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Vengeance11 4 年之前
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      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

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locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1360,7 +1360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] > 60 and checkoutalbina = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She seems to be talking about her dance troupe and a new show they will be doing. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she says anymore. As you finish drying your hair but before you get dressed, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing a towel while you are naked. She drops her towel, revealing her naked, toned body before she turns towards you, giving you an even better view. "So do you like what you see?" she asks.'
+					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She seems to be talking about her dance troupe and a new show they will be doing. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she says anymore. As you finish drying your hair, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing a towel while you are naked. She smiles at you before dropping her towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Yes':
@@ -1368,8 +1368,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 						npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find your body very attractive."'
-						'She walks up and turns you until you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are, whatever am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+						'You decide to be honest. "Yes, very much. I love looking at you. You''re very beautiful and I find your body very attractive."'
+						'She walks up, turns you around so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! Whatever am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'
@@ -1420,7 +1420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/spank.jpg"></center>'
 							'You decide to just confess your feelings. "Yeah I have, you''re very beautiful and I find your body very attractive."'
-							'She walks up to you and then turns you until you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are, whatever am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
+							'She walks up to you, turns you so you are facing the lockers and gives your ass a hard slap and then a firm squeeze. "What a dirty girl you are! Whatever am I going to do with you?" You can tell it is a rhetorical question as you feel her hand sliding down between your legs.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom'