Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into ml-dev

locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -322,6 +322,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 		count['vaginal_dildo'] = 1
 		stim['mag'] += 1
 		!! the same as for 'vaginal'
+		if pcs_vag < temp_dick:pcs_vag += 1
+		if pcs_vag*2 < temp_dick:pcs_vag += 1
 		vgrdif = grange - pcs_vag
 		vltdif = temp_dick - pcs_vag
 		vltdif = vltdif / (temp_silavag+1)

locations/gdkin.qsrc

@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 		if rand(1,3) = 2 and soniaPS < 1 and soniadisco_day ! daystart:
 			if npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5 and StoryLine = 1 and BeInSchool > 0 and soniaslut >= 5 and hour < 23:
-				'You notice Sonia from your class. She is talking to Victor about something.'
-				act 'View Sonya': soniadisco_day = daystart & gt 'soniadisco', 'start'
+				'You notice Sonia talking to Vitek about something.'
+				act 'Watch Sonia': soniadisco_day = daystart & gt 'soniadisco', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				pcs_mood -= 40
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'As you head out on the dance floor, A guy walks up to you and sees the cum still splattered on you. The guy points to you "Check out the cock-sucker! Hey guys, this chick has cum smeared all over her face." The ones standing near him come closer. "Did you forget to swallow, slut?" Your cheeks blush with shame and you quickly head for the exit.'
+				'As you head out on the dance floor, a guy walks up to you, notices the cum still splattered on you and points at you. "Check out this cocksucker! Hey guys, this chick has cum smeared all over her face!" The ones standing near him come closer. "Did you forget to swallow, slut?" Your cheeks blush with shame and you quickly head for the exit.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 			else
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 
 				if alko >= 6:
-					'You''re too drunk to try and dance, you are barely able to stay on your feet and mostly just drunkenly bump into other people as you try and dance.'
+					'You''re too drunk to try and dance. You are barely able to stay on your feet and are mostly just drunkenly bumping into other people as you try and dance.'
 					if rand(0,1) = 0: gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
 				elseif alko > 3:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re drunk, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways. You''re not even paying attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
 				elseif alko > 0:
 					if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						*clr
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways, you''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
+						'You''re a bit tipsy, but you''re having a lot of fun out on the dance floor anyways. You''re not paying much attention to anyone else or even the music.'
 					end
 				else
 					'The music is quite old, but catchy. You have fun dancing, not paying attention to anyone.'
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				pcs_mood -= 40
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'While standing by the wall a guy notices cum on your clothes and he points and shouts. "This chick is covered in cum, wait did you fail to swallow slut?" He says to you laughing. Your cheeks blush with shame and you head for the exit.'
+				'While standing by the wall, a guy notices cum on your clothes and he points and shouts. "This chick is covered in cum! Did you forget to swallow slut?" he says mockingly while laughing. Your cheeks blush with shame and you head for the exit.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 
@@ -161,12 +161,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if alko >= 6 and rand(1, 100) < 3:	gt 'gevent', '6'
 
