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Added missing puncuation

Vengeance11 4 years ago
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      locations/albinahome.qsrc

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locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissingattempt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You cradle her head against your chest as she sobs away, her tears soaking into your top. "Hey, hey. But you did do something about it. You went to the police and now he''s going to prison!" you reassure her while softly stroking her hair.'
 								'She sits up, her eyes puffy from crying and wipes away her tears. "Yeah, yeah you''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>. I did. I guess I just got tired of feeling helpless as my friends suffered when they didn''t deserve any of this. So I exposed him for what he is!"'
-								'"I just want to live my life without having to fear my own father, or any other man for that matter. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive"'
+								'"I just want to live my life without having to fear my own father, or any other man for that matter. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive."'
 								'You smile at her and are about to reply when Albina closes her eyes and tilts her head towards you.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 	npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/game.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you keep playing video games and trash talking each other, even bumping each other to try and screw the other one up, but neither of you are still taking it seriously. You mostly just laugh at the silly mistakes you both make while only partially paying attention to the game.'
+	'The two of you keep playing video games and trash talking each other, even bumping each other to try and screw each other up, but neither of you are taking it seriously. You mostly just laugh at the silly mistakes you both make while only partially paying attention to the game.'
 	if hotcat >= 5:
 		'Once you finish the game, Albina turns towards you instead of starting another one. "How about we see who is actually the better gamer?" she asks with a confident smile.'
 		'You laugh and nod. "Sure, but you are so going down."'
@@ -559,6 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal2.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." You smile at her words and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm, her pussy spraying liquid onto the bed. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
@@ -627,7 +628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_ass_fucks_you':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getanal1.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her applying lube to the dildo. She squirts plenty on the dildo and strokes the shaft with it, getting it nice and lubed up. She then rubs the excess lube onto your asshole. You and the dildo now lubed up, she moves behind you and you feel the tip of the dildo press against your asshole. The pressure builds up until the tip pops into your ass, causing you to groan slightly in pain. She slowly starts to slide the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo up your ass, steadily working it deeper.'
+	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her applying lube to the dildo. She squirts plenty on the dildo and strokes the shaft with it, getting it nice and lubed up. She then rubs the excess lube onto your asshole. You and the dildo now lubed up, she moves behind you and you feel the dildo press against your asshole. The pressure builds up until the tip pops into your ass, causing you to groan slightly in pain. She slowly starts to slide the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo up your ass, steadily working it deeper.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get your ass ploughed':