[fixes] Incorrect footings, typos, spelling errors, bad tense and grammer, missing stat calls and some missing cum calls

[added] new event in parkM for the 'aa' section of walking with your lover and new +/- 1 hour cheat for the object window (turns on in cheat menu)

All from spectre1viper

locations/BDsex.qsrc

@@ -285,9 +285,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hj':
 					'<<$boydesc>> finishes, covering your hands in his hot and sticky cum.'
 					spafinloc = 13
 					sexpartkno = 1
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					gs 'cum_manage'
 				end
 				act 'Leave':gt 'BDsex', 'end'
 			end
@@ -368,9 +368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 					'<<$boydesc>> finished all over your hands covering them in hot and sticky cum.'
 					spafinloc = 13
 					sexpartkno = 1
+					gs 'cum_manage'	
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
-					gs 'stat'
-					gs 'cum_manage'					
+					gs 'stat'				
 				end
 				act 'Leave':gt 'BDsex', 'end'
 			end
@@ -430,9 +430,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 					'<<$boydesc>> finished all over your hands covering them in hot and sticky cum.'
 					spafinloc = 13
 					sexpartkno = 1
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					gs 'cum_manage'
 				end
 				act 'Leave':gt 'BDsex', 'end'
 			end
@@ -443,7 +443,6 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'facial':
 	facial += 1
 	minut += 3
-	gs 'stat'
 	picrand = rand(11, 15)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if protect = 1: 
@@ -455,13 +454,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'facial':
 		spafinloc = 11
 		sexpartkno = 1
 		gs 'cum_manage'
-	end					
+	end
+	gs 'stat'			
 	act 'Brush up':gt 'BDsex', 'end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'swallow':
 	minut += 3
-	gs 'stat'
 	picrand = rand(20, 29)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if protect = 1: 
@@ -474,7 +473,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swallow':
 		sexpartkno = 1
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		swallow += 1
-	end					
+	end
+	gs 'stat'			
 	act 'Brush up':gt 'BDsex', 'end'
 end
 
@@ -488,6 +488,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		Yuri_sex = 0
 		cumspclnt = 4
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
+		gs 'stat'
 		'Yuri lets you have a quick shower and dress before giving you a quick kiss on the cheek.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'nord'
 	elseif $boydesc = 'Michael N.':

locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -337,6 +337,17 @@ $cheatmenu['cumtrait_block'] = {
 	end
 }
 
+$cheatmenu['timecheat'] = {
+	if cheatTime = 0:
+		cheatTime = 1
+		dynamic $cheatmenu['permanent']
+		exit
+	elseif cheatTime = 1:
+		cheatTime = 0
+		dynamic $cheatmenu['permanent']
+	end
+}
+
 $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 	gs'stat'
 	*clr & cla
@@ -387,6 +398,8 @@ $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 	if cumeater_cheat = 1:$cheatcumtrait = 'Currently ON'
 	if exhib_cheat = 0:$cheatexhib = 'Currently OFF'
 	if exhib_cheat = 1:$cheatexhib = 'Currently ON'
+	if cheatTime = 0:$cheatTime = 'Currently OFF'
+	if cheatTime = 1:$cheatTime = 'Currently ON'
 
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Recurrent Cheats</h1></center>'
 	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
@@ -450,6 +463,9 @@ $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 		'No dream chance: <a href="exec:Enable_nodream=input(''Enter no dream chance (%)'') & dynamic $cheatmenu[''permanent'']">Currently OFF</a>'
 	end & !1.2.3 new function
 	*nl
+	'Time Cheat in Objects window: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''timecheat'']"><<$cheatTime>></a>'
+	*nl
+
 	'<font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Disabling states may cause some events not to trigger. Use at your own risk!'
 	'</tr></table></b></center>'
 }
@@ -1202,30 +1218,50 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 		'You''ve been dating for <<loverdays[2]>> days. <a href="exec:loverdays[2] += 5 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">+5</a> <a href="exec:loverdays[2] -= 5 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">-5</a>'
 	end
 	*nl
-	if pav_slut >= 25:'In Pavlovsk you are known as a <<$gnikname>>'
-	if opusk > 0 or gnewQW < 4 or sipovka > 0:'<a href="exec:opusk = 0 & sipovka = 0 & gnewQW = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear reputation with Gopniks</a>'
+	if pav_slut >= 25:
+		gs 'fame'
+		'In Pavlovsk you are known as a <font color="red"><<$gnikname>></font> <a href="exec:pav_slut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+	end
+	*nl
+	if opusk > 0 or gnewQW > 0 or sipovka > 0:'<a href="exec:opusk = 0 & gnewQW = 0 & sipovka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear reputation with Gopniks</a>'
 	if StoryLine = 1:
-		if motherKnowWhore > 0 or motherKnowSpravka > 0 or brotherSex >= 1 or evgenQW >= 3 or brotherknowslut > 0 or sisterknowslut > 0:
-			*nl
-			'<font color="red"><b>WARNING</b></font>: Clearing reputation flags with your family may cause bugs. Use at your own risk!'
-			if motherKnowWhore > 0:
-				'Your mother thinks you are a whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
-				'Your mother thinks that you are a virgin. <a href="exec:motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			end
-			*nl
-			if evgenQW >= 3:
-				'Your brother thinks you are a slut. <a href="exec:evgenQW = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			end
-			if brotherknowslut = 1: 'Your brother saw semen on your body and thinks you fuck around. <a href="exec:brotherknowslut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			if brotherknowslut >= 2: 'Your brother saw you in the park fucking the Gopniks. <a href="exec:brotherknowslut = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			*nl
-			if sisterknowslut > 1 and sisboypartyQW > 1:
-				'Your sister says you are a slut <a href="exec:sisboypartyQW = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			elseif sisterknowslut > 0:
-				'Your sister knows that you sleep around. <a href="exec:sisterknowslut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
-			end
+																																  
+		*nl
+		'<font color="red"><b>WARNING</b></font>: Clearing reputation flags with your family may cause bugs. Use at your own risk!'
+		*nl
+		if motherKnowWhore > 0 or motherKnowSpravka > 0:
+			'Your mother knows, that you are sexually active and considers you a slut. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif motherKnowWhore > 0:
+			'Your mother thinks you are a whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
+			'Your mother knows that you are sexually active. <a href="exec:motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		else
+			'Your mother thinks that you are a virgin.'
 		end
+		*nl
+		if evgenQW >= 4 and brotherSex >= 1:
+			'Your brother thinks you are a total whore. <a href="exec:evgenQW = 0 & brotherSex = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif brotherSex >= 1:
+			'Your brother thinks you are a slut. <a href="exec:brotherSex = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif evgenQW >= 3:
+			'Your brother thinks you are a slut. <a href="exec:evgenQW = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif brotherknowslut = 1:
+											   
+			'Your brother saw semen on your body and thinks you fuck around. <a href="exec:brotherknowslut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif brotherknowslut >= 2:
+			'Your brother saw you in the park fucking the Gopniks. <a href="exec:brotherknowslut = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		else
+			'Your brother has a good opinion of you.'
+		end
+		*nl
+		if sisterknowslut > 1 and sisboypartyQW > 1:
+			'Your sister thinks you are a slut <a href="exec:sisboypartyQW = 0 & sisterknowslut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		elseif sisterknowslut > 0:
+			'Your sister knows that you sleep around. <a href="exec:sisterknowslut = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
+		else
+			'Your sister has a good opinion of you.'
+		end
+		*nl
 		if home_owned[2] = 0 or ParHomeBlock = 1:
 			'<a href="exec:home_owned[2] = 1 & ParHomeBlock = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Restore</a> access to your parent''s apartment.'
 		end

locations/Gnpc2.qsrc

@@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ $din_gboy_go_to_boyhome = {
 				if boyvideorand = 0:
 					'When the movie starts you quickly realize it''s a porn video. The actors do not have time to exchange but a few sentences before the girl was already naked and kneeling in front of the guy with his cock in her mouth.'
 
-					act 'watch porn':
+					act 'Watch porn':
 						cls
 						minut += 30
 						pcs_horny += 10

locations/HunterLoveSex.qsrc

@@ -922,6 +922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_hunters_sex_cumface2':
 	minut += 5
 	pcs_sweat += 10
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cumf20.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*pl
@@ -4147,7 +4148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Igor':
 		minut += 5
 		npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 		'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/igorhunter.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/igorhanter.jpg"></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> hugs you and starts showering you with kisses. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, take off your clothes."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -4324,7 +4325,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Andrei':
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A172'
 		npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 		'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihunter.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> holds you in his arms and begins kissing you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, take off your clothes."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -4467,7 +4468,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sergei':
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A174'
 		npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 		'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/sergeihunter.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/sergeihanter.jpg"></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> holds you in his arms and kisses you deeply. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, take off your clothes."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 CLOSE ALL
 
 $LBZH_sex={
-	act'Give':
+	act 'Give up your pussy':
 		cls
 		gs'stat' 
 		mrapic=rand(0,7)
@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@ $LBZH_sex={
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act'Up':dynamic $LBZH_end
+		act 'Finish':dynamic $LBZH_end
 	end
 }
 
 $LBZH_anal={
-	act'Writing in the ass':
+	act 'Give up your ass':
 		cls
 		gs'stat' 
 		mrapic=rand(0,7)
@@ -28,37 +28,38 @@ $LBZH_anal={
 		gs 'stat'
 		
 		spafinloc = 3
-gs 'cum_manage'
+		gs 'cum_manage'
 		'<<$boydesc>> groaned and came filling your ass with his warm sperm.'
 
-		act'Up':dynamic $LBZH_end
+		act 'Finish':dynamic $LBZH_end
 	end
 }
 
 $LBZH_bj={
-	act'Suck':
+	act 'Suck':
 		cls
 		gs'stat' 
 		mrapic=rand(0,12)
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<mrapic>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You take a cock in your mouth and start sucking it, you get busy working up and down his dick with your mouth. Your lips lock tightly around his shaft while your tongue licks and plays with his dick.'
+		'You take a cock in your mouth and start sucking it. You get busy working up and down his dick with your mouth. Your lips lock tightly around his shaft while your tongue licks and plays with his dick.'
 		'Soon <<$boydesc>> starts to pant heavily and moans out. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m about to cum."'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 			
-		 act'Swallow':
+		 act 'Swallow':
 			cls
+			swallow += 1
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs'stat'
 			mrapic=rand(0,10)
 			!'<<mrapic>>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum<<mrapic>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You pull his dick out of your mouth and keep working on it with your hand, within moments spurts of hot sperm splashes on your face and in your mouth.'
-			'Once the last of the cum shoots in your mouth you swallow it all down.'
+			'You pull his dick out of your mouth and keep working on it with your hand, within moments spurts of hot sperm splash onto your face and into your mouth.'
+			'Once the last of the cum shoots into your mouth you swallow it all down.'
 