 			if alko >= 6:
-				'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to keep from falling down.'
+				'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to stop yourself from falling.'
 				if rand(0,1) = 0: gt 'gdkin', 'too_drunk_dance'
 			elseif alko > 3:
-				'You''re drunk, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
+				'You''re drunk and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
 			elseif alko > 0:
-				'You''re tipsy, and standing against the wall watching the others dance.'
+				'You''re tipsy and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
 			else
 				'You are standing next to the wall while watching the others dance.'
 			end
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0: act 'Look for your classmates': gt 'gdkin', 'classmates'
 	elseif hour < 20:
-		'The Club closes. The main lights go on, the music fades and everyone beings to leave.'
+		'The club closes. The main lights go on, the music fades and everyone begins to leave.'
 		act 'Go outside': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 	end
 end
@@ -217,12 +217,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_2.jpg"></center>'
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-		'You dance with Katja attracting views of men from across the room. And when you consider that you not wearing panties, and your occasional spiraling of your skirt shows that fact off, it helps explain the attention.'
+		'You dance with Katja, attracting views of guys from across the room. When you remember that you aren''t wearing panties, and your occasional spiraling of your skirt shows that fact off, it helps explain the attention.'
 	else
 		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You dance with Katja attracting views of men from across the room.'
+		'You dance with Katja, attracting views of guys from across the room.'
 	end
 	act 'Expose Katja':
 		KatjaHorny += 20
@@ -231,19 +231,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance2_2.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'During the dance you have decided to fool around and embraced Katja, pulling aside her top a bit to show off a nipple. Which causes an approving roar from all around and an embarrassed squeak from Katja.'
+			'During the dance, you decide to fool around and embrace Katja, pulling her top aside a little to show off a nipple. This results in an approving roar from the crowd and an embarrassed squeak from Katja.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Dance on':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance2_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'One of the guys dancing moved in closer to the two of you, unable to stand watching the two of you dancing and touching each other like that, he slides his hand under her skirt.'
+				'One of the guys dancing moves in closer. Unable to stand watching the two of you dancing and touching each other like that, he slides his hand under her skirt.'
 				act 'Stick out tongue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Rebuffing the guy you and Katja pushed him away and turned to the crowd of guys around you. Katja hugs you and sticks out her tongue at the guys. The rebuffed guys looks around and thinks better of it and gets lost among the other dancers.'
+					'Rebuffing the guy, you and Katja push him away and turn to the crowd of guys around you. Katja hugs you and sticks her tongue out at the guys. The rebuffed guy looks around and thinks better of it, getting lost among the other dancers.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Move on': gt 'gdkin'
@@ -253,28 +253,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance3.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'Dancing with Katja you can''t control yourself, you pull Katja close to you, putting your hands on her boobs and burying your face in her cleavage. Katja moans slightly at your actions, while the boys gathered around shout encouragements to the two of you.'
+			'Dancing with Katja, you can''t control yourself. You pull her close to you, put your hands on her boobs and bury your face in her cleavage. Katja moans slightly at your actions while the boys gather around and shout encouragements.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 3:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance4.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'Dancing with Katya and moving quite actively, you do not notice how your breasts fell out from your clothes, exposing your nipples. But the guys sure noticed that where around you.'
+			'Dancing with Katya and moving quite actively, you don''t notice your breasts fall out, exposing your nipples. However, the guys do and happily point it out to each other.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 4:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance5.jpg"></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'During the dance you turn to face Katja, the two of you dance close together, faces near each other. You lean in and give her a passionate kiss, you can hear the cheering of the guys. You barely notice the guys, more of a faint background noise, as you lose yourself in the moment.'
+			'During the dance, you turn to face Katja and you both dance close together. You lean in and give her a passionate kiss, hearing the cheering of the guys. You barely pay attention to them as you lose yourself in the moment.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif dancerand = 5:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance6.mp4"></video></center>'
 			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-			'You dance with Katya paying little attention to what is happening around you, when one of the guys around you reaches out and pulls down your top, baring your breasts for everyone to see. Without ceasing to dance you pull your top back up, to the disgruntled cries of the guys around you.'
+			'You dance with Katya, paying little attention to what is happening around you, when one of the guys around you reaches out and pulls down your top, exposing your breasts for everyone to see. Continuing to dance without interruption, you pull your top back up to the disgruntled cries of the guys around you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja_dance':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Looking at the crowd of guys around you, you hug Katja and stick out your tongue at them, letting them know they can look at you all they like but that''s all they''re going to get.'
+			'Looking at the crowd of guys around you, you hug Katja and stick out your tongue at them, letting them know they can look at you all they want, but that''s all they''re going to get.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Move on': gt 'gdkin'
@@ -297,24 +297,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kotov_love':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A9'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A9'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Vitek walks up to you and the guy. "What is this garbage? Who''s this guy?" Vitek shoves the guy and angrily says "Well who the fuck are you? This is my girl, you want me to bust you up?"'
+	'Vitek walks up to you and the guy. "What''s this? Who''s this guy?" Vitek shoves the guy and angrily says "Well? Who the fuck are you? This is my girl, you want me to bust you up?"'
 
 	if DPgrup = 1:
 		fightboyrand = rand(0, 10)
 
 		if fightboyrand <= 5:
-			'The frightened man begins to speak. "Come on, I didn''t know, I''m leaving." Vitek pushes the guy. "Get out of here and don''t come back."'
+			'The frightened man begins to speak. "Come on, I didn''t know. I''m leaving." Vitek pushes the guy. "Get out of here and don''t come back."'
 		elseif fightboyrand > 5 and fightboyrand < 10:
 			'The guy shoves Vitek back. "Get your hands off me asshole!" Vitek suddenly kicks the guy with a fast and powerful blow.'
-			'The guy falls to the floor in pain, Vitek steps over and looms over the guy, grabbing him by this shirt he yanks him off the floor and slams him into the wall.'
-			'"Well, motherfucker? You think you can take what''s mine? How about I take what''s yours." The guy curled up in pain and frighteningly replies. "You can have anything, anything I got!"'
+			'The guy falls to the floor in pain and Vitek steps over him. Grabbing him by his shirt, he yanks him off the floor and slams him into the wall.'
+			'"Well motherfucker? You think you can take what''s mine? How about I take what''s yours?" The guy curls up in pain and frighteningly replies. "You can have anything, anything I got!"'
 		elseif fightboyrand >= 10:
-			'The guy punches Vitek in the face, Vitek recoils from the hit and lands a powerful kick of his own. Then they start fighting, fists and kicks landing from both sides. Finally a very powerful hit by Vitek, sends the guy flying into the wall, where he slumps to the floor. Vitek runs to him and starts punching him in the face. The guy stops resisting, apparently he lost consciousness.'
+			'The guy punches Vitek in the face. Vitek recoils from the hit and lands a powerful kick of his own. They then start fighting, fists and kicks landing from both sides. Finally, a very powerful hit by Vitek sends the guy flying into the wall, where he slumps to the floor. Vitek runs to him and starts punching him in the face. The guy stops resisting, apparently having lost consciousness.'
 		end
 	elseif DPgrup = 2:
-		'The guy with a look calls over his friends, who all come over to crowd around Vitek. "Real tough guy huh?" Vitek''s friends come over to back him up, after a bit of tough talk and a bit of shoving the two groups break apart peacefully, going their own ways.'
+		'The guy has a smug look on his face as he calls over his friends, who all come over to crowd around Vitek. "Real tough guy huh?" Vitek''s friends come over to back him up. After a bit of tough talk and a bit of shoving, the two groups break apart peacefully, going their own ways.'
 	elseif DPgrup = 3:
-		'The guy throws up his hands "Sorry young man, I didn''t know she was with you." Vitek pushes the guy. "Go back to the city and stay there."'
+		'The guy throws up his hands. "Sorry young man, I didn''t know she was with you." Vitek pushes the guy. "Go back to the city and stay there."'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go to Vitek':numnpc = 9 & gt 'Snpc'
@@ -367,11 +367,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You accepted the offer, the guy took you by the hand and brought you out onto the dance floor, where you started dancing together.'
+	'You accept the offer and the guy takes you by the hand and leads you out onto the dance floor, where you start dancing together.'
 
