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      locations/andreihunter.qsrc
  2. 75 75
      locations/andrey.qsrc
  3. 39 39
      locations/anekdot.qsrc
  4. 214 214
      locations/anushapt.qsrc
  5. 161 160
      locations/anushaptbr.qsrc
  6. 197 197
      locations/anushka.qsrc
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      locations/anushkachat.qsrc
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+ 17 - 17
locations/andreihunter.qsrc

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ boyage = year - boyage
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrei</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big172.jpg"></center>'
-'Andrei is the leader of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadukino.'
+'Andrei is the leader of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino while living close by. He''s <<boyage>> years old and divorced.'
 if huntersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if huntersAndreiQw >= 0 and huntersAndreiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and huntersAndreiQw < 15:'You have friendly relations with him.'
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ act 'Chat (0:30)':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if huntersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrei, learning interesting tidbits about hunting.'
+	if huntersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chat with Andrei. You learn interesting tidbits about hunting from him.'
 	if huntersAndreiQw < 0:'You talk to Andrei. He makes it clear he''d rather not talk to you, but takes part in the conversation anyway.'
 
 	act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You flirt with Andrei. He doesn''t say so aloud but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out when he thinks you aren''t looking.'
+			'You flirt with Andrei. He doesn''t say so aloud, but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out when he thinks you aren''t looking.'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Andrei while you flirt and are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
+				'You smile sweetly at Andrei while you flirt and you are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your lips touch and your heart skips a beat. Andrei takes control and continues aggressively, you find yourself responding to his whims.'
+					'Your lips touch... your heart skips a beat. Andrei takes control and continues aggressively, so you find yourself responding to his whims.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrei whispered, when your lips finally parted. You nod eagerly and Andrei gently took you by the hand and led you to his bed.'
+							'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrei whispers when your lips finally part You nod eagerly then Andrei gently takes you by the hand and leads you to his bed.'
 							act 'Go':gt 'hunterLoveSex','Andrei'
 						end
 					else
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrei says when your lips finally parted. "For now though, let''s get back."'
+							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrei says when your lips finally part. "For now though, let''s go back."'
 
 							act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 						end
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Sorry, Andrei, I can''t right now", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+					'"Sorry... Andrei... I can''t right now", you tell him. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
 
 					act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 				end
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend time together with Andrei. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is happy with your company, you see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
+			'You spend time together with Andrei. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is happy with your company. You can see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You catch Andrei''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leaves no doubt what you want. He nods, places an arm around your shoulders, and leads you inside.'
+		'You catch Andrei''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leaves no doubt what you want. He nods then places an arm around your shoulders to lead you inside.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'As soon as you walked up to Andrei he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you along.'
+	'As soon as you walked up to Andrei, he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you towards him.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go with Andrei, his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don''t mind.'
+		'You go with Andrei while his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don''t mind.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		'"No, Andrei, not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
+		'"No, Andrei not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
 		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
 end
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0:
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Andrei, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you said. You leave while trying not to look at him.'
+		'"Andrei, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you say. You leave while trying not to look back at him.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
@@ -210,9 +210,9 @@ if huntersAndreiQw < 10 and huntersAndreiLove > 0:
 	huntersAndreiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Andrei, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he said firmly and walked away.'
-	'"Well , maybe it''s for the best," you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
+	'You want to talk to Andrei, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he says firmly and walks away.'
+	'"Well , maybe it''s for the best," you think as you leave in the other direction.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end

+ 75 - 75
locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if young_shop_work = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You knock on Mr. Sobulyagin''s office door and when he sees you enter, his expression hardens. "What do you want?" he asks with a scowl.'
+		'You knock on Mr. Sobulyagin''s office door and when he sees you enter his expression hardens. "What do you want," he questions you with a scowl.'
 	end
 
 	if (young_shop_work = 1 and week = 5 and hour = 20) or (young_shop_work1 = 1 and week = 7 and hour = 15) or (young_shop_work2 = 1 and week = 5 and hour = 15):
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You knock on the door and someone calls you in from the other side, telling you to enter. When you enter, you''re greeted by the sight of a sour-faced older man reading papers at his desk. When he sees you, his expression hardens. "Surprised to see an old man managing a clothing store for teenage girls?" he grunts. You didn''t even say anything yet, but he doesn''t seem to care. "Yeah, I get that a lot..." he adds under his breath before sighing and looking back to his papers. "What do you need?"'
+	'You knock on the door and someone calls you in from the other side, "You can enter." After you enter, you''re greeted by the sight of a sour-faced older man reading papers at his desk. When he sees you, his expression hardens. "Surprised to see an old man managing a clothing store for teenage girls?" he grunts. You didn''t even say anything yet, but he doesn''t seem to care. "Yeah, I get that a lot...," he adds under his breath before sighing and looking back to his papers. "What do you need?"'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 	act 'Mention the for hire sign':
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'He barely glances your way as he shuffles some papers around. "Oh yeah, I forgot about that...well, the job is still open. I need an extra worker around the store and it needs to be a girl, a young girl," he says before suddenly dropping the papers and looking at you accusingly. "And before you start with that gender equality crap, I had a guy working here and all he cared about was getting into the pants of female customers rather than their wallets. I''m saving myself from another headache...<i>hopefully</i>."'
+		'He barely glances your way as he shuffles some papers around. "Oh yeah I forgot about that... well, the job is still open. I need an extra worker around the store and it needs to be a girl... a young girl," he says before suddenly dropping the papers to look at you accusingly. "Before you start with that gender equality crap, I had a guy working here and all he cared about was getting into the pants of female customers rather than their wallets. I''m saving myself from another headache...<i>hopefully</i>."'
 		*nl
-		'You''re at a loss for words, this wasn''t how you imagined the interview to go, but your silence goes unnoticed as the store manager continues to talk. "The salary is 205 ₽ a hour, alright? Trust me, no one is fighting you for the chance to work here but don''t think that means you can slack off. Miss work three times and you''re fired, no questions. I have two part-time positions, those are from 16:00 until 20:00, Monday through Friday. Or the weekend shift between 09:00 to 15:00."'
+		'You''re at a loss for words. This wasn''t how you imagined the interview to go, but your silence goes unnoticed as the store manager continues to talk. "The salary is 205 ₽ a hour alright? Trust me, no one is fighting you for the chance to work here, but don''t think that means you can slack off. Miss work three times and you''re fired... no questions. I have two part-time positions that are from 16:00 until 20:00 Monday through Friday or the weekend shift between 09:00 to 15:00."'
 		*nl
-		'He seems to have found what he was looking for, which is the employment documents "You''ll need to sign these to start work here." He holds them out to you, "So, are you interested?"'
+		'He seems to have found what he was looking for, which are the employment documents, "You''ll need to sign these to start work here." He holds them out to you, "So, are you interested?"'
 
 		act 'Don''t take the job':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 				young_shop_work = 1
 				minut += 5
 				*nl
-				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Monday at 15:00.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 				young_shop_work1 = 1
 				minut += 5
 				*nl
-				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Saturday at 09:00.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 !!				young_shop_work2 = 1
 !!				minut += 5
 !!				*nl
-!!				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+!!				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 !!				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Monday at 09:00.'
 !!				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 !!			end
@@ -93,26 +93,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 	'<b><center><font size="4">Manager Andrew M. Sobulyagin</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You knock on the door and Mr. Sobulyagin calls you in. Normally he would be reading the paper, but instead he''s just sitting there with a weird look on his face, almost like you scared him or something.'
+	'You knock on the door and Mr. Sobulyagin calls you in. Normally, he would be reading the paper, but instead he''s just sitting there with a weird look on his face. It''s almost like you scared him or something.'
 
 	if (week = 5 or week = 7) and young_shop_salary > 0:
 		if young_shop_miss = 0:
-			'"Came to get your pay?" he asks quickly and you nod. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
+			'"Came to get your pay," he asks quickly to which you nod yes. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
 		elseif young_shop_warned = young_shop_miss and young_shop_miss > 0:
-			'"Came to get your pay?" he asks quickly and you nod. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
+			'"Came to get your pay," he asks quickly to which you nod yes. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
 			'"You have missed <<young_shop_miss>> '+iif(young_shop_miss = 1, 'time', 'times')+'," he reminds you. "Don''t make a habit out of it. If you miss work 3 times, I will fire you.'
 		elseif young_shop_miss > young_shop_warned and young_shop_miss > 0:
 			young_shop_warned = young_shop_miss
-			'He gives you a hard look when he see''s it''s you. "You missed worked, remember what I said about missing work."'
-			'You nod. "I remember, I''m sorry."'
-			'He snorts slightly and shakes his head. "You better not forget about it the next time, here''s your pay." He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with your money inside.'
+			'He gives you a hard look when he see''s it''s you. "You missed worked, but remember what I said about missing work."'
+			'You nod. "I remember. I''m sorry."'
+			'He snorts slightly and shakes his head. "You better not forget about it the next time. Here''s your pay." He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with your money inside.'
 		end
 
 		act 'Grab the envelope and leave':
 			minut += 15
 			money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-			msg '<center>You''ve worked <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> hours and got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
-			'The manager counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it to you. With that he goes back to looking at the monitor of his computer.'
+			msg '<center>You''ve worked <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> hours and got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
+			'The manager counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it to you. With that done he goes back to looking at the monitor of his computer.'
 !! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 			young_shop_salary = 0
 			young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -128,14 +128,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'"I would like to resign," You say as you walk up to his desk.'
-		'Mr. Sobulyagin gives you a confused look. "Are you sure? I mean...If you''re serious I can arrange everything right now." He scratches his head and starts pulling out the required paperwork but pauses a moment. "But why so suddenly?"'
+		'Mr. Sobulyagin gives you a confused look. "Are you sure? I mean... If you''re serious I can arrange everything right now." He scratches his head and starts pulling out the required paperwork, but pauses a moment. "Why so suddenly?"'
 		act 'Change your mind':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"Actually, I''d like to think about this a bit more..." You say as you''re moving back towards the door. "Sorry for bothering you, Mr. Sobulyagin."'
-			'He shakes his head. "It''s fine, but if there''s nothing else, I''m busy right now."'
+			'"Actually, I''d like to think about this a bit more..." You say as you''re moving back towards the door. "Sorry for bothering you Mr. Sobulyagin."'
+			'He shakes his head. "It''s fine, but if there''s nothing else I''m busy right now."'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 		end
 		act 'Persist':
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"I''ve already made up my mind on this, " You say firmly.'
+			'"I''ve already made up my mind on this," you say firmly.'
 			'"Alright, alright," Mr. Sobulyagin says and starts filling out several forms before handing them over to you to sign.'
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 
-				msg '<center>For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
-				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. and hands it over to you.'
+				msg '<center>For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
+				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
 				young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office and closes the door. "Didn''t I tell you that missing work for three days means you''ll be fired! You''re no exception to the rules, girl."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl when he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. "Didn''t I tell you that missing work for three days means you''ll be fired! You''re no exception to the rules girl."'
 		act 'Agree and accept being fired':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -188,11 +188,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			minut +=15
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times," you sigh. Mr. Sobulyagin pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
+			'"You''re right. I''ve skipped out on work too many times," you sigh. Mr. Sobulyagin pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
 			msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
+				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
 				'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
@@ -207,11 +207,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/tears1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Please, I can''t lose the job! I really need the money, please don''t fire me! I promise to do better." As you say this, tears begin rolling down your cheeks.'
+			'"Please, I can''t lose the job! I really need the money. Please don''t fire me! I promise to do better," As you say this tears begin rolling down your cheeks.'
 			*nl
-			'Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs at you, obviously not swayed so easily by tears. He looks at you in silence, his dark eyes roaming over your body slowly as he licks his lips. "Listen, I''m not a bad guy," he says as he stands from his chair and walks to the door. "I''m willing to give you another chance, but you need to <i>show me</i> how important this job really is to you..." He cups his balls through his slacks and gives them a light squeeze.'
+			'Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs at you, obviously, not swayed so easily by tears. He looks at you in silence with his dark eyes roaming over your body slowly as he licks his lips. "Listen, I''m not a bad guy," he says as he stands from his chair and walks to the door. "I''m willing to give you another chance, but you need to <i>show me</i> how important this job really is to you..." He cups his balls through his slacks and gives them a light squeeze.'
 			*nl
-			'"Or you can leave and lose your job. It''s up to you, but those are your only options." He opens the door for you, allowing you to leave and lose your job if you don''t accept his offer.'
+			'"Or you can leave and lose your job. It''s up to you, but those are your only options." He opens the door for you allowing you to leave and lose your job if you don''t accept his offer.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office and closes the door. He nods and seems to be talking to himself as much as he is talking to you. He leans against his desk and cupping his crotch as he is smiling at you. "Well you know the deal if you want to keep your job."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. He nods and seems to be talking to himself as much as he is talking to you. He leans against his desk and cups his crotch as he is smiling at you. "Well you know the deal if you want to keep your job."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse and get fired (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -253,11 +253,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'"You''re right, and I''ve decided that I''m not doing you anymore favors to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
+				'"You''re right and I''ve decided that I''m not doing you anymore favors to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you, but puts his dick away. He pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
 				msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
+					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
 					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
@@ -278,9 +278,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him, he takes you into his office and closes the door. "You are missing too much work, the other employees are noticing. I am going to need something more from you to prove your deserve to keep your job."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. "You are missing too much work and the other employees are noticing. I am going to need something more from you to prove your deserve to keep your job."'
 		*nl
-		'He leans against his desk and cupping his crotch as he is smiling at you. "You can start of by sucking my cock then you can bend over and let me fuck you in the ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me that you still deserve to keep your job, got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat, and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
+		'He leans against his desk and cups his crotch as he is smiling at you. "You can start off by sucking my cock then you can bend over and let me fuck you in the ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me that you still deserve to keep your job got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat. I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times and I''m not doing that anymore to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them without a word.'
+				'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times and I''m not doing that anymore to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you, but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer to begin filling in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them without a word.'
 				msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
@@ -347,9 +347,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"And why in the hell would I do that?" Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs.'
-		'"Oh please! I''ll do anything you want, I really need this job!" You say, trying your absolute best to convince him.'
-		'"Anything? Ha! Fine, I know what you could do!" The manager says as his eyes begin to wander all over your body. "You can start off by sucking my cock and then bend over and let me stick my cock into your ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me you''re a hard worker, got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat, and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
+		'"And why in the hell would I do that," Mr. Sobulyagin asks scoffingly.'
+		'"Oh please! I''ll do anything you want. I really need this job!" You say trying your absolute best to convince him.'
+		'"Anything? Ha! Fine I know what you could do," The manager exclaims as his eyes begin to wander all over your body. "You can start off by sucking my cock then bend over and let me stick my cock into your ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me you''re a hard worker got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -357,8 +357,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Your face immediately turns beet-red as you try to comprehend what you''ve just heard. "You want me to give you a blowjob...and then have anal sex?" You don''t understand what the hell he''s thinking. "There''s no way I''ll do that!"'
-				'"Fine, then there''s the door!" Mr. Sobulyagin snaps, clearly upset with your answer.'
+				'Your face immediately turns beet-red as you try to comprehend what you''ve just heard. "You want me to give you a blowjob... then have anal sex?" You don''t understand what the hell he''s thinking. "There''s no way I''ll do that!"'
+				'"Fine then there''s the door," Mr. Sobulyagin snaps clearly upset with your answer.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
 		else
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reapply':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Mr. Sobulyagin doesn''t mind having you back, since you ended it all on quite good terms.'
+	'Mr. Sobulyagin doesn''t mind having you back since you ended it all on quite good terms.'
 	act 'Accept your previous position':
 		cla
 		minut += 15
@@ -415,26 +415,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job...I''ll do it."'
 	*nl
-	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it, admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
+	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles. "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, and then move on to licking up and down the entire shaft.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head then move on to licking the entire shaft up and down.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his dick growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue. You pull his pants down to his knee''s to make it easier to suck his cock.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his dick growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue. You pull his pants down to his knee''s to make it easier to suck his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj4.jpg"></center>'
-					'He keeps your head deep down his cock so that after a while your throat starts to feeling a little numb, as you hear him starting to grunt. "I''m about to cum," He yells out as he removes his hand from your head and leans fully back. You pull out, making a popping sound and set straight away with jerking him off.'
+					'He keeps your head deep down his cock, so that after a while your throat starts to feeling a little numb. You hear him starting to grunt. "I''m about to cum," He yells out as he removes his hand from your head and leans fully back. You pull out which makes a popping sound and set straight away with jerking him off.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finish':
@@ -450,9 +450,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 						*clr
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A101', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He starts grunting louder. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You do as he commands and he takes over jerking his cock. Suddenly he is shooting ropes of his hot cum in your mouth and all over your tongue. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum in your mouth. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp. "Now swallow." You do as you''re told and swallow his whole load.'
+						'He starts grunting louder. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You do as he commands and he takes over jerking his cock. Suddenly, he is shooting ropes of his hot cum in your mouth and all over your tongue. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum in your mouth. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp. "Now swallow." You do as you''re told and swallow his whole load.'
 						*nl
-						'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how hard of a worker you are, and how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!" With these words he walks out of the office, leaving you to put yourself in order.'
+						'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how hard of a worker you are and how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips up his pants you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!" With these words he walks out of the office leaving you to put yourself in order.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
@@ -475,24 +475,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say, trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
-	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy and I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
+	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, so just let me give you a blowjob like usual," You say trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
+	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy. I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "I''m willing to help you out, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath, you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -500,9 +500,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I''ve changed my mind, I can''t wait. I want your ass now, you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk, he quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
+				'"I''ve changed my mind and I can''t wait. I want your ass now, so you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk. He quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
 				*nl
-				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps, which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the lairing in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s on his cock.'
+				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the leering in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that done he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s left on his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso'
 				minut -= 5
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 					*clr
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired4.jpg"></center>'
-					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk, while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off, leaving your breasts exposed.'
+					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off that leaves your breasts exposed.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 					gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly, while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole, leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
+						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly as you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 						gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -532,12 +532,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 							gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A101', 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A101', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired6.jpg"></center>'
-							'He starts grunting louder, finally he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around, dropping to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp.'
+							'He starts grunting louder then he, finally, pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around to drop to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it begins to go limp.'
 							*nl
-							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
+							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
 							*nl
-							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has light it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance?" he asks, smiling smugly.'
-							'"Thank you very much!" You say, trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
+							'You slowly stand up and your anus hurts <i>a lot</i> because it feels like someone has lit it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance," he asks as he smiles smugly.'
+							'"Thank you very much," You say while trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
@@ -561,24 +561,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say, trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
-	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy and I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
+	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
+	'"Listen I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy. I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath, you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -586,9 +586,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I''ve changed my mind, I can''t wait. I want your ass now, you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk, he quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
+				'"I''ve changed my mind and I can''t wait. I want your ass now which you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top, as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk. He quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
 				*nl
-				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps, which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the lairing in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s on his cock.'
+				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the leering in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s left on his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso'
 				minut -= 5
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 					*clr
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired4.jpg"></center>'
-					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk, while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off, leaving your breasts exposed.'
+					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you. He reaches up and pulls your top off to leave your breasts exposed.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 					gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly, while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole, leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
+						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 						gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -618,12 +618,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 							gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A101', 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A101', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired6.jpg"></center>'
-							'He starts grunting louder, finally he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around, dropping to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp.'
+							'He starts grunting louder, finally, he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around to drop to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly, he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it begins to go limp.'
 							*nl
-							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
+							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
 							*nl
-							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has light it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance?" he asks, smiling smugly.'
-							'"Thank you very much!" You say, trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
+							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has lit it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance," he asks, smiling smugly.'
+							'"Thank you very much," You say trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'

+ 39 - 39
locations/anekdot.qsrc

@@ -5,52 +5,52 @@ if anrand = 0:
 	'What is the difference between a snowman and a snow-woman?'
 	'Snowballs.'
 elseif anrand = 1:
-	'Somewhere in the Atlantic Ocean, two submarines, Russian and American, come to the surface.'
-	'The Russian one is old and rusty, the American one is new and sleek matte black.'
-	'On the Soviet one, the crew lounges about lazily, and a drunken captain yells at them: "Who threw a valenok on the control board? I''m asking you, who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
-	'From the American submarine, a clean-shaven, sober, and smartly-dressed captain yells scornfully: "You know, folks, in America..."'
-	'The Russian captain dismissively interrupts him: "America??! Ain''t no fucking America no more!!"'
-	'[He turns back to his crew] "For the last time, who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
+	'Somewhere in the Atlantic Ocean two submarines, Russian and American, come to the surface.'
+	'The Russian one is old and rusty while the American one is new and sleek matte black.'
+	'On the Soviet one, the crew lounges about lazily and a drunken captain yells at them, "Who threw a valenok on the control board? I''m asking you who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
+	'From the American submarine, a clean-shaven, sober, and smartly-dressed captain yells scornfully, "You know, folks, in America..."'
+	'The Russian captain dismissively interrupts him, "America??! Ain''t no fucking America no more!!"'
+	'[He turns back to his crew] "For the last time who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
 elseif anrand = 2:
-	'Two old men on a bench in a nursing home:'
+	'Two old men on a bench in a nursing home.'
 	'One says, "My grandson asked me yesterday what I did during the sexual revolution."'
 	'The other replies, "So what did you tell him?"'
-	'"I told him I was captured almost immediately, and got a life sentence, washing dishes.'
+	'"I told him I was captured almost immediately and got a life sentence washing dishes.'
 elseif anrand = 3:
-	'My dog used to chase people on a bike a lot. It got so bad, finally I had to take away his bike.'
+	'My dog used to chase people on a bike a lot. It got so bad, finally, I had to take away his bike.'
 elseif anrand = 4:
 	'The bank was robbed today by a naked woman.'
 	'No-one could remember her face'
 elseif anrand = 5:
 	'I thought I''d tell you a good time travel joke - But you didn''t like it.'
 elseif anrand = 6:
-	'I heard a report about that stomach virus going around.'
-	'Apparently it causes 9 out of 10 people to suffer from diarrhea.'
+	'I heard a report about a stomach virus going around.'
+	'Apparently, it causes 9 out of 10 people to suffer from diarrhea.'
 	'I just can''t stop wondering about the one person who enjoys it.'
 elseif anrand = 7:
-	'I''m selling my parrot. Why? Because yesterday the bastard tried to sell me.'
+	'I''m selling my parrot. Why you ask? Because yesterday the bastard tried to sell me.'
 elseif anrand = 8:
 	'They threw me out of the cinema the other day for bringing my own food. Come on though, the prices are way too high and it''s been ages since I had a barbecue.'
 elseif anrand = 9:
-	'I went to the zoo the other day but they only had a dog on display. It was a shitzu.'
+	'I went to the zoo the other day, but they only had a dog on display. It was a shitzu.'
 elseif anrand = 10:
 	'An optimist sees light at the end of a tunnel and thinks it''s an exit'
 	'A pessimist sees light at the end of a tunnel and thinks it''s an oncoming train'
 	'A train driver sees two idiots on the tracks.'
 elseif anrand = 11:
-	'Yes, money can''t buy you happiness but I''d still feel a lot happier crying in a brand new BMW.'
+	'Yes, money can''t buy you happiness, but I''d still feel a lot happier crying in a brand new BMW.'
 elseif anrand = 12:
 	'Don''t be sad when a bird shits on your head. Be happy pigs can''t fly.'
 elseif anrand = 13:
 	'I used to believe the brain was the most important organ.'
-	'Then I thought, look what''s telling me that.'
+	'Then I thought, "Look what''s telling me that."'
 elseif anrand = 14:
-	'Light travels faster than sound'
+	'Light travels faster than sound.'
 	'That''s why a lot of people look smart until they start talking.'
 elseif anrand = 15:
-	'Stalking: When a couple enjoy long, romantic walks with each other but only one them is aware of that fact.'
+	'Stalking: When a couple enjoys long romantic walks with each other, but only one them is aware of that fact.'
 elseif anrand = 16:
-	'When a guy says he likes girls with a sense of humour, that doesn''t mean he wants a girl to be witty and funny'
+	'When a guy says he likes girls with a sense of humour that doesn''t mean he wants a girl to be witty and funny'
 	'He just wants someone to finally laugh at his jokes.'
 elseif anrand = 17:
 	'I never understood why "bra" is singular and "panties" are plural'
@@ -60,17 +60,17 @@ elseif anrand = 18:
 	'"Quite Lazy"'
 elseif anrand = 19:
 	'I always carry an EpiPen'
-	'My friend gave it to me when he was dying so it was obviously very important to him.'
+	'My friend gave it to me when he was dying, so it was obviously very important to him.'
 elseif anrand = 20:
 	'I bought a thesaurus yesterday'
-	'Not only is it terrible, it''s terrible.'
+	'Not only is it terrible, but it''s terrible.'
 elseif anrand = 21:
 	'A Chukcha sits on the shore of the Bering Strait. An American submarine surfaces.'
-	'The American captain opens the hatch and asks: "Which way is Alaska?"'
-	'The Chukcha points his finger: "That way!"'
-	'"Thanks!" says the American, shouts "South-South-East, bearing 159.5 degrees!" down the hatch and the submarine submerges.'
-	'Ten minutes later, a Soviet submarine emerges. The Russian captain opens the hatch and asks the Chukcha: "Where did the American submarine go?"'
-	'The Chukcha replies: "South-South-East bearing 159.5 degrees!"'
+	'The American captain opens the hatch and asks, "Which way is Alaska?"'
+	'The Chukcha points his finger. "That way!"'
+	'"Thanks," says the American then shouts "South-South-East, bearing 159.5 degrees!" down the hatch and the submarine submerges.'
+	'Ten minutes later, a Soviet submarine emerges. The Russian captain opens the hatch and asks the Chukcha, "Where did the American submarine go?"'
+	'The Chukcha replies, "South-South-East bearing 159.5 degrees!"'
 	'"Don''t be a smart-ass", says the captain, "just point your finger!'
 elseif anrand = 22:
 	'I have the heart of a lion and lifetime ban from the zoo.'
@@ -81,33 +81,33 @@ elseif anrand = 24:
 	'Give a man a fire and he''s warm for a day'
 	'Set him on fire and he''s warm for the rest of his life.'
 elseif anrand = 25:
-	'Father: Son, you were adopted'
-	'Son: What? I knew it! I want to meet my biological parents!'
-	'Father: We are your biological parents. Now pack up, they''ll be here to pick you up in 20 minutes.'
+	'Father says, "Son, you were adopted"'
+	'Son replies, "What? I knew it! I want to meet my biological parents!"'
+	'Father retorts, "We are your biological parents. Now pack up, because they''ll be here to pick you up in 20 minutes."'
 elseif anrand = 26:
-	'When I was younger, I felt like a man trapped in a woman''s body.'
+	'When I was younger I felt like a man trapped in a woman''s body.'
 	'Then I was born'
 elseif anrand = 27:
-	'I was raised as an only child, which really annoyed my sister.'
+	'I was raised as an only child which really annoyed my sister.'
 elseif anrand = 28:
-	'Father: Son, I don''t think you''re cut out to be a mime'
-	'Son: Why, was it something I said?'
+	'Father says, "Son, I don''t think you''re cut out to be a mime"'
+	'Son retorts, "Why? Was it something I said?"'
 elseif anrand = 29:
-	'My sister had a baby and they took a while to name her'
+	'My sister had a baby that they took a while to name her'
 	'I told her to name her soon before she turns into a criminal'
 	'I''m not having my niece on the news like all those other 17 year old criminals who have yet to be named.'
 elseif anrand = 30:
 	'I went into a shop for a book about turtles'
-	'The woman asked me "Hardback?"'
-	'I said yes, with the flippers.'
+	'The woman asked me, "Hardback?"'
+	'I said,  "Yes, but with the flippers."'
 elseif anrand = 31:
 	'Did you hear about the sick clown?'
 	'It was all shits and giggles.'
 elseif anrand = 32:
-	'My therapist says I have a preoccupation with vengeance'
+	'My therapist says that I have a preoccupation with vengeance'
 	'We''ll see about that'
 elseif anrand = 33:
-	'My father always used to say "Whatever doesn''t kill you, makes you stronger"'
+	'My father always used to say, "Whatever doesn''t kill you makes you stronger"'
 	'Until the accident at least.'
 elseif anrand = 34:
 	'The best time to add insult to injury is when you''re signing the cast.'
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@ elseif anrand = 35:
 	'I wrote a letter to the post office about my mail being stolen'
 	'To make sure they read it I put it inside a birthday card.'
 elseif anrand = 36:
-	'I''m sure wherever my father is, he''s looking down on us'
-	'He''s not dead, just very condescending.'
+	'I''m sure wherever my father is that he''s looking down on us'
+	'He''s not dead. He's just very condescending.'
 elseif anrand = 37:
 	'My father is a family man'
 	'He has three of them.'

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+ 214 - 214
locations/anushapt.qsrc


+ 161 - 160
locations/anushaptbr.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. There are two beds crammed into the room on each side. There is a small TV on a stand in the room, with a Playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
+	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. Two beds are crammed into the room with them parallel along the walls that leaves an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a Playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes that are in front of it.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	
@@ -19,45 +19,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
-		'The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. The older brother is maybe a 13 or 14, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls. Her younger brother is about a year or two younger.'
+		'The older brother gathers some courage, "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
 		*nl
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to, cause I know you little shitheads are always up to something."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to ''cause I know you little shitheads are always up to something."'
 		'"What do you care what we do? Shouldn''t you be off with your band or sucking some cock?"'
-		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him in the back of the head. "Watch what you say or I''ll beat your little ass."'
+		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him on the back of the head. "Watch what you say or I''ll beat your little ass."'
 		*nl
 		'He rubs the back of his head. "That''s what mother always says."'
-		'Anushka fumes a bit. "Fuck that bitch, don''t listen to her, listen to dad you little asshole."'
-		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her and looks at you now. "Don''t tell me, is this one of the famous groupies we''ve heard so many stories about?"'
+		'Anushka fumes a bit. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better listen to dad you little asshole."'
+		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her to look at you now. "Don''t tell me... is this one of the famous groupies that we''ve heard so many stories about?"'
 		act 'Excuse me?':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What do you mean?" you ask.'
-			'"We heard a lot of great stories about the band and the groupies from Radomir." Maksim answers.'
-			'"Don''t listen to what he says. He''s making up most of that stuff just to impress you." answers an irritated Anushka.'
-			'"Well, at least lets hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
+			'"What do you mean," you ask.'
+			'"We heard a lot of great stories about the band and the groupies from Radomir," Maksim answers.'
+			'"Don''t listen to what he says. He''s just making up most of that stuff to impress you," answers an irritated Anushka.'
+			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
 			act 'Why''s that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Well, she''s really mean to us. She always beats me up and won''t play games with us." the old brother says while looking at you sadly and the younger one nods in agreement.'
-				'"If you weren''t trying to film her while she is taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert." Anushka answers.'
-				'"Your brothers are really something else. But I guess even boys at this age think with their other head." you say.'
+				'"Well, she''s really mean to us. She always beats me up and won''t play games with us," the old brother says as he looks at you sadly. The younger one nods in agreement.'
+				'"If you weren''t trying to film her while she is taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert," Anushka answers.'
+				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller head," you say.'
 				*nl
-				'Anushka nods in agreement, "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust, even if these are to young to even understand it yet."'
+				'Anushka nods in agreement, "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust even if these are too young to even understand it yet."'
 				'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not too young."'
 				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you, "Maybe I should tell my dad what they''re up to."'
 				act 'Laugh':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear. Anushka continues on, "Look at them, they''re scared shitless."'
+					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear. Anushka continues on, "Look at them! They''re scared shitless."'
 					'Maksim is fuming with anger and starts yelling, "Get out of our room!"'
-					'You and Anushka keep on laughing while the brothers are pushing you out their room.'
+					'You and Anushka keep on laughing while the brothers are pushing you out of their room.'
 					act 'Leave':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','hallway'
 				end
 			end
@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought you groupie with you again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a match" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage, "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a match." She indicates by pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "All of us?"'
 		*nl
-		'She nods. "That''s the plan, the two of us against the two of you."'
-		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard. We''ll definitely beat you this time."'
+		'She nods. "That''s the plan. The two of us against the two of you."'
+		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time."'
 		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time? You got your asses handed to you the last time."'
 		'The boys nod at each other, "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
 		act 'What''s this all about?':
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh, don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them and always beat their ass."'
+			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their ass."'
 			'"Not this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
 			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -88,44 +88,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering, they must be planning something.'
-				'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-				'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you don''t really know what''s happening, it is some shooter game you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
+				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering amongst themselves. They must be planning something.'
+				'"Let''s play," Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You really don''t know what''s happening, because it is some shooter game you have never played before. However, Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-						'The game is pretty much over, all of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
+						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
 						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "You just got lucky is all."'
-						'"You suck, you suck!" Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
-						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like jackass''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+						'"You suck, you suck," Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like jackasses anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'The game is pretty much a draw, with no one getting the upper hand. All of a sudden you make a mistake and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. Which allows her to secure the win while he is trying to recover.'
-						'He begins to yell, "Not fair, you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in. "Anushka''s a cheater."'
-						'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking mad.'
+						'The game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden you make a mistake and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he is trying to recover.'
+						'He begins to yell, "Not fair... you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in, "Anushka''s a cheater."'
+						'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time," she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face despite her brother looking mad.'
 						*nl
-						'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka obviously taking it way too serious, after a bit Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back at them.'
-						'All of a sudden the door opens and their dad is standing there and bellows. "Knock it off!" Anushka and the older of her two brothers shut up at once, they obviously know better than to test their dad.'
-						'"But dad! She cheated again." Timofey pleads with him.'
-						'"But dad nothing, weren''t you supposed to be studying?" Eduard asks.'
+						'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka and obviously taking it way too serious. After a bit, Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back.'
+						'All of a sudden, the door opens and their dad is standing there. He bellows at everyone, "Knock it off!" Anushka and the older of her two brothers shut up at once. They obviously know better than to test their dad.'
+						'"But dad! She cheated again," Timofey pleads with him.'
+						'"But dad nothing. Weren''t you supposed to be studying," Eduard asks.'
 						*nl
-						'"Y-Yes..." both of them answer. "Well get to it" He says to them and then turns to Anushka and you. "You two get out of their room and Nush stop tormenting your brothers." he says he holds the door open ''til you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
-						'Anushka starts to respond. "I wasn''t..." but her dad interrupts her. "I don''t care, leave them alone so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that he turns and goes back to the living room, while Anushka goes back to her room.'
+						'"Y-Yes...," both of them answer. "Well get to i,t" He says to them then turns to Anushka and you. "You two get out of their room. Nush stop tormenting your brothers," he says as he holds the door open ''til you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
+						'Anushka starts to respond, "I wasn''t...," but her dad interrupts her. "I don''t care. You leave them alone, so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that he turns and goes back to the living room while Anushka and you go back to her room.'
 					else
-						'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush is just to good."'
-						'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-						'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK SLUT, THATS ALL YOU ARE GOOD AT!" He screams at Anushka.'
-						'Anushka eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth you little shit, it''s just a game."'
-						'Before anyone can say more the door suddenly opens and their dad is standing there and bellows. "Knock it off!" Everyone shuts up.'
-						'Then he looks at Maksim. "Did I just hear you call your sister a slut and tell her to suck a dick?" His voice is low and full of anger. Maksim visably shrinks under his dads gaze.'
+						'The game is pretty much over you. Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot, but enough that the brothers come close. They fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault ''cause Nush is just to good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off, "It''s not Timos fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again," she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK SLUT ''CAUSE THATS ALL YOU ARE GOOD AT," he screams at her.'
+						'Anushka eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth you little shit since it''s just a game."'
+						'Before anyone can say more, the door suddenly opens and their dad is standing there. He bellows, "Knock it off!" In response everyone shuts up.'
+						'He looks at Maksim. "Did I just hear you call your sister a slut and tell her to suck a dick?" His voice is low and full of anger. Maksim visibly shrinks under his dad''s gaze.'
 						'"She was teasing me." He weakly tries to defend himself, obviously knowing he is in trouble.'
-						'He turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers, go to you room." When she starts to open her mouth, he cuts her off. "I don''t want to hear it, go to your room." With that she gets up in a huff and heads back to her room.'
-						'As you leave just before the door closes you hear Ed say to Maksim. "What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?"'
-						'Maksim voices cracks. "I''m sorry." The door closes before you can hear more, now you just hear the muffled sounds behind the door.'
+						'He turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers and go to you room." When she starts to open her mouth he cuts her off, "I don''t want to hear it, go to your room." With that she gets up in a huff to head back to her room.'
+						'As you leave and just before the door closes you hear Ed say to Maksi,. "What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?"'
+						'Maksim voices cracks, "I''m sorry."'
+						'The door closes before you can hear any more, so now you just hear the muffled sounds emitting from behind the door.'
 					end
 					act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 				end	
@@ -137,43 +138,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		if brotherroom = 1:
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting there talking about something. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting there talking about something. The older brother is maybe a 13 or 14, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls. Her younger brother is about a year or two younger.'
 			act 'What are you up to?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/brothers.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we were going to have when we get older." Maksim responds.'
-				'"Oh? So you want to be like your big sister and be in a band too?" You ask them.'
-				'Maksim shakes his head. "I don''t want to be like her, I want to be like Radomir. Be the band leader and get all the bitches for free. He''s the best."'
-				'Before you can respond Timofey cuts in. "Arkadi is the best or maybe Valentin, they give us stuff."'
+				'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we were going to have when we get older," Maksim responds.'
+				'"Oh? So you want to be like your big sister and be in a band too," you ask them.'
+				'Maksim shakes his head. "I don''t want to be like her, but I do want to be like Radomir. I want to be the band leader and get all the bitches for free. He''s the best."'
+				'Before you can respond Timofey cuts in, "Arkadi is the best or maybe Valentin, ''cause they give us stuff."'
 				act 'What does Valentin give you?':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'"He''s pretty cool, gives us his old video games sometimes. He also has a bike like dad and spends a lot of time with our dad." Timofey answers.'
-					'"Does he ever let you sit on his bike?" you ask.'
-					'"Yeah, he lets us ride with him sometimes, it''s so awesome." says Timofey.'
-					'"But at the same time he doesn''t let us drink..." says Maksim.'
+					'"He''s pretty cool and he gives us his old video games sometimes. He also has a bike like dad and spends a lot of time with him," Timofey answers.'
+					'"Does he ever let you sit on his bike," you ask.'
+					'"Yeah, he lets us ride with him sometimes. It''s so awesome," says Timofey.'
+					'Maksim says, "However, at the same time he doesn''t let us drink..."'
 					act 'Who lets you drink?':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Arkadi!" they both shout. "But don''t tell our dad or he will get mad."'
+						'"Arkadi," they both shout. "Just don''t tell our dad because he will get mad."'
 						'"Don''t worry I won''t tell your dad." you reassure them.'
 						act 'What about Radomir?':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-							'"He''s pretty cool. I want to be like him when I grow up." Maksim confidently says.'
-							'"Because he''s a good musician?" you ask.'
-							'"No because he''s a pussy magnet! He can get any girl he wants." Maksim answers, giving you his best seductive grin which is laughable at best.'
+							'"He''s pretty cool. I want to be like him when I grow up," Maksim confidently says.'
+							'"Because he''s a good musician," you ask.'
+							'"No, because he''s a pussy magnet! He can get any girl he wants," Maksim answers while giving you his best seductive grin. It's laughable at best.'
 							*nl
 							'"That was way too much information for me. I think it''s time for me to head out. I''m feeling a bit nauseous."'
-							'With a disappointed look on his face Maksim says, then he turns to his brother as you are walking out and you over hear him say. "Bitches are a ruble a dozen, as Radomir says." Just as you close the door you hear the little brother agreeing, though likely have no idea what he is agreeing to.'
+							'With a disappointed look on his face Maksim turns to his brother as you are walking out which you overhear him say, "Bitches are a ruble a dozen just like Radomir says." Just as you close the door you hear the little brother agreeing. It''s very likely that he has no idea to what he is agreeing to.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end	
@@ -188,28 +189,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/browrestle.jpg"></center>'
 				'"What are you boys up too?" You ask them.'
-				'Maksim looks at you, blushing, "N-Nothing. G-Get out of our room."'
-				'You look around the bed and see a porn magazine laying on the bed.'
-				'Timofey starts teasing him, "Ha-ha. You got caught by one of Anushka''s friends looking at the magazine."'
-				'"Shut up. You''re just a little kid what do you know..."'
+				'Maksim blushes while looking at you, "N-Nothing... g-get out of our room."'
+				'You look around the bed and find a porn magazine laying on it.'
+				'Timofey starts teasing him, "Ha-ha... you got caught by one of Anushka''s friends looking at the magazine."'
+				'"Shut up. You''re just a little kid, so what do you know..."'
 				act 'Grab the magazine':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you but you easily manage to push him away.'
-					'"Give it back, it''s mine!" Maksim says dejected. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
+					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you, but you easily manage to push him away.'
+					'"Give it back, because it''s mine," Maksim says dejected. "It''s all your fault," he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
 					'Timofey just keeps on sneering at his brother.'
 					act 'Calm down':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad." you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
-						'"Wow. Two girls in one room... That is so hot." says Maksim. "Our sister is the only one with her own room, that''s so unfair."'
-						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you?." you try to explain.'
-						'"I guess... but she could sleep in the living room and then we could each have our own room." he says as if that was totally fair.'
-						'You looks through the magazine and the boy has some kinky tastes, you wonder who might have bought it for him. Then you throw the magazine back on the bed saying, "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
+						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad," you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
+						'"Wow, two girls in one room... that is so hot," says Maksim. "Our sister is the only one with her own room, that''s so unfair."'
+						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you," you try to explain.'
+						'"I guess... but she could sleep in the living room then we could each have our own room," he says as if that was totally fair.'
+						'You look through the magazine and the boy has some kinky tastes. You wonder who might have bought it for him, so you throw the magazine back onto the bed saying, "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end	
@@ -222,29 +223,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Where''s your brother?" You ask him.'
+				'"Where''s your brother," You ask him.'
 				'Maksim gives you a annoyed look. "Why do you care? He is likely outside playing in the dirt like a stupid kid."'
-				'You smile at that and ask. "Why arn''t you playing with him?"'
-				'"I''m not a little kid, am practically a grown man." He tells you.'
+				'You smile at that and ask, "Why arn''t you playing with him?"'
+				'"I''m not a little kid ''cause I''m practically a grown man," he tells you.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				act 'Ask if he wants to play':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod at that and try not to smile. "Oh I see, so do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+					'You nod at that while trying not to smile. "Oh I see, so do you want to play a game with me then?"'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'It looks like he is about to say no and then he smiles. "Ok but only if we make interesting."'
-						'"Interesting how?" You ask him.'
-						'He grins. "If I win you have to show me your boobs, if you win I will tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
+						'It looks like he is about to say no, but then he smiles. "Ok, but only if we make interesting."'
+						'"Interesting how," You ask him.'
+						'He grins. "If I win you have to show me your boobs, but if you win I will tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
 						act 'No, I don''t think so':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head. "No I don''t think so." You tell him.'
-							'He frowns. "Fine then get out of my room, get out!"'
-							'You back out of the doorway. "Ok ok I''m going."'
+							'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so," you tell him.'
+							'He frowns. "Fine then get out of my room. Just get out!"'
+							'You back out of the doorway. "Ok... ok, I''m going."'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end	
 							