-			act'Up':dynamic $LBZH_end
+			act 'Finish':dynamic $LBZH_end
 		end
 	 
 		dynamic $LBZH_sex
@@ -90,7 +91,7 @@ $LBZH_end={
 			'After you are done washing you get dressed and blow <<$boydesc>> a kiss before you leave.'
 			
 			
-			act'Leave':
+			act 'Leave':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				gt'pavResidential'
@@ -110,7 +111,7 @@ gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 
 'He takes you back to his house, once you are both safely inside you start kissing.'
 
-act'Sex':
+act 'Sex':
 	cls
 	gs'stat'
 	tiprand=rand(1,100)
@@ -119,7 +120,7 @@ act'Sex':
 		'<<$boydesc>> gently pushes your shoulders down and you kneel in front of him, waiting for his hard shaft.'
 		dynamic $LBZH_bj
 	     
-		act'Masturbate':
+		act 'Masturbate':
 			cls
 			temp_hj+=1
 			temp_guy+=1
@@ -140,7 +141,7 @@ act'Sex':
 	dynamic $LBZH_sex
 	dynamic $LBZH_anal
 
-	act'Give blowjob':
+	act 'Give blowjob':
 		cls
 		gs'stat'
 		'You offer to give him a blowjob which he eagerly agrees too.'

locations/MDressing.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 'There are whole cabinets filled with designer clothing belonging to various club members and plenty of <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirrors</a> you can use.'
 
 act 'Go to foyer': gt 'MHall', 'foyer'
-act 'Goto east wing hall': gt 'MHall', 'east'
+act 'Go to east wing hall': gt 'MHall', 'east'
 
 --- MDressing ---------------------------------
 

locations/MLibrary.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if hour = 18:
 	act 'Leave her to it': gt 'MHall', 'west'
 end
 
-act 'Goto west wing hall': gt 'MHall', 'west'
+act 'Go to west wing hall': gt 'MHall', 'west'
 
 --- MLibrary ---------------------------------
 

locations/MartinSex.qsrc

@@ -1008,5 +1008,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTeaseDildo':
 	end
 end
 
---- MartinSex ----------------------------------
+--- MartinSex ---------------------------------
 

locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -1018,5 +1018,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCleanup':
 	act 'Leave the bar': gt 'nord'
 end
 
---- MartinSex2 ----------------------------------
+--- MartinSex2 ---------------------------------
 

locations/MartinSex3.qsrc

@@ -350,5 +350,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinPussyLick':
 	end
 end
 
---- MartinSex3 ----------------------------------
+--- MartinSex3 ---------------------------------
 

locations/MartinTalk.qsrc

@@ -973,5 +973,5 @@ end
 !Threesome opportunity?
 
 
---- MartinSex ----------------------------------
+--- MartinTalk ----------------------------------
 

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -188,7 +188,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners of the walls and floors and the place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time. The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
+	'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners of the walls and floors and the place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time.'
+	'The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'

locations/bed1.qsrc

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sog1':
 						pcs_willpwr -= 15
 						'<<$husName>> tries shooing your dog away, but it growls and bares his teeth, so he kicks the <<$namesob>> with all his might.'
 						'Your dogs ribs are shattered and screeching he crawls into a corner, your husband follows and kicks it even harder.'
-						'Seeing his condition, goto your dog and cradle his head and close your eyes. A few minutes later your dog is dead.'
+						'Seeing his condition, you go to your dog and cradle his head and close your eyes. A few minutes later your dog is dead.'
 						'"There''s nothing you can do for your freak dog now." says <<$husName>>. Opening your eyes you see a dead dog in a pool of blood.'
 						'"Well, I don''t know about you, but there''s not much point keep a dead dog. I''ll get rid of him." he takes the dog, wraps it in a sheet and goes out.'
 						'While he is gone you have some time to scour the blood from the floor.'

locations/body.qsrc

@@ -1004,6 +1004,20 @@ else
 	$pcdesc_eyebrow = 'eyebrow'
 end
 
+if pirsN > 0 and pirsN < 10000:
+	$pirsN = 'You are wearing a navel piercing.'
+	rand_navel = rand(0)
+	if rand_navel = 0:$pcdesc_navelrandom = 'pierced navel'
+	$pcdesc_navelwordy = 'pierced navel'
+	$pcdesc_navel = 'pierced navel'
+else
+	$pirsN = ''
+	rand_navel = rand(0)
+	if rand_navel = 0:$pcdesc_navelrandom = 'navel'
+	$pcdesc_navelwordy = 'navel'
+	$pcdesc_navel = 'navel'
+end
+
 !! Some of these are labial rings, some of them are hood piercings. No good way to tell without an overhaul.
 if pirsG  > 0 and pirsG < 10000:
 	$pirspiz = 'You are wearing a pubic piercing.'
@@ -1232,7 +1246,7 @@ if pcs_skin < 20:
 	if rand_skin = 3:$pcdesc_skinrandom = 'pimple-strewn'
 	$pcdesc_skin = 'terrible'
 	$pcdesc_skinwordy = 'awful, greasy and pimply'
-	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is rough and covered with pimples and moles. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>>'
+	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is rough and covered with pimples and moles. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>> <<$pirsN>>'
 	$skin1 = 'terrible'
 elseif pcs_skin < 40:
 	rand_skin = rand(0,3)
@@ -1242,7 +1256,7 @@ elseif pcs_skin < 40:
 	if rand_skin = 3:$pcdesc_skinrandom = 'unappealing'
 	$pcdesc_skin = 'bad'
 	$pcdesc_skinwordy = 'poorly-kept, unappealing'
-	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is rough and has a few pimples. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>>'
+	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is rough and has a few pimples. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>> <<$pirsN>>'
 	$skin1 = 'bad'
 elseif pcs_skin < 60:
 	rand_skin = rand(0,2)
@@ -1251,7 +1265,7 @@ elseif pcs_skin < 60:
 	if rand_skin = 2:$pcdesc_skinrandom = 'clear'
 	$pcdesc_skin = 'average'
 	$pcdesc_skinwordy = 'normal, slightly rough'
-	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is clear of acne but still slightly rough. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>>'
+	$skin = 'Your <<$pcs_tan>> skin is clear of acne but still slightly rough. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>> <<$pirsN>>'
 	$skin1 = 'average'
 elseif pcs_skin < 80:
 	rand_skin = rand(0,4)
@@ -1262,7 +1276,7 @@ elseif pcs_skin < 80:
 	if rand_skin = 4:$pcdesc_skinrandom = 'great'
 	$pcdesc_skin = 'good'
 	$pcdesc_skinwordy = 'smooth, well-kept'
-	$skin = 'You have <<$pcs_tan>>, smooth and well-groomed skin. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>>'
+	$skin = 'You have <<$pcs_tan>>, smooth and well-groomed skin. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>> <<$pirsN>>'
 	$skin1 = 'good'
 else
 	rand_skin = rand(0,4)
@@ -1273,7 +1287,7 @@ else
 	if rand_skin = 4:$pcdesc_skinrandom = 'immaculate'
 	$pcdesc_skin = 'excellent'
 	$pcdesc_skinwordy = 'immaculate, silky-soft'
-	$skin = 'You have <<$pcs_tan>> and very smooth skin which almost feels like silk to the touch. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>>'
+	$skin = 'You have <<$pcs_tan>> and very smooth skin which almost feels like silk to the touch. <<$pirsC>> <<$pirsD>> <<$pirsE>> <<$pirsN>>'
 	$skin1 = 'excellent'
 end
 if pcs_eyecol = 0:
@@ -1781,7 +1795,9 @@ end
 !!Removed as primary appearance factors; will be eventually used in an NPC preference system instead; tanKoef = suntan
 pcs_apprnc = pcs_apprncbase + CloAdjustedBeauty + mopkoef + (pcs_hairbsh * 10) + lipbalmKoef + (pcs_breath * 5) - sweatKoef - glassvnesh - dyevmod - hairkoef - legkoef + panty_beautybounus + bra_beautybounus
 
-if pcs_apprnc >= 200: pcs_apprnc = 200 + supnatvnesh
+if pcs_apprnc >= 200: pcs_apprnc = 200
+pcs_apprnc = pcs_apprnc + supnatvnesh
+
 if pcs_apprnc < 0: pcs_apprnc = 0
 
 !!This sets the "hotness catagory" varibale for use in checks

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -849,5 +849,5 @@ end
 !!if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson_uterus':
 !!end
 
