Changes from Hornguy6 that I had to do manually as his fork is so out of date.

locations/Nord.qsrc

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h2>St. Petersburg</h2></center>'
 	'<center><b>Red Light District</b></center>'
-	if hour >= 15 or hour <= 2:'The <a href="exec:gt ''stripclub'', ''start''">Strip Clubs</a> red lights, attracting men from all over the city.'
+	'The <a href="exec:gt ''stripclub'', ''start''">Strip Clubs</a> red lights, attracting men from all over the city.'
 	if pornstudio >= 1 and hour >= 10 and hour < 22:'At the <a href="exec:gt ''pornstudio'', ''start''">Porn Studio</a>, where a variety of naughty movies are created'
 	'A shop for <a href="exec:gt ''sexshop'', ''start''">sex toys</a> is open for perverts from all around the city.'
 	if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -59,10 +59,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A34'] < 80:
 		'You have a good relationship with your brother.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
-		'You have a great relationship with your brother.'
+		'Your brother is practically one of your closest friends.'
 	end
+	
+	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
+	
 	*nl
-	if hour >= 7 and hour < 21:
+	if hour >= 7 and hour < 23:
 		! WD: Fix old nude variable
 		if (cumloc[1] > 0 or cumloc[4] > 0 or cumloc[8] > 0 or cumloc[9] > 0 or cumloc[10] > 0 or cumloc[14] > 0 or cumloc[15] > 0) and $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none' and cumloc[1] = 1:
@@ -274,6 +277,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 					act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				end
+				!if brotherSex >= 5:
+				!	act'Ask him if he wants to sneak off to fool around':
+				!end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -282,8 +288,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 		gs 'brother', 'pregreact'
 		gs 'brother', 'brotherSexCount'
+		
+		if hour >= 7 and hour < 23:
+			act'Chat with him':gt'brother2','chat'
+		end
+		
+		!if father_go = 1 and hour >= 7:
+		!	act'Play video games with him':gt'video_games','brother'
+		!end
 
-		if indorf = 0 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and brothersawpirsF=0 and father_go = 1 and npc_rel['A34'] > 85 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21 and pirsF > 0:
+		if indorf = 0 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and brothersawpirsF=0 and father_go = 1 and npc_rel['A34'] > 85 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and pirsF > 0:
 			act 'Show off your nipple piercings ':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -322,14 +336,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					exit
 				end
 			else
-				if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21:
+				if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23:
 					'"How lovely." Kolka plays with your pierced nipples'
 					npc_rel['A34'] += 3
 					brothersawpirsF = 1
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'sitrPar'
 					exit
-				elseif father_go = 0 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21:
+				elseif father_go = 0 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23:
 					'"Beautiful." Kolka gently cups your breasts and strokes your pierced nipples.'
 					npc_rel['A34'] += 3
 					brothersawpirsF=1
@@ -348,12 +362,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				if brotherRand < 5:'As you look, you can also clearly see the outline of his morning wood pitching a tent under the blanket.'
 				if week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
 					act'Wake him up for breakfast':gt'brother2','wakeup'
+					if brotherwakeup >= 10:
+						if brotherSex >= 5:
+							act'Wake him up with a handjob':gt'brother2','morninghj'
+						end
+						if brotherSex >= 6:
+							act'Wake him up with a blowjob':gt'brother2','morningbj'
+						end
+					end
 				end
 			elseif hour < 7 and brotherMorningSex = daystart:
-				'Your brother is busying himself getting ready for school.'
+				'Your brother is busy getting ready for school.'
+			elseif hour < 23 and father_go = 1:
+				'Your brother is playing video games.'
 			end
 
-			if hour >= 21 and hour < 24 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart:
+			if hour >= 23 and hour < 24 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart:
 				'When you get close, he suddenly opens his eyes and says,:'
 				if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, help me sleep." Then he throws back the blanket, revealing his erection.'
@@ -374,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
 					end
 					act 'He''s on his own there':
-						'"You''ve got 2 perfectly good hands, I mean eww...", You turn around and leave.'
+						'"You''ve got 2 perfectly good hands to do that yourself. I mean, <i>eww...</i>", You turn around and leave.'
 						cla
 						act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'sitrPar'
 						exit
@@ -382,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				end
 			end
 
-			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21 and brotherSex > 0 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
+			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and brotherSex > 0 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
 				'When you get close, He turns to you and says,:'
 				if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A34'
@@ -434,8 +458,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			act'Offer help with homework': gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 		end
 	end
-
-	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepsexcum':
@@ -580,6 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		stat['hj'] += 1
+		npc_rel['A34'] += 2
 		if brotherSex < 5:brotherSex = 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/handjob/hj1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -594,7 +617,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			pcs_horny += 10
-			brotherfuck += 1
+			brotherbj += 1
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 			stat['bj'] += 1
 			if brotherSex < 6:brotherSex = 6
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -629,6 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				brotherfuck += 1
+				npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A34'
 				spafinloc = 11
 				sexpartkno = 1
@@ -648,6 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 					minut += 5
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					brotherfuck += 1
+					npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A34'
 
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -668,6 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					pcs_horny += 10
+					npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 					brotherfuck += 1
 					if brotherSex < 8:brotherSex = 8
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A34'
@@ -688,6 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 	if brotherSex >= 6:
 		act 'Give yourself to your brother':
 			brotherfuck += 1
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 			if brotherSex < 7:brotherSex = 7
 			cls
 			minut += 5
@@ -710,6 +738,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 	if brotherSex >= 7:
 		act 'Offer your ass to your brother':
 			brotherfuck += 1
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			pcs_horny += 10
@@ -730,13 +759,18 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexEnd':
 	if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):
-		if $loc = 'sitrPar' and father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21:
+		if $loc = 'sitrPar' and father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23:
 			minut += 15
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'Kolka catches his breath, then says, "Nice one <<$pcs_nickname>>, good job. Just remember this is our little secret!" He continues to go about his business.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
+		elseif $loc = 'sitrPar' and npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
+			minut += 15
+			gs 'stat'
+			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>," he yawns, tucking his member back into his pants. Mumbling, "You''re the best..." he curls back up underneath his blanket and begins to doze off.'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
 		elseif $loc = 'sitrPar':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -748,11 +782,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexEnd':
 			act 'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	else
-		if $loc = 'sitrPar' and father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 21:
+		if $loc = 'sitrPar' and father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23:
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'Kolka catches his breath, then says, "Many thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you helped me a lot." He continues to go about his business.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
+		elseif $loc = 'sitrPar' and npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
+			minut += 15
+			gs 'stat'
+			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>," he yawns, tucking his member back into his pants. Mumbling, "You''re the best..." he curls back up underneath his blanket and begins to doze off.'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
 		elseif $loc = 'sitrPar':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'

