Merge branch 'ml-dev'

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -1475,42 +1475,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Truckers':
 	VK = rand (1,6)
 	if VK = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'You approach the trucker and he immediately notices you then gives you a warm smile as he says, "Hey there missy. How are you doing this fine day?" You reply, "I''m doing well." He then says, "Hey why don''t you sit down with me and have a meal? On me."'
 		else
 			'You approach the trucker and he immediately notices you then gives you a warm smile as he says, "<<$NikoSlutName>>! It''s great to see you again. How are you doing this fine day?" You reply, "I''m doing well." He then says, "Hey why don''t you sit down with me and have a meal? On me."'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/5.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'As you approach the trucker, he gives you a very friendly smile as he pulls up a stool for you to sit on. You decide to take him up on his offer and sit next to him before he says, "Hey there pretty lady. You seem new here. Let me treat you to a meal."'
 		else
 			'As you approach the trucker, he gives you a very friendly smile as he pulls up a stool for you to sit on. You decide to take him up on his offer and sit next to him before he says, "Hey there pretty lady. I don''t see your boyfriend here. I assume you are here for a meal. Let me treat you."'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/6.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'You take a seat next to the trucker and he takes a look at you then says, "Hey baby, what is a little thing like you doing here. Shouldn''t you be at school or at home or something?" You try to ignore him, realizing that he has nothing interesting to say.'
 		else
 			'You take a seat next to the trucker and he takes a look at you then says, "Hey baby, I remember you. You are that slut that was here before. I would ask you to suck my dick but I have work to do right now. Maybe later eh?" You then shrug before walking away.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/7.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'You approach the trucker who doesn''t seem to notice you at first then slightly recoils when he see you. He then adjust his cap before saying, "Oh hey there. Have we met? Oh where are my manners? My name is Daniel and I am here visiting an old friend of mine, he owns this fine establishment. Anyway I need to get going now. Take care of yourself missy."'
 		else
 			'You approach the trucker who doesn''t seem to notice you at first then slightly recoils when he see you. He then adjust his cap before saying, "Oh hey, it''s you. Your boyfriend is not with you. I assume that means you are not here on business huh? It''s okay, I am just here visiting an old friend of mine, he owns this fine establishment. Anyway I need to get going now. Take care of yourself missy."'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/8.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'You walk up to the trucker as he looks you over before saying, "What brings a cute girl like yourself out here? Shouldn''t you be in the town instead of with a bunch of old truckers?" He chuckles a bit before adding, "I''m just kidding. Make yourself at home comfortable and steer clear of the bikers that come around here at night. A young girl like you don''t want to get tangled with them."'
 		else
 			'You walk up to the trucker as he looks you over before saying, "So if it isn''t <<$NikoSlutName>>. What brings you out here without your boyfriend? Are you here on business or just to get yourself a good meal before heading back to town?" You reply, "I''m was just passing through." The trucker nods then says, "Well order yourself a good meal and steer clear of the bikers that come around here at night. A young girl like you don''t want to get tangled with them."'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/9.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'See one of the truckers checking you out as you approach he then says, "Whoa what is suck a pretty thing like yourself doing here? Should you be playing with your friends?" You shake your head and walk away, feeling a bit annoyed at his comments.'
 		else
 			'See one of the truckers checking you out as you approach he then says, "Whoa it''s <<$NikoSlutName>>. Didn''t think I''d see you here without that boy you travel with. If you are here for business then I''m afraid I can''t stay long. I need to get back on the road and make a few deliveries. Maybe another time sweetheart." He waves at you then goes back to eating his food.'
@@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bikers':
 	VK = rand (1,4)
 	if VK = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'As you approach the biker, his eyes light up and he says, "Hello miss. You look great today. Here take a seat." He then moves his duffel bag off the seat next to him then gives you a warm smile. You sit next to him and he says, "Hey do you hear that?" You listen for a second before you hear a funny voice saying, "Hey there pretty lady, I would ask you to bone but that would be a total bone head decision." You look over your shoulder to see a little skeleton figure that the biker was holding. You giggle as he says, "I knew that would make you laugh and I alway like to see a pretty girl laugh. Here let me treat you to a meal. I''ll get you a big burger."'
 		else
 			'As you approach the biker, his eyes light up and he says, "<<$NikoSlutName>>, it''s good to see you again. Here take a seat." He then moves his duffel bag off the seat next to him then gives you a warm smile. You sit next to him and he says, "Hey do you hear that?" You listen for a second before you hear a funny voice saying, "Hey there pretty lady, I would ask you to bone but that would be a total bone head decision." You look over your shoulder to see a little skeleton figure that the biker was holding. You giggle as he says, "I knew that would make you laugh and I alway like to see a pretty girl laugh. Here let me treat you to a meal. I''ll get you a big burger."'
@@ -1540,7 +1540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bikers':
 		'You walk up to the biker and he looks up at you and says, "What do you want? If you are here to tell me about how I am the father of your kid then you can go fuck off right now. I don''t give a shit about any kid of mine." He then turns away from you, so you walk away feeling confused and annoyed.'
 	elseif VK = 3:	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/4.jpg"></center>'
-		if $NikoSlutName ! '':
+		if $NikoSlutName = '':
 			'You approach one of the bikers and he barely turns to face you before saying, "You seem to be in the wrong place. You should probably get going." Sensing his hostility, you decide not to push your luck and walk away.'
 		else
 			'You approach one of the bikers and he barely turns to face you before saying, "Oh hey, it''s the dirty slut. I don''t need my dick sucked right now so why don''t you get lost?" Sensing his hostility, you decide not to push your luck and walk away.'

locations/_clothing_image.qsrc

@@ -31,6 +31,8 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'burlesque':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/13burlesque/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/14alternative/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/15beachbabe/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 end
 
 --- $clothing_image ---------------------------------

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 												'You moan softly at the pleasure and grab Albina by the hips, pulling her crotch down to your face. Her legs quiver as you gently trace her labia with your tongue before you spread them and start swirling your tongue around her engorged clitoris.'
 												'You are passionately eating each other out when you hear Albina''s breathing become faster and her legs start shaking as you feel your own orgasm building within you.'
 												*nl
-												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays liquid across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
+												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays her juices across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
 												'Albina pulls her herself up and turns back around, cuddling into you. "I didn''t take you for a squirter!" you laugh. She smirks. "I''ve been with a few girls <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you gave me the greatest orgasm I''ve ever had! I think that was actually my first squirt!"'
 												'She leans over and grabs some tissues from a box on a nearby table, handing you some to clean your face. She runs her hand over her still twitching pussy. "I think I''m still cumming!" she says. You both lie on the sofa, your powerful orgasms pulsing through the both of you. You eventually recover and manage to get dressed.'
                                                 'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it...among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
@@ -183,14 +183,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/train.jpg"></center>'
 			'Albina is training in her room, doing some stretching exercises.'
+			'She is wearing a pair of skin tight yoga pants that show off her toned body quite well.'
 			act 'Ask why she doesn''t train at the gym':
 				*clr & cla
 				AlbinaQW['SportHome']  = 1
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big23.jpg"></center>'
-				'Albina smiles at you and says "I don''t like the sweaty perverts at the gym staring at my ass, so I prefer training at home instead."'
-				'By the way, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want."'
+				'"I don''t like the sweaty perverts at the gym staring at my ass, so I prefer training at home instead." she replies.'
+				'You can''t help but stare at her firm, shapely rear as she says that and she grins at you.'
+				'Eyes up here <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyways, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want."'
 				act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 				act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
 				act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
@@ -270,13 +272,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'poledancing':
 		killvar 'loopcount'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/poledance.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina teaches you various acrobatic moves on the pole.'
+		'Albina teaches you various acrobatic moves on the pole and the two of you greatly enjoy yourselves.'
 		if pcs_dancpol >= 100: 'You didn''t learn anything new since you already know everything she can teach you.'
 
 		act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'
 		act 'Rest':gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 	elseif pcs_stren < 40 and pcs_dancero > 50:
-		'Albina grins "You''re still too weak for poledancing. We can practice developing your strength instead."'
+		'You try your best to follow Albina''s instructions, but you end up smacking your head on the pole instead and fall to the floor.'
+		'You are flat on your back and see Albina kneeling over you. "Are you okay <<$pcs_nickname>>? It looks like you''re still too weak for poledancing. We can practice developing your strength instead."'
+		'You nod at her and she pulls you to your feet, checking your head. "It might bruise, but otherwise you look fine." she says.'
 		act 'Develop strength (2:00)':
 			*clr & cla
 			loopcount = 1
@@ -287,6 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'poledancing':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/stren.jpg"></center>'
 			'Albina shows you how to develop your strength using various exercises.'
+			'You silently wonder if these exercises are how she has such a great looking ass.'
 			act 'Rest':gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 			act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'
 		end
@@ -303,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'poledancing':
 			dancero_exp += rand(2, 10)
 			'Albina teaches you how to passionately dance to the music while stripping.'
 
-			if pcs_dancero >= 100:'But you didn''t learn anything new since you already know everything she can teach you.'
+			if pcs_dancero >= 100:'You didn''t learn anything new since you already know everything she can teach you.'
 		else
 			danc_exp += rand(5, 15)
 			'A striptease is too complex for you. You''re not able to dance and strip at the same time.'
@@ -535,7 +540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wear_strapon':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slap her on the ass. "Come on Albina! Ride it like you mean it." With your encouragement, she starts really riding you hard and fast, taking the whole length inside her until several minutes later, she cries out in ecstasy. She slides off the dildo, which glistens with her juices, and collapses on the bed as an intense orgasm rocks her body.'
+			'You slap her on the ass. "Come on Albina! Ride it like you mean it." With your encouragement, she starts really riding you hard and fast, her huge ass slapping against your thighs as she takes the whole length inside her. She rides you for several minutes until she cries out in ecstasy. She slams down on the dildo and her body shudders as an intense orgasm passes through her. She slides off the dildo, which glistens with her juices, and collapses on the bed next to you.'
 			'Once her orgasm has passed, she looks at you with an appreciative smile on her face.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 7, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -554,8 +559,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina then leans over and whispers in your ear. "I want you to fuck my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>..." You grin as she giggles and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick and then rub the excess onto her asshole.'
-	'You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. After a few minutes, you pull out of her ass and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
+	'Albina then leans over and whispers in your ear. "I want you to fuck my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>..." You grin as she giggles and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick. You then spread her huge ass cheeks and rub the excess onto her asshole. You grab her ass in your hand and appreciate how firms it feels in your grip.'
+	'"Like what you see?" she giggles. You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. You look down and admit that her ass is amazing, the dildo being enveloped by her huge, firm cheeks as you thrust in and out of her hole.' 
+	'You wonder how the guys in your class would feel knowing you''re actually fucking the best ass in school while they can only dream of it. After a few minutes, you pull out of her and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
@@ -563,8 +569,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." You smile at her words and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm, her pussy spraying liquid onto the bed. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
+		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
@@ -609,14 +616,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Lay on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she scoots up between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough. She slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into your pussy. You moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. As you start to moan louder, she starts fucking you a little faster.'
+			'"Lay on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she scoots up between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough and then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside you. You moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. As you start to moan louder, she starts fucking you a little faster.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 8, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep getting your pussy fucked':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag2.jpg"></center>'
-				'She reads your body well. She fucks you harder and faster the more you moan, but when it starts to get a little too rough she backs off a bit. She eventually finds near perfect rhythm and you can feel youself getting wet. She is enjoying it as much as you, moaning softly and squeezing her breast as she fucks you. She stops and pulls out. "OK that''s enough of that, but I''m not finished with you just yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
+				'She reads your body well. She fucks you harder and faster the more you moan, but when it starts to get a little too rough she backs off a bit. She eventually finds a near perfect rhythm and you can feel youself getting wet. She is enjoying it as much as you, moaning softly and squeezing her breast as she fucks you. She stops and pulls out. "OK that''s enough of that, but I''m not finished with you just yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 7, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Take it up the ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'

locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -322,6 +322,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 		count['vaginal_dildo'] = 1
 		stim['mag'] += 1
 		!! the same as for 'vaginal'
+		if pcs_vag < temp_dick:pcs_vag += 1
+		if pcs_vag*2 < temp_dick:pcs_vag += 1
 		vgrdif = grange - pcs_vag
 		vltdif = temp_dick - pcs_vag
 		vltdif = vltdif / (temp_silavag+1)

locations/bed2.qsrc

@@ -320,7 +320,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dream':
 		alarm_set -= 1440
 	end
 	
-	if StoryLine = 1 and indorf = 0 and motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup1'
 
 	if slept_in = 1:
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -440,6 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wake_horny':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wake':
+	if StoryLine = 1 and indorf = 0 and motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup1'
 	menu_off = 1
 	InSleep = 1
 	gs 'stat'

locations/body.qsrc

@@ -2539,8 +2539,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'calcHotcat':
 	tempsupnatvnesh = ARGS[2] & !! supnatvnesh
 	tempCloAdjustedBeauty = ARGS[3] & !! result of calcClothesBonus
 	tempAccessoriesBonus = ARGS[4] & !! result of calcAccessoriesBonus
-	tempGroomingBonus = ARGS[4] & !! result of calcGroomingBonus
-	tempGroomingPenalty = ARGS[5] & !! result of calcGroomingPenalty
+	tempGroomingBonus = ARGS[5] & !! result of calcGroomingBonus
+	tempGroomingPenalty = ARGS[6] & !! result of calcGroomingPenalty
 
 	temppcs_apprnc = temppcs_apprncbase + tempCloAdjustedBeauty + tempAccessoriesBonus + tempGroomingBonus - tempGroomingPenalty
 	!!adjustment to make max achievable

locations/carF.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if kanistra > 0:
 		'In the trunk there is <<kanistra>> canister/s of gasoline. Each canister contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
 
-		if benz <= 35:
+		if benz <= 45:
 			act 'Pour gasoline into the tank':
 				cla
 				menu_off = 1

locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -184,8 +184,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clo':
-	$loc_arg = $ARGS[0]
-	$loc = '$city_market'
+	$loc_arg = 'clo'
+	$loc = 'city_market'
 	cls
 	gs'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'

locations/clothing_QV.qsrc

@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change':
 		$RESULT = FUNC('$short_description', $ARGS[1], CloStyle2)
 		$RESULT += '<<ARGS[2]>>'
 		'<<$RESULT>>'
-		if $ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[1] ! 'swimwear':
+		if $ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[1] ! 'swimwear' and $ARGS[1] ! 'beach':
 			gs 'clothing_descriptions'
 			'<<$description>>'
 		else

locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -1129,7 +1129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubuslina':
 					scfeed = succublvl + rand(1,4)
 					minut += rand(30,60)
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Leave': gt 'dimalina', 'leavewithlina'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'dimalina', 'walklina'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1201,4 +1201,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Femdomdream':
 	'You awake feeling aroused'
 end
 }
---- dimalina ---------------------------------
+
+--- dimalina ---------------------------------
+

locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_3_<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'A girl sits on the toilet peeing and she seems oddly happy to see you.'
+		'A girl sits on the toilet, urinating. She seems oddly happy to see you.'
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 			*clr & cla
 			toiletEvent_Rex = daystart
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk over to Rex and when you are with in arms reach he grabs you by the neck and pulls you close kisses your lips, you take his dick in hand and gently stroke it.'
+			'You walk over to Rex and when you are within arms reach, he grabs you by the neck and pulls you close, kissing your lips. You take his dick in your hand and gently stroke it.'			
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 			act 'Masturbate':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_<<rand(3,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'Breaking the kiss you put your full attention on jerking Rex off.'
+				'Breaking the kiss, you put your full attention into jerking Rex off.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					spafinloc = 15
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you jerk him off he moans and sperm starts spewing everywhere getting on your hands. "Ooh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you saved me, but next time use your mouth." He said with a wink.'
+					'As you jerk him off, he moans and sperm starts squirting all over your hands. "Ooh <<$pcs_nickname>>, you saved me. But next time, use your mouth." he says with a wink.'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 				if reksMeet = 1: bja += 1
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A57'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_<<rand(6,10)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel Rex''s hands on your shoulders gently pushing you down, you instantly obey and drop to your knees. Once your eye and more importantly mouth level with Rex''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, you take his head into your mouth and wrap your lips tightly around his shaft as you begin to stroke him off with your mouth.'
-				'He moans as you suck his cock, he is already tensing up, you can tell he is already about to cum.'
+				'You feel Rex''s hands on your shoulders gently pushing you down. You instantly obey and drop to your knees. Once you''re level with Rex''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, you take his head into your mouth and wrap your lips tightly around his shaft as you begin to suck him off.'
+				'He moans as you suck his cock. He is already tensing up and you can tell he is already about to cum.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 					end
-					'You barely have time to pull the penis out of your mouth, but a couple of spurts of cum still shoot into your mouth. The rest of the sperm spurts in streams across your pretty face, you happily lick his quivering dick, licking up the last drops of cum up.'
+					'You barely have time to pull his cock out of your mouth and a couple of spurts of cum shoot into your mouth, but the rest coats your pretty face. You happily lick his quivering dick, licking the last drops of cum up.'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_6_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Coming into the bathroom you find your sister Anna sitting on the toilet, you notice cum on her face.'
-		'When she see''s you, she smiles, then opens up her mouth and sticks out her tongue, showing her tongue completely coated in cum.'
+		'Entering the bathroom, you find your sister sitting on the toilet. You notice the cum on her face.'
+		'When she sees you, she smiles, then opens up her mouth and sticks out her tongue, showing how it is completely coated in cum.'
 		act 'Lick':
 			*clr & cla
 			toiletEvent_Sis = daystart
@@ -113,21 +113,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_6_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Seeing this little display you smile and kneel down in front of her. You start licking the sperm off her face, once you have licked it all up, you kiss her. The two of you share a long kiss where you trade the cum back and forth in your mouths before you both end up swallowing a portion of it.'
-			'"So who''s dick or should I say dicks, have you been sucking to get all that cum, all over you?" You ask with a smile.'
-			'"Roma tried to make up again." You sister responded angrily, once she finished peeing she got up and left. Obviously not wanting to talk about it.'
+			'Seeing this little display, you smile and kneel down in front of her and start licking the sperm off her face. Once you have licked it all up, you kiss her. The two of you share a long kiss where you trade the cum back and forth in your mouths before you both end up swallowing a portion of it.'
+			'"So who''s dick, or should I say dicks, have you been sucking to get all that cum all over you?" you ask with a smile.'
+			'"Roma tried to make up again." your sister responds angrily. Once she has finished peeing, she gets up and leaves, obviously not wanting to talk about it.'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		toiletEvent_Girls = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You just opened the door and saw Lena and Ira kissing, while Ira sat on the toilet. Lena pushes Ira''s legs apart and then breaks the kiss, lowering her facshe begins to lick her pussy, while Ira is still sitting on the toilet.'
+		'You open the door and see Lena and Ira kissing while Ira sits on the toilet. Lena pushes Ira''s legs apart and then breaks the kiss, lowers herself and begins to lick her pussy while Ira is still sitting on the toilet.'
 		'"Ahaha, Lena, your such a bitch sometimes and that''s why I love you." Moaned Ira.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'A few moments later they both get up and strip naked, Lena sits Ira on the edge of the sink. Lena drops back to her knees while Ira spreads her legs wide, giving her friend easy access. Lena starts licking her friends pussy at once, Ira closes her eyes and moans softly at her friends attention.'
+			'A few moments later, they both get up and strip naked. Lena sits Ira on the edge of the sink and drops back to her knees while Ira spreads her legs wide, giving her friend easy access. Lena starts licking her friend''s pussy at once and Ira closes her eyes and moans softly.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Ira moans louder, her breathe coming quicker, she grabs Lena''s head and pushes it against her crotch as she grinds herself against her friends face. Her body begins to tremble as she lets out a finally load moan of pleasure as she orgasms, coating her friends face with her pussy juices.'
+				'Ira moans louder and her breathing becoming quicker. She grabs Lena''s head and pushes it against her crotch as she grinds herself against her friend''s face. Her body begins to tremble as she lets out a loud moan of pleasure as she orgasms, coating her friend''s face with her pussy juices.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -145,15 +145,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Once they finish you walk in. Ira and Lena look at each other and then smile at you.'
-					'"Oh, it''s you <<$pcs_nickname>>, glad it is not some guy. We do not know what we would have done with him."'
-					'"Yes, I just wanted to tidy myself up." you said with a slight blush.'
-					'Lena came up to you and leaned in close as she whispered in your ear: "You liked watching what we were doing, right?. Stay with us, and you''ll like it even more."'
+					'Once they finish, you walk in. Ira and Lena look at each other and then smile at you.'
+					'"Oh, it''s you <<$pcs_nickname>>. Glad it is not some guy. We do not know what we would have done with him."'
+					'"Yes, I just wanted to tidy myself up." you say with a slight blush.'
+					'Lena comes up to you and leans in close as she whispers in your ear: "You liked watching what we were doing, right? Stay with us and you''ll like it even more."'
 					act 'Stay':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_5.jpg"></center>'
-						'Looking at the naked girls you bite your lower lip as your eyes roam over their bodies with a lustful look. Ira and Lena start taking your clothes off as they start kissing you all over.'
-						'"Mmm, Oh yes, don''t stop." You moan out. With these words, Lena sucks your clit and began licking your wet pussy.'
+						'Looking at the naked girls, you bite your lower lip as your eyes roam over their bodies with a lustful look. Ira and Lena start kissing you all over while stripping you.'
+						'"Mmm.. Oh yes, don''t stop." you moan out. Lena sucks your clit and begins licking your wet pussy.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 							*clr & cla
 							pcs_mood = 100
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_6.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'From the gentle caresses of girls you feel incredible pleasure, completely trusting them you feel totally relaxed. Then Ira takes Lena''s place licking your pussy, while Lena slides her tongue to your asshole as she begins to lick it.'
-							'From this dual tongue lashing you don''t last long. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with an orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once you orgasm passes both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in licking Lena''s face licking Ira''s juices off her face. While Ira''s kisses you both in turns.'
+							'You feel incredible pleasure from the gentle carresses of the girls. Completely trusting them, you feel totally relaxed. Ira takes Lena''s place licking your pussy, while Lena slides her tongue to your asshole and begins to lick it.'
+							'You don''t last long from this dual tobgue lashing. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with an orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once your orgasm passes, both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in, licking Ira''s juices off of Lena''s face while Ira kisses you both in turns.'
 							
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -173,9 +173,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_7.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'"Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, did you like it?"'
-								'"Oh, it was amazing girls, makes me think we never need the touch of a man."'
-								'"That''s for sure, you only need a special girlfriend or girlfriends." With these words, Lena and Ira left you.'
+								'"Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, did you like it?"'
+								'"Oh, that was amazing girls! It makes me think we never need the touch of a man."'
+								'"That''s for sure! You only need a special girlfriend or girlfriends." Lena and Ira then leave.'
 								
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -198,12 +198,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_8_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'From the sounds of the groans, moans and cries of passion the bathroom is in use again. Peeking inside you see a sweet couple fucking like rabbits.'
+		'From the sounds of the groans, moans and cries of passion, the bathroom is in use again. Peeking inside, you see a sweet couple fucking like rabbits.'
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	elseif temp = 8:
 		toiletEvent_SisBoy = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_9.jpg"></center>'
-		'Looking inside the bathroom you find your sister with her back against the wall, her skirt pulled up and panties around her ankles, while Roma''s face is buried between her legs. He''s apparently asking for forgiveness from your sister again.'
+		'Looking inside the bathroom, you see your sister with her back against the wall, her skirt pulled up and panties around her ankles with Roma''s face buried between her legs. He''s apparently asking for forgiveness from your sister again.'
 		act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	end
 end
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_mast':
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	if i < 3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if i = 3:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'With your arousal over powering your senses you couldn''t take it anymore, you pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and soaked you slide your fingers inside of yourself and finger fuck yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to an orgasm.'
+	'With your arousal overpowering your senses, you can''t take it anymore. You pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and wet, you slide your fingers inside your pussy and start finger fucking yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to an orgasm.'
 	
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
@@ -248,10 +248,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_beer':
 	dj_thank = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take two beers to the guys, they gratefully appreciated your offer.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you ever use one of these before?" The DJ asks you indicating the turntable.'
-	'Shaking your head. "No, never."'
-	'He smiles to you. "While everyone is still sitting and drinking you can give it a little <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_thank''">twist</a>, lets see what you can do girl."'
+	'You take two beers to the guys. They gratefully appreciate your offer.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you ever use one of these before?" the DJ asks you, indicating the turntable.'
+	'You shake your head. "No, I can''t say I have."'
+	'He smiles at you. "While everyone is still sitting and drinking, you can give it a little <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_thank''">twist</a>. Let''s see what you can do girl!"'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_thank':
 	instrmusic_exp += rand(0,2) 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are happy to take this opportunity, putting your fingers on the records you move them around, making god awful noises. The guys stop you before to long. "Ok I think that''s enough, I think you made my ears bleed." He says with a laugh.'
+	'You are happy to take this opportunity. Putting your fingers on the records, you move them around, making some god awful noises. The guys stop you before too long. "OK, I think that''s enough. I think you made my ears bleed." he says with a laugh.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 !why not add in an option here to start the series below?
 end
@@ -277,8 +277,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_boobs':
 	dj_boobs = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Like this boys?" You ask as you put your breasts on the turn table and move it a bit with your breasts.'
-	'Not much sound comes out form your attempt, but guys seem to love the attempt all the same.'
+	'"Like this boys?" you ask as you put your breasts on the turntable and move it a bit with your breasts.'
+	'Not much sound comes out from your attempt, but the guys seem to love it all the same.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'Take off your top': gt 'dinParty', 'dj_cock'
 end
@@ -290,8 +290,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_cock':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Seeing the interest from the smiling guys watching you, you get rid of your top and take off your bra and then place your naked breasts on the turntable and try to play it topless. "I think I did better that time, what do you think?"'
-	'The guy pulled out his erection as he said "Not bad, maybe try this instead."'
+	'Seeing the interest from the smiling guys watching you, you get rid of your top and bra and then place your naked breasts on the turntable, trying to play it topless. "I think I did better that time. What do you think?"'
+	'The guy pulls out his erection and says "Not bad. Maybe try this instead."'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'Give his dick a try': gt 'dinParty', 'dj_suck'
 end
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_suck':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You grab his hard cock and place the head on the spinning record, barely touching it. The guy started a bit, perhaps it was a little painful for him.'
-	if Rex_Love = 1: 'You don''t think Rex would like you playing these games with the DJ, you had a little fun but that''s enough.'
+	'You grab his hard cock and place the head on the spinning record, barely touching it. The guy squirms a bit. Perhaps it was a little painful for him?'
+	if Rex_Love = 1: 'You don''t think Rex would like you playing these games with the DJ. You''ve had a little fun, but that''s enough.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	if Rex_Love = 0:
 		act 'Kiss it and make it better':
@@ -313,9 +313,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_suck':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'The DJ at Rex''s Party', rand(17,22)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to make amends to guy, and kiss the head of his cock.'
+			'You decide to make amends to the guy and kiss the head of his cock.'
 			'You find you don''t want to stop and passionately start sucking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick right there in front of everyone.'
-			'After you suck him for a bit, he pulls you up and turns you around. Pulling your panties down, he pushes you forward bending you over.'
+			'After you suck him for a bit, he pulls you up and turns you around. Pulling your panties down, he pushes you forward, bending you over.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -327,9 +327,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_suck':
 				pcs_vag += 1
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You let him bend you over, as he begins to rub the head of his dick against your pussy lips.'
+				'You let him bend you over as he begins to rub the head of his dick against your pussy lips.'
 				'He abruptly pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside of you and starts fucking you with a fast pace.'
-				'With in just a few moments he grunts and shoots his load of sperm deep into your wet pussy.'
+				'Within just a few moments, he grunts and you feel him shooting his load deep into your wet pussy.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -351,9 +351,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_gost_1_<<rand(1,7)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance.'
-	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
-	if pcs_danc >= 50: 'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way. This gets you a lot of attention from the others and you love their attention.'
-	if pcs_danc < 50: 'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
+	'You jump, sway your body and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
+	if pcs_danc >= 50: 'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way. This gets you a lot of attention from the others. Attention that you love.'
+	if pcs_danc < 50: 'Your ridiculous movements during the dance doesn''t bother anyone. You dance badly, but you don''t care.'
 	act 'Have a rest': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'Dance more': gt 'dinParty', 'dance' 
 end
@@ -374,9 +374,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_swalow':
 	if i > 0: jump 'dinPartySwalloop'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_4_<<rand(13,15)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You swallowed the tart mixture of several different guys sperm, greedily licking your lips with your tongue.'
-	'"Uhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, You''re still the best cocksucker around, want more sperm to swallow, Call us."'
-	'The guys helped you back into the apartment and into one of the bedrooms, as you are to drunk to do it yourself.'
+	'You swallow the tart mixture of several different guys sperm, greedily licking your lips with your tongue.'
+	'"Uhh <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re still the best cocksucker around. If you want more sperm to swallow, call us."'
+	'The guys help you back into the apartment and into one of the bedrooms as you are too drunk to do it yourself.'
 	
 	act 'Fall asleep': gt 'dinParty', 'sleep'
 end
@@ -396,9 +396,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_spit':
 	if i > 0: jump 'dinPartySpitloop'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_4_<<rand(16,17)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You spat out the mouthful mixture of cum from several guys from your mouth.'
-	'"What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>> didn''t you like it? I thought all the girls loved the taste of cum." One of the guys asked you with a laugh.'
-	'The guys helped you back into the apartment and into one of the bedrooms, as you are to drunk to do it yourself.'
+	'You spit out the mixture of cum from several guys.'
+	'"What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>? Didn''t you like it? I thought all girls loved the taste of cum." one of the guys asked you with a laugh.'
+	'The guys help you back into the apartment and into one of the bedrooms as you are too drunk to do it yourself.'
 	
 	act 'Fall asleep': gt 'dinParty', 'sleep'
 end
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_talk':
 	rex_talk += 1
 	gs 'stat'	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_2_<<rand(1,5)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You find a space to sit and talk to Reks, he''s quite interesting and very handsome so you spend most of the time just nodding and flirting.'
+	'You find a space to sit and talk to Rex. He''s quite interesting and very handsome, so you spend most of the time just nodding and flirting.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	if rex_talk >= 2: act 'Hug': gt 'dinParty', 'rex_hug'
 	act 'Ask Rex to dance': gt 'dinParty', 'rex_dance'
@@ -428,9 +428,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_hug':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_4_<<rand(2,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'Rex grabbed you with his strong hands and began to knead your ass with one hand and caress your pussy with the other, in front of everybody.'
-		'You grab his neck and audible groan completely given into his affections.'
-		'You are flooded with the most pleasant feeling in the world, you don''t want it to stop.'
+		'Rex grabs you with his strong hands and begins to knead your ass with one hand and caress your pussy with the other in front of everybody.'
+		'You grab his neck and audibly groan, completely giving into his affections.'
+		'You are overwhelmed with the most pleasant feeling in the world. You don''t want it to stop.'
 		act 'Kiss':
 			*clr & cla
 			if rand(1,2) = 1:
@@ -438,9 +438,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_hug':
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_5_<<rand(2,4)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
-			'Looking adoring into each others eyes, being to passionately kiss.'
-			'You lips touch in your long kiss, it almost feels like a shock of electricity is running through you body.'
-			'For a long time you continue to enjoying the warm kiss, Rex finally breaks the kiss and says. "Come with me <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think we''ve had enough fun here." Simling he takes you by the hand and leads you away.'
+			'Looking adoringly into each other''s eyes, you begin to passionately kiss.'
+			'You lips touch in your long kiss. It almost feels like a shock of electricity is running through your body.'
+			'For a long time, you continue to enjoy the warm kiss, but Rex eventually breaks the kiss and says "Come with me <<$pcs_nickname>>. I think we''ve had enough fun here." Smiling, he takes you by the hand and leads you away.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -456,9 +456,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_hug':
 		else
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_13_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 		end
-		'Rex grabbed you with his strong hands and began to knead your ass with one hand and caress your pussy with the other, in front of everybody.'
-		'You grab his neck and audible groan completely given into his affections.'
-		'After playing with your pussy for a bit, he stops and takes you by the hand and pulls you away as he says. "Come with me <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think we''ve had enough fun here."'
+		'Rex grabs you with his strong hands and begins to knead your ass with one hand and caress your pussy with the other in front of everybody.'
+		'You grab his neck and audibly groan, completely giving into his affections.'
+		'After playing with your pussy for a bit, he stops, takes you by the hand and pulls you away as he says "Come with me <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think we''ve had enough fun here."'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -478,9 +478,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_dance':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_3_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	'Rex took you by the hand and dragged you out to dance, you are happily follow him.'
+	'Rex takes you by the hand and drags you out to dance. you are happy to follow him.'
 	'You dance, slowly getting closer to each other and finally grinding a bit against each other.'
-	'You turn around putting your back to him and grind your tight ass against his crotch, you can feel his hard cock against your ass, as you grind against it.'
+	'You turn around, putting your back to him and grind your tight ass against his crotch. You can feel his hard cock against your ass as you grind against it.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg 
 	if rex_talk >= 2: act 'Hug': gt 'dinParty', 'rex_hug'
 end
@@ -492,20 +492,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 	gs 'stat'
 	if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_13_<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You fall asleep feeling the warmth of his body against you back, he hugs you tightly.'
-		'You feel is hard erection against your butt, it excites you, but you are to tired to do anything with it as you fall fast asleep.'
+		'You fall asleep feeling the warmth of his body against your back as he hugs you tightly.'
+		'You feel his hard erection against your ass. It excites you, but you are too tired to do anything with it as you fall fast asleep.'
 	elseif Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_12_<<rand(1,11)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You feel completely safe, as you fall asleep to have sweet dreams.'
+		'You feel completely safe as you fall asleep.'
 	elseif iralenasleep >= 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_iralena_6_<<rand(6,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Lena, Ira and you lay in the bed, side by side as you fall asleep.'
+		'You Lena and Ira lie in the bed side by side as you fall asleep.'
 	elseif drunk_sveta >= 1 and sister_party_dom < 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_girls_party_gost_4_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your body could not withstand so much alcohol and you end up passing out. Fortunately friends were close, who dragged you into a bedroom and put you in bed.'
+		'Your body could not withstand so much alcohol and you end up passing out. Fortunately for you, friends are close and you are placed in a bed.'
 	elseif sister_party_dom >= 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_9_<<rand(3,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You fall asleep in the arms of your beloved sister with a final kiss before drifting off.'
+		'You fall asleep in the arms of your sister with a final kiss before drifting off.'
 	elseif party_boys_in >= 1:
 		i = rand(1,3)
 		hidden_guy += 3
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 			end
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_6_<<rand(1,9)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep, your face and body still smeared and coated in sperm, but you don''t care.'
+			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep. Your face and body are still smeared and coated in sperm, but you don''t care.'
 		elseif i = 2:
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'unconcious rapist', rand(17,22)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 			spafinloc = 11
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_8_<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep, you have a dream about warm wet drops landing on your face and lips, like a warm summers rain, you sleepily like at the drops.'
+			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep. You have a dream about warm wet drops landing on your face and lips, like a warm summers rain. You sleepily like at the drops.'
 		elseif i = 3:
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'unconcious rapist', rand(17,22)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -615,23 +615,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 			i = rand(1,2)
 			if i = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_9_<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if i = 2:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_9_3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep, you have a dream about being impaled on a stake for all your sins, but surprisingly instead of hurting it feels wonderful.'               
+			'After everything that happened tonight, you feel exhausted and fall asleep. You have a dream about being impaled on a stake for all your sins but surprisingly, instead of hurting, it actually feels wonderful.'               
 		end
 	end
 	if (indorf = 0):
 		''
-		'After sleeping some time, you are suddenly awakened by someone yelling at you to wake up while they slap you.'
+		'After sleeping for some time, you are suddenly awakened by someone yelling at you to wake up while they slap you.'
 		act 'Wake up':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 90
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya shakes, yells and smacks you until you slowly wake up'
-			'She smiles at you. "Well it looks like you had fun tonight, how are you feeling?"'
-			'You groan, feeling sick, your head is pounding, you feel like your about to throw up and you are sore in more places than you can remember. "Go away and let me sleep you evil bitch."'
-			'Anya shakes you again. "Get up stupid, or our parents will kill us both, if you don''t come home tonight."'
+			'Anya shakes, yells at and slaps you until you slowly wake up.'
+			'She smiles at you. "It looks like you had fun tonight. How are you feeling?"'
+			'You groan, feeling sick. Your head is pounding, you feel like you are about to throw up and you are sore in more places than you can remember. "Go away and let me sleep, sis"'
+			'Anya shakes you again. "Get up you drunk idiot! Mom will kill us both if you don''t come home tonight."'
 			if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking for the evening.'
-			if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionate kiss Rex on the lips, "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
-			if party_boys_in >= 1: 'As you leave the apartment, some drunk guys tell you they will miss you and sleep well, while laughing to each other.'
+			if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionatly kiss Rex on the lips. "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
+			if party_boys_in >= 1: 'As you leave the apartment, some drunk guys tell you they will miss you and to sleep well while laughing to each other.'
 			if hour < 22 and  hour > 18:
 				minut += ((21 - hour) * 60) + (60 - minut)
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -650,11 +650,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_7.jpg"></center>'
 			'Anya shakes you until you slowly wake up'
-			'She smiles at you. "Well it looks like you had fun tonight, how are you feeling?"'
-			'You groan, feeling sick, your head is pounding and you are sore in more places than you can remember. "Let me sleep sis, I''m sick."'
-			'Anya shakes you again. "Get up stupid, or our parents will kill us both, if they find out that we were not at home tonight."'
+			'She smiles at you. "Well it looks like you had fun tonight. How are you feeling?"'
+			'You groan, feeling sick. Your head is pounding and you are sore in more places than you can remember. "Let me sleep sis! I feel so sick."'
+			'Anya shakes you again. "Get up you drunk idiot! Mom is going to kill us both since we haven''t come home yet!"'
 			if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking for the evening.'
-			if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionate kiss Rex on the lips, "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
+			if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionatly kiss Rex on the lips. "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go home': minut += 15 & gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 			minut += 90
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_girls_party_gost_4_1.jpg"></center>'
-			*nl 'You woke up an hour later, the party was still in full swing.'
+			*nl 'You wake up an hour later and find the party still in full swing.'
 			act 'Return to party': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end

locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'pos19':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'pos19' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	*clr & cla
 	$menu_loc = 'etoexhib'
 	$menu_arg = 'pos19'

locations/fame.qsrc

@@ -162,30 +162,31 @@ else
 
 	pcs_fame = pav_fame + city_fame + village_fame
 	
-	$gnikname = ''
-	if pav_slut > 25:
+	if pav_slut < 25 :
+		$gnikname = ''
+	elseif pav_slut < 50 :
         $gnikname = 'flirt'
-    elseif pav_slut > 50:
+    elseif pav_slut < 75 :
         $gnikname = 'tease'
-    elseif pav_slut > 75:
+    elseif pav_slut < 100 :
         $gnikname = 'minx'
-    elseif pav_slut > 100:
+    elseif pav_slut < 125 :
         $gnikname = 'vixen'
-    elseif pav_slut > 125:
+    elseif pav_slut < 150 :
         $gnikname = 'tempress'
-    elseif pav_slut > 150:
+    elseif pav_slut < 175 :
         $gnikname = 'cocklover'
-    elseif pav_slut > 175:
+    elseif pav_slut < 200 :
         $gnikname = 'boytoy'
-    elseif pav_slut > 200:
+    elseif pav_slut < 225 :
         $gnikname = 'slut'
-    elseif pav_slut > 225:
+    elseif pav_slut < 250 :
         $gnikname = 'nympho'
-    elseif pav_slut > 250:
+    elseif pav_slut < 275 :
         $gnikname = 'whore'
-    elseif pav_slut > 275:
+    elseif pav_slut < 300 :
         $gnikname = 'town bicycle'
-    elseif pav_slut > 300:
+    else :
         $gnikname = 'cum dumpster'
 	end
 end

locations/foto_shoot.qsrc

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 				shoot_type = fashion
 				if modelfoto_fashion >= 10 and modelfoto_bikini + modelfoto_lingerie < 1 and modelfoto_glamour < 1 and modelfoto_nude < 1: gt'foto_events','lingerie_persuasion'
 				cla
-				act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+				act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 				act 'Agree (2:00)':gt 'foto_shoot','fashion'
 			end
@@ -108,8 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 				if modelfoto_bikini + modelfoto_lingerie >= 10 and pcs_mdlng > 20 and modelfoto_glamour < 1 and modelfoto_nude < 1:gt'foto_events','glamour_persuasion'
 				if pcs_inhib < 20:
 					'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'
-					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-					act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 					
 					if pcs_mdlng > 20:
 						gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -123,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 					end
 				else
 					cla
-					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 					act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','bikini'
 				end
@@ -136,8 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 				if modelfoto_bikini + modelfoto_lingerie >= 10 and modelfoto_glamour < 1 and modelfoto_nude < 1:gt'foto_events','glamour_persuasion'
 				if pcs_inhib < 25:
 					'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'
-					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-					act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 					
 					if pcs_mdlng > 20:
 						gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -151,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 					end	
 				else
 					cla
-					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+					act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 					act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','lingerie'
 				end
@@ -190,7 +188,7 @@ end
 !!	act 'Erotic clothing with breast nudity':
 		!!already matched the exhibitionism value above
 !!		cla
-!!		act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+!!		act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 !!		act 'Agree (2:00)':
 !!			*clr & cla
@@ -238,8 +236,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 			else
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other glamour options':gt'foto_shoot','glamour_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 20:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -253,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 			end	
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','sexy'
 		end
@@ -270,8 +268,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other glamour options':gt'foto_shoot','glamour_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 40:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -302,8 +300,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other glamour options':gt'foto_shoot','glamour_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 40:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -334,8 +332,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other glamour options':gt'foto_shoot','glamour_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 45:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -349,7 +347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glamour_shoot':
 			end
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 			
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','topless'
 		end
@@ -379,8 +377,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end		
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other nude options':gt'foto_shoot','nude_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 35:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -394,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 			end
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 			
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','tasteful'
 		end
@@ -411,8 +409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other nude options':gt'foto_shoot','nude_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 50:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -426,7 +424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 			end
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 			
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','topless_nude'
 		end
@@ -444,8 +442,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'
 			end
 		
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other nude options':gt'foto_shoot','nude_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 55:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -459,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 			end
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','nude'
 		end
@@ -477,8 +475,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				'You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'			
 			end
 			
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
-			act 'Look at other options':gt'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
+			act 'Look at other nude options':gt'foto_shoot','nude_shoot'
 			
 			if pcs_inhib > 60:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'self', 'easy'
@@ -492,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 			end
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','erotic'
 		end
@@ -511,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fitness_shoot':
 	'"Alright, what kind of shoot would you like to do? Sportwear, Sport underwear, or Artistic nude?"'
 	act 'Sportwear':
 		cla
-		act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+		act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 		act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','sportswear'
 	end
@@ -521,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fitness_shoot':
 			msg' You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','sports_underwear'
 		end
@@ -532,7 +530,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fitness_shoot':
 			msg' You think about asking to do this shoot but then blush and realize you aren''t confident enough to have pictures of yourself like this circling around the internet. Maybe you could practice it later, but you''re not ready to do it for real.'
 		else
 			cla
-			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 
 			act 'Agree (2:00)':gt'foto_shoot','fitness_artistic_nude'
 		end
@@ -749,8 +747,8 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'topless_nude':
 	*clr & cla
-	modelpay = (pcs_mdlng/2 * 10) + min(city_modelling, 700) + pcs_apprnc
 	minut += 120
+	modelpay = (pcs_mdlng/2 * 10) + min(city_modelling, 700) + pcs_apprnc
 	modelpayfin = 600 + (modelpay * 2) + (15*rand(0,5))
 	modelfoto_nude += 1
 	modelfoto_toplessnude += 1
@@ -933,7 +931,7 @@ end
 !!			gt 'foto', 'nude_shoot'
 !!		else
 !!			cla
-!!			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto','model'
+!!			act 'Look at something else':gt 'foto_shoot','model'
 !!
 !!			act 'Agree (2:00)':
 !!				*clr & cla

locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
 
 $location_type = 'event_outdoors'
 gs 'stat'
+$ReturnAdr = $ARGS[1]
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'find_meadow':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -434,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 	if hunters_were_met = 0:'Wandering through the woods you come across some people. Judging by their appearance they must be hunters.'
 	if hunters_were_met = 1:'Wandering through the woods you see the hunters, Andrei, Sergei and Igor.'
 
-	act 'Leave them alone':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+	act 'Leave them alone':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
 
     !%TODO: Move to hunter interactions
     act 'Approach the hunters':
@@ -460,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 'After chatting with them for about half an hour, the hunters begin to get up and gather their things.'
                 '"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei.'
                 '"If you want, we show you our camp," he added after a short pause. "From there we have made a path back to the village. We can show it to you if you come with us. Or if you want, you can even stay with us for a bit."'
-                act 'Stay in the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                act 'Stay in the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
                 act 'Go with them': minut += 60 & gt 'swamp_yard', 'start'
             else
                 minut += 15
@@ -477,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 '"Don''t run away, we won''t hurt you." said Sergei, seeing you jump to your feet.'
                 '"I think it''s about time I left" you reply.'
                 'You quickly move away from them and only slowing once you can no longer hear them talking.'
-                act 'Go back to the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                act 'Go back to the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
             end
         else
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters.jpg"></center>'
@@ -488,7 +489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 minut += 30
                 'After chatting with them for about half an hour, the hunters begin to get up and gather their things.'
                 '"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei. "You should pay us another visit some time, ok?"'
-                act 'Stay in the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                act 'Stay in the forest':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
                 act 'Go with them': minut += 60 & gt 'swamp_yard', 'start'
             else
                 '"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we were all looking forward to seeing you again" Andrei said with a smile.'
@@ -499,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                     act 'Stay in the forest  (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
                         gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
                         gs 'stat'
-                        gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                        gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
                     end
                 else
                     act 'Stay in the forest (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -520,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 *nl
                 'You pretend not to notice the hunters and walk right past them, swaying your hips pointedly to maximize the effect. Looking around, you notice that the effect has exceeded your expectations. The men have been stopped in their tracks and are staring at you...'
 
-                act 'Continue':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                act 'Continue':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
             end
             act 'Hide':
                 *clr & cla
@@ -531,7 +532,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 *nl
                 'They haven''t noticed you yet, so you quickly hide from sight in a nearby bush. You wait until you can no longer hear them talking to continue on your way.'
 