@@ -254,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 							gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimplay.jpg"></center>'
-							'The two of you start playing, it quickly becomes obvious he has played this game a lot and is very good at it. You try but you just are unable to keep up with him. A couple of times you come close but often you are just outmatched. After a couple of matches he pauses the game and looks at you with a lustful grin. "Ha Ha, you lost, now show me your boobs."'
+							'The two of you start playing, but it quickly becomes obvious he has played this game a lot and is very good at it. You try, but you are just unable to keep up with him. A couple of times you come close to matching him. However, oftentimes you are just outmatched. After a couple of matches, he pauses the game and looks at you with a lustful grin. "Ha Ha you lost, so now show me your boobs."'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 								act 'Refuse to show him your boobs (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -262,11 +263,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head. "No I don''t think so, you''re to young anyways."'
-									'His eyes flash, he is obviously furious with you. "You promised!"'
+									'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so. You''re to young anyways."'
+									'His eyes flash because he is obviously furious with you. "You promised!"'
 									'You shrug. "I lied."'
-									'"GET OUT! Get out of my room!" He yells at you.'
-									'Not wanting anyone to come find out what is going on you quickly get up and leave.'
+									'"GET OUT! Get out of my room," he yells at you.'
+									'By not wanting anyone to come find out what is going on you quickly get up and leave.'
 									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							else
@@ -278,31 +279,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimshow.jpg"></center>'
-								'Well you did agree and he did win. You stand up and then pull your top aside to expose your breasts to him. His eyes get huge as he starts at your tits. Before either of you can say anything you hear the front door slam and Timofey yelling and running down the hall. "Maksim, Maksim, come see, come see."'
+								'Well, you did agree and he did win. You stand up then pull your top up to expose your breasts to him. His eyes get huge as he stares at your tits. Before either of you can say anything you hear the front door slam. Timofey is yelling as he's running down the hall. "Maksim... Maksim... come see... come see."'
 								*nl
-								'You pull your top back in place just before he bursts in the room, Maksim gives him a dirty look. "Why do you have to always ruin everything!"'
-								'Timofey stops obviously not understanding what is going on and looks between the two of you completely confused. "I just wanted to show you something." You use that time to slip out of the room and close the door behind you, leaving the two of them behind to argue.'
+								'You pull your top back into place just before he bursts in the room. Maksim gives him a dirty look. "Why do you have to always ruin everything?"'
+								'Timofey stops obviously not understanding what is going on. He looks between the two of you completely confused. "I just wanted to show you something." You use that time to slip out of the room and close the door behind you. You leave the two of them behind to argue.'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						end
 					else
 						'He shrugs. "Sure I guess."'
-						'You walk over and take a seat next to him and pick up the other controller.'
+						'You walk over to take a seat next to him and pick up the other controller.'
 						act 'Play':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 20
 							gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimplay.jpg"></center>'
-							'You play a game with him, he is pretty good but you are better and you manage to beat him, he just isn''t good enough to beat you and after a bit he seems to get annoyed by the fact he keeps losing and switches games. "I''m bored with that game." He switches to a single player game. You smile knowing he only switched games because he couldn''t win.'
+							'You play a game with him. He is pretty good, but you are better and you manage to beat him. Maksim just isn''t good enough to beat you. After a bit, he seems to get annoyed by the fact he keeps losing and switches games. "I''m bored with this game." He switches to a single player game. You smile knowing he only switched games because he couldn''t win.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end
 				end	
 			end
 		else
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here, doing whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your tits for a couple of moments, before saying. "Get lost."'
-			'Timofey looks over and adds. "Yeah get lost, no girls allowed." After that they just ignore you.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here. They do whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your tits for a couple of moments before saying, "Get lost."'
+			'Timofey looks over and adds, "Yeah get lost, ''cause no girls allowed." After that they just ignore you.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 		killvar 'brotherroom'
@@ -320,74 +321,74 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(1,2) = 1:
-		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought you groupie with you again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
-		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "Ok fine."'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing whatever they were doing. The older one gathers some courage, "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch." She points to the gaming console in their room.'
+		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "Ok... fine."'
 		*nl
-		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard. We''ll definitely beat you this time."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
-		'The boys nod at each other, "We''re sure we will win."'
+		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time."'
+		'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
+		'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure we will win."'
 		act 'Sit down and play':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			gaming_exp =+ rand(1, 3)
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering, they must be planning something.'
+			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
 			'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you don''t really know what''s happening, it is some shooter game you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
+			'The four of you are playing for several minutes and you don''t really know what''s happening. It appears to be some shooter game that you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain it as you play.'
 			act 'Finish':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over, all of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah yeah yeah, you won." Then she reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft I won it, Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass." Maksim says.'
+					'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
+					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah... yeah... yeah... you won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
+					'"Pfft I won it. Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass," Maksim says.'
 					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" Which quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The game is pretty much a draw, with no one getting the upper hand. Until Anushka starts to... well cheat. She uses her foot to keep jarring Maksim, or cover up Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try and return the favor to her and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting trying to screw each other up than actually win the game. Which leaves you to take advantage of their distractions and win the match.'
-					'Maksim begins to yell, "Not fair, you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in. "Anushka''s a cheater."'
-					'"You was doing the same to me. So you were cheating too." she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking mad.'
+					'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand. Until Anushka starts to... well cheat. She uses her foot to keep jarring Maksim or cover up Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try and return the favor to her. Soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting trying to screw each other up than actually win the game. Which leaves you to take advantage of their distractions to win the match.'
+					'Maksim begins to yell, "Not fair, because you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in, "Anushka''s a cheater."'
+					'"You was doing the same to me, so you were cheating too," she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face despite her brother looking mad.'
 					*nl
-					'Maksim obviously doesn''t see it that way. "You started it and your groupie took advantage."'
-					'Anushka laughs at that. "Well who''s fault is that? If you wasn''t consumed with trying to get back at me you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won, though unlikely."'
-					'Maksim responds by yelling. "Shut up..."'
-					'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet, you want dad to come back in here again?"'
-					'That makes him shut his mouth and glance at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When a moment passes and he doesn''t, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He is loud but not to loud.'
+					'Maksim obviously doesn''t see it that way. "You started it and your groupie took advantage of the situation."'
+					'Anushka laughs at that. "Well who''s fault is that? If you wasn''t consumed with trying to get back at me. It's unlikely that you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
+					'Maksim responds by yelling, "Shut up..."'
+					'Anushka interjects before he can say more, "Be quiet, do you want dad to come back in here again?"'
+					'That makes him shut his mouth and glance at the door as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When that moment passes and he doesn''t Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He is loud but not too loud.'
 					*nl
-					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle and she quickly starts to get the upper hand, he just isn''t old enough or big enough yet to beat his older sister. Once it becomes clear she is about to pin Maksim down, Timofey jumps on her back. The three of them wrestle around, Anushka managing to pin one of them but not the other a times, only for the first one to get lose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinnng her down but in the end they all just give up. All panting and out of breath, laying in a heap.'
-					'Finally Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on lets go back to my room." She says to you out of breath. As you follow her out of the room the brothers start to play another game and Makism says. "Next time will win." Just as Anushka closes the door on them.'
+					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t old enough or big enough yet to beat his older sister. Once it becomes clear she is about to pin Maksim down Timofey jumps on her back. The three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but not the other at the same time. This is because the first one gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinnng her down, but in the end they all just give up. All of them panting as they are out of breath and laying in a heap.'
+					'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on lets go back to my room." She says to you out of breath. As you follow her out of the room the brothers start to play another game and Makism says. "Next time will win." Just as Anushka closes the door on them.'
 				else
-					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just to good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get to aggressive like always and make it easier for me to kill you. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door and then glares at Anushka.'
+					'The game is pretty much over you since Anushka and you are able to win. It''s not by a lot, but enough the brothers come close. They always fall a little short in both matches.'
+					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+					'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off, "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get too aggressive like always which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad ''cause you got beat by a girl... again," She says in a teasing tone then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, ''cause we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door then glares at Anushka.'
 					*nl
-					'"Get out, get out of our room." He says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to push her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my god you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "Good then don''t, get out!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat."'
-					'Then she turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'Makism starts to yell but catches himself and while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Fuck you bitch, get out of our room!"'
-					'Then Timofey. Runs up to his sister. "No come back and play with us." He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Instantly Anushka tenses and angry seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					'"Get out... get out of our room," He says to Anushka as he pushes her to try and shove her off the bed.'
+					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you are such a baby. I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "Good then don''t... get out!"'
+					'Anushka sounds exasperated, "Fine, then, you little brat."'
+					'She turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+					'Makism starts to yell, but catches himself while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Fuck you bitch and get out of our room!"'
+					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us," He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+					'Instantly, Anushka tenses up and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
+					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy by pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
 				end
 				act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 			end	
 		end
 	else
-		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one visibly gathers up his courage; "What is it? What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one visibly gathers up his courage, "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch." She points to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Both of them get excited at that. "Yeah and this time we will beat you."'
 		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat us this time?."'
-		'The boys nod at each other, "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
-		'Anushka laughs. "Nah I don''t think so, maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls."'
-		'Maksim looks mad at that. "Shut up and play!" Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter taunting him.'
+		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
+		'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so, maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls."'
+		'Maksim looks mad at that. "Shut up and play!" Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter that taunts him.'
 		act 'Play':
 			*clr & cla
 			gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
@@ -396,40 +397,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Come on guys lets just have fun." You tell them.'
 			'"We will win this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
-			'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you are a lot better since last time. You learned a lot and you are helping out more than you did before. Enough that you and Anushka start to get the upper hand.'
+			'"Let''s play," Timofey says smiling.'
+			'The four of you are playing for several minutes. You''ve gotten a lot better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and you are helping out more than you did before. It''s enough that you and Anushka start to get the upper hand.'
 			act 'Finish':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over, all of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah yeah yeah, you won." Then she reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft I won it, Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass." Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" Which quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					'The game is pretty much over. All of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
+					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah, yeah, you won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
+					'"Pfft I won it, ''cause Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass," Maksim says.'
+					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The two of you are just slightly better than they are and after some time you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws the controller down. "Fuck!" Then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost, God you''re so stupid."'
-					'Timofey shakes his head. "You''re stupid, and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero and Nush tricks you every time."'
-					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth you little shit, she doesn''t trick me." He yells as he starts wailing on his little brother. Before you can even react Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone, he''s right. I baited you out and then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
-					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room, get out or I''ll tell dad you''re picking on us again."'
-					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, lets get out of here." Just as you start to go out, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass." Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out and slams the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					'The two of you are just slightly better than they are and after some time you come out on top. Maksim gets mad, so he throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost. God you''re so stupid."'
+					'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
+					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth you little shit. She doesn''t trick me," He yells as he starts beating on his little brother. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone, ''cause he''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
+					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell dad you''re picking on us again."'
+					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>> lets get out of here." Just as you start to go out Anushka stops then looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here to beat your ass." Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out. He slams the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
 				else
-					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" Then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just to good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get to aggressive and don''t work with Timofey, just trying to win it on your own. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door and then glares at Anushka.'
+					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot, but enough the brothers come close only to fall a little short in both matches.'
+					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+					'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get too aggressive and don''t work with Timofey. You''rejust trying to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad ''cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a teasing tone then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, ''cause we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door then glares at Anushka.'
 					*nl
-					'"Get out, get out of our room." He says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to push her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my god you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+					'"Get out... get out of our room," he says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to shove her off the bed.'
+					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
 					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "You only play with us to bully us. I don''t want to play with you anymore."'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat, I won''t." Then she turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'Makism starts to yell but catches himself and while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Go suck a cock or something."'
-					'Then Timofey, runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again won''t you?" He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Instantly Anushka tenses and angry seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat, I won''t." She turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+					'Makism starts to yell, but catches himself while still loud he doesn''t manage to yell, "Go suck a cock or something."'
+					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again won''t you," he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+					'Instantly, Anushka tenses up and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt," she says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
+					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy while pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
 				end
 				act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 			end

+ 197 - 197
locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-	'Valentin sits across from you and Anushka takes the seat next to you, sliding her arm around your shoulders and pulling you close to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we need your help with a plan."' 
+	'Valentin sits across from you while Anushka takes the seat next to you. She slides her arm around your shoulders and pulls you close to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we need your help with a plan."' 
 	*nl
-	'"What plan?", you ask, looking from her to Valentin and back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question: "We want to drug Mr <<$rand_teacher>>, you know, so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her but she casually ignores your shocked expression and explains what part she expects you to play in this: "I will go up and distract him and when I do, we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
+	'"What plan,", you ask. You look from her to Valentin then back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question. "We want to drug Mr <<$rand_teacher>>... you know... so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her, but she casually ignores your shocked expression. She explains the part she expects you to play in this, "I will go up and distract him. When I do we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
 	*nl
-	'You look at the pills, turning them this way and that uncertainly, and look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
-	'Valentin answers before Anushka can. "Make him tired, is all. He will sleep for a few hours and feel a little groggy for the rest of the day but nothing serious - we''re just gonna make detention a bit less boring, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''re not trying to kill him. So, you going to do it or not?"'
+	'You look at the pills then turning them uncertainly in your fingers. You look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
+	'Valentin answers before Anushka can, "They will make him tired is all. He will sleep for a few hours and feel a little groggy for the rest of the day, but nothing serious. We''re just gonna make detention a bit less boring <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not trying to kill him. Are you going to do this or not?"'
 	gs 'willpower', 'crime', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'This is WAY too sketchy - Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detention.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head and hand back the pills. "Sorry, guys, but I can''t be part of that. It just... does''nt feel right."'
-			'Valentin looks over at Anushka and says, "See, I told you she wouldn''t be game."'
+			'You shake your head and hand back the pills. "Sorry guys, but I can''t be part of that. It just... does''nt feel right."'
+			'Valentin looks over at Anushka then says, "See... I told you she wouldn''t be game."'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser." With that, they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone, trying to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t just "turn down" somebody: You lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
+			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser that you are." With that they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone. You try to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t turn down just "anyone". You have lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
 			act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 		end
 	else
@@ -42,16 +42,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/anushdes.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod. "Okay, let''s do this." Anushka grabs your head, turns your face towards hers and gives you a long, deep kiss with so much tongue and passion that even Valentin seems to start feeling a little awkward. Once she breaks the kiss, she turns towards him. "See? I told you she would do it." Valentin just shrugs slightly and smirks at you, still catching your breath from that kiss. Anushka crushes up the pills - with obvious skill - into a fine powder in less than a minute, then gets up and motions for you to follow her.'
+		'You nod. "Okay let''s do this." Anushka grabs your head to turn your face towards hers and gives you a long, deep kiss with so much tongue and passion that even Valentin seems to start feeling a little awkward. Once she breaks the kiss, she turns towards him. "See? I told you she would do it." Valentin just shrugs slightly and smirks at you. You''re still catching your breath from her kiss. Anushka crushes up the pills, with obvious skill, into a fine powder in less than a minute. She gets up and motions for you to follow her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting while his drink is conveniently located at the opposite end, unguarded. You causally stroll over and sit down on the edge of the table, using your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you, girls?"'
+		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting while his, unguarded, drink is conveniently located at the opposite end. You causally stroll over then sit down on the edge of the table. You use your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you girls?"'
 		*nl
-		'Anushka leans forward and pulls her shirt and bra slightly down and apart, nearly exposing her nipples but definitely giving him a clear view of her cleavage. Her mock-anxious anxious tone, however, is what takes the cake: "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
-		'He seems flustered at her actions, but quickly gets himself under control. "What spot? I don''t see anything."'
-		'She leans in a bit closer, pushing them together even more. "Right there, between my breasts."'
+		'Anushka leans forward then pulls her shirt apart and bra slightly down which nearly exposes her nipples, but definitely gives him a better view of her cleavage. However, her mock-anxious anxious tone is what takes the cake, "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
+		'He seems flustered by her actions, but quickly gets himself under control. "What spot? I don''t see anything."'
+		'She leans in a bit closer and pushes her breasts together even more. "Right there... between my breasts."'
 		*nl
-		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look and as he does, you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod, looks down and then leans back, letting go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh, it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." Then she gives Mr <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Then she gets up and walks back to your table, with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment and then shakes his head, obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup, then another one a few minutes later. Within half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, saliva running down his chin.'
+		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look and as he does you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod. She looks down then leans back and lets go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh... it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." She gives Mr <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Anushka gets up and walks back to your table with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment then shakes his head. He''s obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup then another one a few minutes later. Within a half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, and saliva is running down his chin.'
 		act 'Go to the Teachers'' Lounge':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on, let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket and takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka, who takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
+			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks out from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket. He takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka. She takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'No thanks (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head denying the offered drink, he gives a snort and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint, lights it up and before long the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you, and you watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
+					'You shake your head denying the offered drink. He gives a snort and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint then lights it up. Before long, the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you. You watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
 					*nl
 					gs 'stat'
 					if hotcat >= 6:
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-								'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party, then get lost."'
-								'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+								'Anushka seems completely unfazed. Before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party then get lost."'
+								'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 								act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 							end
@@ -100,13 +100,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'You reflexively open your mouth, wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down, making you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you - you are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers lounge.'
+							'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers lounge.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
 							act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 						end
 					else
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking his cock.'
+						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 						act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 					end
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take the offered drink and take a swig as well. You immediately regret it, choking and coughing from the burning liquid, which gets them both laughing; whatever it is, it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up, passing it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer and with the flask drunk and the joint smoked, you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as he pulls his pants down.' 
+				'You take the offered drink then take a swig as well. You immediately regret it because you choke and cough from the burning liquid. This results in them both laughing. Whatever is in the flask it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up then passes it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer. With the flask drunk empty and the joint smoked to ashes you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as he pulls his pants down.' 
 				*nl
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat >= 6:
-					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'			
+					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'			
 					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 						act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-							'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-							'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Then be quiet and watch, maybe you''ll learn something today."'
-							'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch, wondering if you made the right decision.'
+							'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+							'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+							'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Be quiet and watch. Maybe you''ll learn something today."'
+							'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch. You wonder if you made the right decision.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 							act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 						end
@@ -153,13 +153,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 						npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 						npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-						'You reflexively open your mouth, wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down, making you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you - you are getting turned on by this dream-like situation pretty quickly.'
+						'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are pretty quickly getting turned on by this dream-like situation.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
 						act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 					end
 				else
-					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 				end
@@ -173,44 +173,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly, her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours, so you stop sucking and make room so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking and licking, passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you and occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, as long as you please him.'
+	'Suddenly her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours. You stop sucking to make room, so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking, and licking by passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you. Both of you occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, so long as you please him.'
 	*nl
-	'While you get your turn to suck his dick again, Anushka takes your shirt off, then works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
+	'While it''s your turn to suck his dick again Anushka takes your shirt off and works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute, the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
+	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
 	act 'No fucking':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick you. But I don''t want to get fucked."'
-		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, she just climbs on top of him herself, mounting him cowgirl style and starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she continues to ride him.'
+		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick youm but I don''t want to get fucked."'
+		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, so she just climbs on top of him herself. She mounts him cowgirl style the starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing, and kissing her lovely ass as she rides him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		act 'Suck him again':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcwbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'After riding him for a while, she pulls up and off him, letting his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over, grabs your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick, you can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while, letting you suck up all her pussy juice before pulling your head away and then easing herself back down on his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
+			'After riding him for a while, she pulls off of him to let his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over to grab your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick. You can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while and lets you suck up all her pussy juices before pulling your head away. She eases herself back down onto his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
+				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast. Nush bucks and grinds against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, and takes his cock as deep in her asshole as far as it can go. She takes a loud shuddering breath... her body shakes all over with her eyes rolling up in the back of her head while she slowly comes to a stop. Valentin''s dick is still buried deep in her ass.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes, you hear Valentin panting and grunting as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock, so you know he is getting very close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she lifts up again and quickly gets off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him, pulling you down as well so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes you hear Valentin pant and grunt as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock. You know he is getting, so very close. It seems Anushka does as well, because she lifts up again to quickly get off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while she pulls you down as well, so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though... as a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face right where she was aiming at. The next spurt she aims at her own face followed by your tits then her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you by coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up she diligently licks you clean and doesn''t leave a trace of his sperm on your body. Of course, you return the favor. When all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep... passionate french kiss. Both of you make sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed. Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it. You''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nush was right. You''re a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					'Going back to the library you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside you each go your separate ways.'
 					