locations/brother2.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,86 @@
 # brother2
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kolka</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
+	'You casually talk to him about whatever topics come up.'
+	*nl
+	brotherchat = rand(1,8)
+	if brotherchat = 1:
+		'"... so, yeah. Mom wants me to clean up my stuff on the couch, but if I''m going to sleep there anyways, why does it matter?" he asks, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
+		*nl
+		if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+			'"I know it seems pointless but you should listen to mom. You''ll get in trouble otherwise," you admonish him.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
+			'"Ugh, I know! Mom is always nagging me about everything! She can be such a pain in the ass sometimes!" you '
+		end
+
+	elseif brotherchat = 2:
+		'"... and dad asked me if I want to help him work on the Gazelle but I don''t know. I''d rather go play football with Zhendos and Mishan," he finishes, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
+		*nl
+		'"It''s good to have fun with your friends but it might also be good to work with dad. It''s a good life skill. Besides, there''s nothing girls love more than a man who knows how to work a car!" you wink at him.'
+	
+	elseif brotherchat = 3:
+		'"I hate math so much!" he moans. "Math sucks! It can go die in a hole!"'
+		*nl
+		if pcs_grades >= 50:
+			'"Oh Kolka, you shouldn''t think like that. Math is important!"'
+		elseif pcs_grades < 50:
+			'"Blegh! Yeah, you''re right. Math sucks!" you grumble in agreement.'
+		end
+	
+	elseif brotherchat = 4:
+		'Kolka starts telling you a story about him and his friends. As it goes on longer and all over the place, you find yourself zoning out and not really paying attention to what he''s saying.'
+		'"... and then he ripped his pants!" he giggles, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "Isn''t that hilarious?"'
+		*nl
+		'"Uhh, yeah! That''s pretty funny!" you fake laugh as best you can.'
+
+	elseif brotherchat = 5 and brothersexed >= 1:
+		'"... so I''m enjoying science a lot more," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "My grades have gotten better since you started helping me with my homework but I''m still not sure I completely get it..." He hesitates. "Could you maybe... give me another anatomy lesson? Like you did before?" he says, looking at you meaningfully.'
+		*nl
+		'"I''m thinking about it..." you say slyly.'
+	elseif brotherchat = 5:
+		'"... so science class is alright," he says. "I''m really having trouble with my anatomy homework though. The diagrams in the book aren''t very good, I don''t understand it."'
+		*nl
+		'"Hmm. Well maybe I could help you with it sometime? Do something to help you understand it better?"'
+		anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1
+
+	elseif brotherchat = 6:
+		'... and then he sprayed milk all over his locker!" he says with a burst of laughter "It was <i>so</i> funny!"'
+		*nl
+		'"I bet it was," you say.'
+		'<i>What weird kids he and his friends are...</i> you think to yourself.'
+
+	elseif brotherchat = 7:
+		'"... so the plan is while he''s showering to take his underwear and replace them with girls panties," he says. "Zhendos says that I should just steal some of yours out of your drawer but-" he stops dead with wide eyes and the realization of what he just said.'
+		*nl
+		if npc_rel['A34'] < 80:
+			'"<i>Excuse me?</i> You were planning to do <i>what</i> with my underwear??" you say, sternly staring at him while he twiddles his thumbs and tries to pretend he didn''t say anything.'
+		else
+			'"Woah woah woah!" you say. "Hold up! I love you Kolka, but I am not about to let you put my panties on some juvenile boy!"'
+		end
+
+	elseif brotherchat = 8:
+		'"... I just want more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he moans. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to boring old Gadyukino every other weekend."'
+		*nl
+		if seepornofut = 0:
+			'"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'
+		elseif seepornofut >= 1:
+			'"Pfft! More like you want more time to watch porn with them!" you laugh scoffingly.'
+			*nl
+			if pornMagazine = 0:
+				'	"We play football too!" Kolka protests while you tease him with a silly face and fake jerk off motions.'
+			elseif pornMagazine > 0:
+				'	"We play football too!" Kolka protests while you tease him with silly face and fake jerk off motions. "Hrmph! You''re one to talk anyways," he grumbles. "I know about that magazine you hide under your bed."'
+				*nl
+				'	"I don''t know what you''re talking about," you say with an air of feigned innocence and superiority. "I have never been anything other than ladylike!"'
+				*nl
+				'	"Come on sis," he says with a look. "We were just talking about this. I watch porn. I know what girls do when no one is looking. Furiously schlicking it while biting down on your pillow <i>is</i> your version of ladylike."'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+	act'Continue':gt'brother','start'
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 	cla & *clr
@@ -211,8 +292,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 	
 	if brotherSex >= 5 or pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] >= 85:
 		act'Tell him you''ll give him a handjob':
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 			cla
 			brotherMorningSex = daystart
+			brotherwakeup += 1
 			'"I''ll tell you what Kolka, if you get up now, I''ll help you deal with your morning wood before mom and dad come out of their room."'
 			'His eye cracks open to look at you, seemingly intrigued.'
 			'"How?"'
@@ -236,6 +319,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 		act'Tell him you''ll give him a blowjob':
 			cla
 			brotherMorningSex = daystart
+			brotherwakeup += 1
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 			'"Okay Kolka, if you get up now, before mom and dad come out of their room, I''ll give you a blowjob."'
 			'His eye cracks open to look at you, seemingly intrigued.'
 			'"How does that sound?"'
@@ -245,6 +330,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 				gs 'cum_call','mouth', $boy
 				swallow += 1
+				brotherbj += 1
 				if brotherSex < 6:brotherSex = 6
 				if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and $braworntype = 'none':
 					'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/bj1.mp4"></center>'
@@ -262,5 +348,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'morninghj':
+	cla & *clr
+	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
+	gs 'cum_call','hands', $boy
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 5
+	if brotherSex < 5:brotherSex = 5
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/handjob/kotovhj.jpg"></center>'
+	'Kneeling down next to the sofa, you carefully pull back his blanket to see his morning erection sticking through his pants. Slipping his cock out, you wrap your hand around it and begin to gently work it up and down, feeling it harden even more under your grip.'
+	'Kolka starts to stir and blearily opens his eyes in confusion to see you giving him head.'
+	'"Whaa-? What''s happening? What are you doing?"'
+	'"I thought that would be obvious. I''m giving you a handjob to wake you up!" You smile at him, not for a moment stopping your jerking hand. "This little guy got up even earlier than you did."'
+	'Your brother sighs in satisfaction, your hand continuing to work his cock. After several minutes he orgasms, his sticky cum spilling all over your hand.'
+	'As you think about what you should do to clean it off, you hear him saying, "Handjobs are great and everything, but do you think you could try a blowjob next time instead?"'
+	'"I''ll think about it," you say, rolling your eyes in amusement as you walk away, your brother automatically beginning to get ready for school.'
+	act'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'morningbj':
+	brotherwakeup += 1
+	cla & *clr
+	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
+	gs 'cum_call','mouth', $boy
+	swallow += 1
+	brotherbj += 1
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 10
+	if brotherSex < 6:brotherSex = 6
+	if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and $braworntype = 'none':
+		'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/bj1.mp4"></center>'
+	else
+		'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/bj2.mp4"></center>'
+	end
+	'Kneeling down, you carefully pull back his blanket to see his morning erection sticking through his pants. Slipping his cock out, you wrap your lips around it and begin to suck gently.'
+	'Kolka starts to stir and blearily opens his eyes in confusion to see you giving him head.'
+	'"Whaa-? What''s happening? What are you doing?"'
+	'"What''s it look like I''m doing?" you say after removing his cock from your mouth so you can speak. "I''m giving you your morning blowjob so you can get up in time for school."'
+	'With no further explanations, you get back to blowing your brother. A few more minutes go by and you hear Kolka groan as his hot cum shoots into your mouth.'
+	'"You''re the best sister ever..."'
+	'Swallowing his cum, you flash him a toothy grin. "I know. Now up an at''em kiddo! I don''t do this just so you can go back to sleep."'
+	'Having been given sufficient positive reinforcement, he obediently gets up and starts going about tidying the sofa and getting ready to go to school.'
+	act'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
+end
 --- brother2 ---------------------------------
 

locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -69,10 +69,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				elseif pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 				else
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -82,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'	You casually talk to him about his day while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Look at your legs':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 			else
 				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 			end
@@ -93,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'	You casually chat with him about how he''s doing in school while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Look at your legs':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 			else
 				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 			end
@@ -104,7 +102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'	You chat with him about his friends and what he does for fun with them while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Look at your legs':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 			else
 				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 			end
@@ -156,10 +154,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 			'	<i>Boys will be boys after all...</i> you muse to yourself, a smile subconsciously turning the corners of your own lips.'
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
 				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-			elseif pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 			else
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -168,11 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			if brothershowertalk <= 5:
 				'	You casually talk to him about his day while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				else
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-				end
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'	He happily talks to you about his day, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
@@ -182,11 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					'	"... but, yeah. It was a pretty good day overall," he finishes, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
 					*nl
 					'	"That''s always good to hear!" you reply.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerdaytalk = 2:
 					'	"... so, yeah. Mom wants me to clean up my stuff on the couch, but if I''m going to sleep there anyways, why does it matter?" he asks, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
@@ -196,21 +184,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
 						'	"Ugh, I know! Mom is always nagging me about everything! She can be such a pain in the ass sometimes!" you '
 					end
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerdaytalk = 3:
 					'	"... and dad asked me if I want to help him work on the Gazelle but I don''t know. I''d rather go play football with Zhendos and Mishan," he finishes, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
 					*nl
 					'	"It''s good to have fun with your friends but it might also be good to work with dad. It''s a good life skill. Besides, girls love nothing more than a man who knows how to work a car!" you wink at him.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -220,12 +200,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			if brothershowertalk <= 5:
 				'	You casually chat with him about how he''s doing in school while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				else
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-				end
-
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'	He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
 				brothershowerschooltalk = rand(1,3)
@@ -238,42 +214,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					elseif pcs_grades < 50:
 						'	"Blegh! Yeah, you''re right. Math sucks!" you grumble in agreement.'
 					end
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 2:
 					'	"... and then he ripped his pants!" he giggles, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "Isn''t that hilarious?"'
 					*nl
 					'	"Uhh, yeah! That''s pretty funny!" you fake laugh as best you can.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 3 and brothersexed < 1:
 					'	"... so science class is alright," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I''m really having trouble with my anatomy homework though. The diagrams in the book aren''t very good, I don''t understand it."'
 					*nl
 					'	"Hmm. Well maybe I could help you with it sometime? Do something to help you understand it better?"'
 					anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 3 and brothersexed >= 1:
 					'	"... so I''m enjoying science a lot more," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "My grades have gotten better since you started helping me with my homework but I''m still not sure I completely get it..." He hesitates. "Could you maybe... give me another anatomy lesson? Like you did before?" he says, looking at you meaningfully.'
 					*nl
 					'	"I''ll think about it..." you say slyly.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -283,11 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 			'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			if brothershowertalk <= 5:
 				'	You chat with him about his friends and what he does for fun with them while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				else
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-				end
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'	He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what they get up to together, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
@@ -297,41 +254,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					'	... and then he sprayed milk all over his locker!" he says with a burst of laughter, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "It was <i>so</i> funny! Hey, are you listening?"'
 					*nl
 					'	"Uhmm, yeah! Of course!" you say, trying to maintain your poker face as best you can while he frowns at you suspiciously.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 2:
 					'	"... so the plan is while he''s showering to take his underwear and replace them with girls panties," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back into the room. "Zhendos says that I should just steal some of yours out of your drawer but-" he stops dead with wide eyes and the realization of what he just said.'
 					*nl
 					'	"<i>Excuse me?</i> You were planning to do <i>what</i> with my underwear??" you say, sternly staring at him while he twiddles his thumbs and tries to pretend he didn''t say anything.'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					else
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 
 				elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 3:
 					'	"... I wish I had more time to play football with Zhendos and Mishan though," he says, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I can''t do anything with them when mom is dragging us to Gadyukino every other weekend."'
 					*nl
 					if seepornofut = 0:
 						'	"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'
-						if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-						else
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-						end
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 					elseif seepornofut >= 1:
 						'	"Pfft! More like you want more time to watch porn with them!" you laugh scoffingly.'
 						*nl
 						'	"We play football too!" Kolka turns to cry out in protest while you tease him with a silly face and fake jerk off motions. He blushes deeply and quickly turns back to face the wall.'
-						if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-						else
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-						end
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -374,9 +315,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"That''s always good to hear!" you reply.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerdaytalk = 2:
@@ -386,9 +329,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			if npc_rel['A29'] < 40:'	"Ugh, I know! Mom is always nagging me about everything! She can be such a pain in the ass sometimes!" you grumble in agreement.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerdaytalk = 3:
@@ -397,9 +342,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"It''s good to have fun with your friends but it might also be good to work with dad. It''s a good life skill. Besides, girls love nothing more than a man who knows how to work a car!" you wink at him. "It just makes them want to..." you trail off, grabbing your breast with one hand and putting the other between your legs with an open mouth in a silent moan, pretending to masturbate. After a couple seconds of gyrating your hips in the motion, you spread your hands out over your hips and say, "Sploosh." He laughs at your act and gives you a golf clap while you bow in appreciation.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -421,9 +368,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			if pcs_grades < 50:'	"Blegh! Yeah, you''re right. Math sucks!" you grumble in agreement.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 2:
@@ -432,9 +381,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"Uhh, yeah! That''s pretty funny!" you fake laugh as best you can.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 3 and brothersexed = 0:
@@ -444,9 +395,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerschooltalk = 3 and brothersexed >= 1:
@@ -455,9 +408,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"I''ll think about it..." you say slyly.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -478,9 +433,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"Uhmm, yeah! Of course!" you say, trying to maintain your poker face as best you can while he frowns at you suspiciously.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 2:
@@ -489,9 +446,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'	"<i>Excuse me?</i> You were planning to do <i>what</i> with my underwear??" you say, staring at him sternly while he twiddles his thumbs and tries to pretend he didn''t say anything.'
 			act'Continue':
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-				if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-				if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+					gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				else
+					gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				end
 			end
 
 		elseif brothershowerfriendtalk = 3:
@@ -501,9 +460,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 				'	"It''s okay Kolka," you console him. "Just enjoy the time you have with them. In a couple years mom might not force you to go anymore but you all might end up too busy to hang out."'
 				act'Continue':
 					bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-					if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-					if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+						gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+					else
+						gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+					end
 				end
 
 			elseif seepornofut >= 1:
@@ -513,9 +474,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 					'	"We play football too!" Kolka protests while you tease him with a silly face and fake jerk off motions.'
 					act'Continue':
 						bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-						if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-						if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-						if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+						if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+							gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+						else
+							gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+						end
 					end
 				elseif pornMagazine > 0:
 					'	"We play football too!" Kolka protests while you tease him with silly face and fake jerk off motions. "Hrmph! You''re one to talk anyways," he grumbles. "I know about that magazine you hide under your bed."'
@@ -527,9 +490,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 					'	The two of you continue to playfully sling accusations and lewd gestures at each other for the rest of your shower, giggling the whole time.'
 					act'Continue':
 						bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
-						if bro_ass_compliment = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
-						if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-						if pcs_pubes < 4 and pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+						if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
+							gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+						else
+							gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -621,6 +586,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 	brothergrope = rand(0,1)
 	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	brother_shower_times += 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
 	'	Kolka clambers into the shower with you, doing his best to get under the water. The bath tub isn''t very big and it''s a tight squeeze for both of you to be in there.'
@@ -734,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 				if brotherbj < 1 and brotherfuck < 1:
 					'	"Hey Kolka, want to see something cool?"'
 					'	"Huh?" He asks, confused. "What is it?"'
-					'	His eyes go wide when you grab him by the cock. Slightly panicked, he looks back at you when you start to kneel.'
+					'	His eyes go wide when as your hand slips up his leg and grips his member. Slightly panicked, he looks back at you when you start to kneel.'
 					'	"It''s my mouth around your cock!"'
 					act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
 				else
@@ -804,7 +770,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
 						cla & *clr
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
 						'	Clean from your shower together, you can''t help yourself as you start to get frisky with your brother. His hands slide up your body to caress your breasts. In response, you reach back and start jerking his cock feeling him harden under your touch.'
 						act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
 						act'Fuck him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck'
@@ -823,7 +789,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
 						cla & *clr
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
 						'	Clean from your shower together, you can''t help yourself as you start to get frisky with your brother. His hands slide up your body to caress your breasts. In response, you reach back and start jerking his cock feeling him harden under your touch.'
 						act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
 						act'Fuck him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck'
@@ -842,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
 						cla & *clr
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
 						'	Clean from your shower together, you can''t help yourself as you start to get frisky with your brother. His hands slide up your body to caress your breasts. In response, you reach back and start jerking his cock feeling him harden under your touch.'
 						act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
 						act'Fuck him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck'
@@ -1926,23 +1892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 			'	"It''s okay Kolka. I''m not mad. Let''s get you into the club. Why don''t I show you the <b>member only</b> entrance?"'
 			'	"Don''t you mean member<b>s</b> only entrance sis?" he asks, confused.'
 			'	"That''s not what I said," you whisper, pushing your hips back and swallowing him straight to the hilt.'
-			act'Continue':
-				guy += 1
-				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', rand(5,10)
-				gs 'stat'
-				eff_contra = iif(argc > 1,ARGS[1],sexcontra)
-				tmp = func('pregriskeval',eff_contra)
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
-				'	Barely giving him any time at all to recover from your sudden start, you immediately break into a hard rhythm, thrusting your hips back and giving it your all. He''s your little brother after all. You should try to make his first time special. Soon enough, you start giving him tips.'
-				'	"Hold my hips so you have more control."'
-				'	"Grab my boobs if you like. Boobs are meant to be grabbed during sex.'
-				'	"Don''t worry if you feel like you''re going to cum. It''s your first time so just let me kn-OW-OW-WOAH!"'
-				'	Kolka''s really getting into it. He pumps in and out you, member slick with your juices. His hands come up to grab your breasts and you gasp when they''re used as leverage to fuck you harder, his cock reaching even deeper inside you. His cock! Oh god! It''s driving you insane! Even though it''s his first time, he''s actually pretty good! Fuck! You should have jumped on his dick ages ago!'
-				'	Several minutes go by with you unable to think about anything except how good fucking your brother feels.'
-				'	Suddenly, you feel him urgently tapping you on the shoulder.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_fuck_cum'
-			end
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 		end
 		act'This doesn''t make you''re special':
 			cla
@@ -1951,24 +1901,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 			'	"What do you mean?" he asks, grin disappearing.'
 			'	"There''s been a lot of members in that club." You position his tip at your entrance, lining him up for what you''re about to do next.'
 			'	"A <b>lot.</b> Of <b>members.</b>" On your emphasized words, you thrust your hips backward to take his entire cock inside you in one go, causing your brother to gasp and grab you by the hips to steady himself.'
-			'	"Inside. <b>my ''club.''</b>" you whisper into his ear.'
-			act'Continue':
-				guy += 1
-				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', rand(5,10)
-				gs 'stat'
-				eff_contra = iif(argc > 1,ARGS[1],sexcontra)
-				tmp = func('pregriskeval',eff_contra)
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
-				'	Barely giving him any time at all to recover from your sudden start, you immediately break into a hard rhythm, thrusting your hips back and giving it your all. He''s your little brother after all. You should try to make his first time special. Soon enough, you start giving him tips.'
-				'	"Hold my hips so you have more control."'
-				'	"Grab my boobs if you like. Boobs are meant to be grabbed during sex.'
-				'	"Don''t worry if you feel like you''re going to cum. It''s your first time so just let me kn-OW-OW-WOAH!"'
-				'	Kolka''s really getting into it. He pumps in and out you, member slick with your juices. His hands come up to grab your breasts and you gasp when they''re used as leverage to fuck you harder, his cock reaching even deeper inside you. His cock! Oh god! It''s driving you insane! Even though it''s his first time, he''s actually pretty good! Fuck! You should have jumped on his dick ages ago!'
-				'	Several minutes go by with you unable to think about anything except how good fucking your brother feels.'
-				'	Suddenly, you feel him urgently tapping you on the shoulder.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_fuck_cum'
-			end
+			'	"Inside. <i>My. <b>''Club.''</i></b>" you whisper into his ear.'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 		end
 	else
 		brotherfuck += 1
@@ -2010,9 +1944,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 
 			act'No, I''m a slut':
 				cla
+				brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 				'	"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but yours is just going to be one more of many different dicks that have been inside my pussy little brother."'
-				'	You''re not really sure why you''re telling him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you push your ass towards him and swallow his cock with your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				'	You''re not really sure why you''re telling him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you thrust your hips backward to take his entire length inside you in one go. Your brother gasps at the rush of having his cock entirely swallowed by your pussy, grabbing you by the hips to steady himself.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 			end
 