---- brother_lessons ----------------------------------
+--- brother_lessons ---------------------------------
 

locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -2098,11 +2098,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 		act'Suck him off':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
 			'	Moving quickly, you pull yourself off your brother''s cock and kneel down, putting it between your lips. You suck gently on the tip and almost immediately taste hot cum spilling into your mouth.'
 			act'Swallow':
 				cla
 				swallow += 1
+				gs 'stat'
 				'	You suck a little more, making sure you''ve drained him to the last drop and then withdraw your mouth with carefully closed lips. You look up at him, meeting his eyes through the falling water drops, and swallow his sperm in one gulp.'
 				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_end'
 			end
@@ -2122,6 +2124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			*nl
 			orgasm += 1
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			'	"Cum inside me!" you cry out. "Fill me up!"'
 			'	Your cries push him over the edge and Kolka can''t hold back any longer. He groans and pulls you tight against him. His cock plunges deep and you feel his cum spurting deep inside you. The sensation brings you to orgasm, body spasming and your pussy tightening up around him, squeezing him to the last drop.	As your orgasm winds down and your legs stop quivering, you lean forward against the shower wall, Kolka''s cock slipping from between your legs.'
 			'	Pressing your face against the wall, you feel Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy.'
@@ -2155,6 +2158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 		act'Push him off (not today)':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showercum.mp4"></center>'
 			'	"Not today Kolka." You push your brother off of you and turn around. Grabbing his cock, you jerk him vigorously until he groans, spraying hot cum that spatters all over your stomach.'
 			if pillcon < 30000 and pillday < 18 and tabletkishot < 1 and knowpreg = 0 and thinkpreg = 0:'	"Sorry little brother." You smile apologetically. "I''m not on birth control and I can''t afford to get knocked up. Especially not by my one of my siblings."'
@@ -2165,6 +2169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_horny >= 90:
 				orgasm += 1
 				'	You smile mischievously and suddenly speed up, causing your brother to erupt inside you. He groans as his cum spills into you, sending you over the edge as well with legs quivering and pussy milking his cock for everything he has to give. Finally, Kolka pulls away and as his cock slips from inside you, cum bursts out like your pussy was a champagne bottle uncorked.'
@@ -2198,6 +2203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			*nl
 			orgasm += 1
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			'	"Yes! Yes!" you cry out. "Fill me up!"'
 			'	Your cries push him over the edge and Kolka can''t hold back any longer. He groans and pulls you tight against him. His cock plunges deep and you feel his cum spurting deep inside you. The sensation brings you to orgasm, body spasming and your pussy tightening up around him, squeezing him to the last drop. As your orgasm winds down and your legs stop quivering, you lean forward against the shower wall, Kolka''s cock slipping from between your legs.'
 			'	Pressing your face against the cool wall, you feel Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy, splashing on the bottom of the tub. You think to yourself...'
@@ -2223,6 +2229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_horny >= 90:
 				orgasm += 1
 				'	Smiling mischievously, you suddenly speed up instead of pulling out, causing your brother to erupt inside you. He groans as his cum spills into you, sending you over the edge as well with legs quivering and pussy milking his cock for everything he has to give. Finally, Kolka pulls away and his cock slips from inside you, cum bursting out of your pussy like an uncorked champagne bottle.'
@@ -2301,6 +2308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_horny >= 90:
 				orgasm += 1
 				'	Smiling mischievously, you suddenly speed up instead of pulling out, causing your brother to erupt inside you. He groans as his cum spills into you, sending you over the edge as well with legs quivering and pussy milking his cock for everything he has to give. Finally, Kolka pulls away and his cock slips from inside you, cum bursting out of your pussy like an uncorked champagne bottle.'
@@ -2933,5 +2941,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalkbusy':
 	act'Get out and dry off':gt $loc
 end
 
---- brother_voyeur ----------------------------------
+--- brother_voyeur ---------------------------------
 

locations/cafe3.qsrc

@@ -184,6 +184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 				'You feel like a hot jet of sperm hits you in the throat. You have a mouth full of sperm.'
 				act 'Swallow':
 					cla
+					swallow += 1
 					sexpartkno = 1
 					spafinloc = 12
 					gs 'cum_manage'
@@ -301,6 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 			'You feel like a hot jet of sperm hits you in the throat. You have a mouth full of sperm.'
 			act 'Swallow':
 				cla
+				swallow += 1
 				sexpartkno = 1
 				spafinloc = 12
 				gs 'cum_manage'

locations/dachain.qsrc

@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ if $args[0] = '':
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 13 and temp ! daystart:'I wonder how to <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos12''">garden</a>'
 
 	act 'Lie on the couch': gt 'divan', 'start'
-	act 'Goto the kitchen alcove': gt 'dachain', 'dachakit'
-	act 'Goto the Bathroom':  gt 'dachain', 'dachavann'
+	act 'Go to the kitchen alcove': gt 'dachain', 'dachakit'
+	act 'Go to the Bathroom':  gt 'dachain', 'dachavann'
 	act 'Get in the bed': gt 'bed', 'start'
 
 	act 'Go outside':
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'dachakit':
 	dynamic $vitamin
 
 	act 'Go into the main room': gt 'dachain', ''
-	act 'Goto the Bathroom':  gt 'dachain', 'dachavann'
+	act 'Go to the Bathroom':  gt 'dachain', 'dachavann'
 end
 
 if $args[0] = 'dachavann':
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'dachavann':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/suburban/cottage/dachavan1.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	gs 'din_van', 'private'
-	act 'Goto the kitchen alcove': gt 'dachain', 'dachakit'
+	act 'Go to the kitchen alcove': gt 'dachain', 'dachakit'
 	act 'Go into the main room': gt 'dachain', ''
 end
 

locations/dinSex.qsrc

@@ -144,10 +144,10 @@ $sexstart = {
 		protect = 1
 		if preziktype = 2:
 			sexcontra = 7
-			'<<$boydesc>> take your sabotaged condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
+			'<<$boydesc>> takes your sabotaged condom and puts it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
 		else
 			sexcontra = 3
-			'<<$boydesc>> take your condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
+			'<<$boydesc>> takes your condom and puts it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
 		end
 	else
 		sexcontra = 0

locations/din_bad.qsrc

@@ -136,17 +136,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd_bag':
 	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
 	if salfetka > 0: 'You have <b><<salfetka>></b> wet wipes left in your purse. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_salf">Use a tissue</a>'
 	if pain_timer > totminut - 242 and painkiller > 0: 'Take a <a href="exec:pain[''killer''] = 1 & painkiller -= 1 & pain_timer = totminut & gs ''din_bad'', ''d_bag''">painkiller</a>. <b><<painkiller>></b> painkillers left in your purse.'
-	if kosmetitka > 0 and pcs_makeup = 1: 'There''s a portable makeup in your purse. <b><<kosmetitka>></b> cosmetic applications left. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_kosmetitka">Put on makeup</a>'
-	if kosmetitka > 0 and pcs_makeup ! 1: 'There''s a portable makeup in your purse. <b><<kosmetitka>></b> cosmetic applications left.'
-	if mouthwash > 0 and (pcs_breath = 0 or cumloc[12] = 1): 'There''s a mouthwash in your purse. <b><<mouthwash>></b> uses remaining. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_mouthwash">Use mouthwash</a>'
-	if mouthwash > 0 and pcs_breath = 1 and cumloc[12] = 0: 'There''s a mouthwash in your purse. <b><<mouthwash>></b> uses remaining.'
+	if kosmetitka > 0 and pcs_makeup = 1: 'There''s portable makeup in your purse. <b><<kosmetitka>></b> cosmetic applications left. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_kosmetitka">Put on makeup</a>'
+	if kosmetitka > 0 and pcs_makeup ! 1: 'There''s portable makeup in your purse. <b><<kosmetitka>></b> cosmetic applications left.'
+	if mouthwash > 0 and (pcs_breath = 0 or cumloc[12] = 1): 'There''s mouthwash in your purse. <b><<mouthwash>></b> uses remaining. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_mouthwash">Use mouthwash</a>'
+	if mouthwash > 0 and pcs_breath = 1 and cumloc[12] = 0: 'There''s mouthwash in your purse. <b><<mouthwash>></b> uses remaining.'
 	if greben > 0 and pcs_hairbsh = 0: 'There''s a hairbrush in your purse. <a href="exec:pcs_hairbsh = 1 & gs ''stat'' & gs ''din_bad'', ''d_bag''">Brush your hair</a>'
 	if greben > 0 and pcs_hairbsh = 1: 'There''s a hairbrush in your purse. Your hair doesn''t need brushing right now.'
 	if prezik + prezikcount + preziksabo > 0:
 		if preziktype = 2 or preziksabo > 0:
-			'You have <b><<iif(preziktype = 2, prezikcount, prezikcount+prezik)>></b> normal condoms left, and <b><<iif(preziktype = 2, prezik+preziksabo, preziksabo)>></b> sabotaged <a href="exec:dynamic $din_Switch_Condom_Menu">condoms left in the purse.</a>'
+			'You have <b><<iif(preziktype = 2, prezikcount, prezikcount+prezik)>></b> normal condoms left, and <b><<iif(preziktype = 2, prezik+preziksabo, preziksabo)>></b> sabotaged <a href="exec:dynamic $din_Switch_Condom_Menu">condoms left in your purse.</a>'
 		elseif preziktype < 2 and preziksabo = 0:
-			'You have <b><<prezik+prezikcount>></b> <a href="exec:dynamic $din_Switch_Condom_Menu">condoms left in the purse.</a>'
+			'You have <b><<prezik+prezikcount>></b> <a href="exec:dynamic $din_Switch_Condom_Menu">condoms left in your purse.</a>'
 		end
 		*nl
 	else

locations/downlibrary.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,8 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 			blizoruk += 1
 			gs'stat'
 
-			'	You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it. Not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
+			'	You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
+			'Not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
 			'After about an hour, you decide to take a break from it and, instead, test your memory. You don''t remember much, but you understand magic a tiny bit better than before nonetheless.'
 
 			act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc

locations/enderKik.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ elseif amateur = 1:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/kickboxing/kickboxing_speaker.jpg"></center>'
 	'The referee calls you over, it''s time for the announcement...'
 
-	act 'Goto the middle for the announcement':
+	act 'Goto the center of the ring for the announcement':
 		if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 			cla
 			*clr

locations/fit.qsrc

@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gym':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Goto the kickboxing gym':gt 'fit', 'kickboxing'
+	act 'Go to the kickboxing gym':gt 'fit', 'kickboxing'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'exercise end':
@@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing':
 			razrand = rand(0, 1)
 
 			if razradKik + razrand = 0:
-				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'useless rival', rand(19,45)
+				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Useless rival', rand(19,45)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				strenV = rand(10, 20)
 				speedV = rand(10, 20)
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing':
 				formula = 3
 				amateur = 1
 			elseif razradKik + razrand = 4:
-				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'excellent rival', rand(19,45)
+				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Excellent rival', rand(19,45)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				strenV = rand(40, 60)
 				speedV = rand(40, 60)
@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing':
 				formula = 3
 				amateur = 1
 			elseif razradKik + razrand >= 5:
-				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'best rival in the gym', rand(19,45)
+				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Best rival in the gym', rand(19,45)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				strenV = rand(60, 100)
 				speedV = rand(60, 100)

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -950,7 +950,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anastasia5':
 	anastasia = rand(4,6)
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/anastasia_p/talking/busy.jpg"></center>'
 	'	You''re looking for Anastasia when you find her working on a set.'
-	'	"Now hold the pose just like that!" the photographer calls. Despite how awkward the pose looks, Anastasia doesn''t move even a centimeter while she is illuminated by camera flashes and the air is filled with rapid shutter clicks. A true pro, this is what it means to be St. Petersburg''s number one model.'
+	'	"Now hold the pose just like that!" the photographer calls. Despite how awkward the pose looks, Anastasia doesn''t move even a centimeter while she is illuminated by camera flashes and the air is filled with rapid shutter clicks.'
+	'	A true pro, this is what it means to be St. Petersburg''s number one model.'
 	'	Not wanting to interrupt just to talk to her, you decide to try and find her again later.'
 	act 'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 end
@@ -1513,7 +1514,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystal5':
 	'	You''re looking for Krystal when you find her on set. She''s holding her legs open and you are being treated with a very explicit view of her pussy and asshole.'
 	'	"Is this wide enough for you?" she calls over to the photographer who is changing settings on his camera.'
 	'	He looks up at her, judging the open angles of her legs briefly before saying, "That''s perfect! Just hold that position right there!"'
-	'	"Okay!" she calls back with a sly grin on her face. "You know, not that it''s difficult for me to hold my legs like this, but you should probably hurry up if you want to get the shot off. This is reminding me of the last time I held my legs open for this long. I was getting fucking <i>pummelled</i> by my boyfriend and the memory is going to get me wet soon."'
+	'	"Okay!" she calls back with a sly grin on her face. "You know, not that it''s difficult for me to hold my legs like this, but you should probably hurry up if you want to get the shot off.'
+	'	This is reminding me of the last time I held my legs open for this long. I was getting fucking <i>pummelled</i> by my boyfriend and the memory is going to get me wet soon."'
 	'	Hearing that, the photographer rushes back to the set and you decide it''s probably best if you come back later.'
 	act 'Leave':gt'foto','studio'
 end

locations/furi.qsrc

@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@ if trfatherQW = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hello sir! Can I ask you a question?" you ask the truck driver. When he shrugs, you continue: "Do you happen to know a man named Mikhail Kuznetsov? I''m looking for him. He''s a truck driver, like you!"'
 		'The man ponders for a moment. He looks as if the name does ring a bell, but he can''t remember exactly where from.'
-		'"The name does sound familiar, I think I''ve met him a few times", he nods. When he sees the hopeful look in your eyes, he continues: "There is a large warehouse terminal in St. Petersburg''s industrial district, most truckers go by there on their travels. I bet someone there will be able to help you find him."'
+		'"The name does sound familiar, I think I''ve met him a few times", he nods. When he sees the hopeful look in your eyes, he continues:'
+		'"There is a large warehouse terminal in St. Petersburg''s industrial district, most truckers go by there on their travels. I bet someone there will be able to help you find him."'
 		'"Thank you so much!" you shout gleefully, and you can barely stop yourself from jumping at the man to hug him.'
 		'He laughs when he sees how happy you are, and says: "Glad I could help, girl. I should get back on the road... you take care! Tell Mikhail I said hi!"'
 

locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -2406,7 +2406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					wolf_know = 1
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hanters/hanters.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters.jpg"></center>'
 					'When they reached the clearing, they sat directly on the ground, and you did the same.'
 					if pcs_apprnc >= 60:
 						'"What''s your name, beautiful?" one of them asked.'

locations/gdkin.qsrc

@@ -84,29 +84,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if alko >= 6:
 					'You''re too drunk to try and dance, you are barely able to stay on your feet and mostly just drunkenly bump into other people as you try and dance.'
 					if rand (0,1) = 0:gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
-				elseif alko >= 3:
+				elseif alko > 3:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You''re a bit tipsy and you forget that you don''t have any panties on. As you dance around moving your body, your skirt rides up, exposing your pussy to the observant people on the dance floor.'
+						'You''re drunk and you forget that you don''t have any panties on. As you dance around moving your body, your skirt rides up, exposing your pussy to the observant people on the dance floor with you.'
 					else
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
-				elseif alko > 3:
+				elseif alko > 0:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You''re drunk and you forget that you don''t have any panties on. As you dance around moving your body, your skirt rides up, exposing your pussy to the observant people on the dance floor with you.'
+						'You''re a bit tipsy and you forget that you don''t have any panties on. As you dance around moving your body, your skirt rides up, exposing your pussy to the observant people on the dance floor.'
 					else
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
 				else
 					'The music is quite old, but catchy. You have fun dancing, not paying attention to anyone.'
@@ -159,10 +159,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if alko >= 6:
 				'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to keep from falling down.'
 				if rand (0,1) = 0:gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
-			elseif alko > 0 and alko <= 3:
-				'You''re tipsy, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
-			elseif alko > 3 and alko < 6:
+			elseif alko > 3:
 				'You''re drunk, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
+			elseif alko > 0:
+				'You''re tipsy, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
 			else
 				'You are standing next to the wall while watching the others dance.'
 			end

locations/gdksex.qsrc

@@ -537,6 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_horny += 10
+				swallow += 1
 				spafinloc = 11
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				spafinloc = 12

locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_tits':
 	gs 'gopsex', 'hide','ind_stamina_npc'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/bigroom/gopsex/tits/tits'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Well <<$boydesc>>, do you like my boobies '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_text3')+'?"'
-	'"Yes <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve got fucking tits!"'
+	'"Yes <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve got awesome tits!"'
 	act 'Suck boobs': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_eattits'
 	act 'Titty fuck': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_fucktits'
 	act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex','cont'

locations/gschool_schedule.qsrc

@@ -58,5 +58,5 @@ elseif school_period = 7:
 	!'13.15 - 15.00'
 end
 
---- gschool_lessons ---------------------------------
+--- gschool_schedule ---------------------------------
 

locations/gskver.qsrc

@@ -41,7 +41,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if hour>=6 and hour<=19:
 			'<center><h2>Pavlovsk Park</h2></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/skver.jpg"></center>'
-			'The main square of Pavlovsk Park. At this time of year, it''s one of the primary places in town that locals and tourists enjoy spending their spare time in. It''s always busy: people are resting, walking, playing and dating to their heart''s desires, enjoying the nice surroundings.'
+			'The main square of Pavlovsk Park. At this time of year, it''s one of the primary places in town that locals and tourists enjoy spending their spare time in.'
+			'It''s always busy: people are resting, walking, playing and dating to their heart''s desires, enjoying the nice surroundings.'
 			''
 		else
 			'<center><h2>Pavlovsk Park</h2></center>'

locations/hairsalon.qsrc

@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dyehair':
 				collength = pcs_hairlng
 				money -= 1000
 				gs 'stat'
-				'About an hour later, every	thing should be dried up.'
+				'About an hour later, everything should be dried up.'
 				'The hairdresser removes the dryer hood. "And we''re all done."'
 				'You stand up from the chair and pay her 1000 <b>₽</b>.'
 

locations/housing.qsrc

@@ -84,5 +84,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cable':
 	if home_owned[5] > 2: hcount_cable += 1
 end
 
---- housing ---------------------------
+--- housing ---------------------------------
 

locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -2702,7 +2702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hunters_talk':
 		'Man: "Where are you heading?"'
 		'Politician: "I''m gonna shoot a bear!"'
 		'Man: "Yes, you seem well prepared..."'
-		'Politician: "Yes, you see! This rifle can shoot down an elephunt..."'
+		'Politician: "Yes, you see! This rifle can shoot down an elephant..."'
 		'He continues on walking into the woods.'
 		'Sighing deeply the man says: "Too bad you''re going deeper into the forest... There haven''t been any bears here for quite a while now..."'
 	elseif temp = 7:

locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Igorhome
+# igorhome
 
 !!Igor = A4
 

locations/kafe.qsrc

@@ -465,6 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 									act 'Take the sperm in your mouth':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/waitress_work_bj2.jpg"></center>'
+										swallow += 1
 										gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 										gs 'dinsex','dinrandswallow'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/kakuzu.qsrc

@@ -143,12 +143,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellfireL += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellfireL < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellfire1 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -163,12 +163,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellfire2L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellfire2L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellfire2 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -183,12 +183,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellfire3L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellfire3L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellfire3 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -203,12 +203,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellfire4L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellfire4L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellfire4 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -223,12 +223,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellfire5L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellfire5L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellfire5 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -245,12 +245,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spelleleL += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spelleleL < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellele1 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -265,12 +265,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellele1L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellele1L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellele2 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -285,12 +285,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellele2L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellele2L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellele3 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -305,12 +305,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellele3L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellele3L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellele4 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -325,12 +325,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellele4L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellele4L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellele5 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -347,12 +347,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellertL += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellertL < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellert1 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -367,12 +367,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellert2L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellert2L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellert2 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -387,12 +387,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellert3L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellert3L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellert3 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -407,12 +407,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellert4L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellert4L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellert4 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -427,12 +427,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellert5L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellert5L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellert5 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -449,12 +449,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellwind1L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellwind1L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellwind1 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -469,12 +469,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellwind2L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellwind2L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellwind2 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -489,12 +489,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellwind3L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellwind3L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellwind3 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -509,12 +509,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellwind4L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellwind4L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellwind4 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -529,12 +529,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 					spellwind5L += rand(1, 10)
 
 					if spellwind5L < 100:
-						'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+						'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					else
 						spellwind5 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end
@@ -551,12 +551,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 				spellwaterL += rand(1, 10)
 
 				if spellwaterL < 100:
-					'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+					'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				else
 					spellwater1 = 1
-					'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+					'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				end
@@ -571,12 +571,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 				spellwater2L += rand(1, 10)
 
 				if spellwater2L < 100:
-					'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+					'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				else
 					spellwater2 = 1
-					'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+					'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				end
@@ -591,12 +591,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 				spellwater3L += rand(1, 10)
 
 				if spellwater3L < 100:
-					'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+					'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				else
 					spellwater3 = 1
-					'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+					'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				end
@@ -611,12 +611,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 				spellwater4L += rand(1, 10)
 
 				if spellwater4L < 100:
-					'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+					'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				else
 					spellwater4 = 1
-					'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+					'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				end
@@ -631,12 +631,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mansion1':
 				spellwater5L += rand(1, 10)
 
 				if spellwater5L < 100:
-					'You diligently spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
+					'You diligently study the spell for an hour, but could not grasp it.'
 
 					act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 				else
 					spellwater5 = 1
-						'Finally you will able to study the spell.'
+						'Finally you are able to grasp and learn the spell.'
 
 						act 'Move away':gt 'kakuzu', 'mansion1'
 					end

locations/klofdomhouse.qsrc

@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev41':
 	money += 5000
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/jora/klof3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You got dressed and cleaned up.'
-	'Jora approaches you and says, "The boss likes you, he wants you to goto the pool tomorrow after 10, keep money and bring your swimsuit.'
+	'Jora approaches you and says, "The boss likes you, he wants you to go to the pool tomorrow after 10, keep money and bring your swimsuit.'
 
 	act 'Go home':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/lact_lib.qsrc

@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bp_milking':
 					'As you prepare for pumping you weight your breasts in your hands. You feel that your breasts carry a large amount of milk and pumping will probably take a long time.'
 					'Getting relieve for your breasts with the manual breast pump will probably take at least <<pumptime>> minutes.'
 					if pcs_know_mward <= 0:
-						'You concider visiting a hospital to get help or buying a better breastpump.'
+						'You consider visiting a hospital to get help or buying a better breastpump.'
 						pcs_ask_mward_help = 1
 						pcs_knows_electric_pump = 1
 					end
@@ -908,11 +908,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'man_milking':
 				'You prepare yourself and weight your breasts in your hands. You feel that your breasts carry a large amount of milk and manually expressing it will probably take a long time.'
 				'Getting relieve for your breasts with manual expression will probably take at least <<pumptime>> minutes.'
 				if breastpump <= 0 and bp_unbox <= 1:
-					'You should concider buying a breastpump'
+					'You should consider buying a breastpump'
 				elseif breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 1 and pain['nipples'] <= 60:
-					'You should concider using your breastpump.'
+					'You should consider using your breastpump.'
 				else
-					'You should concider the use of a breastpump.'
+					'You should consider the use of a breastpump.'
 				end
 				'Do you want to continue?'
 				act 'Don''t express':menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $metka

locations/magik.qsrc

@@ -3,17 +3,17 @@
 !!Selecting a magic attack
 if round >= 0:
 	if spelltuman > 0:'Cover terrain fog <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''tuman''">create the spell</a>'
-	if spellklon > 0:'Substitute itself clone <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''klon''">create the spell</a>'
+	if spellklon > 0:'Substitute yourself for a clone <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''klon''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellstun > 0:'Paralyze the enemy <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''stun''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellweap > 0 and weapon > 0:'Invest in energy weapons <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''weap''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellwind > 0:'Blow the mist <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''wind''">create the spell</a>'
-	if spellklon2 > 0:'Substitute themselves clones (3 pieces) <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''klon2''">to create a spell</a>'
+	if spellklon2 > 0:'Substitute yourself for clones (3 clones) <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''klon2''">to create a spell</a>'
 	if spellenergo > 0:'Create weak energy shield <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''energo''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellinit > 0:'Create weak deceleration time <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''init''">create the spell</a>'
-	if spellhel > 0:'Treat yourself to <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''hel''">create the spell</a>'
+	if spellhel > 0:'Heal yourself <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''hel''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellhand > 0:'Striking hand <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''hand''">create the spell</a>'
 	if spellreset > 0 or spellunmat > 0:'<b><font color="red">POWER Rikudo</font></b>'
-	if spellreset> 0:'Power Rikudo "podcherpnut collected energy" <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''reset''">to create a spell</a>'
+	if spellreset> 0:'Power Rikudo "Absorb collected energy" <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''reset''">to create a spell</a>'
 	if spellunmat > 0:'Power Rikudo "not material" <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''unmat''">to create a spell</a>'
 	if spellfire1 > 0:'<b><font color="red">SCHOOL FIRE</font></b>'
 	if spellfire1 > 0:'The Flame <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''fire1''">create the spell</a>'
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if round >= 0:
 	end
 
 	if spellele1 > 0:'<b><font color="red">SCHOOL OF ELECTRICITY</font></b>'
-	if spellele1 > 0:'Rank <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele1''">to create a spell</a>'
+	if spellele1 > 0:'Electric Shock <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele1''">to create a spell</a>'
 
 	if round >= 3:
 		if spellele2 > 0:'Lightning <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele2''">create the spell</a>'
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@ if round >= 0:
 	end
 
 	if round >= 6:
-		if spellele4 > 0:'Dance of thousands of birds <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele4''">create the spell</a>'
-		if spellele5 > 0:'Plyaschuschaya scope <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele5''">create the spell</a>'
+		if spellele4 > 0:'Dance of a thousand birds <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele4''">create the spell</a>'
+		if spellele5 > 0:'Dancing Sphere of Protection <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''ele5''">create the spell</a>'
 	end
 
 	if spellert1 > 0:'<b><font color="red">SCHOOL LAND</font></b>'
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if round >= 0:
 	end
 
 	if spellwater1 > 0:'<b><font color="red">SCHOOL WATER</font></b>'
-	if spellwater1 > 0:'Creek manna <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''water1''">create the spell</a>'
+	if spellwater1 > 0:'Leech manna <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''water1''">create the spell</a>'
 
 	if round >= 3:
 		if spellwater2 > 0:'Flooding <a href="exec:gt ''spell'', ''water2''">create the spell</a>'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -556,11 +556,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			if momslut < 2:
 				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
-				'When you approach her, your mother looks concerned at you and then sighs exasperatedly, rolling her eyes in disgust. When you look down to see what got her so angry, you realize you forgot about the cum stains on your face. They''re quite large, and very recognizable as such.'
+				'When you approach her, your mother looks concerned at you and then sighs exasperatedly, rolling her eyes in disgust. When you look down to see what got her so angry, you realize you forgot about the cum stains on you. They''re quite large, and very recognizable as such.'
 				'"I tell everyone my daughter is decent, and meanwhile it turns out she fucks around like a common whore and then proudly displays the stains for the whole town to see. Slut! Get out of my sight!" You can tell your mother is struggling to resist the urge to slap you.'
 				'You try to calm her down and tell her that''s not true, but she''s too upset right now and not interested in listening to you.'
 			else
-				'When you approach her, your mother looks concerned at you and quickly pulls you to the side, giving you a wet washcloth. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you don''t even wipe the sperm off your face, the whole town might find out you''re a whore. At least be a little discrete about your sexual activities, will you?"'
+				'When you approach her, your mother looks concerned at you and quickly pulls you to the side, giving you a wet washcloth. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you don''t even wipe the sperm off of you, the whole town might find out you''re a whore. At least be a little discrete about your sexual activities, will you?"'
 				'Deeply embarrassed, you apologize to your mother and scrub yourself with the washcloth until the stains are no longer visible.'
 				cumspclnt = 6
 				gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			if momslut < 2:
 				delin_beh += 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
-				'Your mother glares at you. You realize she must have noticed the cum stains on your face, and feel terrible.'
+				'Your mother glares at you. You realize she must have noticed the cum stains on you, and feels terrible.'
 				'"Again, you fucking little whore? I was already so ashamed of you! Get out of my sight!"'
 				'Knowing there is nothing you can say to make it better right now, you simply mumble an apology and leave quickly.'
 			else

locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -140,7 +140,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'description':
 		'Your current home is <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', ''cur_home''"><<$home_name>></a>.'
 	end
 
-	if succubusflag = 1 and sucpcinfo >= 4:	'You are a Succubus.'
+	if succubusflag = 1 and sucpcinfo >= 4:
+		'You are a Succubus.'
+		'Succubus Level: <<succublvl>>'
+	end
 	if age = vidage:
 		'You are <<age>> years old.'
 	else
@@ -1267,7 +1270,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 				elseif brotherknowslut = 1:
 					'Your brother saw semen on your body and thinks that you fuck around.'
 				elseif brotherknowslut >= 2:
-					'Your brother saw you in the park screwing Gopnik.'
+					'Your brother saw you in the park screwing Gopniks.'
 				else
 					'Your brother has a good opinion of you.'
 				end
@@ -1276,7 +1279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 				if sisterknowslut > 1 and sisboypartyQW = 2:
 					'Your sister thinks you are a slut'
 				elseif sisterknowslut > 0:
-					'Your sister knows you sleep around.'
+					'Your sister knows that you sleep around.'
 				else
 					'Your sister has a good opinion of you.'
 				end
@@ -2569,6 +2572,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'emergency':
 	end
 end
 
+!!quick time changes from the object menu
+if $ARGS[0] = '-1 Hour':
+	hour -= 1
+	gs 'stat'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '+1 Hour':
+	hour += 1
+	gs 'stat'
+end
+
 ! remnants of old menu for testing
 if $ARGS[0] = 'old':
 	killobj
@@ -2599,6 +2613,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'old':
 	! else
 		! addobj '<center><font color = green><b>[</b></font>Autosave<font color = green><b>]</b></font></center>'
 	! end
+	if cheatTime = 1:
+		addobj ''
+		addobj '<center><font color="red">-1 Hour</font></center>'
+		addobj '<center><font color="green">+1 Hour</font></center>'
+	end
 	addobj ''
 	addobj '<center><font color = red>Emergency</font></center>'
 end

locations/onobjsel.qsrc

@@ -31,6 +31,9 @@ if $selobj = '<center>Refresh</center>':gs '$menu_obnovit'
 ! end
 if $selobj = '<center>Console</center>':dynamic $cheatmenu['dynamic']
 if $selobj = '<center><font color = red>Emergency</font></center>':gs 'obj_din', 'emergency'
+if $selobj = '<center><font color="red">-1 Hour</font></center>':gs 'obj_din', '-1 Hour'
+if $selobj = '<center><font color="green">+1 Hour</font></center>':gs 'obj_din', '+1 Hour'
+
 !The old menu: end
 
 if $selobj = 'Player':

locations/orgasm.qsrc

@@ -170,13 +170,13 @@ else
 	if rand(1,100) > 75:orgasmic = totminut
 	i = rand(0,3)
 	if i = 0:
-		'A intense building of sensations in your body, getting stronger and stronger. Then it suddenly bursts, like a dam bursting, with gushing water, you are overwhelmed in a sudden surge of hypersensitivity of every nerve in your body.'
+		' An intense erotic sensation builds inside your body, getting stronger and stronger. Then it suddenly bursts, like a dam bursting, with gushing water, you are overwhelmed in a sudden surge of hypersensitivity in every nerve in your body.'
 	elseif i = 1:
-		'You feel a fire building inside of your body and then like a erupting volcano, your whole body starts to shake, pulse and become hypersensitive for several moments. Leaving you feeling light headed and unable to move for a few seconds.'
+		' You feel a fire building inside your body and then like an erupting volcano, your whole body starts to shake, pulse, and become hypersensitive for several moments. Leaving you feeling light headed and unable to move for a few seconds.'
 	elseif i = 2:
-		'Every muscle in your body begins to tighten tighter and tighter, then they begin to quiver and pulsate. Your pussy gets so wet it feels like someone turned a faucet on inside of you as your vagina pulses uncontrollably.'
+		' Every muscle in your body begins to tighten tighter and tighter, then they begin to quiver and pulsate. Your pussy gets so wet it feels like someone turned a faucet on inside of you as your vagina pulses uncontrollably.'
 	elseif i = 3:
-		'You feel a intense almost primal feeling building up inside of you, leaving you unable to focus on anything, but wanting more. Then the crashing waves of pleasure soar through your whole body, your vision goes blurry and you feel light headed for several moments.'
+		' You feel an intense almost primal feeling building up inside of you, leaving you unable to focus on anything, but wanting more. Then the crashing waves of pleasure soar through your whole body, your vision goes blurry and you feel light headed for several moments.'
 	end
 end
 

locations/parkM.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'a':
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 		gs 'stihi'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> reads poetry for you <<$stihi>>.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> reads poetry to you <<$stihi>>.'
 
 		act 'Further':gt 'parkM', 'aa'
 	elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
@@ -184,10 +184,96 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexrand4':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'aa':
+	clr & cla
 	minut += 30
-	'Walked an hour <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> proposed to hold you.'
+	gs 'boyStat', $lover[lover_number]
+	'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/skver.jpg"></center>'
 
-	act 'Home':gt 'sexm', 'start'
+	if loverrelation[lover_number] < 25:
+		'While walking for an hour <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> proposes to hold your hand.'
+		act 'You gladly accept':
+			cls
+			'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+			temp = RAND(1,3)
+			if temp = 1:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
+			elseif temp = 2:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/holding hands park 1.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/date/parkholding.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+			'You hold his hand as you walk through the park.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+		act 'Reject his request':
+			clr & cla
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks rather disappointed as you continue your walk through the park.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+	elseif loverrelation[lover_number] < 50:
+		'While walking for an hour <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stops to give you a warm hug.'
+		act 'Hug him':
+			cls
+			'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+			temp = RAND(1,4)
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/hugging park <<temp>>.jpg"></center>'
+			'You enjoy <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s warm embrace.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+		act 'Pull away':
+			clr & cla
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks rather disappointed as you continue your walk through the park.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+	elseif  loverrelation[lover_number] < 75:
+		'While walking for an hour <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stops occassionally to give you a tender kiss.'
+		act 'Gladly accept with a warm smile':
+			cls
+			'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+			temp = RAND(1,5)
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/kissing park <<temp>>.jpg"></center>'
+			'You are very happy with all the affection and attention <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is giving you.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+		act 'Pull away':
+			cls
+			'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/rejectedkiss.jpg"></center>'
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks rather disappointed as you continue your walk through the park.'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+	else
+		temploverrand = RAND(1,3)
+		if temploverrand = 1:
+			$temploveraction = 'stops several times to give you a passionate kiss.  You gladly accept and kiss him passionately.'
+		elseif temploverrand = 2:
+			$temploveraction = 'takes you to a beautiful grove of trees and tenderly makes out with you.  You gladly accept your lover''s advances.'
+		else
+			$temploveraction = 'stops at a park bench and passionately makes out with you for all to see.  You return the passion with enthusiasm and don''t care who is watching.'
+		end
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you on a nice walk through the park...'
+		act 'Continue':
+			cls
+			'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
+			if temploverrand < 3:
+				temp = RAND(1,5)
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/kissing park <<temp>>.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				temp = RAND(1,3)
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/making out park bench <<temp>>.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+			'While walking for an hour <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> <<$temploveraction>>'
+			loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
+			act '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes you home...': gt 'sexm', 'start'
+		end
+	end
 end
 
 --- parkM ---------------------------------

locations/parksvid.qsrc

@@ -84,21 +84,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			'<<$telsob>> and you walk up to the guy, she leans against you and whispers in your ear. "Well ask."'
 			'"Is it true what they say? That your not suppose to wear anything at all under a kilt?" you ask'
 			'"You want to know, look and see." He replied with a smile.'
-			'"Do you want to take a look <<$pcs_nickname>>?" asked <<$telsob>>'
-			'"Go ahead and look yourself." you answered'
-			'"Fine, I''l look." said <<$telsob>> defiantly pouting and squatting down.'
-			'She lifted his kilt a bit and stuck her head under it.'
-			'"Wow, " came her voice from under the kilt and a few moments when she said nothing more, you had to know. "Well what are you staring there?" you asked noticed the huge smile on the guys face and the movement of her head under is kilt, that she was sucking him off right then and there.'
-			'A few minutes later <<$telsob>> crawled out from under the kilt wiped her lips.'
-			'"If you girls would like to see what all I can do with whats under there, I know a spot.." suggested the guy still sporting a huge grin.'
+			'"Do you want to take a look <<$pcs_nickname>>?" asks <<$telsob>>'
+			'"Go ahead and look yourself." You answer.'
+			'"Fine, I''ll look." Says <<$telsob>> defiantly pouting and squatting down.'
+			'She lifts his kilt a bit and sticks her head under it.'
+			'"Wow!" Comes her voice from under the kilt and after a few moments when she has said nothing more, you realise what is going on. "Well what are you staring there?" you ask noticing the huge smile on the guys face and the movement of her head under his kilt, while <<$telsob>> sucks him off right there and then.'
+			'A few minutes later she crawls out from under the kilt and wipes her lips.'
+			'"If you girls would like to see what else I can do with what''s under there, I know a spot.." suggests the guy still sporting a huge grin.'
 
-			act 'Cancel and go for a walk on.':gt 'parksvid', '3'
+			act 'Decline and continue your walk':gt 'parksvid', '3'
 
-			act 'Go with guy':
+			act 'Go with the guy':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/park/4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decided to go with the guy to his home. No sooner than you are inside the door and he lifts his kilt up and shows off his dangling dick, with not a stitch of anything else on under the kilt.'
-				'Emboldened <<$telsob>> immediately knelt and clasped her lips around his cock and began to suck his dick. You crouched down behind her and started sliding her panties down, so you could lick and tongue fuck her pussy.'
+				'You decide to go with the guy to his home. No sooner than you are inside the door and he lifts his kilt up and shows off his dangling dick, with not a stitch of anything else on under the kilt.'
+				'Emboldened <<$telsob>> immediately kneels, clasps her lips around his cock and begins to suck his dick. You crouch down behind her and start sliding her panties down, so you can lick and tongue fuck her pussy.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 				act 'Further':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/park/5.jpg"></center>'
-					'After a few minutes he picked her up and put her on the bed, on all fours, quickly thrusting his dick in her pussy. You get up and crawl on the bed, pulling your clothes off to allow access to your pussy. You lay down in front of her and spread your legs. She immediately starts licking your pussy as she is getting fucked.'
+					'After a few minutes he picks her up and puts her on the bed, on all fours, quickly thrusting his dick in her pussy. You get up and crawl on the bed, pulling your clothes off to allow access to your pussy. You lay down in front of her and spread your legs. She immediately starts licking your pussy as she is getting fucked.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -114,9 +114,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 					act 'Further':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/park/6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Some time later you have a intense orgasm, not long after he pulls out of her. He grabs her, flipping her over and spinning her around. Now she is laying on her back with her face near his crotch, she opens her mouth at once. Her mouth is barely even open before he shoves his dick in and starts to fuck her mouth, with in moments he is shooting his across her face and in her mouth.'
-						'You crawl down next to her and lick his cum off her face. He smiles as he watches the two of you. "That was great girls, but I need to get back to practicing at the park. I''ll walk you back."'
-						'You all get dressed and he walks with you back to the park, once back in the park you go your seperate ways.'
+						'Some time later you have an intense orgasm, not long after, he pulls out of her. He grabs her, flips her over and spins her around. Now she is laying on her back with her face near his crotch, she opens her mouth at once. Her mouth is barely even open before he shoves his dick in and starts to fuck her mouth, within moments he is shooting his load across her face and in her mouth.'
+						'You crawl down next to her and lick his cum off her face. He smiles as he watches the two of you. "That was great girls, but I need to get back to practising at the park. I''ll walk you back."'
+						'You all get dressed and he walks with you back to the park. Once back in the park you go your separate ways.'
 
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/pavComplex.qsrc

@@ -182,6 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garages':
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Be on your way':gt 'pavComplex', 'garages'
 						act 'Say hi':
+							cla
 							'You step into the garage and walk up behind him. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov."'
 							'A bit startled he quickly turns towards you, gripping his wrench tight. He looks like he is ready to hurt someone. Frightened by his actions you instinctively take a step back ready to quickly run away.'
 							'Feeling like an eternity Eduard finally relaxes, letting the wrench hang loosely in his hand, and even breaks out in a small smile, "You should be careful when approaching someone from behind <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -189,6 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garages':
 							'"Ah, well you didn''t frighten me, but you did startle me. You never know who it might be, maybe my past coming back to haunt me." he says smiling.'
 							'"I was just passing by and wanted to say hi, anyway I should let you get back to work." you say, as you quickly leave. You don''t even notice him nod or the slight frown when he sees you scurry away.'
 							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Back to garages': gt 'pavComplex', 'garages'
 							act 'Go to the courtyard':minut += 1 & gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 						end
 					elseif garageedevent = 2:

locations/pavComplexOld.qsrc

@@ -49,5 +49,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'advert':
 	act 'Continue':gt 'pavComplexOld', 'etaj_1'
 end
 
---- pavComplexb3 ---------------------------------
+--- pavComplexOld ---------------------------------
 

locations/pavIndustrial.qsrc

@@ -117,5 +117,5 @@ elseif npc_QW['A113'] = 1 and daybelisex ! daystart and hour >= 9 and hour <= 23
 	act 'Go to the jeep': return_residential = 2 & gt 'belgang', 'workofdebt' 	
 end
 
---- pavCommercial ---------------------------------
+--- pavIndustrial ---------------------------------
 

locations/rinwork.qsrc

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						cla
 						'You start making excuses. Arthur says to you, "Hey, don''t insult me, your stall is dirty, it has dust and dirt all over it. I should fine you, but if you''re nice I will let you off.'
 
