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[text edit] fix some typos in mother_sextalk

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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locations/mother_sextalk.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek1':
 	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. It sounds like your mother. You run to the door just as it opens and you see her there.'
 	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! What happe-"'
 	if vanrPar_suction_dildo = 1:
-		'She cuts you off by holding up dildo in front of your face.'
+		'She cuts you off by holding up a dildo in front of your face.'
 		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>. <b>What is this doing in the bathroom?</b>"'
 		if pcs_inhib > 30:
 			act'"It''s my dildo"':
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek1':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 				'"It''s my dildo?" you say.'
-				'"What do you think you''re doing with something like this?! It''s improper for a young lady your age! Not to mention if Kolka or your father saw this stuck inside the bathtub! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence! Vladimir would And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+				'"What do you think you''re doing with something like this?! It''s improper for a young lady your age! Not to mention if Kolka or your father saw this stuck inside the bathtub! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence! Vladimir would have a heart attack! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
 				'"My God... you haven''t..."'
 				'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
 				gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
-		'You feel a sinking feeling in your chest. Not looking like you''re going to be able to weasel your way out of this one.'
+		'You feel a sinking feeling in your chest. It''s not looking like you''re going to be able to weasel your way out of this one.'
 		'"Do you have an excuse this time?"'
 		act'"No..."':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek3':
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it opens up to reveal your very mother. She looks more exhasperated than angry this time though.'
-	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this laying around."'
+	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it opens up to reveal your very mother. She looks more exasperated than angry this time though.'
+	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this lying around."'
 	'She shuts the door and you hear the faucet turn and water spray from the shower.'
 	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek4':
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it flies open to show your very angry mother.'
-	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>! You disgusting whore! How dare you leave filth like this laying around the house! This is going straight into the garbage!"'
+	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>! You disgusting whore! How dare you leave filth like this lying around the house! This is going straight into the garbage!"'
 	'She stomps straight past you to the front door and flings it open, going down the stairs.'
 	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos1':
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 		if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 2:
@@ -280,16 +280,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
-			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'Unfortunately, you don''t think you can weasel out of this one.'
 			'"Uhh... Sorry...?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
 			'She returns your apology with a glare.'
 			'"Confiscated."'
-			'She walks away into her bedroom still carrying it.'
+			'She walks away into her bedroom still carrying ' + iif(motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1, 'it', 'them') + '.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Well, so much for that...</i>'
+			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	else
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
@@ -345,8 +345,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos3':
 	suction_dildo += motherQW['bathroom_dildos']
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks more exhasperated than angry.'
-	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this laying around."'
+	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks more exasperated than angry.'
+	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this lying around."'
 	if momloc = 11 or momloc = 12:
 		'With that she walks off into the kitchen.'
 	elseif momloc = 13:
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos4':
 	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
 	'"I want you to know that I found your whore things that you left in the bathroom." You look at her in confusion for a moment.'
 	'"What thi-" and then it hits you. Oh shit, you left your dildo in the bathroom.'
-	'"I also want you to know that I threw them out. If you want to be a slut you can go do it somewhere else."'
+	'"I also want you to know that I threw them out. If you want to be a slut, you can go do it somewhere else."'
 	if momloc = 11 or momloc = 12:
 		'With that she walks off into the kitchen.'
 	elseif momloc = 13:
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	act'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What''re you talkin'' about...?" you say blearily, feining being drowsy from just having woken up. It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. "Is that a dildo? I-"'
+		'"What''re you talkin'' about...?" you say blearily, feigning being drowsy from just having woken up. It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. "Is that a dildo? I-"'
 		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
 		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
 		'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	act'Blame it on Anya':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"It''s not mine," you say blearily, feining being drowsy from just having woken up. "It must be Anya''s."'
+		'"It''s not mine," you say blearily, feigning being drowsy from just having woken up. "It must be Anya''s."'
 		'"Mmrrph. Not mine," your sister mumbles from her bed, rolling over to the other side and going back to sleep.'
 		'"Ahuh. You were saying?" Your mother puts her hands on her hips and glares at you. "I can''t believe you''re stupid enough to leave this in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
 		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, sitting up in bed and throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, sitting up in bed and throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
 		'"Mmmm. She''s right mom. Horny girls need satisfaction," your sister mumbles before rolling over to her other side and going back to sleep.'
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
@@ -552,10 +552,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'You wake up in shock to something made of rubber slapping you in the face. Startled, you sit up in bed and look around, seeing a dildo laying on your covers.'
-		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy another one. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving it laying around like that."'
+		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy another one. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving it lying around like that."'
 	else
 		'You wake up in shock to something made of rubber slapping you in the face. Startled, you sit up in bed and look around, seeing a pair of dildos laying on your covers.'
-		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched those. I''m not going to throw them away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving these laying around like that."'
+		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched those. I''m not going to throw them away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving these lying around like that."'
 	end
 	'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 	act'Continue':gt 'bed2', 'wake'
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 		'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
@@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exhasperation.'
+		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
 		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 		if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 2: