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[text edit] clean up liam

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      locations/liam.qsrc

+ 6 - 6
locations/liam.qsrc

@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@ else
 	end
 end
 
-'The old part of the city, usually called Old Town. A few of centuries ago, this was the village of Pushkin.'
-'Later, the rich bought the land off the poor and knocked down the wooden shacks and farm houses to build large estates. The city began to grow rapidly and it became a desirable suburb.'
-'Since then, even the old houses have been improved, extended, and modernized. The old buildings and beautiful park made it popular with tourists, and it has became part of Pavlovsk.'
+'The old part of the city, usually called Old Town. A few centuries ago, this was the village of Pushkin.'
+'Later, the rich bought the land off the poor and knocked down the wooden shacks and farm houses to build large estates. The city began to grow rapidly, and it became a desirable suburb.'
+'Since then, even the old houses have been improved, extended, and modernized. The old buildings and beautiful park made it popular with tourists, and it has become part of Pavlovsk.'
 
 'Not far from here is the quiet <a href="exec:gt ''liames'',''start''">High Street</a>.'
 'Close by is a narrow street leading to a <a href="exec:gt ''dvor'',''start''">vacant house</a>.'
@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@ if hour >= 13 and hour <= 15 and bodimodel = 1 and arts = 0 and tusa = 1:
 		gs'dibodi'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/marinka/marinka.jpg"></center>'
-		'While standing at the door, you notice a girl from the local hangout, Marinka.'
+		'You notice a girl from the local hangout, Marinka, standing in a doorway nearby.'
 
-		act 'Ask':gt 'dibodi', 'sptusa'
+		act 'Ask Marinka about the art studio':gt 'dibodi', 'sptusa'
 	end
 end
 
-if arts = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''Marin'',''start''">Marina''s Apartment</a>'
+if arts = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''Marin'',''start''">Marinka''s Apartment</a>'
 
 act 'Walk to the train station (0:15)':minut += 15 & nroad = 15 & gt 'pav_train'
 act 'Walk to Pavlovsk park (0:10)':minut += 10 & nroad = 10 & gt 'pav_park', 'start'