[GRAMMAR] - Second to final touch

locations/KGZstart.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ act 'Play a new game':
 	'PAPA_GANS inc.'
 	'are'
 	'Sundead.'
-	'As harsh and merciless this world. Not that past life was better or worse. All its advantages and disadvantages. You were probably wondering, what kind of a zombie apocalypse, there are pros? I''ll tell you ... Freedom. Freedom of action and freedom of choice, everyone is free to do what really wants. For me, the beginning of the end of the world, was liberation. And even now, I realize that I was only here because of their choice, their freedom.'
+	'As harsh and merciless this world. Not that past life was better or worse. All its advantages and disadvantages. You were probably wondering, what kind of a zombie apocalypse, there are pros? I''ll tell you... Freedom. Freedom of action and freedom of choice, everyone is free to do what really wants. For me, the beginning of the end of the world, was liberation. And even now, I realize that I was only here because of their choice, their freedom.'
 	'In a past life I was an ordinary man:he went to work, met a girl, paying loans and was going to fly on vacation at some resort. On a day when everything changed, I woke up surprisingly early, the sun''s rays coming through the curtains and joyfully heralded a new day, and with it the complete collapse of the old society.'
 	'My girl was not there, then I thought that she had gone to work early. How wrong I was. To my surprise, the apartment was not the light, and I put the coffee brewed in the old. Normally I do not have time to watch it, but that day I decided not to rush to work, and simply enjoy the morning. Fire a couple of balls, said that it would be necessary to go to the grocery store and absorb rather take breakfast and read long deferred detective.'
 	'My peace interrupted some noise outside the front door. I heard heart-rending cries, which ended after a few seconds. Still not understanding what was happening, I grabbed the phone and quickly dialed 911. As the tube was silence, frightening and ruthless, no beeps, no sound at all, just my own echo was given in the endless corridors of radio waves.'

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 						if npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 0 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts. It tastes good!"'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 0 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] >= 1:
-							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "Wow ... I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts... and it tastes familiar..."'
+							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "Wow... I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts... and it tastes familiar..."'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] >= 1:
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "Your milk tastes way better from the source...".'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 							'"It''s okay... It felt kind of good to be honest..." you admit with some embarrassment. "Just... ask next time? Please?"'
 							'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
 							if kid <= 0 and npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] <= 0:
-								'Kolka looks up for short "Wait ... haven''t you said only pregnant women have milk?'
+								'Kolka looks up for short "Wait... haven''t you said only pregnant women have milk?'
 								'You blush a bit "I also said, that it can happen under other circumstances...'
 							end
 							'You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'

locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos7':
 		bumtolik = 8
 		'You calmly carried the plates on the table. Yet because of one of the tables you have not addressed sassy tone:'
 		'- Wow, look what the buffer! They are what size, beauty?'
-		'- What !? But how ... Uh ... I do not mind your business! - You blurt.'
+		'- What !? But how... Uh... I do not mind your business! - You blurt.'
 	end
 	act 'Finish':gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 end

locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														'With trembling hands, you start to pull on your panties. Ninel already slipped her robe back on, only her flushed face betraying her apparent innocence.'
 														'"So... how do you feel?"'
 														'"Ooh... just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
-														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m ... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
+														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
 														'"If you like, we could spend some time together, look for me in the clinic."'
 														'You promise to be sure to find her, clean up and leave.'
 
@@ -1446,7 +1446,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_reception':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/milkbank/milk_reception.jpg"></center>'
 	'The woman at the reception looks at you annoyed and and stands up.'
-	'Nurse at the reception: Yes, yes ... go this way.'
+	'Nurse at the reception: Yes, yes... go this way.'
 	'She waves into a general direction down the hallway.'
 	'Nurse at the reception: There should be a sign on the door, it is only a small room.'
 	if lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] < 1: lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] = 1
@@ -1480,7 +1480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 					'You are blushing a bit, knowing that your breasts feel a bit full today, and answer with a short nod.'
 				else
 					'Woman: Are you here for a donation?'
-					'You: Uhm ... Yes.'
+					'You: Uhm... Yes.'
 				end
 				'The woman nods happily and takes some papers and a pen out of her desk.'
 				'Woman: First of all, you have to sign this. Then we are going to take a sample from you.'
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 					lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', 4, 50)
 					if lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] > 15:
 						'After 15 minutes, the woman detaches the pump, tilting her head a bit disappointed.'
-						'Woman: Hmmm ... this isn''t as much as we expected, but it should do.'
+						'Woman: Hmmm... this isn''t as much as we expected, but it should do.'
 						minut += 15
 						lact_ev['poli_milkedvolume'] = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 4, 15)
 					else

locations/cuminsidereact.qsrc

@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ if eff_contra ! 3:
 		end
 	elseif tmp = 2:
 		if $risk_boy ! '':
-			'You think about the load of sperm <<$risk_boy>> just pumped into your unprotected vagina ... and right now he has no clue.'
+			'You think about the load of sperm <<$risk_boy>> just pumped into your unprotected vagina... and right now he has no clue.'
 		else
-			'You think about the load of sperm swimming in your unprotected vagina ... and right now he has no clue.'
+			'You think about the load of sperm swimming in your unprotected vagina... and right now he has no clue.'
 		end
 	else
 		if $risk_boy ! '':

locations/dachain.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ if $args[0] = '':
 	if komp = 1:'Your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the table.'
 	*nl
 	