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
@@ -221,11 +221,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcvag.jpg"></center>'
-		'She''s right: You are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open, and you start moaning softly, the sensation is incredible and somehow the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
+		'She''s right... you are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open. You start moaning softly because the sensation is incredible. Somehow, the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
 		*nl
-		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick, and as if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up, fucking you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure, unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already, the rising tingle in your body threatening to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
+		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick. As if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up to fuck you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure with your body unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already. The rising electric shocks, that is spreading, in your body threatens to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
 		*nl
-		'Just then, when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp, Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place, slamming her pussy down on his cock and impaling herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
+		'Just then; when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp; Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place. She slams her pussy down on his cock and impales herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'group'
@@ -234,9 +234,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control, not while she''s straddling him and not when she pulls herself off and makes him get up. She lays herself down on the couch in his place, spreading her legs and gripping her butt cheeks, spreading them open as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease, even without any additional lubrication, and begins fucking her practically right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over, to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
+			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control. While she''s straddling him and when she pulls herself off to make him get up to change positions. She lays herself down on the couch in his place. She opens her legs and grips her butt cheeks to spread them as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease. Even without any additional lubrication he begins fucking her right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
 			*nl
-			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach and every now and then, her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind, allowing him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time, all three of you audibly content with this position, until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
+			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach. Every now and then her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind. This allows him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time... all three of you audibly content with this position until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'arousal', 'breasts', -10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -244,13 +244,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place, straddling your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. After the enthusiasm with which she treated you, you have no reservations about giving her pussy a thorough licking as well and you go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart, having Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
+				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place to straddle your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. You have no reservations about giving her pussy a through licking after the enthusiasm she treated you to. You go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart to have Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 				*nl
-				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole for a moment before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
+				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole, for a brief moment, before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
 				*nl
-				'Not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle for a moment, allowing you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass, each of them taking turns playing with your nipples, adding another tune to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that is filling your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
+				'By not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle, for a moment, to allow you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit, though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass. Each of them taking turns playing with your nipples. This adds another instrument to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that fills your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -15, 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -259,13 +259,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting, and somehow you know he is getting close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she gets off your face right away and pulls him away from you as well, leaving you feeling suddenly empty. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting. Deep down, you instinctively know that he is getting close. Anushka does also, it seems, because she gets off your face immediately. She pulls him away from you as well which leaves your ass, suddenly, feeling empty. She has him stand and she kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though, because only a few seconds later a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face. It''s right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits and, finally, her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you which coats both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush, giving Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor, of course, and when all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss. She makes sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed again. As Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nush was right. You are a pretty cool chick and not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush then give Anushka a sideways glance to find her grinning at you.' 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					'Going back to the library you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside you each go your separate ways.'
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
 			end
@@ -282,44 +282,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/wedgiefight.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are not about to let go first, you know Anushka well enough to know she has a twisted sense of humor. "No you let go first and then I will." You tell her.'
-	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that." she replies, as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each others panties. Then she suddenly switches tack and instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment, letting go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. Still, she manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position, if you let go of your clothes she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them, then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a change in plans the teacher walks in.'
+	'You are not about to let go first, because you know Anushka well enough to know she has a twisted sense of humor. "No, you let go first then I will," you tell her.'
+	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that," she replies as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each others panties. She suddenly switches tack, instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment and let go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. She, still, manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position. If you let go of your clothes she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a different plan of attack the teacher walks in.'
 	*nl
-	'"Just what are the two of you doing?" Then he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care. Both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms and drags the two of you out of detention towards the principals office.'
+	'"Just what are the two of you doing," He asks as he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care, because both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms to drag you both out of detention. He's directing you both towards the principal''s office.'
 	act 'In trouble':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big134.jpg"></center>'
-		'He knocks, waiting until he hears "Enter" from inside and then proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal. "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
-		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." she nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door.'
+		'He knocks then waits until he hears, "Enter," from inside. He proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside, he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal, "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
+		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>> I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." She nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door behind him.'
 		act 'Punishment':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes." She says as she pulls a chair over near her leather couch, taking a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She then proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red and stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch and just watches you get spanked.'
+			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly take off your clothes," she says as she pulls a chair close to her leather couch then takes a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower, but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach, she grabs you then pulls you across her lap. She proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red. The result is they are stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch. She silently just watches you get spanked.'
 			act 'Next':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are, face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh, it seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap, getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning, either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally she seems to grow tired of it, lifting Anushka off her lap and pointing to your corner. "Go join your friend."'
+				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. You leave your clothes where they are then face the corner." You do as you are told while gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh. It seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap and getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning. She''s either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally, she seems to grow tired of it and lifts Anushka off her lap. She points to to your corner and commands Nush, "Go join your friend."'
 				act 'Standing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together. Your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while. However, neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner while naked with your butts on fire.'
 					act 'Rebel':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear, you are surprised as she kisses you instead, it''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again. "Alright you two, get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
+						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear what she has to say you are surprised as she kisses you instead. It''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again, "Alright you two you can get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
 						*nl
-						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
+						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
 						act 'Can''t':
 							cla
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs, "Sure whatever."'
+							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, but maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs and replies noncommittaly, "Sure... whatever..."'
 							act 'leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 						act 'Sure':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex, you both live at, and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								if anushkaFirstvisit = 0:
@@ -347,37 +347,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit and notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs, quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
+	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit to notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs. This is quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
 	act 'Can''t risk it':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detention.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around and consider it but then decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed and soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+		'You look around and consider it, but decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed and soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 		act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 	act 'Might be fun':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around and when you''re sure that there is no one watching, you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka, as you get close you spot her much further back in the library waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library, far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
+		'You look around. When you''re sure that there is no one watching you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka. As you get close you spot her much further back in the library silently waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library which is far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
 		act 'What kind of fun?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-			'Her playfulness tone and obvious excitement is making you nervous. "What kind of fun?" You say as you glance back in the direction you came to make sure no one else is coming this way.'
-			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting and risky kind, of course." You hear her say behind you, and as you turn back towards her, you see that her top is gone and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles and her panties are already around her knee''s. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, how the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place?! Huh, she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
+			'Her playful tone and her obvious excitement is making you nervous. "What kind of fun," You ask as you glance back in the direction you came to make sure no one else is coming this way.'
+			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting, and risky kind of course," You hear her say behind you. As you turn back towards her you see that her top is gone and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles while her panties are already around her knees. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, so how in the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place? Huh... she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
 			*nl
-			'"Well come on, take your clothes off." She says, waiting and obviously expecting you to start stripping as well. You really have no idea what to expect from her, if even half the stuff you have heard is true, she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue and howl at the moon or just swap clothes.'
+			'"Well come on and take your clothes off," she says, waiting, obviously expecting you to start stripping also. You really have no idea what to expect from her. Even if half the stuff you have heard is true she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue then howl at the moon, or just swap clothes with each other.'
 			*nl
-			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on, haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right, it would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again it might be quite thrilling.'
+			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, it she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right. It would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again it might also be quite thrilling.'
 			act 'No I don''t think so':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] -= 5
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry but I just can''t do that, we might get caught."'
-				'Her grin fades a little. "That''s what makes it fun, come on!"'
-				'"Sorry I just can''t." Then you turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry, but I just can''t do that since we might get caught."'
+				'Her grin fades a little. "That''s what makes it fun, so come on!"'
+				'"Sorry I just can''t." You turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 				act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -390,9 +390,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip, it could be fun and you actually would like to, but what if you got caught? "I don''t know Nush, what if we get caught?"'
-					'She can see your reluctance but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>>, you got to live in the moment. Besides it''ll be so much fun."'
-					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok lets do this." You say as you start taking off your clothes.'
+					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip. It could be fun and you actually would like to, but what if you got caught? "I don''t know Nush. What if we get caught?"'
+					'She can see your reluctance, but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>> and you''ve got to live in the moment. Besides it''ll be so much fun."'
+					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok, lets do this," you say as you start taking off your clothes.'
 					act 'Get Naked': gt 'anushka', 'naked'
 				end
 			else
@@ -409,23 +409,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 	gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you start stripping off your clothes she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit, I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked she gathers up the clothes and stuffs them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the cases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on, we have to go out this way."'
+	'As you start stripping off your clothes, she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit! I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked, she gathers up the clothes to stuff them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the bookcases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on we have to go out this way."'
 	act 'Into the halls':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Halls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/halls.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two of you walk down the halls, Anushka seems completely at ease walking around without any clothes on. Apparently she really doesn''t care if anyone catches her naked, or hell maybe she would even enjoy it more. As you walk around a while longer, you start getting a bit more comfortable with the situation. The two of you talk about normal stuff, like what''s going on in school, any good movies you''ve watched and so on. Just then, you hear the noise of a machine being turned on and notice that the sound is getting closer.'
+		'As the two of you walk down the halls, Anushka seems completely at ease walking around without any clothes on. Apparently, she really doesn''t care if anyone catches her naked or hell, maybe she would even enjoy it more. As you walk around a while longer, you start getting a bit more comfortable with the situation. The two of you talk about normal stuff, like what''s going on in school, any good movies you''ve watched, and so on. Just then... you hear the noise of a machine being turned on and notice that the sound is getting closer.'
 		*nl
-		'"Shit, the janitor is buffing the floors already!" Anushka says as she looks around.'
-		'You try to cover yourself up and get ready to make a run for it, when Anushka grabs your hand and pulls you into one of the classrooms.'
+		'"Shit, the janitor is buffing the floors already," Anushka exclaims as she looks around.'
+		'You try to cover yourself up and get ready to make a run for it, but Anushka grabs your hand and pulls you into one of the classrooms.'
 		act 'Cornered':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floors. Anuska leads you into the back corner of the classroom, where someone would need to come all the way in to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays down it on the floor, before sitting on top of it.'
+			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floor. Anuska leads you into the back corner of the classroom. It''s where someone would need to come all the way into the room to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays down it on the floor before sitting on top of it.'
 			*nl
-			'Not having much of a choice, with nowhere else to go, you sit down next to her. You notice she seems to be completely comfortable being naked, while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear - you never even noticed it there - and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look, she gives you a quick smile, "I knew we were going to be running around naked and I wanted to bring it. So I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
+			'You don''t have much of a choice, since there is nowhere else, you sit down next to her. You notice she seems to be completely comfortable being naked while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear, which you never even noticed it there, and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look she gives you a quick smile. "I knew we were going to be running around naked and I wanted to bring it, so I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
 			act 'Smoke the joint with her':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 1
@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile and take it from her, taking a long drag from the joint. Maybe it will help take your mind off the thought of getting caught naked in a classroom by the school janitor. You pass it back and forth between you as you make small talk, listening to the machine steadily getting closer.'
+				'You smile and take it from her. You take a long drag from the joint. Maybe it will help take your mind off the thought of getting caught, by the school janitor, naked in a classroom. You pass it back and forth between you as you make small talk while listening to the machine steadily getting closer.'
 				act 'Wait for the janitor to pass': anushLimitedQuestions = 4 & gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'drugs', 'resist'
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head. "No thanks, I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare assed without adding to it even more." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk, you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
+					'You shake your head. "No, thanks I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare-assed without its effects adding to the situation." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
 					act 'Wait for the janitor to pass': anushLimitedQuestions = 4 & gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			else
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 					end
 					'After a bit you get curious where she gets her clothes, it''s quite obvious that she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like the ones she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
-					'She lifts an eyebrow at that, looks down at her naked body and then grins, causing you to laugh a bit as well. Her unspoken comment about you asking about her clothes while she is naked, is not lost on you. "Dolls, well... Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
+					'She lifts an eyebrow at that. She looks down at her naked body and grins causing you to laugh a bit as well. Her unspoken comment about you asking about her clothes while she is naked is not lost on you. "Dolls, well... Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
 					'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you suppose that you will find out.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
@@ -499,10 +499,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'You know it can be a touchy subject but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know - about your reputation?"'
-			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? a slut? a whore? a lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh all of it I guess." Not sure what else to say, since her rep is kinda based on all of that and more.'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways and the stuff that is, shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone, then I do. Because I like it." she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around, that''s not what makes me, <b>me.</b> All that is just parts of me, and I do what I want, that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who get that are my friends. The rest.... fuck''em."'
+			'You know it can be a touchy subject, but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know... about your reputation?"'
+			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? a slut? a whore? a lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life away? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed, but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh all of it I guess." You''re not sure what else to say, since her rep is kinda based on all of that and more.'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone then I do. Just Because I like it," she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest.... well... fuck''em."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end
 		
@@ -515,8 +515,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Looking at her for a moment all naked like that, you just have to ask. "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times and if even half the gossip is true this is a pretty normal state for you." You say with a bit of friendly ribbing.'
-			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment and then shrug. "Honestly I don''t know, I am proud of my body, not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus I like that thrill you get from doing something a little taboo and where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in and catching us without a stitch on us." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
+			'Looking at her for a moment, all naked like that, you just have to ask, "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times and if even half the gossip is true this is a pretty normal state for you." You add a bit of friendly ribbing to your tone.'
+			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment then shrugs. "Honestly I don''t know. I am proud of my body and not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus, I like thrill that you get from doing something that''s a little taboo, where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in to catch us without a stitch on." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end		
 
@@ -529,15 +529,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 !!ToDo: Is anushHearband set?
 			if bandpracticeinvite = 0:
 				bandpracticeinvite = 1
-				'"How is the band going?" you ask her.'
-				'Nodding a little she says. "Pretty good, you should come by and hear us play."'
-				'"Yeah that sounds great." You tell her.'
-				'"Nice, I will text you the next time we practice and you can come check us out. I think, well, I hope you''ll like our music. We are not as good as Rad likes to think we are but we are getting there." She takes down your phone number so she can text you in the future.'
+				'"How is the band going," you ask her.'
+				'Nodding a little she says. "Pretty good, but you should come by and hear us play."'
+				'"Yeah that sounds great," you tell her.'
+				'"Nice, I will text you the next time we practice, so you can come check us out. I think, well, I hope you''ll like our music. We are not as good as Rad likes to think we are, but we are getting there." She adds your phone number to her cell phone, so she can text you in the future.'
 			else
-				'"The band still going well?"'
-				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week, which would be awesome. You should totally come by some more of our practices or come to one of the shows, you can help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit and get all set up and then break it all down again."'
-				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, let me know the next time and if I have time I will help out."'
-				'She gives you a quick sideways hug and you feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet, I will text you when we have our next gig and when we practice of course, so you can come listen."'
+				'"Is the band still going well?"'
+				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah, we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week which would be awesome. You should totally come by to some more of our practices. Better yet, come to one of the shows. You could help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit, get all set up, then break it all down again."'
+				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, but let me know the next time. If I have time I will help out."'
+				'She gives you a quick sideways hug and you can feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet... Of course, I will text you when we have our next gig or practice. That way you can come listen."'
 			end
 !!ToDo: A flag probably needs to be set here to keep track of Nush having Svetas number.
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
@@ -548,26 +548,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			anushLimitedQuestions -= 1
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You know she is seeing some guys and girls, it is not really a secret. Not sure if you should even ask but you are curious. "So do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend?"'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to - as they say - sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you, if that right person came along and just blew me away, then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? You wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
-			'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty and exciting at the same time. But did you mean that?'
+			'You know that she is seeing some guys and girls, so it is not really a secret. You''re not sure if you should even ask, but you are curious. "Do you have a boyfriend? Or even girlfriend?"'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking right now. I''m young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
+			'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and makes it sound so dirty, yet, so exciting at the same time. Did she mean that?'
 			act 'Maybe':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/scnakiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel put on the spot, that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously that is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe, I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-				'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up till you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and with more meaning. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you - all you know is that the kiss is amazing.'
+				'You feel put on the spot since that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously it is why you asked. Either way, a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess... maybe I have been thinking about it a bit."'
+				'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction and you''re not sure you want to know it. You feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up until you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face. You find yourself looking into her eyes. The two of you have your lips meet and kiss. It''s a deep long passionate kiss. It''s not a lustful one, or at least there isn''t much lust, but it''s something deeper. This kiss holds more meaning than any words that could have passed between you two. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you... all you know is that the kiss was amazing.'
 				*nl
-				'Finally the kiss ends, both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. Then gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against the idea. So let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
+				'Finally, the kiss ends and both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back then sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking, but then again I''m not against the idea. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head, this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No. I mean I like you, but not like that, not that-" She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on and seems amused by your response.'
-				'"It''s fine, I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
+				'You shake your head because this conversation really went off the rails and is not at all what you meant. "No, I mean I like you, but not like that... not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on. She seems amused by your response.'
+				'"It''s fine. I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			act 'I have a boyfriend':
@@ -581,31 +581,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Niko" You tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, just... just be careful with him.'
+					'"Niko," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
 					if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Fedor," you tell her.'
 						'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
-						'You frown at her, you expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, those criminals where going to take everything form his family and he couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
-						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay, I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you." She says obviously trying to make peace.'
+						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, because those criminals where going to take everything from his family. He couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
+						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you," she says, obviously, trying to make peace.'
 						'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					else
 						if hotcat >= 5:
-							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-							'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'Then she laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it," She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome," she asks as she winks as she makes a kissy face at you.'
 							act 'Maybe':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
@@ -613,8 +613,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I'll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -625,9 +625,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun." You tell her.'
-								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree, he is a guy after all."'
-								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah most likely and I''ll let you know what he says."'
+								'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks it could be fun," you tell her.'
+								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways, I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree. He is a guy after all."'
+								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, so I''ll let you know what he says."'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -636,49 +636,49 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								minut += 5
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
+								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You're not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
 						else
 							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-							'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'Then she laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style and talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah take my big dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>, take it." Then she switches to a girly voice trying to sound like you. "Yes, yes Fedor fuck me with your big dick, YES!" Then she burst out laughing and you can''t help but join in.'
+							'She grins at you. "Right and who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					end
 				elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Vitek" You tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, but doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time, with how much she talks about how great he is, at least when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something." She says with a smirk, you roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Vitek," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices your facial expression from her bad mouthing your boyfriend, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time because of how much she talks about how great he is. At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 10 or artQW = 20:
 					if hotcat >= 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
 						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking, so is he?"'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Then seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah he is pretty good at it, good enough anyways."'
-						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement, sure that strokes his ego." She says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself, do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
+						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 						act 'Maybe':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -688,9 +688,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun. But he is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say." You tell her.'
-							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy, all boys want to fuck as much as they can, two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, I doubt he is any different. Besides maybe I can teach him a new trick or two for you." She says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
-							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him, if he would like to."'
+							'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks because it could be fun. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
+							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
+							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him if he would like to."'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -699,40 +699,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-							'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
+							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					else
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
+						'You tell her, "You do know I have a boyfriend."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah... ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
 						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah, sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
 						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
-						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D or something like that."'
-						'You shake your head. "No we don''t, we make love."'
-						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh and talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
+						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D, or something like that."'
+						'You shake your head. "No, we don''t, because we make love."'
+						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
 					end
 				elseif Rex_Love = 1:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Rex" You tell her.'
-					'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. Then it seems she thinks of him. "Wait isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
-					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah that''s him."'
-					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add. "Ok he is friends with my sister and she invited me to his party and thats when we meet." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Rex," you tell her.'
+					'"Who," She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
+					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah, that''s him."'
+					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you," she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				else
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"<<$boyfriend>>" You tell her.'
-					'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
-					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him, he is just this guy I meet."'
-					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you meet huh?" You laugh and then tell her about him.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"<<$boyfriend>>," you tell her.'
+					'"Who?" She asks, asshe cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
+					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him. I just met him."'
+					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you met huh?" You laugh then tell her about him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				end
@@ -746,10 +746,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				anushAskedofAlyona = 1		
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona and you know she is friends with Anushka and your curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask and when she nods yes. "So how is she doing?"'
-				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler lot less playful edge to it. "Why?"'
-				'You rarely see Anushka not in a good mood but her body language and tone suggest you should tread carefully on this subject. "I was just curious, I heard some stuff and wanted to know if she was alright is all."'
-				'She looks at you a moment and then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life, more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing and getting by well enough considering."'
+				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona. You, also, know she is friends with Anushka, so you''re curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask her. She nods yes back. "How is she doing?"'
+				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler, lot less playful, edge to it, "Why?"'
+				'You rarely see Anushka not in a good mood, but her body language and tone suggest that you should tread carefully on this subject. "I was just curious, because I heard some stuff and I wanted to know if she was alright is all."'
+				'She looks at you a moment then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life and it''s more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing with it and getting by well enough considering."'
 				act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				act 'Is it that bad?':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -757,8 +757,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
 					'You know this might be a bad call but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
-					'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
-					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare, you change the subject.'
+					'She arches her brows at you as if to ask if you are serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself, but she would likely blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious, is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad... so yeah. It''s really that bad, So just drop it."'
+					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare you change the subject.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			end		
@@ -771,17 +771,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				anushAskedGrad = 1	
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over. "Once we graduate what do you plan to do? Focus on the band more?"'
-				'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it. But I am not going to depend on that, I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. So I have a back-up plan, in case the band never takes off."'
-				'You are a bit surprised, you always heard she was doing bad like all the gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'
-				'She laughs a bit at that. "Yeah everyone is surprised by that, but I checked what grades I needed to go to the University and I make sure mine stay above that. So yeah, I am a smart bitch as well as a good looking one. What about you?"'
+				'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over, "Once we graduate, what do you plan to do? Are you going to focus on the band more?"'
+				'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it big. However, I am not going to depend on that, so I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. I have a back-up plan in case the band never takes off."'
+				'You are a bit surprised, since you always heard she was doing bad like all the other gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'
+				'She laughs a bit at that. "Yeah, everyone is surprised by that, but I checked what grades I needed to go to the University. I make sure mine stay above that. Yeah, I am a smart bitch as well as a good looking one. What about you?"'
 				act 'I don''t know':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m not sure, I have a few options I guess." You tell her.'
-					'She nods a bit. "Well you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
-					'Not sure what more to say about it, you decided to change the subject.'
+					'"I''m not so sure, but I have a few options I guess," you tell her.'
+					'She nods a bit. "Well, you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. That is, unless, that''s what you want. I''m not judging, but I''m just saying."'
+					'You''re not sure what more to say about it, so you decided to change the subject.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 				act 'Go to the University':
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
 					'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will know someone there for sure."'
-					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decide then."'
+					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes and we can decide then."'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 				act 'Get married':
@@ -812,9 +812,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 						$boyfriend_temp = $boyfriend
 					end
 					