-                act 'Continue':gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                act 'Continue':gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
             end
         if hunters_were_met = 1:
             '"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we were all looking forward to seeing you again" Andrei said with a smile.'
@@ -542,7 +543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
                 act 'Stay in the forest  (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
                     gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
                     gs 'stat'
-                    gt 'gadforest', $ARGS[1]
+                    gt 'gadforest', $ReturnAdr
                 end
             else
                 act 'Stay in the forest (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'

locations/gdkin.qsrc

@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 		if rand(1,3) = 2 and soniaPS < 1 and soniadisco_day ! daystart:
 			if npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5 and StoryLine = 1 and BeInSchool > 0 and soniaslut >= 5 and hour < 23:
-				'You notice Sonia from your class. She is talking to Victor about something.'
-				act 'View Sonya': soniadisco_day = daystart & gt 'soniadisco', 'start'
+				'You notice Sonia talking to Vitek about something.'
+				act 'Watch Sonia': soniadisco_day = daystart & gt 'soniadisco', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				pcs_mood -= 40
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'As you head out on the dance floor, A guy walks up to you and sees the cum still splattered on you. The guy points to you "Check out the cock-sucker! Hey guys, this chick has cum smeared all over her face." The ones standing near him come closer. "Did you forget to swallow, slut?" Your cheeks blush with shame and you quickly head for the exit.'
+				'As you head out on the dance floor, a guy walks up to you, notices the cum still splattered on you and points at you. "Check out this cocksucker! Hey guys, this chick has cum smeared all over her face!" The ones standing near him come closer. "Did you forget to swallow, slut?" Your cheeks blush with shame and you quickly head for the exit.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 			else
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 
 				if alko >= 6:
-					'You''re too drunk to try and dance, you are barely able to stay on your feet and mostly just drunkenly bump into other people as you try and dance.'
+					'You''re too drunk to try and dance. You are barely able to stay on your feet and are mostly just drunkenly bumping into other people as you try and dance.'
 					if rand(0,1) = 0: gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
 				elseif alko > 3:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways. You''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
 				elseif alko > 0:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways. You''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
 				else
 					'The music is quite old, but catchy. You have fun dancing, not paying attention to anyone.'
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				pcs_mood -= 40
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'While standing by the wall a guy notices cum on your clothes and he points and shouts. "This chick is covered in cum, wait did you fail to swallow slut?" He says to you laughing. Your cheeks blush with shame and you head for the exit.'
+				'While standing by the wall, a guy notices cum on your clothes and he points and shouts. "This chick is covered in cum! Did you forget to swallow slut?" he says mockingly while laughing. Your cheeks blush with shame and you head for the exit.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 
@@ -161,12 +161,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if alko >= 6 and rand(1, 100) < 3:	gt 'gevent', '6'
 
 			if alko >= 6:
-				'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to keep from falling down.'
+				'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to stop yourself from falling.'
 				if rand(0,1) = 0: gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
 			elseif alko > 3:
-				'You''re drunk, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
+				'You''re drunk and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
 			elseif alko > 0:
-				'You''re tipsy, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
+				'You''re tipsy and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
 			else
 				'You are standing next to the wall while watching the others dance.'
 			end
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0: act 'Look for your classmates': gt 'gdkin', 'classmates'
 	elseif hour < 20:
-		'The Club closes. The main lights go on, the music fades and everyone beings to leave.'
+		'The club closes. The main lights go on, the music fades and everyone begins to leave.'
 		act 'Go outside': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 	end
 end
@@ -217,12 +217,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_2.jpg"></center>'
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-		'You dance with Katja attracting views of men from across the room. And when you consider that you not wearing panties, and your occasional spiraling of your skirt shows that fact off, it helps explain the attention.'
+		'You dance with Katja, attracting views of guys from across the room. When you remember that you aren''t wearing panties, and your occasional spiraling of your skirt shows that fact off, it helps explain the attention.'
 	else
 		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You dance with Katja attracting views of men from across the room.'
+		'You dance with Katja, attracting views of guys from across the room.'
 	end
 	act 'Expose Katja':
 		KatjaHorny += 20
@@ -231,19 +231,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance2_2.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'During the dance you have decided to fool around and embraced Katja, pulling aside her top a bit to show off a nipple. Which causes an approving roar from all around and an embarrassed squeak from Katja.'
+			'During the dance, you decide to fool around and embrace Katja, pulling her top aside a little to show off a nipple. This results in an approving roar from the crowd and an embarrassed squeak from Katja.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Dance on':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance2_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'One of the guys dancing moved in closer to the two of you, unable to stand watching the two of you dancing and touching each other like that, he slides his hand under her skirt.'
+				'One of the guys dancing moves in closer. Unable to stand watching the two of you dancing and touching each other like that, he slides his hand under her skirt.'
 				act 'Stick out tongue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Rebuffing the guy you and Katja pushed him away and turned to the crowd of guys around you. Katja hugs you and sticks out her tongue at the guys. The rebuffed guys looks around and thinks better of it and gets lost among the other dancers.'
+					'Rebuffing the guy, you and Katja push him away and turn to the crowd of guys around you. Katja hugs you and sticks her tongue out at the guys. The rebuffed guy looks around and thinks better of it, getting lost among the other dancers.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Move on': gt 'gdkin'
@@ -253,28 +253,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance3.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'Dancing with Katja you can''t control yourself, you pull Katja close to you, putting your hands on her boobs and burying your face in her cleavage. Katja moans slightly at your actions, while the boys gathered around shout encouragements to the two of you.'
+			'Dancing with Katja, you can''t control yourself. You pull her close to you, put your hands on her boobs and bury your face in her cleavage. Katja moans slightly at your actions while the boys gather around and shout encouragements.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 3:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance4.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'Dancing with Katya and moving quite actively, you do not notice how your breasts fell out from your clothes, exposing your nipples. But the guys sure noticed that where around you.'
+			'Dancing with Katya and moving quite actively, you don''t notice your breasts fall out, exposing your nipples. However, the guys do and happily point it out to each other.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 4:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance5.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'During the dance you turn to face Katja, the two of you dance close together, faces near each other. You lean in and give her a passionate kiss, you can hear the cheering of the guys. You barely notice the guys, more of a faint background noise, as you lose yourself in the moment.'
+			'During the dance, you turn to face Katja and you both dance close together. You lean in and give her a passionate kiss, hearing the cheering of the guys. You barely pay attention to them as you lose yourself in the moment.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 5:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance6.mp4"></video></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'You dance with Katya paying little attention to what is happening around you, when one of the guys around you reaches out and pulls down your top, baring your breasts for everyone to see. Without ceasing to dance you pull your top back up, to the disgruntled cries of the guys around you.'
+			'You dance with Katya, paying little attention to what is happening around you, when one of the guys around you reaches out and pulls down your top, exposing your breasts for everyone to see. Continuing to dance without interruption, you pull your top back up to the disgruntled cries of the guys around you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Looking at the crowd of guys around you, you hug Katja and stick out your tongue at them, letting them know they can look at you all they like but that''s all they''re going to get.'
+			'Looking at the crowd of guys around you, you hug Katja and stick out your tongue at them, letting them know they can look at you all they want, but that''s all they''re going to get.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Move on': gt 'gdkin'
@@ -297,24 +297,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kotov_love':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A9'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A9'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Vitek walks up to you and the guy. "What is this garbage? Who''s this guy?" Vitek shoves the guy and angrily says "Well who the fuck are you? This is my girl, you want me to bust you up?"'
+	'Vitek walks up to you and the guy. "What''s this? Who''s this guy?" Vitek shoves the guy and angrily says "Well? Who the fuck are you? This is my girl, you want me to bust you up?"'
 
 	if DPgrup = 1:
 		fightboyrand = rand(0, 10)
 
 		if fightboyrand <= 5:
-			'The frightened man begins to speak. "Come on, I didn''t know, I''m leaving." Vitek pushes the guy. "Get out of here and don''t come back."'
+			'The frightened man begins to speak. "Come on, I didn''t know. I''m leaving." Vitek pushes the guy. "Get out of here and don''t come back."'
 		elseif fightboyrand > 5 and fightboyrand < 10:
 			'The guy shoves Vitek back. "Get your hands off me asshole!" Vitek suddenly kicks the guy with a fast and powerful blow.'
-			'The guy falls to the floor in pain, Vitek steps over and looms over the guy, grabbing him by this shirt he yanks him off the floor and slams him into the wall.'
-			'"Well, motherfucker? You think you can take what''s mine? How about I take what''s yours." The guy curled up in pain and frighteningly replies. "You can have anything, anything I got!"'
+			'The guy falls to the floor in pain and Vitek steps over him. Grabbing him by his shirt, he yanks him off the floor and slams him into the wall.'
+			'"Well motherfucker? You think you can take what''s mine? How about I take what''s yours?" The guy curls up in pain and frighteningly replies. "You can have anything, anything I got!"'
 		elseif fightboyrand >= 10:
-			'The guy punches Vitek in the face, Vitek recoils from the hit and lands a powerful kick of his own. Then they start fighting, fists and kicks landing from both sides. Finally a very powerful hit by Vitek, sends the guy flying into the wall, where he slumps to the floor. Vitek runs to him and starts punching him in the face. The guy stops resisting, apparently he lost consciousness.'
+			'The guy punches Vitek in the face. Vitek recoils from the hit and lands a powerful kick of his own. They then start fighting, fists and kicks landing from both sides. Finally, a very powerful hit by Vitek sends the guy flying into the wall, where he slumps to the floor. Vitek runs to him and starts punching him in the face. The guy stops resisting, apparently having lost consciousness.'
 		end
 	elseif DPgrup = 2:
-		'The guy with a look calls over his friends, who all come over to crowd around Vitek. "Real tough guy huh?" Vitek''s friends come over to back him up, after a bit of tough talk and a bit of shoving the two groups break apart peacefully, going their own ways.'
+		'The guy has a smug look on his face as he calls over his friends, who all come over to crowd around Vitek. "Real tough guy huh?" Vitek''s friends come over to back him up. After a bit of tough talk and a bit of shoving, the two groups break apart peacefully, going their own ways.'
 	elseif DPgrup = 3:
-		'The guy throws up his hands "Sorry young man, I didn''t know she was with you." Vitek pushes the guy. "Go back to the city and stay there."'
+		'The guy throws up his hands. "Sorry young man, I didn''t know she was with you." Vitek pushes the guy. "Go back to the city and stay there."'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go to Vitek':numnpc = 9 & gt 'Snpc'
@@ -367,11 +367,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You accepted the offer, the guy took you by the hand and brought you out onto the dance floor, where you started dancing together.'
+	'You accept the offer and the guy takes you by the hand and leads you out onto the dance floor, where you start dancing together.'
 
 	if DPgrup = 1:
 		if DPtipe = 1:
-			'The guy is dancing with you holding your waist with his hands.'
+			'The guy is dancing with you, holding your waist with his hands.'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reverse_reakt_dance'
 		elseif DPtipe = 2:
 			*clr
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			*clr
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance8.jpg"></center>'
-			'A guy grabs your ass and squeezes it, he pulls you into a hug and kisses you passionately.'
+			'The guy grabs your ass and squeezes it before he pulls you into a hug and kisses you passionately.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reakt_dance'
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reverse_reakt_dance'
 		elseif DPtipe = 2:
-			'A tipsy man hugs your around your waist and his hands go down to grab your ass.'
+			'A tipsy man hugs you around your waist and his hands go down to grab your ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reakt_dance'
@@ -444,27 +444,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 			$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'The guy told you during the dance "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." Once the song ends, the guy asks you to sit with him and chat.'
+				'"My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer. Once the song ends, the guy asks you to sit with him and chat.'
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
-				'The guy told you during the dance "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." During the whole dance the drunk guy humped your body and now his face flushed with excitement. He asks you to leave the club and go get some fresh air, socialize, outside.'
+				'"My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer. During the dance, the drunk guy humped your body and now his face is flushed with excitement. He asks you to leave the club and go get some fresh air outside.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Go with the guy': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'nice'
 		elseif DPgrup = 2:
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'For the entire dance the guy was grabbing your ass, breasts and kissing you, he was clearly excited. When you would press up against him, you could feel something hard in his pants. Finally the song ended and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
+				'For the entire dance, the guy grabs your ass, breasts and kisses you. He is clearly excited. When you press up against him, you can feel something hard in his pants. The song finally ends and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go outside': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'aggressiv'
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
-				'For the entire dance the guy was grabbing your ass, breasts and kissing you, he was clearly excited. When you would press up against him, you could feel something hard in his pants. Finally the song ended and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
+				'For the entire dance, the guy grabs your ass, breasts and kisses you. He is clearly excited. When you press up against him, you can feel something hard in his pants. The song finally ends and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go outside': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'aggressiv'
 			end
 		elseif DPgrup = 3:
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'The man danced with confidence and elegance, finally the song was over and the man offers to go out for some fresh air and talk.'
+				'The man dances with confidence and elegance. When the song ends, he offers to go out for some fresh air and talk.'
 
 				act 'Go with the man':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/dk_night.jpg"></center>'
 					$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 					$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
-					'You went outside with the man. As you walked he put his arm around your waist. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continued, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m in town on a business trip. I am staying at a nearby hotel, I live in the city itself. There is virtually nothing to do in this town you know. Come back to my hotel with me and we can drink whiskey, while we sit and have a nice chat."'
+					'You go outside with the man. As you walk, he put his arm around your waist. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer and the man continues. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m in town on a business trip and I''m staying at a nearby hotel. There is virtually nothing to do in this town you know. Come back to my hotel with me and we can drink some whiskey while we sit and have a nice chat."'
 
 					if alko < 6 or pcs_horny <= 75 or pav_slut <= 50:
 						gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
 				$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 				$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
-				'For the entire dance the drunk man molested you, when the dance ended. He whispered in your ear. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continued, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m not a local, I''m staying in a nearby hotel, let''s take a taxi and go to my room."'
+				'The drunk man molests you for the entire dance. When the dance ends, he whispers in your ear. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answer feeling somewhat disgusted. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continues. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m not a local. I''m staying in a nearby hotel, so let''s take a taxi and go to my room."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go to the hotel': gt 'gdksex', 'hotel'
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			else
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are taking advantage of your ability to dance, sexy moves cause your partner to stare at you. But he seems stunned by how great you look or maybe by how well you move, either way he suddenly moves away and disappears into the crowd.'
+				'You are taking advantage of your ability to dance, your sexy moves causing your partner to stare at you. He seems stunned by how great you look, or maybe by how well you move, but either way he suddenly moves away and disappears into the crowd.'
 			end
 			danc_exp += 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
@@ -540,12 +540,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			if DrunkDPTrand < 70:
 				DPtipe = 1
 				DPgrup = 1
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A guy dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt.'
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 70:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 1
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt.'
 			end
 		elseif DaPaTipeRand >= 70 and DaPaTipeRand < 90:
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 50:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 2
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and a sweatshirt, puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and a sweatshirt puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts.'
 			end
 		elseif DaPaTipeRand >= 90:
@@ -572,12 +572,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			if DrunkDPTrand < 90:
 				DPtipe = 1
 				DPgrup = 3
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A man in a nice suit and expensive shoes, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A man in a nice suit and expensive shoes asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a man in a nice suit and expensive shoes.'
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 90:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 3
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes, puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes.'
 			end
 		end
@@ -600,19 +600,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'familiar':
 		rudeboy = 1
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/normal3.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in jeans and T-shirt, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in jeans and a T-shirt invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	elseif bmTip[Tboynum] = 1:
 		$niknameboy = 'Gopnik'
 		rudeboy = 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/gopnik3.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	elseif bmTip[Tboynum] = 2:
 		$niknameboy = 'Man'
 		rudeboy = 0
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/suit4.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in a nice suit and expensive shoes, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in a nice suit and expensive shoes invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	end
 
 	gs 'BMloc'
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'too_drunk_dance':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance_alco1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Katja Meynold approached you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? Let''s get you home, I''ll help you."'
+		'Katja approachs you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? Let''s get you home, I''ll help you."'
 
 		act 'Go with Katja':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -638,10 +638,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'too_drunk_dance':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			if home_owned[2] = 1:
-				'Katja took you by the arm and helped you get home.'
+				'Katja takes you by the arm and helps you get home.'
 				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 			else
-				'Katja took you by the hand and helped you get back to the apartment complex'
+				'Katja takes you by the hand and helps you get back to the apartment complex.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'classmates':
 	
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 
-	'<center>Most the cool kids are dancing, while the gopniks are standing in the corner of the room, keeping to themselves.</center>'
+	'<center>Most the cool kids are dancing while the gopniks are standing in the corner of the room, keeping to themselves.</center>'
 	if hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and week=5: '<center>At the entrance of the disco hall stands <a href="exec: gt ''VolleyTrenerSpeak''">Coach Mikhail Nikolayevich</a></center>'
 	'</table><center>'
 end

locations/gdktoilet.qsrc

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watercooler':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community Center - Restrooms</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/waterfountain.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/bathroom_entrance.jpg"></center>'
 	
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gdktoilet', 'start'
 	act 'Take a drink':

locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	
-	if meynoldQW = 1:
+	if meynoldQW = 3:
 		act 'Thank Katja for taking you home from the disco':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A14'] += 5
@@ -450,6 +450,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Katjaproblems':
 	cls
 	menu_off = 1
+	meynoldQW = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big14.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big8.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
 	'You see Katja near the lockers, biting her lips and looking around nervously. Leaning against her is none other than Svyatoslav who, according to rumors, has a crush on the redhead (or was it on Christina?). He seems to be trying to convince Katja to go on a date.'
@@ -493,7 +494,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katjaproblems':
             'Vicky joins the (now)group embrace and you can think about how all the guys in the hall (and some girls) are going to masturbate furiously tonight thanks to this embarrassing event.'
             'After this little scene, you chat with the twins until it is time to return to class.'												
 		end
-		meynoldQW = 1
 		npc_rel['A14'] += 1
 		npc_rel['A15'] += 1
         gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	dynamic $showerdin
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & 'Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 	
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush<<rand(1,6)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 	
 	'You head back to the locker room, where you strip from your uniform and head into the showers. You find an empty stall and step inside. You turn the water on and enjoy the sensation of it on your skin.'
 	'You turn the water off, grab your towel and head back to the lockers. You get dressed, place your uniform back in your locker and get ready to leave.'

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			if hotcat < 5:
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
 					'"Hello Mr Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that." but still smiles back at you in response.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that." but still smiles back at you in response.'
 				else
 					'You go to greet him, but notice he is quite sour. You decide to cheer him up with a smile and wave to him.'
 					'In response, the teacher smiles back at you and goes on about his business.'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			else
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
 					'"Hello Mr Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we are not supposed to have such informal relationships with students." he replies, but still smiles back.'
+					'"Thank you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we are not supposed to have such informal relationships with students." he replies, but still smiles back.'
 					npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 				else
 					'"Good morning Mr Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic." you say in a very erotic voice.'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			if hotcat < 5:
 				'You hurry down the hallway. You are already late, so decide to just pass by. He wasn''t even looking in your direction.'
 			else
-				'"Good morning <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
+				'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
 				'"Oh Mr Tsarev! Good morning. Sorry I didn''t notice you. I was busy day dreaming." you reply and run away.'
 			end
 
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Good morning <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly." he jokes.'
+			'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly." he jokes.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(0,4) > 0:
 					'You stumble and fall into your teacher''s arms as he deftly catches you.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you ok, did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you are fine, he goes on about his business.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you OK, did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you are fine, he goes on about his business.'
 				else
 					'You stumble and fall in front of him. However, he lacks the agility to catch you. You bruise your knees form falling as he bends over to help you up.'
 					'"Oh-Oh-Oh, my leg hurts. Oh please look, is it alright?" you say and stretch out your leg in front of his face. He begins to inspect your leg, one hand at the ankle, the other stroking your thigh, just above the bruise.'
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	if break_rand = 1 and hotcat > 5:
 		cla
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none' and pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += 2
-		'As you walk through the hallways, a hand suddenly swoops in, giving you a hard swat on the ass!'+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', '', 'The palm of his hand coming into contact with your panty-less butt cheeks creates an audible clap that sounds through the entire hallway.')
+		'As you walk through the hallways, a hand suddenly swoops in, giving you a hard swat on the ass.'+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', '', 'The palm of his hand coming into contact with your panty-less ass cheeks creates an audible clap that sounds through the entire hallway.')
 		gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1060,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif break_rand = 24:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/legsup.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stop at your locker, a girl starts to taking pictures of her two friends, who start posing at once in funny, seductive or teasing stances. They seem to be really enjoying playing around.'
+		'As you stop at your locker, a girl starts taking pictures of her two friends, who start posing at once in funny, seductive or teasing stances. They seem to be really enjoying playing around.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			if artemLernQW >= 1 and artemVitokQW ! 2 and artemblok = 0 and artlie ! 2 and artembrokenheart ! 1: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemEv'', ''start''">Artem Chebotarev</a> is waiting for you near the school entrance.'
 			if npc_QW['A231'] = 1 or npc_QW['A231'] = 3 or npc_QW['A231'] >= 5: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''AleksandraGo'', ''Start''"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></a> is waiting for you at the end of the school courtyard, listening to music.'
 
-			if katjaMeynoldday ! daystart and meynoldQW >= 2: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''katjaEv''">Katja Meynold</a> is walking across the school courtyard, getting ready to go home.'
+			if katjaMeynoldday ! daystart and meynoldQW >= 1: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''katjaEv''">Katja Meynold</a> is walking across the school courtyard, getting ready to go home.'
 			if DimaBeHomeOnce = 1 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:
 				'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaEv'', ''after_school''">Dimka Nosov</a> is deep in thought, as he leans against a lamp post.'
 			elseif DimaRudeQW > 0 and dimarudeday ! daystart and DimaRudeBlock = 0:

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev1
+! This file contains the class events for PE, biology, science, computer and Russian.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 	fizperand = rand(1,32)
@@ -13,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and some of the other girls get down on your knees together, enjoying the attention of the watching boys while you all show off your asses to them. Deciding to tease them even more, the girls all pull their pants down at the same time. Of course you join in, and enjoy the small boost of confidence as the boys drool over the panty-clad bottoms swaying in front of them. Mr. Pavlovich is keeping his distance, he''s obviously unsure what to think of all this.'
+		'You and some of the other girls get down on your knees together, enjoying the attention of the watching boys while you all show off your asses to them. Deciding to tease them even more, the girls all pull their pants down at the same time. Of course you join in, and enjoy the small boost of confidence as the boys drool over the panty-clad asses swaying in front of them. Mr. Pavlovich is keeping his distance, obviously unsure what to think of this.'
 	elseif fizperand = 3:
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_mood += 20
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in too; of course you agree. After you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was the exact purpose of suggesting them. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
+		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in too; of course you agree. After you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was his intention all along. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 5 and temper >= 20 and sunWeather = 1 and hotcat >= 6:
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-		'Today you''re training with some free weights. In the current exercise, you''re supposed to keep your legs straight while the dumbbells are on the ground. Noting the class got awfully quiet, you look between your legs and notice the majority of the class and several more bystanders gawking at your ass. You hold the position for a few seconds longer than you need to, reveling in their praises while they compliment your figure.'
+		'Today, you''re training with some free weights. In the current exercise, you''re supposed to keep your legs straight while the dumbbells are on the ground. Noting the class got awfully quiet, you look between your legs and notice the majority of the class and several more bystanders gawking at your ass. You hold the position for a few seconds longer than you need to, reveling in their praises as they compliment your figure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 6:
@@ -43,13 +44,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		'During gym class, you hear a commotion from one side and you look over to see two boys shoving each other. They are from your brother''s grade and the first one shoves the second one again and it quickly starts escalating. A few punches are thrown and soon the two of them are down on the ground fighting. The coach rushes over and quickly pulls them apart, before sending them straight to the principal.'
 	elseif fizperand = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/tinydick.jpg"></center>'
-		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell his efforts are not working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and he keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
+		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell they aren''t working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
 		*nl
-		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how very small his penis is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches, Igor desperately trying to pull up his shorts and failing, while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his very tiny penis.'
+		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how tiny his dick is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches, Igor desperately trying to pull up his shorts and failing, all while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his tiny dick.'
 	elseif fizperand = 8 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/wedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'During a break in gym class, you are chatting with several other girls when you feel someone''s hands reach down the back of your shorts, grabbing hold of your panties and sharply yanking them up. Dan yanks your panties up so hard that your feet actually lift off the ground for a moment. You cry out in pain, quickly turn around and see Dan laughing while several others are watching and laughing as well.'
+		'During a break in gym class, you are chatting with several other girls when you feel someone''s hands reach down the back of your shorts, grab hold of your panties and sharply yank them up so hard that your feet actually lift off the ground for a moment. You cry out in pain, quickly turn around and see Dan laughing while several others are watching and laughing as well.'
 		act 'Don''t retaliate': grupvalue[4] -= 2 & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				grupvalue[2] +=1
-				'He starts to back up but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which just got the others laughing harder. A couple of the other girls move over to give you moral support and give the guys dirty looks. Plus they use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
+				'He starts to back up but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which just got the others laughing harder. A couple of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 			end
 		else
@@ -76,17 +77,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				grupvalue[4] +=1
 				demerit += 20
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/beathisass.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You run into him and knock him to the floor, where you''re quickly on top of him, sitting on his chest and starting to punch him straight in the face.'
+				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You bash into him, knocking him to the floor, and quickly climb on top of him. You start furiously punching him in the face, beating him senseless in front of everyone.'
 				*nl
-				'He is a bit stunned by this sudden attack and at first he just covers up to try and block some of your punches, before he finally starts to fight back. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off Dan and nearly tosses you on your back. He steps between the two of you, stopping Dan and you from going at it again. He turns to you and says, "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest but he doesn''t want to hear it and points at the door.'
-				act 'Go to the principals offices': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off a bloody and beaten Dan, nearly throwing you on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again. He turns to you and says "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Beat his ass (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 	elseif fizperand = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hanging.jpg"></center>'
-		'During class, Albina gives you a tap on the shoulder, giggling and pointing at Vitek. You look over and see the tip of his dick hanging out the one leg of his shorts. You giggle as well, but you are also quite impressed and maybe just a little turned on at the sight... he is certainly very well endowed. It takes him a bit to notice the girls giggling at him and even longer to figure out why. Once he does, he makes a big show of tucking his dick back away by adjusting and pulling down on his shorts a bit, all the while standing there with a huge smile on his face.'
+		'During class, Albina gives you a tap on the shoulder, giggling and pointing at Vitek. You look over and see the tip of his dick hanging out the leg of his shorts. You giggle as well, but you are also quite impressed and maybe just a little turned on at the sight... he is certainly very well endowed. It takes him a while to notice the girls giggling at him and even longer to figure out why. Once he does, he makes a big show of tucking his dick away by adjusting his shorts, all the while standing there with a huge smile on his face.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 10:
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		act 'Leave the creep':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage1.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/supply.jpg"></center>'
 			'Once you have the equipment, you duck out of the room as quickly as you can, not looking back at him.'
 			act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		end
@@ -107,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
+				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. You pick up the dropped item and quickly stand up before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -118,16 +119,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		end
 	elseif fizperand = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/bendoverff.jpg"></center>'
-		'While Ivan is watching Lina moves up behind Lariska and pushes her forward at the shoulders making her bend over. She proceeds to pretend to hump Lariska, obviously trying to mimic Ivan''s voice and speech. "Oh Lariska I want to fuck your ass!" which gets several of the other students to laugh, even Ivan. It is quickly broken up by Mr Nikolaevich.'
+		'During class, Lina notices Ivan watching Lariska and so moves up behind her and pushes her forward at the shoulders, making her bend over. She proceeds to pretend to hump Lariska, obviously trying to mimic Ivan''s voice and speech. "Oh Lariska, I want to fuck your ass!" which gets several of the other students to laugh, even Ivan. It is quickly broken up by Mr Nikolaevich.'
 	elseif fizperand = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/doublebutt.jpg"></center>'
-		'During class Lina and Lariska are whispering and giggling about something. After some time, they pull down their back of their shorts to flash ther panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
+		'During class, Lina and Lariska are whispering and giggling about something. After some time, they pull down the back of their shorts to flash their panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
 	elseif fizperand = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/dry3some.jpg"></center>'
-		'Near the end of class, three of the underclass girls are talking and giggling. When they notice some of the more popular boys looking their way, they start horsing around. One bries her face in her friend''s breasts and the third one behind her pretends to hump her. After a few moments, once several guys are watching, they stop, laughing as they move away.'
+		'Near the end of class, three of the underclass girls are talking and giggling. When they notice some of the more popular boys looking their way, they start horsing around. One buries her face in her friend''s breasts and the third one behind her pretends to hump her. After a few moments, once several guys are watching, they stop, laughing as they move away.'
 	elseif fizperand = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hardon.jpg"></center>'
-		'At the end of class when, everyone is allowed to do their own thing, as long as they are doing something physical. You notice one of the boys using the bench press and see that there seems to be a tentpost in his pants. He is sporting one hell of a hardon, with several of the other girls having noticed as well and giggling about it.'
+		'At the end of class, everyone is allowed to do their own thing so long as long as they are doing something physical. You notice one of the boys using the bench press and see that there seems to be a tentpost in his pants. He is sporting one hell of a hardon, with several of the other girls having noticed as well and giggling about it.'
 	elseif fizperand = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/stretchhump.jpg"></center>'
 		'Lina is on the floor doing the splits leaning all the way forward, stretching. Lariska comes up behind her and lays on top of her, pretending to hump her. Lina laughs about it and ignores her at first. After a couple of minutes, they break it up.'
@@ -151,12 +152,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		if scooltiperand = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			gs'stat'
@@ -164,12 +165,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she says softly. "This is why you should wear panties to school, I won''t report you over it, but I suggest you wear them in the future."'
+				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she softly says "This is why you should wear panties to school. I won''t report you, but I suggest you wear some in the future."'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard. While solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties and your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'	
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard. While solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean, and totally forget that not only are you are not wearing any panties, but also have a butt plug stuffed in your ass. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'	
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -179,9 +180,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you. Miss Orlov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you. Miss Orlov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -195,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say. "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Miss Orlov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Miss Orlov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -222,7 +223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Miss Orlov and turn around, slapping Dan with all the force you can muster. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Miss Orlov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -245,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Dan, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards the teacher, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Dan, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards the teacher, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -253,9 +254,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							'You spend the rest of class with Dan''s hand coming and going to squeeze your breast and tweak your nipple, still careful to make sure the teacher doesn''t catch on.'
 							if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand, slipping your two middle fingers up your dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand and slip two fingers into your dripping wet pussy. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear your teacher say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov ask "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -263,9 +264,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							else
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it up under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them up your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them inside yourself. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov ask "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -279,8 +280,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you. Miss Orlov is looking at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you. Miss Orlov is looking at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -294,8 +295,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is snapping my bra stap." Miss Orlov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
-					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him  to the principal''s office.'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is snapping my bra stap." Miss Orlov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
+					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -321,14 +322,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Miss Orlov and turn around, slapping Dan with all the force you can muster. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Miss Orlov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/juliabra.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment. Most of your fellow students don''t study but do a variety of things. Julia catches your eye and as you look over, she opens her shirt to show off her bra, then blushes bright red, closes her shirt and pretends to be busy for the rest of the class.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment. Most of your fellow students don''t study, but do a variety of other things instead. Julia catches your eye and as you look over, she opens her shirt to show off her bra, then blushes bright red, closes her shirt and pretends to be busy for the rest of the class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -338,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'Lavrenti quickly wiggles himself out, gets the desk upright again and hurriedly sits down again, blushing furiously all the while. After making sure he is OK, Miss Orlov gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks at the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get an alert on your phone. After quickly checking that Miss Orlov is busy, you sneakily pull it out of your purse and rest it in your lap. You lean back a bit, glancing down to see that someone has sent you an image. You open it up, expecting something innocent - only to be confronted by a photo of someone''s dick. You hear snickering from one side and look up to investigate, but you can''t tell who it was or exactly where it came from. Unsure what to do about it, you decide that you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
@@ -348,10 +349,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'You notice Dan keeps flicking Artem''s ear whenever Miss Orlov looks away. Poor Artem''s ear is already bright red from all the flicking and he looks like he is on the verge of tears.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He has pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He has pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/danshowdick.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of class to work on your homework. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you hear someone giggle. You think it was Irina but you''re not sure. As you glance up and look around, you quickly spy what was the cause of it. Dan has he pants unzipped, with his dick out. He is saying something to Irina who is now mostly ignoring him, though does take a peek now and again as does Natasha. Apparently what ever Dan wanted isn''t going to happen and he finally puts his dick away at the end of class bell.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last few minutes of time to work on it. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you hear someone giggle. You think it was Irina but you''re not sure. As you glance up and look around, you quickly spy what was the cause of it. Dan has he pants unzipped, with his dick out. He is saying something to Irina, who is mostly ignoring him, although she does take a peek now and again, as does Natasha. Apparently what ever Dan wanted isn''t going to happen and he finally puts his dick away at the end of class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -360,17 +361,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Irina gets up and sits on the edge of Miss Orlov''s desk and starts taking selfies. She ignores the boys hoots and cat calls until the end of class when the bell rings.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of class to work on your homework. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you glance around and notice Natasha is sitting with her legs slightly apart, showing off her panties to anyone that looks. You doubt she is aware of it, as she seems completely engrossed in working on her homework.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of time to work on it. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you glance around and notice Natasha is sitting with her legs slightly apart, showing off her panties to anyone that looks. You doubt she is aware of it, as she seems completely engrossed in working on her homework.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natsit.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Most of the students get up and walk around, even Natasha puts her books away and gets up and sits on the back of her chair, giving you a smile when you look her way.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Most of the students get up and walk around. Even Natasha puts her books away, gets up and sits on the back of her chair, giving you a smile when you look her way.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov calls Natasha up to the blackboard to write out the assignment. Once done Natasha returns to her seat and sits down, unaware that the back of her skirt has caught on the seat, which shows off her panty clad ass as she sits through the last of class. Several other students notice as well.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov calls Natasha up to the blackboard to write out the assignment. Once done Natasha returns to her seat and sits down, unaware that the back of her skirt has caught on the seat, which shows off her panty clad ass as she sits through the rest of the class. Several other students notice as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -380,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Miss Orlov a question about her assignment. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Lazar turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even the teacher walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Lazar again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -405,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 19:
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -496,13 +497,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		scooltiperand = rand(1,18)
 		if scooltiperand = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -511,15 +512,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she says softly. "This is why you should wear panties to school, I won''t report you, but I suggest in the future you wear them."'
+				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she softly says "This is why you should wear panties to school. I won''t report you, but I suggest you wear some in the future."'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. On accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is also stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Your teacher prods impatiently. You''re teacher is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where your teacher sits, they can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so they start to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and, with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -529,7 +530,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself a pair and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_10.jpg"></center>'
@@ -549,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Andrey grins when he realizes he''s been caught, and he winks at you before turning back to face the blackboard. While Stasya, having finally noticed what her boyfriend is doing, gives you a dirty look.'
+				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Andrey grins when he realizes he''s been caught, and he winks at you before turning back to face the blackboard. Stasya, having finally noticed what her boyfriend was doing, gives you a dirty look.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			
@@ -572,7 +573,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -611,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A141'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Veronika. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Miss Orlov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. She clears her throat a few times and even hushes you once, before she finally tells you to be quiet or she''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Veronika. She is her usual cold and distant self and doesn''t say much, but doesn''t seem to mind you talking to her. You often get dirty looks from Miss Orlov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. She clears her throat a few times and even hushes you once, before she finally tells you to be quiet or she''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Vanya':
@@ -633,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/andstaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Stasya saying. "Stop it Andrey." When you glance over you see Andrey is trying to pull her skirt up and she is trying to hold it down. She is talking softly and trying not to draw attention while trying to make him stop. After a few more hissed whispers, he lets go and says something along the lines of. "You don''t have to be such a prude all the time." Stasya glares at him and class goes back to normal.'
+			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Stasya saying "Stop it Andrey." When you glance over you see Andrey is trying to pull her skirt up and she is trying to hold it down. She is talking softly and trying not to draw attention while trying to make him stop. After a few more hissed whispers, he lets go and says something along the lines of "You don''t have to be such a prude all the time." Stasya glares at him and class goes back to normal.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -643,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/iristagossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Irina and Stasya sitting next to each other gossiping and overhear a bit of it as Stasya says. "Oh my god Igor got pantsed at the dance last Friday and he had the tiniest dick." She holds up her hands with her fingers less than 10cm apart. Irina giggles at that as does Stasya. Once they get a few looks, they talk even quieter and you can''t make out what else they are gossiping about.'
+			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Irina and Stasya sitting next to each other gossiping and overhear a bit of it as Stasya says "Oh my god Igor got pantsed at the dance last Friday and he had the tiniest dick!" She holds up her hands with her fingers less than 6cm apart. Irina giggles, as does Stasya. Once they get a few looks, they talk even quieter and you can''t make out what else they are gossiping about.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -656,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/staoverdesk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends, Stasya starts to get up and knocks her book off the front of her desk. While still in her desk, she stands up and bends over to grab the book off the floor, inadvertently giving everyone in class behind her a look at her panty clad ass until she straightens up. A few snickers and giggles causes her to look back as she seems to understand what happened. She quickly smooths out her skirt and leaves class with Andrey.'
+			'As class ends, Stasya starts to get up and knocks her book off the front of her desk. While still in her desk, she stands up and bends over to grab the book off the floor, inadvertently giving everyone behind her a look at her panty clad ass until she straightens up. A few snickers and giggles causes her to look back as she seems to understand what happened. She quickly smooths out her skirt and leaves class with Andrey.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -704,9 +705,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you. Mr. Ivanov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you. Mr. Ivanov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -720,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is grabbing my breasts." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is grabbing my breasts." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Vasily denies it, but Mr Ivanov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -747,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr. Ivanov and turn around, slapping Vasily with all the force you can muster. Vasily recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Mr. Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principals office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Vasily (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -755,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -770,7 +771,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Vasily, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards Mr. Ivanov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Vasily, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards Mr. Ivanov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -778,9 +779,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'You spend the rest of class with Vasily''s hand coming and going to squeeze your breast and tweak your nipple, still careful to make sure Mr. Ivanov doesn''t catch on.'
 							if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand, slipping your two middle fingers up your dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand and slip two fingers up your dripping wet pussy. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -788,9 +789,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							else
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them up your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them inside yourself. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -803,8 +804,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Vasily behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr Ivanov. "Is there a problem, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you. Mr. Ivanov is looking at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Vasily behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr Ivanov. "Is there a problem, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you. Mr. Ivanov is looking at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -818,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is snapping my bra stap." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is snapping my bra stap." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Vasily denies it, but Mr Ivanov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -844,8 +845,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr. Ivanov and turn around, slapping Vasily with all the force you can muster. Vasily recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
-					'Mr Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principals office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Vasily (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -857,12 +858,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks at the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			if soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Mr Ivanov engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts flirting with him openly and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr. Ivanov. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia. You wonder why she isn''t sent to the principal''s office. If anyone else had done that, they would been kicked out of class.'
+				'Mr Ivanov engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts openly flirting with him and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr. Ivanov. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia. You wonder why she isn''t sent to the principal''s office. If anyone else had done that, they would been kicked out of class.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -872,7 +873,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr. Ivanov is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, whhile the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, while the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -890,17 +891,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Vasily letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Vasily letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what that looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Vasily':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Vasily. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Vasily. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Albina':
@@ -908,7 +909,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Albina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Albina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Lizaveta':
@@ -916,7 +917,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A140'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Lizaveta. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Lizaveta. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Alyona':
@@ -924,7 +925,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Artem':
@@ -932,7 +933,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Artem. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Artem. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Gerasim':
@@ -940,7 +941,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A153'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Gerasim. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Gerasim. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Zinaida':
@@ -948,7 +949,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A142'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Zinaida. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally she tells you to be quiet or she will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Zinaida. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally she tells you to be quiet or she will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Sonia':
@@ -956,7 +957,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
@@ -964,7 +965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Mr. Ivanov a question about the lesson. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Artem turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even Mr. Ivanov walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Artem again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -994,9 +995,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teachdis.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your heart is pounding. Mr Ivanov is much older than you, why is he looking at your legs like that? Isn''t he supposed to know better? You try to straighten your skirt as inconspicuously as you can, attempting to make it look natural, like a random afterthought and not because of his staring.'
-				'Your teacher doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show, and calls attention to you, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
+				'Your teacher doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show, and calls attention to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
 				*nl
-				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology, "I''m sorry, Mr. Ivanov."'
+				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology. "I''m sorry, Mr. Ivanov."'
 				'For the remainder of the class, he keeps shooting glances in your direction. He seems to be having a great time in class today and you suspect that you''re the reason.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1022,9 +1023,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[1] +=1
 					demerit += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say'
-					'"Mr Ivanov, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
-					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom, and he raps his desk several times until he gets the class to quieten down. "Go to the principal''s right now Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>.'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Ivanov, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
+					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom, and he raps his desk several times until he gets the class to quieten down. "Go to the principal''s right now Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>!'
 					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					else
 						pcs_horny +=40
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/spreadb.jpg"></center>'
-						'The thoughts of him checking you out so sneakily turn you on a great deal and the fact that you know you should know better make it even hotter. Throughout the class you keep spreading your legs whenever he looks your way and you can tell the looks of your bare pussy are causing him a great deal of arousal as well. Unable to control yourself, you occasionally give yourself a quick rub over your exposed pussy lips, preferably when he looks at you. Towards the end of the class, your pussy lips are soaked in your juices and you absent-mindedly put your finger in your mouth for a taste. '
+						'The thoughts of him checking you out so sneakily turn you on a great deal and the fact that you know you should know better make it even hotter. Throughout the class, you keep spreading your legs whenever he looks your way and you can tell the looks of your bare pussy are causing him a great deal of arousal as well. Unable to control yourself, you occasionally give yourself a quick rub over your exposed pussy lips, preferably when he looks at you. Towards the end of the class, your pussy lips are soaked in your juices and you absent-mindedly put your finger in your mouth for a taste. '
 					end
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1069,8 +1069,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr. Ivanov looks at you, he''s staring right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now.'
 					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what is the meaning of this!?" Mr. Ivanov says angrily.'
 					'You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal."'
-					'He''s slightly nervous now, knowing you caught him staring. He still tries to posture himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'He''s slightly nervous now, knowing you caught him staring and tries to compose himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Flip him off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1083,7 +1083,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/albbendover.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Albina is one such student. She takes one of the books to one of the long empty tables and bends over the table, resting her elbows on it while standing on her toes. This gives a nice look up her skirt at her panties. You are fairly certain that she is doing it on purpose, but she ignores the lewd comments from Vasily.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Albina is one such student. She takes one of the books to an empty table and bends over it, resting her elbows on it while standing on her toes. This gives a nice view up her skirt at her panties. You don''t know if she is doing it on purpose since she angrily glares at Vasily when he makes lewd comments out loud.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1091,17 +1091,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 18:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage1.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov calls Alyona up to the computer at the font of the class, with the large monitor facing the rest of the class so everyone can see what you are doing on it. He ask Alyona to trouble shoot a problem he has created on a small program. She tries but fails to figure it out. He starts mocking her inability to, as he puts it, "Solve even the most basic of problems that a three year old could have solved by now."'
-			'At that point, Alyona loses it and gets up and screams. "Fuck you, you worthless motherfucker! I''m tired of your shit!" Mr. Ivanov is caught off guard and tells her to calm down, but she grabs the small trash can next to his desk, dumps it out and then throws it at his empty desk.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov calls Alyona up to the computer at the front of the class, with the large monitor facing the rest of the class so everyone can see what you are doing on it. He asks Alyona to troubleshoot a problem he has created on a small program. She tries but fails to figure it out. He arrongantly starts mocking her inability to, as he puts it, "Solve even the most basic of problems that a three year old could have solved by now."'
+			'At that point, Alyona loses it. "Fuck you, you worthless motherfucker! I''m tired of your shit!" Mr. Ivanov is caught off guard and tells her to calm down, but she grabs the small trash can next to his desk, dumps it out and +throws it at his empty desk.'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage2.jpg"></center>'
-				'He fumes. "That''s enough young lady. I''m taking you to the principal''s office." he says as he starts walking torwards her, but she grabs a chair and violently yells at him. "I will bash your fucking head in with this chair if you even dare try to touch me asshole!" This causes him to stop and take a step back, the whole class is stunned by this. Alyona is known to have a violent streak, but normally she spends most of her time sleeping in class.'
+				'He fumes. "That''s enough young lady. I''m taking you to the principal''s office." he says as he starts walking torwards her, but she grabs a chair and violently yells at him. "I will smash your fucking head in if you even dare try to touch me asshole!" This causes him to stop and take a step back, the whole class stunned. Alyona is known to have a violent streak, but she normally spends most of her time sleeping in class.'
 				
 				act 'Keep watching':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Mr Ivanov somewhat calmly says "Fine I won''t touch you, but you are going to the principal''s office." She screams and throws the chair across the room into the wall, then in a much more calm tone says. "Fine, whatever, let''s go." She heads out of class with Mr. Ivanov trailing behind her. Once they are gone, everyone starts talking about what just happened and sending texts on their phones. Neither of them return to class before the bell rings.'
+					'Mr Ivanov somewhat calmly says "Fine I won''t touch you, but you are going to the principal''s office." She screams and throws the chair across the room, then in a much more calm tone says "Fine, whatever. Let''s go." She heads out of class with Mr. Ivanov trailing behind her. Once they are gone, everyone starts talking about what just happened and sending texts on their phones. Neither of them return to class before the bell rings.'
 					