-	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 11:'Kopashatsya working in the garden, hmm ... maybe sometime <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos10''">motivate</a> for them to work quicker and smarter.'
+	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 11:'Kopashatsya working in the garden, hmm... maybe sometime <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos10''">motivate</a> for them to work quicker and smarter.'
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 12:'Leave in <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos11''">garden in lingerie and robe.</a>'
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 13 and temp ! daystart:'I wonder how to <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos12''">garden</a>'
 

locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -942,7 +942,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_chat':
 		else
 			act 'No (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-		!! I changed the else condition so it matches up with generic boyfriends, because i think the variable boyfriend doesnt exist ... if it does a third elseif must be added for boyfirend or generic boyfriends and the if conditions must be changed
+		!! I changed the else condition so it matches up with generic boyfriends, because i think the variable boyfriend doesnt exist... if it does a third elseif must be added for boyfirend or generic boyfriends and the if conditions must be changed
 		if NikoVolkovQW >= 5 or fedorKozlovQW >= 1 or pcs_lover ! 0:
 			act 'I have a boyfriend':
 				*clr & cla

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ $pavser = {
 	pcs_mood -= 10
     gs'stat'
     'You entered the room and bowed, after graduating from a deep curtsey.' 
-    'Tryahshuv head, swept ... hair ... colors, came to the middle of the room and did a pirouette - slowly-slowly raised his hands in voskhoschenii room and devouring glance.'
+    'Tryahshuv head, swept... hair... colors, came to the middle of the room and did a pirouette - slowly-slowly raised his hands in voskhoschenii room and devouring glance.'
     'You blinded sunny <<$pcs_nickname>> rained out of the window and the shade seemed to get closer.'
     'And then you notice it. He sat behind the couch against the wall, his face buried in his knees.You cried and,involuntarily raised his hand to his mouth, bit, fingers.'
 	act 'Speak':dynamic $pavser1

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fine_art':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-											'"Hey! ... HEY!!" you yell at her.'
+											'"Hey!... HEY!!" you yell at her.'
 											'She stops her maniacal laughing and finally looks back at you.'
 											'"That''s not the point! The point is that I don''t want to lose my virginity right now!" The woman frowns at you, this time with disappointment.'
 											'"And vhy not? Iz it becauze you have not found ze right man? Not to worry, Alexhandar iz great man. I know. He iz my zon. Zatisfies many girls. He vill-"'

locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 
 				'"I''m Andrei," replies the older man, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 				'"By any chance is your last name <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
-				'"Don''t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
+				'"Don''t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 				*nl
 				'After chatting with them for about half an hour, the hunters begin to get up and gather their things.'
 				'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei.'

locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball4':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/game'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'It seems the coach noticed you weren''t wearing any panties, his eyes lit up and he said turning away: "<<$pcs_lastname>>. Come see me after training. I need to show you UH ... a few things" '
+				'It seems the coach noticed you weren''t wearing any panties, his eyes lit up and he said turning away: "<<$pcs_lastname>>. Come see me after training. I need to show you UH... a few things" '
 				act 'Leave':gs'stat'& gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				act 'Go to the coach''s office': gt 'Voltrenersex', 'start'
 			end

locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_lick':
 	'"Dan, lick my pussy, please." You ask sweetly.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, aren''t you screwy to asking me doing such stuff?"'
 	'"And what''s wrong with that? Are you ashamed to do me nicely?"'
-	'"Yes, it''s unpleasant for me to lick cunt of a slut, God knows how many cocks you have got there today ... So come on! Don''t fuck with me ... Expose your whorish holes! I''m going to fuck you."'
+	'"Yes, it''s unpleasant for me to lick cunt of a slut, God knows how many cocks you have got there today... So come on! Don''t fuck with me... Expose your whorish holes! I''m going to fuck you."'
 	end
 	act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex','cont'
 end
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 			elseif rnd_caught_mom = 2:
 				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "You are naughty again <<$pcs_nickname>>? I begged you not to fuck at every corner, you got fully out of hand, slut!"'
 			elseif rnd_caught_mom = 3:
-				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can see you''ve found a place to spread your legs for guys ... horribly unsanitary."
+				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can see you''ve found a place to spread your legs for guys... horribly unsanitary."
 				"It''s not my fault, the idea, to go here, occurred to the boys. As soon as they finish, I''ll come home and I''ll take a bath." You replied being on your knees and cleaning your messy holes with wet wipes.'
 			elseif rnd_caught_mom = 4:
 				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, instead of fucking the whole town, you should do your homework." "Yes <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''ve done it!"'
@@ -1205,8 +1205,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if rnd_caught_sister = 1 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "You''re such slut, <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
 		if rnd_caught_sister = 2 and pav_slut < 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: <<$rnd_telogg_text>>'
 		if rnd_caught_sister = 2 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: <<$rnd_telogg2_text>>'
-		if rnd_caught_sister = 3:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "I''m running about and searching her high and low ... and it emerges that she is being fucked here. Put a bell on your neck or something, so I could find you easier next time. Give me your keys, filthy slut, I forgot my keys at home. ... Okay! let it be, I''ll do it myself. In your purse? Take out the dick out of your mouth, when an elder inquires you! In your pocket? Ok, I found them. ... If you go into bathroom, clean it all with powder. The last thing I need is being after you by Holy Ghost knocked up."'
-		if rnd_caught_sister = 4 and pav_slut < 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is looking for you, and you are being fucked right here! How long do you need?" "Oh sis, it''s so enjoyable ... another ten minutes they fuck me and then I''ll come right."'
+		if rnd_caught_sister = 3:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "I''m running about and searching her high and low... and it emerges that she is being fucked here. Put a bell on your neck or something, so I could find you easier next time. Give me your keys, filthy slut, I forgot my keys at home. ... Okay! let it be, I''ll do it myself. In your purse? Take out the dick out of your mouth, when an elder inquires you! In your pocket? Ok, I found them. ... If you go into bathroom, clean it all with powder. The last thing I need is being after you by Holy Ghost knocked up."'
+		if rnd_caught_sister = 4 and pav_slut < 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is looking for you, and you are being fucked right here! How long do you need?" "Oh sis, it''s so enjoyable... another ten minutes they fuck me and then I''ll come right."'
 		if rnd_caught_sister = 4 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_sister = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$rnd_namesis_text>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are with clients? How long yet? You''ve to wake up early tomorrow." Your sister turns to the boys that were standing in line. "Have you fucked her already?" "Nope, the first just started."'
 
