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Smaller fixes. Mostly time related.

Blatte 7 years ago
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4 changed files with 18 additions and 18 deletions
  1. 2 2
      locations/Nord
  2. 1 1
      locations/down
  3. 5 5
      locations/metro
  4. 10 10
      locations/young_shop

+ 2 - 2
locations/Nord

@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@ if hour >= 5 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec:gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a
 if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week > 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''autosalonF'', ''start''">Car Dealership</a>'
 if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20 and week < 7:'<a href="exec:gt ''autoservisF'', ''start''">Repair Shop</a>'
 if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week > 1:'Used <a href="exec:gt ''autotraidF'', ''start''">Car Dealership</a>'
-if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week < 6:'<a href="exec:gt ''dk'', ''start''">Community centre</a>'
-if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week < 6 and bumtolik > 3:'<a href="exec:gt ''buklinik'', ''start''">Mercy clinic</a>'
+if hour >= 9 and hour < 17 and week < 6:'<a href="exec:gt ''dk'', ''start''">Community centre</a>'
+if hour >= 9 and hour < 17 and week < 6 and bumtolik > 3:'<a href="exec:gt ''buklinik'', ''start''">Mercy clinic</a>'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The parking lot, which is engulfed in bright lights, belongs to a <a href="exec:gt ''shop'', ''start''">Supermarket</a>'
 if hour >= 12 and hour <= 19:'Above the door to a basement room is a bright neon sign for the <a href="exec:gt ''pirsingsalon'', ''start''">Tattoo & Piercing parlor</a>'
 if tobiQW >= 1:'The old mansion, home to <a href="exec:gt ''kakuzu'', ''start''">Kakuzu</a>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/down

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'Infront of the expensive <a href="exec:gt ''restora
 
 if hour >= 6 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec:gt ''burger'', ''start''">Diner Bystroeshka</a> is open for low cost fast food.'
 if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
-if pornstudio >= 1 and hour > 5:'At the <a href="exec:gt ''pornstudio'', ''start''">Porn Studio</a>, where a variety of naughty movies are created'
+if pornstudio >= 1 and hour >= 10 and hour < 22:'At the <a href="exec:gt ''pornstudio'', ''start''">Porn Studio</a>, where a variety of naughty movies are created'
 if week < 6 and hour >= 7:'At the <a href="exec:gt ''univer'', ''start''">University</a> where you can earn your diploma.'
 if student > 0 or (hour >= 6 and hour <= 23):'The <a href="exec:gt ''dorm'', ''start''">Hostel</a> offers a small, but cheap, living space, for university students.'
 if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 18:'You can see the most important <a href="exec:bankloc = 1 & gt ''bank'', ''start''">Bank</a> in the city from here.'

+ 5 - 5
locations/metro

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/metro.jpg"></center>'
 	'Subway fare costs 16 <b>₽</b>.'
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 5
 	clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	fcolor = rgb(0, 0, 0)
@@ -23,28 +23,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if money >= 16:
 		if $loc ! 'street':
-			act 'Go to the <b>residential area</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Go to the <b>Residential Area</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
 				$loc = 'street'
 				gt 'metro', 'vagon'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if $loc ! 'down':
-			act 'Go to the <b>center</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Go to the <b>City Center</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
 				$loc = 'down'
 				gt 'metro', 'vagon'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if $loc ! 'Nord':
-			act 'Go to the <b>northern area</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Go to the <b>Northern Area</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
 				$loc = 'Nord'
 				gt 'metro', 'vagon'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if $loc ! 'liam':
-			act 'Go to the <b>the old town</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Go to the <b>The Old Town</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
 				$loc = 'liam'
 				gt 'metro', 'vagon'
 			end

+ 10 - 10
locations/young_shop

@@ -29,25 +29,25 @@ lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 '<b><center><font size="4">Keys-pussy</font></center></b>'
 '<center><img src="images/pictures/young_shop.jpg"></center>'
 'A Small shop clothing for young people. Mostly pretty bold outfits for emancipated young people with attractive bodies.'
-'Manager works from 8:00 to 18:00.'
+'Manager works weekdays from 09:00 to 18:00.'
 
 !!if young_shop_work = 0:
 ! WD: Set managment hours
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18 and young_shop_work = 0 and week < 6:
-	act '<font color="navy">Go to the manager</font>':
+if hour >= 9 and hour < 18 and young_shop_work = 0 and week < 6:
+	act '<font color="navy">Talk to the manager</font>':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'andrey'
 	end
 end
 
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18 and young_shop_work = 3 and week < 6:
-	act '<font color="navy">Go to the manager, maybe he will hire you again</font>':
+if hour >= 9 and hour < 18 and young_shop_work = 3 and week < 6:
+	act '<font color="navy">Talk to the manager, maybe he will hire you again</font>':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'andrey'
 	end
 end
 
-act '<b>Get out of the shop</b>':
+act '<b>Leave the shop</b>':
 	minut += 3
 	gt 'torgcentr'
 end
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if ((hour = 15 and minut <= 5) or (hour = 14 and minut >= 30)) and young_shop_wo
 		if random > 75 and random <= 80:gt 'young_shop', '5'
 
 		if random >= 1 and random <= 20 and (kira <> 0 or young_shop_salary < 3):
-			'A regular days work, nothing interesting happens and its now time to got home.'
+			'A regular days work, nothing interesting happens and its now time to go home.'
 
 			act 'Finish the job':dynamic $endwork
 		elseif random >= 1 and random <= 20 and kira = 0 and young_shop_salary >= 3:
@@ -84,14 +84,14 @@ if ((hour = 15 and minut <= 5) or (hour = 14 and minut >= 30)) and young_shop_wo
 			kira = 1
 			'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
 			'Twenty minutes before the end of the day a lady comes up to me with a glamorous looking girl. The Girl constantly turns and asks the woman:'
-			'"Mom, this is not necessary. Let''s not buy in this store .. Well, MAAM .."'
-			'"Stop acting up! All your classmates are wearing this clothes. I do not want my girl to be bullied because she is not like them at all!" The Woman is full of determination and certainly won''t change her intentions.'
+			'"Mom, this is not necessary. Let''s not shop in this store .. Well, MAAM .."'
+			'"Stop acting up! All your classmates are wearing these sort of clothes. I do not want my girl to be bullied because she is not like them at all!" The Woman is full of determination and certainly won''t change her intentions.'
 			'"Hello, can I help you?" With a smile on your face you walk over to the mother and her daughter.'
 			'The Lady inspects you appraising your appearance, then turns her head to her daughter:'
 			'"You see, Kira, this girl is only a little older than you, and dressed .." She does not have time to finish the sentence, because Kira starts acting up again:'
 			'"Well, here where hardly anyone sees it! I can not be seen on the street in these clothes and without a bra. People will be able to see everything!"'
 			'"And why shouldn''t they?" The Woman throws up her hands in surprise, "You are grown up. It would be a shame not to show it! So, that''s enough, I''m tired."'
-			'She turns to you with a haughty smile and looks you in the eye:'
+			'She turns to you with a haughty smile and looks you in the eyes:'
 			'"Girl, tell me, would clothes like yours fit my Kira?" she says with a little nod clearly just waiting for a positive response.'
 
 			act 'Yes, of course':