 			act'Yes, you''re my first time (lie)':
@@ -2079,7 +2014,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first2':
 		end
 	end
 end
-
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first3':
+	guy += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', rand(5,10)
+	gs 'stat'
+	eff_contra = iif(argc > 1,ARGS[1],sexcontra)
+	tmp = func('pregriskeval',eff_contra)
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	'	Barely giving him any time at all to recover from your sudden start, you immediately break into a hard rhythm, thrusting your hips back and giving it your all. He''s your little brother after all. You should try to make his first time special. Soon enough, you start giving him tips.'
+	'	"Hold my hips so you have more control."'
+	'	"Grab my boobs if you like. Boobs are meant to be grabbed during sex.'
+	'	"Don''t worry if you feel like you''re going to cum. It''s your first time so just let me kn-OW-OW-WOAH!"'
+	'	Kolka''s really getting into it. He pumps in and out you, member slick with your juices. His hands come up to grab your breasts and you gasp when they''re used as leverage to fuck you harder, his cock reaching even deeper inside you. His cock! Oh god! It''s driving you insane! Even though it''s his first time, he''s actually pretty good! Fuck! You should have jumped on his dick ages ago!'
+	'	Several minutes go by with you unable to think about anything except how good fucking your brother feels.'
+	'	Suddenly, you feel him urgently tapping you on the shoulder.'
+	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_fuck_cum'
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck':
 	broshowerfuck = daystart
@@ -2375,6 +2326,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 	cla & *clr
 	dynamic $showerdin
+	brother_shower_times += 1
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'arousal','end'
 	if brotherfuck = 1 and brother_knows_not_virgin >= 1:
@@ -2495,7 +2447,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						'	A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
 						'	"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
 						'	Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
-						brotherSex += 1
 						brothervirginlie = 0
 						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
@@ -2531,6 +2482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				'	"Pfft~! It''s not like I''m gonna marry you or anything like that. You''re still my sister. And I''m still gonna fuck lots of other girls once they start looking my way! But..." he trails off again.'
 				'	"... now we have a bond that other siblings don''t have," you finish. "And no matter what else happens, we''ll carry each other''s virginities for the rest of our lives." He nods.'
 				act'Continue':
+					brotherSex = 9
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					cla & *clr
@@ -2588,7 +2540,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 
 				act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
 					cla
-					brotherSex += 1
 					brothervirginlie = 0
 					'	A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
 					'	"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
@@ -2628,16 +2579,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ass_compliment':
 	'	"Hmm? Sure, what is it Kolka?"'
 	'	"You have a great ass!"'
 	'	Feeling his smile radiating from behind you, you look over your shoulder and give him a grin and a little shake of your ass to show your appreciation for his compliment.'
-	act'Continue':
-		if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-			gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
-		else
-			gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-		end
-	end
+	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
+	if pcs_pubes < 4 or pcs_leghair < 4:gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 	cla & *clr
 	if brothershowerlook = 1:
 		if pcs_leghair > 0 or pcs_pubes > 0:
@@ -2645,7 +2591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 		'	You''re rinsing off when you notice Kolka staring at your legs and what''s between them.'
 		'	"Excuse me?" you ask him pointedly. "Can I help you with something?"'
 		elseif pcs_pubes < 11 and pcs_leghair > 3:
-			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to look at your legs and pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to Continue and pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
 		elseif pcs_pubes >= 11 and pcs_pubes < 21 and pcs_leghair > 3:
 			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re growing a bit of a bush down there." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and your trimmed pussy hair. "Looks like your legs are growing grass to match. Aren''t you going to shave?"'
 		elseif pcs_pubes >= 21 and pcs_leghair > 3:
@@ -2811,10 +2757,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 					inhib_exp += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-					if pcs_pubes < 11:
+					if pcs_pubes =< 10:
 						'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
 						'<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the bits of stubble from around your pussy.'
-					elseif pcs_pubes > 10:
+					elseif pcs_pubes >= 11:
 						'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe it''s time to get rid of this bush," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
 						'<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the hair from around your pussy.'
 						'<br>	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -207,40 +207,49 @@ $bath = {
 
 $brit = {
 	'Your razor blade looks in good enough shape for <b><<stanok>></b> more shaves.'
-
+	!pubestyle
 	if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 1:
-		act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:15)':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			minut += 15
-			pcs_leghair = 0
-			pcs_pubes = 0
-			pcs_horny += 5
-			stanok -= 2
+		if pubestyle > 1 or pubestyle = 0:
+			act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:15)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 15
+				pcs_leghair = 0
+				if pubestyle = 3 or pubestyle = 0:
+					pcs_pubes = 0
+				elseif pubestyle = 2 and pcs_pubes > 11:
+					pcs_pubes = 11
+				end
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 2
 
-			if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
 
-			if $loc ='Gadbana':
-				'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
-			end
+				if $loc ='Gadbana':
+					'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 
-			*nl
-			if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
-				'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
-				'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
-			elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
-				pcs_mood += 10
-				'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
-			else
-				'You lather up your legs and crotch and then start carefully shaving them. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-			end
+				*nl
+				if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
+					'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
+					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
+				elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
+					pcs_mood += 10
+					'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
+				elseif pubestyle = 2:
+					'You lather up your legs and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished gliding your hands over your smooth legs, ensuring you didn''t miss a spot, you spend some time trimming back your bush as well.'
+				else
+					'You lather up your legs and crotch and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
+				end
 
-			dynamic $dryOff
+				dynamic $dryOff
+			end
 		end
 	end
-
+	
+	
 	if pcs_leghair > 3 and stanok > 0:
 		act 'Shave your legs (0:10)':
 			cla
@@ -266,26 +275,42 @@ $brit = {
 	end
 
 	if pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 0:
-		act 'Shave your pussy (0:10)':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			minut += 10
-			pcs_pubes = 0
-			pcs_horny += 5
-			stanok -= 1
+		if pubestyle = 3 or pubestyle = 0:
+			act 'Shave your pussy (0:10)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 10
+				pcs_pubes = 0
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 1
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+
+				if $loc ='Gadbana':
+					'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 
-			if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+				*nl
+				'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After shaving you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
 
-			if $loc ='Gadbana':
-				'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				dynamic $dryOff
+			end
+			
+		elseif pubestyle = 2 and pcs_pubes > 15:
+			act 'Trim your pussy (0:10)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 10
+				pcs_pubes = 11
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 1
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave4.jpg"></center>'
+				*nl
+				'You spend some time trimming back your bush, not shaving it away completely but careful to make it neat and tidy.'
+				dynamic $dryOff
 			end
-
-			*nl
-			'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After shaving you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-
-			dynamic $dryOff
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -622,7 +647,13 @@ $pirManage = {
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 	if stanok > 0:'Your razor will last for <b><<stanok>></b> more shavings.'
-
+	
+	'Pubic Shaving Style:'
+	if pubestyle = 0:'<a href="exec:pubestyle = 3 & gt $loc, $metka">Clean Shave</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 2 & gt $loc, $metka">Trimmed</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 1 & gt $loc, $metka">Never Shave</a> | <u>None</u>'
+	if pubestyle = 1:'<a href="exec:pubestyle = 3 & gt $loc, $metka">Clean Shave</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 2 & gt $loc, $metka">Trimmed</a> | <u>Never Shave</u> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 0 & gt $loc, $metka">None</a>'
+	if pubestyle = 2:'<a href="exec:pubestyle = 3 & gt $loc, $metka">Clean Shave</a> | <u>Trimmed</u> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 1 & gt $loc, $metka">Never Shave</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 0 & gt $loc, $metka">None</a>'
+	if pubestyle = 3:'<u>Clean Shave</u> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 2 & gt $loc, $metka">Trimmed</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 1 & gt $loc, $metka">Never Shave</a> | <a href="exec:pubestyle = 0 & gt $loc, $metka">None</a>'
+	
 	!WD: heal chafe
 	if mosolmaz>0:'On a shelf is a tube of ointment for chafing, which will be enough for <b><<mosolmaz>></b> applications.'
 
@@ -704,29 +735,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 	dynamic $basin
 
 	if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 1:
-		act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:15)':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			minut += 15
-			pcs_leghair = 0
-			pcs_pubes = 0
-			pcs_horny += 5
-			stanok -= 2
-			if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+		if pubestyle > 1 or pubestyle = 0:
+			act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:15)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 15
+				pcs_leghair = 0
+				if pubestyle = 3 or pubestyle = 0:
+					pcs_pubes = 0
+				elseif pubestyle = 2 and pcs_pubes > 11:
+					pcs_pubes = 11
+				end
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 2
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
 
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
-			*nl
-			if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
-				'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
-				'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
-			elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
-				pcs_mood += 10
-				'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
-			else
-				'You lather up your legs and crotch and then start carefully shaving them. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-			end
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				*nl
+				if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
+					'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
+					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
+				elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
+					pcs_mood += 10
+					'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
+				elseif pubestyle = 2:
+					'You lather up your legs and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished gliding your hands over your smooth legs, ensuring you didn''t miss a spot, you spend some time trimming back your bush as well.'
+				else
+					'You lather up your legs and crotch and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
+				end
 
-			act 'Return to showering':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Return to showering':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -747,20 +786,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 	end
 
 	if pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 0:
-		act 'Shave your pussy (0:10)':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			minut += 10
-			pcs_pubes = 0
-			pcs_horny += 5
-			stanok -= 1
-			if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+		if pubestyle = 3 or pubestyle = 0:
+			act 'Shave your pussy (0:10)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 10
+				pcs_pubes = 0
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 1
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
 
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
-			*nl
-			'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After shaving you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				*nl
+				'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After shaving you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
 