 	if DPgrup = 1:
 		if DPtipe = 1:
-			'The guy is dancing with you holding your waist with his hands.'
+			'The guy is dancing with you, holding your waist with his hands.'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reverse_reakt_dance'
 		elseif DPtipe = 2:
 			*clr
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			*clr
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance8.jpg"></center>'
-			'A guy grabs your ass and squeezes it, he pulls you into a hug and kisses you passionately.'
+			'The guy grabs your ass and squeezes it before he pulls you into a hug and kisses you passionately.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reakt_dance'
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reverse_reakt_dance'
 		elseif DPtipe = 2:
-			'A tipsy man hugs your around your waist and his hands go down to grab your ass.'
+			'A tipsy man hugs you around your waist and his hands go down to grab your ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'gdkin', 'reakt_dance'
@@ -444,27 +444,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 			$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'The guy told you during the dance "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." Once the song ends, the guy asks you to sit with him and chat.'
+				'"My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer. Once the song ends, the guy asks you to sit with him and chat.'
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
-				'The guy told you during the dance "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." During the whole dance the drunk guy humped your body and now his face flushed with excitement. He asks you to leave the club and go get some fresh air, socialize, outside.'
+				'"My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer. During the dance, the drunk guy humped your body and now his face is flushed with excitement. He asks you to leave the club and go get some fresh air outside.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Go with the guy': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'nice'
 		elseif DPgrup = 2:
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'For the entire dance the guy was grabbing your ass, breasts and kissing you, he was clearly excited. When you would press up against him, you could feel something hard in his pants. Finally the song ended and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
+				'For the entire dance, the guy grabs your ass, breasts and kisses you. He is clearly excited. When you press up against him, you can feel something hard in his pants. The song finally ends and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go outside': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'aggressiv'
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
-				'For the entire dance the guy was grabbing your ass, breasts and kissing you, he was clearly excited. When you would press up against him, you could feel something hard in his pants. Finally the song ended and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
+				'For the entire dance, the guy grabs your ass, breasts and kisses you. He is clearly excited. When you press up against him, you can feel something hard in his pants. The song finally ends and the guy offers to take you outside for a drink.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go outside': gt 'gdksex', 'outside', 'aggressiv'
 			end
 		elseif DPgrup = 3:
 			if DPtipe = 1:
-				'The man danced with confidence and elegance, finally the song was over and the man offers to go out for some fresh air and talk.'
+				'The man dances with confidence and elegance. When the song ends, he offers to go out for some fresh air and talk.'
 
 				act 'Go with the man':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/dk_night.jpg"></center>'
 					$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 					$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
-					'You went outside with the man. As you walked he put his arm around your waist. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continued, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m in town on a business trip. I am staying at a nearby hotel, I live in the city itself. There is virtually nothing to do in this town you know. Come back to my hotel with me and we can drink whiskey, while we sit and have a nice chat."'
+					'You go outside with the man. As you walk, he put his arm around your waist. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." you answer and the man continues. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m in town on a business trip and I''m staying at a nearby hotel. There is virtually nothing to do in this town you know. Come back to my hotel with me and we can drink some whiskey while we sit and have a nice chat."'
 
 					if alko < 6 or pcs_horny <= 75 or pav_slut <= 50:
 						gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			elseif DPtipe = 2:
 				$npc_usedname[$npclastcalled] = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
 				$boydesc = $npc_nickname[$npclastcalled]
-				'For the entire dance the drunk man molested you, when the dance ended. He whispered in your ear. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answered "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continued, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m not a local, I''m staying in a nearby hotel, let''s take a taxi and go to my room."'
+				'The drunk man molests you for the entire dance. When the dance ends, he whispers in your ear. "My name is <<$boydesc>>. What''s your name?" You answer feeling somewhat disgusted. "<<$pcs_nickname>>." The man continues. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m not a local. I''m staying in a nearby hotel, so let''s take a taxi and go to my room."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go to the hotel': gt 'gdksex', 'hotel'
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 			else
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are taking advantage of your ability to dance, sexy moves cause your partner to stare at you. But he seems stunned by how great you look or maybe by how well you move, either way he suddenly moves away and disappears into the crowd.'
+				'You are taking advantage of your ability to dance, your sexy moves causing your partner to stare at you. He seems stunned by how great you look, or maybe by how well you move, but either way he suddenly moves away and disappears into the crowd.'
 			end
 			danc_exp += 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
@@ -540,12 +540,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			if DrunkDPTrand < 70:
 				DPtipe = 1
 				DPgrup = 1
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A guy dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt.'
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 70:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 1
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk guy dressed in jeans and a T-shirt.'
 			end
 		elseif DaPaTipeRand >= 70 and DaPaTipeRand < 90:
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 50:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 2
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and a sweatshirt, puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and a sweatshirt puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk guy dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts.'
 			end
 		elseif DaPaTipeRand >= 90:
@@ -572,12 +572,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_partner':
 			if DrunkDPTrand < 90:
 				DPtipe = 1
 				DPgrup = 3
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A man in a nice suit and expensive shoes, asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A man in a nice suit and expensive shoes asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a man in a nice suit and expensive shoes.'
 			elseif DrunkDPTrand >= 90:
 				DPtipe = 2
 				DPgrup = 3
-				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes, puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
+				$din_disc_dance = 'A drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes puts his arms around your waist and asks you to dance.'
 				$din_disc_dance2 = 'Dancing next to you is a drunk man in a nice suit and expensive shoes.'
 			end
 		end
@@ -600,19 +600,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'familiar':
 		rudeboy = 1
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/normal3.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in jeans and T-shirt, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in jeans and a T-shirt invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	elseif bmTip[Tboynum] = 1:
 		$niknameboy = 'Gopnik'
 		rudeboy = 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/gopnik3.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in sweatpants and sweatshirts invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	elseif bmTip[Tboynum] = 2:
 		$niknameboy = 'Man'
 		rudeboy = 0
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/suit4.jpg"></center>'
-		'A man dressed in a nice suit and expensive shoes, invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him but he seems familiar.'
+		'A man dressed in a nice suit and expensive shoes invites you to dance. You don''t recognize him, but he seems familiar.'
 	end
 
 	gs 'BMloc'
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'too_drunk_dance':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance_alco1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Katja Meynold approached you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? Let''s get you home, I''ll help you."'
+		'Katja approachs you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? Let''s get you home, I''ll help you."'
 
 		act 'Go with Katja':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -638,10 +638,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'too_drunk_dance':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			if home_owned[2] = 1:
-				'Katja took you by the arm and helped you get home.'
+				'Katja takes you by the arm and helps you get home.'
 				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 			else
-				'Katja took you by the hand and helped you get back to the apartment complex'
+				'Katja takes you by the hand and helps you get back to the apartment complex.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'classmates':
 	
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 
-	'<center>Most the cool kids are dancing, while the gopniks are standing in the corner of the room, keeping to themselves.</center>'
+	'<center>Most the cool kids are dancing while the gopniks are standing in the corner of the room, keeping to themselves.</center>'
 	if hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and week=5: '<center>At the entrance of the disco hall stands <a href="exec: gt ''VolleyTrenerSpeak''">Coach Mikhail Nikolayevich</a></center>'
 	'</table><center>'
 end

locations/gdktoilet.qsrc

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watercooler':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community Center - Restrooms</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/waterfountain.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/bathroom_entrance.jpg"></center>'
 	
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gdktoilet', 'start'
 	act 'Take a drink':

locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -1170,7 +1170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 						'Nobody is finding the gesture funny and more than one person is actually murmuring their disapproval at the "obvious derision" of this "jerk" against you. Taking advantage of the distraction, Katja helps you to your feet and fixes your clothes before leaving the lake, but you wait for Vanya and after a few minutes, the smiling jock meets with you.'
 						'"So girls. It worked?"'
 						'"Yeah... I think that now that everybody, including us, thinks that you are an idiot, they will forget my... performance."'
-						'Vanya smiles and raises his right hand in a high five motion. After a few minutes when neither Katja or you react, he shrugs and leaves you to your own devices. It is time to look for something else to do.'
+						'Vanya smiles and raises his right hand in a high five motion. After a few minutes when neither Katja nor you react, he shrugs and leaves you to your own devices. It is time to look for something else to do.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
@@ -1663,25 +1663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan9':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KL9.jpg"></center>'
 