 					act 'Leave the classroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1109,17 +1109,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/lizalb.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Albina and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and when they notice Gerasim has his phone out, they give him their phones and ask him to take several pictures of them together. They do a variety of poses together before collecting their phones from him.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Bella and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and when they notice Gerasim has his phone out, they give him their phones and ask him to take several pictures of them together. They do a variety of poses together before collecting their phones from him.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/lizskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Albina and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and looking at something on Albina''s monitor. Lizaveta leans over to get a better view, which gives a nice view of her thigh.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Bella and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and looking at something on Bella''s monitor. Lizaveta leans over to get a better view, which gives a nice view of her thigh.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 21 and soniaPS = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/soniabutt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. It is a fairly hard assignment and you are sure it will take to the end of class to finish. Sonia walks past you up to Mr Ivanov''s desk and tells him she doesn''t understand and asks if he can help. He turns his monitor so she can see it and he starts explaining to her what he just explained to class. While he is doing this, Sonia leans forward and pulls her skirt up and her panties down, showing the whole class her naked ass and pussy. Several students take out their phones and start taking pictures of her, but she doesn''t seem to mind in the slightest.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. It is a fairly hard assignment and you are sure it will take to the end of class to finish. Sonia walks past you up to Mr Ivanov''s desk, tells him she doesn''t understand and asks if he can help. He turns his monitor so she can see it and starts explaining to her what he just explained to class. While he is doing this, Sonia leans forward, lifts her skirt up and pulls her panties down, showing the whole class her naked ass and pussy. Several students take out their phones and start taking pictures of her, but she doesn''t seem to mind in the slightest.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1127,7 +1127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 22:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/soniashirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her boobs from her neck to her skirt. Mr Ivanov tells her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her boobs. Mr Ivanov scolds her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
 			'Sonia smiles to him seductively. "I thought you liked what you saw."'
 			'He blushes and repeats himself. "Sit down now." Sonia, with a bemused smile, sits back in her chair and slowly buttons her shirt back up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
@@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 23:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/zinlean.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, Albina, who is still working on it, asks Zinaida if she would come over and help her, since Zinaida was the first one done as always. She goes over and starts trying to help explain things to Albina. Mr Ivanov doesn''t seem to mind, but then again, he lets the nerds get away with a lot. As Zinaida helps Albina, she leans forward more and more until you can almost see up her skirt, although her tights would ruin any view even if you could see anything.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, Albina, who is still working on it, asks Zinaida if she would come over and help her, since Zinaida was the first one done as always. She goes over and starts trying to help explain things to Albina. Mr Ivanov doesn''t seem to mind, but then again, he lets the nerds get away with a lot. As Zinaida helps Albina, she leans forward until you can almost see up her skirt, although her tights would ruin any view, even if you could see anything.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -1175,15 +1175,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Yenotin poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Yenotin that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Yenotin poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Yenotin that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mr Yenotin prods impatiently. Mr. Yenotin is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Yenotin sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Yenotin sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -1193,7 +1193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself a pair and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_10.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			if soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Mr. Yenotin engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts flirting with him openly and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr Yenotin. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia.'
+				'Mr. Yenotin engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts openly flirting with him and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr Yenotin. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8 and soniaPS = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1239,7 +1239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Svyatoslav letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Svyatoslav letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1249,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A146'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Marcus. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Marcus. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Stasya':
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A139'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Stasya. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Stasya. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Alyona':
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Ekaterina':
@@ -1273,7 +1273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Ekaterina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Ekaterina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Svyatoslav':
@@ -1281,7 +1281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Svyatoslav. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Svyatoslav. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Paulina':
@@ -1289,7 +1289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A24'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Paulina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Paulina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Sonia':
@@ -1297,15 +1297,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
-			act 'Lesco':
+			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
-				npc_rel['A7'] += 1
+				npc_rel['A17'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Irina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Irina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
@@ -1313,7 +1313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Mr Yenotin a question about his lesson. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Marcus turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even the teacher walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Marcus again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1338,22 +1338,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15 and (soniafall = 5 or soniaPS = 1):
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/soniadare1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Paulina talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr Yenotin desk and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk and pull your panties down and your skirt up showing off your butt."'
+			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Paulina talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr Yenotin and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk, pull your panties down and show everyone your ass."'
 			'Sonia blushes a little, but also looks thrilled at the idea. "Everyone would see."'
-			'Paulina nods. "Yeah everyone would see how badass you are."'
+			'Paulina nods. "Yeah, everyone would see how badass you are."'
 			'Sonia looks around, spots you looking at them and grins as she gets up and heads up to Mr Yenotin''s desk.'
 			act 'Ignore them and wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/soniadare2.jpg"></center>'
-				'She stops at his desk and starts talking to him quietly. You can''t hear what she is saying but he is smiling and nodding to her before he starts explaining something to her. She leans forward over the desk, then reaches back and pulls her skirt up and then her panties down, showing off her bare ass and pussy to the whole class. When Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking just about the whole class pulls out their phones and starts taking pictures of Sonia''s naked ass.'
+				'She stops at his desk and starts talking to him quietly. You can''t hear what she is saying, but he is smiling and nodding at her before he starts explaining something to her. She leans forward over the desk, lifts her skirt up and then pulls her panties down, showing off her bare ass and pussy to the whole class. When Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, just about the whole class pull out their phones and start taking pictures of Sonia''s naked ass.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 			'For today''s lesson, Mr Yenotin decides to have the class to read a passage from an old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes find difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page. She sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over, spotting Marcus. "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages? You need the practice anyway."'
-			'Marcus looks worryingly around, hesitating. "Can I skip it this time?" he asks. Mr Yenotin is shaking his head."Don''t worry Marcus, go on. It''ll be fine."'
+			'Marcus looks worryingly around, hesitating. "Can I skip it this time?" he pleads. Mr Yenotin is shaking his head. "Don''t worry Marcus, go on. It''ll be fine."'
 			*nl
 			'Marcus clears his throat and begins reading. He''s painfully slow at times and his American accent doesn''t help but he does his best. As he comes to a difficult part, he starts stammering and gets stuck trying to pronounce a word correctly.'
 			'While Marcus is trying to tackle the word, you hear someone snickering behind him. It''s Alyona. "M-M-Maybe you should t-t-try once again. Are you slow or something?" The rest of the class starts laughing while Marcus shamefully stares down on his desk...'
@@ -1368,9 +1368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					grupvalue[1] += 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Not wanting to partake in the bullying you decide to speak up. "Oh, shut up Alyona. It''s not like you''re any better. At least Marcus has got an excuse. What''s yours, drunk again?"'
+					'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, you decide to speak up. "Shut up Alyona. It''s not like you''re any better. At least Marcus has an excuse. What''s yours, drunk again?"'
 					'Alyona reacts as expected. She leaps from her desk and heads straight towards you. "What the fuck did you say to me bitch? You don''t know anything about me. You say something like that to me again and I will fuck you up bitch!"'
-					'Before she reaches you, Mr Yenotin steps in and deescalates the situation, telling Alyona to return to her desk. The class sits there in silence for a moment before Mr Yenotin tells Lesco to read instead. After a while, you notice Marcus looking at you, nodding gratefully.'
+					'Before she reaches you, Mr Yenotin steps in and defuses the situation, telling Alyona to return to her desk. The class sits in silence for a moment before Mr Yenotin tells Lesco to read instead. After a while, you notice Marcus looking at you, nodding gratefully.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1390,8 +1390,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act'Do nothing':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, but also not wanting to piss off Alyona or the gopniks, you don''t say anything. Mr Yenotin says to Marcus "Please continue." He then gives Alyona a look. "Please be nice, treat others as you would like them to treat you." This doesn''t have the effect he was hoping for as it just gets her and several other students laughing.'
-				'After a bit, Marcus is still struggling and now Paulina joins in as well in taunting Marcus, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good job. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit. Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
+				'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, but also not wanting to piss off Alyona or the gopniks, you don''t say anything. "Please continue." Mr Yenotin tells Marcus while giveing Alyona a disapproving look. "Please be nice and treat others as you would like them to treat you." This doesn''t have the effect he was hoping for as it just gets her and several other students laughing.'
+				'After a few minutes, Marcus is still struggling and now Paulina joins in as well, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good effort. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit? Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act'Take over reading':
@@ -1399,7 +1399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				npc_rel['A146'] += 1
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hate that Marcus is being bullied but you don''t want to piss off Alyona or the other gopniks either, so you wait for Marcus to stop again and you start reading instead. You know it isn''t your turn, but you don''t care. Mr Yenotin smiles at you and doesn''t seem to mind. Marcus lets out a sigh of relief and gives you a grateful smile, while Alyona just rolls her eyes at you for ruining her fun.'
+				'You hate seeing Marcus being bullied but you don''t want to piss off Alyona or the other gopniks either, so you wait for Marcus to stop again and you start reading instead. You know it isn''t your turn, but you don''t care. Mr Yenotin smiles at you and doesn''t seem to mind. Marcus lets out a sigh of relief and gives you a grateful smile, while Alyona just rolls her eyes at you for ruining her fun.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
@@ -1409,8 +1409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teachdis.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your heart is pounding. Mr Yenotin is much older than you, why is he looking at your legs like that? Isn''t he supposed to know better? You try to straighten your skirt as inconspicuously as you can, attempting to make it look natural, like a random afterthought and not because of his staring.'
-				'Mr Yenotin doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show and calls attention to you "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
-				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology, "I''m sorry, Mr. Yenotin."'
+				'Mr Yenotin doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show and calls attention to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
+				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology. "I''m sorry, Mr. Yenotin."'
 				'For the remainder of the class, he keeps shooting glances in your direction. He seems to be having a great time in class today and you suspect that you''re the reason.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1433,8 +1433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'stat'
 					grupvalue[1] +=1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say'
-					'"Mr Yenotin, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Yenotin, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
 					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Yenotin looks embarrassed. He opens his mouth as if he wants to say something in defense, but thinks the better of it and just lets you have your win. After a while, he manages to get the class back under control and continues to teach, carefully avoiding your legs.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1475,9 +1474,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					npc_rel['A26'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
 					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When the teacher looks at you, he''s staring right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now.'
-					'"What is the meaning of this <<$pcs_nickname>>!?" your teacher says angrily.'
+					'"What is the meaning of this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>!?" Mr Yenotin says angrily.'
 					'You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look and I''m telling the principal."'
-					'Flustered, Mr. Yenotin leaves the class for a moment. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if maybe someone else knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Yenotin returns to class and resumes his lesson like nothing happened, carefully avoiding you with his eyes. Everyone in class is very surprised you did not get kicked out after what you just did.'
+					'Flustered, Mr. Yenotin leaves the class for a moment. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if anyone knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Yenotin returns to class and resumes his lesson like nothing happened, carefully avoiding eye contact you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you didn''t get kicked out after what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1485,19 +1484,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 18:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/alyonachalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr Yenotin calls Alyona up to the front of the class and asks her to write on the chalkboard what he recites. He faces the class talking about a complex sentence structure, but instead of writing what he says, Alyona starts using the chalk to draw a female naked backside and then a large dick sticking in it''s ass. This gets the whole class laughing and Mr Yenotin is confused and tries to calm everyone down. He finally turns around and see''s whats on the chalkboard and rushes up to wipe it clean. He then tells Alyona to take a seat as he starts writing what he says on the chalkboard himself as he tries to continue the lesson.'
+			'Mr Yenotin calls Alyona up to the front of the class and asks her to write what he recites on the chalkboard. He faces the class talking about a complex sentence structure, but instead of writing what he says, Alyona starts drawing a female''s naked backside with a large dick in it''s ass. This gets the whole class laughing and confuses Mr Yenotin, who tries to calm everyone down. He finally turns around, sees what''s on the chalkboard and rushes up to wipe it clean. He then tells Alyona to take a seat as he starts writing what he says on the chalkboard himself as he tries to continue the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/alyonasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice some smoke drifting your way near the end of class. You turn and see Alyona sitting there, looking bored while smoking a cigarette. When Mr Yenotin sees it, he walks back and says to her. "There is no smoking in class."'
-			'She gives him a bored look. "I know." She replies as she takes another drag of her cigarette.'
+			'You notice some smoke drifting your way near the end of class. You turn and see Alyona sitting there, looking bored while smoking a cigarette. When Mr Yenotin sees it, he walks up to her and says "There is no smoking in class."'
+			'She gives him a bored look. "I know." she replies as she takes another drag of her cigarette.'
 			'He gives her a frustrated look. "Please put that cigarette out."'
 			'She gives him a half ass, bewildered look. "What cigarette?"'
-			'He sighs. "The one you''re smoking..." before he just gives up and takes the cigarette from her and walks back to the front of the class, where he puts it out and throws the butt in the trash can before continuing his lesson.'
+			'He sighs. "The one you''re smoking..." before he just gives up, takes the cigarette from her and walks back to the front of the class, where he puts it out and throws the butt in the trash can before continuing his lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/paulpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "Thats as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be ... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be ... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev2
+! This file contains the class events for geopgraphy, math, history and shop 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -10,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -19,12 +20,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mrs. Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties and your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe the board. You totally forget that not only are you are not wearing panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -57,11 +58,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained grasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Valentin letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained grasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Valentin letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 			act 'Mefodiy':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -124,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mrs Sokoloff a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Artem turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mrs. Sokoloff walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Artem again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -165,16 +166,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					act 'Scream':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classcum.jpg"></center>'
-						'You feel something wet hit the side of your face and shoulder from behind. You look over just in time to see Vitek finish jerking off on you.'
-						'"What the hell are you fucking insane?" you shout as you feel the consistency of cum on your fingers as you try and wipe the wetness from your face.'
-						'"Listen here-." Just as the boys are about to reply, they stop as Mrs Sokoloff returns.'
+						'You feel something wet hit the side of your face and shoulder from behind. You look over just in time to see Valentin finish jerking off on you.'
+						'"What the hell?! Are you fucking insane?!" you shout as you feel the consistency of cum on your fingers as you try and wipe the wetness from your face.'
+						'"Listen here-" Just as the boys are about to reply, they stop as Mrs Sokoloff returns.'
 						act 'Don''t tell on them':
 							*clr & cla
 							npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 							npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You quickly start wiping the cum off you while giving them dirty looks. One of the girls from another grade gives you some tissues to help. You quickly clean yourself and your clothes up as best you can. Mrs Sokoloff notices you and asks "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what are you doing?"'
+							'You quickly start wiping the cum off you while giving them dirty looks. One of the girls from another grade gives you some tissues to help. You quickly clean yourself and your clothes up as best you can. Mrs Sokoloff notices you and asks "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, what are you doing?"'
 							'You glance up at her and then turn to clean up the rest of your shoulder while looking at the boys. "Something must have dripped on me from the ceiling and I was just cleaning it up." Mrs Sokoloff looks up at the celling, as if expecting something to fall from it for a few moments and then goes back to teaching the class.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -191,10 +192,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 								grupvalue[4] -= 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
 								'You quickly get out of your seat and run to Mrs Sokoloff, telling her what happened.'
-								'Straight away, she begins to yell for Vitek and Valentin to come to the desk. "The principal will have a field day with you two. How could you do something disgusting like this?"'
-								'While the boys keep to their story that they''re innocent, Mrs Sokoloff turns to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> you''re excused to visit the toilet to wash off."'
+								'Straight away, she begins to yell for Vitek and Valentin to come to the desk. "The principal will have a field day with you two. How could you do something so disgusting?"'
+								'While the boys keep to their story that they''re innocent, Mrs Sokoloff turns to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re excused to visit the toilet to wash off."'
 								*nl
-								'When you return all cleaned up, the boys are gone. Mrs Sokoloff tells you that they''ve been sent to the principal and that it was the right thing you told her.'
+								'When you return all cleaned up, the boys are gone. Mrs Sokoloff tells you that they''ve been sent to the principal and that you done the right thing telling her.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						else
@@ -206,8 +207,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/geography.jpg"></center>'
 			'For today''s lesson Mrs Sokoloff is talking about the continent Africa. She''s going through the rich flora and fauna that can be found there.'
-			'She tells you to open the book to page 150, where you see a photo of a tribe. They''re wearing a minuscule amount of clothes. "Look at them, they''re nude." outbursts a laughing Lazar. "They all look like Marcus!" he continues on.'
+			'She tells you to open your books to page 150, where you see a photo of a tribe. They''re wearing a minuscule amount of clothes. "Look at them, they''re nude." outbursts a laughing Lazar. "They all look like Marcus!" he continues on.'
 			'"Shut up!" yells Andrey. "Are you so butthurt that they all have bigger cocks than you?" he asks Lazar.'
+			*nl
 			'The whole class bursts out in laughter. "How the hell do you know that? Have you been looking at Marcus''s cock? What a faggot!"'
 			'"Fuck you, that wasn''t what I meant. It''s well known that black people have got bigger cocks." Andrey quickly replies.'
 			'"Well, everyone has a bigger cock than you, but why not ask the class expert on cocks? What do you say <<$pcs_nickname>>, is there some truth to that?" Lazar asks and the whole class turns toward you.'
@@ -215,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
 				'You look around at the class as everyone sit on the edge of their chairs in anticipation.'
-				'You only answer them by showing the middle finger while still reading the history book.'
+				'Your answer is showing them the middle finger without even looking up from your book.'
 				'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Share your knowledge." Lazar sighs.'
 				'As you''re about to tell them off, Mrs Sokoloff clears her throat, telling everyone if they keep it up, they will be sent to the principal. Everybody settles down and the class goes back to normal.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -224,9 +226,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to tease them a little and begin laughing. "Well, from what I''ve noticed you guys are in big trouble if Marcus begins going after all the girls. There''s a reason they say ''once you go black you never go back.''"'
-				'The boys are sitting there with their mouths wide open. They can''t believe what they just heard.'
-				'You continue laughing. "You lot really are fucking stupid! How the hell should I know that? Tell you what. Next time you have gym class, stand next to each other and compare your little dicks, faggots."'
-				'"That''s enough! You''ve had your fun." Mrs Sokoloff angrily says. You quickly settle down and return to the lesson.'
+		        'The boys are sitting there with their mouths wide open. They can''t believe what they just heard.'
+				'You continue laughing. "You lot really are fucking stupid! How the hell should I know? Tell you what. Next time you have gym class, stand next to each other and compare your little dicks, faggots."'
+				'"That''s enough! You''ve had your fun." Mrs Sokoloff angrily shouts. You quickly settle down and return to the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
@@ -235,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/stasyaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class as everyone is getting up to leave, you hear Andrey and Stasya talking and him saying he will miss her, as they don''t have next class together. Stasya unzips her skirt and pulls it wide open, showing him her panties while sticking her tongue out at him. He grins but then grumbles a bit as he adjusts his crotch. "Damnit now I am going to have a hard on thinking about you all next hour. She laughs and they walk out together.'
+			'At the end of class as everyone is getting up to leave, you hear Andrey and Stasya talking and he says how he will miss her, as they don''t have next class together. Stasya unzips her skirt and pulls it wide open, showing him her panties while sticking her tongue out at him. He grins but then grumbles a bit as he adjusts his crotch. "Damnit! Now I''m going to have a hard on thinking about you for the next hour!" She laughs and they walk out together.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -267,12 +269,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of both of your holes. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
+				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you aren''t wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of both of your holes. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
 				*nl
 				'Dimka: "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you certainly know how how to put on a show."'
 				'Igor: "Yeah, you have some nice holes there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 				if npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and NikoPayback = 0:
-					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says, "That''s my girl right there."'
+					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says "That''s my girl right there."'
 				elseif npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4 and NikoPayback > 0:
 					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says "I always knew that you were a proud little whore."'
 				elseif npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
@@ -285,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of your pussy, as well as the butt plug currently stuffed up your asshole. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
+				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of your pussy, as well as the butt plug currently stuffed in your asshole. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
 				*nl
 				'Dimka: "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you getting that ass loose for later?"'
 				'Igor: "Yeah, you have some nice holes there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -308,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you look around the classroom, waiting for the lesson to begin, you pause to admire the expensive looking stockings that Sonia is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you look around the classroom, waiting for the lesson to begin, you pause to admire the expensive looking stockings that Sonia is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -320,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'stat'
 			elseif VK = 2 and soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'As Mr Tsarev has everyone work on solving math problems, Sonia raises her hand then asks for assistance. As Mr Tsarev shows begins tutoring Sonia, she begins openly flirting and dropping not to subtle innuendos while he does his best to dismiss her advances, but you notice a bulge forming in his pants. At this point, Sonia pulls open her shirt and flashes her breasts at Mr. Tsarev and the whole class. Mr Tsarev pauses in shock for a moment before saying, "That is very inappropriate behavior." He then does his best to silence the class before rushing back to his desk. You occasionally catch him staring back at Sonia when he believes that no one is looking.'
+				'As Mr Tsarev has everyone work on solving math problems, Sonia raises her hand and asks for assistance. As Mr Tsarev begins tutoring Sonia, she begins openly flirting and dropping none too subtle innuendos while he does his best to dismiss her advances, but you notice a bulge forming in his pants. At this point, Sonia pulls open her shirt and flashes her breasts at Mr. Tsarev and the whole class. Mr Tsarev pauses in shock for a moment before saying "That is very inappropriate behavior." He then does his best to silence the class before rushing back to his desk. You occasionally catch him staring back at Sonia when he believes that no one is looking.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -333,7 +335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Sonia Ivanko">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/soniasmile.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hear the sound of something hitting the ground and turn around to see Sonia picking up her lipstick. Sonia is wearing a transparent blouse that does a very nice job of emphasizing her breasts to anyone willing to look her way. Sonia places her lipstick in her bag when she notices you looking, then gives you a warm smile before turning back to the front of the class.'
+				'You hear the sound of something hitting the ground and turn around to see Sonia picking up her lipstick. She is wearing a transparent blouse that does a very nice job of emphasizing her breasts to anyone willing to look her way. She places her lipstick in her bag when she notices you looking, then gives you a warm smile before turning back to the front of the class.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
@@ -356,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as Natasha asks Mr Tsarev a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle a few drawing in your notebook. When you look back up, you notice Igor turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction?'
 			*nl
 			'Even Mr Tsarev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing with his lesson. Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Igor again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Button your shirt':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -405,7 +407,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Tsarev, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!" Loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Tsarev is obviously embarrassed. He opens his mouth to speak, but realizes that speaking might make things worse, so he tries his best to get the class back under control before continuing the lesson, carefully avoiding your legs.'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Tsarev, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"' 
+					'Loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Tsarev is obviously embarrassed. He opens his mouth to speak, but realizes that speaking might make things worse, so he tries his best to get the class back under control before continuing the lesson, carefully avoiding your legs.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -444,9 +447,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					grupvalue[3] -= 1
 					npc_rel['A26'] -= 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr Tsarev looks at you, he stares right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now. "Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>, what is the meaning of this!?" Mr. Tsarev says angrily. You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal." He looks slightly nervous now, knowing that you caught him staring at you. He still tries to posture himself. "<<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!" You have no intentions of getting up and add, with a sly smile, "And I don''t know, maybe your wife?"'
+					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr Tsarev looks at you, he stares right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, what is the meaning of this!?" Mr Tsarev says angrily. You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal." He looks slightly nervous now, knowing that you caught him staring at you and tries to compose himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!" You have no intentions of getting up and add, with a sly smile, "And I don''t know, maybe your wife?"'
 					*nl
-					'Obviously flustered, Mr Tsarev leaves the classroom for a moment to collect his thoughts. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if maybe someone else knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Tsarev returns to class and resumes his lesson as if nothing had happened, carefully avoiding eye contact with you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you did not get kicked out after what just happened.'
+					'Obviously flustered, Mr Tsarev leaves the classroom for a moment to collect his thoughts. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if anyone knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Tsarev returns to class and resumes his lesson as if nothing had happened, carefully avoiding eye contact with you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you didn''t get kicked out after what just happened.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -454,25 +457,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/chrislar.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class is ending Christina, Lariska, and Vanya are all talking. The girls get up and hug, posing together as Vanya takes Lariska''s phone and takes several pictures of them together.'
+			'As class is ending Christina, Lariska and Vanya are all talking. The girls get up and hug, posing together as Vanya takes Lariska''s phone and takes several pictures of them together.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/chrissoniabully.jpg"></center>'
-			'Sonia and Christina are called to the front to both work on the same problem to see who can get it done faster. Christina stops in the middle of it and grabs the back of Sonia''s skirt and pulls it up, showing off her butt cheeks as she is only wearing thong panties. This gets a lot of hoots and hollars from the rest of the class. Mr Tsarev tries several times to get the class back in order and sends both girls to sit back down.'
+			'Sonia and Christina are called to the front to both work on the same problem to see who can get it done faster. Christina stops in the middle of it, grabs the back of Sonia''s skirt and pulls it up, showing off her ass cheeks as she is wearing a thong. This gets a lot of hoots and hollars from the rest of the class. Mr Tsarev tries several times to get the class back in order and sends both girls to sit back down.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/larskirtup.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, Lariska leans forward in her seat to talk to Christina sitting in front of her today. As she does Arkadi, who is sitting behind her, grabs her skirt and pulls it up, showing off her panty clad ass. It takes her a while to wrestle the hem of her skirt out of his hands and get it back in place, blushing as most of the class laughs.'
+			'During class, Lariska leans forward in her seat to talk to Christina, who is sitting in front of her. As she does Arkadi, who is sitting behind her, grabs her skirt and pulls it up, showing off her panty clad ass. It takes her a while to wrestle the hem of her skirt out of his hands and get it back in place, blushing as most of the class laughs.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12 and soniaPS = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/soniachair.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends, Mr Tsarev gives the class the last five minutes of class to do what they want. Some students talk to their fellow students next to them, a few get up and walk around. Sonia gets up and tries to step over a desk, but ends up straddling the back of a chair. Instead of stepping the rest of the way over it, she stops and bites her lower lip, then scoots back and forth along the chair. Before anyone really notices what she is doing, the bell rings and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends, Mr Tsarev gives the class the last five minutes to do what they want. Some students talk to their fellow students next to them, a few get up and walk around. Sonia gets up and tries to step over a desk, but ends up straddling the back of a chair. Instead of stepping the rest of the way over it, she stops and bites her lower lip, then scoots back and forth along the chair. Before anyone really notices what she is doing, the bell rings and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -487,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You unfold the note and read it. It says. ''I dare you to take a picture of your pussy and send it to Mr Tsarev.'' After reading the note, in a bit of a surprise at what she wrote, you glance up and you see both Christina and Lariska encouraging you to do it. Lariska, who is sitting next to you, even leans over and whispers "Do it."'
+					'You unfold the note and read it. It says ''I dare you to take a picture of your pussy and send it to Mr Tsarev.'' After reading the note, a bit surprised at what she wrote, you glance up and you see both Christina and Lariska encouraging you to do it. Lariska, who is sitting next to you, even leans over and whispers "Do it."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 						act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -509,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare4.jpg"></center>'
 						if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs and pull up your skirt, pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed and take a photo of your pussy. You quickly pull your panties back in place and pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
+							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs, pull up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed and take a photo. You quickly pull your panties back in place and pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
 						else
 							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs and pull up your skirt, exposing your pussy since you are not wearing panties and take a photo of your pussy. You quickly pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
 						end
@@ -519,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						act 'Send the image':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You send the image through the school wifi so your number doesn''t show up. The nerds long ago set it up long ago for the cool kids so texts could be sent anonymously. After you send it, Mr Tsarev stops what he is doing when his phone buzzes and looks at it. There is a shocked look on his face for a moment before he looks around at the class, obviously trying to figure out who sent it. A few minutes later, the bell to end class rings.'
+							'You send the image through the school wifi so your number doesn''t show up. The nerds set it up long ago for the cool kids so texts could be sent anonymously. After you send it, Mr Tsarev stops what he is doing when his phone buzzes and looks at it. There is a shocked look on his face for a moment before he looks around at the class, obviously trying to figure out who sent it. A few minutes later, the bell to end class rings.'
 							act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					end
@@ -553,9 +556,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/touchhands.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You lightly run your fingers across the palm of his hand as you listen to his explanation. After he quickly checks to make sure that no one notices, he reciprocates and takes your hand in his left hand. Seconds later, you feel his right hand resting on your back, gently rubbing it as he continues to explain a difficult to understand part of today''s lesson. You move your hips a bit closer to his, and lean closer to him as you continue listening to his explaination. When he is done with his explanation, you whisper in his ear, "You''re so smart and kind, Anatoly. I wish you would teach classes at the University, so I could go to your classes for several years more when I finish here. There is still so much that you can teach me."'
+		'You lightly run your fingers across the palm of his hand as you listen to his explanation. After he quickly checks to make sure that no one notices, he reciprocates and takes your hand in his left hand. Seconds later, you feel his right hand resting on your back, gently rubbing it as he continues to explain a difficult to understand part of today''s lesson. You move your hips a bit closer to his, and lean closer to him as you continue listening to his explaination. When he is done with his explanation, you whisper in his ear. "You''re so smart and kind, Anatoly. I wish you would teach classes at the University, so I could go to your classes for several years more when I finish here. There is still so much that you can teach me."'
 		*nl
-		'You notice a small shiver roll down his spine as he responds "Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>...I mean Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I should let you get back to work." He then quickly walks back to his desk while occasionally glancing back at you.'
+		'You notice a small shiver roll down his spine as he responds. "Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>...I mean Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I should let you get back to work." He then quickly walks back to his desk while occasionally glancing back at you.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 	act 'Coerce him':
@@ -564,9 +567,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashteach.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You edge closer and closer to him as he continues to explain some solutions. You step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. He stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward and whisper in his ear "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear. "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
+		'You edge closer and closer to him as he continues to explain some solutions. You step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. He stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward and whisper in his ear. "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear. "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
 		*nl
-		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips. You encourage him some more. "That feels so good Anatoly. Can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges in two fingers and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice, Mr Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says "You should let you get back to work." He gets up then walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two fingers in his mouth, swallowing your juices.'
+		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips. You encourage him some more. "That feels so good Anatoly. Can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges two fingers in and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice, Mr Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says "I should let you get back to work." He gets up and walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two fingers in his mouth, swallowing your juices.'
 		*nl
 		'It is clear that Mr Tsarev definitely won''t be forgetting today''s lesson anytime soon.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -583,13 +586,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teacherhelp.jpg"></center>'
 			'You smile at him empathetically and you put your hand on his shoulder for a brief moment to say to him "Would you like me to have a talk with her? My father left when I was still a baby. Your daughter doesn''t know what she''s missing, I would kill to have a father as great as you. I bet I could help her realize that. How about you take me home sometime, to talk to her?"'
 			*nl
-			'He responds "That is a kind offer, but I need to solve my issues on my own." You lightly squeeze on his shoulder before saying "Are you sure? I would love to come home with you someday, maybe you can tutor me. I''m sure that a strong man like you can teach me many things." Anatoly''s eyes widen before he replies, "Uhh maybe some other time. I should let you get back to work." He stands up then returns to his desk. You notice him sweating more than usual.'
+			'He responds "That is a kind offer, but I need to solve my issues on my own." You lightly squeeze on his shoulder before saying "Are you sure? I would love to come home with you someday, maybe you can tutor me. I''m sure that a strong man like you can teach me many things." Anatoly''s eyes widen before he replies. "Uhh.. maybe some other time. I should let you get back to work." He stands up and returns to his desk. You notice him sweating more than usual.'
 		end
 		act 'Be helpful':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teacherhelp.jpg"></center>'
-			'You suggest "Are you frightened that you might say something that might push her away while trying to help her with her drinking habits? You are a teacher, you educate us all for a living. You just need more confidence in yourself as well as an ability to take chances from time to time. You can even teach your daughter about the ways of life, like you do in class every day."'
+			'"Are you frightened that you might say something that might push her away while trying to help her with her drinking habits? You are a teacher, you educate us all for a living. You just need more confidence in yourself as well as an ability to take chances from time to time. You can even teach your daughter about the ways of life, like you do in class every day." you explain to him.'
 			*nl
-			'He nods his head slowly before responding. "You make a really good point. Maybe if I just speak with her without second guessing myself, I can actually make some progress. Thank you Miss... <<$pcs_firstname>> for your advice. You seem to have a great understanding of people in general." He gives your shoulder a light squeeze before returning to his desk.'
+			'He nods his head slowly before responding. "You make a really good point. Maybe if I just speak with her without second guessing myself, I can actually make some progress. Thank you Miss... <<$pcs_firstname>>, for your advice. You seem to have a great understanding of people in general." He gives your shoulder a light squeeze before returning to his desk.'
 		end
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -605,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -614,15 +617,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgoe that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:	
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mrs Sokoloff prods impatiently. Mrs Sokoloff is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -636,9 +639,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -652,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A157'] -= 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is grabbing my breasts." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is grabbing my breasts." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Roman denies it, but Mrs Sokoloff doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -662,7 +665,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/breastg.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -679,7 +682,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mrs Sokoloff and turn around and slap Roman with all your force. Roman recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mrs Sokoloff''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Roman (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -687,7 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, with Roman behind you snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -703,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 2
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molesters fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Roman, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mrs Sokoloff, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Roman, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mrs Sokoloff, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -713,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Roman''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -723,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Roman''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -736,8 +739,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Roman behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mrs. Sokoloff. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Roman behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mrs. Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -751,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A157'] -= 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is snapping my bra." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman an look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is snapping my bra." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Roman denies it, but Mrs Sokoloff doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -761,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/engaged.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -778,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mrs Sokoloff and turn around and slap Roman with all your force. Roman recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mrs Sokoloff''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Roman (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -786,11 +789,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'During class, there is a loud crashing sound from the back of the class. You along with everyone else in the class turn to look. In the back, Petka is still sitting at his desk, but now the desk is laying on its side on the floor. The whole class bursts out laughing at him.'
-			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is ok, Mrs Sokoloff gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
+			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is OK, Mrs Sokoloff gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -801,11 +804,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Roman letting go of Igor''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Roman letting go of Igor''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Marcus':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -876,7 +879,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mrs Sokoloff a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Petka turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mrs. Sokoloff walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Petka again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -900,7 +903,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenatchair.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mrs.= Sokoloff asks the class to study quietly as she leaves the classroom a few minutes before the end of class. Most of the students start talking or get up  and start walking around as soon as she leaves. Lena on the other hand, walks up to Mrs Sokoloff''s desk, sits down in her chair and starts rolling and spinning around on it, seemingly having the time of her life.'
+			'At the end of class, Mrs Sokoloff asks the class to study quietly as she leaves the classroom a few minutes before the end of class. Most of the students start talking or get up and start walking around as soon as she leaves. Lena on the other hand, walks up to Mrs Sokoloff''s desk, sits down in her chair and starts rolling and spinning around on it, seemingly having the time of her life.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenlerskirt.jpg"></center>'
@@ -911,18 +914,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenlerupskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you notice Petka keeps looking back past you at the back of class. You turn your head to follow his gaze and see Lena and Lera sitting side by side with their legs slightly spread apart, just enough to show off their panties. They seem amused by all the looks they are getting.'
+			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you notice Petka keeps looking back past you to the back of the class. You turn your head to follow his gaze and see Lena and Lera sitting side by side with their legs slightly spread apart, just enough to show off their panties. They seem amused by all the looks they are getting.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/leratongue.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you glance around in boredom and notice Lera doing the same. When she see''s you looking at her, she sticks out her tongue at you. She has a surprisingly long tongue, maybe that is why Lena likes her so much? You hear Mrs Sokoloff clear her throat and you look back to the front of class to wait for class to end.'
+			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you glance around in boredom and notice Lera doing the same. When she sees you looking at her, she sticks out her tongue at you. She has a surprisingly long tongue, maybe that is why Lena likes her so much? You hear Mrs Sokoloff clear her throat and you look back to the front of class to wait for class to end.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/linaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, Mrs Sokoloff calls Lina up to the front of class to write an answer on the chalkboard. As she does, you and everyone else in class notice the back of her skirt is pulled up, held up by what looks like her pantyhose. You don''t think she is aware of the view she is giving the class as several students whistle or laugh. Lina seems confused and when Mrs Sokoloff tells the class to quieten down, she see''s what is causing the ruckus, grabs the back of Lina''s skirt and pulls it down. Only then does Lina realize what happened and blushes a bright red and turns back to the chalkboard to write out the answer. She sits back down, where she looks sheepish for the rest of the class.'
+			'During class, Mrs Sokoloff calls Lina up to the front of class to write an answer on the chalkboard. As she does, you and everyone else in class notice the back of her skirt is pulled up, held up by what looks like her pantyhose. You don''t think she is aware of the view she is giving the class as several students whistle or laugh. Lina seems confused and when Mrs Sokoloff tells the class to quieten down, she sees what is causing the ruckus, grabs the back of Lina''s skirt and pulls it down. Only then does Lina realize what happened and blushes a bright red and turns back to the chalkboard to write out the answer. She sits back down, where she looks sheepish for the rest of the class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -955,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see Vitek, Dan, and Vasily have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see Vitek, Dan and Vasily have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -964,15 +967,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Kuznetsov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Kuznetsov that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Kuznetsov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Kuznetsov that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mr Kuznetsov prods impatiently. Mr Kuznetsov is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Kuznetsov sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Kuznetsov sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -982,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>' 
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Viktoria is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Viktoria is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok7.jpg"></center>'
@@ -990,9 +993,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mr Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mr Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1006,7 +1009,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Kuznetsov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Mr Kuznetsov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Kuznetsov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Mr Kuznetsov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Dan denies it, but Mr Kuznetsov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1033,7 +1036,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Kuznetsov and turn around and slap Dan with all your force. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mr Kuznetsov''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1041,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -1057,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 2
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Dan, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Kuznetsov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Dan, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Kuznetsov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -1067,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1077,7 +1080,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1090,8 +1093,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1115,7 +1118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with Mr Kuznetsov now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr. Kuznetsov, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with Mr Kuznetsov now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end			
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1132,7 +1135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Kuznetsov and turn around and slap Dan with all your force. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mr Kuznetsov''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Come and see me after school."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1153,7 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Dimka':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1222,7 +1225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mr Kuznetsov a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Marcus turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Kuznetsov walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Marcus again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1246,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12 and hotcat => 6:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/nushpussy.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to end, you glance around bored. You notice Anushka looking back at you, but you think nothing of it. When you meet her eyes again, she grins and reaches down between her legs as she spreads them apart and she turns to face you. She pulls her panties aside to reveal her pussy and gives you a amused smirk as your eyes drift down to her hand movements. You hear Mr Kuznetsov clear his throat and you look back to the front of class. When you glance back later, she is sitting normally again and either doesn''t notice your glance or is ignoring it.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to end, you glance around bored. You notice Anushka looking back at you, but you think nothing of it. When you meet her eyes again, she grins, reaches down between her legs and spreads them apart before turning to face you. She pulls her panties aside to reveal her pussy and gives you an amused smirk as your eyes drift down to her hand movements. You hear Mr Kuznetsov clear his throat and you look back to the front of class. When you glance back later, she is sitting normally again and either doesn''t notice your glance or is ignoring it.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1255,7 +1258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/paulnushhump.jpg"></center>'
 			'Near the end of class, Mr Kuznetsov tells the class to study quietly as he leaves class a few minutes early. Of course, once he is gone no one listens and everyone starts wandering around messing with the tools. Meanwhile, Anushka starts to tease Fedor, asking him if he wants to fuck her until she makes him blush. When he finally admits he is attracted to her, Paulina swoops in behind Anushka, pushes into her and pulls up the back of her skirt.'
 			*nl
-			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Paulina says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick, it almost feels good." This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
+			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Paulina says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, and Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick! It almost feels good!" This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1309,7 +1312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You open your mouth and start to speak, but as you do, he suddenly rockets out of his chair, standing up and leaning across his desk. Before you have time to react, he grabs you by your tie and jerks you closer to him. "Did I fucking tell you you can speak? You will speak when I tell you to and you will by God learn to respect or at least fear me!"'
+			'You open your mouth and start to speak, but as you do, he suddenly rockets out of his chair and leans across his desk. Before you have time to react, he grabs you by your tie and jerks you closer to him. "Did I fucking tell you you can speak? You will speak when I tell you to and you will by God learn to respect or at least fear me!"'
 			act 'Punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -1322,11 +1325,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 					end
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'rough'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'butt plugged':
+					act 'Plugged':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop4.jpg"></center>'
-						'"You think your some bad little girl? Well I will show you what happens to bad little girls!" With one hand he pulls your cheeks apart and before you even have a chance to protest, he shoves the unlubriated butt plug up your ass. It hurts and really doesn''t want to slide in, but by sheer brute force he forces it in. You wince in pain as he does.'
+						'"You think you''re some bad little girl, huh? Well I will show you what happens to bad little girls!" With one hand he pulls your cheeks apart and before you even have a chance to protest, he shoves the unlubriated butt plug up your ass. It hurts and really doesn''t want to slide in, he forces it in with sheer brute force. You wince in pain as he does.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'rough', 'maso'
 						gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1334,7 +1337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop5.jpg"></center>'
-							'Once he has the plug fully seated up your ass, he pulls over a chair and sits down. He roughly grabs you, bends you over his knee and proceeds to spank you open handed. Not only does each swat sting, but each swat also jams the plug up your butt to its base. You grit your teeth and bare the pain.'
+							'Once he has the plug fully seated up your ass, he pulls over to a chair and sits down. He roughly grabs you, bends you over his knee and proceeds to spank you. Not only does each swat sting, but each swat also jams the plug up your ass to its base. You grit your teeth and bare the pain.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'rough', 'maso'
 							gs 'pain', 'asscheeks', 2, 'spank'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1357,14 +1360,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 										*clr & cla
 										minut += 5
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop8.jpg"></center>'
-										'Several minutes pass as he fucks your mouth, only for him to abruptly stop. He walks around the desk and roughly grabs hold of the butt plug in your ass and yanks it out, causing you to gasp in pain before you close your mouth again. He shoves the butt plug in your mouth. "That''s it bitch, suck that plug clean." He fucks your mouth with the butt plug as you try not to think about where it just was.'
+										'Several minutes pass as he fucks your mouth, only for him to abruptly stop. He walks around the desk, roughly grabs hold of the butt plug in your ass and yanks it out, causing you to gasp in pain before you close your mouth again. He shoves the butt plug in your mouth. "That''s it bitch, suck that plug clean." He fucks your mouth with the butt plug as you try not to think about where it just was.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'bound', 'deepthroat'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'No lube':
 											*clr & cla
 											minut += 10
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop9.jpg"></center>'
-											'With the plug nice and clean, he pulls it out of your mouth and drops it on the desk. He rolls you onto your back and uses one hand to pull your butt cheeks apart. Seconds later, you feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock against your loosened asshole. He just shoves it in, the only thing making the pain bearable is the butt plug having already stretched it out and your saliva acting as lube.'
+											'With the plug nice and clean, he pulls it out of your mouth and drops it on the desk. He rolls you onto your back and uses one hand to pull your ass cheeks apart. Seconds later, you feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock against your loosened asshole. He just shoves it in, the only thing making the pain bearable is the butt plug having already stretched it out and your saliva acting as lube.'
 											'It takes him a couple of minutes of roughly fucking your ass to finally shove his dick balls deep inside you. Once he does, he begins to pound your ass hard and furiously.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'bound'
 											gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
@@ -1373,16 +1376,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 												*clr & cla
 												minut += 10
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop10.jpg"></center>'
-												'After several minutes, you can feel your saliva not offering much in the way of lubrication anymore. Apparently he can as well. Maybe out of pity, or more likely because it feels better for him with a little lubrication, he pulls his dick out of your ass and takes off his pants. Once naked, he climbs up on the desk and straddles your chest. He grabs you by the hair and painfully yanks on your head while shoving his dick back in your mouth.'
+												'After several minutes, your saliva isn''t offering much in the way of lubrication anymore. Maybe out of pity, or more likely because it feels better for him with a little lubrication, he pulls his dick out of your ass and takes off his pants. Once naked, he climbs up on the desk and straddles your chest. He grabs you by the hair and painfully yanks on your head while shoving his dick back in your mouth.'
 												*nl
-												'He moans slightly. "You best suck it clean and get it nice and wet, because that is the last lubrication you''re going to get." He starts fucking your face, going balls down in your mouth again. You gag repeatedly, but do your best to coat his dick with your slobber.'
+												'He moans slightly. "You best suck it clean and get it nice and wet, because that is the last lubrication you''re going to get." He starts fucking your face, going balls down in your mouth again. You gag repeatedly, but do your best to coat his dick with your drool.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'bound', 'deepthroat'
 												gs 'stat'
-												act 'Lots of slobber':
+												act 'Anal':
 													*clr & cla
 													minut += 15
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop11.jpg"></center>'
-													'Once satisfied, he crawls back off the desk and unties your legs, then he promptly flips you over onto your stomach and half pulls you off the desk until you are bent over it. He lifts your right leg, bending it and places your knee on the desk. With your ass nice and spread by your position, you feel him shove his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock back into your ass. This time, it is not nearly as bad. Your asshole already stretched out and with fresh slobber for lubrication, it slides it pretty easily and he bottoms out balls deep inside you. He begins to pound your ass again.'
+													'Once satisfied, he crawls back off the desk and unties your legs. He promptly flips you over onto your stomach and half pulls you off the desk until you are bent over it. He lifts your right leg and places your knee on the desk. With your ass nice and spread by your position, you feel him shove his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock back inside you. This time, it is not nearly as bad. Your asshole already stretched out and with fresh saliva for lubrication, it slides in pretty easily and he bottoms out balls deep inside you. He begins to pound your ass again.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'bound'
 													gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -1390,7 +1393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 														*clr & cla
 														minut += 4
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop12.jpg"></center>'
-														'The lubrication from your slobber seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says. "Open you mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
+														'The lubrication from your drool seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says "Open you mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
 														*nl
 														'Several spurts of cum later, he lets go of you and gets dressed. Once he is finally fully dressed, he unties your hands and pulls you off the desk roughly, causing you to fall roughly to your knees. He throws your clothes at you as he sits back down at his desk. "Get the fuck out of my office, I don''t expect to see you in here again. If I do, then I will keep showing you what happens to bad little girls until you get it. Now get the fuck out!"'
 														if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1414,7 +1417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 						end
 					end
 				else
-					'He quickly walks around his desk and once he is standing next to you, he shoves you forward, bending you over his desk. He pulls up your skirt and violently yanks down your panties. You can hear the tearing fabric as he does. He gives your bare ass one hard open handed swat that stings. He lays into your ass, smacking about a dozen times until he leaves it red and stinging. With tears in your eyes, he finally stops, pulls you up by your tie and shoves you towards the door. "Now get out of here and start behaving in my class." You put you clothes back in place as best you can and then walk out.'
+					'He quickly walks around his desk and once he is standing next to you, he shoves you forward, bending you over his desk. He pulls up your skirt and violently yanks down your panties. You can hear the tearing fabric as he does. He gives your bare ass one hard open handed swat that stings. He lays into your ass, smacking about a dozen times until he leaves it red and stinging. With tears in your eyes, he finally stops, pulls you up by your tie and shoves you towards the door. "Now get out of here and start behaving in my class!" You put your clothes back in place as best you can and then walk out.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'

locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev3
+!This file contains the class events for literature, English, music and art.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -15,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big4.jpg"></center>'
 			'"What''s wrong, Igor? Why don''t you call me a slut like you and Dimka did to my friend yesterday!"'
 			*nl
-			'You look up to see Lizaveta and her clique surrounding Igor like wolves cornering their prey. Even from where you''re sitting, you can see how tense and rigid his body is as he keeps his head hung low, doing his best to ignore them by focusing on his school work, but Lizaveta demands his full attention. Before he can react, she snatches the paper out from under his pen and holds it above his head.'
+			'You look up to see Lizaveta and her friends surrounding Igor like wolves cornering their prey. Even from where you''re sitting, you can see how tense and rigid his body is as he keeps his head hung low, doing his best to ignore them by focusing on his school work, but Lizaveta demands his full attention. Before he can react, she snatches the paper out from under his pen and holds it above his head.'
 			*nl
 			'"Dimka is the only reason you''re considered popular!" she hisses before leaning in closer. "If it weren''t for him, you''d be nothing but a cum dump for all the boys in the school. I''m sure you''d love it, especially if that meant you''d get fucked by Dimka."'
 			*nl
@@ -88,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Ms Braakman poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Ms Braakman that, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Ms Braakman poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Ms Braakman that, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
@@ -104,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/work.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ms Braakman has the class working in pairs for today, so everyone has their desks pushed together, side by side with their partner''s. You''ve been paired together with Roman, and as usual he isn''t doing any of the work; instead he''s scribbling crudely drawn pictures in his notebook.'
+			'Ms Braakman has the class working in pairs today, so everyone has their desks pushed together, side by side with their partner''s. You''ve been paired together with Roman, and as usual he isn''t doing any of the work; instead he''s scribbling crudely drawn pictures in his notebook.'
 			act 'Get to work':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/events/roman_touch.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -190,7 +191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big152.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you overhear Feofan excitedly telling a boy about the last convention he went to.'
+			'During class, you overhear Feofan excitedly telling a boy about the last convention he attended.'
 			'"Feofan, not to be rude, but I don''t really care." the boy says.'
 			'"Just wait, I haven''t gotten to the best part!" Feofan says before continuing. You can''t tell if he lacks self-awareness or is just really thick.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -250,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 		'"Screw reading! <<$pcs_nickname>>''s mouth is better suited for sucking cock." you overhear someone say from behind you. You turn around and it''s none other than Petia staring back at you. Unashamed, a perverted smile spreads across his face. You get the feeling he''s undressing you with his eyes.'
 		act 'Say nothing':
 			*clr & cla			
-			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remaining class period. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
+			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remainder of class. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Blush':
@@ -273,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
 				grupvalue[3] -= 1
 				npc_rel['A159'] += 2
-				'"You''re right, and I''m pretty damn good at it, too!" you say with a playful smile. A few kids nearby overhear you and start to whisper amongst themselves, the girls quick to bash you and the guys eagerly wanting to put your skills to the test. Before you know it, the whole class is stealing glances at you, some looking disgusted, others lustful. You''re sure that by the end of the day, the whole school will know about how proud you are of your cocksucking skills.'
+				'"You''re right, and I''m pretty damn good at it, too!" you say with a playful smile. A few nearby students overhear you and start to whisper amongst themselves, the girls quick to bash you and the guys eagerly wanting to put your skills to the test. Before you know it, the whole class is stealing glances at you, some looking disgusted, others lustful. You''re sure that by the end of the day, the whole school will know about how proud you are of your cocksucking skills.'
 				cla
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -295,13 +296,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[4] += 1
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Fuck off pig!" you warn, jaw clenched and eyes narrowed. As if he had been slapped across the face, Petia''s expression falls and is replaced by a mixture of surprise and fear as he cowers slightly under your heated gaze.'
+				'"Fuck off you fat, disgusting pig!" you shout, jaw clenched and eyes narrowed. As if he had been slapped across the face, Petia''s expression falls and is replaced by a mixture of surprise and fear as he cowers slightly under your heated gaze.'
 				*nl
 				'"I was just joking..." he says quietly while sinking back into his seat.'
 				*nl
 				'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> isn''t fucking around." Anushka marvels, giving you a nod of approval.'
-				'"Just hit that fat piece of shit, no one''s going to care." Roman comments as he turns to face Petia with a scowl.'
-				'"Jesus Christ, when are you gonna realize no one likes you, especially chicks!?" Arkadi adds, his lips curled back in disgust. Before you know it, the three gopniks have zeroed in on the outcast, giving him a verbal lashing he''ll spend all day recovering from.'
+				'"Just hit that fat piece of shit! Nobody''s going to care." Roman comments as he turns to face Petia with a scowl.'
+				'"Jesus Christ, when are you gonna realize no one fucking likes you, especially chicks!?" Arkadi adds, his lips curled back in disgust. Before you know it, the three gopniks have zeroed in on the outcast, giving him a verbal lashing he''ll spend all day recovering from.'
 				act 'Get back to work':
 					*clr & cla
 					'Leaving it to the gopniks to finish what you started, you go back to work.'
@@ -330,9 +331,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[1] += 1
 				grupvalue[3] -= 1
 				grupvalue[4] += 1
-				'"You''re too fat to even see your own dick, so what would you know about blowjobs, besides being a pro at giving them?" Your smile drops as the last words are spoken. There''s a moment of stunned silence before laughter breaks out in the class. Watching Petia''s face flush bright red as he struggles to defend himself fills you with a smug satisfaction.'
+				'"You''re too fat to even see your own dick, so what would you know about blowjobs besides being a pro at giving them?" you say with a mocking smile. There''s a moment of stunned silence before laughter breaks out in the class. Watching Petia''s face flush bright red as he struggles to defend himself fills you with a smug satisfaction.'
 				*nl
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>! I don''t want to hear that kind of language in my class!" Ms Braakman shouts, barely managing to speak above the noise in the class.'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! I don''t want to hear that kind of language in my class!" Ms Braakman shouts, barely managing to speak above the noise in the class.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -367,8 +368,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 		act 'Apologize':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big137.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I'' really sorry, Ms Braakman. I promise not to do it again."'
-			'Ms Braakman says nothing for what feels like an eternity, until she finally lets out a heavy sigh, "Don''t do it again." she says, holding your phone out. With a grateful smile, you take it and quickly make your way to the door before she can change her mind.'
+			'"I''m really sorry, Ms Braakman. I promise not to do it again."'
+			'Ms Braakman says nothing for what feels like an eternity, until she finally lets out a heavy sigh. "Don''t do it again." she says, holding your phone out. With a grateful smile, you take it and quickly make your way to the door before she can change her mind.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -378,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/angry.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Whatever, can I just have my phone back?" You sigh, crossing your arms over your chest as you roll your eyes impatiently.'
+				'"Whatever, can I just have my phone back?" you moan, crossing your arms over your chest as you roll your eyes impatiently.'
 				'Ms Braakman''s expression darkens as she stands from her seat, the sound of the chair scraping against the floor cutting through the silence like a knife. As she comes out from behind her desk, you notice she''s holding something in her hand. It isn''t until she''s standing a few steps away that you realize it''s the long wooden pointer she uses during class.'
 				'"I think that answers my question." she says, her voice low and oddly calm. "Turn around, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 				act 'Obey':
@@ -399,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 							*nl
 							'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 							*nl
-							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -419,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 							*nl
 							'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 							*nl
-							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					end
@@ -446,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 								*nl
 								'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spread across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 								*nl
-								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
@@ -468,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 								*nl
 								'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 								*nl
-								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						end
@@ -497,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Bella looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Bella looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
@@ -531,7 +532,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					grupvalue[1] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cumdump to all the boys in school."'
+					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cum dump to all the boys in school."'
 					'Lera and Lena seem surprised with how much you say, but you reassure them it''s a really good insult; the worst of the worst. With a smile, they repeat the sentence, completely unaware of what they''re actually saying.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -548,7 +549,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big15.jpg"></center>'
-				'Vicky taps you on the shoulder and shows you a small makeup bag, "Want me to put some makeup on you? Katja showed me some tips last night and I''m looking to try them out on someone." she asks. "Other than myself, that is." she adds with a laugh.'
+				'Vicky taps you on the shoulder and shows you a small makeup bag. "Want me to put some makeup on you? Katja showed me some tips last night and I''m looking to try them out on someone." she asks. "Other than myself, that is." she adds with a laugh.'
 				act 'Decline':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A15'] -=1
@@ -562,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					npc_rel['A15'] +=1
 					pcs_makeup = 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod your head and Vicky is quick to situate herself in front of you. She''s hesitant at first, but as she works she starts to gain confidence. She doesn''t do anything too crazy, and when you look at yourself in her little pocket mirror, you''re quite pleased with the freshly applied light makeup.'
+					'You nod your head and Vicky is quick to place herself in front of you. She''s hesitant at first, but as she works she starts to gain confidence. She doesn''t do anything too crazy, and when you look at yourself in her little pocket mirror, you''re quite pleased with the freshly applied light makeup.'
 					'"Wow, this looks really good. You''re a natural." you tell her. Vicky''s face lights up and she gives you a quick hug before returning to her seat.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -590,9 +591,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					npc_rel['A141'] +=1
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
-					'"You''re all just jealous that Veronika has more talent in her big toe than all of you combined." you say with a smirk. "It must really scare you knowing that she''s going to do something with her life while the rest of you will end up pregnant before your 21st birthday, by a deadbeat who will see you as nothing more than a warm hole he can stick his dick in."'
+					'"You''re all just jealous that Veronika actually has a talent that isn''t dick riding." you say with a smirk. "It must really scare you knowing that she''s going to do something with her life, while the rest of you will end up pregnant before your 21st birthday by a deadbeat who will see you as nothing more than a warm hole he can stick his dick in."'
 					*nl
-					'The girls are staring at you in silence and Veronika is looking at you in disbelief. Did you go too far? You start to worry you did something wrong, but then you notice the smallest hint of a smile on Veronika''s face.'
+					'The girls are staring at you in stunned silence and Veronika is looking at you in disbelief. Did you go too far? You start to worry you did something wrong, but then you notice the smallest hint of a smile on Veronika''s face.'
 					'"S-screw you <<$pcs_nickname>>!" one of the girls stutters as she and her group quickly retreat with their tails between their legs.'
 					cla
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -623,14 +624,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/lenler.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ms Braakman leaves near the end of class and tells everyone to study quietly. As soon as she is out the door, everyone starts talking or getting up. Lena and Lera go up to sit on the teacher''s desk, talking to Radomir. When Radomir starts flirting with Lena, she returns it in kind when Lera suddenly turns and kisses Lena full on the lips in a long, slow and passionate kiss which Lena returns. Most of the other students hoot, holler or whistle encouragements to them. They keep making out for a couple of minutes until the bell that ends class rings.'
+			'Ms Braakman leaves near the end of class and tells everyone to study quietly. As soon as she is out the door, everyone starts talking or getting up. Lena and Lera go up to sit on the teacher''s desk, talking to Radomir. When Radomir starts flirting with Lena, she returns it in kind when Lera suddenly turns and kisses Lena on the lips in a long, slow and passionate kiss which Lena returns. Most of the other students hoot, holler or whistle encouragements to them. They keep making out for a couple of minutes until the bell that ends class rings.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/lenlerbras.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. He is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bra''s. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the boobs neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
+			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. As he is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bras. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the boobs neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -638,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10 and hotcat => 5:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/leraeatme.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice Lera squirming around in her seat during class and decide to see what''s wrong. "What''s up" you ask.'
+			'You notice Lera squirming around in her seat during class and decide to see what''s wrong. "What''s up?" you ask.'
 			'She glances at you and seems like she is about to have a sharp retort, but then closes her mouth and seems to really look at you and then says "Nothing you couldn''t fix for me." She sticks her tongue out between two of her fingers in the universal ''eat me'' sign. You can''t help but blush a little as it caught you a little off guard, as Lera seems to only pays attention to Lena. Before you can reply though, Ms Braakman clears her throat and gets you both looking forward again. She spends the rest the class keeping an eye on both of you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -678,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'working':
 				npc_rel['A154'] -=1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				'You frown and shake your head. "Seriously?" he asks, genuinely surprised by your refusal, which doesn''t come as a surprise. He seems to think everyone is obsessed with him, especially the girls.'
-				'Radomir''s eyes narrow as he leans back into his seat. "Well...fuck you." he curses. You shrug indifferently and go back to work.'
+				'Radomir''s eyes narrow as he leans back into his seat. "Well fuck you then." he curses. You shrug indifferently and go back to work.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -779,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'working':
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Sorry, but I''ve still got a lot to finish," you reply, pointing to your own work. Ivan''s smile fades and he looks disappointed, but he shrugs his shoulders and leaves you alone.'
+				'"Sorry, but I''ve still got a lot to finish." you reply, pointing to your own work. Ivan''s smile fades and he looks disappointed, but he shrugs his shoulders and leaves you alone.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -798,19 +799,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_radomir':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		npc_rel['A3'] += 1
 		*nl
-		'After awhile, Radomir hands you back your paper, "Thanks babe." he says, once again winking at you.'
+		'After a while, Radomir hands you back your paper. "Thanks babe." he says, once again winking at you.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		pcs_mood -= 10
 		*nl
-		'Radomir has had your paper for awhile, so you turn around to see what''s taking him so long, but he''s busy talking to someone behind him. Your paper is sitting on his desk, and it looks like he hasn''t finished copying your answers.'
+		'Radomir has had your paper for a while, so you turn around to see what''s taking him so long, but he''s busy talking to someone behind him. Your paper is sitting on his desk, and it looks like he hasn''t finished copying your answers.'
 		act 'Take your work back':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A3'] -=2
 			'Fed up, you take your paper back. He doesn''t notice at first, but when he finally turns back around and sees it missing, he starts to look for it. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think I lost your work."'
 			*nl
-			'"You didn''t lose it, I took it back since you weren''t doing anything with it." you reply. Hearing this, Radomir tries to explain that he had just turned around for a moment and asks you to give him another chance, but you refuse. Angry, he mutters something under his breath before leaving you alone.'
+			'"You didn''t lose it. I took it back since you weren''t doing anything with it." you reply. Hearing this, Radomir tries to explain that he had just turned around for a moment and asks you to give him another chance, but you refuse. Angry, he mutters something under his breath before leaving you alone.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Wait for him to finish':
@@ -830,9 +831,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_radomir':
 		npc_rel['A154'] +=2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder, "Hey, I think someone stole your paper," he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn...I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
+		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder. "Hey, I think someone stole your paper." he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn...I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
 		'"Was it stolen or did you lose it, Radomir?" you ask with a glare.'
-		'Again, Radomir shrugs his shoulders, "I might have lost it, who knows. Just go get another sheet and start over." he says with a laugh as he gets up and makes his way over to Bella. Taking his advice, you quickly try to fill out another worksheet, but you only manage to get it halfway done before class is over. Ms Braakman isn''t pleased and gives you a bad mark for today.'
+		'Again, Radomir shrugs his shoulders. "I might have lost it, who knows. Just go get another sheet and start over." he says with a laugh as he gets up and makes his way over to Bella. Taking his advice, you quickly try to fill out another worksheet, but you only manage to get it halfway done before class is over. Ms Braakman isn''t pleased and gives you a bad mark for today.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 		npc_rel['A154'] +=1
@@ -871,7 +872,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see Valentin and Radomir have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see Valentin and Radomir have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -885,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex',  2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
@@ -897,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_2.jpg"></center>'
 				end
-				'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself, "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
+				'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -907,9 +908,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear you Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering. Mr Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear you Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir snickering behind you. Mr Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -923,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A154'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Radomir is grabbing my breasts." Mr Vasilyev gives Radomir a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Radomir is grabbing my breasts." Mr Vasilyev gives Radomir a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Radomir denies it, but Mr Vasilyev doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -934,7 +935,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				cla
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
-				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -950,8 +951,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					npc_rel['A154'] -= 3
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Vasilyev and turn around and slap Radomir with all your force. Radomir recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
-					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Radomir (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -959,7 +960,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -973,7 +974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A154'] += 1
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Radomir, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Vasilyev, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Radomir, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Vasilyev, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -982,7 +983,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Radomir''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -992,7 +993,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Radomir''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1005,8 +1006,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Lavrenti behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti behind you is snickering. Mr Vasilyev looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Lavrenti behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti snickering behind you. Mr Vasilyev looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1020,7 +1021,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A155'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Lavrenti is snapping my bra stap." Mr Vasilyev gives Lavrenti a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Lavrenti is snapping my bra stap." Mr Vasilyev gives Lavrenti a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Lavrenti denies it, but Mr Vasilyev doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1032,11 +1033,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				npc_rel['A155'] += 1
-				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you sit in the classroom you hear Katja asking from behind you "<<$pcs_nickname>> I dropped my pen, be a dear and pick it up for me?" You sigh and look under her desk, immediately noticing her bare pussy between her widely spread legs. The little minx is doing it on purpose! A bit flustered, you pick up her pen and hand it back to her. When you do, she gives you an innocent grin and gets back to what she was doing as if nothing happened.'
+					'As you sit in the classroom, you hear Katja asking from behind you "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I dropped my pen. Be a dear and pick it up for me please?" You sigh and look under her desk, immediately noticing her bare pussy between her widely spread legs. The little minx is doing it on purpose! A bit flustered, you pick up her pen and hand it back to her. When you do, she gives you an innocent grin and gets back to what she was doing as if nothing happened.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				else
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1055,8 +1056,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					npc_rel['A155'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Vasilyev and turn around and slap Lavrenti with all your force. Lavrenti recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
-					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Lavrenti (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1064,11 +1065,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'During class, there is a loud crashing sound from the back of the class. You along with everyone else in the class turn to look. In the back, Petia is still sitting at his desk, but now the desk is laying on its side on the floor. The whole class bursts out laughing at him.'
-			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is ok, Mr Vasilyev gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
+			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is OK, Mr Vasilyev gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image. Opening the image, you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image. Opening the image, you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1079,11 +1080,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Katja':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1113,7 +1114,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sit next to Valentinduring class. You spend much of the class talking quietly to each other, often getting looks from Mr. Vasilyev when you get to loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'You sit next to Valentin during class. You spend much of the class talking quietly to each other, often getting looks from Mr. Vasilyev when you get to loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Lariska':
@@ -1154,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'When you look back up, you notice Petia turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Vasilyev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			*nl
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Petia again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Petia''s face turns red when he realizes he''s been caught, and he immediately turns back to face the blackboard.'
@@ -1193,7 +1194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/music/larflute.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mr Vasilyev is helping Petka, Lina and Lariska are talking about how to give a blowjob and they seem to disagree. After a few moments of heated but quiet debate, Lariska decides to show what she means on her flute. After showing how she means to give a blowjob on the flute, Lina comes around to her point of view. Several of the guys watchin also seem to agree with Lariska about how to give a blowjob.'
+			'As Mr Vasilyev is helping Petka, Lina and Lariska are talking about how to give a blowjob and they seem to disagree. After a few moments of heated but quiet debate, Lariska decides to show what she means on her flute. After showing what she means, Lina comes around to her point of view. Several of the guys watching also seem to agree with Lariska.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1205,7 +1206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/music/larlinpiggy.jpg"></center>'
-			'When the bell rings to end class and everyone starts to leave, Lina drops her books and Lariska uses the distraction to jump on her back. This causes Lina to fall down on her hands and knees while Lariska starts talking to her like a horse, telling her to giddy up and such.'
+			'When the bell rings to end class and everyone starts to leave, Lina drops her books and Lariska uses the distraction to jump on her back. This causes Lina to fall on her hands and knees while Lariska starts talking to her like a horse, telling her to giddy up and such.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1214,7 +1215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Ignore them and wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Eavesdrop':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok<<rand(0, 12)>>.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'gschool_gossip', 'lesson'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1245,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -1259,7 +1260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex',  2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forgot that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
@@ -1270,7 +1271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_1.jpg"></center>'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself, "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
+					'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
 					gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1305,11 +1306,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained grasp, as did several others. You glance over just in time to see Anushka letting go of Zinaida''s panties sitting in front of her. She pulled the panties half way up Zinaida''s back. You wince slightly, that looks like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained grasp, as did several others. You glance over just in time to see Dan letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled the panties half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looks like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Erast':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1396,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'When you look back up, you notice Feofan turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Vasilyev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			*nl
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Feofan again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Feofan''s face turns red when he realizes he''s been caught, and he immediately turns back to face the blackboard.'
@@ -1421,7 +1422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/natpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'Natasha asks Anushka if she can borrow a pencil as she seems to have lost hers. Anushka agrees and offers her one, but keeps pulling it slightly out of reach of Natasha, who keeps stretching to reach it. When she is half standing up in her desk to reach forward to grab it, By the time Natasha grabs the pencil from Anushka, she has given everyone behind her a nice look at her panty clad ass.'
+			'Natasha asks Anushka if she can borrow a pencil as she seems to have lost hers. Anushka agrees and offers her one, but keeps pulling it slightly out of reach of Natasha, who keeps stretching forward to reach it. By the time Natasha grabs the pencil from Anushka, she has given everyone behind her a nice look at her panty clad ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1436,7 +1437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Next picture':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/julnushalbvic2.jpg"></center>'
-				'As Feofan kneels to take their picture again, Mr Vasilyev watches, looking pleased at Feofan''s serious take on taking pictures. Julia, Albina, and Vicky pose seriously again while Anushka doesn''t stick her tongue out this time, but instead lifts up the front of her skirt to show off her panties.'
+				'As Feofan kneels to take their picture again, Mr Vasilyev watches, looking pleased at Feofan''s seriousness. Julia, Albina and Vicky pose seriously again while Anushka doesn''t stick her tongue out this time, but instead lifts up the front of her skirt to show off her panties.'
 				*nl
 				'Feofan blushes as Mr Vasilyev speaks up. "That''s enough of that Miss Konstantinov."'
 				'Anushka gives him an innocent look. "What? Isn''t this art class?"'
@@ -1444,7 +1445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				'Anushka gives him a sweet smile and rattles off names of artists. "Is their artwork not appropriate art?"'
 				'Mr Vasilyev looks surprised by the question. "Those are some classic artists. Of course there is nothing wrong with their work."'
 				*nl
-				'She then smiles, as if she expected that responce. "Yes, but doesn''t some of their work show nudity? I only showed my panties, so why is their work OK and this isn''t?"'
+				'She then smiles, as if she expected that response. "Yes, but doesn''t some of their work show nudity? I only showed my panties, so why is their work OK and this isn''t?"'
 				'Mr Vasilyev gives a bone weary sigh and starts trying to explain why art can show many things, but not everything is appropriate for school. It seems to be a losing discussion and you are sure Anushka is just yanking his chain for the fun of it. The rest of the class quickly loses interest in the discussion and goes back to doing their own thing.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1453,7 +1454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/vickypanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice Erast paying special attention to Vicky today and it seems she has noticed as well. At one point, she turns to sit sideways in her desk and spreads her legs, causing her skirt to ride up until it gives Erast a very nice view of her panties. His eyes get big as she giggles, straightens her skirt back in place and turns back to the front of class.'
+			'You notice Erast paying special attention to Vicky today and it seems she has noticed as well. At one point, she turns to sit sideways in her desk and spreads her legs, causing her skirt to ride up until it gives Erast a very nice view of her panties. His eyes grow wide as she giggles, straightens her skirt back in place and turns back to the front of class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1461,7 +1462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushvic.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, when Mr Vasilyev lets the class have some free time to experiment with their own artwork, some of the girls get together to gossip about boys. Vicky starts talking about a date her and Vanya recently went on, she even goes so far as to act out a little bit of it. At one point, she bends over and talks about how she was rubbing her butt against Vanya''s crotch while dancing, but before she can say what Vanya did, Anushka steps up behind her, grabs her hips and starts dry humping her. "This is what he was wanting to do to you." She gets all the girls to crack up, most agreeing that is all any boy talks about.'
+			'Near the end of class, when Mr Vasilyev lets the class have some free time to experiment with their own artwork, some of the girls get together to gossip about boys. Vicky starts talking about a date her and Vanya recently went on, even going so far as to act out a little bit of it. At one point, she bends over and talks about how she was rubbing her butt against Vanya''s crotch while dancing, but before she can say what Vanya did, Anushka steps up behind her, grabs her hips and starts dry humping her. "This is what he was wanting to do to you." She gets all the girls to crack up, most agreeing that is all any boy talks about.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1485,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				*clr & cla
 				if hotcat => 6:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushpanties2.jpg"></center>'
-					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little kissy face and then reaches down to her panties and pulls them aside to show you her bald pussy, smiling at you. Before you can look away, you hear Mr Vasilyev clear his throat. When you glance to him, he gives you a stern look. "Please pay attention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know art history is a bit dry and boring, but this will be on your test." You nod to him and as he goes back to the lecture, you glance back and see that Anushka is now sitting normally.'
+					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little kissy face and then reaches down to her panties and pulls them aside to show you her bald pussy, smiling at you. Before you can look away, you hear Mr Vasilyev clear his throat. When you glance to him, he gives you a stern look. "Please pay attention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know art history is a bit dry and boring, but this will be in your test." You nod to him and as he goes back to the lecture, you glance back and see that Anushka is now sitting normally.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushpanties1.jpg"></center>'
 					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little smirk but then turns her attention away from you. She apparently doesn''t care if you look up her skirt at her panties.'
@@ -1502,7 +1503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Ignore them and wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Eavesdrop':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok<<rand(0, 12)>>.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'gschool_gossip', 'lesson'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end

locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -1988,7 +1988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'skirt_breeze':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'swamp_yard'
+		act 'Further':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
 	end
 end
 

locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -40,11 +40,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a seamstress in a factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every day except Saturday and Sunday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
-	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 <b>₽</b> plus tips.')
-	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Teh work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450 <b>₽</b> .')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.')
-	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an opene schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
+	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as a clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
+	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 <b>₽</b> plus tips.')
+	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You deliver mail for the postmaster. The work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450 <b>₽</b> .')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.')
+	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an open schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
 	if film > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working in the city industrial region as a pornographic actress under the name <<$pfname>>')
 	if bumtolik = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been asked to help the homeless at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region.')
 	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region and work with the homeless. Working hours are from 09:00 to 17:00 on Saturday and Sunday.')
@@ -138,17 +138,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		if grupTipe = 0:
 			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are not a member of any particular school social group.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 1:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of the popular, cool, and beautiful.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of the popular, cool and beautiful.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 2:
 			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of jocks and natural athletes.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 3:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of nerds, geeks, and good students.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of nerds, geeks and good students.'+$journal_school_standing)
 			if nerd_game['game_day'] > daystart: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been invited to a games night on <<$week[(week + (nerd_game[''game_day'']  - daystart))]>> at 20:00 in the community center library.')
 			if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been invited to a games night tonight at 20:00 in the community center library.')
 		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of gopniks, rebels, punks, or troublemakers.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of gopniks, rebels, punks or troublemakers.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 5:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of losers, teacher''s pets, sluts, and the ugly.')
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of losers, teacher''s pets, sluts and the ugly.')
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since your parents divorced, so you have no real memory of him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/28.png"></center>'
-	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. When not working, your stepfather will often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
+	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Vladimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. When not working, your stepfather can often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/33.png"></center>'
 	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister, two years your senior, but she still lives at home and shares a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends or with her boyfriend Roma.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother, born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you and enjoys football. When he is not playing football or doing homework, he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/30.png"></center>'
-	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
+	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mother''s older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
 	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunt''s live-in boyfriend, only that he is from Africa and doesn''t speak Russian very well. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
@@ -403,11 +403,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	'<center><h2>Teachers & Facility</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/134.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Aleksandrina Volkov</center>'
-	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman in her mid to late thirties who always dresses well. She was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict, but fair disciplinarian. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
+	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman in her mid to late thirties who always dresses well, she was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict, but fair disciplinarian. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/132.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ruslan Kuznetsov</center>'
-	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor and shop teacher. He is also the assistant Headmaster. He is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job and really believes that he can impact on the students future, but he is mostly ignored by everyone... even his colleagues. This has recently seen him start becoming bitter.'
+	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor and shop teacher. He is also the assistant Headmaster. He is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job and really believes that he can impact on the students future, but he is mostly ignored by everyone, even his colleagues. This has recently seen him start becoming bitter.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/26.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Anatoly E. Tsarev</center>'
@@ -426,12 +426,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	if grupTipe = 3:
 		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. This is to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complain about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accepts the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
 	else
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, giving the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes that he never does with another student group. He seems to take delight in catching the cool kids, jocks, or gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, giving the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes, which he never does with the other cliques. He seems to take delight in catching the cool kids, jocks and gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/128.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Makar Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
+	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/137.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Raven Braakman</center>'
@@ -439,12 +439,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/130.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ilya Yenotin</center>'
-	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language, and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is unliked by most of the students simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls, chasing down the gopniks and trying getting them to attend class.'
+	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is disliked by most of the students simply because he comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing gopniks, trying to get them to attend class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/131.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktor Pavlovich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall in his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted because he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall in his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted and often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
 	else
 		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall his office. He likes to use it on students, especially female students. He is single and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
 	end
@@ -452,20 +452,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/69.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Mikhail Nikolaevich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad, you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad, you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
 	else
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport, but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/138.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arina Orlov</center>'
-	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which makes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and is very cute as well. This causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
+	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which causes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and is very cute. This causes the boys to sometimes pay extra special attention to her during class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/136.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Olga Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heels over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked; the ideal woman.'
+	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse, having transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heels over this true beauty, describing her as slim and stacked; the ideal woman.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/133.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Rolan Matveev</center>'
@@ -485,21 +485,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. He is the Game Master for the weekly game night and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
 	else
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds".'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but isn''t bad looking for one. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is that he runs some silly game night for the other nerds, which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds."'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
-	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. He otherwise tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at the games they play.'
 	else
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the male nerds for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	if grupTipe = 3:
 		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
 	else
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. He is afraid of his own shadow and thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. However, he is afraid of his own shadow and is thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/240.png"></center>'
 	'<center><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></center>'	
-	'Natalia is a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. She is rarely seen with anyone but one thing she always keeps with her is a special notebook that she never lets anyone touch.'
+	'Natalia is a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships, but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. Despite this, she is rarely seen hanging out with anyone. She also fiercely guards a notebook she likes to keep private, never letting anyone read or even touch it.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
-	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football, least when he is not chasing girls or, more often being chased by girls, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
+	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
@@ -547,20 +547,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
-	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is also more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
+	'Christina is one of the school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, however, more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
-	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football, as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is known to have a short temper and is intimidating if angered. She runs a dance troupe at the community center that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are rumours about her home life, but nobody dares mention them in front of her.'
+	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered. She leads a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are several rumors about her going around school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
 	
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
-		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
+		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks Ivan''s level of talent. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
-	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him and despite his easy going attitude, is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
+	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him. Despite his easy going attitude, he is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
-	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, would be a lot more popular.'
+	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, she would be a lot more popular.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
 	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
-	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
+	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very socialable. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
@@ -601,13 +601,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
 	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, her reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
+		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
 	end
 
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
-		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has become a outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he just wanted to. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
+		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has been an outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he actually wanted to do it. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
@@ -622,16 +622,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	if grupTipe = 1:
 		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school and everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
 	else
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given the chance.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
-	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around people much older than herself.'
+	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids." She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself.'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
+	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
@@ -640,33 +640,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she doesn''t use her knowledge to tear others about. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
 	else
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty, but most boys seem torn, attracted to her but afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and most boys seem torn. Thay are attracted to her, but are afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
-	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya Yanka. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
-	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
-	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hanging around the new exchange student Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
+	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey hangs around with Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
-	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
+	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
 	else
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
@@ -678,10 +678,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She has started hanging out with the gopniks, trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		else
 			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -690,212 +690,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Nerds</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
-	else
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds".'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
-	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
-	else
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Petka Klyuyev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
-	else
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. He is afraid of his own shadow and thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Gerasim Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone, even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks. The rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/12.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Julia Milov</center>'
-	'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and doesn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing the other girls while they are changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/151.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Evgeny Kuznetsov</center>'
-	'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but has not shown any interest in girls, or anyone else for that matter. No one would be surprised if he has mild autism.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/16.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
-	'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your school. Even though you both live in the same building, her parents are very poor and it shows as Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shun her or mock her poor clothing.'
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
-	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football, least when he is not chasing girls or, more often being chased by girls, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
-	'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part in. He is mostly into boxing and running and is considered to be very good looking by the girls in school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tends to keep to himself, although he occasionally hangs out with Fedor. He is calm and collected by nature, some might even say apathetic.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
-	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is also more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
-	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is known to have a short temper and is intimidating if angered. She runs a dance troupe at the community center that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are rumors about her home life, but nobody dares mention them in front of her.'
-	
-	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
-		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Veronika "Ronnie" Sokolov</center>'
-	'Veronika Sokolov is called the "Ice Queen" by her fellow students behind her back for a few reasons. One is that she is a very talented ice skater, there is even talk about how she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other is because she is cold and indifferent and never lets anyone get close to her. She comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
-	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him and despite his easy going attitude, is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
-	'Erast Vagin is a huge boy and is very strong. He is not a looker or even clever, but is always polite and a little shy. When he is playing sports he changes into a demon, always fighting to win, putting his all into winning and nothing else. He is an average athlete and relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. Other than playing sports, he sometimes boxes with Ivan.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
-	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, would be a lot more popular.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
-	'Lariska is a very athletic girl, with an exceptional talent for volleyball. However, she has a very weak personality and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina. She considers Christina to be her best friend and she can often be seen following her around school.'
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
-	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
-	'Petia Alkaev is the class mooch. He persistently asks others for food, money and cigarettes. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space", which is made worse by the fact that he seems to be unaware of what soap is. He is an unattractive, overweight loser who makes girls uncomfortable by repeatedly hitting on them. No matter how many beatdowns he suffers or how many cruel pranks are pulled on him, he doesn''t seem to learn his lesson.'
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, her reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
-	end
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
-		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has become a outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he just wanted to. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
-	end
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Cool kids</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/1.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Dimka Nosov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school and everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
-	else
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
-	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around people much older than herself.'
-	
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
-	'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows it and takes full advantage of it. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile. She often makes the boys do her dirty work.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she doesn''t use her knowledge to tear others about. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
-	else
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty, but most boys seem torn, attracted to her but afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
-	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya Yanka. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
-	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
-	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hanging around the new exchange student Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
-	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
-	else
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Mefodiy Utkin</center>'
-	'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, with middle-of-the-road grades. He is fairly average looking, but possesses a good sense of humor and timing. He isn''t too popular, just popular enough to hang among the cool kids, who like his humor.'
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 1:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She has started hanging out with the gopniks, trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
-		else
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
-		end
-	end
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Gopniks</h2></center>'
@@ -905,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/154.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Radomir Popov</center>'
-	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Buystvo (Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can and as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
+	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Buystvo (Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/157.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Roman Yakovlev</center>'
@@ -917,11 +711,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/145.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katyusha" Maksimov</center>'
-	'Ekaterina Maksimov, also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty since her face is too masculine. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, either by stealing it or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl, other than Lena, who can do that. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, she prefers fighting the boys herself. Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming boxing is for pussies and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik since it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect, which is really hard to do.'
+	'Ekaterina Maksimov, known as "Katyusha", is not a traditional beauty since her face is too masculine. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, either by stealing it or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys, it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl other than Lena who can do this. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, she prefers fighting the boys herself.'
+	'Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming "boxing is for pussies" and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, but other people consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect, which is really hard to do.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/158.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valentin Bogdanov</center>'
-	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame with the girls to use them. It is just that he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
+	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. However, this doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame to use girls. He is just rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad, working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/24.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Pauline Sebagotulina</center>'
@@ -929,7 +724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/156.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arkadi Fyodorov</center>'
-	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was also held back a year, so he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
+	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was held back a year, so looks a bit older than his fellow students. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/20.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yalena "Lena" Kotova</center>'
@@ -949,19 +744,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/143.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Alyona Zima</center>'
-	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a troubled family as her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
+	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a troubled family as her parents are alcoholic drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/21.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valeria "Lera" Tsarev</center>'
-	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, but her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
+	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, but her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes her lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/155.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lavrenti Romanov</center>'
-	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which has lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time. Since the fight, he started hanging with the gopniks. He is more of a follower and the gopniks like using his money while tolerating him.'
+	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which resulted in him and Dimika having a major falling out. Since the fight, he has been hanging with the gopniks. However, he is more of a follower, the gopniks tolerating him while using his money.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/189.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Nikolai Volkov</center>'
-	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
+	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Roman, with many saying that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg

locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	if katjaLernTimes >= 10: gs 'katjaEv', 'learning'
 
 	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
-		Act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
+		act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	else
 		act 'Say goodbye and leave':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -178,9 +178,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learning':
 		if katrand = 2:'Katja as if by accident puts her hand on your knee, then quickly removes it.'
 		if katrand = 3:'Katja smiles at you, quite a silly smile, then turns away.'
 	elseif katjaLernQW = 5:
-		gt 'katjaEv', '5'
+		xgt 'katjaEv', '5'
 	elseif katjaLernQW >= 6:
-		gt 'katjaEv', '6'
+		xgt 'katjaEv', '6'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1016,6 +1016,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathanlakesw1':
     *clr & cla
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear':
 		minut +=10
+		$loc = 'katjaEV'
+		$loc_arg = 'kathanlakesw1'
 		gs 'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 		act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	else
@@ -1034,6 +1036,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kathanlakesw2':
     *clr & cla
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear':
+		$loc = 'katjaEV'
+		$loc_arg = 'kathanlakesw2'
 		gs 'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 		act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	else
@@ -1056,6 +1060,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kathansaunasw1':
     *clr & cla
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear':
+		$loc = 'katjaEV'
+		$loc_arg = 'kathansaunasw1'
 		gs 'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 		act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	else
@@ -1067,6 +1073,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kathansaunasw2':
     *clr & cla
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear':
+		$loc = 'katjaEV'
+		$loc_arg = 'kathansaunasw2'
 		gs 'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 		act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	else
@@ -1162,7 +1170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 						'Nobody is finding the gesture funny and more than one person is actually murmuring their disapproval at the "obvious derision" of this "jerk" against you. Taking advantage of the distraction, Katja helps you to your feet and fixes your clothes before leaving the lake, but you wait for Vanya and after a few minutes, the smiling jock meets with you.'
 						'"So girls. It worked?"'
 						'"Yeah... I think that now that everybody, including us, thinks that you are an idiot, they will forget my... performance."'
-						'Vanya smiles and raises his right hand in a high five motion. After a few minutes when neither Katja or you react, he shrugs and leaves you to your own devices. It is time to look for something else to do.'
+						'Vanya smiles and raises his right hand in a high five motion. After a few minutes when neither Katja nor you react, he shrugs and leaves you to your own devices. It is time to look for something else to do.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
@@ -1655,25 +1663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan9':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KL9.jpg"></center>'
 
-			if IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250:
-				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
-				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
-				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
-				'Ivan sits between the two of you and begins to talk, mostly about his dream to be at the boxing nationals. This isn''t a particularly interesting subject for Katja, but even she seems taken by the jock''s driven dedication. That and his defined abs... Cough... who wouldn''t be?'
-				'Katja slowly opens up to the conversation and soon the three of you are talking in a mismatched dialogue mixing sports, cosmetics and strangely, who is the girl with the best ass in school (You of course!). The time passes and the conversation ends with a relaxed silence as you observe the landscape.'
-				'"Ok girls, this has been fun, but I must return to my training."'
-				'Ivan gives you both a little kiss on the cheek and then walks towards the lake, letting the two of you appreciate the jock''s nice butt... Sigh...'
-
-				act 'Redress and look for something else to do': gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 20 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-
-				act 'Swim':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan5'
-
-				act 'Tan':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan6'
-
-				act 'Walk':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan7'
-
-
-			elseif IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250 and Katjaslut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+			if IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250 and Katjaslut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
 				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
 				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
 				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
@@ -1929,6 +1919,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan9':
 						end
 					end
 				end
+			elseif IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250:
+				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
+				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
+				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
+				'Ivan sits between the two of you and begins to talk, mostly about his dream to be at the boxing nationals. This isn''t a particularly interesting subject for Katja, but even she seems taken by the jock''s driven dedication. That and his defined abs... Cough... who wouldn''t be?'
+				'Katja slowly opens up to the conversation and soon the three of you are talking in a mismatched dialogue mixing sports, cosmetics and strangely, who is the girl with the best ass in school (You of course!). The time passes and the conversation ends with a relaxed silence as you observe the landscape.'
+				'"Ok girls, this has been fun, but I must return to my training."'
+				'Ivan gives you both a little kiss on the cheek and then walks towards the lake, letting the two of you appreciate the jock''s nice butt... Sigh...'
+
+				act 'Redress and look for something else to do': gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 20 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+
+				act 'Swim':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan5'
+
+				act 'Tan':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan6'
+
+				act 'Walk':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan7'
+
+
 			else
 				'Talking with Ivan, King of the Lone Wolves, is an uphill battle. He is evidently not interested in the sort of things Katja likes to talk about and would probably prefer to jump back into his swimming. Alas, Ivan is too polite to just tell you to fuck off, and that is a weakness you and Katja can exploit.'
 				'After some pestering, Ivan finally resigns to sit with you and pass time in "civilized" conversation. The minutes pass, with him primarily listening to your endless rants, but after a while, between Katja''s shyness and Ivan''s apathy, silence falls over the three of you, leaving your little trio observing the lake in tranquillity.'
@@ -1972,31 +1980,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KS8.jpg"></center>'
 
-		if KatjaSlut >= 20:
-			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you or Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
-			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
-			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, making the time pass quickly.'
-			'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>. I think that this is enough."'
-			'Blinking surprised, you look the time. Yes, half an hour has passed, more than enough for your skin treatment.'
-
-			if month >= 12 and month < 3:
-				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
-				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-
-					act 'Ice dipping!':
-						*clr & cla
-						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'					
-						gs 'stat'
-						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
-					end
-				else
-					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-				end
-
-				act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-
-		elseif KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and  katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
-			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you or Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
+		if KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and  katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you nor Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
 			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
 			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, but as the time pass, you observe some details on the redhead. She seems unable to sit still, bites her lips and gives you longing gazes. It''s undeniable that she is horny, so... what to do? Have some semi-public hot and steamy sex or let the ginger cook in her own sauce until you reach a better place?'
 
@@ -2022,7 +2007,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force', 'easy'
 						gs 'stat'
 						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
-						end
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -2031,7 +2015,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 
 			act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 
-		elseif KatjaSlut <= 20:
+		elseif KatjaSlut >= 20:
+			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you nor Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
+			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
+			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, making the time pass quickly.'
+			'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>. I think that this is enough."'
+			'Blinking surprised, you look the time. Yes, half an hour has passed, more than enough for your skin treatment.'
+
+			if month >= 12 and month < 3:
+				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+
+					act 'Ice dipping!':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'					
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
+					end
+				else
+					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				end
+			end
+			act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+
+		else
 			'You both change in the lockers, but before Katja can put on her bikini, you grab it.'
 			'"Hey! What are you doing? This isn''t fun"'
 			'Smiling, you look at her, ogling the petite doll-like ginger that is desperately trying to cover her body.'
@@ -2342,12 +2349,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS3.jpg"></center>'
 		if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
 			'As you enter a second-hand shop, you can see your little slave, Natasha, happily looking over the shop''s discount selection. On the floor is a bag with some clothing inside. Well, at least she is using YOUR money to stay pretty for HER mistress.'
-			'Neither Katja or Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
+			'Neither Katja nor Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Look at that rack!"'
 			'Katja grabs your arm and pulls you away from the nerd. Maybe you should go and talk with her?'
 		else
 			'As you enter a second-hand shop, you can see Natasha, looking over the shop''s discount selection. She is biting her lips and seems somewhat uneasy. Maybe she doesn''t have the money to buy even that?'
-			'Neither Katja or Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
+			'Neither Katja nor Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Look at that rack!"'
 			'Katja grabs your arm and pulls you away from the nerd. Maybe you should go and talk with her?'
 
