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  1. 1 1
      locations/BurgerTip.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv.qsrc
  3. 6 6
      locations/FedorEv2.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv3.qsrc
  5. 17 18
      locations/FedorEv4.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/FedorMisc.qsrc
  7. 1 2
      locations/HotelHole.qsrc
  8. 10 10
      locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc
  9. 13 13
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  10. 4 4
      locations/NikoDreams.qsrc
  11. 3 3
      locations/NikoEv.qsrc
  12. 5 5
      locations/NikoEv2.qsrc
  13. 11 12
      locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc
  14. 1 1
      locations/NikoSlut.qsrc
  15. 8 8
      locations/NikoWhore.qsrc
  16. 6 6
      locations/VolleyTrenerSpeak.qsrc
  17. 1 1
      locations/Voltrener.qsrc
  18. 1 1
      locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc
  19. 1 1
      locations/artemhome.qsrc
  20. 2 3
      locations/brother_lessons.qsrc
  21. 1 2
      locations/city_center.qsrc
  22. 2 3
      locations/city_clinic.qsrc
  23. 5 5
      locations/dimaEv.qsrc
  24. 1 1
      locations/ender.qsrc
  25. 1 1
      locations/foto.qsrc
  26. 2 2
      locations/foto_models.qsrc
  27. 2 2
      locations/gLakeNude.qsrc
  28. 3 4
      locations/gadhouse.qsrc
  29. 3 3
      locations/gopsex.qsrc
  30. 5 5
      locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc
  31. 1 1
      locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc
  32. 1 1
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  33. 4 4
      locations/gschool_events.qsrc
  34. 2 2
      locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc
  35. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc
  36. 7 7
      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc
  37. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc
  38. 1 1
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc
  39. 2 2
      locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc
  40. 2 2
      locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc
  41. 1 1
      locations/igorev.qsrc
  42. 45 53
      locations/katjaEv.qsrc
  43. 1 1
      locations/leonid.qsrc
  44. 4 4
      locations/love.qsrc
  45. 1 1
      locations/mirafather.qsrc
  46. 1 1
      locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc
  47. 2 2
      locations/nyp_school.qsrc
  48. 1 1
      locations/party_girls.qsrc
  49. 3 3
      locations/pav_clinic.qsrc
  50. 10 10
      locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc
  51. 4 4
      locations/pav_shared_nd.qsrc
  52. 2 2
      locations/pav_shared_sp.qsrc
  53. 1 1
      locations/police_station.qsrc
  54. 2 2
      locations/preNT.qsrc
  55. 1 1
      locations/preTG.qsrc
  56. 1 1
      locations/qwBarPolet.qsrc
  57. 2 2
      locations/rolanapt.qsrc
  58. 3 3
      locations/rolanbath.qsrc
  59. 3 3
      locations/sexm.qsrc
  60. 1 1
      locations/shop_pussycats.qsrc
  61. 3 4
      locations/shoplifting.qsrc
  62. 7 7
      locations/shulga_room.qsrc
  63. 2 2
      locations/sisterQW.qsrc
  64. 1 1
      locations/sister_chat.qsrc
  65. 5 5
      locations/sistersleep.qsrc
  66. 4 4
      locations/street_event.qsrc
  67. 10 11
      locations/street_walker.qsrc
  68. 3 3
      locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc
  69. 1 1
      locations/vann.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_work':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/work.jpg"></center>'
 	'The senior manager Ivan shows up in your office.'
-	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would...well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
+	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would... well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
 	
 	act 'Plead with him not to show the pictures': gt 'BurgerTip', 'ivan_work2'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gorslut':
 			gs 'stat'	
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then...Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
+			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then... Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
 			
 			act 'Move away':
 				if $loc = 'gschool_lunch':

+ 6 - 6
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park Walk':
 		FedorLuv -= 2						
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to...Let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
+		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to... let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
 
 		act 'Continue your walk': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Train Tracks'				
 	end		
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vaginal Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor start breathing rapidly and then his breath stops, he then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach, he takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "You were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>" as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath then respond, "You were great as well...Thank you."'
+			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor starting to breathe rapidly and then his breathing stops. He then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach. He takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "you were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>", as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath before you respond, "you were great as well... thank you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 			gs 'stat'				
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?...ohh you mean ...I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met...Thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
+						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met... thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
 						*nl	
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginanal.jpg"></center>'
-	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can...do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
+	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can... do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok, I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
 	
 	act 'Anal':
 		*clr & cla			
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park 2':
 				FedorLuv += 2
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/swing2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue...so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
+				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue... so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 				gs 'stat'		

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -1045,7 +1045,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'	
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go...After we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
+				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go... after we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
 
 				act 'Submit':
 					*clr & cla

+ 17 - 18
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3Way':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you...Or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
+			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you... or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			
 			act 'Go with Fedor':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Home 2'
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 					IvanPregChat = 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant...Well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
+					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant... well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
 					*nl
 					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, you have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
 					*nl
@@ -511,9 +511,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way3':
 							IvanPregChat = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/double.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are you on the pill...right?"'
+							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are on the pill... right?"'
 							*nl
-							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well...Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." You respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well... Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." you respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forehead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 							*nl
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum8.mp4"></video></center>'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Livingroom 2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/livingroom/sex/sofa6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You respond, "Of course I do, Your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and...moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
+				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" you respond, "Of course I do, your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and... moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum110.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
@@ -1063,9 +1063,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom Cam':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/cam/no2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shoot Fedor a firm stare "I said <b>NO!</b>" Fedor recoils back and then you take a deep breath then tell Fedor "It''s not that I don''t trust you but someone could swipe or even hack your phone then share the video with all their friends or even upload it online."'
-			'Fedor nods "I understand....You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, Aren''t you?"'
-			'You laugh as you push him against the counter almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
-			
+			'Fedor nods "I understand... You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, aren''t you?"'
+			'You laugh as you push him against the counter, almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
 			act 'Wash up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Quick Wash'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1770,7 +1769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/lick'+rand(2,3)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch every time your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re...driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on mush longer"'
+			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch everytime your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re... driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on much longer"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2601,7 +2600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Picture':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him...Ohh Fyodor." you then place the picture back.'
+	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him... ohh Fedor." you then place the picture back.'
 
 	act 'Step away':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 end
@@ -2849,7 +2848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Regina Intro':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="#FF00FF"><<"Regina Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/regina.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fyodor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is...when he''s here... Anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
+	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fedor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is... when he''s here anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
 
 	act 'No thank you':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Kitchen'
 	act 'Only if it''s no trouble':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dinner 1'
@@ -3199,7 +3198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk Strela 2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next ot Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those...Fuckers took everything away from me...my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those... fuckers... took everything away from me, my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
 	*nl
 	'Fedor lets out a mild smile as he continues staring at the ceiling and after a few seconds responds, "You are the greatest gift I can ever ask for and I''m so glad I met you. <<$pcs_firstname>> you are the perfect girl and I will always strive to be the best boyfriend you can ever have." You lightly kiss his cheek as you reply, "You are already the best boyfriend I could ever have." Fedor quickly turns to you and kisses your lips very passionately.'
 	*nl
@@ -3238,14 +3237,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Future':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day...be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could...have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
+			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day... be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could... have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
 
 			act 'I''m sure':
 				*clr & cla
 				FedorLoveTalk = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so...what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
+				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so... what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
 
 				act 'Get up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Fedor Bedroom'
 			end
@@ -3325,7 +3324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Private Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment...In private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment... in private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
 
 	act 'Follow Fedor to his bedroom':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dimka Help'
 end
@@ -3336,7 +3335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Shelter':
 	FedorShelter = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor...I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3374,9 +3373,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Help':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I...well...Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something...dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
+		'"I... well... Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something... dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
 		*nl
-		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fyodor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
+		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fedor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
 
 		act 'Get out of bed':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 	end	

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Workout':
 		FedorWorkout = 1
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>...Impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
+		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>... impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/gym/strength1.jpg"></center>'
 

+ 1 - 2
locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -1024,9 +1024,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 									'You slowly open your eyes'
 									'"<<$pitfs>>Where am I?<<$pitfe>>" Your vision is blurry and you have to blink several times to clear it.'
 									'You find yourself lying on a soft bed. You look around and see a sterile white room with a woman in light blue scrubs standing with her back to you. Your mind pieces together the clues and you realize this is the hospital.'
-									'"H..hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
+									'"H-hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
 									'The nurse turns around, slightly startled, and says, "Oh you are awake. Just one minute, I will get the doctor for you." The nurse quickly exits the room.'
-
 									gs 'medical_din', 'remove_preg'
 									abortionbirthdate = daystart
 									unintendedabort = 1

+ 10 - 10
locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1043,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

+ 13 - 13
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/Charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You...You may.."' 
+							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You... you may..."' 
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to...kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
+							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to... kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 						inhib_exp += 1
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/cover.jpg"></center>'
-						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos...for us."'
+						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos... for us."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 						
 						act 'Agree':
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
+								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
 								act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home Sad'
 							end
 						else
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No...he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
+		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No... he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You ask, "Was he a teacher?" Niko replies, "No he was a psychiatrist who was obsessed with finding a cure for psychosis." You tilt your head as you respond, "What could have made him so absorbed by that?" Niko takes a deep breath then replies, "My little brother was diagnosed with psychosis and he was always screaming to himself in his room. My father didn''t want him put in an asylum, so he had to keep him in the house to protect him and everyone else from him. My sister Matilda was really upset. She and Eduard were very close before he was diagnosed. My brother and I did our best to console her and help keep her mind off of our little brother." You place your hand on Niko''s shoulder then ask, "Did she ever move on from her loss?"'
 			*nl
-			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died...My big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... A car came out of nowhere and she...She didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
+			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died... my big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... a car came out of nowhere and she... she didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
 
 			act 'Place your hand on his shoulder':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
+				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants and then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?... please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
 
 				act 'Sure':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your...family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who...passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
+			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your... family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who... passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
 
 			act 'Continue listening':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 						gs'stat'						
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer3.jpg"></center>'					
-						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life...Please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
+						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life... please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
 
 						act 'I believe you':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me...Why? To make you look tough?"' 
+								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me... why? To make you look tough?"' 
 								
 								act 'See Niko''s response':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway Strip':
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/strip/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There...I took off my top...I feel more daring now..Thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
+			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -1334,7 +1334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d...be right back. I was waiting...for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'After School 2':
 							minut -= 3
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow4.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m...glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
+							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m... glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 4 - 4
locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!...Don''t drop her!....Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!... Don''t drop her!... Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'								
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'								
-									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright?....She will be fine. She just needs some more rest....She''s moving. Do you think she is?..."'
+									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright...? She will be fine. She just needs some more rest... she''s moving. Do you think she is...?"'
 									
 									act '...':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath'
 								end	
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Classroom Dream':
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'	
-		'You recoil in shock. "Wha...Me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
+		'You recoil in shock. "Wha... me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
 
 		act 'Walk to the front of the class':	
 			*clr & cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="maroon"><<"Dmitriy [Dimka] Nosov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is...Why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is... why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
 
 	act 'See what Dimka does':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/pissoff.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane!...Whatever...Keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
+			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane! Whatever... keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
 		
 			act 'Thank Niko':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly...Unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
+				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly... unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
 
 				if NikoEv >= 17:
 					act 'Sure thing':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Events'

+ 5 - 5
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of...a...Crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
+	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of a... a crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
 	*nl
 	'You ask, "But how much does he want exactly?" Niko replies, "Uh don''t worry about that. I will handle that when the time comes. Just know that it is a lot!" You shake your head, "How the hell will we be able to pay "A lot" to this man?"'
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/avatars/threaten1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continues pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik...Just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
+						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continuous pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik... just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/smile1.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m...just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m... just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
 		
 		act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh no. i didn''t mean....I meant my girl here, will take care of you...for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
+			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh no, I didn''t mean... I meant my girl here, will take care of you... for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
 			
 			act 'Let the biker examine you':	
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1033,7 +1033,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good as you."'
 			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu...." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
 			*nl
-			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m...glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
+			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m... glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
 
 			act 'Give them your real name':	
 				*clr & cla

+ 11 - 12
locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
-
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options. Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
@@ -64,14 +63,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well, you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -360,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -630,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +709,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -770,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did and be unphased." You nod as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I... uhm... care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
@@ -930,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1045,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -1550,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bikers':
 		if rand (1,2) = 1:
 			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "When people ask me why I travel the roads instead of getting a normal job and a family, I always tell them this; last I worked as a bank teller, can you believe that? Anyway one day this fat woman walks into the bank and she asks me to check her balance. Guess what I did? I pushed the bitch over! How is that for checking your balance bitch?" You and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		else
-			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes?...Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
+			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes...? Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		end
 	end	
 	

+ 8 - 8
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker5.mp4"></video></center>'	
 										'You lower your head in submission, "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around then unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside of your ass, causing a surge of pressure and pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I can''t believe this is happening. Niko where are you? Please help me!'+$CloseInnerThought+' Dan continues fucking your ass when his phone begins ringing.'
 										*nl
-										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room...Sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room... sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why...mmmmm...Why''d you....mmmm..Tell him abo...." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you.... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big9.jpg"></center>'
 												if kotovloveQW > 0:
 													kotovloveQW = -1
-													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a...whore and I can...Grr...prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a... whore and I can... grr... prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
 													*nl
 													'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You suddenly realize what that Dan must have recorded you as you sucked Niko''s dick in the hallway, after school. '+$OpenInnerThought+'There is no way I can talk my way out of this. What will Viktor do to me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat then turning to you with his face; seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground. Vitek begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage then Dan places his hand on Vitek''s shoulder, "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her, you never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself then brushes Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants then pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
 												else
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them and says, "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl, who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
 																		*nl
-																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
+																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?... why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation','exhibitionism'
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			gs'stat'															
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
+																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... you bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 														!!we don''t have to worry about it right now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in a alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
 														'<center><b><h4><font color=#fb00b7><<"Valeria [Lera] Tsarev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big21.jpg"></center>'
-														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying...Hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
+														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying... hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
 														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 														gs 'stat'	
 														
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/6.jpg"></center>'
-										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So...He didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why wont anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
+										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So... he didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why won''t anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
 										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A189', 1
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 6 - 6
locations/VolleyTrenerSpeak.qsrc

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 	   gt 'Voltrenersex', 'discoSex'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go upto Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
+		'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I was told you were here, are you really that stupid? There''s a game tomorrow!"'
-		'"I...err...was...erm...dropping off a book for a friend." you mumble.'
+		'"I... err... was... erm... dropping off a book for a friend." you mumble.'
 		if alko > 1:
 			'"You''ve been drinking! If you can''t even take the team seriously, then you''re not playing tomorrow."'
 			npc_rel['A69'] -= 1
@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 else
 	!---------------------------While not in the squad-------------------------
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go upto Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
+	'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
 	if pcs_vball < 20:
-		'Mikhail turns and looks at you. "UH...Have we met?" He doesn''t seem to recognize you. "Ah, I''ve seen you at school, you''re in pretty good shape, you should come to volleyball training".'
+		'Mikhail turns and looks at you. "Uh... have we met?" He doesn''t seem to recognize you. "Ah, I''ve seen you at school, you''re in pretty good shape, you should come to volleyball training".'
 	elseif pcs_vball < 35:
 		'The coach looked at you with condemnation. "<<$pcs_lastname>>, well done, you''re getting a hang of the basics. You don''t belong here though... although, what do I know?"'
 	elseif pcs_vball < 60:
@@ -52,14 +52,14 @@ else
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, don''t piss me off, what I do is my business, and what are you doing here is also my business.'
 		if pcs_horny > 79:
 			trenerlust += 1
-			'"Is that the truth, Mikhail N. Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach, and flutter your eyes at him.'
+			'"Is that the truth, Mr. Nikolaevich? Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach, and flutter your eyes at him.'
 			'"I meant as your coach, and don''t think you can win just by fluttering your eyes. Want to impress me? Workout, and no partying."'
 		else
 			'"As your coach." he adds with a slight blush.'
 		end
 	else
 		'The coach looked at you with condemnation. "<<$pcs_lastname>> you here again, what the fuck? This is not the place for candidates for the team.'
-		'"Mikhail N. you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
+		'"Mr. Nikolaevich, you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, are you thick? When does the team play?"'
 		'"Saturday." You respond, sheepishly.'
 		'"So, on Friday I expect my players not to hang out here but go home and get some sleep. Or they aren''t going to be fit to play tomorrow. Clear? You have some skill, sort out your attitude and you might yet make the team."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Voltrener.qsrc