-			if IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250:
-				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
-				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
-				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
-				'Ivan sits between the two of you and begins to talk, mostly about his dream to be at the boxing nationals. This isn''t a particularly interesting subject for Katja, but even she seems taken by the jock''s driven dedication. That and his defined abs... Cough... who wouldn''t be?'
-				'Katja slowly opens up to the conversation and soon the three of you are talking in a mismatched dialogue mixing sports, cosmetics and strangely, who is the girl with the best ass in school (You of course!). The time passes and the conversation ends with a relaxed silence as you observe the landscape.'
-				'"Ok girls, this has been fun, but I must return to my training."'
-				'Ivan gives you both a little kiss on the cheek and then walks towards the lake, letting the two of you appreciate the jock''s nice butt... Sigh...'
-
-				act 'Redress and look for something else to do': gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 20 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-
-				act 'Swim':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan5'
-
-				act 'Tan':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan6'
-
-				act 'Walk':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan7'
-
-
-			elseif IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250 and Katjaslut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+			if IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250 and Katjaslut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
 				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
 				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
 				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
@@ -1937,6 +1919,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan9':
 						end
 					end
 				end
+			elseif IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut < 250:
+				'"Hey Ivan! Why not sit with Katja and me for a while?"'
+				'For a moment, he looks to the lake and seems at the brink of saying "no", but then shrugs and walks towards you.'
+				'"Yeah, why not? I have swam enough for a while"'
+				'Ivan sits between the two of you and begins to talk, mostly about his dream to be at the boxing nationals. This isn''t a particularly interesting subject for Katja, but even she seems taken by the jock''s driven dedication. That and his defined abs... Cough... who wouldn''t be?'
+				'Katja slowly opens up to the conversation and soon the three of you are talking in a mismatched dialogue mixing sports, cosmetics and strangely, who is the girl with the best ass in school (You of course!). The time passes and the conversation ends with a relaxed silence as you observe the landscape.'
+				'"Ok girls, this has been fun, but I must return to my training."'
+				'Ivan gives you both a little kiss on the cheek and then walks towards the lake, letting the two of you appreciate the jock''s nice butt... Sigh...'
+
+				act 'Redress and look for something else to do': gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 20 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+
+				act 'Swim':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan5'
+
+				act 'Tan':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan6'
+
+				act 'Walk':minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan7'
+
+
 			else
 				'Talking with Ivan, King of the Lone Wolves, is an uphill battle. He is evidently not interested in the sort of things Katja likes to talk about and would probably prefer to jump back into his swimming. Alas, Ivan is too polite to just tell you to fuck off, and that is a weakness you and Katja can exploit.'
 				'After some pestering, Ivan finally resigns to sit with you and pass time in "civilized" conversation. The minutes pass, with him primarily listening to your endless rants, but after a while, between Katja''s shyness and Ivan''s apathy, silence falls over the three of you, leaving your little trio observing the lake in tranquillity.'
@@ -1980,31 +1980,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KS8.jpg"></center>'
 
-		if KatjaSlut >= 20:
-			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you or Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
-			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
-			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, making the time pass quickly.'
-			'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>. I think that this is enough."'
-			'Blinking surprised, you look the time. Yes, half an hour has passed, more than enough for your skin treatment.'
-
-			if month >= 12 and month < 3:
-				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
-				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-
-					act 'Ice dipping!':
-						*clr & cla
-						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'					
-						gs 'stat'
-						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
-					end
-				else
-					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-				end
-
-				act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-
-		elseif KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and  katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
-			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you or Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
+		if KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20 and  katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you nor Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
 			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
 			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, but as the time pass, you observe some details on the redhead. She seems unable to sit still, bites her lips and gives you longing gazes. It''s undeniable that she is horny, so... what to do? Have some semi-public hot and steamy sex or let the ginger cook in her own sauce until you reach a better place?'
 
@@ -2030,7 +2007,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force', 'easy'
 						gs 'stat'
 						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
-						end
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -2039,7 +2015,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan10':
 