-					'You sigh in a way only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
-					'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
-					'Not sure what more to say on the topic you decided to change it.'
+					'You sigh in a way that only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully, <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
+					'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and shrugs. "Well, best of luck with that."'
+					'You are not sure what more to say on the topic you decided to change it.'
 					killvar '$boyfriend_temp'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
@@ -827,16 +827,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hallcheck.jpg"></center>'
 			'You start to say something more when she raises her hand to stop you. "You hear that?"'
-			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No I don''t hear anything."'
-			'She grins at you. "Yeah means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on lets go." She gets up and heads for the door, she opens it slowly and then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. Then she steps out and hurries down the hall, with you just behind her.'
+			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No, I don''t hear anything."'
+			'She grins at you. "Yeah that means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on, lets go." She gets up and heads for the door. She opens it slowly then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. She steps out and hurries down the hall with you following just behind her.'
 			*nl
-			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library, sneaking back in the way you left. Heading back to where you stashed your clothes the two of you start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on, the bell that signals detention is over starts ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "Perfect timing, as always. See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
+			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library to sneak back in the way you left. You both head back to where you stashed your clothes and you both start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on the bell that signals detention is over begins ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "That''s perfect timing as always. I''ll see you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
 			'With that the two of you leave school.'
 			act 'Can''t today': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			act 'Go with Anushka':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-				'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her families apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+				'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'
 			end
 		end
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'meet_after_school':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "You ready?" She asks and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her families apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "Are you ready," she asks and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'
 end
 

+ 254 - 251
locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -24,40 +24,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So you and Rad use to date huh?" You ask her.'
-			'She sighs, looks at you a moment, you can tell this isn''t something she is to keen on talking about. "Yeah when I was young and dumb, right after they started their band, I started hanging out with them. Val told me about him and Rad starting a band and invited me to come listen to them."'
-			'You just nod as you listen as she continues. "Anyways they was kinda crap honestly back then, could barely play and the lyrics where awful, they mostly just did covers to practice back then." She pauses a moment as if remembering what it was like. "Even back then Rad was a decent singer a bit raw but you could hear the natural talent. He use to look at me, with that look. The ones boys give you when they really want you, back then it felt amazing to be looked at that way, now I know what that look really means." She finishes with a frown.'
-			'You prod her a little. "Then what?"'
-			'"Well he was already a bit of a bad boy even then, plus he was the lead singer of a band which was hot, and he payed attention to me the way young girls want guys to pay attention to them." She says with a laugh and shakes her head. "God I was so stupid back then. When he asked me out I agreed and we started dating and I became their number one fan."'
+			'"You and Rad use to date huh," you ask her.'
+			'She sighs and looks at you a moment, so you can tell this isn''t something she is too keen on talking about. "Yeah, when I was young and dumb. I started hanging out with them right after they started their band. Val told me about Rad and him starting a band. He invited me to come listen to them."'
+			'You just nod as you listen as she continues. "Anyways, they were kinda crap honestly back then, since they could barely play while the lyrics were awful. They mostly just did covers to practice with back then." She pauses a moment as if remembering what it was like. "Even back then, Rad was a decent singer, a bit on the raw, but you could hear the natural talent. He use to look at me with that look. It was the one that boys would give you when they really want you. Back then it felt amazing to be looked at that way, but now I know what that look really means," she finishes with a frown.'
+			'You prod her a little. "What happened next?"'
+			'"Well he was already a bit of a bad boy even then, plus he was the lead singer of a band which was hot. He paid attention to me in the way young girls want guys to pay attention to them," she says with a laugh and shakes her head, "God, I was so stupid back then. When he asked me out I agreed then we started dating. I ended up becoming their number one fan."'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-				'Then she sighs a bit. "At first everything was great, I already knew how to play guitar myself and we talked about that and I helped teaching him what I knew from my dad and he taught me what he knew and we both got better. I also helped him write original songs for the band. In time I asked him if I could join and he let me try out. Rad and Val agreed, shit head didn''t." Noticing the look on your face to her shit head comment she adds. "The bands previous drummer, a real asshole."'
-				'You get curious. "How was he a asshole? I mean other than not wanting you in the band?" You ask.'
-				'"It is hard to explain, he was always harping about me being in the band and that Rad spent to much time with me. It was like he was against us from the start but him trying to split us up only made our relationship grow tighter." She says obviously trying to explain it, but seems a bit unsure how to.'
-				'You nod. "Ok so being in the band caused you guys to break up?"'
-				'She gives you a confused look for a moment. "What? No, actually at first things where better than ever between Rad and me."'
-				'"So then what happened?" You press her a bit more.'
-				'She gives a loud sigh and you can tell she is starting to get annoyed talking about it. "Then we actual started to make a name for ourselves and I don''t just mean with the local kids, but we started to playing at some parties, at the time we just got free booze, drugs and got to hang out with older kids, even played at some of the underground parties as a opening act."'
+				'She sighs a bit, "At first, everything was great, because I already knew how to play guitar myself. We talked about that and I helped teaching him what I knew from my dad. He taught me what he knew and we both got better. I also helped him write original songs for the band. In time, I asked him if I could join, so he let me try out. Rad and Val agreed, shit head didn''t." She notices the look on your face to her shit head comment she adds, "He was the bands previous drummer. He was a real asshole."'
+				'You get curious. "How was he an asshole? I mean other than not wanting you in the band," you ask.'
+				'"It is hard to explain, but he was always harping about me being in the band and that Rad spent too much time with me. It was like he was against us from the start, but with him trying to split us up it only made our relationship grow tighter," she says obviously trying to explain it, but seems a bit unsure how to express herself.'
+				'You nod. "Ok, so being in the band caused you guys to break up?"'
+				'She gives you a confused look for a moment. "What? No, actually, at first things where better than ever between Rad and me."'
+				'"What happened then," you press her a bit more.'
+				'She gives a loud sigh, so you can tell that she''s starting to get annoyed talking about it. "We actually started to make a name for ourselves. I just don''t mean with the local kids, but we started to playing at some parties. At the time we just got free booze, drugs, and got to hang out with older kids. We even played at some of the underground parties as a opening act."'
 				act 'Go on':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-					'She frowns at you as you prod her even more to go on. "That''s when it started, suddenly I had guys hitting on me all the time even guys several years older who before never payed me any attention before. The girls was doing the same with the boys, but I didn''t care, Rad and I was together."'
-					'You can tell she is starting to get visible upset and not angry, but like maybe she actually might be on the verge of crying. Then she takes a deep breath calming breath and gets herself back under control and her vulnerable moment passes. "It was after one of the underground parties we played at. After we was done, we joined in with the dancing and partying, then I noticed Rad wasn''t anywhere to be seen. So I went to look for him... Yeah I found him fucking some other chick." Now she seems to be more angry again with saying that. "We fought, he said he was sorry and wouldn''t do it anymore and I forgave him. God I was so fucking stupid." She says harshly.'
-					'"But he didn''t stop I caught him several more times with different sluts always. I kept taking him back and forgiving him, then... then he has the nerve to fucking dump me, fucking asshole. Says it is what is best for the band." Then she goes quiet for a moment and looks kinda sad.'
-					'"In the end he was right, we should have never dated and should have broke up sooner. It was a good PR move for the band if we both are single to create the fantasy that our fans have a chance with us. It took me awhile to come to that realization." She says shaking her head.'
+					'She frowns at you as you prod her even more for her go on. "That''s when it started. Suddenly, I had guys hitting on me all the time even guys several years older. They had never before paid me any attention before. The girls were doing the same with the boys, but I didn''t care. Rad and I were together."'
+					'You can tell she is starting to get visibly upset, but not angry. It''s like she might actually be on the verge of crying. She takes a deep, calming breath to get herself back under control. Her vulnerable moment passes. "It happened after one of the underground parties we played at. After we was done, we joined in with the dancing and partying. I noticed Rad wasn''t anywhere to be seen, so I went to look for him... Yeah I found him fucking some other chick." Now she seems to be angry with saying that, "We fought over him cheating on me. He said he was sorry and wouldn''t do it anymore, so I forgave him. God, I was so fucking stupid," she says harshly.'
+					'"However, he didn''t stop because I always caught him several more times with different sluts. I kept taking him back and forgiving him. He had the nerve to fucking dump me that fucking asshole. He says it is what is best for the band." She goes quiet for a moment while looking kinda sad.'
+					'"In the end he was right. We should have never dated and should have broken up sooner. It was a good PR move for the band if we both are single to create the fantasy that our fans having a chance with us. It took me awhile to come to that realization," she says shaking her head.'
 					act 'Then what':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'"We fought all the fucking time, but Val convinced me to stay in the bad, Rad wanted me to stay too. But it made shithead leave, which likely is the best thing to come out of Rad and me dating, cause then we found Arkadi."'
-						'You are a bit confused if he dumped her why they still hook up. "If you guys broke up, why are you still hooking up?"'
-						'She shrugs a bit. "I got over it. I forgave him, we was both young and stupid. Now we are just friends and he is still a good fuck so why not." She says with a smile, but you are unconvinced that is all there is but then she changes the subject to a song she recently heard she liked, obviously not wanting to talk about it more.'
+						'"We fought all the fucking time, but Val convinced me to stay in the bad and Rad wanted me to stay too. However, it made shithead leave which, likely, is the best thing to come out of Rad and myself dating. ''Cause we found Arkadi then."'
+						'You are a bit confused if he dumped her then why they still hook up. "Why are you still hooking up if you guys broke up?"'
+						'She shrugs a bit. "I got over it. I forgave him, but we were both young and stupid. Now we are just friends and he is still a good fuck so why not," she says with a smile, but you are unconvinced that is all there is. She changes the subject to a song she recently heard and she liked. She''s, obviously, not wanting to talk about it any more.'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					end
@@ -72,15 +72,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Rad, you guys serious or something?" You ask her.'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Rad? Are you guys serious or something," you ask her.'
 			'She gives you a what do you mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter. But no we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
-			'You get the feeling she is holding something back. "So nothing serious then? No chance of you guys becoming a couple?"'
-			'Her smile completely disappears and you feel like you have touched on a touchy subject. "No." She pauses a moment before continuing. "We use to date, but things didn''t work out, so we broke up."'
-			'You get the feeling she really doesn''t want to talk about it, but you are also now curious what happened.'
+			'You smile to her knowing that she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up, but is that just it or is there something more," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter, but no, we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
+			'You get the feeling she is holding something back. "There''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys becoming a couple?"'
+			'Her smile completely disappears and you feel like you have touched on a sore subject. "No," she pauses a moment before continuing, "We used to date, but things didn''t work out. We ended up breaking up."'
+			'You get the feeling she really doesn''t want to talk about it, but you are also now curious about what happened.'
 			if radspy = 1 and valspy =1: 
-				'You also wonder if the reason she doesn''t want to talk about it is, because she is sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin, and if that causes problems with the band.'
+				'You also wonder if the reason she doesn''t want to talk about it is, because she is sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin. Does that cause problems with the band?'
 				act 'Problems in the band': gt 'anushkachat', 'radval'
 			end
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Val, you guys serious or something?" You ask her.'
-			'She gives you a what do you mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no, but smiles at the question. "No we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
-			'"So nothing serious then? Then why hook up? I mean he is ok looking." You comment.'
-			'She giggles at that. "Well first he is just fun to hang out with and second he has a huge dick. He always leaves my pussy and ass aching but in a good way." She says with a grin, while she pretends like she is holding one massive dick. You both laugh at that and then she tells you about some of the times she and Val has hooked up before.'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Val? Are you guys serious or something," you ask her.'
+			'She gives you a what-do-you-mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
+			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no, but smiles at the question. "No, we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
+			'"So nothing serious then? Why just hook up? I mean he is ok looking," you comment.'
+			'She giggles at that. "Well, first, he is just fun to hang out with and second he has a huge dick. He always leaves my pussy and ass aching, but in a good way," she says with a grin while she pretends like she is holding one massive dick. You both laugh at that. She tells you about some of the times that she and Val has hooked up before.'
 			if radspy = 1 and valspy =1: 
-				'After that you can''t help but wonder if her sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin causes problems with the band.'
+				'After that, you can''t help but wonder if her sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin causes problems with the band.'
 				act 'Problems in the band': gt 'anushkachat', 'radval'
 			end
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -113,19 +113,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Marcus, I didn''t know you guys was friend let alone, you know..." You say to her.'
-			'She arches a slender brow. "What do you mean, you know?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up right? Or is it something more serious?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter. We''re not, friends that is, not really. He is ok I guess."'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Marcus? I didn''t know you guys were friends let alone... you know...," you say to her.'
+			'She arches a slender brow. "What do you mean?"'
+			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up right? Is it something more serious," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind because it doesn''t matter. We''re not friends that is... not really. He is ok I guess."'
 			*nl
-			'You get a bit confused by that. "Then why are you hooking up, if you''re not friends?"'
-			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo, you know how people are. He''s black, he''s a American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong, both just makes it doubly taboo. Which makes it fucking hot, not to mention he has a big fucking dick."'
-			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, least what you have seen of it. "So it''s just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
-			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah pretty much, I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black dick is making me horny again." She says with a laugh but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
+			'You get a bit confused by that. "Why are you hooking up if you''re not friends?"'
+			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. but both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot and not to mention he has a big fucking dick."'
+			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, least what you have seen of it. "Is it just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
+			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah pretty much, I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black dick is making me horny again," she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
 			*nl
-			'You laugh. "Ok, ok I get it, big black dicks make you horny."'
-			'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that, or I should say only that. It is about everyone saying it''s wrong. It is the same reason I like fucking other chicks, or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that, the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
-			'You only nod at that, you know Anushka is a bit of a anarchist at heart, so not a surprise breaking social norms turns her on.'
+			'You laugh. "Ok, ok, I get it. Big black dicks are what makes you horny."'
+			'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that or I should say only that. It is also about everyone saying it''s wrong. It is the same reason that I like fucking other chicks or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that is the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
+			'You only nod at that. You know Anushka is a bit of a anarchist at heart, so it''s not a surprise breaking social norms turns her on.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['nush_inv'] = 0:
@@ -135,14 +135,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					OluQW['nush_inv'] = 1
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-					'You grin like the cat that just ate the canary and she looks at you a little strange and then says. "What? Why are you looking like you have a big juicy secret? Come on tell me!" She demands'
-					'You keep grinning. "Well I kinda get it, I hooked up with a really and I mean really big black guy." You hold your hands apart, to show roughly how big Olu is.'
-					'She looks a bit surprised. "That''s even bigger than Marcus and he is the biggest guy I have ever been with. So where did you meet this Olu?"'
-					'"He is my Aunts boyfriend." You can see her surprised look at that but you hold up her hand to stop her from saying anything. "My Aunt knows, they have a open relationship and the are both ok with him hooking up with other girls and they are ok with it being me."'
+					'You grin like the cat that just ate the canary. She looks at you a little strange and asks, "What? Why are you looking like you have a big juicy secret? Come on tell me!"'
+					'You keep grinning. "Well, I kinda get it. I hooked up with a really big black guy. I mean a really, really big black guy." You hold your hands apart to show roughly how big Olu is.'
+					'She looks a bit surprised. "That''s even bigger than Marcus and he is the biggest guy I have ever been with. Where did you meet this Olu?"'
+					'"He is my Aunt''s boyfriend." You can see her surprised look at that, but you hold up her hand to stop her from saying anything. "My Aunt knows because they have a open relationship. They are both ok with him hooking up with other girls. They are, also, okay with it being me."'
 					'Anushka giggles at that. "Wow and I thought my family was weird."'
-					'You give her a sly look and ignore the weird family comment. "So would you want to give it a go, biggest you ever seen?" You ask her.'
-					'She laughs a bit more. "Yeah... sure why not. Next time you go see him send me a text and I might come over and give him a go."'
-					'After that the two of you start talking about some other boys and how well hung they are.'
+					'You give her a sly look and ignore the weird family comment. "Wwould you want to give it a go? It''ll be the biggest you have ever seen," you ask her.'
+					'She laughs a bit more. "Yeah... sure why not. Next time you go see him just send me a text and I might come over to give him a go."'
+					'After that, the two of you start talking about some other boys and how well hung they are.'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 				end
@@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Seeing her clothes in the room, some hanging up, others draped over chairs a few laying on the floor. They are all of a similar style. After a bit you get curious about where she gets her clothes, it is obvious she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
-			'"Dolls, well Patchwork Dolls to be exact. Near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
+			'Seeing her clothes in the room with some hanging up there are others draped over chairs while a few are laying on the floor. They are all of a similar style. After a bit, you get curious about where she gets her clothes since it''s obvious she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
+			'"Dolls, well, Patchwork Dolls to be exact. It''s near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
 			if Anush_dolls = 0:
 				Anush_dolls = 2
-				'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you will find out you suppose.'
+				'"If you stop by tell Savva or Viola that I said they still owe me a round from the last time." You nod that you will. You have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you will find out you suppose.'
 			else
 				Anush_dolls = 2
-				'You tell her you''ve been there before and she says, "Next time you''re there tell them they still owe me a round."'
+				'You tell her you''ve been there before, so she says, "Next time you''re there tell them that they still owe me a round."'
 			end
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -174,13 +174,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		bandpracticeinvite = 1
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two of you sit close to each other; "I''ve heard a lot about your band. Most people tell me you''re really good."'
-		'"I guess so. Most the lyrics are written by me, so of course we''re good." Anushka replies nonchalantly. You roll your eyes a bit at her reply. Anushka''s is always like this.'
-		'"I would really like to watch you play sometime. Are you doing any gigs soon?" you ask.'
+		'The two of you sit close to each other. "I''ve heard a lot about your band. Most people tell me that you''re really good."'
+		'"I guess so. Of course we''re good because most the lyrics are written by me," Anushka replies nonchalantly. You roll your eyes a bit at her reply. Anushka''s is always like this.'
+		'"I would really like to watch you play sometime. Are you doing any gigs soon," you ask.'
 		*nl
-		'"That would be great, we usually have lots of fun at the gigs, they''re so energetic. Especially when the crowd gets going. The after parties are a lot of fun too, especially if you like to party. Yeah, you should definitely come by, I''m sure you wouldn''t regret it. Or you could come to one of our practices if you just want to hear us play and hang out."'
+		'"That would be great because we usually have lots of fun at the gigs. They''re so energetic, especially when the crowd gets going. The after parties are also a lot of fun too, especially if you like to party. Yeah, you should definitely come by, I''m sure you wouldn''t regret it. You could also come to one of our practices if you just want to hear us play and just hang out."'
 		'You nod. "Where do you practice?"'
-		'Anushka laughs a bit. "Rad somehow managed to get ahold of one of those old garages at the end of the courtyard and we converted into a place we can play." She explains roughly where it is, which isn''t to far from your stepdads garage.'
+		'Anushka laughs a bit. "Rad somehow managed to get a hold of one of those old garages at the end of the courtyard, so we converted it into a place we can play." She explains roughly where it is and it isn''t to far from your stepdad''s garage.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit next to Anushka, eager to ask about her the band members; "Tell me about the others in the band? I really want to know more about them."'
-		'"Well, there''s Radomir, he''s thinks he''s gods gift to everything, all the girls think he''s the shit, there is always some slut hanging off him, it seems. My mother has got a hard-on for him though and wants me to marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would consider. He started the band with Val, he is a pretty good singer, plays guitar pretty well and does a decent job writing some of our music. He does have a gift for giving people what they want and getting us noticed by people, I''ll give him that."'
+		'You sit next to Anushka and eagerly ask her about the band members, "Can you tell me about the others in the band? I really want to know more about them."'
+		'"Well, there''s Radomir. He thinks he''s god''s gift to everything and all the girls think he''s the shit. It seems that there is always some slut hanging off him. My mother has got a hard-on for him though and wants me to marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would even consider. He started the band with Val. He is a pretty good singer, plays guitar pretty well, and does a decent job writing some of our music. I''ll give him that he does have a gift for giving people what they want and getting us noticed by people."'
 		*nl
-		'"Then we have Arkadi, he''s can be fun and is usually up for whatever, he''s a great drummer. He is always trying to keep us focused on the music, which can get annoying at times. He also has got a serious temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you aren''t too careful. I''m glad he''s with us, the band would probably split up if it wasn''t for him. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon at times but I enjoy his company, plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first." She says with a wink and a grin.'
+		'"We, then,  have Arkadi. He can be fun and is usually up for whatever you want to do. He''s a great drummer as well. He is always trying to keep us focused on the music which can get annoying at times. He also has got a serious temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you aren''t too careful. I''m glad he''s with us though, since the band would probably split up if it wasn''t for him. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon at times, but I enjoy his company. Plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first," she says with a wink and a grin.'
 		*nl
-		'"Finally there''s Valentin, he is pretty laid back and a lot of fun to hang out with, plays a mean bass. He''s been with the band from the start, him and Rad started it all. He also manages things, Rad schmoozes them and then Val steps in to handle the details and work out a good deal for us, when we do gigs. Plus he''s got a really big dick." She says with a laugh.'
+		'"Finally, there''s Valentin. He''s pretty laid back and a lot of fun to hang out with. He also plays a mean bass. He''s been with the band from the start because Rad and him started it all. He also manages things for the band. When we do gigs, Rad schmoozes the client then Val steps in to handle the details to work out a good deal for us. On the plus side, he''s got a really big dick," she says with a laugh.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -203,14 +203,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"How did you get so free-spirited and not worry about being seen naked?" you ask Anushka while sitting on her bed.'
-		'"I don''t really know. I''ve always felt different than everybody else, it''s been like this, as far back as I can remember. I used to just love the sensation of the wind or the warmth of the sun on my bare skin. As I got older and discovered my sexuality, I started to enjoy showing off my body, and watching most guys and more than a few girls checking me out. It''s quite uplifting getting all the looks and I get so fucking turned on by that."'
-		'You sit there in silence wondering if you should dare to ask her about sex. You ask quietly; "I don''t mean to pry, but I''ve heard some rumors about your sexuality...?"'
+		'"How did you get so free-spirited and not worry about being seen naked," you ask Anushka while sitting on her bed.'
+		'"I don''t really know. I''ve always felt different than everybody else and as far back as I can remember that it''s been like this. I used to just love the sensation of the wind or the warmth of the sun on my bare skin. As I got older and discovered my sexuality, I started to enjoy showing off my body. I''d watch most guys along with more than a few girls checking me out. It''s quite uplifting to be getting all the looks, so I get fucking turned on by that."'
+		'You sit there in silence wondering if you should dare to talk to her about sex. You say quietly, "I don''t mean to pry, but I''ve heard some rumors about your sexuality..."'
 		*nl
-		'"What do you mean!?" she asks.'
-		'"Well, some people say you like guys but sometimes hook up with girls, others say you like girls but hook up with guys sometimes." Trying to not make it sound as if you are implying she is a slut, which is what many seem to think.'
-		'She shrugs slightly. "Honestly I don''t really care, if I like someone and I find them attractive, then I want to fuck them. I mean sex is great, it feels amazing and it something you can share with other people. So why not have sex with anyone you like and are attracted to?"'
-		'You open your mouth to respond but then, thinking about it, you realize she makes a valid point.'
+		'"What do you mean," she asks.'
+		'"Well, some people say you like guys, but sometimes hook up with girls. Others say you like girls, but hook up with guys sometimes." You try to not imply that she is a slut which is what many seem to think.'
+		'She shrugs slightly. "Honestly, I don''t really care. If I like someone and I find them attractive then I want to fuck them. I mean sex is great, it feels amazing, and it something you can share with other people. Why not have sex with anyone you like and are attracted to?"'
+		'When you open your mouth to respond is when you realize that she makes a valid point.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -221,8 +221,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I often see you hanging out with Alyona, aren''t you scared of her?" you curiously ask Anushka.'
-			'"Yeah, she''s my partner in crime and confidant. We hang out a lot and I really enjoy her company. She''s also our band''s number one fan. Most people are afraid of her but she doesn''t really give a fuck, that''s what I really like about her."'
+			'"I often see you hanging out with Alyona. Aren''t you scared of her," you curiously ask Anushka.'
+			'"Yeah, she''s my partner in crime and confidant. We hang out a lot and I really enjoy her company. She''s also our band''s number one fan. Most people are afraid of her, but she doesn''t really give a fuck which is what I really like about her."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -232,8 +232,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you and your bothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
-		'"I know we have a bit of a love hate relationship, they can be such little assholes but at the same time they have their moments when they''re an absolute blast. If Maksim could just stop creeping around and perving out on all my female friends. We would get along a lot better and if my mother would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
+		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you and your brothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
+		'"I know we have a bit of a love/hate relationship. They can be such little assholes, but at the same time they have their moments when they''re an absolute blast to be around. If only Maksim could just stop creeping around and perving out on all my female friends. We would, also, get along a lot better if my mother would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -242,17 +242,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What will you do if the music path doesn''t work out? Don''t get me wrong... I mean you''re talented and all but you might never catch your big break..." you say with a slight hesitation, afraid about how Anushka will react.'
-		'She looks at you smiling; "I''m not too worried about that, I''m certain we''ll make it. Either way it might not seem like it but I''ll let you in on a little secret even though you might not see me at school all the time or seeing me fucking off in class, I''ve got pretty good grades, good enough to get into the University in Saint Petersburg. I am planning to attend the University after school regardless how the band goes. I know my father wants me to study more and focus on being a good girl, but if he would just cut me some fucking slack I might surprise him."'
-		'Before you can say something she asks you. "What about you? What are your plans for the future?"'
+		'"What will you do if the music path doesn''t work out? Don''t get me wrong... I mean you''re talented and all, but you might never catch your big break," you say with a slight hesitation because you''re afraid about how Anushka will react.'
+		'She looks at you smiling. "I''m not too worried about that since I''m certain we''ll make it. Either way it might not seem like it, but I''ll let you in on a little secret. Even though you might not see me at school all the time or see me fucking off in class, I''ve got pretty good grades that are good enough to get into the University in Saint Petersburg. I am planning to attend the University after school regardless of how the band goes. I know my father wants me to study more and focus on being a good girl, but if he would just cut me some fucking slack I might surprise him."'
+		'Before you can say something she asks you, "What about you? What are your plans for the future?"'
 		act 'I don''t know':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m not sure, I have a few options I guess." You tell her.'
-			'She nods a bit. "Well you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
-			'Not sure what more to say about it, you decided to change the subject.'
+			'"I''m not sure, but I guess I have a few options," you tell her.'
+			'She nods a bit. "Well, you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town. Only to end up married to some asshole and popping out his kids every few years. Not judging you, unless that''s what you want. I''m just saying..."'
+			'You''re not sure what more to say about it, so you decide to change the subject.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -261,8 +261,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will for sure know someone there."'
-			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decided then."'
+			'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. For sure now, I will know someone there."'
+			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, then we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes to decide then."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -288,8 +288,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			end
 