@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		trener_Speak = 6
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak19.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take Mikhail''s hand in yours and say, "Coach, I want you to know that I would never betray you. I certainly like to gossip, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team." Blurting this out, you stare at the coach and wait for his reaction.'
-		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says,smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
+		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says, smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
 	elseif trener_Speak = 6 and trenerSex >= 1:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak21.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex24.jpg"></center>'
-	'Invitingly you reach back and pull the buns of your ass apart,so your asshole is exposed and gapping slightly from the pressure.'
+	'Invitingly you reach back and pull the buns of your ass apart, so your asshole is exposed and gapping slightly from the pressure.'
 	act 'Further':
 		cls
 		npc_rel['A69'] += 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'Masharin tries to excuse himself, "It worked for me but it doesn''t mean it will work for anyone else. We all have our own quirks that helps us when it comes to that stuff, you have your breaks and I have mine."'
 								'"Well, I would love to hear what you did, it would be of great help." you tell him.'
 								'Masharin smiles, "Fine, fine, I''ll tell you then. I used to close my eyes and think that I''m in the middle of a forest, only hearing those unusual sounds that you can hear in a silent forest. This always cleared my mind and it helped me re-focus."'
-								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thank a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
+								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thanks a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'artemhome','hallway'
 							end
 						end

+ 2 - 3
locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -680,10 +680,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 				if guy > 0:
 					'"That I''ve had sex? Yeah. Someone already took my v-card," You say somewhat proudly. "But don''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
 				else
-					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "... mastur...bating..."'
+					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "mastur... bating..."'
 				end
 			end
-			
 			'He nods in acknowledgement while writing down some more notes.'
 			*nl
 
@@ -703,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 
 				act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
 					cla
-					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
+					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There have been a few uhh, big guys inside me...", you trail off.'
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				end

+ 1 - 2
locations/city_center.qsrc

@@ -82,14 +82,13 @@ if shantpopala > 0:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sex/rape.jpg"></center>'
 	'On the street close to you, a black jeep suddenly hit the brakes. You turn your head to see what''s happening and see two large men jump of it and start to run towards you in. Before you can react and run away, they grap you and drag you into the car.'
 	'"You''re doing this for a living? Taking pictures of naked people in the park?", one of the shouts, holding one of the pictures to your face you''ve made awhile back and sent someone over a social network, hoping they would pay the ransom.'
-	'"No...what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
+	'"No... what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
 	'"Don''t lie to use you stupid bitch.", as he said that, he hits you on your head and you pass out.'
 	'You wake up somewhere out of town, you''re tied up and naked. You look down on yourself and notice traces of cum on your body, it also seems like that cum is flowing from your ass and your pussy.'
 	'You notice that the blokes, who captured you sit next to you and seem to have a break, some of them are smoking.'
 	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get an evil grin on their face.'
 	'They got up and came back at you, barely a minute later you wished your were still knocked out, as these jackasses had their ways with. You tried to resist, but the tape hindered you from moving. Not long after, everything faded to black and you lost you consciousness again.'
 	'You feel groggy as you wake up, but it feels like someone is grapping you by the hair and shouts at you. "Let this be a lesson for you, bitch.", he shouts, then kicks you into the stomach and leaves. As you collapse on the ground holding your stomach in pain, you take a glimpse at the street and see the assholes driving away in their black jeep. The mainroad is about 200m away, you crawl most of the way there, but soon you can walk again and eventually you find your way back to one of the mainstreets.'
-
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang','humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'

+ 2 - 3
locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -821,8 +821,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														*clr
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam11.jpg"></center>'
 														'With trembling hands, you start to pull on your panties. Ninel already slipped her robe back on, only her flushed face betraying her apparent innocence.'
-														'"So...how do you feel?"'
-														'"Ooh...Just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
+														'"So... how do you feel?"'
+														'"Ooh... just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
 														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m ... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
 														'"If you like, we could spend some time together, look for me in the clinic."'
 														'You promise to be sure to find her, clean up and leave.'
@@ -967,7 +967,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 											'Ninel sees this and smiles.'
 											'"Oh, no. Enough is enough. But you come in another time for something else and we''ll have some fun.."'
 											'You think to yourself that your next illness can''t come soon enough. You are healthy and satisfied, thanks to Ninel.'
-
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 											

+ 5 - 5
locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_school':
 				'Dimka downcasts his eyes nervously, obviously afraid of Fedor, and looking around for some type of escape, but he doesn''t know who to shut up "Yes, it''s true, she sucked me off outside the community center."'
 				'Fedor shoves Dimka to the ground and raise his fists. Dimka begin to panic as he remembers that Fedor is a boxer, "Keep your hands off me! Why would you want to date a cocksucker like her anyway?"'
 				'Fedor grabs Dimka by the lapels and lifts him off the ground, then rams his fist into Dimka''s stomach. "You talk shit about <<$pcs_firstname>> again and I''ll start collecting teeth."'
-				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor, he crawl back. "Come on..cof..calm down..augh..I won''t, I won''t..."'
-				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and lead you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
+				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor as he crawls back. "Come on... cough... calm down... augh... I won''t, I won''t..."'
+				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and leads you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackmail':
 		'"Hello, Dimka." you say softly, then stand waiting.'
 		'"Hello, Dimka? That is what you say?" Dimka says in a low, menacing tone, "After all I''ve done for you? Let you into my world? Hello, Dimka?"'
 		'"You fucking whore!" he roars, standing quickly and flinging his chair halfway across the room, "You useless fucking whore. You think you can come prancing in here just like that and all is forgiven?"'
-		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You..You..Fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
+		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You... you... fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
 		'You never felt the blow, but he must have hit you as you curl now on the floor into a ball. He grabs you by the hair and forces you into a chair.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaEv', 'dimkawarns'
 	else
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position.. Hmm.. let''s see if a you can learn something" Then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurt, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He release you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse8':
 	sub += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/vag.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow..So..I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here..So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
+	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow... So... I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here... So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
 	if pirsG > 0:'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka takes the pins out of your pussy and sets you free.'
 	if pirsG = 0:
 		pirsG = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'With one last kick, the bitch squad lies fallen before you, whimpering in pain thanks to the sound beating they''ve received at your hand, but as you look around for your next victim, a redheaded girl grabs you and pulls you away from the brawl turned riot, towards the waiting Vanya & Vicky.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what to do with you! What were you thinking?!"'
 		'You...aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
-		'"Well...Katja, I want to say, well...That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
+		'"Well... Katja, I want to say, well... That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
 		'Katja looks dumbfounded as he raises his hand, more even when you clap it, followed by a shrugging Vicky, who jumps and does the same. As you turn smiling towards Katja, waiting for her to join, she facepalms, turns and begins to walk away, musing about your idiocy. Well, it is probably better if you follow her, so after saying goodbye to Vanya & Vicky, you go with her. It was "fun" but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 
 		act 'Continue': gt 'katjaEV', 'kathan'

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 			gs 'stat'
            	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/models.jpg"></center>'
             'You are trying to find the "McGuffin" that Tatiana told you was somewhere in the agency and that was cursing the place, but you haven''t had much luck... until now. You feel a magic tingle and snoop on an interesting titbit.'
-            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass...massa...masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
+            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass... massa... masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
             '"Sorry, I don''t swing that way. Well... except on my boyfriend''s birthday."'
             '"Huh?! No! Well... maybe? I mean that she can help you with your boob pains!"'
             '"You mean my BACK pains? Are you feeling alright? You sound a little off today."'

+ 2 - 2
locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		'"Tsk-! You really think you could do better than her, Ivanna? She''s smart, she''s beautiful, and she''s knows how to carry herself. What do you have that she doesn''t?"'
 		'"I don''t have a fat ass."'
 	elseif model_chatter = 2:
-		'"...cking making me do my makeup here."'
+		'"...ucking making me do my makeup here."'
 		'"What do you mean? How is Katherine making you do makeup in the bathroom? What''s wrong with your station?"'
 		'"I caught her fucking her boyfriend there again! Fucking left cum all over my fucking seat! Like, I''m going to fucking sit down there after that. Probably come up with fucking herpes or some shit."'
 		'"God! What is wrong with that girl? Can''t she keep it in her pants for two seconds?"'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		*nl
 		'The girls giggle together as you tune out again...'
 	elseif model_chatter = 5:
-		'"...nd he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
+		'"...and he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
 		'"Oh! You finally did your first nude shoot?"'
 		'"About time, girl. How long have you been here? Four months?"'
 		'"What?? Who took four months to do their first nude shoot?"'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gLakeNude.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 					voyeurism += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/self/lake_legs.jpg"></center>'
-					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
+					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha-... what am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
 					act'Stop Watching!': gt'gLakeNude'
 				else
 					voyeurism_start = 2
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 					voyeurism += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/voyeurism/voyeurism_start_event.jpg"></center>'
-					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
+					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha-... what am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
 					act'Watch the couple': 	gs'gLakeNudeEvent','gLakeNude_sex'
 				end
 			end

+ 3 - 4
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -1131,7 +1131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"Ugh, yes Grandpa, I did everything just like you showed me when I was a kid."'
 				'"Don''t sass me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," you grandfather says with a scowl. "Properly brushing a horse is very important for their health."'
 				'The rebuke stings a little. "Sorry, Grandpa."'
-				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...No, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favor and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...no, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favor and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 				'"It''s okay Grandpa. I know Desperado is important to you," you say.'
 				'He smiles and rubs your shoulder. "Thank you again. You may rest now, there is nothing else to do today."'
 
@@ -1152,7 +1152,6 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says.'
 				'"You''re welcome! Is there anything else you need?"'
 				'"No, you can take the rest of the day off, granddaughter."'
-
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1557,9 +1556,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 				*nl
 				'You let out an exasperated sigh, "Yeah, yeah I know, you told me that already. So, how early are we talking?"'
 				if month = 6:
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right...Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she slept here. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she slept here. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				else
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right...Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				end
 				act 'Continue':
 					cla & *clr

+ 3 - 3
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1613,12 +1613,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 !doggie in the ass
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_doggy_anal':
 		txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
-		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed only twitch and scream, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
+		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed in only twitching and screaming, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
 		"Oh yess! .... mmm .... deeper! .... mmmm .."
 		He grabs your hips and starts banging increasing his pace gradualy. You diligently fuck back wanting to get even more on his shaft. You are insanely excited and serve him with pleasure.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 1:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> is kneeling between your legs and shoving his prick into your ass hole up to his balls.You are on all fours having your bum lifted and you are fucking back in pace and moaning with pleasure. Your lover is propelled even more by your moaning. He is fucking you in silence for a while and then begins moaning excitedly.
-		"You have got nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you still keeping his pace.
-		"Mmmm ... yesss ...yess ... harder ..... deeper ... mmm... oh yees, you have such big cock ... mmmm..." You are cheering him.'
+		"You have got a nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you, still keeping his pace."
+		"Mmmm... yesss... yess... harder... deeper... mmm... oh yesss, you have such big cock... hmmmm..." you are cheering him on.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 2:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '"I missed your tight tushie, baby! I''m going to fuck your bum now, my sweet chick". You feel that his prick is hard and jostles against your butt. <<$boydesc>> spits into his palm, greases his cock head and sets the glans to your anus. He starts pushing and slowly and gentle shoves his cock in your ass. As soon as the cock is fully in your bum, <<$boydesc>> starts wiggling with his pelvis holding your hips. You moan loudly and start fucking back and impaling yourself on his big cock.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 3:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock head to your narrow entrance and pushes in. Your sphincter stretches and allows his thin prick to slide into your bum without exceptional resistence. He grabs your hips and starts fucking fast your bum. You shriek out at each thrust, which he enjoyes it a lot he is banging you faster and faster. He was seize with animal instincts and he desires so as you scream louder and louder continuously. <<$boydesc>> shoves his prick deep into your bowels so his balls smash your taint.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 4:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> moves you on your knees and he spoons to you from behind. He holds your bum with one hand and with other hand he aims his prick into the brown eye. It is seen that you enjoyed it. Holding your butt firmly, he is swinging his hips back and forth so forcefully, so smacks are somewhat frenzied, are both sonorous and muffled. And so fast: a swing, a hit, a swing, a hit. He starts drawing you close, when he reaches your womb, he draws close your ass, which rippled by his strokes.'

+ 5 - 5
locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -559,12 +559,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'"No...Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.' 
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live like that - just letting guys...use you like that?"'
+		'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live with that - just letting guys... use you like that?"'
 		'You are about to speak up, but she shakes her head and walks away. You can''t tell if she was feeling disgusted or disappointed at you. She might even have been both.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 		'Your conversation, if you can call it that, with Albina is shallow and is over after only a minute or two as she excuses herself.'
-		'"You know my...father...cares...a lot..." She stops herself from laughing before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
+		'"You know my... father... cares... a lot...", she stops herself from laughing before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
 		'She outright refuses to speak about her home life, her father in particular, and more than a few people have been on the receiving end of her wrath when they press her about the subject.'
 	end
 	
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mefodiy':
 		else
 			'"Who would have thought that being funny and kinda cute would make me so popular?" Mefodiy says and you can''t help but laugh.'
 			'"You really couldn''t be more wrong." you tease him.'
-			'He takes a moment to think. "Hmm...Ah, you''re right! What I should have said was <i>incredibly handsome and hilarious</i>. Thanks for correcting me <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says with a wink.'
+			'He takes a moment to think. "Hmm... ah, you''re right! What I should have said was <i>incredibly handsome and hilarious</i>. Thanks for correcting me <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says with a wink.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A148'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 250:
 		npc_rel['A148'] += 1
@@ -760,8 +760,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stasya':
 	if npc_rel['A139'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A139'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
-			'When Stasya sees you, she pulls you into a quick hug. "Glad you showed up, I was starting to get bored...and desperate." she tells you with a dramatic sigh.'
-			'"Desperate enough to hang out with Irina for the rest of break?" you joke with a cheeky smile.'
+			'When Stasya sees you, she pulls you into a quick hug. "Glad you showed up, I was starting to get bored... and desperate." she tells you with a dramatic sigh.'
+			'"Desperate enough to hang out with Irina for the rest of the break?" you joke with a cheeky smile.'
 			'"I''ll never be that fucking desperate!" she blurts out before the two of you break out into laughter.'
 		else
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you think of this?" Stasya gives her reflection in the little mirror hanging inside her locker one last look before turning towards you.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
 		elseif VK = 2:
 			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for a while?" You nod and reply."Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
 		elseif VK = 3:
-			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin.. and you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod and then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin. And you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye!" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were... oh fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
 		elseif VK = 4:
 			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook and waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia and discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
 		else		

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling...tense again and Lazar is going to help me.. relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
+			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling... tense again. And Lazar is going to help me... relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -1237,13 +1237,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follow_petka':
 				'You release his ear, but as you do you knee him hard in the balls, causing him to crumple to the floor with a gasp, holding his crotch. "Get up pussy." Grabbing him, you haul him up onto his hands and knees while he is still recovering from the hit. You shove him forward until his face is over the toilet bowl. "Ready to give me your homework yet?" you ask him.'
 				'He pleads with you and resists by placing his hands on the toilet bowl. "No! Let me go! Please!"'
 				*nl
-				'Maneuvering a bit, you get into a position where you can push down on his head and deliver another kick to his balls. He crumples as he cries out and you easily push his head down. You place one of your knees on his upper back while using one hand to force his head into the toilet. After a couple of dunks and him still refusing, you use your other hand to reach down the back of his pants. Clutching his underwear, you yank on them until you hear cloth tearing. Finally, he relents. "OK...OK! You...You can have...my homework! Just...please...stop!" he pleads through what sounds like sobs.'
+				'Maneuvering a bit, you get into a position where you can push down on his head and deliver another kick to his balls. He crumples as he cries out and you easily push his head down. You place one of your knees on his upper back while using one hand to force his head into the toilet. After a couple of dunks and him still refusing, you use your other hand to reach down the back of his pants. Clutching his underwear, you yank on them until you hear cloth tearing. Finally, he relents. "OK... OK! You... You can have my homework! Just, please... stop!" he pleads through what sounds like sobs.'
 				act 'Let him up':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/homeworksuccess.jpg"></center>'
 					'You let go of him and back off, letting him shakily get back on his feet. "Well?" you demand.'
-					'He grabs his pack and pulls out some papers, quickly handing them over. "Here, now please...leave me alone." he says as his voice cracks.'
+					'He grabs his pack and pulls out some papers, quickly handing them over. "Here, now please leave me alone..." he says as his voice cracks.'
 					'You smile at him and pat him on the cheek, causing him to flinch. It is hard to tell with the toilet water on his face if he is crying or not. "See, that wasn''t so hard was it? Next time you will know better." you say in a mocking tone.'
 					'He is on the verge of tears and just nods. You leave with the homework to find a quiet place to copy it before class.'
 					act 'Take the homework': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
@@ -1274,8 +1274,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follow_petka':
 		pcs_grades += 3
 		lernHome -= 1
 		'You follow Petka into the bathroom and as the door closes, he quickly turns around alarmed. When he sees you he looks a little afraid and crest fallen. "What do you want this time?" he asks.'
-		'"The same thing as last time Petka...or do you need a reminder?" you reply.'
-		'He quickly pulls out his homework, obviously afraid of you. "Here, take it! Just please...leave me alone."'
+		'"The same thing as last time Petka... or do you need a reminder?" you reply.'
+		'He quickly pulls out his homework, obviously afraid of you. "Here, take it! Just please, leave me alone..."'
 		act 'Take the homework': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
 	end
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 		'"I don''t know. I heard it was <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 		'"Fuck they''re both lesbians? That sucks."'
 		'"Well I heard Ivan fucked them both, so I think they are both bi."'
-		'"Sweet...Lucky bastard."'
+		'"Sweet... lucky bastard."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 14:
 		'"I heard Ivan only fucks girls in the ass and they all seem to be lining up to let him do it."'
 		'"I wonder how he convinces them to take it? Maybe we should ask him what his secret is?"'
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
         '"I don''t know. Is worth it?"'
         '"An ass like that is always worth it. You''ve had a crush on her for as long as I know. Just go flirt with her. She might surprise you."'
         *nl
-        'His friends push him towards her and she turns to face him. "Uh, hey. Do you wear space pants to gym class.....because your ass is out of this world." he asks with a crack in his voice, but still making a cringey attempt to act smooth.'
+        'His friends pushes him towards her and she turns to face him. "Uh, hey. Do you wear space pants to gym class... because your ass is out of this world." he asks with a crack in his voice, but still making a cringey attempt to act smooth.'
         'Everyone, upon seeing or hearing what''s happening, turn and await Albina''s reaction. She is unimpressed by the attempted flirting, crossing her arms and laughing.'
         '"No, I wear volleyball shorts because my ass is out of your league!" she answers before she stares him right in the eyes. "You have 3 seconds to get out of my sight. One..."'
         'He doesn''t need to be told twice and flees in a panic, his laughing friends following close behind. You have never seen anyone run so fast in your life. Albina just smirks and turns back to what she was doing.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				if $boy = 'A4':
 					'You watch Igor sink lower into his seat; it seems he was also trying to hide. He reluctantly and quietly starts to read the passage, but Ms Braakman interrupts and asks him to speak clearly. Some kids start to snicker and whisper to each other, causing Igor to awkwardly clear his throat before continuing. By the time he''s finished reading, his cheeks are colored a rosy red and he refuses to look up from his desk for the rest of the class.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A140':
-					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms Braakman glares at her. "Uh...what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
+					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms Braakman glares at her. "Uh... what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A156':
 					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation with the gopnik since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, the gopnik closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A157':

+ 7 - 7
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr Tsarev begins handing out work sheets. He is obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
 				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean out the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and...sexy man in my life." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
 				'Christina then replies. "That is why I have no interest in dating losers like you." Christina then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr Tsarev begins handing out some work sheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive her on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
 				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm was not working at all." Mr Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You are really bad at it."'
@@ -54,22 +54,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			*nl
 			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/photos/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
 			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s...Real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
 		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s penis?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s penis?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
 			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
 			'No one raises their hand, so Mr Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr Tsarev shakes his head before responding. "Is infinity a number?"' 
-			'"Um I guess so...Right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr Tsarev replies.'
+			'"Um I guess so... right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'The smallest number in existence is...Nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
+		'The smallest number in existence is... nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back. "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 4 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
-				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very...you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
+				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very... you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
 			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile as she returns it. Sonia then turns back toward the teacher while continuing to cruise the internet.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								'You decide to have some fun and quickly slide the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt. When Mr Tsarev arrives at your desk, he asks "What is so important that you need to use your phone during my lesson? If nothing, then I will hold onto it until the end of class." He then extends his hand out. "Would you like to see?" you reply in a seductive tone.'
-								'You then hand him your phone with the picture you took still on the screen. Mr Tsarev looks at what''s on the screen and he stares at it for a few seconds before turning the screen off and returning to the front of the class. After he reaches the front of the classroom, he turns to you and says "Well...Uhhh, I''ll be holding onto your phone for now. You can have it back after class."'
+								'You then hand him your phone with the picture you took still on the screen. Mr Tsarev looks at what''s on the screen and he stares at it for a few seconds before turning the screen off and returning to the front of the class. After he reaches the front of the classroom, he turns to you and says "Well... uhhh, I''ll be holding onto your phone for now. You can have it back after class."'
 								'He puts your phone in his pocket before returning to teaching his lesson. You occasionally see him turn the phone on and peek at the screen when he believes that no one is watching.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolansoup0.jpg"></center>'
-						'"...shit!...i hate to puke... " ... BLUURB...And you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck!...that ... roll... . Better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess...just in time.'
+						'"...shit!... I hate to puke... " ... BLUURB... and you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck! That... roll... better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess... just in time.'
 						'<i>Shit! I''m going to puke!</i> You race to the restroom and find an empty stall just in time. If you''d thought it tasted awful the first time...'
 						act 'Leave ': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 							'Albina gives Petka a dirty look, not that he can see it with his face buried in your pussy. "Is that so? And he agreed?" she asks.'
 							'You giggle a little. "I told him it was that or I would go get the coach and bring it up with the principal, who would likely call his parents in. He decided against that."'
 							'Albina can''t help but laugh. "Well that works for me." she says. "Mind if I help ''teach him a lesson'' as well?"'
-							'You smile at her. "No...not at all."'
+							'You smile at her. "No... not at all."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Against the locker':

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tChristina':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What are the two of you up to now?" you ask Christina, ignoring Lina, as you walk up to them.'
 		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but when Christina sees you, she just looks straight down and mumbles something. Grabbing her by the arm, you give her a shake, and say "I''m talking to you, bitch! Speak up." Meekly, she replies "Training, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m not allowed to run anymore, but I thought I could still help Lina."'
-		'Lina is looking back and forth, between the two of you, unsure how to behave in this new dynamic. The fact that you''re also naked seems to be messing with her even more. Still, she tries to cover for Christina by saying "I did horrible in the last race, so I...uh...asked her for help."'
+		'Lina is looking back and forth, between the two of you, unsure how to behave in this new dynamic. The fact that you''re also naked seems to be messing with her even more. Still, she tries to cover for Christina by saying "I did horrible in the last race, so I... uh... asked her for help."'
 		act 'Let them train in peace': gt 'gLake'
 		act 'Train Lina yourself (0:30)':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLina':
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What are the two of you up to now?" you ask Lina, ignoring Christina, as you walk up to them.'
-		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but all she says is "I did horrible in the last race, so I...uh...asked Christina for help." Christina just nods, staring at her feet, too afraid to even look at you.'
+		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but all she says is "I did horrible in the last race, so I... uh... asked Christina for help." Christina just nods, staring at her feet, too afraid to even look at you.'
 		'"Training is good, Lina. A much better plan than trying to suck the coach off, if you ask me." Christina''s cheeks flush a little, but she keeps looking down. Lina just smiles, but still seems too afraid of Christina to say anything against her.'
 		act 'Let them train in peace': gt 'gLake'
 		act 'Train Lina yourself (0:30)':

+ 2 - 2
locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters_theme':
 			cla
 			hunter_sexual_comfort -= 5
 			hunter_collective_opinion += 1
-			'"Huh...what? No I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears'
+			'"Huh... what? No I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears'
 			if hunter_sexual_comfort < 35 and hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
 				'"Stop embarrassing the little lady" says Sergey. "She is our guest, we have to be polite"'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamp_yard', 'campfire'
@@ -1414,7 +1414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_encounter':
 					hunter_collective_opinion += 3
 
 					'"That''s the spirit <<$pcs_nickname>>. You have got nothing to hide so why hide it?" says Andrei'
-					'"I...uh...wow." stammers Igor. "Still not used to you prancing around like that"'
+					'"I... uh... wow." stammers Igor. "Still not used to you prancing around like that"'
 					act 'Help him get more used to it':	gs 'hunter_interactions', 'igor_demonstration'
 				else
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 3

+ 1 - 1
locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_sisterkom_krossdress':
 			'You start looking through the clothes and quickly find some beautiful lingerie.'
 			'"Wow, look at this beautiful lingerie." you comment and see Igor appreciatively nodding.'
 			'"Well, if you like it that much, can''t you try it on?" you jest and toss the lingerie at him.'
-			'"Hardy...har har. Very funny..." said Igor as he picked up the lingerie from the floor.'
+			'"Hardy har har... Very funny..." said Igor as he picked up the lingerie from the floor.'
 			'"Yeah!" you continue searching on... "Let''s find something nice for you to try on! Here, try these panties on... and... this bra too!" you laugh as you toss the items into his face. You are laughing to yourself as you find this being such a good joke!'
 			'"Say what?! You want me to dress like a girl?" Igor said indignantly.'
 			'"Come on, don''t be such a bore! Let''s have some fun!" you say playfully, and giggle sweetly while looking at him.'

+ 45 - 53
locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -920,19 +920,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 							if KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KS6.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you prepare to put on your swimwear at the lockers, Katja lies against a wall and observes you undressing. The redhead has stopped midway, and stands there in (sexy)underwear, with eyes full of mischief.'
+								'As you prepare to put on your swimwear at the lockers, Katja lies against a wall and observes you undressing. The redhead has stopped midway, and stands there in (sexy) underwear, with eyes full of mischief.'
 								'"Hm. Is something wrong Katja?"'
 								'The ginger just smiles and begins to caress and play with her red mane without breaking eye contact.'
-								'"I... was thinking <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe it is better if we go naked, I mean, the hot steam will make us sweat and...my bikini will feel uncomfortable. What do you think? All that sweat all over my skin. It gives you ideas, doesn''t it?"'
+								'"I... was thinking <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe it is better if we go naked, I mean, the hot steam will make us sweat and... my bikini will feel uncomfortable. What do you think? All that sweat all over my skin. It gives you ideas, doesn''t it?"'
 								'Oh fuck! Is she tempting you?'
-
 								act 'You can''t resist her!':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KL2.jpg"></center>'
-									'Groaning in frustration, you get naked, as sweet... candid... Katja... get naked, and exaggeratedly sighs giving you sensuall eyes.'
+									'Groaning in frustration, you get naked, as sweet... candid... Katja... get naked, and exaggeratedly sighs giving you sensual eyes.'
 									'"Bitch!"'
-									'You varelly whisper your insult and take the gigling bimbo wannabe towards the sauna.'
-
+									'You whisper your insult and take the giggling bimbo wannabe towards the sauna.'
 									act 'Go to the sauna':
 										gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 										if pcs_inhib < 20: inhib_exp += 1
@@ -941,7 +939,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 										gt 'katjaEv','kathan10'
 									end
 								end
-								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard' & !!This does not take into consideration inhibition/exhibitionism because Sveta chose to put on the swimwear and Katja is forcing her to undress.
+								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard' !!This does not take into consideration inhibition/exhibitionism because Sveta chose to put on the swimwear and Katja is forcing her to undress.
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Resist her!': gt 'katjaEV','kathansaunasw2'
 								else
@@ -974,7 +972,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 					
 					if pcs_inhib > 20:
 						act 'Go in the nude!':	gs 'clothing', 'strip' & gs 'underwear', 'remove' & gt 'katjaEv','kathan10'
-
 					elseif pcs_inhib < 20:
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'easy'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -991,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 							act 'Go in the nude! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 						end
 					end
-					act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+					act 'Hm... it is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1003,7 +1000,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 			'Everyone knows, at least in your school, that being cool costs money and if you aren''t called Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov or Dimka Nosov, your parents are going to frown at any "unnecessary" expenditure. Sigh. What would they know about being a teen in modern Russia?'
 			'So, what is a high school student with no money going to do? You visit open-air markets, jumble sales and the occasional van with "second hand" merchandise in the back.'
 			'That is precisely what you and Katja have decided to do. Look for that elusive bargain that will propel your standing a little higher in the school''s totem. An always important enterprise that requires time, patience and the endless manhandling of the sympathetic sellers'' products.'
-
 			act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
 		end
 
@@ -1326,9 +1322,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 		'That is the thing that passes by your head in the aftermath of laying in the frozen soil. The snow, trying to its heart content, to pass the flimsy protection that your winter clothes try to give but you remember one thing.'
 		'"I am a Russian bitch! You can''t stop me Winter!"'
 		'You scream at the heavens, and with an effort of will, your arms and legs begin to move against the snow''s cold resistance, shaping it on your heavenly form''s visage, but winter is not defeated, and a sudden icy wind blows against your face, trying to stop you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just...Hahaha!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just... hahaha!"'
 		'You look to the smiling redhead, who is trying to stand, but fails and sits on the ground, laughing at your antics until you get up and help her to her feet. There in the ground are your silhouettes. It has been fun, but now you are cold and it is probably best to look for something else to do.'
-
 		act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	end
 
@@ -1336,10 +1331,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWT12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You know the drill, it isn''t really that hard. Three big snowballs, some stones for details, maybe some discarded clothes from a dumpster...and bingo! A snowman! Then why is it taking you so much time to finish it?!'
+		'You know the drill, it isn''t really that hard. Three big snowballs, some stones for details, maybe some discarded clothes from a dumpster... and bingo! A snowman! Then why is it taking you so much time to finish it?!'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I think that the red scarf doesn''t go with those sticks."'
 		'You two have examined the dumpsters and piked the most selected branches around the zone, but somehow that isn''t enough.'
-		'"Hm, you are right Katja. I''m thinking...on that old jacket!"'
+		'"Hmm, you are right Katja. I''m thinking... on that old jacket!"'
 		'Of course, kids around you want to help, but really, what will those snot-nosed kiddos know about dressing your creation! So, that is why you have "encouraged" the kids to, well, build their own far away so your work continues undisturbed, changing clothes, stones, and sticks until your snowman is ready.'
 		'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>! Let''s do a selfie!"'
 		'And then, after half an hour of intense work, your masterful creation is ready for posterity. It is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2243,9 +2238,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan13':
 		'It takes a long while for you both to catch your breath after the frenetic sex you just had, the sauna''s atmosphere not helping much.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> Woah! Te-he Uff! I''m wasted, but... it was worth it!"'
 		'You smile tiredly to the good-spirited girl, who now sits happily by your side, tiredly caressing and kissing you.'
-		'"Yeah Katja...But we must leave before we dry up like raisins."'
+		'"Yeah Katja... but we must leave before we dry up like raisins."'
 		'You help her get up and prepare to exit the sauna.'
-
 		if month >11 or month <3:
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -2590,7 +2584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 11:
 		'"Yeah, I know! Mefody is always the life of the party, but remember the rule! Do not leave him alone with Vanya for more than five minutes!"'
 	elseif random_event = 12:
-		'"Fine! Ok! I will admit it! I think that Ivan has a great ass. Every girl in our class will say it and...you are going to make say it? Sigh... Yes, I fantasied with him taking me to the church, but I was 13! I now have...other things in my head."'
+		'"Fine! Ok! I will admit it! I think that Ivan has a great ass. Every girl in our class will say it and... you are going to make say it? Sigh... Yes, I fantasized about him taking me to the church, but I was 13! I now have... other things in my head."'
 	elseif random_event = 13:
 		'"I don''t know if you saw this film, what''s it called? Captain America? Well, there was this guy Buck? Bully? Bucky! Yes, that was his name! Well Fedor is Ivan''s Bucky!"'
 	elseif random_event = 14:
@@ -2608,7 +2602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 20:
 		'"I don''t remember ever seeing Vanya sad, depressed or angry. He has always been this Happy-Go-Lucky hyperactive fellow that tries to make everybody smile. I really envy my sister for being with him, but remember no matter how much he cries, or how much he begs, never, ever give him a Red Bull."'
 	elseif random_event = 21:
-		'"Artem is...nice, I guess? I mean I don''t know. I do my own homework and don''t deal a lot with him."'
+		'"Artem is... nice, I guess? I mean I don''t know. I do my own homework and don''t deal a lot with him."'
 	elseif random_event = 22:
 		'"Sometimes, I think that Petka likes being bullied by the girls."'
 	elseif random_event = 23:
@@ -2618,9 +2612,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 25:
 		'"Zina? Who is Zina?"'
 	elseif random_event = 26:
-		'"Evgeny is...weird. I''m not sure what his problem is, but he is just too centered on chess. Obsessed I will say."'
+		'"Evgeny is... weird. I''m not sure what his problem is, but he is just too centered on chess. Obsessed I will say."'
 	elseif random_event = 27:
-		'"Te-he! Look, there is this little rumour...Jejeje...about Feofan. It''s seems, that after being send to detention, he met our favorite bully and somehow, well...She deflowered him."'
+		'"Te-he! Look, there is this little rumour... Jejeje... about Feofan. It seems, that after being send to detention, he met our favorite bully and somehow, well... she deflowered him."'
 	elseif random_event = 28:
 		'"The truth is that Gerasim and I don''t interact too much. He is a pretty good student, but beyond that, there isn''t really any relation."'
 	elseif random_event = 29:
@@ -2630,7 +2624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 31:
 		'"Pussy Riot''s music isn''t exactlly my style, but I admit that the band is pretty cool and that is the problem! Anushka is incredibly cool with the capacity to put on clothes ours moms would burn on a stake! Why does she hang around with the gopniks?"'
 	elseif random_event = 32:
-		'"I...Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about this, but...We failed Lavrenti. He had all the reasons in the world to hate us and I don''t know how to fix the situation."'
+		'"I... look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about this, but... we failed Lavrenti. He had all the reason in the world to hate us and I don''t know how to fix the situation."'
 	elseif random_event = 33:
 		'"Some men were born lucky. Some men were born very lucky. Lesco? God shat all over him."'
 	elseif random_event = 34:
@@ -2725,9 +2719,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big140.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Hey girls! Just a moment! Ending this, and I am with you!"'
 	'Catching your attention is a smiling Lizaveta, your school''s "Gossip Girl" that, as always, is typing away on her phone. It is evident that the girl''s sixth sense for gossiping has pinpointed Lizaveta towards you, and now the always eager for news girl is zeroing in on your position.'
-	'"Hm. <<$pcs_nickname>>.Time to look for something else to do?"'
+	'"Hmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, time to look for something else to do?"'
 	'Katja seems somewhat troubled about Lizaveta''s apparition, trapped between the need to know and the knowledge that if you aren''t very careful, anything you tell the spook will end up in everyone''s ears. So, what to do?'
-
 	act 'Quickly sneak away':
 		menu_off = 1
 		*clr & cla
@@ -2768,11 +2761,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 		elseif random_event >= 75 and random_event >= pcs_intel:
 			'"Don''t worry Katja! What''s the worst that could happen?!"'
 			'Katja opens her mouth to answer, but stops and facepalms at your not exactly well-chosen words that have somehow made Lizaveta stop and turn towards you smiling, before she quickly runs towards your sitting place.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You won''t believe what I just learned, but...you know what, forget about that! I wanted to ask you something!"'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You won''t believe what I just learned, but... you know what, forget about that! I wanted to ask you something!"'
 			'You are taken back by the gossiper''s sudden assault and don''t have time to react to the girl''s burning interest. You must admit certain proudness at her questioning. Obviously, your life must be pretty interesting for her, so decide to satiate that thirst for knowledge.'
-			'"Well, yes, my mother went to see him...Albina? After that she was angry...I dunno, it seemed a good idea..."'
+			'"Well, yes, my mother went to see him... Albina? After that she was angry... I dunno, it seemed a good idea..."'
 			'For the next half hour, you and Lizaveta proceed to gossip about basically everything with, curiously, a progressively more silent Katja, but it ends with Lizaveta getting up.'
-			'"Oh! Look at the time! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go, you know, some chores to do! So...Bye!"'
+			'"Oh! Look at the time! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go, you know, some chores to do! So... bye!"'
 			'Lizaveta turns and leaves, but not without taking her phone out to continue the gossiping online, so you turn towards an embarrassed looking Katja.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Why did you tell her those things?"'
 			'You stand there trying to process what exactly was said. Nothing special? At your stunned expression, Katja rolls her eyes, grabs your hand and takes you away. Just pray that this doesn''t hurt you, but for the moment, it is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2788,7 +2781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 			'Katja looks at you embarrassed, but the little smile in her lips is evident that yes, maybe the infamous Lizaveta Petrov has a really big mouth. But seriously, the gossiping is great, so you both sit and wait patiently until the typing ends and she deigns herself to talk.'
 			'"Sorry! Sorry! You won''t believe what I just learned!"'
 			'Looking like the cat that just ate the mouse, and knowing that you are eager for some news, Lizaveta quickly sits and begins to talk. As it can''t be otherwise, you eat up all the juicy gossip before adding your own knowledge to this special stew.'
-			'"What? No! We can''t tell Stasya...Seriously, I''m surprised that Feofan knows his way around a girl...Oh my god! You are such a slut!"'
+			'"What? No! We can''t tell Stasya... seriously, I''m surprised that Feofan knows his way around a girl... oh my god! You are such a slut!"'
 			'And this is how the three of you pass the next half hour. Gossiping, badmouthing, rumormongering. In general, being like a group of parrots taking pleasure in every word, but all good things must end and the signal is Lizaveta''s phone ringing.'
 			'"Hm? What am I doing? Hu? What time is it? Shit! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go! Bye!"'
 			'Lizaveta stands quickly and says goodbye. It is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2904,11 +2897,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan21':
 	elseif random_event = 13:
 		'"Fuck! You are dressed, and I''m cumming!"'
 	elseif random_event = 14:
-		'"I will bed a man for you, so...Are you up for some DP?"'
+		'"I will bed a man for you, so... are you up for some DP?"'
 	elseif random_event = 15:
 		'"What? Are you ignoring me? Fortunately, I want your mouth for other things."'
 	elseif random_event = 16:
-		'"Your mouth says NO! Sniff...but my cock say YES!"'
+		'"Your mouth says NO! Sniff... but my cock say YES!"'
 	elseif random_event = 17:
 		'"Deep inside, you are all the same. Cock hungry whores, so let''s skip the foreplay."'
 	elseif random_event = 18:
@@ -2939,7 +2932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan22':
 		'It was a dull moment in your conversation when it happened. Suddenly, in a little-travelled street corner, Katja turned towards you and...'
 		'"Hmf?!"'
 		'You grunt surprised as the redhead forcefully kisses your lips and merges in a warm embrace. Time stops and you can only stand there, reciprocating Katja''s kisses with your own. Some bystander says something... encouraging? Insulting? You are barely aware, but somehow that stops the making out session.'
-		'"Woah! That was...Great Katja!"'
+		'"Woah! That was... great Katja!"'
 		'She gives you a cheeky smile and grabbing your hand, takes you away to look for something else to do.'
 
 		if hour >= 20:
@@ -3008,7 +3001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan23':
 				'Smiling nervously, you unhook your arm from the redhead, and feeling insecure, stride towards the approaching Svyatoslav.'
 				'"Hey Slavik! I..."'
 				'As Svyatoslav tries to pass by your side towards Katja, he gives you an exasperated gaze. It is evident that a little outcast girl like you isn''t going to stop the big jock boy from reaching the redheaded beauty...or at least that''s what would happen if you were in school.'
-				'"But...But...I just wanted to talk! Slavik why are you all so mean to me?!"'
+				'"But, but... I just wanted to talk! Slavik, why are you all so mean to me?!"'
 				'You then whine and put on scared eyes for all the people on the street''s enjoyment, and in that instant, the atmosphere changes as around you, the pedestrians instantly form a dislike to the BIG BAD BULLY threatening the SCARED CUTE GIRL'
 				'"Fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>! Why don''t you go and fuck your therapist? Just leave Katja and I alone for a minute!"'
 				'"Nope!" you angrily answer and grab his arm "And if you don''t follow me, I will begin to scream about how your bullying has made me need one!"'
@@ -3084,14 +3077,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 		'You try to calm the hyper-ventilating redhead as she maniacally gets up and takes a peek beyond her room''s door. Finally, she calms enough to talk with you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you saw that didn''t you? I mean...They were...Oh God!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you saw that didn''t you? I mean... they were... oh God!"'
 		'Taking her hand, you force Katja to sit by your side and embrace the redhead, mostly to stop her from driving you crazy.'
 		'"There there Katja. Just stop and breathe."'
 		'She takes your advice, and takes a big gulp of air. That seemed to quieten her down, deflating and returning her to a more "normal" mindstate. Even at that, she is troubled.'
-		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and...Remember how she clung to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
+		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and... remember how she clung to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
 		'"That maybe your mother and Valentina were, or are, lovers? That troubles you? You don''t like that?"'
 		'Katja looks at you with a mix of emotions in her face. Confusion, surprise, doubt, fear. She opens and closes her mouth, looks at you, blushes and says something surprising...'
-		'"I don''t know...Maybe? I never thought about something like that. Ehm...<<$pcs_nickname>>...What would you think, if I...I mean...Ehm...behaved like Valentina and...tried to kiss you?"'
+		'"I don''t know... maybe? I never thought about something like that. Ehm... <<$pcs_nickname>>... what would you think, if I... I mean... ehm... behaved like Valentina and... tried to kiss you?"'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'force', 'hard'
 		minut += 5
@@ -3105,8 +3098,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				'"Yes?"'
 				'You lean against her and give her a little kiss on the lips. She doesn''t react, so you continue, grabbing at her face, cheeks and neck. Her hands raise against your chest, but she doesn''t try to push you away. In fact, she begins to kiss you back.'
 				'This escalates into an awkward make out, as the inexperienced girl shyly tries to follow your lead, biting you on more than one occasion. More and more, your lips and eventually tongues mix, arousing the two of you in an ever-increasing loop, but it all stops when Katja gives a surprised "Epp!" and moves away from you.'
-				'It seems that one of your hands had somehow reached below her clothes and, well, began to play with one of her tits. Now the two of you are looking at the transgressive hand in confusion. Biting her lips,she looks around nervously and tries to fix her ruffled clothes.'
-				'"That was...Woah. Hm. Something <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
+				'It seems that one of your hands had somehow reached below her clothes and, well, began to play with one of her tits. Now the two of you are looking at the transgressive hand in confusion. Biting her lips, she looks around nervously and tries to fix her ruffled clothes.'
+				'"That was... woah. Hmmm... Something <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
 
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force', 'hard'
@@ -3130,7 +3123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 		gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'self', 'hard'
 
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act '"Katja...Hm...Want to try it?"':
+			act '"Katja... want to try it?"':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3157,7 +3150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				act 'Time to leave': gt 'katjaEv','TamVal_2'
 			end
 		else
-			act '"Katja...Hm...Want to try it?" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act '"Katja... want to try it?" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 
 		act 'Stare at her awkwardly.':
@@ -3166,9 +3159,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Hu?!"'
 			'That is the most your brain seems capable of answering to Katja''s question and obviously she didn''t take it too well.'
-			'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I wasn''t insinuating...I mean...I didn''t want to...Ehm..."'
-			'You stare at her. She stares at you. The silence only seems to make the two of you more embarrassed by the second...Fuck!'
-
+			'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I wasn''t insinuating... I mean... I didn''t want to... ehm..."'
+			'You stare at her. She stares at you. The silence only seems to make the two of you more embarrassed by the second... fuck!'
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			npc_rel['A14'] -= 5
 			minut += 5
@@ -3188,7 +3180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				'You can''t stop smiling at her cuteness, but the truth is that Katja''s childishness is getting boring. Her mother has a worshiping toygirl at her beck and call, Vicky has acquired the munch-eating services of a rock-hard-abs jock. Well, Katja can have a fucking superhuman succubus! What is she thinking?! End up as the only virgin in your class? Time to change that.'
 				'"Ok Katja, time for a lesson. Let''s get naked."'
 				'You begin to take away your clothes as a flabbergasted Katja stops in her tracks and tries to process what you just said.'
-				'"Eh...What? <<$pcs_nickname>>, is this a joke?"'
+				'"Eh... what? <<$pcs_nickname>>, is this a joke?"'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'No it isn''t':
@@ -3205,13 +3197,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 					act 'She sits on the bed.':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/SL1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>...What...What are you planning to do?"'
+						'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>... what... what are you planning to do?"'
 						'You don''t answer. In it''s place, there is only an embrace. Katja squirms nervously, but doesn''t try to break away. Kissing her beautiful neck, you wait and let the redhead relax... A  difficult task, so after a few minutes, your hands begin to roam her body.'
-						'"Listen to me shy, innocent, self-conscious, virginal Katja. From now on, you will respond only with "Oh...Oh...Oh..." Do you understand my Pet?"'
-						'Your right hand finally reaches between her legs and rests over the soft fabric of her panties. A promise of things to come....stopped when she closes her legs.'
+						'"Listen to me shy, innocent, self-conscious, virginal Katja. From now on, you will respond only with "Oh... oh... oh..." Do you understand my pet?"'
+						'Your right hand finally reaches between her legs and rests over the soft fabric of her panties. A promise of things to come.... stopping when she closes her legs.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Ouch!"'
 						'At Katja''s transgression, you give her crotch a little pinch, startling her, but making her shut up. Your enhanced senses let you caress all her erogenous zones and soon she is moaning, forgetting her reluctance at your dominant act.'
-						'"That is ok Pet. Just... let me do all the work. But first, I need you to give me something... Will you let me in?"'
+						'"It is ok my pet. Just... let me do all the work. But first, I need you to give me something... will you let me in?"'
 						'She looks at you confused, but unquestionably aroused. With a vague understanding of your words, she opens her legs.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -3266,7 +3258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal_2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'A few minutes pass with Katja in contemplative silence before you finally decide to leave, but as you reach for the door, she finally talks.'
-	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I...look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... Ehm...taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to...come home to study? I''m not trying to...Ehm...Fuck!"'
+	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I... look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... ehm... taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to... come home to study? I''m not trying to...Ehm...Fuck!"'
 	'You smile at Katja''s awkwardness.'
 	'"Yes, I would like that Katja, don''t worry."'
 	'She gives you a timid smile before climbing under her bed''s covers as you leave. This has been a full afternoon. There is nothing more for you here... Except Katja''s mother waiting for you in the entry hall...'
@@ -3292,7 +3284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal_2':
 
 		else
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> isn''t it? I''m Tamara Mikhailovna, my pleasure."'
-			'"Hello Mrs.Mikhailovna."'
+			'"Hello Mrs. Mikhailovna."'
 			'"So... <<$pcs_nickname>>, what exactly is troubling my little girl?"'
 			'She is asking you without concern, and for a moment, you don''t know what to say, but finally decide to answer.'
 			'"She is troubled about the fact that Valentina and you are in a... well... romantic relationship."'
@@ -3475,7 +3467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 					'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-					'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+					'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 					'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 					'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 					'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3496,7 +3488,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 				'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-				'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+				'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 				'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 				'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 				'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3560,7 +3552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 					'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-					'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+					'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 					'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 					'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 					'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3580,7 +3572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-			'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+			'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 			'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 			'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 			'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3616,7 +3608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-		'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+		'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 		'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 		'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 		'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/leonid.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstTime':
 	''
 	'"Do you think I am stupid? The authorities are under my grasp. I own them. Do it and nobody will see you ever again."'
 	'You get up back to your knees.'
-	'"All right Mister <<$bSurname>>, I''ve got the idea. I promise to keep quiet and be your...slave."'
+	'"All right Mister <<$bSurname>>, I''ve got the idea. I promise to keep quiet and be your... slave."'
 	'"Very well. I will call you if I require your presence. Until then you are free to go."'
 	if SchoolAtestat = 0:
 		'"But Mister <<$bSurname>>, what do I tell to my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>? How do I explain my absence from the school and everything?"'

+ 4 - 4
locations/love.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if modelfoto_nude > 30:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Why are you not telling us about the photos you shot for these web sites?" She pulls out the nude photos of you and lies them out on the table. "My son, your mother cares about you. This girl is not worthy of you."'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and screams, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and screams, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if kavslut > 0:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, everyone knows that this girl is a slut. <<$pcs_nickname>> does not just wait tables, she lets every customer, even the Armenians who go there, tear up every hole she has. She doesn''t deserve you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if frot > 3:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, this girl is a slut and lets every pervert who settles down next to her on the subway grope her. She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if gloryhole > 30:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, your girlfriend moonlights at the sex shop, sucking the members of countless strangers. Do you want a wife like that? She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/mirafather.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if Mira_no > 0 and mirafathertalk = 0 and miraday ! daystart:
 	'"N-no, what happened to her?" you ask in a confused voice, expecting him to start shouting any second.'
 	'"I don''t know. She is just sitting at home all the time. She doesn''t leave the yard, I''m concerned." Mira''s father answers.'
 	'"Oh, ah...I don''t know," you say, trying to make it sound believable and make your eyes look innocent. "Maybe she was by hurt some local boy, or had a fight with someone..."'
-	'"Okay, I think it will pass...soon I hope. But, I want you to come and visit us, I think your company would do Mira a lot of good. It might bring her out of this funk faster." Mira''s father says good-bye, and leaves to resume working around his house.'
+	'"Okay, I think it will pass... soon I hope. But, I want you to come and visit us, I think your company would do Mira a lot of good. It might bring her out of this funk faster." Mira''s father says good-bye, and leaves to resume working around his house.'
 	'"Close call," you think as you watch his retreating back and exhale with relief.'
 	MiraLoc = 0
 	minut += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc

@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night3':
 							grupvalue[3] += 5
 							pcs_mood += 20
 							gs 'stat'
-							'You roll the dice and jackpot! You have managed to roll well above what you needed, as you look sneakily towards Feofan, clearing your throat you start bargaining, charming the pants off the blacksmith,"Fine, fine, girl! I''ll let you buy all the equipment you need for the regular price with that damn gold."'
+							'You roll the dice and jackpot! You have managed to roll well above what you needed, as you look sneakily towards Feofan, clearing your throat you start bargaining, charming the pants off the blacksmith. "Fine, fine, girl! I''ll let you buy all the equipment you need for the regular price with that damn gold."'
 							'Smiling you point towards all the armor and weapons you want and you manage to fully equip all your group members in better gear. A few minutes pass as you call in Artem and tell him to help you carry all the stuff, you thank the blacksmith for the business as he mutters something.'
 							act 'Meet up with the others':
 								*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					else
-						'"What do you want?" you cry out. Vasily just grins. "What do I want? I''d like a New Year''s gift. Nothing big, just a little kiss on the cheek...or how about we continue this in the locker room and I get to fuck you raw? That would be quite the gift." He grabs you by the arm and pulls you along, with the rest of the students either ignoring what''s going on or cheer Vasily on. A few of the other gopniks join him in dragging you into the locker room.'
+						'"What do you want?" you cry out. Vasily just grins. "What do I want? I''d like a New Year''s gift. Nothing big, just a little kiss on the cheek... or how about we continue this in the locker room and I get to fuck you raw? That would be quite the gift." He grabs you by the arm and pulls you along, with the rest of the students either ignoring what''s going on or cheer Vasily on. A few of the other gopniks join him in dragging you into the locker room.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Get dragged into the locker room': gt 'nyp_school', 'slut'
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 			act 'What do you want to talk about?':
 				*clr & cla
 				'Hearing this you ask her "Well, what would you want to talk about then? I mean what do nerds normally talk about that isn''t something weird?"'
-				'Natasha kind of throws up her hands. "I don''t know...Almost anything. Clothes, fashion, what''s going on at school. Even any good books anyone has read or movies they''ve watched. Just [i]something[/i] else."'
+				'Natasha kind of throws up her hands. "I don''t know... almost anything. Clothes, fashion, what''s going on at school. Even any good books anyone has read or movies they''ve watched. Just [i]something[/i] else."'
 				'You nod to that. It sounds reasonable. If Natasha wasn''t, well, such a nerd and more socialable, she would likely be one of the cool kids. "Sounds boring, but reasonable." You glance at the others and wait for a reply about why they never talk about stuff she likes.'
 				'Feofan, who you assume is the leader as he was the most lively before you came along, tries his hardest to avoid looking you in the eyes while the others try to avoid making any sound if possible,'
 				*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/party_girls.qsrc

@@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ira_dance':
 					if i = 1: '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_iralena_7_<<rand(5,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
 					if i = 2: '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_iralena_7_<<rand(8,9)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Together, laying down comfortably you continue to kiss and caress each other.'
-				    'You lick each other,using your tongue and fingers to explore each others pussies. Lapping up and swallowing each others juices, stopping only to share a passionate kiss with one another.'
+				    'You lick each other, using your tongue and fingers to explore each others pussies. Lapping up and swallowing each others juices, stopping only to share a passionate kiss with one another.'
 					'You work each others bodies, sometimes two on one and other times each giving and receiving from different girls. As you feel yourself getting close, you pay extra attention to whom ever seems to be lagging behind, emphasizing the sensual caress in the most erogenous places.'
 					'Soon, the three of you are moaning almost as one, all nearing your peak.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'

+ 3 - 3
locations/pav_clinic.qsrc

@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 					'You: Uhm, Hello...'
 					'Nurse: Which one is yours?'
 					'You: Mine? I don''t understand...'
-					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and than back at your face.'
+					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and then back at your face.'
 					'Nurse: Well, you are obviously lactating, so you came here to breastfeed your offspring?'
 					'She concludes on you, giving you a rised eyebrow.'
 				elseif preg = 0 and pregtimes = 0 and pcs_gpolimilkdonation <= 0 and lactation['pc_aware'] > 0:
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 					'You: Uhm, Hello...'
 					'Nurse: Which one is yours?'
 					'You: Mine? I don''t understand...'
-					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and than back at your face.'
+					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and then back at your face.'
 					'Nurse: Well, you are obviously lactating, so you came here to breastfeed your offspring?'
 					'She concludes on you, giving you a rised eyebrow.'
 					'You look at her, then down at your cleavage, no idea how to react.'
@@ -1409,7 +1409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 					'You: Uhm, Hello...'
 					'Nurse: Which one is yours?'
 					'You: Mine? I don''t understand...'
-					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and than back at your face.'
+					'The nurse looks at your face then down at your breast and then back at your face.'
 					'Nurse: Well, you are obviously lactating, so you came here to breastfeed your offspring?'
 					'She concludes on you, giving you a rised eyebrow.'
 				else

+ 10 - 10
locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc

@@ -265,20 +265,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Mphhhf...I cannot believe you don''t know what you''ve done. You snoop around in my house and take whatever you want... and me ... I allow you to wander around freely. You really don''t know what you''ve done? Well I''ll tell you: you used my Babushka''s ashes to repair the bath! Happy now? What else do you want to take from me? You have taken what was the most important thing to me and thrown it away!"'
+			'"Mphhhf... I cannot believe you don''t know what you''ve done. You snoop around in my house and take whatever you want... and me... I allow you to wander around freely. You really don''t know what you''ve done? Well I''ll tell you: you used my Babushka''s ashes to repair the bath! Happy now? What else do you want to take from me? You have taken what was the most important thing to me and thrown it away!"'
 			*nl
-			'"I-I...I can''t believe it, if only I knew... I never would have used them...you have to believe me..."'
+			'"I-I... I can''t believe it, if only I knew... I never would have used them... you have to believe me..."'
 			*nl
-			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I didn''t have the money for a burial, and I couldn''t just leave Babushka to be thrown away. I believe you, it was an accident... but that''s not the point. You shouldn''t snoop around someone else''s house. That''s not polite. And...and...Oh Babushka what have I done... why didn''t I take care of you? You were everything to me...". Rolan starts crying in agony.'
+			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I didn''t have the money for a burial, and I couldn''t just leave Babushka to be thrown away. I believe you, it was an accident... but that''s not the point. You shouldn''t snoop around someone else''s house. That''s not polite. And... and... oh Babushka what have I done... why didn''t I take care of you? You were everything to me..." Rolan starts crying in agony.'
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				cla & *clr
 				money -= 8000
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapolgift.jpg"></center>'
-				'"...Rolan here... take this to dry your tears... I know you like them, and I don''t have any wipes. You can have them, I''ve got a bunch."'
+				'"...Rolan, here... take this to dry your tears... I know you like them, and I don''t have any wipes. You can have them, I''ve got a bunch."'
 				*nl
-				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I think it''s time for me to make my apologies. I was extremely rude to kick you out of my house in that way...."'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I think it''s time for me to make my apologies. I was extremely rude to kick you out of my house in that way..."'
 				*nl
 				'"Oh Rolan there''s no need... I would have done the same if I were in your position"'
 				*nl
@@ -312,11 +312,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
 				'...Rolan, broken inside, says: "Witch! You have stolen my Babushka and put her ashes into my bath!"'
 				*nl
-				'You can''t believe what you have heard. "But...But.."'
+				'You can''t believe what you have heard. "But... but..."'
 				*nl
 				'"...Before you ask your stupid question, I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t got enough money for a burial and I couldn''t just leave Babushka to be thrown away."'
 				*nl
-				'"...I''m sorry Rolan ... I never could have imagined...I''m so sorry Rolan, I don''t know what to do... Here take this money, it won''t give you Babushka back, but you can recruit some workers to restore the vessel. If only I knew, I never would have used the powder, you have to believe me."'
+				'"...I''m sorry Rolan... I never could have imagined... I''m so sorry Rolan, I don''t know what to do... Here take this money, it won''t give you Babushka back, but you can recruit some workers to restore the vessel. If only I knew, I never would have used the powder, you have to believe me."'
 				*nl
 				'"I appreciate your effort, but that doesn''t change things. You could have asked, but you didn''t. You should learn what''s yours and what''s not." He turns and fixes you with a hard stare. "Give me your panties."'
 				*nl
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
-					'"O-OK...I think I''ve learned my lesson..."'
+					'"O-OK... I think I''ve learned my lesson..."'
 					*nl
 					'"No you didn''t. You shouldn''t snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and that you know nothing about. You need to learn a harder lesson than this. Now bend over."'
 					'...'
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 							gs 'stat'
 							pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Rolan starts beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you can''t say the same about anger....'
+							'Rolan starts beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you can''t say the same about anger...'
 							act 'It hurts!':
 								cla & *clr
 								gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-			'"...O-OK...I think I''ve learned my lesson..."'
+			'"...O-OK... I think I''ve learned my lesson..."'
 			*nl
 			'"No you haven''t. We have to fix this. Now give them to me."'
 			'...'

+ 4 - 4
locations/pav_shared_nd.qsrc

@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndChat':
 					'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, are you wearing a sex toy in your anus?"</font> (his blush turns dark red).'
 					if rand(0, 100) < 30:
 						'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Yes <<$nd_name>>, it is a buttplug. Will you help me with it? It seems stuck."</font>'
-						'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Wh..what do you mean?"</font>'
+						'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Wh... what do you mean?"</font>'
 						act 'Pull it out for me':chatLvl = 10 & gt 'pav_shared_nd', 'ndChat'
 					end
 				end
@@ -116,13 +116,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndChat':
 			if servitudeLvl = 0:
 				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, din''t you change your mind about easing off some of the rent?"</font>'
 				'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What do you mean?"</font>'
-				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Well as we talked about it before..you know..to cook for us or clean up a bit.."</font>'
+				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Well as we talked about it before, you know... to cook for us or clean up a bit..."</font>'
 				act 'Say you are still not iterested to be their maid':step = 0 & gt 'pav_shared_nd', 'ndChat'
 				act 'Say you are willing to do some work afterall':step = 0 & servitudeLvl = 1 & gt 'pav_shared_nd', 'ndChat'
 			elseif servitudeLvl = 1:
 				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, din''t you change your mind about easing off some more of the rent?"</font>'
 				'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What do you mean? I already clean up and cook for you."</font>'
-				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Well we also talked about this before..you know..to help us easy a bit of stress, if you know what I mean"</font>'
+				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Well we also talked about this before, you know... to help us easy a bit of stress, if you know what I mean"</font>'
 				act 'Say you are still not iterested to be their cumbucket':step = 0 & gt 'pav_shared_nd', 'ndChat'
 				act 'Say you are willing to spread your legs a bit afterall':step = 0 & servitudeLvl = 2 & gt 'pav_shared_nd', 'ndChat'
 
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndChat':
 
 	! anal plug
 	elseif chatLvl = 10:
-		'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"O..OK <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll help you."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"O-OK... <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll help you."</font>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/buttplugpullout.mp4"></video></center>'
 		''
 		'Hesitantly he grabs the plug and slowly pulls it out.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/pav_shared_sp.qsrc

@@ -121,13 +121,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spChat':
 			if servitudeLvl = 0:
 				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, din''t you change your mind about easing off some of the rent?"</font>'
 				'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What do you mean?"</font>'
-				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"Well as we talked about it before..you know..to cook for us or clean up a bit.."</font>'
+				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"Well as we talked about it before, you know... to cook for us or clean up a bit..."</font>'
 				act 'Say you are still not iterested to be their maid':step = 0 & gt 'pav_shared_sp', 'spChat'
 				act 'Say you are willing to do some work afterall':step = 0 & servitudeLvl = 1 & gt 'pav_shared_sp', 'spChat'
 			elseif servitudeLvl = 1:
 				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, din''t you change your mind about easing off some more of the rent?"</font>'
 				'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What do you mean? I already clean up and cook for you."</font>'
-				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"Well we also talked about this before..you know..to help us easy a bit of stress, if you know what I mean"</font>'
+				'<font color=#<<$sp_font>>>"Well we also talked about this before, you know... to help us easy a bit of stress, if you know what I mean"</font>'
 				act 'Say you are still not iterested to be their cumbucket':step = 0 & gt 'pav_shared_sp', 'spChat'
 				act 'Say you are willing to spread your legs a bit afterall':step = 0 & servitudeLvl = 2 & gt 'pav_shared_sp', 'spChat'			
 			elseif servitudeLvl = 2:

+ 1 - 1
locations/police_station.qsrc

@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booking2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/police/booking1.jpg"></center>'
 			'As you step inside the room he closes the door which has been open the whole time, "Uh, Lev?" you ask nervously.'
 			'He shrugs his shoulders, but you see a small smile as he moves closer to you. "Take off your clothes," he orders.'
-			'Surprised, you stare at him for a moment. "Again? But...but I thought the last time was enough?"'
+			'Surprised, you stare at him for a moment. "Again? But... but I thought the last time was enough?"'
 			'"I was hoping you''d be back, I wasn''t finished with you yet," he answers.'
 			'As the initial shock vanishes, you start taking off your clothes. You''re still confused how he can get away with this but you''re also a bit turned on at the same time by how risky and forbidden it is.'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/preNT.qsrc

@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  '':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-					'You take a few seconds to wipe your tears away before saying, "I''m leaving mother and for once in my life, I am going to be happy." You look toward your mother in blind hatred. "And you...can''t control me...Anymore." You then turn around and walk back to your mother''s house to collect your things. You walk into your bedroom where your bags are laid out. You open one of them up to check if you have packed everything while you hear your mother arrive back home.'
+					'You take a few seconds to wipe your tears away before saying, "I''m leaving mother and for once in my life, I am going to be happy." You look toward your mother in blind hatred. "And you... can''t control me... anymore." You then turn around and walk back to your mother''s house to collect your things. You walk into your bedroom where your bags are laid out. You open one of them up to check if you have packed everything while you hear your mother arrive back home.'
 					*nl
-					'You peek out the doorway while feeling your heart pounding, not wanting to get into another argument, you try to check your things quietly while you mother calls someone on the phone. As soon as you finish your packing then you quietly walk toward the front door before hearing your mother leave the kitchen with the phone still in her hand.'
+					'You peek out the doorway while feeling your heart pounding, not wanting to get into another argument, you try to check your things quietly while you mother calls someone on the phone. As soon as you finish your packing, you quietly walk toward the front door before hearing your mother leave the kitchen with the phone still in her hand.'
 					'<center><b><font color=#00FF9C><<"Galina [Mother] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/city/mother2.jpg"></center>'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/preTG.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roomPRE':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/tg/man.jpg"></center>'
 								'Roman is busy talking on the phone when you re-enter the his office, he gestures for you to sit down on one of the chairs across from him.'
 								*nl
-								'"Yes, I understand... yes. I will send Mikhail over ASAP, he''ll represent me. ... Yes... Tell your men to work on some other parts of the project in the meantime. Have Igor guard the pit and let no one make any fuss, and make sure nobody gets wind of this and, you know, try to halt the construction. ...Okay, we''ll keep in touch."'
+								'"Yes, I understand... yes. I will send Mikhail over ASAP, he''ll represent me... Yes... Tell your men to work on some other parts of the project in the meantime. Have Igor guard the pit and let no one make any fuss, and make sure nobody gets wind of this and, you know, try to halt the construction... Okay, we''ll keep in touch."'
 								*nl
 								'Roman hangs up and turns to you.'
 								*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/qwBarPolet.qsrc

@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RandomDrinkEvents':
 		'"Coming right up." Only seconds later, Martin puts down a full glass in front of you before directing his attention elsewhere.'
 		'As you muster the liquid that can only do so much to cure your boredom, you start listening in on a nearby conversation.'
 		*nl
-		'"...and the guy yelled at me for ten minutes! ''What do you mean, I can''t buy a second car?! I demand to see your manager!'' It''s good my boss showed up when he did, cause I was about to punch him."'
+		'"...and the guy yelled at me for ten minutes! ''What do you mean, I can''t buy a second car?! I demand to see your manager!'' It''s good my boss showed up when he did, because I was about to punch him."'
 		'"I don''t get it. Why couldn''t he just buy that car?"'
 		'"Because the governor''s wife was caught having an affair with her driver and the governor doesn''t want her to leave the house on her own anymore, so he had the assembly pass that law for him."'
 		'"... really?"'

+ 2 - 2
locations/rolanapt.qsrc

@@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mypanty':
 					*clr
 					'<center><b><font color = maroon>I want my panties back</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/drawer/pant1.jpg"></center>'
-					'"....and since you have no interest in stealing someone else''s panties... well the rules are very simple..."'
+					'"...and since you have no interest in stealing someone else''s panties... well, the rules are very simple..."'
 					act 'Continue':
 						cla
 						*clr
@@ -1237,7 +1237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chef':
 															*clr & cla
 															'<center><b><font color = maroon>Olivier Salad</font></b></center>'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/kitch/lesson/russalad/oliver12.jpg"></center>'
-															'You accidentally spray yourself with water. "...Well, it''s a good thing I remembered the apron!"'
+															'You accidentally spray yourself with water. "...well, it''s a good thing I remembered the apron!"'
 															act 'Continue':
 																*clr & cla
 																'<center><b><font color = maroon>Olivier Salad</font></b></center>'

+ 3 - 3
locations/rolanbath.qsrc

@@ -672,13 +672,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bonershower':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanboner3.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You stand up and help Rolan up too, you are ready to continue when you notice he has a hard on...'
+					'You stand up and help Rolan up too, you are ready to continue when you notice he has a hard-on...'
 					*nl
-					'"I''m sorry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I shouldn''t...I haven''t...it''s jus-" '
+					'"I''m sorry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I shouldn''t... I haven''t... it''s jus-" '
 					*nl
 					'You cut him off, "It''s alright, Rolan. It''s perfectly normal for a healthy man to get an erection when around a <i>beautiful</i> woman."'
 					*nl
-					'You continue to start at his rock hard cock, "And you certainly are <i>healthy</i>."'
+					'You continue to stare at his rock hard cock, "And you certainly are <i>healthy</i>."'
 					pcs_horny += rand(3,6)
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':

+ 3 - 3
locations/sexm.qsrc

@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
-				'"Wait,you''re married! You deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouts at you and runs after your husband.'
+				'"Wait, you''re married! You deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouts at you and runs after your husband.'
 
 				act 'Leave':  gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
@@ -1044,12 +1044,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
-				'"Wait,you''re married!, you deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
+				'"Wait, you''re married!, you deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 				
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-				'"Well, I see am not the only one for you, so perhaps I''ll go. But if you want I can stay and comfort you " said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+				'"Well, I see I am not the only one for you, so perhaps I''ll go. But if you want I can stay and comfort you" said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
 
 				act 'Let him go': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop_pussycats.qsrc

@@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Those were the days</font></center></b>'
 	'You''ve just finished hanging up some cute blouses from the new collection, when an older lady comes up to you. She looks to be in her 70s and begins a long, dull monologue about herself, her work, modern fashion and the old days.'
 	'The grandmother starts complaining about modern society and its flaws: Deception, corruption, drugs, sex and everything in general. Then she remembers the good old times when the grass was greener and women married as virgins at the age of 18:'
-	'"And now it has come to this... In my granddaughter''s classroom there are no virgins left. She is a 7th grade student and they have 15 girls in the classroom! How can this be? ...and one girl, Lena, already had three abortions. What has this world come to?" the grandmother complains for 20 minutes and you can not manage to calm her down and show her the exit.'
+	'"And now it has come to this... in my granddaughter''s classroom there are no virgins left. She is a 7th grade student and they have 15 girls in the classroom! How can this be...? and one girl, Lena, already had three abortions. What has this world come to?" the grandmother complains for 20 minutes and you can not manage to calm her down and show her the exit.'
 	'"Here''s my granddaughter," she shows you a picture of a younger girl. "Did you also go to the same school? Is that why you dress this way? Are you not ashamed?"'
 
 	act 'It''s just part of your job':

+ 3 - 4
locations/shoplifting.qsrc

@@ -198,8 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 					'By the time you''ve gradually slowed down, the security guard himself has started jerking off as he''s closely observing your every move, turned on by your obedience.'
 					'Suddenly an urge overcomes you and without him commanding you, your other hand travels upward your body stopping at your breast and you carefully begin to play with one of your nipples, gently rubbing it in a circular motion building up your arousal.'
 					'You don''t even care anymore if he approves or not, you''re too excited and it''s getting the best of you as you begin picking up the pace again, moaning loudly by now.'
-					'"You little minx! Who told you to take the control?" he manages to say between his panting, "I''ll let you off this time as I love seeing you squirm, as you appease me...but use this instead" as he hands over a fake cock.'
-
+					'"You little minx! Who told you to take the control?" he manages to say between his panting, "I''ll let you off this time as I love seeing you squirm, as you appease me... but use this instead" as he hands over a fake cock.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -505,8 +504,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The guard forcefully drags you into the room and shoves you towards the chair, "Well well, look who''s back...If it isn''t the little rat!" he heatedly comments.'
-	'<i>Fuck it''s the same guard, now you''ve done it, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get prepared for whatever awaits you...Your fate is in his hands...</i>'
+	'The guard forcefully drags you into the room and shoves you towards the chair, saying "Well well, look who''s back... if it isn''t the little rat!" he heatedly comments.'
+	'<i>Fuck it''s the same guard, now you''ve done it, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get prepared for whatever awaits you... your fate is in his hands...</i>'
 	'"I hate you fucking rats. Do you know what I had to go through to get away from ending up in jail. Luckily one of the pigs didn''t mind getting bribed so I got away," he grins, "And now for your punishment."'
 
 	act 'Beg':

