm sure we'll win it back.@@
+[[text: Thanks Sis->grateful after giving you money.]]
+<</if>>
+</div>>
+
+::Beg the girls for money <5213,4721>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::Check wallet <4955,4360>
+You check your wallet, It's got 1 folded up five dollar bill in it.
+
+That won't be enough for much of anything.
+
+<<include [[Places to search]]>>
+
+::do jess's chores <4850,5036>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::text: Yes-do jess's chores> <5000,5036>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::no money from sis <5150,5036>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::grateful after giving you money. <5300,5036>
+Double-click this passage to edit it.
+
+::new clothes 1 <4934,4141>
+"Alright, after practice we'll head to the Mall to get you a new wardrobe."
+
+[['"New wardrobe?"']
+