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[text edit] clean up sisterQW

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1 өөрчлөгдсөн 41 нэмэгдсэн , 41 устгасан
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      locations/sisterQW.qsrc

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locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_expel':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_07.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisboytrioQW ! 1:
-		'Your sister reminds you that she wants spend time alone with Roma and asks you to leave the room.'
+		'Your sister reminds you that she wants to spend time alone with Roma and asks you to leave the room.'
 	else
 		'Your sister asks you to briefly leave the room.'
 	end
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_08.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to your bedroom door and stop. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend and you are sure they are having or are going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but you cannot shake the stimulating thoughts of your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
+	'You walk up to your bedroom door and stop. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend, and you are sure they are having or are going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but you cannot shake the stimulating thoughts of your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
 	act 'Leave them in peace':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 1
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 				minut += 1
 				blockBedrPar = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel guility about spying on your sister after you promised you would leave her in peace and you close the door softly so they don''t hear you. You lean your head against the door for a few moments to collect yourself before walking away.'
+				'You feel guilty about spying on your sister after you promised you would leave her in peace, and you close the door softly so they don''t hear you. You lean your head against the door for a few moments to collect yourself before walking away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
 	'He is lying relaxed, as if he had fallen asleep, but your sister is wide awake and continues playing with him.'
-	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
 	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before they see you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy2':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked, Anya lies down on her bed, with her legs hanging off the edge. She spreads her legs wide and Roma kneels down at the edge of the bed between her legs. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy. You can hear her moaning from where you stand. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he is doing. Several minutes pass and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed like she is about to have an orgasm already.'
-	'At that moment, you wish to be in your sister''s place, but you are exposed here by the door and you don''t want to be caught.'
+	'Once naked, Anya lies down on her bed with her legs hanging off the edge. She spreads her legs wide, and Roma kneels down at the edge of the bed between her legs. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy. You can hear her moaning from where you stand. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he is doing. Several minutes pass, and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed like she is about to have an orgasm already.'
+	'At that moment, you wish to be in your sister''s place, but you are exposed here by the door, and you don''t want to be caught.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -129,8 +129,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy3':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once Anya is naked, Roma pushes her down to her knees roughly. She pulls down his pants and his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking it.'
-	'Anya relishes swallowing his member balls deep and when she takes it out of her mouth, she sobs heavily, her face plastered in saliva.'
+	'Once Anya is naked, Roma pushes her down to her knees roughly. She pulls down his pants, and his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking it.'
+	'Anya relishes swallowing his member balls deep, and when she takes it out of her mouth, she sobs heavily, her face plastered in saliva.'
 	*nl
 	'She has a hard time deep-throating such a large cock with mascara and tears running down her face, but Roma forcefully grabs her hair in both his hands and starts fucking her mouth roughly, his balls slapping against her chin.'
 	'You can hear her gags and muffled gasps from here. Your mischievous sister suffers, just to please her boyfriend.'
@@ -156,11 +156,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy4':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He then grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. She then moans loudly and Roma starts thrusting against her, obviously fucking her and she seems to be loving it. This goes on for several minutes.'
+	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He then grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. She then moans loudly, and Roma starts thrusting against her, obviously fucking her and she seems to be loving it. This goes on for several minutes.'
 	*nl
 	'Roma is red and sweaty when he suddenly freezes for a moment, then falls on his back. You look closely and can clearly see his cum trickling from her pussy.'
 	'Your sister groans. "Already?" Her tone turns angry when she realizes what''s happened. "What the fuck!? You came inside me again? How many times do I have to tell you, you fucking moron? Get the fuck away from me!"'
-	'It seems they need to talk and so you take the opportunity to run away before they notice you.'
+	'It seems they need to talk, and so you take the opportunity to run away before they notice you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -182,10 +182,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy5':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of it''s contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand, while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly your sister gasps and tenses up for a moment. Her hands tighly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
+	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of its contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly, your sister gasps and tenses up for a moment. Her hands tightly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
 	*nl
-	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She is soon laying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe." Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
-	'His movements get faster and faster and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams "More... more! Yes... fuck my tight little ass... just like that!"'
+	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She is soon lying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe," Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
+	'His movements get faster and faster, and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams, "More... more! Yes... fuck my tight little ass... just like that!"'