@@ -2416,23 +2423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS5.jpg"></center>'
 
-					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
-						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
-						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
-						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
-						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
-						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-						end
-					elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
 						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
@@ -2460,6 +2451,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
 							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 						end
+					elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
+						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
+						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
+						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
+						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
+						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
+
+						if hour >= 20:
+							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+						else
+							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+						end
 					else
 						'Walking without care to the nerd, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the girl can react, you push Natasha against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
@@ -3107,7 +3114,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 		'Taking her hand, you force Katja to sit by your side and embrace the redhead, mostly to stop her from driving you crazy.'
 		'"There there Katja. Just stop and breathe."'
 		'She takes your advice, and takes a big gulp of air. That seemed to quieten her down, deflating and returning her to a more "normal" mindstate. Even at that, she is troubled.'
-		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and...Remember how she climbed to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
+		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and...Remember how she clung to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
 		'"That maybe your mother and Valentina were, or are, lovers? That troubles you? You don''t like that?"'
 		'Katja looks at you with a mix of emotions in her face. Confusion, surprise, doubt, fear. She opens and closes her mouth, looks at you, blushes and says something surprising...'
 		'"I don''t know...Maybe? I never thought about something like that. Ehm...<<$pcs_nickname>>...What would you think, if I...I mean...Ehm...behaved like Valentina and...tried to kiss you?"'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -660,6 +660,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'referral':
 		GspravkaTimes += 1
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to go to the clinic. We need a written referral from the gynaecologist for school."'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
+	elseif GspravkaT = 0 and GspravkaTimes < 3 and GspravkaTalked ! daystart and motherKnowDildo = 1:
+		GspravkaTalked = daystart
+		GspravkaTimes += 1
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to go to the clinic. I really doubt that you are still a virgin, but we need a written referral from the gynaecologist for school anyway."'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
 	elseif dildo_gyno_fail = 1:
 		gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_gyno_fail'
 	elseif dildo_gyno_pass = 1:

locations/mother_sextalk.qsrc

@@ -98,7 +98,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
 		act'"Sorry...?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
@@ -113,7 +114,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 		end
 	else
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		'You feel a sinking feeling in your chest. Not looking like you''re going to be able to weasel your way out of this one.'
@@ -130,7 +132,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 		
 		act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
@@ -158,7 +161,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek3':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 	vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-	vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	suction_dildo += motherQW['bathroom_dildos']
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
@@ -172,7 +176,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek4':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 	vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-	vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	suction_dildo += motherQW['bathroom_dildos']
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
@@ -228,7 +233,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos1':
 	
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		cla & *clr
@@ -265,7 +271,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
 		act'"Sorry...?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
@@ -281,7 +288,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 		end
 	else
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		act'"No..."':
@@ -296,7 +304,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 		
 		act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
@@ -324,7 +333,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos3':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 	vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-	vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	suction_dildo += motherQW['bathroom_dildos']
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
@@ -342,7 +352,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos4':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 	vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-	vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
@@ -360,7 +371,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos5':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 	vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-	vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
@@ -376,15 +388,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos5':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
-	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
+	motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1
+	InSleep = 0
+	gs'stat'
 !!	if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup4'
-	if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 0:
-		motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1
-	elseif motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1 and motherKnowDildo = 1:
-		gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup3'
-	elseif motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+	if motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 0:
+		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
+	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 1:
 		gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup2'
+	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] >= 2 and motherKnowDildo = 1:
+		gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup3'
 	end
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'"<<$pcs_firstname>> what the hell is this?!"'
 		'You wake up in a shock when your door bangs open and you see your mother standing in the doorway holding... a dildo?'
@@ -398,7 +413,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	
 	act'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What''re you talkin'' about...?" you say blearily, feining being drowsy from just having woken up. It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. "Is that a dildo? I-"'
 		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
 		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
@@ -408,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	
 	act'Blame it on Anya':
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"It''s not mine," you say blearily, feining being drowsy from just having woken up. "It must be Anya''s."'
 		'"Mmrrph. Not mine," your sister mumbles from her bed, rolling over to the other side and going back to sleep.'
 		'"Ahuh. You were saying?" Your mother puts her hands on her hips and glares at you. "I can''t believe you''re stupid enough to leave this in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
@@ -419,7 +434,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		cla & *clr
@@ -442,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 		end
 		*nl
 		'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need new ones.</i>'
-		act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'end'
+		act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -460,11 +476,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
 		act'"Sorry...?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'Unfortunately, you don''t think you can weasel out of this one.'
 			'"Uhh... Sorry...?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
 			'She returns your apology with a glare.'
@@ -472,26 +489,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Well, so much for that...</i>'
-			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'end'
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
 		end
 	else
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		act'"No..."':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No..." you say dejectedly.'
 			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
-			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'end'
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
 		end
 		
 		act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
@@ -506,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Ugh. Great.</i> you think, throwing your head back against your pillow. <i>Now I need a new one. But maybe at least this gets <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> off my back...</i>'
-			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'end'
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
 		end		
 	end
 end
@@ -522,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup3':
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy another one. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving it laying around like that."'
 	'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
-	act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'end'
+	act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
 end
 
 !! branching path if a SINGLE dildo was left in the bathroom
@@ -530,7 +549,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 	if dildo_ownership ! 1:
 		act'I swear! It''s not mine!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			Gspravka = 0
 			GspravkaT = 0
@@ -548,13 +568,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 			else
 				'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+				act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+			else
+				act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			end
 		end
 	end
 	
 	act'I didn''t get to use it yet':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		Gspravka = 0
 		GspravkaT = 0
@@ -563,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		GspravkaTimes = 2
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		if count['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or pcs_vag = 0:
+		if stat['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or pcs_vag = 0:
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use it yet..."'
 			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
 			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
@@ -581,12 +606,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 			*nl
 			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
-	
 	act'I just suck on it':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		Gspravka = 0
 		GspravkaT = 0
@@ -606,13 +635,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		else
 			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
 	
 	
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		cla & *clr
@@ -633,7 +667,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		end
 		*nl
 		'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need a new one.</i>'
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -643,7 +681,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 	if dildo_ownership ! 1:
 		act'I swear! They''re not mine!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-			vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			Gspravka = 0
 			GspravkaT = 0
@@ -661,13 +700,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 			else
 				'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+				act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+			else
+				act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			end
 		end
 	end
 	
 	act'I didn''t get to use them yet':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		Gspravka = 0
 		GspravkaT = 0
@@ -676,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		GspravkaTimes = 2
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		if count['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or pcs_vag = 0:
+		if stat['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or pcs_vag = 0:
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use them yet..."'
 			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>? There were <i>two of them</i> in there!"'
 			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
@@ -694,12 +738,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 			*nl
 			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
 	
 	act'I just suck on it':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		Gspravka = 0
 		GspravkaT = 0
@@ -719,13 +768,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		else
 			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
 	
 	
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
-		vanrPar_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
+		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		cla & *clr
@@ -741,7 +795,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
 		*nl
 		'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need new ones.</i>'
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
+			act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
+		else
+			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		end
 	end
 end
 

locations/music_guitarlesson.qsrc

@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodbye':
 	ml_guitarlesson['lessonhour'] = 15
 
 	if ml_guitarlesson['lessonday'] < 8:
-		gs 'music_gutarlesson', 'getdate'
+		gs 'music_guitarlesson', 'getdate'
 		'You agree to meet for your next lesson on <<$ml_guitarlesson[''lessonday'']>> at <<ml_guitarlesson[''lessonhour'']>>:00 next week, on <<newday>>/<<newmonth>>. The teacher enters it in the diary and you say good bye before you leave.'
 		killvar 'newday'
 		killvar 'newmonth'

locations/natbelapt.qsrc

@@ -1976,7 +1976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natmother':
 					'With your other hand, you start playing with your pussy, putting a finger inside, pulling it open occasionally to apply the vibrations to your clit directly, causing you to moan even louder.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 10
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Contintue':
+					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/natbelapt/sex/hitachi02.jpg"></center>'
 						'The thought of doing this in someone else''s bedroom just makes it even more exciting. You feel your orgasm approaching rapidly as you start fingering yourself faster and faster. All the while rubbing your clit with as much pressure as you can stand.'

locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -1088,7 +1088,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'Drink some more':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'drink more':
 	!!This act just repeats the above until the player picks something else or Sveta passes out from drinking too much.
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/newyear/punch.jpg"></center>'

locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -883,7 +883,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 				elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
 					'Your mother knows that you are sexually active.'
 				elseif motherKnowDildo > 0:
-					'Your mother knows you took your own virginity with a dildo.'
+					'Your mother knows you masturbate with a dildo.'
 				else
 					'Your mother thinks that you are a virgin.'
 				end

locations/obroom.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # obroom
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	$sexloc = 'obroom'
 	CLOSE ALL
 	$loc_arg = 'start'

locations/pav_commcenter.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ end
 if month > 8 and ml_guitarlesson['advertisement']  = 0: gt 'music_guitarlesson', 'advertisement'
 
 if hour >= 20 and hour <= 23 and week >= 5 and week < 7:
-	'The entrance to the Community Centre is full of young people, the guys are just hanging around smoking and joking. The girls in small groups, all dressed up and gossiping. You see the bushes moving, Pavlovsks'' famous make out garden.'
+	'The entrance to the community centre is full of young people. The guys are just hanging around smoking and joking while the girls are in small groups, all dressed up and gossiping. You see the bushes moving - Pavlovsks'' famous make out garden.'
 	'You hear people in the alley beside the club. <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''ugel''">Investigate</a>.'
 	if gdkincum = daystart and (cumloc[6] = 0 and cumloc[7] = 0) and cumloc[11] = 0: gdkincum = 0
 	if gdkincum ! daystart:
@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@ if hour >= 20 and hour <= 23 and week >= 5 and week < 7:
 		end
 	end
 else
-	'The Community Centre has sports facilities and offers classes in the evening.'
-	'It houses a small library. Open from 8h until 18h.'
-	'Upstairs, there are some hobby clubs available from 12h until 20h.'
-	'The sports section is open from 14h until 20h during the week and 9h until 20h during the weekend.'
-	'On Friday and Saturday evenings, from 20h to midnight, the main hall is used as a local club, with popular music and dancing. Entrance 25 <b>₽</b>.'
+	'The community centre has sports facilities and offers classes in the evening.'
+	'It houses a small library which is open from 08:00 until 18:00.'
+	'Upstairs, there are some hobby clubs available from 12:00 until 20:00.'
+	'The sports section is open from 14:00 until 20:00 during the week and from 09:00 until 20:00 during the weekend.'
+	'On Friday and Saturday evenings, from 20:00 to midnight, the main hall is used as a club with popular music and dancing. Entry fee is 25 <b>₽</b>.'
 end
 
 

locations/pav_commclubs.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ act 'Go to the toilets': gt 'gdktoilet', 'start'
 if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart and hour = 20: act '<b>Join nerds</b>': gt 'nerd_game_night','game'
 
 if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
-	'At this time of day the community center operates various clubs.'
+	'At this time of day, the community center operates various clubs.'
 
 	if krumonth = month and kruyear = year:
 		act 'Go to the sewing club': gt 'krupo'
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Sewing circle</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/krupo.jpg"></center>'
-			'You went to the sewing club room, as you walked in, a teacher looked at you said. "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join, you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up any days you did not attend are not transferred."'
+			'You go to the sewing club room. As you walk in, a teacher looks at you and says "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join and you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up, any days you did not attend are not refunded."'
 			if money >= 500:
 				act 'Sign up':
 					cls
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 					krumonth = month
 					kruyear = year
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You pay the tuition.'
+					'You pay for the tuition.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commclubs'
 				end
 			end
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Chess Circle</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/kruchess.jpg"></center>'
-			'You went to the chess club room, as you walked in, a teacher looked at you said. "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join, you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up any days you did not attend are not transferred."'
+			'You go to the chess club room. As you walk in, a teacher looks at you and says "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join and you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up, any days you did not attend are not refunded."'
 			if money >= 500:
 				act 'Sign up':
 					cls
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 					chessmonth = month
 					chessyear = year
 					gs'stat'
-					'You pay the tuition.'
+					'You pay for the tuition.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commclubs'
 				end
 			end

locations/pav_industrial.qsrc

@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ boynumBlock = 0
 if streetevent_hour + 2 < hour:gt'street_event','pav_industrial', 'main'
 
 '<center><h2>Pavlovsk Industrial District</h2></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/factory/pav_factory.jpg"></center>'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/factory/gshveyfab.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
-'This is the Industrial region of Pavlovsk, it houses some factories and warehouses along with the old houses that are small and run down.'
+'This is the Industrial region of Pavlovsk. It houses some factories and warehouses, along with the old houses that are small and run down.'
 *nl
-'This area is dominated by one biggest employers in Pavlovsk, the local textile factory. It''s owned by G&M who opened up a store opposite.'
+'This area is dominated by one of the biggest employers in Pavlovsk, the local textile factory. It''s owned by G&M, who opened up a store opposite.'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour < 20 and week >= 1 and week <= 5:
-	'Behind the security checkpoint you can see the <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''pav_factory'', ''enter''">entrance</a> that every employee passes through.'
+	'Behind the security checkpoint, you can see the <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''pav_factory'', ''enter''">entrance</a> that every employee passes through.'
 elseif hour < 8 or hour > 20 or week > 5:
 	'The factory is currently closed.'
 end
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ end
 if week < 6 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 	*pl 'The local <a href="exec:torg = 0 & gt ''budgetclothes'',''start''">G&M Store</a> is currently open.'
 else
-	*pl 'The local G&M Store is currently closed. Opening hours are Monday to Friday, between 08:00 to 20:00.'
+	*pl 'The local G&M store is currently closed. Opening hours are Monday to Friday, between 08:00 to 20:00.'
 end
 
 act 'Walk to the Five Eight estate (0:05)':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_complex', 'start'

locations/pav_library.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ frost = 0
 gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/pav_library.jpg"></center>'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
 'For such a small town, this library is surprisingly large - containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
 
 act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'

locations/pav_pharmacy.qsrc

@@ -346,9 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_lube':
 	if gaptekfirstlube = 0:
 		gaptekfirstlube = 1
 		minut += 2
-		if pav_slut > 150:
-			'You pretend to look at the goods positioned on the shelves, while you consider how to best approach your aunt. Your aunt notices you staring at the shelves, and comes from behind the counter when she''s done helping her last customer.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you looking for something?"'
+		if pav_slut > 150:			
 			'You take a deep breath and say: "Erm... yes aunt. I need some ''stuff''," putting extra emphasis on the word, while looking at the lube.'
 			'"What you mean is lube so you can lets the boys stick their dicks up your ass." She says with a smile.'
 			'When she notices your surprised look she adds. "Your reputation precedes you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Everyone in Pavlovsk knows you''re a <<$gnikname>>."'
@@ -356,8 +354,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_lube':
 			'She chuckles at you stumbling over your words, and gives you a reassuring smile: "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m just teasing you. I''m not here to judge. I guess it runs in the family; maybe we all carry a slut gene or something. Come on, I''ll show you what we have." She takes you by the hand and leads you to the counter holding the lube, "We also have birth control pills and condoms if you want to things other than anal."'
 			'You can''t help but blush again. "Please don''t tell my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. She wouldn''t understand."'
 		else
-			'You pretend to look at the goods positioned on the shelves, while you consider how to best approach your aunt. Your aunt notices you staring at the shelves, and comes from behind the counter when she''s done helping her last customer.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you looking for something?"'
 			'You take a deep breath and say: "Erm... yes aunt. I need some ''stuff''," putting extra emphasis on the word, while looking at the lube.'
 			'Your aunt pretends to be confused, and teases you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what kind of stuff? We sell all kinds of things!"'
 			'You blush as you realize she is going to make you say it: "I know, aunt... I need some lube..."'

locations/pav_shared_gp.qsrc

@@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gpSexVaginal':
 			''
 			'<<$gp_name>> takes a vacuum dick enlarger device from his closet, putting it on his already <<gpDick>> cm long dick.'
 			'As he is pushing the pump, you can see the cock getting larger with each push.'
-			'After some time he stops, putting a ring on the root of his dick. Today the device has enlarged it to <<ndDick_enlarged>> cm!'
+			'After some time he stops, putting a ring on the root of his dick. Today the device has enlarged it to <<gpDick_enlarged>> cm!'
 			act 'Let him fuck you with that monster':subStep = 1 & gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpSexVaginal'
 		elseif subStep = 1:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckdeep1.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gpSexAnal':
 			gpDick_enlarged = gpDick + (gpDick * rand(20, 40) / 100)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/gp/vacuumpumppenis.jpg"></center>'
 			''
-			'<<$gp_name>> takes a vacuum dick enlarger device from his closet, putting it on his already <<ndDick>> cm long dick.'
+			'<<$gp_name>> takes a vacuum dick enlarger device from his closet, putting it on his already <<gpDick>> cm long dick.'
 			'As he is pushing the pump, you can see the cock getting larger with each push.'
 			'After some time he stops, putting a ring on the root of his dick. Today the device has enlarged it to <<gpDick_enlarged>> cm!'
 			act 'Let him fuck you with that monster':subStep = 1 & gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpSexAnal'

locations/psiklin.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='start':
     '<center><H4>Elite settlement<H4></center>'
     '<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/settlement.jpg" ></left>'
 
-	if hour >= 4 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> station is only a short walk from here from here.'
+	if hour >= 4 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> station is only a short walk from here.'
 
     if BDSMClub = 1 or BDSMmeet > 0:
 	    act 'BDSM-club':gt'BDSM_Club','start'

locations/salon.qsrc

@@ -1156,8 +1156,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tanning_booth':
 	else
 		money -= 1000
 	end
-	if salonrand > 6 and npc_QW['A192'] > 2:gt 'etoexhib', 'pos1'
-	if salonrand = 0 and masha = 0:gt 'salon', '0'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/solarium.jpg"></center>'
 	'You spend an hour naked in a tanning booth bronzing your skin.'
@@ -1179,7 +1177,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hair_removal':
 	else
 		money -= 2000
 	end
-	if salonrand = 0 and masha = 0:gt 'salon', '0'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/depilation.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get a full body hair removal treatment, giving you a smooth and completely hair free body.'
@@ -1197,7 +1194,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'skin_care':
 		money -= 5000
 	end
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
-	if salonrand = 0 and masha = 0:gt 'salon', '0'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/facialmask.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get a beauty mask treatment, afterwards your face feels smooth and your skin tight.'
@@ -1215,7 +1211,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rejuvination':
 		money -= 25000
 	end
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
-	if salonrand = 0 and masha = 0:gt 'salon', '0'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/bodyscrub.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get a full body rejuvenation procedure, afterwards your skin feels soft and silky smooth.'
@@ -1326,7 +1321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 		end
 		
 		if money >= 1500:
-			act'Double hardcore massage 1,500 <b>₽</b>':gt'salon','hardcore_massage'
+			act'Double hardcore massage 1,500 <b>₽</b>':gt'salon','double_hardcore_massage'
 		else
 			act'Double hardcore massage (<font color="red">1,500 <b>₽</b> </font>)':
 				msg'You don''t have enough money for this!'
@@ -1488,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'throat_massage':
 		'"Mmrph mrr mrrrph," you choke around the masseur''s cock. Surprisingly, he understands you perfectly and without hesitation pulls out of your mouth and climbs onto the edge of the table before spraying semen all over youe. The hot sticky liquid coats your face and hair and the masseur continues to smear it everywhere with his cock for as much coverage as possible. It''s strangely comforting after being throatfucked for half an hour Once your face is fully covered, he steps down off the table, cleans his cock with a towel, and thanks you for your patronage before leaving you to get dressed.'
 		act'Wipe the cum off your face':
 			cumspclnt = 12
-			gs 'cum_cleanup', 'cleanloc'
+			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			'Taking a nearby towel, you wipe your face and hair clean, tossing it into a bin and redressing before prreparing to leave.'
 			act 'Leave':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
@@ -1587,7 +1582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcore_massage':
 			act'Get dressed and leave':gt'salon','massage_end'
 			act'Wipe your face off first':
 				cumspclnt = 12
-				gs 'cum_cleanup','cleanloc'
+				gs 'cum_cleanup'
 				gt 'salon','massage_end'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1638,7 +1633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'double_hardcore_massage':
 		orgasm += 1
 		gs'stat'
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial28.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial28.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Mmm mmm mm mmmmph," you mumble around the cock in your mouth. Interestingly enough, they seem to understand perfectly and immediately withdraw from your holes, gathering around your face. You stick out your tongue in anticipation and are rewarded with hot streams of cum spattering across your face. It''s thick, it''s sticky, and makes you feel so fucking hot. You massage your clit furiously while they spray load after load that coats your face and hair and it finally sends you over the edge into orgasm.'
 		act'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -1649,7 +1644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'double_hardcore_massage':
 			act'Get dressed and leave':gt'salon','massage_end'
 			act'Wipe your face off first':
 				cumspclnt = 12
-				gs 'cum_cleanup','cleanloc'
+				gs 'cum_cleanup'
 				gt 'salon','massage_end'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1713,7 +1708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gentle_massage':
 			act'Get dressed and leave':gt'salon','massage_end'
 			act'Wipe your face off first':
 				cumspclnt = 12
-				gs 'cum_cleanup','cleanloc'
+				gs 'cum_cleanup'
 				gt 'salon','massage_end'
 			end
 		end

locations/scandalicious.qsrc

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Scandalous</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/scandalous/shop.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Scandalicious</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/scandalicious/shop.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'This store is cheap and tacky. The clothing lives up to the name though and you assume they saved a lot of money on fabric.
 	Its not somewhere you''d go with your Mom or let her know you''d even looked in the window but if you want to show off your body there is nowhere better to shop. The staff aren''t judging anyone so it feels relaxed but there is still a mix of those hiding their embarrassment and those exuding confidence.'

locations/selfplay.qsrc

@@ -495,10 +495,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suction_dildo':
 		'Your <a href="exec:gs ''selfplay'',''bath_suction_dildo''">suction dildo</a> is stuck to the bath tub.'
 	end
 	*nl
-	if suction_dildo > 0 and dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo') ! 1 or dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo') ! 1:
+	if suction_dildo > 0 and dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo') ! 1 and dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_glass_shower_dildo') ! 1:
 		'You can also stick a suction dildo inside <a href="exec:gs ''selfplay'',''shower_suction_dildo_apply'' & gt $loc, $loc_arg">the shower</a>.'
 	elseif dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo') = 1 or dyneval('result = <<$loc>>_glass_shower_dildo') = 1:
-		'Your suction dildo is <a href="exec:gs ''selfplay'',''shower_suction_dildo''">inside the shower</a>.'
+		'Your suction dildo is <a href="exec:gt ''selfplay'',''shower_suction_dildo''">inside the shower</a>.'
 	end
 	*nl
 end
@@ -520,19 +520,22 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_suction_dildo_apply':
 	dynamic('<<$loc>>_suction_dildo += 1')
-    suction_dildo -= 1
 	if $bathtype = 'bathtub shower': 
 		dynamic('<<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo = 1')
 	elseif $bathtype = 'glass shower' or $bathtype = 'glass shower and tub': 
 		dynamic('<<$loc>>_glass_shower_dildo = 1')
 	end
+	suction_dildo -= 1
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_suction_dildo_remove':
-	dynamic('<<$loc>>_shower_dildo = 0')
 	dynamic('<<$loc>>_suction_dildo -= 1')
+	if $bathtype = 'bathtub shower': 
+		dynamic('<<$loc>>_bath_shower_dildo = 0')
+	elseif $bathtype = 'glass shower' or $bathtype = 'glass shower and tub': 
+		dynamic('<<$loc>>_glass_shower_dildo = 0')
+	end
     suction_dildo += 1
-
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathtub_dildo_check':
@@ -557,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_suction_dildo':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/bathtub_dildo.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your suction dildo is currently stuck onto the bathtub.'
 	act'Leave it there':gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	act'Take it off':suction_dildo = 1 & dynamic('<<$loc>>_bathtub_dildo = 0') & gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act'Take it off':gs'selfplay','bathtub_suction_dildo_remove' & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act'Ride it':gt'selfplay','bath_suction_dildo_ride'	
 end
 
@@ -566,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_suction_dildo':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shower_dildo.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your suction dildo is currently stuck on the wall of the shower.'
 	act'Leave it there':gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	act'Take it off':suction_dildo = 1 & dynamic('<<$loc>>_shower_dildo = 0') & gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act'Take it off':gs'selfplay','shower_suction_dildo_remove' & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 !! for using a dildo suctioned to the BATHTUB when not bathing
@@ -600,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_suction_dildo_ride':
 	act'Finish masturbating and unmount your dildo':
 		dildo_timer = 0
 		gs'arousal','end'
-		gs 'bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
+		gs 'selfplay','bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
@@ -664,7 +667,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_bathtub_suction_dildo_ride':
 	end
 	act'Finish masturbating, unmount your dildo, and get out and dry off':
 		dildo_timer = 0
-		gs 'bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
+		gs 'selfplay','bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
 		gs'arousal','end'
 		mirror_steam = hour
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -729,7 +732,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_bathtub_suction_dildo_ride':
 	end
 	act'Finish masturbating, unmount your dildo, and get out and dry off':
 		dildo_timer = 0
-		gs 'bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
+		gs 'selfplay','bathtub_suction_dildo_remove'
 		gs'arousal','end'
 		mirror_steam = hour
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -801,7 +804,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_bathtub_wall_dildo_fuck':
 	end
 	act'Finish masturbating, unmount your dildo, and get out and dry off':
 		dildo_timer = 0
-		gs 'shower_suction_dildo_remove'
+		gs 'selfplay','shower_suction_dildo_remove'
 		mirror_steam = hour
 		gs'arousal','end'
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -852,7 +855,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glass_shower_suction_dildo_fuck':
 	end
 	act'Finish masturbating, unmount your dildo, and get out and dry off':
 		dildo_timer = 0
-		gs 'shower_suction_dildo_remove'
+		gs 'selfplay','shower_suction_dildo_remove'
 		mirror_steam = hour
 		gs'arousal','end'
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg

locations/set_home.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ if curr_home = 1:
 	$home_name = 'City residential apartment'
 	$home_town = 'city'
 	$home_location = 'city_residential'
-	$hone_entrance = 'korr'
+	$home_entrance = 'korr'
 elseif curr_home = 2:
 	$home_name = 'Parent''s home in Pavlovsk'
 	$home_town = 'pavlovsk'
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ elseif curr_home = 4:
 	$home_name = 'Old town apartment'
 	$home_town = 'oldtown'
 	$home_location = 'liames'
-	$home_entrance = 'koor2x'
+	$home_entrance = 'korr2x'
 elseif curr_home = 5:
 	$home_name = 'My mansion'
 	$home_town = 'city'
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ elseif curr_home = 14:
 	$home_name = 'Grandparent''s house in Gadukino'
 	$home_town = 'gadukino'
 	$home_location = 'gaddvor'
-	$hone_entrance = 'gaddvor'
+	$home_entrance = 'gaddvor'
 end
 
 --- set_home ---------------------------------

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -316,8 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You buy the dildo and calmly hide it.'
 			end
-			act 'Leave':gt 'pav_train_market', 'start'
-			act 'Buy something else':gt 'pav_train_market', 4
+			act 'Move away from the counter':gt'sexshop','start'
 		end
 	elseif suction_dildo > 0 and money >= 1000:
 		act 'Buy another 15cm suction dildo 1000 <b>₽</b> (cash':
@@ -332,8 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You buy the dildo and calmly hide it.'
 			end
-			act 'Leave':gt 'pav_train_market', 'start'
-			act 'Buy something else':gt 'pav_train_market', 4
+			act 'Move away from the counter':gt'sexshop','start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -350,8 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You buy the dildo and calmly hide it.'
 			end
-			act 'Leave':gt 'pav_train_market', 'start'
-			act 'Buy something else':gt 'pav_train_market', 4
+			act 'Move away from the counter':gt'sexshop','start'
 		end
 	elseif (karta + bankDebtLimit >= 950):
 		act 'Buy 15cm suction dildo 1000 <b>₽</b> (card0':
@@ -366,8 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You buy the dildo and calmly hide it.'
 			end
-			act 'Leave':gt 'pav_train_market', 'start'
-			act 'Buy something else':gt 'pav_train_market', 4
+			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 		end	
 	end
 

locations/sister.qsrc

@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 '<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-'Your sister Anya is a bit older than you. She is <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from Secondary school, but didn''t go to the university and now works at the local supermarket, here in Pavlovsk.'
+'Your sister Anya is a bit older than you. She is <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from school, but didn''t go to the university. She works at Pavlovsk''s local supermarket.'
 gs 'sister_chat', 'checks'
 
 if hour = 8 and week < 6:
-	'God damn it, <<$pcs_nickname>>, because of you I will be late for work.'
+	'God damn it, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I will be late for work because of you!'
 	act 'Apologize and let her get ready': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 exit
 end
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_commcenter':
 	*clr & cla
 	if npc_rel['A33'] < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What do you want? Fuck off!" Anya and her friends laugh and point at you, until you leave them alone.'
+		'"What do you want? Fuck off!" Anya and her friends laugh and point at you until you leave them alone.'
 		act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	! Showing up after party invite
 	elseif week = 5 and (daystart - (daystart mod 7)) mod 2 = 0 and sisterQW['party'] = 1 and daystart - sisterQW['partyday'] < 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Anya and some of her friends are dressed up organizing themselves before going to the party. Anya sees you and waves you to her. "Come on, I was starting to wonder if you were going to show up."'
+		'Anya and some of her friends are dressed up and organizing themselves before going to the party. Anya sees you and waves at you. "Come on, I was starting to wonder if you were going to show up."'
 		gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'anya'
 	! Anya heading to party
 	elseif npc_rel['A33'] >= 70 and week = 5 and (daystart - (daystart mod 7)) mod 2 = 0 and (sisterQW['party'] = 0 or sisterQW['party'] = 2):
@@ -33,18 +33,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_commcenter':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if npc_rel['A57'] >= 80:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/reks.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'rex'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
-			'Then your sister sees you, smiles and waves you over. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''re going to a party at Rex''s today. Want to come with us?"'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Your sister sees you, smiles and waves you over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! We''re going to a party at Rex''s place. Want to come with us?"'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'anya'
 		end
 	else
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anya.jpg"></center>'
-		'Anya sits with some girls and boys, drinking beer. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Anya smiles, "Want a beer?"'
+		'Anya sits with her friends, drinking beer. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Anya smiles. "Want a beer?"'
 		act 'Drink beer':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_commcenter':
 			else
 				AniaFrends = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You meet Anya''s friends. They are all her former classmates. There''s small and nimble Lusya, Ira who is constantly confused, a tall athletic guy, whom everyone calls Rex, and a red-haired lanky guy named Roma. After the introductions you sit down with them, drinking beer and chatting with Anya and her friends.'
+				'You meet Anya''s friends, who are all her former classmates. There''s the small and nimble Lusya, the ditzy Ira, a tall athletic guy whom everyone calls "Rex" and a lanky, red-haired guy named Roma. After the introductions, you sit down with them, drinking beer and chatting with Anya and her friends.'
 			end
 			act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
@@ -74,19 +74,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 		if mesec > 0 or pcs_mood < 25 or alko >= 3 or cumloc[11] = 1 or cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1:
 			sisterQW['party'] = -1
 			if mesec > 0:
-				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today, you go without me."'
+				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
 				'"What, are you on the rag today? You should have told me! Alright, go home and get some rest."'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			elseif pcs_mood < 25:
-				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today, you go without me."'
-				'"You do look a little pale sis, go home and get some rest."'
+				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
+				'"You do look a little pale sis. Go home and get some rest."'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			elseif alko >= 3:
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, how the hell did you get so drunk already? I was going to invite you to a party, but you look like you have already been to one. Go home and sleep it off."'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, how the hell did you get so drunk already? I was going to invite you to a party, but you look like you have already been to one. Go home and sleep it off!"'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
-				'Her smile fades and she seems confused for a moment then gets a look of disgust on her face. "My God, why are you walking around with your face coverd in cum? You''ll get yourself a reputation! Go home and wash that off, quickly."'
-				'You feel a little ashamed that your sister has seen you looking like this in public.'
+				'Her smile fades and she seems confused for a moment before a look of disgust appears on her blushing face. "My God, why are you walking around with cum all over your face!? You''ll get yourself a reputation! Go home and wash that off, quickly!" She then shoos you away as her friends stare at you.'
+				'You feel a little ashamed that you have embarrassed yourself and your sister by walking around like this in public.'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		else
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_1.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I''d love to, but I have a lot of homework to do. I''m sorry."'
-				'"Don''t worry, maybe next time you can come."'
+				'"Don''t worry. Maybe you can come next time?"'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 			act 'Go to the party': if sisterQW['partycount'] > 0: gt 'sbReksHome', 'party' else gt 'sister_party', 'sisboyQW_party'
@@ -110,35 +110,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 			rexPark = 0
 			rexCar = 0
 			if pav_slut >= 250:
-				'"Shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> everywhere people are saying you are a fucking whore. What is this garbage, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I thought we were an item, and things were getting serious, and you''re fucking around?"'
-				'"I do not know what came over me, I was not myself, please forgive me, if you can."'
+				'"Shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> people everywhere are saying you are a fucking whore. What is this garbage, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I thought we were an item and things were getting serious, but you''re fucking everything that moves?"'
+				'"I don''t know what came over me. I wasn''t myself. Please, forgive me if you can."'
 				'"Listen, everything''s OK, but let''s just be friends and forget being together. Okay?"'
 				'"Okay..."'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
-				'"Shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> are you covered in cum? What is this garbage, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" He leans in to get a better look then recoils in disgust.'
-				'Your hand goes up to the dried cum on your face, you forgot about it. "I do not know what came over me, I was not myself, please forgive me, if you can."'
-				'"What ever slut, just get away from me." With that he moves away from you and now you see everyone giving you either a disgusted or angry look.'
-				'"Okay..." Not knowing what else to say you walk away.'
+				'"Shit <<$pcs_nickname>>, is that cum?" He leans in to get a better look then recoils in disgust.'
+				'Your hand goes up to the dried cum on your face that you forgot to wipe off. "I don''t know what came over me, I wasn''t myself. Please, forgive me if you can."'
+				'"Whatever slut. Just get away from me." He moves away from you and you see everyone giving you either a disgusted or angry look.'
+				'"Okay..." Not knowing what else to say, you walk away disheartened.'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		elseif mesec > 0 or pcs_mood < 50:
-			'"Sorry Rex, sweetie, I''m not feeling too good today, you go without me."'
-			'"Sweetie, I do not want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys, take care, and do not be sad."'
-			'Rex gives you a gentle kiss on your cheek and leaves.'
+			'"Sorry sweetie, but I''m not feeling too good today. You go without me."'
+			'"Babe, I don''t want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys. Take care and do not be sad."'
+			'Rex gives you a gentle kiss on the cheek and leaves.'
 			act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		elseif alko >= 3:
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? I wanted to invite you to the party, but you look like you just left a party. Go home and sleep it off."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? I wanted to invite you to the party, but you look like you just left one. Go home and sleep it off."'
 			act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		else
-			'"Baby, let''s go to my place, I am throwing another one of my parties."'
+			'"Babe, let''s go to my place. I''m throwing another one of my parties."'
 			act 'Decline':
 				cla
 				minut += 5
 				sisterQW['party'] = -1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Sorry Rex, I have a lot of homework. I''d love to but I don''t want to fail my exams."'
-				'"Well, go on then, but next time you definitely come, okay?"'
+				'"Sorry Rex, but I have a lot of homework. I''d love to come, but I don''t want to fail my exams."'
+				'"Well, go on then. But you''re definitely coming next time, okay?"'
 				act 'Move away': SiSgdk = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 			act 'Accept': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party'
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your sister Anya and her friends Lusya, Ira, Rex, and Roman are sitting outside the community center drinking beer.'
+	'Your sister and her friends Lusya, Ira, Rex and Roma are sitting outside the community center, drinking beer.'
 	if npc_QW['A33'] = 1:
 		act 'Meet your sister''s boyfriend':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -159,15 +159,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			npc_QW['A33'] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/sisboyqw_02.jpg"></center>'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to meet my boyfriend? This is my boyfriend Roma, and this is my sister <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to meet my boyfriend, right? Well, this is Roma. Roma, this is my sister <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'"To friendship!!!" Rex shouts drunkenly, raising his cup. You pick up a cup full of beer and start drinking, glancing at your sister''s boyfriend.'
-			'Roma, red-haired and skinny, is actually pretty cute, he kinda reminds you of Katja and Vicky but more manly. You think to yourself, "Sister, how very lucky you are."'
+			'Roma, red-haired and skinny, is actually pretty cute. He reminds you of Katja and Vicky, but more manly. You think to yourself how lucky Anya is to have him.'
 			act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 		end
 	else
 		temp = rand(0,4)
 		if temp = 0:
-			'Impatiently, Anya picks up a bottle of beer and shouts, "Come on guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
+			'Impatiently, Anya picks up a bottle of beer and shouts "Come on guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex takes the bottle out of Anya''s hands.'
 				temprand = rand(0,4)
@@ -180,32 +180,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "Hurry up, you piece of dog shit!"'
 					else
 						'With a smile, Ira says "Don''t get angry, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'"Well, you always like to be late for the fun. Relax your ass, I''m sorting it all out."'
+					'"Well, you always like to be late for the fun. Will your loud ass relax? I''m sorting it all out."'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
 						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says "My ass is always relaxed."'
-						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is." Which gets everyone laughing.'
+						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is.", which gets everyone laughing.'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "If we had something to drink we would be relaxed!"'
+						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "If we had something to drink, we would be relaxed!"'
 					else
-						'Roma giggles and says "If she relaxes it anymore it will be too loose to feel anything."'
-						'Anya quips, "That''s just because you have a little dick." Which gets everyone laughing.'
+						'Roma giggles and says "If she relaxes it anymore, it will be too loose to feel anything."'
+						'"That''s just because you have a little dick." Anya quips, which gets everyone laughing.'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'"Come on, you could have opened it yourself, lazy bitch. Don''t you have hands?" He says with a smile'
+					'"Come on, you could have opened it yourself, you lazy bitch. Don''t you have hands?" he says with a smile.'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
 						'Anya giggles "Yeah, but what else are yours good for?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Really just one other thing."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Really? Just one other thing..."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
 						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "Is that how you speak to a lady?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Yes. I speak Russian to her."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Yes, I speak Russian to her."'
 					else
 						'Ira smiles, saying "Don''t get so upset, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him up to a tree to keep him calm."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a tree to keep him calm."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 3:
 					'"Allow me, madame."'
@@ -219,12 +219,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 						'Impatiently, Anya says "Pour it already, you clown."'
 					end
 				else
-					'"Shit! Where''re the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
+					'"Shit! Where are the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Anya picks up the cups, "Here they are, you blind monster."'
+						'Anya picks up the cups. "They''re right here, you blind moron."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Roma says "Rex, you''re the one who bought them, is your memory really that bad?"'
+						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad?" Roma asks.'
 					else
 						'Lusya holds up the cups and says "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
@@ -237,16 +237,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				elseif temprand = 1:
 					'Rex takes the cups and mutters "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
+					'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour already, you big doofus."'
 				else
-					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, they suddenly starts to tip over, unable to regain his balance this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you, ''Always pour with two hands!''"'
+						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that, are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Indignantly, Anya says "Always the same, getting too drunk, too fast.."'
+						'Placing her head in her hand, Anya indigantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast.."'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -258,12 +258,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex picks up a bottle of beer and pops it open.'
 				if rand(0,2) = 0:
-					'"Shit! Where''re the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
+					'"Shit! Where are the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Anya picks up the cups, "Here they are, you blind monster."'
+						'Anya picks up the cups. "They''re right here, you blind moron!"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Roma says "Rex, you''re the one who bought them, is your memory really that bad?"'
+						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad? Roma asks."'
 					else
 						'Lusya holds up the cups and says "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
@@ -281,14 +281,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				elseif temprand = 2:
 					'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
 				else
-					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, they suddenly starts to tip over, unable to regain his balance this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you, ''Always pour with two hands!''"'
+						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that, are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Indignantly, Anya says "Always the same; getting to drunk, to fast.."'
+						'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast.."'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -300,16 +300,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			elseif temprand = 1:
 				'Rex takes the cups and mutters "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
 			elseif temprand = 2:
-				'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
+				'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour already, you big doofus."'
 			else
-				'As Roma pours beer in the cups, they suddenly starts to tip over, unable to regain his balance this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+				'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 				temprand = rand(0, 2)
 				if temprand = 0:
-					'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you, ''Always pour with two hands!''"'
+					'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that, are you really that drunk already?"'
+					'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 				else
-					'Indignantly, Anya says "Always the same; getting to drunk, to fast.."'
+					'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast.."'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 	end
 	
 	
-	'Finally, everybody''s plastic cup is filled with cold beer. You all merrily drink together.'
+	'Eventually, everybody''s plastic cup is filled with ice cold beer. You all merrily drink together.'
 	if reksLike = 1 and toiletRexSex = 0 and sisterQW['partycount'] > 0 and rex_breakup = 0:
 		temp = rand(1,100)
 		if temp >= 70:
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			npc_rel['A57'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/rex.jpg"></center>'
-			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you - "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me refill your glass" - but he, seemingly accidentally, spills some on your foot. - "Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, forgive me! Here, I''ll clean that up."'
+			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me refill your glass." However he, seemingly by accident, spills some on your foot. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, forgive me! Here, I''ll clean that up for you."'
 			'Rex begins wiping off your legs with his shirt sleeve.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					npc_rel['A57'] -= 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/community/rexnet.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No problem, I can manage that." You say as you clean your own shoe.'
+					'"No problem, I can manage that." you say as you clean your own shoe.'
 					act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 				end
 			else
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/rex.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'reks', 'rexRep'
-			'Rex comes up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you could have at least told me you didn''t want to go out... last night was a disaster! Next time, please just tell me if you can''t make it."'
+			'Rex comes up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you could have at least told me you didn''t want to go out! Last night was a disaster! Next time, please just tell me if you can''t make it."'
 			act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 		elseif temp > 50 and npc_rel['A57'] >= 30:
 			cla
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 !2 - agreed to go to the party
 !!again want to change rexs party to only every other Friday
 		elseif week < 5 and week > 1 and (daystart - (daystart mod 7)) mod 2 = 0 and pcs_vag > 0 and (sisterQW['party'] = 0 or sisterQW['party'] = 2) and daystart - sisterQW['partyday'] > 3:
-			'Roma looks up at you, suddenly remembering something. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex''s apartment is available on Friday and he''s having a party, do you want to go?"'
+			'Roma looks up at you, suddenly remembering something. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex''s apartment is available on Friday and he''s having a party. Do you want to go?"'
 			sisterQW['partyday'] = daystart
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You turn down the invitation.'
-				'"Sorry Roma, I would love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework and books to read, you know what it''s like."'
+				'"Sorry Roma, I would love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework to do and books to read, you know what it''s like."'
 				act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 			end
 			if razradbeg > 0:
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'You turn down the invitation.'
-					'"I can''t, the coach does not allow my to stay out late, and drinking is also prohibited."'
+					'"Sorry, but I can''t. The coach doesn''t allow me to stay out late and drinking is also prohibited."'
 					act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 				end
 			end
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You agree to go to the party.'
-				'"Awesome <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''ll be fun. We will meet here, don''t forget to be there before 18:00, otherwise we will leave without you."'
+				'"Awesome <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''ll be fun. We will meet here. Just don''t forget to be here before 18:00, otherwise we will leave without you."'
 				'Anya gives Roma a dirty look, but he just shrugs it off.'
 				act 'Finish':SiSgdk = 0 & gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 			end
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The bottles of beer are quickly drained and everyone seems a little tipsy at this point. Soon everyone gets up and staggers inside, as they go they tell you bye, you wave to them and head on your way.'
+	'The bottles of beer are quickly drained and everyone seems a little tipsy at this point. Soon everyone gets up and staggers inside. As they go, they all shout goodbye at you, so you wave to them and head on your way.'
 	act 'Leave':SiSonWork = 0 & SiSgdk = 0 & gt 'pav_commcenter'
 end
 

locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_expel':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_07.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisboytrioQW ! 1:
-		'Your sister reminds you, she wants spend time alone with Roma and asks you to leave the room.'
+		'Your sister reminds you that she wants spend time alone with Roma and asks you to leave the room.'
 	else
 		'Your sister asks you to briefly leave the room.'
 	end
@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_08.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to your bedroom door, you stop just before it. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend and you are sure you know they are having or going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but at the same time you can not shake the stimulating thoughts, your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
+	'You walk up to your bedroom door and stop. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend and you are sure they are having or are going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but you cannot shake the stimulating thoughts of your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
 	act 'Leave them in peace':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 1
 		blockBedrPar = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_06.jpg"></center>'
-		'You can''t bring yourself to spy on them and you remember your promise to your sister and decide not to bother her.'
+		'You can''t bring yourself to spy on them and remember your promise to your sister, so you decide not to bother her.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You force yourself to slowly touch the handle of the door. You turn the knob slowly and pull it open just a crack, pressing your face to the crack in the door you peer into the room.'
-			'Your eyes focus on your sister and her boyfriend passionately kissing and undressing each other, yep it looks like they are about to have sex.'
+			'You force yourself to slowly grab the handle of the door. You turn it slowly and push the door open just a crack. Pressing your face to the gap, you peer into the room.'
+			'Your eyes focus on your sister and her boyfriend passionately kissing and undressing each other. It looks like they are about to have sex.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Close the door':
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 				minut += 1
 				blockBedrPar = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel guility about spying on your sister after you promised her you would leave her and her boyfriend in peace and you close the door softly so they don''t hear it. You lean your head against the door for a few moment to collect yourself before turning and moving away.'
+				'You feel guility about spying on your sister after you promised you would leave her in peace and you close the door softly so they don''t hear you. You lean your head against the door for a few moments to collect yourself before walking away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy1':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked Roma lays back on her bed, Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock, she slowly starts sucking on his dick.'
+	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
 	'He is lying relaxed, as if he had fallen asleep, but your sister is wide awake and continues playing with him.'
-	'Anya is so skillful with a cock, you are greatly impressed. She could teach you a few lessons, you start imagining yourself in her position.'
-	'You are getting a little carried away, you should leave the room, before you are discovered.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
+	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before they see you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy2':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked Anya lays down on her bed, with her legs hanging off the edge. Then she spreads her legs wide apart, while Roma kneels down at the edge of the edge of the bed between her legs. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy, you can hear her moaning from here. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he is doing down there. Several minutes pass and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed like she is about to have a orgasm already.'
-	'At that moment you want so much to be in your sisters place, but you are exposed here by the door and you don''t want to be caught.'
+	'Once naked, Anya lies down on her bed, with her legs hanging off the edge. She spreads her legs wide and Roma kneels down at the edge of the bed between her legs. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy. You can hear her moaning from where you stand. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he is doing. Several minutes pass and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed like she is about to have an orgasm already.'
+	'At that moment, you wish to be in your sister''s place, but you are exposed here by the door and you don''t want to be caught.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -129,10 +129,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy3':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once Anya is naked, Roma pushes her down to her knees roughly. She pulls down his pants once she is down on her knees, his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking on his dick.'
-	'Anya relishes swallowing his member all the way to the testicles and taking it out of her mouth, she sobs heavily, her face plastered in saliva.'
+	'Once Anya is naked, Roma pushes her down to her knees roughly. She pulls down his pants and his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking it.'
+	'Anya relishes swallowing his member balls deep and when she takes it out of her mouth, she sobs heavily, her face plastered in saliva.'
 	*nl
-	'She has a hard time deep-throating such a large penis, mascara and tears run down her face, but Roma forcefully grabs her hair in both his hands and starts fucking her mouth roughly, his balls slapping against her chin.'
+	'She has a hard time deep-throating such a large cock with mascara and tears running down her face, but Roma forcefully grabs her hair in both his hands and starts fucking her mouth roughly, his balls slapping against her chin.'
 	'You can hear her gags and muffled gasps from here. Your mischievous sister suffers, just to please her boyfriend.'
 	'You want to watch until the end, but you are running the risk of being noticed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -156,11 +156,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy4':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her, slaps her ass once. Then he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him, suddenly she moans loudly, and Roma starts thrusting against her obviously fucking her and she seems to be loving it. For several minutes this goes on.'
+	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He then grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. She then moans loudly and Roma starts thrusting against her, obviously fucking her and she seems to be loving it. This goes on for several minutes.'
 	*nl
-	'Roma is red and sweety, when he suddenly freezes for a moment, then falls on his back.'
-	'Your sister groans, "Already?" Then pauses a moment and her tone turns angry. "What the fuck? You came inside me again? You fucking moron, Get off of me, how many times do I have to tell you?"'
-	'It seems they need to talk, you have time to run away, since you have not been noticed.'
+	'Roma is red and sweaty when he suddenly freezes for a moment, then falls on his back. You look closely and can clearly see his cum trickling from her pussy.'
+	'Your sister groans. "Already?" Her tone turns angry when she realizes what''s happened. "What the fuck!? You came inside me again? How many times do I have to tell you, you fucking moron? Get the fuck away from me!"'
+	'It seems they need to talk and so you take the opportunity to run away before they notice you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -182,11 +182,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy5':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her, slaps her ass once. Then he reaches over to her night stand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of it on his dick and then some on her butt, after that he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reach down to grab his dick with one hand, while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly your sister gasp and tenses up a moment. Her hands tighly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath, as Roman starts to slowly fuck her.'
+	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of it''s contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand, while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly your sister gasps and tenses up for a moment. Her hands tighly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
 	*nl
-	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her, until she is laying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe." Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips, as he starts to really hammer her ass.'
-	'His movements get faster and faster, and their bodies sway in unison, Anya screams, "More... more! Fuck my tight little ass!"'
-	'It seems they are so engrossed in each other, that they have not yet noticed your presence, it might be time to leave the hot couple.'
+	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She is soon laying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe." Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
+	'His movements get faster and faster and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams "More... More! Yes...Fuck my tight little ass...Just like that!"'
+	'They are so engrossed in each other that they have not yet noticed your presence. Now might be the time to leave the hot couple to it.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -207,9 +207,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked Roma kneels on her bed, Anya lays on the bed in front of him and starts to kiss and lick his cock, she slowly starts sucking on his dick.'
-	'Anya is so skillful with a cock, you are greatly impressed. She could teach you a few lessons, you start imagining yourself in her position.'
-	'You are getting a little carried away, you should leave the room, before you are discovered, you know. But you really want to watch the whole thing.'
+	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
+	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before you are discovered, but you really want to watch the whole thing.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -232,35 +232,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy5.jpg"></center>'
-			'After giving him a blowjob for a bit, he pulls her up till she is kneeling facing him. He grabs her and lifts her up, she spreads her legs and lines up his cock with her pussy as he lowers her back down, impaling her on his dick. They both moan as he holds her up as they fuck, Roma seems to be pretty strong, being able to hold her up like that and still fuck her.'
+			'After giving him a blowjob, he pulls her up until she is kneeling while facing him. He grabs her and lifts her up, she spreads her legs and lines his cock up with her pussy before he lowers her back down, impaling her on his dick. They both moan as he holds her up as they fuck. Roma seems to be pretty strong, being able to hold her up like that and still fuck her.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ride''em cowgirl':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Eventually Roma gets tired and lays back on the bed, after a bit of adjustment. He lays on his back and she mounts him and starts riding him cowgirl style. Her pace is frantic almost animal like, after a few minutes she cries out as a orgasm crashing through her body and she slowly stops moving while laying on top of him.'
+				'Eventually Roma gets tired and lies back on the bed. Anya then mounts him and starts riding him hard. Her pace is frantic, almost animal like. After a few minutes, she cries out as an orgasm pulses through her body and she slowly stops moving while sitting on top of him, his dick still inside her pussy.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Doggy for the win':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Having recovered his strength, Roma rolls Anya off him and gets back up on his knees. He pulls her up on her knees, then spins her around so he is behind her, and pushes her shoulders folder until she bends over, on all fours. Once she is on all fours he slides up behind her and starts fucking her doggy style. With one hand he smacks her ass and with the other he grabs ahold of her hair and occasionally pulls it back, causes her head to strain back.'
+					'Having recovered his strength, Roma rolls Anya off him and gets back up on his knees. He pulls her up on her knees, spins her around and pushes her shoulders forwards until she bends over on all fours. Once she is in position, he slides up behind her and starts fucking her doggy style. He smacks her ass with one hand and grabs hold of her hair with the other, occasionally pulling it back and causing her head to strain back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Tight ass no more':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy8.jpg"></center>'
-						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy, takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she, really has time to react. She cries out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. Roma on the other hand groan in full pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, he quickly starts to really hammer her ass. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly and her moans and groans remain a mixture of pain and pleasure, it sounds like pleasure might be winning out though.'
+						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy and takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she really has time to react. She cries out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. Roma, on the other hand, groans in pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, quickly starting to really hammer it. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly and her moans and groans remain a mixture of pain and pleasure.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'ATM':
+						act 'Ass To Mouth':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy11.jpg"></center>'
-							'Suddenly he pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair. He pulls her head around towards his dick, the first spurt of cum hits her in the chest. Before another spurt comes out though, he sticks his dick in her mouth and groans loudly. He milks his dick into her mouth, filling it with his sperm. He pulls his dick out and says. "Swallow it!" She makes a swallowing motion then opens her mouth, sticking out her clean tongue. They both collapse on the bed. Roma just out of your view, while your sister cum splattered tits are visible.'
+							'He suddenly pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair. He pulls her head around towards his dick and the first spurt of cum lands on her chest. Before another spurt comes out, he sticks his dick in her mouth and groans loudly. He unloads into her mouth, filling it with his sperm. He then pulls out and says "Swallow it!" Anya makes a swallowing motion then opens her mouth, sticking out her clean tongue. Roma collapses on the bed just out of your view, with only your sister and her cum splattered tits visible.'
 							*nl
-							'After a few moments your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that, it''s gross."'
+							'After a few moments your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that. It''s fucking gross."'
 							'You hear Roma chuckle. "You said you love the taste of my cum babe."'
-							'She sighs. "I am talking about taking it out of my ass and sticking it straight into my mouth, stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You have been watching them for a long time, you need to leave before someone finds you spying or before Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
+							'She sighs. "I mean pulling out of my ass and sticking it straight into my mouth. Stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You have been watching them for a long time, you need to leave before someone finds you spying or before Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -281,10 +281,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caress':
 	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib += rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spymas<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can not restrain yourself from the strong excitation, you turn and rest your back against the wall.'
-	'You pull your panties down and touch your glistening, wet pussy with your finger, as you listen to the moans and groans coming from your room.'
-	'You lick your finger before rhythmically caressing your swollen clit, and caressing your breasts with the other hand, lost in the moment, oblivious to all around you.'
-	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens, realizing you have hit your peak, biting your lip to restrain your moans.'
+	'You can''t help yourself. You turn and press your back against the wall.'
+	'You pull your panties down and rub your glistening, wet pussy with your finger as you listen to the moans and groans coming from your room.'
+	'You lick your finger before rhythmically caressing your swollen clit and caressing your breasts with your other hand. You are lost in the moment, oblivious to everything around you.'
+	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens. Realizing you have hit your peak, you bite your lip to stiffle your moans.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_07.jpg"></center>'
 		'Anya opens the door, looking sad.'
-		'"You promised to come, what happened? Well maybe next time..."'
+		'"You promised to come! What happened? Well maybe next time..."'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 		exit
 	end
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_41.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enter the room, you see Anya and Roma tumbling in the bed.'
-	'Anya notices you, Roma frees her from his embrace and she walks slowly to you and gives you a intimate hug and pulls your towards the bed.'
+	'Anya notices you, Roma frees her from his embrace and she walks slowly to you, gives you an intimate hug and pulls your towards the bed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'This is wrong':
@@ -330,8 +330,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 		sisThank = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep4.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Screw this, someone in this family should have a shred of dignity."'
-		'It feels so wrong, you think you might throw up. You turn and flee from these perverts. Once outside the door you turn and close it, you hold the door closed a moment with a look of shock on your face as you realize what almost happened. Then you finally let go of the door and walk away.'
+		'"Screw this! Someone in this family should have a shred of dignity!"'
+		'It feels so wrong, you think you might throw up. You turn and flee from these perverts. Once outside the door you turn and close it. You hold the door closed a moment with a look of shock on your face as you realize what almost happened. You then let go of the door and walk away.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flee': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -339,14 +339,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	act 'Join her on the bed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You crawl on her bed with her and the two of you hug and lightly fondly each other on the bed as Roma just watches the two of you for the moment. Roma licks his lips as he watches obviously already aroused at the thought of what is to come. "Come on girls, show me your tits."'
+		'You crawl on her bed with her and the two of you hug and lightly fondle each other as Roma just watches the two of you for the moment. Roma licks his lips as he watches, obviously already aroused at the thought of what is to come. "Come on girls, show me your tits."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flash':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $braworntype ! 'none':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him, his eyes go to first your chest than her''s, going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras but I said tits, don''t be shy girls." You pull up your bra.'
+				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him. His eyes are drawn to your chest, than Anya''s before going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras, but I said tits. Don''t be shy girls." With his encouragement, you pull up your bra.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Boobs': gt 'sisterQW', 'flash_boobs'
@@ -360,32 +360,32 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You expose your tits, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands. While Roma walks closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at your boobs. He starts pulling off your top as he says "Take off Anya''s top." Soon both you and Anya are topless. "Now kiss for me girls."'
+	'As you expose your tits, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands while Roma walks closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at them. He starts pulling off your top as he says "Take off Anya''s top." You and Anya are soon topless. "Now kiss for me girls."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Kiss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Anya and you kiss, as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn this is so fucking hot." Roma says, he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes and Anya''s obviously wanting to get you both naked as quickly as he can.'
+		'You and Anya kiss as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn this is so fucking hot." Roma says as he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes as well as Anya''s, obviously wanting to get you both naked as quickly as he can.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fondle':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once you are both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. With you all naked Roma starts to rub your pussy with one hand, while he suckles at one of your nipples. Anya plays with your other tit with one hand, while her other smacks your ass before squeezing it. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands. Roma then stops playing with you and says "Damn, one of you needs to start sucking my dick."'
+			'Once you are both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. All of you now naked, Roma starts to rub your pussy while he suckles at one of your nipples. Anya plays with your other tit with one hand while the other smacks and squeezes your ass. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands. Roma then stops playing with you and says "Damn, one of you needs to start sucking my dick."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch Anya suck':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Anya gets down on all fours and starts sucking Roma''s dick like a pro, you get down as well and have a close view of her work. Roma places a hand on the top of your head and the back of her. He makes her deep throat him a few times as you watch. After a couple of minutes Anya pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you.'
+				'Anya gets down on all fours and starts sucking Roma''s dick like a pro. You get down as well and have a close view of her work. Roma places a hand on top of your head and on the back of Anya''s. He makes her deepthroat him as you watch. After a couple of minutes, Anya pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Suck Roma':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it, closing your lips around his shaft you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep on his dick, while Anya starts playing with your boobs. Several minutes go by of you sucking Roma before he states "I want to fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it. Closing your lips around his shaft, you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep on his dick, while Anya starts playing with your tits. Several minutes go by of you sucking Roma before he states "I want to fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -400,27 +400,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some8.jpg"></center>'
 						if pcs_vag = 0:
 							roma_cherry = 1
-							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls pack, pulling his dick out of your mouth and lays down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him, she takes ahold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick already slick with slobber pressed up against your vaginal lips and then force them apart, sliding into you. You feel your hymen tearing as his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick fills your slot. As you ride his cock Anya licks and sucks at your clit making the pain feel less and the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
+							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you. You feel your hymen tearing as his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick fills you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, reducing the pain and causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
 							gs 'pain', 3, 'vaginal', 'tear'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Red surprise': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 						else
-							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls pack, pulling his dick out of your mouth and lays down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him, she takes ahold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick already slick with slobber pressed up against your vaginal lips and then force them apart, sliding into you with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. As you ride his cock Anya licks and sucks at your clit making the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
+							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Anya''s turn':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off and puts you aside. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her back. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, she moans loudly as he does, just as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
+								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off of him and places you aside. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Your turn again':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some11.jpg"></center>'
-									'Suddenly you feel a smack on your ass. "Ok come over here and get on all fours, I want to fuck you again" says Roma and you are sure he is the one that smacked your butt. You climb off Anya and gets on all fours, Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back in your pussy, while Anya lays down in front of your face and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces you face into her crotch, you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again. Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and then you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
+									'You then feel a sudden smack on your ass. "OK, come over here and get on all fours. I want to fuck you again." Roma demands. You are sure he is the one that smacked you. You climb off Anya and gets on all fours as Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back in your pussy, while Anya lays down in front of your face and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces you face into her crotch and you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again. Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -431,8 +431,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-											'You pull away and turns your head back to him. "No anal!" He visable sighs obviously looking forward too.'
-											'"Ok, no anal." Then he grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she is still on her back. As you watch he slides his dick in her ass, then he glances up at you "Well, get back on her face." You straddle her face as he fucks her, she licks you pussy, as you glance back he occasionally switches which of her holes he is fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
+											'You pull away and turn your head back to him. "No anal!" He sighs, obviously having looked forward to fucking your ass.'
+											'"OK, no anal." He grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she is still on her back. You watch as he slides his dick in her ass, then he glances up at you. "Well, get back on her face." You straddle her face as he fucks her and she licks your pussy. You glance back occasionally and see how he switches which of her holes he is fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
 											act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
@@ -444,14 +444,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A56'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some12.jpg"></center>'
-										'When you don''t say anything he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass and pauses a moment to let you get us to it. Then he slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from Anya and your''s pussy juices, so it slides up your butt fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
+										'When you don''t say anything, he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass, pauses for a moment to let you get used to it. He then slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from you and Anya''s pussy juices, so it slides into you fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Deep pounding':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some10.jpg"></center>'
-											'Once he dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your butthole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed, only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass, he does a pretty good job of pounding you without being to rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining and you can tell he is getting read to come, maybe it is the sound or maybe you, either way at that moment is when Anya has a orgasm rock through her body. Just then Roma pulls his dick out of your ass.'
+											'Once his dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass, he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass. He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. You can tell he is getting read to cum, and at that moment, Anya has an orgasm rock through her body. Roma then pulls his dick out of your ass.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'refuse_to_fuck_roma':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You shake your head no. "I just want to do oral this time, maybe next time." He frowns obviously a little disappointed but nods. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her back. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, she moans loudly as he does, just as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking her pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time, as you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, you see him sometimes switch holes, from her pussy to her ass, and then later back to her pussy and then finally back to her ass. A few moments later a massive orgasm rocker her body, which gets Roma to start grunting obviously on the verge of a orgasm himself.'
+	'You shake your head. "I just want to do oral. Maybe next time." He frowns, obviously a little disappointed, but nods. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking her pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time and you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, seeing him sometimes switch holes. A few moments later, a massive orgasm rocks her body, which causes Roma to start grunting, obviously on the verge of an orgasm himself.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
@@ -484,23 +484,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		minut += 60
 		npc_rel['A33'] += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
-		'Despite the pain from having your cherry popped you still enjoyed it. Roma starts to change positions, as he does he looks down at his dick seeing the blood. "Shit, Anya I think <<$pcs_nickname>> was a virgin."'
-		'Anya sits up suddenly. "What?" She looks at Roma, then to the blood on his dick and then to you. As she looks at you her eyes get big, realizing her boyfriend just popped her little sisters cherry.'
+		'Despite the pain from having your cherry popped, you still enjoyed it. Roma changes positions and as he does, he looks down at his dick and notices the blood. "Anya, you didn''t tell me that <<$pcs_nickname>> was a virgin!"'
+		'Anya frantically sits up. "What!!??" She looks at Roma, then to the blood on his dick and then to you. As she looks at you, her eyes grow wide at the realization that her boyfriend just took her little sister''s virginity.'
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell where you thinking?" She asks you angrily.'
-		'Seeing their reaction, you start to tear up "I was thinking I loved you and couldn''t think of a better way to lose my virginity and I was tired of being a virgin."'
-		'Anya seeing your tears gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it." She gives Roma a look that says go away.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell where you thinking?" she asks you angrily.'
+		'Seeing their reaction, you start to tear up. "I was thinking I loved you! I was tired of being a virgin and couldn''t think of a better way to lose my virginity!"'
+		'Anya, seeing your tears, gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it." She gives Roma a glare and he leaves.'
 		*nl
-		'Roma gets up and goes to take a shower and finish himself off in there.'
-		'Anya and you end up having a long talk about what just happened and what it means going forward. Your bond, if anything, is now stronger and you really were tired of being a virgin.'
-		'Shit, what are you going to tell your mother?'
+		'Roma gets up to take a shower and finish himself off in there.'
+		'You and Anya end up having a long talk about what just happened and what it means going forward. Your bond, if anything, is now stronger.'
+		'"Shit, what are you going to tell mother?" she asks aloud.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		roma_cherry = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get up': gt 'bedrPar'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some13.jpg"></center>'
-		'Roma pulls you over and onto your back, so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs over the top of you so her face is just above your face, with his dick nearly between you. He starts jerking off and mere moments latter cum starts spurting out of his cock, Anya opens her mouth and you follow suit. Most of his cum ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both of your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto your face or into your mouth.'
+		'Roma pulls you over and onto your back, so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs on the top of you so she is is just above you, with his dick between you. He starts jerking off and mere moments later, cum starts spurting out of his cock. Anya opens her mouth and you follow suit. Most of his cum ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both of your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto your face or into your mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A56', 1
 		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A56', 1
@@ -508,9 +508,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some14.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapse back on the bed. While Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you share his cum as you kiss. A few moments later she climbs off you, still having left some of his cum on your face. She grabs a tissue and hands you one as well and starts cleaning his cum off her face. You follow suit and start cleaning your face as well, after that all of you get dressed. Just as you finish dressing Roma says "That was a blast girls, we will have to do that again." He gives Anya a pleading look as he says it.'
-			'Anya laughs and shakes her head like a mom might do with a small kid asking for more cookies. "Maybe, we''ll see, depends on how good you are."'
-			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug "I am always good, that''s why you love me." Then before she can respond he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they are getting all romantic you decided to leave.'
+			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapses back on the bed. Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you sharing his cum as you kiss. A few moments later, she climbs off you, some of his cum still on your face. She grabs a tissue and starts cleaning her face before offering you one. You follow suit and start cleaning your face and then get dressed. Just as you finish dressing, Roma says "That was a blast girls! we have to do that again." He gives Anya a pleading look as he says it.'
+			'Anya laughs and shakes her head. "Maybe. It depends on how good you are."'
+			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug "I am always good, that''s why you love me." Before she can respond, he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they are getting all romantic, you decide to leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			cumspclnt = 12
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'

locations/sister_chat.qsrc

@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'checks':
 		!! If you have visible cum on you:	
 		if cumloc[11] = 1 or (cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1) and pav_slut < 200:
 			sisterknowslut = 1
-			'Your Sister looks at you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what is that?". Suddenly, her eyes narrow, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, is that cum on you? What was you thinking walking around with that on you? It''s a good thing I noticed, what if it had been <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>?!"'
+			'Your sister looks at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what is that?" Suddenly, her eyes narrow. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, is that cum!? What were you thinking walking around with that on you? It''s a good thing I noticed and not <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. God forbid what she would do if she ever saw you like that!"'
 		elseif cumloc[11] = 1 or (cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1) and pav_slut >= 200 and sisterknowslut = 0:
 			sisterknowslut = 1
-			'Your Sister looks at you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, so the rumours are true, you are <<$gnikname>>"'
+			'Your sister looks at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>?! So the rumours are true, you are <<$gnikname>>!"'
 		elseif cumloc[11] = 1 or (cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1) and pav_slut >= 250 and sisterknowslut > 0:
-			'Your Sister looks at you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, up to your usual tricks? You could at least wash yourself."'
+			'Your sister looks at you. "Up to your usual tricks, <<$pcs_nickname>>? You could at least wash yourself."'
 		end
 
 		!! If you are on drugs:
@@ -58,14 +58,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'checks':
 			if StrongNarkota > 20:
 				if pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You realize you are way to high to talk to your sister right now and she would flip out if she noticed you are high again, so you quickly move away before she notices.'
+				'You realize you are way too high to talk to your sister right now and she would flip out if she noticed you are high again, so you quickly move away before she notices.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
 				if pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				narkossister = 0
 				*nl
-				'You tell yourself, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, deep breath, focus, you can do this."'
+				'You tell yourself "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, deep breath, focus. You can do this."'
 				'You feel your head is clear enough to talk to your sister once more.'
 				act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			end
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'checks':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 			if sisterQW['naked'] = 0:
 				sisterQW['naked'] = 1
-				'Anya looks at you, her eyes wide. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you doing? What if someone walks in and sees you like this? Mom would throw a fit if she catches you walking around naked like that. Sometimes I just don''t understand you.'
+				'Anya looks at you, her eyes wide. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you doing? What if someone walks in and sees you like this? Mom would throw a fit if she catches you walking around naked like that. Sometimes I just don''t understand you."'
 			else
 				'Anya shakes her head at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, sooner or later mom is going to catch you and tan your ass.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -91,23 +91,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'checks':
 			act '"Hey sis, can you teach me how to braid my hair...?"':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
-				'She pauses for a moment and looks at you funny, "You don''t know how to braid your own hair?"'
-				'You look down embarrassed, "I usually just go to the salon for them to braid it..."'
-				'She laughs and gives you a hug. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, of course I will teach you how to braid your hair, though it make take a bit."'
-				act 'Spend an hour with your sister learning how to braid your hair.':
+				'She pauses for a moment and looks at you, eyebrow raised. "You don''t know how to braid your own hair?"'
+				'You look down embarrassed. "I usually just go to the salon for them to braid it..."'
+				'She laughs and gives you a hug. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, of course I will teach you how to braid your hair, though it make take a while."'
+				act 'Spend time learning how to braid your hair.':
 					minut += 60
 					canBraidHair = 1
 					npc_rel['A33'] += 5
 					*clr & cla
-					'Though you made plenty of mistakes and got your hair in a knot a couple of times, afterwords you feel confident that you can braid your hair on your own.'
+					'You make plenty of mistakes and get your hair in a knot a couple of times, but eventually you feel confident enough to braid your hair on your own.'
 					act 'Thank your sister and leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
-				act 'Thank her but say you really actually have to get going':
+				act 'Thank her but say you actually have to get going':
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
-					'She shrugs her head and says, "Come back if you want to learn how <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+					'She shrugs her head and says "Come back if you want to learn how <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 					act 'Thank your sister and leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			end
@@ -138,23 +138,23 @@ $narkosisterspalila = {
 	gs 'stat'
 	!'sister slept on drugs.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Come on, keep it together, act sober." You think. "I have just have to talk normally and not think about it."'
-	'Your sister looks at you quizzically. "Are you stoned <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+	'"Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>, keep it together! Act sober." you think to yourself. "I just have to talk normally and not think about it."'
+	'Your sister looks at you, her eyebrow raised. "Are you stoned <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 	act 'No':
 		cla
 		narkossister = 1
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You shake your head "No." You back away, but it''s very clear your sister could tell that you are stoned.'
+		'You nervously shake your head and back away, but it''s obvious that Anya can tell that you are high.'
 		act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
-	act 'Share':
+	act 'Yes':
 		*clr & cla
 		narkossista = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You tell your sister, that you learned where to buy drugs, and you really wanted to try and it is just this once, never again.'
-		'Your sister strictly looks at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m not your mother, who would kill you if she found out, but this is the first and last time. It''s not worth it!'
-		'If you continue, then your whole life will not be worth shit.'
+		'You admit that you learned where to buy drugs and you really wanted to try them out, just this once.'
+		'Anya looks at you sternly and says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m not your mother, who would kill you if she found out, but this is the first and last time. It''s not worth it!"'
+		'"If you continue, then your whole life will not be worth shit."'
 		act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		exit
 	end
@@ -180,16 +180,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 
 	!Anya will only invite Sveta from Tuesday to Thursday, daystart part blocks her from asking again
 	!! This needs a few extra triggers as Anya shouldn''t be trying to outright corrupt Sveta
-	if hour > 6 and hour < 24:
+	if anyaloc ! 1:
 		!! If you are visibly pregnant:
 		if npc_pregtalk['A33'] = 0 and func('body_din','pregnancyVisibility') = 1 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			npc_pregtalk['A33'] = 1
 			if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-				'With surprise your sister says, "You''re pregnant, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-				'"How the hell can you tell?"'
-				'With a smile, she says, "I have a bionic eye." As she reaches out and rubs your protruding belly, "So, do you know who the father is?"'
+				'"You''re pregnant <<$pcs_nickname>>?!" your sister exclaims in surprise.'
+				'"How the hell can you tell?" you reply.'
+				'With a smile, she says "I have a bionic eye." She reaches out and rubs your protruding belly. "So, do you know who the father is?"'
 			else
-				'You sister looks at your belly with surprise. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you pregnant? And who got you pregnant?'
+				'You sister looks at your belly with surprise. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you pregnant? Who the hell knocked you up!?"'
 			end
 			$tmpstr = ''
 			$tmpstr2 = ''
@@ -223,11 +223,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			if arrsize('$specfath') > 0 and npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
 				$tmpa = ''
 				if $tmpstr2 ! '':
-					$tmpa = ' You decide to start by telling her the easy news. "Oh, sister, <<$tmpstr>>it''s possible the father is <<$tmpstr2>>. I think it could also be someone we know.'
+					$tmpa = ' You decide to start by telling her the easy news. "<<$tmpstr>>it''s possible the father is <<$tmpstr2>>. I think it could also be someone we know.'
 				else
-					$tmpa = ' You look at her for a moment and then say, "Oh, sister, I think the father might be someone we know."'
+					$tmpa = ' You look at her for a moment and then say "I think the father might be someone we know."'
 				end
-				'You realize that telling her who the father might be could be difficult.<<$tmpa>>'
+				'You realize that telling her who the father is could be difficult.<<$tmpa>>'
 				idx = 0
 				sz = arrsize('$specfath')
 				if sz > 1:
@@ -241,22 +241,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					$fath = $specfath[idx]
 					if $fath = 'Roma':
 						'You <<$tmpb>>the father might <<$tmpc>>be Roma.'
-						'"You mean my Roma?"'
+						'"You mean [i]my[/i] Roma?"'
 						'You nod with a forced smile.'
-						'"Oh, I am so sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>! This is probably my fault.", she says and hugs you to her strongly.'
+						'"Oh, I am so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! This is probably my fault." she says and hugs you tightly.'
 						pcs_mood += 50
 					elseif $fath = 'Kolka':
 						'You <<$tmpb>>the father could <<$tmpc>>be Kolka.'
-						'"Seriously? Our little brother?" she asks with a little shock. "Why would you have sex with our little brother? What is wrong with you?"'
-						'You feel yourself blushing, as you murmur, "I don''t know it just felt right." She just shakes her head at you.'
+						'"Seriously?" she asks with a little shock. "You had sex with our little brother? What is wrong with you!?"'
+						'You feel yourself blushing as you murmur "I don''t know, it just felt right." She just shakes her head at you.'
 					elseif $fath = 'Stepfather':
 						'You <<$tmpb>>the father could <<$tmpc>>be your stepfather.'
 						'"Oh, what a slut you are!" she smiles happily. "Do you think he will notice it too?"'
 					elseif $fath = 'our real father':
 						'You <<$tmpb>> the father might conceivably <<$tmpc>>be your real father.'
-						'Your Sister looks at you with shock! "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what is wrong with you? How did you even find him?"'
-						'You explain how you tracked him down through the truck drivers to the where he works now, and how your relationship quickly grew into something unexpected for both of you. "I haven''t told him," you tell her. "Maybe I should. I don''t know."'
-						'She listens intently to your story and gives you a hug when you finish. "I don''t know either, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I hope you take me to meet him someday."'
+						'Your sister looks at you with shock. "What is wrong with you <<$pcs_nickname>>?! How did you even find him?"'
+						'You explain how you tracked him down through the truck drivers and how your relationship quickly grew into something unexpected for both of you. "I haven''t told him." you tell her. "Maybe I should. I don''t know."'
+						'She listens intently to your story and gives you a hug when you finish. "I don''t know either <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I hope you take me to meet him someday."'
 					end
 					if idx = 0 and sz > 1:
 						$tmpc = 'also '
@@ -269,15 +269,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 				end
 			else
 				if arrsize('$wombpotfath') = 0:
-					'"Oh, sister, I have no idea who the father could be! I''m not even sure how I got pregnant!"'
+					'"I have no idea who the father could be! I''m not even sure how I got pregnant!"'
 				elseif arrsize('$wombpotfath') = 1:
 					if $wombpotfath[0] = '' or $wombpotfath[0] = 'unknown':
-						'"Oh, sister, I have no idea whom the father could be!"'
+						'"I have no idea who the father could be!"'
 					else
-						'"Oh, sister, <<$tmpstr>>I think the father is <<$tmpstr2>>."'
+						'"<<$tmpstr>>I think the father is <<$tmpstr2>>."'
 					end
 				else
-					'"Oh, sister, <<$tmpstr>>I think the father is <<$tmpstr2>>"'
+					'"<<$tmpstr>>I think the father is <<$tmpstr2>>"'
 				end
 			end
 			act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
@@ -287,16 +287,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			sisterQW['partyday'] = daystart
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_1.jpg"></center>'
 			if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 0:
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, one of my friends birthday is this friday and he''s having a party. I asked him if I could invite you."'
-				'"Oh, Anya I don''t know, they are your friends and I don''t really know any of them."'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s one of my friend''s birthday this Friday and he''s having a party. I asked him if I could invite you."'
+				'"I don''t know. They are your friends and I don''t really know any of them."'
 			elseif sisterQW['partycount'] = 0:
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, one of my friends is having a party this friday. I asked him if I could invite you."'
-				'"Oh, Anya I don''t know, they are your friends and I don''t really know any of them."'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, one of my friends is having a party this Friday. I asked him if I could invite you."'
+				'"I don''t know. They are your friends and I don''t really know any of them."'
 			else
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex is having another party this friday. I asked him if I could invite you again and he said yes."'
-				'"Really? You want me to go to another party?"'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex is having another party this Friday. I asked him if I could invite you again and he said yes."'
+				'"Really? You want to take me to another party?"'
 			end
-			'"Come on, it will be a lot of fun I promise. So will you come?"'
+			'"Come on, it will be a lot of fun. I promise. So will you come?"'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'No (study)':
 				sisterQW['party'] = -1
@@ -304,8 +304,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You refuse to go to the party.'
-				'"Sorry Anya, I would love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework and books to read, you know what it''s like."'
-				'She smiles to you. "My nerdy little sister, well have fun studying."'
+				'"Sorry Anya. I would love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework and books to read, you know what it''s like."'
+				'She smiles to you. "My nerdy little sister. Well have fun studying!"'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			end
 			if razradbeg > 0:
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You refuse to go to the party.'
-					'"I would love to, but I have a competition to prepare for. I have to train. One day I could be a great athlete, not like you lazy bones." You tell her with a teasing laugh.'
+					'"I would love to, but I have a competition to prepare for. I have to train. I could be a great athlete one day, unlike you Miss Lazy Bones." you tell her with a teasing laugh.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
 			end
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'You refuse to go to the party.'
-					'"I can''t, the coach does not allow my to stay out late, and drinking is also prohibited."'
+					'"I can''t. The coach does not allow me to stay out late and drinking is also prohibited."'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
 			end
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 				!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_2.jpg"></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
 				'You agree to go to the party.'
-				'"Awesome <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''ll be fun! We will meet at the community center this friday, don''t forget to be there before 18:00, otherwise we will leave without you."'
+				'"Awesome <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''ll be fun! We will meet at the community center this Friday. Don''t forget to be there before 18:00, otherwise we will leave without you."'
 				'With these words, your sister hugs you and kisses you on the cheek.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			end
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 		elseif (sisterQW['party'] = 1 and daystart > sisterQW['partyday'] and week > 5) or (sisterQW['party'] = 1 and daystart - sisterQW['partyday'] > 3):
 			sisterQW['party'] = 0
 			if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 1: sisterQW['rexbday'] = -1
-			'"We missed you at the party, <<$pcs_nickname>>." Anya pouts at you, "I''ll let you know when the next party is and maybe you''ll be able to make it, okay?"'
+			'"We missed you at the party <<$pcs_nickname>>." Anya pouts at you. "I''ll let you know when the next party is and maybe you''ll be able to make it, okay?"'
 			'You apologize for missing the party and Anya smiles at you.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 		!! After Roma visit
@@ -364,14 +364,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 
 			'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_00.jpg"></center>'
-			'Merrily Anya runs up to you and wraps her arms around your neck.'
+			'Anya merrily runs up to you and wraps her arms tightly around your neck.'
 			if sisboytrioQW ! 1:
-				'"Sister, I adore you! I spent a lovely evening with Roma."'
-				'"Yes, I''m glad for you. Enough already, you''ll strangle me."'
-				'Anya is happy to let you go, and kisses you on the cheek.'
+				'"I adore you, little sis! I had a lovely evening with Roma."'
+				'"Yes, I''m glad for you, but enough already. You''re going to strangle me!"'
+				'Anya lets you go and kisses you on the cheek.'
 			else
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I adore you! I really enjoyed our evening with Roma."'
-				'"Yes, me too. But please, not so tight, you''re strangling me."'
+				'"Yes, me too. But please, not so tight. You''re strangling me."'
 				'Anya is bouncing with joy and loosens her grip just enough to kiss you on the cheek.'
 				sisboytrioQW = 0
 			end
@@ -396,8 +396,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re both embarrassed after what happened that night, and can not look into each other''s eyes, finally Anya speaks with you.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," with a smile she tells you, "I thought you liked guys and I always found it much more pleasant to handle men."'
+			'You''re both embarrassed after what happened that night, and cannot look each other in the eye. Anya eventually speaks.'
+			'"I thought you liked guys <<$pcs_nickname>>? I always found it much more pleasant to handle men." she says with a smile.'
 			if sisterQW['dno'] = 0:
 				act 'I don''t know what happened':
 					sisterQW['dno'] = 1
@@ -405,8 +405,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-					'You look at Anya blushing, "Forgive me, I was so worked up, I just could not control myself, I do not know what came over me."'
-					'"Well, I do not mind, if you sometimes lose control of yourself. Just try and control yourself though." She smiles slyly, You smile at her...'
+					'You blush at Anya. "Forgive me, I was so worked up and I just couldn''t control myself. I don''t know what came over me."'
+					'"Well, I don''t mind if you sometimes ''lose control of yourself''. Just try and control yourself though." she smiles slyly. You smile back at her.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
@@ -418,8 +418,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-					'You look at Anya blushing, "I like girls, I''m a lesbian and I don''t know what came over me... you are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
-					'"Oh!" She seems a little surprised but then smiles at you and hugs you. "As long as you are happy that is all I care about, but for the record I''m not a lesbian." She says with a laugh and then she asks you about any girl friends you have had, for someone that claims to be straight she sure seems curious about lesbian sex.'
+					'You blush at Anya. "I... I like girls. I''m...I''m a...lesbian. I don''t know what came over me. You are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
+					'"Oh!" She seems a little surprised, but then smiles at you and hugs you. "As long as you are happy, then I don''t care about your sexuality. But for the record, I''m not a lesbian." she says with a laugh and then asks you about any girlfriends you have had. For someone that claims to be straight, she sure seems curious about lesbian sex.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
@@ -431,8 +431,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-					'You look at Anya blushing, "I like girls too, I''m not a lesbian, I just like both guys and girls. I don''t know what came over me that night... you are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
-					'"Oh!" She seems a little surprised but then smiles at you and hugs you. "As long as you are happy that is all I care about, but for the record I''m not a lesbian or into girls." She says with a laugh and then she asks you about any girl friends you have had, for someone that claims to be straight she sure seems curious about lesbian sex.'
+					'You blush at Anya. "I like girls too. I''m not a lesbian, I just like both guys and girls. I don''t know what came over me that night. You are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
+					'"Oh!" She seems a little surprised, but then smiles at you and hugs you. "As long as you are happy, then I don''t care about your sexuality. But for the record, I''m not a lesbian or into girls." she says with a laugh and then asks you about any girlfriends you have had. For someone that claims to be straight, she sure seems curious about lesbian sex.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
@@ -444,10 +444,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-					'Wait, she said more pleasant, so does that mean? "Wait you said more pleasant, so does that mean you have been with other girls before?"'
-					'Anya blushes. "Well yes, twice before. I was curious and horny." She says with a laugh when she realizes it sounds like you when you came onto her.'
+					'"Wait, you said ''more pleasant.'' Does that mean you have been with other girls before?" you ask.'
+					'Anya blushes. "Well, yes... Twice before actually. I was curious and horny." she says with a laugh when she realizes she sounds like you when you came onto her.'
 					'You grin and pry. "So did you like it?"'
-					'She blushes maybe even more. "Yeah a little, it was fun. But I much prefer guys, they are way more fun." Soon the two of your are talking about the differences in sex with guys and girls, with you adding in your own experiences along with hers.'
+					'She blushes even more. "Yeah, a little. It was fun, but I prefer guys. They are way more fun." Soon the two of you are talking about the differences in sex with guys and girls, with you adding in your own experiences along with hers.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
@@ -459,23 +459,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya looks at you and laughs "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know what you were up to! I went into the room, and you were playing with yourself!"'
+			'Anya looks at you and laughs "Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know what you were up to! I went into the room, and you were playing with yourself!"'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			exit
 		!! Anya is about to head to work
-		elseif hour = 8 and week < 6 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
+		elseif anyaloc = 4 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sobir.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your sister is busy getting ready for work.'
-			'Anya, without even turning around, says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, no time to talk, I''m already late!"'
+			'Anya, without even turning around, says "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, no time to talk. I''m already late!"'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-		elseif hour = 7 and minut > 30 and $loc ! 'bedrPar':
+		elseif anyaloc = 2 and $loc ! 'bedrPar':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat_kitchen1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your sister is finishing her breakfast.'
-			'Anya, without even turning around, says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, no time to talk, I need to get ready for work!"'
+			'Anya, without even turning around, says "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, no time to talk. I need to get ready for work!"'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		!! Anya is going for a walk
 		elseif sisterdialog = 3 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/progulka.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your sister is getting herself ready to go out. She admires herself in a mirror and wiggles her ass, trying different poses.'
-			'Anya, without even turning to look at you, says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, If you decide to take a walk, I will be near the club with my friends."'
+			'Anya, without even turning to look at you, says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, if you decide to take a walk, I will be near the club with my friends."'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		elseif npc_rel['A33'] < 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					sisterQW['lowrelboost'] = daystart
 					npc_rel['A33'] += (pcs_intel/10) + (pcs_apprnc/20)
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You apologize to your sister and it seems she forgives you some.'
+					'You apologize to your sister and it seems she forgives you somewhat.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			end
@@ -518,14 +518,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			sisterpirsadaytalk = daystart
 			if rand(1,100) >= 75:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your sister looks you in the mouth. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, and what have you got there in your tongue?"'
+				'Your sister looks you in the mouth. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what is that on your tongue?"'
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'easy'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Nothing (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 						cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You shake your head. "Nothing." Then turn away, so that your sister does not see your pierced tongue.'
+						'"Nothing." you quip as you turn away so that she can''t see your pierced tongue.'
 						act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					end
 				else
@@ -539,8 +539,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/a<<pirsA>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue, showing your sister your tongue piercing.'
-					'Your sister smiles, "Wow, you go <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+					'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue, showing her your tongue piercing.'
+					'She smiles. "Wow, you go <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 					'She seems to approve and spends a few minutes asking you all about it.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
@@ -551,13 +551,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 			end
 		elseif pirsB > 0 and pirsB < 10000 and sisterQW['pirsB'] = 0 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your sister looks at your lip, studying your piercing. "That''s so cool, and pretty, I love it!"'
-			act 'Thank you':
+			'Your sister looks at your lip, studying your piercing. "That''s so cool and pretty! I love it!"'
+			act 'Thank her':
 				*clr & cla
 				sisterQW['pirsB'] = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/b<<pirsB>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You thank your sister for her compliment instinctively playing with your new piercing.'
+				'You thank your sister for her compliment, instinctively playing with your new piercing.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			end
@@ -565,22 +565,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 		elseif pirsC > 0 and pirsC < 10000 and sisterQW['pirsC'] = 0 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			sisterQW['pirsC'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your sister looks at your earrings. Reaching up to hold and inspect one closely she says, "Well, finally! I thought you would never get your ears pierced."'
+			'Your sister looks at your earrings. Reaching up to hold and inspect one closely, she says "Well, finally! I thought you would never get your ears pierced."'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			exit
 		elseif pirsD > 0 and pirsD < 10000 and sisterQW['pirsD'] = 0 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			sisterQW['pirsD'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya is clearly shocked by your nose ring: "Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, tell me who did this to you and I''ll get them for you."'
-			'She dances around you shadow boxing and you both end up laughing loudly.'
+			'Anya is clearly shocked by your nose ring: "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, tell me who did this to you and I''ll get them for you."'
+			'She dances around you, shadow boxing and you both end up laughing loudly.'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			exit
 		elseif pirsE > 0 and pirsE < 10000 and sisterQW['pirsE'] = 0 and $loc = 'bedrPar':
 			sisterQW['pirsE'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your sister takes a good look at your eyebrow piercing and says, "Nice, but be careful, don''t accidentally get it caught on something!"'
+			'Your sister takes a good look at your eyebrow piercing and says "Nice, but be careful and don''t accidentally get it caught on something!"'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 			exit
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					trfatherQW = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask about your real father, Anya grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I was 4 years old when they broke up. I don''t even remember what he looks like. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> does not like to talk about him, but as you know, our real father went to live in another town. I also remember, he worked as a long-distance truck driver, maybe sometimes he passes through Pavlovsk."'
+					'You ask about your real father and Anya sighs. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I was barely 3 years old when they broke up. I don''t even remember what he looks like. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> doesn''t like to talk about him, but as you know, our real father went to live in another town. I remember that he worked as a long-distance truck driver. Maybe he sometimes passes through Pavlovsk?"'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 				end
@@ -617,36 +617,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 				end
 				if temp = 1:
-					'As you chat with your sister, she says it is possible to rent an apartment in the city and live and work there, but she is happy living in Pavlovsk, even with helping with the bills she has way more money to spend on herself this way.'	
+					'As you chat with your sister, she says it is possible to rent an apartment in the city and live and work there, but she is happy living in Pavlovsk. Even she helps pay the bills, she has way more money to spend on herself this way.'	
 				elseif temp = 2:
-					'You chat with your sister, Anya, she tells you the tailor at the Garment factory is a creep who makes his customers wait around in their underwear or at least the pretty girls.'
+					'You chat with your sister. She tells you the tailor at the garment factory is a creep who makes his customers wait around in their underwear. At least the pretty girls that is.'
 				elseif temp = 3:
-					'You ask Anya about the University. She grins, "I almost went, passed the entrance exam. However, I started working in the summer and got used to having cash. What can I buy with a diploma?"'
+					'You ask Anya about the University and she grins. "I almost went, passed the entrance exam. However, I started working in the summer and got used to having cash. What can I buy with a diploma?"'
 				elseif temp = 4:
-					'You ask Anya about her boyfriend. She smiles, "Well, I have a boyfriend. Although nothing serious. It''s more like friends with benefits."'
+					'You ask Anya about her boyfriend and she smiles. "Well, I have a boyfriend, but it''s nothing serious. It''s more like friends with benefits."'
 				elseif temp = 5:
-					'You start talking with Anya, she tells you about the boys she met, parties she''s been to and cosmetics.'
+					'You start talking with Anya and she tells you about the boys she has met, the parties she''s been to and cosmetics.'
 				elseif temp = 6:
-					'You chat with your sister, she tells you about the new dress she brought at the store today.'
+					'You chat with your sister and she tells you about the new dress she brought at the store today.'
 				elseif temp = 7:
 					'You chat with your sister about movie stars, discussing and sharing fantasies about them, and arguing about which ones are sexier.'
 				elseif temp = 8:
 					'Anna talks about sports clubs in the community center, and how sport is very good for the figure, but she is too lazy to go there.'
 				elseif temp = 9:
-					'Anya says, that one of her friends had a kid, but the father denies it and she''s left looking after her kid alone. She says, that if you are smart, you will buy the pill from the pharmacy.'
+					'Anya says that one of her friends had a kid, but the father denied it and she was left looking after her kid alone. She says that if you are smart, you will buy the pill from the pharmacy.'
 				elseif temp = 10:
-					'Anya says, one winter she went out without a coat and caught a bad cold. You remind her that she spent the whole time complaining about it to you.'
+					'Anya talks about the one winter where she went out without a coat and caught a bad cold. You remind her that she spent the whole time complaining about it to you.'
 				elseif temp = 11:
-					'You chat with your sister, discussing the latest trends in fashion.'
+					'You chat with your sister, discussing the latest fashion trends.'
 				elseif temp = 12:
-					'Anya tells you how used to try various fad diets to make herself beautiful. However she was under weight, her skin looked gaunt and she kept getting acne. Since quitting the diets she is much healthier and looks more beautiful every day.'
+					'Anya tells you how she used to try various fad diets to make herself beautiful. However she ended up underweight, her skin looked gaunt and she kept getting acne. Since quitting the diets, she is much healthier and looks more beautiful every day.'
 					'The last part has you both laughing.'
 				elseif temp = 13:
 					'You chat with your sister and she tells you that you can find a lot of interesting bargains if you wander through the market.'
 				elseif temp = 14:
-					'You chat with your sister and she tells you about one of her weird ex-boyfriends who was always so poetically dramatic. In particular, she tells you about how he broke up with her. "He said: Anya, my love, I so deeply cherish you, but we are not meant to be. Like water and oil, no matter how hard we try, we cannot be together!"'
+					'You chat with your sister and she tells you about one of her weird ex-boyfriends who was always so poetically dramatic. In particular, she tells you about how he broke up with her. "He said: Anya my love, I so deeply cherish you, but we are not meant to be. Like water and oil, no matter how hard we try, we cannot be together!"'
 				else
-					'You chat with your sister, Anya, she asks you how you feel about women''s sexual rights. You spend some time having a very frank and quite revealing conversation.'
+					'You chat with your sister and she asks you how you feel about women''s sexual rights. You spend some time having a very frank and quite revealing conversation.'
 				end
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
@@ -662,22 +662,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 						'Your sister boasts to you about how good her boyfriend is in bed. She goes into a surprising amount of detail.'
 					elseif temp = 2:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister tells you a story about her and her girlfriend sucking off their friend on his birthday. Afterwards he came on both their faces and they licked his cum off of each other.'
+						'Your sister tells you a story about her and her friend sucking off her other friend on his birthday. Afterwards, he came on both their faces and they licked his cum off of each other.'
 					elseif temp = 3:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister3.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister reveals to you that she just loves it in the ass. With mother having her innocence checked all the time, she wanted to have sex so decided to try anal. It hurt the first couple of times but after that she loved it. Though once she lost her virginity she found she liked vaginal sex more, but still does anal. She suggest you try it or just stick to blowjobs to keep mom from finding out you''re sexualy active.'
+						'Your sister reveals to you that she just loves it in the ass. With mother having her innocence checked all the time, she wanted to have sex and so decided to try anal. It hurt the first couple of times, but after that she loved it. Once she lost her virginity she found she liked vaginal sex more, but still does anal. She suggests that you try it or just stick to blowjobs to keep mom from finding out you''re sexualy active.'
 					elseif temp = 4:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister tells you about how she gave her boyfriend a blowjob and swallowed his load with out slowing down, "Oh, You should have seen his face!"'
+						'Your sister tells you about how she gave her boyfriend a blowjob and swallowed his load without slowing down. "Oh, you should have seen his face!"'
 					elseif temp = 5:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister5.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister tells you about when in school she use to go to a classmates apartment to help her study and afterwards he would fuck her in the ass.'
+						'Your sister tells you about how, when she was in school, she would to go to a classmate''s apartment to study and afterwards, he would fuck her ass.'
 					elseif temp = 6:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister reveals to you, that she just loves when a guy just takes over and grabs her by the head and just fucks her mouth.'
+						'Your sister reveals to you that she just loves it when a guy takes over, grabs her by the head and just fucks her mouth hard.'
 					elseif temp = 7:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister7.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your sister reveals to you, that at a party she let two guys fuck her at the same time. Sucking one and getting fucked by the other was fun, but having one fuck her pussy while is friend fucked her ass was amazing.'
+						'Your sister reveals to you that, at a party, she let two guys fuck her at the same time. Sucking one and getting fucked by the other was fun, but having one fuck her pussy while his friend fucked her ass was amazing.'
 					else
 						cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister8.jpg"></center>'
@@ -685,17 +685,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 						act 'Tell her you don''t':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head no. "Eww, don''t you have a boyfriend anyways?"'
-							'She sighs. "Yes but if we ever break up."'
-							'Then she drops the topic.'
+							'You shake your head. "Eww! Don''t you have a boyfriend anyway?"'
+							'She sighs. "Yes, but if we ever break up..."'
+							'She then awkwardly drops the topic.'
 							act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						end
 						act 'Tell her you want to':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-							'You grin at that imagery as well. "God yes I would like to as well, there is a boy in my school from America. He is tall and well built and as dark skinned as I have ever seen."'
-							'She laughs. "Well why don''t you hit on him then. I am sure he would be eager to show you what it is like."'
+							'You grin at that imagery as well. "God yes I would like to as well. There is a boy in my school from America. He is tall, well built and as dark skinned as I have ever seen."'
+							'She laughs. "Well why don''t you hit on him then? I am sure he would be eager to show you what it is like."'
 							'You laugh and the two of you talk about what it would be like and why it is taboo.'
 							act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
@@ -711,9 +711,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 										*clr & cla
 										OluQW['anya_inv'] = 1
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-										'You ask her if she wants to go up and visit him. "Would you like to come up with me next time I visit him?"'
-										'She thinks about it for a moment and then grins and nods yes. "Yes I think I would, you know just to try it." She says with a blush.'
-										'You promise to text her next time you are going up there and let him know she is willing to help with his needs too. "Ok next time I am going up there I will let you know and tell him."'
+										'"Would you like to come up with me next time I visit him?" you ask.'
+										'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it." she says while blushing.'
+										'You promise to text her next time you are going up there and let him know she is willing to help with his needs too. "OK, next time I am going up there I will let you know and tell him."'
 										act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 										act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 									end
@@ -724,14 +724,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 							act 'Tell her about Marcus':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-								'You tell her about Marcus from school and how you have been having sex with him. Her eyes get big and she starts asking all kinds of questions about how it was. You tell her how big he is and start getting into details about your sex with him.'
+								'You tell her about Marcus from school and how you have been having sex with him. Her eyes grow wide and she starts asking all kinds of questions about how it was. You tell her how big he is and start getting into details about your sex with him.'
 								act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 								act 'Ask if she wants a turn':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-									'You ask her if she wants to give him a go. "Maybe I could invite him over one evening and you can give him a go, interested?"'
-									'She thinks about it for a moment and then grins and nods yes. "Yes I think I would, you know just to try it." She says with a blush.'
-									'You promise to text her next time you are going up there and let him know she is willing to help with his needs too. "Ok I will talk to him about it and let you know."'
+									'"Maybe I could invite him over one evening and you can give him a go? Interested?" you ask.'
+									'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it." she says while blushing.'
+									'"OK, I will talk to him about it and let you know."'
 									act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 									act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 								end
@@ -746,9 +746,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								act 'Ask if she wants to join you':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-									'You ask her if she wants to go to the city with you and go have sex with them. "Would you like to come up with me next time I go?"'
-									'She thinks about it for a moment and then grins and nods yes. "Yes I think I would, you know just to try it." She says with a blush.'
-									'You promise to text her next time you are going up there and let him know she is willing to help with his needs too. "Ok next time I am going to the city to see them, I will let you know."'
+									'"Would you like to come up with me next time I go?" you ask.'
+									'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it." she says while blushing.'
+									'"OK, next time I am going to the city to see them, I will let you know."'
 									act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 									act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 								end
@@ -766,20 +766,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 						if hour > 6 and hour < 23:
-							'You you crawl over her bed towards her to kiss her and when she realizes what you are about to do she pulls back from you. "What are you doing? Everyone is still up, what if someone walked in?" She shakes her head. "You really need to control yourself little sister." She makes it clear nothing is going to happen.'
+							'You crawl over her bed towards her to kiss her and when she realizes what you are about to do, she pulls back from you. "What are you doing? Everyone is still up. What if someone walked in?" She shakes her head. "You really need to control yourself little sister." She makes it clear nothing is going to happen.'
 							act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						else
-							'You lean in and give her a quick but passionate kiss on the lips. She stiffens a bit at first, obviously unsure but then returns the kiss. Once you break the kiss she says. "You''re a horny little thing aren''t you?"'
-							'You grin to her. "Come on, it will be fun."'
+							'You lean in and give her a quick but passionate kiss on the lips. She stiffens a bit at first, obviously unsure but then returns the kiss. Once you break the kiss, she says "You''re a horny little thing aren''t you?"'
+							'You grin at her. "Come on, it will be fun."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							if rand(1,3) = 1:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
 								'Anya says "Again? You know I enjoy this, but I''m not a lesbian and we should only do it... occasionally... okay?"'
-								'You give her another short kiss, then gently caress her. "You know you want to, come on." You whisper to her seductively.'
-								'Then she kisses you back as her answer.'
+								'You give her another short kiss, then gently caress her. "You know you want to, come on." you whisper to her seductively.'
+								'She kisses you back as her answer.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Have sex with her': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sex'
@@ -787,7 +787,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
 								'Anya says "Again? You know I enjoy this, but we should only do it... occasionally... okay?"'
-								'She gives you another short kiss, then gently pushes you away. "Not tonight, let''s both get some sleep tonight and not wear outselves out, huh?"'
+								'She gives you another short kiss, then gently pushes you away. "Not tonight. Let''s both get some sleep and not wear outselves out, huh?"'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -807,10 +807,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Anya about her boyfriend. She smiles.'
-						'"Well, I have a boyfriend. Although nothing serious. He is more of a friend who I have sex with."'
-						'"Awesome, now when I think out about it, you simply must introduce me to him!"'
-						'"Good sister, we hang out in the evenings at the community center. Meet me there and I''ll introduce you to him."'
+						'You ask Anya about her boyfriend and she smiles.'
+						'"Well, I have a boyfriend, but it''s nothing serious. He is more of a friend who I have sex with."'
+						'"Awesome. Now that I think about it, you have to introduce me to him!"'
+						'"We hang out in the evenings at the community center. Meet me there and I''ll introduce you to him."'
 						act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 					end
 				elseif npc_QW['A33'] >= 2 and npc_rel['A33'] >= 40 and sisboytrioQW > -1 and sisboytrioDayOtkaz <= daystart and sisboypartyQW < 2:
@@ -824,19 +824,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 							sisboyday = daystart
 							if rand(0,3) = 1:
 								'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>! Well, did you like it last time? We had a very good time with Roma."'
-								'You do not say anything and just smile slyly watching your sister''s eyes.'
-								'"We want to repeat our games tomorrow evening, if you would like to."'
+								'You don''t say anything and just smile slyly, watching your sister''s eyes.'
+								'"We want to repeat our game tomorrow evening, if you would like to."'
 								act 'I would love to, but can we postpone it?':
 									*clr & cla
 									sistrioday = daystart + rand(7,14)
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_36.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Oh, sis! I would be glad to join you, but tomorrow evening is really not good! Could we do it some other day?"'
+									'"Oh, sis! I would be glad to join you, but tomorrow evening isn''t a good time! Could we do it some other day?"'
 									'She looks kind of dejected, so you continue to talk to her.'
-									'"Really Anya, I am glad to be asked! And I do want to have sex with you two at the same time! But it is really not a good time, and I am the most bummed about it."'
-									'Finally she realize that you didn''t reject her idea, and simply the timing is off a little. She smiles at you and then kisses your lips.'
-									'"Then later it is, little sis.", she says.'
+									'"Really Anya, I am glad you asked. I do want to have fun with both of you, but tomorrow really isn''t a good time."'
+									'Finally, she realizes that you didn''t reject her idea and that the timing is simply a little off. She smiles at you and then kisses your lips.'
+									'"Then later it is, little sis." she says.'
 									act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 								end
 								act 'Agree':
@@ -848,13 +848,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_36.jpg"></center>'
 									'You agree to Anya''s indecent proposal.'
 									'"Well, aren''t you all liberated? Of course I agree, it will be very interesting."'
-									'You hug and kiss with your beloved sister.'
+									'You hug and kiss your beloved sister.'
 									act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 								end
 							else
-								'"The last time Roma was here was so good, thank you very much."'
-								'"You''re welcome, I''m always very happy to help my beloved sister and to see her happy."'
-								'"He would like to come here again tomorrow, do you mind taking another walk for about an hour?"'
+								'"The last time Roma was here was so good! Thank you very much."'
+								'"You''re welcome, I''m always very happy to help my sister and to see her happy."'
+								'"He would like to come here again tomorrow. Do you mind taking another walk for about an hour?"'
 								gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'easy'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'No (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -881,8 +881,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 									'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
 									*nl
-									'"Certainly sister, I understand, I will go for a walk late at night. Only do not be too loud, if Kolka hears you it will blow his tiny little mind."'
-									'You and Anya laugh and she joyfully hugs you saying, "You''re the best!"'
+									'"Fine, I''ll ''go for a walk.'' Just don''t be too loud. If Kolka hears you, it will blow his tiny little mind."'
+									'You and Anya laugh and she joyfully hugs you saying "You''re the best!"'
 									act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 								end
 							end
@@ -892,13 +892,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 							sisboyday = daystart
 							if sisterQW['roma3inv'] = 0:
 								sisterQW['roma3inv'] = 1
-								'"Sister, Roma and I have thought about it a lot and... I do not know how to say this..."'
+								'"Sister, Roma and I have thought about it a lot and... I don''t know how to say this..."'
 								'"Well, don''t just leave me hanging. What is it that you want to say to me?"'
-								'"Well, hmmm... We want, you to err... join us tomorrow evening."'
+								'"Well, hmmm... We want you to err... join us tomorrow evening."'
 							else
-								'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>! Well, did you like it last time? We had a very good time with Roma."'
-								'You do not say anything and just smile slyly watching your sister''s eyes.'
-								'"We want to repeat our games tomorrow evening, if you would like to."'
+								'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Well, did you like it last time? We had a very good time with Roma."'
+								'You do not say anything and just smile slyly, watching your sister''s eyes.'
+								'"We want to repeat our game tomorrow evening, if you would like to."'
 							end
 							act 'Decline':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -908,9 +908,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								sisterQW['roma3block'] = 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/sisboyqw_37.jpg"></center>'
-								'You decline your sisters indecent proposal.'
-								'"You fucking perverts! No way, you disgusting bitch!'
-								'You quarrel with your sister and when you have both shouted yourselves out and tears roll down your cheeks, she turns away from you and does not want to talk any more."'
+								'You decline your sister''s indecent proposal.'
+								'"No, you pervert!"'
+								'You argue with your sister and when you have both shouted yourselves out and tears roll down your cheeks, she turns away from you and doesn''t want to talk any more."'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 							end
 							act 'I would love to, but can we postpone it?':
@@ -919,11 +919,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_36.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Oh, sis! I would be glad to join you, but tomorrow evening is really not good! Could we do it some other day?"'
-								'She looks kind of dejected, so you continue to talk to her.'
-								'"Really Anya, I am glad to be asked! And I do want to have sex with you two at the same time! But it is really not a good time, and I am the most bummed about it."'
-								'Finally she realize that you didn''t reject her idea, and simply the timing is off a little. She smiles at you and then kisses your lips.'
-								'"Then later it is, little sis.", she says.'
+								'"Oh, sis! I would be glad to join you, but tomorrow evening isn''t a good time! Could we do it some other day?"'
+							    'She looks kind of dejected, so you continue to talk to her.'
+								'"Really Anya, I am glad you asked. I do want to have fun with both of you, but tomorrow really isn''t a good time."'
+								'Finally, she realizes that you didn''t reject her idea and that the timing is simply a little off. She smiles at you and then kisses your lips.'
+								'"Then later it is, little sis." she says.'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 							end
 							act 'Agree':
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								*nl
 								'You agree to Anya''s indecent proposal.'
 								'"Well, aren''t you all liberated? Of course I agree, it will be very interesting."'
-								'You hug and kiss with your beloved sister.'
+								'You hug and kiss your sister.'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 							end
 						!! Anya asks Sveta to go for a walk the next day at 18:00
@@ -946,12 +946,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								sisterQW['romatime'] = 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_01.jpg"></center>'
 								'Anya takes a long and hesitant look at you, and eventually decides to ask you.'
-								'"<<$pcs_nickname>> could you spend an hour tomorrow after 18:00 going for a walk or something? Roma wants to visit me here and... well, you know what I mean."'
+								'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, could you spend an hour tomorrow after 18:00 going for a walk or something? Roma wants to visit me here and... well, you know what I mean."'
 								'Your sister is blushing a little and looks at you with pleading eyes.'
 							else
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_09.jpg"></center>'
-								'"The last time Roma was here was so good, thank you very much."'
-								'"You''re welcome, I''m always very happy to help my beloved sister and to see her happy."'
+								'"The last time Roma was here was so good! Thank you for giving us some space, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+								'"You''re welcome, I''m always very happy to help my sister and to see her happy."'
 								'"He would like to come here again tomorrow, do you mind taking another walk for about an hour?"'
 							end
 							gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'easy'
@@ -980,63 +980,63 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Certainly sister, I understand, I will go for a walk late at night. Only do not be too loud, if Kolka hears you it will blow his tiny little mind."'
-								'You and Anya laugh and she joyfully hugs you saying, "You''re the best!"'
+								'"Fine, I''ll ''go for a walk.'' Just don''t be too loud. If Kolka hears you, it will blow his tiny little mind."'
+								'You and Anya laugh and she joyfully hugs you saying "You''re the best!"'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 							end
 						elseif temp = 4:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'You ask your sister about Roma, she is happy talking about him and says how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
+							'You ask your sister about Roma and she happily talks about him, saying how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 5:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya says, before she met Roma he was with a mean girl, and after ignoring her for a long time he called her, making Anya jealous and she scolded him.'
+							'Anya says that before she met Roma, he was with a mean girl and after ignoring her for a long time, he called her, making Anya jealous, so she scolded him.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 6:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'One day she and Roma were in a movie, and noticed on the back row a girl sucking a guy, and that Roma asked her if she would do the same. So she did, she sucked him off right there in the theater and then swallowed all his cum.'
+							'Anya tells you of the time that she and Roma were at the movie theater and noticed a girl sucking a guy off in the back row, and that Roma asked her if she would do the same. She says she did and so gave him a blowjob before swallowing his load.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 7:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya complains that Roma drinks too much beer, does not buy her gifts, and doesn''t pay enough attention to her.'
+							'Anya complains that Roma drinks too much beer, does not buy her gifts and doesn''t pay enough attention to her.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 8:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya says, Roma offered her a threesome with another girl, which she was most offended by and didn''t speak to him for a week afterwards. Though she admits she was tempted to try it, but it was the way he asked that bothered her.'
+							'Anya says Roma offered her a threesome with another girl, which she was most offended by and didn''t speak to him for a week afterwards. She admits she was tempted to try it, but it was the way he asked that bothered her.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 9:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya blushes as she tells you that Roma sometimes comes to her work and drags her into the back room for a quicky.'
+							'Anya blushes as she tells you that Roma sometimes comes to her workplace and drags her into the back room for a quicky.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 10:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya in detail and with enthusiasm tells you about Roma''s magnificent virility, and how if not for this, they would have long since parted.'
+							'Anya, in detail and with great enthusiasm, tells you about Roma''s magnificent virility and how if not for this, they would have long since parted.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 11:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya shares with you a secret, that her favorite position is "cowgirl", even though Roma prefers to do her in doggy-style.'
+							'Anya shares a secret with you. Her favorite position is "cowgirl", even though Roma prefers to do her doggy-style.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 12:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'You speak with your sister very frankly about sexual things, and she says shyly, she use to not like to swallow sperm. With Roma it''s different and she was willing to swallow for him, because she loved him. Now she founds he loves the taste of cum and likes swallowing it and even licking it up.'
+							'You speak with your sister about sex. She shyly admits that she didn''t like swallowing cum at first, but she was willing to swallow for Roma because she loved him. She found that she loves the taste of cum and now likes swallowing it and even licking it up.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						elseif temp = 13:
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
@@ -1048,20 +1048,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 								rexSisTalk = 0
 								rexPark = 0
 								rexCar = 0
-								'Anya talks for a long time about her and Roma''s friends, and asks you if you want to get to know any of them.'
+								'Anya talks for a long time about her and Roma''s friends and asks you if you want to get to know any of them.'
 								'"Well, Rex sounds quite nice... I guess."'
-								'Anya smiles, "Hmm... He is a nice guy, but sometimes behaves a bit strange, Rex is obsessed with women''s legs.'
-								'There was a case when Rex was driving without a license in his father''s car and gazing at a girl walking on the sidewalk, in stockings and a short skirt. Imagine, he was so carried away, he had not noticed a van ahead sitting at the traffic lights.'
-								'He drove straight into it and totalled the car! That''s why we call him Rex, because he stares at legs with his mouth open, teeth on show, wanting to devour them." As she says this, Anya is holding her hands like claws and impersonating a T-Rex growling at your legs.'
+								'Anya smiles. "Hmm... He is a nice guy, but sometimes behaves a bit strange. He is obsessed with women''s legs."'
+								'"There was the time he was driving his father''s car without a license and gazing at a girl walking on the sidewalk, who was wearing stockings and a short skirt. As you can imagine, he got so carried away that he didn''t notice a van ahead sitting at the traffic lights."'
+								'"He drove straight into it and totalled the car! That''s why we call him Rex, because he stares at legs with his mouth open, teeth on show, wanting to devour them." As she says this, Anya is holding her hands out like claws and impersonating a T-Rex growling at your legs.'
 							else
-								'You ask your sister about Roma, she is happy talking about him and says how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
+								'You ask your sister about Roma and she happily talks about him, saying how he is good, responsive and courageous.'
 							end
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						else
 							npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anya says that Roma likes you and asks if you like him, too.'
+							'Anya says that Roma likes you and asks if you like him too.'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1081,19 +1081,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pargone':
 	'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you have to get rid of your bird. Have you heard what he has been saying lately. If <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ever heard this she would kick us both out of the house"'
-	'You have become quite attached to your bird and really don''t want to get rid of him. " Wait, there must be another solution. Give me a few days, I will go to the pet store and ask if they have a remedy for this"'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you have to get rid of your bird. Have you heard what he has been saying lately? If <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ever heard this, she would kick us both out of the house!"'
+	'You have become quite attached to your bird and don''t really want to get rid of him. " Wait, there must be another solution. Give me a few days. I will go to the pet store and ask if they have a remedy for this."'
 	if npc_rel['A33'] > 75:
-		'"Fine you have 3 days, if there is no solution by then , I will release him myself"'
-		'"Thanks sis, don''t worry I will find something."'
+		'"Fine, you have 3 days. If there is no solution by then, I will release him myself!"'
+		'"Thanks sis. Don''t worry, I will find something."'
 		ParrotQW['SisterReleaseParrotDay'] = daystart
 		ParrotQW['Level'] = 1
 		ParrotQW['Day'] = 1
 
