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locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 		fedorKozlovQW = 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'"It''s ok, I''m... I'm ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
+		'"It''s ok, I''m... I''m ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
 		*nl	
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -1052,7 +1052,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Breakup':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off... I'm sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
+	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off... I''m sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
 	
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 end		

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -1334,7 +1334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes... I'll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes... I''ll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m... I'm fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
+	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m... I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
 	*nl
 	'Niko continues kissing your forehead before responding, "I will do everything in my power to protect you. Just stay strong. Okay <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You nod your head again before saying, "Thank you Niko. I always feel safe in your arms." Niko smiles as he wraps his arms around you.'
 
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I wont have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
+	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I won''t have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Niko Search':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lick the tip of Dan dick before taking it into your mouth sucking it firmly, knowing that they wont let you go. Vitek and Vasily take out their dicks then begin lightly stroking it before you reach out and grab onto their dick and stroke it for them. Vasily rubs on the back of your head as he says, "You are doing well <<$pcs_nickname>>, can you suck me next?" You nod before pulling away from Dan then wrapping your lips around Vasily''s penis and sucking it gently while Vitek paws at your breasts, through your shirt. After a few more seconds, Vitek grows impatient and pushes his dick against your lips while saying,' 
+		'You lick the tip of Dan dick before taking it into your mouth sucking it firmly, knowing that they won''t let you go. Vitek and Vasily take out their dicks then begin lightly stroking it before you reach out and grab onto their dick and stroke it for them. Vasily rubs on the back of your head as he says, "You are doing well <<$pcs_nickname>>, can you suck me next?" You nod before pulling away from Dan then wrapping your lips around Vasily''s penis and sucking it gently while Vitek paws at your breasts, through your shirt. After a few more seconds, Vitek grows impatient and pushes his dick against your lips while saying,' 
 		if kotovloveQW < 0:	
 			'"What are you waiting for slut? Start sucking my dick. You made a fool of me and you will make up for it." You can feel your heart rapidly beating as you pull away from Dan''s dick then begin sucking Vitek''s dick, fearful of angering him further.'
 			*nl
@@ -1248,7 +1248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Search 2':
 			'Vasily: "Awww do you miss her or did she forget to take your call?"'
 			'Dan: "I just wanted to empty my balls is all."'
 			if kotovloveQW < 0:	
-				'Vikek: "We can always fetch <<$pcs_firstname>>. She wont dare say no."'
+				'Vikek: "We can always fetch <<$pcs_firstname>>. She won''t dare say no."'
 			else
 				'Vikek: "You can always look for <<$pcs_firstname>>. She seems to know her place."'
 			end	

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
 	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t... I'm... I'm a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!"'		
 	elseif VK = 4:

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I... I'm scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
+	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I... I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
 
 	act 'Weep in his arms':
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 				npc_rel['A23'] -= 2
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You shake your head. "Uhhh... I'm really not interested in doing that."'
+				'You shake your head. "Uhhh... I''m really not interested in doing that."'
 				'Albina puts the strapon away and you can tell she is a little disappointed. She comes back over and lies down beside you again. "You are so going to lose!" she laughs. You continue to play games for a while, although things are awkward between you. Eventually, Albina stops. "Well I had fun, but there is some stuff I need to take care of." she says as she turns the consloe off.'
 				'Getting the hint, you get up as well. "Yeah, I should probably get going myself." You exchange a brief hug before you leave.'
 				act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'

+ 2 - 2
locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 	young_shop_salary = 1
 	young_shop_bonus = 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
-	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job... I'll do it."'
+	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job... I''ll do it."'
 	*nl
 	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles. "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I'll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr.qsrc

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'kuhr'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'kuhr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr.qsrc

@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 2 - 2
locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 				if harakHusb = 0:
 					'"What are you doing?", <<$husName>> asks.'
-					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it and you''re always busy, " you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it and you''re always busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
 					'"And how often do you that", he asks.'
 					'"Every now and then, sometimes I put it in the ass too, would you like to watch me?" you ask him'
 
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 2 - 2
locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policelie':
 	'Unamused, the officer crosses his arms over his chest. "I know what you''re doing out here, lying won''t get you anywhere except a visit to the police station."'
 	'Your eyes immediately drop to the ground at the mention of being arrested. Heart racing, palms sweaty, you take a deep breath before nodding slowly. "I''m sorry, sir... you''re right, I was out here working..."'
 	'He scoffs. "What, suddenly you''re shy about it? Let me hear you <i>say</i> it," he orders coldly, and all you can do is nod again.'
-	'"I was... I'm a prostitute, sir..." You say quietly.'
+	'"I was... I''m a prostitute, sir..." You say quietly.'
 
 	act 'Beg him to let you go':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policebribe':
 	*nl
 	'Your heart skips a beat as you think of what to do! He must already know you''re out here whoring so lying would definitely get you into more trouble. You heard that some girls offer sexual favors to avoid trouble, but it feels like too much of a risk. As you stand there squirming, you suddenly get an idea and hope it''ll get you out of this.'
 	*nl
-	'"Listen... I have some money... y'know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if... you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir... I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
+	'"Listen... I have some money... y''know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if... you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir... I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
 
 	act 'Wait for his reaction': gt 'street_walker', 'briberyreaction'
 end