-						act 'Goto warehouse':gt 'RynokHoz', 'the_beginning'
+						act 'Go to warehouse':gt 'RynokHoz', 'the_beginning'
 
 						act 'No':
 							cla

locations/road.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/road.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'<center><<nroad>> km</center>'
-	'Calling it a highway would be too much credit, but this road is the main way to get from St. Petersburg to the town of Pavlovsk, 20km away. Smaller villages named Gadukino and Pushkin can be found along the way. Cars are driving by you at a high speed.'
+	'Calling it a highway would be too much credit, but this road is the main way to get from St. Petersburg to the town of Pavlovsk, 20km away.'
+	'Smaller villages named Gadukino and Pushkin can be found along the way. Cars are driving by you at a high speed.'
 
 	if car > 0 and cardrive = 22 and ncarroad = nroad:'You parked <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">your <<$car>></a> next to the road.'
 	if nroad = 0:act 'Walk to the City Industrial Region (0:15)':minut += 15 & gt 'nord'

locations/rolanbath.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	if newbath ! 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-		'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners and floor. A big crack in the wall. This place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time. The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
+		'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners and floor. A big crack in the wall. This place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time.'
+		'The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
 	elseif newbath = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathroomnew.jpg"></center>'
 		'The bathroom is in much better shape since you worked on it.'
@@ -737,7 +738,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryOff':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			if newbath ! 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-				'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners and floor. A big crack in the wall. This place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time. The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
+				'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners and floor. A big crack in the wall. This place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time.'
+				'The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. It also seems that the latch on the door is broken.'
 			elseif newbath = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathroomnew.jpg"></center>'
 				'The bathroom is in much better shape since you worked on it.'

locations/sauna.qsrc

@@ -64,6 +64,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna2':
 			dynamic $showerdin
 			saunaday = daystart
 			pcs_mood = 100
+			pcs_horny -= 50
+			if pcs_horny < 0: pcs_horny = 0
+			pcs_health += healthmax/5
+			pcs_stam = stammax
+			pcs_willpwr = pcs_intel*5 + will*5+1000
+			pcs_manna = (pcs_intel*pcs_magik) + pcs_magik*100 + pcs_vital*10 + rikudo
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sauna/sau.jpg"></center>'
 			'You spend an hour relaxing in the heat of the sauna, having a cool shower and dressing. You feel revitalised.'

locations/sexm.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	*clr & cla
 	if loverlove[lover_number] = 0 and loverrelation[lover_number] >= 100 and loverdays[lover_number] >= 30 and husband = 0: act 'Talk about cohabitation': gt 'love', 'start'
-		
+
+	'<center><img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg"></center>'	
 	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stops at the entrance of your building.'
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can I come in for a cup of coffee?"'
@@ -322,6 +323,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'variant':
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
+	'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
 
 	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at you and is waiting for you to say something'
 
@@ -351,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 	gs 'brosok'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj24.jpg"></center>'
-	'you wrap you lips around <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> ''s dick.'
+	'You wrap your lips around <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> ''s dick.'
 
 	if stat['bj'] = 1:'You think, "Damn, now I am just sitting here sucking his dick."'
 
@@ -365,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		loverrelation[lover_number] += 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum30.jpg"></center>'
-		'A hot jet of sperm hit you in the mouth. You started to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continued to cum in your mouth. Finally the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stopped.'
+		'A hot jet of sperm hits you in the mouth. You start to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continues to cum in your mouth. Finally the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stops.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'sexm', 'endsex'
 	end
@@ -459,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/dom/pegging.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You go to the drawer and put on your strapon. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gets ready on all fours on the bed.'
-	'you use some lubrication on the guys anus and stick in the strapon. While you fuck his ass he groans a lot and finally finishes. You remove the strapon from his ass and go to the bathroom.'
+	'You use some lubrication on the guys anus and stick the strapon in. While you fuck his ass he groans a lot and finally finishes. You remove the strapon from his ass and go to the bathroom.'
 
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 30, 'dom'
@@ -569,13 +571,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		
 		if klismaday ! daystart:
 			loverrelation[lover_number] -= 8
-			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes his dick out of your ass and he see some traces of excrement. He says, "Baby, I did not come here to watch Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. You should use an enema before we start."'
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes his dick out of your ass and sees some traces of excrement. He says, "Baby, I did not come here to watch Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. You should use an enema before we start."'
 		elseif klismaday = daystart:
 			loverrelation[lover_number] += 5
 			spafinloc = 3
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 
-			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> took his dick out of you and gave you a kiss. Then you went to the bathroom.'
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes his dick out of you and gives you a kiss.  You get up and use the bathroom.'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_ass < dick:pcs_ass += 1
@@ -712,7 +714,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 		gs 'brosok'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src ="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj24.jpg"></center>'
-		'you wrap you lips around <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> ''s dick.'
+		'You wrap your lips around <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s dick.'
 
 		if stat['bj'] = 1:'You thought, "Damn, now I am just sitting here sucking his dick."'
 
@@ -1044,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 			end
 		elseif izvratH = 1:
 			'"You really only love me?" asked <<$husName>>.'
-			'"Yes, so you come to me and i will do everything with you like he did, but it will be with love now and you will understand the difference" you replied. You are amazed at how he believes in this nonsense. <<$husName>> came up to you and you unbuttoned his pants to reveal his dick.'
+			'"Yes, I will do everything with you like he did, but it will be with love now and you will understand the difference" you replied. You are amazed at how he believes in this nonsense. <<$husName>> came up to you and you unbuttoned his pants to reveal his dick.'
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
@@ -1074,7 +1076,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					houseslut += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You lie down on the bed and <<$husName>> enters your pussy while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you and moves his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
-					'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>> I have never seen you so enthousiastic when we were together. Maybe we should try some other positions" proposed <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and your husband agreed.'
+					'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>> I have never seen you so enthusiastic when we were together. Maybe we should try some other positions" proposed <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and your husband agreed.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 					gs 'stat'

locations/sistersleep.qsrc

@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $loc = 'bedrPar':
 					orgasm += 1
 					if npcSex['A33'] = 0:npcSex['A33'] = 1 & girl += 1
 
-					'Anya''s fingers pull out of her pussy, soaked with her sticky juices. Withoug taking her eyes off of you once, she glides them up to her swollen bud, and begins to stroke in small circles, putting pressure on it as she rubs faster and faster.'
+					'Anya''s fingers pull out of her pussy, soaked with her sticky juices. Without taking her eyes off of you once, she glides them up to her swollen bud, and begins to stroke in small circles, putting pressure on it as she rubs faster and faster.'
 					'"Oooooooh.... mmmmmmmmm..... yeah, that''s it... beat off with me, <<$pcs_nickname>>...watching your fingers doing what mine are doing is soooo.... hot.... sooooo.... mmmmmmm .... AGGGGHHHHHHHHHH"'
 					'You moan along with her, feeling the tension build, and explode. "Heh..Hehh.....Oooooooo....Eeyaaaaahhhhh" comes from your mouth as little warm spurts come out of your pussy. As you look into each other''s eyes, bodies twitching and fingers strumming, you both smile, and lean towards each other in perfect harmony, kissing and sighing into each other''s mouths.'
 					'"Mmmmmmmm.....that was... really special, sis...Now, go over there to your bed so I can get some sleep" she says in a whisper, prodding you back and giving your boob a quick squeeze.'

locations/sny.qsrc

@@ -193,12 +193,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pavResidential'
 			end
 		end
-	elseif alko >= 6 and alko < 10:
+	elseif alko >= 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/tit.jpg"></center>'
-		'You are quite drunk and has not thinking straight. Someone''s hand pulls you into the center of the room with the dancing boys and girls. Nosov suddenly pulls your top down, exposing your breasts to everyone in the room. You sluggish pull your top back up. Dimka takes you by the hand and drags you out of the room.'
+		'You are quite drunk and not thinking straight. Someone''s hand pulls you into the center of the room with the dancing boys and girls. Nosov suddenly pulls your top down, exposing your breasts to everyone in the room. You sluggish pull your top back up. Dimka takes you by the hand and drags you out of the room.'
 
 		act 'Hey! Where are you dragging me?': minut += 5 & gt 'sny', '10'
-	elseif alko > 3 and alko < 6:
+	elseif alko > 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/alb.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are a little drunk, but having fun. When you notice, Albina sitting on the couch and kissing Vanka, while Fedka paws at her breasts. Looking around you some more you notice that Katja nowhere to be seen.'
 
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go into the room': minut += 5 & gt 'sny', '8'
 		end
-	elseif alko > 0 and alko <= 3:
+	elseif alko > 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/idi.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are a bit tipsy and feel fairly relaxed at the party. There''s some vodka shots lined up so you could have another drink or maybe it''s time to head home?'
 

locations/spell.qsrc

@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+
 # spell
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reset':
 	cla
@@ -363,9 +364,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ele1':
 	cla
 	!Create mist
-	'Category. Cost 10 manna.'
+	'Electric Shock. Cost 10 manna.'
 