 			act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 
-		elseif KatjaSlut <= 20:
+		elseif KatjaSlut >= 20:
+			'After undressing in the lockers, and waiting for your turn, Katja and you enter the sauna. You sit completely naked, neither you nor Katja being ashamed to show your beautiful bodies and letting the hot and humid air smooth your precious skins.'
+			'"Oh yes <<$pcs_nickname>> this hits the spot!"'
+			'Ahhh yes! Letting your problems melt away, you and Katja relax in the sauna, talking about your problems and do some rumourmongering, making the time pass quickly.'
+			'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>. I think that this is enough."'
+			'Blinking surprised, you look the time. Yes, half an hour has passed, more than enough for your skin treatment.'
+
+			if month >= 12 and month < 3:
+				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+
+					act 'Ice dipping!':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'					
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt 'katjaEv','kathan11'
+					end
+				else
+					act 'Ice dipping! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				end
+			end
+			act 'Shower, redress and go':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gs 'underwear', 'wear' & minut += 10 & minut += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+
+		else
 			'You both change in the lockers, but before Katja can put on her bikini, you grab it.'
 			'"Hey! What are you doing? This isn''t fun"'
 			'Smiling, you look at her, ogling the petite doll-like ginger that is desperately trying to cover her body.'
@@ -2350,12 +2349,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS3.jpg"></center>'
 		if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
 			'As you enter a second-hand shop, you can see your little slave, Natasha, happily looking over the shop''s discount selection. On the floor is a bag with some clothing inside. Well, at least she is using YOUR money to stay pretty for HER mistress.'
-			'Neither Katja or Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
+			'Neither Katja nor Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Look at that rack!"'
 			'Katja grabs your arm and pulls you away from the nerd. Maybe you should go and talk with her?'
 		else
 			'As you enter a second-hand shop, you can see Natasha, looking over the shop''s discount selection. She is biting her lips and seems somewhat uneasy. Maybe she doesn''t have the money to buy even that?'
-			'Neither Katja or Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
+			'Neither Katja nor Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Look at that rack!"'
 			'Katja grabs your arm and pulls you away from the nerd. Maybe you should go and talk with her?'
 
@@ -2424,23 +2423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS5.jpg"></center>'
 
-					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
-						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
-						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
-						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
-						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
-						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-						end
-					elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
 						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
@@ -2468,6 +2451,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
 							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 						end
+					elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
+						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
+						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
+						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
+						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
+						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
+
+						if hour >= 20:
+							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+						else
+							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+						end
 					else
 						'Walking without care to the nerd, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the girl can react, you push Natasha against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -660,6 +660,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'referral':
 		GspravkaTimes += 1
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to go to the clinic. We need a written referral from the gynaecologist for school."'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
+	elseif GspravkaT = 0 and GspravkaTimes < 3 and GspravkaTalked ! daystart and motherKnowDildo = 1:
+		GspravkaTalked = daystart
+		GspravkaTimes += 1
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to go to the clinic. I really doubt that you are still a virgin, but we need a written referral from the gynaecologist for school anyway."'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
 	elseif dildo_gyno_fail = 1:
 		gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_gyno_fail'
 	elseif dildo_gyno_pass = 1:

locations/pav_commcenter.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ end
 if month > 8 and ml_guitarlesson['advertisement']  = 0: gt 'music_guitarlesson', 'advertisement'
 
 if hour >= 20 and hour <= 23 and week >= 5 and week < 7:
-	'The entrance to the Community Centre is full of young people, the guys are just hanging around smoking and joking. The girls in small groups, all dressed up and gossiping. You see the bushes moving, Pavlovsks'' famous make out garden.'
+	'The entrance to the community centre is full of young people. The guys are just hanging around smoking and joking while the girls are in small groups, all dressed up and gossiping. You see the bushes moving - Pavlovsks'' famous make out garden.'
 	'You hear people in the alley beside the club. <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''ugel''">Investigate</a>.'
 	if gdkincum = daystart and (cumloc[6] = 0 and cumloc[7] = 0) and cumloc[11] = 0: gdkincum = 0
 	if gdkincum ! daystart:
@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@ if hour >= 20 and hour <= 23 and week >= 5 and week < 7:
 		end
 	end
 else
-	'The Community Centre has sports facilities and offers classes in the evening.'
-	'It houses a small library. Open from 8h until 18h.'
-	'Upstairs, there are some hobby clubs available from 12h until 20h.'
-	'The sports section is open from 14h until 20h during the week and 9h until 20h during the weekend.'
-	'On Friday and Saturday evenings, from 20h to midnight, the main hall is used as a local club, with popular music and dancing. Entrance 25 <b>₽</b>.'
+	'The community centre has sports facilities and offers classes in the evening.'
+	'It houses a small library which is open from 08:00 until 18:00.'
+	'Upstairs, there are some hobby clubs available from 12:00 until 20:00.'
+	'The sports section is open from 14:00 until 20:00 during the week and from 09:00 until 20:00 during the weekend.'
+	'On Friday and Saturday evenings, from 20:00 to midnight, the main hall is used as a club with popular music and dancing. Entry fee is 25 <b>₽</b>.'
 end
 
 

locations/pav_commclubs.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ act 'Go to the toilets': gt 'gdktoilet', 'start'
 if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart and hour = 20: act '<b>Join nerds</b>': gt 'nerd_game_night','game'
 
 if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
-	'At this time of day the community center operates various clubs.'
+	'At this time of day, the community center operates various clubs.'
 
 	if krumonth = month and kruyear = year:
 		act 'Go to the sewing club': gt 'krupo'
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Sewing circle</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/krupo.jpg"></center>'
-			'You went to the sewing club room, as you walked in, a teacher looked at you said. "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join, you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up any days you did not attend are not transferred."'
+			'You go to the sewing club room. As you walk in, a teacher looks at you and says "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join and you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up, any days you did not attend are not refunded."'
 			if money >= 500:
 				act 'Sign up':
 					cls
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 					krumonth = month
 					kruyear = year
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You pay the tuition.'
+					'You pay for the tuition.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commclubs'
 				end
 			end
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Chess Circle</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/kruchess.jpg"></center>'
-			'You went to the chess club room, as you walked in, a teacher looked at you said. "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join, you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up any days you did not attend are not transferred."'
+			'You go to the chess club room. As you walk in, a teacher looks at you and says "It costs 500 <b>₽</b> for one month to join and you can come as many days as you like. Once the month is up, any days you did not attend are not refunded."'
 			if money >= 500:
 				act 'Sign up':
 					cls
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if hour >= 12 and hour < 20:
 					chessmonth = month
 					chessyear = year
 					gs'stat'
-					'You pay the tuition.'
+					'You pay for the tuition.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commclubs'
 				end
 			end

locations/pav_industrial.qsrc

@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ boynumBlock = 0
 if streetevent_hour + 2 < hour:gt'street_event','pav_industrial', 'main'
 
 '<center><h2>Pavlovsk Industrial District</h2></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/factory/pav_factory.jpg"></center>'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/factory/gshveyfab.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
-'This is the Industrial region of Pavlovsk, it houses some factories and warehouses along with the old houses that are small and run down.'
+'This is the Industrial region of Pavlovsk. It houses some factories and warehouses, along with the old houses that are small and run down.'
 *nl
-'This area is dominated by one biggest employers in Pavlovsk, the local textile factory. It''s owned by G&M who opened up a store opposite.'
+'This area is dominated by one of the biggest employers in Pavlovsk, the local textile factory. It''s owned by G&M, who opened up a store opposite.'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour < 20 and week >= 1 and week <= 5:
-	'Behind the security checkpoint you can see the <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''pav_factory'', ''enter''">entrance</a> that every employee passes through.'
+	'Behind the security checkpoint, you can see the <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''pav_factory'', ''enter''">entrance</a> that every employee passes through.'
 elseif hour < 8 or hour > 20 or week > 5:
 	'The factory is currently closed.'
 end
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ end
 if week < 6 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 	*pl 'The local <a href="exec:torg = 0 & gt ''budgetclothes'',''start''">G&M Store</a> is currently open.'
 else
-	*pl 'The local G&M Store is currently closed. Opening hours are Monday to Friday, between 08:00 to 20:00.'
+	*pl 'The local G&M store is currently closed. Opening hours are Monday to Friday, between 08:00 to 20:00.'
 end
 
 act 'Walk to the Five Eight estate (0:05)':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_complex', 'start'

locations/pav_library.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ frost = 0
 gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/pav_library.jpg"></center>'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
 'For such a small town, this library is surprisingly large - containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
 
 act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'