 			'You sigh in a way only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
-			'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
-			'Not sure what more to say on the topic.'
+			'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
+			'You''re not sure what more to say on the topic.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -299,20 +299,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You know she is seeing some guys, it is not really a secret and some girls. Not sure if you should even ask but you are curious. "So do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend?"'
+		'You know she is seeing some guys and girls, so it is not really a secret. You''re not sure if you should even ask, but you are curious. "Do you have either a boyfriend or girlfriend?"'
 		*nl
-		'Shaking her head no. "Nope, not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to, as they say: sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you, if that right person came along and just blew me away, then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? You wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
-		'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty and exciting at the same time. But did you mean that?'
+		'She shakes her head no. "Nope, I''m not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
+		'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt about what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty while being exciting at the same time. Do you mean that?'
 		act 'Maybe':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel put on the spot, that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously that is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe, I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up ''til you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and more. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you, all you know is that the kiss is amazing.'
+			'You feel put on the spot that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously you do mean it which is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe since I have been thinking about it a bit."'
+			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction and you''re not sure you want to know it. However, you feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up ''til you are looking at her. Her face is merely inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face. You find yourself looking into her eyes. Suddenly, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, with just a hint of lust, while being something deeper with more meaning to it. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you, but all you know is that this kiss is amazing.'
 			*nl
-			'Finally the kiss ends, both of you needing to breath a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. Then gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against it. So let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
+			'Finally, the kiss ends and both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against it. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes, so you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -321,66 +321,132 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head, this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No. I mean I like you, but not like that, not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on and seems amused by your response.'
-			'"It''s fine, I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
+			'You shake your head because this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No, I mean I like you, but not like that... not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on. She seems amused by your response.'
+			'"It''s fine. I''m just yanking your chain. I like things just as how they are too."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
 		act 'I have a boyfriend':
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 5
-			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Niko" You tell her.'
-				'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, just... just be careful with him.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
-				if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
+				if rand(0,1) = 0:
+					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
-					'You frown at her, you expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, those criminals where going to take everything form his family and he couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
-					'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay, I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you." She says obviously trying to make peace.'
-					'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
+					'"Niko," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-				else
+				elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
+					if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
+						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, because those criminals where going to take everything from his family. He couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
+						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you," she says, obviously, trying to make peace.'
+						'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
+						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					else
+						if hotcat >= 5:
+							'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it," She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome," she asks as she winks as she makes a kissy face at you.'
+							act 'Maybe':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								nushfedor3s = 1
+								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I'll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+							act 'I will ask him':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								nushfedor3s = 1
+								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks it could be fun," you tell her.'
+								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways, I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree. He is a guy after all."'
+								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, so I''ll let you know what he says."'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+							act 'No, I don''t think so':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
+								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You're not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+						else
+							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'She grins at you. "Right and who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
+							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+						end
+					end
+				elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
+					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Vitek," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices your facial expression from her bad mouthing your boyfriend, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time because of how much she talks about how great he is. At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+				elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 10 or artQW = 20:
 					if hotcat >= 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-						'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-						'Then she laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
+						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
+						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 						act 'Maybe':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
-							nushfedor3s = 1
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 						act 'I will ask him':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
-							nushfedor3s = 1
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun." You tell her.'
-							'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree, he is a guy after all."'
-							'You shake your head a little. "Yeah most likely and I''ll let you know what he says."'
+							'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks because it could be fun. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
+							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
+							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him if he would like to."'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -389,108 +455,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-							'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
+							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					else
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-						'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-						'Then she laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style and talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah take my big dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>, take it." Then she switches to a girly voice trying to sound like you. "Yes, yes Fedor fuck me with your big dick, YES!" Then she burst out laughing and you can''t help but join in.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-				end
-			elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Vitek" You tell her.'
-				'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, but doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time, with how much she talks about how great he is, at least when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something." She says with a smirk, you roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			elseif artQW =  3 or artQW =  10 or artQW =  20:
-				if hotcat >= 5:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Artem" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
-					'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-					'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking, so is he?"'
-					'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Then seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah he is pretty good at it, good enough anyways."'
-					'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement, sure that strokes his ego." She says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself, do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
-					act 'Maybe':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-						'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-					act 'I will ask him':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun. But he is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say." You tell her.'
-						'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy, all boys want to fuck as much as they can, two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, I doubt he is any different. Besides maybe I can teach him a new trick or two for you." She says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
-						'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him, if he would like to."'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-					act 'No, I don''t think so':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-						'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+						'You tell her, "You do know I have a boyfriend."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah... ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
+						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah, sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
+						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D, or something like that."'
+						'You shake your head. "No, we don''t, because we make love."'
+						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
 					end
+				elseif Rex_Love = 1:
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Rex," you tell her.'
+					'"Who," She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
+					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah, that''s him."'
+					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you," she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				else
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Artem" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
-					'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-					'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
-					'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
-					'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D or something like that."'
-					'You shake your head. "No we don''t, we make love."'
-					'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh and talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"<<$boyfriend>>," you tell her.'
+					'"Who?" She asks, asshe cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
+					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him. I just met him."'
+					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you met huh?" You laugh then tell her about him.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				end
-			elseif Rex_Love = 1:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Rex" You tell her.'
-				'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. Then it seems she thinks of him. "Wait isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
-				'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah that''s him."'
-				'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-				'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add. "Ok he is friends with my sister and she invited me to his party and thats when we meet." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			else
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"<<$boyfriend>>" You tell her.'
-				'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
-				'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him, he is just this guy I meet."'
-				'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you meet huh?" You laugh and then tell her about him.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			end
-		end
-	end
+		end	
 	if valeriaIntroduced = 1:
 		act 'Ask about her mother':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -498,11 +501,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You are not sure how you should ask this, but you are curious about what''s wrong with her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s wrong with your mother?"'
-			'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry, everyone but her knows it. Honestly I don''t really know, she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun and then she just... changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
+			'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, 'Why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?''" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry, everyone but her knows it. Honestly, I don''t really know because she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun then she just... changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
 			*nl
-			'"Best I can tell is my mother was a party girl looking for a guy she could latch onto, who would give her a party life forever. My dad was the biggest baddest mother fucker around back then, so perfect for my mother. But sometime after I was born, he settled down and I think it just hit her. This was her life, just that of a house wife and mother. She resents him, my brothers, and me for it and blames us for every bad thing that has happened in her life."'
+			'"The best I can tell is my mother was a party girl looking for a guy she could latch onto and who would give her a party life forever. My dad was the biggest, baddest motherfucker around back then and perfect for my mother. Sometime after I was born, he settled down and, I think, it just hit her. This was her life now to be just that of a house wife and a mother. She resents him, my brothers, and me for it. She blames us for every bad thing that has happened in her life."'
 			*nl
-			'Then her tone turns a bit hard. "She is just a loser bitch that wanted to live off a man and didn''t get her way, like my dad says. She''s just a waste of fucking space." Then she looks away for a moment before saying more. "I don''t really want to talk about this."'
+			'Her tone turns a bit harsh. "Like my dad says, 'She is just a loser bitch that wanted to live off of a man and didn''t get her way.'' She''s just a waste of fucking space." She looks away for a moment before saying more, "I don''t really want to talk about this."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -516,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
 			if hotcat >= 5:
-				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss fully.'
+				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it, but she turns her head to look at you. Her face is not that far from yours and you can''t help it. You just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over to give her a kiss. She fully returns your kiss.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk more': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -524,20 +527,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtmakeout.jpg"></center>'
-					'She wraps her arms around you neck and pulls you close and soon the two of you are kissing passionately. The kisses are full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more and more aroused.'
+					'She wraps her arms around you neck and pulls you close. Soon the two of you are kissing passionately. The kisses are full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more and more aroused.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Stop making out': 
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'hate'
-						'You pull away before things go too far and catch your breath. You see her slightly confused look and you feel a bit bad about it. "Sorry, I got carried away. Can we just go back to talking?" She frowns a little. "Yeah whatever." You know you annoyed her a little and you don''t blame her, you did just give her the girl equivalent of blue balls.'
+						'You pull away before things go too far and catch your breath. You see her slightly confused look and you feel a bit bad about it. "Sorry, I got carried away. Can we just go back to talking?" She frowns a little. "Yeah whatever." You know you annoyed her a little and you don''t blame her since you did just give her the girl equivalent of blue balls.'
 						act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					end
 					act 'Peeking':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
-						'As the two of you keep kissing she breaks the kiss and uses one of her hands to pull down your top and expose your breasts, she takes a long hard look at your breasts. "Nice tits" You can''t help it, just the way she says it in the moment makes you giggle, but your giggle is short lived as she starts kissing you again.'
+						'As the two of you keep kissing she breaks the kiss and uses one of her hands to pull down your top to expose your breasts. She takes a long hard look at your breasts. "You have nice tits." You can''t help it, but just the way she says it in the moment makes you giggle. Your giggle is short lived as she starts kissing you again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Undress her':
@@ -545,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You don''t waste any time and start pulling her clothes off, she returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you were''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others bodies. Regardless before long, you are both naked.'
+							'You don''t waste any time and start pulling her clothes off. She returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you were''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, before long you are both naked.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get pleasured': gt 'anushkaev1', 'getpleasured'
@@ -553,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					end
 				end
 			else
-				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss a moment then stops and pulls away. Sensing she isn''t interested you decided to keep talking instead.'
+				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it, but she turns her head to look at you. Her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it. You just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss for a moment then stops to pull away. Sensing that she isn''t interested, instead you decide to keep talking.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk more': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			end
@@ -565,8 +568,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You bite your lip a moment, unsure if you should ask. It might seem rude but you could really use a snack and drink. "Hey Nush you got anything to snack on or drink?"'
-		'She looks a bit surprised and then a bit abashed, which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future but come on."'
+		'You bite your lip a moment because you are unsure if you should ask. It might seem rude, but you could really use a snack and drink. "Hey Nush, do you have anything to snack on or a drink?"'
+		'She looks a bit surprised and a bit abashed which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, I didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future, but come on."'
 		act 'Follow her':gt 'anushapt','snack'
 	end
 	if maksimQW >= 3:
@@ -575,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance over at Anushka. "Hey I actually had fun playing with your brothers last time, you think they would be up for a rematch?"'
+			'You glance over at Anushka. "Hey I actually had fun playing with your brothers last time. Do you think they would be up for a rematch?"'
 			'She grins at you and gets up heading for the door already. "Lets go find out."'
 			act 'Follow': gt 'anushaptbr', 'rematch'
 		end
@@ -588,24 +591,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radval':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'You pauses a moment not sure if you should ask but decided to anyways. "You''re sleeping with both Rad and Val right?" You already know the answer but asking is polite.'
-	'She gives you a slightly confused look. "Yeah, why?" Which turns into a what business of yours is it look when she answers.'
-	'You give her a friendly smile. "Well I was just wondering if it causes problems, if they got jealous or something of each other."'
-	'She looks at you for a long moment and then busts out laughing. "Are you fucking kidding me? Guys don''t give a shit as long as they get a turn, most guys would pimp out their girlfriend for a pack of smokes if they was out."'
+	'You pause a moment because you''re not sure if you should ask, but decided to anyways, "You''re sleeping with both Rad and Val right?" You already know the answer, but ask to be polite.'
+	'She gives you a slightly confused look. "Yeah, why?" Which turns into a what-business-of-yours-is-it-look when she answers.'
+	'You give her a friendly smile. "Well, I was just wondering if it causes problems like if they get jealous or something of each other."'
+	'She looks at you for a long moment and bursts out laughing. "Are you fucking kidding me? Guys don''t give a shit as long as they get a turn. Most guys I know would pimp out their girlfriend for a pack of smokes if they were out."'
 	act 'Not all guys':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You frown and ok some guys but not all are that way. "That''s not true some guys are sweet."'
-		'She gives you are you stupid look but then softens it a bit. "Ok sure some guys, the ugly ones or the ones lacking confidence that they can get another pussy. Sure they might be sweet, but only cause they fear not having any pussy."'
-		'You are a bit surprised by how jaded she already is, but maybe you shouldn''t be, it explains a lot. "Wow you are really jaded." You can''t help but call it like you see it.'
+		'You frown and reply, "Okay some guys, but not all are that way. There are some guys that are sweet."'
+		'She gives you are you stupid look, but then softens it a bit. "Ok, sure, some guys like the ugly ones or the ones lacking confidence that they can''t get another pussy. Sure they might be sweet, but only cause they fear not having any pussy."'
+		'You are a bit surprised by how jaded she already is, but maybe you shouldn''t be since it explains a lot. "Wow, you are really jaded." You can''t help, but call it like you see it.'
 		*nl
-		'She shrugs a bit. "Ever guy that talks to you or tries to get to know you, eventually tries to fuck you. Ok maybe not the gay guys but they don''t count. Tell me I''m wrong."'
-		'You open your mouth to deny it, but she has a point pretty much all of them do eventually try and screw you sooner or later. "Yeah but that doesn''t mean they don''t care." Even you are unsure if you believe that.'
-		'She gives you a smirk. "Maybe but my personal experience, what I have seen and heard from other girls says deep down all guys are that way. Besides why do you care?" She asks.'
-		'You shrug a bit. "Was just worried it might break up the band or cause problems."'
-		'She smiles and shakes her head. "Don''t worry about that, it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong but she obliviously doesn''t believe it and you don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
+		'She shrugs a bit. "Ever guy that talks to you or tries to get to know you will eventually try to fuck you. Ok maybe not the gay guys, but they don''t count. Tell me that I''m wrong."'
+		'You open your mouth to deny it, but she has a point. Pretty much all of them do eventually try and screw you sooner or later. "Yeah, but that doesn''t mean they don''t care." Even you are unsure if you believe that.'
+		'She gives you a smirk. "Maybe, but in my personal experience and what I have seen and heard from other girls says deep down all guys are that way. Besides why do you care," she asks.'
+		'You shrug a bit. "I was just worried it might break up the band or cause problems."'
+		'She smiles and shakes her head. "Don''t worry about that ''cause it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong, but she obliviously doesn''t believe it. You don''t think you can change her mind, so you let it drop.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -614,10 +617,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radval':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You frown and think about it, yeah you have seen a lot of guys treat guys like a sex object and nothing else, maybe she has a point. "Ok maybe but guys are still pretty territorial."'
-		'She shrugs a bit. "Yeah some are, like Vitek I could see him fucking around but being pissed if his ''girlfriend''" She does air quotes when she says girlfriend. "Was with another guys, because he thinks he owns her, it would be like some other guy taking his car with out asking."'
-		'You shrug a bit. "So you don''t think they are the same and might cause problem with the band?"'
-		'She smiles and shakes her head. "No, they are cool and we all have a understanding, friends with benefits but that''s it. Don''t worry about it, it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong but she obliviously doesn''t believe it and you don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
+		'You frown and think about it, ''Yeah you have seen a lot of guys treat girls like a sex object and nothing else. Maybe she has a point after all.'' "Ok maybe, but guys are still pretty territorial."'
+		'She shrugs a bit. "Yeah, some are, like Vitek. I could see him fucking around, but being pissed if his ''girlfriend,''" she does air quotes when she says girlfriend, "Was with other guys. All because he thinks he owns her it would be like some other guy taking his car without asking."'
+		'You shrug a bit. "You don''t think they are the same and might cause problem with the band?"'
+		'She smiles and shakes her head. "No, they are cool and we all have a understanding. We''re friends with benefits, but that''s it. Don''t worry about it since it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong, but she obliviously doesn''t believe it. You don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end