 		!----
@@ -1243,8 +1243,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 5 and pav_slut < 250:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> Julia Milov, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - <<$rnd_telogg_text>>'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 5 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> Julia Milov, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - <<$rnd_telogg2_text>>'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 6:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Young boys notice you. Nudging each other, they are clicking on their phone what''s happening. You overhear their talk vaguely: "Look!... Look!... Not here, over there!... There is... Oh shit!"... "Shoot! Shoot! Faster!"... "Holy shit!", I''ve never seen a woman being fucked in real." "What the fuck?"... "That''s a cunt!" "Can it be done also in the ass?" "Idiot, they''re able almost whole forearm insert there. Heifers want it so. I''ve seen pics at Kirian''s." "Don''t brag!"... "Let''s no quarrel!"'
-		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW < 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, uncle Misha <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Oh dear! What kind of people! Like mother, like daughter! Exactly the same! Boobs exposed, legs apart. And the eyes are so cunning ... Come to me then, we need to talk."'
-		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW >= 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Your brother''s football buddies notice you, when they are walking past you. They stop and start talking about you intensively: "Oh, my fuck, we treat her like a princess: only in her mouth... thank you... please... see you! It turns out that she is quite a prostitute. Oh shit, if we had known it then, we would have '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_sextext2')+' that ripper in one gate all three of us, as we had wanted always. Well... Svetochka... It isn''t hard for you to help us, is it? ... After all, you are Kolya''s sister... moreover older. Cavaliers, fuck ... Now we get all. After all, they don''t ask whores, they bang them right with their cocks, do they? Am I right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" ... "Hurrah, she nodded! Oooh, you''re such our sweetie! Fuck yeah! We''re lucky: We have got our cum dumpster now. See you soon, fuckhole! Prepare your butt hole! Let''s delight Kolya. He has been always jacking off dreaming about her. ... I call dibs on her ass!" "Can she hold three at once in her mouth? We should try it long ago. Fuck, we were too shy to suggest it, frigging gentlemen!"'
+		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW < 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, uncle Misha <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Oh dear! What kind of people! Like mother, like daughter! Exactly the same! Boobs exposed, legs apart. And the eyes are so cunning... Come to me then, we need to talk."'
+		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW >= 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Your brother''s football buddies notice you, when they are walking past you. They stop and start talking about you intensively: "Oh, my fuck, we treat her like a princess: only in her mouth... thank you... please... see you! It turns out that she is quite a prostitute. Oh shit, if we had known it then, we would have '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_sextext2')+' that ripper in one gate all three of us, as we had wanted always. Well... Svetochka... It isn''t hard for you to help us, is it?... After all, you are Kolya''s sister... moreover older. Cavaliers, fuck... Now we get all. After all, they don''t ask whores, they bang them right with their cocks, do they? Am I right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" ... "Hurrah, she nodded! Oooh, you''re such our sweetie! Fuck yeah! We''re lucky: We have got our cum dumpster now. See you soon, fuckhole! Prepare your butt hole! Let''s delight Kolya. He has been always jacking off dreaming about her. ... I call dibs on her ass!" "Can she hold three at once in her mouth? We should try it long ago. Fuck, we were too shy to suggest it, frigging gentlemen!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 8:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'You are approached by a charwoman in the stairwell: "Well boys, step back and let your toy have a rest for a while. Don''t throw away bottle, just put them on window sill when you''re done. I''ll take them away. Don''t make a mess with scumbags everywhere! I gather up after you on half a bucket each day! Better, don''t use them at all: it will be much pleasurable for you and your smasher without them or stack them neatly into her purse: she can take her trophies home with her, when she is done. Oi! Oi!!! Fuckbunny! Swallow, don''t spit on the floor! Did you understand? Washing the floor after every whore, I would ruin my health. Don''t drain your pussy onto the floor otherwise I''ll make you lick all the scum!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 9:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, Aunt Luda <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, how is your sex life? Just think, it was only recently, when a tweeny, bows in her hair, blushing and stuttering, bought pads in my pharmacy for the first time. And now her lap squelches here all around so one can hear even on the street. You grew up very early. You better not stand like doggie here, fool. Do you know, what distinguishes sluts from decent girls? Scraped knees. Come for Green, I''ll give it to you for a half price, goof!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 10:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, a mother with her little daughter notice you. The mother takes daughter by the hand and tells her: "Turn away and don''t watch! This girl just did not obey her mama and that''s why she''s punished. Do you hear her calling her mama now? Obey mama and you''ll never end up like her!" She turns to you: "Couldn''t you wait, until you get home, slut? Do you have to shake buttocks just here? By the way, children walk here."'
@@ -1548,7 +1548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if txt_sex_hj = 1:$txt_sex_hj = 'You take his still soft cock into your hand and it starts growing noticeably. You begin a hand job feasting your eyes on his strong prick.'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 2:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> shoves his cock into your hand. Your fingers grip on his fat elastic trunk shakily. He tells you to hold it firmer.'
 		'"Don''t release it and move your hand up and down..." He takes hold showing how to do it.'