-			act 'Return to showering':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Return to showering':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
+		elseif pubestyle = 2 and pcs_pubes > 15:
+			act 'Trim your pussy (0:10)':
+				cla
+				*clr
+				minut += 10
+				pcs_pubes = 11
+				pcs_horny += 5
+				stanok -= 1
+				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave4.jpg"></center>'
+				*nl
+				'You spend some time trimming back your bush, not shaving it away completely but careful to make it neat and tidy.'
+
+				act 'Return to showering':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
 		end
 	end
 

locations/family.qsrc

@@ -120,7 +120,11 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 		end
 
 		 if $loc = 'sitrPar' or ($loc = 'family' and $metka = 'sofa'):
-			if hour < 7 or hour >= 21:
+			if hour < 7 and brothemorningsex = daystart:
+				'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is getting ready for school.'
+			elseif hour < 7 and brothermorningsex ! daystart:
+				'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sleeping on the sofa.'
+			elseif hour >= 23:
 				ocpd_room = 1
 				'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sleeping on the sofa.'
 			end
@@ -136,15 +140,15 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 				if hour >= 18 and hour < 20:
 					if kanikuli > 0:
 						ocpd_room = 1
-						'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, watching TV.'
+						'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, playing video games.'
 					else
 						ocpd_room = 1
 						'Your little brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting by the table and doing his homework.'
 					end
 				end
-				if hour = 20:
+				if hour > 20 and hour < 23:
 					ocpd_room = 1
-					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, watching TV.'
+					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, playing video games.'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -161,7 +165,7 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 					end
 				end
 
-				if hour >= 18 and hour <= 20:
+				if hour >= 18 and hour <= 23:
 					ocpd_room = 1
 					'Your younger brother <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> is sitting on the sofa, watching TV.'
 				end

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -378,12 +378,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 		if first_fame_event = 2:
 			act'Ask if there''s special work available':gt'foto_events','special'
 		end
-		if model = 1:act 'Go to the showers':gt'foto','showers'
-		if model = 1:act 'Go to your makeup station':gt'foto','makeup'
 	else
 		*nl
 		'	There is no way anyone is going to want to see pictures of you while your std is so obvious, you should see a doctor.'
 	end
+	if model = 1:act 'Go to the showers':gt'foto','showers'
+	if model = 1:act 'Go to your makeup station':gt'foto','makeup'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gave_passport':
@@ -405,32 +405,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-	if howoldareyou = 0:
-		'	"You want to work here? How old are you?"'
-		if age >= 18:
-			howoldareyou = 2
-			'	I''m <<age>>.'
-			'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
-			gs 'foto', 'interview_undress'
-		elseif fakepassport = 1:
+	'	"You want to work here? How old are you?"'
+	if age >= 18:
+		act'I''m <<age>>':
 			howoldareyou = 2
-			'	"I''m 18."'
-			'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
-			gs 'foto', 'interview_undress'
-		else
-			act 'Tell the truth':
-				age_truth = 1
-				howoldareyou = 1
-				cla
-				gs'foto','interview'
-			end
-			act 'Lie':
-				age_lie = 1
-				howoldareyou = 1
-				cla
-				gs'foto','interview'
-			end
+			gt'foto','interview2'
 		end
+	elseif fakepassport = 1:
+		act'I''m 18':gt'foto','interview2'
 	else
 		howoldareyou = 2
 		if age_truth = 1 or age >= 18:
@@ -444,14 +426,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 		else
 			fakepassport = 2
 			'	"You look a little young, do you have any ID?"'
-			'	Not having any you feign surprise and tell hime you didn''t realise you needed one.'
+			'	Not having any, you feign surprise and tell him you didn''t realise you needed it.'
+			'	"Sorry love, no ID no modelling. If it turned out you were underage I''d end up in jail."'
 			'	Now how are you going to find a way around this?'
-			gt 'foto', 'start'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'foto', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'interview_undress':
+	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
+	if age_truth = 1 or age >= 18:
+		*nl
+		'	"I''m <<age>>."'
+		'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
+	elseif fakepassport = 1 or age_lie = 1:
+		*nl
+		'	"I''m 18."'
+		'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
+	end
 	if undress_ask = 0:
 		act'What? Why?':
 			undress_ask = 1
@@ -460,7 +454,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview_undress':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 			'	"What?? Why?"'
 			'	"Hmm? This is a modelling studio. That means sometimes we dress our models up in skimpy clothes and lingerie. Our studio is also popular for its nude spreads. You don''t necessarily need to do shoots with nudity, but you need to have your body inspected to make sure you match the criteria for working here."'
-			gs 'foto', 'interview_undress'
 		end
 	end
 	if why_here = 0:
@@ -473,7 +466,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview_undress':
 			'	"Might as well be here," he shrugs. "If you want to work here, we have a dress code policy for the models."'
 			'	"So? What does that have to do with me getting naked in the middle of a workplace?"'
 			'	"The policy is that models don''t wear clothes while on the premises. It makes the logistics of dressing and undressing them for shoots easier. Come on. You want to work for a modelling studio that specializes in nude spreads. Don''t get shy about showing your body to a few people here when you might be on a magazine cover showing it to the entire country. Now are you going to undress so I can do my job or are you going to keep wasting my time here?"'
-			gs 'foto', 'interview_undress'
 		end
 	end
 	if pcs_inhib >= 40:
@@ -483,7 +475,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview_undress':
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip1.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'	You take off your clothes and leave them on the floor while the photographer examines you.'
+			if undress_ask = 0 and why_here = 0:
+				'	You unquestioningly take off your clothes and leave them on the floor while the photographer examines you.'
+			else
+				'	You take off your clothes and leave them on the floor while the photographer examines you.'
+			end
 			'	He circles you slowly, occasionally asking you to adjust your pose slightly, carefully inspecting every aspect of your nude body. Your <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes framed by your <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, your <<$liptalk3>>, your <<$titsize>> breasts, your <<$skin1>> <<$pcs_tan>> skin, your thighs, even your <<$vaginatipe>> pussy...'
 			'	He spends several minutes doing this without saying anything. Several people walk by while he does, including several beautiful and nude women who glance at you, whispering to each other before moving on.'
 			act'Continue':gt'foto','job_offer'
@@ -737,7 +733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showers':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Despite the openness of the shower area, you can''t help yourself and place the shower head between your legs, massaging your pussy with powerful jets of warm water and fingers.'
+				'Despite the openness of the shower area, you can''t help yourself and place the shower head between your legs, massaging your pussy with powerful jets of warm water and fingers. '
 
 				if hypnoAddict > 0:
 					minut += 10
@@ -954,7 +950,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 	'	"Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. We''ve already done a paid shoot with you this week, so we can''t do another one. '
 	'	But would you like to get some practice in?"'
 	act '"Maybe not today"' :gt 'foto','studio'
-	act '"Yes, please."':
+	act '"Yes, please"':
 		cla
 		'	"What kind of shoot would you like to do today? With nudity or without?"'
 		*nl
@@ -980,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 					if fashionshoot < 5:'	You dress up in the latest in fashion wear and spend the next two hours sexily posing for the photographer.'
 					if fashionshoot = 5:
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fashion4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'	You spend the next two hours putting on various dresses, practicing modelling for the online catalogs of retail clothing stores. Apparently for consistency they want you to have the exact same expression on your face every time, so you spend most of the time practicing that.'
+						'	You spend two hours putting on various dresses, practicing modelling for the online catalogs of retail clothing stores. Apparently for consistency they want you to have the exact same expression on your face every time, so you spend most of the time practicing that.'
 					end
 					if pcs_mdlng < 20:
 						act'Continue':
@@ -1412,7 +1408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/model4.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'	A topless shoot without even a bikini or a loose shirt to hide your breasts... Unthinkable that you could ever do it for real! But it''s only a practice shoot right now. You''re not comfortable with it, but if you want to grow as a model, this is what you have to do.'
 						*nl
-						'	You put on the bottoms the photographer chose for you and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend the next two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
+						'	You put on the bottoms the photographer chose for you and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
 						if pcs_inhib < 20:
 							act'Continue':
 								cla
@@ -1449,7 +1445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 						inhib_exp += 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/model4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'	You put on the bottoms the photographer chose for you and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend the next two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
+						'	You put on the bottoms the photographer chose for you and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
 						if pcs_mdlng < 20:
 							act'Continue':
 								cla
@@ -1480,38 +1476,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 				end
 			end
 			