+ 307 - 96
locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -19,35 +19,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	end
 
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Housing</h2></center>'
-	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Bills are paid by the other tennants in exchange for your house services')
-	if home_owned[1] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. Rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically, in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days')
-	if home_owned[1] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[1] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.')
-	if home_owned[2] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You live in a two-room apartment, in a large apartment complex, with your parents and siblings in Pavlovsk.')
+	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Your bills are paid by the other tenants in exchange for your house services')
+	if home_owned[1] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment in the city residential area. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days')
+	if home_owned[1] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment in the city residential area. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[1] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.')
+	if home_owned[2] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You live in a two-room apartment in a large apartment complex. You live with your parents and siblings in Pavlovsk.')
 	if home_owned[3] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own small holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the communal village.')
-	if home_owned[4] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment, in Pushkin. Rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically, in sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days')
-	if home_owned[5] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a vacant block, in the city suburbs. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[5] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a block in the city suburbs, upon which, you are building a house. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[5] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own an impressive mansion in the suburbs of St. Petersburg. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[4] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment in Pushkin. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days')
+	if home_owned[5] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a vacant block in the city suburbs. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[5] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a block in the city suburbs, upon which, you are building a house. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[5] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own an impressive mansion in the suburbs of St. Petersburg. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Work</h2></center>'
-	if workPTU > 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a teacher at the Lycée. Working days Mon-Sat, with 14.00 to 16.00. Salary 300r/day. Dress code - office clothes, Strict. The road from the apartment to the Lyceum takes 2 hours 10 minutes.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working as a waitress at The Roadhouse cafe. You need to come to work between 11 and 12, working days: Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. At work, you can receive tips from customers, and payment is received on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 8 and 9, during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and worksalon > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a masseuse in the city at the Beauty Bar. You need to come to work with 9 to 10, working days, Monday, Wednesday, Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a secretary at Titran-Express. At work you need to come up 9, during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and tanwork > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a governess for Tanya, at Nicholas'' luxury city apartment. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 15, Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 9, Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 9, Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if workPTU > 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a teacher at the Lycée and your schedule is Mon-Sat, with you teaching between 14:00 to 16:00. Your Salary is 300r/day. The dress code is Office Clothes, Strict. The road from the apartment to the Lyceum takes 2 hours 10 minutes.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working as a waitress at The Roadhouse cafe. You need to come to work between 11:00-12:00 while your working days are: Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday. At work, you can receive tips from customers and your wages are received on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 08:00-09:00 during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and worksalon > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a masseuse in the city at the Beauty Bar. You need to come to work with 09:00-10:00 while your working days are: Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a secretary at Titran-Express. For work you need to come by 09:00 during the week Monday-Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and tanwork > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a governess for Tanya at Nicholas'' luxury city apartment. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 15:00 Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a seamstress in a factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every day except Saturday and Sunday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. Work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday, starting at 8 AM. Salary depends on sales.')
-	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Work is every day from 16 to 19. Salary is 250 plus tips.')
-	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Work starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in pavlovo clinic. Work is from 16 to 21.')
-	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. Free schedule, every day from 15 to midnight. No salary, only tips.')
+	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
+	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 plus tips.')
+	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Teh work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16 to 21.')
+	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an opene schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
 	if film > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working in the city industrial region as pornographic actress under the name <<$pfname>>')
 	if bumtolik = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been asked to help the homeless at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region.')
-	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region, working with the homeless. Working hours are from 9 to 17, Saturday and Sunday.')
+	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region and work with the homeless. Working hours are from 09:00 to 17:00 on Saturday and Sunday.')
 	if model > 0: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are a model working at ''Aphrodite Photography'' in St. Petersburg.')
 	if model > 0 and model_week = (daystart - week) / 7 and model_job_week >= 2:
 		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have no more modeling jobs available this week.')
@@ -69,9 +69,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		end
 	end
 	if pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour < 11: 
-		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You are expected in the porno studio at 10:00.')
+		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You are expected to be in the porno studio at 10:00.')
 	elseif pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour >= 11 and hour < 13: 
-		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You should be at the porno studio, shooting!')
+		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You should be at the porno studio shooting!')
 	elseif pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour >= 13: 
 		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You missed a scheduled porno shoot!')
 	end
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	elseif grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 30:
 		$journal_school_standing = ' You are in good standing with your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5:
-		$journal_school_standing = '<font color="red"> You are on the outs with your clique, you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
+		$journal_school_standing = '<font color="red"> You are on the outs with your clique, so you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
 	end
 	
 	if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
@@ -256,13 +256,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'locations':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Pavlovsk</h2></center>'
-	'Pavlovsk is a small town, it is somewhat of a tourist spot thanks to Catharina Palace, the former palace grounds has been converted into a large park. The town of Pavlovsk is centered around the train station. There is an open air market near the train stations that is open year around, where many bargains can be found. The cafe where your mother works can also be found near the train station, catering to the visitors coming in by train. The downtown area has most of the businesses and some middle class housing, while the residential area is a mixture of houses and soviet era apartment blocks. Some of the wealthiest families live in houses near the park on the outskirts of town. While the poorest homes are found near the old industrial area where several old factories has long since been closed down, lay abandoned and are run down. The only factory that is still open is the G&M clothing factory which also has a local store front and a tailor that can adjust your clothing. The industrial area is now mostly a home to prostitutes and drugs dealers, it is not considered a safe area to walk around at night. Despite being a tourist destination the area is seen as fairly poor, without many jobs.'
+	'Pavlovsk is a small town. It is somewhat of a tourist spot thanks to Catharina Palace and the former palace grounds has been converted into a large park. The town of Pavlovsk is centered around the train station. There is an open air market near the train station that is open year around. There are many bargains that can be found. The cafe is where your mother works can, also, be found near the train station. It caters to the visitors coming in by train. The downtown area has most of the businesses and some middle class housing. The residential area is a mixture of houses and Soviet-era apartment blocks. Some of the wealthiest families live in houses near the park that''s on the outskirts of town. While the poorest homes are found near the old industrial area where several old factories has long since been closed down, lay abandoned, and are run down. The only factory that is still open is the G&M clothing factory which also has a local store front and a tailor that can adjust your clothing. The industrial area is now mostly a home to prostitutes and drugs dealers. It is not considered a safe area to walk around at night. Despite being a tourist destination the area is seen as fairly poor and without many jobs.'
 
 	'<center><h2>Gadukino</h2></center>'
-	'You''ve spent several summers at your grandparents village. It''s a real small village where everyone are very tightly knit together. You remember spending the days by playing with the local children by the river, visiting the local little shop that had everything a kid needs. While your great grandparents where younger they used to take you out in the woods where you picked mushrooms and berries. Your great grandfather also showed you around the hunting grounds, telling you all kind of stories about the hunters that come and visit the sleepy little village.'
+	'You''ve spent several summers at your grandparents'' village. It''s a real small village where everyone is very tightly knit together. You remember spending your days by playing with the local children at the river or visiting the local little shop that had everything a kid needs. While your great grandparents where younger they used to take you out into the woods where you picked mushrooms and berries. Your great grandfather also showed you around the hunting grounds. He told you all kind of stories about the hunters that come and visit the sleepy little village.'
 
 	'<center><h2>St. Petersburg</h2></center>'
-	'You''ve heard many rumors about the City from both family members and school friends and they all say it''s both a great place and a bad place. The few memories you have are connected to the big city park where you and your family visited once. They had a large amusement park with lots of rides and fun to be had. You also know about the University because you''ve overheard Anya and your mom argue about it. Sometimes your mother would drag you and Anya along to the big City mall while she was visiting the beauty salon, you got to run around there among the shops asking your mother to buy you some of the clothes available there.'
+	'You''ve heard many rumors about the City from both family members and school friends. They all say it''s both a great and bad place. The few memories you have are connected to the big city park where you and your family visited once. They had a large amusement park with lots of rides and fun to be had. You also know about the University because you''ve overheard Anya and your mom argue about it. Sometimes, your mother would drag you and Anya along to the big City mall while she was visiting the beauty salon. You even got to run around there among the shops asking your mother to buy you some of the clothes available there.'
 		
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -271,37 +271,37 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/29.png"></center>'
-	'Mother Natasha - Your mother was born in Gadukino village is still quite young and attractive, you have done the math and know she had Anya when she was only sixteen years old. She works at the station cafe. Your grandmother died in child birth with your mother and your grandfather a couple of years later in the Afghanistan war.'
+	'Mother Natasha - Your mother was born in Gadukino village. She is still quite young and attractive. Since you have done the math, you know she had Anya when she was only sixteen years old. She works at the station cafe. Your grandmother died in child birth with your mother. Your grandfather was killed a couple of years later in the Afghanistan war.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/35.png"></center>'
-	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
+	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, so you have no real memory of him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/28.png"></center>'
-	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father and married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born that you know of. While not working your stepfather will often be found working on his cars by the garage.'
+	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. While not working, your stepfather will often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/33.png"></center>'
-	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister. She is two years your senior, she still lives at home sharing a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends or with her boyfriend Roma.'
+	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister. She is two years your senior, but she still lives at home and shares a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket, instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends, or with her boyfriend Roma.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/34.png"></center>'
-	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother, born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you, and enjoys football. When he is not playing football, or doing homework, he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
+	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother and born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you and enjoys football. When he is not playing football or doing homework he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/30.png"></center>'
-	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister, she has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about the looks and talks and if anything seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
+	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about the looks, talks, and if anything seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
-	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunts live in boyfriend. Only that he doesn''t speak Russian very well, he is from Africa and is a very large man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
+	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunts live-in boyfriend. You only that he doesn''t speak Russian very well and he is from Africa. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/31.png"></center>'
-	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man, who is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is barely being fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house any more, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'
+	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man. He is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is barely being fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house anymore, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/32.png"></center>' 
-	'Great Grandma Elena Knavs - Your great grandma is extremely old, and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time she just sits on her bed watching TV, or slowly cleans the house. Having raised your mother and aunt Luda, she is like a grandmother to you and a mother to your mother. Having raised two generations of kids your great grandparents are now content with the peace and quiet of the village.'
+	'Great Grandma Elena Knavs - Your great grandma is extremely old and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time, she just sits on her bed watching TV or slowly cleans the house. Having raised your mother and aunt Luda, she is like a grandmother to you and a mother to your mother. She has raised two generations of kids, so your great grandparents are now content with the peace and quiet of the village.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/54.png"></center>'
-	'Mikhail "Misha" - Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him, warning you that he used to be a local crime lord, and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and nice to you. He is close friends with your stepfather, both have been evasive about how they met and became friends.'
+	'Mikhail "Misha" - Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him Uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him by warning you that he used to be a local crime lord and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and nice to you. He is close friends with your stepfather, but both have been evasive about how they met and became friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/112.png"></center>'
-	'Sergey Shulgin - He lives in the same building as you with his son, your childhood friend Vasily. He has gray hair and a small beer belly, but still hearty looking. His wife, Vasily''s mother left when Vasily was still a small child. He has been close friends with your stepfather and mother for as long as you can remember. Oddly enough he never re-married after being left by his ex-wife.'
+	'Sergey Shulgin - He lives in the same building as you with his son, your childhood friend Vasily. He has gray hair and a small beer belly, but still hearty looking. His wife, Vasily''s mother, left when Vasily was still a small child. He has been close friends with your stepfather and mother for as long as you can remember. Oddly enough, he never re-married after being left by his ex-wife.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -310,28 +310,28 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>School</h2></center>'
-	'You attend the Secondary School in Pavlovsk, you have known most of your classmates your whole life. You are on friendly terms with some of them and less so with some others. The relationships you''ve had have changed over the years. The school is fairly new, a few years ago the new school was built, along with a new sports field that some students use after school hours, while the old school building was left to rot. When the school was built was state of the art, but as some years has passed it is starting to fall into disrepair. The old school is a shell of it''s former self and sometimes used by the students as a place to hang out. In the school there are four different cliques that most of the students belong to, the rest are the outcasts who no one wants to have anything to do with unless it is to pick on or abuse them.'
+	'You attend the Secondary School in Pavlovsk and you have known most of your classmates your whole life. You are on friendly terms with some of them and less so with others. The relationships you''ve had have changed over the years. The school is fairly new, it''s only been a few years ago that it was built, along with a new sports field that some students use after school hour. When the school was built it was state of the art, but as some years has passed it is starting to fall into disrepair. In the school there are four different cliques that most of the students belong to while the rest are the outcasts who no one wants to have anything to do with unless it is to pick on or abuse them. The old school building was left to rot and is now a shell of its former self. It''s sometimes used by the students as a place to hang out. '
 	*nl
-	'There are the cool kids, those with that IT factor, maybe they are wealthy, charming, posses a good sense of style, are just good looking, or all of the above. They are mostly concerned with appearances above all things. If you don''t look good they don''t consider you worthy. Next are the jocks, the athletes, they are all into one or more sports and spend most of their time working out or playing sports. They look down on those with no athletic ability, though they and the cool kids overlap a bit and mostly get along. Next are the nerds who are all into what many consider nerdy or geeky stuff, like cosplay, role playing games, or other fringe activities. Most of them are also very smart and do well in school, they tend to keep their heads down and focus on doing their school work while at school. The last group are the gopniks, they are a rowdy bunch, ranging from small time criminals, to party animals, or trouble makers. They thumb their nose at authority and often are barely passing their classes, leaving many to wonder why they bother coming to school at all.'
+	'There are the cool kids. They are the ones with that IT factor, maybe they are wealthy, charming, posses a good sense of style, are just good looking, or all of the above. They are mostly concerned with appearances above all things. If you don''t look good then they don''t consider you worthy. Next are the jocks or the athletes, they are all into one or more sports and spend most of their time working out or playing sports. They look down on those with no athletic ability. There is some overlap between them and the cool kids overlap a bit who mostly get along. Following them are the nerds who are all into what many consider nerdy or geeky stuff, like cosplay, role playing games, or other fringe activities. Most of them are also very smart and do well in school. They tend to keep their heads down and focus on doing their school work while at school. The last group are the gopniks. They are a rowdy bunch that range from small time criminals, to party animals, or trouble makers. They thumb their nose at authority and often are barely passing their classes. This leaves many to wonder why they bother coming to school at all.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><h2>Social Group</h2></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'You are a member of the cool clique in school, the royalty of the school. You get along with your fellow cool kids and most of the jocks, the nerds fear and live in awe of you, while the gopniks are just losers without a sense of style that try to act tough, when in reality everyone knows they are just jealous. On the weekends you are your fellows often go to the disco at the community center to hang out and dance the night away. Other times you hang out in small groups at each others houses or the occasional house party.'
+		'You are a member of the cool clique in school. They are the royalty of the school. You get along with your fellow cool kids and most of the jocks. The nerds fear and live in awe of you while the gopniks are just losers without a sense of style. They try to act tough, but in reality everyone knows they are just jealous. On the weekends you and your fellows often go to the disco at the community center to hang out and dance the night away. Other times, you hang out in small groups at each others houses or the occasional house party.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'You are a member of the jock clique in school, you get along with your fellow jocks and most of the cool kids as well. The nerds live in fear and awe of you, the gopniks are wannabe toughs that just can''t physically keep up with you and your fellow jocks. You and your fellow jocks often get together at the school field or community center for pickup games for fun. At least when you are not working out. Sometimes you and some of the other jocks will attend some of the cool kids get together''s.'
+		'You are a member of the jock clique in school. You get along with your fellow jocks and most of the cool kids as well. The nerds live in fear and awe of you. The gopniks are wannabe toughs that just can''t physically keep up with you and your fellow jocks. Your clique often get together at the school field or community center for pickup games for fun. At least, when you are not working out. Sometimes you and some of the other jocks will attend some of the cool kids get togethers.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
-		'You are a member of the nerd clique in school, you and your fellow nerds mostly keep to yourselves and avoid the rest. The cool kids like to mock and emotional abuse you, the jocks often just bully you, and the gopniks are the worst of the lot, their torments know no bounds. Most of you attend a weekly DnD game at the community center library, at other times you sometimes gather together for study groups, or video game nights.'
+		'You are a member of the nerd clique in school. You and your fellow nerds mostly keep to yourselves and avoid the other cliques. The cool kids like to mock and emotional abuse you. The jocks often just bully you. The gopniks are the worst of the lot, because their torments know no bounds. Most of you attend a weekly DnD game at the community center library, but at other times you sometimes gather together for study groups or video game nights.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
-		'You are a member of the gopnik clique in school, you hang out with your other gopniks. Which means drinking, doing drugs, fucking, partying, fighting or just causing general mayhem. The school and Pavlovsk is your playground, you thumb your nose at authority. Some often wonder why you and the rest stay in school, but they just don''t get it. Where else could you find this much fun all forced together. You get along with most of your fellow gopniks.' 
+		'You are a member of the gopnik clique in school. You hang out with your other gopniks. This entails drinking, doing drugs, fucking, partying, fighting, or just causing general mayhem. The school and Pavlovsk is your playground, so you thumb your nose at authority. Some often wonder why you and the rest stay in school, but they just don''t get it. Where else could you find this much fun all forced together? You get along with most of your fellow gopniks.' 
 	else
-		'You are an outcast in school, no one really likes you, not even your fellow outcasts. It is pretty much every man for themselves. Sometimes you cluster near each other, more for defense than out of like. That way if some of the jocks or gopniks come around they will likely grab one of you to pick on and the others can slip away. Your life is a lonely life, school is often hell and you have no real friends. You spend most of your time alone.'
+		'You are an outcast in school. No one really likes you. Not even your fellow outcasts. It is pretty much every man for themselves. Sometimes you cluster near each other which is more for defense than out of like. That way if some of the jocks or gopniks come around they will likely grab one of you to pick on and the rest can slip away. Your life is a lonely life since school is often hell and you have no real friends. You spend most of your time alone.'
 	end
 	if grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 70:
 		'You are well respected and liked within your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 30:
 		'You are in good standing with your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5:
-		'<font color="red">You are on the outs with your clique, you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
+		'<font color="red">You are on the outs with your clique. You''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><h2>Class schedule</h2></center>'
@@ -371,76 +371,76 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	'<center><h2>Teachers & Facility</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/134.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Aleksandrina Volkov</center>'
-	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman in her mid to late thirties, who always dresses well. She was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict disciplinarian, but fair. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
+	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman, in her mid to late thirties, who always dresses well. She was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict, but fair disciplinarian. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/132.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ruslan Kuznetsov</center>'
-	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor and shop teacher, he also the assistant Headmaster. Is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job. He really believes that he can impact on the students future but is mostly ignored by everyone even his colleagues. Which recently has seen him start becoming bitter.'
+	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor, and shop teacher. He is, also, the assistant Headmaster. He is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job. He really believes that he can impact on the students future, but is mostly ignored by everyone... even his colleagues. This has recently had him start becoming bitter.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/26.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Anatoly E. Tsarev</center>'
-	'Anatoly Tsarev is the school''s math teacher. He''s a stern teacher, who always demands the best out of his students. His daughter Lera is in your class and a gopnik. He''s married to Vera, who works at the train station as a ticket saleswoman and as a cleaner in the garment factory. There are rumors that since Lesco his nephew has come to live with them, his marriage has been on the rocks.'
+	'Anatoly Tsarev is the school''s math teacher. He''s a stern teacher and who always demands the best out of his students. His daughter, Lera, is in your class and a gopnik. He''s married to Vera who works at the train station as a ticket saleswoman and as a cleaner in the garment factory. There are rumors that since Lesco, his nephew, has come to live with them that his marriage has been on the rocks.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/135.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yeva Sokoloff</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school, she likes to think she is tough often giving those in her class a hard look, which is funny coming from someone that looks like the little old lady in the market. But she is quick to send you to the Headmistress if you misbehave to much.'
+		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and she likes to think she is tough oftentimes by giving those in her class a hard look. It''s funny coming from someone that looks like the little old lady in the market. She is quick to send you to the Headmistress if you misbehave to much.'
 	else
-		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and has a very firm no nonsense teaching style, but can also be very kind and motherly to students that work hard and behave.'
+		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and has a very firm no-nonsense teaching style, but can also be very kind and motherly to students that work hard and behave.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/129.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Serafim Ivanov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. A former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no nonsense, teacher, who is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes and is brutal when it comes to his grading, to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complains about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accept the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. This is to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complain about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accept the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
 	else
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. A former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no nonsense, bitter teacher, who is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, he gives the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes, that he never would do with another student group. He seems to take delight when he catches one of the cool kids, jocks or Gopniks out, ridiculing them on how little they know.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, because he gives the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes that he never does with another student group. He seems to take delight when he catches one of the cool kids, jocks, or Gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/128.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Makar Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students and even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of the students.'
+	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/137.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Raven Braakman</center>'
-	'Raven Braakman is the school''s social sciences and English teacher. She is from South Africa, she married a Russian man and moved to Pavlovsk, a few years ago her husband died in a car accident. She has a strict teaching style, accepting only the best out of her students. It is rumored she is a bit of a party goer in her free time.'
+	'Raven Braakman is the school''s Social Sciences and English teacher. She is from South Africa that married a Russian man then moved to Pavlovsk. A few years ago her husband died in a car accident. She has a strict teaching style and accepts only the best out of her students. It is rumored that she is a bit of a party goer in her free time.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/130.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ilya Yenotin</center>'
-	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy but is unliked by most of the students, simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing down the Gopniks, trying getting them to attend class.'
+	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language, and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is unliked by most of the students simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing down the Gopniks and trying getting them to attend class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/131.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktor Pavlovich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher and is the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a power build with a massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted, he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest if not the meanest teacher in school.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is, also, the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted because he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
 	else
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher and is the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a power build with a massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He likes to use it on students, especially female students. He is single, and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is, also, the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He likes to use it on students and especially female students. He is single and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/69.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Mikhail Nikolaevich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, he almost worships the best of the jocks, always talking and laughing with them.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Was heading towards the big leagues as a football and almost became a pro himself but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive, always wanting to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
 	else
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that, but now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/138.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arina Orlov</center>'
-	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which makes many of the students to ignore her during class, she has a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and very cute as well, which causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
+	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school since she just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey which makes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and very cute as well. This causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/136.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Olga Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heel over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked, the ideal woman.'
+	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heel over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked which is the ideal woman.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/133.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Rolan Matveev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught as he was rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties, while others say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, you and the other girls have caught him staring at you when he doesn''t think you are watching and then will quickly look away.'
+		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties. While other people say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, you and the other girls have caught him staring at you when he doesn''t think you are watching and will quickly look away.'
 	else
-		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught as he was rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties, while others say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, everyone agree''s he looks and acts creepy.'
+		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties. While other people say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, everyone agrees he looks and acts creepy.'
 	end	
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
@@ -656,6 +656,217 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing she has an amazing sense of style able to pull off many great looks earning her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother leaving this poor one behind, and instead having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		end
 	end
+
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Nerds</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for super heroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. Ths doesn''t include his collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous super heroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students. He has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
+	else
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for super heroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. Ths doesn''t include his collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous super heroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students. He has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has gotten some to call him the King of the Nerds.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
+	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks since he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks. Thanks to his looks and good grades he has befriended a lot of jocks because he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise, he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes, and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself by playing various games on her phone. Although she is great a video games, she knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, super heroes, and other important things. The boys seem to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
+	else
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes, and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself by playing various games on her phone. Although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner, unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Petka Klyuyev</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students since he prefers to only talk to his fellow nerds. He mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
+	else
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people because he mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. If you need homework he is easy to bully homework out of since he is afraid of his own shadow.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Gerasim Vasilyev</center>'
+	'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and surprisingly a few of the jocks. Most of the rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/12.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Julia Milov</center>'
+	'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and really doesn''t have any friends in school other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing other girls while they change clothes after the gym lessons. It''s likely she''s jealous of their popularity.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/151.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Evgeny Kuznetsov</center>'
+	'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but he has not shown any interest in girls or anyone else for that matter. Nobody would be surprised if he has mild autism.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/16.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
+	'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your school. You live in the same building, so you know that her parents are very poor. It shows because Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends since most of the other girls shun her or mock her due to the poor quality clothing she wears.'
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
+	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football. At least when he is not chasing girls or more often being chased by girls. With whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls. Lazar is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports, but Lazar is the overall better athlete and Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
+	'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part of. He is mostly into boxing and running at this time. Ivan is considered to be very good looking by the girls in school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tends to keep to himself. He is a true lone wolf, but he occasionally hangs out with Fedor. He is calm and collected by nature while some might even say apathetic.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
+	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her having a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, also, more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
+	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football and many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
+	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it. This makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well because she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself a adult already. Bella considers the rest of her classmates to be beneath her for being too young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
+		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Veronika "Ronnie" Sokolov</center>'
+	'Veronika Sokolov is called the ice queen by her fellow students behind her back. It''s for a couple of valid reasons. One of those reasons is that she is very talented ice skater. Talk of the town indicates that she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other reason is because she is cold and indifferent to people. She never lets anyone get close to her. She, also, comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
+	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock that plays jokes on his teammates while, also, annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so most everyone likes him. Despite his easy going attitude, he is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
+	'Erast Vagin is a huge boy and very strong. He lacks the good looks or the cleverness of the other jocks, but is always polite and a little shy. When he is playing sports his personality changes into a demon. He''s always fighting to win but putting his all into winning and nothing else. He is an average athlete that relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. He also sometimes spars with Ivan in a friendly manner.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
+	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term you would use is Christina''s lapdog. She, usually, does anything Christina wants her to do as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself she would be a lot more popular.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
+	'Larissa is a very athletic girl with an exceptional talent for volleyball. She has a very weak personality though and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina. Her best friend is Christina. One can often see her chasing after Christina.'
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
+	'Everyone at school always bullies Lesco over anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev while also being the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He seems to always be sad and just want to be left alone.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
+	'Petia Alkaev is the class mooch. He persistently asks others for food, money, cigarettes, and anything else not nailed down. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space". This is made worse by the fact that, he seems to be unaware what soap is. He is an unattractive overweight guy who makes the pretty girls uncomfortable by hitting on them repeatedly and constantly. No matter how many beat downs or cruel pranks pulled he just doesn''t seem to learn his lesson.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
+		'After a series of slutty behavior incidents, that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk and gave five guys, including Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob near the community center. Only to return with her face covered in their cum her reputation has been in shambles. Most of the girls in school all give her the silent treatment and pretend that she does not exist anymore. Meanwhile, all the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her knowing that she doesn''t have the strength to say no. Many say she has embraced being the cheap slut that happily lets anyone use her. Other people gossip that she has started to prostitute herself by the highway.'
+	end
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
+		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone he has become a outcast. He claims that he was forced to and had no choice, but most thinks he just wanted to. Many of the boys call him a fag and often ask him if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly just as bad since many of them make fun of him as well. Now Fedor mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Cool kids</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/1.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Dimka Nosov</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him since he is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school. Everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
+	else
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him because he is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor there are rumors saying that he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally torment the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
+	if grupTipe < 3:
+		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family. She always does her best to look and dress well. She is considered to have the best sense of style in school and one of the prettiest girls in school. She is also an excellent dancer. She is always conducting herself properly because her father is trying to become the town mayor. Image is everything is probably Albina''s motto. She runs a dance troupe at the community center which only the prettiest and best dancers make it on her troupe. It is a real boon to be picked for it.'
+	else
+		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family. She always does her best to look and dress well. She is considered to have the best sense of style in school and one of the prettiest girls in school. She is also an excellent dancer. She always conducts herself properly because her father is trying to become the town mayor. Image is everything is probably Albina''s motto.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
+	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African-American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends, so he tends to use Marcus rising popularity to boost his own. In the process, he spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
+	'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows this and takes full advantage of her assets. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality that is hidden behind her sweet smile. She often makes the boys do her dirty work.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. She''s extremely nosy and is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion since she is all to eager to pry into the details. Pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicey gossip they have. If you want to know anything about anyone she is the one to ask. Luckily she doesn''t use your knowledge to tear others with. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
+	else
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. She''s extremely nosy and is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion since she is all to eager to pry into the details. She's pretty, but most boys seem torn. They''re attracted to her. All the boys are afraid that she will tell everyone everything about them. This could lead to their whole life becoming public knowledge.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
+	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On the one hand, she''s a smart ass and on the other hand, she''s a cheerful girl. She is very sociable with her being friends with many of the students in school. Vicky is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and boyfriend Vanya Yanka. As a good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. When she was a child she took gymnastics which resulted in her having excellent flexibility. She's a bit flighty and unpredictable, so you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, She makes decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
+	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friends, so whenever you see one of them the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, a high pitched voice, and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally, a boy like him would be mocked. However, his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka though, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
+	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch and always has been one. Now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hang around the new exchange student Marcus more than her Stasya has became a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all. She never says anything around Marcus or Andrey, instead she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her. The nerds and the outcasts, especially, are her targets.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
+	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl. She''s a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent. She, at times, can also be impulsive like Vicky. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Marcus Larson is an African-American exchange student, that arrived to the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school while being a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls. He always remarks about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability, and different views on life it has made him pretty popular with both the cool kids and the jocks. He is friendly and outgoing. However, if he wasn''t, so close friends with Andrey he would have likely been a jock instead.'
+	else
+		'Marcus Larson is an African-American exchange student, that arrived to the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school while being a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls. He always remarks about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability, and different views on life it has made him pretty popular with both the cool kids and the jocks. He stays with Andrey''s family with whom he has become close friends with.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Mefodiy Utkin</center>'
+	'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, but has average  grades. He''s fairly average looking, but possess a good sense of humor and the timing that goes with it. He isn''t too popular, but just popular enough to hang among the cool kids who like his humor.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 1:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
+		if grupTipe = 4:
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl that doesn''t stand out much. A pretty, smart, and sociable girl Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. However, lately she has started hanging out with the gopniks trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment because her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical, and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style that is able to pull off many great looks that earns her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother and leaving this poor one behind. She yearns of having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+		else
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl that doesn''t stand out much. A pretty, smart, and sociable girl Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment because her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical, and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style that is able to pull off many great looks that earns her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother and leaving this poor one behind. She yearns of having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+		end
+	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -665,68 +876,68 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Gopniks</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/9.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Viktor "Vitek" Kotov</center>'
-	'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy, who considers himself a gangsta. He is very loud, obnoxious and not very attractive. Lena is his twin-sister, whom he is overly protective of and that has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the local leader of the Gopniks and as such is the most feared boy in school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
+	'<center>Vitek Kotov</center>'
+	'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy who considers himself to be a gangsta. He is very loud, obnoxious, and not very attractive. Lena is his twin-sister, whom he is overly protective of, which has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the local leader of the Gopniks and as such is the most feared boy in school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/154.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Radomir Popov</center>'
-	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist, and leader of a local underground rock/punk band the Pizdá Buystvo(Pussy Riot), they are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole, thinking he should already be a star, thus being arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him, because they think he is cool or are just groupies, latching onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his mini fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
+	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist, and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named the Pizdá Buystvo(Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him, because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can and as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/157.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Roman Yakovlev</center>'
-	'Roman Yakovlev is a psychopath, he''s one of the smaller kids, but is always causing trouble. He''ll start fights knowing that the other Gopniks will have his back. He has been known to start fights just because he was bored, as well as being especially cruel or sadistic. Once he smashed a bottle over a guys head and stabbed the guy in the face with the broken bottle, because he said the guy looked at him funny. He always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers and other adults. Not doing great at school, not that he cares. The other gopnik''s find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into funny situations.'
+	'Roman Yakovlev is a psychopath. He''s one of the smaller kids, but he is always causing trouble. He''ll start fights knowing that the other Gopniks will have his back and because he was also bored. He enjoys being especially cruel or sadistic to his victims. Once he smashed a bottle over a guy''s head then stabbed the guy in the face with the same broken bottle. All because he said the guy looked at him funny. Roman always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers or other adults. He''s not doing great at school because he doesn''t care. The other gopniks find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into funny situations.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/10.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Dan Ryzhov</center>'
-	'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy, whose body language screams his disdain and contempt for others. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily, and is considered to be the smartest one of the bunch. Though most consider that to not be much of a feat.'
+	'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy whose body language screams his disdain and contempt for others. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily. He is considered to be the smartest one of the bunch. Though most consider that to not be much of a feat.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/145.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katyusha" Maksimov</center>'
-	'Ekaterina Maksimov also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty, her face is too masculine for that. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, stealing or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys, it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl other than Lena who can do that, but while the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, Katyusha prefers fighting the boys herself. She practices Sambo in the park every day before school, regardless of weather. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers, claiming boxing is for pussies, real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect. Which is really hard to do.'
+	'Ekaterina Maksimov also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty, since her face is too masculine for that. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can either by stealing or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl, other than Lena, who can do that. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother she prefers fighting the boys herself. Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming boxing is for pussies, because real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik since it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect. Which is really hard to do.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/158.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valentin Bogdanov</center>'
-	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band, he the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his mini fame with the girls, to use them in return, it is just he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motor bike and ride across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle, when he is not hanging out with the band.'
+	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and he the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame with the girls and to use them. It is just that he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motor bike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/24.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Pauline Sebagotulina</center>'
-	'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child making her very unpredictable. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. No one dares to mess with her cause she''s been in more fights than anyone else, her and Katyusha can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
+	'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child which makes her very unpredictable. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. No one dares to mess with her ''cause she''s been in more fights than anyone else. Katyusha and her can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/156.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arkadi Fyodorov</center>'
-	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from the Saint Petersburg, to Pavlovsk, he was also held back a year, he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the Gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
+	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was also held back a year, so he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry. Especially, with anyone outside the Gopniks. He is, also, not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is while how lame Pavlovsk is.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/20.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yalena "Lena" Kotova</center>'
-	'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local Gopniks. With a chip on her shoulder, she can be aggressive and unpredictable. She''s best friends with Lera, and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms during school, or hanging out together after school.'
+	'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local Gopniks. She has a chip on her shoulder, so she can be aggressive and unpredictable. She''s best friends with Lera. They can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms during school or hanging out after school.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/11.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Vasily "Shulga" Shulgin</center>'
+	'<center>Vasily Shulgin</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, who are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father, after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him and as you both drifted towards the gopniks have stayed good friends.'
+		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, since they are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh. This makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him and as you both drifted towards the gopniks have stayed good friends.'
 	else
-		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, who are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father, after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him, but as you grew up you have somewhat drifted apart.'
+		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, since they are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh. This makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you were younger you was good friends with him, but as you grew up you have somewhat drifted apart.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/144.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Anushka "Nush" Konstantinov</center>'
-	'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and backup vocalist in Radomir''s band, she and her band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of a exhibitionist, her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She does surprisingly well in school, she seems to like getting into and causing trouble. She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally, what ever she deems the most fun at the time. Other than the band she hangs out a lot with Alyona, she and Radomir use to date.'
+	'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and backup vocalist in Radomir''s band. Her band and her often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is not shy about her bisexuality. Nush is also a bit of a exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She does surprisingly well in school, but she seems to like getting into and causing trouble. She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally with whatever she deems to be the most fun at the time. Other than the band, she hangs out a lot with Alyona which she and Radomir use to date.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/143.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Alyona Zima</center>'
-	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker, she lives to cause trouble or jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a fucked up family, her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts, most view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol, the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
+	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker, since all she lives to cause trouble or jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a fucked up family as her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. By knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/21.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valeria "Lera" Tsarev</center>'
-	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena, and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms, or hanging out together after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
+	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family while her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/155.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lavrenti Romanov</center>'
-	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family, an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time, since the fight he started hanging with the Gopniks. He is more of a follower, and the Gopniks like using his money, while tolerating him.'
+	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He isan only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent which has lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time. Since the fight he started hanging with the Gopniks. He is more of a follower and the Gopniks like using his money while tolerating him.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/189.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Nikolai "Niko" Volkov</center>'
-	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking, and partying then he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman, for his money. Niko always seems confident, and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid, and unstable.'
+	'<center>Nikolai Volkov</center>'
+	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying then he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -735,17 +946,17 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothing':
 	'<center>Clothing information</center>'
 	*nl
-	'Clothing has a strength value, this decreases by 1 every day you wear that outfit. At 0 it is ruined and you will have to throw it away.'
-	'You can attempt to fix outfits when strength is very low and you have a high enough sewing skill. Clothes you throw away will appear again in the shop.'
+	'Clothing has a strength value, which decreases by 1 for every day you wear that outfit. At 0 it is ruined and you will have to throw it away.'
+	'You can attempt to fix outfits when its strength is very low and you have a high enough sewing skill. Clothes you throw away will then appear back in the shop.'
 	*nl
 	'Quality of clothing is ranked in this order:'
-	'	This crappy quality outfit'
-	'	This very low quality outfit'
-	'	This low quality outfit'
-	'	This average quality outfit'
-	'	This reasonable quality outfit'
-	'	This good quality outfit'
-	'	This is an outstanding quality outfit'
+	'	Crappy quality outfit'
+	'	Very low quality outfit'
+	'	Low quality outfit'
+	'	Average quality outfit'
+	'	Reasonable quality outfit'
+	'	Good quality outfit'
+	'	Outstanding quality outfit'
 
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka

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