-		'"Not so sharply ... yes so. Don''t pull ... Yes,that''s it. Great! ... More ... More.!"'
+		'"Not so sharply... yes so. Don''t pull... Yes,that''s it. Great!... More... More.!"'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 3:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> asks you to do hand job to him. You take his dick firmly into your hand and start to rub the skin back and forth.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_hj>>'
 		killvar '$text_sex_hj'
@@ -1602,7 +1602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		You obey dumbly, and you get on all fours. You like to be fucked in this way.
 		"<<$pcs_nickname>> bend backwards and lower your head!"
 		"Yes, <<$boydesc>>." You say excitedly and arch your back more and lower your head. Your bum move up more and your pussy become closer and easier to reach that appeals to him. <<$boydesc>> gets on the floor and parts your legs to sides and he kneels between them. Thereafter, he widely stretches your butt cheeks, slowly runs his shaft along your wet pussy and then shoves it deeply in.
-		"Mmmm ... aaah ... mmm," you moaned. 
+		"Mmmm... aaah... mmm," you moaned. 
 		<<$boydesc>> puts both hands on your bum and starts plowing your pussy with his prick with delight.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy = 5:$txt_sex_doggy = 'Holding your waist, <<$boydesc>> is banging you, slowly increasing his pace. You are diligently fucking back moaning with pleasure and in quest to please him. Your boobs are swaying and your pink swollen nipples are sticking out seductively. You feel as his strong member alternately fills and pleasantly stretches your pussy at one moment and then it gets out fully. You feel like a whore and you like it.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy = 6:$txt_sex_doggy = '<<$boydesc>> turns you, prompts you to bend forward and without ceremony he starts banging your pussy. Slaps beoame louder and louder. His chest and back are glistening with sweat, his fingers dig into your butt and the thrusts become stronger and shorter. <<$boydesc>> is not pulling out his prick fully from your cunt but just a bit. His cock is in your box completely and still keeps pounding. It seems that he won''t stop.'
@@ -1614,7 +1614,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_doggy_anal':
 		txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed in only twitching and screaming, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
-		"Oh yess! ... mmm ... deeper! ... mmmm..."
+		"Oh yess!... mmm... deeper!... mmmm..."
 		He grabs your hips and starts banging increasing his pace gradualy. You diligently fuck back wanting to get even more on his shaft. You are insanely excited and serve him with pleasure.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 1:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> is kneeling between your legs and shoving his prick into your ass hole up to his balls.You are on all fours having your bum lifted and you are fucking back in pace and moaning with pleasure. Your lover is propelled even more by your moaning. He is fucking you in silence for a while and then begins moaning excitedly.
 		"You have got a nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you, still keeping his pace."
@@ -1657,7 +1657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		You turn on your back and invitingly spread your legs. He doesn''t need to be asked twice. <<$boydesc>> lies down at you and his member plungs into your wet tunnel. You clasp his body with your legs as if you were afraid that he leaves you. <<$boydesc>> starts moving rhythmically gradually increasing his pace and you are fucking back actively. You moan loudly and scream when he shoves his prick extra deep into your squelching slit.'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 2:$txt_sex_miss = '<<$boydesc>> puts you down on your back, he spreads your legs with his pelvis to sides and he lies down his stomach at you. He penetrates you groaning and watching his member sliding fast into your love hole, softly parting your nether lips. Elastic walls of your cunt softly envelope and captivate his member. He leans his hands on the bed hanging down over you, looking into your face and you keep your eyes on him. You are quite skilled, despite your age. When he is in you, you tightly squeeze your feet beneath him and to further stimulate his member with your hips. He is screwing you experiences a special gripping pleasure, being tightly captured with your hips.'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 3:$txt_sex_miss = 'His member is tossing in your cunt like a crazy bull, you sense his hard trunk every time when <<$boydesc>> literally stamps your tender groin with his pelvis. He tenses up somewhat and starts banging you tirelessly, what make his dick quite hot.'
-		if txt_sex_miss = 4:$txt_sex_miss = 'You are lying on your back, <<$boydesc>> starts running along yours nether lips with his bare glans. You feel very ticklish sensation, when he rubs your clit. Later, when he reaches your hole, he starts dipping there a bit more, ramming several times and then he gets out again. Gradually the deepness increases and finally he is fucking you fully. To say true, the position isn''t very comfortable, but on the other hand he can see the whole body of his moaning mate and it was worth seeing. Suddenly you moans : "More! ... More! ... Come on!"'
+		if txt_sex_miss = 4:$txt_sex_miss = 'You are lying on your back, <<$boydesc>> starts running along yours nether lips with his bare glans. You feel very ticklish sensation, when he rubs your clit. Later, when he reaches your hole, he starts dipping there a bit more, ramming several times and then he gets out again. Gradually the deepness increases and finally he is fucking you fully. To say true, the position isn''t very comfortable, but on the other hand he can see the whole body of his moaning mate and it was worth seeing. Suddenly you moans : "More!... More!... Come on!"'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 5:$txt_sex_miss = 'Your pussy is well greased and his member slides easily into your love hole. You feel as his mushroom head is stretching inner walls of your fanny. You let out moan with each penetration. It doesn''t last long and you get accustomed. You put your hands on his buttock and start set the pace. "Faster! faster!" Your whisper is melting into moaning and you tilt your head back. <<$boydesc>> doesn''t contain himself and he rams his prick so deep so your pubes touched. You are breathing fast and heavily through your teeth. After a while <<$boydesc>> is fucking you openly. In turn, you seize his back and moan monotonously.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_miss>>'
 		killvar '$text_sex_miss'