 	else
-		'"No <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is too dangerous"'
-		'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>>, reaches for the cage and opens it. <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> immediately flies out and leaves through the open window.'
-		'You look at your pet flying away and have to hold back your tears'
+		'"No <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is too dangerous!"'
+		'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> reaches for the cage and opens it. <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> immediately flies out and leaves through the open window.'
+		'You look at your beloved pet flying away and have to hold back your tears.'
 		'You turn away from your sister because you don''t want her to see you crying.'
 		ParrotQW['Owned2'] = 0
 

locations/sister_party.qsrc

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
 		''
 	end
-	'Your cheerful sister Anya' + iif($loc_arg = 'party_gost', ' is drunk and in good spirits.', '.')
-	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, How do you like our humble party? It looks like your having a good time."'
+	'Your sister' + iif($loc_arg = 'party_gost', ' is drunk and in good spirits.', '.')
+	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, How do you like our humble party? It looks like you''re having a good time."'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	if alko < 6 and $loc_arg = 'party_home': act 'Have a drink': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_drink'
 	if $loc_arg = 'party_gost': act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'sister_drink'
@@ -33,53 +33,53 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 			'"It is strange seeing you back together with Roma."'
 			'"We talked things out and decided to give it another chance.'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 2:
-			'"You''re over it after all the curing, crying and yelling?"'
-			'"I know, I know, I got excited a little bit, but now everything is worked out."'
+			'"You''re over it after all the cursing, crying and yelling?"'
+			'"I know, I know. I got excited a little bit, but now everything is worked out."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 3:
-			'"So you just going to continue dating him, after everything that happened?"'
-			'"Well, little sister, he made mistakes. Now he and I have worked things out and I thank God everything is behind us."'
+			'"So you are just going to continue dating him after everything that happened?"'
+			'"Well little sis, he made mistakes. Now he and I have worked things out and I thank God everything is behind us."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 4:
-			'"I can not believe it, my sister letting him crawl back and taking him back, it''s not like you."'
-			'"Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, best to have a bird in the hand, especially now that we don''t have such a simple relationship anymore.'
+			'"I cannot believe it! You let him crawl back and took him back? It''s not like you."'
+			'"Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s best to have a bird in the hand, especially now that we don''t have such a simple relationship anymore.'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 5:
-			'"What do you mean you don''t have a simple relationship, I need more details."'
-			'"Yes I know, so pay attention, I''m not going to repeat this. In a sense we now have an open relationship."'
+			'"What do you mean you ''don''t have a simple relationship''? I need more details."'
+			'"Yes I know, so pay attention, I''m not going to repeat this. In a sense, we now have an open relationship."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 6:
-			'"Open relationship? You mean where you can both fuck anyone you want and you keep dating Roma?"'
-			'"Eh <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is something like that."'
+			'"Open relationship? You mean where you can both fuck anyone you want and you keep dating him?"'
+			'"Eh, something like that <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 7:
-			'"I understand you are a fool, I could not agree to that."'
+			'"I can see that you are a fool! I could not agree to that."'
 			'"Why? I know he loves me and he knows that I love him, but while we are young, we have fun."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 8:
-			'"I still say it''s crazy, how you can be in a loving relationship and fuck anyone."'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I am a not complete, fool. Why with anyone? Look there are other nice guys here too, such as Rex.'
+			'"I still say it''s crazy how you can be in a loving relationship and still fuck anyone."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I am a not complete fool. Why ''anyone''? Look around, there are other nice guys here too, such as Rex.'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 9 and Rex_Love = 1:
-			'"You want me to kill you, you know that I''m dating Rex."'
-			'"I know that you two are dating, I was joking, although I did let you fuck my boyfriend, why can''t I fuck yours?"'
+			'"Do you want me to kill you? You know that I''m dating Rex!"'
+			'"Calm down <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was joking! I know that you two are dating. Although... I did let you fuck my boyfriend, so why can''t I fuck yours?"'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 9 and Rex_Love = 0:
-			'"Ok you''re right, I wouldn''t mind it myself but I don''t know if Rex would."'
-			'"Oh what a naughty girl, well then how about we lure him together?"'
+			'"You''re right. I wouldn''t mind having him myself, but I don''t know if Rex would agree."'
+			'"Oh, what a naughty girl! Well then, how about we lure him together?"'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 10 and Rex_Love = 1:
 			sisterQW['AnyaRomaQW'] = 2
-			'"I get what you''re you hinting at, but I''m not sure Rex would also agree. You and Roma both agreed ahead of time."'
-			'"The main thing is that you are not opposed <<$pcs_nickname>>, besides all men are all the same. You really think Rex could withstand both of our charms?"'
+			'You huff and pout, but realize she has a point. "OK fine, but I''m not sure Rex would agree. You and Roma both agreed ahead of time."'
+			'"The main thing is that you are not opposed to it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Besides, all men are the same. You really think Rex could withstand both our charms?"'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 10 and Rex_Love = 0:
 			sisterQW['AnyaRomaQW'] = 2
-			'"You want to seduce Rex? Haha I have fucked him, and you have no idea what he is like in bed.'
-			'"Wow what little minx you are, so that''s why you are always running around in his room, well then that will make this easier."'     
+			'"You want to seduce Rex? Haha, I''ve already fucked him! You have no idea what he is like in bed.'
+			'"Wow! What a saucy little minx you are! So that''s why you are always running around in his room? Well then, that will make this easier."'     
 		end
 		
 	else
 		i = rand(1,9)
 		if i = 1:'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you still don''t have a man?"'
-		if i = 2:'"Sometimes I can''t decide, what is more important, the size of their wallet or penis? What do you think, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+		if i = 2:'"Sometimes I can''t decide what is more important. The size of their wallet or the size of their dick. What do you think <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		if i = 3:'"If you have a reputation as the town whore, the guys won''t let you come to the parties anymore."'
-		if i = 4:'"Its not good to come here when you''re in a bad mood, Rex hates miserable bastards in his house."'
-		if i = 5:'"Still going to the crap school? Idiot, find yourself a rich man and all your problems are solved."'
+		if i = 4:'"It''s not good to come here when you''re in a bad mood. Rex hates having miserable bastards in his house."'
+		if i = 5:'"Still going to that crap school? Idiot, find yourself a rich man and all your problems are solved!"'
 		if i = 6:'"When I drink, I become like a man and constantly think about sex."'
-		if i = 7:'"Roma sends his greetings, he said he missed our threesomes, I slapped him across the face for it."'
+		if i = 7:'"Roma sends his greetings. He said he missed our threesomes, so I slapped him across the face."'
 		if i = 8:'"What do you think of our host?"'
-		if i = 9:'"Get wild <<$pcs_nickname>>, everything that happens at Rex''s parties, stays at Rex''s parties."'
+		if i = 9:'"Get wild <<$pcs_nickname>>! Everything that happens at Rex''s parties, stays at Rex''s parties."'
 
 	end
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_drink':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Anya hands you a bottle and you take a drink and start to hand it back. "Keep the bottle, sister. I won''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>."'
-	'You gladly drink more sharing it with your beloved sister.'
-	'Ridding high on your alcohol high you are ready to plunge into the wild debauchery.'
+	'Anya hands you a bottle. You take a swig and hand it back. "Keep the bottle, little sis. I won''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>." she says with a wink.'
+	'You gladly drink more, sharing it with your sister.'
+	'Feeling buzzed, you are ready to plunge into the wild debauchery of the party.'
 	if alko >= 7: 'Sudden severe head spinning and you are ready at any time...'
 	if alko >= 7: act 'Pass out': gt 'dinParty', 'sleep'
 	if alko < 7: act 'Dance topless': gt 'sister_party', 'fun'
@@ -108,19 +108,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'     
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_3_<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Alcohol has hit you hard, you feel a little light headed but warm and happy.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, lets dance like there''s no tomorrow." Pulling her top off, she helps you remove yours.'
-	'Before long Anya and you have both stripped down to just your panties, dancing and shaking your boobs for anyone that wants to watch.'
+	'The alcohol has hit you hard. You feel a little light headed, but warm and happy. Anya cheerfully stumbles up to you.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s dance like there''s no tomorrow!" Pulling her top off, she helps you remove yours.'
+	'Before long, you and Anya have both stripped down to your panties and are dancing and shaking your tits for anyone that wants to watch.'
 	if Rex_Love = 1: 'Rex watches you and your sister with great curiosity.'     
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'Kiss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_3_<<rand(3,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you dance nearly naked with your sister the strong intoxication and excitement turns you on and you start kissing your sister.'
-		'She did not resist, instead she responds in kind with the kiss and soon you are both embraced in a deep passionate kiss, while your tongues explore each others mouths.'
-		if Rex_Love = 1:'Rex watches you and your sister with great curiosity.'
-		'Wild desire seizes you, as you continue to kiss, you pull her towards one of the bedrooms'
+		'As you dance half naked with your sister, the strong intoxication and excitement turns you on and you start kissing her.'
+		'She doesn''t resist. Instead, she responds in kind and soon you are both embraced in a deep passionate makeout, your tongues exploring each other''s mouths.'
+		if Rex_Love = 1:'Rex continues to watch you and your sister with great curiosity.'
+		'Wild desire seizes you. As you continue to kiss, you pull her towards one of the bedrooms.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -129,8 +129,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_3_<<rand(5,10)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once in the room, you push the door close and then push Anya down on the bed, you quickly crawl on top of her as you continue to kiss and caress her.'
-			'Anya panting with excitement, caress your body in return and just as fiercely returns the kiss.'
+			'Once in the room, you push the door closed and then push Anya down on the bed. You quickly crawl on top of her as you continue to kiss and caress her.'
+			'Anya, panting with excitement, caresses your body in return and just as fiercely returns the kiss.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -140,10 +140,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 				sister_party_dom = 1
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_4_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Kissing her breasts, stomach, down to her panties. You pull her panties down exposing her already soaking wet pussy, which you begin to lick.'
-				'Both of you moan in pleasure, you feel hot with desire, but can''t help think that despite all your sisters protest that she isn''t a lesbian, she is just kidding herself, she loves having lesbian sex, way to much.'
-				'Kissing, licking and sucking her clit. Your face is already wet with her desire. Her body twitches and she moans loudly from your actions.' 
-				'After her moaning starts getting louder you plunge your tongue inside of her eliciting a cry of pleasure from her as you tongue fuck her pussy, slipping your tongue in and out of her.'
+				'You kiss her breasts and stomach right down to her panties. You pull her panties down, exposing her already soaking wet pussy, which you begin to lick.'
+				'Both of you moan in pleasure. You feel hot with desire, but can''t help but think that, despite all your sister''s protests that she isn''t a lesbian, she is just kidding herself. She loves having lesbian sex way too much.'
+				'Kissing, licking and sucking her clit, your face is wet with her juices. Her body twitches and she moans loudly from your actions.' 
+				'After her moaning starts getting louder, you plunge your tongue inside of her, eliciting a cry of pleasure as you tongue fuck her pussy, slipping your tongue in and out of her.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -156,10 +156,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 				sister_party_dom = 2
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_4_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You roll over as Anya climbs on top of you, kissing her way down to your nipples, your body arches in pleasure as you feel your pussy getting wet with desire already.'
-				'Kissing and licking her way down your body she pulls off your panties, she gently kisses your clit, her tongue flicking your clit gentling eliciting deep moans of pleasure from you. You feel a full tremor run through your body as her tongue slips inside of you.'
-				'"mmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, you taste so sweet." Mumbles your sister, you can''t help but smile at the skill of her tongue on your pussy and think, yeah sis your no lesbian.'
-				'Anya''s tongue works wonders, filling you with mounting pleasure, her tongue stroking inside of you, penetrating you as deeply as her tongue will go. She starts to tongue fuck your pussy.' 
+				'You roll over as Anya climbs on top of you. Kissing her way down to your nipples, your body arches in pleasure as you feel your pussy getting wet already.'
+				'Kissing and licking her way down your body, she pulls your panties off and gently kisses your clit. Her tongue gently flicking your clit elicites deep moans of pleasure from you. You feel a full tremor run through your body as her tongue slips inside of you.'
+				'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, you taste so sweet." Anya murmurs. You can''t help but smile at the skill of her tongue and again silently question her claims that she isn''t into girls.'
+				'Anya''s tongue works wonders, filling you with mounting pleasure as it strokes inside of you, penetrating you as deeply as it can will go. She starts to tongue fuck your pussy.' 
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -175,16 +175,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_5_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if sister_party_dom = 1:
-		'After lick your sisters pussy for some time you pull your head away from her and slips your hand to her pussy, rubbing her clit with your fingers.'
-		'She moans and bucks her hips a bit against you hand, you slip several of your fingers inside of her pussy, fucking her pussy with your fingers, as they rapidly plunge in and out of her soaking twat.'
-		'Her moans get louder and she starts to fuck your fingers back as she pleads with you not to stop.'
+		'After licking your sister''s pussy for some time, you pull your head away from her and start rubbing her clit with your fingers.'
+		'She moans and bucks her hips against your hand. You then slip several of your fingers inside of her pussy and start rapidly finger blasting her wet hole.'
+		'Her moans get louder and she starts to fuck your fingers, pleading with you not to stop.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 				
 	elseif sister_party_dom = 2:
-		'After playing plenty oral attention from Anya, her hand slowly slides to your pussy and starts rubbing it.'
-		'A little rubbing then she slips a finger into wet twat, then a second and finally a third, finger fucking you in earnest.'
+		'After recieving plenty of oral attention from Anya, she withdraws and starts rubbing your wet pussy with her fingers.'
+		'She slips a finger into wet hole, then a second and finally a third. She then starts finger fucking you in earnest.'
 		'You start trying to hump her hand as you wither in pleasure, begging her not to stop.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
@@ -196,9 +196,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		if rand(1,2) = 1:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_6_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Stopping a moment so you can both catch your breath, neither of you exactly eager for it to end but also desperate for release.'
-			'Anya smiles wickely to you, "Well little sister lets see who licks pussy better and bring the other to orgasm first."'
-			'With those words, you simultaneous seek out each other twat, licking, sucking, using your fingers and tongue to fuck the other. Both of you moaning and panting, close to both close to your sweet release.'
+			'Stopping a moment so you can both catch your breath, neither of you want it to end, but you are both also desperate for release.'
+			'Anya smiles wickely at you. "Well little sis, let''s see who eats pussy better and brings the other to orgasm first."'
+			'With those words, you simultaneously seek out each other''s crotch and start licking, sucking and using your fingers and tongue to fuck the other. You both start moaning and panting, close to your sweet releases.'
 			''
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_8_<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Opening up your legs you rub your pussies against one another in a slow motion, both moaning in pleasure as you look into each other eyes. Slowly picking up speed as you begin to grind your pussies against one another.'     
+		'Opening up your legs, you rub your wet pussies against one another in a slow motion, both moaning in pleasure as you look into each other''s eyes. You slowly pick up speed as you continue to grind your pussies against one another.'     
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'trib', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -247,9 +247,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_9_<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your bodies convulse and spasm at the same time as a pure wave of pleasure overwhelms you both. In time both of you will claim the other came first, but for now you are lost in the Ecstasy of the moment.'
-	'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you weren''t my sister I would marry you." Mumbles your sister.'
-	'Your warm wet, limp bodies lay entangled in a moment of pure bliss, you fall asleep in each other arms.'    
+	'Your bodies convulse and spasm at the same time as a pure wave of pleasure overwhelms you both. In time, both of you will claim the other came first but for now, you are lost in the ecstasy of the moment.'
+	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you weren''t my sister, I would marry you." your sister mumbles.'
+	'Your warm, wet and limp bodies lay entangled in a moment of pure bliss before you fall asleep in each other arms.'    
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5
@@ -271,8 +271,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_8.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'Once you burst into Rex''s house, the loud music immediately drowns out just about any other noise.'
-	'You began to help the guys to lay out the table, they carried the drinks, you snacks, but there was so much booze that it covered the table leaving no where to put the snacks.'
-	'Everyone started to thump in unison, dealing, laughing, telling funny stories.'
+	'You help the guys lay out the table. They carried the drinks and you the snacks, but there was so much booze that it covered the table, leaving nowhere to put the snacks.'
+	'Everyone starts to thump in unison, dealing, laughing and telling funny stories.'
 	'You cheerfully ask Anya. "You won''t leave me alone at the party will you?"'
 	'Anya smiles and hands you a bottle of vodka. "Of course not <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	act 'Decline the drink':
@@ -281,9 +281,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You politely try and refuse the drink.'
-		'But seeing everyone watching gathered around began to chant: "Drink, drink, drink, drink, drink, drink."'
-		'Giving into peer pressure you take the bottle from Anya''s hand, and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
+		'You politely try and refuse the drink, but everyone watching has gathered round and started chanting. "Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink!"'
+		'Giving into peer pressure, you take the bottle from Anya''s hand and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sister_party', 'sit'
@@ -295,9 +294,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You took the bottle from her hands'
-		'"Well, let''s party." You say and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
-		'Roma looks at Anya and smirks. "Look, <<$pcs_nickname>> is drinking more than you." with these words, everyone began to drink heavily.'
+		'You took the bottle from her hand."Well, let''s party!" you say and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
+		'Roma looks at Anya and smirks. "Look, <<$pcs_nickname>> is drinking more than you!" Everyone then begins to drink heavily.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sister_party', 'sit'
@@ -309,12 +307,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Standing, you tried to get out from behind the table, to go dancing, but no one was dancing they were all just sitting and drinking.'
-		'Seeing, you got up and wanting to leave the table, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going, it''s only the beginning, hold the bottle, and let''s drink, otherwise I would be offended."'
+		'Standing, you try to get out from behind the table to go dancing, but no one is actually dancing. They are all just sitting and drinking.'
+		'Seeing you get up and wanting to leave the table, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going? It''s only the beginning! Hold the bottle and let''s drink, otherwise I will be offended."'
 		if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 2:
-			'You can''t deny the birthday boy and take the bottle from his hands, and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
+			'You can''t deny the birthday boy, so take the bottle from his hand and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
 		else
-			'You can''t deny the host of the party and take the bottle from his hands, and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
+			'You can''t deny the host of the party, so take the bottle from his hand and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
 		end
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
@@ -329,10 +327,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_10.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Drunk you stumble to go dance.'
-	'You did not need to be persuade, you were on the same wavelength with everyone else and pulled off your top, staying just in your bra.'
-	'The boys carried on dancing, jumping and bumping into each other, even though you were almost half-naked, it seemed like no one was paying any attention to you.'
-	'Anya approached you:"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come on cheer up, go get into the center, have fun dancing and other very tempting things."'
+	'You drunkenly stumble around to go and dance.'
+	'You do not need to be persuaded. You are on the same wavelength with everyone else and pull your top off, dancing in your bra.'
+	'The boys carry on dancing, jumping and bumping into each other. Even though you are almost half-naked, it seems like no one is paying any attention to you.'
+	'Anya approaches you. "Cheer up <<$pcs_nickname>>! Go get in the center and have fun dancing, among other things..."'
 	act 'Drink':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
@@ -340,22 +338,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_13.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You wanted to drink again and again, the boys quickly gave you two bottles of whiskey and without hesitation you start to pour both of them into your mouth, the whiskey spills out of your mouth, unable to drink it all fast enough, it pours all down your body.'
-		'All your clothes were wet, and through your wet bra everyone could see your protruding nipples.'
-		'Two guys around you mad with energy, began to dance around you, persistently lapping at the booze on your body.'
+		'You want to drink again and again. The boys quickly give you two bottles of whiskey and without any hesitation, you start to pour both of them into your mouth. The whiskey spills out of your mouth as you are unable to drink it all fast enough. It pours all down your body.'
+		'Your clothes are soaked in alcohol and everyone can see your nipples poking through your wet bra.'
+		'Two guys around you, mad with energy, begin to dance around you, persistently lapping at the booze on your body.'
 		act 'Dance with them': gt 'sister_party', 'two_boy'
 	end
 	act 'Keep dancing':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_18.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You''re drunk, but still able to control yourself, you wanted to continue the dance.'
+		'You''re drunk, but still able to control yourself. You want to continue dancing.'
 		'Your erotic movements have attracted the attention of many guys, and two of them approach.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
 !! This should have a way to back out, but where to?
 		if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 2: act 'Congratulate Rex personally': gt 'sister_party', 'reks'
-		if sisterQW['AnyaRomaQW'] = 0: act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_find'
+		if sisterQW['AnyaRomaQW'] = 0: act 'Look for Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_find'
 		act 'Dance with them': gt 'sister_party', 'two_boy'
 	end
 	if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 2:
@@ -363,17 +361,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_find':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_find':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You are looking for your sister, but I can''t find her. "Where the hell, did she go?" You looked everywhere, you need to find her.'
-	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_toilet'
-	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_kit'
-	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_kom'
+	'You are looking for your sister, but can''t find her. "Where the hell did she go?" You look everywhere in desperation.'
+	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_toilet'
+	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
+	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_bed'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_kit':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_kit':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	$locclass = 'kitr'
@@ -381,30 +379,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_kit':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_24.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You burst into the kitchen, and look around for your sister. You find two drunk chicks having fun in the corner of the room, but neither of them know where your sister is. Suddenly, you hear heavy breathing behind you.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen and look around for your sister. You see two drunk girls having fun in the corner of the room, but neither of them know where your sister is. Suddenly, you hear heavy breathing behind you.'
 	act 'Turn around':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_25.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Turning you find Anya completely naked, drinking from a bottle with tears running down her face, looking at Roma. "Well it''s over between us, go to hell, dog."'
-		'Roma didn''t say anything in response. Anya turned and ran away. You glare at him few moments for making your sister cry and then you rush after her.'
+		'Turning around, you find Anya completely naked, drinking from a bottle with tears running down her face while looking at Roma. "Well it''s over between us. Go to hell dog!"'
+		'Roma doesn''t say anything in response and Anya turns and runs away in tears. You glare at him for a few few moments, then rush after her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Chase Anya':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_26.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'It takes you a bit to find Anya again, you find her sitting on her knees in front of two unfamiliar guys. "What are you doing, stop, think about this." You plead with your sister.'
-			'Drunkenly Anya keeps sucking the guys off, The boys turn to look at you. "Come join us, or get the fuck out."'
+			'It takes you a while to find Anya again, but you eventually find her on her knees in front of two unfamiliar guys. "What are you doing? Stop and think about this!" you plead to your sister.'
+			'Anya keeps drunkenly sucking the guys off and they turn to look at you. "Come and join us or get the fuck out."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_27.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You decide not to argue with strong guys afraid of what they might do and wait.'
-				'The guys push Anya down on her stomach, one kneels down in front of her and sticks his cock back in her mouth, while the other kneels down behind her and shoves his dick in her ass and begins to fuck her hard.'
-				'Turning to look at you again, one of the guys leers and pats the floor next to Anya. "Come over here and join us, if your so worried about her. Then we will take turns fucking you both in the ass instead of just her."'
+				'You decide not to argue with them, afraid of what they might do and wait.'
+				'The guys push Anya down on her stomach. One kneels down in front of her and sticks his cock back in her mouth, while the other kneels down behind her, shoves his dick in her ass and begins to fuck her hard.'
+				'Turning to look at you again, one of the guys leers and pats the floor next to Anya. "Come over here and join us if you''re so worried about her. Then we will take turns fucking you both in the ass."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hour < 22:
@@ -426,11 +424,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_kit':
 					$npc_lastpart['A33'] = '$boy1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_28.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You frown seeing your sister used like this, but maybe it would be better for her if you let them use you too, so she wouldn''t be the solo object of their lust. "Ok, who wants to fuck me first?" You say as you walk over and take your clothes off.'
-					'The one that had been talking to you and fucking your sisters mouth pulls away from her and shoves you down on your hands and knees. Without waiting he shoves his cock in your ass and begins to furiously fuck you.'
-					'You hands tighten as you grimace in pain, trying to think about anything but the pain of having your ass tore up.'
-					'It goes on for some time, eventually the boys switch places, taking turns fucking you and Anya in the ass. Finally mercifully they cum inside of both of you. After they finished they laughed and left the room.'
-					'You gather up your clothes and get dressed and then help Anya get dressed as you help her home.'
+					'You frown upon seeing your sister being used like this, but maybe it would be better for her if you let them use you too so she wouldn''t be the sole object of their lust? "OK, who wants to fuck me first?" you say as you walk over and take your clothes off.'
+					'The one that had been talking to you and fucking your sister''s mouth pulls away from her and shoves you down on your hands and knees. Without waiting, he shoves his cock in your ass and begins to furiously fuck you.'
+					'Your hands tighten as you grimace in pain, trying to think about anything but the pain of having your ass torn up.'
+					'This goes on for some time and the boys eventually switch places, taking turns fucking you and Anya in the ass. Finally, and mercifully, they cum inside of both of you. After they are finished, they laugh and leave the room.'
+					'You gather your clothes up and get dressed. You then help Anya get dressed and help her home.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough', 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 					gs 'stat'
 					if hour < 22:
@@ -447,27 +445,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_kit':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_toilet':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_toilet':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_22.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'In the bathroom you find some guy pushing some poor girls head into the toilet. It wasn''t Anya and you didn''t want to get involved so you left.'
-	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_kit'
-	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_kom'
+	'You walk into the bathroom and find some guy pushing some poor girl''s head into the toilet. Thankfully, it isn''t Anya and, not wanting to get involved any further, you leave.'
+	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
+	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kom'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anna_kom':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_bed':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	pcs_horny += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_23.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'In the bedroom you see two guys jerking off on the face of some poor unconscious girl. As one of them says to the other. "Let''s get the fuck out of here before she wakes up, I don''t want to deal with her ex-boyfriend, he''s one of the boxers.'
-	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_toilet'
-	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_kit'
+	'In the bedroom, you see two guys jerking off onto the face of some poor unconscious girl as one of them says to the other "Let''s get the fuck out of here before she wakes up. I don''t want to deal with her ex-boyfriend, he''s one of the boxers."'
+	'Anya isn''t here, so you keep searching.'
+	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_toilet'
+	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
@@ -477,19 +476,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_19.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"Hey girly, damn you''ve been having fun. Oh yeah, you''re Anya''s sister, I know, she''s... that''s odd, I haven''t seen her. Although I have been drinking bubbly all day, here, drink up."'
-	'With this he starts pouring the sweet champagne down your throat, he''s so drunk he pours it much too fast and as much as you try to keep up, alot of it spills on the floor.
+	'"Hey girl! Damn, you''ve been having fun. Oh yeah, you''re Anya''s little sister, right? I know she''s... That''s odd, I haven''t seen her. Although I have been drinking bubbly all day. Here, drink up!"'
+	'He starts pouring the sweet champagne down your throat. He''s so drunk that he pours it too fast and, as much as you try to keep up, a lot of it spills on you and the floor.
 	 Then, without a word, Rex just staggers off.'
-	act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_find'
+	act 'Look for Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_find'
 	act 'Follow Rex to the toilet for birthday sex':
 		*clr & cla
 		toiletRexSex = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_20.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You went to the bathroom only to find Rex already there just finishing taking a piss with his dick still out in his hand. "Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you again? I''m here already..."'
-		'Stopping him in mid-sentence, you push him down to sit on the toilet, and pull his hand away from his cock. You start taking your clothes off, you watch his cock stiffen and grow while he stares at your naked nubile body. You climb on and straddle him. Lowering yourself on his cock, you feel it slide into your wet pussy and you being to ride him as you kiss him. While you whisper. "Happy birthday."'
-		'"Fucking hell." he mumbled while you rode him.'
+		'You go to the bathroom, only to find Rex already there, having just finished taking a piss with his dick still out in his hand. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, you again? I''m here already..."'
+		'Stopping him mid-sentence, you push him down onto the toilet and pull his hand away from his cock. You start undressing and watch his cock stiffen as he stares at your naked body. You climb on and straddle him. Lowering yourself onto his cock, you feel it slide into your wet pussy and you begin to ride him. "Happy birthday." you whisper in his ear.'
+		'"Fucking hell." he mumbles as you ride him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Doggystyle':
@@ -500,12 +499,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_21.mp4"></video></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Rex growls as he grabs you and lifts you off him. He gets up, bends you over, and plunges his dick right back into your pussy and begins to furiously fuck you balls deep.'
-			'"Not so fast, not so deep." You beg him, but gradually, the pain melted from his frantic balls deep fucking and gave way to waves of deep pleasure.'
-			'With a final grunt he shoots his sperm deep inside your pussy. "Wow <<$pcs_nickname>>, You are hotter than your sister." With these words he leaves you alone in the bathroom.'
+			'Rex growls as he grabs you and lifts you off him. He gets up, bends you over and plunges his dick right back into your pussy and begins to furiously fuck you balls deep.'
+			'"Not so fast, not so deep." you beg him. However, the pain of his frantic balls deep fucking soon gives way to waves of deep pleasure as he keeps pounding you.'
+			'With a final grunt, he shoots his load deep inside your pussy. "Wow <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are hotter than your sister!" He then zips his pants and leaves you alone in the bathroom.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_find'
+			act 'Look for Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_find'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -515,17 +514,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boy':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_14.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
-	'They rubbed your body, touched boobs, and squeezed your ass. Under the influence of alcohol, you really like it, and just enjoy the moment'
-	'Seeing, that you do not resist they pull you into the next room.'
+	'They rub your body, grab your boobs and squeeze your ass. Under the influence of alcohol, you really like it and just enjoy the moment'
+	'Seeing that you aren''t resisting, they pull you into the next room.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Go':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_15.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'As you enter the room, they pushed you down on the bed and pull out their cocks for you to service.'
-		'In a drunken fog you try to grab one, then the other, but you are so drunk the room is spinning.'
-		'One of the guys started licking your pussy, and you can hear yourself moaning in passion.'
+		'As you enter the room, they push you down on the bed and pull out their cocks.'
+		'In a drunken fog, you try to grab one, then the other, but you are so drunk that the room is spinning.'
+		'One of the guys starts licking your pussy and you can hear yourself moaning in passion.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Doggystyle':
@@ -536,9 +535,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boy':
 			$boy1[2] = $npclastgenerated
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_16.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'The lift you up into doggystyle, their hands help hold you steady as one of them slips his dick in your pussy and the other shoves his cock in your mouth.'
-			'The guys start laughing, obviously having fun fucking you as they talk and joke to each other. "She''s still a bit young, I think she might be Anya''s little sister."'
-			'"Fuck I think you''re right, she''s a sweet little thing, but I don''t fuck schoolgirls." Looking at his friend getting a blowjob from you. "Hey I''ll trade you."'
+			'They lift you up onto your knees. Their hands help hold you steady as one of them slides his dick into your pussy and the other shoves his cock in your mouth.'
+			'The guys start laughing, obviously having fun fucking you as they talk and joke to each other. "She looks a bit young. I think she might be Anya''s little sister."'
+			'"Fuck, I think you''re right. She''s a sweet little thing, but I don''t fuck schoolgirls. I''ll trade you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 			minut -= 5
@@ -560,15 +559,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boy':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_17.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'The guys switch places and continued to rhythmically fuck you. After they fucked you awhile, you came to their senses a bit: "Oh yeah, wake up bitch, come on suck and fuck us harder."'
-				'Still mostly out of it you obey and began to suck harder, until he starts to cum. Then he pulls out of your mouth and splatters your entire face in his cum. The second guy cums quickly too, he pulls out of your pussy and splatters your ass with his cum.'
-				'After some time cleaning yourself up, you decide to go find your sister.'
+				'The guys switch places and continue to rhythmically fuck you. After they have fucked you for a while, you somewhat come to your senses. "Oh yeah, wake up bitch! Suck and fuck us harder."'
+				'Still mostly out of it, you obey and begin to suck harder until he starts to cum. He pulls out of your mouth and splatters your entire face in his cum. The second guy cums quickly too, pulling out of your pussy and covering your ass with his cum.'
+				'After spending some time cleaning yourself up, you decide to go and find your sister.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anna_find'
+				act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_find'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -581,8 +580,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drink':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_11.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Everyone undressed to the waist and went into the hall to dance. "Come dance, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you don''t want to be left alone." Anya called to you.'
-	'Not now Anya, I want to drink some more first." You tell her.'
+	'Everyone undresses to the waist and goes into the hall to dance. "Come dance <<$pcs_nickname>>, you don''t want to be left alone." Anya calls out to you.'
+	'Not now Anya. I want to drink some more first." you reply.'
 	act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 end
 