 	'They are so engrossed in each other that they have not yet noticed your presence. Now might be the time to leave the hot couple to it.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy3.jpg"></center>'
 	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
-	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
 	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before you are discovered, but you really want to watch the whole thing.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -232,13 +232,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy5.jpg"></center>'
-			'After giving him a blowjob, he pulls her up until she is kneeling while facing him. He grabs her and lifts her up, she spreads her legs and lines his cock up with her pussy before he lowers her back down, impaling her on his dick. They both moan as he holds her up as they fuck. Roma seems to be pretty strong, being able to hold her up like that and still fuck her.'
+			'After receiving her blowjob, he pulls her up until she is kneeling while facing him. He grabs her and lifts her up, and she spreads her legs and lines his cock up with her pussy before he lowers her back down, impaling her on his dick. They both moan as he holds her up as they fuck. Roma seems to be pretty strong, being able to hold her up like that and still fuck her.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ride''em cowgirl':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Eventually Roma gets tired and lies back on the bed. Anya then mounts him and starts riding him hard. Her pace is frantic, almost animal like. After a few minutes, she cries out as an orgasm pulses through her body and she slowly stops moving while sitting on top of him, his dick still inside her pussy.'
+				'Eventually Roma gets tired and lies back on the bed. Anya then mounts him and starts riding him hard. Her pace is frantic, almost animal like. After a few minutes, she cries out as an orgasm pulses through her body, and she slowly stops moving while sitting on top of him, his dick still inside her pussy.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Doggy for the win':
@@ -250,17 +250,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 					act 'Tight ass no more':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy8.jpg"></center>'
-						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy and takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she really has time to react. She cries out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. Roma, on the other hand, groans in pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, quickly starting to really hammer it. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly and her moans and groans remain a mixture of pain and pleasure.'
+						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy and takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she really has time to react. She cries out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. Roma, on the other hand, groans in pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, quickly starting to really hammer it. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly, and her moans and groans remain a mixture of pain and pleasure.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Ass To Mouth':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy11.jpg"></center>'
-							'He suddenly pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair. He pulls her head around towards his dick and the first spurt of cum lands on her chest. Before another spurt comes out, he sticks his dick in her mouth and groans loudly. He unloads into her mouth, filling it with his sperm. He then pulls out and says "Swallow it!" Anya makes a swallowing motion then opens her mouth, sticking out her clean tongue. Roma collapses on the bed just out of your view, with only your sister and her cum splattered tits visible.'
+							'He suddenly pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair. He pulls her head around towards his dick, and the first spurt of cum lands on her chest. Before another spurt comes out, he sticks his dick in her mouth and groans loudly. He unloads into her mouth, filling it with his sperm. He then pulls out and says, "Swallow it!" Anya makes a swallowing motion then opens her mouth, sticking out her clean tongue. Roma collapses on the bed just out of your view, with only your sister and her cum splattered tits visible.'
 							*nl
-							'After a few moments your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that. It''s fucking gross."'
+							'After a few moments, your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that. It''s fucking gross."'
 							'You hear Roma chuckle. "You said you love the taste of my cum babe."'
-							'She sighs. "I mean pulling out of my ass and sticking it straight into my mouth. Stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You have been watching them for a long time, you need to leave before someone finds you spying or before Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
+							'She sighs. "I mean pulling out of my ass and sticking it straight into my mouth. Stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You have been watching them for a long time. You need to leave before someone finds you spying or before Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caress':
 	'You can''t help yourself. You turn and press your back against the wall.'
 	'You pull your panties down and rub your glistening, wet pussy with your finger as you listen to the moans and groans coming from your room.'
 	'You lick your finger before rhythmically caressing your swollen clit and caressing your breasts with your other hand. You are lost in the moment, oblivious to everything around you.'
-	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens. Realizing you have hit your peak, you bite your lip to stiffle your moans.'
+	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens. Realizing you have hit your peak, you bite your lip to stifle your moans.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_41.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enter the room, you see Anya and Roma tumbling in the bed.'
-	'Anya notices you, Roma frees her from his embrace and she walks slowly to you, gives you an intimate hug and pulls your towards the bed.'
+	'Anya notices you. Roma frees her from his embrace, and she walks slowly to you, gives you an intimate hug and pulls you towards the bed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'This is wrong':
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep4.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Screw this! Someone in this family should have a shred of dignity!"'