-			
-			
-				
-					cla
-					act 'Not for me':gt 'foto','studio'
-
-					act 'Agree (2:00)':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 120
-						modelpayfin = 0
-						mdlng_exp += rand(8,10)
-						inhib_exp += 4
-						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/lingerie_trans<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'	You put on some very lacy, very transparent underwear and get to posing, your nipples often showing through the thin fabric.'
-						*nl
-						'	After having taken all his pictures, the photographer thanks you for your time and concludes the shoot, counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
-						*nl
-						if pornstudio = 0:pornstudio = 2 & '	At the end of the shoot a staff member comes up to you. "By the way, you should take this," he says, handing you a business card. You''re shocked to see that it''s for a porn production company in St. Petersburg. "Since you''ve shown that you''re willing to go full nude, we figure we might as well let you know this opportunity exists. We share a couple of models with them and from what we can tell, it increases sales for both of us. If you feel like you''re up to it, use this card and tell them we sent you. That will get you a special audition. But we understand if you don''t go. We know it''s not for everyone and that some of you want more legitimate fame."'
-						if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:
-							act 'Leave':gt'foto','commercial'
-						else
-							act 'Leave':gt 'foto', 'end'
-						end
-					end
-				end
-			end
-			
 			act 'Transparent Lingerie':
 				cla
 				act 'Not for me':gt 'foto','studio'
-
 				if pcs_inhib < 55:
 					act 'Practice (2:00)':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1825,12 +1792,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 				pav_modelling += rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 				fashionshoot = rand(1,5)
 				gs 'stat'
-				if fashionshoot <= 2:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fashion<<rand(1,2>>.mp4"></video></center>'
+				if fashionshoot <= 2:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fashion<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 				if fashionshoot >= 3 and fashionshoot < 5:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fashion<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 				if fashionshoot < 5:'	You dress up in the latest in fashion wear and spend the next two hours sexily posing for the photographer.'
 				if fashionshoot = 5:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fashion3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'	You spend the next two hours modelling for the online catalogs of retail clothing stores, wearing various different dresses but the same expression. It''s boring but it still gets you paid.'
+					'	You spend two hours modelling for the online catalogs of retail clothing stores, wearing various different dresses but the same expression. It''s boring but it still gets you paid.'
 				end
 				*nl
 				'	After having taken all his pictures, the photographer thanks you for your time and concludes the shoot, counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
@@ -2040,7 +2007,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				inhib_exp += 3
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/model4.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'	You put on some pants and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend the next two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
+				'	You put on some pants and omit a top leaving your breasts exposed. You spend two hours striking various poses, covering and uncovering your breasts, and listen to instruction while the photographer takes pictures of you.'
 				*nl
 				'	After having taken all his pictures, the photographer thanks you for your time and concludes the shoot, counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
 				if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:
@@ -2113,26 +2080,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 						'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 						*nl
-						'	You spend the next two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you that fully expose your breasts and pussy. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+						'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you that fully expose your breasts and pussy. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(13,15)>>.jpg"></center>'
 						'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 						*nl
-						'	You spend the next two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, your thick bush being used as a simple censor of your pussy and make it more "acceptable" as art while still maintaining the feeling of eroticism. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+						'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, your thick bush being used as a simple censor of your pussy and make it more "acceptable" as art while still maintaining the feeling of eroticism. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 					end
 				elseif shoot_type = 2:
 					modelfoto_nip += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(4,11)>>.jpg"></center>'
 					'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 					*nl
-					'	You spend the next two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often being asked to carefully position your hands or legs in ways that tastefully shields your pussy while simultaneously teasing the would-be readers of what they cannot see. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+					'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often being asked to carefully position your hands or legs in ways that tastefully shields your pussy while simultaneously teasing the would-be readers of what they cannot see. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				else
 					city_modelling += rand(0,5)
 					pav_modelling += rand(0,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude12.jpg"></center>'
 					'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 					*nl
-					'	You spend the next two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often being asked to carefully position your hands or legs in ways that tastefully hides your pussy and nipples. These images, though incredibly provocative, are still somehow considered to be conservative enough to be allowed on the front cover of fashion, sports, and other tabloid magazines. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+					'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often being asked to carefully position your hands or legs in ways that tastefully hides your pussy and nipples. These images, though incredibly provocative, are still somehow considered to be conservative enough to be allowed on the front cover of fashion, sports, and other tabloid magazines. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				end
 				*nl
 				if pornstudio = 0:pornstudio = 2 & '	At the end of the shoot a staff member comes up to you. "By the way, you should take this," he says, handing you a business card. You''re shocked to see that it''s for a porn production company in St. Petersburg. "Since you''ve shown that you''re willing to go full nude, we figure we might as well let you know this opportunity exists. We share a couple of models with them and from what we can tell, it increases sales for both of us. If you feel like you''re up to it, use this card and tell them we sent you. That will get you a special audition. But we understand if you don''t go. We know it''s not for everyone and that some of you want more legitimate fame."'
@@ -2169,7 +2136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				modelfoto_pussy += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/vmodel.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'	You spend the next two hours posing for the photographer, changing in and out of various underwears, sexy clothings, and lingeries until you end the shoot fully striped down and dancing naked.'
+				'	You spend two hours posing for the photographer, changing in and out of various underwears, sexy clothings, and lingeries until you end the shoot fully striped down and dancing naked.'
 				*nl
 				'	After having taken all his pictures, the photographer thanks you for your time and concludes the shoot, counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
 				if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'high_fasion':
 			mdlng_exp += rand(1,2)
 			city_modelling += rand(5,25)
 			pav_modelling += rand(0,city_modelling)/6
-			gs 'exhibitionism', 1
+			pcs_exhib += rand(0,1)
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfotomoney += modelpayfin
 			'	You spend the duration of the shoot changing in and out of designer bodices, corsets, and other tops, all of which conspicuously lack any kind of bottom, leaving your pussy exposed.'
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modern_art':
 				modelfoto_nude += 1
 				mdlng_exp += rand(9,10)
 				city_modelling += rand(1,21)
-				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
+				pcs_exhib += 5
 				modern_art_projet = 1
 				pcs_horny += 20
 				'	The girl has you and the other model lie down on your sides and then wrap your legs your heads, both of you grabbing the other''s foot with your hand in a way that allows you to perfectly mirror each other''s position. At the client''s insistence, you bury your face between between the other girl''s legs. The aroma of her sex fills your nostrils and you can feel her breath on your own pussy as well.'
@@ -1325,7 +1325,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wet':
 							mdlng_exp += rand(9,10)
 							city_modelling += rand(18,21)
 							pav_modelling += rand(0,city_modelling)/4
-							gs 'exhibitionism', 3
+							pcs_exhib += 5
 							money += modelpayfin
 							modelfotomoney += modelpayfin
 							'	Eventually, the shoot is over and they leave you cold, shivering, and with really hard nipples. But at least you''ve also got a dry wad of cash that counts out to <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b>.'

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -419,6 +419,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
 			'	"Hey Mari, how come you don''t shave your bush?"'
 			'	"The photographers actually ask me not to shave. They say it helps sell my ''farm girl'' look," she says, causing you both to giggle a little. "Besides, I tried shaving once when I still lived in Gadyukino and I hated that prickly feeling when it would start to grow back as stubble. It''s too much of a hassle to keep it smooth down there so since then I just decided to keep it trimmed."'
+			if pubestyle = 2:
+				'	"I know what you mean! Keeping it clean-shaven is too much work. What''s wrong with having a bit of bush?"'
+				'	"Right???"'
+				'	The two of you laugh together over your agreement in pubic hair fashion.'
+			end
 			act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 		end
 
@@ -458,62 +463,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 					'	"Ugh! Everything! He''s an annoying little brat! He just spends all his time playing football with his friends and if I''m around he''ll scream at me until I go away. He''s always asking me to do his homework for him and worst of all he''s always trying to spy on me in the shower!"'
 					'	"What? You don''t have a latch or something to stop him?"'
 					'	You blush. "Uh, yeah I do, but I, uh, forget to lock it sometimes..."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 
 				elseif npc_rel['A34'] < 40:
 					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my annoying little brother."'
 					'	Mari sits up a bit. "Really? What''s so irritating about him?"'
 					'	"Oh, nothing much. Just sibling squabbles. He''s not all that bad, just gets on my nerves sometimes."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 
 				elseif npc_rel['A34'] < 60:
 					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my little brother."'
 					'	"That sounds nice. What are they like?"'
 					'	"Well to be honest, my sister can be a bit of a slut, but she''s still the best one I could ask for. My brother loves playing football so sometimes I join him and his friends at the field."'
 					'	"Maybe I''ll get to meet them one day!"'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 
 				elseif npc_rel['A34'] < 80:
 					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my silly little brother."'
 					'	Mari smiles at you. "That''s sounds nice."'
 					'	You think of your siblings and smile. "Yeah. It is."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
-
+					
 				elseif sisterLesb >= 5:
-					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
-					'	Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
-					'	Your mind wanders back to your sister and how you sometimes wake her up in the middle of the night to fool around with her. "You could say that..."'
+                    '    "Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
+                    '    Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
+                    '    Your mind wanders back to your sister and how you sometimes wake her up in the middle of the night to fool around with her. "You could say that..."'
 
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
-
-				elseif brothersex < 1:
-					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
-					'	Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
-					'	You think of your siblings and smile, "Yeah. We are."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
+                elseif brothersex < 1:
+					'    "Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
+                    '    Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
+                    '    You think of your siblings and smile, "Yeah. We are."'
 