@@ -592,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sit':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_12.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'After drinking you start to feel a little dizzy, and you chose to sit for awhile. As your sitting Anya and her friends approached you. "<<$pcs_nickname>> why are you sitting here? Come dance with us." Not taking no for an answer Anya drags you out to dance with her and her friends.'
+	'You are starting to feel a little dizzy after drinking so much and so sit down for a while. Anya and her friends then approach you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>? Why are you just sitting there? Come dance with us." Not taking no for an answer, Anya drags you out to dance with her and her friends.'
 	act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 end
 

locations/sistersleep.qsrc

@@ -5,15 +5,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sleep0<<rand(1,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Anya is sleeping face down on her bed, with her covers tossed aside, exposing her panty clad ass. You admit she has a really nice ass, you never see her workout, you wonder how she keeps so fit.'
+	'Anya is sleeping face down on her bed, with her covers tossed aside, exposing her panty clad ass. You admit she has a really nice ass, but you never see her work out, leaving you wondering how she keeps so fit.'
 	if sisterLesb >= 7 or sisterLesb = -1:
-		'You want to touch her again but you keep from doing it, you agreed to not wake her up like this anymore. You sigh and then move away.'
+		'You want to touch her again, but you stop yourself from doing it. You agreed to not wake her up like this anymore. You sigh and then move away.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 	else
 		if sisterQW['lesbDay'] = daystart:
-			'You want to touch her again but you change your mind at the last minute. Doing this more than once a day could make her really angry. Better try again tomorrow.'
+			'You want to touch her again, but you change your mind at the last minute. Doing this more than once a day could make her really angry. Better try again tomorrow.'
 			act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 		else
 			act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_1':
 	if sisterLesb <= 2:
 		sisterLesb += 1
 		'You dare to touch your sleeping sister''s perfect ass.'
-		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body, the feeling is weird, you can''t seem to place it.'
-		'Her ass feels as good as it looks. You want to touch it more but when her breathing changes you panic a bit and pull away.'
+		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird and you can''t seem to place it.'
+		'Her ass feels as good as it looks. You want to touch it more, but when her breathing changes you panic a bit and pull away.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 	elseif sisterLesb = 3:
 		'You dare to touch your sleeping sister''s perfect ass.'
-		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body, the feeling is weird, you can''t seem to place it.'
+		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird and you can''t seem to place it.'
 		'Her ass feels as good as it looks.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'self'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_1':
 		end
 	else
 		'You can not stop thinking about the feelings you experienced last time you touched your sister''s bare ass.'
-		'Convinced that Anya is fast asleep, you once more dare yourself to touch her soft butt.'
-		'This time you decide to caress those buns a little longer, enjoying the moment.'
+		'Convinced that Anya is fast asleep, you once more dare yourself to caress her ass.'
+		'This time you decide to caress her a little longer, enjoying the moment.'
 		'Anya''s whole body is seriously sexy and it is filling you with desire.'
 		act 'Proceed': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2'
 	end
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/touch2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You continue to explore your sister''s hot body, your frisky fingers accidentally slipping between her legs. Her panties are wet, you gently pull her panties aside, exposing her wet pussy. Sensations of heat and moisture overwhelm you, her pussy is oozing with desire. Apparently she is having a sexual dream, or is it her response to your touch?'
-	'You are caught up in a fantasy, you start to lower your face to her pussy with your tongue out, wanting to taste her. When suddenly Anya stirs. "Fuck...Fuck..!" She''s waking up.'
-	'Sleepily Anya rolls over, looking up and sees you on her bed, as you hastily remove your hand and hide it behind your back.'
-	'"What...what''s going on here? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" She says as she sleepily sits up.'
-	'You sit in front of your sister on her bed, excited, caught off guard, and not knowing what to do.'
+	'You continue to explore your sister''s hot body, your frisky fingers accidentally slipping between her legs. Her panties are wet. You gently pull her panties aside, exposing her wet pussy. Sensations of heat and moisture overwhelm you, her pussy is oozing with desire. She seems to be having a sexual dream, or is it her response to your touch?'
+	'You are caught up in a fantasy. You start to lower your face to her pussy with your tongue out, wanting to taste her, when she suddenly stirs. "Fuck...Fuck!" She''s waking up!'
+	'Anya sleepily rolls over, looks up and sees you on her bed as you hastily remove your hand and hide it behind your back.'
+	'"What...what''s going on here? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" she asks as she sleepily sits up.'
+	'You sit in front of your sister on her bed, excited, caught off guard and not knowing what to do.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Act innocent':
@@ -80,13 +80,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 		minut += 1
 		npc_rel['A33'] -= 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide to do nothing and quietly move away from your sleepy sister, maybe she will forget it all for the morning'
+		'You decide to do nothing and quietly move away from your sleepy sister. Maybe she will forget it all in the morning...'
 		'As you step away from her bed she calls to you.'
 		if sisterLesb = 3:
 			sisterLesb = 4
-			'"I do not want to know what you did to me while I was asleep, but don''t do it again."'
+			'"I don''t want to know what you did to me while I was asleep, but don''t do it again."'
 		else
-			'"I told you last time I don''t want to do stuff with you, so please stop and don''t do it again." Then she rolls over angrily.'
+			'"I told you last time I don''t want to do stuff with you, so please stop and don''t do it again." she says and rolls over angrily.'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -107,25 +107,25 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2_kiss':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/touch3.jpg"></center>'
-	'With nothing to lose, you feel yourself filled with courage, and while Anya is still half asleep, you bring your face to hers and sensually kiss her on the lips.'
+	'With nothing to lose, you feel yourself fill with courage and while Anya is still half asleep, you bring your face to hers and sensually kiss her on the lips.'
 	'Anya is too aroused and sleepy to think or resist, her soft body easily giving into your touches as you bring her pleasure.'
-	'Your fingers again slip under your sister''s panties, but now your affection is bold and confident.'
+	'Your fingers again slip under your sister''s panties, but your affection is now bold and confident.'
 	'She starts fully waking and breaks the kiss and looks at you in a confused way. "What are you doing?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finger your sister':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You smile to her. "Shh... you looked stressed earlier and I thought I would help you out." You tell her as you slide your hand down her panties and then slip a finger inside of her soaking wet pussy. She grabs your wrist obviously intent on stopping you until her breath catches and you can see how turned on she is.'
-		'She slowly lets go of your wrist and just lays back spreading her legs and enjoying you fingering her. You pull her panties off and toss them aside and then go back to fingering her pussy as she starts to moan in pleasure.'
+		'You smile to her. "Shh... you looked stressed earlier and I thought I would help you out." you tell her as you slide your hand down her panties and then slip a finger inside of her soaking wet pussy. She grabs your wrist, obviously intent on stopping you until her breath catches and you can see how turned on she is.'
+		'She slowly lets go of your wrist and just lays back, spreading her legs and enjoying you fingering her. You pull her panties off and toss them aside before going back to fingering her pussy as she starts to moan in pleasure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep fingering her':
 			*clr & cla
 			sisterLesb = 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slip another finger in her, now fingering her deeply with two fingers while your thumb rubs her clit. Anya lays all the way back and starts to moan louder, you lean forward and start kissing and sucking on her nipple as you keep finger banging her soaking wet pussy. Suddenly huddles in gentle convulsions and roughly orgasms, she looks at you with a gratefully, sleepy, but pleased look on her face and smiles.'
-			'"Well, aren''t you just the sweetest little sister. Now go to sleep." She says as she rolls over and nuzzles into her pillow, pulling her panties back up, as she goes back to sleep. You are really excited and even a little upset not to receive your own release, but you are satisfied for now.'
+			'You slip another finger in her, now fingering her deeply with two fingers while your thumb rubs her clit. Anya lies all the way back and starts to moan louder, so you lean forward and start kissing and sucking on her nipple as you keep finger banging her soaking wet pussy. Suddenly, her pussy gently convulses and she orgasms. Anya looks at you with a sleepy but pleased look on her face and smiles.'
+			'"Well, aren''t you just the sweetest little sister? Now go to sleep." she says as she grabs her panties, slides them back on and rolls over, nuzzling into her pillow and falling asleep. You are a little upset not to receive your own release, but you are satisfied for now.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -136,13 +136,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2_kiss':
 		act 'Tell her you want to have sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I want to make you feel good, I want to make you orgasm." You tell her and then kiss her, she stiffens at the kiss but then relents and lets you kiss her, she is obviously turned on and trying to fight her desires.'
-			'Then she breaks the kiss and pulls her face a little ways away from yours. "No, it''s wrong, we''re sisters." She only sounds half convinced to you.'
+			'"I want to make you feel good, I want to make you orgasm." you tell her and then kiss her. She stiffens at the kiss, but then relents and lets you kiss her. She is obviously turned on and trying to fight her desires.'
+			'She breaks the kiss and pulls away from you. "No, it''s wrong, we''re sisters." She only sounds half convinced to you.'
 			act 'Say you''re sorry':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pull away from her. "Sorry, I didn''t think it was a big deal just comforting each other." You say softly.'
-				'She sighs. "It''s fine, just don''t do it again, ok. It is wrong and I''m into guys anyways." With that she rolls over and goes back to sleep.'
+				'You pull away from her. "Sorry, I didn''t think it was a big deal just comforting each other." you say softly.'
+				'She sighs. "It''s fine. Just don''t do it again, OK? It''s wrong and I''m into guys anyways." She rolls over and goes back to sleep.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -165,35 +165,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les2.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisterLesb = 5:
-		'"Why is it wrong? We love each other and just making each other feel good, how can that be wrong?" You ask her as you pull her panties down, she only half heartedly resists you.'
-		'"You know why, where sisters and I like guys even if that wasn''t true." She says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
-		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet from here. "If it is so wrong, why is your pussy so wet?"'
-		'"I... I was having a sex dream is all." She explains.'
+		'"Why is it wrong? We love each other and how can making each other feel good be wrong?" you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
+		'"You know why! We''re sisters and even if that wasn''t the case, I like guys." she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
+		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it is so wrong, why are you so wet?"'
+		'"I... I was having a...dream is all." she explains.'
 	else
-		'"Did it feel wrong last time? I think you enjoyed it enough to cum, tell me you didn''t enjoy it?" You ask her as you pull her panties down, she only half heartedly resists you.'
-		'"It doesn''t matter, you can enjoy things that are wrong, it doesn''t make them any less wrong." She says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
-		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet from here. "If it is so wrong, why is your pussy so wet?"'
-		'"I... shut up." She says with a blush, knowing why she is wet and knowing you know why as well.'
+		'"Did it feel wrong last time? I think you enjoyed it enough to cum! Tell me you didn''t enjoy it." you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
+		'"It doesn''t matter. You can enjoy things that are wrong, but it doesn''t make them any less wrong!" she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
+		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it is so wrong, why are you so wet?"'
+		'"I... shut up." she says with a blush, knowing why she is wet and knowing you know why as well.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finger her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You reach down and slide two fingers into her soaking wet pussy, they easily slide in by how turned on she is. You start rubbing her clit with your other hand. She moans softly obviously enjoying the sensations.'
+		'You reach down and slide two fingers into her soaking wet pussy. They easily slide in by how turned on she is. You start rubbing her clit with your other hand. She moans softly, obviously enjoying the sensations.'
 		'She moans out. "We should stop."'
 		'You keep fingering her and rubbing her clit. "Do you really want me to stop?"'
-		'She moans louder. "Yes... no..."'
+		'She moans louder. "Yes... No..."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go down on her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les5.jpg"></center>'
-			'With that you move around and lay down between her legs and start licking and sucking on her clit with your mouth and tongue, as your fingers keep plunging in and out of her pussy.'
+			'You move around, lie down between her legs and start licking and sucking on her clit as your fingers keep plunging in and out of her pussy.'
 			if sisterLesb = 5:
-				'She finally lays back and starts caress her breasts no longer resisting or even pretending to not enjoy it anymore.'
+				'She finally lays back and starts caressing her breasts, no longer resisting or even pretending to not enjoy it anymore.'
 			else
-				'She lays back and starts caress her breasts moaning passionately having fully given into your love making.'
+				'She lays back and starts caressing her breasts and moaning passionately, having fully given in to your love making.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
@@ -202,9 +202,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les6.jpg"></center>'
 				if sisterLesb = 5:
-					'You get up and strip down, you lay down near her head. She watches you with lust in her eyes, but you can still see a bit of resistance. Not wanting to give her time to recover, you reach over and pull her head between your legs. She resist for a moment and then stops, instead she starts to lick your pussy in return.'
+					'You get up and strip down and lie down near her head. She watches you with lust in her eyes, but you can still see a bit of resistance. Not wanting to give her time to recover, you reach over and pull her head between your legs. She resists for a moment and then stops. She starts to lick your pussy in return.'
 				else
-					'You get up and strip down, you lay down near her head. This time without even needing to prod her she rolls over and places her face between your legs and starts licking at your pussy and clit.'
+					'You get up and strip down and lie down near her head. This time, without even needing to prod her, she rolls over and places her face between your legs and starts licking at your pussy and clit.'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
@@ -213,9 +213,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 				act '69':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Obviously still wanting more, Anya gets up and moves. She climbs on top of you and places her pussy above your face. You start licking her again, as she positions her face over your pussy and starts licking it again as well. The two of your lay there lapping at each others pussies in complete bliss. Until finally Anya''s body starts to convulse and she has a orgasm right on your face, as she grinds her pussy against you, riding out her orgasm.'
+					'Obviously still wanting more, Anya gets up and moves. She climbs on top of you and places her pussy above your face. You start licking her again as she positions her face over your pussy and starts licking it again as well. The two of you lay there lapping at each others pussies in complete bliss until Anya''s body starts to convulse and she has an orgasm right on your face. She grinds her pussy against you, riding out her orgasm.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
-					$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
+					$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaahhh!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -223,20 +223,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 					act 'Aftermath':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once her orgasm has fully passed she climbs off you and gets up on her knees and blushes deeply. "Look I had fun but lets forget this ever happened ok?"'
+						'Once her orgasm has fully passed, she climbs off you, gets up on her knees and blushes deeply. "Look, I had fun but, let''s forget this ever happened OK?"'
 						if sisterLesb = 5:
 							sisterLesb = 6
-							'You respond by getting up on your knees and kissing her, she returns the kiss. Once you finish kissing her you tell her. "Sure sis, nothing happened." You tell her in a slightly teasing tone.'
+							'You respond by getting up on your knees and kissing her and she returns the kiss. Once you finish kissing her, you tell her "Sure sis, nothing happened." in a slightly teasing tone.'
 							*nl
-							'She shakes her head. "I need to get some sleep. You need to go back to your bed and go to sleep too." With that she lays back down and rolls over facing away from you and tries to go back to sleep.'
+							'She shakes her head. "I need to get some sleep. You need to go back to your bed and go to sleep too." She lays back down and rolls over, facing away from you, and tries to go back to sleep.'
 							act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 						else
-							'She gives you a stern look. "I''m serious we can''t do this anymore, do you hear me? This is the last time."'
+							'She gives you a stern look. "I''m serious! We can''t do this anymore! This is the last time."'
 							act 'Accept her decision':
 								*clr & cla
 								sisterLesb = -1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'					
-								'You put your best little sister pout on your face, but thinking she has already made her mind up, you shrug, and accept that you won''t be having any more private times with her.'
+								'You put your best little sister pout on your face, but thinking she has already made her mind up, you shrug and accept that you won''t be having any more private times with her.'
 								'She rolls over and goes to sleep.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -250,16 +250,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 								npc_rel['A33'] += 5
 								$orgasm_or = 'no'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Anya, you don''t have to be a lesbian to enjoy a special release that only another woman can know how to give you.", you say as you begin lightly caressing her thigh.'
-								'"What if we agreed that we''ll help each other out only when we REALLLLYYYYY need it, but depend on our normal boyfriends most of the time, hmmm?". Her breathing starts to get faster as your fingertips glide to the center of her legs.'
+								'"Anya, you don''t have to be a lesbian to enjoy a special release that only another woman knows how to give you." you say as you begin lightly caressing her thigh.'
+								'"What if we agreed that we''ll help each other out only when we REALLLLYYYYY need it, but depend on our boyfriends most of the time, hmmm?". Her breathing gets faster as your fingertips glide to the center of her legs.'
 								*nl
-								'"Well... since you put it that way, I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we.... REALLLLYYYYY....need....mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay ....mmmmm..", she sighed, as she leans in and kisses you.'
+								'"Well... when you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we.... REALLLLYYYYY....need....mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay ....mmmmm.." she sighs as she leans in and kisses you.'
 								*nl
-								'Once you break the kiss she adds. "Ok but seriously no more waking me up like this, we can ... when we really need it just tell the other one ok?" You nod and agree to not wake up her like this anymore, besides her into it from the start would be better anyways. Then she rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night" She tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
+								'Once you break the kiss she adds. "OK, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can ... when we really need it, just tell the other one OK?" You nod and agree to not wake up her anymore, besides her being into it from the start would be better anyways. She rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night." she tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'incest'
 								gs 'arousal', 'forplay', 3, 'incest'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 3, 'incest'
-								$orgasm_txt = 'You both start feeling the heat, and lay down, kissing, touching, licking each other into orgasm.'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'You both start feeling the heat and lay down, kissing, touching and licking each other into orgasm.'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 3, 'incest'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian':
 	*clr & cla
 	npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other as you slowly undress each other, Anya lays back on the bed as you do. You hands roam each others bodies as you remove clothes from each other and passionately keep kissing.'
+	'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other as you slowly undress each other, Anya lays back on the bed as you do. Your hands roam each other''s bodies as you undress each other and passionately keep kissing.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Spread her legs ':
@@ -305,14 +305,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian':
 		act 'Finger her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slip one finger in her already wet pussy and start sliding it in and out of her, causing her to moan in pleasure. After a couple of minutes of this you add a second finger as well.'
+			'You slip one finger in her already wet pussy and start thrusting it in and out of her, causing her to moan in pleasure. After a couple of minutes, you add a second finger as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go down on her': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_lesbian_cuni'
 			act 'Keep fingering her':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les4.jpg"></center>'
-				'She lays all the way back as you keep fingering her. You use one hand to kneed her breasts, before lowering your mouth to suck on her mipple. She moans and withers in pleasure as your fingers slide in and out of her and your mouth sucks on her nipple.'
+				'She lays all the way back as you keep fingering her. You use one hand to kneed her breasts, before lowering your mouth to suck on her nipple. She moans and withers in pleasure as your fingers slide in and out of her and you keep sucking on her nipple.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', -5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -325,30 +325,30 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian_cuni':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slide down the bed, as you finger your sister and crawl between her legs. You lower your mouth to her clit and start to suck and lick on it, as your fingers thrust in and out of her ever increasing twat, her moans getting steadily louder and louder.'
+	'You slide down the bed as you finger your sister and crawl between her legs. You lower your tongue to her clit and start to suck and lick on it as your fingers thrust in and out of her increasingly wet hole, her moans getting steadily louder and louder.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Have her return the favor':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les6.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stop licking and fingering her, she gives you a slightly confused look at first and then seems to realize why. You lay on your back and spread you legs, she rolls over and crawls up between your legs and then starts to lick and nuzzle at your pussy. For someone that keeps telling you she isn''t into girls, she really seems to know how to eat pussy as it feels amazing.'
+		'You stop licking and fingering her. She gives you a slightly confused look at first and then seems to realize why. You lay on your back and spread your legs as she rolls over, crawls up between your legs and then starts to lick and nuzzle at your pussy. For someone that keeps telling you she isn''t into girls, she really knows how to eat pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act '69':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les7.jpg"></center>'
-			'After several minutes of her eating you out, she apparently isn''t content with just that. While still licking your pussy she slowly spins her body around and climbs on top of you, until her pussy is directly above your face. You start licking her twat as the two of your sixty nine each other. Several minutes pass until she cries out and her whole body quivers as a orgasm shoots through her body, her juices flow out of her pussy, coating your face.'
+			'After several minutes of her eating you out, she apparently isn''t content with just that. While still licking your pussy, she slowly spins her body around and climbs on top of you until her pussy is directly above your face. You start licking her as the two of you enter a sixty-nine. Several minutes pass until she cries out and her whole body quivers as an orgasm shoots through her body. Her juices flow out of her pussy, coating your face.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'With her orgasming above you and your face getting covered in her juices you feel your own orgasm wrack your body, you cry out as the waves of pleasure rock your body, until it slowly fades.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'With her orgasming above you and your face getting covered in her juices, you feel your own orgasm wrack your body. You cry out as the waves of pleasure rock your body, until it slowly fades.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Aftermath':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once the orgasm passes she rolls off you and the two of you lay side by side panting and basking in the afterglow of sex, finally she gets up onto her knees, you do the same. You share a brief kiss and butt grab with her before she breaks away from you pushing you slightly away. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not to often." She says with a slight blush.'
-				'You grin at her. "What ever you say sis." Then she starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+				'Once the orgasm passes, she rolls off you and the two of you lay side by side, panting and basking in the afterglow of sex. Finally, she gets up onto her knees and you do the same. You share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you, pushing you slightly away. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not too often." she says with a slight blush.'
+				'You grin at her. "Whatever you say sis." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -363,11 +363,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 	npc_rel['A33'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap1.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisterQW['strapon'] = 0:
-		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try and remove her clothes she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" You ask her.'
-		'She smiles to you and you are not sure you like the way she is smiling. "Nothing I just wanted to do something different this time, something I have been wanting to actually try for a long time." With that she reaches over to her night stand drawer and opens it up. Spends a few moments fishing around for something as you watch her curiously. When she turns back she has a strapon harness with attached dildo in her hand.'
+		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try and remove her clothes she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
+		'She smiles at you and you are not sure you like the way she is smiling. "Nothing. I just wanted to do something different this time, something I have been wanting to actually try for a long time..." She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and opens it up. She spends a few moments fishing around for something as you watch her curiously. When she turns back, she has a strapon harness with attached dildo in her hand.'
 	else
-		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try and remove her clothes she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" You ask her.'
-		'She smiles to you with a naughty glint in her eye. "Nothing I just wanted to fuck you again." With that she reaches over to her night stand drawer and opens it up. You smile a bit, knowing she is grabbing her strapon again.'
+		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try and remove her clothes she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
+		'She smiles to you with a naughty glint in her eye. "Nothing. I just wanted to fuck you again." She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and opens it up. You smile, knowing she is grabbing her strapon.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -376,15 +376,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 		npc_rel['A33'] -= 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked, I just want to make love to you."'
-		'She frowns and drops the strapon back in the draw. "Well I don''t want to do that, I have told you before I am not into girls."'
-		'You put your hand on her hip. "Come on you know you love it."'
-		'She shoves your hand away. "No! I don''t want to do that and if you don''t want to do this, then we should just let it be." With that she lays down on her bed and gets out a book to read. Knowing you shouldn''t push it while she is in her mood right now, you back away.'
+		'She frowns and drops the strapon back in the drawer. "Well I don''t want to do that. I have told you before I am not into girls."'
+		'You put your hand on her hip. "Come on, you know you love it."'
+		'She shoves your hand away. "No! I don''t want to do that and if you don''t want to do this, then we should just let it be." She lays down on her bed and pulls a book out. Knowing you shouldn''t push it while she is in her mood right now, you back away.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 	end
 	act 'Help her put it on':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap2.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you don''t disagree she takes it as consent and starts slipping the harness on, you help her getting it into place and pulling all the straps nice and tight so it doesn''t move around. While she is on her knees with the dildo pointing at you, you take it in your hand and stroke it a bit, just testing if the harness is securely in place of course. She gives you a look of what are you waiting for. "Well start sucking my dick."'
+		'When you don''t disagree, she takes it as consent and starts slipping the harness on. You help her get it into place and pull all the straps nice and tight. While she is on her knees with the dildo pointing at you, you take it in your hand and stroke it a bit, testing if the harness is securely in place. She gives you a look. "Well? Start sucking my dick."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck her dick':
@@ -392,18 +392,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap3.jpg"></center>'
 			if sisterQW['strapon'] = 0:
 				sisterQW['strapon'] = 1
-				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base outwards, at the end, as you suck the head. It isn''t too big, a bit longer than a coke can and kinda thick maybe a bit above average size dick. Then Anya grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat, you start suffocating and wave your arms in panic. Then she pulls it out of your mouth, leaving your mouth and eyes watering.'
+				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base upwards and then suck the head. It isn''t too big, maybe a bit above average size. Anya then grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat, causing you to choke and thrash your arms in panic. She quickly pulls it out of you, ropes of your drool sticking to the shaft from your mouth as your eyes water.'
 				*nl
-				'"Bitch, What are you doing? I''m suffocating here, you could have killed me." You tell her angrily.'
-				'"Don''t be so dramatic little sister, I would never hurt you. You see, guys like this, your big sister is helping you train your mouth and throat, so you are use to giving boys blowjobs."'
-				'Without another word she shoves the strap-on dildo back in your mouth and teaches you the finer arts of how to suck a cock, not to mention what to expect from the boys.'
+				'You cough and splutter as you speak. "What...are you...doing? You could...have killed me!"'
+				'"Don''t be so dramatic <<$pcs_nickname>>! I would never hurt you. You see, guys like this. It''s called ''deepthroating.'' I''m just helping you train your mouth and throat so you know how to give boys proper blowjobs."'
+				'Without another word, she shoves the dildo back in your mouth and teaches you the finer arts of how to suck a cock, not to mention what to expect from the boys.'
 				*nl
 			else
-				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base outwards, at the end, as you suck the head. It isn''t too big, a bit longer than a coke can and kinda thick maybe a bit above average size dick. Then Anya grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat, this time you expected it and are a bit more ready for it. Still you feel your mouth watering like crazy and your eyes watering as she fucks your throat, as she teaches you the finer arts of how to suck a cock, not to mention what to expect from the boys.'
+				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base upwards and then suck the head. Anya then grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat. This time, you expect it and are a bit more ready for it, but you still you feel your mouth filling with drool and your eyes watering as she fucks your throat. She continues to teach you how to give blowjobs.'
 				*nl
 			end
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
-				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo for a bit she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you''re still a virgin. Mom will be happy, but luckily you have another hole I can use." She says as she pushes you down on the bed to lay on your side.'
+				'After she fucks your mouth for a bit, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you''re still a virgin. Mom will be happy, but luckily you have another hole I can use." she says as she pushes you down on the bed to lay on your side. She slides in behind you and starts rubbing the head of the dildo against your anus.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get butt fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_anal'
@@ -412,18 +412,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 					npc_rel['A33'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
 					'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt."'
-					'She frowns and backs away, pulling the strapon out of you. "Ok suit yourself but I''m not taking your virginity and I am tired of fucking your mouth." She starts taking the harness off, a bit disappointed you help her remove it. Once done she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
-					'With that all taken care of you share a brief kiss and butt grab with her before she breaks away from you pushing you slightly away. "Ok time for bed." Then she starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+					'She frowns and backs away from you. "OK suit yourself, but I''m not taking your virginity and I am tired of fucking your mouth." She starts taking the harness off and, feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
+					'With that all taken care of you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "OK, time for bed." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 					act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 				end
 			elseif sisterQW['knownotvirgin'] = 0:
 				sisterQW['knownotvirgin'] = 1
-				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo for a bit she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are no longer a virgin, mom won''t be happy." She says as she lays down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned from the boys."'
+				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are no longer a virgin. Mom won''t be happy." she says as she liess down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned, cowgirl."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_vaginal'
 			else
-				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo for a bit she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are already wet, good, that will make this more fun." She says as she ;lays down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned from the boys."'
+				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are already wet. Good, that will make this more fun." she says as she lies down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned, cowgirl."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_vaginal'
@@ -436,16 +436,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_vaginal':
 	*clr & cla
 	pcs_vag += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand over the top of her, with her body between your legs. You slowly lower yourself down until you feel the tip of the dildo pressing against your slit. You reach between your legs and line up the dildo and lower yourself until you feel it party you vaginal lips and start to slide inside of you, causing you to moan softly. You lower yourself down on your knees and start to slowly fuck the dildo, as you do your sister takes off her top. You take the whole thing into you, it''s sightly longer and thicker than average size fills you up completely with out hurting at all.'
+	'You straddle your sister and slowly lower yourself down until you feel the tip of the dildo pressing against your slit. You reach between your legs, line up the dildo and lower yourself until you feel it part your lips and start to slide inside of you, causing you to moan softly. You lower yourself down further and start to slowly fuck the dildo, your sister taking off her top as you do. You take the whole thing inside you. It''s sightly longer and thicker than average and fills you up completely.'
 	*nl
-	'As it feels better and better you start riding the dildo faster and faster. Just as it really starts to feel good your sister slaps your ass. "Get up and face the wall, I want to do the fucking now."'
+	'As it feels better and better, you start riding the dildo faster and faster. Just as it really starts to feel good, Anya slaps your ass. "Get up and face the wall. I want to be in control now."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Stand up':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap5.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stand up and face the wall. Anya gets up and stands behind you, she grabs the dildo and lines it up, rubbing the tip against your wet slit a couple of times before sliding it in. She quickly slides it balls deep into your hole, completely filling you up. She quickly starts fucking you hard and fast, her hips bouncing against your butt, causing you to place your hands on the wall to keep your balance as your pounds your little pussy. After a few mins she starts to pant obviously starting to wear herself out. She slaps your ass cheek again. "Lay down, so I can fuck that little ass of yours."'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'You spasm and have an intense orgasm with the dildo buried deep in your pussy, you almost can''t keep yourself standing as your legs threaten to give out.'
+		'You stand up on the bed and face the wall. Anya gets up and stands behind you. She grabs the dildo and lines it up, rubbing the tip against your wet slit a couple of times before sliding it in. She quickly thrusts it balls deep into your hole, completely filling you up. She quickly starts fucking you hard and fast, her hips bouncing against your ass, causing you to place your hands on the wall to keep your balance as she pounds your little pussy. After a few minutes, she starts to pant, obviously starting to wear herself out. She slaps your ass again. "Lay down, so I can fuck that little ass of yours."'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You spasm and have an intense orgasm with the dildo buried deep in your pussy. You almost can''t keep yourself upright as your legs threaten to give out.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -455,9 +455,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_vaginal':
 			npc_rel['A33'] -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt."'
-			'She frowns and backs away, pulling the strapon out of you. "Ok suit yourself but I am to tired to do anymore." She starts taking the harness off, a bit disappointed you help her remove it. Once done she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
-			'With that all taken care of you share a brief kiss and butt grab with her before she breaks away from you pushing you slightly away. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not to often." She says with a slight blush.'
-			'You grin at her. "What ever you say sis." Then she starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+			'She frowns and backs away, pulling the strapon out of you. "OK suit yourself, but I am to tired to do anymore." She starts taking the harness off and, feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
+			'With that all taken care of you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not too often." she says with a slight blush.'
+			'You grin at her. "Whatever you say sis." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 			act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 		end
 	end
@@ -466,13 +466,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You do as she says and lay down on your side, Anya goes to her dresser and pulls out a small bottle of lube and then starts lubing the strapon up.'
-	'She lays down behind you and uses her fingers and hand to line the dildo up with your ass. Once she has it in place she pushes her hips forward, you can feel the pressure building up before the head of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass.'
+	'You do as she says and lie down on your side, Anya goes to her dresser, pulls out a small bottle of lube and generously applies it to the strap-on. She then rubs some on your anus.'
+	'She lays down behind you and lines the dildo up with your ass. Once she has it in place, she pushes forwards. You can feel the pressure building up before the head of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass.'
 	*nl
 	if pcs_ass = 0:
-		'Your first impression is unbearable pain, you want to get away, to jump, but her hands on your hips hold you in place and pull you further back, as she thrust her hips forward, impaling your ass on the dildo. You gradually stop resisting as it starts to feel nice, really nice. Once you stop resisting she lets go of your hip and lifts your leg up, with her hand.'
+		'Your first impression is unbearable pain. You want to get away, but her hands on your hips hold you in place and pull you further back as she thrusts her hips forward and the dildo goes deep into your ass. You gradually stop resisting as it starts to feel great, really great. Once you stop resisting, she lets go of your hip and lifts your leg up with her hand.'
 	else
-		'It hurts a little at first but then quickly it gives way to pleasure, as you start to moan she starts stroking the dildo deeper into your ass. Reading your actions well, she finds the right rhythm and depth that feels the best and starts butt fucking you to ecstasy.'
+		'It hurts a little at first, but the pain quickly gives way to pleasure. As you start to moan, she starts thrusting the dildo deeper into your ass. Reading your actions well, she finds the right rhythm and depth and starts butt fucking you to ecstasy.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_anal':
 		pcs_ass += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap7.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Anya lifting your leg as she thrusts the dildo deep into your ass, you start roughly rubbing your clit.'
-		'"aaa... yeah... mmmhmmm.... fuck me.... good.... yeah.... fuck me...." you cry out, as it starts to feel really good.'
+		'"Aaahh... Yeah... Mmmhmmm.... Fuck me... Yeah, fuck me good!" you cry out as it starts to feel really good.'
 		$orgasm_txt = 'You spasm and have an intense orgasm with the dildo in your ass and as you recover, Anya moves from under you to stand in front of you, the strap-on held to your lips.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
@@ -489,8 +489,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_anal':
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Finally she stops fucking your butt and rolls onto her back, causing the dildo to pop out of your ass. She is sweating slightly and panting obviously spent from fucking you. The two of you lay side by side panting and basking in the afterglow of sex, finally she gets up onto her knees, you do the same. She takes off the harness and you help her, once it is off, you share a brief kiss and butt grab with her before she breaks away from you pushing you slightly away. "Well that was a lot of fun, little sis. I think we are going to have to do that again sometime." She says with a slight blush.'
-			'You grin at her. "I enjoyed it as well." Then she starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+			'Finally, she stops fucking you and rolls onto her back, causing the dildo to pop out of your ass. She is sweating slightly and panting, obviously spent from fucking you. The two of you lay side by side panting and basking in the afterglow of sex. She eventually gets up onto her knees and you do the same. You help her take off the harness. Once it is off, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "Well that was a lot of fun, little sis. I think we are going to have to do that again sometime." she says with a slight blush.'
+			'You grin at her. "I enjoyed it as well." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/start.qsrc

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 $fname = 'Tahoma'
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-$version = '0.8 The family update (part 1).'
+$version = '0.8.1 The key people left and we had to wing it one.'
 
 opPRE = 1
 

locations/succubus.qsrc

@@ -735,17 +735,17 @@ if $args[0] = 'sucwalkinggo':
 !!This picks the location where you end up and how you got there
 	if succublvl >= 4 and car > 0 and wrek ! 1:
 		if benz <= 4:
-			if money < (30 * (40 - benz)):
+			if money < (30 * (50 - benz)):
 				if kanistra > 0:
 					benz += 5 & kanistra -= 1
 				else
 					money = 0
 					scwalkmon = 0
-					benz += rand(10,40)
+					benz += rand(10,50)
 				end
 			else
-				money -= (30 * (40 - benz))
-				benz = 40
+				money -= (30 * (50 - benz))
+				benz = 50
 			end
 		end
 		sctemp = rand(1,11)

locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -289,13 +289,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swamp_escape':
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/igorhanter.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/handshelp.jpg"></center>' & !! instead igorhanter.jpg
 			'As you start moving into the swamp Igor calls after you.'
 
 			!TODO: Different line depending on opinion and slut
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, where are you going? You will get stuck in there!'
 
-			act 'Turn back':gt 'swamp_yard'
+			act 'Turn back':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
 			act 'Ignore him and keep going':
 				minut += 5
 

locations/swamphouse.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # swamphouse
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	*clr & cla
 	$location_type = 'indoors'
 	$loc = 'swamphouse'

locations/version.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,42 @@
 # version
 
 act 'Return': gt 'start'
+'0.8.1'
+'- Reminder for work at salon in stat window from hornguy6'
+'- Rework of the runner race structure from THX'
+'- Shower dildos! And new virginity lose to them with reactions thanks to hornguy6'
+'- add new events according to the THX''s storyline from rachels'
+'- new masseuse content and reorganization of the salon at the St. Petersburg mall by hornguy6'
+'- Some new surprises if you sleep on the park bench and small changes to existing event from Darcanlos'
+'- In game variable debugger from Philo'
+'- Phone can now receive SMS messages not that there are any yet thanks to Philo'
+'- Code optimizations by Philo'
+'- Computer available in cottage and more mod friendly thanks to netuttki'
+'- Buttons for new shops from Gwen'
+'- Added new shop for slutty swimwear removing it from the sports store by KS'
+'- Added new shop for lingerie, moved the boutique underwear to it by KS'
+'- Music Life by netuttki added to main game and various fixes/updates by them.'
+'- A bit more to the Niko story line plus fixes by Violet Kitten'
+'- Rework of gloryhole in women''s bathroom of the community centre by Iron Jack'
+'- Bella and Albina swapped cliques to more accurate ones thanks to Violet Kitten'
+'- File renaming to use English and more logical names to some hubs and common locations by netuttki and KS'
+'- Journal update for nerd game night and social changes from philo'
+'- Changes to women''s restroom in comunity centre and inner thought default style set by Iron Jack'
+'- Rework of the Kendra scenes by nutluck with code from Violet Kitten'
+'- Reworked Africans in uni dorm scenes by nutluck with code from Violet Kitten'
+'- Anushka photo modelling scenes from nutluck'
+'- Clique warnings added for when you are getting close to dropping out of them by nutluck'
+'- pav_slut scale adjusted so all nicknames and related checks require double the points'
+'- Clique system range extended and more subtly added by nutluck and Violet Kitten'
+'- Appearance code rebalanced by KS, Violet Kitten, nutluck and philo'
+'- Starting appearances and weights for school girl starts redone by nutluck, Violet Kitten and philo'
+'- Some new clothing items from hornguy6'
+'- New clothing items from Snegurochka with data by Gwen and formatted by KS'
+'- New clothing items from Gwen formatted by KS'
+'- Many changes and additions to photo studio including new fitness shoots from hornguy6'
+'- Text edits from Vengeance11, hornguy6, philo and Iron Jack'
+'- Bug fixes by hornguy6, Kevin Smarts, hornguy6, nutluck, sicaa, Vengeance11, pfffbft, Violet Kitten and rachels'
+
 
 '0.8'
 '- Niko story rewrites and added material from Violet Kitten'

locations/zaprF.qsrc

@@ -51,42 +51,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	act 'Go to the toilet':gt 'zaprF', 'toilet'
 
-	if car > 0 and cardrive = 6 or cardrive = 21:
-		'Your <a href="exec: gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked here.'
-		act 'Buy a canister able to contain up to 5 liters of gasoline for 150 <b>₽</b>':
-			cla
-			kanistra += 1
-			money -= 150
-			'You bought a canister of gasoline. (It was automatically put in the trunk)'
-
-			act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
-		end
-	end
+	if car > 0:
+		if cardrive = 6 or cardrive = 21: 'Your <a href="exec: gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked here.'
+	
+		if kanistra < 5:
+			act 'Buy a canister and fill it with 5 liters of gasoline for 150 <b>₽</b>':
+				cla
+				kanistra += 1
+				money -= 150
+				'You bought a canister of gasoline. (It will automatically be put in the trunk of your car)'
 
-	zprbenz = 40 - benz
+				act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
+			end
+		end
 
-	if benz < 40 and car > 0 and cardrive = 6 or benz < 40 and car > 0 and cardrive = 21:
-		zprbenz = 40 - benz
+		if benz < 50 and (cardrive = 6 or cardrive = 21):
+			zprbenz = 50 - benz
 
-		if zprbenz * 30 <= money:
-			act 'Fill the tank with petrol':
-				cla
-				*clr
-				benz = 40
-				zprpay = zprbenz * 30
-				money -= zprpay
+			if zprbenz * 30 <= money:
+				act 'Fill the tank with petrol':
+					cla
+					*clr
+					benz = 50
+					zprpay = zprbenz * 30
+					money -= zprpay
 
-				! WD: Uninitialised ~ 'pol'
-				! if pol > 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/gas/zapr1.jpg"></center>'
+					! WD: Uninitialised ~ 'pol'
+					! if pol > 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/gas/zapr1.jpg"></center>'
 
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/gas/zapr1.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/gas/zapr1.jpg"></center>'
 
-				'You filled the tank and paid <<zprpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
+					'You filled the tank and paid <<zprpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
-				act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
+					act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
+				end
+			else
+				'You do not have enough money to refuel your car.'
 			end
-		else
-			'You do not have enough money to refuel.'
 		end
 	end
 end