locations/gopskver.qsrc

@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'BjBeerPhone':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/gop/bjbeerphone.jpg"></center>'
 	'You spread your <<$liptalk>> and wrap them around Vitek''s cock. At that moment, Dan grunts: "Open wider, slut" and begins to unceremoniously cram his dick into your mouth as well, stretching it to the limit. You try to protest, but the guys just laugh at the comical sounds you make with two cocks in your mouth.'
 	'Suddenly Vasily pulls out his phone and begins to record a video, while he comments on what is happening: "Hello everyone, and welcome to Pavlovsk News! Our special guest today is the one and only <<$gnikname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Say hi to our viewers, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-	'"Mvhr ... mflm ..." you try to say something, but the cocks in your mouth prevent you from talking. The boys firmly hold your head in place, and continue to fuck your mouth with their two cocks.'
+	'"Mvhr... mflm ..." you try to say something, but the cocks in your mouth prevent you from talking. The boys firmly hold your head in place, and continue to fuck your mouth with their two cocks.'
 	'Vasily continues: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve been told that you''re doing this, for a beer! Do you really like beer, or do you just like sucking cocks so much?"'
 	'Dan grabs your <<$pcs_haircol>> <<$curly>> hair in his fist, and moves your head so it looks like you''re nodding yes.'
 	'Vasily piles it on some more: "There you have it, dear viewers! <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> is happily sucking three cocks, for the low low price of one beer! Where else can you find such a cheap slut?"'

locations/gschool_chats.qsrc

@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			end
 			'Stasya glances at Bella. "My god, she is an absolute social disaster. Really no sense of style at all." Then she turns towards Andrey. "If I ever wore something like that, would you still love me?"'
 			'Andrey shakes his head. "Hell no, a man has to have his standards after all.", which just gets more and more of them to laugh.'
-			'Then Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe you''re lost? The nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hang out in. "Perhaps you would find those who might appreciate your sense of ... style there." Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar and Erast either ignore what is going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
+			'Then Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe you''re lost? The nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hang out in. "Perhaps you would find those who might appreciate your sense of... style there." Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar and Erast either ignore what is going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You walk over to the lockers where you think you heard the noise come from. You get closer, look through the vents in the lockers and listen closely. As you get to one it sounds like ... someone breathing. Could someone be inside one of the lockers? "Is anyone there?" you ask and hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
+					'You walk over to the lockers where you think you heard the noise come from. You get closer, look through the vents in the lockers and listen closely. As you get to one it sounds like... someone breathing. Could someone be inside one of the lockers? "Is anyone there?" you ask and hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
 					act 'Open the locker': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_lockerroom'
 					act 'Ignore it':
 						*clr & cla

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/paulpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be ... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -854,7 +854,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 					'Rolan looks down, "Oh! You mean my jacket?"'
 					'You stare at Mr. Matveev for a moment. "How do you eve-never mind... Well i assume you enjoyed that?"'
 					'"It was... sweet tasting. What flavor was it?"'
-					'"It was white ... i assume it was vanilla."'
+					'"It was white... i assume it was vanilla."'
 					'"Vanilla? I think I''ve heard of that before. Tastes different from beef though. Very sweet."'
 					'You keep yourself from shuddering at the thought of meat flavored ice cream. "I''m no expert on ice cream flavors but i think that the sweetness comes from the sugar..."'
 					'"Sugar, huh? I should add that to my foods..." You don''t doubt he would.'

locations/hotel_resep.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			menu_off = 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/resep.girl0,'+rand(0,10)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You approach the reception desk, and ask the girl: "About the job you told me about ... I''d like to get your referral."'
+			'You approach the reception desk, and ask the girl: "About the job you told me about... I''d like to get your referral."'
 			'"Great. Do you have my fee of 5.000 <b>₽</b> with you?"'
 
 			act 'No':

locations/housecall.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel03.jpg"></center>'
 				'You open your mouth and the doctor examines your sore throat.'
-				'She uses a tongue depressor to look in your mouth. "Hmmm ... your throat is very red and inflamed. Now I need to take your temperature."'
+				'She uses a tongue depressor to look in your mouth. "Hmmm... your throat is very red and inflamed. Now I need to take your temperature."'
 
 				act 'Take temperature':
 					cla
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel03.jpg"></center>'
 				'You opened your mouth and the doctor examines your sore throat.'
-				'She uses a tongue depressor to look in your mouth. "Hmmm ... your throat is very red and inflamed. Now we need to take your temperature."'
+				'She uses a tongue depressor to look in your mouth. "Hmmm... your throat is very red and inflamed. Now we need to take your temperature."'
 
 				act 'Let her take your temperature':
 					cla
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel19.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lay there panting, sweating and exhausted on your bed. Ninel snuggles as the two of you share gentle kiss.'
 							'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
-							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
+							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 							'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
 							'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you were sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 

locations/huntersex.qsrc

@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexafterstrip3':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/dance/dancesexoi2.'+rand(0,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		'You wrap your lips	 around Igor''s member...'
-		gs 'boyStat', 'A173' &! Igor ... need data for oral procedure
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A173' &! Igor... need data for oral procedure
 		gs 'oral','start'
 		'You try to swallow as Igor''s dick as deeply as possible and he seems to like it...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'

locations/korr.qsrc

@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ $ninel0 = {
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel00.jpg"></center>'
 	'You open the door. Standing on the threshold is a pretty young girl with a medical bag in her hand. You greet her.'
 	'"Hello, my name is Ninel. - I do the home visits for the clinic. Where is the patient?"'
-	'"That would be me ... kha-kha-kha."'
+	'"That would be me... kha-kha-kha."'
 	'"I see. First, we need to get you back into bed."'
 
 	act 'Follow the doctor in the bedroom and lay down':

locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30 and dinner_day ! daystart and indorf = 0:
 			'Kolka freezes in place, but seeing that she is pissed he decides he doesn''t want to be the one to tell her about your reputation and just says. "Sorry."'
 			'Your stepfather clears his throat and quickly changes the subject, talking about how his work went. After that, you have a fairly enjoyable dinner.'
 		elseif pav_slut > 150:
-			'You start to respond to him when your mother interrupts. "She is too young to worry about that and ... we talked about it." She gives you a meaningful glance and you shut your mouth.'
+			'You start to respond to him when your mother interrupts. "She is too young to worry about that and... we talked about it." She gives you a meaningful glance and you shut your mouth.'
 			'Kolka then chimes in. "Like any boy would date her when she sucks them all off anyways."'
 			'You mother turns towards Kolka. "That''s not funny." Then she glances at you. "She might have made some mistakes, but she is trying to be a better girl now. Now apologize to your sister right now!" Anya just smirks.'
 			'Kolka freezes in place. "Sorry."'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -1232,7 +1232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 					'You laugh at what she said. "I already buy them there."'
 					'Your mother shakes her head: "What? Luda never told me that."'
 					'You smile to her. "I asked her not to, she knew I was going to do it either way and she thought I should be safe. So she sold me the stuff and promised not to tell you."'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks furious for a moment then just deflates and nods. "She is right, we can''t stop you and it is better if you use protection. I just wish she would have told me, but I understand. I just wish ... I had been the one to talk to you about this instead, now." She says as she looks at you sadly.'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks furious for a moment then just deflates and nods. "She is right, we can''t stop you and it is better if you use protection. I just wish she would have told me, but I understand. I just wish... I had been the one to talk to you about this instead, now." She says as she looks at you sadly.'
 					'You give her another hug. "We are talking now." With that you turn and leave.'
 
 					act 'Return to the hallway':gt'korrPar'

locations/nichChore.qsrc

@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 											cla & *clr
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/gala/slave/maid3.jpg"></center>'
 											'She bends you over and pulls your skirt up.'
-											'"Don''t ... be ... lazy ... you ... stupid ... cunt!"'
+											'"Don''t... be... lazy... you... stupid... cunt!"'
 											'She emphasizes each word with a smack on your butt. She repeats her sentence several times.'
 											'"Do you understand? Yes? Then back to work!"'
 											'You pull down your skirt and get back up.'
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/gala/slave/maid3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You bend over and pull your skirt up.'
-							'"Don''t ... be ... lazy ... you ... stupid ... cunt!"'
+							'"Don''t... be... lazy... you... stupid... cunt!"'
 							'She emphasizes each word with a smack on your butt. She repeats her sentence several times.'
 							'"Do you understand? Yes? Then back to work!"'
 							'You pull down your skirt and get back up.'

locations/nichTaras.qsrc

@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'katinka':
 					'"Excuse me?"'
 					'"Psssst. Please talk quitely. Master will be mad when he finds out you were talking to me." she looks and sounds terrified.'
 					'"Who are you? Why are you here?"'
-					'"I ... I ... I am nothing but my Masters little slut. I am here to serve him." a tear rolls down her cheek as she says these lines which are obviously not her own thoughts.'
+					'"I... I... I am nothing but my Masters little slut. I am here to serve him." a tear rolls down her cheek as she says these lines which are obviously not her own thoughts.'
 					'<i>She doesn''t seem to be ready to talk about this topic. Maybe you should ask her again at another time.</i>'
 					xgt 'nichTaras','katinka','talkEnd'
 				end

locations/npc_intro.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # npc_intro
 
 !! this procedure is designed for introduction of any npc either with standard or with custom description
-!! $ARGS[0] is ID number of npc ... required parameter
+!! $ARGS[0] is ID number of npc... required parameter
 !! $ARGS[1] is an image path
 !! $ARGS[2] is a color name of the title  e.g. 'red'
 !! $ARGS[3] is $npc_notes replacement

locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 		'you grin and shake your head, opening the door wide to let her walk in. "Olu this is my friend Nush."'
 		'He smiles to her and stands up. "Hello, you are very pretty."'
 		'She walks over to him and starts stripping. "You''re not so bad yourself and <<$pcs_nickname>> told me you have a massive cock." She practically purrs.'
-		'He nods. "It is true, very big, how you say ... massive yes?"'
+		'He nods. "It is true, very big, how you say... massive yes?"'
 		'She stops next to him stripped down to just her underwear and grabs his crotch and her eyes get big and she grins. "Massive might be a understatement. I don''t know if it will fit but i want to try." She turns and starts rubbing her butt against his crotch. "I want you to tear up my tight little white holes with your monster black dick, I want you to fuck me hard and rough and rip my tight little holes up."'
 		'He grins, obviously liking the idea of that. "Ok I no be gentle with you."'
 	else

locations/pav_clinic.qsrc

@@ -1378,7 +1378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 					'Nurse: You don''t look like you ever had a child, how come you are lactating?'
 					'You are surprised by the sudden and precise analysis of the nurse.'
 					'You: How... how do you know?'
-					'Nurse: I''ve been working here for ages. Trust me ... I can tell by the smell. Now why are you lactating?'
+					'Nurse: I''ve been working here for ages. Trust me... I can tell by the smell. Now why are you lactating?'
 				elseif preg = 0 and pregtimes = 0 and pcs_gpolimilkdonation <= 0 and lactation['pc_aware'] <= 0:
 					'You walk up to the nurse'
 					'You: Uhm, Hello...'
@@ -1464,7 +1464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 							if preg = 0 and pregtimes = 0:
 								pcs_gpolimilkdonation = 2
 								if lactation['induced'] = 1:
-									'You: Erm ... I used a breast pump on myself...'
+									'You: Erm... I used a breast pump on myself...'
 									'You blush a bit from embarresment, while telling it to her.'
 								else
 									'You: I don''t really now... it just started some day.'
@@ -1519,7 +1519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 										'Nurse: Okay... it seems you are able to make enough milk for a 50ml donation, but you could have trouble to breastfeed a baby properly.'
 									else
 										'You have trouble to fill the bottles to the first mark. The nurse shakes her head disappointed.'
-										'Nurse: Mhmm ... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come here and get yourself pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
+										'Nurse: Mhmm... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come here and get yourself pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
 									end
 									'The nurse detaches the pump and allows you to dress up again.'
 									if lact_ev['gpoli_milkedvolume'] > 500:
@@ -1552,7 +1552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 								end
 							else
 								pcs_gpolimilkdonation = 2
-								'You: Well ... I don''t have a kid here... I was just looking around for a bit'
+								'You: Well... I don''t have a kid here... I was just looking around for a bit'
 								'You look a bit awkward at the nurse as you try to explain yourself.'
 								'The nurse nods at you professionally, then pulls some paper together, while she looks really thoughful. She then looks up at you and starts to speak.'
 								'Nurse: Have you ever thought of donating your breast milk?'
@@ -1603,7 +1603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 										'Nurse: Okay... it seems you are able to make enough milk for a 50ml donation, but you could have trouble to breastfeed a baby properly.'
 									else
 										'You have trouble to fill the bottles to the first mark. The nurse shakes her head disappointed.'
-										'Nurse: Mhmm ... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come here and get yourself pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
+										'Nurse: Mhmm... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come here and get yourself pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
 									end
 									'The nurse detaches the pump and allows you to dress up again.'
 									if lact_ev['gpoli_milkedvolume'] > 500:
@@ -1690,7 +1690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 							'Nurse: Okay... it seems you are able to make enough milk for a donation, but you could have trouble to breastfeed a baby properly.'
 						else
 							'You have trouble to fill the bottles to the first mark. The nurse shakes her head disappointed.'
-							'Nurse: Mhmm ... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come and be pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
+							'Nurse: Mhmm... your breasts don''t seem to make enough milk. You can still come and be pumped, but we need at least 50ml for a valid donation.'
 						end
 						'The nurse detaches the pump and allows you to dress up again.'
 						if lact_ev['gpoli_milkedvolume'] > 500:

locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc

@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 					if rolanpantyconfession ! 1:
 						'Well he''s a good man after all...'
 					else
-					'Well maybe he''s a good man after all ... even though he steals panties...'
+					'Well maybe he''s a good man after all... even though he steals panties...'
 					end
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end

locations/preSYS.qsrc

@@ -1314,7 +1314,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Ugly duckling</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/sys/altstart23.jpg"></center>'
-	'Some girls blossom early and some have natural good looks...you got neither. In fact, you seem to have been cursed with an androgynous face and body. You have been mistaken for a boy more times than you would care to admit. You have never learned to use makeup, but maybe you should. It might help make people realize you are indeed a girl.'
+	'Some girls blossom early and some have natural good looks... you got neither. In fact, you seem to have been cursed with an androgynous face and body. You have been mistaken for a boy more times than you would care to admit. You have never learned to use makeup, but maybe you should. It might help make people realize you are indeed a girl.'
 	*nl
 	'Your body seemed to have grown out of sync, leaving you looking odd and, at best, unattractive for most of your life. Now in your teens, your body is starting to even out in growth but you are still very androgynous and you are still considered by most to be ugly. Your lack of good looks has made you a social pariah. Nobody seems to like you or want to spend time with you unless they are making fun of you.'
 	act 'Select another': gt 'preSYS', 'charselect'

locations/preTG.qsrc

@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepPRE':
 		*clr
 		clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/tg/povpre.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Fuck," you say and immediately shut your mouth again. Your voice ... it''s so feminine. Tatiana giggles.'
+		'"Fuck," you say and immediately shut your mouth again. Your voice... it''s so feminine. Tatiana giggles.'
 		*nl
 		'"This is the first time I changed the gender of a person, therefore I just HAD to see your reaction. Totally worth it. But you turned out beautiful. For a first try that is of course. I miscalculated something, for example due to sharp hormonal change you have bad acme on your face and I failed to change your eyes and lips. On the bright side, your body will change much faster than one of a natural born woman. That means it will be easier to gain and lose weight and change facial features. All in all you turned quite well. By the way, your new ''equipment'' down there is fully functional, so if you don''t want to be a mother, you should think about using contraceptives."'
 		*nl

locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 
 
 
-!!Check *clr & cla ... Adjust pictures etc.
+!!Check *clr & cla... Adjust pictures etc.
 
 
 

locations/rolanbath.qsrc

@@ -720,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryOff':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanbusy1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Shit! It''s Rolan! ...when did he enter?'
+			'Shit! It''s Rolan!... when did he enter?'
 			act 'Close curtain (0:05)':
 				cla
 				*clr

locations/sexm.qsrc

@@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 			money = 0
 			komp = 0
 			'while getting up you could see in the corner of the room your husband giving blow after blow to your lover, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> was trying hard to escape out the door, finally he succeeds and he runs out of the apartment at a breakneck pace.'
-			'<<$husName>> looked at you, "Here ... you ... whore ... cock ... and pussy ... and ass ... and in your mouth." he says putting a strong emphasis on every word. At the end of the last word, he kicks you in the face, rendering you unconscious. You woke up two hours later. Your husband was gone and so was all of his stuff. Some of your stuff was missing too'
+			'<<$husName>> looked at you, "Here... you... whore... cock... and pussy... and ass... and in your mouth." he says putting a strong emphasis on every word. At the end of the last word, he kicks you in the face, rendering you unconscious. You woke up two hours later. Your husband was gone and so was all of his stuff. Some of your stuff was missing too'
 
 			act 'Leave': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 

locations/sistersleep.qsrc

@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 								*nl
 								'"Well... when you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we... REALLLLYYYYY... need... mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay... mmmmm..." she sighs as she leans in and kisses you.'
 								*nl
-								'Once you break the kiss she adds. "OK, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can ... when we really need it, just tell the other one OK?" You nod and agree to not wake up her anymore, besides her being into it from the start would be better anyways. She rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night." she tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
+								'Once you break the kiss she adds. "OK, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can... when we really need it, just tell the other one OK?" You nod and agree to not wake up her anymore, besides her being into it from the start would be better anyways. She rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night." she tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'incest'
 								gs 'arousal', 'forplay', 3, 'incest'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 3, 'incest'

locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 	'Huh? Oh yeah! How could you forget? You were about to do a photoshoot for an new essential oil with her. It seems you dozed off for a moment, but what were you to do? Tatiana is a professional masseuse, so it''s hard not to get carried away.'
 	'"Okay! Let''s start with the oil, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	'A freezing sensation spreads down your back as Tatiana pours the oil over you. Its coldness seeps into your spine and travels up into your head, making you forget.'
-	'...Huh? ...Didn''t you have to do something?'
+	'...Huh?... Didn''t you have to do something?'
 	'"Hey! Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>! The guys are gone! Tell me... Doesn''t this give you ideas?"'
 	'Tatiana turns your face up and sits on your lap, her robe nowhere to be seen as a mischievous smile crosses her face. She bends over, and her cold lips close over your left nipple.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'

locations/train_incidental.qsrc

@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 			if temp_var > 15:
 				milkedvolume = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 2, 15)
 				'As you open your eyes again, you see the baby suckle on your left breast, the small lips kneading your areola over and over. The tingling feeling fading away, the kneading of the small mouth intensifies for a bit before the baby latches off on its own, making an unsatisfied noise. You make the baby switch breasts and you continue to breastfeed until the baby latches off again.'
-				'You speak up: Sorry ... I don''t think he was getting enough...'
+				'You speak up: Sorry... I don''t think he was getting enough...'
 				if milkedvolume >= 50000:
 					'The man nods, smiling a bit: At least this will help for the rest of the train ride'
 				else
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 			if pcs_firstbabybreastfeeding <=0:'It feels really great to breastfeed. It is relaxing in a way you haven''t thought of yet.'
 			'The baby is drinking from you for at least <<temp_var>> minutes. You look up to the father.'
 			if vidage <= 19:
-				'The man looks at your breasts and the baby in amazement: Wow ... you really seem to have enough milk for that. How much do you make?'
+				'The man looks at your breasts and the baby in amazement: Wow... you really seem to have enough milk for that. How much do you make?'
 			else
 				'The man looks at your breasts and the baby: You really seem to have enough milk for that. How much do you make?'
 			end
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 				'You unlatch the baby and hand it to the father, then you cover yourself up. The man thanks you for the help.'
 				act 'Finish':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			elseif temp_var < 12:
-				'You think about it and nod your head while answering: "Uhm ... I think I produce a fair amount."'
+				'You think about it and nod your head while answering: "Uhm... I think I produce a fair amount."'
 				if lactation['breastmm'] >= 500000:
 					'Adding to that: I could fill up a beer glass, when my breasts feel engorged, I think, haha.'
 					'You smile cutely and giggle a bit. You notice how the mans eyes widen from your answer and how he blush.'
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 						'You grab your right breast with your right hand and pull it out of your top, slightly weighting it in your hand.'
 						'You whisper: My breast milk ...'
 						if vidage <=16:
-							'The man looks nervously at you. Shaking is head: No, no ... you are too young for that...'
+							'The man looks nervously at you. Shaking is head: No, no... you are too young for that...'
 							'You lean in: ...but not to young to breastfeed your son?'
 							'Offering your breast to him again: Come on, it is no big deal...'
 						end

locations/zsoft_gopskverGorSlut.qsrc

@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/gop/bjbeerphone.jpg"></center>
 					You spread your <<$liptalk>> and wrap them around Vitek''s cock. At that moment, Dan grunts: "Open wider, slut" and begins to unceremoniously cram his dick into your mouth as well. You try to protest, but the guys just laugh at the comical sounds you make with two cocks in your mouth.
 					Suddenly Vasily pulls out his phone and begins to record a video, while he comments on what is happening: "Hello everyone, and welcome to Pavlovsk News! Our special guest today is the one and only <<$gnikname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Say hi to our viewers, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"
-					"Mvhr ... mflm ..." you try to say something, but the cocks in your mouth prevent you from talking. The boys firmly hold your head in place, and continue to fuck your mouth with their two cocks.
+					"Mvhr... mflm ..." you try to say something, but the cocks in your mouth prevent you from talking. The boys firmly hold your head in place, and continue to fuck your mouth with their two cocks.
 					Vasily continues: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve been told that you''re doing this, for a beer! Do you really like beer, or do you just like sucking cocks so much?"
 					Dan grabs your <<$pcs_haircol>> <<$curly>> hair in his fist, and moves your head so it looks like you''re nodding yes.
 					Vasily piles it on some more: "There you have it, dear viewers! <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> is happily sucking three cocks, for the low low price of one beer! Where else can you find such a cheap slut?"