-		'It feels so wrong, you think you might throw up. You turn and flee from these perverts. Once outside the door you turn and close it. You hold the door closed a moment with a look of shock on your face as you realize what almost happened. You then let go of the door and walk away.'
+		'It feels so wrong, you think you might throw up. You turn and flee from these perverts. Once outside the door, you turn and close it. You hold the door closed a moment with a look of shock on your face as you realize what almost happened. You then let go of the door and walk away.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flee': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	act 'Join her on the bed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You crawl on her bed with her and the two of you hug and lightly fondle each other as Roma just watches the two of you for the moment. Roma licks his lips as he watches, obviously already aroused at the thought of what is to come. "Come on girls, show me your tits."'
+		'You crawl on her bed with her, and the two of you hug and lightly fondle each other as Roma just watches the for the moment. Roma licks his lips as he watches, obviously already aroused at the thought of what is to come. "Come on girls, show me your tits."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flash':
@@ -360,20 +360,20 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some3.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you expose your tits, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands while Roma walks closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at them. He starts pulling off your top as he says "Take off Anya''s top." You and Anya are soon topless. "Now kiss for me girls."'
+	'As you expose your tits, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands while Roma walks closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at them. He starts pulling off your top as he says, "Take off Anya''s top." You and Anya are soon topless. "Now kiss for me girls."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Kiss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Anya kiss as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn this is so fucking hot." Roma says as he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes as well as Anya''s, obviously wanting to get you both naked as quickly as he can.'
+		'You and Anya kiss as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn this is so fucking hot," Roma says as he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes as well as Anya''s, obviously wanting to get you both naked as quickly as he can.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fondle':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once you are both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. All of you now naked, Roma starts to rub your pussy while he suckles at one of your nipples. Anya plays with your other tit with one hand while the other smacks and squeezes your ass. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands. Roma then stops playing with you and says "Damn, one of you needs to start sucking my dick."'
+			'Once you are both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. All of you now naked, Roma starts to rub your pussy while he suckles at one of your nipples. Anya plays with your other tit with one hand while the other smacks and squeezes your ass. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands. Roma then stops playing with you and says, "Damn, one of you needs to start sucking my dick."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch Anya suck':
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 				act 'Suck Roma':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it. Closing your lips around his shaft, you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep on his dick, while Anya starts playing with your tits. Several minutes go by of you sucking Roma before he states "I want to fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it. Closing your lips around his shaft, you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep on his dick, while Anya starts playing with your tits. Several minutes go by of you sucking Roma before he states, "I want to fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some8.jpg"></center>'
 						if pcs_vag = 0:
 							roma_cherry = 1
-							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you. You feel your hymen tearing as his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick fills you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, reducing the pain and causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
+							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him, and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you. You feel your hymen tearing as his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick fills you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, reducing the pain and causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
 							gs 'pain', 3, 'vaginal', 'tear'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
@@ -414,13 +414,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 							act 'Anya''s turn':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off of him and places you aside. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
+								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off of him and places you aside. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face, and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Your turn again':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some11.jpg"></center>'
-									'You then feel a sudden smack on your ass. "OK, come over here and get on all fours. I want to fuck you again." Roma demands. You are sure he is the one that smacked you. You climb off Anya and gets on all fours as Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back in your pussy, while Anya lays down in front of your face and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces you face into her crotch and you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again. Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
+									'You then feel a sudden smack on your ass. "OK, come over here and get on all fours. I want to fuck you again," Roma demands. You are sure he is the one that smacked you. You climb off Anya and get on all fours as Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back in your pussy, while Anya lies down in front of your face and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces your face into her crotch, and you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again. Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
 											'You pull away and turn your head back to him. "No anal!" He sighs, obviously having looked forward to fucking your ass.'
-											'"OK, no anal." He grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she is still on her back. You watch as he slides his dick in her ass, then he glances up at you. "Well, get back on her face." You straddle her face as he fucks her and she licks your pussy. You glance back occasionally and see how he switches which of her holes he is fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
+											'"OK, no anal." He grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she is still on her back. You watch as he slides his dick into her ass, then he glances up at you. "Well, get back on her face." You straddle her face as he fucks her, and she licks your pussy. You glance back occasionally and see how he switches which of her holes he is fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
 											act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
@@ -444,14 +444,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A56'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some12.jpg"></center>'
-										'When you don''t say anything, he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass, pauses for a moment to let you get used to it. He then slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from you and Anya''s pussy juices, so it slides into you fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
+										'When you don''t say anything, he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass, pausing for a moment to let you get used to it. He then slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from you and Anya''s pussy juices, so it slides into you fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Deep pounding':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some10.jpg"></center>'
-											'Once his dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass, he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass. He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. You can tell he is getting read to cum, and at that moment, Anya has an orgasm rock through her body. Roma then pulls his dick out of your ass.'
+											'Once his dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass, he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass. He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. You can tell he is getting ready to cum, and at that moment, Anya has an orgasm rock through her body. Roma then pulls his dick out of your ass.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'refuse_to_fuck_roma':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You shake your head. "I just want to do oral. Maybe next time." He frowns, obviously a little disappointed, but nods. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking her pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time and you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, seeing him sometimes switch holes. A few moments later, a massive orgasm rocks her body, which causes Roma to start grunting, obviously on the verge of an orgasm himself.'
+	'You shake your head. "I just want to do oral. Maybe next time." He frowns, obviously a little disappointed, but nods. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face, and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time, and you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, seeing him sometimes switch holes. A few moments later, a massive orgasm rocks her body, which causes Roma to start grunting, obviously on the verge of an orgasm himself.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
@@ -484,12 +484,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		minut += 60
 		npc_rel['A33'] += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
-		'Despite the pain from having your cherry popped, you still enjoyed it. Roma changes positions and as he does, he looks down at his dick and notices the blood. "Anya, you didn''t tell me that <<$pcs_nickname>> was a virgin!"'
+		'Despite the pain from having your cherry popped, you still enjoyed it. Roma changes positions, and as he does, he looks down at his dick and notices the blood. "Anya, you didn''t tell me that <<$pcs_nickname>> was a virgin!"'
 		'Anya frantically sits up. "What!!??" She looks at Roma, then to the blood on his dick and then to you. As she looks at you, her eyes grow wide at the realization that her boyfriend just took her little sister''s virginity.'
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell where you thinking?" she asks you angrily.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell were you thinking?" she asks you angrily.'
 		'Seeing their reaction, you start to tear up. "I was thinking I loved you! I was tired of being a virgin and couldn''t think of a better way to lose my virginity!"'
-		'Anya, seeing your tears, gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it." She gives Roma a glare and he leaves.'
+		'Anya, seeing your tears, gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it." She gives Roma a glare, and he leaves.'
 		*nl
 		'Roma gets up to take a shower and finish himself off in there.'
 		'You and Anya end up having a long talk about what just happened and what it means going forward. Your bond, if anything, is now stronger.'
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		act 'Get up': gt 'bedrPar'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some13.jpg"></center>'
-		'Roma pulls you over and onto your back, so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs on the top of you so she is is just above you, with his dick between you. He starts jerking off and mere moments later, cum starts spurting out of his cock. Anya opens her mouth and you follow suit. Most of his cum ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both of your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto your face or into your mouth.'
+		'Roma pulls you over and onto your back so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs on the top of you so she is is just above you, with his dick between you. He starts jerking off, and mere moments later, cum starts spurting out of his cock. Anya opens her mouth, and you follow suit. Most of his cum ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both of your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto your face or into your mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A56', 1
 		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A56', 1
@@ -508,9 +508,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some14.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapses back on the bed. Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you sharing his cum as you kiss. A few moments later, she climbs off you, some of his cum still on your face. She grabs a tissue and starts cleaning her face before offering you one. You follow suit and start cleaning your face and then get dressed. Just as you finish dressing, Roma says "That was a blast girls! we have to do that again." He gives Anya a pleading look as he says it.'
+			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapses back on the bed. Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you sharing his cum as you kiss. A few moments later, she climbs off you, some of his cum still on your face. She grabs a tissue and starts cleaning her face before offering you one. You follow suit and start cleaning your face and then get dressed. Just as you finish dressing, Roma says, "That was a blast girls! We have to do that again." He gives Anya a pleading look as he says it.'
 			'Anya laughs and shakes her head. "Maybe. It depends on how good you are."'
-			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug "I am always good, that''s why you love me." Before she can respond, he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they are getting all romantic, you decide to leave.'
+			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug. "I am always good, that''s why you love me." Before she can respond, he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they are getting all romantic, you decide to leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			cumspclnt = 12
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'