+ 7 - 7
locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -1133,7 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_night':
 		if vasyan_textb = 4: $vasyan_textb = ' He tells you a story about his trip to the city: "I lost my wallet in the city and had no way to get home. The only way I could earn money for the train was by washing dishes at the barbecue. It turned out great though. The cute barmaid was flirting with me all night, and I even got to make out with her before I left. The next time I make it up there I''m going to rock her world."<br> "You go get her tiger", you encourage him.'
 		if vasyan_textb = 5: $vasyan_textb = ' Vasily complains: "The economy is broken, and none of these idiots is doing anything about it."<br> "What should be done to fix it", you ask curiously.<br> "Oh, I don''t care. I can use my laptop to hack the banks, and get money whenever I need it", he says.<br> "Then why the hell are you complaining", you say frustrated'
 		if vasyan_textb = 6: $vasyan_textb = ' He talks about his trip to the city: "I got lost in the old section of the city. I nearly starved to death, before I found my way out. If you ever end up there be careful. That place is like a Byzantine labyrinth."<br> "Did you find anything interesting?", you ask.<br> Not really, there was lot''s of grass and abandoned buildings. I did see a leather clad woman get out of a cab, but she disappeared like a puff of smoke.'
-		if vasyan_textb = 7: $vasyan_textb = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, the guys and I were trying to figure something out. How big are your tits? I said they look like <<$titsize>>s, but I figured I''d ask you to be sure."<br> You cross your arms over your chest, and glare at him in response.<br> "So,bigger then?", he quirks an eyebrow.<br> You give him a little slug in the arm for an answer.'
+		if vasyan_textb = 7: $vasyan_textb = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, the guys and I were trying to figure something out. How big are your tits? I said they look like <<$titsize>>s, but I figured I''d ask you to be sure."<br> You cross your arms over your chest, and glare at him in response.<br> "So, bigger then?", he quirks an eyebrow.<br> You give him a little slug in the arm for an answer.'
 		if vasyan_textb = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] < 30: $vasyan_textb = ' He tells you a story about magic fairies, who live in the countryside. He swears it''s true, but you just roll you eyes.'
 		if vasyan_textb = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] >= 30 and webcamera = 1: $vasyan_textb = ' Don''t you sometimes do homework at Julia Milova''s place after school?, he asks.<br> "Maybe", you say suspiciously.<br> "Well, if you ever do please put in a good word for me. I think she''s cute", he finishes.'
 		if vasyan_textb = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] >= 30 and npc_rel['A11'] < 50 and webcamera = 0: $vasyan_textb = ' Vasily says: "Have you heard about all the webcam sites that are popping up? Apparently girls can make a lot of money on them. If you have a computer, webcam, and are willing to show a little skin I bet you could do very well <<$pcs_nickname>>."<br> "I''m not sure I would be comfortable doing something like that", you say.<br> "You should think about it. It''s not like you would be selling it on the street. All you have to do is lie around on a bed and talk to a bunch of lonely guys. Then you show them a little skin and the money starts rolling in. It would be so easy", he finishes.'
@@ -1144,11 +1144,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_night':
 		vasyan_textb_gorslut = rand(0,12)
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 0 and soniaPS = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' He tells you about fucking Sonia: "The boys and I were all taking turns with that slut, until she couldn''t even stand. She eventually just collapsed in a heap. Then the fist thing she did when she got up was try to get my cock in her mouth. It''s crazy, that girl is fucking addicted to cock."'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 0 and soniaPS <= 0: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily tells you: "I saw you poke your head in the door the other day when we were screwing Sonia. You seemed to enjoy it, because you watched for a long time. Were you trying to learn something, or just wishing it was you getting fucked by us"'
-		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' You really seemed to enjoy getting fucked like a drunken slut the other day <<$pcs_nickname>>", Vasily snickers<br> "Well I...Yea, I kind of got into it", you stammer meekly.<br> "Then you should come drinking with us in the park more often. We will gladly fuck you six ways to Sunday if you show up there", Vasily say with a sly grin.<br> Don''t be surprised if I take you up on that offer", you say with a wink and a blush.'
+		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' You really seemed to enjoy getting fucked like a drunken slut the other day <<$pcs_nickname>>", Vasily snickers<br> "Well I... yeah, I kind of got into it", you stammer meekly.<br> "Then you should come drinking with us in the park more often. We will gladly fuck you six ways to Sunday if you show up there", Vasily say with a sly grin.<br> Don''t be surprised if I take you up on that offer", you say with a wink and a blush.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 2 and soniaPS = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' "We have to figure out how to get you and Sonia in the same room", Vasily says hungrily.<br> "I certainly wouldn''t kick her out of bed", you say giving him a wink.<br> "Just thinking about it is getting me going. Actually seeing you two together would be hot enough to start a fire."<br> You rest your hand on his groin, and give it a squeeze. "Oh, I can tell", you whisper seductively.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 2 and soniaPS <= 0: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily says: "Sonia was talking about you the other day."<br> "Oh really, what did she say?", you ask.<br> "She said and I quote: That <<$pcs_nickname>> is crazy hot. Every time I see her I just want to eat her like a bowl of ice cream.", he says laughing.<br> "Well next time you see her tell her it tastes like cherry", you tell him laughing.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 3 and SchoolAtestat = 0: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily says dreamily: "Oh, what I would give to see under that little skirt our English teacher wears. Her ass just looks unbelievable in that thing. I swear she must wear it just to drive the kids crazy."<br> "I totally agree, knows whats she is doing. If she keeps it up I might get under that skirt myself. If I ever do manage to get in there I''ll report back to you with the details commander", you say giving him a mock salute.'
-		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 3 and SchoolAtestat = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' He says dreamily: "God, I would love to get in Julia''s pants. The quiet ones like her always turn into freaks in the bedroom."<br> "I think she has a crush on me. Maybe I''ll get her drunk, and find out for myself. I could have that little wallflower licking between my legs in no time. Should we make a bet?", you ask with a wink.<br> "No, but just the thought of it is getting a rise out of me. Luckily I already have a little freak in the bedroom handy",he says looking at you with lust.'
+		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 3 and SchoolAtestat = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' He says dreamily: "God, I would love to get in Julia''s pants. The quiet ones like her always turn into freaks in the bedroom."<br> "I think she has a crush on me. Maybe I''ll get her drunk, and find out for myself. I could have that little wallflower licking between my legs in no time. Should we make a bet?", you ask with a wink.<br> "No, but just the thought of it is getting a rise out of me. Luckily I already have a little freak in the bedroom handy", he says looking at you with lust.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 4: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily says: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, did you know that your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is still a slut. We saw her in the cafe after closing with her boss. She was sucking his dick like it was the fountain of youth. I see where you got your skills, she must have been a really good teacher."<br> "Ha, dream on asshole", you tell with a laugh.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 5 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and soniaPS = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily tells you: "Sonia spends almost the whole day in the boys bathroom at school now. That girl sucks and fucks like quantity is the only things that matters."<br> "I think most of her diet is cum these days", you say.<br> "Yea, I do my part to feed her almost every day", he says laughing.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 5 and SchoolAtestat = 1 and soniaPS = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' He says: "Sonia was fucking one of the teachers the other day. It was so damn loud I bet half the school heard it."<br> "Oh, who was she fucking?", you ask with interest.<br> " I couldn''t tell, but that''s not the point. That slut is completely out of control. I almost feel bad for her. There is no way this will end well", he laments.'
@@ -1156,7 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_night':
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 6: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = 'The guys have all gathered around you. Vasily says, "How about we get this party started?" All the boys are looking on with anticipation.<br> "Well one of you guys is going to have to get me a drink first" you smile.<br> "Why do you always need a drink? Let''s just get to it.<br> It''s the only way I can make you guys look good enough to fuck", you say laughing. "Now fetch me a drink."'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 7: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' "Do you like anal now <<$pcs_nickname>>? Does it hurt, or does it give you pleasure?", Vasily asks.<br> "My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> has a dildo in here closet. I could get it if you want to find out for yourself", you say laughing.<br> "Yeah, I''ll pass", he says dryly.<br> "Party pooper", you say sticking out you tongue at him.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 8: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily asks: "What your favorite position?"<br> "Comfortable", answer you laughing.<br> All the boys join in laughing.'
-		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 9: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to play some cards?", Vasily asks.<br> "I don''t know, will I get to keep my clothes on?",you ask.<br> "Sure, we can to play for money", he says.<br> "Too bad, I guess I''l pass", you say disappointedly. You flash him you tits, and have a good laugh.'
+		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 9: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to play some cards?", Vasily asks.<br> "I don''t know, will I get to keep my clothes on?", you ask.<br> "Sure, we can to play for money", he says.<br> "Too bad, I guess I''l pass", you say disappointedly. You flash him you tits, and have a good laugh.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 10: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' Vasily says: "Do you remember that barmaid in the city I was telling you about? I finally made it back to the barbecue to see her again. She gave me the best blowjob I''ve had in my life!"<br> "Umm Vasily, there''s something I...."<br> "I didn''t mean it babe. She was good is all. Nobody is better than you", he says apologetically.<br> You decide not to push the topic of the barmaid.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 11: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you into water sports?", he ask innocently.<br> "Oh, I don''t know. I''m better at volleyball and running than I am at swimming. If it''s warm out I do like to cool off in the water though"<br> Vasily announces to the room: "I think that means she''s up for it guys."<br> "What are you guys talking about? Up for what?", you say suspiciously.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 12 and npc_rel['A11'] < 30: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = ' "I love <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, and it looks so good on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."<br> "Thanks Vasily, that''s very sweet", you say blushing.<br> "Does the carpet match the drapes?", he asks with a smirk.<br> "Typical", is all you answer with an exasperated sigh.'
@@ -1383,8 +1383,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_lern':
 			act iif(pcs_horny >= 50, 'You''re already wet', 'Oh, I suppose'): gt 'shulga_room', 'shulga_lern_sex_yes'
 		elseif pav_slut < 150:
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, if you would like to keep learning, I''ve been told that I''m an excellent teacher", Vasily says as he gently starts to paw at you.'
-			'You have a sneaking suspicion that he isn''t talking about the Biology assignment.'
-			'You stammer: "I...don''t know...would you please..."'
+			'You have a sneaking suspicion that he isn''t talking about the biology assignment.'
+			'You stammer: "I... don''t know... would you please..."'
 			if pcs_vag >= 1:
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'easy'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_day':
 		if vasyan_textb = 4: $vasyan_textb_day = ' He tells you a story about magic fairies, who live in the countryside. He swears it''s true, but you just roll you eyes.'
 		if vasyan_textb = 5: $vasyan_textb_day = ' Vasily complains: "The economy is broken, and none of these idiots is doing anything about it."<br> "What should be done to fix it?", you ask curiously.<br> "Oh, I don''t care. I can use my laptop to hack the banks, and get money whenever I need it", he says.<br> "Then why the hell are you complaining", you say frustrated'
 		if vasyan_textb = 6: $vasyan_textb_day = ' He talks about his trip to the city: "I got lost in the old section of the city. I nearly starved to death, before I found my way out. If you ever end up there be careful. That place is like a Byzantine labyrinth."<br> "Did you find anything interesting?", you ask.<br> Not really, there was lot''s of grass and abandoned buildings. I did see a leather clad woman get out of a cab, but she disappeared like a puff of smoke.'
-		if vasyan_textb = 7: $vasyan_textb_day = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, the guys and I were trying to figure something out. How big are your tits? I said they look like <<$titsize>>s, but I figured I''d ask you to be sure."<br> You cross your arms over your chest, and glare at him in response.<br> "So,bigger then?", he quirks an eyebrow.<br> You give him a little slug in the arm for an answer.'
+		if vasyan_textb = 7: $vasyan_textb_day = ' "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, the guys and I were trying to figure something out. How big are your tits? I said they look like <<$titsize>>s, but I figured I''d ask you to be sure."<br> You cross your arms over your chest, and glare at him in response.<br> "So, bigger then?", he quirks an eyebrow.<br> You give him a little slug in the arm for an answer.'
 		if vasyan_textb_day = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] < 30: $vasyan_textb_day = ' "I love <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, and it looks so good on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."<br> "Thanks Vasily, that''s very sweet", you say blushing.<br> "Does the carpet match the drapes?", he asks with a smirk.<br> "Typical", is all you answer with an exasperated sigh.'
 		if vasyan_textb_day = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] >=30 and webcamera = 1: $vasyan_textb_day = ' Don''t you sometimes do homework at Julia Milova''s place after school?, he asks.<br> "Maybe", you say suspiciously.<br> "Well, if you ever do please put in a good word for me. I think she''s cute", he finishes.'
 		if vasyan_textb_day = 8 and npc_rel['A11'] >=30 and npc_rel['A11'] <50 and webcamera = 0: $vasyan_textb_day = ' Vasily says: "Have you heard about all the webcam sites that are popping up? Apparently girls can make a lot of money on them. If you have a computer, webcam, and are willing to show a little skin I bet you could do very well <<$pcs_nickname>>."<br> "I''m not sure I would be comfortable doing something like that", you say.<br> "You should think about it. It''s not like you would be selling it on the street. All you have to do is lie around on a bed and talk to a bunch of lonely guys. Then you show them a little skin and the money starts rolling in. It would be so easy", he finishes.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy5':
 	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of it''s contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand, while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly your sister gasps and tenses up for a moment. Her hands tighly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
 	*nl
 	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She is soon laying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe." Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
-	'His movements get faster and faster and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams "More... More! Yes...Fuck my tight little ass...Just like that!"'
+	'His movements get faster and faster and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams "More... more! Yes... fuck my tight little ass... just like that!"'
 	'They are so engrossed in each other that they have not yet noticed your presence. Now might be the time to leave the hot couple to it.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $braworntype ! 'none':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him. His eyes are drawn to your chest, than Anya''s before going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras, but I said tits. Don''t be shy girls." With his encouragement, you pull up your bra.'
+				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him. His eyes are drawn to your chest, then Anya''s before going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras, but I said tits. Don''t be shy girls." With his encouragement, you pull up your bra.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Boobs': gt 'sisterQW', 'flash_boobs'

+ 1 - 1
locations/sister_chat.qsrc

@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_24.jpg"></center>'
-					'You blush at Anya. "I... I like girls. I''m...I''m a...lesbian. I don''t know what came over me. You are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
+					'You blush at Anya. "I... I like girls. I''m... I''m a... lesbian. I don''t know what came over me. You are just so pretty and I was so horny..."'
 					'"Oh!" She seems a little surprised, but then smiles at you and hugs you. "As long as you are happy, then I don''t care about your sexuality. But for the record, I''m not a lesbian." she says with a laugh and then asks you about any girlfriends you have had. For someone that claims to be straight, she sure seems curious about lesbian sex.'
 					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					act 'Chat': gt 'sister_chat', 'sister_chat'

+ 5 - 5
locations/sistersleep.qsrc

@@ -69,9 +69,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/touch2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You continue to explore your sister''s hot body, your frisky fingers accidentally slipping between her legs. Her panties are wet. You gently pull her panties aside, exposing her wet pussy. Sensations of heat and moisture overwhelm you, her pussy is oozing with desire. She seems to be having a sexual dream, or is it her response to your touch?'
-	'You are caught up in a fantasy. You start to lower your face to her pussy with your tongue out, wanting to taste her, when she suddenly stirs. "Fuck...Fuck!" She''s waking up!'
+	'You are caught up in a fantasy. You start to lower your face to her pussy with your tongue out, wanting to taste her, when she suddenly stirs. "Fuck... fuck!" She''s waking up!'
 	'Anya sleepily rolls over, looks up and sees you on her bed as you hastily remove your hand and hide it behind your back.'
-	'"What...what''s going on here? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" she asks as she sleepily sits up.'
+	'"What... what''s going on here? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" she asks as she sleepily sits up.'
 	'You sit in front of your sister on her bed, excited, caught off guard and not knowing what to do.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 		'"Why is it wrong? We love each other and how can making each other feel good be wrong?" you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
 		'"You know why! We''re sisters and even if that wasn''t the case, I like guys." she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
 		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it is so wrong, why are you so wet?"'
-		'"I... I was having a...dream is all." she explains.'
+		'"I... I was having a... dream is all." she explains.'
 	else
 		'"Did it feel wrong last time? I think you enjoyed it enough to cum! Tell me you didn''t enjoy it." you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
 		'"It doesn''t matter. You can enjoy things that are wrong, but it doesn''t make them any less wrong!" she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 								'"Anya, you don''t have to be a lesbian to enjoy a special release that only another woman knows how to give you." you say as you begin lightly caressing her thigh.'
 								'"What if we agreed that we''ll help each other out only when we REALLLLYYYYY need it, but depend on our boyfriends most of the time, hmmm?". Her breathing gets faster as your fingertips glide to the center of her legs.'
 								*nl
-								'"Well... when you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we.... REALLLLYYYYY....need....mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay ....mmmmm.." she sighs as she leans in and kisses you.'
+								'"Well... when you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we... REALLLLYYYYY... need... mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay... mmmmm..." she sighs as she leans in and kisses you.'
 								*nl
 								'Once you break the kiss she adds. "OK, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can ... when we really need it, just tell the other one OK?" You nod and agree to not wake up her anymore, besides her being into it from the start would be better anyways. She rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night." she tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'incest'
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 				sisterQW['strapon'] = 1
 				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base upwards and then suck the head. It isn''t too big, maybe a bit above average size. Anya then grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat, causing you to choke and thrash your arms in panic. She quickly pulls it out of you, ropes of your drool sticking to the shaft from your mouth as your eyes water.'
 				*nl
-				'You cough and splutter as you speak. "What...are you...doing? You could...have killed me!"'
+				'You cough and splutter as you speak. "What... what are you doing? You could have killed me!"'
 				'"Don''t be so dramatic <<$pcs_nickname>>! I would never hurt you. You see, guys like this. It''s called ''deepthroating.'' I''m just helping you train your mouth and throat so you know how to give boys proper blowjobs."'
 				'Without another word, she shoves the dildo back in your mouth and teaches you the finer arts of how to suck a cock, not to mention what to expect from the boys.'
 				*nl

+ 4 - 4
locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -1572,7 +1572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'divorce_party':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/divorcee/limo.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re walking down the street when a car speeds past you. It''s nothing to be particularly interested in until it suddenly comes to a squealing stop ahead. You slow your pace and watch it idle for a few moments, only just now noticing the muffled music coming from inside it as you near it. The window rolls down and the sound of an obnoxious pop song spills out, followed by a woman. Her whole top half is leaning out the car window which almost leads to her falling out, but a pair of hands from inside the car steady her. "Ah fucking shit tits...<i>fuck</i>," she curses as she spills the drink in her hand onto the sidewalk. "Hey...hey you! Come here for a s-sec," she calls to you with a beckoning wave of her free hand.'
+	'You''re walking down the street when a car speeds past you. It''s nothing to be particularly interested in until it suddenly comes to a squealing stop ahead. You slow your pace and watch it idle for a few moments, only just now noticing the muffled music coming from inside it as you near it. The window rolls down and the sound of an obnoxious pop song spills out, followed by a woman. Her whole top half is leaning out the car window which almost leads to her falling out, but a pair of hands from inside the car steady her. "Ah fucking shit tits... <i>fuck</i>," she curses as she spills the drink in her hand onto the sidewalk. "Hey... hey you! Come here for a s-sec," she calls to you with a beckoning wave of her free hand.'
 	act '"Uhm..."':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
@@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'divorce_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/divorcee/limo.jpg"></center>'
 		'Understandably you hesitate but she picks up on that and shakes her head wildly, "Don''t worry, I''m not gonna, like, shnatch you up or a-anything, I just gotta queshtion!" If it wasn''t obvious before, it''s clear now that the woman is drunk. But that doesn''t mean she''s a bad person, and judging from the limo chauffeuring her and her friends around, you could think of worse people to kidnap you. You walk over to her and she welcomes you with an excited giggle. "I''m Marta," she introduces herself. "And you see my friend here?" She moves to give you a peek into the limo filled with two other women and points out the one in red before continuing.'
 		*nl
-		'"That''s Eva and her lying, whore of a husband had been cheating on her with some...some cheap, loose pussy, dog faced CUNT!" she shouts angrily before taking a deep breath. "So she divorced his sorry ass and now she''s a free who deserves ONLY the best things in life! And you know what one of those things is?" she asks and you awkwardly shake your head.'
+		'"That''s Eva and her lying, whore of a husband had been cheating on her with some... some cheap, loose pussy, dog faced CUNT!" she shouts angrily before taking a deep breath. "So she divorced his sorry ass and now she''s a free who deserves ONLY the best things in life! And you know what one of those things is?" she asks and you awkwardly shake your head.'
 		'"It''s to make out with a pretty little thing like you," Marta grins and gives you (a very poor attempt at) a wink. "So? What do you say? Wanna give her a little kiss?"'
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 		act'Keep walking':
@@ -1601,7 +1601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'divorce_party':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/divorcee/makeout.jpg"></center>'
 				'You look behind her and see Eva blushing, trying to hide behind the rim of her cup as she takes a drink. She''s actually really pretty and younger than you thought. You''re not sure why her husband would cheat on her, but you''re not going to pass up the opportunity to have some fun with her. "You''re right, she does deserve the <i>best</i> and I can give her just that," you purr with a knowing smile.'
 				*nl
-				'In an instant, the other women are cheering and giggling as they lead Eva to the window. She tries to reluctantly argue against this, but she makes no real effort to stop them. "Uhm...hi?" she says sheepishly, her eyes avoiding yours as she bites her lip nervously. "My name is Eva..."'
+				'In an instant, the other women are cheering and giggling as they lead Eva to the window. She tries to reluctantly argue against this, but she makes no real effort to stop them. "Uhm... hi?" she says sheepishly, her eyes avoiding yours as she bites her lip nervously. "My name is Eva..."'
 				'"Oh, I know..." Your hand cups her cheek gently and you guide her head back, her gaze now meeting yours. "I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>," you say before leaning in to kiss her. As soon as your lips meet, any resistance she had before melts away. Her lips part and your tongues intertwine. You can taste the sweet alcohol she had been drinking as she eagerly presses against you with a soft moan. When you finally pull away, Eva is breathless with a dazed yet satisfied look.'
 				*nl
 				'"Holy shit that was <i>amazing</i>!" Marta laughs as Eva collapses back into the car seat. Marta is back at the window with a wide grin, "Look, I even caught it on camera!" She holds up her phone and you see a shaky but still rather clear video of the two of you making out. "Hey, you know what, why don''t you come out with us? I know Eva would love to have you come!" Marta winks again, obviously hinting at the double meaning there.'
@@ -1679,7 +1679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'divorce_party':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/divorcee/d7.jpg"></center>'
 										'"Fuck, you''re tight..." Yefim growls as he slides the first few inches of his cock inside her.'
 										'Eva inhales sharply as he slowly fills her. "Oh <i>fuck</i>!" she pants heavily as he sets a rhythm of steady, shallow thrusts.'
-										'Marta can''t keep from smiling as she watches her dear friend enjoying herself. "I know, it''s been awhile since you''ve been properly fucked..." she coos. "But like I said earlier...he''s going to fuck you until you can''t remember that bastard''s name."'
+										'Marta can''t keep from smiling as she watches her dear friend enjoying herself. "I know, it''s been a while since you''ve been properly fucked..." she coos. "But like I said earlier... he''s going to fuck you until you can''t remember that bastard''s name."'
 										*nl
 										'Hearing this, Yefim pulls Eva''s hips down hard to slam into his, burying balls deep inside her in one stroke. She lets out a strangled moan as he pulls out to slam back into her again and again. Eva can barely manage a word out as she gasps and moans beneath him. You and the girls watch excitedly as he continues to pound into her with renewed vigor, having angled his hips to hit her sweet spot until her walls clench around him and she cums hard with a strained cry. Yefim thrusts a few more times before pulling out and shooting his load all over her flushed and sweaty body.'
 										*nl

+ 10 - 11
locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -600,11 +600,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policelie':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/police.jpg"></center>'
-	'You swallow hard and let slip a worried chuckle. "R-right...well, to answer your question, the time is..."'
+	'You swallow hard and let slip a worried chuckle. "R-right... well, to answer your question, the time is..."'
 	'"The <i>time</i>?" The officer interrupts, his lips twisting into a deeper scowl. He takes a step closer and you catch a whiff of stale coffee and cigarettes.'
 	'"Yeah, isn''t that what you asked?" You ask innocently.'
 	'Unamused, the officer crosses his arms over his chest. "I know what you''re doing out here, lying won''t get you anywhere except a visit to the police station."'
-	'Your eyes immediately drop to the ground at the mention of being arrested. Heart racing, palms sweaty, you take a deep breath before nodding slowly. "I''m sorry, sir...you''re right, I was out here working..."'
+	'Your eyes immediately drop to the ground at the mention of being arrested. Heart racing, palms sweaty, you take a deep breath before nodding slowly. "I''m sorry, sir... you''re right, I was out here working..."'
 	'He scoffs. "What, suddenly you''re shy about it? Let me hear you <i>say</i> it," he orders coldly, and all you can do is nod again.'
 	'"I was...I''m a prostitute, sir..." You say quietly.'
 
@@ -633,11 +633,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policeexp':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/police.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You wrack your brain for a good answer but come up with nothing. "No...I was just...on my way home." You look up and bat your eyelashes innocently but he seems unfazed.'
+	'You wrack your brain for a good answer but come up with nothing. "No... I was just... on my way home." You look up and bat your eyelashes innocently but he seems unfazed.'
 	'His expression darkens. "You think I''m stupid, girl?" he barks back so suddenly and loudly that it makes you jump slightly. You quickly shake your head and try to apologize, but he cuts you off. "I''ve been watching you for awhile now and all you''ve been doing is slinking up and down the streets looking for customers!"'
 	'You swallow hard as your eyes look everywhere except at him. "I...I think you might have me confused with someone else..." You start to take a step back, but the officer grabs your upper arm with an iron grip and pulls you back close.'
 	'"You really wanna keep lying to me?! You''re just making this a lot worse for yourself..." He tightens his grip even more and you wince softly. It''s not enough to really hurt you but it gets his point across.'
-	'"Alright, alright, I was! I was whoring!" You admit with a huff. "Please...please just give me a break! I don''t want to go to jail...I can''t!" Before the last words are out your mouth, you start to sniffle and soon tears are rolling down your cheeks.'
+	'"Alright, alright, I was! I was whoring!" You admit with a huff. "Please... please just give me a break! I don''t want to go to jail... I can''t!" Before the last words are out your mouth, you start to sniffle and soon tears are rolling down your cheeks.'
 
 	act 'Beg him to let you go':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policeexp':
 			*nl
 			'"...Alright, stop your crying..." The officer says, but you''re barely able to hear him between your sobbing.'
 			'"Wh...what?" You ask when you feel him release his grip on your arm. Through blurry eyes, you see the officer is giving you a pitiful yet uncomfortable look. "You''re letting me go?"'
-			'He clears his throat awkwardly. "Yeah, I am...but you better head straight home. I don''t want to see you out here again, understand?"'
+			'He clears his throat awkwardly. "Yeah, I am... but you better head straight home. I don''t want to see you out here again, understand?"'
 			'You quickly nod, wiping away the tears as you compose yourself. "Thank you!" You say, but he just responds with a grunt before waving you away.'
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'street_walker', 'work'
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policebribe':
 	*nl
 	'Your heart skips a beat as you think of what to do! He must already know you''re out here whoring so lying would definitely get you into more trouble. You heard that some girls offer sexual favors to avoid trouble, but it feels like too much of a risk. As you stand there squirming, you suddenly get an idea and hope it''ll get you out of this.'
 	*nl
-	'"Listen...I have some money...y''know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if...you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir...I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
+	'"Listen...I have some money...y''know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if... you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir... I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
 
 	act 'Wait for his reaction': gt 'street_walker', 'briberyreaction'
 end
@@ -706,9 +706,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'briberyreaction':
 		*nl
 		'The cop sighs heavily before taking the money. He takes a moment to count it, occasionally glancing your way as he does. "It''s one thing to be a whore, but to be dumb too?" he laughs cruelly as he pockets the money. You stare at him, hurt and confused before you realize that he''s still planning to arrest you. Your first instinct is to run, maybe he''s just trying to scare you and won''t chase after you, but if he''s being serious then it could mean you getting hurt.'
 		*nl
-		'"But...but I gave you the money..." You whine in defeat, but it only makes the sadistic grin on his face widen.'
+		'"But... but I gave you the money..." you whine in defeat, but it only makes the sadistic grin on his face widen.'
 		*nl
-		'"Yeah, you did...before I agreed to anything," he laughs. He watches your expression fall with sick satisfaction, enjoying every second of this. "I know right now you''re thinking you''re gonna tattle on the big, bad crooked police officer, but let me tell you: no one is gonna believe a whore like you. And once you point the finger at a cop, you''re gonna have the whole station after you, so it''s best, for once, you keep your lips shut and just accept what''s going to happen."'
+		'"Yeah, you did... before I agreed to anything," he laughs. He watches your expression fall with sick satisfaction, enjoying every second of this. "I know right now you''re thinking you''re gonna tattle on the big, bad crooked police officer, but let me tell you: no one is gonna believe a whore like you. And once you point the finger at a cop, you''re gonna have the whole station after you, so it''s best, for once, you keep your lips shut and just accept what''s going to happen."'
 		*nl
 		'It feels like the ground is spinning beneath you! You never expected such a downright cruel reaction, and he''s right. There''s nothing you can do except accept your fate.'
 		'Nearly in tears, you hold out your wrists and let him cuff and shove you in the back of his unmarked police car to be dropped off at the station.'
@@ -730,9 +730,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'briberyreaction':
 			prst_bribe = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/police/arrested.jpg"></center>'
-			'"No...no, I can''t do that..." You tell him as you pull your hand back and pocket your money again. The officer looks disappointed but doesn''t seem to dwell on it. He probably has another girl like you he''s forced into fucking him...'
+			'"No... no, I can''t do that..." You tell him as you pull your hand back and pocket your money again. The officer looks disappointed but doesn''t seem to dwell on it. He probably has another girl like you he''s forced into fucking him...'
 			'"Fine by me, slut. Hands behind your back," he orders and you comply. In a matter of seconds, you''re cuffed and in the back of his unmarked car being driven to the station to be booked.'
-
 			act 'Drive to the police station': gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'prst'
 		end
 	end
@@ -746,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policesub1':
 	gs 'pain', 4, 'nipples', 'pinch'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/sex/policesub.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"Alright...if that''s what it takes," You say reluctantly. You''re barely given a chance to put away the money before he''s pulling you to a dark, secluded area between two buildings. In the darkness, you can''t make out anything he''s doing. "Um, lets make this qui--" Your words are cut off as you''re shoved against the cold, hard brick wall of one of the buildings. You can only whimper as the officer presses his body against you.'
+	'"Alright... if that''s what it takes," You say reluctantly. You''re barely given a chance to put away the money before he''s pulling you to a dark, secluded area between two buildings. In the darkness, you can''t make out anything he''s doing. "Um, lets make this qui-" Your words are cut off as you''re shoved against the cold, hard brick wall of one of the buildings. You can only whimper as the officer presses his body against you.'
 	*nl
 	'"Shut up, slut," he breathes into your ear. "I''ll do what I want with you." Using one arm, he hooks it under both of yours and forces them behind your back while his free hand roughly kneads your breast. Violently, he yanks down your top to expose your breasts to the cool air and naturally your nipples begin to stiffen, something he takes as a sign that you''re enjoying yourself. "Such a dirty little whore..." He punctuates his sentence by taking your nipple between his fingers and pinching down hard.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'prostitution', 'rough'

+ 3 - 3
locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2B':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/models.jpg"></center>'
 			'You enter the Agency with the fake ID, get undressed, and proceed to search the place, hoping that your aching senses guide you to the "McGuffin". Soon, you feel a magic tingle that takes you to the bathroom, where some models are having an interesting conversation.'
-			'"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass...massa...masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
+			'"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass... massa... masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
 			'"Sorry, I don''t swing that way. Well... except on my boyfriend''s birthday."'
 			'"Huh?! No! Well... maybe? I mean that she can help you with your boob pains!"'
 			'"You mean my BACK pains? Are you feeling alright? You sound a little off today."'
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 	'She seems taken aback by your question, but quickly smiles and begins modeling for you.'
 	'"These little things? Hmm...I don''t know. They... I mean, like I was born with them, but for sure! I think they are pretty! I love how they stylize my hips!"'
 	'She then stops and nervously licks her lips.'
-	'"Look, sorry if I scared you, but there was this blonde that warned me about somebody coming to...banish me and, well, I was a little confused. You don''t look like that sort of person. I mean, hell, you know about shoes! Okay, give me a moment. Talking this way is tiring, let''s talk somewhere else."'
+	'"Look, sorry if I scared you, but there was this blonde that warned me about somebody coming to... banish me and, well, I was a little confused. You don''t look like that sort of person. I mean, hell, you know about shoes! Okay, give me a moment. Talking this way is tiring, let''s talk somewhere else."'
 	'She extends a hand, touching you and...'
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 		'"Tatiana, where are we?"'
 		'"Umm... I don''t know. Hmm. Someplace in your head?"'
 		'She leans against you and sighs. It is obvious that talking ''outside'' is tiring. Her skin, now that you can perceive it, is cold and tense under your touch. Not knowing what to do, you instinctively raise your hands and begin to give her a massage.'
-		'"Ohhh...Yes! Thanks! That hit the spot!"'
+		'"Ohhh... yes! Thanks! That hit the spot!"'
 		'You continue massaging a moaning Tatiana for a while before a question finally forms in your head.'
 		'"Hey, Tatiana, you told me something about a blonde?"'
 		'"Hmm? Blondie? Yeah, she was the one that warned me about you. She is like this tall, business suit-wearing blonde jerk with a stick up her ass! I told her to try wearing some stilettos and a leather skirt suit, you know for the "hot boss dominatrix" look, and she was like, pretty insulting!" Tatiana sighs. "Look, I know that the ''other'' Tatiana sent you, but can you, like, forget it? I mean, I don''t want to be banished! I don''t know what will happen to me if that happens! I just..."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/vann.qsrc

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'v3':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/sex/bathroom/v8.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tuen and drop to your knees in front of him as he starts jerking his cock above your face.'
 				'"Open wide!" You open your mouth and his cum splatters across your face, tits and tongue.'
-				'"Well, thank you, but you were..lacking something." he says as he gets dressed and walks out, leaving you on the floor covered in his cum. "Fucking asshole!" you whisper to yourself as you stand up.'
+				'"Well, thank you, but you were... lacking something." he says as he gets dressed and walks out, leaving you on the floor covered in his cum. "Fucking asshole!" you whisper to yourself as you stand up.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'vann', 'start'
 			end