-	act 'Category (10 manna)':
+	act 'Electric Shock (10 manna)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		pcs_manna -= 10
@@ -417,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ele3':
 		pcs_manna -= 150
 		defence = defence + 1500
 
-		'<b><font color = green>You''ve created a wall around themselves dancing lightning, now you <<defence>> protection units.</font></b>'
+		'<b><font color = green>You''ve created a wall around yourself of dancing lightning, now you have <<defence>> protection units.</font></b>'
 
 		xgt'fight','sta'
 	end
@@ -431,9 +432,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ele4':
 	cla
 	!Create mist
-	'Dance of thousands of birds. Cost 250 manna.'
+	'Dance of a thousand birds. Cost 250 manna.'
 
-	act 'Dance of thousands of birds (250 manna)':
+	act 'Dance of a thousand birds (250 manna)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		pcs_manna -= 250
@@ -736,16 +737,16 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'water1':
 	cla
 	!Create mist
-	'Creek manna, inflicts 100 units Absorbs 1000 units of manna. Cost 10 manna.'
+	'Leech manna, inflicts 100 units Absorbs 1000 units of manna. Cost 10 manna.'
 
-	act 'Creek manna (10 manna)':
+	act 'Leech manna (10 manna)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		pcs_manna -= 10
 		damTip = 100
 		damTipM = 1000
 
-		'<b><font color = green>You have created in his hand a small stream of water that shot into the enemy.</font></b>'
+		'<b><font color = green>You have created in your hand a small stream of water that shoots into the enemy.</font></b>'
 
 		xgt'atakA','atak'
 	end

locations/stat.qsrc

@@ -144,6 +144,13 @@ if CheatSlut = 1 or succubusflag = 1:
 	cycle = 1
 end
 
+if succubusflag = 1 and succublvl > 2 and rape > rape_count:
+	!!High Level Succubus cannot get raped
+	orgasm += 1
+	rape = rape_count
+	mood = 100
+end
+
 if pcs_horny < 50 and cheatHorny = 1: pcs_horny = 50
 
 !!These will be made obsolete with the combat system overhaul

locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 				if spellbefshild = 1:defence = 500
 				'<<$streetev_title>>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/street/pursechase.jpg"></center>'
-				'You chase after him, screaming at him to stop or anyone to stop him. All that working out is paying off, you are gaining on him. He keeps glancing back as you get closer, he turns and ducks down a alley when you are nearly on top of him. He leaps over a overturned trash can, obviously still hoping to get away from you. You easily leap over it as well and a few steps later you tackle him, sending both of you rolling on the ground. As you regain your feet you see he has as well, just as he lunges at you.'
+				'You chase after him, screaming at him to stop or anyone to stop him. All that working out is paying off, you are gaining on him. He keeps glancing back as you get closer, he turns and ducks down a alley when you are nearly on top of him. He leaps over an overturned trash can, obviously still hoping to get away from you. You easily leap over it as well and a few steps later you tackle him, sending both of you rolling on the ground. You both get back to your feet at the same time, realising he can''t escape he lunges at you.'
 				act 'Fight':gt 'fight', 'start'
 			end
 		end

locations/succubus.qsrc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'init':
 		gt 'succubus', 'firsttime'
 	else
 		if succonfail ! 1: 'You call <<$sucself1>> up from its resting place'
-		'It fills you completely, suffusing you being with power...'
+		'It fills you completely, suffusing through your being with power...'
 		'<font color="red"><b>and hunger</b></font>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
 		suceatinit = 1
@@ -795,6 +795,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'sucwalkinggo':
 !!This is the wake up action
 	act 'Wake Up':
 		cla
+		pcs_sleep = 100
+		pcs_mood = 100
+		pcs_health += healthmax/5
+		pcs_stam = stammax
+		pcs_willpwr = pcs_intel*5 + will*5+1000
+		pcs_manna = (pcs_intel*pcs_magik) + pcs_magik*100 + pcs_vital*10 + rikudo
+
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		$scwrdtmp = '.'
@@ -803,7 +810,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'sucwalkinggo':
 		if pcs_hairbsh = 1 and pcs_makeup > 1: $scwrdtmp = ', your hair is brushed, and you''re wearing makeup.'
 		'Instead, you are fully dressed<<$scwrdtmp>>'
 		if scwalkmon > 0: 'You find <<scwalkmon>> <b>₽</b> stuffed in your cleavage (which you place in your wallet)'
-		'And you feel aboslutly <i>bursting</i> with energy.'
+		'And you feel absolutely <i>bursting</i> with energy.'
 		''
 		'After a moment, you start wondering where you are...'
 		killvar 'scwalkmon' & killvar '$scwrdtmp'

locations/svidboy.qsrc

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Park</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park0.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and you are met at the entrance to the park.'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and you meet at the entrance to the park.'
 
 	act 'Go for a walk':
 		parksvidrand = rand(0, 1)
@@ -126,7 +126,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park4.jpg"></center>'
-					'You stand and enjoy petting, one hand fingering her pussy, when <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> bends you and exposing your ass glares at his tongue, his tongue slides between your buttocks then fondling pussy is a sensitive anus.'
+					'You enjoy the petting, as one hand fingers your pussy, when <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> suddenly bends you over, exposing your ass. You glare at his tongue as it slides between your buttocks and your fingered pussy.'
+					'It feels quite sensitive, and you enjoy <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s actions very much.'
 
 					act 'Continue':
 						picrand = 49

locations/tanhozspal.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if hour > 8 and hour < 20 and tanwork = 1 and $clothingworntype = 'uniform' and
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/gosps4.jpg"></center>'
 							'You obediently start licking the milk from the floor; once again, you feel her hand at your neck, squeezing your face to the floor, ''guiding'' you and often making you lick a spot again. When the entire floor is milk-free, she wordlessly undoes the collar and leaves you, naked in the kitchen.'
 
-							act 'Goto the corridor':gt 'tanhouse'
+							act 'Go to the corridor':gt 'tanhouse'
 						end
 					end
 				end

locations/trainBimbo.qsrc

@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos22':
 	act'Suck':
 		cla
 		*clr
-		gs'stat'
 		minut += 9
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		spafinloc = 12
 		gs 'cum_manage'
+		gs'stat'
 		stat['bj'] += 1
 		if bimbo_rand1 < 10:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/sex/vokbimbo22.jpg"></center>'
 		if bimbo_rand1 >= 10 and bimbo_rand1 < 40:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/sex/bimbo.boy0,'+rand(0,5)+'.jpg"></center>'

locations/vanrPar.qsrc

@@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A28'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_5.jpg"></center>'
 	'You turn around just just in time to see your stepfather as he opens the door, he nervously licks his lips before he makes the decision and quickly jumps inside locking the door behind him. Because he is a large man and the bathroom is so small, it suddenly feels crowded in here, yet you can''t help but feel a little excited at the size difference between the two of you.'
-	'"You drive me crazy." he says, a manic look in his eyes as he frantically undresses. You decide to tease him even more by giggling and thrusting forward with you hips, while leaning against the cold tile wall for support. You know you look like a horny little imp, wet and willing, but to hell with it! You like it and how it makes you feel.'
-	'Your step-father climbs in the shower with you, as soon as he is undressed. He is roughly groping at your body. Suddenly he spins you around and you find yourself pressed up against the cold tiled wall. You spread your feet a little wider as you feel his fingers grope at the inside of your thighs, searching, teasing your asshole on their way lower. You are already treacherously wet, and bite your lips to stop yourself from moaning when his fingers find your dripping pussy, you expect more teasing but the fingers are immediately replaced by his hard throbbing member.'
+	'"You drive me crazy." he says, with a manic look in his eyes as he frantically undresses. You decide to tease him even more by giggling and thrusting forward with you hips, while leaning against the cold tile wall for support. You know you look like a horny little imp, wet and willing, but to hell with it! You like it and how it makes you feel.'
+	'Your step-father climbs in the shower with you, as soon as he is undressed. He is roughly groping at your body. Suddenly he spins you around and you find yourself pressed up against the cold tiled wall. You spread your feet a little wider as you feel his fingers grope at the inside of your thighs, searching, teasing your asshole on their way down. You are already treacherously wet, and bite your lips to stop yourself from moaning when his fingers find your dripping pussy. You expect more teasing but his fingers are immediately replaced by his hard throbbing member.'
 	stepdadqw += 1
 	npc_sex['A28']+=1
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex':
 		'"Oh... Just fuck me!"'
 		'But he is in no hurry. He takes his time, thrusting confidently and slowly, savouring every inch of your narrow little slit, making you moan and beg for more. Gradually the thrust become faster and faster, harder and harder until it starts to feel like he is literally tearing you apart. Looks like your constant teasing is finally paying off, you think giggling hysterically. Soon your giggles turn into more moans as you are being fucked into the cold tiled wall, squashed by your stepfather''s powerful thrusts and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as his thrusts increase in speed and power, he''s clearly intending to show you who''s the boss. And it turns out you don''t mind at all, soon you turn into a little moaning bitch, groaning under him and moving your hips as much as you can, searching, wanting more. You don''t think you will last much longer. After all, the pounding the stepfather has been giving you is very fast paced. You finally climax, you feel warmth spread all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction. Your sweet moans help your stepfather cum too, he suddenly pulls out and spills his seed in your asshole.'
 		'"Ffuh" he exhales wearily, wiping the sweat from his forehead, "Oh and I''d fuck you any time".'
-		'He says this sweetly, and you can''t help but smile, still basking in the glow of your powerful orgasm and almost sliding down the wall. After a couple of minutes stepdad leaves the shower and begins to get dressed. It looks lie you have to wash yet again.'
+		'He says this sweetly, and you can''t help but smile, still basking in the glow of your powerful orgasm and almost sliding down the wall. After a couple of minutes your stepdad leaves the shower and begins to get dressed. It looks like you have to wash yet again.'
 
 		gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
 	end

locations/zsoft_gopskverGorSlut.qsrc

@@ -460,10 +460,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'piss':
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				pcs_horny += 5
 				minut += 5
-				stat['bj'] += 1
+				stat['bj'] += 2
+				spafinloc = 7
+				gs 'cum_manage'
 				spafinloc = 11
 				gs 'cum_manage'
+				spafinloc = 12
+				gs 'cum_manage'
+				spafinloc = 16
+				gs 'cum_manage'
 				facial += 1
+				swallow += 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/gop/p_otsos.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You sigh and drop to your knees, rubbing your hands over the groins of their police uniforms. They obviously want you, the bulges in their pants are impossible to ignore.'