 				elseif sisterLesb >= 5 and brotherSex < 7:
 					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
 					'	Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
 					'	Your mind wanders back to your siblings and how you''ve fooled around with both of them separately.'
 					'	"You could say that..."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 
 				elseif sisterLesb >= 5:
 					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my adorable little brother. I love them both so much!"'
 					'	Mari smiles at you. "You sound close."'
 					'	Your mind wanders back to your siblings and how you''ve fooled around with your sister and even had full fledged intercourse with your brother. Your thoughts wander to the memory of the last time his cock was inside you and it causes you to blush.'
 					'	"You could say that..."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
-
-				else
-					'	"Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my silly little brother."'
-					'	Mari smiles at you. "That''s sounds nice."'
-					'	You think of your siblings and smile. "Yeah. It is."'
-					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
+                else
+                    '    "Yeah, I''ve got two. My sister who''s about the same age as you are and my silly little brother."'
+                    '    Mari smiles at you. "That''s sounds nice."'
+                    '    You think of your siblings and smile. "Yeah. It is."'
 				end
+					act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 			else
-				'	"No, there''s just me.'
+				'	"No, there''s just me."'
 				act 'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_chat'
 			end
 		end
@@ -687,7 +682,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 		act'"What''s that?"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading6.jpg"></center>'
-			'	She stands up and gives you a tight hug. Once again you feel her soft breasts molding into yours and her hot skin rubbing against you. Her hug is so tight that your hips are being pressed together and you can feel her bush between your legs.'
+			if pcs_pubes < 11:
+				'	She stands up and gives you a tight hug. Once again you feel her soft breasts molding into yours and her hot skin rubbing against you. Her hug is so tight that your hips are being pressed together and you can feel her bush between your legs.'
+			else
+				'	She stands up and gives you a tight hug. Once again you feel her soft breasts molding into yours and her hot skin rubbing against you. Her hug is so tight that your hips are being pressed together and you can feel her bush brushing against your own.'
+			end
 			'	Pulling back with a smile she says, "Always make friends with your co-workers. Especially girls. We have to stick together you know!"'
 			'	You can''t help but smile back, saying, "We sure do Mari!"'
 			act'Continue':gt 'foto_models','mari_modelling_chat'
@@ -718,7 +717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 					'	"So then how <i>did</i> you get hired here?"'
 					'	Mari looks down at her book smiling in a way that looks like she''s slightly embarrassed. "I just... kind of... walked in... I saw some of the albums they have by the entrance, thought, ''Hey, maybe I can do this?'' and asked if I could get hired here."'
 					'	"And they hired you just like that?" you ask.'
-					'	"Well... There were a couple hoops I had to jump through. I wasn''t exactly legal yet, so I had to buy a fake passport that said I was just to get started. But as you can see, it was well worth it!"'
+					'	"Well... There were a couple hoops I had to jump through. Don''t tell anyone but I was 17 at the time so I had to buy a fake passport just to get started. But as you can see, it was well worth it!"'
 					mari_fakepassport = 1
 					act'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_modelling_chat'
 				end
@@ -731,11 +730,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 			*clr & cla
 			mari_modelling_ask = 1
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading2.jpg"></center>'
-			'	"Wait, so how old were you when you started working here?"'
-			if year = 2016:'	"I was 17. I actually only just turned 18 this year."'
-			if year > 2016:'	"I was 17."'
-			'	"And you said you bought a fake passport to work here?"'
-			'	"Yup!"'
+			'	"Wait, you used a fake passport to start working here?"'
+			'	"Yeah."'
+			'	"So how old are you now?'
+			if year = 2016:
+				'	"I''m 18 now, thankfully. My birthday was actually just this last May."'
+			elseif year > 2016 and month > 5:
+				'	"I''m <<2016 - 1998>>. I turned 18 back in 2016."'
+			else
+				'	"I''m <<2016 - 1999>>. I turned 18 back in 2016."'
+			end
 			if age < 18 and fakepassport = 1:
 				act '"Did you buy it from that suspicious guy at the train station?"':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -743,20 +747,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 					'	"Hey, did you buy it from that suspicious guy at the train station?" you ask her.'
 					'	She perks up as you say this.'
 					'	"I did! How did you know? Are you using one now? How old are you?"'
-					act'"I''m <<age>>."':
+					act'Tell her shyly':
 						cla
+						*nl
 						'	"I''m <<age>>... You''re not going to tell anyone are you?"'
-						'	"How could I? You basically did the same thing I did. Besides, girls like us have to stick together you know!"'
+						'	"Are you kidding? How could I? You basically did the same thing I did. We''d both get in trouble!" she laughs.'
 						act '"Hey..."':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading6.jpg"></center>'
-							'	"Hey... this reminds me for some reason... The guy who auditioned you... Did he also make you strip down before telling you how old you needed to be to work here?"'
+							'	"Hey... this reminds me for some reason... The guy who interviewed you... Did he also make you strip down before telling you how old you needed to be to work here?"'
 							'	Mari jumps up out of her seat to finish your sentence, "And then told you that he liked your naked body so you should go to the train station and buy a fake passport??"'
 							'	"Yeah he did!" you cry out. "What a perv! Going out of his way to make excuses to take pictures of underage girls like us!"'
 							'	You laugh about it together and then try to quiet down a bit, remembering you should probably not spread it around that you''re only <<age>>...'
 							act'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_modelling_chat'
 						end
 					end
+					act'Tell her excitedly':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading6.jpg"></center>'
+						'	"I''m <<age>>!"'
+						'	"What??" she cries, jumping up excitedly. "That''s crazy!"'
+						'	"I know right? What are the odds that two girls like us from outside the city would both buy fake passports to end up here?"'
+						'	"You said you visit your grandparents in Gadyukino sometimes right? Maybe it''s something in the water!" she laughs.'
+						'	You laugh with her for a moment before the both of you calm down again.'
+						'	"Hey... this reminds me for some reason... The guy who auditioned you... Did he also make you strip down before telling you how old you needed to be to work here?"'
+						'	"And then told you that he liked your naked body so you should go to the train station and buy a fake passport??"'
+						'	"Yeah he did! What a perv! Going out of his way to make excuses to take pictures of underage girls like us!"'
+						'	You both burst into fits of laughter before clapping your hands over your mouths and trying to stifle your hysterics. You probably shouldn''t spread it around that you''re only <<age>>...'
+						act'Keep chatting':gt 'foto_models','mari_modelling_chat'
+						end
+					end
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -788,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_modelling_chat':
 					act '"I''m <<age>>, I never used a fake passport."':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading3.jpg"></center>'
-						'	"Oh no, I''ve never bought a fake passport. I''m <<age>> and I''ve always been legal to work here, I just know about the guy. It was where the Gopniks in my school would go to get their fakes so they could buy booze," you say with a laugh.'
+						'	"Oh no, I''ve never bought a fake passport. I''m <<age>> and I''ve always been working here legally, I just know about the guy. It was where the Gopniks in my school would go to get their fakes so they could buy booze," you say with a laugh.'
 						'	"Oh! I didn''t realize he was that well known."'
 						act'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1483,7 +1503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystal_chat':
 						'	Suddenly you realize Krystal is giving you a weird look.'
 						'	"W-What...?" you stammer. "Is there something on my face?"'
 						'	"No..." she says while eyeing you up. "I just wanted you to know that if you ever want to do some uhh... ''fat burning exercises'' with me and Ben... you''re more than welcome to join us." She gives you another smirk as she bites her lip.'
-						if exhibitionist_lvl < 2:
+						if pcs_inhib < 50:
 							'	You break eye contact with her and look away, blushing furiously and try to mumble some kind of response. "I... uhh... ummm... yeah..."'
 							'	<i>What the hell am I even supposed to say to that?</i> you think to yourself.'
 							act'Keep chatting':gt'foto_models','krystal_chat'

locations/stripclub.qsrc

@@ -19,20 +19,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	
 	if hour = 2:
 		'The strip club is closing and security guard ushers everyone out.'
-	elseif hour > 2 and hour < 15:
+	elseif hour > 2 and hour < 11:
 		'The strip club is closed. You notice a sign on the door: The business hours are between 15 - 02.'
 	else
-
-		if rand(1, 100) <= 30 and stripday ! daystart:
-			stripday = daystart
-			cfnm = 1
-		elseif stripday ! daystart:
-			stripday = daystart
-			cfnm = 0
-		end
-
-		if cfnm = 1:'Tonight''s performance will only feature male strippers. The entrance fee is 500 <b>₽</b>.'
-		if cfnm = 0:'Tonight''s performance will only feature female strippers. The entrance fee is 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 		
 		if stripdolg > 0:
 			if money >= 50000:
@@ -144,13 +133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					end
 				end
 			end
-
-			if cfnm = 0 and stripwork > 0:
-				act 'Walk into the dressing room':frost = 0 & gt 'stwork', 'start'
-			
-			elseif cfnm > 0 and stripwork > 0:
-				'The strip club is closed off to female employees today, male strippers only.'
-			end
+			act 'Walk into the dressing room':frost = 0 & gt 'stwork', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 

