[text edit] change line in tatiana_lab back to using simpler style code like in the version rachels reverted to when my initial commit broke the code, but with the spelling/grammar corrections from my earlier commit and with the initial line using *p so the sentence doesn't have a weird line break in the middle of it

locations/tatiana_lab.qsrc

@@ -707,8 +707,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tatianasuctalk':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
 	if sucpcinfo < 2:
 		minut += 15
-		'As you both settle onto the couch, Tatiana turns to you and says, "Ok, tell me what happened."'
-		'You spend the next 15 minutes telling her about the Fairy, the odd dream, ' + iif(succubusQW < 4, 'and ', '') + 'the energy you let loose the other night.' + iif(succubusQW < 4, '.', iif(succubusQW = 4, ', and ', ', ') + 'the feeling you get when you''ve had sex' + iif(succubusQW = 4, '.', ', and the reaction you had to almost being raped.'))
+		*p 'As you both settle onto the couch, Tatiana turns to you and says, "Ok, tell me what happened."'
+		'You spend the next 15 minutes telling her about the Fairy, the odd dream, '
+		if succubusQW < 4:
+			'and the energy you let loose the other night.'
+		elseif succubusQW = 4:
+			'the energy you let loose the other night, and the feeling you get when you''ve had sex.'
+		else
+			'the energy you let loose the other night, the feeling you get when you''ve had sex, and the reaction you had to almost being raped.'
+		end
 		''
 		'She thinks about it for a moment and then says, "Well, I have a couple of ideas, but no sense guessing when I can just magically examine you."'
 		'She hops up and says, "Get undressed and lie down on the couch."'