locations/stwork.qsrc

@@ -38,46 +38,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	publichot = pcs_dancero/2 + pcs_apprnc/4 + city_stripping/4 + stripKoef + stripKoef2 + stripKoef3 + stripKoef4 + stripKoef5 + stripKoef6 + stripKoef7
 	publichotstart = publichot
-
-	if hour >= 18 or hour <= 2:
-		if cumloc[1] = 0 and cumloc[2] = 0 and cumloc[4] = 0 and cumloc[5] = 0 and cumloc[6] = 0 and cumloc[7] = 0 and cumloc[11] = 0 and cumloc[14] = 0:
-			if pcs_makeup >= 4:
-				if pcs_hairbsh = 1:
-					if pcs_sweat < 20:
-						if pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
-							if fingal <= 0:
-								act '<b>Go on stage</b>':stpredmet = 3 & gt 'stwork2', 'strip'
+	act 'Exit the club':gt 'stripclub', 'start'
+	act '<b>Go on stage</b>':
+		if hour >= 11 or hour <= 2:
+			if cumloc[1] = 0 and cumloc[2] = 0 and cumloc[4] = 0 and cumloc[5] = 0 and cumloc[6] = 0 and cumloc[7] = 0 and cumloc[11] = 0 and cumloc[14] = 0:
+				if pcs_makeup >= 4:
+					if pcs_hairbsh = 1:
+						if pcs_sweat < 20:
+							if pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes <= 19:
+								if fingal <= 0:
+									stpredmet = 3 & gt 'stwork2', 'strip'
+								else
+									'You aren''t allowed on stage, because of the black eye.'
+								end
 							else
-								'You aren''t allowed on stage, because of the black eye.'
+								'Nobody wants to see a stripper with hairy legs and untrimmed pubes. Have a shave before you go on stage!'
 							end
 						else
-							'Nobody wants to see a stripper with hairy legs and hairy pubes. Have a shave before you go on stage.'
+							'Damn, you stink like a pigsty, take a shower before going on stage.'
 						end
 					else
-						'Damn, you stink like a pigsty, take a shower before going on stage.'
+						'The least you can do is brush your hair.'
 					end
 				else
-					'The least you can do is brush your hair.'
+					'You need to put on very thick makeup if you want people to be impressed by your beauty.'
 				end
 			else
-				'You need to put on very thick makeup if you want people to be impressed by your beauty.'
+				'There is some visible semen on your body. Wash yourself off before going on stage.'
 			end
 		else
-			'There is some visible semen on your body. Wash yourself off before going on stage.'
+			'You''re done for today. Time to head home.'
 		end
-	else
-		'You''re done for today. Time to head home.'
 	end
-	
+	act 'Use staff toilet':gt 'stwork', 'toilet'
+	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
+	act 'Change your clothes':gt 'wardrobe', 'start'
 	act 'Have a cup of water (0:05)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 	if money >= 100:
 		act 'Have a snack (0:05) (100 <b>₽</b>)': money -= 100 & gs 'food', 'snack'
 	end
-	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
-	if pcs_hairbsh = 0: act 'Brush your hair': gt 'mirror', 'brush'
-	act 'Change your clothes':gt 'wardrobe', 'start'
-	act 'Use staff toilet':gt 'stwork', 'toilet'
-	act 'Exit the club':gt 'stripclub', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'stripgirl':
@@ -122,14 +121,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 	''
 	'You enter a dirty and smelly staff bathroom that''s probably never been cleaned.'
 	'There is no mirror, only a grimy shower, toilet, and basin'
-
+	act 'Leave the toilet':gt 'stwork', 'start'
+	act 'Have a shower and get ready for work':
+		cls
+		dynamic $showerdin
+		minut += 10
+		makupskl_exp += rand(1,3)
+		kosmetica -= 3
+		vidageday -= 1
+		pcs_makeup = 4
+		pcs_hairbsh = 1
+		'<h3>Staf Toilet</h3>'
+		'<h5>Shower</h5>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/brothelShower.jpg"></center>'
+		*nl
+		'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, then head to the shower. You wash yourself thoroughly, brush your hair, and put on heavy you makeup for the customers.'
+		dynamic $brit
+		act 'Get out and dry off':gt $locM, $metkaM
+	end
 	act 'Have a shower':
 		cls
 		dynamic $showerdin
 		'<h3>Staf Toilet</h3>'
 		'<h5>Shower</h5>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/brothelShower.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		*nl
 		'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, then head to the shower. You wash yourself thoroughly to be as clean as possible for potential customers.'
 		dynamic $brit
 		act 'Get out and dry off':gt $locM, $metkaM
@@ -157,8 +173,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 	dynamic $tampon
 	dynamic $quickwash
 	dynamic $basin
-
-	act 'Leave the toilet':gt 'stwork', 'start'
 end
 
 --- stwork ---------------------------------

locations/stwork2.qsrc

@@ -6,18 +6,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Stage</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/stripclub/stripclub1.jpg"></center>'
 
-	if publichot < 10:$pubhot = 'booing you, you hear someone shout, "Get this stupid cow off the stage."'
-	if publichot >= 10 and publichot < 20:$pubhot = 'clearly showing discontent with your dancing. They want you off the stage as quickly as possible.'
-	if publichot >= 20 and publichot < 30:$pubhot = 'clearly looking bored, drinking and talking among themselves, ignoring you.'
-	if publichot >= 30 and publichot < 60:$pubhot = 'sometime looking at you, smiling and enjoy the performance.'
-	if publichot >= 60 and publichot < 70:$pubhot = 'watching you with genuine interest while conversing with each other over their beers.'
-	if publichot >= 70 and publichot < 80:$pubhot = 'having their attention focused on you.'
-	if publichot >= 80 and publichot < 90:$pubhot = 'with strained faces, sweat beading on their foreheads, their arousal clearly showing.'
-	if publichot >= 90:$pubhot = 'completely indulged in you. They''re clapping and waving money at you trying to get you attention.'
+	if striptip < 10:$pubhot = 'booing you, you hear someone shout, "Get this stupid cow off the stage."'
+	if striptip >= 10 and striptip < 20:$pubhot = 'clearly showing discontent with your dancing. They want you off the stage as quickly as possible.'
+	if striptip >= 20 and striptip < 30:$pubhot = 'clearly looking bored, drinking and talking among themselves, ignoring you.'
+	if striptip >= 30 and striptip < 60:$pubhot = 'sometime looking at you, smiling and enjoy the performance.'
+	if striptip >= 60 and striptip < 70:$pubhot = 'watching you with genuine interest while conversing with each other over their beers.'
+	if striptip >= 70 and striptip < 80:$pubhot = 'having their attention focused on you.'
+	if striptip >= 80 and striptip < 90:$pubhot = 'with strained faces, sweat beading on their foreheads, their arousal clearly showing.'
+	if striptip >= 90:$pubhot = 'completely indulged in you. They''re clapping and waving money at you trying to get you attention.'
 
 	'There are men sitting in front of the stage <<$pubhot>>.'
 
-	if hour >= 18 or hour <= 2:
+	if hour >= 11 or hour <= 2:
+		if stpredmet = 3:lapdance = 0
 		if stpredmet > 0:
 			act 'Striptease 5 minutes (<<stpredmet>> items of clothing)':
 				cls
@@ -25,7 +26,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 				stpredmet -= 1
 				pcs_sweat += 5
 				fat -= 3
-				pcs_mood -= rand(2, 6)
 				dancero_exp += rand(2, 4)
 				inhib_exp += rand(2,5)
 				city_stripping += rand(1,2)
@@ -33,9 +33,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 				if stpredmet = 1:pcs_sweat += 5
 				if stpredmet = 0:pcs_hairbsh = 0 & stripdancesum += 1
 
-				publichot += rand(pcs_dancero/5, pcs_dancero/3)
-
-				if publichotstart = publichot: publichot -= rand(5, 10) & publichotstart = publichot
+				striptip = rand(pcs_dancero,100)
+				lapdance += striptip
 
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/stripclub/stripclub2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -45,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 					vesrand = rand(0, 100)
 
 					if vesrand >= 75:
-						publichot -= rand(5, 10)
+						striptip -= rand(5, 10)
 						'You overhear some of the customers right next to the stage, "Look at her fat hanging out. Her gut and ass shaking like jelly."'
 					end
 				end
@@ -70,10 +69,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 				if stpredmet = 0:pcs_makeup = 0 & stripdancesum += 1
 
 				!pcs_hairbsh = 0
-				publichot += rand(pcs_dancero / 10, pcs_dancero / 5)+ rand(pcs_dancpol / 5, pcs_dancpol / 2)
-
-				if publichotstart = publichot:publichot -= rand(5, 10) & publichotstart = publichot
-
+				striptip = rand(pcs_dancpol,100)
+				lapdance += striptip
+				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/stripclub/strippole.jpg"></center>'
 				'You step up on the stage and the music starts. You grab hold of the pole and acrobatically slide around it while you teasingly undress.'
@@ -83,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 
 					if vesrand >= 75:
 						'Performing another trick on the pole you can not support your weight and fall flat to the floor. The crowd laughs, "Hey, hippopotamus, stomp back to the swamp where you came from."'
-						publichot -= 15
+						striptip -= 15
 						fingalrand = rand(0, 100)
 						if fingalrand >= 75:
 							fingal += rand(2, 5)
@@ -93,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 						end
 					end
 					if vesrand >= 50:
-						publichot -= rand(5, 10)
+						striptip -= rand(5, 10)
 						'You overhear some of the customers right next to the stage, "Look at her fat hanging out. Her gut and ass shaking like jelly."'
 					end
 				end
@@ -105,9 +103,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strip':
 		end
 
 		if stpredmet = 0:
-			if publichot >= 70:
+			if lapdance >= 150:
 				privatrand = rand(0, 100)
-				if privatrand >= 70:
+				if privatrand >= 50:
 					'After you finish dance, the security guard approaches you and tells you that you have a customer wanting a private show.'
 					gs 'stwork2', 'privatdance'
 					exit
@@ -126,19 +124,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tipcalculator':
 	paymin = 0
 	paymax = 0
 	
-	if publichot < 30:
+	if striptip < 30:
 		'Nobody even noticed you or your efforts on the stage.'
-	elseif publichot < 60:
+	elseif striptip < 60:
 		'A couple of people looked at you but nothing more than that, you didn''t receive a tip.'
-	elseif publichot < 70:
+	elseif striptip < 70:
 		paymax = 1
 		if payrand = 0: 'A couple of people looked at you but nothing more than that, you didn''t receive a tip.'
-	elseif publichot < 80:
+	elseif striptip < 80:
 		chance = 5
 		paymin = 3
 		paymax = 10
 		'The customers are pleased with your performance. They give you a small tip.'
-	elseif publichot < 90:
+	elseif striptip < 90:
 		chance = 10
 		paymin = 10
 		paymax = 50

locations/vanrPar.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif hour >= 18 and hour <= 21 and brother_ev1 ! daystart and rand(0,2) = 1:
+	elseif hour >= 18 and hour <= 23 and brother_ev1 ! daystart and rand(0,4) < 2:
 		cla
 		*clr
 		brother_ev1 = daystart